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Title: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 15th, 2003, 9:19pm I fancied a serious Chalet school story that we could all contribute too, so here goes. Len, Con and Margot stood
quivering outside the dooor of thier fathers study,
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 15th, 2003, 9:26pm Jack rose, his face red with anger, 'You girls - you realise that you have committed a terrible crime, blackmail, which has ended up in the disappearence of a peer. Len you have been disobedient and devious in the reading of books, obviously not suitable for babies of your age. Con you have used youir talents in a way most evil. Margot, you have turned away from your conscience and not lead in a positive manner. Len you will be deprived of novels until i see fit, Con, all writing materials will be confiscated except for at lesson time and Margot you will have a lesson a week with me about morality and leadership. All three of you will be separated for the present, unitl i deem you mature enough to be otherwise. If i can get you back into the school, you will be moved into classes suitable for your age group, one in upper three A, and one in each of the lower fourths. You may go.' |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Lesley on Sep 17th, 2003, 5:32pm Only just seen this - it's really good! Keep going Marianne. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 17th, 2003, 5:53pm Feel free to continue anyone! It was just a weird idea! |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 17th, 2003, 5:58pm The three triplets left, very subdued and very scared - would miss Annersley have the three back? Would Mamma get better? |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Richenda on Sep 17th, 2003, 9:33pm The three girls ran upstairs to the pretty bedroom they shared. Margot threw herself face down on the bed, Len chose a chair by her desk and Con sat on the window ledge. The three were silent for a few moments, broken by Len "What are we going to do?" she wailed "Mamma's really ill and it's all our fault" "And what will we do if we aren't allowed back to school?" added Con "We'll be sent back to England!" Margot suddenly sat up, her eyes flashing an face as red as her curls. "Well I think Dad is a [/i]mean[i]" she said "We were only trying to stop that horrible Yseult being mean to the prees. Yseult is just a...a....a....[/i]pig[i]" Her sisters looked shocked. Margot had always struggled with her "Devil" as she called her temper. Con tried to smooth down Margot's ruffled feathers, but with her usual lack of tact succeeded in making matters worse, resulting in the youngest triplet storming out of the bedroom. A door slammed downstairs told them that she had marched straight out of the front door of Freudesheim. Len turned to Con in dismay
"Oh it's a thousand times worse now - we aren't supposed to go out without
permission"
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 18th, 2003, 4:18pm 'Well we can't go out can we?' said Len. 'We have to Helena, we can't let Margot get into more trouble, she wouldn't be in trouble if it wasn't for us - YOU!' exclaimed Con, she was frustrated with herself for going along with Len's blackmail campaign and angry that len didn't feel the same loyalty towards herself and Margot as they had towards her. 'What do you mean ME?' yelled Len in reply. 'It's your fault we three are in trouble with the Abbess in the first place, if you had just let us report Yseult in the first place instead of trying to take it on yourself we would be at school still! You didn't have to try to be responsible you know Len, you are only half an hour older than me!' said Con. 'Well, you've both got brains in your heads - you could have done something about it yourself, you don't have to follow me all the time!' Len said indignantly. 'But we're triplets Len, something you don't seem to understand, we have to stick together! I'm going to find Margot - you stay here if you want! Selfish!' she finished before stalking out of the room. Len sat firmly on her bed, put her head in her hands and wept - all she wanted to do is make her parents proud of her, to fulfill their expectations of her. In this attempt however she had annoyed her closest friends (con and Margot) and mayed her mother very ill indeed. Con found that Margot had
gone only so far as the front steps where her anger had left her and she
had dropped to the floor and cried as bilterly as her eldest sister.
The pair returned to their bedroom where Len lay face down on her bed, crying. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Lesley on Sep 20th, 2003, 2:38pm Excellent - like it that for once Len is the one at fault! ;D |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Jennie on Sep 20th, 2003, 5:19pm I agree, Lesley. It's good to see someone who is always perfect, well-behaved and responsible, behaving in this way. I hope there's going to be a lot more of this, Marianne. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 21st, 2003, 12:04pm The whole day passed without further word from their father and they went to bed, exhausted by the emotions of the day. There father walked into
their bedroom, the first thing the next morning,
'Did you see his face? We
are expelled i know we are!' exclaimed Margot, the slight tendancy towards
selfishness comeing out.
Breafast was eaten quickly
since the three couldn't bring themselves to eat too much,
All the anger that Margot
and Con felt towards Len melted away and they already felt the pain of
their impending separation.
