|
||
Title: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 1:40am Archived for length Part 1 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/TENSIO~1[1].DOC Part two http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tension2.htm Part three http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensionagain.htm Part 4 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/Tensions4.htm Part 5 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensions5.html Part 6 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensions6.html Part 7 http://members.lycos.co.uk/thecbb/tensions7.html
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:07am Oh, look, Esmeralda! So much space and empty corners for you to fill! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:09am *watches Esmeralda hightail it into the distance, searching for a hiding place!!* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:17am Does Esmeralda suffer from agorophobia? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:24am Nope! I think she was hiding from the 'more story' demands!! ;) ;D |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:27am But we're all so nice, and appreciative, and polite about wanting more story, and... and... and... :'( |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:30am *offers KB a tissue* :-* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:33am Thank you. *blows nose very loudly* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 13th, 2004, 3:36am You're very welcome!! :-* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 13th, 2004, 8:46am Esmeralda, where are you? More story please! |
||
Title: as Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 13th, 2004, 2:19pm Off to ring threcomputer people!Sorry ladies, I just clicked onto the last unread drabble last night when my monitor went blank. Obviously as I couldn't see anything I couldn't write, and it's just done the same now, I can only see very faintly. Engineer can't come till
Friday - as I don't think it's a very good idea to keep turning the screen
on and off every 5 seconds I won't be around till then, unless I drag the
old pc out!
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Jennie on Jan 13th, 2004, 4:02pm Give them hell, Esmeralda, it's a new computer. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 13th, 2004, 10:31pm *struggles very, very hard to be patient* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 14th, 2004, 1:40am *huggles Esmeralda tightly and suggests that we all look forward to a mega posting session when Esmeralda gets the 'puter fixed* :-* :-* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 14th, 2004, 1:45am *thinks that is an excellent idea* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nicolette on Jan 14th, 2004, 11:57pm I'm a wee bit confused... Con is engaged to Andrew, but Andrew who? I'm sure Esmeralda said Hamilton, but wasn't it NeilHamilton? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:03am No, it was Neil Sheppard. It was Ian Hamilton. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nicolette on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:10am Ok, so who is Andrew? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:12am Perhaps an Esmeraldaism? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:27am I think Andrew was Ian Hamilton's nephew? Am I right Esmeralda? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:36am Is that from this story or canon? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:39am From this story! (we don't allow cannons, or any other types of heavy artillary on this board! ;)) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:43am Ah, thank you. And :P for your comment! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nicolette on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:45am on 01/15/04 at 00:36:06, KB wrote:
ignoring Vikki's smart-arse response ;), what is canon? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:54am Canon is the stuff written by the original author, EBD in this case. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 12:56am on 01/15/04 at 00:43:01, KB wrote:
Oh, come on!! Don't try and tell me you'd have resisted that one!! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 15th, 2004, 1:02am Hey, I never said I would! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Jennie on Jan 15th, 2004, 3:54pm When did the CBB ever need cannons or heavy artillery? We can manage to kill enough people withour resorting to heavy weapons. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 15th, 2004, 7:09pm Well, you do have a point there Jennie!! ;) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 15th, 2004, 7:16pm Re the Ian/Andrew Hamilton thing - I'm sure Esmeralda mentioned it - they are both his names - he was referred to as one - because a relative had the same name -but then reverted - something like that any way! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 16th, 2004, 3:06am Ah, thank you, Lesley. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:28pm Lesley is quite right, but so is the Esmeraldaism theory too, though I prefer to call it an EJBDism ;D I started off calling Hamilton Andrew because I thought that was his name and I didn't bother to check even though I had the book next to me, then someone pointed out tht his name was Ian, so then I wrote a bit about him reverting to name Andrew after his father died, as that was his name too. His full name, for the purposes of this story, is Andrew Ian Hamilton. Now the bad news - the computer isn't fixed yet - the engineer came round with a new graphics card this morning, and found out it was the monter after all, so it won't be sorted until Wednesday now GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR >:( >:( |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Susan on Jan 16th, 2004, 2:36pm Sending huggles to Esmeralda. Wednesday seems such a long time from Friday. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 3:10pm Esmeralda that's terrible - it's a brand new machine - can't they just get a new one from the showroom? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Ally on Jan 16th, 2004, 3:44pm Poor you Esmeralda, I hope it gets fixed soon ~ and so do a lot of other people ;D |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 16th, 2004, 5:21pm on 01/16/04 at 15:44:13, Ally wrote:
Include me in that sentiment! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 8:20pm Thanks for huggles and sympathy - I've set up the old pc again for now, the one where you type half a dozen words than wait for it to catch up!! I've written quite a bit in longhand, about 12 sides of A4, so I'm going to use this to start typing it up, and hopefully posting some of it - then when the other PC is fixed I can have a mammoth catching up session - I refuse to use this to access the archives - I just don't have that amount of time to spare. I hope you think it was worth the wait. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 8:54pm Back at Freudesheim, Joey sat staring blankly at the typewriter. She had gone straight upstairs after she had arrived home that morning, but not to bed. She passed the time with her youngest daughter, the child who she would never again call Gwynnie, waiting until she heard the door close behind Jack. “You poor little mite,” she had murmered to the sleeping child, “What sort of future are you going to have? It will be as happy as I can make it, I promise, and if I do have to be both mother and father to you, then I will be, to you and your brothers and sisters.” Her eyes had grown a little blurry as she remembered making the same promise to the triplets when they were virtually the same age, for an instant she felt again the despair, the utter desolation and grief which had overwhelmed her at that time, but the feeling passed, that was only a memory, everything was so different this time. Instead of grief she felt worn down and overcome by tiredness, but not the tiredness which invited sleep quickly or easily. She would have been grateful for one of the doses which Jack had, on more than one occasion, slipped into her drink when she was becoming particularly overwrought, but under the circumstances, she was damned if she was going to ask. Maybe, she thought, Jem would visit her later, maybe he could supply the rest which she craved, but until then, perhaps she could get lost in her latest fictional world. Finally, she had heard the door slam as Jack left for the San, and she had gone back down stairs where Anna, her faithful maid, had supplied her with milky coffee in answer to her summons. The maid had tried to persuade Joey to eat some breakfast , but this offer had been brushed aside, despite having eaten nothing since the previous afternoon, Joey felt to full up to tackle solid food. Anna, who had jumped to the conclusion that Joey’s reluctance to eat was due to her concern about Con, had murmered sympathetically, and retired to the kitchen where she set about baking Joey’s favourite lemon biscuits, hoping to tempt her into eating later. Joey, relieved that Anna had not felt moved to ask any more questions, had drained her coffee and fled to the sanctuary of her study. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nina on Jan 16th, 2004, 9:01pm Welcome back Esmeralda! Even little postings are better than nothing ;D |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 9:03pm Thank you Esmeralda - hope your problems with computer are sorted soon! What will Jo call her daughter then if not Gwynnie? I assume she is Jo's latest attempt to have quads? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 16th, 2004, 9:38pm Ooh, it's nice to have even a little bit more of this, and to see inside Joey's head. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 16th, 2004, 10:11pm Thank you. Lesley - Joey told Con she was going to change Gwynnies name to Mary, after the trips(!) but I think that she will just start using the child's second name, Hilda. One more bit for tonight...... In her study, Hilda Annersley
