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(Message started by: Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 1:40am)

Title: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 1:40am
Archived for length

Part 1 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/TENSIO~1[1].DOC 

Part two http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tension2.htm

Part three http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensionagain.htm

Part 4 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/Tensions4.htm

Part 5 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensions5.html

Part 6 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensions6.html

Part 7 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensions7.html
 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:07am
Oh, look, Esmeralda! So much space and empty corners for you to fill!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:09am
*watches Esmeralda hightail it into the distance, searching for a hiding place!!*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:17am
Does Esmeralda suffer from agorophobia?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:24am
Nope! I think she was hiding from the 'more story' demands!! ;) ;D

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:27am
But we're all so nice, and appreciative, and polite about wanting more story, and... and... and... :'(

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:30am
*offers KB a tissue* :-*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:33am
Thank you. *blows nose very loudly*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:36am
You're very welcome!! :-*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 13th, 2004, 8:46am
Esmeralda, where are you? More story please!

Title: as Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 13th, 2004, 2:19pm
Off to ring threcomputer people!Sorry ladies, I just clicked onto the last unread drabble last night when my monitor went blank.  Obviously as I couldn't see anything I couldn't write, and it's just done the same now, I can only see very faintly.

Engineer can't come till Friday - as I don't think it's a very good idea to keep turning the screen on and off every 5 seconds I won't be around till then, unless I drag the old pc out!
I'll just have to do lots of writing the old fashioned way!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Jennie on Jan 13th, 2004, 4:02pm
Give them hell, Esmeralda, it's a new computer.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 10:31pm
*struggles very, very hard to be patient*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 14th, 2004, 1:40am
*huggles Esmeralda tightly and suggests that we all look forward to a mega posting session when Esmeralda gets the 'puter fixed* :-* :-*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 14th, 2004, 1:45am
*thinks that is an excellent idea*

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nicolette on Jan 14th, 2004, 11:57pm
I'm a wee bit confused... Con is engaged to Andrew, but Andrew who? I'm sure Esmeralda said Hamilton, but wasn't it NeilHamilton? 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:03am
No, it was Neil Sheppard. It was Ian Hamilton. 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nicolette on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:10am
Ok, so who is Andrew?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:12am
Perhaps an Esmeraldaism?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:27am
I think Andrew was Ian Hamilton's nephew? 

Am I right Esmeralda?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:36am
Is that from this story or canon?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:39am
From this story!

(we don't allow cannons, or any other types of heavy artillary on this board! ;))


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:43am
Ah, thank you. And  :P for your comment!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nicolette on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:45am

on 01/15/04 at 00:36:06, KB wrote:
Is that from this story or canon?

ignoring Vikki's smart-arse response  ;), what is canon? 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:54am
Canon is the stuff written by the original author, EBD in this case. 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:56am

on 01/15/04 at 00:43:01, KB wrote:
Ah, thank you. And  :P for your comment!

Oh, come on!! Don't try and tell me you'd have resisted that one!!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 1:02am
Hey, I never said I would!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Jennie on Jan 15th, 2004, 3:54pm
When did the CBB ever need cannons or heavy artillery? We can manage to kill enough people withour resorting to heavy weapons.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 7:09pm
Well, you do have a point there Jennie!! ;)

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 15th, 2004, 7:16pm
Re the Ian/Andrew Hamilton thing - I'm sure Esmeralda mentioned it - they are both his names - he was referred to as one - because a relative had the same name -but then reverted - something like that any way!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 16th, 2004, 3:06am
Ah, thank you, Lesley.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:28pm
Lesley is quite right, but so is the Esmeraldaism theory too, though I prefer to call it an EJBDism ;D  I started off calling Hamilton Andrew because I thought that was his name and I didn't bother to check even though I had the book next to me,  then someone pointed out tht his name was Ian, so then I wrote a bit about him reverting to name Andrew after his father died, as that was his name too.  His full name, for the purposes of this story, is Andrew Ian Hamilton.

Now the bad news - the computer isn't fixed yet - the engineer came round with a new graphics card this morning, and found out it was the monter after all, so it won't be sorted until Wednesday now GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR >:( >:(

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Susan on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:36pm
Sending huggles to Esmeralda.  Wednesday seems such a long time from Friday.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 3:10pm
Esmeralda that's terrible - it's a brand new machine - can't they just get a new one from the showroom?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Ally on Jan 16th, 2004, 3:44pm
Poor you Esmeralda, I hope it gets fixed soon ~ and so do a lot of other people  ;D

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 16th, 2004, 5:21pm

on 01/16/04 at 15:44:13, Ally wrote:
Poor you Esmeralda, I hope it gets fixed soon ~ and so do a lot of other people  ;D

Include me in that sentiment!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 8:20pm
Thanks for huggles and sympathy - I've set up the old pc again for now, the one where you type half a dozen words than wait for it to catch up!!

I've written quite a bit in longhand, about 12 sides of A4, so I'm going to use this to start typing it up, and hopefully posting some of it - then when the other PC is fixed I can have a mammoth catching up session - I refuse to use this to access the archives - I just don't have that amount of time to spare.
I hope you think it was worth the wait.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 8:54pm
Back at Freudesheim, Joey sat staring blankly at the typewriter.  She had gone straight upstairs after she had arrived home that morning, but not to bed.  She passed the time with her youngest daughter, the child who she would never again call Gwynnie, waiting until she heard the door close behind Jack.