(i'm just making this up off the top of my head so...) |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Lesley on Sep 21st, 2003, 12:12pm That's the best way Marianne! ;D This is really good! |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 21st, 2003, 12:16pm It's wonderful! I'd never thought Jack would take it that far, although he will feel terrible later if/when Joey dies and he realises that they will always blame themselves for her death because of what he told them. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 21st, 2003, 1:54pm Len ran, she wasn't sure why or where but she ran until she fell over. She down at the foot of the tree and promtly burst into tears, she cried for her mother, for the mistakes she'd made, she cried for herself and the horrible punishment that had been inflicted upon her but most of all she cried for her reputation, she had let herself down, they all expected her to be responsible and perfect and so when she wasn't it seemed much, much worse. Len sat for sometime and began to feel cold for the winter was fast approaching, she couldn't bring herself to go home and besides she didn't know exactly where she was so by and by she drifted off into an uneasy sleep. Meanwhile Margot and Con
were frantically calling her althought they had not left the boundries
of their land,
The pair once again found
themselves outside their fathers study,
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 21st, 2003, 1:57pm Not sure where to go now - its finishing a leetle quickly! I may have to kill both Joey
and Len.
(what would you most like?) |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Lesley on Sep 21st, 2003, 2:07pm on 09/21/03 at 13:57:31, Marianne wrote:
Well there's always the scenario of the Gornetz Platz being hit by a meteor! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 21st, 2003, 2:08pm ( A tiny little cliff hanger for you!) 'Yes i suppose you two ought to come. You might find one of her vests and i will get the dog.' Jack said, for although he was angry he was naturally very anxious about his eldest daughter. 'Thankyou Papa, come on Margot!' Con said, finding her voice. 'Good girls...hang on, let me get the phone i'll put them off.' Jack said, now caught up in the moment. Ten minutes or so past and
the girls were ready and waiting to search for their sister, Jack returned.
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 22nd, 2003, 12:12am My vote - kill Len and Joey, and give Jack and nervous breakdown! |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 22nd, 2003, 4:47pm 'Len is a naughty, disobedient girl, you may find her if you wish!' Jack said before walking out of the door. 'we have to find Len, Margot.' said Con, worried that her sister may walk too. 'I know, come on Bruno!' ordered Margot, so the dog and Con followed their new leader out of the house. They walked and called for half an hour following Bruno who had a strong sent of one of his mistresses, eventually they saw a small heap on the ground which looked suspiciously like Len. 'Len! Len, wake up! We've found you! We have to go to Mamma coz she's really ill!' called Margot, obviously delighted they had found her eldest sister. 'Margot - ' Len began but stopped when she saw the strange behaviour of Bruno the dog. He was stood in front of the other two triplets growling angrily and seemingly attempting to push them back. Sudenly the sleepy Len saw the reason, 'Margot! Look out! The tree!' she cried for a large branch of a tree was cracking and coming loose, 'W-what? Get off, bruno!' she shouted irritatedly. 'The tree - ' Len cried again, bounding over to Margot and shoving her bodily out of the way but triping over her untied shoe lace and falling. The branch fell...to Con and Margot it was in slow motion but to Len it was alll too quick, she had no chance to get out of the way, she couln't see it fall for she was lying face down but it landed hard on her lower back. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Esmeralda on Sep 22nd, 2003, 4:53pm Does s he die? Or will she just be paralysed? |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 22nd, 2003, 5:00pm Not sure yet Esmerelda - waiting eagerly for votes. This story has no plan (you might have guessed!) i just make it up as i go. (ANYONE REALLY FEEL FREE TO BUTT IN!!!) |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 22nd, 2003, 11:39pm Oh, no, Marianne. You started this story - you finish it! And I vote for a temporary paralysis, at least. (Shades of Seven Little Australians here, I think.) |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 23rd, 2003, 7:58am I thought someone would work that one out - that's a great book though - perhaps temproray paralysis then!!! |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Jennie on Sep 23rd, 2003, 8:52am Does Jack also get to regret how he's behaved? I hope so. I really don't like to think he'd reject a paralysed child. Hoping that this drops a big hint. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 23rd, 2003, 4:36pm 'Oh - my -God!' said Con. 'Stop standing their like a stranded cod fish - lets get this thing off Len!' ordered Margot. 'Yes-erm-right. Don't wrooy Len, we'll help you.' The too little girls heaved but it was no use, the branch was a big heavy thing from an old pine tree; 'I know!' said Margot with a stroke of Genius, 'Tie a note to Bruno and he'll take it to Papa!' 'Um - i have no paper.' squiremed Con. 'What kind of Author and Guide are you Constance Maynard!?' asked Margot for she to had left the house without thinking of the need for paper. 'Oh, you two - i have paper, if you can get your hand to my pocket...' gasped Len for the pain was great. 'thank God someone is prepared.' Margot whispered, she didn't like the paleness of her sisters face. Margot got down on all fours and reached into the depths of her sisters dress, 'Got it! - and a pen - quick Con, your the neatest, tell Papa to follow Bruno, he'll know what to do!' exclaimed Margot - she had great faith in their marvellous saint Bernard. Con did as she was bade and sent the Dog off to find their Papa. Meanwhile at the San Jack was sitting by the bedside of his sick wife, she was sleeping restlessly but eventually her eyelids rose to reveal bright feverish eyes; 'My babies...' she uttered.
