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#2501:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:13 am


Just what am i supposed to react about?

BTW, did anyone else have a horrendous time getting onto the site this morning? It's just taken me fifteen minutes to access the site.

I may not be on again until Saturday, so don't expect any explosions from me.

ETA: Am I supposed to jump up and down yelling for Hilda to kill Jo Maynard? I know Hilda won't do that, she's got something up her sleeve, she always has, even if it's Bill Gates and Eminem.

 


#2502:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:18 am


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ETA - is it me or is my avatar highly applicable right now?!!

 


#2503:  Author: KathyeLocation: Laleham PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:37 am


Not sure you are being taken down a peg or 2 yet,

mmmmmmm

its Friday tomorrow Rachael, are you scared !!!! ROFL

 


#2504:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:40 am


Not at all, Kathye - should I be?

I have very little planned this weekend except for visiting friends - so RTW's idle threat that she knows where I live won't mean much if I'm not at home!!

LOL! Wink

 


#2505:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:41 am


Don't see why you would feel that your avatar was right, I think this was extremly clever.

 


#2506:  Author: NellLocation: London, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:46 am


Lesley can't you please find a way to post before this evening....though at least i'm in tonight with an empty flat!!!

And as for the whole Janet thing...

 


#2507:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:58 am


Wow - that clock thing is scary - cos Jennie definitely posted after my last 2 comments Shocked

There's no need to act all innocent Jennie - we know that if you were left with a sharp knife and a pistol/ligature to your best friend's head/neck, you'd have no compunction about finishing off Joey!! Very Happy

In which case, I'm very surprised that you're not yelling at Hilda to get on with it!! Wink
But then, without Joey you'd only have Reg to loathe!! Very Happy

 


#2508:  Author: ChloëLocation: London: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:01 am


Lesley the only thing that can make up for the strangess of the CBB clock is more (well that and chocolate ice-cream but that's not makiing me feel totla better yet)

 


#2509:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:03 am


And isn't he enough for any one woman to loathe? BTW, if you read one of my earlier posts, I said that I didn't dislike Jo as much in this drabble, as she wasn't constantly interfering.

tongue tongue tongue

 


#2510:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:14 am


Touche!! Very Happy
And I did read it, honest injun - just forgot Embarassed

Very true though - Joey is a much nicer person than this - seems to have developed some spine when we could have been expecting her to faint all over the place ...

 


#2511:  Author: XantheLocation: London/Cambridge PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 12:57 pm


*wails*

other than that I have got some good examples of the infliction of suffering on the body (though from the wrong time period...) this is not condusive to me going back to writing my essay in a studious frame of mind!

this is far far too well written and gripping and...

*sits down to wait for more*

 


#2512:  Author: NellLocation: London, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 1:55 pm


*joins Xanthe on the sofa waiting and provides chocolate, coffee and baileys*

 


#2513:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:20 pm


**much perturbed by disappearing posts**
What else did I miss? fume
*throws things at all the mini-TEMs*
I HATE IT WHEN THIS HAPPENS!!!!

ETA Now some of the posts have returned.
*increasingly confused*

And Joey & Hilda & Bill still haven’t escaped Crying or Very sadCrying or Very sadCrying or Very sad

 


#2514:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 3:14 pm


We all know that Hilda will have worked something out, so why are we worrying?

 


#2515:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 3:20 pm


Lesley, please please please can we have some more of this?

I'm having such a stressful day at work and I can't cope with Hilda's plight as well! Please please put me out of my misery!! Laughing

 


#2516:  Author: Catherine_BLocation: Oxford, UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 3:21 pm


Oops that was me Embarassed

 


#2517:  Author: SophieLocation: Cambridegeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:01 pm


We-ll...that's a turn up and no mistake.

Rachael, your elaborate undercover work was an act of genius. Congratulations! Bit miffed that you've clocked up the same total as I have, and you just doing it in your spare time, as it were.

Lesley, dear...what a nice story...*backs away slowly, reaches the door and runs away screaming from the sheer ghastliness of what Lesley manages to dream up*

I don't know how much longer I can bear this. Found a little hope in Catherine_B's idea that Hilda might have learned knife throwing.

BTW, is Kelly Stevens perhaps related to Joyce Linton, whose mother had TB, and who was intimately involved in getting Thekla expelled?

 


#2518:  Author: Sarah_KLocation: St Albans PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:05 pm


Sophie! That sounds like a pretty inspired guess to me! It would explain why she was targetted before she came to the school, a two in one type thing.

 


#2519:  Author: SophieLocation: Cambridegeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:21 pm


Why thank you. Smile It came to me last night as I lay awake in bed thinking about Surfeit . Might not be right though!

 


#2520:  Author: ChloëLocation: London: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:30 pm


When does Lesley get back from work?

 


#2521:  Author: SophieLocation: Cambridegeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:38 pm


Not soon enough!

 


#2522:  Author: AlexLocation: Home again PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 4:55 pm


Sophie, I had just come to the same conclusions about the Lintons when I read your post.

Lesley, hurry up and post more (I won't say write, I expect that's already done and you're just being mean).

 


#2523:  Author: KathyeLocation: Laleham PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 5:06 pm


Sob........ Sob Crying or Very sad Sob........... Sob

Where's a wailing smiley when you need one Wink

Sob....... Sob....... Lelsley Please Crying or Very sad

Between this and the hayfever I can't cope.........PLEASE

 


#2524:  Author: PatMacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 5:46 pm


Joins the queue to plead for all three to be resuced Crying or Very sad

 


#2525:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 5:58 pm


Sophie that sounds spot on, hopefully Lesley will let us know if you're right soon (she's online at the moment).

 


#2526:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:03 pm


Yes I'm on-line, and yes I have written the next three posts - did them while at work today as Rachael can confirm as she has seen them!

However THE BLOODY EMAIL HASN'T ARRIVED!!!!! fume fume fume


I am now seriously p*ssed off because it means I've got to rewrite the damn things - back soon!


Last edited by Lesley on Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:09 pm; edited 1 time in total

 


#2527:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:06 pm


Did you want our sympathy Lesley? Twisted Evil

 


#2528:  Author: EllaLocation: Staffordshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:10 pm


Ergh! My head is going round in circles. I don't know who anyone is anymore. But maybe I didn't in the first place! Shocked

Please tell me it's not allowed for people to kill off other people's favourite characters?! (Looking for a ray of hope here) - yes I know it's Lesley's drabble, so I suppose she can get rid of whoever she wants.

Nevertheless, to echo everyone else, Lesley - PLEASE RESCUE THEM!!!
(I'm being really sympathetic about having to rewrite things etc, honestly!)

 


#2529:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:11 pm


No Pat, I did not want anyone's sympathy, I was just informing everyone why they will have to wait.

 


#2530:  Author: Sarah_KLocation: St Albans PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:17 pm


If Rachael saw them Lesley does she have copies? Don't worry, we'll wait as long as ew know they're coming eventually Very Happy

 


#2531:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:46 pm


*utterly speechless*

 


#2532:  Author: NellLocation: London, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:51 pm


Ok if thats the case and there is no more yet i shall go and have dinner, and come back later in the hope that the email will have arrived or lesley will have got thinks retyped!!

 


#2533:  Author: RosieLocation: Huntingdonshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:53 pm


*looks agast at lack of new Surfeit* I'm going OUT in a minute, and I won't be back till tomorrow!!! *wails* And as for the whole Janet thing - haven't we been warned many times not to trust people met on the Internet?!

