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(Message started by: Carolyn P on Dec 29th, 2003, 12:11am)

Title: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Carolyn P on Dec 29th, 2003, 12:11am
Archived for length

 

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance
Post by KB on Dec 29th, 2003, 12:18am
Ooh, Carolyn's been bitten by the archiving bug!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance
Post by Carolyn P on Dec 29th, 2003, 12:22am

on 12/29/03 at 00:18:15, KB wrote:
Ooh, Carolyn's been bitten by the archiving bug!

I haven't been biten by any bug my dear.

Just doing what has to be done. The presence of Miss Annersley on the board has the effect of keeping one on one's toes does it not?


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance
Post by KB on Dec 29th, 2003, 12:26am
Yes, that's true, it does. 

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 29th, 2003, 12:58am
*feels guilty for not having done any archiving!!*

(Too tired not to screw up!!) :-[ :-[

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 29th, 2003, 3:52am
Carolyn seems to be doing it, Vikki, so don't worry. 

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by keren as a guest on Dec 29th, 2003, 9:22am
I think that this holiday season is a very difficult time for this board.

There are all these stories that we want to read, and every time we go to look at the 3 or 4 or 5 pages added, there is only yibbling (to which I am adding).
On the other hand there are all these other gifted writers who cant write as they have to spend the holidays with their faimlies (or let their relatives use the computer).
And what about the plot bunnies??

How are they all faring when they cant get their ideas out to the board?


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Lesley on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:18am
*Wonders if any plot bunnies spontaneously combust if unable to get their stories written!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Carolyn P on Dec 29th, 2003, 11:15am
There has been a lot of yibbling hasn't there, and I've been just as bad, I must take the computer downstairs then I won't stay up till 1:00am on here.

My own plot bunnies had a day or of sleep, following which they feasted and then started whispering a multitude of ideas into my ear. I haven't got time to stat, so I satiate them by using a notepad and pen and making a brief outline of their ideas. I don't want to have bunny splattered over my walls thank-you.

Last time I mentioned plot bunnies D suggested that I watch Fatal Attraction again.  :o


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 29th, 2003, 4:06pm
*so your bunnies are quivering in fear then Carolyn!?*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Alex on Dec 29th, 2003, 6:16pm
Ha! He's gone out! 

“Did you have a good journey?” Lala attempted a conversation once the were settled in the car.

“Yes, thank you,” Giles was brief in his reply, still struggling to come to terms with the age and appearance of two girls he still thought of as children.

“It’s a shame the weather is so bad, there are some lovely views from the train when you can see far enough, but it’s been raining for days,” Lala tried again.

“I could see well enough,” Giles was clearly unimpressed by such trivialities as the weather and the scenery.

For the rest of the journey Lala’s attempts at conversation were constantly rebuffed by Giles. Polly, a fixed scowl on her fact appeared to be concentrating hard on the road, but was in fact seething at the perceived treatment of her sister, which, in fact were more due to shyness on Giles’s part than anything else.

The Winterton sisters had yet again banished their mother to lie down while they went to the station, leaving strict instructions with Freddie not to disturb her, but she was ready to greet her step-son when they arrived at the front door.

“Giles, dear, welcome to our home. Come in, come in. Lala, would you take Giles’s bags up to his room and Polly, could you….could you make tea, please.” Mrs Winterton narrowly avoided a disastrous choice of words, which in Polly’s present mood would have been unfortunate in the extreme. “Giles come this way, Freddie take Giles’s coat, I’m sure you’ll want to wash, just through there, then please come through here and we’ll have tea. Then we can show you everything afterwards. I’m so sorry your father couldn’t be here to welcome you. Some disaster with his publisher I understand.”
 

*feeling I have achieved something in life having been archived"


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Carolyn P on Dec 29th, 2003, 6:27pm

on 12/29/03 at 16:06:23, Vikki wrote:
*so your bunnies are quivering in fear then Carolyn!?*

Only of D and the kids. They have made a little nest under the head of the bed on my side and keep well away from D. Having said which he is talking about breeding his own PB's. I think they arfe scared of that, or rather of having no time to type if he is writing as well. I have told them to wait until new year as the assignment bunnies have priority at the moment,  but Peter has come up with a doozy of a story, following on from one of the advent drabbles, and I can see I'll have to at least get the plan down soon, if only to shut him up.

