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Title: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 9th, 2004, 10:38pm Archived for length part 1 (http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/xmasrom.htm) part 2 (http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/xmasrom2.htm) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Abi on Jan 9th, 2004, 11:23pm :o I clicked on this and it said it didn't exist! How scaaarrryyy! How about some more, Alex? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 10th, 2004, 12:17am *agrees that more story is very desirable* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Susan on Jan 10th, 2004, 1:35am Click on - no story? More please Alex. Off to catch up on other drabbles. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 10th, 2004, 3:26am Maybe we should stick around, just in case... |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Lesley on Jan 10th, 2004, 10:20am *Adding to pleas of more Alex.* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 10th, 2004, 2:23pm *starts organising the chanters properly, 'Right, on the count of three- one, two, three- chant!* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Cumbrian_Rachel on Jan 10th, 2004, 3:52pm *joins in the chanting* *gets the budgies to join in too* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 10th, 2004, 9:03pm *joins in organised rather than haphazard chanting* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Abi on Jan 10th, 2004, 11:23pm *chants vociferously* Why is there no mooooooooooore? Alex! Where are you? :'( *shouts and stamps round looking for Alex* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:18am Is it time to get out the heat seekig equipment and sniffer dogs to go and find Alex again? The search party worked so well last time - and there was alcohol available too ;) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:20am *thinks another search party sounds sensible* *looks for her night-vision goggles* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Kathryn on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:27am *brings the sniffer dog and the GPS unit so we don't get lost bringing Alex back from whereever she is* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:37am ** packs a small rucksack with a first aid kit, bottle of water, poster of Orlando Bloom, pack of crackers, bar of chocolate, torch, whistle, string, pen knife, sandwiches, camera, diary, Travel KittensTM, spare socks, change of shoes, toilet roll, duvet, photo album, waterproof rain coat, welly boots, personal DVD player, pint of milk and a homing hamster ** |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:39am *wonders where Rachel got her "small" rucksack from, and if she could get one like it* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:41am ** small rucksack explodes ** ** Packs slightly larger rucksack with only the necessities: poster of Orlando Bloom, Travel KittensTM, homing hamster ** |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:44am on 01/11/04 at 01:41:02, Rachel wrote:
sounds like my Brownie's bags on Pack Holiday Rachel! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:53am on 01/11/04 at 01:44:19, xanthe wrote:
It's actually what more or less happens to me on a daily basis! I have a bag; it's function is to hold things. The bag NEVER manages to hold all the things I wish it to. I buy a bigger bag. It's function is to hold things. Pile of things for bag to hole increases proportionally. The bag never manages to hold all the things I want it to. I buy a new bigger bag. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:56am Aah... One of my bags once LITERALLY exploded... |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:58am Did it kill or maim anyone? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 1:59am er, not that I'm aware of... |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:04am ah well, better luck next time. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:13am *snickers* it was a bit annoying really, I was rather fond of that bag *sigh* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:15am I'll weave you a new one out of the hair on my back |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:16am *eebles in terror* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:32am be grateful it's not the hair on my front |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:32am *falls to the floor, grey, still, and to all appearances petrified* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:34am ** does a quick Shelob on Xan's still body ** |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:35am what, in the name of pantyhose, is that?? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:40am in the name of pantyhose, have you not read Lord of the Rings?? Seen the films?? Read the online reviews?? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:41am No, no, and no! yeech, Tolkein, yuck! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:43am SPOILER IF YOU HAVEN'T READ LORD OF THE RINGS YET Shelob is the most enormous spider. She clicks her clicky bits together in anticipation (a la Frank N Furter) and wraps Frodo's still body in her webby stuff to keep him fresh for eating later. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:45am Euw euw euw YUCK!!!!!!! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:46am Not at all! A sensible use of the resources available! Now be quiet, you're wrapped in webby stuff until Samwise comes to the rescue! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:49am Wonders who this Samwise is, and when they will come to the rescue... ::) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:53am Shhhhhhh! You have to wait til the Orcs have stripped you butt nakey and left you on the floor - only then can he come and become your hero and lover (or is that Frodo?) and escort you to a safe place. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Kathy_S on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:54am Samwise brandishes Frodo's sword Sting and rapidly removes nasty web. "Someone" sticks a pin in Shelob, as well. A great elven warrior probably. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:59am I actually have the feeling that Tolkien intended to rework LotR before it became so popular. In all honesty, I think I may have to tackle the job m self at some point in order to make sure the correct characters gain the prominence they were so clearly meant to get in the revised version of the book! There's a little plot bunny just appeared out of nowhere - says his name is JR and he wants me to get writing! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 2:59am *looks completely confuzzled by the whole thing* *wonders if this is a sign that it is past her bedtime* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:03am Don't leave me alone on the board Xan! I say alone, but what I actually mean is, don't leave me alone with the second pree! I may end up confessing all my wrongdoings if she gives me a certain look! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:05am *looks intrigued* *wonders if she can manage that "certain look"* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:06am ** shrieks in terror ** please don't do the look! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:08am *guggles menacingly* well don't go round threatening me with cockroach clusters then! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:09am <mutters under breath> wasn't a threat. was a promise |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:11am *Wonders if a "prominse" is in any way related to a promise...* ;) *gives Rachel "the look"* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:15am ** Quavers under the look, but musters courage to ask haughtily ** Whatever do you mean "prominse"? There's no such word my dear! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:31am must be that i am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sleepy i am imagining things ::) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:33am must be due to your sleepiness that you were guggling at me too! off to bed then sweetie - and come back ready for yibbling fun tomorrow ;) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:35am Nope, "guggling" is asthmaticy giggling... and part of the reason I am still awake :-/ |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:38am Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! * Hurls Xanthe into the Hugs
Box *
Revenge is oh so sweet ;D |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:47am *sails through the air, not tremendously gracefully, and disappears from sight* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 11th, 2004, 3:48am Ooooooops. Maybe I should have actually aimed the poor girl! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 11th, 2004, 6:41am *thinks it might have helped and goes off to search for Xanthe* *finds her groaning, two feet from the Hugs box* *huggles her and puts her inside* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Lesley on Jan 11th, 2004, 10:02am *Wonders if it is possible for an entire thread to be archived when containing no story just yibbling! ;)* Really wish we could have more story!! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 11th, 2004, 10:17am Of course it is, Lesley! One of my "Matey's Secret" threads was archived with just yibble after being hijacked while I slept sweetly in my ickle bed. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Pat on Jan 11th, 2004, 11:22am That was simple justice, KB! Or revenge on the master yibbler, whichever way you want to say it!! 8oo 8oo 8oo |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 11th, 2004, 8:12pm *wonders if Alex is ever coming back?* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Jan 11th, 2004, 10:53pm Allllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeex! I hope that you're ok
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 11th, 2004, 11:21pm on 01/11/04 at 11:22:57, Pat wrote:
So I should feel flattered? Is that what you're saying? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Abi on Jan 12th, 2004, 1:15pm *is very disappointed that there is STILL no more story (but giggling at the yibbling - hey that sort of nearly rhymes)* I think maybe we should make up a search party! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 12th, 2004, 2:59pm Okay, let's do this properly, who wants to go which way to look? ;D |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Jennie on Jan 12th, 2004, 8:07pm issuing maps, ropes, torches and all sorts of food and drink to the search parties. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 12th, 2004, 9:39pm *begins to prepare cocoa for the searchers up their return* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by PatMac on Jan 12th, 2004, 10:04pm they've been gone over 30 minutes - should we send Rufus after them? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 12th, 2004, 10:32pm Didn't they take Rufus with them? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Pat on Jan 12th, 2004, 10:35pm on 01/11/04 at 23:21:53, KB wrote:
Whuchever way you want to take it, my dear! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 12th, 2004, 10:47pm Thank you, I think. :-/ |
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tle: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alex on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:36pm Can't a girl have writers block in peace? I'm a bit stuck, so here is some lightish relief, not really relevant, unless it's to character development. It was Christmas morning and still dark outside. Giles switched on the bedside light and looked at his watch. Five o’clock. Why was he waking up at five o’clock in the morning like a small child. It was probably just as well, he had been having a most peculiar dream involving going to sea in a giant Christmas stocking. He turned over and tried to go back to sleep but there was too much going on in his head, maybe he should try and read for a bit. Lala seemed inclined to be bookish, it was likely there would be something not too tedious to read on her shleves. In fact tedious would not necessarily be bad as it might help him get back to sleep again. To think was to act. He flung off the covers, climbed out of bed and grabbed the first book to hand and hurried back into bed, shivering. He lay huddled under the covers for a minute or so until he was warm again and then looked at the book he had selected. Nancy Meets a Nazi by one Josephine M. Bettany. Not something he would have chosen normally, he was surprised Lala still had such childish books, but it was only until he fell asleep again and he was damned if he was getting out of bed again. Giles settled down to making the best of a bad job. At half past eight there was a knock on the door. Giles stirred, there was another knock and this time he woke up. “Come in,” he called. The door opened and Lala came in bearing a steaming mug of tea. “Merry Christmas, Giles,” she smiled, then her smile changed to a puzzled look. Giles followed her gaze and realised with embarrassment that Nancy was still lying on the covers where he had dropped it when he fell asleep. “Couldn’t sleep,” he muttered to Lala’s raised eyebrows. Lala nodded. “Breakfast will be ready at nine, and we’re going to church for ten, we’ll leave at quarter to.” She headed for the door, but paused with her hand on the handle. “There are some more Josephine Bettanys up there,” nodding towards the shelf, eyes twinkling, “including another one about Nancy if you’re interested.” |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:53pm Yay thank you LAex, we we were only worreid which is why we started the search :) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 10:30pm No, you MAY not have writer's block in peace! And that was great - thank you for a giggle! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 14th, 2004, 1:34am *huggles Alex over her writer's block* Thank you for that post honey!! Would love to hear Giles' opinion of 'Nancy'!!!! ;) ;D |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 14th, 2004, 1:36am I'd love to hear what Lalla tells Polly! 8oo |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alex on Jan 15th, 2004, 2:42pm After church the Wintertons wandered home, wrapped up well against the cold. “But at least it’s not raining,” Lala pointed out to Freddie when he mentioned it. Then she grabbed his hand and skipped down the lane singing Joy to the World, until her mother called her to order. Giles grinned in spite of his disapproval. Polly laughed and said it was a good job none of the Middles had seen that display of unladylike behaviour. “I have to be so good all the time now, it’s a relief to let in out in the holidays,” retorted Lala. Giles had found it difficult to concentrate during the service. Peggy Bettany was sitting in the row in front of him and he noticed that she, Bride and Maeve as well as his own two sisters seemed very serious and devout during the service. Not that everyone else in the church seemed to be fidgeting, but there was an aura of calm and at the same time happy energy in their two pews. God was obviously smiling on him that day, for Peggy did as she wished him a Merry Christmas. “Your brother looks tired,” mentioned Bride to Polly, when they were talking afterwards, luckily for Giles, as otherwise they would have been sure to see the look on his face as he returned the greeting warmly “No wonder,” returned Polly, “Lala claims he was up all night reading Nancy Meets a Nazi.” “What?” demanded Bride. “You mean ‘pardon’,” replied Polly, with a grin. “She says she saw it with her own eyes.” “A grown man reading one of Auntie Joey’s books?” Bride was stunned. “Are you sure?” “That’s what she says. I thought you thought her books were great.” “I do, I did, but he’s a grown up. Oh well, I suppose [i]Nancy is one of the best of them,” Bride calmly ignored the fact that she was herself quite grown up. Polly felt the need to point it out and did so. Bride was reduced to sticking her tongue out. “On second thoughts I could
be wrong,” murmured Polly to no-one in particular.