was discovering that the members of Gypsophilia dormitory were capable
of showing an unaccustomed display of stubborness, or defiance. Despite
her best efforts to find out what had been the cause of the earlier disturbance,
including a prodigious use of ‘the look’, the girls had remained silent
for the most part, and evasive when silence really was not an option,
it was true that several of the more impressionable girls looked on the
verge of tears, but since that looked unlikely to prove helpful, Hilda
had been forced, for one of the few times in her long career, to admit
defeat.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 16th, 2004, 10:25pm Thank you again - feeling ever so sorry for Hilary. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 16th, 2004, 10:53pm You are very noble to type this up on a hamster powered pc and thank you for 2 sections. Agree that Hilary is to be pitied. We'd love some more when you can face it. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nicolette on Jan 16th, 2004, 11:35pm Thank you Esmeralda! :) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Carolyn P on Jan 16th, 2004, 11:59pm Echo's those thanks. Don't wear the hamster out. We want more, much more, but will wait if we really, really have to. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Kathy_S on Jan 17th, 2004, 2:56am Poor Hilary! Poor Joey! Hilda even, finding out ‘the look’ isn’t infallible. Looking forward to more. (If these are “short posts,” long ones must be incredible.) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 3:40am I'm looking forward to seeing how this is all dealt with. I'm seeing parallels of Jack Lambert's first time. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Jennie on Jan 17th, 2004, 1:50pm Looking forward to lots more, Esmeralda. Give the PC people hell when they come to repair your monitor. BTW, did you know that the 'Sale of Goods'Act means that you can demand a new Monitor? It clearly isn't fit for its purpose, so demand a new one. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:34pm I am getting a new monitor Jennie, but they are sending it by courier, hence the wait until Wednesday. Unfortunately, I wasn't at home when the engineer came, and Hubby agreed with this, I would have demanded they sent it straight away! Anyway, the majority of this story was written on the Hamster powered pc and he's had a good long rest for a month or so, so it's time he started running around on the wheel again. I would have posted this last night but I wasn't happy with it, I've changed it now, and I'm still not over happy, but I don't want to spend the next month worrying about one small segment when I'm going to re-write the whole lot when I get to the end, so here it is. While Hilda was left to contemplate
if the latest generation of schoolgirls really were stronger willed than
they used to be, or if she was beginning to lose her authority, and thinking
that the benefits of retirement looked more attractive each day, Jem was
still relishing the opportunity to return to the practice of medicine rather
than concentrating his efforts on running a large, and increasingly diverse,
business. He had had little direct involvement with his patients
over the last few years and it felt good to him, to walk among them, and
in many cases, receive their thanks and gratitude for the work he was doing
on their behalf.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:36pm "You’ll be looked after, Biddy,” he said to her shortly, “And if you want to go home, I see no reason why you shouldn't’. It's probably the best place for you right now.” “And it’s glad you are to be getting rid of me, isn’t it? Though not as glad as I am to be getting away from this place.” She replied bitterly, “Well, you know where to send the cheque to, now you be getting out of here and let me be getting dressed.” Jem’s trip to Switzerland was proving more expensive than he had ever imagined, but he did indeed make sure that Biddy’s future was provided for, and although she was never to know it, her words had a more long lasting and profound effect. Reflecting on the incident, some months later, he came to realise that he had indeed had a privileged life, and that he had come to take those privileges very much for granted. It was true that the San had always provided free treatment for needy cases, especially for children, but it was also true that much of this treatment was paid for by outside fundraising, such as the Chalet School’s sales of work, otherwise, although he donated generously to various charities, it was as much a matter of form as anything else, he did not take the trouble to think too deeply about the needs of the recipients of that charity. Thanks to Biddy, he came to understand that somewhere along the way he had lost the philanthropic impulses that had driven him to study medicine in the first place, and in an effort to make amends, and regain his humanity, he founded his own charitable organisation to help those who found themselves in similar straits to the widowed Irish woman. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 4:54pm Thank you Esmeralda - don't know what part of that you were unhappy about - I felt all of was perfectly in character - Biddy could indeed have reacted like that - she has known true poverty after all. And will Hilda be retiring at the end of the term? You dropped a few large hints - if she does I hope it will be a fairly happy affair - as happy as possible for her considering. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 5:15pm Thanks Esmerelda. That was great, nice to see Biddy's forthrightness again. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 5:32pm Yes, it was the Biddy reaction I was worried about, especially with her being such a popular character. Joey had found it impossible
to write, after making five attempts at one sentence she ripped the sheet
of paper from the typewriter and tore it in half. It was pointless
trying to pretend she could lose herself in her fiction when so much was
happening in real life, she pushed the typewriter away and sat back in
her chair, allowing just one or two tears of self pity to trickle down
her face.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 5:57pm The morning passed more slowly for Joey, who spent most the hours locked in her study, than it did for Jack, who found that he had to give all his concentration to his work. He and Jem managed a scant fifteen minutes lunch break, during which Jem announced that they were to have a meeting later to discuss the staffing situation. “We ought to bring Phil Graves into it to, I suppose, but I want to talk to you alone beforehand,” he stated in a manner which Jack did not find entirely reassuring. Joey did not bother with lunch at all, still feeling that solid food was beyond her digestive capabilities, yet, when that hour came around, she found that she could no longer bear to sit in her study, thinking. Nor did she want to visit any of her friends, either at school or elsewhere. She knew that none of them would ask questions, but goodness only knew what wild stories had begun circulating the Platz, and for once, she did not feel inclined to be the centre of attention, no matter how hard people tried to disguise their curiosity. She came to a sudden decision and rose to her feet, prior to mounting the stairs in a manner which was suggestive of being the proud Mamma of a long family of twelve, rather than the schoolgirl she so fondly imagined she resembled. She retrieved her youngest daughter from the nursery, wrapping her warmly in her outdoor clothes, then after depositing a few other garments into a small bag, she and the child slipped out of the house before Anna, coming to clear up the plates, discovered the uneaten food. Linda Stone, glancing out of her classroom window, saw Joey walking along, pushing the child in the old family perambulator, but thanks to the shortage of teaching staff, she had little time to ponder upon what she had seen, “And it wasn’t as if I thought there was anything to think about,” she said later, “It was just Joey taking her baby for a walk.” |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:11pm Lots and lovely lots! I don't blame Biddy at all. She is quite rightly angry! Also she puntured Jem's pomposity which needed doing! But, where has Joey gone? This thread certainly lives up to its title. btw How is Con? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:50pm Oh lots more - Want to bang Jack and Joey's heads together!! Where is Joey going with little Hilda? More please Esmeralda! (I know - you've posted lots - but this is so good I just want more!) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:56pm What a lovely lot. It was all so good. I'm worried about where Joey's going though. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nicolette on Jan 17th, 2004, 6:58pm I'm worried too Pat. that last comment sounded very ominous. :-/ |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:06pm You're worried about Joey & little Hilda? Oh dear, I haven't written that part yet. Sorry. It was growing late when
Jem and Jack finally found the opportunity to talk, the lines of exhaustion
drawn on Jack’s face were only too obvious to Jem, and he suspected that
were he to look in the mirror, his own appearance would not be dissimilar.