By the way thanks whoever sent me the counting bunny a while back, I've taken 400 words out of an assignment today, only another 1200 to get out!! And then another assignment to go!!!!!
 

Alex, this story is coming on well. Sorry for yibbling on about my plot bunnies. Please let yours continue to work hard as much, much more of this story will be appreciated.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 29th, 2003, 7:02pm
Thank you Alex!!

I would like to know what the potentially disastrous word choice was though!!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by LulieCat on Dec 29th, 2003, 7:09pm

on 12/29/03 at 19:02:26, Vikki wrote:
I would like to know what the potentially disastrous word choice was though!!

Me too! Me too! 

Thank you Alex, now post the "word choice" version 
;D


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Dec 29th, 2003, 7:48pm
Yay thank you Alex!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:10pm
Wonderful work, Alex! I love the different characters you have going in this!

*also interested in knowing word choice*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by xanthe on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:22pm
Thank you Alex  ;D

I'm assuming she nearly said "Polly put the kettle on"?


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:35pm
*giggles wildly* How did I not think of that?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance
Post by Abi on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:44pm
*joins in the giggles*

*chants*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:46pm
Glad to see more of this story, Alex, hope you get the chance to write some more soon.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 29th, 2003, 10:51pm
*joins in Abi's chant*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 29th, 2003, 11:34pm

on 12/29/03 at 22:22:45, xanthe wrote:
Thank you Alex  ;D

I'm assuming she nearly said "Polly put the kettle on"?

Can't believe I missed that one!!!
*giggles wildly!*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Dec 30th, 2003, 2:28am
Lovely story Alex, really enjoying it.

On hoovers - ours is a Dyson (non-upright) it is really good, wouldn't swap it for worlds.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 2:34am
We have centralised vaccuuming.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 2:41am
KB, what the heck is centralised vaccuuming? ???

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 2:43am
It's where you don't actually have to have a vaccuum cleaner, you just plug the pipe into a hole in the wall and the dust and dirt is sucked into an exterior collection box. Very handy!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 2:52am
*thinks this is a very good idea, as it means I wouldn't keep stubbing by toe on the Dyson when it gets left in the hallway!!!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 2:59am
Definitely! The only bad thing is that the hose does occasionally strip paint of the corners...

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:02am
Well, who needs painted corners anyway?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:06am
My mother, apparently...

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:11am
Oh! Well, mothers can be strange sometimes! Mine is!! ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:14am
*agrees with the first and more general point*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:24am
Oh the second bit is true as well! ;) Where do you think I get it from?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:25am
I believe you, but I didn't think I should insult your mother like that. I'll save it up for you, instead. ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:33am
*will exact revenge for that in March!!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:36am
Looking forward to it!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:40am
*tries to think of good plan!!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:42am
*suggests that Vikki's good plan should include somewhere to hide*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:47am
That's easy! Behind all the others!!! ;) ;D

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:51am
I should have guessed... ::)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:53am
Well, might as well make use of being the CBB midget!!! ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:56am
I'm sure, one day, someone smaller than you will join!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:58am
It doesn't count if they're under the age of twelve!!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:01am
*lol* My mother was the smallest person at her school (which went from children aged 5 to those aged 18) until she was in her second last year there! So I think she'd have been smaller than you, growing up!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:05am
Possibly! I think I stopped growing at 18 in the end!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:14am
*lol* So did my Mum, I think!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:16am
Did you know, that apparantly, if you're born prematurely, you carry on growing until you're 25?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:19am
Presumably your body has to catch up. Were you prem, late, or exactly to the day?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:27am
I was late! If I'd been born on time my grandfather would have seen me before he died! :'( How about you?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:33am
Exact to the day. (I'd make comments about being perfect, but you might get sick. ;)) *huggles about your grandfather*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:37am
Thank you! :-* I never knew him, but I wish I had! 

Everyone thought my grandmother would follow him quite quickly, but she didn't, and she's still here, and getting better!!! Yay!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:39am
That's wonderful news about your grandmother! *considers setting off party popper again*

*remembers all the problems it caused last time*
*decides against it*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:43am
She's still in hospital, but apparantly she got herself up and washed and dressed this morning, so she's definitely on the mend!!  ;D ;D

*touches wood!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:50am
That's wonderful news! *big hugs*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:53am
Thank you sweetie!

