Mini drabble!
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#1: Mini drabble! Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 11:59 am


I'm being incredibly daring posting this, since it's the first CS drabble/fic I've ever written, and I'm aware that it's not EBD's style - I simply can't manage it! It's also un-beta-d, since my Charmed, X-Files and BtVS betas have never heard of the CS. Constructive criticism would be appreciated please. I do have another part which I may post, but it all depends on the reaction to this one and whether I think I can actually write Margot sympathetically.

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"Sisters are connected throughout their lives by a special bond… whether they try to ignore it or not. For better or for worse, sisters remain sisters until death do them part" - Brigid McConville

The girl sitting in front of the fire heaved a deep sigh; alone at last, she was able to ponder over the events of the day. The eldest of eleven children rarely found the time to reflect upon her own thoughts and fears, yet she knew that the whirl of activities in which she revelled only provided a convenient excuse to, once again, ignore her own feelings in favour of others. It was easier that way.

Frowning in concentration, Len stared into the fire in the Saal, wondering where, exactly, it had all gone so wrong. The idea that she was not responsible, in some way, for the utter disappointment caused by her sister, was simply irreconcilable with the fact that she was her triplet. How can I not have seen this coming?

The door opened, and Len turned, startled, to see her youngest triplet enter. She was biting her lips in an attempt to fight back tears, but seemed to be failing miserably. Silently, Len moved over to make room for her sister beside her and Margot, after a moment’s hesitation, sat down next to her.

The two sat in uncomfortable silence for several minutes, before Margot opened her mouth to speak.

“Oh, Len! Everyone’s so disappointed!”

“Aren’t you?” Len asked her sister directly. “You behaved abominably, Margot.”

Margot sat very still. To hear such a thing from her eldest sister shocked her beyond words. From Con, she could bear it – Con you could always rely on to tell you when you were behaving like a first-class idiot. But Len had always tried to protect her.

“Yes,” Margot mumbled finally. “Yes, I am.” She lifted teary eyes to her sister’s. “Len, Con, I’m sorry. I can’t even begin to say how wrong I was, to the two of you, and especially to Ted.”

Len jumped as Con, who had arrived in the Saal unbeknownst to her, calmly spread-eagled herself across the rug at her sisters’ feet. “You’re forgiven,” Con told Margot firmly, knowing exactly how much that admission meant coming from her proud, stubborn, argumentative, defiant, lovable younger sister. “Just never do something like that again.”

“I won’t – oh, I won’t!”

“It may take more than an “I’m sorry” for Ted to forgive you though Margot,” Len cautioned her younger sister.

Margot nodded, taking a deep breath. “I know. But if I’m going to do it, I’m going to do it properly.”

“Glad to hear it!” Con grinned, making a determined effort to keep the atmosphere light. “How about speaking English properly while you’re at it? Beginning a sentence with a preposition, Margot – Auntie Hilda would be ashamed!”

“Yes, she would.” Len’s tone left no doubt that she was referring to something other than Margot’s English Language usage.

Con shot her a warning glance. “Len…”

Listening to her sisters, Margot couldn’t help but notice the reversal of roles. Though Con was, as a rule, much quieter in public, whilst the three were alone it was she who scolded Margot – always had been, her sister recalled with a vague memory of tantrums caused throughout their childhood because Con had dared to tell Margot that she was wrong. It was Len who was the peacemaker out of the three, protecting Margot against Con’s brutal honesty and attempting to keep her less wild actions from their mother – with little success, it must be admitted. There was very little about her daughters that Joey didn’t notice, no matter how little she actually discussed with them. Now, it was Con who was desperately trying to keep the peace between the eldest and youngest triplets, sensing Len’s bitter disappointment with Margot, and knowing at the same time, that Margot could stand the disappointment from anyone but Len.

“I just don’t understand it, Margot!” Len said in exasperation. “I know you didn’t realise what you were doing was blackmail, but you must have known that it was wrong – that what you were doing was hurtful, to Ted, to Mama, and to us.”

“I did,” Margot mumbled, looking at her feet.

“Look at me, Margot!” Len was beyond furious now, and both of her sisters were coming to the rapid conclusion that they would be here for some time. Margot was more than aware that Len was far better at keeping her temper under control than she, but it was well and truly unleashed. Len was going to have her say this evening, or die trying.