The long hectic day had caused him to remember why he no longer played
such an active part in the day to day medical work at own branch of the
San.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:12pm Tensions all the way Esmerelda. *Biting my lips, waiting for more* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:17pm Oh charming! I can just visualise Phil Graves telling Jem exactly where to stick his job! How dare he just blithly assume he can order Phil to up sticks back to England - should imagine Hilary will have something to say about that too! Thanks again Esmeralda! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:24pm on 01/17/04 at 20:12:42, Carolyn P wrote:
*Sends lipsalve to Carolyn.* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Ally on Jan 17th, 2004, 8:35pm Thank you for the tremendous amount of goodies, that was a lot of typing! *Waiting patiently to discover where Joey went* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:22pm “Eh?” the question took Jack completely by surprise, up until that point he had taken Jem’s words as a veiled threat to himself, and never having contemplated any such circumstance as the one in which he now found himself embroiled he had never taken the time to think upon who could replace Phil Graves. “It’s not that difficult, I just want to know if there is anyone you could promote if the situation demands it.” “Well, if it did come to that, I suppose it would have to be Neil Shephard. It wouldn’t be the most popular decision, since there are several others who have been here a great deal longer, and he may not be quite as good a doctor as some of the others, but he does seem to have something about him, some sort of natural authority. I really do hope it doesn’t come to that though, Jem. Speaking in a professional capacity, I really do not want to lose Phil, and since we already have three vacancies to fill, I don’t really see how we can afford to.” “Three vacancies? Obviously Entwhistle has written himself out of the equation, but who is the third?” “We’ve been struggling for quite some time. The workload has grown quite substantially, recently, but the staff hasn’t expanded to meet that need, also Daisy Ven- Roscommon has been working for us on a part time basis, as you know, but she’s going to be rather too busy to keep that up much longer.” “Hmmpphh. Women, they demand all this training, then what do they do? As soon as you make a doctor of them they keep stopping to have babies. They may as well stay at home in the first place.” “But about our current situation,” Jack had no great wish to encourage Jem to ride one of his favourite hobby horses at that time, “I’ve already prepared an advertisment for the Medical Journal, I suppose there is no reason why we shouldn’t recruit more than one person from that, provided they are of the right calibre of course, and Andrew Hamilton will be joining us in about six months time, if you remember.” “Hamilton, of course, I had forgotten, but maybe I can persuade him to take up his position early, if that is at all possible. I’ll seek him out later, even if he can’t start any sooner we might as well take advantage of his being here at the moment – I’m sure he’s seen enough of Con today to be able to drag himself away for a few hours tomorrow.” “Andrew? He’s here? Since when?” “Since this morning, I’m sorry, I forgot to mention it.” Jem at least had the grace to look a little uncomfortable, “Con was telling me yesterday how much she was longing to see him, so I got in touch with him last night. Obviously you haven’t spoken to her today.” “Not since this morning,” Jack replied rather acidly, “I have been rather busy, if you hadn’t noticed, and when I did find a moment to look in on her she was sleeping.” He frowned, resenting the manner in which Jem had taken it upon himself to usurp his own parental duties, and feeling slightly hurt that Con had preferred to confde in her Uncle rather than himself, “I should have told you before, I’m sorry, but it doesn’t really matter who contacted him does it? It’s made Con happy and that’s the important thing, surely.” Jem correctly interpreted Jack’s feelings, “Anyway, you need to get that advertisment placed as soon as possible. I’ll leave the selection process in your hands of course,” he looked at his watch, “Where has Graves got to? He should be here by now. “What’s your opinion of Mrs Smithson?” He abruptly changed the subject to a discussion about the patients until a quick tap on the door announced Phil’s arrival. “Sit down, Phil,” Jem’s greeting was brusque, “Jack, you may as well go and get yourself another coffee seeing as you never finished the one you had earlier. Be back in ten minutes.” Jack did not entirely enjoy the experience of being dismissed from his own office, but he understood that Jem wanted to talk to Phil before he took matters any further, and the thought of coffee was certainly attractive. He stood up, hoping that Jem could persuade Phil to act in a more professional manner, as much for the younger doctor’s sake as for his own. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:25pm Ooooh, I've just noticed that I'm being examined by a doctor - I hope he's gazing caringly into my eyes - though knowing my luck it'll probably turn out to be Frank Peters. He never found out what was
said inside the office, for neither of the two ever told, but when he arrived
back after his allotted ten minutes there was no more talk of Phil being
transferred to Wales.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 9:56pm Esmeralda!! I thought we'd got away from the behind closed doors syndrome! Liked the post - Jem is starting to annoy me now though! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:01pm You have been busy haven't you Esmerelda, thanks so much. Love the insight into the internal politics at the san. For all its supposed importance we don't actually see a lot of the san in the books do we? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:06pm *huggles Esmeralda!!!* Thank you honey!! Lots of lovely story!!!! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:07pm I'll have you know that I'm very grateful for closed doors, and I think it's the first time I've used them. And yes, I have been busy, but not in the traditional CS sense, with this bit, I'll have posted over 4000 words today, and I think that's enough! Tomorrow, we can all go back to school...... “In addition,” Jem continued,
“I’m sure you recognise that you need another two or three doctors, that
being so, we will be placing an advertisment in the next issue of the Medical
Journal.”