*big hugs back*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:02am
*wonders whether we should drag this topic back on track* :-/

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:12am
Okay!

More story please Alex!! (before we start on about vaccuum cleaners again!!) ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:14am
*echoes pleas for more*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Lesley on Dec 30th, 2003, 9:14am
*Good to hear about your grandmother, Vikki!*

Alex - loved the last post - was it Polly put the kettle on? - more please!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 10:14am
*goes to check* Yes, that was the last post. 

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by keren on Dec 30th, 2003, 12:40pm
more yibbling and i was so excited about seeing another 3 pages of story.

so what is happening in march?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by LulieCat on Dec 30th, 2003, 1:12pm
Just to snook your theory, KB, I was 3 months prem and stopped growing at 14. Fortunately I was a decently sized 14 yr old!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Dec 30th, 2003, 3:45pm
Glad to hear about your grandmother Vikki.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:26pm
Also pleased to hear that your Gran is on the mend Vikki.

My mum was a premmie, and she's only 4'11". 


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:36pm
I'm very glad to hear it too, Vikki  :-*

Esmeralda, I think Vikki's granny may be a little old for what you just typed ;)
 

Quote:
Also pleased to hear that your Gran is on the men Vikki. 


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:39pm
:-[

*Hopes one is never to old.
*Amends original post - sorry Vikki.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Angel on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:40pm
*splutters*

That is way ageist... Grannies can have sex lives too.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:41pm
Knows at least one person who was a grannie at thirty six.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Pat on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:44pm
Just hope that nobody thinks I'm past it!!!  I'd set EBD and the TEM on them!!  (2 grandchildren!!)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Dec 30th, 2003, 4:45pm
i'm sure vikki said her granny was 90ish! 

not that i have anything against grannies enjoying themselves, you understand - but i think maybe one man at a time would be more suitable 8oo


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Pat on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:06pm

on 12/30/03 at 16:45:01, Catherine_B wrote:
i'm sure vikki said her granny was 90ish! 

not that i have anything against grannies enjoying themselves, you understand - but i think maybe one man at a time would be more suitable 8oo

Make that manageable!!  We're not in our twenties any more!!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:13pm
*reads pat's comment worriedly and wonders whether she should start having a wild sex life while she still can!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:22pm
*Assures Catherine that there is no need to panic,

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:25pm
*notices that Esmeralda hasn't filled out the 'age' field in her profile*  *doesn't know whether to feel reassured or not*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:29pm
*Chuckles evilly - decides to leave Catherine wondering.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Dec 30th, 2003, 5:33pm
*refuses to be reassured by someone who won't even give the teeniest clue about their age!*

 


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 30th, 2003, 7:16pm
*giggles!*

Now, shall I pass Esmeralda's comment on to my grandmother? ;)
Possibly not a good idea!!
Thanks guys!! And more story please Alex!!

Oh, and Keren, in March we're having a Gathering at Rachael's house, details in Off Topic, and the archives!!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 8:10pm
I loved this joke:

I'm still having a great sex life at 75. Fortunately, I live an number 77, so it's not far to go!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Dec 30th, 2003, 8:28pm
That was one of the recetly departed Bob Monkhouse's jokes according to yesterdays paper.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Dec 30th, 2003, 8:44pm
I didn't know who it was - I just saw it on the news and liked it.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Dec 30th, 2003, 9:35pm
I think I saw it on the news too in a tribute to him, but I definitley read it in the paper in a list of his most favourite jokes.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Dec 31st, 2003, 1:03am
aaaauuuuuuuuuuggggggghhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another thread with lots of yibbles and no more story. how can there be five - or however many it was - pages of yibbling?

*flings self on floor in temper tantrum*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 31st, 2003, 1:13am
Now come on Abi, you contributed plenty to the yibbling last night!!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by xanthe on Dec 31st, 2003, 1:16am
*giggling helplessly*

would appreciate some more story if the yibblers haven't frightened you away Alex...


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Dec 31st, 2003, 1:18am
ME??????????????? Would I yibble? Would I really do such a thing?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Dec 31st, 2003, 1:25am
*hopes Xan includes herself in the category of yibblers*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Alex on Jan 2nd, 2004, 8:46pm
Sorry, my brother was 21 on Tuesday and then it was New Year and last I was so tired and here is some more story:

The Bettany family were at breakfast on Wednesday morning. They did not go in for full English breakfasts as a rule, and this morning was no exception. They were feasting on toast and marmalade.