“How could you do something so truly despicable? Mary-Lou said that people get sent to prison for things like this! You’re a good person, Margot, and you’ve managed to keep your “devil” under control for years now! So why on earth did it come up now?”

Margot’s head snapped up, but she kept her cool under Con’s pleading gaze. “I – I didn’t like you being friendly with Ted,” she admitted ashamedly. “I know I have Emmy, and you two have every right to have other friends, but – ” here Margot faltered, struggling to put into words what she feared so greatly.

“Well?” Len asked coolly, calming down despite herself but not yet quite willing to accept her sister’s explanation.

“I – I thought that you might prefer her.”


Last edited by Gem on Thu Jul 08, 2004 10:46 pm; edited 3 times in total

 


#2:  Author: AngelLocation: London, England PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 1:13 pm


Wow

compelling, and wondering why on earth you haven't graced us with more, and sooner.

 


#3:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 3:16 pm


This is great Gem! More soon please!!!

 


#4:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 4:10 pm


Why leave this as a poor, lonely, only child? Please do write some more.

 


#5:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 4:56 pm


Joining the pleas for more. And the question of why you haven't written before this!!! You have been depriving us!

 


#6:  Author: AnnLocation: Newcastle upon Tyne, England PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 7:31 pm


Interesting idea - thanks Gem, this is great.

More asap, please!

 


#7:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 8:06 pm


Excellent Gem - please don't leave it long before adding to this!

 


#8:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 9:19 pm


That read very well Gem and I look forward to reading the second part, and lots more of your writing.

 


#9:  Author: PatMacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 10:41 pm


Gem, that is tremendous! I love the way you have got into the 'skin' of the three.

More, please!!!

 


#10:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 11:01 pm


*storms into thread muttering obscenities about irresponsible sisters*

Believe me, I envy the triplets their sisters at the moment! My parents have been away one day, and my sis and her friends have collectively manged to break 3 glasses, chip the mahogany polished table of which my mother is very proud, break an antique chandelier and pour vodka all over the floor!!!!!!!!!

So, obviously, there is only one solution. Well, three actually. Archers, Galaxy and the CBB!!

Oh, and I might write something as well... Very Happy Thanks so much for all the luffly comments - really cheered me up!!


Last edited by Gem on Sat Jun 26, 2004 11:05 pm; edited 1 time in total

 


#11:  Author: PatLocation: Doncaster PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 11:05 pm


I'm glad I'm not her when your parents come back!!!

 


#12:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2004 11:06 pm


Lol, Pat, I'll get blamed for not controlling them better! Ah, to be the oldest sister.

Am finding it v funny at the moment - however may be due to the Archers. Will prob find it less funny in the morning when faced with hangover, huge cleanup and exam on Mon which I haven't revised for.

 


#13:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 1:34 pm


Poor Gem, know only too well what it is like being an elder sister!

Great story, love this new slant on the triplets. Hopw the exams are going well and that you can post the new bit soon.

 


#14:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 2:25 pm


Gem, I had a terrible elder sister, it's much worse being the second one.

 


#15:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 6:54 pm


Sorry, Jennie, but I'm gonna agree with Susan on that one!!!! I'm sure, however, that yours and your sister's roles were reversed and you are the better sister Very Happy

Next part will be up Friday, I promise! Have been revising up until 1 for the past 3 nights, and got up at 4.30 this morning to carry on revising - will be sleeping tonight as have driving test tomorrow Sad and then have exam on Thurs. But Fri will be spent in blissful peace, so I can promise some drabble then.

 


#16:  Author: DawnLocation: Leeds, West Yorks PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 8:26 pm


Don't work too hard Gem - good luck wiht the exam and the driving test

We'll wait for more drabble until life has slowed down a bit, so if you just need to sleep on Friday don't worry

 


#17:  Author: LadyGuinevereLocation: Leicester PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 8:36 pm


How did I miss this??

Love it! Nice expansoion on the trips, and totally within character.

~LadyG

 


#18:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 11:09 pm


Great Gem - also eager to see the next instalment.

 


#19:  Author: NicciLocation: UK PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 11:25 pm


Wow, Gem. I'm stunned. This is wonderful. You certainly have a flair for this. I can't wait for the next part.

 


#20:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 5:34 pm


Gem, I don't think I've run into you before here since I've not been about, but this is brilliant. How can you doubt it? Please carry on...

 


#21:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 7:47 pm


Just to say thank you for various comments Very Happy and to say that there will hopefully be an update tonight - will be an interesting one though as am drinking... (c'mon, you must all know what my particular drink is now! Prizes for first guess!)