 


#2534:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:06 pm


But Rosie - Rachael and I met on the Internet! Laughing

Next bit - still writing (bloody email!)


There was a deathly silence in the room, Hilda Annersley paled considerably and looked shocked, she spoke quickly,

“Janet, please, you can’t…”

Janet cut her off, roughly,. “You will not tell me what I can and can’t do, Hilda, you said that you’d do anything to save Nell? Prove it!”

Hilda looked directly into Nell’s eyes, Nell started to shake her head but stopped when the noose tightened once more, she returned Hilda’s gaze before closing her eyes as if in pain. Hilda looked across at the other prisoner. Joey was suffering severely due to the effects of dehydration, her face white and drawn, however she was alert and had heard all that had been said. She met Hilda’s gaze immediately,

“Do it, Hilda,” she said quietly, “If it means that Nell survives, then I will be proud that my death was not in vain. I know that you will be gentle.” Joey’s black eyes were soft and calm as she gazed across at the woman who had known her since she was 14 years old. She continued in such a quiet voice that her words were barely heard, “And it will repay the debt I owe both of you,”

“You might as well, Hilda,” Janet’s voice cut across, “Because she’s going to die anyway. Oh yes,” she continued as Hilda’s gaze swapped back to her, “Out of all of you, you didn’t think I’d allow the great Josephine Bettany to survive, did you? After all, she was the one primarily responsible for my mother’s expulsion. At least you mistresses were just doing your job. So that should make it easier for you, Hilda, your choice is simple, if you want me to spare Nell, you must dispose of Joey.”

Hilda knelt there, her head down, for sometime, on raising her head there was a new determination in her eyes, she picked up the knife.

 


#2535:  Author: KathyeLocation: Laleham PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:08 pm


Lesley you can't leave it there !!!

Type faster..........Please Shocked

 


#2536:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:13 pm


*gives Lesley a pair of fast typing gloves*

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#2537:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:15 pm


Oh boy!

Speechless, surely she won't do it. Not Hilda.

Lesley does Rachael not have a copy of your writing?

Sophie, what an excellent idea, wish it had occured to me, I wouldn't be suprised if you are right.

 


#2538:  Author: PatMacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:17 pm


Cliff after cliff!

 


#2539:  Author: Sarah_LLocation: Redcar PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:30 pm


I was reading through the last few pages of this, hoping I'd get to the end without being left on a cliff. Unfortunately...

 


#2540:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:45 pm


LESLEY!!

You should have rung me!!
Have e-mailed you everything I have - hope it gets there - if desperate I can post for you (I know the breaks!!!)

 


#2541:  Author: Catherine_BLocation: Oxford, UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:48 pm


argh! yargh! yeeeeaaaaaarrrrrrggggghhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!


PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL US WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 


#2542:  Author: RachelLocation: Plotting in my lair PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:49 pm


Hilda is my new inspiration. Maddened gleam in her eyes and a shiny knife in her hands. What more can a girl ask for?!?

 


#2543:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:56 pm


LOL!! Have just had contact with Lesley and her e-mail from work has finally arrived, as has mine I think, and apparently she had lost my phone number!!! Rolling Eyes
Anyone from Kent - did you not hear the cursing??!

And then her computer was playing up but seems to be sorted now so I think we may have action soon

If it's any consolation, it's worth waiting for ... and as she's added a bit that I haven't seen (but did hint/beg for), I am as agog as the rest of you ...

*impatient!*

 


#2544:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:00 pm


Laughing Well as Rachael already knows - cos she rang me - I'd lost her phone number! However I have rewritten this bit and hopefully it comes out OK!

Rachel - you are evil! Laughing



Hilda slowly rose and walked over to where Joey sat, chained to the wall, Janet watched her avidly, leaning forward slightly, and even allowing the ligature around Nell’s neck to loosen a little. Nell, helpless, watched her partner with sorrow filled eyes before bending her head somewhat in prayer.

As Hilda reached Joey she placed a hand on her friend’s shoulder, “Forgive me, Joey,” she said quietly. Joey looked up at Hilda and smiled at peace with herself. Hilda brought the knife down to rest on Joey’s throat.

There was a flash of silver and a high pitched scream! Nell looked round in confusion, the scream came from Janet! The knife was now embedded in her right hand, and had caused her to drop the gun, she staggered backwards, dropping the cord round Nell’s neck. There was deep red blood welling up from the wound in her hand and, momentarily, Janet forgot about any other danger.

Before she could recover, Hilda had covered the distance between them, and, with a strength she did not realise she possessed, Hilda Annersley grabbed hold of Janet’s arm and propelled her straight into the wall. There was a crunch as Janet’s face smacked against the concrete and she collapsed to the floor, still clutching her injured hand.

Hilda scooped up the gun, then walked over to Nell, swiftly removing both the noose around Nell’s neck and the gag. “Are you alright, Nell?” she asked, her voice rather shaky.

Nell swallowed a few times and took a few deep breaths before replying, “I am now, Hilda.” She paused before continuing with a slight smile, “Where on Earth did you learn that trick with the knife?”

Hilda smiled, “Prison, Nell, though I must admit, I never expected that I would have to use it for real!” She turned to Joey, “I’m sorry I couldn’t tell you of my plan, Joey,” she apologised, “I thought that if I tried, Janet would realise and stop me.”

Joey looked, if possible, even paler than she had before, her face ‘ghost-like’ and her dark eyes wide, she gave a short laugh then quickly repressed it, realising how close to hysteria she sounded. After a few deep breaths she was able to reply, “That’s fine, Hilda, thank you.”

Nell rolled her shoulders, uncomfortably, “I can’t tell you how pleased I am that this is over,” she said, “Hilda, you were wonderful, now can you please release these cuffs?”

Hilda turned back to the woman on the floor, Janet was conscious, moaning feebly, and trying to stop the bleeding from her injury. “It’s not quite over yet, Nell,” Hilda Annersley’s voice was ice cold, “There is some unfinished business.” She raised the pistol and aimed it directly at Janet.

 


#2545:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:03 pm


Hilda Annersley, become a cold blooded killer? I won't believe it.

fantastic post Lesley. but I never doubted Hilda!

 


#2546:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:04 pm


I love it Lesley - especially the extra bit(s), thank you!! Kiss







ETA: - FOR GOD'S SAKE - KEEP MY NUMBER IN A SAFE PLACE!!! Very Happy

 


#2547:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:05 pm


erm, yes, well

not sure how to react to this turn of events.....know Hilda is not going to pull the trigger, but what can she possibly be about to do?

 


#2548:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:05 pm


fire all the bullets so no one can possibly use it?

 


#2549:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:07 pm


Thank you Lesley. That was wonderful. I'm sorry I reacted the way I did earlier - but I was so disappointed! It must have been as frustrating for you as for us. Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad

 


#2550:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:07 pm


Isn't she?
I'd be thinking damn seriously about it - the litany of things that Janet has done, especially to Nell ... (not that I'm biased on that front or anything Wink )
She spared Matey and look what happened?
And she's learnt to throw a punch and a knife! Shocked

 


#2551:  Author: Catherine_BLocation: Oxford, UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:22 pm


I knew it!!!!

Way to go, Hilda!!!!!!!

Lesley, please let Hilda kill Janet, please please please? Just for once let Hilda let her righteous temper get the better of her? Twisted Evil

 


#2552:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:43 pm


Pat - yes it was very frustrating for me - all's forgiven! Smile

Catherine - I'm shocked!