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alex on Jan 15th, 2004, 2:43pm Once they were home, Mr Winterton ushered his family into the sitting room, while Mrs Winterton checked on the turkey. Freddie was detailed to hand out the presents, but Lala cried “Stockings first!” All four of the second generation Wintertons had the same in their stockings: two satsumas, a bar of chocolate and an appropriately selected book. Giles was very touched by the trouble his step mother had gone to to find something he liked and said so. “Don’t thank me, thank Father Christmas,” she said, blushing with pleasure. Then the presents were passed round, and he noted that every gift, however small, had a huge amount of thought put into it in order to ensure that the receiver would like it. He was not naïve, and realised that not every member of his family had wanted him to be there but everything was given ungrudgingly. Polly had painted a beautifully stormy seascape, the light just breaking the clouds and Giles was astounded at his sister’s talent, and the time she must have put into the picture. Freddie had managed to find a flat pen and thought that this would be ideal for use on a ship as it would not roll. Lala presented him with a pair of beautifully carved bookends, explaining that they came from one of the villages near to her school. He suddenly felt overwhelmed and had to leave the room. Giles, as Bride said, was a grown man, and would have scorned to show emotion in public but the love that he felt within the family moved him greatly. He could not understand where it had come from, for he was sure it had not been there last time he had visited. Certainly a lot could happen in 8 years, but if it had been like this before, he would have come back a lot more often. A shame this stay was so short, he would have to make the most of the time left. Christmas dinner went with a swing. After lunch they went out for a walk (“Le digestif,” announced Lala in a (naturally) commendable French accent. “No, that’s a drink,” said Polly) and that afternoon they played all manner of games, including some favourite paper games which Polly and Lala insisted on introducing to everyone. Polly and Lala noticed that Giles’s mood seemed to have lifted and wondered what to attribute it to. “I even had a proper conversation with him,” Polly announced when they were tucked up in bed. “I wonder what is going on in his head. Perhaps,” she giggled, “it’s the effect of the profound writing of Josephine M. Bettany. Life-changing stuff.” “Personally, I think it must be the profound writing of the Chaletian, which he asked to see this afternoon. Or maybe it’s just because he’s realised we don’t hate him completely,” offered Lala. “Maybe he’s in love,” speculated Polly wildly. “With who?” asked Lala, crushingly. “Maybe…maybe it’s the magic of Christmas.” “Goodnight Lala,” Polly was
smiling into her pillow. The magic of Christmas, she thought, and they
say my sister has no imagination.
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Cumbrian_Rachel on Jan 15th, 2004, 3:19pm Thanks for that Alex! Really good!!! *feeling relieved that there was some story in there after all that yibbling ;)* *wondering when the next installment of the story will be* *hoping Alex's writers' block is over* *suggesting a chant might be started soon* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Jan 15th, 2004, 4:58pm Thanks Alex this is great :) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by xanthe on Jan 15th, 2004, 5:07pm Yippee! Thank you Alex this is fab! ;D |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 7:24pm Thank you Alex!! That was beautifully written!! Looking forward to more!! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by LauraT on Jan 15th, 2004, 7:43pm Alex this is lovely! I'm enjoying it so much! See, Giles is a sweetie really... :D More please! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by PatMac on Jan 15th, 2004, 8:14pm Thank you Alex. That's developing nicely. I love the way some minor characters get fleshed out and we get new insights into ones we thought we knew. Looking forward to more. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Lesley on Jan 15th, 2004, 10:08pm Thank you Alex - also impressed at how the characters are becoming human - even Giles! More please! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Liss the Fluffy Bunny on Jan 15th, 2004, 11:42pm I'm really enjoying this, Alex. We get such a rotten picture of Polly and Lala at the beginning of Peggy that it's lovely to see how they've matured. Giles is great - I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. (And can I - sorry, may I have it for the main site, please?) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Susan on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:07am Really nice Alex, love the happy family Christmas as they are anything but a happy family when we first meet them. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:55am Lovely work, Alex! I can see Giles softening in every post! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Abi on Jan 16th, 2004, 12:35pm *croaks hoarsely* Thank you Alex - so glad to see this back! I'm hoarse because I've been cheering at the new bits of the story ;D Are we allowed to chant yet? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alex on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:18pm Liss you can have it for the site if you tell me where to send it! The next week passed happily for the Wintertons and the Bettanys, apart from the incessantly falling rain, which meant they were often confined to their respective houses. Most of them had plenty of studying to occupy themselves with. One afternoon, it stopped long enough for Peggy and Bride to walk over to the Wintertons, with some winter vegetables from the garden. Mrs Winterton insisted that they stay for tea. “We’d better not,” said Peggy with a glance at her sister, “it might start raining any second.” At this point no less person than Giles interrupted. “Oh, I’m sure Polly could run you back if it does start to rain.” “Oh, we don’t want to be an inconvenience,” said Bride. “I’m sure it won’t be an inconvenience,” Mrs Winterton backed up her stepson. “Giles, will you call Freddie and ask him to set the table, dear. I’ll just put the kettle on. Luckily Lala made some buns from a patent Chalet recipe this morning so there will be plenty, as we still have some Christmas cake left.” Giles assented with a nod, and only Bride saw his smile as he turned and left the room. It started to rain again while they were sampling Lala’s interpretation of Frau Mieders buns. “It always seems to be raining in this place,” said Giles. “These buns are jolly good Lal.” “Thanks,” replied his sister. “It’s a shame it’s been like this the whole time you were here, Giles,” she continued. “You haven’t been able to see any of the area. There are some really beautiful places not to far away.” “I know!” some evil spirit moved Bride to exclaim. “We should plan an expedition for the first fine day. Where shall we go?” “To the mines,” said Lala the ever sensible, “then if it does rain we can be under cover.” “I don’t see how mines come under the headings of beautiful scenery,” laughed Giles. The others hastened to correct him. “They’re in a really beautiful area,” volunteered Polly. “They aren’t working mines, and there’s a funny little museum and they have guided tours of the mine. I think that’s a very good suggestion,” put in Peggy. “Can I come?” asked Freddie. “I should think so, I expect the second twins would like to come as well,” said Bride. They laid their plans for the first fine day. “And if there’s not a fine day before you go,” wound up Lala, “then you’ll just have to come back another time when the weather’s better.” Giles could not decide if he wanted the weather to get better or not. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:25pm on 01/16/04 at 14:18:05, Alex wrote:
Bless his cotton socks! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 4:16pm Thank you Alex - nothing nasty is going to happen in the mines is it? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by PatMac on Jan 16th, 2004, 5:11pm Lesley, you spoke (or wrote) my thought! Including the thanks to Alex. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Jan 16th, 2004, 5:19pm Yay thanks Alex this really is wonderful :) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 3:44am on 01/16/04 at 16:16:11, Lesley wrote:
I think it will. What was that about 'evil spirits'...? Maybe Peggy and Giles will get trapped behind a fall of rock... |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Kathryn on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:11am Just remember we have young people on the board! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:20am Which is exactly why I left it there, with three small dots... ;) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by catherine on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:27am *giggling wildly to self* I was just reading the first
part of this and had reached the yibbles on vacuum cleaners when suddenly,
an advert for a vacuum cleaner popped up! It was only when I closed
it down, I realised that there were several links to adverts for vacuum
cleaners on the page and I must have inadvertently clicked on one!!