Those of you who have pm-ed me in response to my thread on Off-Topic, thank you so much. Others that haven't read it (it's now deleted) please bear with me as am not in a rose-coloured glasses kind of mood - but I'm trying!

Off to write drabble now... or to pester Lesley for more RCS. Not sure which yet.

 


#22:  Author: MoraLocation: Lancaster PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 8:38 pm


With a choice between those two things, you can't lose! This is brilliant Gem! Have only just read it but looking forward to some more. Smile

 


#23:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 9:15 pm


Very very mini update - am really not sure about this one, and people may disagree with what I've insinuated, but it's my personal take on the triplets and their relationship. See what you think, anyways!

ETA: This is not the end btw, though it may seem that way - tis not such a mini drabble after all! I'm just tired, and it seemed like a good place to end it.

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"I could never love anyone as I love my sisters." - Jo March, Little Women

Len’s mouth dropped open. “Well, of all the blethering rubbish!” she exclaimed once she had caught her breath. “Margot, for a reasonably intelligent person, you can talk absolute nonsense at times!”

A smile quirked at the ends of Margot’s mouth. “Really?”

“Really and truly,” Con informed her. “You’re a ninny.”

“That’s possibly the most ridiculous statement I’ve ever heard, and it won’t wash,” Len said flatly, still glaring at Margot. “How dare you? We’re sisters, Margot. There is no chance that anyone could ever replace you. Either of you,” she added with a glance at Con. “I won’t accept that as a reason, Margot.”

“Well, you’ll have to, because I don’t have any other,” Margot snapped back at her.

Con decided to take a hand before Len riled Margot to the extent that she lost her temper, knowing with certainty that both Len and Margot in a rage would result in, for the second time that day, at least one of them getting slapped. If not both. By her. “Margot, did you really consider it?” she asked of her younger sister. “Was there any way that you thought it might be possible?”

Hesitating, Margot answered, “I didn’t want it to be possible.”

“But did you think that it might be?” Con insisted. “Truthfully, Meg!” She reverted to the baby name that they had used before they could manage the two-syllable Margot. It had the desired effect – Margot glared at her fiercely, but there was a smile behind it.

“I – I think I knew that it was unlikely. I didn’t think that it was entirely impossible though.”

Len breathed in deeply, making a conscious effort to keep her own temper, wondering all the while why it was always she who had to suppress hers whilst Margot’s temper hid in plain sight behind her “devil”. She considered slipping out of the role briefly, forgetting her desire for peace amongst her triplets, and screaming for attention the way Margot had done that day, and always would do until she succeeded in escaping the role of the “bad girl”. For one moment, Len was tempted to stomp her foot and scream at the pure injustice of the difficulties which they faced alone when they had always been together, at the necessity for maturity when they had always been encouraged to be youthful. Then solemn grey eyes met tearful blue; Len’s carefully made plans to help Margot unravelled, as always, at the realisation that this was no longer her role and never would be again; and once more the eldest held the youngest as she cried.

 


#24:  Author: MoraLocation: Lancaster PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 9:24 pm


Well I think it's really beautiful, what you've said and how you've written it. And I'm glad it's not the end.

I'm pondering on the insinuations. I always like insinuations because it's not clear and I'm never quite sure whether I'm reading it the same as everyone (or anyone) else. It makes reading interesting tho' and I would definitely like to read more.

 


#25:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 9:36 pm


Thank you Gem, a very realistic portrayal! Laughing

(Always wondered why Margot was the only one allowed to have tantrums when Len supposedly had as hot a temper!)

 


#26:  Author: Kathy_SLocation: midwestern US PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 4:05 am


Lovely job with the inter-sibling dynamics, Gem.

*looks forward to more*

 


#27:  Author: LulaLocation: Midlands, UK PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 10:47 am


Oooh... lovely!

 


#28:  Author: Amanda MLocation: Wakefield PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 7:45 pm


I really enjoyed reading what you've written. I loved the dynamics between the triplets. I hope you continue this.


Star Wars

 


#29:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Jul 10, 2004 1:50 pm


Yes, this is well worth continuing.

 


#30:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Sat Jul 10, 2004 9:22 pm


I love this drabble, and I'd like more soon. I love all our serious fill-in takes! Laughing
Just think of all the money EBD would have made if she'd written the study scenes as short stories...