“You poor little mite,” she had murmered to the sleeping child, “What sort of future are you going to have?  It will be as happy as I can make it, I promise, and if I do have to be both mother and father to you, then I will be, to you and your brothers and sisters.”
Her eyes had grown a little blurry as she remembered making the same promise to the triplets when they were virtually the same age, for an instant she felt again the despair, the utter desolation and grief  which had overwhelmed her at that time, but the feeling passed, that was only a memory, everything was so different this time.
Instead of grief she felt worn down and overcome by tiredness, but not the tiredness which invited sleep quickly or easily.  She would have been grateful for one of the doses which Jack had, on more than one occasion, slipped into her drink when she was becoming particularly overwrought, but under the circumstances, she was damned if she was going to ask.  Maybe, she thought, Jem would visit her later, maybe he could supply the rest which she craved, but until then, perhaps she could get lost in her latest fictional world.
Finally, she had heard the door slam as Jack left for the San, and she had gone back down stairs where Anna, her faithful maid, had supplied her with milky coffee in answer to her summons.  The maid had tried to persuade Joey to eat some breakfast , but this offer had been brushed aside, despite having eaten nothing since the previous afternoon, Joey felt to full up to tackle solid food. 
Anna, who had jumped to the conclusion that Joey’s reluctance to eat was due  to her concern about Con, had murmered sympathetically, and retired to the kitchen where she set about baking Joey’s favourite lemon biscuits, hoping to tempt her into eating later.  Joey, relieved that Anna had not felt moved to ask any more questions, had drained her coffee and fled to the sanctuary of her study.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nina on Jan 16th, 2004, 9:01pm
Welcome back Esmeralda!  Even little postings are better than nothing  ;D

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 9:03pm
Thank you Esmeralda - hope your problems with computer are sorted soon!

What will Jo call her daughter then if not Gwynnie? I assume she is Jo's latest attempt to have quads?


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 16th, 2004, 9:38pm
Ooh, it's nice to have even a little bit more of this, and to see inside Joey's head. 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 10:11pm
Thank you.  Lesley - Joey told Con she was going to change Gwynnies name to Mary, after the trips(!) but I think that she will just start using the child's second name, Hilda.

One more bit for tonight......

In her study, Hilda Annersley was discovering that the members of Gypsophilia dormitory were capable of showing an unaccustomed display of stubborness, or defiance.  Despite her best efforts to find out what had been the cause of the earlier disturbance, including a prodigious use of ‘the look’, the girls had remained silent for the most part, and evasive when silence really was not an option,  it was true that several of the more impressionable girls looked on the verge of tears, but since that looked unlikely to prove helpful, Hilda had been forced, for one of the few times in her long career, to admit defeat. 
She harshly told those with watery eyes to pull themselves together, and proceeded to hand out  punishments  to the whole dorm, her famous justice, for once, not tempered with mercy.  For the remainder of the term Gypsophilia would be subject to the same rules as the Juniors with regard to bedtimes, in addition, they were condemned to get up and go to bed in silence for the same length of time, they were to be supervised during all their free periods and barred from all the Saturday night entertainments, that period to be spent hemming sheets, and they were told in no uncertain terms that they would have no part in the Nativity performance.  In addition, Hilary and Louise, who, by the evidence of Hilda’s own eyes, had appeared to be the chief protagonists, were told they would not be allowed to join the rest of the school in the upcoming half term excursions.
This last point was accepted philosophically by Louise, who had never yet spent half term at the school since her family were in the local area, but it was a bitter disappointed to Hilary who had been looking forward to the chance to see more of Switzerland, but even her disappointment was tempered by the fact that she was so grateful to Miss Annersley for intervening when she did, that she felt she could have borne almost any punishment, and bt the end of the day, the treatment meted out by her peers left her feeling decidedly relieved that she would not be spending the holiday with them.
No longer content with merely not speaking to Hilary, the other girls, including those who had previously stood by her, added new depths to their policy of ignoring her, pointedly turning their backs and removing themselves as far as possible from her presence when she walked into a room, carefully moving her desk slightly away from the rest to leave her isolated in class, placing everything she could possibly need at mealtimes in front of her before she needed to ask.  Only Cora, who was still something of an outcast herself, appeared oblivious to the prevailing current of hostility directed towards Hilary.  Hilary found herself feeling grateful for Cora’s continued attentions, even though the younger girl never gave any sign of realising that it was as a direct result of her friend championing her cause that she had found herself in her current situation.
All in all, Hilary was about as miserable as she had ever been, but to all appearances she remained completely unaffected by this treatment.  I t was perhaps a pity that her pride would not allow her to show her true feelings, since she may have found life a little easier, but as it was the crime of uncaring arrogance was added to the list of supposed sins, the most grievous charge on the list being the worst that could be laid before any true Chalet girl, that of dishonourable behaviour,


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 10:25pm
Thank you again - feeling ever so sorry for Hilary.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 16th, 2004, 10:53pm
You are very noble to type this up on a hamster powered pc and thank you for 2 sections.  Agree that Hilary is to be pitied. We'd love some more when you can face it.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nicolette on Jan 16th, 2004, 11:35pm
Thank you Esmeralda!  :)

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Carolyn P on Jan 16th, 2004, 11:59pm
Echo's those thanks.

Don't wear the hamster out. We want more, much more, but will wait if we really, really have to.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Kathy_S on Jan 17th, 2004, 2:56am
Poor Hilary!  Poor Joey!   Hilda even, finding out ‘the look’ isn’t infallible.  Looking forward to more.

(If these are “short posts,” long ones must be incredible.)


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 3:40am
I'm looking forward to seeing how this is all dealt with. I'm seeing parallels of Jack Lambert's first time. 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Jennie on Jan 17th, 2004, 1:50pm
Looking forward to lots more, Esmeralda. Give the PC people hell when they come to repair your monitor. 

BTW, did you know that the 'Sale of Goods'Act means that you can demand a new Monitor? It clearly isn't fit for its purpose, so demand a new one.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:34pm
I am getting a new monitor Jennie, but they are sending it by courier, hence the wait until Wednesday.  Unfortunately, I wasn't at home when the engineer came, and Hubby agreed with this, I would have demanded they sent it straight away!

Anyway, the majority of this story was written on the Hamster powered pc and he's had a good long rest for a month or so, so it's time he started running around on the wheel again.  I would have posted this last night but I wasn't happy with it, I've changed it now, and I'm still not over happy, but I don't want to spend the next month worrying about one small segment when I'm going to re-write the whole lot when I get to the end, so here it is.

