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#1: Unwanted Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 9:58 pm

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It seems that as soon as I get a week off work and don't have to fill my brain with genetic biomarkers and gastric pH, the bunnies take ruthless advantage of this and attack me in groups of 10 or more! Anyway, this small purple leave is sparkling the most at the moment, so here you are...


In the back of the taxi, Grizel Cochrane had been fidgeting excitedly for the whole journey. Finally the car pulled up outside a large house. The driver got out, carried a trunk and small case to the front porch, and rang the bell, while Grizel danced her way up the path. When no-one came to the door, he turned to speak to the little girl standing impatiently beside him. “This is the right address, missy, but there don’t seem to be nobody in.”

“That’s alright” she replied confidently. “My Daddy will be here soon. I’ll wait for him. You don’t have to stay, he won’t be long.”

“Are you sure miss?” asked the driver hesitantly. He had been paid to bring the child here, but nothing had been said about waiting and he had another booking he had to get to. But he was reluctant to leave the little girl on her own at an empty house. Still, if she was sure someone would be here before long…

“I’ll be alright.” She assured him. “I’ll stay here and look out for him. He’ll be here soon, I know.” After another moment, and a look at his watch – he really must be in time for his next booking, he couldn’t afford to lose business, not with a little one on the way – he left her, warning her not to wander off anywhere. “Don’t worry, I’m going to wait here for Daddy.” She promised him, her big grey eyes shining, and she waved cheerily to him from inside the gate as he drove off.

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 2:45 pm; edited 7 times in total

 

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#2:  Author: Pat, Location: Doncaster Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:04 pm

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Oh poor poor Grizel.

 

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#3:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:12 pm

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Thank you Liz. Looks like this is going to be vey interesting. But poor Grizel, it's going to be horrible for her

 

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#4:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:14 pm

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Oh no!!!!!Poor little girl!!!!

 

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#5:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:18 pm

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Should like to strangle that insensitive turd, how dare subject his daughter to this? poor Grizel.

 

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#6:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:49 pm

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Wibbles Poor Grizel, it's so sad seeing how bright and cheery she is and knowing that she will soon have her hopes and dreams dashed.

 

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#7:  Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 11:02 pm

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I know it shouldn't, but somehow the fact that she is so bright, cheery and happy makes what is about to happen seem even worse. How could he!

 

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#8:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 11:38 pm

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ohhhh, poor Grizel

 

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#9:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 11:40 pm

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It turned out to be a long afternoon for Grizel. At first she stood by the gate, looking hopefully at each car that turned into the street. Then a short shower sent her to the shelter of the porch, where she sat down on her trunk, her chin on her knees, dreaming. She hadn’t told the taxi driver the other exciting thing about Daddy coming home. Grannie had told her. For a moment she was sad, remembering saying goodbye to Grannie that morning, then she remembered that exciting thing Grannie had told her. Daddy was bringing a new mother for her with him. Grizel knew the reason she’d lived with her Grannie for the last 5 years because she didn’t have a mother, her own mother had gone to be with the angels. But now, Daddy had found her a new mother so that she could live with him again. The short shower over, she returned to the front gate, not noticing that leaning on it left a damp grey mark across the front of her clothes. As the afternoon wore on, she suffered disappointment after disappointment as each car drove past without stopping. “Please come home soon Daddy” she whispered over and over again, and each time a car came around the corner “Please be Daddy’s car, please be Daddy’s car,” but none of them were. In the early evening, another shower of rain sent her back to the porch, and she sat on the steps, still watching hopefully, but eventually getting too tired to notice that a car had stopped outside, until she heard the squeak of the gate and saw someone coming up the path in the twilight.

 

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#10:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 11:42 pm

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Awwwwww!!! Please can I go into the drabble and hug little Grizel?

 

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#11:  Author: Kathy_S, Location: midwestern US Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 12:24 am

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Mr. Cochrane. What was he thinking?

 

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#12:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 2:37 am

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Poor little unloved soul. But WHY did her Granny send her unannounced?

 

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#13:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 5:09 am

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And when they do finally arrive all Grizel will get is dislike and disapproval! Thanks Liz.

 

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#14:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:50 am

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Oh, poor Grizel.

 

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#15:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:02 am

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*Huggles Grizel*

 

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#16:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:14 am

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Oh poor Grizel. Interesting to see what happened to Grizel pre-Chalet School. Your heart just goes out to her, doesn't it? Thanks Liz.

 

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#17:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 11:13 am

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Thank you Liz, this is so lovely, and little Grizel is just too adorable. Poor Grizel :crying: Can you bring some CBBers in to give her hugs please?

 

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#18:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 11:54 am

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Poor Grizel, how absolutely awful for her

 

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#19:  Author: pim, Location: St Andrews (right next to the beach) Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 12:07 pm

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Poor Grizel Maybe we could do a mass CBB adoption of her?

 

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#20:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 12:12 pm

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*bets this is all the new mother's fault* poor Grizel - **hugs little Grizel** if they don't come by nightfall she's coming home with me and i'll feed her hot milk and biscuits!!

 

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#21:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 12:41 pm

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I'm reading this drabble through my fingers at the moment as I can hardly bear to read what happens next I strongly suspect that you, LizB, are about to change my perception of Grizel for ever.... and that is a good thing, btw! ETA: I can't believe I've gone all the way back to first lesson - and lost my star! But thankyou for tidying up the board Vikki

 

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#22:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 1:15 pm

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pim wrote:

Poor Grizel Maybe we could do a mass CBB adoption of her?

You've already got Amy, I bags Grizel!

 

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#23:  Author: Ann, Location: Newcastle upon Tyne, England Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:18 pm

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Interesting to read all the pro-Grizel comments on this thread, bearing in mind what people have said on the character discussion thread... Thanks Liz - this is a brilliant idea for a drabble and I'm hooked already.

 

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#24:  Author: Emily, Location: Land of White Coats and Stethoscopes. Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:45 pm

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LizB wrote:

“Please come home soon Daddy” she whispered over and over again, and each time a car came around the corner “Please be Daddy’s car, please be Daddy’s car,” but none of them were.

Surely no-one could be anti-Grizel too evilly after reading this?! Loving this Liz, in a heart-breaking sort of way.

 

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#25:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:47 pm

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Aww. I feel so bad for her. *wibbles wibblingly*

 

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#26:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:06 pm

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Poor Kiddy! Presumably Grannie didn't want her either to send her off alone like that! Thank you Liz.

 

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#27:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:29 pm

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Thanks Liz. Poor, poor Grizel!

 

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#28:  Author: Joan the Dwarf, Location: Er, where am I? Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:30 pm

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Oh no... I can't bear to read this!

 

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#29:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:38 pm

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Just to let you know - I do have some initial sympathy for Grizel's stepmother - but that's no excuse for how she treats Grizel! Also, I've made up names for Mr & Mrs Cochrane, but if they do have names mentioned in the books, please let me know.

It had been a lovely honeymoon, thought the new Mrs Cochrane, as the taxi drove them through the streets to the house that was to be her home from now on. It was a shame there had been such a delay on the return trip. She had suggested they stay in a hotel overnight and finish the journey the next day, but Henry had been adamant that they must get back that day. He had mentioned that there would be a surprise waiting for her and she smiled to herself, imagining a big bouquet of flowers waiting for her. Henry wasn’t much of a romantic – nor was she come to that – but he did make an effort on occasion. She turned to smile at him and slipped her hand into his. “Thank you for a wonderful honeymoon,” she said softly.

“Eh? Oh, yes, well, glad you enjoyed it” he replied. “Ah, here we are at last. You go on up to the house, you don’t want to stand here in the rain. I’ll sort the cases and pay the driver and will be with you to take you inside.” She wondered as she opened the gate if “take you inside” meant he was going to scoop her up in his arms and carry her over the threshold, although that would be very unlike Henry. Lost in her thoughts, she was almost at the house, when, through the gathering gloom, she saw a figure standing on the steps, hopping from one foot to another.

“What on earth are you doing here, child?” she demanded.

“I live here.” Grizel replied. “Nonsense” replied Irene Cochrane. She knew homeless children in London often slept in the doorways of uninhabited houses, but surely not here in Devonshire.