“Does anyone want any more tea?” asked Peggy. “There is some more water in the kettle so I can easily fill the pot again.”
“Me, please,” said Maeve, “I do miss tea at school. And even when we have it at Aunty Jo’s, it doesn’t taste the same, I think it must be the milk.”

“What does it taste like then?” asked her twin.

“Just…different I suppose,” Maeve replied, screwing up her face in a puzzled way.

“Maeve Bettany! Your face will stay that way, if you pull such faces,” teased Bride.

“There is no medical evidence for that,” announced Rix, somewhat pompously, as Peggy returned with the teapot.

“There you are, Maeve,” she poured out a cup for her sister. “Anybody else?” She waved the pot a little recklessly.

“Peg, be careful,” remonstrated her father. “You’ll scald us all if you carry on like that.”

“Burns can cause severe scarring,” announced Rix.

Bride rolled her eyes. “You’re starting to get very boring you know, Rix.”

“Perhaps it’s a new way of killing off the patients,” put in Maurice cheekily, at which Maeve giggled.

Rix rose with dignity. “I must do some work.”

“Yes get it all out of your system do,” muttered Bride under her breath, as he said this.

Rix chose to ignore the comment. “What time are the Wintertons expected?”

“About midday,” his mother smiled at him. “Don’t forget your chores before you start work.”

Breakfast seemed to have come to its conclusion and so Maeve and Maurice cleared the table, John and Bride were to wash up. Peggy had been up early attending to the hens, but she would make a start on the household chores, the girls would assist her when they had finished their other tasks. 

The morning proceeded without mishap. All housework was successfully completed and Bride and John managed to get some work done, although Maeve announced she was leaving her holiday task until after Christmas. Shortly before 12, Peggy, who was dusting her own abode, heard a car draw up outside. Checking her appearance in the mirror, she noticed that the hem of her skirt was coming down.

“Bother!” she exclaimed in annoyance. This would not do at all. Taking a needle from her sewing box, she hurriedly thread it and tacked a couple of stitches which would hold it for the time being, not too well as it turned out. Flustered, Peggy proceeded along the landing to the top of the stairs. The Wintertons were being welcomed in by Dick Bettany and were clustered at the bottom of the staircase. Taking a breath to calm herself, she walked sedately down the stairs. Five steps from the bottom, she caught her heel in the loosely tacked hem of her skirt and fell headlong, fortunately to be caught by a pair of strong arms at the bottom. Embarrassed, indeed blushing wildly, Peggy looked up to thank her saviour….into the face of a stranger. This, then, was Captain Giles Winterton.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by LulieCat on Jan 2nd, 2004, 8:52pm
Marvellous Alex! How romantic *swoons along with Peggy*

*starts the chant for more, very tunefully as it happens 8oo*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Lesley on Jan 2nd, 2004, 9:17pm
Aaaaaaaahhhhhh!

In the best Mills and Boon tradition! ;)

Thank you Alex!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 2nd, 2004, 10:17pm
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! Bless!!!!!!!!!!

How sweet!!! :)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Jan 2nd, 2004, 10:29pm
And how fortunate that Peggy is so light and dainty - otherwise she might literally have bowled him over 8oo

Lovely, Alex - can hardly wait for more!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 2nd, 2004, 10:34pm
Aaah, how lovely, but how embarrassing :-[

Glad you've got back to this Alex.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Angel on Jan 2nd, 2004, 10:39pm
OOOOH

Would it help if I mentioned that's how I one of my exes - I slipped on the ice in Warsaw, and he caught me?


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Jan 2nd, 2004, 11:01pm
awwwwww! How lovely  :)

Abi *goes all gooey and sentimental*

*but doesn't forget to chant!*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Jan 3rd, 2004, 1:11am
Aww that's lovely.  Plenty of scope too for misundertandings amd embarrassment.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by xanthe on Jan 3rd, 2004, 1:35am
*chants loudly for some MORE please!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 3rd, 2004, 2:13am
*joins Xan's chant*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Lesley on Jan 3rd, 2004, 9:35am
*Adding to chant as Peggy has been in Giles' arms long enough for a first date!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Jan 3rd, 2004, 11:24am
*joins the chant* 

This is wonderful Alex i can't wait for some more  :) 


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Jennie on Jan 3rd, 2004, 12:52pm
With this length of time, they ought to be married by now.