While Hilda was left to contemplate if the latest generation of schoolgirls really were stronger willed than they used to be, or if she was beginning to lose her authority, and thinking that the benefits of retirement looked more attractive each day, Jem was still relishing the opportunity to return to the practice of medicine rather than concentrating his efforts on running a large, and increasingly diverse, business.  He had had little direct involvement with his patients over the last few years and it felt good to him, to walk among them, and in many cases, receive their thanks and gratitude for the work he was doing on their behalf.
Although he had, in the past, lost his share of patients, he preferred not to dwell on his failures, the majority of whom he had regarded as hopeless causes, but on his successes., especially those which he had achieved against all the odds. 
He had always had a slight, regrettable, tendency to to accept the semi – mythical status that that particular group of patients conferred on him as his due, and this tendency had grown somewhat since he had received his honour from the government of the day.
He was feeling immensely pleased with himself, gratified by the reaction of those patients who prounounced themselves as feeling privileged to have the ‘great’ Sir James Russell take a personal interest in their cases, when he was swiftly brought down to earth by one particular patient, Biddy Courvosier.
Biddy had known Jem since she had been a wild young orphan, adopted by the middles of the time in the Tyrol; His reputation had meant nothing to her then, and it meant nothing to her now.
“And what the hell is it that you’re doing here, Jem Russell?” she asked, her words spirited enouigh, but the tone they were delivered in dreary beyond belief.  “You’ve come to sort out that brother-in-law of yours, I hope, after what he did to my Eugen.”
“They had a fight, Biddy, and I admit that I’m not happy about it, but Eugen got up and walked away.  He was at the other end of the Platz when he died.”
“And whose fault was it that he was walking around on the Platz in the middle of a storm?  It was a broken heart that he died of, after Jack Maynard told him to leave.  I wish he’d never come to this place, so I do.  I wish we’d never set eyes on this San, and if you have any ideas of keeping me here drugged up and quiet, you can forget about it.  I’m going home to my children., and you, all of you, are going to pay for this.”
“Now, Biddy, don’t be hasty, you’ve had a great shock, I know you want to deal with it in your own way but…”
“And what would you be knowing about dealing with things, Jem Russell, when have you ever had to deal with anything like this in your life?  Even if you did have to, you would probably pay someone to deal with it for you.”
Jem felt slightly hurt by her attack on his own person, but bearing in mind the circumstances, he made allowances for her words, “I know this isn’t an easy time for you, Biddy, dear, but…”
“I’m not you’re dear.  Don’t you try patronising me Jem, I’ll not stand for it.”
“I’m sorry, but..”
“And there’ll be no easy times for Biddy Courvosier in the future, not with three children to bring up and no husband.  I suppose you think I should be overcome by grief?  Maybe I should, but I don’t have that luxury do I?  It’s all alone that I am in the world, with my three babies.  I’ve no-one to look after me, now, but I will make you pay for this Jem Russell, my children aren’t going to suffer through you trying to avoid your responsibilities.  I’m noyt saying that money will make everything all right, because it won’t, but it’ll make it a damn sight better.”
Jem looked at her rather coldly, he knew, of course, all about her background, but he still felt it was rather unseemly, not to say heartless, of her to keep bringing up the subject of money less than twenty four hours after the discovery of her husband’s body, but he also felt rather ashamed of himself for not having troubled himself with any thoughts about Biddy’s future, nor those of her children,  not that that endeared her to him at the time.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:36pm
"You’ll be looked after, Biddy,” he said to her shortly, “And if you want to go home, I see no reason why you shouldn't’.  It's probably the best place for you right now.”

“And it’s glad you are to be getting rid of me, isn’t it?  Though not as glad as I am to be getting away from this place.” She replied bitterly, “Well, you know where to send the cheque to, now you be getting out of here and let me be getting dressed.”
Jem’s trip to Switzerland was proving more expensive than he had ever imagined, but he did indeed make sure that Biddy’s future was provided for, and although she was never to know it, her words had a more long lasting and profound effect. 
Reflecting on the incident, some months later, he came to realise that he had indeed had a privileged life, and that he had come to take those privileges very much for granted.  It was true that the San had always provided free treatment for needy cases, especially for children, but it was also true that much of this treatment was paid for by outside fundraising, such as the Chalet School’s sales of work, otherwise, although he donated generously to various charities, it was as much a matter of form as anything else, he did not take the trouble to think too deeply about the needs of the recipients of that charity.   Thanks to Biddy, he came to understand that somewhere along the way he had lost the philanthropic  impulses that had driven him to study medicine in the first place, and in an effort to make amends, and regain his humanity, he founded his own charitable organisation to help those who found themselves in similar straits to the widowed Irish woman.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:54pm
Thank you Esmeralda - don't know what part of that you were unhappy about - I felt all of was perfectly in character - Biddy could indeed have reacted like that - she has known true poverty after all.

And will Hilda be retiring at the end of the term? You dropped a few large hints - if she does I hope it will be a fairly happy affair - as happy as possible for her considering.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 5:15pm
Thanks Esmerelda. That was great, nice to see Biddy's forthrightness again.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 5:32pm
Yes, it was the Biddy reaction I was worried about, especially with her being such a popular character.