“But I do” replied Grizel. “Daddy’s coming…” she was interrupted by the squeak of the gate and with a squeal of excitement, and regardless of the rain, which was coming down more heavily now, she dashed along the path and flung herself delightedly on her father. “Daddy! Daddy!” she exclaimed. “I knew you’d come! Oh, Daddy!”

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:25 pm; edited 1 time in total

 

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#30:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:45 pm

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Thank you Liz. Poor Grizel it must be horrible for her. I do feel sorry for Mrs Cochrane though - it was awful of Mr Cochrane not to tell her about the child. All the heartbreak might have been prevented if there had been some advance warning. Well maybe not all but some of it at least

 

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#31:  Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 11:15 pm

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Poor Grizel Also, must admit to feeling a bit sorry for Mrs Cochrane - though that might change in the future! It must have been a shock finding a child foistered onto you.

 

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#32:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 7:27 am

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OK I feel it was a huge shock, but why take out her temper on the child - she should have punched Henry instead! Mr Cochrane!

 

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#33:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:50 am

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*hugs Grizel* It must have been a shock to Mrs Cochrane *pokes Mr Cochrane*

 

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#34:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:54 am

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Poor Grizel! Mr Crochane has a funny idea of a nice surprise I must say More soon please!

 

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#35:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 11:10 am

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Insensitive, unfeeling, thoughtless, uncaring, unsympathetic, unkind, mean spirited, heartless, callous, spiteful, *pauses for breath* dim, thick, brainless, dim-witted, foolish, silly, daft person! If I'd been Mrs Cochrane, I'd have been out of there like a shot - even if I liked children!

 

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#36:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 12:19 pm

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God this makes your heart break. Poor little Grizel. What an insensitive worm! Thanks Liz

 

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#37:  Author: pim, Location: St Andrews (right next to the beach) Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 1:51 pm

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Mrs Cochrane Horrible woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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#38:  Author: JustJen, Location: waiting for a bus Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 4:35 pm

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Oh poor por kid.

 

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#39:  Author: Nicci, Location: UK Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 5:10 pm

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I feel incrediably sorry for Grizel - but I do have some sympathy (or at least understand) Mrs Cochrane's reaction. Why on earth did Mr Cochrane not tell her??btw, I seem to remember something about Mr and Mrs Cochrane in the books, or maybe it was a drabble. Something around the time of Mr Cochrane's death - wasn't it felt that he had been pushed around a bit by the new Mrs C? Or is that just a figment of my imgaination combined with the plot from the modern-day version of Cinderella that they keep showing on daytime tv for some kind of school education programme??Looking forward to hearing more about Grizel - and as someone else has said, would love it to go up to when Madge offers her the place.

 

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#40:  Author: Kathy_S, Location: midwestern US Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 5:36 pm

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I'm not feeling too charitable towards either Mr. or new Mrs. Cochrane. :evil:However, that "Daddy! Daddy!" paragraph -- did anyone else suddenly envision Shirley Temple playing Grizel? (showing my age, no doubt ) Grizel would have had to become the main character, of course... Just think what it would have done to Jo et al.

 

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#41:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:15 pm

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Grizel tripped backwards and forwards across the doorstep, chattering nineteen to the dozen, following her father as he brought the cases and her trunk into the house. She was radiantly happy to be with her father again, and wouldn’t let him out of her sight. She didn’t notice no-one was responding to her chatter, but she barely left space for anyone to get a word in anyway.“You missed my birthday Daddy,” she said reproachfully when the cases were finally all in the house, and he turned to look at her.

“Did I?”

“Yes Daddy, it was 3 weeks ago yesterday and I was 10.” she told him importantly.

“Well,” he explained “3 weeks ago yesterday I was busy getting married.”

“Is that my present then?” she asked ingenuously.

“Is what your present?” he suddenly realised that in the bustle of wedding and honeymoon preparations he had forgotten this year to send the usual cheque to his mother, so she could buy a present for his daughter from him.

“A new mother for me. Is that why you got married on my birthday? To give me a new mother as my present?”

“Well …” he didn’t know quite what to say. Her innocent question could hardly be answered truthfully, even if she was spot on about part of his motives. “My goodness!” he exclaimed, changing the subject “It’s time you were in bed and asleep isn’t it? Off you go and jump into bed and I’ll bring you some supper in a few minutes.”

“Yes Daddy, but which is my bedroom?” she asked eagerly.

“Well let’s go and see.” He had left instructions with the daily help to have a room made up ready for her, and they soon found it on the first floor, and within half an hour she had eaten a simple supper of sandwiches, drunk a glass of milk, and was fast asleep, dreaming of the wonderful times she was going to have now that she was living with her Daddy and new mother.

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:27 pm; edited 1 time in total

 

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#42:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:37 pm

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Poor little Grizel. Oh that man makes me so mad! :Bang: How dare he do that to his daughter? Can even feel a tiny amount of sympathy for the evil step mother, but him?????

 

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#43:  Author: Nicci, Location: UK Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:38 pm

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Oh poor Grizel. My heart aches for her.

 

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#44:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:52 pm

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Poor, poor Grizel. :crying:

 

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#45:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:32 am

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Don't know if I want to see how Grizel's happiness is wittled down to nothing.

 

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#46:  Author: Kathye, Location: Laleham Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:36 am

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I don't think I can bear to read any more.... its just making me well up :crying:

 

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#47:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 12:49 pm

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Thanks for a, lovely post. But poor grizel, she is going to be so dissappointed

 

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#48:  Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 3:34 pm

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Poor Grizel I get the feeling that this is going to be incredibly hard to read (and for you to write Liz) the further it goes.

 

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#49:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 5:47 pm

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*leaves large quantities of tissues lying around!* *hugs little Grizel!*

 

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#50:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 8:43 pm

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*Picks up a few hundred tissues in readiness* - thanks Vikki! *Joins the huggle of Grizel* *Wibbles horribly at thought of what is to come.... *

 

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#51:  Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 8:56 pm

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You can sometimes see a fathers' day card with reads "Anyone can be a father, it takes someonw special to be a dad." Mr Cochrane is clearly a father.

 

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#52:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 9:34 pm

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This gets more heart-rending by the minute. Mr Cochrane is a great example of why some people should be neutered! Thanks for the update Liz

 

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#53:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:15 pm

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While Grizel dreamed sweetly upstairs, there was an uncomfortable silence downstairs, where Henry and Irene, having eaten a similar supper, sat in the Drawing Room. “That was quite a surprise, I must admit” Irene broke the silence. “You never mentioned that you had a daughter.”

“You knew I’d been married before, and my wife died 5 years ago.” he told her.

“Yes, but you never mentioned you had a child. She obviously hasn’t been living with you, so where has she been?” the question “and why didn’t you tell me about her” was left unspoken.

“She’s been with my mother since Victoria died. But mother is getting too old to keep up with a young child.”

“She’s certainly a lively girl,” commented Irene dryly, “but I’m sure a good boarding school will soon teach her to direct her energy.”

“She’s not going to boarding school.” Henry told her. “One of the reasons for getting married was so that she would be able to live with me with a mother to care for her.”

“But I don’t know anything about children.” she protested.

“Well, it can’t be that difficult can it?” asked Henry, “After all, you were a girl once, weren’t you.”

“Well, yes, of course I was,” answered Irene, “but that doesn’t mean that I know how to bring one up.” There was a slight sharpness in her tone, as she tried to hide her upset at the situation. The first argument of their married life, and it was happening on the first night in her new home.

“Well, I married you so she’d have a mother to bring her up.” Henry replied, rather tactless in his annoyance. “And if we send her straight off to boarding school as soon as she comes to live with us what do you think people will say?”

Irene was silent for a moment. She was new to Taverton, and she realised that if she started people talking against her as soon as she arrived, she could have a very uncomfortable life here. “She had better go to the local school then.” she capitulated “I certainly can’t act as governess to her.”

“Wasn’t expecting you to my dear” replied her husband, glad that she had seen reason. “I understand there’s a very good school near here, we’ll enrol her there.”

