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(Message started by: Marianne on Sep 2nd, 2003, 1:32pm)

Title: The far, far future
Post by Marianne on Sep 2nd, 2003, 1:32pm
A white haird old ladysat in a wheel chair, blanket over her knee and a baby on her lap. She stared out at the beautiful scene and remebered that wonderful line, so often quoted by chaletians, she thought nothing of the worry her youngest daughter was going through. Joey Maynard had always vowed that she would remain a chaletian and even after 11 children and 30 grandchildren, she still was. Her youngest daughter had just given birth to her 4th child and at the same time asked her aging mother to leave her, her family and her school alone. The order had promted Joey into action and Joey had kidnapped the child, now the baby Elizabeth was screaming madly. 

Title: Re: The far, far future
Post by Ciorstaidh on Sep 3rd, 2003, 4:15pm
LOL! MARIANNE!!!!!!

Like it though - especially working with the elderly, I can quite imagine this!!! I'm interested to see where this goes - pleeeze don't have too many deaths or accidents, but plenty of mayhem and confusion (Jo running away from Phil in her electric wheelchair sounds like fun!)

Suggestion: not intentional kidnap, rather Joey thinks Elizabeth is better off with her, Phil clearly isn't thinking straight and it's up to Joey to look after "her" youngest "child" ... that's possibly the way she'd see things, especially if she's got a degree of dementia.


Title: Re: The far, far future
Post by Marianne on Sep 3rd, 2003, 4:21pm
My thoughts exactly - please continue anyone, it was a huge plot bunny that attacked me!

Title: Re: The far, far future
Post by KB on Sep 3rd, 2003, 11:18pm
Did you want it to be amusing or serious? Are we making another Dr Venables?

Title: Re: The far, far future
Post by Carolyn P on Sep 3rd, 2003, 11:36pm
Sounds more like a pop idol !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: The far, far future
Post by Kathryn on Sep 4th, 2003, 1:25am
Where's a gold lame skirt and Aunt Susan when you need them? ;D

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