Joey had found it impossible to write, after making five attempts at one sentence she ripped the sheet of paper from the typewriter and tore it in half.  It was pointless trying to pretend she could lose herself in her fiction when so much was happening in real life, she pushed the typewriter away and sat back in her chair, allowing just one or two tears of self pity to trickle down her face.
She had returned to Freudeshiem the day before in a state of some trepidation, which was only slightly eased by the fact that Jack had managed to speak to her civilly while they were inside the San.  He had reverted to silence once they had left Con, merely grunting in reply to an innocuous remark which she had made as they got into the car.
She still had no idea what, if anything, Roger had told Jack, yet, as worried as she was about that scenario, it was overshadowed by a thought that she found more terrifying by far.  What she dreaded most of all, was that she would hear her husband confess to being complicit in Eugen Courvosier’s death.  She had wished desperately that she could take back the impulsive words she had blurted out to Jem earlier, feeling that the fact of her having uttered them were more likely to make them be true.
Even when they were, finally, back at the house, Jack had been in no hurry to broach the subject of his fight with Eugen, although he had relieved her smaller worry, when he began by apologising for ever considering that she had been involved with Roger Richardson, “As you said, the girl, Fay, was obviously motivated by spite, I dare say it was Roger that she wanted to get at, not you.  He had just broken off their engagement, for Heaven’s sake, it’s hardly surprising that she wanted revenge.  Roger would hardly be interested in you after all.”
It was probably a pity that Jack, thinking of Roger’s sexuality, added the last sentence.  To Joey’s ears it was a hurtful dismissal of her own attractions, of herself as a woman, and it was enough to ensure that when the conversation moved on to Jack’s violent disagreement with Eugen, Joey did nothing to ease the obvious burden of guilt which her husband was labouring under, even though she so easily could have done so. 
Although she had been relieved to discover that Eugen had walked away from Freudesheim of his own accord, she had rightly been furious when she found that there had been more than a grain of truth in Biddy’s tale, and she made the most of her opportunity to drive home the fact that Jack’s behaviour had been anything but reasonable, and if she had had any slight reservations about this approach, they had vanished completely when she found out that Jack had so casually revealed her deepest secret to Jem, the man who had been a father figure to her since the latter part of her extended childhood.
Never in her long marriage had she felt so betrayed, and never had she felt so bitter towards her husband.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 5:57pm
The morning passed more slowly for Joey, who spent most the hours locked in her study, than it did for Jack, who found that he had to give all his concentration to his work.  He and Jem managed a scant fifteen minutes lunch break, during which Jem announced that they were to have a meeting later to discuss the staffing situation.  “We ought to bring Phil Graves into it to, I suppose, but I want to talk to you alone beforehand,” he stated in a manner which Jack did not find entirely reassuring.

Joey did not bother with lunch at all, still feeling that solid food was beyond her digestive capabilities, yet, when that hour came around, she found that she could no longer bear to sit in her study, thinking.  Nor did she want to visit any of her friends, either at school or elsewhere.  She knew that none of them would ask questions, but goodness only knew what wild stories had begun circulating the Platz, and for once, she did not feel inclined to be the centre of attention, no matter how hard people tried to disguise their curiosity.
She came to a sudden decision and rose to her feet, prior to mounting the stairs in a manner which was suggestive of being the proud Mamma of a long family of twelve, rather than the schoolgirl she so fondly imagined she resembled.  She retrieved her youngest daughter from the nursery, wrapping her warmly in her outdoor clothes, then after depositing a few other garments into a small bag, she and the child slipped out of the house before Anna, coming to clear up the plates, discovered the uneaten food.
Linda Stone, glancing out of her classroom window, saw Joey walking along, pushing the child in the old family perambulator, but thanks to the shortage of teaching staff, she had little time to ponder upon what she had seen, “And it wasn’t as if I thought there was anything to think about,” she said later, “It was just Joey taking her baby for a walk.”

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:11pm
Lots and lovely lots!

I don't blame Biddy at all.  She is quite rightly angry!  Also she puntured Jem's pomposity which needed doing!

But, where has Joey gone?  This thread certainly lives up to its title.

btw How is Con?


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:50pm
Oh lots more - Want to bang Jack and Joey's heads together!!

Where is Joey going with little Hilda? More please Esmeralda!

(I know - you've posted lots - but this is so good I just want more!)


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:56pm
What a lovely lot.  It was all so good.  I'm worried about where Joey's going though.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nicolette on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:58pm
I'm worried too Pat. that last comment sounded very ominous.  :-/

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:06pm
You're worried about Joey & little Hilda?  Oh dear, I haven't written that part yet.  Sorry.

It was growing late when Jem and Jack finally found the opportunity to talk, the lines of exhaustion drawn on Jack’s face were only too obvious to Jem, and he suspected that were he to look in the mirror, his own appearance would not be dissimilar.  The long hectic day had caused him to remember why he no longer played such an active part in the day to day medical work at own branch of the San.
He had already sent Phil Graves home to dine with his wife, but before extracting a grudging promise from the man that he would return later. 
Phil had gone to great lengths to avoid Jack Maynard as much as possible during the day, and on the few occasions when he had been forced into proximity with the other man he had taken no trouble to disguise his hostiliity, something which more peoiple than Jem had noticed.  Furthermore, Phil was still feeling somewhat resentful of the manner in which Jem had spoken to him the previous day, and since the responsibilty of taking Biddy home and getting her settled had fallen solely upon himself and his wife, Hilary, he was no mood to spend the evening waffling.
The other two men had eaten in the staff canteen; Jem, looking forward to rather grander food at his hotel later that replenished himself with coffee and pastries.  Jack, who was not expecting Jo to have arranged a hearty meal to welcome him home opted for something more substantial, but was hard pushed to eat it fast enough to satisfy Jem, who was clearly in a hurry to get on with his pre-meeting chat.
Ruefully thinking that he could soon add indigestion to his list of problems, Jack followed Jem back to the office, where he watched without protest as Jem instinctively seated himself behind the desk, leaving his younger relative to draw up one of the visitors chairs.  He had scarcely done so before Jem began to speak, “The reason I wished to speak to you alone, Jack, is this antagonism between you and Phil.  You can hardly operate as a team if you don’t, or won’t, speak to one another, and I’m not prepared to see this branch being put into jeopardy because the two leading figures are involved in a feud.  Under normal circumstances I wouldn’t stand for it at all, but since it’s obviously Courvosier’s unfortunate demise which is behind all this, and it’s only a little over a day since we heard the news I’m prepared to give you both a chance.  Do you think you can patch things up?”
“I think that is something you need to ask Phil, rather than me.  As you say, he is obviously blaming me for what happened, with some justification I suppose.”
“I suggest that that is a matter between you and your conscience, but whatever did happen earlier, it was his decision to walk along that path, and to try to jump that gap.”
“But perhaps I drove him to it, maybe he felt he had something to prove, or perhaps he wasn’t even trying to get to those Americans.”  Jack finally voiced the thought that had been at the back of his mind, and uppermost in Phil’s thoughts, since they had heard of Eugen’s fate.
“Nonsense. Courvosier wasn’t that sort of man,” Jem blatently disregarded the fact that he had no real idea what sort of man Eugen had been, “There’s no point in thinking along those lines.”
Jack was not convinced, but neither was he ready to face up to the full implications of his own words, so he accepted the escape route which Jem had offered him, “What I may think is neither here nor there, the problem is that that is what Phil thinks, so as I suggested earlier, you had better talk to him about it.”
“I shall.  The San is bigger than any one doctor, and I’m not going to sit back and see it being dragged down by personal disagreements.  If Phil doesn’t agree to compromise his attitude, at least while he is working, I shall have to transfer him back to England.  You know, it might be beneficial for him anyway, in the long term.  Give him chance to broaden his horizons a bit, he’s spent nearly all his career here so far hasn’t he?  Do you have anyone who could fill his place?”