Janet McRae looked up into a remorseless face; still holding her bloody hand to her chest she whispered, “I surrender, I’m willing to go for treatment. You wouldn’t kill me, would you Hilda?”

Nell struggled to her feet, her eyes on her friend’s face, “Hilda, no, you can’t do this,” she said softly.

“That’s not like you, Nell,” Hilda Annersley’s voice was cold, she did not stop staring at Janet, the pistol was held, unwaveringly, “You’re normally the first to advocate revenge.” She looked at the bruises on Nell’s face, “And she’s obviously not treated you well over the last 24 hours or so,”

Nell took a deep breath, “No, she’s treated both Joey and myself very badly, Hilda. I, personally, want to rip her arms out of their sockets, and then punch her senseless. It’d make me feel a Hell of a lot better, but it would be wrong, all the same.”

“Why would it be wrong? Why not give her exactly the same treatment as she has meted out? That’s justice in its simplest form.”

“Not like this, Hilda, she’s sick, she doesn’t understand what she was doing, she needs medical help.” Nell managed, shakily, to walk over and stand next to her friend.

“And suppose she manages to escape from that medical help, Nell?” Hilda looked across; “Gwynneth Lloyd did, murdered one and nearly killed another. This woman is very clever, Nell, if we don’t dispose of her now, she may haunt us for years to come!”

Nell walked round to stand in front of Hilda, for a moment the gun was pointed directly at her, then Hilda quickly pointed it to the ceiling. “Hilda, I know that logically it would be most sensible to kill her, but this is not you. I don’t want you to do something that you’ll be unable to live with in the future. Dammit Hilda, help me out here! You should be the one saying all of this to me!”

“She tried to kill you, Nell,” Hilda looked over at the woman still moaning on the floor, “she tried to force me to kill Joey, she’s responsible for any number of attacks on the pupils and Staff this term.”

Nell nodded gently, “Yes, I know all that, but she’s still sick, she is not responsible for her actions.” Nell paused here before adding softly, “But you are responsible for yours.”

There was silence for a time, Nell holding her friend’s gaze, after what seemed an eternity Hilda took a deep breath and nodded very slightly. Then, seeing Nell sway, Hilda helped her to sit down once more. Walking over to Janet, Hilda ignored the woman’s flinching away from her, and searched her pockets until she found the key to the handcuffs. She quickly released Nell’s wrists and used the same cuffs to chain Janet to the wall. Hilda then stopped; looking at the knife that was still embedded in Janet’s hand. "Can't allow you access to knives, Janet," she said softly, her eyes still appearing grey, she reached over and grasped the handle of the knife and slowly withdrew it. As more blood started to flow she picked up the discarded gag and held it to the wound, instructing the stricken woman to hold her fist tightly closed.

Hilda moved across to Joey and released her before finding the key to the door and unlocking it. While waiting for all the myriad different people to enter the room, Hilda ensured both women had a large bottle of water.

 


#2553:  Author: Catherine_BLocation: Oxford, UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:47 pm


Oh rats!

Rolling Eyes

Well, at least she wanted to kill her!

Thank you Lesley for a truly gripping story. I hope there's some more to come? *winning smiley*

 


#2554:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:49 pm


wonderful Lesley. And Nell, nearly fainting! Anyone would think she's been through a lot the last 24 hours...

ETA. also loved Nell talking Hilda out of it.


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#2555:  Author: pimLocation: the place where public transport doesn't work properly! PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:49 pm


Oh goodness, just read the last 3 lots in one go and I'm a bag of nerves now!


Lesley that was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

 


#2556:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:50 pm


Lesley, that was something else.

No idea how to respond.

This story is fantastic.

 


#2557:  Author: PatMacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:57 pm


I held my breath there and only the fact that Hilda would feel remorse afterwards stopped me willing her to kill Janet.

*Hopes we get the rest tonight*

 


#2558:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:10 pm


LOL!! I don't think you will!!

Catherine_B - I did my best!! I begged, I pleaded .... Wink
But I did so love Nell talking Hilda out of it ... most fabulous!

(have to admit though, I did push for a few extra bits of violence ... in the absence of a vengeance killing you understand!! Very Happy )


Way to go Lesley!!!!!!!!

 


#2559:  Author: KathyeLocation: Laleham PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:25 pm


Starts the standing ovation, probably slightly early, hopefully early !!

But starts it early anyway Lesley you are Amazing

Stands at computer appluading all that is Lesley (to the worried looks of family Shocked )

 


#2560:  Author: SophieLocation: Cambridegeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:26 pm


Gripping and thrilling. Love Nell's line about Janet's not responsible for her actions, but Hilda is. Great stuff. Thanks Lesley (especially since you had to re-write it. Poo to e-mail systems that don't work properly).

 


#2561:  Author: RachelLocation: Plotting in my lair PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:32 pm


<disgruntled noises that Hilda didn't kill janet>

Please tell me she twisted the knife as she pulled it out though? I need something to keep basing my respect for Hilda on!

 


#2562:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:48 pm


Laughing OK Rachel I think she twisted the knife a little - she was certainly still annoyed - did you notice her eyes were still grey while she was removing the knife?

Oh and must admit I LOL on reading of Kathye giving me a standing ovation to worried looks from family!

I think I'll probably finish this tomorrow - depending on how much I can write at work! If not then Saturday!


It seemed to take a very long time to get everything arranged. The Police and psychiatrists conferred for some time before Janet McRae was led away in handcuffs, her destination, at least for now, being a hospital for the criminally insane. She was facing a number of charges including accessory to murder in Switzerland, and attempted murder of Kelly Stevens, Janetta Mackenzie, Evadne Van Alden and Shane Coates. As she was led away, her mother Theresa Hanson came out to see her, Janet turned away and Mrs Hanson watched with sorrowful eyes as her daughter was driven off the site.

Back in the bunker, Jack Maynard had reached Joey and carried her outside, there he had laid her on a stretcher and an ambulance had taken her to hospital, suffering from severe dehydration. Hilda managed to persuade Nell that she go along for the medics to check her over. Nell went only after securing a promise from Hilda that she could return to their cottage that night!

It had taken almost two hours before all the formalities were completed and the Police left the School, it was past lunchtime and the ordinary business of the School continued. Miss Annersley returned to the School to inform the Staff and Prefects about all that had happened. She also spent a few hours working before a phone call from the hospital reminded her of her promise to Nell. Leaving the School in Miss Derwent’s capable hands, the Head drove down to the hospital. In one of the short-stay rooms Nell waited for her. She had not required any intravenous fluids, but had managed to rehydrate herself adequately with normal fluids. Her bruises on her face had been checked for any underlying fractures - there were none, and the wounds around her neck and both wrists had been dressed.

Daisy Venables turned as Hilda entered the room, “OK Nell, Hilda,” she began, “You can go home, Nell, but you are to continue drinking copious fluids - aim toward three litres a day for the next few days. You are also to get a lot of rest, understood?” Nell nodded, smiling slightly and the two friends walked out to the car. During the drive home, Hilda kept the talk light and inconsequential, however she was aware that Nell was trying to hide something from her.

Back in the cottage, Hilda pushed her friend upstairs with instructions to take a long soak in the bath, when she came back downstairs, wearing night shirt and soft woollen dressing gown, it was to discover that Hilda had cooked a light meal. Afterwards the two women sat in their lounge, chatting softly for a while and watching a few things on TV. Most of the conversation was from Hilda, and that fact did not elude the Head. As darkness fell, Hilda went out to the kitchen and returned with two milky coffees, she placed them on the table then sat beside her friend.

