Morvoren makes a splash at the C S (formerly Surfer!)
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#1: Morvoren makes a splash at the C S (formerly Surfer!) Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 1:03 pm


Right, new(ish) board, new story!

For those of you that stuck with Dancer, I am trying to make this story very different - not nearly so much weeping, wailing and gnashing of teeth! Rolling Eyes But I hope you all enjoy it anyway!

It is set parallel to Carola (it replaces that one, really) but doesn't fit into the CS series as such, as I've invented a new place for it (which will all be explained in tomorrow's post!)

PLEASE point out any inconsistencies (especially to do with characters, staff etc) your feedback is valued as always!

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“With all of this happening before the term has even started, it’s a wonder my hair isn’t as white as yours, Nell!” Thus spake Hilda Annersley, Headmistress of the Chalet School, at the start of the Summer term. Nell Wilson, whom the girls affectionately addressed as ‘Bill’ – though never to her face! – raised her eyebrows as she returned her friend’s comment with ‘a look’.

“All in good time, my dear,” she retorted, refusing to rise to the bait. Hilda laughed.

“You know I’m joking. Come and sit down and have a coffee with me. We’ve both worked really hard and deserve a rest.” Hilda set the example by rising from her knees from the floor, dusting herself off, and feeling a flask that was balanced precariously on a wobbly table. “It’s still warm – ish,” she added laughing.

With a grunt, Nell also rose, and lowered herself into a chair with more energy than grace. “Ouf! I ache!” she exclaimed as she reached out eagerly for Hilda’s proffered mug. There was a brief silence as the two women sipped their lukewarm coffee and then simultaneously made faces at each other.

“Ugh! Remember the coffee that Karen would serve?” sighed Nell, reminiscing on their Tirol days.

“Oh, do I! And the luscious concoctions of cream, honey and nuts!”

“Well, we may complain about Cornish coffee, but as far as cakes and pastries go – it’s safe on that score!” Hilda nodded agreement to this and the two women drained their insipid drink, and then surveyed the efforts of their labours spread out on the floor before them. Nell continued to speak: “I still don’t know why we couldn’t leave this to the girls when they arrive! It has taken the two of us two hours; it would take a class of them twenty minutes!”

“But time is of the essence, my dear,” responded Hilda. “We’re already quite late in the season. It’s a blessing Easter was early this year, or I fear we’d have lost the lot.” She eyed the several hundred pieces of potato that covered the dirty floor dispassionately. The two staff had spent a couple of back breaking hours dividing the seed potatoes and spreading them out on the floor ready for chitting. “Besides,” she continued with an unladylike grin, “the girls will have enough to do in the garden this year – and with this lot in about six weeks’ time!”

Nell returned her smile, and then shivered suddenly. “Brr! I’m cold!” she said. “How about we shut the door on this lot and go into the drawing room. We could build up the fire,” she suggested.

“Oh very well! I’m cold, too. We’re about finished here anyway.” She picked up the flask and led the way from the outhouse style room in which they had been working. Closing the ill-fitting door best she could, she hurried through the outdoor passage way and then into the big house nearby.

It was the work of just a few minutes to get a small fire burning in the grate, and within another ten minutes it was burning away merrily. Hilda and Nell pulled their chairs up as close as they dared.

“We may have been in the Tirol all those years, but I never felt this cold!” exclaimed Hilda. Nell looked at her sharply; Hilda had been in a serious road accident just the previous year and had taken some time to recover her strength. The strain and worry of the last six weeks had taken its toll, and Nell was concerned for her wellbeing. Nell herself had not been as badly injured and was back to her old self.

“It’s the damp,” she suggested. “And this old house hasn’t been lived in for such a time. Once the girls are all here and the generator is going, we’ll be cosy enough. What time is the repair man coming tomorrow?”

“Well, obviously it depends on the tides and weather. But the plan is that he arrives around midmorning. I’m going back over to the mainland in the boat with him, to buy some more supplies in Looe. I’ll stop the night with Joey, and then take the train on to Liskeard where I shall meet the girls on Friday morning. Then we should all be arriving here on Friday afternoon. You’ll be all right on your own?”

Nell laughed and tossed her head in a girlish way. “Of course! Anyway, I shan’t be on my own, not really. The kitchen staff arrive tomorrow afternoon, and Dot and Jean have been here as long as we have.” She was referring to the members of staff they had employed to help them set up the school in its new, temporary, location. “And Matron will be arriving Friday morning, so I will have company enough!”

“Well, shall we make a start on these lists? No use groaning, my dear! You got your way with the fire, now we must set to!” The two heads, one white and curly, the other straight haired with smooth brown locks, bent together over the lists and a companionable silence fell.


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#2:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 1:08 pm


sorry double postings

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#3:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 1:09 pm


*g* This looks great! I have to say, I always thought Hilda could be uncharacteristically tactless when referring to white hair in front of Nell! Laughing Although it's also true she only seems to do it in the war years and immediately after. Maybe her hair was more white than brown by the end of the series but EBD never let on...

More please Lisa, and don't drag your feet over it either!

 


#4:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 1:15 pm


Looking good Lisa - dying to know why they've moved to Cornwall!

BTW If it's during the war would they have been allowed near the beach?

 


#5:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 2:44 pm


I like the look of this Lisa, I don't mind all the misry and gnashing of teeth but it's nice to read a story without them too.
Looking forward to tomorrows posting.

 


#6:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 5:48 pm


Good start, looking forward to some explanations tomorrow.

 


#7:  Author: ChelseaLocation: Your Imagination PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 6:30 pm


Very promising start.

*looking forward to reading more tomorrow!

 


#8:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 6:31 pm


Aww. Do we really need to wait that long?

I'm going home. I'm cold (see how I suffer for free internet *sigh* Laughing ) and I want to do some writing on my own account. Be back later!

 


#9:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 6:33 pm


A new story, hooray!

Sounds intriguing.

 


#10:  Author: ChloëLocation: London/Southampton: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 7:30 pm


Lisa this looks very promising more soon please!

 


#11:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 9:44 pm


Yay!! New drabble!! More please Lisa!!!!

 


#12:  Author: LulieLocation: Middlesbrough PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 9:48 pm


Yay! More please Very Happy

*tries to imagine Miss Annersley in a wet suit*

*fails utterly*

 


#13:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 11:20 pm


Wetsuit? Aren't you getting your drabbles mixed up, Lulie? I know this one is entitled 'A Surfer at the CS' but I bet that Lesley will put Hilda into a wetsuit before Lisa does! Laughing ROFL

 


#14:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 12:17 am


Had Lesley not already done that?



























Oh no, that was Bill losing her bikini top whilst surfing, wasn't it? Laughing Laughing

 


#15:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 9:31 am


Great start Lisa. I hope that all will be revealed soon.

 


#16:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:13 am


I need some advice! Firstly, I want to change the title of the story - does anyone know if I can do this?
Secondly, who else would have been in Len & Con's form? (2nd form)

I am writing some more for later, but have lent out all my books before and after Carola, and can't find the ones I want on the transcripts site, so I'm getting stuck with names etc!

By the way, I am taking some huge liberties with this, especially regarding when and where it's set, if anything doesn't fit, I'm making it up! Laughing (Writer's licence!) (eg Lesley - the beach bit!)

 


#17:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:16 am


Try changing the title by amending your first post. That might work. sorry I can't be more help.

 


#18:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:27 am


Lisa, I like the name Morvoren, where does it come from?

 


#19:  Author: AbiLocation: Alton, Hants PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:31 am


And how is it pronounced? *cautious as always*

 


#20:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:33 am


Thanks Jennie, that worked! That's great! Heart
I have chosen the name Morvoren with great care. It's Cornish - there will be an explanation soon about it! Wink

Abi - I don't know how it's pronounced, although I've assumed it's quite phonetic ( a bit like Maureen). I have a friend called Mauv, so she'll probably be called that for short!

 


#21:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 1:07 pm


It was very early on Friday morning, and the sun was still new in the sky but the train station was uncharacteristically busy. Three of the carriages leaving Paddington had been designated for the use of the Chalet School and there were swarms of girls milling about, all clad in the smart brown and cream uniform, accented by flame: on the ties, embroidered on the pockets and around the hat band. But there was an orderly atmosphere, for the girls had been well drilled in matters of etiquette and discipline. Two sophisticated young women were in charge of the groups, and were busily collating tickets and names.

“Well, I know all about it,” proclaimed a clear voice in bell-like tones. “I’ve been corresponding with Auntie Joey and she has kept me well-informed.” A group of girls were clustered around the speaker and behaved in a way that showed they clearly regarded her as a leader.

“Well, are you going to tell us or not?” demanded a character named Vi Lucy of her companion. The latter tossed her long straight hair and glanced around the group.

“Well, I might,” she began, and then relented at the groans that came from the others. At this point, one of the Mistresses approached them, efficiently folding up lists with one hand whilst indicating the carriages with the other.

“Continue your conversation on the train,” she began with a laugh. “Or you’ll have to walk to Cornwall!” With a glance at the station clock, and some muttered exclamations, the girls reddened and hurried on to the train. Once they were settled, the leader of the group spoke up again.

“Now are you all listening?” she demanded. “Because I don’t want to have to repeat myself. Miss Slater, I don’t know if you know the whole story, so you may want to listen too!” Some of the girls were rendered breathless by this piece of audacity, and as Verity murmured to her neighbour: “No-one else would get away with it!” Miss Slater, though, knew her pupil and smiled.

“Thank you Mary-Lou. Please do enlighten us,” she said, with a touch of sarcasm, but nevertheless in a jovial manner.

Mary-Lou continued serenely. “Well, as you know, this was to be our third term on St Briavel’s, ‘cos of that ghastly business with the drains at Plas Howell. But there was a terrible fire the day after we all left for the holidays –“

“Yes, we know that!” an older girl interrupted impatiently, “get on with the real news!”

Mary-Lou regarded her with an inscrutable expression. “Patience is a virtue, Clem,” she said primly, before continuing. “Of course, the fire was a real blow for the school, but at least no one was hurt. We’re going to be smaller than ever this term though,” she paused and sighed here rather dramatically, ”as repairs are made to St Briavel’s. Some people aren’t coming back for this term.”

“Like who?” demanded a big girl through a mouthful of cake, who was rather lazy looking.

“Manners, Gillian,” reproved Miss Slater. “And I would suggest you wait until we at least leave London.”

“Oh, I’ve got plenty,” said Gillian complacently, munching another piece.

“Well, it would be manners to wait and see who hasn’t and then offer to share,” said the mistress. Gillian reddened and choked down the remainder of her mouthful whilst rewrapping the cake. She was grateful when Mary-Lou resumed her tale.

“Oh, it doesn’t matter who isn’t returning,” she said breezily, not wishing to admit that she was not too sure herself. “As long as it isn’t any of our gang – and it isn’t,” she added confidently. “So, anyway, Bill – I mean Miss Wilson,” in some confusion as she caught Miss Slater’s eye, ”was on the lookout for a temporary location. What with it being the war and all, the Heads really wanted another small island, and their first choice was Caldey Island off the coast of Pembrokeshire, but it was unavailable, and then they heard that St George’s Island was.”

“But where is St George’s Island?” asked a girl in a silvery voice.

“Oh Verity-Anne,” said Mary-Lou disparagingly. “That’s where the school is!”

“But I thought we were staying on Looe Island?” ventured the deep voice of a tall girl whom the others addressed as ‘Tom’.

Mary-Lou raised her eyes heavenwards in a very patronising gesture. “You really are a group of ninnies!” she proclaimed “Honestly, anyone would think -“

“That’s enough Mary-Lou,” said Miss Slater in a soft voice. “Looe Island’s real name is St George’s Island, but it tends to be known by its common name of Looe Island.” Mary-Lou, the wind taken out of her sails for once, sat quietly, and when the next question was asked, she left it to the Mistress to answer.

“Well, Annis, we do have to depend on the tides. We have to take a boat from Looe harbour, and it takes about twenty five minutes to cross to the tiny shingle beach on our island. But as for what it looks like, I’m as much in the dark as you are! We’ll all discover it together.”

After this the conversation moved on to holidays and news from home, before subsiding as the girls read, slept or watched the changing landscape out of the window. At long last they pulled into Liskeard station, and were greeted by the welcome sight of Miss Annersley waving at them from the platform. The girls thronged around her, enquiring solicitously after her health, for she was much-loved and the school had had a shock when she had suffered the accident along with other favourite members of staff.

“I’m really feeling very much like my old self, girls,” she reassured them in her beautiful melodious voice, laughing. “Now, aren’t any of you hungry? There is an excellent café here which I have reserved for our exclusive use. We have half an hour before the train to Looe, so I would suggest you tuck in!” The girls had a real appetite and did not need anymore encouragement. As one, they sped into the café and took their seats. After a quick grace said by Miss Annersley they fell on the hot vegetable pasties with relish.

“Oh, I love Cornish pasties,” announced Mary-Lou, much recovered from her earlier squashing.

“Must be your name, Trelawney,” mused Vi. “That’s Cornish, isn’t it?” But Mary-Lou’s answer was not heard, as with an exclamation, Miss Annersley glanced at her watch and then leapt up.

“Quickly girls,” she cried. “We have just a few minutes!” There was a scramble, but the school boarded the train to Looe just in time and settled back in their seats to look out of the window in delight.

 


#22:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 1:26 pm


I see Mary Lou is still as opinionated as ever Laughing . Lovely, Lisa. We went over there a couple of years ago in a little boat from Looe. Lot's of scope for adventure on the island!

 


#23:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 2:50 pm


Thanks Lisa, enjoyed seeing Mary Lou 'squashed' for once.

 


#24:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 3:01 pm


*wincing* OOAOML is just so bumptious sometimes isn't she? If I'd been Pam Slater, I'd have given her a considerably heftier squashing than that! I think it'd take a steam roller to really squash Mary-Lou!

 


#25:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 4:30 pm


Lisa, this is great!! Glad OOAOML got a good squashing!!!!

 


#26:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 4:39 pm


Wonderful put-down for OOAO from Miss Slater. That woman has the right stuff in her.

.........feeling Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

 


#27:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 5:46 pm


Oh, goody, another new drabble! And this is a wonderful change! I can't wait to see where it goes!

 


#28:  Author: ChloëLocation: London/Southampton: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 5:53 pm


Any chance of some more Lisa?

 


#29:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 6:14 pm


*agrees with Chloe that more would be very much appreciated*

 


#30:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 7:27 pm


Glad you like it so far!

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“How long will it take us to reach Looe, Miss Annersley?” asked Miss Slater on behalf of the girls.

“Not long at all,” the Head replied. “Just another half an hour. Girls! This is a beautiful quaint line we’re on, following the old canal.” There was an immediate flurry of questions and so she proceeded to give them a highly interesting commentary on the history of the canal.

“It was first proposed in 1777!” she said, to the girls’ surprise, “but not built and opened until 1827, and even then it took another three years until all the work was completed. If you look carefully, you can see some of the remainders of the twenty four locks along the route.” The girls peered eagerly out of the windows at once, and Miss Annersley laughed.

“But the canal’s quite short, isn’t it?” protested Annis. “Twenty four locks seems an awful lot!”

“Yes, Annis,” replied the teacher, pleased at the interest the girls were displaying. “It’s only a six mile stretch, but the incline, particularly down into Looe, is steep.”

“Was it built for the Copper Mine trade that was founded on Caradon Hill?” asked Tom, who knew something of the area.

“Well, strangely enough, no! The copper seam had not been discovered, and the canal was initially designed for ease of transporting agricultural goods.”

“And I suppose that enabled more of the land to be accessed and developed,” contributed Mary-Lou wisely.

“Quite right,” acknowledged Miss Annersley. “The canal was at its peak in the 1860s with the traffic from the copper mine, but by 1882 the mine at South Caradon was closed, and in less than twenty years, the transformation to railway line was complete. Quiet, now girls! We’re just approaching Sandplace, and in a moment you’ll have your first view of Looe spread out before you!”

The girls lapsed into silence apart from exclamations of delight as the train rumbled across a marshy plain, and then rounded a bend. Either side was a wooded vale, and wild birds called to each other across the plain, seeming to ignore the train as it passed through.

“Oh!” exclaimed Clem, “we’re on water! How does the train go?”
Miss Annersley broke into a peal of laughter. “Oh, you funny child!” she chuckled. “The train tracks are raised up, but this is a tidal creek, so the water comes in either side of us. Now, look!”

The girls looked, as they rounded the bend and saw the lovely little town of Looe spread out before them. “Looe is really two towns,” explained Miss Annersley softly. East Looe spread out to the left of them was certainly the main hub of business with a thriving fishing port and several shops. Directly ahead of them was a bridge that spanned the tidal river and linked East Looe with its neighbour West Looe which was altogether quieter and smaller. The effect of seeing this lively little town nestled in the wooded vale was enchanting, and Mary-Lou was heard to exclaim that perhaps the fire at St Briavel’s was for the best after all, if it meant they could live in such a topping place!

The girls clambered off the train, and stood around taking great gulps of sea air. They could see the harbour with its many boats bobbing about on the water, but although more than one strained their eyes, they could not spot an island. Observing their disappointed faces, Miss Slater laughed.

“Try looking behind you!” she advised, and the girls swung round to behold not an island, but a tall attractive woman, with dark hair pinned up, standing with her hands on her hips and regarding them quizzically. With her were two girls of school age, one with auburn hair, and one blonde.

“Charming!” she said in a deep musical voice. “I come to meet you especially, and you don’t even notice me!”

Shrieks of “Auntie Joey!” and “Mrs Maynard!” greeted this statement, and Joey stepped back with her hands raised as if to fend off the excited pupils.

“But what are you doing here?” demanded Polly, who had been rather quiet so far.

“I couldn’t bear to be so distant from everyone, and I didn’t want my girls to be too far away,” she added, referring to two of her triplet daughters. There was an undercurrent of sadness in her voice for her third triplet was presently in Canada with Madge Russell, and Joey missed both her daughter and sister badly. “So,” she continued in a lighter tone, “I’ve taken a holiday cottage in Hannafore until the Summer!”

“But where is Hannafore?” asked Verity quietly. “I would have thought you’d stay in Looe.”

“Well, it is Looe really,” Joey informed her. “Look to the right. You see that road which stretches around the harbour in West Looe? Well, follow that and you come to Hannafore. It has a topping view of the island!” she added wickedly with a glance at Miss Annersley to see of she would rise to the bait. She did instantly.

“Your language!” she groaned. “I would thank you not to be a bad influence on the girls, Joey!”

Joey just laughed. “I’ll lead the way to the harbour,” she declared. “The tide is on the turn now, so you don’t have any tine to lose. Croc, girls!” The girls fell into line instantly and embarked on the short walk to the harbour. They looked around them with curiosity as they marched. Elderly fisherman with some boy assistants were standing around, mending nets, washing and gutting fish or just sitting on barrels and smoking a pipe. More than one of the girls wrinkled up her nose at the smell of the fish, but all were too polite to comment. The view out of the harbour was curtailed by the cliff over at West Looe, but to their left they could see a sandy beach with a backdrop of rugged cliffs. There was still no island!

The procession caused much interest as they strode through the narrow streets and the girls were uncomfortable by the many looks they received from curious townsfolk. Very soon they reached the harbour side where two large boats were moored. The captains came forward and helped the girls on, advising them to watch their footing, sit and stay seated! Joey was coming over to the island with them, to see her daughters established, but also to help out with one or two things.

Once they were settled, with one eye to the tide, the skipper of the first boat called something unintelligible to the second and then tossed the rope on board in a neat coil and started the chugging engine.

“What on earth did he say?” asked Lalla of her sister, Polly, who shook her head in confusion.

“It’s Cornish!” commented Len. “Doesn’t it sound gorgeous!”

“Hold on here,” broke in Jo with a warning note in her voice, “we are about to cross the bar – that’s where the river and sea currents meet and race across one another,” she explained. “It’s liable to be bumpy!”

The truth of her words were proven when the boat suddenly lurched up in the air, and then plummeted down, causing many of the girls to squeal involuntarily. Wildly exhilarated, they held on to the wooden bar around the boat with white knuckles as they rode up and down on the waves. Gillian began to look rather green, and closed her eyes.

“It’s all right, Gillian,” spoke Miss Annersley kindly. “It will be over in just a minute – there! We’re in calmer water already. And there – “ she spoke with a note of triumph in her voice, “is our new home!”

 


#31:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 7:37 pm


Lisa, this is a wonderful description! I feel like I was really there! And I can't wait to see what the new school's like.

Oh, and trust Jo to come along too...

 


#32:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 7:44 pm


Lol! When Mum first married, she couldn't understand his brother and sister-in-law, because of their accent. The last Cornish speaker before people started learning it again was in the 1700s, I think, so I'm assuming they weren't used to the accent, which would have been much stronger then! I only wish I had it!

*New car number plates arrived today with St Piran's flag on them!! Kernow bys vyken!*

 


#33:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 7:54 pm


So will Cornish be another language that will infiltrate the school?

 


#34:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 8:03 pm


KB, Cornish is closely allied to Welsh! The beginnings of word change as well as the endings, so I understand! I don't speak more than the odd phrase!

 


#35:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 8:06 pm


Ah, thank you, Pat. *displaying ignorance again*

 


#36:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 9:03 pm


Lisa this is really good - enjoying it immensely!

 


#37:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 10:34 pm


Mebyon Kernow, Pat! (Which I believe means brotherhood of Cornwall) That's the only Cornish I know! But I am very interested in Celtic languages & know a teeny bit of Welsh.

I do intend to incorporate as much Cornish heritage as possible, but as Babel Fish doesn't include Cornish I may not get very far with another language at the Chalet School!

I do hear my rellies' voices in my head though with their very strong accents and dialects, so I'll try to represent them when necessary!

 


#38:  Author: ChelseaLocation: Your Imagination PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 2:13 am


Lisa, this is great - though I would have felt like slugging OOAOML!

Trust Joey to move near the school!

 


#39:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 5:51 am


*begins the chant*

 


#40:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 11:02 am


Lisa, this is great, but I have to ask, have you sent Con off to Canada instead of Margot? Since Con has black hair and Margot is the blondish one?

 


#41:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 11:25 am


Mitten da, Lisa. May we have some more soon please! This is set on the opposite coast to where I grew up - Port Isaac. It's a much softer coast there, but still lovely.

 


#42:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 12:44 pm


Lisa, this is great, I'm really enjoying it.

Since you seem to know about it, and so does Pat, is Cornish any relation to the Anglo-Saxon group of languages? And if so, how?

 


#43:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 4:03 pm


Lisa this is really good, I've never been to Looe but I can just imagine that from your description, I'm quite relived that there won't be any Cornish language in this though.

 


#44:  Author: ChloëLocation: London/Southampton: when away from home planet! PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 5:50 pm


Thank you Lisa Very Happy

 


#45:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 6:03 pm


Liiiiiiiiisssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Come and give us more. Thanks! ROFL



Sorry, I edited to make the post fit on the page.
Carolyn

 


#46:  Author: Sarah_LLocation: Leeds PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 8:56 pm


Is it just me, or is everyone reading this now thinking of Cornish pasties and Cornish icecream?

 


#47:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 8:58 pm


Someone on another thread did say that every thread ends up on the subject of food. Laughing

 


#48:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 9:56 pm


No probs, Carolyn, I thought I'd fixedd it myself but evidently not! Laughing

 


#49:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 10:40 pm


Jennie wrote:
Lisa, this is great, I'm really enjoying it.

Since you seem to know about it, and so does Pat, is Cornish any relation to the Anglo-Saxon group of languages? And if so, how?


Jennie, it's Celtic!! Well before any of those foreign invaders reached these shores. Like Welsh - speakers of each can understand each other. Also similar to Breton.

 


#50:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 10:48 am


Thanks, Pat. No wonder I don't recognise any of it.

 


#51:  Author: JanetLocation: Ferndown, Dorset PostPosted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 4:28 pm


This is so atmospheric with all the Cornish descriptions - but I'm thinking of Daphne du Maurier rather than ice cream and pasties!!

You have a real gift for writing Lisa - I just read all of Dancer in one sitting it and loved it! Thank you!

Hope you post more of this one soon Very Happy

 


#52:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 4:33 pm


More soon, please, Lisa!

 


#53:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 11:36 pm


What? No more story yet? Wink

 


#54:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 11:58 pm


I've just found this Lisa, keep up the good work.

 


#55:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 1:52 am


Echoes the post above,

 


#56:  Author: AbiLocation: Alton, Hants PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 2:09 pm


*adds yet another echo*

This is really good Lisa!

 


#57:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 5:28 pm


Sorry to keep you waiting! small sparkling purple leaf very obliging with a later part of the story (which is now written!) but I have found it difficult to write the intervening part!
************
As the boats had crossed the bar, they swung out from the protection of the tall cliff that acted as a natural harbour and there, quite close, the big humped shape of Looe Island was revealed!

“It looks just like a whale!” Mary-Lou decreed, as they examined the dark trees that covered a good half of the back of the island.

“It’s so romantic,” said a voice in awe and Joey turned sharply to regard her daughter Con’s eyes glowing as she took in the appearance of the island. “There’ll be history and legends there – “

“Which you can study in your own time,” warned her mother, who knew her daughter’s flights of fancy well. Joey was proud that Con had inherited her own gift for writing, but the girl often became more a part of her make-believe world than the real one.

But more than one girl was enthralled by the island as it rose out of the mist. It was a very small island, to be sure, measuring only about a mile in circumference, but, as Polly offered shyly, that made it more like a real island somehow. “Because,” she had explained, “what would be the use of an island if you didn’t know you were on one?”

“Gosh! It’s beautiful!” breathed Gillian, her mind averted from her seasickness by the sight before her. “And look at the height of it!”

“It’s 150 feet above sea level, the top of that hill,” Joey informed her with a blissful disregard for good grammar. “And the whole island is only twenty two and a half hectares in area.” She stopped at a peal of laughter from Pam Slater. “Yes, Miss Slater?” enquired Joey, a touch frostily.

“Oh, I’m sorry, Jo – but you sound like you’ve swallowed the guide book!” spluttered Miss Slater. Joey grinned at once and winked.

“Well, I did do some reading as research! Look, we’re nearly there!”

The girls looked as they rapidly approached a small shingle bay. The most part of the perimeter of the island was surrounded by rocks and cliffs, and this was really the only safe place to beach. The captain turned off the engine, and the second boat, being only some minutes behind, soon caught up and did the same. The two boats bobbed about on the water as the men prepared to offload their passengers and cases.

“Doesn’t the water look clear, here?” exclaimed Vi. “Just look at the fish!” It really was remarkably clear just there. The jagged rocks that served as sentries around the island, forbidding most to enter, also defended this small patch so that it was often calm, and only disturbed in the very roughest seas.