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:12pm
Tensions all the way Esmerelda.

*Biting my lips, waiting for more*


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:17pm
Oh charming! I can just visualise Phil Graves telling Jem exactly where to stick his job! How dare he just blithly assume he can order Phil to up sticks back to England - should imagine Hilary will have something to say about that too!

Thanks again Esmeralda!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:24pm

on 01/17/04 at 20:12:42, Carolyn P wrote:
*Biting my lips, waiting for more*

*Sends lipsalve to Carolyn.*


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Ally on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:35pm
Thank you for the tremendous amount of goodies, that was a lot of typing!

*Waiting patiently to discover where Joey went*


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:22pm
“Eh?”  the question took Jack completely by surprise, up until that point he had taken Jem’s words as a veiled threat to himself, and never having contemplated any such circumstance as the one in which he now found himself embroiled he had never taken the time to think upon who could replace Phil Graves.

“It’s not that difficult, I just want to know if there is anyone you could promote if the situation demands it.”
“Well, if it did come to that, I suppose it would have to be Neil Shephard.  It wouldn’t be the most popular decision, since there are several others who have been here a great deal longer, and he may not be quite as good a doctor as some of the others, but he does seem to have something about him, some sort of natural authority.  I really do hope it doesn’t come to that though, Jem.  Speaking in a professional capacity, I really do not want to lose Phil, and since we already have three vacancies to fill, I don’t really see how we can afford to.”
“Three vacancies?  Obviously Entwhistle has written himself out of the equation, but who is the third?”
“We’ve been struggling for quite some time.  The workload has grown quite substantially, recently, but the staff hasn’t expanded to meet that need, also Daisy Ven- Roscommon has been working for us on a part time basis, as you know, but she’s going to be rather too busy to keep that up much longer.” “Hmmpphh.  Women, they demand all this training, then what do they do?  As soon as you make a doctor of them they keep stopping to have babies.  They may as well stay at home in the first place.”
“But about our current situation,” Jack had no great wish to encourage Jem to ride one of his favourite hobby horses at that time,  “I’ve already prepared an advertisment for the Medical Journal, I suppose there is no reason why we shouldn’t recruit more than one person  from that, provided they are of the right calibre of course, and Andrew Hamilton will be joining us in about six months time, if you remember.”
“Hamilton, of course, I had forgotten, but maybe I can persuade him to take up his position early, if that is at all possible.  I’ll seek him out later, even if he can’t start any sooner we might as well take advantage of his being here at the moment – I’m sure he’s seen enough of Con today to be able to drag himself away for a few hours tomorrow.”
“Andrew?  He’s here?  Since when?”
“Since this morning, I’m sorry, I forgot to mention it.” Jem at least had the grace to look a little uncomfortable, “Con was telling me yesterday how much she was longing to see him, so I got in touch with him last night.  Obviously you haven’t spoken to her today.”
“Not since this morning,” Jack replied rather acidly, “I have been rather busy, if you hadn’t noticed, and when I did find a moment to look in on her she was sleeping.”  He frowned, resenting the manner in which Jem had taken it upon himself to usurp his own parental duties, and feeling slightly hurt that Con had preferred to confde in her Uncle rather than himself,
“I should have told you before, I’m sorry, but it doesn’t really matter who contacted him does it?  It’s made Con happy and that’s the important thing, surely.”  Jem correctly interpreted Jack’s feelings, “Anyway, you need to get that advertisment placed as soon as possible.  I’ll leave the selection process in your hands of course,” he looked at his watch, “Where has Graves got to?  He should be here by now.  “What’s your opinion of Mrs Smithson?”  He abruptly changed the subject to a discussion about the patients until a quick tap on the door announced Phil’s arrival.
“Sit down, Phil,” Jem’s greeting was brusque, “Jack, you may as well go and get yourself another coffee seeing as you never finished the one you had earlier.  Be back in ten minutes.”
Jack did not entirely enjoy the experience of being dismissed from his own office, but he understood that Jem wanted to talk to Phil before he took matters any further, and the thought of coffee was certainly attractive.  He stood up, hoping that Jem could persuade Phil to act in a more professional manner, as much for the younger doctor’s sake as for his own.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:25pm
Ooooh, I've just noticed that I'm being examined by a doctor - I hope he's gazing caringly into my eyes - though knowing my luck it'll probably turn out to be Frank Peters.