“Nell,” she began gently,

Nell Wilson looked up, somewhat startled, from her contemplation of the flooring.

Hilda continued, “Nell, I know this seems to be too soon, I know that you don’t want to talk about your ordeal, but you have to, and the sooner the better. Otherwise it will fester inside you.” She waited.

“How did you know?” Nell’s voice was very quiet.

Hilda smiled, “Nell, having been through it myself, I can recognise when someone is traumatised. Tell me.”

Nell nodded, slowly, at first, then with more confidence, she began to describe all that she had endured, when she had finished she sat, hunched up, and a little defensive. Hilda moved over to sit beside her and placed an arm around her shoulders, for a moment Nell seemed to resist, then she allowed herself to be pulled closer, so that she was lying against Hilda’s shoulder.

“OK, Nell,” Hilda’s voice was very gentle, “you just relax now, allow me to help.”

There was silence for a time, then, “I was completely helpless, Hilda, I could do nothing to help myself. I have never felt like that before - even when Elinor was attacking me, I knew you were there, and would help. I have never been so frightened in my life!”

“I know, Nell,” Hilda’s reply was comforting.

Nell looked up at her friend, “How can you live with the fear that you will feel like that again?” she asked softly.

“You rely on your friends, Nell, they will always be there.”

Nell nodded slightly, her eyes drooping, she rested her head on Hilda’s shoulder and slept.

Hilda looked across at her friend and smiled, reaching out she managing to pick her book up and started reading…

 


#2563:  Author: ChloëLocation: London: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:48 pm


Very Happy Thank you lesley Very Happy

 


#2564:  Author: PatMacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:54 pm


That was lovely, Lesley. this has been superb from strart to (nearly) finish.

 


#2565:  Author: pimLocation: the place where public transport doesn't work properly! PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:56 pm


Thank you soooooo much Lesley, that was just... wow. I'm completely at a loss for words. *stumbles off looking for the tissues*

 


#2566:  Author: NellLocation: London, England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:58 pm


Lesley thank you, thank you, thank you. If you don't manage to finish this tomorrow I can just see us all at kathye's on Saturday clustered round the computor urging you to post!!!!

*joins in Kathye's ovation* Absolutely fantastic! Loved that last scene with Nell admitting her vunerability Hilda comforting her.

 


#2567:  Author: Sarah_KLocation: St Albans PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 9:59 pm


*sniffles into hankie*
I didn't want to check tonight because I was so worried and I'm glad I didn't until now so i could read straight through but still...
*gulps hard*

 


#2568:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:03 pm


Wow - what a roller coaster of emotions, just read all todays instaments in one go!
Thanks for getting them out of there, though I can't help wishing Hilda had shot Janet, but I suppose it would have been obvious who was the guilty party and she would have ended up in prison again, so I suppose it's just as well.
Loved the scene between Bill & Hilda too.

 


#2569:  Author: CathyLocation: Australia PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:03 pm


I'm applauding on the inside because I'm at work and already have the reputation of being slightly nuts.

That was great Lesley. Can't wait for the loose ends to be tied up. I'm with whoever was guessing the Kelly Stevens/Joyce Linton connection.

Sits down to wait patiently.

 


#2570:  Author: SugarplumLocation: second star to the right! PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:30 pm


Wow I'm amazed
Totally riveting ....... rollercoaster of emotions .....fantastic!!

 


#2571:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 10:36 pm


*sniffle*
That was a lovely scene Lesley!!!
*waiting eagerly for more!!!!!!*
(SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad I didn't have to wait over all those cliffs!!!!!!!!!!!)

 


#2572:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 2:33 am


Rah for Hilda! And Nell! And Joey! And Lesley!
You all came through magnificently!!!
(Wanted to say "You all done good," but figured Hilda would object.)

(also adds oak-leaf cluster to Rachael’s medal for devious posting)

 


#2573:  Author: Catherine_BLocation: Oxford, UK PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:45 am


*Happy*

Thank you, Lesley Kiss

 


#2574:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:47 am


Rachel wrote:
<disgruntled noises that Hilda didn't kill janet>

Please tell me she twisted the knife as she pulled it out though? I need something to keep basing my respect for Hilda on!


RTW - my thoughts exactly - this is what I wrote when Lesley sent me it
"Perhaps she could twist it a bit as well when she draws it out? *feeling extremely vengeful after what she's done to Nell (and Hilda)*"

Lesley - that last bit was simply beautiful, thank you (though wish I'd seen it last night before I'd gone to bed as tears first thing at work is most uncool!!)
Quote:
“You rely on your friends, Nell, they will always be there.”

That would be my favourite line!! I look forward to the last few bits ...

*wondering how on earth she's going to get through work next week with no Surfeit to look forward to ...*
*contemplates a re-read of Real CS*

 


#2575:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:42 am


Lesley that was supurb, the emotion in that last scene was so sensitive, and Hilda, wow! Crying or Very sad

 


#2576:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:43 am


Lesley thank you very much. Its really frustrating when you're waiting for a specific e-mail to arrive and everything but comes instead. Like everyone else I can't believe its nearly finished. Have you got an idea for the next installment yet?

 


#2577:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 11:07 am


Magnifico, Lesley.

Didn't I say that Hilda would have a plan? Loves being right.

 


#2578:  Author: XantheLocation: London/Cambridge PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 12:12 pm


I cannot cry, because I am in the computer room...

*inwardly sniffling*

Lesley this is brilliant

 


#2579:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 12:44 pm


*chanting for more!!*
Come on Lesley, please?
It IS my birthday....
.....and Carolyn's, and Chelsea's......

 


#2580:  Author: RachelLocation: Plotting in my lair PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 3:34 pm


** Bumping this back up top **


Come on Lesley - more story please! PLEASE include some more gratuitous torture scenes - you write them so well!!

 


#2581:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 3:37 pm


HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO VIKKI, CAROLYN AND CHELSEA.


birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake birthday cake

Trumpet Trumpet Trumpet drummer drummer drummer piano piano piano Guitar Guitar Guitar

 


#2582:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 3:49 pm


Thank You Jennie, I wasn't expecting to see that there.

Lesley a wonderful birthday present for all of us would be lots more surfeits.

 


#2583:  Author: RosieLocation: Huntingdonshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 3:56 pm


*giggles* Happy birthday guys!
Lesley, that was absolutely amazing, but I think I may have to go lie down for a while now.

 


#2584:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 4:16 pm


Oooh! more b'day greetings!!!!
Thank you!!!


no more flippin story though!!! Crying or Very sad

 


#2585:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 4:18 pm


I was thinking of putting it on every thread, but decided not to in case it caused problems with that which shall be nameless, and only ever referred to by its initials.

 


#2586:  Author: AlexLocation: Home again PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 4:27 pm


My first thought was as always, how amazing.
My second was, did Hilda slip a little something in Nell's rehydration salts?

 


#2587:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:20 pm


Alex wrote:
My first thought was as always, how amazing.
My second was, did Hilda slip a little something in Nell's rehydration salts?


Don't understand Alex Confused
Happy Birthday Vikki, Carolyn and Chelsea! Laughing

Next bit!


The following day saw both the Head and Deputy Head resume their normal duties; Miss Annersley had given Miss Wilson the opportunity to take the rest of the week as sick leave,

“After all, Nell, it’s Tuesday now, we break up on Friday, it’s not going to cause too many problems if you want to rest further, And Daisy did say you should rest.”