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Carolyn P on Sep 23rd, 2003, 6:26pm So much misery. Will Joey die as he goes off to help? If she did, would he be able to forgive Len for neither of them being there? Or are you going to give this a happy ending? |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 23rd, 2003, 8:54pm (I know - it wasn't going to be in the slightest bit miserable - i wasn't going to write it! I don't think its going to be too unhappy an ending.) The intelligent Canine knew what he had to do, he understodd, 'fetch Jack' and bounded off with the note under his collar (how can you be taking this seriously?). Soon he reached the San and Nurse Fobbs found the note, read it and ran off to fetch her boss - Dr Maynard. 'Dr...Sorry to disturb you but your dog has come in here with this note - you need to read it!' sghe exclaimed paying no heed to Joey. 'What? give it to me!' Jack read the note which just told him to follow bruno - fast. 'What is it Jack - is it my girls?' Joey uttered, not opening her eyes but sensing something was wrong. 'Yes darling, i am going to get them...Hang on my darling...' he finsished before rushing from the room. 'Nurse Fobbs, get Jem, we might need an abulance, tell him two minutes. I'll be next to the abulance.' Ordered Jack. Jem came and the two sped off in the ambulance, Bruno leading the way (i know that dosn't make sense!) 'Look! I can see them! Oh my God, look at Len, Len!Jem, my baby!' excalimed Jack already cursing himself. 'Don't fret Jack, she's still alive - we'll get her out and back to the san.' Jam replied much more clamly than he felt. The pair of strong doctors
lept out of the ambulance and moved over to where Len was lying, face down,
pale and shivery.
'Sort of Papa but i do feel awfully queer.' 'I know darling, but you've done shock in guides havn't you? Thats probably what you have.' said Jack. 'oh.' Jack knew what that meant,
the likley hood was that Len would bleed to death once the branch was lifted
off her - but they had to try. With one man at each end and the opther
two triplets holding her hands they removed the Branch from Len's back,
she let out a cry of pain and fell unconcious. They lifeted her onto the
stretcher and itno the ambulance.
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Lesley on Sep 23rd, 2003, 9:07pm OOOOh! This is good Marianne - can't think why you don't like it - keep going!! |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Esmeralda on Sep 23rd, 2003, 10:26pm Please Marriane, it should get really interesting if both Jo & Len are hovering on the brink of death and Jack is torn between the two of them.....not that I'm trying to influence you of course! |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 23rd, 2003, 10:50pm Hmm, maybe they'll be in beds next to each other and can hold each others' hands as they die... |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Esmeralda on Sep 23rd, 2003, 10:58pm *Sniggers |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Vikki on Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:30pm KB and Esmeralda, I don't believe the two of you are treating this situation with the appropriate degree of gravity!!!! :o :o |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:43pm I am completely serious (I'll take it the use of 'grave' wasn't meant as a pun - dead, grave, never mind) and think it would make a lovely, touching scene. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Vikki on Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:48pm on 09/23/03 at 23:43:32, KB wrote:
It definitely wasn't meant
as a pun!