 


#31:  Author: LLLocation: Salford, Manchester PostPosted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 6:13 pm


Excellent stuff Gem!

 


#32:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 11:22 pm


Must have been awful for Len trying to keep her own temper like that when Margot's just flared out. Good on Len for her self control.

Great story really like it.

 


#33:  Author: LissLocation: Harrow, London PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 11:13 am


This is great, Gem! I hope you'll be writing much more CS fic...

And did you mention something about BtVS fanfic...?

 


#34:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 11:51 am


Sorry it's taken so long to get to an update people - there will be one up within the next two days or so! Have been working lots Sad

Liss - yes, I do write BtVS fic - my main one is Tears In Heaven, a Will/Tara fic dealing with the end of Season 6 (evil Joss! Evil or Very Mad )

 


#35:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:41 pm


hammer EEeeeeevil work!

 


#36:  Author: Sarah_KLocation: St Albans PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 1:25 pm


This is great Gem! I'm looking forward to the next bit whenever you can write it Very Happy

(have you got a link for oyur BtVS fic? I'd love to read it, prehaps pm me though so we don't drive the whole board mad with OT talk)

 


#37:  Author: JackieJLocation: Kingston upon Hull PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 1:32 pm


Oooh... BtVS fic.... don't suppose I could have a link as well...

'Tis a good fic. The sibling dynamics are very well written. Please may we have some more?

JackieJ

 


#38:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 6:29 pm


For all those that would like me to email "Tears In Heaven" (which will be finished within the month) to them or my largest finished Charmed fic, "Fly", please PM me. "TiH" focuses mainly on the dynamics between the entire Gang, but there is obviously some f/f as it's a Will/Tara fic. Also, one part of "TiH" is NC17, but it adds very little to the actual plotline. If you want that left out, then please tell me in your PM.

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"Temperament lies behind mood; behind will, lies the fate of character. Then behind both, the influence of family the tyranny of culture; and finally the power of climate and environment; and we are free, only to the extent we rise above these" – John Burroughs

Con sat silently, hugging her knees to her chest as she watched for not the first time, nor the last, Len holding Margot as she sobbed away the worst of her anger, and with it her own bitter disappointment in herself. Once again she recognised those old familiar roles; her elder and younger triplets, both wishing so desperately to be needed – Len as the protector, Margot as the ‘baby’ sister, the triplet who needed to be protected, yet hid it so well. And again she found herself questioning her own role in their friendship, wondering if she held a place beyond that of the watcher, the sister who saw everything that was needed but could never quite provide it.

Sniffling and wiping a ragged hankerchief across her face – prompting Len to roll her eyes and pass over a distinctly more presentable one – Margot sat up, making a valid attempt to curb her tears but not quite succeeding. Being what her mother would have phrased as “a proud little madam”, the youngest triplet hated for anyone to see her cry, yet it never seemed to matter with her sisters.

“Does Mama know?” Margot muttered after a moment, turning to look at Con.

Con shook her head. “No – no, I don’t think so. Didn’t Papa tell you?”

“He’s not talking to me.” Margot’s voice shook as she spoke, and Len flinched. She knew how much Margot loved and admired their father, seeing in his character and career a path she desperately wanted to walk herself. It was generally accepted that Len and Con took after their mother; Len with her ability to help other people when it seemed all else was lost – something that Margot knew she took for granted – and Con, with her talent of insight and writing. Jack Maynard was much quieter and less flamboyant with his talents, yet he saved lives. He mattered, and all three sisters, now more than ever, knew how much Margot wanted to heal, to end the pains of the body when she didn’t quite understand the hurts within the mind.

Con moved forward and hugged Margot awkwardly. “He’ll come around, Margot. He just needs to understand it.”

Margot managed a weak smile. “So do I, for that matter.” Abruptly, she jumped to her feet. “I need to talk to Mama.”

Len mirrored her action. “No, Margot! You mustn’t!”

“Why not?” her youngest triplet demanded.

“Papa told us that she wasn’t well, and mustn’t be bothered. If you go to her with this, then she most certainly will be. I’m sorry, Margot, but Con and I will have to do, and if not then there’s always Auntie Hilda, Auntie Nell, Mary-Lou, Ferry – oh, lots of people! But Mama must not be bothered. If you care about her at all, then you’ll recognise that.”