“Thanks Hilda, but I’ve had enough time off this term, besides, I’d rather be back at work than sitting brooding over ‘what might have happened!’ Plus it’s not fair on you, if I’m off.” Miss Wilson looked across with affection, at the Head.

“Very well, but you are to take it easy, Nell, this has been a traumatic term in general and I think we will both be pleased for the break come Friday!”

School business continued as normal during the day, there was a general Staff Meeting that afternoon, while the School had a free period, the Prefects and senior girls taking care of the Juniors. After all normal business had been completed, Miss Annersley informed the Staff of her conversation with the State Prison Governor, she had been very interested in the Head’s idea of providing access for the inmates to an independent teacher who could help with both improving literacy and answering correspondence.

“We still have a few details to arrange,” Miss Annersley continued, “But hope to start this at the beginning of next term – it will obviously be provided only during term time. Now I am not forcing anyone to do this, if you cannot face having to be in contact with criminals, some of them exceptionally violent, I will not blame you.” She smiled, “It is rather a culture shock!”

A low chuckle spread through the Meeting Room. Miss Annersley continued, “However, for those of you who are interested, this will be in School time – you will not have to use your free time for this. I have cleared this with the board as another part of Training and Development. And I, myself will be going along at least once a month.”

Miss Derwent, after checking with those of her own Department, spoke, “Hilda, I think the English Department will want to help. Perhaps I could make a list and present it to you by tomorrow?”

Miss Annersley nodded, smiling.

Kathie Ferrars stood up; “It’s not just restricted to the English Department is it? I mean I should imagine most of us would be able to teach basic reading and writing!”

Miss Annersley shook her head, “No, Kathie, there are no restrictions, as far as I’m concerned most of you have sufficient qualifications, the only proviso I would make is to ensure that your written work is clear and legible.” She carefully did not turn to include the Deputy Head in her gaze.

That afternoon the two friends managed to rearrange their schedules to allow them to visit the Real Hospital, after visiting both Kelly and Shane, they moved across to the Female Medical Ward, to see Joey. Joey Maynard had spent the night in hospital and was likely to be there for another 2 – 3 days. She had been kept prisoner for longer than Nell, and was consequently suffering more from the effects of dehydration. In addition, her own, far more ‘highly strung’ personality had caused the ordeal to affect her more physically. She was also far less robust in health than Miss Wilson.

When the two entered her room, they found both Jack Maynard and Madge Russell in attendance, after initial greetings they all settled down. Both Jack and Joey were profuse in their praise for both Nell and Hilda. Nell was thanked for all she had done to keep Joey focused on the fact that they would be rescued, while Hilda was thanked for the rescue itself.

“And have you told Jack and Madge about your own part, Joey?” Hilda Annersley asked; she looked round, and on seeing that both named looked puzzled, continued, “Obviously not.” She turned to them; “Janet McRae gave me only one way to save Nell’s life, to kill Joey,”

Jack nodded, “Joey told us, she said that’s when you threw the knife that disarmed Janet,”

“Yes, but she didn’t mention her own part. Joey told Hilda to do it, that if it would save me, Hilda should kill Joey,” Nell put in quietly, “She was willing to die for her friends, there is no higher accolade.”

Jack and Madge turned to look at Joey, she flushed slightly, “I owed them that…” she began, she was not allowed to finish.

Hilda Annersley interrupted, “Joey, by saying, and meaning that you have, forever, wiped out any debt that you felt that you owed to either Nell or myself. I don’t ever want to hear from you that you feel guilty about your role when in the fictional world.”

“Agreed Joey,” Nell continued, “there is no debt between us now.”

 


#2588:  Author: XantheLocation: London/Cambridge PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:25 pm


*cheering*

hurrah for hilda! and for nell! and for lesley!

 


#2589:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:38 pm


The troubel with the RCS is that you run out of superlatives!!! It's phenominal, stupendous, prodigous, stunning!!!
*Admits to consulting a thesaurus* Embarassed

 


#2590:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:42 pm


Lovely, Lesley, as Pat said, no more superlatives left!

 


#2591:  Author: EllaLocation: Staffordshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:22 pm


WOW! Very Happy

Thank you Lesley.
Loved the Hilda-and-Nell scene especially.
Amazing writing.

Happy Birthday to Chelsea, Carolyn and Vikki!

 


#2592:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:29 pm


Next bit -only one more post to go!

That evening the Heads hosted a special meeting to fully discuss and hopefully conclude the episodes that had affected the School that term. Invited to the meeting were the Senior Management Team and Nancy Wilmot, Madge Russell, Con Mackenzie and Jack Maynard, John Coates and Major Stevens. Also there, her flight back to the States was leaving the following morning, was Theresa Hanson aka Thekla von Stift. After ensuring that all had enough to drink, Miss Annersley began,

“I thought we should all discuss everything that occurred over the last term,” she began, “everyone here will then be able to pass on to any others the full facts. I’d like to start by introducing Mrs Theresa Hanson, I don’t believe that all of you have had the opportunity to see her.”

The elderly lady smiled round at the group.

“First then, and most important, we have finally identified the reason for the attacks and the culprit. Janet McRae is Mrs Hanson’s daughter, she is, unfortunately, mentally ill, and she had fixated on the fact that all her problems were due to her mother being expelled from school. For the benefit of those that are not yet aware, Mrs Hanson was, in the original chalet school, Thekla von Stift, the first girl that was expelled from the school.”

There was a murmur around the room, those that had not been aware of Mrs Hanson’s identity, Con Mackenzie and Major Stevens, looking across at the woman with interest. Mrs Hanson smiled again.

“Knowing Janet’s delusion,” the Head continued softly, “It is actually easy to see why certain people were attacked,” she paused here for a wry smile, “although of course, hindsight is a wonderful thing! However, the reason for Thekla’s expulsion was due, in part, to both Joey Bettany and Cornelia Flower, Joey, of course, was targeted, and, as Cornelia was not available, her daughter Evadne was chosen. Then there are the five senior mistresses that discussed the case, Mlle Lepattre, myself, Nell, Con and Jeanne de Lachenais. Well, Nell and I were attacked, in fact poor Nell was attacked twice – though I think the second time was just chance,”

Nell Wilson nodded, “I think so,” she said, “I just happened to wander too close when searching for Joey.” She grinned, “Next time I’ll stay in your Study, Hilda,”

“I wish I could believe that, Nell,” Miss Annersley smiled over at her partner, “To continue, Jeanne was also attacked, and it seems likely that Gwynneth Lloyd was going to move on to Simone Lecoutier’s family next.”

“Excuse me interrupting, Miss Annersley,” Major Stevens put in, “Why would this Lloyd woman want to attack the Lecoutier family?”

The Head turned, smiling, “We sometimes forget that not everyone will know our history,” she said gently, “Mlle Lepattre died some years ago, however Simone and Renee, the murdered woman, were cousins of hers – her only known family,”

“In addition, Janetta Mackenzie was attacked as a way of getting to Con,” Nell Wilson put in, “So that Janet had targeted almost everyone associated with Thekla’s expulsion, in fact there was only one omission, and knowing everything else, it seems a fairly glaring one.” She looked across at her partner.

Hilda nodded, “Yes, and I believe we can clear up that omission now,” she turned to the Major, “I understand you have some news for us, Major?”

