#1: An new start... Author: Sarah, Location: Ormskirk, LancashirePosted: Thu May 11, 2006 7:49 pm (short but complete - my first attempt!)
Jo nervously made her way up the front path to the house that stood in front of her, waiting. She stopped a moment to glance round. Behind her, Jack smiled encouragingly. Drawing confidence from his warm smile, Jo took a deep breath and once again fingered the silver key she held in her hand. She raised her hand to the lock, fitted the key and turned it. As the door opened, Jo felt her heart do a flip-flop. She crept into the hall and stood looking around with wonder. A mix of emotions threatened to overwhelm her and she turned once again for her husband. As he wrapped his comforting arms around her, she exclaimed, “Oh Jack – our first home together!”
#2: Author: Eilidh, Location: MacclesfieldPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 7:52 pm Lovely - nice to see them happy together. Thanks Sarah.
#3: Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, EnglandPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 8:26 pm Ah! That was so sweet.
#4: Author: grover, Location: DublinPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 8:49 pm Oh, how nice! Hope you go on to write lots more,Sarah!
#5: Author: KathrynW, Location: LondonPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 10:13 pm That was lovely Sarah, thank you
Kathryn
#6: Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeriesPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 10:29 pm Gorgeous.
Thanks Sarah
#7: Author: Alison H, Location: ManchesterPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 11:54 pm That was lovely - thanks Sarah .
#8: Author: Fatima, Location: Sunny QatarPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:52 am Oh, that was so sweet, thanks, Sarah.
#9: Author: Chair, Location: Rochester, KentPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:27 am Thanks, Sarah. It was lovely to see the moment when they moved into their 1st home. I'm just sorry that they had to leave again so quickly.
#10: Author: RuthY, Location: Anyone's guessPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:47 pm Awww, that was lovely. Thank you, Sarah.
#11: Author: leahbelle, Location: CoventryPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 6:53 pm That was really lovely!
#12: Author: La Petite Em, Location: CheltenhamPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 4:55 pm Thanks sarah, that was lovely!!
#13: Author: Róisín, Location: Galway, EirePosted: Wed May 17, 2006 5:04 pm Beautiful Sarah, thank you
#14: Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, EnglandPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 5:48 pm Thanks Sarah - that was lovely
#15: Author: Kat, Location: AbertawePosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:38 pm Very sweet and perfect!
#16: Author: Josie, Location: LondonPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:58 pm Aw, that's made me feel all warm and fuzzy!