“Very well,” agreed Irene.

“That’s my girl.” Henry smiled at her. “I’ll leave Grizel and the direction of the house to you – I’m sure you’ll manage it all splendidly. You can organise the domestic staff as you see fit. Let me know what sort of budget you’ll need for housekeeping.” Now that the issue of his daughter was settled, he was prepared to be generous in other areas.

“Well,” said Irene after a moment’s quiet “I think I’ll retire for the night – all the travelling today has been quite tiring.”

“I’ll be up shortly,” replied Henry. By the time he went upstairs however, she was asleep, and he didn’t see the dried tears on his bride’s cheeks.

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:29 pm; edited 1 time in total

 

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#54:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:19 pm

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Fantastic update. Thank you. I feel sorry for Grizel but now I feel sorry for Irene too. For him to tell her that he only married her to be a mother when she thought he'd married her because he loved her must be heartbreaking. Still, she shouldn't have treated Grizel so badly

 

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#55:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:22 pm

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How stupid of him to marry her so she'd be a Mother to Grizel, when she doesn't even know he has a daughter

 

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#56:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:24 pm

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Feeling very sorry for 'Steppy' ! Can you imagine that :

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“Well, I married you so she’d have a mother to bring her up.”

*time for CBB lynch mob?* They never had a chance!

 

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#57:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:36 pm

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Evil, unfeeling, tactless skunk!!! Like everyone I'm starting to feel a little sorry for Grizel's step-mother. But that man? Castration's too good for him!

 

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#58:  Author: Nicci, Location: UK Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:48 pm

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Thoughtless thoughtless man. I can understand Irene's reaction much more now.

 

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#59:  Author: pim, Location: St Andrews (right next to the beach) Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 11:24 pm

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Grizel's father

 

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#60:  Author: Kathy_S, Location: midwestern US Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 11:37 pm

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That low-down, lizard-brained excuse for a man! He’s even worse than I imagined. By the next post I may think they deserve each other, but at this point … Poor Grizel, caught in the middle...

 

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#61:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 11:48 pm

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Grizel awoke feeling very hungry the next morning. She opened her eyes, wondering for a moment where she was, then, with floods of excitement, she remembered. She was living with Daddy and her new mother. She jumped joyfully out of bed and scampered barefoot across the floor to tug open the curtains.

The early morning sunlight streamed in, and she climbed up onto the wide windowseat to look outside. Her room was at the back of the house and overlooked a large garden. It was rather overgrown and wild in places, but every leaf was glistening with water from the previous night’s rain, the sunlight catching the drops and making the whole garden sparkle. It looked like it would be a splendid place to explore she thought. Her room, she had taken in the previous evening a bed, now with rumpled sheets, a large wardrobe, a dressing table and a chest of drawers, all in a dark wood. Her trunk and case had been brought upstairs and were against one wall, still unpacked. There was nothing much to see here, but, she remembered happily, there was the rest of the house to look around.

Still barefoot and in her pyjamas, she opened the door, slipped out into the hallway and down the stairs, oblivious of the fact that the clock was just striking five. A quick foray into the back of the house brought her to the kitchen, where she found some bread rolls, which took the edge off her hunger, and a couple of apples, which she took with her, munching on the first as she wandered around the downstairs rooms.

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#62:  Author: Pado, Location: Connecticut, USA Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 12:11 am

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Bother. I was comfortable not feeling sorry for Grizel.

 

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#63:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 5:14 am

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What makes it so much worse is Grizel's innocence. Thanks Liz.

 

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#64:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:18 am

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Lesley wrote:

What makes it so much worse is Grizel's innocence.

I know, I'm hating myself now for what I'm going to do to her in the future so I'm letting her enjoy herself as much as possible first!

Irene Cochrane also opened her eyes that morning, wondering where she was. A gentle snore came from next to her as she remembered – she was in her new home. For a moment she lay there, happily reliving memories from the honeymoon. Then a sudden heaviness descended on her heart as she remembered the conversation of the previous evening. She had not believed Henry Cochrane to be wildly in love with her, nor she with him. But he had talked of companionship, compatibility and sharing a home and, she had thought that his natural reserve was hiding some warmer feelings. She certainly had very fond feelings for him, and had been hoping that over the years together their relationship would develop into the loving one that she craved. Someone left on the shelf, as she had been by the time she met Henry, was too old to fall head-over-heels in love, but surely a more mature love could grow, based on their mutual fondness and understanding. At least, that was what she had thought was happening until the previous evening. The honeymoon had been marvellous. They had spent the whole time together, discussing the sights of Paris, music, arts, and all sorts. He had been so considerate and gentle in his treatment of her and she had begun to believe something special was growing.

Then she found out he had married her because he needed a housekeeper and mother to his child. She had thought she knew him, but he had a child he hadn’t mentioned once, either before they were married, or in those three wonderful weeks. They had never discussed children at all, so he hadn’t been aware that she didn’t really like them. She never knew what to say to them, or how to relate to them. They made her feel nervous, and she hid the nervousness by speaking sharply to them. At least this one was old enough not to be constantly crying or making a mess, if that was any consolation!

A sound from overhead interrupted her thoughts and she sat up in alarm. Henry was still snoring beside her, but there was definitely somebody moving around upstairs. There were no live-in domestic staff at the moment (something she would rectify without delay) and it was far too early in the morning for the ‘woman who did’ for Mr Cochrane to be in the house. "Henry," she whispered urgently, but the only response was a gentle snore. She climbed out of bed and pulled on her dressing gown and slippers. Then seizing a poker from the fireplace, she tiptoed from the room and up the stairs to the 2nd floor. She reached the top of the staircase and cautiously made her way to the front room, above the bedroom. The door was ajar, but peering through the gap revealed nothing, although there were definitely sounds coming from the room. Pushing it wider open, she was horrified to hear the hinges creak. The noise sounded very loud in the quietness and was followed by complete silence.

Clutching the poker in front of her, in a slightly shaking hand, she walked into the room to find Grizel, who had stopped mid-run across the wooden floor, a half-eaten apple in one hand, staring at her with wide eyes. Relief flooded through Irene, followed swiftly by annoyance. The realisation of what a fool she must look like, dressed in her nightclothes, wielding a poker, added to her irritation. “What on earth are you doing here, child?” she asked, unconsciously echoing her words of the previous evening.

“I’m exploring.” Grizel explained. “Are you exploring too?”

“No I am not.” Irene replied shortly. “Now get back to bed this instant.”

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:32 pm; edited 1 time in total

 

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#65:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:59 am

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Poor Grizel

 

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#66:  Author: pim, Location: St Andrews (right next to the beach) Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:08 am

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:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: Poor Grizel.

 

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#67:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 11:42 am

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Poor Grizel Its good to have some background about Mrs Cochrane to explain her treatment of Grizel, shame she still had to treat her like that when an adult.

 

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#68:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 1:56 pm

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I do have some sympathy for Mrs Cochrane, but it's a shame she chose to take out her husband's idiocy on Grizel. Poor little mite. Thanks Liz

 

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#69:  Author: Ann, Location: Newcastle upon Tyne, England Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 7:19 pm

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LizB wrote:

I know, I'm hating myself now for what I'm going to do to her in the future so I'm letting her enjoy herself as much as possible first!

It's not what you're going to do to her, Liz, it's what EBD did to her. *struck by a horrible thought* Unless you've got something even worse in mind? *wibbles*

 

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#70:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:15 pm

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Thanks Liz. Great updates. Feel so sorry for Grizel, she obviously hasn't yet realised that her new mother dosn't want her. Feel sorry for Mrs Cochrane too though

 

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#71:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:23 pm

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*Want to kick Mr Cochrane.*

 

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#72:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 11:41 pm

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*Puts on heavy boots and stands next to Lesley* Ready to start kicking whenever you are, Lesley!

 

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#73:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 11:47 pm

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mr cochrane this man is not fit to have a wife or a daughter!

 

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#74:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 1:41 pm

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May I join the kicking queue please?

 

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#75:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 3:30 pm

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*Joining queue behind Vikki*

 

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#76:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:05 am

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*whispers* Can we have some more please?