Major Stevens nodded slightly, “I have, following our discussion on Saturday at the Sports Day, I contacted my lawyer in London, he holds all my papers, and, of course, those of my wife. He retrieved some information about my wife’s family.” The major removed a sheet of paper from his pocket, “Sue was born in 1966, her mother, Kelly’s grandmother, in 1944. Kelly’s great grandmother, for some reason, was never able to produce documentary evidence of her birth – she always said it was destroyed during the Blitz, apparently. Her name was Joyce, her maiden name was Joyce Linton.”

At the name there was a sigh throughout the room, Mrs Hanson, Thekla von Stift, smiled slightly and leaned forwards, “Excuse me, Major, does Joyce still live? I would like the opportunity to meet her again.”

Major Stevens shook his head, “I’m sorry, Mrs Hanson, she died in the early eighties, lung cancer I believe.”

“Ah, a pity.”

Miss Annersley looked around the room, “Now you can see why Kelly was targeted, as the only surviving descendant of Joyce Linton, she would be the obvious one to choose.”

“And the fact that Janet was able to befriend her and even push her toward enrolling at the Real Chalet School, was just the first step in her plans.” Miss Wilson looked across at her friend, “I’ll bet she got your fingerprints while she was being interviewed too!”

“Quite possibly, Nell,” Miss Annersley replied, “She certainly interviewed well, all the candidates were good but she came across as the best, don’t you agree, Nancy?”

Nancy Wilmot nodded, “She did, Hilda, it’s rather worrying how easily she fooled all of us,”

“You are not to worry, Nancy,” The Head returned quickly, “Janet is an extremely clever person, she planned with precision, oh that reminds me, Madge?”

Madge Russell looked across,

“You’ll probably see Rachael Pelter before I do, please impress upon her that she was not at fault either. I know she applied certain personality tests but Janet had obviously worked out how to circumvent them.”

“No problem, Hilda.”

Mrs Hanson rose, saying that she should retire as she had an early start in the morning, her movement began a mass exodus until only Madge Russell was left with the Heads. Madge smiled, “When I decided to retire as Headmistress at the end of last term,” she began, “I had no idea that I would be leaving all of this for you to cope with!”

Hilda laughed, “Whether you were still here or not, Madge, I believe the attacks would have occurred.”

“Perhaps,” smiled Madge as she also got up to leave, at the door she turned for a last few words, “I don’t think I’d have managed as well as the pair of you, though!”

 


#2593:  Author: Sarah_KLocation: St Albans PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:33 pm


I'm glad Hilda said that. It's absolutely true and Joey needed to hear it.
*starts tearing up again*

Just noticed you posted another bit, we were right about Kelly then (just about the first time I've ever guessed anything right in this drabble)

I can't believe it's coming to an end Sad

 


#2594:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:38 pm


Like the others have said, superlatives have run out...how can we praise this more...you are by far the best writer we have here....please tell us of plans for another RCS story before you finish this one.

Thanks for the wonderful birthday present of having all this posting and the conclusion of a great story and wind up (Rachael/Janet) on our birthday.

 


#2595:  Author: XantheLocation: London/Cambridge PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:39 pm


*torn between wanting the last post and not wanting it to end*

 


#2596:  Author: pimLocation: the place where public transport doesn't work properly! PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:49 pm


*sniffles and searches for a superlative that hasn't been used yet and fails miserably*

*debates not going out to wait for the last bit* Thank you Lesley.

 


#2597:  Author: SugarplumLocation: second star to the right! PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:49 pm


Aww this is lovely...... Thank you ...I hadn't quite got the Joyce Linton link........can't believe it is finally coming to an end ! Crying or Very sad
When are you starting the pb on the next on ??

 


#2598:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:27 pm


Thank you Lesley!!!!!!!

Just don't know how you do it!!!

 


#2599:  Author: AlexLocation: Home again PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:32 pm


Lesley, it was just because Nell fell asleep so quickly and you know how Matey and Jack at any rate are always "slipping doses" into hot milk.

I don't want it to end... Crying or Very sad

 


#2600:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:35 pm


*collapses in an exhausted heap* that'll teach me not to go AWOL on RCS again...

Lesley.....I'm not even going to try. You did say there was one more post, didn't you?


Oh, and happy birthday to our CBB Triplets!!!

 


#2601:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:53 pm


Laughing Alex - Poor Nell hadn't had any sleep the night before - had she?

Well here we are at the final post once more! This one is even longer than Real Chalet School - 110,760 words!

Thank you everyone for your support, encouragement, comments and praise - I couldn't write these without you!

A very special thanks to Rachael - she's known of the plot since before Christmas, she helped me manufacture Janet,she helped me out with all the Personnel/legal bits.She's also given me ideas and corrections when having the advance postings. Thanks Rachael - I really appreciate it! Kiss

On with the show.....


The last day of Term Three began with a full assembly; Miss Annersley, stood behind the lectern, smiled around at all the girls in front of her. Behind her sat Miss Wilson and those Staff without responsibility for a form. The Form Mistresses sat beside their forms in the Hall. Also present were Kelly Stevens and her father, Kelly was sat in a wheelchair and still looked as though she were in some pain, however she chatted happily with some of her classmates. Seated near the back were John Coates and his son, Shane. Shane Coates was not yet fully fit, however was hoping to return to full duties at the start of the next term.

“Good morning everyone,” the Head began, “and welcome to the final day of term! I must confess there have been times when I wondered if we would ever reach this day!” There was a ripple of amusement through the Hall and Miss Annersley herself smiled. “However, we have, and I believe the incidents that have occurred during this term have strengthened all of us. The Real Chalet School has survived and has grown, we are a family. Now, as this is my first term as Headmistress, and Miss Wilson’s first as Deputy, we felt that we had to mark it in some way. After a lot of thought, we decided to revive an award first given when the predecessor of this School – the Original Chalet School – was in existence, namely an award for bravery.”

Miss Wilson took over, “We first decided this at the beginning of term,” she said, smiling, “And this is not an award that will be presented every term, like Form Prizes, so we had no inkling that the term would give us so many people deserving of it. Those presented with this award will have their names inscribed on a new Honour Board that has been commissioned especially,” she pointed to a board covered with a cloth, on the wall, “in addition, in a book held in the Head’s Study, will be detailed the reason for the award. The prize will consist of a small medal, to be worn on the left lapel, a certificate and,” she smiled, “five hundred pounds sterling!”

There was a murmur of voices at this, swiftly silenced as the Deputy Head continued, “Or whatever it’s equivalent in your own country’s currency! Now, unlike the award in the original chalet school, we have increased the number of those eligible, instead of only being awarded to pupils of the School, anyone employed by the Real Chalet School is eligible, and it is for that reason that we have so many recipients today.”

Miss Annersley walked back across to the lectern, “We will announce the winners and the reason for the award,” she said softly, “I would ask that they not come up to the dais just yet, I will explain later. Firstly then, as everyone knows, we had an explosion in the Chemistry Laboratory early in the term, this explosion left one class trapped. Four mistresses went back into the burning building, removed the obstruction, and rescued the class and mistress, Miss Nancy Wilmot, Ms Catherine Barber, Miss Rachel Gray and Mrs Pat Willimott have all been awarded this medal for risking their own lives to save others!”

She stopped there as everyone began to clap and cheer, looking around the Head saw that all four mistresses were giving varying impressions of stranded fish!