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:16pm Oh, golly, is there anywhere on the entire Platz that isn't tense? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:17pm Will be interesting to see how David's arrival goes down...... |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Carolyn P on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:33pm How on earth can Jem expect them to treat David as any other junior Dr when he has just told them that he will eventually be taking over? Stupid man. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 17th, 2004, 10:33pm Badly, I suspect! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:07pm Well! *pauses for breath, decides that comments will be censored and takes 3 deep breaths to calm down* Rant: Jem is SO out of touch with the times and SO arrogant ..... and SO typical of his type. 'Obviously he (David) will take over'. David might be a prat, incompetent - not even want the job! Don't they have a board who have to approve appointments? This just confirms my opinion of Jem. (and I'd still like to hear some more ;) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:18pm I hate the 'I know best' type of man! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by LauraT on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:26pm Poor Jack! And Jem is a pompous arse who needs to be hit over the head and thrown off the Platz (in a strop here!) More story please! :-* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Pat on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:33pm I've always wondered how a strong woman like Madge put up with Jem! ::) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:41pm on 01/17/04 at 23:33:51, Pat wrote:
I agree. Brainwashed by her upbringing, I suppose. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:41pm on 01/17/04 at 23:33:51, Pat wrote:
That was the tragedy though wasn't it? She was no longer a strong woman once she got married. Must say when Jem first appeared on the scene in this story my opinion of him was high - he did all the right things, dealing with Jack, Con, Hilda and Matey. But he seems to have reverted to type now! Esmeralda - couldn't you arrange a similar accident to the one that got rid of that Policeman? Thank you so much for all your hard work today! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nina on Jan 17th, 2004, 11:57pm Thank you Esmeralda (and the hamster), that was so worth staying up for! What next ... ...? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 18th, 2004, 12:40am *sending a huggle to Esmeralda, and a little one for the hamster* How many words is this now honey? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 18th, 2004, 1:17am on 01/17/04 at 23:26:08, LauraT wrote:
No, really? I couldn't tell!!! ;) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Susan on Jan 18th, 2004, 2:27am Thank you Esmeralda, for all those lovely, lovely posts. You have Jem's character so well, however nice he appeared for a while he would soon revert to type. Hope the hamster isn't too worn out - more hugs for Esmeralda and her hamster. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by keren on Jan 18th, 2004, 10:47am Wow Esmerelda, thanks for all this story in one go! (just got a spam mail from someone called "Joey Rodgers" do you think the spammers read this board? |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Nicolette on Jan 18th, 2004, 3:29pm Thanks Esmeralda, those were fantastic posts. But I'd forgotten Andrew was a doctor *smacks head in frustration* , so when you get my e-mail, just take into consideration that I'm a half-wit. Although, on the other hand, that makes things a lot easier... More story please sweetie, as soon as you can! ;) |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 18th, 2004, 5:39pm I can't believe how eager you all are to see people being thrown over the edge of a cliff - do I really want to spend a day with such a bloodthirsty lot? ;D This bit is about as far as it goes, until I write some more that is. The girls of Gypsophilila
undressed in a sullen silence, resentful of the early bedtime which had
been imposed upon them. Apart from Hilary, who was only to happy that the
interminably long day was ending, only Flaurette was unpeturbed by this
part of the dormitory’s collective punishment. She was glad of the
extra hour of peace in which to think.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by crashbb on Jan 18th, 2004, 6:07pm Too bad she won't actually take a vocal stand, but at least someone looks like they might support Hilary. Thanks for the new bit. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 18th, 2004, 7:12pm Thanks Esmeralda - echoing Chelsea's comment that it's a pity Flaurette won't be more vocal but at least she's going to do something! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by LauraT on Jan 18th, 2004, 7:18pm Does anyone else find that the name Flaurette makes them think of a cauliflower? Or is that just me?! ::) Ahh, I'm glad someone's still there for Hilary! :D |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 18th, 2004, 8:21pm on 01/18/04 at 19:18:55, LauraT wrote:
LOL I seem to remember - right back at the beginning of this story - that Hilary thought the same! ;D |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 18th, 2004, 9:12pm Very impressed with Lesley's memory ;D Unlike Phil, Jack was in
no particular hurry to get home, and Jem had, by his actions, reminded
him that he had neglected to spend any time with Con that day, an oversight
which he decided to remedy. It was obvious though, as soon as he
walked through the door, that Con had not missed him. Obviously feeling
better, she was sitting up in bed, smiling into the face of the young man
who was sitting by her side.