Margot’s eyes flashed in anger as she heard what her sister had to say. “If I care about her at all?” she demanded. “Of course I do!”

“Len didn’t mean it like that,” Con interrupted hastily. “Don’t be angry, Margot, please!”

Calming down swiftly, Margot nodded. “I know she didn’t. Sorry, Len. I didn’t mean to fly off the handle like that.”

Len nodded, internally cursing herself for giving Margot the opportunity to lose her temper again, and feeling grateful to Con that she had successfully diffused the situation. As she did so, she recognised that, no matter what they had said tonight, whatever walls they had broken down, they were still stuck in the same situation.


Last edited by Gem on Thu Jul 15, 2004 9:01 am; edited 1 time in total

 


#39:  Author: AngelLocation: London, England PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 6:37 pm


Wow.

A powerful insight into Margot's character

Thanks

 


#40:  Author: LadyGuinevereLocation: Leicester PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 6:45 pm


Wonderful! The dynamics really are good Smile I think it's as much an insight into Con as Margot Smile

~LadyG

 


#41:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 6:45 pm


*speechless*

You've captured a lot of powerful emotions here Gem!

It's fascinating to see how the trips are dealing with the situations, and their feelings!

 


#42:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 7:01 pm


Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Where's the next bit? Laughing Cool

 


#43:  Author: Amanda MLocation: Wakefield PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 7:28 pm


This is really good stuff, you can see the different aspects of the triplets characters coming out. I do feel sorry for Con, as much as for Margot, and am wondering if Len or Margot will pick up on how Con's feeling. Can't wait for more.

Star Wars

 


#44:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 7:48 pm


Thank you Gem - riveting!

 


#45:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 9:53 pm


Margot and Len stand out, but Con has a powerful role here as well, in diffusing the situation.

Love this.

 


#46:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 11:17 pm


Very Happy

Thank you everyone for luffly comments - there will probably only be two, or three at most, further updates to this, but I'm planning on making the "mini-drabbles" a regular thing, just writing my own personal insights into particular occurences. Don't have any ideas for any longer drabbles at present though Sad Plot bunnies appear to have abandoned me - my own luffly bunny died last week so I think they're in mourning Sad

 


#47:  Author: Amanda MLocation: Wakefield PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 11:55 pm


Gives huggles to Gem Sad

Star Wars

 


#48:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Jul 16, 2004 1:21 pm


Aaahhhhhh! Poor Gem. Sending a hug.

 


#49:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 3:55 pm


This is a lovely story. Love the way we are seeing the triplets grow and develop here. Feel sorry for Con as she seems, more than Margot to be the one left out.

 


#50:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:30 pm


just a little bounce, after your comment in Need a Break, Gem...... Wink

 


#51:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:34 pm


And another one, just to rub it in!

 


#52:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:34 pm


Not a problem - next part will be ready in about 5 mins! Just thought I'd wait and see if anyone wanted any more *g*

*ducks*

 


#53:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:39 pm


Crafty mare!!!!!

 


#54:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:42 pm


So where is it, then?

 


#55:  Author: CharlotteLocation: Casterton, Kirkby Lonsdale PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:18 pm


Hey, this is WAY more than 5 mins!!! Evil or Very Mad

 


#56:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:19 pm


Sorry - Con was being extremely difficult!!! Why do drabble characters never do as they're told??

As Len was coming to her conclusions, Con was realising the same thing, wondering if she or Len would ever succeed in their attempts to make things easier for their younger sister. For what seemed like the hundredth time, Con wondered how Margot, who was so clever, could be so incapable of recognising the responsibilities of her actions. It was selfishness, pure and simple – she knew that, no matter how she tried to justify it – yet she hated to even consider the thought that either of her triplets were not perfect. Len was so very close to it, and Margot so far from it, but to her they were faultless – until now.

The acknowledgement of Margot’s failures hit far harder than Con would have ever expected. She’d told herself, and Len, over and over that they were not to blame for Margot’s mistakes. So why did it hurt so badly, when she’d known it all her life, to admit that her younger sister – her baby sister – was not perfect?

Margot looked out at the rain pouring down the Saal window. For reasons unbeknownst to her sisters, she’d always loved the elements, the recognition of how small she was in comparison to the work of her God. She bit back a chuckle as she recalled times dancing outside in the rain - once the concerns for her health were reduced - nevertheless causing endless worry for Len, just as their Auntie Madge had worried over their mother’s delicacy which had never seemed quite as concerning to Joey herself.