Miss Wilson continued, “now the cause for the explosion has been discovered, it was as everyone is aware, a bomb, sent to Kelly Stevens. She made a serious mistake in setting the thing off,” she swiftly glanced over at Kelly, sat with flaming cheeks and bent head, “however, this medal is for bravery, and I believe that, since the explosion, there has been no girl braver than Kelly. She sustained serious injuries, some of them extremely painful, yet she has tried, her entire time, to show only a happy face to her visitors. If she has not always succeeded it is only that the pain has been too severe. Kelly, we will be pleased to welcome you back to the School sometime next term, but in the interim, are pleased to give you this medal for bravery.” Miss Wilson joined in the clapping and cheers that followed on from her speech. Kelly, even redder in the face, smiled around at everyone.

Miss Annersley spoke next, “As everyone is aware, there was an attempt to kill two of our pupils travelling back from School Camp at half term. The next awards go to Evadne Van Alden and Janetta Mackenzie, for bravery under fire, for surviving more than 24 hours without food or fresh water, for taking care of an injured man. You both showed courage and resilience. I am proud of you.” She picked out both girls, sitting, surrounded by classmates congratulating them.

Another pause for the cheering to fade, then Miss Wilson spoke once more, “and finally, also in the same incident, there was one other person involved. Without this person no one would have survived, he recognised in time that a deadly trap had been set, he managed to get the jeep away and then hide it for 24 hours. When it looked as though they were all going to be shot, he ordered the girls to run while he himself grappled with the gunman, despite having a bullet in his back. Shane Coates, you are a worthy recipient!”

At the back Shane grinned rather shyly while his father seemed ready to explode with pride.

Miss Annersley walked back to the dais and whispered something into her friend’s ear; Miss Wilson looked puzzled but went back to her seat. Miss Annersley waited until the Hall had regained silence. She then smiled and began to speak,

“I know that everyone is waiting for me to present the medals,” her voice, as always, reaching all parts of the Hall without apparent effort, “however, there is one more act that needs to be mentioned. It is one that, I believe, captures the essence of exactly what winning this medal actually means. Going back to the explosion in the Chemistry Laboratory. At the time of the explosion the mistress in charge physically pulled all the pupils out into the corridor, then on realising that one was missing, she went back into the lab. Inside the lab almost everything was burning and there was hot, thick, black smoke everywhere. The mistress had to move along the floor to be able to breath, and still sustained burns to her lungs and windpipe. When she reached Kelly Stevens it was to discover that Kelly’s clothing was burning, the mistress beat out the flames with her bare hands, sustaining burns to her hands and arms. She then dragged Kelly out into the relative safety of the corridor. While awaiting rescue she ensured that Kelly’s burns were continually doused in cold water, thus reducing the effects of the burns, as well as keeping the rest of the class cheerful and positive of rescue.”

Miss Annersley smiled and glanced over toward her friend, Miss Wilson sat, open-mouthed, all colour draining from her face.

“Now, in my opinion, that act is worthy of an award, and more, I believe it should also be commemorated in another fashion,” she nodded to Miss Derwent, standing next to the covered Honour Board. Miss Derwent pulled a cord and the cover fell away to reveal a board with nine names inscribed upon it. It also revealed the name of the Honour. There was a gasp, and then the Hall erupted into applause. Miss Annersley allowed this to continue for a few minutes before raising her hand for silence, she spoke once more,

“To receive the first medal of the Helena Wilson Award for Bravery, I ask that Miss Wilson please step up to the dais,” the Head looked across at Miss Wilson.

The Deputy Head sat, dumbfounded, as the Hall once more erupted with applause and cheering, eventually, after receiving a poke from one of the other mistresses, she stood up and walked over to stand next to the Head. Miss Annersley smiled and, as Miss Wilson seemed to be in shock, grasped her right hand to shake it; she handed over a small presentation box. Miss Wilson opened the box to see the medal inside; it had ‘Helena Wilson Bravery Award’ inscribed around the edge on the front, with the School crest in the centre. On the back were her name and the date of the explosion. She removed the medal from the box and, smiling, fixed it to her left lapel. The School cheered once more.

Seated near the front the Library Prefect was holding a small cine-camera, capturing the event for the School archives, she watched as, after pinning the medal to her lapel, the Deputy Head reached across to hug the Headmistress, her eyes alight with tears. She saw her speak but was unable to hear what was said, “never mind, perhaps Miss Townsend can work it out for me later!”

On the dais Miss Wilson hugged her friend, “I had no idea you planned this, Hilda, why didn’t you tell me?”

“Because you would have found some way to refuse, Nell, and I happen to think you deserve this! And because I wanted to see you totally shocked, ” Miss Annersley replied smoothly.

Miss Wilson stood back slightly, staring across at her partner, and her further conversation was easily lip read by Lisa Townsend, when she saw the film later, “Hilda Annersley, you are a complete ratbag!”


THE END.......FOR NOW!


Last edited by Lesley on Sat Apr 24, 2004 7:57 am; edited 2 times in total

 


#2602:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:59 pm


*sniffle*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Lesley! What a lovely ending!!!!!!!
And thank you for your timing!
Made a lovely b'day pressie!!!!

 


#2603:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:00 pm


Crying or Very sad

It's not often I sit here in tears...but wow


The Helena Wilson Award for Bravery.

Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad

 


#2604:  Author: KatarzynaLocation: Preston, Lancashire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:00 pm


sitting here reading this finale and feeling extremely chocked up.

thank you Lesley for a wonderful ending to a brilliant story! You are fantastic and your writing superb!!

looking forward to the next installment of Real CS......... when you've had a short break of course!!!

 


#2605:  Author: pimLocation: the place where public transport doesn't work properly! PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:00 pm


Wow. That was just amazing Lesley, it's been brilliant the whole way through.

I feel all warm and fuzzy and happy now (as well as sitting here sniffling and crying cos it was so beautiful).

But loved the ratbag bit!

 


#2606:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:01 pm


Hmmmmmmmm.....
Short break? how long do you reckon girls? twenty minutes? half an hour?

 


#2607:  Author: SugarplumLocation: second star to the right! PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:06 pm


Awwwwwwwwwwwwww Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad

Lesley ... that last post was lovely.

Thank You for writing Surfeit Lesley ...... it has been a drabble that made me laugh, cry, tear my hair out and fall over many cliffs!

It was brilliant. You are extremely talented. SmileSmile

 


#2608:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:15 pm


Lesley I can't think of anything new to add - this has just been absolutely fabulous. I've now started reading the whole of the real CS so that I can catch up on all the background & then there'll be Santa, so PLEASE will you start something else in the next couple of weeks ready for when I've finished those!

 


#2609:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:18 pm


Don't be so generous Vikki!! Can't she start the next straight away? Loved it all Lesley, especially the Ratbag at the end!!

 


#2610:  Author: RosieLocation: Huntingdonshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:27 pm


I'm glad to find I'm not the only one feeling tearful on finishing this. Lesley, this has been utterly amazing, even on the occasions where I couldn't read whole posts at once because it got too much for me!

 


#2611:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:37 pm


*Adds to the accolades given to Lesley*
Thank you so much for writing this, it was just absolutely, utterley, totally brilliant.
I'm just sorry that it's ended - it will seem strange not rushing back home from work and looging on to the board to catch the latest Surfeit.
I do hope there will be another real CS soon.

 


#2612:  Author: SophieLocation: Cambridegeshire PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:57 pm


Lesley, this is fantastic. A wonderful story, a wonderful ending. Thank you so much.

Trumpet *blows a fanfare for the queen of the drabblers* Trumpet

 


#2613:  Author: NellLocation: London, England PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:59 pm


I can't really add to anythign that has already been said. Wonderful Lesley, thank you very much. And again i hope it won't be too long before the next installment of the RCS!