8oo
Your yibbles are obviously
having a profound effect on Lycos! 8oo
Really enjoying the story, Alex, please keep going! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:00am Please may we have some more Alex i'm really enjoying this :) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:53am on 01/17/04 at 08:27:00, catherine wrote:
*joins in giggling* Today the board, tomorrow the world! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by LauraT on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:23am KB, isnt it about 4am where you are?! ??? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:56am Four AM?! *wibbles faintly* No, it's about 11pm. We're 11 hours ahead of the UK. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Jennie on Jan 17th, 2004, 12:52pm Dear Alex, may we have some very soon, please? Luv, Jennie |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Liss the Fluffy Bunny on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:35pm E-mail it to me, Alex: lisette@chaletian.co.uk |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:11pm Yay!! More soon please Alex!! ;) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:33pm Oh, yes, please, definitely more! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alison on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:43pm Adds newbie voice to plea for more! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:45pm It's great that you're getting so involved, Alison! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alison on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:13pm Aw, thanks KB! Don't want to intrude, but it's so much FUN! Even DH is getting into it - he's just said, "Are you planning on coming to bed or are you reading ANOTHER drabble?" Um - what a difficult decision ... ;D It's like discovering a whole shelf of CS books you haven't read. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:21pm on 01/17/04 at 23:13:11, Alison wrote:
Exactly! Alison. *grins* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:22pm Alison, I get comments like that too! It's par for the course, I'm afraid! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Jan 18th, 2004, 1:14am on 01/17/04 at 23:13:11, Alison wrote:
Glad you're enjoying yourself so much! And I think DH should resign himself to losing your attention... ;) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Jan 18th, 2004, 1:52pm Please may we have some more Alex :) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rebecca on Jan 18th, 2004, 4:51pm *Adds her rather tuneless voice to the chorus for more* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Sarah_G-G on Jan 18th, 2004, 8:13pm What will happen in the mines, then? *joins chant* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Today at 12:48am *joins the chant* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Susan on Today at 1:35am Also joining in the chant!! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Today at 3:57am *eagerly joins in chant* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by crashbb on Today at 3:58am *adds a painfully off-tune harmony to the chant |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Today at 4:17am *shoves in ear plugs while continuing to chant* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alison on Today at 8:23am *digs out guitar to strum along to the chant, in the hopes of restoring the tune* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Today at 8:44am *applauds Alion's musical ability* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alison on Today at 9:30am *bows to appreciative audience and hopes they don't notice she only knows three chords* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Today at 9:35am Well, I do still have my earplugs in... |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Abi on Today at 9:42am Alex, why isn't there any more? What happens in the caves? Please tellllllllll!!!!! *lip wibbles* |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by KB on Today at 10:01am Keep going, Abi! You might soften her hard heart! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alex on Today at 12:04pm You don't deserve this KB, after that comment.... As it happened it was a further two days before the rain stopped, but stop it did. Having confirmed the arrangement by phone, the four Wintertons packed themselves some turkey sandwiches and set off, with Polly driving, for the mines. Rix and John had declined the invitation and so, of the Bettanys, only Peggy, Bride, Maeve and Maurice made the trip, arriving at the museum some five minutes after the Wintertons. A large sign announced that there was only to be one tour of the mine that day, which would begin in about 40 minutes. They decided to look at the museum first, which wouldn’t take too long, then go on the tour and after that to go for a walk. As Bride said, “We can always go back to the museum afterwards if we need more time.” The time in the museum passed quickly. There was some old mining equipment and also possessions of people who had once worked the mine, including faded letters and diaries. There was also an account of a daring rescue which had taken place more than 100 years before when a tunnel had collapsed and ten men had been trapped for two days. They had been saved by the skill and courage of another miner who died in doing so. The museum was named in his honour. “I always think we should bring Auntie Joey here,” said Bride to Peggy, Polly and Lala, “I’m sure she could get a book out of it.” Overhearing, Giles asked “Does your aunt write books then?” As it happened, Peggy was the only one of the four who had not heard of the Nancy incident and she replied easily “Yes, mainly for