“I say! Are we going to have to wade ashore?” demanded Mary-Lou, whose sharp eyes had noticed that there was no smaller boat or dinghy attached to either boat, but they were still a good fifteen yards out. She was immediately answered by Miss Annersley’s hasty reassurance.

“Goodness me, no! Do you think I want to have to report to all your parents that you have all succumbed to colds already?! But watch, Mary-Lou, and you’ll soon see what happens.” She sat back with a smile on her composed features, confident at causing something of a sensation. Joey eyed her and shared in her anticipation.

Two men had appeared on the beach. They had run down from under the cover of the trees as the two large boats bearing the school’s pupils had drawn near, and they were now hauling at a long raft-type contraption. One of the men brought a rusty frame on wheels, and wedged it under the wooden boards. With a shout, the men heaved in unison, and then to the girls’ delight, the wooden platform began to move over the stones. It moved slowly and protestingly at first, as the shingle embedded the wheels, but then it freed itself and rumbled down to the sea edge. With a splash it entered the sea, and then within seconds there was a readymade platform, bridging boat to shore.

“How simply wizard!” cried a girl with long black plaits that were swinging wildly as she jumped up and down.

“Keep still!” ordered Miss Annersley. “Yes, it is an invention of genius, isn’t it? Now listen carefully to instructions.”

It only took ten minutes for all the girls to have stepped up out of the boat and made their way tentatively along the swaying platform, before standing proudly on the beach.

“And it’s our beach!” said Mary-Lou proudly, sizing up the area with a proprietary eye.

“Now, do you all have your hand luggage? Nobody with wet feet? Then in single file please, line up behind me. No straggling. March!” The girls marched and soon found themselves leaving the small beach and heading up a slope that skirted the North side of the island. The views were magnificent and stretched far up the coast towards Devon. The girls walked in near silence as they took in the sights around them. The path was getting steep and narrow and the croc of girls slowed as more than one stumbled over the unfamiliar uneven ground.

Vi looked around her. On her right was a tall hedge that obscured any further view of the island. Looking down away to her left, she watched the water creaming softly over the foot of the cliffs below. A shiny brown blob suddenly emerged from the water and then vanished again. Vi stopped dead, to a chorus of grunts from behind her as disgruntled girls fell over each other and stepped in the heels of the one in front.

“Did you see it? What is it?” she cried in great excitement. Joey was bringing up the rear and she called ahead to find out what the hold up was. Panting, she reached Vi and the crowd assembling around her. Taking in the situation at a glance, she grinned widely, and then raised her voice so that it carried.

“Young Vi here has just seen the first Looe Island seal!” she laughed, and Vi squealed in delight. “Oh, you’ll see plenty more,” she continued. “By the way, look behind you, the way we have just come. Do you all see that delightful little white cottage on the coast opposite.? Well, that’s MY place! You’ll all be invited over in due course. But come on, we’re left behind. Hurry up!”

 


#58:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 5:53 pm


Lovely, Lisa. But I'm soooooooooo tempted to say I'd would have loved to read a scene with them all splashing through the water, suitcases in tow, being led by Miss Annersley...oops. I think RCS is having a bad effect on me! Embarassed Laughing

Can you give us more? And isn't it maddening when the PB dpes that? That's my problem with the emerson drabble!

 


#59:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 6:11 pm


Plot bunnie or not, that was great.

 


#60:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 6:26 pm


Lisa_T wrote:
Lovely, Lisa. But I'm soooooooooo tempted to say I'd would have loved to read a scene with them all splashing through the water, suitcases in tow, being led by Miss Annersley...oops. I think RCS is having a bad effect on me! Embarassed Laughing


Hey! How come I'm getting the blame? Wink

Lisa this is wonderful - more please! (And yes it is annoying when the PB gives you the eandings and you have to work at the middle! Laughing )

 


#61:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 11:56 pm


It's all very well for people who do have plot bunnies that can do endings!
But since this has only just started, so to speak, there should be lots of middle to enjoy, I hope.

 


#62:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 3:00 am


*chants at Lisa for more!*

 


#63:  Author: AbiLocation: Alton, Hants PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 11:35 am


*joins in the chant*

 


#64:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 12:52 pm


*Harmonises with Abi & Vikki*

*Deposits box of earplugs on thread for the unappreciative*

 


#65:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 4:48 pm


*refuses earplugs with a smirk and chants louder than anyone else*
Oh, sorry. Was that too loud? Laughing
No matter. LissssAAAAAAAAAAA!

 


#66:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 6:31 pm


Lisa, this is a wonderfully descriptive story! I can just feel their actions!

 


#67:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:10 am


How lovely on a wet February night to read of a warm sunny sea trip.

 


#68:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2004 11:38 pm


*hopes Lisa is okay!!!!*

 


#69:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 6:57 am


Maybe shes busy?

 


#70:  Author: AbiLocation: Alton, Hants PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:05 am


Not another busy person? Laughing

 


#71:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:10 am


Perhaps there are things that she isn't telling us, such as more story.

 


#72:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 6:06 pm


*lol* Subtle as a brick, Jennie!

 


#73:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 8:05 pm


Abi wrote:
Not another busy person? Laughing


It's a CBB baby boom!!! Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

 


#74:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:03 pm


Vikki, I have been busy all evening, and I can assure you that it's not that kind of busy!!! There is absolutley no chance of that!
*Wishes the night sweats would go away!*

 


#75:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:07 pm


*huggles Pat and offers a mini fan!!*

 


#76:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 5:22 am


*sends over an ice pack*

 


#77:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 3:06 pm


They're the pits, aren't they? Hope you're feeling better soon.

 


#78:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 3:08 pm


It's totally crazy to lie awake in the middle of the night, with no heating on, and nothing over you, and feeling like mid summer!!!
Never mind, I grew into them, so I'll grow out of them!

 


#79:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 5:18 pm


Well, at least you get to loose one of the annoyances of femininity.......


















......that has to be some compensation? Wink

 


#80:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 5:47 pm


Careful, Vikki. Some women are so unhappy at the loss of their femininity at menopause that they can get severly despressed.

 


#81:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 6:49 pm


OoopS! Embarassed Didn't mean to upset anyone! I just meant it in the context of no longer feeling crappy and grumpy and irritable every fourth week!!!

 


#82:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 6:52 pm


That's okay, I'm sure you didn't. I just thought I'd make that point before we all got carried away extolling the virtues of menopause.

 


#83:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 6:53 pm


Get upset? You jest!!! Get it over and done with more like!!

BTW, Mum still knows when she should be on, and she's 91!! She gets PMT still, though mildly!

 


#84:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 6:55 pm


Poor her and poor you, Pat!

 


#85:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 7:25 pm


*huggles Pat and her mum!!*

 


#86:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 8:58 pm


Well, my mother takes an almost malicious delight in reminding me that she no longer needs to bother- even though in her case menopause was prematurely induced by hysterectomy! She's only 46- was 45 at the time.

 


#87:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 9:18 pm


My mum had that at 37 Lisa!

 


#88:  Author: TrishLocation: Australia PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 1:24 am


And I had that last year at the age of 31. Many friends and people at work have told me they are quite envious heh. I do NOT miss that "annoyance of femininity" at all!

I'll still go through menopause in the future though, as they left my ovaries so I wouldn't go through it now. This of course means I still get PMT.














Or I would if I'd ever had it!! Laughing

 


#89:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:42 am


Lucky you, Trish. Actually, I don't get PMT either, thankfully.

 


#90:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 2:56 pm


Would agree totally with Pat. And can someone tell me exactly what is wrong with sitting with a door or window open on a freezing February day?

Vikki - it's wonderful not having to worry about that 'aspect of femininity' if going away.

 


#91:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 3:03 pm


*waves a hand* Sitting at an open window as we speak - and I haven't even got hot flushes!

 


#92:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:10 pm


Luckily I've never had PMT, but it's really weird when you cna feel that the air is cold, but you aren't!

 


#93:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:18 pm


Still get PMT sometimes. I also used to get incredibly tired some months and I still get that now and again. Glad to get rid of it though,

 


#94:  Author: JanetLocation: Ferndown, Dorset PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 9:26 pm


Only one post in the last wek Lisa?

never mind though it was excellent - you take the CS and thrust into a completely new location but retain all the characters and essence of the school!

I'm hoping for more soon!

 


#95:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 6:22 am


Janet wrote:
I'm hoping for more soon!


So am I!

 


#96:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 2:49 pm


Well, I'm glad I didn't upset anyone!!!! Embarassed

 


#97:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 6:39 pm


Aw, Vikki! *huggles* of course you didn't!

 


#98:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 7:00 pm


*sobs and berates self* Crying or Very sad
Oh no! Now you're all going to be excited thinking I've posted more story (at last) and then you'll all be disappointed in me...

Sorry everyone. I sound like someone in a decline or something, but I have been very unwell for a long time, and it flared up again last week. I am making progress but it can be sporadic. Please pray that I'll be OK for the Gathering, hubby is threatening to put his foot down and not let me come unless I'm well enough! I'm sure I will be...

Anyway, whenever I've come on to the CBB I've wanted to post this, but didn't want you all to think there was more story so I kept putting it off and then .. and then ...

I am aiming to write a bit more over the next couple of days, but then I am on holiday for a few days (to Looe! All in the name of research, but hubby thinks it's a treat for his 30th birthday Twisted Evil )

Thanks for your patience (and yibbling about PMT & the change - all very inspiring!)

Hopefully back later Embarassed

 


#99:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 7:02 pm


*sighs gloomily and trudges away again after giving Lisa a huge huggle*

 


#100:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:13 pm


*repeats KB's actions, including the gloomy departure*
*leaves a nice big box of choccies, baileys and flowers for Lisa*

 


#101:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:23 pm


Thanks guys *smiles shyly*

Well I have managed a little bit, but at least it gets me back into the swing of it! I'm nearly at the bit I have already written (so you will get more soon!) but not as someone said the end! I thinnk with Dancer I really knew where it was going and it was plot driven, whilst this is more an indulgence of my romanticised mind!

*has consumed Baileys from Lisa, so not so shy now!*

Anyway, hic, here is a little bit.

Have a choccie anyone?

***************


The girls hurried, but it was very trying to have to leave such exciting sights unexplored. Verity-Anne yelped as Mary-Lou grabbed her with a thrill.

“Look,” she gasped, pointing to a small white cottage that was set tantalisingly back behind some leafy plants. A small path of scattered shingle led round to the doorway, past a sign that read ‘Smuggler’s Cottage’. “Oh, do you think that there were smugglers on this island? There might be some historical evidence for them!”

“Save your breath!” panted Verity-Anne, speaking up uncharacteristically. It would appear that Mary-Lou heeded this advice, but she was in fact too puffed to respond, and another few minutes’ trudging brought the girls out into the open at the top of the island.

“Oh!” exclaimed many voices, as their owners beheld the stunning view before them. This place on the island really was the best viewpoint. Looking back over their shoulders to the left, the coastline of Hannafore and Looe jutted out into the horizon, whilst to the right a tiny intriguing island could be seen, linked precariously to the one they were on by a small bridge spanning the gap of churning waves.

Behind them, providing a solid rock of defence from any Southerly winds, and an indefinable feeling of comfort and security, rose an imposing stone building. It was in the doorway of this great house that Miss Annersley had headed and was laughing with a pretty young woman who had come to greet them.

With a loud inhalation of satisfaction, Joey greeted the newcomer with a carrying: “Rosalie!” and this dispelled the reverie many of the new girls had fallen into. With one accord, they turned their backs on the amazing view and dashed into the house that was to be their school for the next term.


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#102:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:24 pm


*rubs eyes*
*double checks*
Nup. No story. Uh, Lisa, you did mean more story, didn't you?

 


#103:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:25 pm


Oh, OK! Double posting! Thanks, especially when you're ill
*sends more choccie and baileys as the first lot had such a good effect*

 


#104:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:26 pm


Sorry about that, Lisa !!! Laughing It was so long since I posted any story I had to go back and check where I'd got to! Now what are the chances of someone checking that fast?!

ETA Oh, now I'm really drunk & confused! When I posted this there was only one post from you Lisa, so what is the double posting you're referring to? (Bet while I'm writing this, you've posted again, and this will make even less sense!)

 


#105:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:32 pm


No i mean double posting as in we posted at the same time- cross posting might express it better!

 


#106:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:19 pm


Thank you Lisa!! Big huggles and hope you're feeling better soon !!!

 


#107:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:26 pm


Big huggles, Lisa and get well soon. It was kind of you to make the effort and we're looking forward to seeing more as soon as you are well. What a place for a school!

 


#108:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 10:15 pm


*sends a giant huggle to Lisa* Heart

Its especially deserved seeing as you are so ill and still manage to post.

 


#109:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 3:07 am


Thank you for more story Lisa. Hope you are feeling much better soon. Enjoy your holiday.

 


#110:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 4:46 pm


I am feeling better today, thanks everyone!
****************

The girls were effectively managed by the staff and in no time were standing in rows in a fairly large and airy room. A tall girl with her hair pinned up turned to her fellow and said in a regretful tone:

“But aren’t we small this year?”

It was true, that surveying the assembly in the hall there was but a third of the usual throng present. The objective onlooker may conclude that this was a new school just starting out, or one that was struggling. The Chalet School, of course, was neither of these. The misfortunes of the last few months had affected many, however, and the majority of parents and guardians had elected to keep their charges at home, as this was a short term. Indeed, the term had been due to commence three weeks’ previously, and staff of a lesser courage would probably have elected to close the school completely whilst repairs were being executed to the building on St Briavel’s. But not this staff. The number of pupils remaining though, gazed about them in satisfaction. They were standing bathed in the late afternoon sun that peeped through the high windows. The room smelled of floor polish and beeswax; there was also an ‘old’ smell that was not unpleasant but despite the thorough cleaning the room had apparently undergone, motes of dust swirled in the air, illuminated by the shafts of light.

The school fell to rapt attention as Miss Annersley and Miss Wilson walked briskly to the front of the room. They mounted a low dais, that had been hastily constructed for this purpose and regarded the neat ranks of girls. Miss Annersley’s heart swelled with pride as she noted how they organised themselves with very little bidding. She cleared her throat and her voice rang out, leading the girls in a short prayer of thanksgiving that both denominations could listen to. Prayers over, Miss Annersley looked at the girls and smiled.

“I know you are all eager to discover the place” she began, “and we have planned the first few days so that you will all be able to do so!” An immediate murmur of excitement rippled around the room but was quelled quickly as the girls waited to hear what was coming. “This evening we have unpacking and settling in to attend to as usual. The form lists will be read after this assembly and you will be given further instruction about sleeping arrangements, which will be different this year, due to the plan of the house. Tomorrow, in forms, you will be taken on a nature walk which will enable you to explore the island, as well as learn something of the ecology of this coastline. Sunday will be, as is our custom, a day of rest and prayer. Girls in VB and above will be permitted to take walks around the island in the afternoon; the rest of you are requested to keep to the garden and lawns.” She paused as this sank in and drew a deep breath, knowing that her next statement would make something of a sensation. “Girls, we are in a difficult time, both as a school and as a nation. Every one of us has a duty to perform, to the best of her ability. Due to the circumstances surrounding us this term, we have decided to change the curriculum for all but those girls who are taking examinations in July.“ She held her hand up for silence as an excited noise arose. “So, we propose to deliver a specialised curriculum that takes advantage of the situation in which we find ourselves. In addition to our usual core of Maths, English and Languages, we will concentrate particularly on gardening, domestic sciences, geography, local history and marine biology.” At this last a chorus of enquiries was poured forth and Miss Annersley laughed and addressed Nell. “Would you like to explain, Miss Wilson?” she asked. Her friend at once acquiesced.

“I’m sure that many of you understand the word ‘marine’ to pertain to the sea,” she said, “and as we are placed in an ideal situation to study it this term, we will be following a programme that enables us to study the plant, animal and bird life of this part of coast. We will also investigate the geology of this area, and research something of Cornwall’s rich mining heritage.” She smiled with satisfaction at the sighs of delight from the girls. “And we have one more announcement for you.” The girls’ eyes swivelled to behold Joey as she made her way to the front of the hall, chuckling with delight at the excitement she was causing. “Mrs Maynard has made some suggestions about this specialised curriculum, and will be telling you now.”

“Hello everyone!” beamed Joey around the room. “I will be coming over every Tuesday and Thursday, tides and weather permitting, and delivering some lectures on the myths and folklore of the area. At the end of the term, I will be holding a creative writing competition, and you are all invited to submit poetry or prose which is inspired by being here on the island!” The girls were unable to maintain their silence any longer, and enthusiastic comments spilled out. Miss Annersley gave them their heads for a moment, and then called for quiet, which was achieved quickly. She was experienced enough to know that the girls were restless, and deemed it best to hand over to Matey to deal with the lists.

 


#111:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 4:55 pm


Lisa, these are wonderful ideas! Marine biology as a subject might be a bit modern, but the ideas are excellent!

 


#112:  Author: ChelseaLocation: Your Imagination PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 5:09 pm


*love the new ideas

*looking forward to marine biology lectures

 


#113:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 5:26 pm


I know, it is a bit modern isn't it?! I just thought I'd indulge myself to be a bit different! It would be my ideal curriculum (without the maths - but I thought I'd better leave that in! Oh, and I'd like a bit of music too on an ideak world ...)

Here is a tiny bit more (but I think you'll all shout about this!) Twisted Evil


************

It was after dinner, that Matey appeared in the small parlour that had been commandeered as a staff room. She looked harassed, and Nell leapt up at her furrowed brow.

“What on earth is it?” she demanded, leading one of the bastions of the school to a threadbare tapestry chair. “Surely the lists haven’t defeated you this year? There are less girls to worry about.”

Matron smiled mirthlessly. “How ironic,” she muttered. “It’s just that that I am worried about.” She jumped as a voice spoke suddenly from behind the door.

“Talk sense!” instructed Hilda, anxiety and fatigue making her a little sharp.

Matey raised her eyebrows and glanced sharply at her, noting her white face and strained expression. “I’m just tired,” she said. “As you are, I suspect. Take my advice, and get to bed.” Hilda raised herself wearily from her chair.

“I might do just that,” she sighed. “Goodnight, all.” She left the room to a chorus of good wishes. As soon as the door closed behind her, Matron turned and faced the rest of the assembled staff.

“One of the new girls is unaccounted for,” she stated bluntly. “I have consulted the records, and she was meant to meet us at the quayside. She didn’t…” she trailed off, not wishing to speak aloud the words that they were all thinking. Miss Annersley had had the responsibility of meeting the girls.


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#114:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 5:29 pm


*obligingly shouts at Lisa as I fall down the unexpected cliff* swear

 


#115:  Author: ChelseaLocation: Your Imagination PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 5:37 pm


Oho, Hilda is doing so well. First Phil and now this....

Please come back and stop KB from plummeting to her death over the cliff.

 


#116:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 5:40 pm


*yells back, just prior to crashing onto rocks, that there was nothing about dying in my contract*

 


#117:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 8:40 pm


Is there a class on cliff-hangers that you drabble writers take that the rest of us know nothing about?

 


#118:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 8:56 pm


There's no class, Mandy, but I suspect it is highly infectious! Twisted Evil

 


#119:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 9:34 pm


I was just settling in to a 'nice' little story in a beautiful setting and looking forward to marine biology and folk tales and, and ....

I've fallen down the cliff!
*grabs KB and heroically saves her life. Both wind up battered but safe for the moment, but the tide is coming in!* Help, Lisa!

 


#120:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 9:48 pm


*splutters* PatMac, haven't you learned yet that there aint no such animile as a 'nice little story' on this board?!

*falls over cliff on top of PatMac and KB*
*mutters at KB for not looking out for the cliff in the first place!*

 


#121:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 10:47 pm


*Wonders what has happened to Jennie's trampolines, which were supposed to stop such accidents.*

 


#122:  Author: Tassie_EllenLocation: Tasmania, Australia PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:01 am


P'raps Miss Annersley left them on the quayside, too!!!! Shocked Shocked

 


#123:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 7:27 am


Lisa_T wrote:
*falls over cliff on top of PatMac and KB*
*mutters at KB for not looking out for the cliff in the first place!*


How is it my fault?!

And thank you, PatMac.

 


#124:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:42 am


Oh no! At the begining Lisa said this was set just after Miss A's return following her head injury - could this be the cause?

More please

 


#125:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:44 am


Good point, Lesley. And if so, will she regret it?

 


#126:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 9:43 am


This time, there's real cliffs! I don;t think Lisa will mind if I post this link. It's a gorgeous place.

http://www.mti.dmu.ac.uk/~ahugill/island/

 


#127:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 4:26 pm


All trampolines were in place the last time that I checked. Suspect that someone has been moving them.

 


#128:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:17 pm


But Jennie, part of your contract is to ensure that they're always there!

 


#129:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:59 pm


*grovels to HM*
*mutters at Jennie for not doing her job properly*
I thought there was more! I hope Lisa is feeling ok and that she posts more soon! Laughing

 


#130:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2004 8:35 pm


Thank you Lisa!!! This is great, but please don't let this missing pupil cause too much trouble for Hilda!

 


#131:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 6:58 am


Great story so far! Not to mention setting. (Sorry I’m late.) But, sincerely hopes that last post doesn’t mean Lisa’s been taking lessons in killing off characters. We ought to have somebody left in the increasingly elite group that lets the poor things survive.

Re/ marine biology -- it may be recent, but not recent enough to be an anachronism here. For example, the Marine Biological Laboratory at Wood's Hole, Massachusetts has been around since the 1880s. Complete with women as scientists.

Re/ the hot flashes discussion – Just how long are you guys saying being waked up by these things lasts? I was sort of hoping it was a short term thing. *Feels quite put upon being tormented by both before & after menopause symptoms* (not to mention sleeplessness intensified by miserable Michigan germs)

 


#132:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 9:20 pm


So far hot flushes/flashes have been going on for 2 years on and off!

 


#133:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 9:38 pm


Quote:
Lisa wrote: She was experienced enough to know that the girls were restless, and deemed it best to hand over to Matey to deal with the lists.



Oh dear! Why does the first part of that remind me of Teaching Practice?!!!


This is fantastic, Lisa! Please keep going! Hope you feel better soon!

 


#134:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 10:52 pm


Just wondered if there is any more (apart from hot flushes, of course)

 


#135:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 12:03 am


Well, Lisa did say she was going on holiday for a few days, though she wasn't too specific as to when...

Thanks Pat for information Sad . Adds to file translating flashes as flushes and PMS as PMT.

 


#136:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 6:03 pm


*sends big huggles to anyone experiencing hot fla/ushes*

 


#137:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 9:03 pm


Pat wrote:
So far hot flushes/flashes have been going on for 2 years on and off!


I'm up to nearly three years with them Exclamation

 


#138:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 9:29 pm


*aaaaaaah!!!*

I'm only on about 6 months, and worried that it will get even worse if/when I go off the hormones doctor is throwing at out-of-control cycles.

I am too young for this bawling

 


#139:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 11:53 pm


That's what I thought.

 


#140:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2004 7:43 am


*huggles Kathy and Sue*

 


#141:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2004 10:39 am


thankfully mine seem to have died down for the time being! I just wish everything could just stop, like it started! I hate never knowing what or when something will happen!

 


#142:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2004 3:40 pm


Pat, have you tried the Phyto-hormone treatment? You get your HRT from plants, not animals.

 


#143:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 9:37 pm


Thanks for hanging around whilst I've been away! (Even if you are discussing a subject that I'm sure EBD would not acknowledge! Confused )

I did some great field research in Looe, including a visit to Looe guildhall (from 15th century) which provided me with a real life bit of information about the island which unbelievably fits in to the exact year I think - 1942?) which I can't wait to include in the drabble! If anyone else finds out, please don't say or guess! It's great story stuff!

*************

It was exciting, preparing for bed that first evening. The wind had risen, and a howling surrounded the old house which seemed to shiver, doing battle with a familiar foe. Crowded into the partitioned rooms, sundry members of the fifth chattered about the day. The position of the island had struck a chord with the romantic notions of many of them, and they discussed old tales of shipwrecks and smugglers, whilst huddling together in nervousness at the harshness of the elements.

“It’s so – so deliciously spooky!” declared Bride Bettany, after a particularly eerie wail had sounded. She sat in her bed, hugging her knees. “Gosh! What’s that?” She may well ask, as at that moment a loud rattling sound made the girls jump. “Has someone thrown pebbles at the window?” Two of the girls made their way over to the pane of glass to investigate, when there was a loud whirring noise, then the room was plunged into darkness! The air was punctuated by screams and yelps of laughter and fear. Just as Rebecca had banged her knee against a bedstead and was adding her loud moans to the affray, a ghostly figure appeared in the doorway, bearing a candle. Too shocked for words, the girls clutched at each other, but were rapidy reassured by the solid voice of Miss Wilson.

“Girls! What is the meaning of this childish noise? We look to you to set an example to the younger members of the school. If you all fall apart at some mere bad weather, there is little hope for you!” As she spoke, she had been lighting and passing round candles, and soon the girls’ faces were flickering in the shadowy light. “Rebecca! Let me see. Yes, I daresay that will be a big bruise tomorrow. Please cease that noise at once. Now, someone sensible, you Tom, explain!”

Tom looked around at the rest of the assembly rather scornfully, and gave a concise explanation to the Head. The latter raised her eyebrows. “I see,” she said. “Well, the weather is liable to be rough occasionally here; those won’t be the last hailstones you’ll hear, and neither will this be the last time the generator fails, I expect!”

“But Miss Wilson,” spoke up Bride suddenly, “does this mean that the walks tomorrow will be cancelled?”

“Well, certainly, if the weather continues in this way,” responded their teacher, but she seemed rather detached. “Now, look to your beds, girls, because I am not leaving you with the candles aflame!” she repressed a shudder as the girls climbed into bed, and more than one of them reflected on the cause of their move to Looe island. “Goodnight, girls, God Bless,” she whispered, and closed the door behind her.

“I say, do you think there is something troubling Bill?” asked Tom urgently in her low voice, as she propped herself up on an elbow, barely discernible in the gloom. “She seemed distracted, as if she was worried about something.”

“Well, all I know is that she didn’t squash us as I thought she would,” replied Suzanne complacently.

“Probably school worries,” mumbled Bride, sleepily, “come on, everyone, let’s be quiet now. Miss Wilson was right when she said we have an example to set.”

“Isn’t it fun, being able to see each other, without dividing curtains for once?” asked Marielle, but the remainder of the girls were silent, and soon only the sound of gentle breathing within the room, and loud rumbles from without.

 


#144:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 10:20 pm


Yay!! Good to see you (and the story) back Lisa!!!

 


#145:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 10:34 pm


Nice to have you back Lisa, with a new installment too.