 


#2614:  Author: CathyLocation: Australia PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:26 pm


Yay yay yay. What a fabulous story. Thank you for the happy ending.

But now I also feel sad, because it's over. Please write another RCS drabble! I'm feeling generous though and I think you should have a rest first, so I'm willing to wait, oh, a few hours or so. (Ducks for cover and rushes off to the shower!)

 


#2615:  Author: Sarah_KLocation: St Albans PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:28 pm


Thank you Lesley.

It's been quite a journey to get here and I may have not entirely trusted you at times but you got them all (minus poor Renee) safely to the end, and what an ending. Very Happy

You are the Queen of the CBB drabblers without a doubt!

 


#2616:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:44 pm


The best drabbler we have Lesley, without a shadow of a doubt.

 


#2617:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:46 pm


Lesley that was fantastically fabulous. As has been said all the superlatives have been used up so can't think of any others.

Thank you so much for writing this I have enjoyed every word, some I was nearly hiding behind the sofa to read, others had me giggling aloud.

Sends Lesley a big bouquet of flowers, box of chocolates and something nice to say thnk you very much and hope they fuel the bunnies with more ideas.

 


#2618:  Author: RachelLocation: Plotting in my lair PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:09 am


What a lovely conclusion Lesley - although a few more deaths wouldn't have gone amiss. Perhaps that's someting you can rectify in the next installment??

And how great is it to get to the end so I can go back through and shut Rachael P up! She's been gloating shamelessly all evening and it aint a pretty sight I can tel you!

 


#2619:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:14 am


Oh dear.......
........Is there sqibbling amongst the ranks of the Rach(a)els?????? Wink

 


#2620:  Author: Chickpea PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 7:29 am


Thank you so much Lesley for writing the most exquisite drabble (are you sure you're not EBD's long lost grandaughter?)

 


#2621:  Author: BethCLocation: Worcester, UK PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 8:50 am


Lesley, I only meant to log on briefly to check something, but have just read the conclusion of this and had to add my voice to everyone else's - this has been absolutely wonderful. Thank you so much, even for the countless cliffhangers (and Janet! - btw, shouldn't her "first" name be Rachael not Rachel? Wink ). Brilliant.
piano Guitar drummer

 


#2622:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 10:45 am


Wow, wowo, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. wow, wow,wow, wow, wow.

 


#2623:  Author: EllaLocation: Staffordshire PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 1:47 pm


Just to agree with what everyone else has said... no words left! Very Happy
Think Jennie's post expresses it exactly!
Thank you so much, Lesley.
Sooooo glad I found the CBB while 'Surfeit' was happening and could read it as it went along.
Lovely ending.
*Going away to sniffle quietly and re-read the last few posts and wish it wasn't over*

 


#2624:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:08 pm


Lesley, that was stunningly beautiful. I love the idea of the Helena Wilson award for bravery, and though I expected her to be awarded the medal, it was wonderful when she realised that it was to be in her name.

I can't wait for the next installment of RCS.....

oh, and one thing that I'm unsure about, how did Janet know Kelly Stevens' origins?

 


#2625:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 4:05 pm


one last Thank You from Kathy Smile

(*suspects Nell will go further than calling Hilda a ratbag*)

 


#2626:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 6:36 pm


ROFL!!!! 'ratbag' is actually quite easy to lipread too.....

Lesley, you are a marvel. THANK YOU for a wonderful drabble. I have only one question....



























When do we get the fourth installment? Laughing Laughing

 


#2627:  Author: AlexLocation: Home again PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 6:44 pm


*Applauds*

*Loses all self control and cheers wildly*

 


#2628:  Author: Cumbrian RachelLocation: near High Wycombe PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 7:26 pm


I've just read the last week's worth of story! Fantastic! And I'm so glad I didn't have to sit on the cliffs at the time. I only wish there was some more story as it's been so good!

 


#2629:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 7:34 pm


Rachel wrote:
And how great is it to get to the end so I can go back through and shut Rachael P up! She's been gloating shamelessly all evening and it aint a pretty sight I can tel you!


The cheek of it - I wasn't that bad!!! Mr. Green
Well, I could have been worse ... Wink

Embarassed Thanks, Lesley - you know you're very welcome!

I ran out of superlatives a long time ago but what impressed me most with the last few posts was Lesley's ability to keep the momentum of the story so charged right until the very last line. I wondered how she could possibly write a conclusion that could match the drama and suspense of the scenes where Hilda rescues Nell and Joey - and then she comes up with not only bravery medals but the Helena Wilson Award for Bravery! For a moment there my eyes welled, I was so pleased and proud of Nell ... but a millisecond later I was chortling out loud as she had Lisa_T lipreading Nell's last words ....

To take your reader so seamlessly from tears to laughter is a sign of a great writer - and Lesley has done this time and time again throughout each of her Real CS epics - thank you, Lesley!! Pure genius and definitely the best Drabbler on the Board!

Congratulations!

 


#2630:  Author: ChloëLocation: London: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 10:29 am


As ever Lesley i was hooked from the first to the last word you really are a great writter thank you so much Smile

 


#2631:  Author: XantheLocation: London/Cambridge PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 2:16 pm


Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much Lesley!

I can merely echo the approbation previously expressed for this Mr. Green

 


#2632:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 3:23 pm


Thanks Lesley, and even though you warned us the end was here I never thought to bring tissues to read it.

Looking forward to the next part too.

 


#2633:  Author: cazLocation: Cambridge PostPosted: Mon Apr 19, 2004 10:18 am


Wow. Just wanted to add my voice to the chorus of thanks: Thank you, Lesley, this has been a fantastic read. Very Happy

 


#2634:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 5:36 am


Many thanks for all your kind words! Embarassed

I'm afraid the RCS has become an obsession with me now - I'm already working out the next installment! Have promised myself that I'll have some time off before starting another though so you'll have to wait a while!

Nicci - Janet was so obsessed that she researched anyone that had suspicious origins - would have looked at the War years as that's when her mother transferred over - she may even have been the woman responsible for the death of Kelly's mother in the 'hit and run'in 1996!

Thanks again everyone!

 


#2635:  Author: PatMacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 6:25 am


Just back from weekend away and HAD to see the end before doing anything else! Everything has been said, Lesley and just adding my voice to the thanks for a superb drabble. It's been a gripping story from page 1 and I began to wonder how the ending could possibly be up to the standard - but it was.

Hooray for the Drabbler Supreme!

 


#2636:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 7:54 am


You may have gathered that you are not the only one with an obsession for the RCS!!!!
We are all waiting with bated breath for the next installment!!! As soon as you're ready!!

 


#2637:  Author: cazLocation: Cambridge PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 8:03 am


There's going to be more RCS!!!! Hooray!

 


#2638:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 6:53 pm


Thanks for the explanation Lesley.
Happy to hear you've got more plans for RCS!

 


#2639:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 9:44 pm


Thank you so much for a fantastic drabble, Lesley. I've loved every post and I'm really pleased to hear there'll be another installment before long.

Enjoy your rest - you've earned it!

 


#2640:  Author: Catherine_BLocation: Oxford, UK PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2004 9:03 pm


Lesley, I was away when you finished this so I didn't manage to congratulate you at the time, but better late than never...

CONGRATULATIONS on a truly fantastic story Razz I loved every single post, so many favourite moments that I could hardly imagine how the ending would live up to the high standard you'd set yourself through the whole drabble... but you excelled yourself even at the last!

Thank you and I can't wait for RCS4 Kiss

 




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