 

He never found out what was said inside the office, for neither of the two ever told, but when he arrived back after his allotted ten minutes there was no more talk of Phil being transferred to Wales.
“What do you think of Shephard?” Jem asked Phil as soon as Jack had retaken his seat. 
“In what way?  He’s sound enough, hard working, maybe not brilliant, but not an idiot either.  The patients seem to like him, and the rest of the staff get along with him all right, most of them anyway.”  Phil could not help but wonder where this discussion was going to lead.  He was soon to find out.
“Do you think he is management material?” Jem asked.
“Yes, I suppose so,” Phil replied tentatively, none too sure of what answer was required.
“Good. That’s settled then, effective from tomorrow morning, Shephard is part of the management team of this Sanatorium, provided he accepts of course, and I see no reason why he shouldn’t.  That should take the pressure off you two a bit.  Now as you know, Phil, Con’s fiance is joining us in a few months time, I hope to be able to persuade him to take up his position early, but that may not be feasible, we’ll just have to hope that it is.”
Phil was careful to keep his reply neutral, he had never fully approved of Jack Maynard offering positions to his relatives and proteges, but given his own family ties, Jem Russell was not the best person to express that opinion to, nor, since Phil’s own sister held the position of Matron, was he well placed to raise the issue.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:56pm
Esmeralda!! I thought we'd got away from the behind closed doors syndrome! Liked the post - Jem is starting to annoy me now though!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:01pm
You have been busy haven't you Esmerelda, thanks so much.

Love the insight into the internal politics at the san. For all its supposed importance we don't actually see a lot of the san in the books do we?


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:06pm
*huggles Esmeralda!!!*

Thank you honey!! Lots of lovely story!!!!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:07pm
I'll have you know  that I'm very grateful for closed doors, and I think it's the first time I've used them.

And yes, I have been busy, but not in the traditional CS sense, with this bit, I'll have posted over 4000 words today, and I think that's enough!
Tomorrow, we can all go back to school......

“In addition,” Jem continued, “I’m sure you recognise that you need another two or three doctors, that being so, we will be placing an advertisment in the next issue of the Medical Journal.”
“May I suggest something?”  So far Phil could see little reason for his presence at the meeting being requested, since Jem, or Jem and Jack together, had already decided what was going to be done, but since he had torn himself away from his home he determined to make his presence felt, “I think we should advertise in the European papers too.  A growing number of our patients come from the local area, or elsewhere on the Continent, and it might be beneficial to them if they had the opportunity of consulting with one of their own countrymen.  Also, the day’s when this establishment catered solely for TB patients are gone, we have already had to open a casualty unit, and I feel that we should seek to appoint someone with more general experience and skills.”
“As I already told Jack, it is entirely up to you who you appoint.  By all means advertise in the Europeans too, but obviously the positions must go to the most suitable and capable applicants, regardless of where they come from.  I take it you agree with that Jack.”
“Certainly, it’s a valid point.”
“That’s settled then, just one more thing, then we can all go home.  I’ve decided to send David over here for a year.”
“Eh?”
“What?”
Jem sat back, satisfied with the reception he received, but he did not leave the other two wondering for too long.  “There’s no need for either of you to look alarmed, I’m not sending him in to take over your jobs, quite the opposite in fact.  I rather think he has been taking too much for granted recently.  Obviously he will be taking over as head of this establishment in the future, but before then he needs a good grounding in the work.  He’s still young, about the same age as your junior doctors, I think, and I expect you to treat him in accordance with his age and experience.  If he shows any signs of wanting to be more important than that, then you must make it clear that he will have to work for promotion, along with everyone else.  Don’t give him any special privileges.  Right, that concludes this meeting, good night gentlemen.  If you have any thing further to say, come ans see me tomorrow, oh. And one more thing, you are having this weekend off, Jack.  I’ll still be here to cover, and Phil will be on call to help if necessary.”
Phil opened his mouth to protest, then quickly closed it again, something which did not go un-noticed by Jem.  Nor could he fail to notice Jack’s comments about not especially wanting the forthcoming weekend off work, but he could and did ignore him.
Phil hung back until Jem was out of earshot, then he turned to speak to Jack, who was busy rearranging the chairs, “We may be able to have a working relationship, Maynard, but don’t expect anything more.  Everyone knows who was responsible for Eugen’s death, and I for one will never forgive you.”
He left Jack to reflect that it scarcely mattered how he treated David, while his future boss was working under him, if Phil’s attitude was typical of his colleagues, his own position would soon be untenable anyway.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:16pm
Oh, golly, is there anywhere on the entire Platz that isn't tense? 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:17pm
Will be interesting to see how David's arrival goes down......

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:33pm
How on earth can Jem expect them to treat David as any other junior Dr when he has just told them that he will eventually be taking over? Stupid man.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:33pm
Badly, I suspect!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:07pm
Well! *pauses for breath, decides that comments will be censored and takes 3 deep breaths to calm down*

Rant: Jem is SO out of touch with the times and SO arrogant ..... and SO typical of his type. 'Obviously he (David) will take over'.  David might be a prat, incompetent - not even want the job!  Don't they have a board who have to approve appointments?  This just confirms my opinion of Jem.

(and I'd still like to hear some more  ;)


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:18pm
I hate the 'I know best' type of man! 

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by LauraT on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:26pm
Poor Jack! And Jem is a pompous arse who needs to be hit over the head and thrown off the Platz (in a strop here!)

More story please!  :-* 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:33pm
I've always wondered how a strong woman like Madge put up with Jem!  ::)

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:41pm

on 01/17/04 at 23:33:51, Pat wrote:
I've always wondered how a strong woman like Madge put up with Jem!  ::)

I agree.  Brainwashed by her upbringing, I suppose.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:41pm

on 01/17/04 at 23:33:51, Pat wrote:
I've always wondered how a strong woman like Madge put up with Jem!  ::)

That was the tragedy though wasn't it? She was no longer a strong woman once she got married.

Must say when Jem first appeared on the scene in this story my opinion of him was high - he did all the right things, dealing with Jack, Con, Hilda and Matey. But he seems to have reverted to type now! Esmeralda - couldn't you arrange a similar accident to the one that got rid of that Policeman?