 

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#77:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 6:25 pm

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Can I join the kicking queue too please?

 

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#78:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 8:47 pm

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Mihiri, the more the merrier! Liz - can we have the next bit now please?

 

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#79:  Author: Catherine_B, Location: Oxford, UK Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:18 pm

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Aaaaargh, this is an inspired drabble (both choice of subject and writing) but I can't bear the dreadful awful horribleness that Grizel is going to experience now. :crying: :crying: :crying: (speaking as someone who's suffered through 2 evil stepmothers though fortunately not living with them, but even at a distance they were bad enough!)

 

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#80:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 6:15 pm

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Sorry for the lack of posting - managed to stupidly scald the inside of my wrist and computer use has been uncomfortable for a few days. Is healing nicely now though.

Grizel lay in bed thinking. She realised she had done something to upset her new mother. She must try to do something special to make it up to her later.

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#81:  Author: Kathy_S, Location: midwestern US Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 6:44 pm

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Sorry to hear about the scald. Those are nasty! Look at it this way... You've sacrificed yourself to keep poor Grizel happy a little longer. *does a little extra Mr. & Mrs. Cochrane*

 

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#82:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 12:45 pm

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Ouch! That must have hurt! Glad the wrist's on the mend anyway...

 

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#83:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 3:33 pm

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Sounds painful Liz. Hope you feel better soon

 

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#84:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 5:17 pm

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Ouch! Hope the wrist is better soon Liz!

 

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#85:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 5:26 pm

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Sounds painful! Thank you for the update Liz - and hope the wrist mends soon!

 

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#86:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 5:57 pm

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Poor you about the wrist - and thanks for the update!

 

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#87:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:24 pm

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The wrist is healing nicely thanks - prompt and prolonged treatment with cold water and then ice helped keep the damage down to a minimum, and now all I have to show for it is a slightly darker, slightly wrinkled patch of skin.

When she was allowed to get up later, Grizel dressed herself carefully in the clothes she had worn the previous day. She went downstairs and found her father eating his breakfast and reading the paper. Irene had purposely finished her meal before she arrived and was in the parlour making lists. Sitting at the table and helping herself to some food she started chattering to him, telling him about what she had found when she looked around the house. After a few moments of non-stop chatter he put down his newspaper and looked at her. “Grizel, do try to stay quiet for a while, and eat your breakfast, there’s a good girl.” He must have a word with Irene about teaching the child to stay quiet at mealtimes, especially breakfast.

Once she’d finished breakfast and her father had thankfully dismissed her from the table, telling her to behave well for her new mother, Grizel wandered through to the kitchen, where she found the back door. The key was in the lock and she turned it and pushed the door open. She spent a few minutes investigating the garden before she had a wonderful idea. Skipping happily along, with the occasional venture into a tangle of growth after a particularly pretty flower, she had soon gathered a large handful of flowers and returned to the house.

Oblivious of the muddy footsteps she was leaving behind her, she searched the downstairs rooms for Irene, before finding her unpacking cases in the main bedroom. “I got these for you.” Grizel announced from the doorway.

Irene jumped, startled, and turned around. “Look at the state of you child!” she exclaimed, “what have you been doing?”

Grizel walked across the room, leaving a moist trail across the carpet and examined herself in the mirror. In addition to the mark from leaning on the gate the previous day, she now had a collection of green stains on her clothes, mud on her stockings, and a tear in her skirt where a bramble had caught it. Her brown curls were in complete disarray, meriting the description 'dragged through a hedge backwards'. A smudge on her cheek completed the look. Grizel turned away from the mirror, unconcerned at the appearance she presented. Grannie had never minded if she got messy playing, as long as she was clean and tidy when they had visitors. “I picked some flowers for you, mother.” She smiled, confident that her gift would explain everything.

Irene looked at the bedraggled collection of flowers and weeds, and the damp, dishevelled girl standing grinning disrespectfully, she thought, at her. “I am not your mother!” she snapped. “Now go and change your clothes and make yourself respectable.”

Grizel looked at her, bewildered. “But… your flowers…” she faltered.

Irene snatched them out of her hands. “I told you to go and change. Now go!” her voice rose and Grizel turned to leave the room, but not quickly enough to avoid seeing her rejected offering flung into the wastepaper basket.

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:34 pm; edited 1 time in total

 

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#88:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:31 pm

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*cries* Poor Grizel. Rejection is horrible, I think it's the worst feeling in the world, especially as a little kid.

 

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#89:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:32 pm

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ohhhh - poor, poor girl! doesn't Irene care for her at all? hope your wrist gets better soon!

 

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#90:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:33 pm

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How awful! ((((Grizel)))). I can see this being a very unhappy marriage, which probably explains a lot of Grizel's problems in the future. thanks Liz.

 

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#91:  Author: Ann, Location: Newcastle upon Tyne, England Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:40 pm

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Grrrrr! You don't have to be an expert in childcare to exercise tact! Glad the wrist is improving, Liz.

 

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#92:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:45 pm

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:crying: Poor Grizel!!

 

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#93:  Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 10:58 am

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Poor Grizel That must have been awful for her. Irene for not being more understanding.

 

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#94:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 1:28 pm

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Poor Grizel,That women is so cruel, has she no heart?

 

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#95:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 1:57 pm

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Oh, poor Grizel! ((Grizel)) This drabble is excellent, and you're really showing how disconcerting she must have been to her unprepared stepmother. Presumably Irene's not had too much to do with children up until now, and has no idea how to treat them. If she's a very houseproud, neat and tidy person, a child who is not could be extremely irritating. If she was really Grizel's mother (and had a nicer personality) she'd be able to see the gesture for what it really is. Mr Cochrane, of course, is the one to blame for the whole situation, though Irene is not helping matters by deciding that the problem is all Grizel's fault (though probably quite psychologically likely).

 

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#96:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 2:17 pm

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God, this is so heartbreaking - poor Grizel. Some adults just don't realis the damage they do to children. Liz, this is wonderfully written - very emotive. thanks

 

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#97:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 3:32 pm

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*sobs* Poor Grizel, how awful for her. It might not be all Irene fault but she should have been able to keep her temper infront of the child.

 

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#98:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 3:38 pm

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((Grizel)) Irene & Mr Cochrane

 

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#99:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 4:41 pm

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Poor little Grizel!

 

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#100:  Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 4:50 pm

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This is so hard, poor poor Grizel, it does explain so much of what happened to her. Irene is in a difficult situation, she doesn't like children, doesn't have any experience of them, and has been landed not with a baby whom she would have time to grow used to (although that would be a whole set of different problems) but a young girl who is looking for a lot of love and affection that she doesn't know how to give. Grizel's father needs a short sharp kick, followed by a long a slow painful experience.

 

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#101:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 7:53 pm

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Lines up behind Carolyn to give Mr Cochrane the kicking he deserves....

 

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#102:  Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 8:40 pm

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I think it does say in the books that Grannie 'spoilt' Grizel, prehaps never suggesting little things like "wipe your feet before coming into the house", etc. Must admit that if my 9 yr old had brought that much mess in, AFTER i had thanked him for the flowers, i would have aasked him to sweep up the mess... but all this is Mr Cochrane's fault - if he'd been honest with Irene about wanting a mother for grizel, she still might have married him, but could have prepared. I think Irene should sweep the floor & put all the earth in his bed.

 

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#103:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 12:53 pm

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She supposed she shouldn’t have shouted at the child – she had seen the hurt and shock on the young, expressive face. Irene was berating herself, but really, whatever had possessed the girl to think that she would want a collection of damp weeds. And to call her “mother” like that of all things? She couldn’t apologise to the girl – any sign of weakness and she would never have authority over her, she thought, but maybe she should go and speak more calmly to the child. She left the room, her sharp eyes noticing the damp trail to and from it, and soggy collection of leaves at the top of the staircase and her exasperation started to rise again. Grizel suddenly appeared in the doorway to her room, clad in vest and knickers, still with hair awry and smudged cheek. “My clothes are all in my trunk,” she informed Irene.