 


#146:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 10:48 pm


Thanks! Feel so refreshed by the holiday that I'm posting some more!

**************

The next morning, Bride’s doom laden suggestion was borne out. Looking eagerly out of the windows at first light, she sighed loudly. “It’s all a mist!” she exclaimed in disappointment. Further along the landing, these sentiments were echoed by members of the second form as they hurried to dress.

“It’s a shame!” declared Mary-Lou. “Now we’ll be penned up all day, and I’m dying to explore this island!”

It certainly was a shame, felt by staff and girls alike. The unpredictable Cornish weather put paid to their plans for the first weekend, and although Miss Slater, Miss Cochrane and Miss O’Ryan rallied round and provided a treasure hunt and quiz to enable the girls to get acquainted with the house, the girls chafed under their imprisonment. One or two of the staff, too, seemed bad tempered and irritable, and more than one member of the school wondered at what the future term had in store. Saturday and Sunday passed slowly, but at length Sunday evening arrived, and with it a lightening in the weather.

“About time, too!” commented Miss Bell over a cup of coffee. “I feel that the term is two weeks’ old, not two days’ old!”

“A good night’s sleep is all you need, ma cherie,” replied Jeanne de Lachennais, smiling gently. “All will feel better in the morning. Where is Hilda, do you know?”

“Ah,” Biddy O’Ryan looked up from her knitting soberly, “she’s closeted with Nell. She, Nell that is, decided it was time Hilda was told about our missing pupil.”

Jeanne winced. “Then it is to be hoped that she will not take it too badly,” she commented with feeling. “But, has nothing been heard of the girl?”

“No, and no news from her family,” supplied Grizel Cochrane. “They probably don’t care much,” she concluded bitterly.

Biddy shot a look at her colleague. “We don’t know. Rosalie has been trying to contact them, but this weather has made communication difficult.” She paused and then deliberately changed the subject. “So what are the plans regarding the timetable tomorrow?”

Pam Slater consulted the small notice board placed there for their convenience. “We are still aiming to begin the curriculum,” she noted. “It’s French day. But we will be fitting the walks in throughout the day. Oh – hello Nell. How did Hilda take the news?”

Nell looked disturbed. “She did not react as I expected,” she explained. “She seemed vaguely concerned, but started talking about the potatoes. I’m hoping she’ll realise more in the morning. Rosalie will take her through it. It may do Hilda good to get her teeth into something,” she ruminated, and then laughed at the expression on Biddy’s face. “Oh, I know. Shocking language!” She yawned. “I’m off to bed. Perhaps a clear head will help me to think tomorrow. It looks like being a nicer day anyway!”

She left the room, and the remaining staff began to pack up their leisure items, talking softly about the next day. The night passed peacefully and the school was greeted by the welcome reappearance of the sun when it woke. Spirits certainly rose as the girls gathered in the main hall for breakfast and chatted of the exploration in store.

“Where’s Miss Annersley?” demanded Mary-Lou, her voice ringing through the hall. “She’s not at the staff table. Neither’s Miss Dene, come to think of it,” she continued, looking round the room which served as dining room, assembly room and a space for dance and exercise.

“Mary-Lou, eat your breakfast and be quiet,” spoke a fair girl rather shortly, her voice carrying the authority of junior prefect, as she noticed uncomfortably that several staff members had turned to look in their direction at Mary-Lou’s question.

“But I was only – “ began the offender, when Verity-Anne poked her sharply in the ribs.

“Miss O’Ryan is giving you a look” she warned in a hissing whisper. Mary-Lou opened her mouth, reconsidered, and then mutely filled it with porridge.

First lessons began, and soon the school sank into a harmonious atmosphere. The first two forms were sent out on walks with their teachers, and a peace reigned.

 


#147:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 10:50 pm


*worried about Hilda!*

 


#148:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 10:53 pm


More please, Lisa!! What's wrong with Hilda?

 


#149:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 11:12 pm


Oh dear poor Hilda - more problems.

 


#150:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 2:18 am


Great posts, Lisa!

 


#151:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 7:11 am


Oh, dear, more worries...

 


#152:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 1:22 pm


AARRGHH!

Help! I woke up in the night feeling like an utter goop because I realised I've got completely confused about the timing of this!

Please forgive and help me! Are there any knowledgeable persons out there (& I know there are!) that can help:
I thought this should be in place of Carola, so:
is the war still on?!
how old would the trips be?
how old is Mary-Lou?
have I got any of the characters remotely right? (I know I have completely made up names of some eg Rebecca, Sally, Marielle!) Can any of you suggest who some of the pupils would be and their ages/forms?!

*Slinks away feeling pathetic, having worried half the night! Suspects she may have to rewrite the next section of story, which was written over two weeks ago and feels disjointed now anyhow.* Crying or Very sad

 


#153:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 7:25 pm


The war isn't on, Lisa. It finished a couple of years previously!

(If you're setting it in the summer term, it would be Wrong you're covering not Carola and Joey and co. would be in Canada and Grizel would have gone to New Zealand. If it's Spring then Margot would be in Canada as would Josette.) Mary-Lou would be Lower Fourth, I think. The trips would be Upper Second/Lower Third.

What age(s) are you wanting for names of pupils? Peggy Bettany would be Head Girl and Bride and Tom Upper Fifth. Julie - Lower Fifth.


Huggles!

 


#154:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 7:57 pm


Oh! fume


Thanks Catherine! I feel like a prize idiot! Embarassed

What shall I do, guys?
a) Cry Crying or Very sad

b) Create a massive EBDism style parallel / alternative universe where it's Spring 1942 and Margot is in Canada & the other trips are old enough to board & I basically make up any pupils I need to? Rolling Eyes

c) Attempt to rewrite and plan (I suppose a few years after the war, 'digging for victory', rationing etc is all still v important) Confused

d) Give up HelpMe

e) All of the above

Answers on a postcard!


*blushes red to roots of her hair in embarrassment*

 


#155:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:19 pm


*huggles Lisa*

 


#156:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:28 pm


I don't think the Trips age was relevant re boarding. They're boarding from Three Go 'cos of bad weather, and they go straight into St Briavel's as boarders too for the obvious reason, so if this story is set after a relocation from St B then they can board- except that you have Jo nearby, so maybe they won't need to! Arrange it to suit yourself, the plot, and the characters (not necessarily in that order) and justify it somehow. I don't think we'd tear you to pieces over that! Wink

This is excellent, and I wanna know what Hilda's trouble is. Only, if it's set post Island, as far as I can work out, that's around three years after the accident. Lesley? KB? Can you be more precise on that?

 


#157:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:36 pm


Sorry to add to your problems Lisa - but Miss A's head injury was in 1943 and she returned to the School in the Summer term of 1944! There was a certain amount of rationing on into the 1950's however so that would be covered. If this is set in time of move to Island thats about Spring 1948. If you want to link Miss A's problems you could have her having a minor accident just before the start of the story - that could have a delayed reaction to bring on severe symptoms again!

(PM me if you want some symptoms!)

 


#158:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:41 pm


Poor Lisa! *huggles*

 


#159:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:44 pm


*laughs manically*

Ho hum.

Got it ...

Then Miss Annersley woke up and it had all been a dream!!


Think I'll take your advice Lesley, and set it in Spring 48, close enough to the war for rationing etc to still be important. This seems to fit slightly better. Yes - I would like some symptoms please. I do have vague ideas of where I want this to go, but I never felt very confident about it, or the timing (it shows, huh?!) Although it goes against the grain with me (I really wanted it to be 'correct') I think I will just continue best I can (If you can all put up with the inaccuracies and inconsistencies!) & then if it's worth it, come back to it and edit later!

Grr! All because I leant out several CS books (inc Carola etc) & was trying to do this from memory!

Ok, I'm off to re-read the latest bit, then I'll post it! I really liked it when I first wrote it, I hope you do (just ignore all the previous bits!) Laughing

 


#160:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:49 pm


You've done so much research that to give it all up now would be a great shame.

*waits eagerly for next bit*

 


#161:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 8:59 pm


OK, posting lots now as a reward for all your encouragement and understanding!

**************

In the study, Rosalie had succeeded in enabling Hilda to fully comprehend the situation. The secretary tried to reassure her friend and colleague that it was a minor problem, but one that needed addressing.

“But the term is three days’ spent, and there’s still no word of Morvoren Treffry,” protested Hilda Annersley in concern. “Her family cannot be reached on the telephone, and you have already cabled them. I simply do not know what to do.”

Rosalie Dene stared at this admission of helplessness which was uncharacteristic of the usually so calm and composed Headmistress. The trauma of the fire that seemed to have provoked a return of some of the effects of the accident of five years ago had disturbed her health in more ways than one, and poor Hilda was finding issues that would not have troubled her too much usually, very difficult to resolve. Rosalie sighed as she considered the situation. This, on top of all the worries that had preceded this term was simply too much.

“Come on, Hilda,” she began in a gentle voice. “You know that you haven’t had your rest today, and the Doctor decreed that you may only return to work on the condition that you followed his regime. Leave the Morvoren business to me.” Sounding more confident than she felt, she guided her friend and colleague towards the door, and was rewarded with a grateful smile.

“You’re right,” Hilda acknowledged, in a resigned voice. “I will feel better after a little sleep. I will see you later at lunch time and we’ll discuss the matter then,” and she vanished out of the room. Left alone, Rosalie drew a crumpled telegram from her pocket and smoothed it out, her brow furrowing in concern. The telegram, from Mr Treffry, declared that his daughter had left at the appointed time for school, three days previously. Although this struck terror into Rosalie’s heart, it was softened by the final line of the message which informed the school not too worry – as he knew his daughter! Puzzling over the situation, Rosalie tapped her teeth with her pencil and then sucked the end of it, appearing very much like a daydreaming middle.

 


#162:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:00 pm


“I suppose I must go to the police with this,” she sighed, speaking aloud to herself in the tiny room that served as the school’s main administrative office. “But I’ll take it to Nell first.” With resolution in her step, she strode down the narrow hall way, and knocked sharply on a door that opened into a large sunny room. A pleasant voice bid her “Entrez!” and Rosalie, recalling that this was a French day, entered the room and spoke prettily.

“Excusez-moi, Mlle Wilson. Je suis désolé d'interrompre votre leçon. Mais je dois vous parler instamment.” Miss Wilson’s eyes widened, but she said nothing, merely rising to her feet and addressing the class of seniors:

“Continuez le travail sur le conseil, et puis lisez les pages cent vingt à vingt neuf,”

As soon as the door was shut behind them, Rosalie dropped into English and acquainted Nell with the facts. The latter looked grave, but nodded her agreement at the secretary’s suggestion.

“We simply must not worry Hilda at all costs. Something like this could set her back seriously, and you know the Doctor said she was not to be worried. Yes, we must alert the police at once. I will – my goodness, what on earth is that!”
She may well have exclaimed loudly, for a din was coming from outside the house. Both women flew to the window, opened it and beheld the second form tearing up the slope, puffing and panting as they called out loudly.

“Girls!” admonished Miss Wilson in a carrying voice which spoke of her yodelling skills in the Tirol. “Stop that noise at once! What is the meaning of this?”

Most of the girls had reached the house by now, but were in no fit state to respond. The slope up to the house from the beach was a steep one, and more than one girl was gasping for breath. Len Maynard, somewhat fitter than the others, managed to speak first.

“Please, Miss Wilson, we’re sorry, but Miss Burn told us to come for you at once!”

Biting back her retort that she was sure Miss Burn would not have encouraged this display, Miss Wilson nevertheless realised the urgency of the message, and she vanished from the window only to reappear a moment later at the door, hastily pulling on her coat. “Where is Miss Burn?” she demanded crisply. “Is anyone hurt?” She was startled at this point from an outbreak of giggles from Sally and she fixed that miscreant with an icy glare until she subsided into a deep crimson blush.

“No one is hurt,” continued Len, leading the way back down the slope, “and she is on the beach. Only – something has come up,” she finished lamely. Just then they rounded the corner at the top of the slope and Miss Wilson could see the panorama spread out before them. The water sparkled blue in the spring sunshine, and Looe and Hannafore appeared very close today in the clear light. A dark shape in the water caught her eye, and she looked closely to see a small wooden rowing boat approaching the island with just one occupant. The waters and currents were notorious around this coastline, and is Wilson feared the worst for the boat and its sailor. Hurrying down the slope as fast as she dared, Miss Wilson reached the small shingle beach in a rush of pebbles, and encountered Hilary Burn, the Phys. Ed. teacher, shouting instructions to the figure. Horrified, Miss Wilson observed that the rower was a young slender girl of perhaps fourteen. With scant regard for her shoes and the temperature, the figure jumped from the boat and expertly hauled it up on to the beach. Then she turned and greeted the surprised co-head in a broad Cornish accent, which was nevertheless quite musical.

“Good morning! I’m Morvoren Treffry and I’ve come to join the Chalet School!” She could not have caused more of a sensation if she had owned two heads, and Miss Wilson turned sharply at Len’s gasp. She did not want the rest of the second form making a heroine of this unorthodox new pupil, and spoke rapidly to the younger girl.

 


#163:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:01 pm


"Thank you, Helena. Back up to the school now, please. And not a word of this to the others!” she warned. Len turned and trudged her way back up the slope in great disappointment, and some surprise at the use of her name. She had been looking forward to spreading the exciting news about Morvoren’s arrival! Stealing a glance over her shoulder, she scrutinised the new girl discreetly. She had a pale creamy face, with a liberal sprinkling of freckles over her nose. Her eyes were a vibrant deep green, but her most striking feature was her long auburn hair, that trailed over one shoulder in a bedraggled mess. Len continued up the slope reflecting that if this was typical of Morvoren, they were in for an exciting term anyhow!

The subject of these musings had waded back out into the sea, and was pushing the boat further up the beach. Almost speechless, Miss Wilson listened to Hilary Burn’s hurried explanation. “I had taken the girls on a rocky shore ramble,” she explained. “And then Con called out that she’d spotted a boat heading for us. As this is a private island, I did not want there to be scene with any trespassers or tourists in front of the girls so I told them to proceed back to the school, and bid you come down here at once. I’m so sorry, but those foolish girls began screeching and running, and simply would not listen to me when I told them to stop.” Red in the face, Miss Burn finished her embarrassed explanation.

“Never mind, we’ll talk of that later,” said Miss Wilson kindly, resolving inwardly to take the disobedient class in hand very firmly later on. She turned her attention to the Chalet School’s newest pupil, and spoke to her firmly.

“Come out of the water at once, Morvoren!” she exclaimed. “You’ll catch your death of cold.” To her surprise, Morvoren replied to this cheerfully.

“Not me. I’m never ill!” and continued in her unhurried way to empty the boat of her belongings. She lifted a large oilskin bag out, and an awkward package of newspapers.

Realising that Morvoren apparently did not mean her response for insolence, Miss Wilson nevertheless felt an anger building up and spoke in a voice that boded no good.

“I said at once! Now you may be new here, Morvoren, but I am very unhappy about your – your arrival. You are two days’ late for a start. We have been extremely worried about you, and as for what your family must be thinking …”

Morvoren screwed up her nose as she pondered the teacher’s words. “Oh! Well, I’m sorry about that. But don’t be concerned about my family – they won’t worry! Here,” she continued calmly, handing over the slippery newspaper package, “came right through a shoal of mackerel as I was crossing the bar. They were practically lining up to take a bite, so I bagged us some for dinner!”

A peculiar splutter came from Hilary Burn at this juncture and she instantly busied herself by relieving Moroven of her bag and beginning to head up the slope. Miss Wilson, stunned into silence, took the proffered package dumbly, and followed her colleague’s lead. Morvoren followed on chattering happily.

“This is a handsome place!” she exclaimed, her eyes glowing as she surveyed the island. “I haven’t been here in years.”

“But you’ve been here before?” gasped Miss Burn, who was somewhat restored by her struggle with the oilskin. Morvoren observed her difficulty, and immediately lifted the bag from the young teacher’s hands as if it weighed no more than a satchel.

“Here, I’ll take it. I’m used to it. Yes, I used to row over here with my brothers. We played in the woods – and went swimming. I’ve waded over once, too!” she added surprisingly.

Miss Wilson, shuddering at the thought of children swimming in this dangerous place without supervision was pulled up short by the last statement. “Surely you can’t reach the island by wading?” she exclaimed, stopping for a moment to regard her pupil.

Morvoren returned her gaze frankly, and Miss Wilson, who was a fine judge of character, immediately reflected that whatever else this surprising new girl may be, she was certainly honest. “Oh, yes, but very rarely. The tides have to be just right. You can climb out over the rocks at Hannafore point, wade across, and clamber up to the rocks then on the South side of the island. A very strong current runs across though, so you have to get your timing just right, and be a good swimmer. I didn’t get back,” she mused regretfully, “and my brother couldn’t pick me up till the next day. I say – what a big house!”

The little party paused for a moment, the two staff somewhat out of breath, both from the climb and the revelations they had just heard. Morvoren, despite having carried the heavy bag and chattered all the way up the slope, did not show any ill effects as she gazed at the house with interest.

“Now, come with me,” instructed Miss Wilson, “and I will introduce you to Matron, who will help you wash, get into some clean, warm things, and unpack.”

Morvoren frowned slightly. “Oh – but I don’t need any help – “ she began but was cut off by Miss Wilson’s speedy reply.

“That is the way we do things here,” she said. “Please report to me when you are ready.” She bustled Morvoren into the porch and through into the carpeted hallway, and was met by a worried-looking Rosalie and a wiry woman who Morvoren surmised was Matron. “Miss Dene,” she said, “please trouble yourself no more about the missing student. This,” she said with a flourish, “is Morvoren Treffry!”

 


#164:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:07 pm


*giggles* What a gorgeous character! I can't wait to see how she goes at school!

 


#165:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:22 pm


Yay!!! Thank you Lisa!!!

 


#166:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:45 pm


Excellent start for Morvoren! Thank you Lisa! Looking forward to more!

 


#167:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 10:15 pm


Fab, Lisa! I'm really pleased you're keeping on with it! How will the school deal with Morvoren?!! More please!

 


#168:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 11:51 pm


Morvoren sounds a wonderful addition to the school. Would like to see some more of her adventures soon.

 


#169:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 12:15 am


I've just read chunks of this in one go, it's wonderful, I love the new character, it looks as though the school is going to have lots of fun with her.
If you hadn't mentioned about the timings, I expect I would have been so absorbed in the story that I wouldn't have noticed any discrepancies, so I'm really pleased you didn't give up.

 


#170:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:06 am


I love the independent Cornish spirit, Lisa!!! Fresh mackeral -mmmm! You can't get it fresh enough up here! I bought about 20 years ago when we lived in Ripon and it tasted very strange, so haven't dared since! Too used to getting them still wriggling!!!

 


#171:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 12:17 pm


This is great, Lisa. Is Morvoren going to be another Mary-Lou? 'Oh, it's only Morvoren, she doesnt mean to be insolent."

 


#172:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 12:51 pm


Just caught up with this, including your soul searching about the timing. Poor you, I'm not surprised. that period always muddles in my head.

I'm so glad you didn't give up. Morvoreen sounds like a lively addition to the school!

 


#173:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 2:28 pm


Jennie wrote:
Is Morvoren going to be another Mary-Lou? 'Oh, it's only Morvoren, she doesnt mean to be insolent."

Oh Jennie, I hope not! But I admit that thought occured to me, too! I want her to be much more likeable than Mary-LOu, but I also want to show her as having a real confidence in matters to do with Cornwall and the sea. Please tell me if she becomes too Mary-Louish!!

********************

Roaslie Dene beheld a wild looking and bedraggled girl who looked like she had stepped straight out of legend. Her naturally pale colouring nevertheless had a healthy glow, and the freckles spoke of long exposure to the sun. Matron bore the girl off in the efficient way only she could. Glancing at Nell, the secretary laughed suddenly.

“Look at your face! How did – what is that awful smell?!”

Miss Wilson looked chagrined for a moment, than broke into a peal of laughter that went a long way to releasing the tension that had been building up. “It’s me!” she spluttered, shifting Morvoren’s gift of fresh fish under her arm. The sudden movement caused the pulpy paper to finally disintegrate, and within a moment the two women’s feet were showered with the slippery glistening bodies. Helpless with laughter, Nell clutched Rosalie who was trying to back away from the mackerel, and Nell’s fishy hands that were outstretched towards her. It was perhaps inevitable that one of them at least would go over, and as Hilary Burn came running back out from the house to investigate the commotion she witnessed the erstwhile dignified joint Head of the Chalet School fall backwards as if in slow motion, pulling the neat secretary over on top of her. Hilary squawked in surprise as she hurried to the rescue and narrowly avoided her own fishy mishap. With tears of mirth running down her face, she hauled up Rosalie and then the two of them gripped Nell’s wrists and heaved. She sprang to her feet, and gazed at the mackerel through vision blurred by tears of laughter.

“Oh, I ache!” moaned Nell, still shuddering from the storm of laughter that had gripped her. “But I do feel better! I’d best have a wash, and then report to Hilda, I suppose.”

“Well, someone has to deal with this mess,” commented Hilary, eyeing the scattered fish. “Come on, we all reek of them anyway. Let’s take this lot to the kitchen – waste not, want not!” she chirruped gaily and threatened another outburst of giggling. So it was that the three mistresses trooped into the kitchens with their arms full of fish that appeared to be wriggling, such was their haste. Jill, the cook, came to the door of the kitchen, wiping her hands on a cloth that was tucked into her belt. She looked askance when she saw the entourage, and rapidly relieved them of their burden frowning all the time at the behaviour of the staff. Over a pot of tea later on, she gossiped with her assistants and they speculated on the odd conduct of those from ‘up country’ and decided that this school “warn’t as prim as some!”

 


#174:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 3:30 pm


'They furriners' certainly aren't!!! I take it the kitchen staff will deal with the fish d'reckly?!!!!

 


#175:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 3:59 pm


*sobbing quietly with laughter at the fish episode*

 


#176:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:19 pm


*joins in sobbing*

 


#177:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:29 pm


Love the kitchen staff, may we please see more of them?

 


#178:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 11:27 pm


*joining in with the giggling and pleading* Brilliant, Lisa!!1 More please

 


#179:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 3:48 am


Loving Morvoren's arrival and the fish!
(Early on I wondered whether she'd turn up on a surfboard Shocked , but this fits together so well....)

P.S. Mary-Lou is so likeable.

 


#180:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 7:27 am


I wish they'd ask me to dinner. Fresh mackerel Razz (need an ecstatic smiley!)

 


#181:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 8:19 pm


Loving it Lisa! Laughing

 


#182:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 8:33 pm


*sorrowfully* I thought there was more. Hope Lisa isn't ill again!

 


#183:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 9:29 pm


No, I'm OK thanks! The Winchester meeting was a tonic! Just a little bit (hee hee, I typed 'nit' the first time, coz most of the letters on my keyboard have rubbed off!)

************
Glancing out of the window during her maths lesson, Tom Gay observed the three mistresses giggling like schoolgirls as they made their way to the bathrooms. She smiled to herself, her worries about Miss Wilson laid to rest. ‘Well, that’s alright then,’ she murmured to herself, and then turned her attention back to trigonometry.

An hour later saw a clean and tidy Morvoren tap politely on the door of Miss Wilson’s office. The occupant, much refreshed by her second bath of the day, called “Entrez!” in her pleasant voice and then rose to greet the newest girl as she came in.

“Now, you look better, Morvoren!” she began, inwardly marvelling at how much younger looking the girl was in her uniform, and with her hair brushed back and plaited by Matron into a long tail. “Please sit there, dear. Now, I trust Matron has acquainted you with the rules, whys and wherefores – “

“Oh, yes thank you, Miss Wilson. And may I say now, that I really am very sorry for any anguish I caused you all in my – tardiness,” she interrupted, but with a frankness that was disarming.

Miss Wilson smiled to herself as Morvoren battled with the unfamiliar words. ‘Well read’ the Mistress noted silently, ‘there may well be hidden depths to this girl.’ Aloud, she spoke hurriedly:

“Well, let’s ignore your – somewhat – unusual method of arrival. I have cabled your father, and am following it with a longer letter. I understand that the weather disrupted your plans. But I do just want to remind you that you are part of a community now, and your actions have repercussions for everyone else.”

“Oh, yes, I understand, Miss Wilson,” broke in Morvoren eagerly. “It’s much like that at home. We all have to work together. If there’s a disappointing catch one week, we all share. Like I brought the fish for dinner. And I don’t mind collecting mussels at night,” she added somewhat surprisingly, and rather charmingly.

“Yes, well, with a team attitude you will go far,” muttered Miss Wilson, wondering exactly what to make of this astonishing new girl. After a few minutes of going over the timetable, the door opened again, and Miss Annersley entered.

“Now, then, are you the one that has caused us all this trouble?” demanded Miss Annersley with a twinkle in her eye. “Morvoren Treffry, I believe?”
Despite herself, Morvoren rose to her feet, and then attempted an awkward curtesy. She liked the look of this trim, neat woman with the piercing eyes very much, and felt determined about doing her best to please her. Hilda, for her part, felt a warmth towards the politeness shown by the spirited Cornish girl. The curtsey reminded her forcefully of her time in Tirol, and she thoroughly approved of a proper respect shown to her elders.

Some fifteen minutes later, a rather bemused Morvoren left the office in the wake of Miss Annersley who led her to Mlle Berne’s lesson. The mistress knocked on the door, and then opened it to the musical sound of “entrez”. A group of eleven heads glanced up from the hemming that they were doing, and gazed at Morvoren. Unperturbed, the redhead met their stares with a toss of her long plait, which already seemed to be working itself loose from its neat knotting.

“Mlle Berne, c'est Morvoren Treffry ; elle joindra la troisième forme. Elle ne parle pas français!" she added with a laugh.

Mlle Berne turned her flashing smile on the girl and spoke in prettily accented English. “Welcome, Morvoren!” she said in a friendly tone. “We will speak in English for the remainder if the lesson for your sake!”

Mustering all the French she knew, Morvoren spoke clearly and confidently: “Mousy Madam,” she said.

 


#184:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 10:42 pm


*rofl* Lisa, that was inspired. I'm having visions of Mlle with round ears and whiskers...

 


#185:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:44 am


*Giggles, reading aloud to cat*

(Morvoren's French is clearly as good as mine.)

 


#186:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:46 am


*giggles*
I can just picture Mdlle in a mouse costume.....

 


#187:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:47 am


*joins in giggling*

That's fantastic! I wonder if her German is as bad as her French?

 


#188:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:55 pm


Oh, I hope so!!! Wink

 


#189:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 5:12 pm


Me too! That was wonderful!

 


#190:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:18 am


Lisa this is fantastic. Love the fish story and Mademoiselle as a mouse.