Thank you so much for all your hard work today!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nina on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:57pm
Thank you Esmeralda (and the hamster), that was so worth staying up for!  What next ... ...?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 18th, 2004, 12:40am
*sending a huggle to Esmeralda, and a little one for the hamster*

How many words is this now honey?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 18th, 2004, 1:17am

on 01/17/04 at 23:26:08, LauraT wrote:
Poor Jack! And Jem is a pompous arse who needs to be hit over the head and thrown off the Platz (in a strop here!)

More story please!  :-* 

No, really? I couldn't tell!!! ;)


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Susan on Jan 18th, 2004, 2:27am
Thank you Esmeralda, for all those lovely, lovely posts.

You have Jem's character so well, however nice he appeared for a while he would soon revert to type. 

Hope the hamster isn't too worn out - more hugs for Esmeralda and her hamster.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by keren on Jan 18th, 2004, 10:47am
Wow Esmerelda, thanks for all this story in one go!

(just got a spam mail from someone called "Joey Rodgers" do you think the spammers read this board?

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Nicolette on Jan 18th, 2004, 3:29pm
Thanks Esmeralda, those were fantastic posts. But I'd forgotten Andrew was a doctor *smacks head in frustration* , so when you get my e-mail, just take into consideration that I'm a half-wit. 

Although, on the other hand, that makes things a lot easier...

More story please sweetie, as soon as you can!  ;) 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 18th, 2004, 5:39pm
I can't believe how eager you all are to see people being thrown over the edge of a cliff - do I really want to spend a day with such a bloodthirsty lot? ;D

This bit is about as far as it goes, until I write some more that is. 

The girls of Gypsophilila undressed in a sullen silence, resentful of the early bedtime which had been imposed upon them. Apart from Hilary, who was only to happy that the interminably long day was ending, only Flaurette was unpeturbed by this part of the dormitory’s collective punishment.  She was glad of the extra hour of peace in which to think.
In the general melee of that morning it had gone unnoticed that she alone had not joined in with the general condemnation of Hilary, nor had she taken any active part in the brief, hastily arranged meeting in the splashery when the girls had comprehensively decided to send Hilary to Coventry.
She still felt some discomfort with her own earlier behaviour, when she had stopped talking to her friend out of a sense of loyalty to Jenny, and the more the she thought about it, the more she regretted allowing herself to be carried along by Stella’s passionate appeals, but at least Hilary had had other people to speak to then.  And Jenny had been desperately ill when the girls had last seen her, maybe she really was even dying, and it was due to Cora that she hadn’t sought the help she needed earlier.  If only Hilary had dropped Cora, they would all still be friends, and the events of morning would never have happened.
She gave up on the tussle between her loyalties to her two closest friends, and thought again about the events of the morning, a small frown upon her brow.  She was finding it difficult to reconcile those events with what she knew of her friend.
From the moment she and Hilary had been forced together by that bad tempered prefect, Lucy Peters, they had felt a deep liking for one another, and that liking had grown, on Flaurette’s part at least, the more they saw of each other.  There was no doubt that the first few days, made more difficult by the circumstances, had been easier because of their friendship.  She remembered the shock she had felt that first evening, when it was explained to her what ‘tri-lingual’ really meant, and the shameful way in which she had dealt with that news, Hilary had calmly helped her at that time, and she had helped her later too, when she had been struggling with her German.  Admittedly Hilary’s own knowledge of that language had been sketchy, based on what she had picked up during the time she had spent in the country with her mother, but she had more than willingly passed on the little she knew.  Flaurette was no so sure she would have done the same, if she had been presented with an opportunity to outshine the other new girls she was sure she would have accepted it, gratefully. 
Indeed, she had done just that, the first morning, accepting Jenny’s compliments on her speed and tidyness whilst looking on with amusement at Hilary’s own struggles to get herself ready in time, never mind accomplishing her cubey tasks, even the simplest of which had seemed to be beyond her capabilities,
As Flaurette recalled, Stella had taken charge of her that day, even changing her position on the bath list to do so, and, as she suddenly realised, Stella  hadn’t changed  back again until this day.  If Stella had continued to run around after Hilary that could well explain why the bathroom had been in such a mess.  So far, school had failed to make much impression to Hilary’s attitude to the mundane day to day business of tidyness and neatness, she had been called out lessons to tidy her drawers more than once, more than once on the same day, on one memorable occasion., yet, although she had accepted these strictures with her usual equanimity, she never really seemed to think she had done anything wrong. 
It was hard for Flaurette to believe that any girl of Hilary’s age could be so heedless, yet despite her understanding of other people feelings, she seemed to be almost blind to her surroundings.  Not only would that explain why she had left the bathroom in such a mess, it would go a long way to explaining why she had refused to take any responsibility for the situation.  It made a lot more sense than the alternative, that Hilary was not the generous spirited and straightforward girl that Flaurette had believed her to be.
Having settled that point in her own mind, Flaurette was left wondering what to do about it.  She could not suddenly decide to start speaking to Hilary again, she was not strong willed enough to make herself unpopular by making a stand against the rest of the school, but if she could find a way of helping Hilary, without anyone finding out, she vowed to do so.
As she rolled over in bed and closed her eyes, she thought she had the germ of an idea.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by crashbb on Jan 18th, 2004, 6:07pm
Too bad she won't actually take a vocal stand, but at least someone looks like they might support Hilary.