children, although she does write adults books too. She writes under her maiden name – Josephine M. Bettany – but I wouldn’t expect that you’ve heard of her.” She could not understand why Giles turned darkly purple whilst Polly and Bride choked and Lala become fixated on something on the other side of the room. Fortunately at that point a man came into the room and addressed them, “Are you all for the tour?” Giles agreed that they all were. It turned out that they were the only people there so they all followed the man, who introduced himself as Eddie, into a back room, where he issued them each with a helmet and miners lamp. The lamp consisted of a large pack on a belt which was fixed around the waist. A thick lead ran from the pack to the lamp, which could be attached to the front of the hat. “But you won’t be doing that.” said Eddie, “Carry the lamp around your neck, it is only attached to the hat if you’re working. I’m glad to see you’ve all got sensible shoes and warm coats as it isn’t very warm down there, although at this time of year it’s warmer than outside. Yes, the packs are very heavy,” he added to Maeve who had muttered something to her twin and Freddie. He led them out of a door in the corner of the room and they found themselves outside. In front of them was the entrance to the mine, a rather ordinary looking door in a brick wall, he produced a key and unlocked the door. They followed him into the mine and he closed the door behind them. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Alex on Today at 12:05pm “The door can only be opened from outside with the key, but you don’t need the key to get out. We have to keep it locked from a safety point of view, there are many deep shafts and a maze of passageways. Now, this is not like a coal mine, where you would have to descend to a great depth to view the workings, rather the mine is cut into the side of a hill, and whilst it does go deeper in places, the upper level is easily accessible. Watch your footing, the ground is a little uneven in places.” The mine was dimly lit, but they had their lamps to see by as well. As the went forward into a mine Eddie showed them various things of interest including old workings, at one point he stopped them by a deep shaft which was fenced off. “This shaft is almost 200 feet deep and is, as you can see, full of water. Falling into water this deep can cause two problems. Firstly, you could drown. Secondly, if you are lucky enough not to drown, the pressure of such deep water can cause nitrogen gas to form bubbles in your blood and body tissues, this is known as the bends, it leads to some very unpleasant symptoms and can also kill you, although nowadays there is more that can be done about it, if you’re lucky enough to be in the right part of the country.” “What do you mean, the right part of the country?” asked Bride. “A piece of equipment called a decompression chamber is needed to treat the condition, they’re quite few and far between.” Bride nodded her thanks to Eddie. As they made their way on, she said to Peggy, “I’m glad we haven’t got young Margot and her devil here, she’d be all set for a swim.” Peggy agreed, “Perhaps it wouldn’t be such a good idea for us to bring Auntie Jo here.” They emerged into fresh air after about an hour and all blinked at the brightness of the day. Making their way back into the building, they discarded their lamps and thanked Eddie for the interesting tour. “What are you going to do now?” he asked them. “We’re going to take a walk up the hill and show Giles the view,” said Polly, “and find a sheltered spot to eat our sandwiches if we can.” “Well, you’ve a good day for it,” said Eddie. “Make sure you stick to the paths, mind. They’re all marked and we don’t want any accidents.” “What sort of accidents?” asked Freddie. “Because of the mining, the ground in some places isn’t very firm and could give way, especially as we’ve had so much rain lately. So be careful,” he replied. “We’ll be careful,” promised Freddie hastily. |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by PatMac on Today at 12:28pm Suspense! First I thought they would fall down the 200' shaft - too final, I guess. Then I thought the water would rise and trap them. Now I'm waiting for someone to fall down a hole - but who and who turns out to be a hero(ine)?? thank you for 2 sections, waiting patiently for the third! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Rachel on Today at 1:31pm I foresee a "Sense and Sensibility" style scenario with Peggy spraining her ankle and Giles doing the noble and carrying her for miles to safety. Guess I'm an old romantic deep down. Although, Giles could also shove Lala down one of those unsafe areas as payback for telling Bride about his reading habits, and when Peggy rushes to the rescue, he clonks her on the head with a big rock, flings her over his shoulder and does the chauvanist bit and marries her before she even comes round. Am I getting close Alex? |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Vikki on Today at 2:49pm Quickly Alex, post more before Rachel's imagination goes even wilder!! |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by LauraT on Today at 3:36pm on 01/19/04 at 13:31:31, Rachel wrote:
Very deep! And I was utterly expecting them not to be able to get out again, the river/whatever to flood, thus trapping them, and leaving them to swim for safety. (however, did see a film very similar to this a couple of days ago! the swimming to safety bit I mean!) ::) |
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Title: Re: A Christmas Romance ~ Part Three Post by Chloe on Today at 6:40pm Yay thanks Alex may we have some more soon please :) |
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