She glanced over at her elder sister briefly, and her eyes widened at the tears filling in Con’s eyes. She’d never seen Con cry. Len had cried in front of her once or twice, and she herself had cried in front of her sisters countless times, but Con, never. The second Maynard triplet was an intensely private person – Margot had an idea that there was still a great deal which she didn’t know about her elder sister. Con, for all her writing, for all the insight which she shared with her sisters, was very much a closed book.

Len looked towards the fire briefly, and Margot managed to catch Con’s gaze, looking at her steadily with a concern that seemed to overrule the hurt that she herself felt. For some reason, she knew that Con would hate it if she spoke the concern aloud, drawing Len’s attention to it. Margot knew well enough that Con had spent most of her life trying to hide away from the spotlight, recognising that Len had a hard enough time dealing with the youngest triplet, and she hated herself at that moment for her selfishness.

What’s the matter? Margot mouthed. Con shook her head firmly, praying that Margot would understand, and for once, she did. The concern and understanding in the deep blue eyes was unnerving; for a moment, Con was afraid that Margot knew everything that she feared, recognised the loneliness and desperation which she felt so often. Then she glanced away, and she was just her baby sister again, loving her with all her heart but never really knowing her. And that was just fine with her.

 


#57:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:24 pm


I know this is a double post, but I just want to see if anyone's interested in acting as beta. I've got several ideas for longer drabbles, but I prefer working with a beta, just to get an idea of the reaction before I post it. I'm not particularly happy with this post - it seems to contradict more than answer questions, but I suppose feelings and emotions do that. Anyways, if anyone's willing, please PM me or post on this thread.

 


#58:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:25 pm


That was a lovely piece Gem!!! Poor Con!

 


#59:  Author: CharlotteLocation: Casterton, Kirkby Lonsdale PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:30 pm


yey!! Am now satisfied

(and will remain so for 5 mins...)

 


#60:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:34 pm


his is brilliant Gem, an oustanding insight into the trips characters. You may not have ben happy with the last post, but it seemed fine to me.

 


#61:  Author: RayLocation: Bristol, England PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:16 pm


This is looking very good, Gem Smile Very nicely done.

If you want a beta reader, I have beta'd in numerous places so you're welcome to ask. Providing I'm not in the midst of moving rooms again (!!), I should be able to help you out Smile

Ray *hates flat pack furniture with a vengeance*

 


#62:  Author: AllyLocation: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 11:10 pm


That was wonderful Gem, very insightful into the Triplets, and in particular Con

 


#63:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 11:51 pm


Anyone finding that their characters go their own way, has written about a real person. Thank you Gem, your characters live.

 


#64:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 9:29 am


*agrees with Ellie*
Excellent, Gem - good to see the depth you give to the characters

I enjoyed Con's realisation that her sisters aren't perfect (even if Len is close!), loved the affinity that Margot has with the elements (very real) and that private moment between Con & Margot was spot on ...

Looking forward to more ...

 


#65:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 4:23 pm


Nice to see the way the triplets are growing up but still keeping their affinity as triplets.

Last edited by Susan on Wed Jul 28, 2004 1:12 pm; edited 1 time in total

 


#66:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 9:06 pm


That was so lovely, Gem!!!!! please let us have more.
And if you still one betas, im happy to volunteer!

 


#67:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:41 pm


Final installment of "mini-drabble" - which didn't turn out to be so 'mini' after all! I have several plans for more drabbles in the works, but this is all for this one, anyway!

“I think,” Len announced, jumping to her feet, “that it’s time for bed. Look at the time! It’s nearly eleven o’clock! Mama would have a fit!”

Con squawked, imitating her sister’s action, whilst Margot followed more reluctantly. She’d wanted to talk to Con alone, and Len caught the expression on her face. “I’m going to go and check on the babies,” she said quickly. “Cecil was sniffling a bit today – I want to make sure she’s sleeping OK.” She suited action to the word, leaping up the stairs actively but silently, checking on Cecil’s phantom cold.

“Come on, Margot,” Con called quietly, following Len up the stairs more slowly. Margot opened her mouth, and she caught the expression. “Don’t, Margot!” Con said more forcefully. “There’s no need.”

“But something’s wrong,” Margot argued stubbornly, wanting to fix it, whatever ‘it’ was.

