#1: Murmured Words Author: Ally, Location: John Bettany's Cabin!Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:04 am My entry for Mia's challenge. Italics are EBD's words.
Goodbye, girls — Joey-baba, take care of yourself.’ He held Jo close for a moment, murmuring something in her ear.
‘I’m proud of you Jo,’ and Joey could tell from his quiet faltering voice that he meant it. ‘Both Madge and I are, we love you.’
Joey felt the back of her eyes prick as he ended, and fought to prevent the tears from falling, though she acknowledged the words that meant so much with a slight nod.
‘Now you mustn’t worry about us, I will take good care of Madge, of all the family and those friends I can. You must focus your journey, it won’t be easy and you will need you to be strong for everyone.
There was a pause then Joey realised he was smiling. ‘You have Jack now but it’s been a pleasure to have shared responsibility for you. God bless you and we will see you very soon in happier times.
Then he released her, and departed. They heard his footsteps dying away down the passage, and they were alone again. Jo, with a startled expression on her face, turned to helping to clear up, for they must leave no traces of their presence here.
#2: Author: Mia, Location: LondonPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:08 am How wonderful, that's exactly the sort of thing I always thought Jem said!
*wells up*
Thanks Ally *snuggles*
#3: Author: Alison H, Location: ManchesterPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:13 am Thanks Ally.
#4: Author: Róisín, Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:28 pm
Thanks Ally, that was lovely.
#5: Author: leahbelle, Location: KilmarnockPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:40 pm That was really moving. I do like Jem.
#6: Author: Josie, Location: LondonPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 2:07 pm Awww, thanks Ally, Lovely to see a nice Jem for once - that's him just as I imagine him to be.
#7: Author: Fatima, Location: Sunny QatarPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 3:02 pm Yes, that's the sort of thing I imagined, too. Thanks, Ally.
#8: Author: KathrynW, Location: LondonPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 3:36 pm Thank you Ally, that was lovely.
Kathryn
#9: Author: Nell, Location: London, EnglandPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 4:03 pm Thank you Ally - lovely!
*bounces*
#10: Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!!Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:01 pm Thanks Ally! (My nosy streak has always wanted to know WHAT Jem whispered to Jo to produce that startled look!)
#11: Author: Chair, Location: Rochester, KentPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:22 pm Thanks, Ally. Jem said exactly the right words there.
#12: Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, EnglandPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:30 pm That was lovely
Thanks, Ally
#13: Author: keren, Location: IsraelPosted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:21 am Well that was somethnig we always wanted to know
#14: Author: aitchemelle, Location: West SussexPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:47 pm I'm really glad I finally know what Jem said!
Thanks Allyhon!!
#15: Author: Kate, Location: IrelandPosted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 4:45 pm Thanks Ally. I wish that scene had been left in.