Just a subtle hint for more.

Who was that saying that I can't do subtle?


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Jan 3rd, 2004, 11:23pm
*pats Jennie on the head* of course you're subtle darling, of course you are..........

*whines* Aleeeeeeeex. pleeeease post more!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Jan 4th, 2004, 1:02am
What still no more story?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 4th, 2004, 2:13am
*wonders where Alex has got to? ???*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 4th, 2004, 8:57am
Wow, what a, er, smashing introduction! ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Jan 4th, 2004, 9:56am
KB that's a terrible pun  ::) 

Alex where are you we'd like mroe story please  :)


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 4th, 2004, 10:09am
I was rather proud of it, myself... ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Pat on Jan 4th, 2004, 4:31pm
Your break hasn't improved soem things, KB!!   :P

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 5th, 2004, 1:49am
Yes, but you'd miss them if I stopped altogether! :D

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Jan 6th, 2004, 1:22pm
Alexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 

Where are you, hope you're ok and that we can have more story soon  :)


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Alex on Jan 6th, 2004, 1:27pm
Flu and siblings - a terrible combination (sympathy come on)

Giles was not having a good day. He had slept very badly the night before, woken up very badly this morning and been forced to endure Freddy’s chattering at breakfast. At least his father was home now, so there was another man in the house, there was really no-one else to pass the time of day with. Mary, or Polly as she insisted on being called, ridiculous really, took herself off to “paint weather” most of the time, and Lala too was very occupied with work, some magazine or something. She had offered to show him but why she thought he would be interested in some school girl (ignoring the fact that Lala was a prefect and bore the distinction of being the oldest girl in the school) rubbish he had no idea why she would expect him to be interested. 

The day before, he had been informed that they were going to visit “their great friends the Bettanys” on the morrow. More school children. The Bettanys apparently had some kind of small farm which as run by Mr and Mrs Bettany and their eldest daughter, who was no doubt a great oaf of a girl with huge muscles, a loud voice and a weather-beaten complexion. All the rest of them were still studying apart from the youngest who was a mere infant. Giles could not understand why his parents would expect him to like these people. And the first thing that happened when they arrived was that the eldest daughter threw himself down stairs at him. Fortunately she was not great but she was certainly an oaf.

Peggy was absolutely mortified at the incident. Her embarrassment was not lessened by the fact that, once it had been ascertained that she was not hurt, her entire family laughed. 

Extracting herself from Giles’s grasp she thanked him very primly and escaped to the kitchen, to give her some time to compose herself. Bride followed her after a short time.

“Peggy are you all right?” asked Bride.

Peggy was sat at the kitchen table with her head in her hands, her usual composure gone.

“No, yes, I will be in a minute,” Peggy stuttered.

“I don’t think you need to worry, no-one will say anything,” said Bride.

“Or they wouldn’t have done if I’d just stood there and laughed with them but I did have to run away and make a complete ninny of myself in front of a complete stranger.”

“Peg, it’s only the Wintertons, they won’t mind, it was an accident, it could happen to anyone. And if it’s him you’re worrying about, it’s not like you’re ever going to see him again and if you listen to Polly, he sounds a complete idiot!”

Peggy smiled a little. “My dear, I would advise you to take everything Polly says about her brother with a large pinch of salt.”

“Come on then,” said Bride, taking Peggy’s hand, “let’s go and show them that the Bettany’s aren’t ashamed of total public humiliation.”

Peggy got to her feet. “I don’t know why but I have a bad feeling about today.”


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Pat on Jan 6th, 2004, 1:36pm
Giles is a complete anal orifice, isn't he?!   ::) ::) ::)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Alex on Jan 6th, 2004, 2:16pm
Don't think I quite meant to lay it on that thick......

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachel on Jan 6th, 2004, 2:27pm
Alex, I like stories like this! When are we likely to see further developments in Peggy and Giles' relationship?

 

Wasn't that a polite request! I definitely deserve more drabble now!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Pat on Jan 6th, 2004, 2:29pm

on 01/06/04 at 14:16:03, Alex wrote:
Don't think I quite meant to lay it on that thick......

To be fair, you didn't.  That was me lowering things to the gutter!!   :-[ :-[ He's a bit of an opininated prat though! 


