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#1: Drabble Challenge End of the Holiday Author: Mel, Location: UP NORTH

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 6:10 pm
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The dark girl and the fair young man chatted companionably as they relaxed in the hotel garden.
"What about a stroll?"
"Good scheme!"
"Come on infant."
The seven year old girl scrambled to her feet. "Rather! Where are we going?"
"You choose," said the young man amiably.
"Oh please - by the lake near the pretty chalet."
Soon all three were walking in the soft September sunshine.
"I shall miss all this in India," sighed the young man.
"And I shall miss you, Dick," said Madge wistfully.
"Cheer up old lady - you'll have plenty to do. Baby will see to that!"
"I know she will, bless her, and how well she looks, but sometimes I wish there was more. for me to do..."
They were interupted by Joey dancing excitedly along the lake path.
"There it is Madge. Isn't it pretty?"
They gazed at the chalet with its balconies and cheerful frescoes.
"I wish we could stay here for ever, don't you Madge?" asked Joey longingly.
Madge looked at the blue waters of the Tiernsee, at the chalet which attracted them so, but mainly at Joey's tanned face and healthy looks.
"So do I Joey - so do I."

#2: Author: Fatima, Location: Sunny Qatar

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 6:28 pm
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That was great, thanks Mel.

#3: Author: Lesley, Location: Allhallows, Kent

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 6:29 pm
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Lovely story.

Thanks Mel.

#4: Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 9:35 pm
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That is lovely, nice and simple.

#5: Author: Alison H, Location: Manchester

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 9:55 pm
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Lovely - thanks, Mel.

#6: Author: Josie, Location: London

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 10:02 pm
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Loved that, Mel. Thanks. Very Happy

#7: Author: KathrynW, Location: London

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 11:58 pm
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That was really beautiful, thanks Mel Very Happy

#8: Author: Nell, Location: London, England

Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:24 am
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Lovely, thanks Mel.

#9: Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire

Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:10 pm
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Thanks, Mel, that was great.

#10: Author: Mia, Location: London

Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 2:20 pm
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Lovely, thank you Very Happy

#11: Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England

Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 2:20 pm
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Lovely Very Happy

Thanks, Mel

#12: Author: leahbelle, Location: Kilmarnock

Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:11 pm
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Thanks, Mel. That was really nice.

#13: Author: Chair, Location: Rochester, Kent

Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:02 pm
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Thanks, Mel. I'm glad they were able to return to the chalet a few years later.

#14: Author: aitchemelle, Location: West Sussex

Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:39 pm
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Luffly! Thank you Mel! x

#15: Author: Ruth B, Location: Oxford, UK

Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:11 pm
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Very very loverly. Thank you Mel!

#16: Author: La Petite Em, Location: Cheltenham

Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 9:51 pm
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What a great idea!!! I love Joey in this- she was so much nicer as a young child!
Thanks Mel Very Happy

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