Need my night time giggle and you have provided it.

 


#191:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:03 pm


Thanks folks! I am aiming to make this story as humorous as possible!
OK - I know OOAOML isn't really in character in this bit, but I'm taking liberties for the sake of the story (I've already taken so many others with timing, I might as well!)

**********

Mustering all the French she knew, Morvoren spoke clearly and confidently: “Mousy Madam,” she said. She was instantly taken aback by the friendliness of all the girls, who beamed at her as if of one mind, and began shuffling about to try and make room for her next to them.

“Here, my dear, take your chair and sit next to Vi,” said Mlle Berne with the merest lift of her eyebrows at Morvoren’s attempts at that lady’s native tongue. “How is your sewing, Morvoren?”

Morvoren was staring around at the other members of the lower fourth. Her quick eye was taking in details of appearances and she was already making some fast judgements about people, as was a weakness of hers. She wrested her gaze from the strong chinned face of a girl who she felt unsure about, and looked directly at the teacher. “I can make nets faster than anyone else in my village!” she said proudly. There was a gasp from the others at this display of what some may call audacity, and the girl Morvoren had noted remarked to her neighbour in a sibilant undertone:

“Well, she’s an odd ‘un, and make no mistake!”

Mlle Berne shot the speaker a look. “Mary-Lou, will you be so kind as to keep silence when I am speaking to someone else?” she enquired, both pleasantry and sarcasm vying in her voice. The offender dropped her eyes to her sewing, but scowled at the newcomer with resentment. Verity-Anne sighed as she witnessed this, and shook her head discreetly.

Vi stood and patted the seat alongside her.

“Come on, Morvoren – what a smash – I mean,” in some confusion, “nice name. I’m Vi. We’ve still twenty minutes of the lesson left and so you’ll be able to show us your skills.”

Morvoren sat down, and took the piece of hemming pressed upon her. Mlle Berne explained that they were turning sheets sides to middle. “Do you need me to explain what I mean by that?” she enquired kindly.


“Oh, no, Miss, I’ve been doing this since afore I could write!” beamed Morvoren, and fell upon the work with something akin to enthusiasm. Her deft fingers flew and she made a rapid and neat job of the task. Whilst their teacher’s interests were otherwise engaged, Vi thought it prudent to explain a few things to her new charge, beginning with terms of address for teachers. Morvoren listened with interest, soaking up all the new information she was presented with.

“What does your name mean?” asked the irrepressible Vi, who was still chatting softly after ten minutes. Mlle Berne allowed quiet discussion as long as the girls were completing the task set, as she believed it was good discipline for ladies to be able to sew and conduct a sensible conversation, and she had turned a largely deaf ear to Vi’s talk, knowing that that girl was doing her best to welcome the new one. Morvoren folded a completed sheet neatly, and picked another off the pile to the audible gasps of many others in the room.

“Well, it’s Cornish of course. It was given to me once I was two,” she said casually, causing a sensation. Around the room, the girls dropped all pretext of their own work and listened unashamedly.

“So, what’s your real name?” demanded Mary-Lou directly. “Morvoren can’t be your real name if you only got it when you were two. It must be more of a nickname.” There was a challenge in her voice as she said this – very subtle, but there. The colour in Morvoren’s cheeks rose a little, but she said steadily:

“Oh, but it is. My folk believe that a name should say something about one’s character. So I was watched as my personality developed and then a fitting name was bestowed upon me at a naming ceremony. So much more appropriate than just going for any name, don’t you think?” she said pointedly.

“Girls! It is time to start packing away. There has been rather too much chat this lesson, and some of you have shown a slackening in pace. Look at Morvoren’s work; she has easily done as much as any of you, in less than half the time. The only other person worthy of note is Verity-Anne. Well done, dear.” Verity-Anne looked pleased, and reddened.

“So, what does your name mean?” persisted Vi as she collected the pairs of scissors from around the room, and placed them in a fabric-covered box made by Mlle for this purpose. Suddenly Gillian gave a squeal.

“Oh – stop! I’ve got a wizard idea!” she exclaimed, and then looked furtively at Mlle Berne, who, luckily for her was struggling with some tangled cottons that a very red faced Stephanie had managed to drop. “Let’s not ask Morvoren to tell us what her name means – if it has been chosen because of her personality, let’s see if we can guess it, as we get to know her!” This idea was acclaimed at once, and the girls were still occupied with it as the gong sounded for lunch.

“Wonder what’s for dinner?” spoke Gillian, concerned with her stomach as usual.

“Hmm, mackerel perhaps?” suggested Morvoren as she moved to the door.
“Don’t be ridiculous! We don’t have fresh fish on Mondays!” began Mary-Lou, but stopped short as they left the room and wafting down the corridor from the hall came the unmistakeable aroma of grilled mackerel. The girls giggled and surrounded this exotic new girl in admiration, as Mary-Lou found herself at the back of the group, straggling behind.

 


#192:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:12 pm


Oh lovely!!! Twisted Evil OOAOML upstaged!!!! Twisted Evil

 


#193:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:30 pm


Lovely to see OOAO put in her place. Yay for Lisa.

 


#194:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 4:23 pm


Thanks Lisa, love Mousy Madamselle, and seeing Mary Lou made to look foolish with regard to the mackeral.
It will be interesting to find out what the name does mean....

 


#195:  Author: RosieLocation: Huntingdonshire/Bangor PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 5:04 pm


*giggles* Nice one! Will show Mary-Lou that she's not OOAO after all!!

 


#196:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 7:51 pm


I wonder whether Vi will show some leadership qualities and stick by Morvoren.

 


#197:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 9:47 pm


*chants at Lisa for more!!!*

 


#198:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 3:37 pm


Chanting in unison with Vikki.

 


#199:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2004 12:16 am


Joins in chant!

 


#200:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2004 1:48 pm


Excellent Lisa - like it that someone has my language skills! Love OOAO being upstaged - a GEM lurking there i think! Laughing

 


#201:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2004 1:52 pm


Definitely, OOAO never did like having to take a back seat to someone else.

 


#202:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Sat Mar 13, 2004 8:35 pm


*ignores slurs on Mary-Lou*

Chants to

"Mackerel,
Sweet mackerel,
Fresh mackerel,
New mackerel"

(alternating a few Morvorens)

 


#203:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 9:42 pm


Hopes Lisa will soon be well enough to post some more of this drabble.

 


#204:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 10:25 pm


*agrees that more would be very welcome*

 


#205:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 2:23 am


*hopes Lisa is okay!!*
has anyone seen her since the Gathering?

 


#206:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 2:33 am


She wasn't feeling too good then, and she didn't look too great when she went home. Maybe still flat out especially if she caught The Cold?

 


#207:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 8:52 am


Poor Lisa hope she is better soon

 


#208:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 10:08 am


*sends huggles and cold-and-flu tablets to Lisa*

 


#209:  Author: MandyLocation: Derry, N.Ireland PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:26 pm


Lisa this is great. Don't worry about the timing etc, we're that used to EBD, we'll just enjoy the story.

*joins chant for more*

 


#210:  Author: ShanderLocation: Canada PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 3:09 pm


I've just caught up on this. It's absolutley wonderful. More please!

 


#211:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 9:44 pm


*also joins in chant*

 


#212:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2004 5:22 pm


Hopes Lisa is now recovered from her illness.

 


#213:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 2:35 am


Also worries about Lisa.
And Morvoren, of course.

 


#214:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 3:05 am


I hope Lisa is OK. Has anyone heard from her?

 


#215:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 3:05 pm


Hope we hear from Lisa very soon.

Wonders whether to threaten to sing 'Caller Herring' to make Lisa post.

 


#216:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 6:49 pm


How long has it been since we last heard from her?

Hope you're ok Lisa! Get well soon! coffee (baileys in coffee mug)

Out of interest, has anyone ever got the pancake smiley to work?

 


#217:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 8:13 pm


I don't think anyone's heard anything of her since we saw her at TG. I do hope she's all right.

 


#218:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 5:49 am


Did anyone get any contact information and could call her or something?

 


#219:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 8:24 pm


I'll send a PM if you like.

 


#220:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 9:29 pm


Have PM'd Nicci, in the hopes that she may know something or know how to contact Lisa since the two of them were one book title at TG and may have corresponded beforehand.

 


#221:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 9:33 pm


Good thinking,Catherine. Might her address/phone number be somewhere in the lists for the Gathering?

 


#222:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 9:36 pm


It should be. Liss or Rachael should be able to answer that.

 


#223:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 9:38 pm


But neither is on the Board tonight.

 


#224:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 10:20 pm


Wait and see what Nicci knows, if anything and then we can try them.

 


#225:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 10:43 pm


*crosses fingers*

 


#226:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 5:57 pm


Just to let you all know!

Nicci has spoken to Lisa. She's been poorly and RL has stopped her from being around but she thought it was lovely we were all so concerned. She said she'd try to pop her head up sometime this week.

 


#227:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 8:04 pm


Awwww! *Huggles to Lisa*

 


#228:  Author: KBLocation: Berlin, Germany PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2004 5:52 am


Well, I'm glad she's all right! Or sort-of all right. Thanks, Catherine and Nicci!

 


#229:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 3:44 pm


Glad that we have heard from Lisa.

Leaving huggles for her.

 


#230:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 3:47 pm


Leaving a big huggle for Lisa, and hoping she feels better soon.

 


#231:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 1:39 am


Glad Lisa's okay, but sorry she's not been well!

 


#232:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 12:57 pm


It's Friday already, and Lisa hasn't popped in, hope she's not feeling poorly again.

 


#233:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:06 pm


Not feeling poorly, just shy! Embarassed

You have all been so sweet! Thank you for your concern! I told a friend of mine that you all had worried and Nicci had phoned and she was so impressed - she said if she suddenly collapsed no one would know!!

Thanks for all your lovely encouragement about the story. I have taken rather a break from it as I have had massive (and scary) decisions to make about work and life generally (linked to this ongoing illness) and I haven't been in a writing mood, but I hope to get back to it soon. I haven't had the creative energy!

Aw, it really is lovely to think you have all 'kept an eye' on me! Thanks guys!

Shucks! Very Happy

 


#234:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:09 pm


Oops! That was me of course! So shy and out of practice I forgot to log in!!

 


#235:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:17 pm


Lisa I hope things are starting to sort themselves out. Take your time, and only post when you're ready.

 


#236:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:25 pm


Lisa, thank you for popping in and posting that, it's good to know that you are getting better.

 


#237:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 8:17 pm


*huggles Lisa!*

 


#238:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2004 4:29 pm


Hope you have a better week next week, Lisa.

 


#239:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 3:34 am


Hopes Lisa's plot bunnies are taking good care of her!

(since clearly they're ignoring the mackerel -- it'll be burned to a crisp before long.)

 


#240:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 4:07 pm


Glad too know your Ok(ish) Lisa, hope you're feeling completely well soon.

 


#241:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 2:25 pm


Get well soon Lisa! I'm loving this story!

 


#242:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 2:26 pm


sorry-forgot i can't log on at home! and that i need to add my name-
Edith! Embarassed

 


#243:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 2:40 pm


Glad to hear you're still with us, Lisa! Like everyone else, I wondered, but after talking to you at TG I guessed you were feeling rotten.
*leaves huggles*

 


#244:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 4:45 pm


Hello! I'm back! Sorry no story today but dare I hint that it will be 'in the offing' as it were? !

My lovely mum and dad sent me and hubby on holiday to Amsterdam, and I've now got back, replete after many dutch pancakes (oh my goodness, they're delicious!) slices of apple pie and Easter Eggs! Just as well I lost weight since Christmas; I've put most of it back on again in two weeks!

So I am feeling nourished and ready to tackle life again (although I don't think I'll ever be able to catch up with the drabbles)

Here's hoping for a smidgen of story tomorrow (well, a smidgen would be better than nothing, wouldn't it?!)

Very Happy

 


#245:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 6:00 pm


So glad to hear you are better, Lisa.

 


#246:  Author: RosieLocation: Huntingdonshire/Bangor PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 6:04 pm


Hello again Lisa! Glad to hear you're Ok, but you're right, you'll never do a full drabble catch-up!

 


#247:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 7:52 pm


Glad you're back and feeling better, Lisa.

 


#248:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 9:48 pm


That's great Lisa, and welcome back!

 


#249:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 10:11 pm


Echoing 'glad your back and betters'

Good to see you back on the board Lisa!

 


#250:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 10:31 pm


Also glad you're back and feeling better - glad you had a good trip.

 


#251:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 11:11 pm


Welcome back Lisa glad you had a good time and are feeling better

 


#252:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:30 am


Just a little bit - have had to re-read the story and try to get back into the swing of it!


The meal was enjoyed by everyone, although some of the girls reserved judgement on the strong flavour of the fresh fish. Morvoren finished her fourth piece of crusty bread with a sigh and smacked her lips in satisfaction. Gillian smothered a giggle and then spoke to her:

“You eat more than me! And that’s saying something! It’s not fair – why are you so slim?”

“I doubt that fairness has anything to do with it,” broke in Vi, defending her new friend. “Morvoren probably isn’t lazy like you.”

“Well, I am usually very active – and besides, I had worked up a good appetite rowing over,” mollified Morvoren, although the good natured Gillian had not taken offence at Vi’s words. Most of the girls had heard something of the unorthodox way their newest member had arrived, and they now questioned her eagerly. The tinkling of a bell hushed them as they turned to see Miss Annersley standing at the staff table.

“I hope you enjoyed your lunch, girls,” she began pleasantly. “Once we have cleared away, you all have three quarters of an hour rest time, where you may read quietly. You may set up chairs on the lawn, but the grass is still wet, and you must ensure you wear a wrap. I know it feels warm today, but the breeze is still chill.” She paused and took a sip of water. One or two of the staff glanced at each other. It was unheard of for Miss Annersley to pause during a talk; her oratory skills were renowned. “Where was I? Oh, yes, the remainder of you will have your nature walks this afternoon, beginning with the third form. Please be ready after rest time. That is all.”

There was a busy noise of chairs being moved and tables cleared, and then peace fell in the hall as the girls made their way out to rest. Nell turned to Hilda as they watched the kitchen help sweeping the floor.

“Well, it may be more crowded than usual, but we are managing well with the use of this room. How do you think it’s all going so far, Hilda?”

“Mmm. Think I will go on the nature walk with form III. Will you come?” asked Hilda absently, as she turned to leave the room.

“I think I will,“ responded Nell under her breath, “I think I’d better.”

 


#253:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:32 am


Aargh! Why does this computer keep logging me out everytime, though I've told it not to?! Mad

 


#254:  Author: RosieLocation: Huntingdonshire/Bangor PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:35 am


*suggest Lisa gives computer a large kick*
Oh-errr! Poor Hilda.... Great to have more of this!!

 


#255:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 1:41 pm


Thank you for more story Lisa. Can imagine Morvoren on the nature walk - she will know more than whoever is taking them.

 


#256:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:22 pm


Poor Hilda, but she'll be better soon. Thank you for that, Lisa.

 


#257:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 3:34 am


So glad to see this back! (with the mackerel only "strong.")

Not sure how well Hilda deals with nature walks even at the best of times.... Good thing Nell's coming too!

 


#258:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 5:34 am


Oh good, more story - thanks Lisa!

Poor Hilda! Crying or Very sad

 


#259:  Author: Sarah_LLocation: Leeds PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 1:02 pm


I'd been wondering where you were Lisa, but I hadn't thought to check this drabble for information. Glad you had such a nice holiday and it's good to see more story.

 


#260:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Thu May 13, 2004 5:31 am


4 weeks since the last installment?
*hopes Hilda hasn't wandered off and lost herself on the nature walk*

*hopes RL isn't treating Lisa badly*

 


#261:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2004 2:28 pm


Lisa, how are things with you? I hope the nasty illness has not returned. Please let us know if you are well, even if you can't write more drabble.

 


#262:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:39 pm


Hi!! Had managed to get past the guilty stage of not adding anymore story until I came back on here and saw this...!

OK, boring and self-indulgent rant coming up - scroll down to ********** for news on story!!


Oh, life.... My mother-in-law has MS and it is very severe now. She is completely paralysed and hasn't had a conversation or spoken with us for 3 years, and we don't think she knows us. Last Monday we nearly lost her, and the doctors asked my stepdad-in-law (!) if he wanted them to resuscitate or not as basically everything was packing up and her heart couldn't take the strain. But amazingly she responded to treatment and is now stable again. It's so hard to explain this and I don't want anyone to take this the wrong way but it is so emotionally exhausting when we keep having to prepare ourselves for her death and then it all goes back to this awful existence. Without writing pages to tell you the full story, she talked about suicide a lot 8 years ago, but even though she seems ready to go she keeps hanging on somehow. It is so desparately sad, especially as her mother (supergran aged 91) helps care for her but lately has been suffering more and more. Also, my hubby's brother died tragically when he was 20, so hubby and I take a lot of this on ourselves. It's not that we want her to die, we just want all this to be over. Oh it's hard to explain. It has gone on for so long - she has had MS at least 20 years, started to deteriorate quite rapidly 10 years ago, and the last 5 or so have been a nightmare. She often wails and is in pain. It's hard for family and friends to keep having support or sympathy (for us I mean!) as the situation has been so bad for so long.

Anyway, sorry! We had a number of bereavements in my family in the last couple if years too, and it all adds up sometimes and really gets me down. It was my 30th birthday yesterday and my uncle died in the morning following a shortish but vicious illness and his passing was not peaceful. My dad is very cut up as it is his older brother he has always looked up to and I feel sad and (I know this sounds awfully selfish) I don't know how I can cope with going through another funeral and supporting others.

Aargh! Sorry! I know this isn't the right place for this, but it all just came tumbling out! I'm OKish though generally and getting my life back on track!!

********
My June target is to return to this story! I find it hard to get back into it, but once I discipline myself to write a little everyday it should soon start to flow again! (I hope!)

Thanks for 'listening' even though you didn't have any choice and thought you were going to get more story!

And the recent suggestion has given me inspiration fpr the next bit of story... Laughing

 


#263:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:42 pm


Whoops! That was me of course! For some reason, computer keeps logging me out!

 


#264:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:43 pm


Lisa,

Your feelings seem very normal and reasonable and I'm so sorry you're having to provide much of the support system when there's so much going on in your family.
I hope you and hubby are able to get time out every now and then just for yourselves ...

Am also sorry that your 30th clearly wasn't all that it could have been and I hope that you get the opportunity to properly celebrate that milestone later on ...

Best wishes and a big hug
Rachael

 


#265:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:45 pm


Lisa remember that you are entitled to receive support just as much as anyone else. If you feel unable to provide it at the moment that is fine. I'm dreadfully sorry for everything that you have gone through and am praying for you.

 


#266:  Author: ChelseaLocation: Your Imagination PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:51 pm


Lots and lots of hugs for you Lisa. Don't feel guilty for either ranting (which you weren't) or asking for support or not writing any more story.

We are always here to listen to you (the benefits of users in many timezones).

HUGS,
Chelsea

 


#267:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 7:54 pm


Lisa, I'm so sorry to hear that things have been so rotten lately. I can understand your feelings about your mother in law, having to watch someone suffer like that is horrific.
Remember that you have a lot of friends here who are always ready to listen if you need to let off steam.

 


#268:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 9:19 pm


Lisa, can totally understand your feelings about wanting it to be over, both for your sake and your MiL. Have seen enough seriously ill people on the wards in my time. Don't feel guilty about your perfectly normal and justified feelings.

Hope you and hubby find time for yourselves.

*Hugs*

Lesley

 


#269:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 10:15 pm


Lisa, there is so little I can do to help you, apart from holding you and all your family in my thoughts

You are in a horrible situation and I totally sympathise with your feelings about your MiL - they are completely justified.

Please do try to take time out for yourself and hubby, I'm so sorry that your birthday was clouded by the death of your uncle and your MiLs illness

You do not have to go to the funeral - obviously this is not a decision to take lightly & you would have to explain to your dad, but maybe you could arrange just a quiet time together for immediate family or a time together to celebrate his life (rather than mourning his passing)

Big big huggles love dawn

 


#270:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 12:17 am


Sorry to hear about all the difficulties, Lisa. And no, you're not being self-indulgent! It's just one of those 'saints can't do more' situations....

hugs & prayers-

 


#271:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 3:24 pm


Lisa, you are clearly having to deal with so much in your life at the moment that even thinking about drabble-writing should be the last theing you do.

I wish that I could be a help and support to you, but instead of being able to do anything practical, I can only send moral support, and let you know that I am thinking about you and your family, and hoping that you will all have the strength to come through this.

Lots of moral support coming your way.

 


#272:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 2:53 pm


Oh Lisa please accept more support, hugs and prayers. Please as others have said make sure you make time for yourself. We had a spate of funerals in our family over the last few years too and there were times when I wanted to run screaming but I coped as you will do too. I am more thankful than I can say for this board and the caring people on it who helped me greatly before Christmas when it was all starting again. The board gave me space to get away.

You have my deepest sympathy with the wailing my gran was like that for a while before she died, and my Mum often wails at night if she has had a bad day. However often you hear it you never get used to it. Thankfully though Mum's bad days are becoming fewer.

To reitrate what others have said there is nearly always someone here so if you can come for a few minutes anyone of us will try and help you.

Wish there was somthing more practical I could do too. But I will be thinking of you and the family.

 


#273:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 7:24 pm


Hello! Tis moi! Things have settled down, m in law stable but will slowly deteriorate. She has had a couple of operations and things went ok. Thanks all for your support!

Well, after a break I have resumed the tale ... hope you like it!


************

The rest time over, the third form gathered excitedly in a huddle, awaiting the arrival of their mistresses. The attention of many of the girls was focussed on their newest arrival, and they listened enthralled to her descriptions of the island.
“And I hope we can explore the woods,” Morvoren was saying, “there are some delicious mushrooms to be found.”

“No picking of mushrooms, please girls!” instructed Miss Wilson who approached the class at this moment. She glanced at Miss Annersley who was closely behind her, and added in a low voice: “they can be easily confused with toadstools.”

“Yes, they can,” acknowledged Morvoren, who had heard this aside and thought nothing of commenting on it, “but there are some clear differences that are simple to – “

“Enough, Morvoren,” frowned Miss Wilson, and the Cornish girl stopped talking in some confusion. She smiled ruefully at Vi, and turned away, just missing a rather smug smile on Mary-Lou’s face. Vi sighed as she sensed storm clouds on the horizon, but was distracted from her inward apprehension by the arrival of Miss O’Ryan who was leading the walk. The mistress was delighted to see that she was to have the company of two other staff members, and bestowed a happy smile on the waiting group.

“Excellent, girls! I see you all have your wraps. Now listen closely, and we will enjoy a fine walk. Did you know that Looe Island has its own, tiny island? When we leave the house, we will proceed in single file there first. Those who wish may cross over the bridge there. Once we have returned to the main island, and are heading towards the NORTH area, you may walk with a partner. But it is not until we reach the trees that you may break rank and explore in twos or threes.”

The girls wriggled with delight to hear of these plans, and eagerly lined up with the mistresses at the head. Leaving the schoolhouse behind them, the girls crossed the flat lawn and then turned NORTHWARDS to climb a steep slope. Suddenly they came out on a flattish headland and saw to their surprise that the land ended suddenly, only to rear up again about ten yards away, forming a small island.

“Stand well back girls,” called Miss O’Ryan, “and line up along here, so that you can all see. Now, does anyone have any thoughts as to the geography or history of this particular area?” she smiled at their blank faces, then noted Mary-Lou’s quizzical look. “Mary-Lou?”

“Do you think this could have been caused by a – a volcano, or an earthquake, Miss O’Ryan?” she enquired confidently, ignoring the disbelieving and incredulous noises of girls around her. “You know, an eruption from long ago that pushed up the layers of rock and formed these cliffs, or a quake that caused the island to separate from the mainland, and even caused this crack here?”

“Indeed, Mary-Lou, you are thinking along the correct lines,” praised Miss O’Ryan, reflecting on what a fine archaeologist this girl may make one day. “The rocks and land around here are many hundreds of thousands of years old, and the shape of the coast line was formed by the movements of the earth all that time ago. Looking at this miniature island, we are perhaps seeing a microcosm of the way our country evolved.”

There was a silence as the girls regarded the jutting out rock solemnly. As it reared up out of the water, ledges had formed upon which some cormorants rested and terns wheeled about. Small clumps of sea pinks hugged the cliff side tenaciously and gave splashes of colour. Grass and a few stunted gorse bushes topped the island and gave a suggestion of softness.

“Who would like to cross over?” asked Miss O’Ryan quietly, indicating a swinging rope bridge. Many of the girls’ hands flew to their mouths in horror, and Miss Annersley blanched, but Miss Wilson and Miss O’Ryan were both experienced alpinists and had previously checked the bridge for safety. Morvoren and Mary-Lou both stepped up immediately, with one or two other courageous souls close behind them. Most of the girls were content to remain safely where they were and watch the small procession as they passed one at a time across the bridge. Once arriving on the springy turf, the girls looked around them.

“I – I feel like I’m setting foot on a new world,” Mary-Lou tried to explain somewhat embarrassed. “It seems – all remote and new somehow.”

Morvoren nodded with understanding. “It’s so unspoilt,” she said. “I sort of feel that we shouldn’t be here.”

Miss Wilson looked at the two girls that had spoken shrewdly. “There was a tiny hermitage here,” she explained. “In fact, in a moment we will go and see the remains of a place of worship, back on the main island. Perhaps you two are sensing something of the air of spirituality here.”

Her eyes shining, Mary-Lou turned at once to the history teacher. “Do you mean that there could be the remains of a hermit’s dwelling here?” she demanded, her interest piqued. She immediately began to scan the ground, but it yielded nothing.

“It’s unlikely after all this time,” she began to respond, when Morvoren broke in, joining Mary-Lou’s enthusiasm:

“A cave!” she exclaimed. “I shouldn’t be surprised if there was a cave somewhere hereabouts. This coastline is riddled with them!”



***********

This is as far as I got for now! Sorry for the long wait! Smile

 


#274:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 8:26 pm


Great to see you and this back, Lisa! Glad things are a bit better now.


More please!!!

 


#275:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 8:56 pm


Good to see this back. Thanks.

 


#276:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 9:07 pm


Hello Lisa! Glad things have settled a little for you. Thanks for more- did we ever find out what's wrong with Hilda, BTW?

 


#277:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 11:04 pm


Yay!! Great to have you back Lisa!!!

 


#278:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:06 am


Wonderful, Lisa! Both the new episode and that you're back!

ETA Greetings to the new felines in the family Very Happy .

 


#279:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 2:32 am


Sorry to hear you've been having such a bad time Lisa - I'm glad that you are back, and the extra story is a bonus, but please don't feel guilty if you have to delay the next part. Take care.