Irene sighed. Was this infernal child going to appear every time she turned around? As well as a few times when she didn’t? Marching into the bedroom, she flung open the case and pulled out a dress and pinafore. “Put these on,” she instructed Grizel shortly, “then go and get a damp floorcloth from the kitchen and clean up the dirt you have left through the house.”

Grizel nodded, unsure what to say. She did not remain subdued for long, however, and soon the sound of a childish voice singing floated through the house, as she removed traces of mud from the stairs. Inspecting the rooms on the 2nd floor, Irene heard her and felt a twinge of annoyance. Was there going to be no opportunity for peace and quiet? She shut the door of the room and leant against it, muffling the sound slightly. She looked around the room. It was the one she had found Grizel in that morning. An idea began to form in her brain, and became clearer as she left that room and looked around the others.

When she went back downstairs she found Grizel still singing to herself making her way towards the main bedroom. “I’ll do the cleaning up in there.” She informed her, reluctant to have the child looking around her things. “If you have finished everywhere else you may go and unpack your belongings and carry them upstairs to the room above the one you slept in last night. That room and the schoolroom next to it will be the rooms you are to keep to when you are in the house.”

“Two rooms of my own?” asked Grizel excitedly.

“Yes, those two rooms will be for your use,” confirmed Irene, “but I shall expect you to keep them clean and tidy yourself. Now don’t stand her chattering,” as Grizel opened her mouth again, “go and get on with your unpacking and be quiet about it!” Grizel turned and went to start unpacking. “Oh, and while I remember child, I shall have some staff sent over by an agency for interviews this afternoon, so you must stay upstairs out of the way.” Irene walked into the main bedroom and closed the door, effectively curtailing any response from Grizel.

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#104:  Author: Dawn, Location: Leeds, West Yorks Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 1:06 pm

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This is so well written Liz - thankyou for anyone not used to the amount of noise/mess kids make it must be a nightmare. Irene no doubt had her own plans of a peaceful house and her being the gracious lady of it with just a husband to look after. No wonder they got off on such a wrong footing and never recovered.

 

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#105:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 1:09 pm

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Thank you Liz. Poor Grizel and poor Irene.

 

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#106:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:00 pm

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Thanks Liz, its sooo sad to see Grizel being excited about having those rooms when we know they are not given in kindness. I'm not looking forward to Grizel growing older and realising the truth of the situation.

 

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#107:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:00 pm

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Before this drabble began I guess I was in a majority of those disliking Grizel's stepmother but now I feel sorry for her. Though sorrier for Grizel. Of course she may think also that she will be doing Grizel good by making her more conformable - it's obvious that she doesn't know about Grannie's regime, and if she did, she might think that her step-daughter has had far too much freedom.

 

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#108:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:12 pm

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Thanks Liz. I'm finding this getting sadder by the post... Poor Grizel

 

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#109:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:43 pm

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This is so tragic Thanks Liz

 

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#110:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 4:36 pm

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Thanks LizPoor Irene, it must be hard for her, but it still doesnt excuse her letting Grizel think she's getting those rooms as a nice gesture. Evil woman

 

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#111:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 6:02 pm

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The removal of her belongings from the trunk and up the stairs to her new room, one armful at a time, was hindered by stopping to chat to the ‘woman who did’, Mrs Clawton, who had been sent to pull dustsheets off the furniture and make sure the bed was aired and ready for use. She listened with half an ear to Grizel’s chatter, admittedly the little girl didn’t require much of a response. “She’d talk the hind leg off a donkey, that one!” she told her husband that evening. “And she’s that set on her father – just adores him she does.”

After lunch, when Grizel had to be told to keep quiet four times, she went back to continue her unpacking. She felt really important and grown up, putting her own things away, and she sang to herself as she pushed her clothes into drawers, regardless of any creases caused. By the time she had finished doing this, a stream of domestic staff was coming and going from the house, being interviewed by Mrs Cochrane.

Managing to remember that she had been told (firmly) after lunch that she was to stay upstairs that afternoon, she sat and peered through the banisters, watching as the different women came and went. Most of them looked curiously around the hallway as they entered the house, and one woman, looking up, saw the small face between the banisters and gave a cheery wave, which was rewarded with a brilliant smile before she disappeared from view.

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#112:  Author: Rosea, Location: Edinburgh Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 6:08 pm

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Aww - I hope that was Cookie - Grizel needs some sympathetic company! Great updates - thanks.

 

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#113:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 8:05 pm

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Really want to castrate Mr Cochrane for this - feel sorry for Irene, but her behaviour is still pretty appalling. Poor Grizel.

 

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#114:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 8:17 pm

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Whilst Irene is being rather - understatement! - mean to Grizel, at the same time essentially all the blame rests on his shoulders. He should have told Irene, he should spend more time with Grizel and generally have some thought that after however many months/years apart she is going to want more than about 30 seconds to relate her experiences to him! *also feeling the need to castrate him* *hugs Grizel*

 

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#115:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 8:17 pm

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Also hoping that was Cookie. Thank God Grizel at least had her in her life. *offers to help Lesley with the castration of Mr Cochrane - awful man! * Thanks Liz

 

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#116:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 8:21 pm

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I wonder what Irene actually thought of Cookie...

 

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#117:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 8:24 pm

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*Stands in line to castrate Mr Cochrane. My knife is blunt AND rusty.*

 

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#118:  Author: Chloë, Location: London/Southampton: when away from home planet! Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 8:32 pm

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Awwww please let Cookie arrive for Grizel soon!

 

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#119:  Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 9:52 pm

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patmac wrote:

*Stands in line to castrate Mr Cochrane. My knife is blunt AND rusty.*

Oh, don't use a knife, it's far to quick no matter how blunt and rusty. A fork and spoon might do a better job. Did think about two bricks, but that is too quick.

 

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#120:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 9:54 pm

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Thanks for the updates. I have 3 children, all very much wanted and dearly loved, but there are times when I long for peace, quiet and a tidy house - and will admit to occasionally wishing they would just all stay in one place and keep quiet for a while! So I have some sympathy with Irene, and none at all with Grizel's father. And I too hope the cheerily waving one is Cookie. I've said it before and I'll say it again - this drabble is going to change the way I view Grizel for ever.

 

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#121:  Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 10:02 pm

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Helen P wrote:

I have 3 children, all very much wanted and dearly loved, but there are times when I long for peace, quiet and a tidy house - and will admit to occasionally wishing they would just all stay in one place and keep quiet for a while!

Oh I recognise that feeling...why does 'Please will you tidy that lego away' translate as move it from the living room floor to the dining room floor???

 

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#122:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 10:18 pm

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Thanks Liz. i hope it is Cookie, Grizel definitely needs someone to look after her soon

 

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#123:  Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 10:25 pm

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Poor Grizel. I hope that it was Cookie that she saw. I get a feeling it's going to get a lot worse from here for Grizel.

 

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#124:  Author: Pat, Location: Doncaster Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 10:45 pm

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I read a book once that did castration really slowly. A cord tied round the required parts very tightly, and they eventually just dropped off. No blood flow!

 

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#125:  Author: ravenseyes, Location: New Zealand Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 10:47 pm

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Lowering the tone even further Perhaps he didn't get to use them anyway as Mrs Cochrane II was never busy

 

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#126:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 9:02 am

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Pat wrote:

I read a book once that did castration really slowly. A cord tied round the required parts very tightly, and they eventually just dropped off. No blood flow!

But wouldn't the area with no blood flow become numb? In which case although slow that wouldn't be painful enough!


Irene was pleased with herself that evening. She had managed to engage a housemaid and a cook, both with excellent references, who would be able to start the following week. Her satisfaction and good mood enabled them to get through dinner without her scolding Grizel for talking too much, but she did not notice that Henry’s brows were gradually drawing together into a frown as the chatter continued, although he said nothing about it until later in the evening.

Once they were sitting in the drawing room, and Grizel was fast asleep in bed, Henry sat and listened while Irene told him about the staff she’d employed. “Oh and I’ve moved the child’s bedroom upstairs next to the schoolroom,” she told him, although he had might have gathered as much if he had been paying attention to Grizel’s chatter at dinner. He nodding approvingly and she continued, “It seems much more sensible for the rooms she will be using to be together.”