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Jan 6th, 2004, 3:25pm
Thank you Alex, i can't seem to write when i'm ill so you've done wonderfully well  :)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 6th, 2004, 5:46pm
Thanks Alex, I suppose Giles is being a bit of a pain, but I guess he's feeling a bit uncomfortable himself, being a house full of women when at least two of them don't want him there.

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 6th, 2004, 5:49pm
*huggles Alex sympathetically and encouragingly* :-* :-*

(*and mentions that we really would like some more when it's possible*)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Jan 6th, 2004, 11:55pm
*boosts this up to the top as a gentle hint to Alex*

aww - sweet! Poor Peggy. Poor Giles. 8oo


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 7th, 2004, 12:36am
Actually, I think it's a very accurate portrayal! He's not an overly likeable character yet, but I'm sure he will become one!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 7th, 2004, 5:01pm
*hopes we'll have the to find out soon!*

Please, Alex!! :-*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Alex on Jan 7th, 2004, 7:29pm
Despite Peggy’s misgivings, lunch passed smoothly enough, apart from when she dropped a jug and broke it. (This was made worse by the fact that it was full of gravy at the time, but that was easily cleared up, although Dick Bettany was moved to murmur to his wife, “I don’t know what is the matter with Peggy today.”) Maeve, Maurice and Freddie were quite happy to entertain themselves. Peggy, Bride, Polly and Lala had always got on well and John and Rix were content with each others company. Giles attatched himself to the elder members of the party and the early afternoon went smoothly enough. After a time, Mollie Bettany noticed that Giles mostly stared into space and only spoke if a comment was addressed directly to him. She slipped out of the room to find her daughters and eventually tracked them down to Peggy’s sitting room.

“Why don’t you girls take Captain Winterton out and show him the chickens and the vegetable garden,” she suggested brightly as she came into the room.

Polly rolled her eyes, but the the only person who noticed was Bride who gulped hurriedly and then asked, “But are you sure he’ll be interested?”

“Bride, in my opinion the man is painfully shy and could do with some fresh air, after all the weather has been terrible this last week, and some good company,” she folded her arms are stared her daughter down.

“Well we can ask him, I suppose,” said Peggy doubtfully.

Mollie threw up her hands in horror. “I never realised I raised my own children so badly they can’t show simple good manners to a stranger.”

“Come on then you lot,” said Peggy getting to her feet, as Mollie left the room leaving them all a little ashamed. “Lets get our coats and then wander in the direction of the sitting room and see if anyone wants to come out with us.”

“To hear is to obey,” said Bride in low tones. “Sorry, Peg” she apologised, feeling cross with herself for taking an irrational instant dislike to someone.

Once they were all warmly wrapped up, they made their way to the sitting room where Peggy announced their intentions to go out. 

“Why don’t you show Captain Winterton the garden?” suggested Mollie brightly.

Faced with such directness, Giles could hardly refuse without being rude so he followed the girls into the garden, where they pointed out various interesting things to him such as the chickens, carrots, herbs and an enormous pig. After listening to their idle chatter, Giles strode away down the garden where the girls were loath to follow him, but Peggy, taking her mothers words to heart followed him, and found him staring out towards the sea which you could see from the end of the garden.

“Do you miss it when you’re on land?” she asked him.

Getting no reply she continued. “I used to think I’d go mad without the mountains, I’d always lived among them, but then after that I lived by the sea, and now I think I could do with one or the other, but I must have one of them.”

Slightly startled by this speech from someone who he had marked down as an imbecile, Giles replied. “Yes I suppose I do miss it. I know I couldn’t live in a city.”

Peggy nodded, not really sure what to say. “I think I would prefer the mountains if I had a choice.”

“Where did you live in the mountains?” he asked, for want of a better topic of conversation.

”Well, at school, in Switzerland and before that I lived in Wales and before we were in Austria, when I was a child, until we had to leave.”

“Why did you have to leave?”

Peggy frowned. “Because of the Anschluss of course.” She saw she had made him feel foolish so she laughed and added, “We left at a quite sedate pace although my aunt and uncle and some of their friends had to run for their lives across Europe.”

He relaxed, and was about to enquire into the well-chronicled adventures of Peggy’s aunt and uncle, but the other three arrived and declared that they were freezing, so they all made their way back to the house.