 


#280:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 11:09 am


It's great to see you back, Lisa. I'm glad that RL is better for you and your family.

 


#281:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 4:04 pm


Great to see you back Very Happy Hope RL continues to be better.

 


#282:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 5:54 pm


Sorry, just a teeny tiny bit which should have been on the end of the last post! Thought we needed a cliff edge (literally!) Twisted Evil


Kathy_S, the felines have settled in and taken over! Trouble is, they distract me from drabbling!

*************
This last comment went ignored as Miss O’Ryan’s attention was caught by a commotion on the main island. She glanced at the huddle of girls who seemed to have moved too close to the edge for comfort. Reflecting that Hilda would keep on an eye on them she scanned the crowd for her colleague, but too her consternation she could not espy her.

“Come girls, time to return to the others,” she instructed rather abruptly, and led the way back to the small bridge. Somewhat reluctantly the girls followed with Miss Wilson bringing up the rear.

“Verity-Anne, come back from the edge!” commanded Miss O’Ryan, “Where’s Miss Annersley?”

“But that’s just it, Miss O’Ryan,” responded Sarah, a highly strung girl who was given to acts of melodrama, “she’s gone!”

 


#283:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 5:55 pm


Grrr! Computer logged me out again! Thought it had stopped doing that!
That was me of course! Smile

 


#284:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 6:01 pm


Liiiiiiiisssssaaaaaaaaa!!

That's not fair!!! Come back and tell us what's going on!!!

 


#285:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 7:38 pm


Her heart in her mouth, Biddy O'Ryan peered over the edge, and to her horror beheld the prostrate body of their beloved Head, lying still, grey and to all appearances dead!


Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

 


#286:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 7:42 pm


Doesn't improve matters much does it?
Great cliff, Lisa.

 


#287:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 8:12 pm


Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!!!!
Lisaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!

 


#288:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 8:32 pm


Excellent cliff! Laughing

 


#289:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 9:21 pm


LISA!

Come back here and get us down from this cliff!!!

 


#290:  Author: MatthewLocation: Birmingham, England PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 9:42 pm


I can see that you know exactly how to make this lot suffer during a drabble. Well done!! Twisted Evil

 


#291:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 11:00 pm


There's definitely somethin g wrong with Hilda- apart from all that falling-down-a-cliff-lying-grey-still-etc business whihc i don't believe for a moment. I mean, she's not normally in the habit of accidentally done-a-purpose walking off cliffs. I'd have been less surprised if it was Verity!!!

In other words, Lisa, come back and dismantle this cunning little cliff of yours!

 


#292:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 11:17 pm


But Hilda has not been well in this drabble.

*worries*

 


#293:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 1:14 am


Lisa_T wrote:

In other words, Lisa, come back and dismantle this cunning little cliff of yours!


Bah! Rumbled! And I thought I was so funny! Rolling Eyes
Kathy - you don't need to worry (not yet anyhow Wink )

OK OK, so the last post was just silly!
Ignore it!

*************

“Sarah! Stop being hysterical. We don’t expect you girls to behave like spineless jellyfish the moment something unexpected happens,” commanded Miss Wilson briskly as she strode up to the group of girls. “Miss Annersley has probably had to return to the school house. Now line up and about turn – and we’ll have no more silly nonsense.”

Much squashed, a red faced Sarah took her place in the line, and failed to notice that the mistress’s eyes belied her tone. The girls proceeded to march, following Miss O’Ryan, who had exchanged a meaningful look with the older teacher before moving off. As the girls headed away from the area, Miss Wilson steeled herself and peered quickly over the edge. She heaved a deep sigh as she released the tension she had hitherto been unaware of, and breathed a silent prayer of thanks before she hurried to catch up with the line.

“Verity-Anne, a word,” she motioned, and an alarmed Verity dropped back to accompany the teacher, fully expecting to be admonished for standing so close to the edge. “Did Miss Annersley mention where she was going?” the mistress continued.

“Why, no,” answered Verity, innocently and with a sigh of relief. "She had been telling us about the fauna of this part of the island – and we were all examining that fern that grows just there, but when we looked up she had disappeared!”

“I see,” said Miss Wilson firmly. “Well, I believe she has a busy afternoon ahead. Once she saw us returning over the bridge, no doubt she took the opportunity to get back to some paperwork. Thank you Verity, you may rejoin the others.” This just as the little party reached a high point, on which some rocks and old bricks lay strewn about. With half an ear, Miss Wilson listened to Miss O’Ryan’s explanation of this ancient chapel site, but her thoughts turned inwards to Hilda’s unexplained departure. It was uncharacteristic of her friend to leave a group of girls unsupervised in such a situation. A worry gripped the pit of Bill’s stomach.

 


#294:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 3:48 am


Now that's more realistic! And rather more worrying! Confused

 


#295:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:20 am


Waiting until the History teacher had finished her lecture, and the girls were occupied in scrutinising the ruins, Miss Wilson cleared her throat and spoke in pleasant, calm tones:

“Ah, Miss O’Ryan, I find I need to return to the school. I will send someone to accompany you.”

“Very well,” responded the younger mistress, and watched with troubled eyes as her colleague picked her way over the grassy hillocks and walked rapidly down the hill towards the old stone building that was silhouetted against the late afternoon sun.

Rosalie met her on her arrival at the school.

“Oh, there you are. Hilda asked me if you’d look over the stock lists – “ she stopped short, aghast at Nell’s expression.

“Have you seen her?” she demanded of the secretary breathlessly.

“Why, yes, of course, when she asked me to ask you – “

“When?” demanded Nell.

“Just five minutes ago. She said she didn’t know where you were – what on earth is the matter, Nell?”

Explaining the situation concisely, the Head concluded with a reflection: “there must be something wrong, Rosalie. Really wrong. She is so forgetful, and keeps confusing her priorities. We need to speak to her.”

At that moment, Hilda bustled forth and stopped dead when she saw her friend.

“Oh, there you are, Nell. I really think we need to look over these lists before going into Liskeard next,” she began, and then paused at the look on her friend’s face. “Is there something …” she began.

Nell took her friend’s elbow and gently steered her towards their shared office. “Rosalie, some kaffee – erm – coffee, if you would be so kind. Now, Hilda, what happened about the nature walk?”

Startled, Hilda glanced at Nell. “I didn’t think that was until two,” she said, her eyes darting to the large wall clock mounted above the fireplace. The clock proclaimed that it was ten minutes to three, and Hilda turned back to Nell, suddenly looking small and vulnerable. “I – I must have lost track of time,” she commented feebly.

“Sit down, dear,” said Nell softly, desperately trying to decide whether or not she should tell her friend that they had been on the walk all ready. She decided in the negative for now. “I know you won’t like this, but remember the doctor’s advice. You need plenty of rest; stop trying to do everything.”

“I do feel so tired all the time,” admitted Hilda with a deep sigh. “But if I just keep going, I will soon get back to normal – “

“Now, that’s a myth!” said Nell, not ungently. “What advice would you give if it were me in this situation?” she grinned at Hilda’s rueful smile. “I thought as much! Ah, here’s Rosalie with the coffee. Do sit down and join us dear.”

“Thank you, but I have a mountain of paperwork,” began Rosalie, but catching a warning look in Nell’s eye she concluded lamely: “but a break would be very welcome!”

Thus it was that the three were able to converse lightly about matters of the weather and gardening, and upon finishing the last of the coffee, Hilda acquiesced to going for a lie down in her room. Nell glanced at her watch, and spoke thoughtfully.

“I am going to rejoin Biddy and the girls,” she said. “Ah – Rosalie, I think it’s best if we – ah, don’t mention – “

“But surely Matron?-“

“Yes, perhaps you’re right. But no-one else.”

 


#296:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:23 am


Mad But I DID JUST log in!! Confused Evil or Very Mad

 


#297:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:24 am


This is developing very nicely, so lots more, please.

 


#298:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 11:37 am


whoopsy whoopsy! *commends Lisa for her ability to switch from the parody of shrek to here* Lovely jubbly!

 


#299:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 12:28 pm


Lots more please, Lisa! This is intriguing ........

 


#300:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 4:35 pm


Thank you Lisa!!!
Glad Hilda DIDN'T end up at the bottom of that cliff!!!

 


#301:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 6:16 pm


Thank you Lisa - should just mention that Hilda's symptoms, while not as dramatic as walking off a cliff, are just as worrying. Sad

 


#302:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 11:53 am


Nice to see you back Lisa - glad things are stable at the moment.

Nice to see Morveren mack as well. Foresee squalls between her and the staff if she continues to speak as she does.

Poor Hilda glad she didn't fall over a cliff though her symptons are worrying enough.

 


#303:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 1:37 pm


Back at the ruins of the old chapel of Lamanna, Morvoren and Mary-Lou had forgotten any animosity between them as they shared their enthusiasm of old places. The site was the highest point on the island and offered wonderful views.

“Just imagine,” Mary-Lou was saying, “a holy man would have sat at this very spot looking out over the sea. He would say his prayers just here – and this would have been an altar –“

“Yes, and he probably fished off this rock,” added Morvoren, but Mary-Lou was caught up on her historical fantasies. She examined the stones carefully along with some of the others.

“Miss O’Ryan, I’ve found a carving!” cried Gillian, and the girls all clustered round her in excitement.

“Oh look,” Mary-Lou said dreamily, “the hermit would have sat here carving whilst he meditated on God – “

“Not likely!” said Morvoren, her voice coming out louder than she intended it. “He would have been too busy trying to survive. It was not as romantic as you think, Mary-Lou! You don’t know much about living around here! Gillian, let me look at that stone. That’s not a carving, you goop! It’s a fossil!”

Gillian took no offence at this, but Mary-Lou bristled. How dare this new girl show her up like that, and insult Gillian. If she, Mary-Lou, had seen the stone first, she would have recognised the fossil, and would have told Gillian kindly and discreetly. She glared at Morvoren, and felt smug as she heard the teacher’s reprimand of the Cornish girl.

“And let that be an end to it,” said Miss O’Ryan. “Now, we’ve spent long enough here, and I can see Miss Wilson returning. Let’s head down this way to meet her, then we’ll bear North East and explore the woods behind the house.”

“Is it possible to go down that way, Miss O’Ryan?” Stephanie asked, interested as she gazed over the west face of the cliff.

“No, it’s too much of a scramble and rather dangerous,” responded Miss O’Ryan shortly. “Follow me, please.”

As the girls fell into line, Vi took a place next to Morvoren. “Have you been down that way?” she asked knowingly.

“Ah yes,” smiled Morvoren. It is a bit of a scramble, but there’s a great fishing rock there, very sheltered. I could take you,” she suggested.

“But Morvoren, you just heard what Miss O’Ryan said! It’s not allowed!" protested Vi, shocked.

Morvoren looked a bit puzzled. “Yes, but I’ve done it before and I know a safe way. It would be all right. Besides, she didn’t say it wasn’t allowed, just that it wasn’t possible. And I know different.”

Vi opened her mouth to respond to this, but had to save her breath as the short way down to the woods was steep and uneven, and more than one girl stumbled as they made their way down, heedlessly at first, then with more care.

Miss Wilson rejoined the group smiling. “Just in time!” she said, eager to see the girls’ faces as they beheld the entrance to the wood. “Everything well, Miss O’Ryan?” she said this in a way that could either be a question or a statement, and the younger teacher visibly relaxed. “Then, girls, look here!”

The girls peered forwards, and there were immediately many exclamations of delight. The entrance to the woods resembled a small leafy cave entrance, full of mystery and intrigue. It seemed the only way in, as the trees were packed densely around the perimeter.

“You may explore for fifteen minutes, in twos or threes,” called Miss O’Ryan. I’ll call you when we need to reconvene. Come back to this spot please.”

“But, Miss O’Ryan, what if we get lost?” came a tremulous voice.

The two staff members glanced at each other then erupted into peals of laughter!

“Oh,Verity! It isn’t a forest! It’s really a miniature wood, as Little Island we just visited is a miniature island. It’s probably the safest place you could be!"

 


#304:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 3:44 pm


Famous last words!

ROFL at OOAO's idea that she would have been tactful!

 


#305:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 4:36 pm


*Awaiting next cliff!*







(Worrying about Hilda)

 


#306:  Author: Guest PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 7:08 pm


Glad you picked up on the last line, Jennie! And I did hope people would find OOAOML's thoughts on discretion and tact amusing!

(Tut tut, starting a sentence with 'and') Embarassed

*********

Giggling, the girls set off into the dark interior of the wood. The leafy canopy ensured that very little light filtered down to the floor, and a hush descended on the group as they entered inside. Ferns and bracken were liberally strewn over the floor, that was itself springy and soft, made up as it was from layers of decaying leaves and plant life.

“Ooh! This is fun!” cried Vi, and headed off down a little twisting path. “Coming Morv?” The two girls raced down the path that lay before them, laughing and calling out. Mary-Lou watched them go with pursed lips. She glanced round and spotted Gillian.

“Partner me?” she asked, then, without checking to see if Gillian was following, took a path in the opposite direction to that which the other two had taken. Gillian hurried to keep up with Mary-Lou, rather pleased to have been asked. She gazed at the trees around her.

“Aren’t they thick?” she remarked. “It feels like a different place here, doesn’t it? Not on the island at all. Sort of – timeless. You can look around here and know that nothing has changed in thousands of years.”

Mary-Lou was also looking around with interest. She slowed down and nodded. “It certainly is a special place,” she agreed. “The path seems to lead off down there; shall we follow it?”

“Look! Mushrooms!” cried Gillian, dropping to her knees with scant regard for her tunic. “Morvoren said that there were mushrooms here. Shall we gather some?”

“And Miss Wilson said there was to be no picking of them!” observed Mary-Lou wryly. “Don’t let Morvoren be a bad influence on you, Gill. I think she could be trouble.”

“Whatever do you mean?” demanded Gillian, wide eyed. “She seems ever so nice. A bit uncon-unconventional perhaps, but she’s different to us.”

“Exactly!” quoth Mary-Lou darkly. “Hark! Is that Miss O’Ryan calling?” A clear melodious yodel rang through the woods, and scufflings could be heard in the foliage. “Come on!” She ran lightly through the trees with Gillian puffing behind her, frowning as she considered Mary-Lou’s words. Gillian was a simple creature, not in the least malicious, and she felt disturbed. She ran heavily, her vision a little blurred from the perspiration that beaded on her brow. She did not see the root that lay across her path. Her foot snagged on its twisting shoot and she fell forwards, landing on her front, the air squashed out of her. A blazing pain pierced her ankle and stars pricked around her vision as blackness enfolded her. Her tiny yelp went unheard by Mary-Lou who continued blissfully unaware of her friend’s dilemma.

 


#307:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 7:10 pm


Honestly, i JUST signed in!

Well, you did ask for a cliff, Lesley ... Wink

 


#308:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 7:17 pm


Oh dear! This isn't good!!!


Don't leave her there too long, Lisa!!

 


#309:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 8:13 pm


Lisa wrote:
Honestly, i JUST signed in!

Well, you did ask for a cliff, Lesley ... Wink


Did I? Oh well in that case thanks very much!! Laughing

(Mary Lou is not being particularly nice here is she?)

 


#310:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 8:44 pm


Eeek!! Poor Gillian!!!

 


#311:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 11:55 am


Hmm, yes, Mary-Lou is getting rather unpleasant which wasn't my intention! I just had the idea that Morvoren would be a bit of a free spirit and that there would be similarities in their characters that they both found difficult to start with. I'm not sure if this is working so well, the plot is taking a while to come out, I do have vague ideas but it doesn't feel as real as 'Dancer'. Honest opinions, please? I can take it!


***************

“Excellent time, girls!” cried Miss O’Ryan, looking at her watch. “What fine Guides you are! Morvoren! What have you got there?”

The girls spun round to look at Morvoren, whose skirts were hitched up and bulging full of something. She looked openly back at the mistress, while Vi reddened and hid behind her bold Cornish friend.

“I said that there were some delicious mushrooms here, “ said Morvoren happily, showing the contents of her skirts. “They’ll make fine eating for tea –“

“You were forbidden to pick the mushrooms!” Miss Wilson’s voice was terrible. She had borne a great deal of worry, and now this disobedient new girl had really been the last straw.

“Oh, but I didn’t think that applied to me!” Morvoren responded complacently. “Only to them as don’t know the difference atween – “

“Kindly remember to use good English, Morvoren,” said Miss Wilson icily, and was about to continue when Miss O’Ryan caught her arm:

“Miss Wilson – Gillian’s missing!” Mary-Lou looked around herself in horror, and realised that her friend was not behind her as she had supposed. “Who was her partner? Then, Mary-Lou, you know better than to leave her behind!”

“I – I didn’t realise,” stammered Mary-Lou lamely.

“Quick, girl, lead us back the way you came,” commanded Miss O’Ryan. Girls, wait here together, and DO NOT move.” The two staff members dashed down the path following Mary-Lou. In a few moments they reached the prostrate figure and stopped short. Miss O’Ryan crouched down at once and spoke to the girl tenderly: “Gillian dear, can you hear me?”

Gillian stirred immediately and turned a pale and shocked face to the mistress. “I – I fell,” she whispered. “My ankle hurts,” and then to her shame she began to weep gently, large fat tears leaving white tracks in her dirt-spattered face.

“Can you sit up?” coaxed Miss Wilson, supporting the girl as she struggled up. “There now. Where’s your handkerchief? That’s better.” Gillian responded to the teachers’ ministrations and was soon more cheerful, although pale and subdued. Mary-Lou hovered anxiously in the background, awaiting instructions from the staff.

“Mary-Lou, please go down to the house and fetch some help. We need one of the men to carry her back. Why on earth did you leave her?”

Mary-Lou muttered an apology as she took off for the house. Miss Wilson turned her attention back to the shivering patient. “Now Gillian, we will look around for some branches to make a splint with,” she said practically and conversationally. “Perhaps, Miss O’Ryan will take the girls back?” she asked, glancing at the younger teacher.

Acquiescing, Miss O’Ryan plunged back into the woods to meet the girls and guide them back to the school house. Fortunately the trees were very close to the building, as their walk had brought them in a sweeping arc. Back with Gillian, Miss Wilson hid her concern behind cheerful comments as she sought for branches that would make a suitable splint. A rustle in the bushes behind her made her jump and she spun round to see ….

 


#312:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 3:09 pm


..someone running after Lisa to tie her to the pc and demand more!

(well, you did want an honest opinion, didn't you!)

 


#313:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 3:10 pm


to see.......... Yes? What exactly?

Lisa this a totally different story to Dancer. The characters are as real as they should be and the fact that ML is different to the way you would like her to be is a pointer to that.

Morvoren is a free spirit - and a breath of fresh air. It is understandable that she and ML would clash, as ML doesn't like her nose to be out of joint.

Hope Bill's telling off for the mushrooms will not be behind closed doors, or is there a rogue one among them and though Bill forbids then for the girls the staff or domestic staff have them and someone ends up poorly?

 


#314:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 3:15 pm


Lisa, the story is gripping, the characters are 'in-character' the setting is wonderful and your new character is an intriguing enigma. Don't know about others, but as far as I'm concerned it's a fantastic read!



(Do want Hilda to get better though! Wink)

 


#315:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 7:33 pm


Lisa this is really good. From our point of view it is working but I know how it feels when a drabble just isn't flowing that well. You've had a long break from it and that may account for part of it. I really do like this - it's original, it's fresh. Let the characters do what they want and don't worry about how they're coming across.

And like Lesley said. let Hilda get better please!!

 


#316:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 12:32 am


*agrees that this really is good!!*
Lisa, have faith in yourself sweetie!!!!

 


#317:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:11 am


Saw who? or what?

*Wonders whether Morvoren would have reason to ignore a DON'T MOVE*

Please continue soon!

 


#318:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 11:30 am


Aw. Embarassed You're all so sweet! I agree, Catherine, it's probably the long break that's done it. And I think this drabble was always character and location-driven rather than plot driven (like Dancer) so you're right Susan, I shouldn't compare. Oh, and I love the mushroom idea - what if one of them was of the 'magic' persuasion ... I feel a humorous interlude coming on!

Kathy_S wrote:
Saw who? or what?

*Wonders whether Morvoren would have reason to ignore a DON'T MOVE*


Very perceptive, Kathy!

OK, on with the drabble, I'll let it lead where it wants ....



***************


a glimpse of brown fabric. A moment later, Morvoren emerged from the woods, her arms full of stout poles.

“Morvoren!” gasped Miss Wilson. “What on earth – “

“I heard Miss O’Ryan say she needed a splint, and I knew you wouldn’t find the right kind of branch in this scrub,” she said breathlessly. “So I brought – Miss Wilson! Gillian!”

Miss Wilson’s attention snapped to the girl beside her, who had slumped into another faint. Her colour had gone grey, and she was motionless. The position she had fallen into revealed a hitherto unseen purplish bruise spreading from under her hairline. The mistress was galvanised into action, and found Morvoren a willing and capable helper. The Cornish girl deftly bound the unconscious one’s ankle, while the teacher ensured Gillian was breathing. A sound of ripping startled Miss Wilson and she turned to see Morvoren tearing her tunic into long strips.

“No –“ she began, but a murmur from Gillian stopped her. She stroked the girl’s brow and looked on as Morvoren tied the cloths between two poles to create a makeshift stretcher.

“Let’s ease her on, one two three, up!” panted the girl. Within minutes, they had her laid out comfortably on the stretcher, and the teacher and pupil carried their burden between them. Just as they reached the outskirts of the wood, the two men ran up from the beach.

“Give her here, Missus. Ye two can’t be carryin’ her. Take t’other end, Tom. Thass it.” The two men carried the unconscious girl rapidly and smoothly towards the house where Matron was waiting. She was rushed inside and Miss Wilson and Morvoren were left alone. The teacher looked at the girl.

“I – I can’t speak to you now, Morvoren. Go in and get changed, your dress is positively indecent. Expect a summons from me later.”

Much chastened, Morvoren made her way into the house and crept up the stairs, hoping that she would not see anyone.


**********

Now how the heck did THAT happen? That wasn't in the plot! Confused

 


#319:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 12:55 pm


*G*

Tis the characters doing what they want to do, that's all Lisa!! Was very funny though. What will Matey say about her dress?!!!!

 


#320:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 1:40 pm


Well, Matey won't be pleased, but Morvoren seems to be the only one who kept her head and knew what to do.

 


#321:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 8:23 pm


Yes but will the CS see it that way? Only ML is allowed to do that!

Thanks Lisa.

 


#322:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 9:23 pm


Well, Bill should be impressed. Wasn't she rather keen on first aid in her guider days?

 


#323:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 9:11 am


But Morvoren isn't supposed to show initiative when OOAO is around.

 


#324:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 9:32 am


Much chastened, Morvoren made her way into the house and crept up the stairs, hoping that she would not see anyone. Fortunately for her, Matron was much occupied with Gillian, so the dishevelled girl managed reach the large room to which she had been assigned undiscovered. She rummaged in the cupboard next to her bed and pulled on her only other tunic. Looking at the tattered remnants of the first in her hand she grinned ruefully. Now what to do? Should she wait here until summoned? Morvoren sat rather heavily on the bed and wondered how Gillian fared.

Matron had overseen the arrival of Gillian into the tiny ground floor sick room that had been converted from an outhouse. The girl had recovered consciousness quickly, and Matron was relieved to see that her pupils were beginning to dilate normally and her colour returning. She bathed the bruise with arnica and then tucked the girl into bed whilst seeing to her ankle. She glanced up at a knock on the door to see Miss Wilson peering round the door and hastened to reassure her that all would be well.

“She has some concussion, but it’s not as bad as I first feared,” Matron told her. “Her ankle is very swollen; I believe it is broken, but cannot have it x-rayed until she is well enough to go over to the mainland. But I have strapped it up well, so it may heal naturally. It could have been worse, and it is just as well that you managed to get her back so quickly.”

“Ah, that!” sighed Miss Wilson and regaled Matron with the tale of Morvoren’s assistance. Matron winced when she heard of the damage done to the dress, but listened silently to the account.

“I know that you know how to deal with the girls, Nell,” she began, “but I suggest that you aren’t too scathing. Oh yes, I know she has been very disobedient, and that should be pointed out to her. But she has had a very different upbringing, and we must bear this in mind. Thankfully, Gillian was fine, but it could easily have been a different story, and Morvoren could have saved her life by her prompt action. I don’t believe there is any intentional cheek in her behaviour.”

Miss Wilson ruminated on these words as she made her way back to her office. Soon, Hilda would wake up, and then Nell would break the news to her, but play it down as much as possible to avoid burdening her friend with any more worry. She met Miss O’Ryan just outside the office door, and updated her.

“What are you going to do about Morvoren and the mushrooms?” asked Miss O’Ryan wickedly, the relief provoking a sense of humour. “And her terrible disobedience?” she giggled.

“Oh well, she didn’t mean it badly, that’s just Morvoren!” came Miss Wilson’s reply. “Would you do me a favour, Biddy? Go and find her and send her to me. I think you’ll find her in her room getting changed.”

“I meant to say, I’ve sent Mary-Lou to your office to wait for you,” said Miss O’Ryan suddenly, reddening as she remembered the waiting girl just the other side of the door.

Miss Wilson’s eyes widened, she grimaced and quickly entered the room. Mary-Lou was standing at the window, gazing out on the view, and turned quickly at the entrance of the teacher. She dropped a curtsey and stood upright meeting the mistress’s eyes squarely.

“How is Gillian?” she asked at once.

“She has broken her ankle, Matron thinks, and has a nasty bruise on her head but she will recover. Well, Mary-Lou, you did a fine job of fetching help,” began Miss Wilson. “But I’d like to ask just what you were thinking of when you left Gillian alone.”

“I didn’t realise,” mumbled Mary-Lou miserably. “I’m so sorry – “

“Do you realise how the others look up to you, Mary-Lou? They look to you for guidance. If they see you behaving as you did today, heedless of rules, how will that influence them? I am disappointed in you.” There was an awkward pause in which Mary-Lou stared down at the floor, her lips pressed mutely together. A knock on the door interrupted the silence. “That’s enough, Mary-Lou, you may go.” Mary-Lou curtsied again and opened the door, almost crashing onto Morvoren who stood with fist poised to knock again. As she walked away down the corridor she heard Miss Wilson’s voice ring out cheerfully: “Come in, Morvoren my dear."