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 24th, 2003, 1:46am That's all right. I forgive you. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 24th, 2003, 2:29pm Soon the ambulance was heading for the san, the unconcious Len on board with Margot and Con at her side. By they time they reached to hospital Len had ceased to breath, it seemed that she had gone into shock, the doctors however were working manically to save her life. 'Hello girls, are you here to see your Mamma?' asked nurse Green, who knew the Maynards by sight. 'We came with Len - Papa's gone with her. Is Mamma alright?' Margot garbbled, she hardly dared to beleive what was happening to her. 'Oh - goodness, was that your triplet? I wondered when i saw Dr Maynard crying. Don't worry, i'm sure she'll be alright, come and say hi to your Mamma.' she said, not understanding what the missing triplet meant for Joey. Margot and Con dared not argue with the brisk nurse and they were lead into a pretty yellow side room where Joey Maynard lay sleeping alone. 'Mamma,' whispered Con, alarmed by her mothers ill appearance. 'Girlies, is that my girlies - Len - Len are you alright?' she stammered, not fully concious. 'Len isn't here, she's a bit poorly, Papa's with her.' Maegot said truthfully. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Esmeralda on Sep 24th, 2003, 11:56pm Apologises and grovels to KB for sniggering - it is a moving and touching scene, in print. Unfortunately I had a sudden visualisation of how it would appear as filmed in a totally OTT and sentimental melodrama. Also apologies to Marrianne for not appearing to take it seriously, I am honestly, I found the line about what the missing triplet would mean to Joey particularly moving. *Pleads temporary insanity due to too much CBB, if one can have too much of such a good thing, and not nearly enoogh sleep. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 25th, 2003, 6:28pm *Its alright, my egp and self esteem is at an all time high! So now! :P* |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Vikki on Sep 25th, 2003, 11:07pm Marianne, stop poking your tongue out and get posting, young lady!! ;) ;) |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 26th, 2003, 3:52pm 'I want my Len - my len! If i pass without her knowing i forgive her, without me telling her i love her, i shall die a bad mother! I don't want that! I want my Helena, my first born!' Joey shouted in her delirum. Margot and Con were frightened, 'Get Papa Con, we need Len!' oreder Margot, offering a prayer to her gaurdian angel at the same tie wishing she had the wisdom of her eldest sister. Con ran down the corridor
where she had seen the doctors take Len,
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Esmeralda on Sep 26th, 2003, 4:04pm :'( Nooo. I didn't think you were going to let her die without seeing Len, and without Jack being there either! :'( How awful for them all. *Searches for communal tissue box. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 26th, 2003, 4:26pm *sorry - had to be done - i'm just making it up as i go so whatever creaps into my head first - happens.* By and by Jacks tears subsided and full gravity of the situation hit him, his wife was dead, his strength, his rock, his child was paralysed from the waist down and would probably be in a wheel chair for ever more. His third daughter was bitter and blamed him for what had happened and in his heart he knew that she was right and young Con was in shock, she stoiod staring unblinkingly at her mothers body, no tears had rolled down her cheaks, a sob hadn't escaped her body. 'Darlings, let us leave this place, let us go to Len for she needs us. Mamma is with the little christ child now.' he said finally. 'There is no Christ Child but i shall come to Len.' Margot said coldly, Con simply follwed her without uttering a word. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Lesley on Sep 26th, 2003, 4:32pm :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(Sniff! (PS More please) |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Esmeralda on Sep 26th, 2003, 4:40pm :'( :'( :'( :'( That's even sadder than the last part! And to think you said something about giving them a happy ending earlier! Echoes Lesley's plea for more. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Carolyn P on Sep 26th, 2003, 6:44pm Tissues please. There is a small lake forming on my keyboard. What will happen to them now. Can't believe it happened. Not like that, with none of us there. *feeling bereft* |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 26th, 2003, 8:02pm The three tortured individuals walked solemly into Len's room where she lay flat on her back, 'Its Mamma - isn't it?' questioned Len, in her heart knowing the answer. 'Yep. I'm sorry Len. But you have to know that she wanted to forgive you, she said she loved you.' Margot said, her maturity astounding her father. 'I knew. When you didn't come back - i knew.' said Len, tears rollign down her cheeks. |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by KB on Sep 26th, 2003, 10:58pm *digs out three massive boxes of tissues and offers them around* |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Vikki on Sep 27th, 2003, 12:06am *feels traumatised!* |
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Title: Re: SCS The Chalet school triplets Post by Marianne on Sep 27th, 2003, 6:26pm *offers necassary councelling service* Jack and his three eldest
daughters wept together but they didn't feel united in their greif, Jack
was beginning to feel an overwheling sense of guilt, as was Len. Margot
felt angry while Con just felt numb with shock.
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