“Will she be eating her meals up there?” Henry asked.

“I hadn’t considered that,” replied Irene, thoughtfully, “I suppose it would be possible for her to have dinner up there, although it would mean extra work for the maid.”

“Well you pay her to work don’t you.” Henry pointed out. “I think until Grizel's a little older and has learnt to control her tongue during mealtimes she’d better have her dinner in the schoolroom.”

“I think you are right, Henry,” she agreed.

“Of course I am right my dear,” he answered. “Now, the Mortons have invited us to dinner a week on Wednesday he is a business acquaintance of mine and …” the conversation moved on to other interests.

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#127:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 9:15 am

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How can people that evil be allowed to look after a young child?

 

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#128:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 9:40 am

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They couldn't possibly be more cold if they tried! I can't believe how angry their behaviour is making me feel! (which obviously means you are doing a fantastic job of writing this Liz - thanks!)

 

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#129:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 10:14 am

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*grrrrrrrrrrrrr* I'm so angry at Mr Cochrane *offers a special old blunt and rusty axe to the cause*

 

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#130:  Author: Caroline OSullivan, Location: Reading, Berkshire, UK Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 10:26 am

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Thanks Liz. This is wonderful. ((((Grizel)))) *offers a children's first cutlery set (ie couldn't cut melted butter) for the cause*

 

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#131:  Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 11:26 am

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Mr Cochrane. How can a man be so completely self-centered like that. The only thing he seems to care about is him. (((Grizel)))

 

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#132:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 11:46 am

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Evil b*stard! I have got such an evil bunny biting my ankles at the moment...

 

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#133:  Author: Dawn, Location: Leeds, West Yorks Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 11:53 am

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Carolyn P wrote:

Helen P wrote: I have 3 children, all very much wanted and dearly loved, but there are times when I long for peace, quiet and a tidy house - and will admit to occasionally wishing they would just all stay in one place and keep quiet for a while! Oh I recognise that feeling...why does 'Please will you tidy that lego away' translate as move it from the living room floor to the dining room floor???

But Carolyn that's really good - at least they move it! I suppose for many people (especially men) this was still the era of children should be seen and not heard. Also think that Grannie was partly to blame - she obviously didn't explain to Grizel that things would be different and she does sound to have let her run fairly wild. She must also have kept praising Henry and buildiing him up in Grizels mind, otherwise she would have half forgotton him in the ensuing time - did he ever visit her during that time?

 

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#134:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 12:37 pm

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Lesley wrote:

Evil b*stard! I have got such an evil bunny biting my ankles at the moment...

Oh please write it!!!!! *pleads* Evil man!!! Poor Grizel!

 

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#135:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 4:52 pm

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Great update but nasty nasty man. How can he suggest that his child doesnt even have any meals with him!

 

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#136:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 5:55 pm

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((((Grizel)))) that WOMAN is so insensitive and that MAN is even worse he marries someone to be a mother to Grizel and then banishes her to 2 rooms at the top of the house?????

 

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#137:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 6:50 pm

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The next day was Saturday and Grizel woke early again. Once more she ran to the window and opened the curtains to find the sun shining. She dressed herself hurriedly and, carrying her shoes, tiptoed downstairs, into the kitchen, where she pulled on her shoes, and once more turned the key in the locked door and let herself out into the garden. Yesterday her exploration had been diverted into flower gathering. This morning she decided she would explore properly.

It was a large garden and she spent a happy couple of hours wandering around making discoveries – a pond (green with algae, but that didn’t bother her), some weather-beaten statues, a bird-bath, which to her delight was occupied when she saw it, and she stood still to watch, until with a final flutter the birds flew away. Moving on she found, near the bottom of the garden, a moss-covered tree stump, which, she discovered made a perfect seat. She sat there, thinking. She knew she was going to have a lovely day today. It was Saturday, and she knew from her cousin who lived near Grannie, and the little girl who had lived next door, that Saturday was a day when Daddy would be at home. She was sure she was going to have a wonderful day with her Daddy and her new mother, the three of them together. She loved Grannie, and had loved living with her, but as she had grown up she had wanted to have a family like other people. Now she did. Now she was with her Daddy again and they were a proper family.

“Come back to the house at once child. We’ve been looking everywhere for you!” The sharp voice cut through her thoughts like a knife. The Cochranes had risen to find that Grizel was not in her room and had searched the house from top to bottom, becoming increasingly anxious and annoyed, before Irene had ventured into the garden and found her sitting there. Relief at finding her was mixed with, and swiftly overcome by, irritation, and grasping Grizel tightly by the wrist, she hustled her back to the house and upstairs to change her moss-stained dress. “You must take better care of your clothes, child.” Irene scolded her. “This one will have to go to the laundry as well, and I have better things to be doing than having your clothes laundered all the time because you can’t keep them clean. And when they do come back from the laundry you may mend that rip in the dress you tore yesterday morning. Now come and eat your breakfast and for goodness sake keep quiet while you do so!”

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#138:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:09 pm

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Grizel is such a sunny little girl here! She still hasn't caught on to the situation and has such a touching faith in her father. I particularly loved

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“Of course I am right my dear,” he answered

It just summed him up in a nutshell and also shows what Irene has before her in their life together. On first thoughts Pat's method of dealing with him does sound too kind but the mental torture would be exquisite and, with a man like this, that particular mental agony, especially if conducted by women (which is what I think we have in mind) would be better than a rusty knife. I've always been a bit of a Grizel fan and this is certainly confirming my inuition. Thanks Liz

 

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#139:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:48 pm

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This just goes from bad to worse - I wouldn't mind if this Grizel was behaving badly, but she's not - they're just treating her so terribly - when she finally catches on it's going to be tragic. Thanks Liz.

 

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#140:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:51 pm

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Nasty nasty man. He needs a slap.

 

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#141:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 8:38 pm

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May I suggest a jagged and rusty nail file as an implement for the castration?

 

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#142:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 8:39 pm

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Vikki wrote:

May I suggest a jagged and rusty nail file as an implement for the castration?

Ouch I agree - but ouch

 

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#143:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 8:42 pm

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Blunt, rusty nail scissors?

 

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#144:  Author: Pat, Location: Doncaster Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 9:35 pm

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Red hot poker?

 

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#145:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 10:01 pm

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Pat wrote:

Red hot poker?

Ooohhhh, can we do to him what was done to a King of England during the Middle Ages??? (It shows no external wound and is an excruciating way to die!!!)

 

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#146:  Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 10:08 pm

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That is a nasty idea, but very very tempting.

 

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#147:  Author: Pat, Location: Doncaster Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 10:20 pm

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Lesley wrote:

Pat wrote: Red hot poker? Ooohhhh, can we do to him what was done to a King of England during the Middle Ages??? (It shows no external wound and is an excruciating way to die!!!)

That was the lines I was thinking along! Castration being a little too kind!

 

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#148:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 2:21 am

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I may be a lady, but right now I could just spit!. Sending Grizel's nasty daddy to live in the attic alone by himself. Sending Grizel's nasty steppie to live in the coal cellar (she doesn't like dirt? Oh what a shame).

 

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#149:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:52 am

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*Hastily produces her book on Medieval torture and hands it around* Poor Grizel, she cannot do anything right

 

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#150:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 11:25 pm

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The day did not progress as Grizel had envisaged. She managed to sit fairly quietly during breakfast, occupying herself by trying to read some of the long words on the back of her father’s newspaper and wondering what they meant. When he had finished eating, Mr Cochrane folded his paper, rose from the table and disappeared to his study, patting Grizel on the head as he passed.

“I will be going shopping this morning you had better come with me.” Mrs Cochrane announced. “Go and tidy your hair and put on your hat and coat. Don’t run up the stairs like that child!”

Grizel looked about her with eager interest as they walked into town. It wan’t a long journey, but it was filled with “don’t skip like that child”, “watch where you’re going”, “walk properly”, “do be quiet child”, “stop staring like that”, “Will. You. Walk. Properly.”, most of which went straight over her head in her wide-eyed absorption.