Anger rising within her, Mary-Lou stalked down the corridor, hesitated at the end, and then walked out through the door that led to the lawn area. She wandered along a small bark path that led to the fledgling vegetable patch and hunkered down to look at tiny rows of early radishes and small delicate green leaves that would grow into big bullet headed cabbages. Her thoughts whirled inside her head as she railed against the unfairness of it all. Since Morovren had arrived – was it really only just that morning? – Mary-Lou had been publicly snubbed and humiliated. Miss Wilson’s words had pierced deeply, but her own sense of shame was overridden by the memory of that cheery “Come in, Morvoren my dear.” Mary-Lou had waited in the office as bidden by Miss O’Ryan, and hadn’t been able to help overhearing the first part of the mistresses’ conversation. She had moved away to the window as soon as she could, despising the idea of eavesdropping, but not before she heard Miss Wilson say “that’s just Morvoren!” In the girl’s mind, she could see only the apparent unfairness of the way in which she had been treated. ‘An’ I’ve been reprimanded for accidentally moving faster than Gillian, while her outright disobedience and cheek gets laughed over!” she thought furiously. Mary-Lou, of course, knew nothing of Morvoren’s quick thinking in making the stretcher, nor did she know of the interview that was taking place that very moment.


Last edited by Lisa on Mon Aug 02, 2004 12:39 pm; edited 1 time in total

 


#325:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:09 am


What a shocker OOAO is in this drabble.

 


#326:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:42 pm


Well, OOAOML seems to be getting a taster of how all the other girls might have felt over the way SHE was favouritised!!!!!

 


#327:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:59 pm


Somehow, I don't think it's going to make her a better person, not in this drabble.

 


#328:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 4:28 pm


Does anyone else feel a little hint of satisfaction over the way OOAO is having to cope with someone more like her than she is? Laughing

Thanks for that bit Lisa!

 


#329:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 4:45 pm


I did initially, but now I'm beginning to feel really sorry for her... Embarassed

I'd love more though! Very Happy

 


#330:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 11:44 am


I don't feel sorry for her, because she isn't using it as a learning experience, but instead is allowing her resentment to build up inside her.

 


#331:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 11:28 am


*Loving the discussion about ML* Good, you are all thinking along the lines I wanted you to!!
I've never really written an 'interview' before, so I hope it isn't disappointing, but bear in mind she hasn't even been at the school for 12 hours yet!

*************

The subject of Mary-Lou’s thoughts was at that moment studying her toes with great intensity. When she first entered the office, Morvoren swallowed any qualms and cheerfully took a chair, waiting expectantly for Miss Wilson to speak. Almost immediately she shot up again, startled as her teacher barked an order heavy with disapproval. Heaving a deep sigh, the co-Headmistress shook her head solemnly at the surprised pupil.

“Morvoren, there are many things you will need to learn. Your behaviour today has not shown you in the best light. No – don’t interrupt. Listen. Your delayed arrival caused us a great deal of concern. Then you showed scant regard for our instructions regarding berthing your boat. This afternoon you disobeyed rules several times – “she held her hand up to quell a response: “several times. Now you behave disrespectfully, sitting down here without waiting to be invited. What do you have to say for yourself?”

Morvoren had gulped a little at hearing her list of crimes listed in such an uncompromising way. “I – I didn’t realise, “she began miserably. “I honestly didn’t mean to be rude or – or disobedient. But I know this land, and the sea, so I just acted on my init – initiative.”

Miss Wilson rapidly smothered a smile, and continued her lecture. “Morvoren, I am aware that you have often needed to be independent and responsible in your fishing village at home. But here you are part of a different community; one in which we have the responsibility for you. You must follow our lead, and obey our rules. We don’t have that many here, but the ones we do have, we expect to obeyed absolutely.”

“I can look after myself,” muttered Morvoren, but not rudely. Miss Wilson eyed her sharply and saw that the girl was on the verge of tears.

“Don’t you see,” the mistress interposed gently, “that our impression of your family and upbringing will come from your behaviour and attitude here. As you grow up, your little village will be judged by its representatives – of which you are one.” There was a long pause, in which Morvoren stared at her shoes and tried desperately not to snuffle.

Miss Wilson had borne in mind Matey’s wise words, and she also had great experience of young girls. She waited just long enough, and then tempered her lecture with some words of kindness. “However, Morvoren, you are new here, and it will take you time to learn our ways. You did show initiative and capability this afternoon, and had Gillian been more severely injured, she would certainly have owed a great deal to you.” Her gentleness broke the barrier and a fat tear rolled down Morvoren’s cheek. She wiped it away in horror, ashamed to be in tears.

“I want you to think very hard about why we have rules, and what the reasons for them may be. Now, it is still your first day, and it has been a truly eventful one for you. In just a moment you must go and wash, and then the gong will be going for dinner. But before you go, I want to ask you to do something for me.”

Morvoren raised her eyes to Miss Wilson, blinking in surprise.

 


#332:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 11:41 am


Awwwww.

Glad to see Miss Wilson being kind but will they manage to tame Morvoren's wild spirit even just a little?

And what is she going to ask Morvoren to do?!!

 


#333:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 11:56 am


And does it invole OOAOML?

 


#334:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 12:40 pm


Thanks for the nterview Lisa- just right!

*Also wondering if Miss Wilson is going to ask something about ML.*

 


#335:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 2:50 pm


I can see the need for Morvoren to keep the rules, but Nell should have praised her rather more. And I join in the hopes that Morvoren isn't going to have to be nice to OOAO who is being positively bovine in this drabble.

 


#336:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 7:53 pm


You've hit just the right balance with this Lisa! Thanks!

 


#337:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:29 pm


*dancing impatiently* But what does Bill want her to do? take over as ooao maybe? *g*

I love this drabble, Lisa! Laughing

 


#338:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:17 pm


Or show her the way forward...?! Or take over as form prefect (if OOAOML is it at present?) !

 


#339:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 3:14 pm


Questions, questions, - but where are the answers?

 


#340:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 3:41 pm


Jennie wrote:
Questions, questions, - but where are the answers?


Erm ... my bunny has them, amd he has escaped to play in the garden with my new cats....

As soon as he comes back I'll get hime to dictate the next part. (The delay has NOTHING to do with a rather fat package arriving from GGBthis morning Wink )


Now I know you'll all be cross with me 'cos you expected another installment Laughing

 


#341:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 4:00 pm


Yes we did. This was said in a resigned, not to mention martyred tone of voice intended to make Lisa feel immensely guilty.

 


#342:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 4:03 pm


We're not angry Lisa... just... *sob* - disappointed. -- said in my best parental manner.

 


#343:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 5:18 pm


*cringes under weight of guilt*

OK (oops - visit to the fines box) the bunny hopped in for a while and came up with this:

(Oh I'm so tempted to make this into a farce, it seems easier to do than with Shrek!)

***********

Morvoren raised her eyes to Miss Wilson, blinking in surprise.

“You have many skills and talents, Morvoren, and if you are willing to share them with us, it will be of great benefit to the school. Now, there are some of us who are natural leaders, and others who are not. I believe that you are one of the former. But there is another in your class who has those very qualities. Sometimes, when two strong characters meet, there can be problems. I want you to be aware of this, Morvoren. Show sensitivity to those who have been here longer than you. But don’t lose your character – we like strong personalities here at the Chalet School!”

With this, Morvoren was dismissed, and it was a very serious and reflective girl who made her way back to the splashery to freshen up.

Mary-Lou was scrutinising a beetle that was sitting happily in a cabbage leaf. She was trying to decide whether it would do any damage or not, when a noise behind her startled her.

“Doris!” she breathed in relief, as her friend approached at a rapid pace. “I wondered what that was!”

“Mary-Lou Trelawney, where have you been?” demanded Doris without ceremony. “Do you realise that the bell for dinner will be going in two minutes, and you’re as grubby as – as grubby as an earthworm!” she declared. “Miss Slater has been asking questions. We’ve all been dancing in the drawing room since getting back. Oh! Is it – is it Gillian?” she asked as she observed Mary-Lou’s pale face in dismay.

“No, not really. That is, she isn’t too chipper, but she’ll be OK,” returned her friend, using slang that would cause her Headmistresses to raise their hands heavenwards in despair. “I got it hot and strong from Bill for leaving her behind though,” she added momentarily confusing her listener.

“Oh, Gillian!” Doris exclaimed with a laugh. “Come on, any way, or you’ll add tardiness to your collection of sins!” She hauled her friend up and dragged her off to the splashery to wash. Mary-Lou, much cheered by her friend’s actions, soon began to return to a semblance of cheerfulness, and arms linked they proceeded to the cloakroom at a decidedly unladylike pace, mercifully avoiding the wrath of a prefect who was patrolling the corridor but was distracted by a loose shoelace.

The fourth form table was somewhat subdued at dinner that evening. The girls consumed their scrambled eggs and salad in near silence, and Hilda, much restored by her afternoon nap, commented to Nell that she hoped there wasn’t going to be a wholesale epidemic!

“I’m sure they’re just tired out with all the walking and excitement today,” said Miss Wilson reassuringly. “They are probably wondering about Gillian, too, although Matron has informed them of her progress. To be on the safe side, Matron is taking her to Looe tomorrow, and from there into Liskeard so she can be fully checked over by the doctors there.”

“How are they getting to Liskeard?” enquired Miss Annersley. She looked much better for her sleep: brighter and with a hint of a rosy colour.

“Oh, Joey is running them there in her car,” Miss Wilson informed her.

“What a Godsend Joey is!” exclaimed her friend, of which dictum her colleague heartily approved. “Well, time for grace. They look just about finished.” With a deep breath, Miss Annersley pushed back her chair and rose to say the short grace with which the school always finished its meals.

As night fell on Looe Island, the various occupants of the old house settled in to sleep. The moon made an appearance from behind some stormy looking clouds, and shone wanly on the humped isle. Soon there was a peaceful slumbering emanating from the building, with all except three minds deeply asleep. The three were in separate parts of the house. Miss Wilson moved uneasily in her bed. Sleep usually came to her quickly, but she was mulling over the events of the day. Hilda had seemed better following her nap, and Matron had assured Nell that she would talk over Hilda’s symptoms with a doctor in Liskeard. “But I’m sure it is just a delayed reaction to the shocks of the recent weeks,” she had said. Nell turned her mind to the incident on the walk. She replayed her interview with Morvoren in her mind, feeling uneasy stirrings in her mind as she recalled the girl’s tear stricken face. ‘Perhaps I should have praised her for her quick thinking more,’ she thought. Still, Morvoren was made of strong stuff, and with this thought, the teacher at last drifted off to sleep.

The Cornish girl herself was also restless, and thinking very seriously about the interview too. She resolved to do her very best so that her family and village would be well respected by these girls. Then she turned her mind to puzzling over the Head’s closing words to her. ‘I don’t know who it can be,’ she frowned for at least the twentieth time since dinner. ‘I must keep my wits about me, and figure it out. I don’t want to tread on anyone’s toes, but, well, I must be true to myself.”

In the room next door, Mary-Lou lay wide awake staring at the ceiling. There was a tempest going on in her soul as she called to mind everything that happened that day. Mary-Lou was no coward and she forced herself to face up to what it was she mistrusted about the school’s newest pupil. ‘I s’pose it’s cos she’s a bit like me,’ she thought uncomfortably. ‘But I don’t see why Bill showed such favouritism. Well, I’ll do my best to like her, honest injun I will. But she’d better learn the way we do things here!’

 


#344:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 6:05 pm


Ok. I'm now torn between, *oh, she's lovely really* and *omg how self obsessed is she!* (with regards to ML)

However, considering she's had the - "it's just Mary-Lou!" treatment for however many years I guess you would get like that - so I hope she's ok. Very Happy

 


#345:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 7:18 pm


Glad the bunny came in from playing with the cats, Lisa. Lovely post - very interesting to see all the sub plots!

Last edited by Lesley on Wed Aug 04, 2004 5:49 pm; edited 1 time in total

 


#346:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 10:38 am


Lovely, Lisa can see a great storm brewing between Morvoren and ML.

 


#347:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 1:04 pm


Thought we'd better get moving and beyond Morvoren's first day!

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Term proper got under way and in no time at all the Chalet School settled to its new surroundings. The girls relished the special curriculum, and were soon making great strides in areas of botany, marine biology and nature observation. Under the strict supervision of at least three members of staff, rowing was practised in the lee of the little bay when the weather was kind, although Miss Wilson threw up her hands in horror at Morvoren’s suggestion that a swim might be nice.

“No swimming!” she ordered. “I know that you are impervious to cold Morvoren – and probably swim all year round – but it is simply too early in the year. Perhaps in the second half of the term, but that is a BIG perhaps!”

The Cornish girl began to shrug her shoulders good-naturedly, but caught Miss Wilson’s eye and hurriedly dropped a bob instead. In her three weeks at the Chalet School she had learned a lot about the expectation of manners and etiquette, and she really was doing her best, although some of the mistresses despaired of her unconventional ways. Still, she had won the respect and liking of the staff and most of her peers for she was a forthright and original creature who was happy to help out.

Matters had calmed down between Morvoren and that shining light of the third form, Mary-Lou. There was an uneasy peace between them as they both strove to heed Miss Wilson’s words and they were always perfectly polite towards each other.

Matron had returned from Liskeard with three pieces of news. Firstly, Gillian had broken two small bones in her ankle, but the doctors praised Matron’s handiwork and merely plastered the joint in position. Tests revealed that Gillian was suffering from anaemia, which explained her fainting and weakness. She was put on a strict diet which appalled the poor girl who enjoyed her cakes and pastries but sad to say did not love her greens. The second piece of news was that Joey had suffered a prolonged bilious attack and was unable to come over to the island to begin the creative writing classes for several weeks. She was fine, but rather weak and had been told to rest and not work until she was completely fit and well. Joey bemoaned her fate, but busied herself with some writing inspired by the locality in which she was now living. Finally, Matron on her return became closeted with Miss Wilson and had a frank discussion with that lady about their colleague and friend, Hilda Annersley.

“So it seems that the worst has probably passed,” the smaller lady said. “But we need to keep a very close eye on her and ensure that she has plenty of rest, and as little worry as possible. If we could persuade her to pay a visit to the cottage hospital in Liskeard, there are some tests that the doctors could run – “but she stopped as Nell was shaking her head.

“Hilda will never agree to that,” she said at once. “Besides, if the worst has passed it would only worry her if we suggested it. I think we should continue as usual, but as you say, observe her closely.”

 


#348:  Author: Ellen PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 1:21 pm


More, more, more!!!

Just one question. What is a bilious attack? They seem common in the books and I've never known what one is!!

 


#349:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 1:42 pm


Tummy bug kind of thing, I think, Ellen.


Thanks Lisa. It's good to see that Morvoren has settled down a bit - even if it's not for long!!!

 


#350:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 2:04 pm


Ellen, I've never really known what a bilious attack is either! I think we've discussed it elsewhere and come to the conclusion that EBD used it as a euphemism for anything from period pain to a tummy bug or headache!

************

The beginning of the third week brought the beloved Mrs Maynard back into the fold and with her commenced a wonderful series of lessons. Though, as Mary-Lou expressed it, how they could be called lessons when they were such downright fun, was anybody’s guess! The third form had been ushered into the Hall after prayers where Joey stood, looking every inch the schoolgirl despite being a proud Mamma, her eyes twinkling with mischief. Under one arm she carried a large canvas bag. Once the girls assembled they stood looking at one another curiously.

“Funny place for a lesson,” muttered Doris. “Where are the desks, I wonder?” she was hushed by the sound of Joey clearing her throat, and then all eyes turned expectantly to the Chalet School’s first pupil.

“Good morning everyone,” rang out Joey’s musical tones. “As you know, each form will be following a special creative writing course this term, and we will finish with a competition. Now, we are going to be looking at a whole range of skills that will help you to frame your creative ideas, and we are going to focus mostly on,” she paused for dramatic effect, “story-telling!” She stood back and looked around expectantly, amused at some of the expressions of dismay. Throwing back her head she gave an attractive peal of laughter. “Why the glum faces?” she demanded.

A small hand was raised rather tremulously, and a red faced girl gulped an answer: “If you please, Mrs Maynard, we’re not babies!” she finished in embarrassment, slightly cheered by the nods of agreement around her.

Joey’s eyebrows almost disappeared into her hairline. “So that’s what it is!” she exclaimed. “You ninnies! Who said you were babies? I think I am going to have to change your minds about this! But, before we begin the lesson, I want you to all hurry to the cloakrooms, fetch wraps, and come back here with a notebook and pencil. Chop chop!” and she clapped her hands together. There was an immediate bustle of excitement as the girls flew to do as they were bid.

 


#351:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 3:41 pm


Iiiiiinteresting.

Is it too early to ask for more? Confused

 


#352:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 4:07 pm


Anything to oblige, Laura (especially as you're so enthusiastic and supportive! Smile )

**************


“You can always rely on Joey to create a sensation!” observed Miss O’Ryan wryly to Miss Slater. “Did you deposit Gillian OK?”

“Mind your language, Biddy!” admonished Pam Slater. “The girls may hear you. Yes, Gillian is waiting there already. She chose Morvoren to accompany her. The descent would have been very difficult with those crutches, but between Morvoren and myself we gave her a fairly comfortable ‘Queen’s chair’ lift down.”

By this time the girls had once again assembled and Joey decided to be merciful.

“Stories must be real,” she began, after holding her hand up for silence. “As a writer, you need to convey experiences that your readers will believe in. As we study the tools of writing, we are going to use all our senses to help us feel the stories we need to tell!” With this enigmatic comment, she then turned and led the way from the Hall, calling a cheery “follow me!” over her shoulder.

The girls were excited and intrigued, and immediately fell into line. Mary-Lou soon realised where they were heading. “We’re heading to the rocks behind the landing beach!” she announced, her clarion tones carrying through the air. Joey turned her head with a laugh.

“Good for you, Mary-Lou!” she cried. “We are, but we’re taking a direct route. Now we’re nearly there; when we arrive, please, I’d like you to get into pairs, and then one from each pair is to approach me and collect something from my bag.”

There was much excitement among the girls at this point, interrupted by Vi calling out: “Oh, look! There’s Gillian! And Morvoren. I wondered where they were.”

“Well, we couldn’t expect poor Gillian to keep up with the rest of us,” Joey informed her. “She needs more time and I thought it fairer if she was brought here in advance so that she could be fresh and waiting for us. Are you in your pairs? Good. Then one from each pair come up please.” She efficiently handed out squares of newspaper, and the girls looked at them in surprise until Verity-Anne cried that they must be for sitting on! “Yes,” acquiesced Joey, “If I were to take you all back with colds from sitting on the ground, Matey would NOT love me!” and she shuddered at the thought. “Now, you are to find a comfortable space and sit on your newspapers.”

The girls scurried about, giggling and whispering as they each found a space and sat down.

“Get as comfortable as you can. Now before we begin, I’d like us to talk about this idea of storytelling, and why some of you think it’s babyish. Why do you think people tell stories?”

A forest of arms waved at her, and she smiled at the enthusiasm of the girls. “Stephanie?”

“To entertain little ones, Mrs Maynard, and help them go to sleep at night,” offered Stephanie uncertainly.

Joey bit her lip, but nodded encouragingly. “Well, yes, that’s certainly one reason I suppose. What else? Vi?”

Vi rose to her feet, blushing a little. “I- I think it’s to help explain things,” she said in a rush. “Sometimes stories have – have hidden meanings, if you see what I mean,” she trailed off lamely, and sat down in a hurry.

“Excellent, Vi!” exclaimed Joey. “You are exactly right. You remember of course that Our Lord used stories to help explain things to people? Yes, Gillian?”

“They were called preambles, Mrs Maynard!” she said eagerly, and Joey’s choke, it is a shame to say, was audible even over Mary-Lou’s piercing “that’s parables, you mook!”

Gillian grinned round at everyone. “Oh, well, you know what I mean!” she said. “Like the sower and the proj-prodigal son.”

“And the parable of the talents!” put in Doris, remembering this from assemblies.

“Yes,” laughed Joey. “Sometimes we can explain the truth, or our view of things more clearly by telling a story. Can anyone think of an example which isn’t in the Bible?”

Verity-Anne responded to this in her silvery voice. “Aesop’s fables,” she said confidently. “And the story of the Emperor’s new clothes. That had a different meaning to the obvious one.”

“So now we have thought about some of the purposes of story-telling, I want you to think about the way you tell stories in your everyday lives.” The girls stared blankly at their teacher, and she realised she need to prompt them further. “Gillian, you have been telling a certain story a lot recently. Why is that?”

Momentarily dumbfounded, Gillian frowned, then her face cleared and she nodded violently. “Oh yes! I’ve been telling people about how I hurt my ankle,” she said, “’cos they want to know, and – oh! I see what you mean! I’m sharing my experience with them!”

“That’s it!” nodded Joey, pleased. “Telling stories is really all about how you share your view of the world and experiences with others. Can anyone think of any other examples?”

Morvoren shuffled and the resolutely put her hand up in the air. At Joey’s nod, she began to speak: “In the evenings in the winter, in our village, we often tell stories around the fire, whilst we’re mending nets or something,” she said in a rush. “It’s a way of keeping memories and wisdom alive, my Dad says,” she continued, warming to her theme, “and it you can learn a lot about the history of the land and sea.”

 


#353:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 4:08 pm


Never too early to ask for more, Laura!!


More please, Lisa!! This is great!

 


#354:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 4:15 pm


Thanks Lisa! Very Happy

Joey has gone up in my estimation, too. Incidentally - has ML had time to talk to Joey over what happened with Morvoren yet? If so, how will Joey react to her?

 


#355:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 4:17 pm


Good thinking, Laura! I will attend to that at once! There will be some more later - I've been on a roll today! (a cheese & pickle one Laughing )


Oh, I'm such a card.

 


#356:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 5:42 pm


Joey looked delighted. “That leads perfectly into our first piece of work!” she declared. “Thank you, Morovoren, for sharing that. It is important for us to remember girls that there is a much longer oral story-telling tradition than there is a literary one, even though we read a lot of our stories in books. When people would share a story, particularly in a community as Morvoren has just described, they may act out, exaggerate or enhance parts of the story to show where their intentions and attitudes lie. When we are writing stories down, we need to think about strategies – that is, ways,” she explained as some of the girls looked confused at the unfamiliar word, “to help us achieve the effect we want. I will give you an example. Look out to sea.”

The girls obediently turned their heads and gazed out to the expanse of green-blue water that surged around the island.

Joey spoke softly. “What do you think is the story of the sea? No, don’t try to answer. Just think for a couple of minutes.” She paused for long enough, and then continued in the same tone. “We all think of the sea in different ways, and it can be difficult to put into words how we are feeling. Look back at me, now.”

Sixteen pairs of eyes solemnly swivelled back to her, and Joey was thrilled to have their rapt attention. “We are going to each write a small piece of composition about the sea this morning,” she said, with a blissful disregard for rules of grammar, appalling in one in her position, “but we are going to do it by building up our own ideas first.” She switched topic: “What are the five senses?”

The girls called out answers quickly, and Joey nodded, summarising their responses for emphasis: “Right, smell, touch, taste, sight and sound. We are going to begin with smell. I want you each to close your eyes. Go on!” With some self-consciousness the girls began to obey. “Mary-Lou! I said eyes closed!” whereupon Mary-Lou, who had been gazing round at the others, rapidly shut them. “Now, no talking! Just breathe in deeply through your nose, and smell the sea. Don’t make any sounds!” this as one or two snorts were heard, “what does the sea smell like? Just think to yourself. You can’t get the answer wrong, you know.” Again she paused for a minute or two to allow the girls to relax and absorb. “Now, pick up your pens and privately write down what you think the sea smells of.”

Heads were bowed as the girls industriously scribbled. Joey surveyed the intent faces, smiled inwardly at one or two tongues that were poking out of mouths with concentration, and then went to sit by Stephanie, who was looking doleful. “Qu’est-ce que c’est, cherie?” asked Joey, dropping into the girl’s native language as she approached.

Stephanie looked grateful and screwed up her nose as she admitted her problem. “The sea just smells like the sea to me,” she commented in the same language. “I can’t explain more than that.” She was a literal child, and found imagination difficult.

“What is the smell like?” pursued Joey. “Nice? Clean?”

“Oh no,” responded the French girl at once, “it’s dangerous. It sort of gets up your nostrils all sharp and -”

“Well done,” approved Joey, “you have answered your own question. Excellent, Stephanie! Develop that idea.” She left the beaming girl and took her place perched on a large flat rock. When she was sure that everyone, she then made a most surprising request.

“I thought she just said ‘stick your tongues out!’” gasped Polly.

“She did!” Vi informed her. “I think it’s going to be for the taste one,” she said wisely, and was proved to be correct by Joey’s next command to taste the sea. Even Joey could not have foreseen that at that moment a rather large wave couple with a strong gust of wind would send spray all over the group, thus giving them a far better taste of the sea than they had bargained for!

The rest of the lesson was taken up with the girls jotting down notes relating to the way they experienced the sea with each of their senses. Glancing at her watch, Joey clapped her hands for attention. “For prep I would like you to use your notes to help you write a short composition about the sea. No longer than 100 words!” she added, and some faces brightened at this. “That’s because I want quality, not quantity. One well-chosen word is far more effective than five heedless ones!” quoth Jo. “Now, gather up your things, and we’ll make for the school. Here comes Miss Slater, Gillian, to help you back. Off we go!”

All throughout lunch, the girls chattered hard about the morning’s lesson and Clem Barrass had to rap on the table three times for quiet. As form prefect she was responsible for good behaviour during meal times, and she was aware of eyes from the staff table upon her. However, the staff knew of Joey’s exciting lessons, and allowed the girls to let off steam a little as they ate.

It was on record that night that the third form went eagerly to prep, raced through their other work, and then turned with contented sighs to their compositions.

“Honestly, they were no trouble at all!” declared Peggy Bettany, Head Girl and niece of the founder of the school as well as the redoubtable Mrs Maynard. “Auntie Joey is a marvel!” she concluded, her eyes shining, and she and several of the other unfortunates who were studying for exams and therefore unable to participate in the special curriculum sighed with great sadness as they took up their maths work and prepared to grapple with algebraic problems.


******************

You'll get to read some of the compositions if you're lucky! (Or unlucky as the case may be!)

ETA Oh, and yes I have made a major Lisa-ism by making Clem form prefect of 3rd form, but that's because Morvoren should have been in her form to begin with, not Mary-Lou's. Confused M is 2 years older than ML. But I'll put it down to 1) M is behind in some aspects of work because of her upbringing (although her natural intelligence is of course very good Wink ) and 2) because of the move & size of the school & special curriculum the forms have been all amalgamated ....

Are you convinced?! Very Happy

 


#357:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 6:08 pm


No... but it was a very welcome section of drabble!

Are you still inspired? If so...more please! (yes, I know I'm pushing it...but I thought I'd check!) Very Happy

 


#358:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 7:03 pm


Lisa that was womderful - love Joey's lessons!