Thanks for the new bit.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 18th, 2004, 7:12pm
Thanks Esmeralda - echoing Chelsea's comment that it's a pity Flaurette won't be more vocal but at least she's going to do something!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by LauraT on Jan 18th, 2004, 7:18pm
Does anyone else find that the name Flaurette makes them think of a cauliflower? Or is that just me?!  ::)

Ahh, I'm glad someone's still there for Hilary!  :D


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 18th, 2004, 8:21pm

on 01/18/04 at 19:18:55, LauraT wrote:
Does anyone else find that the name Flaurette makes them think of a cauliflower? Or is that just me?!  ::)

LOL I seem to remember - right back at the beginning of this story - that Hilary thought the same! ;D


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 18th, 2004, 9:12pm
Very impressed with Lesley's memory ;D

Unlike Phil, Jack was in no particular hurry to get home, and Jem had, by his actions, reminded him that he had neglected to spend any time with Con that day, an oversight which he decided to remedy.  It was obvious though, as soon as he walked through the door, that Con had not missed him.  Obviously feeling better, she was sitting up in bed, smiling into the face of the young man who was sitting by her side.
“Hello,” she spared him a quick glance as he walked in, “Andrew’s here, isn’t it wonderful?”
“Wonderful indeed,” Jack fought down a slight pang at the thought that his daughter was growing up fast, that she was quickly heading  towards her own life, one which he would not be a part of, to smile at her indulgently.
“And I feel so much better today, I’m sure I’ll be able to go home tomorrow, Andrew is going to stay until Sunday night, if you let me home tomorrow, we’ll be able to spend the whole three days together.  Maybe we can go to Interlaken, or Berne,”
“Let’s wait until we see how you are tomorrow before you start making plans, young lady.” 
“Hmmm, there’s no need for Mamma to come tonight, Andrew will be staying here with me, of course.”
Jack raised his eyebrows slightly, but deciding spending the night together in a room in a very public sanatorium could hardly give rise to any impropriety, he forbore to say anything. 
He lingered a little longer, exchanging civilities with his future son-in-law, but since it was clear that his presence was not required, he did not overstay his welcome.
It was dark when he arrived home, and the unlit Fruedesheim looked unwelcoming, bleak even.  He walked into the house, turning on the lights as he walked through to the living room.  A small glimmer of light escaping from under the door frame suggested that Joey was in her study, but as he switched on the overhead light even that small shred of evidence of her presence was obliterated.
As he had expected, there was no meal awaiting him, instead, he poured himself a small drink before he went to his own study to catch up on his reading.
He settled down intent on catching up on the latest medical developments, but despite his good intentions, his long tiring day and the previous sleepless night caught up with him, and he fell asleep, his head resting on the desk.
He awoke a couple of hours later, cold and stiff, and decided to go to bed.  Maybe it was seeing Con and Andrew together earlier, or perhaps it was just a need to fend of the feeling of loneliness which had swept over him as he made his way to his single bed, but something drew him to look in upon his youngest girl child. 
Not wanting to disturb her, he forbore to turn on the light, as he quietly slipped into the nursery.  He stood for a few moments, suppressing a yawn while he waited for his eyes to adjust to the lack of light, wondering idly with half his mind what was different.
Suddenly he knew.  He jumped for the light switch, dreading what he might see as he realised that it was the regular sound of his daughter soft breath that had permeated his mind.  For a brief instant, he felt an overwhelming sense of relief when he saw that the bed was empty, then he was overcome by other fears. 
Fighting back a sense of foreboding, he raced back down the stairs, knowing that there was no reason for Joey to have the child with her in the study, but forcing himself to believe that his baby must be there.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by LauraT on Jan 18th, 2004, 9:26pm
I never read the beginning, and havent got time to go back and do so yet! (correspondingly, could anyone give me a brief plot summary?! I'm living in  a happy haze of confusion at the mo!)

But poor Jack! And how rude of Joey!
 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by PatMac on Jan 18th, 2004, 9:50pm
Wow!  Poor Jack, adjusting to his 'little girl' growing up and then going home to find Joey gone.  This has so many sub plots that I'd forgotten she had gone walkabout!

I don't know how you are keeping this all in your head, Esmeralda but the story is aptly named!

*wondering if will sleep tonight, worrying about the latest development*


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Carolyn P on Jan 18th, 2004, 10:17pm
*wails*

Where is Joey.

Getting more and more tense again.


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Lesley on Jan 18th, 2004, 11:12pm
Thanks again Esmeralda! Should like to confess that I'd been reading through the first part of Tensions in the archives recently to remind myself of the beginning of the story - reason I could remember the bit about Flaurette!

Oh Laura - I don't think it's possible to summarize all the plots in this masterpiece - suggest you trawl the archives - or ask if Esmeralda has it on word so you can read it through. When you get to the point where Esmeralda mentions my Aside - I have that on doc as well if you're interested!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Vikki on Jan 19th, 2004, 12:42am
Thank you Esmeralda!! ;D

More soon please!

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 19th, 2004, 4:37am
And if you're going to read it all the way through, Laura, I suggest you set aside at least three hours to do so!

Wonderful stuff, Esmeralda! I can't wait to find out what's happened to Joey!


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Cathy on Jan 19th, 2004, 5:55am
Has Joey taken off with Gwynnie? I hope not. I can't work out whether I feel sorry for Jack or not, I keep changing my mind. 

Sits down and begins to chant ...
 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by KB on Jan 19th, 2004, 6:21am

on 01/19/04 at 05:55:15, Cathy wrote:
Has Joey taken off with Gwynnie?

Yes, she has. 


Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Esmeralda on Jan 19th, 2004, 11:37am
Well, I have written a brief summary, though I'm beginning to wish I hadn't coz it all looks rather thin and implausible when it's condensed to 1200 words, but the whole doc. up to the point where part 6 was archived can be accessed by clicking on the little hut at the side.  I'll update when the 'puter is mended.  One warning, it comes complete with major errors, typos and spelling mistakes, but at the moment I'm more concerned with getting it written than getting it right!

It's strange though, how things which seem to flow naturally when you're writing seem anything but when you look back on them.
My only excuse is that most of what has happened wasn't supposed to....this was really meant to be a story about Hilary and Flaurette, and Lucy, with just a brief explanation of why Con was teaching, and it was only going to be @ 3,000 - 5,000 words long.  I just got a little bit carried away.
Anyway Laura, if you want to send me your e-mail, I'll send a copy of the summary if you want.

Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!!
Post by Jennie on Jan 19th, 2004, 12:05pm
I've just caught up on this after the weekend, Esmeralda. it's terrific, so complex and so believable.

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