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We don’t even have time for a paragraph about your continued involvement in the school, and tendency to act like a schoolgirl despite your age, marriage and elevation to motherhood.”
“Gosh, it must be serious – I’m on my way”. |
Beth wrote: |
Rosalie dear, will you ring the bell for tea? I appear to have lost the use of my limbs, and cannot reach the bell. |
Beth wrote: |
Well, here’s another attempt at drabbling. For anybody who was kind enough to read “Jem’s proposal”, may I take this opportunity to apologise for the similarity in style and tone; I’m not really used to writing fiction. Also apologies for the appalling title - I hate misquotes, but was really struggling to think of something to call it that wouldn’t give the painfully thin plot away at the very start! (Suggestions on a postcard please!)
I'd really really appreciate feedback, as I'm far from confident with this one. Anyway, enough waffle, and on to the drabble: |
Beth wrote: |
*slightly taken aback by response*
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JackieJ wrote: |
Is that why you've ricked your ankle, Gem?
I do agree, there's far too many cliffs at the moment. I feel like I'm in the Himalaya's *Ponders starting the JackieJ school of abseiling, should get a lot of business with all these cliffs wandering about* JackieJ |
Gem wrote: |
ETA: Found the trampolines Jennie - I have very bad aim and I missed them last time! *bounces happily* |
Ellie wrote: |
Loving this!
Bet she's not really dead though! |
Lesley wrote: |
Love Nell's comment about not being able to be sarcastic.
Love that Hilda's voice reached all corners but not Matey cos she was in the middle. Love this Beth! |
Dawn wrote: |
when do we get MORE? please |