 


#359:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 4:43 am


What a impressive day you've had! Thank you!
*very happy that Joey didn't limit Lisa to 100 words! Smile *

 


#360:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 9:55 am


The sea has a sad story. She is a maiden who calls plaintively to her lover on the wind. Her cry is a moan of sadness and her delicate perfume reaches out to him. She wears a necklace of feathers, shells and seaweed, and runs silky fingers over the sand, smoothing her bed. She tastes of promise and richness, but her lover the moon just looks silently down on her.
Vi Lucy

Full of fury and danger is the sea. She assaults you with her sharp acidic scent, and burns the back of your throat with her rage. She swallows up ships and spits out their bones in crashes and booms. Hers is a rough caress as her coarse touch scrapes flesh from your bones and she is constantly in tumult as
her surface foams white.
Stephanie Berlioz

She is a traveller from afar, who has seen many places and times. She has a rich heady scent of Arabian spices, carrying with her the cries from far off countries. In her breath there are secrets of time and lives passed, and she touches you invitingly to voyage and explore. Her cloak is of many rippling shades of blue and green and she places exciting foreign tastes on the tongue.
Mary-Lou Trelawney.

The sea is a fickle goddess, with moods ever changing in the hues of her waters. Her smell is of decay and yet life. She tastes of fish and plenty, but that can be a shallow promise as she gives and takes away. The sound of her silence can be overwhelming, but she reassures with a gentle kissing sound on a summer’s day. She can hold you tightly, comfortingly, or she can let you go and sink deep down.
Morvoren Treffry

As each girl had risen from her desk and read out her composition, the class had clapped. As Morvoren finished, Joey stood up and fairly galloped to the front of the classroom.

“Girls,” she said, her hands clasped together, “those were some excellent pieces. Each one tells me a lot about you as individuals. What did most of you do to the sea in order to tell her story? Susan?”

Susan rose and answered very properly. “We personified the sea, Mrs Maynard. We gave it the qualities of a person so that it would mean more to the reader about our perception of it.”

Joey nodded. “Excellent. Now we are going to look at a different story about the sea. Morvoren?”

Her head held high, Morvoren made her way to the front of the class. Joey had requested something particular of her on the way back up to the school house after the last lesson, and the girl had readily agreed, but now she was feeling all the eyes on her she felt unusually shy.

She stood at the front of the room, feet slightly apart, and spoke to them in her clear Cornish voice. “Mrs Maynard has asked me to tell you a myth from Cornwall. There are lots of myths and legends set in this part of the world, and I know quite a few of ‘em,” she glanced at Mrs Maynard, then swallowed. “I’m going to tell you the story of the mermaid of Zennor,” she began.

(For the story, click here http://www.connexions.co.uk/culture/html/mz.htm

The girls listened to spellbound as Morovoren’s lilting voice told the story so well. As Vi observed afterwards, it was as if she really believed it and that made it all the more enthralling to the listener. “This is going to be such an exciting course of lessons,” she wound up by saying. “Bless Joey for such a grand idea!”

The mystery of Morvoren's name was much closer to being solved now, and the girls eagerly gossiped about it.

Mary-Lou listened to the story with the same attention as the rest, but Joey observed a quizzical look on her brevet niece’s face. She resolved to get to the bottom of it, and at the end of the lesson, when the pupils were filing out, she detained Mary-Lou by placing her hand on that girl’s arm.

“Oh, Mary-Lou, give me a hand with my books, would you?” The girl willingly obliged, and as she held the door for Joey, that lady typically came straight to the point.

“Look here, Mary-Lou, there seems to be something on your mind. Why don’t you beg leave of Hil – I mean Miss Annersley or Miss Wilson to spend Saturday afternoon with me. I can send a man with a boat over and you can come about two.” Mary-Lou brightened considerably, but the smile faded as Joey called back over her shoulder, “oh, and Mary-Lou, bring that new girl, Morvoren Treffry, will you?” then cheerfully called goodbye and vanished down the slope towards the beach.

 


#361:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 10:05 am


when are we going to hear about the Piskies? I'm sure Morvoren knows all about them!!!

 


#362:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 1:48 pm


Really enjoying this story. Why didn't we get lessons like this at school?

 


#363:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Sat Aug 07, 2004 1:34 pm


Once again, far to much to catch up on to comment on it all - but I enjoyed Bill's "It's just Morvereen" comment. Iwonder if ML had any idea how often that phrase was used about her.

Joey is quite good at this teaching business isn't she? I wish we could have had lessons like that.

Very much looking forward to seeing Joey, ML & Morv.

 


#364:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2004 5:18 pm


Excellent - wonder how Joey will get along with Morvereen! Laughing

 


#365:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 6:40 pm


Of course, not every day could herald a creative writing lesson, and Saturday morning found the girls yet again trooping outside, but this time for some gardening work. Due to the rationing that was still in force, it was vital that the school was able to provide its own vegetables as much as possible, and with this in mind, the Heads had employed their two handy men to dig over some vegetable beds. The potatoes that those two august ladies had spent two back-breaking hours cutting and placing out to chit – or sprout – had been carted over to the patch, and the girls eyed the dirty soft little vegetables that nevertheless had strong and vigorous shoots coming out of them.

“The roots are already growing!” cried Gillian in amazement from her vantage point of a comfortable chair that Miss Slater had placed there in readiness for her.

“Actually, Gillian, these shoots will be the growth we see above the ground,” explained that teacher, who enjoyed gardening in her own time and had willingly offered to take classes in it. “Once the potatoes are planted, small tubers will begin to grow under ground and they will eventually develop into the potatoes we’ll have on the dinner table.”

The girls were quite excited by this, and fell to with a will. A large rectangular bed had been prepared and the girls began to dig trenches, into which the half potatoes were placed at regular intervals. Morvoren, with her years of experience, rapidly and accurately planted the tubers, and began to rake up the soil around each one, leaving just the very tip of the shoot showing. Straightening at one point, she espied Mary-Lou’s efforts, and immediately shot over to help her.

“Oh, Mary-Lou, that’s all wrong!” she laughed. “Not like that, you’ve left far too much of the potato sticking out. Here,” and she promptly re-did Mary-Lou’s handiwork, “that’s better. Otherwise, your potatoes will sit on top of the soil and turn green. And green spuds are poisonous!” she declared. With this dictum, Morvoren skipped off to help Doris, who was planting her potatoes upside down. Unfortunately, she was unaware of the fairly malevolent glare that Mary-Lou cast in her direction. ‘Why must she always butt in?’ she thought fiercely. If the truth be told, Mary-Lou was suffering some twinges of toothache, and instead of anticipating the afternoon’s tea with Joey with delight, she was dreading the trip over with Morvoren, who she felt was far too sure of herself. She was startled out of her thoughts by a sudden yell that was followed by a howl, and then an appalling racket of growls, yelps and scuffles!

 


#366:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 6:54 pm


ooh! That doesn't sound good! Neither does it bode well for any friendship between Mary-Lou and Morvoren!!


More please, Lisa!! (And more Shrek would be good too!! Very Happy )

 


#367:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 7:34 pm


catherine wrote:


More please, Lisa!! (And more Shrek would be good too!! Very Happy )


Embarassed Ahh ... thought soemone would notice that I had been severely neglecting Shrek! I will write more for that before I next post here! Very Happy

 


#368:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 7:38 pm


Nice little post, Lisa,and good cliff! Laughing

 


#369:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 8:15 pm


Lovely Lisa, thank you for this bit, things do not look good between them.

 


#370:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 2:45 pm


Sorry, this is an incredibly short bit! Got company arriving in about 6 minutes, and not going til Sunday, so I'll post more then!

*************

Vi had been leaning on her spade handle, enjoying the feel of the sun on her back, when the island cat suddenly rubbed up against her legs. Startled out of her reverie, Vi had given a shriek, jumped, twisted violently to try to avoid falling but failed spectacularly, plunging headfirst into a potato trench and squashing the cat en-route. The much-abused creature protested vocally, and the ensuing racket was what Mary-Lou had heard. Miss Slater, after ensuring that Vi was not harmed, tutted and raised her eyebrows.

“If only you girls wouldn’t day dream so!” she said, and had to turn away rapidly to hide a smile that persisted because of the state of young Vi’s clothes. Vi stood dolefully gazing round at everyone, her face and arms smeared with mud. The unfortunate cat had shown its disapproval by scratching out, and the front of her tunic was torn. Her hair looked as if she had had a long tussle with a hedge, and a shoe was left buried in the mud at the bottom of the pit.

Morvoren escorted the unfortunate to bear the wrath of Matron, and the girls remaining tidied away the best that they could.

 


#371:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 3:45 pm


*poor cat!* (I'm sure Vi will be fine, but small as she is, she's much heavier than kitty)

*loved Morvoren's lecture on potato planting*
(but hopes she & ML become good friends, eventually)

 


#372:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 4:53 pm


Oh dear! Poor Vi!

 


#373:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 12:27 pm


Lisa wrote:
Sorry, this is an incredibly short bit! Got company arriving in about 6 minutes, and not going til Sunday, so I'll post more then!


Points out that it is now Monday afternoon ..........

 


#374:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 12:36 pm


Dawn wrote:


Points out that it is now Monday afternoon ..........


*thanks Dawn for her 'pointing out-ness' and hastens to reassure her that I was busy writing at that precise moment!*

Here is some more. Am getting worried that Morvoren is not as nice as I thought she was!!

*********

Morvoren escorted the unfortunate to bear the wrath of Matron, and the girls remaining tidied away the best that they could. It is on record that Matey told Vi what she thought of her in no uncertain terms, and that individual spent many hours endeavouring to repair the sorry state of her tunic. The cat avoided the vegetable patch from thereon after, so, as Miss Slater remarked later, perhaps the whole event was a blessing after all!
After lunch, the girls went to collect books and writing materials and take chairs out on to the lawn. They watched Mary-Lou and Morvoren enviously as the two prepared for their short voyage across to Hannafore, where they would enjoy tea at Jo’s.

Mary-Lou’s toothache was nagging at her, and had Matron not been so absorbed with Vi she may have questioned the former on her slightly shadowed look, but as it was, Mary-Lou escaped unnoticed. The two girls made their way demurely down the slope to the small beach. Morvoren made attempts to start a conversation, but after being rebuffed a number of times by the pained Mary-Lou, she gave it up and amused herself by whistling a repertoire of birdsongs. Upon arrival at the shore, the girls saw a small but smart rowing boat accompanied by a man enveloped in a thick knitted woollen jumper. Morvoren greeted him with a flood of Cornish and his weather-lined face relaxed into a surprisingly young expression. They conversed for a few minutes, and then Morvoren turned to her fellow pupil.

“Come on Mary-Lou,” she called. “Get in. This is Robbie, who has been sent by Joey to collect us. But he says I can row over if I like – and I could do with the practice!” she added with a laugh.

The girls clambered in, and Morvoren expertly handled the oars. In no time, they were skimming over the surface of the water, which for a wonder was perfectly calm and unruffled. Mary-Lou, feeling calmed by the fresh air and pleasant voyage, momentarily forgot her toothache and exclaimed aloud at the clarity of the water.

“You can see all the fish!” she cried. “Even at this depth!”

Robbie muttered something and Morvoren laughed in response to this. Mary-Lou reddened and pulled herself upright, very much on her dignity. Her toothache returned with a sudden pain.

“I really did not think I said anything remotely amusing,” she said icily. Morvoren raised her eyebrows in surprise and this gesture further irritated Mary-Lou.

“He only said that if you thought this was deep, you had a lot to learn,” Morvoren said, in an attempt to pacify, but the damage had been done, and the rest of the journey passed in an uncomfortable silence.

Jo was waiting at the shore at Hannafore and upon her first observation of the pair she immediately knew that something was amiss. She wisely refrained from interfering at this point, and merely nodded her thanks to Robbie. “And you’ll take them back over at six?” she finished.

Morvoren interrupted this with a laugh and a glance at the sky. “I don’t think it will be a very comfortable journey,” she said. “There’s some rough weather on the way!”

Mary-Lou, stung by Morvoren’s apparent arrogance, and emboldened by Joey’s presence, commented briskly.

“Nonsense, Morvoren. It is perfectly calm and clear. It will hardly change that much in a few hours.”

“But that unnatural calm indicates a swell proceeding from the South –” began the Cornish girl and looked to Robbie for confirmation. He merely nodded his head.

“Well,” said Jo doubtfully, “it looks fine to me. I’m sure all will be well, but if for any reason the weather does turn inclement, you can both stay the night!”

Morvoren dashed back down to the shore to help Robbie to beach the boat, leaving Mary-Lou and her brevet Aunt waiting together.

“Oh, we’ll be staying, Aunt Joey,” commented Mary-Lou dryly. “Morvoren is never wrong, you know!” and with this piece of bitterness, she tossed her head and began her way up the steps that led up to the road way. Joey was fairly stunned by this comment, and swung her gaze from the girl’s back to the approaching cheerful figure striding up from the shore. Joey raised her eyes to the horizon and muttered to herself. “Well, it looks like there’s more than one storm brewing, and if I don’t get to the bottom of this, my name’s not Joey Maynard!”

*********

*reassures self that a night spent at Auntie Jo's will restore happiness all round!* Wink

 


#375:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 3:34 pm


Isn't OOAO being odious in this?

 


#376:  Author: RoseaLocation: Edinburgh PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 3:40 pm


Not sure I am too keen on Morvoren! I can see how she would unintentionally rub people up the wrong way - much like Mary-Lou. It is funny how similar they are too each other though.
Great installment thanks - looking forward to seeing what happens next Very Happy

 


#377:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 3:47 pm


*Hopes so! (That and a good storm Smile ) *
*prudently checks Joey's supply of clove oil *

 


#378:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 5:52 pm


Mary Lou is having to endure what all her classmates have had to for years! I don't think either Mary Lou or Morvoren are particularly nasty -but mary Lou cannot cope with competition.

Thanks Lisa.

 


#379:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 8:59 pm


Thanks all! I love it when you all start to discuss the characters like this! I agree with you, Lesley. It's funny, I was saying earlier that I was happier with 'Dancer' but I do feel that Morvoren is more real, and uncontrollable (by me, that is!) than Amelia was! Time for some drama ....

***********

Joey’s home was an unusual wooden construction. A few years’ earlier, in 1944, Hannafore had experienced a rare aerial attack which resulted in the destruction of the building that had previously been on the site. Hannafore’s bombed house had gone down in the annals of Looe, and the landowner had been able to raise the capital to build a new cottage there, but unfortunately felt unable to remain in a place which harboured unpleasant memories. All of this was to the good for Joey, who was able to rent the property cheaply at very short notice. Determined to break the awkward silence between her two guests, Joey recounted this story, and the two girls felt their interest piqued despite themselves. They discussed the tale with alacrity and didn’t notice the darkening in the room, although Joey unconsciously added a log to the smouldering fire in her grate. The scene became cosier and it was a much happier party who partook of afternoon tea: cream cakes, shortbread and a choice of cocoa or fresh coffee.

“I’m sorry the cream is rather sparse, rationing, you know,” apologised Joey with a rueful smile. “Still, the shortbread is good, if I say it myself and – Gosh!” she started at a particularly loud rumble, “what on earth is that?” Her question was answered by a flash that illuminated the room and its occupants in a weird blue hue.

All three ran to the bay window that overlooked the sea – but what a different sea! No longer calm and unruffled, but churning and grey. The island was obscured by a grey mist of spray.

“Looks like you were right!” Joey exclaimed generously to Morvoren and swished the curtains closed. "I think you will certainly both be staying tonight!”

“Oh, please Mrs – Joey, may we have the curtains open?” begged Morvoren, who loved the sea in any of her varied guises. "It looks like being a sma- a spectacular storm!”

In response, Joey merely opened the curtains, and grinned. “It didn’t take you long to pick up some slang!” she said. “Now let’s finish up our hot drinks and goodies; we’ll need our strength!”

The three clustered around Joey’s low table and continued munching. Joey’s shrewd eyes noted that Mary-Lou’s appetite didn’t seem to be as hearty as usual, and neither did she take as active a part in conversation as Joey would expect. Reminded of the fact that she wanted to get to the bottom of her brevet niece’s problems, she put down her cup with decision.

“Mary-Lou, would you come and give me a hand looking for the candles?” she enquired. “I think we’re going to need them any moment! Morvoren, would you like to check on my babies for me? Steve and Charles are being watched by Anna, but it’s not the same as their real mother,” she laughed. Obediently, Mary-Lou got up and followed Joey into the kitchen and Morvoren headed for the stairs. Once alone in the kitchen, Joey placed her hands on Mary-Lou’s shoulders and looked directly into the girl’s face. “Right. I want to hear the whole story. I am not happy with the shadows under your eyes. What is going on?”

Caught off-guard by this direct demand, Mary-Lou stammered for a moment, and then to her horror felt her eyes welling up. Joey had not hidden toothache in the past from Matey herself before for nothing, and instantly she hit the answer. “Toothache!” she cried. “Well, it’s just as well that you’re staying tonight, because I can accompany you to the dentist’s in Looe tomorrow. Meanwhile, hold this rag on it.” And Joey reached up into a cupboard and brought down a small brown jar. She dabbed some of the liquid from it on to a clean rag that she took from a drawer and a strong scent of cloves pervaded the room. A loud moan came from the wind that was whirling outside the cottage, and the electric lights flickered.

“There’s a dentist in Looe?” Mary-Lou said in a muffled voice. The clove oil-soaked rag was already relieving some of the pain.

“Don’t try to talk!” said Joey severely. “Yes, he’s a friend of Jack’s, well, an acquaintance really, and he’s visiting Looe at the moment.” Joey turned to a cupboard under the big stone sink and brought out the candles without hesitation. She clearly hadn’t needed help in finding them, thought Mary-Lou ruefully. “Now, what’s all this other business?”

Mary-Lou looked startled and opened her mouth to speak when a loud clatter from the stairs drew their attention. Morvoren bounded into the room, breathless.

“It’s Steve!” she gasped, “Come quick!”


Last edited by Lisa on Tue Aug 17, 2004 9:04 pm; edited 1 time in total

 


#380:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 9:01 pm


Kathy_S wrote:
*Hopes so! (That and a good storm Smile ) *
*prudently checks Joey's supply of clove oil *


Sorry to .... (what is that word, spree?) Very good Kathy - latter fulfilled, former about to be ... Twisted Evil

 


#381:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 9:21 pm


*wonders what Lisa is going to do to poor Steve*

 


#382:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 12:49 am


Suddenly feeling very, very anxious, it was bad enough when there was only a thunderstorm to deal with (I hate storms and this one seems particularly real) but now that something has happened to Steve - help.

 


#383:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 5:39 pm


Oh, and just as Joey was about to get to the bottom of the problem!!!

Thanks Lisa. Wink

 


#384:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:32 pm


Just to tantalise you...

**********

Joey raced up the stairs at a veritable gallop, closely followed by the two girls. The anxious mother yanked open the door to the nursery just as there was a blinding flash accompanied by a huge crash of thunder and to the group’s horror, the lights went out! In the eerie silence that followed, Steve’s baby wail could be heard echoing disconsolately in the darkness....

 


#385:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:40 pm


Lisa, that is most unfair!!!

 


#386:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:46 pm


Honestly! That wasn't very nice! More soon please!

 


#387:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:11 pm


Well, at least we can hear Steve, so he can't be still, grey, etc. Confused

 


#388:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:27 pm


Nice one Lisa! Wink

 


#389:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:40 pm


Joey had the presence of mind to strike the match she had in her hand, and as the room was momentarily illuminated by a warm yellow glow, she saw to her utmost relief that Steve was standing in his cot, holding on to the bar and protesting, as any child should, at the rudeness of the storm. Joey felt a hand on her arm, even as she rushed for her son, her arms outstretched.

She glanced down at Morvoren’s face, which shone palely in the weird light.

“But, Mrs M- I mean, Auntie Jo, I have been trying to tell you, Steve – ” her words were drowned out by another thunderclap, which made all four jump, and Steve added his scream to the din. From the cot on the opposite side of the room, baby Charles added to the racket with a scream that seemed to rise to a crescendo, as Mary-Lou reported later.

The next flash of lightning revealed Joey, clasping Steve in her arms and anxiously examining him for any sign of injury. “He – he seems to be OK” she said breathlessly, and was astounded by a peal of mirth that came from Morvoren.

“He is!” she gasped, laughing all the harder as her nerves were tried a little by the noise of the storm. “I was just coming to tell you that he was doing a handstand in his cot!”

How Joey may have reacted to this is anyone’s guess, but at that moment there was another flash of blue light, almost immediately followed by a splintering sound and then the unmistakeable smell of burning. Glancing around the room, Joey issued a command: “Mary-Lou, grab Chas, I – ” she paused and then caught her breath, “where is Mary-Lou?”

 


#390:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:49 pm


*teeters on edge of Lisa's cliff*

 


#391:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:52 pm


*Pushes Vikki! Twisted Evil *

Love the reason why Morvoren yelled!!! Laughing

 


#392:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:55 pm


*grabs Lesley's ankle, and pulls her off cliff edge too*

 


#393:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:56 pm


*Opens parachute and reaches down to tickle Vikki.*

 


#394:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:01 pm


*clips safety harness onto Lesley's parachute harness*

 


#395:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:02 pm


*Retrieves penknife.*

 


#396:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:06 pm


*points out to Lesley that my harness is made of super tensile steel cable...*

 


#397:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:07 pm


*teeters!*

 


#398:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:07 pm


*Wasn't planning to cut the harness. Evil or Very Mad * Wink

 


#399:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:15 pm


*shows Lesley my Kevlar lined full body suit*

 


#400:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:18 pm


Goodness me, what a lot of yibble, I mean, action!
*adopts stern pose* What are you doing messing about on the edge of a cliff in a ferocious storm anyway?

*******

Mary-Lou had had the presence of mind to dash downstairs and collect the candles from the top of the dresser in the kitchen. In the dark, she knocked them to the floor, and as she was crouched, rooting around for them, the lightning bolt struck the house with a terrifying crack. At the precise moment when Joey was looking for her she was lying on the floor, under the heavy oak table, partially shielded for now from the debris that seemed to rain about her head.

Upstairs in the nursery, Joey and Morvoren had charge of a baby each, and they stumbled out to the landing, gasping. The landing was lit by a flickering light, and it only took a moment for Joey to realise what was causing it.

“Fire!” she panted. She rapidly, and correctly, surmised that the wooden cottage had been struck by lightning and had kindled immediately. She glanced at Morvoren. Thankful that her young friend was keeping her head, she peered into the gloom, gathered all her yodelling skills and yelled “Mary-Lou!”

Mary-Lou became aware of someone calling her name, but it sounded as though it came from far away. She raised her head and tried to see what had happened. Gingerly exploring herself with her fingers, she heaved a sigh of relief as she realised she was uninjured. “Nothing broken, anyway,” she murmured to herself, seeking comfort in the sound of her own voice. “Now, what’s going on here?” In a few moments she recalled the situation, and huddled further under the table to protect herself. It was clear that the parlour had suffered the lightning strike, and was now aflame. Mary-Lou offered up a brief prayer of thanks that she had been in the kitchen, and the others safely upstairs, and then turned her mind to the predicament she was in. From her vantage point she could see her exit – the kitchen door that opened out on to the neat little vegetable garden – when there was a sudden crash, and a beam fell across her path. The flames leaped quickly from the beam and licked at the surfaces with their wicked tongues. She shrank back in fear as the fire came closer ...

 


#401:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:22 pm


And???! Then what???! Lisa!!

 


#402:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:25 pm


Aaaaaaaaargh!!!!

Lisaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!

 


#403:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:53 pm


Yes? Rolling Eyes

 


#404:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 7:02 pm


More story would be lovely.... *subtle hint*

 


#405:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 7:12 pm


Lisa, a little more, please.

 


#406:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:49 pm


*Tuts* very well, then. You're never satisfied!

***********

She just made out Joey’s voice again, above the noise, and did her best to answer, but although she opened her mouth no voice came out. Whimpering, she hugged her knees to her body and watched the door frame slowly ignite.

Joey and Morvoren, encumbered by the babies, peered over the banister in horror. They could see the path of destruction that the fire was leaving. Joey’s dark eyes were huge in her pale face as she took in the situation, but Morvoren remained calm as she sized up the possibilities. She hustled Joey and Steven back into the nursery and closed the door firmly.

“Sit down,” she commanded, and placing Chas in a cot, she took Steve from Joey and placed him in alongside his brother. “Put your head between your legs,” she continued, and pushed Joey’s head down. “Now listen, we are safe in here for the moment. The door will act as a seal.” She moved over to the window and looked out. “It will be quite easy to get across to next door’s roof, if I use that tree,” she mused. Then warming to her topic she turned an animated face to Joey. “Right! Let’s rip those sheets up!” and suiting the action to the word she pulled the sheet from the vacant cot and began to tear it, explaining her plan as she went. “I’ll scoot down the tree and across to the roof, then you can pass the babies down in a sling we’re going to make from that sheet.” She looked out of the window again. “We’ll have no shortage of helpers, anyway,” she added as she observed a crowd of neighbours heading towards the house.

Joey nodded mutely and began to rend the sheets. “But, Mary-Lou – “ she stuttered.

“The babies first,” replied Morvoren firmly. “Then I’ll deal with Mary-Lou. She’s probably safe for now, if she did go to fetch candles, which I imagine she did.” Swinging her leg over the window sill she called back to Jo, “now, tie the sling around Charles, like this,” and she demonstrated. “We do this with the nets to bear the weight of a big haul. Then let down this end to me when I call. Do you think you can remember how to do this with Steve when it’s his turn?”
Joey nodded. “I’m not sure how – “ began Morvoren doubtfully, but Joey anticipated her.

“Oh, don’t worry about me, I’m pretty good at climbing trees, you know!” she said with a short unnatural laugh. The two exchanged a look, then without further ado, the girl disappeared from sight.

 


#407:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 9:30 pm


*wibbles loudly*

 


#408:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 10:33 pm


Good for Morvoren!!

Thanks Lisa.

 


#409:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 10:43 pm


What does she mean, probably safe Shocked ??

(C'mon, Mary-Lou!)

 


#410:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 12:19 am


Eeek!

Lisa - more please NOW






or at least by mid morning Wink

 


#411:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 10:38 am


Dawn wrote:

Lisa - more please NOW



or at least by mid morning Wink


I'm glad you added that last bit, Dawn! I was in bed at 1 am, trying to keep a cat off my face!

Is 11.35 mid-morning enough? Wink

**********

In the school house, the curtains had been drawn as the skies darkened, and to take their minds off the ferocity of the storm, Bill had ordered an impromptu Guide meeting. The girls used the hall as their ‘campsite’ and enjoyed singing songs loudly over the increasing rumble of the weather. Pam had expressed concern over the two pupils at Joey’s, but Hilda had quickly reassured her with a toss of her attractive neat head.