Irene felt it was one of the longest, most frustrating shopping trips she had ever taken. The child needed constant attention, she never seemed to stop talking, she was unable to keep still, spending the time Irene was talking to the butcher hopping from one foot to the other, darting off to stroke the no-doubt flea-ridden cat in the grocers, and chatting to a most unsuitable-looking boy at the fishmongers. By the time they returned to the house Irene felt worn to a frazzle and dispatched Grizel to the schoolroom with instructions to amuse herself quietly until lunchtime.

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#151:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 11:33 pm

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I can just imagine Grizel, who has never had an unkind word in her life till now, bouncing along with Irene's admonitions going straight over her head! Poor little soul!

 

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#152:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 11:36 pm

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Evil pair, there are just not the adjectives available to describe them properly.

 

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#153:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 9:26 am

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*Huggles Grizel*

 

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#154:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 4:39 pm

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Thanks Liz What a nasty woman, was she never a child? Think we need Jennie's blunty rusty scissors and Pat's red hot poker!

 

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#155:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 4:43 pm

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Poor little Grizel :crying: She sounds just too lovely - and her father and Irene are HORRIBLE

 

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#156:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 1:12 pm

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Poor Grizel, doesn't her father and her stepmother have a kind and positive word to say to her!

 

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#157:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 4:23 pm

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She seems so obblivious to their feelings towards her at the moment that it's going to be dreadful when it sinks in. Thanks Liz

 

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#158:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:39 pm

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The next morning there was a light rain falling when she looked out of the window, so once she had got dressed, she went into the schoolroom to find something to do. Against one wall there was an upright piano, and she went over and carefully opened the lid. She spent a few minutes playing with the music-holder and then balanced carefully on the stool to open the top and look inside. Finally she sat down on the stool and gently pressed a key. Delighted at the sound it made, she tried another, then another, then a finger from each hand at the same time, then playing lots of notes one after the other without pausing.

It was Henry Cochrane who was woken first by the crashing, discordant sounds from above. Leaping out of bed he ran up the stairs. “Grizel! Stop that awful noise at once!” he exclaimed.

Surprised, Grizel turned around from the piano. “Did I wake you up Daddy?” she asked, noticing he was in his pyjamas.

“Yes!” he replied shortly.

“I was making music. Can you make music Daddy?”

“Grizel it is far to early for playing the piano, or discussing it.” Obviously his mother had had no discipline over the child. “Will you please go back to bed until you are told to get up.”

Grizel went, not noticeably subdued, and with a heavy sigh Henry went downstairs. A few days later, when Grizel went to try the piano again, she found the lid locked shut.

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#159:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:40 pm

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Oh poor Grizel, she really doesn't understand!

 

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#160:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:53 pm

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Agggh that evil evil man! Has he no empathy whatsoever ??! So what age did Grizel go and live with her grandmother? Ie has he ever spent any length of time with her? Does he know her except by name?

 

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#161:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 4:04 pm

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*too angry to even say anything about him* Thanks Liz

 

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#162:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 4:46 pm

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Thanks Liz! I think every printable comment on the father and steppie have been made by now. What I find so distressing is how this sunny little girle, expecting the best of everyone is eventually turned into the brittle Grizel we know from the books.

 

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#163:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 6:05 pm

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Grrrr! Agree completely with Patmac - you've done a fantastic job showing how Grizel would have been changed by such awful treatment. I recently bought a hb copy of Eustacia at the CS, and was astonished by the horrible way in which Mrs Cochrane speaks about Grizel to Mrs Trevanion (Stacie's aunt): she doesn't trouble to hide from this outsider (who is not a close friend) how objectionable she found Grizel, and how much she thought she had been improved by school. Erm, how about a little love and understanding that she didn't get at home?

 

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#164:  Author: Sarah_G-G, Location: Sheffield (termtime), ? any other time! Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:08 pm

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Little Grizel is so lovely here that I'm almost scared to find out what more those... people (I will *not* call them her parents)... will do to her! Hpw can they treat her so?

 

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#165:  Author: Chloë, Location: London/Southampton: when away from home planet! Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:28 pm

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Poor Grizel i think Henry is totally horrid adn for no reason he's obviously never thoguht what havbing a child would mean!

 

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#166:  Author: Miriam, Location: Jerusalem, Israel Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:25 pm

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And she looks like she could have a potential interest/aptitude for music. First they utterly destroy that by over regimentation (when they decide that music is a desirable acomplishment, then insist that she takes it up as a career. If she'd met with more symathetic treatment she might have been much more willing to look at music as a career base. Equallly though, if they had been more sympathetic, they would never have forced Grizel into taking it up as a career. However much she disliked teaching, she is shown as being willing to play for other peoples plaesure, when she plays for Deiras daughter in NZ, and when she plays on the boat - she obviously had some feeling for it.

 

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#167:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 11:21 pm

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I feel all weepy for poor Grizel. *hugs*

 

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#168:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 11:29 pm

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Evil people - and you can just see how their treatment would have changed her - I'm surprised she remained sane. Thanks Liz.

 

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#169:  Author: Sophoife, Location: down under Down Under Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 5:06 am

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Rachael wrote:

Oh, how heart-breaking Le pauvre Grizel

La pauvre Grizel, surely, unless she's a boy and we never noticed!

 

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#170:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 5:33 pm

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(((Grizel))) Thanks Liz

 

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#171:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 1:16 am

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Sophoife wrote:

Rachael wrote: Le pauvre Grizel La pauvre Grizel, surely, unless she's a boy and we never noticed!

Isn't Rachel just keeping up the good EBD tradition of making wildly inaccurate statements in foreign languages, secure in the knowledge that most of us won't understand it anyway?!

 

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#172:  Author: Sophoife, Location: down under Down Under Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 4:22 am

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True, Di, very true! I forgot that - mea culpa Rachael, I've ruined your EBDism!!!

 

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#173:  Author: Rosie, Location: Huntingdonshire/Bangor Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 9:16 pm

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Miss Di wrote:

Sophoife wrote: Rachael wrote: Le pauvre Grizel La pauvre Grizel, surely, unless she's a boy and we never noticed! Isn't Rachel just keeping up the good EBD tradition of making wildly inaccurate statements in foreign languages, secure in the knowledge that most of us won't understand it anyway?!

Such as 'le comptoir' for 'the bill'... Please someone tell I'm not going mad and it does really mean 'the counter'... Otherwise I may have to leave uni right now!!

 

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#174:  Author: Katie, Location: London, but my heart belongs to Harrogate Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 10:13 pm

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Rosie wrote:

Miss Di wrote: Sophoife wrote: Rachael wrote: Le pauvre Grizel La pauvre Grizel, surely, unless she's a boy and we never noticed! Isn't Rachel just keeping up the good EBD tradition of making wildly inaccurate statements in foreign languages, secure in the knowledge that most of us won't understand it anyway?! Such as 'le comptoir' for 'the bill'... Please someone tell I'm not going mad and it does really mean 'the counter'... Otherwise I may have to leave uni right now!!

Don't worry yourself, Rosie. It's EBD who's wrong, not you!

 

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#175:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 11:47 pm

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LizB wrote:

“I was making music. Can you make music Daddy?”

That line almost reduced me to tears. Poor, poor Grizel :crying:

 

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#176: languages - the direct method Author: kerry blue,  Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 9:22 am

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Such as 'le comptoir' for 'the bill'... Please someone tell I'm not going mad and it does really mean 'the counter'... Otherwise I may have to leave uni right now!! I showed off my recently acquired knowledge and used it in a French class. I have never lived it down!

 

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#177:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 10:49 pm

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Many thanks to Josie & Mihiri for proof-reading and encouraging me to include this bit.

Instead of returning to the bedroom, Henry went to his study, shut the door and sank down into a chair with a sigh. He should never have got married, and certainly never should have had a child. Maybe it would have been different if Victoria hadn’t left him ... “Victoria.” He said the name to himself, the ache of missing her was still so painful after all these years. If there had ever been a case of opposites attracting it had been Henry Cochrane and Victoria Ellis. She was like quicksilver, always on the move, fiery, passionate, full of laughter and life, while he was reserved, serious and sombre. But the moment he had seen her, he had been lost. He had never understood what she had seen in him, but her carefree spirit had released him from his rigid self-control, she had melted his icy layer with her exuberant enjoyment of life. He had hardly been able to believe it when she had agreed to marry him. They had had 7 blissful years together, during which time Grizel had arrived, which had been a source of further joy to her and, despite his reticence, he had been delighted by his daughter.