As the Wintertons left the Quadrant that evening, Giles reflected that Peggy Bettany might or might not be a rather clumsy, complete imbecile, but she was undoubtedly the most beautiful girl he had ever laid eyes on.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Jan 7th, 2004, 7:35pm
*applauds* 

Alex that was so wonderful, but may we have some more soon please!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by LauraT on Jan 7th, 2004, 7:45pm
Alex thats so good! And so cute!   ;D

*joins in with applause and, never satisfied, pleas for more!  ;D *


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 7th, 2004, 7:51pm
Oh, thank you Alex, this is developing nicely, please may we have more soon?

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 7th, 2004, 8:58pm
Alex, this is great!! Please may we have some more soon? :-*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Pat on Jan 7th, 2004, 10:11pm
Joining in the calls for more.  Alex this is lovely!  Fancy making Peggy look as if she might be an imbecile!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Jan 7th, 2004, 11:28pm
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! (that was a sound expressing wild glee). 

*chants at the top of her voice in tones that cannot possibly be ignored*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by xanthe on Jan 7th, 2004, 11:32pm
*applauds wildly while calling for more*

see - I can multitask!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 8th, 2004, 12:00am
*watches as Xan misses and hits herself in the face*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachel on Jan 8th, 2004, 12:31am
Alex this is WONDERFLUBBLE! And I have no praise higher than that!

I just wish (watch the subtlety here girls!) that there was more to read of this now! It's so well written and I am enjoying it *so* much!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 8th, 2004, 12:59am
Oh! So that's why the tip of your nose is brown Rachel!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 8th, 2004, 5:08am
Well, I'm glad Giles has woken up a little! And good on Peggy for trying to be polite at least!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Lesley on Jan 8th, 2004, 5:27am
Thank you Alex - good to see Giles start to notice things!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachel on Jan 8th, 2004, 9:29am

on 01/08/04 at 00:59:55, Vikki wrote:
Oh! So that's why the tip of your nose is brown Rachel!!

 

The tip of my nose is brown because I've been sniffing the hot chocolate powder again. I'm not posh enough to have cocoa  ;)


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 8th, 2004, 9:38am
*sends Rachel a small tin of cocoa* Can't have un-posh CS girls, you know! ;)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachel on Jan 8th, 2004, 9:47am
I've always had the feeling that I wouldn't be classed in the group of girls Len describes as NOT being likely to attend the village school!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Jan 8th, 2004, 9:50am
*brain reeling from all the negatives in that sentence!*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachel on Jan 8th, 2004, 9:59am
Double negative makes it positive!

Oh alright - I would be a village school type person and not a CS type at all - Rosamund Lilley had my full sympathy!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Jan 8th, 2004, 10:12am
*huggles Rachel and assures her that class doesn't matter a scrap to Aussies*

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Chloe on Jan 8th, 2004, 12:30pm
Please may we have soem more Alex!  :)

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachael on Jan 8th, 2004, 1:51pm
Alex,

This is a lovely story, thank you, and I'm looking forward to Giles becoming increasingly more likeable if he's to be suitable for our Peg!!

I don't usually LOL at serious drabbles but some of the yibblling on this thread is hilarious - I particularly enjoyed Pat's succinct descriptions of Giles!!  ;D

Please may we have some more soon ... before the yibbling takes over?!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Alex on Jan 8th, 2004, 8:03pm
But I thought you liked the yibbling Rachael.

Later that evening, Lala was putting the final touches to the Christmas tree, when Polly came in with a bundle. Lala looked up and smiled at her sister as she came in. Polly thrust the bundle at her.

“What’s this?” asked Lala, taking it.

“See for yourself,” came the curt reply.

Lala unfolded the material and found that it was the old winter socks of their fathers that they used for Christmas stockings.

“Mother says we’re all four of us to hang them up together now,” announced Polly.

“I see,” said Lala. “Why the long face?”

“As if you didn’t know. You know he’ll laugh in my face if I suggest it,” said Polly, leaving no doubt as to who was going to laugh.

“Polly,” said Lala, “you are being very childish over this.” She paused. “And if there is one thing he hasn’t done since coming here it is laugh. I’ll go and ask him. You fetch Freddie.” She suited the action to the word and left the room.

Eventually she tracked Giles down to the study, where he was speaking to her father.

“Sorry to interrupt,” she said breezily.

“Lala!” exclaimed her father as if had not seen her for a twelvemonth. “What can we do for you? Editorial advice for that marvellous publication of yours?”