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by LauraT on Jan 18th, 2004, 9:26pm I never read the beginning, and havent got time to go back and do so yet! (correspondingly, could anyone give me a brief plot summary?! I'm living in a happy haze of confusion at the mo!) But poor Jack! And how rude
of Joey!
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by PatMac on Jan 18th, 2004, 9:50pm Wow! Poor Jack, adjusting to his 'little girl' growing up and then going home to find Joey gone. This has so many sub plots that I'd forgotten she had gone walkabout! I don't know how you are keeping this all in your head, Esmeralda but the story is aptly named! *wondering if will sleep tonight, worrying about the latest development* |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Carolyn P on Jan 18th, 2004, 10:17pm *wails* Where is Joey. Getting more and more tense again. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Lesley on Jan 18th, 2004, 11:12pm Thanks again Esmeralda! Should like to confess that I'd been reading through the first part of Tensions in the archives recently to remind myself of the beginning of the story - reason I could remember the bit about Flaurette! Oh Laura - I don't think it's possible to summarize all the plots in this masterpiece - suggest you trawl the archives - or ask if Esmeralda has it on word so you can read it through. When you get to the point where Esmeralda mentions my Aside - I have that on doc as well if you're interested! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Vikki on Jan 19th, 2004, 12:42am Thank you Esmeralda!! ;D More soon please! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 19th, 2004, 4:37am And if you're going to read it all the way through, Laura, I suggest you set aside at least three hours to do so! Wonderful stuff, Esmeralda! I can't wait to find out what's happened to Joey! |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Cathy on Jan 19th, 2004, 5:55am Has Joey taken off with Gwynnie? I hope not. I can't work out whether I feel sorry for Jack or not, I keep changing my mind. Sits down and begins to chant
...
|
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by KB on Jan 19th, 2004, 6:21am on 01/19/04 at 05:55:15, Cathy wrote:
Yes, she has. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Esmeralda on Jan 19th, 2004, 11:37am Well, I have written a brief summary, though I'm beginning to wish I hadn't coz it all looks rather thin and implausible when it's condensed to 1200 words, but the whole doc. up to the point where part 6 was archived can be accessed by clicking on the little hut at the side. I'll update when the 'puter is mended. One warning, it comes complete with major errors, typos and spelling mistakes, but at the moment I'm more concerned with getting it written than getting it right! It's strange though, how things which seem to flow naturally when you're writing seem anything but when you look back on them. My only excuse is that most of what has happened wasn't supposed to....this was really meant to be a story about Hilary and Flaurette, and Lucy, with just a brief explanation of why Con was teaching, and it was only going to be @ 3,000 - 5,000 words long. I just got a little bit carried away. Anyway Laura, if you want to send me your e-mail, I'll send a copy of the summary if you want. |
||
Title: Re: Tensions ~ Part Eight!!! Post by Jennie on Jan 19th, 2004, 12:05pm I've just caught up on this after the weekend, Esmeralda. it's terrific, so complex and so believable. |
||
The
Chaletian Bulletin Board » Powered by YaBB
1 Gold - SP 1.1!
|