Con shook her head, a light in her eyes that Margot didn’t think she’d ever seen before. “No,” she said slowly, beginning to smile. “No, there isn’t.” Con looked at her sister, seeing for the first time the passion, intellect, enthusiasm and awkwardness that was Margot, and recognising those same qualities in herself and Len. How could three people be so totally alike, yet completely different? Len was refined in her character, Margot flamboyant, and herself? Con struggled, trying to come up with a word that would describe herself and her relationship with her sisters, and for once her literary talent failed her. She was indescribable.

Looking at her sister, Margot saw the inner struggle and decided to take a hand. “Con?” Con glanced up, confusion foremost in her eyes. “Why do you always have to describe things?”

“Huh?” Con conveniently forgot that that particular expression was completely forbidden.

“You’re doing it now,” Margot said mildly. “You’re trying to describe something.”

Her sister’s eyes widened as she realised the truth, wondering at the same time exactly how Margot knew this. “I know you,” Margot told her, smiling at the look in her triplet’s eyes. It wasn’t often that Con Maynard was stunned beyond words. “More than you know.” She struggled to explain what she meant. “Whatever you’re trying to describe, you don’t need to. It – it just is.”

Seeing the realisation slowly dawning in her Con’s eyes, Margot turned to the stairs. “Goodnight, and God bless!” she called softly as she hurried up the stairs, mindful of the late hour.

“It just is,” Con repeated slowly. How on earth could she have thought that she could describe fifteen years of sisterhood? She loved writing, loved the sense of security that knowing how she felt could give her. Feelings and hurts placed on paper could be battled, burnt and beaten. Once that was done, when every feeling had been adequately described and set in stone, so to speak, what was there left to feel?

Nothing.

“It just is,” Con repeated again, giddy with excitement. Spinning around, she bounded up the stairs, meeting Len coming out of the nursery.

“Goodnight,” Len called in confusion as her sister tore past her, rushed back to give her a hug, and then disappeared into her room. Seconds later, Margot poked her head out of her bedroom door, gave Len a matey grin, and withdrew again.

Len gave a low chuckle, and turned to go to her own bedroom, wondering about the utter mystery that was sisterhood. She pondered upon the question, before giving it up as a lost cause, and leaving the bedroom to peer in at the babies again. Next door, Con was scribbling frantically in her diary, full of good resolutions and hopes for the future. Finally, at the end of the house, with the light dimmed and her Bible open, Margot Maynard prayed with all her heart for the strength and the love to be able to face all that life gave – for her and her triplets.

 


#68:  Author: AllyLocation: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:45 pm


Lovely Gem, thank you Very Happy

Im glad Margot was so perseptive, and was able to help Con, and I like the ending, with them all doing different things, but somehow similar.

 


#69:  Author: catherineLocation: York PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:54 pm


Thank you, Gem. That was a lovely ending and sums them all up so well.

 


#70:  Author: VikkiLocation: Possibly in hell! It's certainly hot enough....... PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 11:01 pm


Thank you Gem!! That was a lovely ending!

 


#71:  Author: LesleyLocation: Rochester, Kent PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 12:00 am


Thanks Gem, hope it won't be long before you write another drabble.

 


#72:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 12:31 pm


That was lovely, Gem, thank you.

 


#73:  Author: Rachael PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 10:40 am


Wonderful Gem, especially that it was Margot who was able to help Con instead of Len

*Looking forward to the next drabble*

 


#74:  Author: LauraLocation: London (ish) PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 12:09 pm


I just discovered this - is REALLY good!

I eagerly await more Very Happy

Loved the insight into Con - ever my favourite triplet!

 


#75:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 11:28 am


Thank you Gem, a lovely story. Looking forward to your next one,

 


#76:  Author: Lisa_TLocation: Belfast PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:15 pm


*sniff* wonderful!

 


#77:  Author: CathLocation: Cornwall, England PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:51 pm


Wow, noticed a little post about me in there, eh? Laughing Cheek, I say. Wasn't *my* fault.

As for that mini drabble, absolutely wonderful. Twenty thumbs up! And I'm urging you to write some more drabbles if you haven't already. *nudges* Please?

 


#78:  Author: RuthLocation: Lincolnshire, England PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 10:57 am


Gem, that was lovely! Please write more drabbles!

 


#79:  Author: GemLocation: Saltash, Cornwall (holidays), Aberystwyth (termtime from September) PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 11:08 am


*g*

Check out "Untitled", Ruth. It was just started last night.

 




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