Hiding a smile at the expression on Giles face she shook her head.

“No, no, I’ve just brought Giles his stocking to hang up for Father Christmas. We’re just doing them now.”

Giles is face was stony, and he seemed about to dismiss his step-sister, but then changed his mind and held out his hand for the sock.

“By Jove! I wouldn’t have thought these old things were still in one piece. Excuse me, Dad.” He followed Lala out of the study into the sitting room where Polly was helping Freddie fix his stocking to the mantelpiece.

“I can’t believe these old things are still in one piece,” he repeated. “Why, I remember one time…” He came to a halt.

“What?” demanded Freddie, getting over his fear of this older brother sufficiently to speak to him.

There was a moment of silence. “Nothing,” replied Giles. A faraway look came into his eyes and Polly and Lala both realised he must be thinking of his own childhood, when his mother was still alive. Freddie was about to ask again, but Polly saw him and kicked him before he could. Freddie said “Ow,” Polly had kicked him pretty hard considering she was only wearing slippers, but he said it quietly so as not to upset her. The moment was lost.

The two girls spoke of it after they had gone to bed that evening. Polly summed up her feelings.

“I felt he just might be human. For the first time he seemed to be an actual person. With emotions. And I felt as if we really could manage to be a family this Christmas. Now, read to me.” She picked up the New Testament from beside her bed (it was not normally kept there but she had got it off the shelf earlier in preparation). They had heard of the custom of reading the Gospel story at home on Christmas Eve from the Continental at school and thought it rather beautiful. 

“‘At that time the Emperor Augustus ordered a census to be taken throughout the Roman Empire,’” began Lala.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Jan 8th, 2004, 9:43pm
Thank you Alex! More soon please!!!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Lesley on Jan 8th, 2004, 10:07pm
That was lovely! Many thanks Alex.

(Would like even more please!)


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Abi on Jan 8th, 2004, 10:19pm
Come on Alex, write some more.......please! This is sooooooooooooooooooo good!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by xanthe on Jan 8th, 2004, 10:22pm
Yay!  Thank you Alex, this is SOOOOOOOOOOOO good!  ;D

*would also like some more asap*


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachel on Jan 8th, 2004, 10:25pm
** Jumps up and down shrieking for more **

 

This is so good - and feels really christmassy!

(Which is probably a good thing bearing in mind the title! doh!)


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Peggy on Jan 8th, 2004, 10:40pm
*rubs sore ankle caused by falling downstairs*

Oh! I was so embarrassed by being so clumsy today.  I hope Polly and Lala's brother doesn't think I'm a complete idiot.  He didn't seem quite as bad as they make out, though.  Oh well, it doesn't really matter, I don't suppose I'll ever meet him again after this visit.

Auntie Bridgy was reading the tealeaves at breakfast again this morning.  Rix says it's a lot of nonsense but Auntie Bridgy kept looking at me very oddly when she was going on about meeting a tall, dark and handsome stranger...


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Susan on Today at 12:30am
Hello Peggy it's nice to see you here, thank you for your side of the story.

Alex brilliant story just spoilt by one thing   -  it's too short!!!
More soon please.


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Catherine_B on Today at 12:49am
Nice to see a thoughtful side to Giles (seeing as he'll be presumably be spending more time with our Peg in the near future ;))  Thank you, Alex! 

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Esmeralda on Today at 1:05am
Thank you, Alex, but pleeeease may we have some more soon........

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Today at 4:44am
Lovely, Alex! I'm glad Polly and Lala are growing up to become such decent people!

And Peggy, it's lovely to see you again!

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachael on Today at 9:02am
Alex, I do like the yibbling but your story is much better!  :D

Please may we have some more and soon - looks as though Giles is going to become his true self very soon and I'm looking forward to more Christmassy bits ...


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Today at 9:59am

on 01/09/04 at 09:02:07, Rachael wrote:
Alex, I do like the yibbling but your story is much better!  :D

Well, certainly equally good...


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Rachael on Today at 10:36am
*chuckle*

I wonder how Alex will react to her wonderful story being described as "equally good" to yibbling?!


Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by KB on Today at 10:47am
Well, it was meant in a good way...

Title: Re: A Christmas Romance  #2
Post by Vikki on Today at 9:40pm
Of course, we wouldn't need to yibble if we had story to read........

(aims subtle hint in Alex's direction)

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