“Joey will keep them over night,” she said. “Will probably make quite a party of it, too – if I know Jo!” The rest of the staff agreed, so were not unduly worried. As the storm threw its worst at the little exposed island, the staff put their heads together and devised a fun programme, including setting lighted candles about the place and jumping over them, and – the icing on the cake – kneading flour and water to make delicious twists that they took in turn to toast at the fire in its huge grate.

The lightning bolt that struck at Hannafore on the mainland sent a reverberating shudder across the water, and without knowing why, Miss O’Ryan shivered. “I think I’ll just be getting us some jam for these twists,” she mentioned to Hilda, who nodded amiably. Biddy left the warm and cosy hall, carrying a candle and made her way into the corridor. She gave a shiver, and walked rapidly towards the kitchen. Groping in the pantry for the elusive jam, Biddy jumped as a loud clap of thunder sounded, and she involuntarily glanced out of the window which looked towards the mainland. The burning cottage showed up in sharp relief against the black silhouettes of Hannafore’s buildings, and Biddy narrowed her eyes and stared hard before suddenly dropping the jam with a scream and racing back to the hall with the energy of a Middle.

 


#412:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 12:52 pm


*contemplating violence*
Lisa, it would be so nice of you to write a post that doesn't end on a cliff......just for a change! Laughing


*thinks Lesley had a lot to answer for*

 


#413:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 1:38 pm


Lisa_T wrote:

Lisa, it would be so nice of you to write a post that doesn't end on a cliff......just for a change! Laughing


But I thought that was the 'done thing' on this board Rolling Eyes

***********

Morvoren climbed part way across the tree expertly, and crouching, jumped on to the roof of the adjoining house. It was a staggered set up, so really quite a straightforward job, but the assembled crowd beneath gasped at the girl’s acrobatics. A number of men present had begun to roll up sleeves and prepare to try and help, but the flames had taken hold, and the most they could do was form a chain down to the sea, along which they passed buckets of water to try and douse the flames.

Clinging to the drainpipe, Morvoren wriggled down the side of the house and then dropped on all fours to the floor. Within seconds she was up on her feet again, and shouted something up at the upstairs window. It was only then that the onlookers realised that there were people – including two babies – still trapped inside. A corporate gasp was heard as a white shape appeared at the window, and then a round bundle began to be lowered down. The bundle squirmed and screamed, and two of the men began to climb the tree in an attempt to catch the bundle before it had to go far. At about eight feet above the ground, the men managed to extricate Charles from the intricate knot of sheets, and then pass the baby down to more helpers.

Joey watched her youngest child being safely handed over to someone on the ground, and she sobbed a thanksgiving prayer through her tears. Steve protested at the tightness of her grip, and she loosened it, resolutely smiling at her son.

“Look Mamma, shmoke!” cried the lad, pointing to the Nursery doorway, and Joey recoiled as she saw a thick grey haze spreading out under the door.

“Now, dearie, Steve and Mamma are going to play a game!” she said, striving to keep the tremble from her voice. “We are going to crawl on the floor like – like snakes.” Always excited by the idea of playing a game, Steve obediently began to squirm on the floor. Smoke was already filling the room, but as it was rising the six inches or so above the floor was left relatively clear, and they could still breathe easily. Joey had kept a hold of the end of the sheet-rope and she felt it slacken, so she hauled with all her might and was rewarded by the sling part first catching and then suddenly cascading over the sill and falling on their heads. Steve let out a boyish giggle and happily submitted to being wrapped in the sheet.

“Now I’m a shquirrel, Mamma!” he declared triumphantly as he began his descent, and Joey’s heart nearly broke as she had to release her hold on him and watch him vanish out of sight.


********

Twisted Evil

 


#414:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 2:56 pm


Thankyou very much Lisa - both posts much appreciated










but there's still a few unresolved issues Wink

 


#415:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 3:35 pm


Although....as usual... more would be absolutely fabulous!

 


#416:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 6:03 pm


Just a teeny smidgen then...



Morvoren waited just long enough to see that the rescue operation was proceeding successfully and then spun on her heel and skirted the cottage. Rushing up to the first member of the chain, she took the bucket and emptied its contents over her head. Thrusting the empty pail back at the amazed man, she shuddered at the cold water, then ran round to the garden, calling over her shoulder:

“There’s someone else in there!”

 


#417:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 6:12 pm


Er...interesting....I'm sure she knows what she's doing...er....I would quite like to know what she's doing too!

 


#418:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 7:08 pm


Lisa_T wrote:
*contemplating violence*
Lisa, it would be so nice of you to write a post that doesn't end on a cliff......just for a change! Laughing


*thinks Lesley had a lot to answer for*


*Bows to the board! devil *

Lisa this is wonderful!

Thank you. Kiss

 


#419:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 11:10 pm


This is great Lisa! (but can we have the next bit quick please?)

 


#420:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2004 12:24 pm


Lovel posts Lisa. Atleast I missed some of the cliffs with being away.

Hope you are doing well back at school and are able to write more of this soon.

 


#421:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:12 pm


Ooh, hello (shyly) I know I've done it again - massive gaps between posts. Sorry! Hopefully there will be a flurry of drabble-posting from me now! There are just SO many drabbles now - I feel that I can only read OR write - there simply isn't the time to do both! So sorry if you have forgotten what is going on - -here is a summary...


The story so far

CS relocates to Looe Island off Cornish coast (kind of set parallel to Carola) New Cornish pupil, Morvoren, makes unorthodox arrival, rowing herself over from the mainland. She is a strong and confident girl, used to being very independent, from a small fishing village and has several unusual talents. She and OOAOML don't exactly hit it off, so Joey invites them both over for tea ... during a storm. The house is struck by lightning and goes up in flames - -with Joey Charles & Steve, ML & Morv all trapped!....


(Oh yes, and Hilda seems to be going a bit doo-lally)



***************

Biddy’s entrance and dramatic announcement back in the hall had a spectacular effect. Miss Annersley had sprung to her feet at once, and Miss Wilson threw a reproving glance at the young mistress who had broken the news so heedlessly. Thankfully, her excited declaration had been out if the earshot of the girls, which was just as well, as Pam Slater remarked later, because in her excitement, Biddy’s language had become richly Irish. They hurriedly left the Hall for a crisis meeting in the kitchens, leaving the bemused girls under the capable charge of the Prefects.

Once established by the window, a horrified silence descended upon the staff. Frustrated by their inability to help or do anything practical, they stood quietly, straining their eyes as they watched the shadows moving in front of the fire. Miss Annersley had cried “Joey! The babies!” just once, and Miss Wilson murmured “and Mary-Lou and Morvoren,” as they stood transfixed by the greedy flames over on the mainland. Many a silent prayer flew heavenwards on desperate wings as the staff watched the blaze build.

 


#422:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:34 pm


The flames gave an unearthly feel to the scene that confronted the island watchers, and also the villagers of Hannafore, who were desperately trying to combat the fire. The lithe girl, with hair the colour of flame herself, appeared to be a spirit trapped in the inferno as she dodged burning timbers, sure-footed and moving rapidly. The man whose bucket she had upended stirred himself and called out hoarsely:

“Stop her!” As he and several others ran forwards there was a sudden gust of wind that fanned the glowing wood to an even more ferocious heat, and the men backed off, defeated.

Within the flames, Morvoren cut a magical figure. Her lips moving, her eyes strangely ecstatic, she leapt like a cat over fallen beams, showering the floor with little drips of water, her red mane plastered to her back. She knew that her only chance lay in her movement. That, and the water she had doused herself with, would keep the flames at bay for – hopefully – just long enough until she could reach Mary-Lou. But then… Her thoughts strayed back to Joey and little Steve for a moment, but she stalled them, willing herself to keep focussed. There was the kitchen door, a shadow within the flames. The door itself had largely burned away, but Morvoren could see that the way in to the kitchen was blocked by a hunk of smouldering wood that could burst into flame at any time. She paused for just a moment, then lifted her leg and gave the wood a hefty shove with the flat of her foot. The wood shifted a little, but held position. Thankful for the years of long practise, shoving out fishing nets and hauling in boats, Morvoren tried again, and this time the wood definitely moved. “Mary-Lou!” she cried. She summoned all her strength for a last effort, aware as she did so, that her breathing was becoming ragged, and her head swimming. The wood burst into a shower of sparks, and without hesitation, Morvoren plunged into the orange-tinted gloom within.

From her vantage point under the table, Mary-Lou thought she could see movement in the doorway. She had kept her handkerchief pressed to her mouth, and her face near the floor, conserving her energy and fighting to keep panic at bay. Her eyes were streaming from the effects of the heat and smoke, so she was unsure if she really could see the blurred figure. Surely it wasn’t Morvoren? Mary-Lou had been hoping to see a man from the village, and she was shocked to see the silhouette of someone not much bigger than herself. Above the crackling of the fire Mary-Lou heard her name, as if called by a far away voice, and she rubbed her eyes to clear her vision. She witnessed Morvoren’s well-placed kick, observed the wood fully ignite, and saw the girl head into the room. She opened her mouth to respond when her words of thankfulness were abruptly cut off in a scream. The oak lintel above the door had been weakened by the fire and Morvoren’s attempts to enter, and with an ugly rending sound it fell, aflame, on to the advancing shape of the girl. Mary-Lou saw Morvoren’s face for one sharp moment – defined in a vivid relief, and then it was gone, as the Cornish girl vanished beneath the flames.


Twisted Evil

 


#423:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:39 pm


You've been taking lessons in cliffs too!!! Get back here and post some more!

 


#424:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:07 pm


LISA!!!




please please please come back and sort out the rescue

 


#425:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:22 pm


Nice cliff - have a gold star! Laughing

 


#426:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:27 pm


Methinks Lesley will have to look to her laurels when she starts RCS5!! There are an awful lot of people learning the trick! Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

 


#427:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 8:02 pm


All these cliffs, how will we cope?

 


#428:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:13 pm


Lisa that is a lovely post but not a nice place to leave it. Could we have a post soon that says they are all well!

 


#429:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:39 pm


Aaaaaargh!!!!
*wibble*

Lisa!!!!!
Please!!!!!

 


#430:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:11 pm


Joins Vikki in wibbling, aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 


#431:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 5:58 pm


Is there a mass cliffs course going on or something? Or is there a secret competition for most cliffs? Geeeez...

 


#432:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 8:36 pm


Laura wrote:
Is there a mass cliffs course going on or something? Or is there a secret competition for most cliffs? Geeeez...



It's Lesley's fault! She has too much free time at the moment, and keeps encouraging people to do cliffs!!!! Wink

 


#433:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:10 pm


Twisted Evil Laughing Twisted Evil Laughing Twisted Evil Laughing

 


#434:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:57 pm


So, I'm getting better! Only 5 days between posts this time Rolling Eyes But there's plenty to make up for it!

************

The shock galvanised Mary-Lou into action. She leapt clear of the table, and seized Morvoren by her hair. Praying aloud through hot tears that ran down her scorched face, she tugged at the girl hard, and to her intense relief, Morvoren opened her eyes and fixed Mary-Lou with a stare.

“Ouch!” she said, giving Mary-Lou an insane desire to giggle. “Let go!” Summoning all their combined strength, the two girls heaved the burning lintel aside, and helped each other out of the door. The men had just arrived in the back garden, and the image they saw was of two blackened and charred looking young girls, leaning against each other, framed by the burning doorway, in which they appeared like silhouettes. Then they ran forward and caught the apparitions as they fell.




Morvoren smiled sleepily and stretched out in the comfortable bed. She could feel the starched white sheets rustle beneath her cheek and was filled with a feeling of well-being. As soon as she tried to turn over, however, she gasped at the tight burning sensation that ripped across her back!

“Now, now my ‘andsome,” came the soft Cornish burr of a nurse as she rushed up to the patient. “You’re gonna find that a bit sore for a fair while. Just keep still.”

“I – I’m thirsty,” stammered Morvoren, her breath quite literally taken away by the pain for a moment. She raised herself up on to her elbows and sipped awkwardly at a glass of water the nurse held out for her. After a few moments, she felt a bit better and returned to her supine position.

“Just you lie there and rest,” instructed the nurse. “If you’re feeling up to it later, you can have a visitor!”

“Oh, but I’m feeling up to it now!” protested Morvoren, wriggling again. “Please, Nurse, where am I? Oh, I know I’m in hospital, but where? And how is Mary-Lou, and Jo? And the chil-“

“I’m here, thanks to you!” came a merry voice suddenly, and a tall, pale lady came into Morvoren’s line of vision. She waved away the Nurse’s protests: “Nonsense! My husband is Dr Maynard and he gave permission. Morvoren will benefit by some company, and I daresay she has a lot of questions to ask! Could you bring that mirror, Nurse? Thanks awfully!”

With a practised hand, Jo set up a mirror which would enable her young friend to look at her without craning her neck. Jo herself took a comfortable seat next to the bed and looked comically at Morvoren.

“Well, this is a turn up for the books!” she said unexpectedly, and both broke into the laughter that sometimes accompanies relief. Jo gave Morvoren her head for a moment, then intervened when the laughter became a little too strained. “So, what did you want to know? Oh yes, you’re in Liskeard of course. Mary-Lou is fine; she has some burns to her hands – got when rescuing you from under that doorway,” Jo repressed a shudder, “and has been under sedation for shock as you have. Oh yes!” she exclaimed in answer to the expression on Morvoren’s face, “that’s why you have been feeling woozy, I’m sure. I’m just dandy as you can see, and Steve and Charles are no worse for their adventure. In fact, Steve keeps asking when we can play the game again!” For all Jo’s light-hearted tone and words, Morvoren was astute enough to recognise the shadow in her eyes, and interrupted Jo’s flow of speech.

“Are you sure you’re just dandy?” she asked suddenly, and Jo fell silent. “You’re as white as – as a new born gull! Which is actually rather grey, if you see what I mean!”

“Oh, Jack put me to bed for a couple of days, to get over the shock. I am feeling better now, but I’m still not sleeping too well,” Jo responded in a confidential tone. “The cottage is ruined, you know. Burnt almost to the ground.”

“But where are you going to live?” demanded Morvoren, wincing as she moved. Her question re-ignited some of the hitherto unseen merriment in Jo’s dancing eyes.

“Well, I’ll tell you, only it isn’t common knowledge yet! Do you know of Smuggler’s cottage on the island? Well, Hild – I mean, Miss Annersley and Miss Wilson are having a couple of the men try to render it liveable, so I and the babes will be able to move in there! What do you think of that?!” Jo sat back, confident that she had made a sensation, and was rewarded by the excitement in Morvoren’s eyes. “Of course, it means that I won’t be able to see quite as much of Jack, stationed as he is in Plymouth at the moment, but I’ll be near the Trips and – oh everyone else!”

“Mrs M- Auntie Jo,” said Morvoren quietly, “what has happened to my back exactly? And how long have I been here?”

Jo was instantly mortified. “Oh, my poor dear! Chatting away about me when you needed to – I was just trying to cheer you up, you know! You have nothing to worry about. Long term, that is. It’s Wednesday today,” Morvoren gasped again, “and you have been under sedation to allow you to sleep and recover. The burning lintel bruised and scorched your back, but it is already healing nicely.”

“When will I be allowed out?” she asked in a small voice.

“Perhaps in a week or so, depending on your progress. Don’t groan dear! You have been very brave so far, but now you need a different kind of endurance. And I must go. You look tired out!” She stooped to kiss the girl, whose eyes were already closing.

“Bye,” murmured Morvoren, and then she fell into a natural, restful sleep.



****************


And more coming later! Wink


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#435:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:59 pm


Goodoh!

 


#436:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:52 pm


Ahhh! Thanks Lisa.

 


#437:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:56 pm


The next time she awoke, she immediately felt better. “Hello? Nurse?” she called, and instantly the nurse from earlier appeared at her side. “I need – “ Morvoren was at a loss for how to express herself, but the nurse understood, and rapidly and sensitively administered to the girl. Afterwards, Morvoren spoke again. “Nurse – I’m frightfully hungry! Please may I try to sit up?”

“Now, just you hold your horses!” remonstrated the nurse. “The Doctor will be here in a few minutes, and you can ask him. As for your tea, that’s on its way too!”

Morvoren had to be content with that and she lay quietly for ten minutes, thinking back over the last few weeks. She was just reflecting uncomfortably on aspects of her behaviour when her thoughts were interrupted:

“And how are you feeling young lady?” boomed a hearty voice. “I’m Doctor Sandford, and I’ve been overseeing you,” he consulted a chart in his hand as he spoke, then with a nod of satisfaction, smiled at the patient.

“I’m very well, thank you,” said Morvoren politely. “But I’m feeling very hungry, and would like to sit up, please.”

The doctor looked surprised, but then shrugged. “If you think you can,” he said. “You will find it rather sore I’m afraid, but most of the injury is at the top part of your back, near your shoulders, so once you are sitting, you may feel quite comfortable. But if movement hurts too much, you must remain in this position for a little while longer.” He aided Morvoren, and soon the girl had twisted into position. She couldn’t repress the sharp intake of breath at the pain, but once she was sitting up she began to breathe more easily. The doctor looked at her, frank admiration written on his features.

“Is everything O – all right, Doctor?” asked Morvoren shyly.

“Yes, indeed! I was just marvelling at your high pain threshold!” he exclaimed. “You have a very fast rate of natural healing, and are exceeding my expectations. Ah – here comes tea!”

Morvoren’s face fell as she beheld a bowl of soup, with some bottled fruit to follow. The doctor, observing this, chuckled. “You’ll have a more substantial meal tomorrow!” he promised. “Remember, you haven’t eaten for several days, so your stomach needs time to adjust. Enjoy your tea, and I will see you tomorrow morning.”

Morvoren waved as the doctor left, and turned to her soup mournfully. She enjoyed it though; it was a tasty and filling broth and Morvoren was surprised that she soon felt satisfied. The fruit was a welcome dessert, and then, tended to by the gentle nurse, Morvoren leaned back tentatively on the pillows and gazed around her. For the moment, she was the only person on the room, although two vacant beds proclaimed that there would usually be further occupants. The room was light and airy, with an attractive mural painted around the walls in pale yellow to match the curtains. To her right, there was a small chest of drawers containing her belongings: wash things, towel, hairbrush and clothes. Morvoren glanced down at the hospital gown she was currently wearing and smiled ruefully. Stretching, she reached for the mirror, and was leaning towards the unit to pick up her hairbrush when a voice called out to her.

“Morvoren! Don’t do that! Let me – oh!” The owner of the voice looked down at her bandaged hands, and giggled shyly.

“Mary-Lou!” exclaimed Morvoren with genuine delight. “Come and sit here, do! So, you’re up and about then?”

Mary-Lou shook her long straight mane, and perched on the edge of the bed. She picked up the hairbrush with her wrists and deposited it on Morvoren’s lap. “I’d offer to brush it for you, but …”

“Thank you,” said Morvoren soberly. “You saved my life.”

“Only because you saved mine first!” responded Mary-Lou indignantly. “Your back’s worse than my hands. At least I can move about!”

“Oh, it won’t be long!” answered Morvoren airily. “I always get over things quickly. And the doctor said I had a high pain threshold!”

Mary-Lou looked suitably impressed by this, and didn’t enquire what it meant. She glanced around guiltily. “I say, I’ll get in trouble if I’m found here!”

“Especially for sitting on the bed!” interposed Morvoren swiftly and the two girls giggled as they thought of Matron. They chatted about inconsequential things for a few minutes, and then there was a silence. Both girls looked thoughtful.

“I’ve been thinking – “ began Morvoren.

“Look here – “ burst out Mary-Lou simultaneously, and both girls stopped and looked at each other. “You go first, Morvoren.”

“I’ve been thinking about my behaviour towards you – and others. I can see that I’ve acted like a big head – “

“That’s – that’s pifflebunk!” retorted Mary-Lou hotly, her face red. “I’m the one who should be doing the apologising. I was about to in fact. I – I have not behaved as a Chalet girl ought to. You were the new girl, but I behaved like – like a spoilt baby. I have had a lot of time to reflect over the last day or so, and I realise why I was doing it. I think, I think I was jealous.” She was blushing furiously as she said this, and didn’t like to meet Morvoren’s eye.

“Jealous?” said that girl, incredulously. “Of me? Why on earth? You’re the one whom everyone likes, the leader.”

“That’s just it,” explained Mary-Lou, miserably. “I felt that you might use – usurp my position. I didn’t like that fact that there are some areas that you know more than me in, and – “

“Oh, stop!” said Morvoren, dangerously close to tears. “Let’s just both put all this behind us, and start new. We’re both sorry, and I think that we could be firm friends if we tried. Besides, we both own a little of each other’s spirit now!”

“What on earth do you mean?” demanded Mary-Lou, her eyes wide.

“Oh, just that in Cornish legend, if you save the life of someone, you forever more retain a part of his spirit.”

“I like that idea,” mused Mary-Lou. They chatted a while longer, but then were rudely interrupted by the arrival of the nurse who dispatched with Mary-Lou and then attended to Morvoren’s hair, taking care to brush it gently and not place any strain on the back.

 


#438:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 8:00 pm


That's nice - love the spirit bit too. Smile

 


#439:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 10:57 pm


Wow! When you post, you post!

Especially liked the ML/Morvoren reconciliation scene -- very CS!
(*hopes this doesn't mean we're near the end, though...*)

 


#440:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 11:03 pm


Glad they are both OK. Thank you Lisa.

 


#441:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 12:09 am


Thank you Lisa!
Very relieved they're both okay!

 


#442:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 9:26 am


Kathy_S wrote:
Wow! When you post, you post!

Especially liked the ML/Morvoren reconciliation scene -- very CS!
(*hopes this doesn't mean we're near the end, though...*)


Thanks Embarassed

As for being near the end ...

This story has dragged on for ages, and this certainly feels like an ending, doesn't it? My original intention was to have M & ML make up as the climax of the book, but the characters insisted on doing their own thing, and then the lightning struck ... Confused

I do have more ideas to continue the story, but it might seem a little tame after this!

As for the long post (oh, I'm so proud!) I feel like I want to try and keep going at it, to make it more interesting (for me, as well as everyone else)


Help! This makes no sense! Aargh. & why do I have a hangover this morning after 1 tiny glass of medicinal ginger wine? Evil or Very Mad

More later - if you want it! Wink

 


#443:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 10:00 am


Yes please Lisa.

 


#444:  Author: LisaLocation: South Coast of England PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 10:10 am


Well, the joys of not working Wednesdays (not to rub it in!) means ... more drabble!

***********

“I came to see if you felt like seeing a visitor,” said the nurse, “but I see you already had one!”

“Oh, who is it Nurse? Yes, please, I feel ever so bored. I’m not one for sitting still very often.”

“It’s Miss Annersley, your headmistress, I believe. She has been lodging here in Liskeard while you two girls were in the hospital. Would you like me to call her now that you look more presentable?”

Morvoren willingly acquiesced and soon Hilda Annersley was shown in. What passed between Headmistress and pupil was unheard by anyone else, but that night Morvoren was able to feel, with a glow of pride, that she was well on the way to becoming a true Chalet School girl!

Mary-Lou was due to leave hospital on the Saturday, and Miss Annersley was to accompany her back to the island. Morvoren was making startling progress, and the doctor had advised her to begin some gentle exercises, which she took to immediately. When the doctor paid his morning visit on Saturday, it was to find Morvoren walking stiffly across the ward, with a huge grin on her face.

“Look, Doctor! I’m walking! Now let me go home with the others!” Her face was animated and she certainly looked well. The doctor shook his head, smiling.

“Well, Morvoren, you have made excellent progress, but I’m not happy for you to leave just yet. Perhaps Monday.”

“Oh, but – “

“What’s this dear? Arguing with the doctor?” Miss Annersley’s eyes twinkled as she walked in on the scene. “I’m sure he knows best. Now, hear him out!”

Morvoren lowered herself into a high backed chair with a sigh of resignation and listened. He explained clearly that the new skin growing on her back was still very delicate and should be protected. Monday really was the earliest she would be able to leave. At this point, Miss Annersley interjected to reassure Morvoren that Miss Wilson would be coming to collect her. Eventually, all was settled and Mary-Lou, with a backwards glance and wave at Morvoren, left with her Headmistress. Morvoren watched them go from the window of the ward, feeling somewhat forlorn. A scuffle in the doorway though grabbed her attention and she turned to see a young girl of perhaps eight, struggling and protesting as she was brought into the ward.

“Now you get in that bed, and stay there!” came the firm command of the nurse as she placed the miscreant into bed with strong hands. “Behave yourself!” and with that the nurse dusted her palms together and stalked off, leaving the two girls looking at each other curiously. The younger girl tossed her head so that her long hair covered her face.

“Hello,” said Morvoren, friendly at once. “I’m Morvoren. What’s your name?”
There was silence from the bed, just a long shuddering sigh of self-pity. Morvoren decided not to give up. She walked stiffly over to the bed and perched on the edge of it. “Why are you in hospital?”

“Go ‘way,” mumbled the voice, and the figure in the bed turned over in a determined way, humped her back and put her head under the covers. Morvoren grinned, and then made her way back to the window. She stood looking out for a while, and then began to sing softly.

No one at the Chalet School had heard Morvoren sing. She had a very unusual voice, not at all conventional, but well-suited to the old Cornish melodies that she had grown up with in the village. The girl under the bedclothes kept very still, straining her ears to make out the muffled sound of the singer. Eventually, the little girl eased an ear out of the covers. The singer had an undulating voice that was strangely calming, and yet provoked shivers as you heard it. Morvoren, her eyes fixed unseeing on the rolling hills, was singing a lament for the sea in her native tongue. The tune rolled up and down, as if on the surface of the waves, and the haunting melody brought tears to both the singer’s and the listener’s eyes. At length, Morvoren ended the song and remained at the window, silently.


*********

*tuts* now where did this character come from? Morvoren was meant to be having a nice restful couple of days getting better, and now she has to deal with this newcomer! And I didn't know Morv could sing!

There will be more later I hope, but I have just arranged to go and see a friend this afternoon. We have been trying to get together for ages, so I really don't feel that I can tell her that I'm on a roll with a CS story and can't meet up! Wink

 


#445:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 11:16 am


Ooooh........


Thank you Lisa!!!
Hope you get lots of ideas while you're out with your friend!!!!

 


#446:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 12:23 pm


Just knew that Lisa not working Wednesday would be useful! Have a lovely afternoon Lisa.

Shows how good a writer you are when new characters and charactaristics pop up. Love this new part of the story.

 


#447:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 5:17 pm


Thank you, Lisa, that was good. Hope you had a lovely afternoon with your friend.

 


#448:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 7:55 pm


Excellent - story telling itself! Laughing

Thanks Lisa.

 




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