Then Victoria had gone from his life as suddenly as she had arrived. A young man, drunk, behind the wheel of a motor car had taken all the light and love out of his life. Something that she had ignited in him had flickered and died at that same moment and he would never be the same again.

So she had gone, leaving him alone with their daughter, who looked so like her, was so like her, that he couldn’t bear the reminder. He had sent Grizel to live with his mother, had made sure there was enough money for her every need to be met. At first he had visited regularly, but the reminder each time he saw Grizel, of what he had lost, was too much so he stopped visiting and shut her out of his mind as much as he possibly could. He had managed to numb himself over time. Nothing and no-one would ever be able to touch him as Victoria had done. Never would he give anyone the opportunity to leave him hurting and alone like that again.

And so he had managed some semblance of living, if it could be called that, going from day to day, working, socialising, even laughing and smiling as the years went by, but inside he was cold and untouched by those around him. The letter from his mother had come out of the blue. It had never occurred to him that she would not always be able to take care of Grizel. He had assumed she would be bring her up, see her through her debut in London and happily married to someone suitable. Instead, he had had to make arrangements for Grizel to come to live with him. His mother had suggested boarding school, but he had been sent to one as a child and life there had not been pleasant, he would have her living with him and it seemed the ideal way to have someone to take care of her would be to get married. As a single man, to have employed a governess would have been most improper, so he had looked around for a suitable wife.

Irene was fairly new to his circle of acquaintance, but was, he considered, of a suitable age to marry him, without any silly romantic notions or expectations of having any children. She would understand that it was a marriage of convenience and would run his house admirably. He supposed, in hindsight, he should have told her about Grizel, but talking about her meant talking about Victoria and that was something he never did if it could be avoided. So he had put it off and suddenly it had been too late – the most he had been able to do was to say there would be a surprise for Irene when they got back from their honeymoon.

So here they were, Grizel was living with them and oh, she looked so like his beautiful Victoria, sounded like her, laughed like her, that it hurt more every time he encountered her. The only thing he could do was retreat, shut himself off, avoid her and lock away all those feelings he couldn’t deal with. He could not risk caring for anyone ever again. Not after Victoria had taught him to laugh, taught him to love and taught him about heartbreak, but left him to learn the lesson alone. He looked at the study door, and remembered Grizel’s enthusiastic face as she had ‘made music’. With another sigh he locked down the memories again and turned to deal with a pile of papers

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#178:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 11:00 pm

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OK Liz, you've suceeded in making me feel a little sorry for Henry - but only a little - to treat Grizel like that, there's still no excuse, I still want to remove certain parts of his anatomy with a pick axe! (Very clever writing)

 

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#179:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 11:00 pm

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Poor Henry. It makes his behaviour a little more understandable. But I still want to poke him hard and shout 'pull yourself together - that little girl is depending on you!'

 

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#180:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 11:19 pm

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Poor Henry, I can now understand some of his problems with Grizel (just shows you need to hear both sides of a story) However, it does not excuse the way he has treated Irene and he should be able to overcome his feelings after this time to help Grizel, not hinder her.

 

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#181:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 12:11 am

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*takes deep breath**stops crying*I just read this all the way through... POOR POOR Grizel!!! :cliff: Horrible, stupid, stupid man, - even if i do feel a tiny tiny bit sorry for him!And that women! Honestly, she might not like children but she must have some ounce of empathy, surely?!!!grrrrrrr(brilliant writing though...i want to see what happens please, i just need mor tissues!)

 

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#182:  Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 10:51 am

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liz, are you going to make us feel sorry for all the Cochranes? Henry, because of Victoria Irene because of Henry's deceit and Grizel, goes without saying. Still, he's not thinking about the long termeffects, Grizel would have been better of going straight into boarding school.

 

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#183:  Author: Mihiri, Location: surrey england Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 11:58 am

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Thanks Liz. Its good to see Henry's point of view

 

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#184:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 8:09 pm

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*wibble* Thank you Liz!!! *also feeling a bit sorry for Henry now!*

 

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#185:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 8:19 pm

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What a twist! As Ally says, you always need to hear both sides of a story. I still think he was rather callous in marrying Irene just to bring up his child. If I'd been her, I would be borrowing Lesley's pickaxe myself It's just so sad that Grizel is the victim of their immature behaviour! ((((Grizel))))

 

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#186:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 10:41 pm

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*looks around cautiously to check Uto's not hiding anywhere* Had already read, but glad you decided to post it Liz.

 

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#187:  Author: Cathy, Location: Sydney, Australia Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 11:02 pm

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I'm not in the least sorry for Grizel's father. Yes he lost someone he loved -- lots of people do. He was lucky to have Grizel -- he should have cherished her all the more because she was like her mother.Stupid stupid man.

 

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#188:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 12:50 am

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LizB wrote:

He had hardly been able to believe it when she had agreed to marry him. They had had 7 blissful years together, during which time Grizel had arrived, which had been a source of further joy to her and, despite his reticence, he had been delighted by his daughter. Then Victoria had gone from his life as suddenly as she had arrived. A young man, drunk, behind the wheel of a motor car had taken all the light and love out of his life. Something that she had ignited in him had flickered and died at that same moment and he would never be the same again.

Umm...nitpicking - but wasn't there a bit in School at about Grizel's mother being a semi invalid who lay arround on the couch all day and said shush alot? Of course maybe she lingered a while after the accident and this is what Grizel was remembering... Or maybe I'm just totally confusing it with another CS absent parent! Whatever. I'm still enjoying it in a kind of "Oh Dog, what is going to happen to that poor child next" kind of way

 

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#189:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:00 am

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Have just read this all the way through. Wonderful story Liz. Feel really sorry for Grizel. All the relatives in her life up to this point have behaved in a disgusting manner. Her father though he is heartbroken shpuld cherish her more. Does he never wonder what Victoria would have said about his treatment of their daughter? As for Irene what sort of childhood must she have had to have no compassion for the child? Not liking children is no excuse.

 

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#190:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:14 pm

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Miss Di wrote:

Umm...nitpicking - but wasn't there a bit in School at about Grizel's mother being a semi invalid who lay arround on the couch all day and said shush alot? Of course maybe she lingered a while after the accident and this is what Grizel was remembering... Or maybe I'm just totally confusing it with another CS absent parent!

I don't recall this at all - is it in the HB?

Liz

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#191:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:20 pm

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I don't remember it either - it's either in the HB or it's someone else...

 

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#192:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 3:40 pm

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I've definitely read that bit somewhere, but only the once, so I think it must be in a hardback. Possibly Head Girl ?

 

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#193:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:36 pm

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i'm fairly sure its in head girl - i've only ever read it once as well....how old was grizel when her mother died though?

 

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#194:  Author: Chelsea, Location: Your Imagination Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:31 pm

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Her mother had died when she was five. Grizel could just remember her as a fragile, complaining being, who lay on a couch all day, and said ‘Hush!’ in fretful tones whenever her little daughter ventured to raise her voice.

From the HB (transcript) of School at. I'd go with the lingering after the accident theory.

 

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#195: Thanks Author: Phil, Location: London UK Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 6:51 pm

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Dear Liz, Thanks for this wonderful story. It is well written and brings out the "other side of the story" from all the characters. I do agree that Henry Cochrane needs the treatment suggesed by everyone else, but he seems to have screwed up his life BADLY, he can't bear to see his daughter who is so reminiscent of his late wife, just doesn't know what to do with the girl, and is too weak to tell his second wife of Grizel's existence. Poor Grizel goes from being loved until the death of her mother, then being over indulged by her grandmother, so by the age of 9 / 10 she is a confident, happy lively girl, but a little spoilt. Then the way her stepmother treats her is appalling. No attempt to empathise with this child, and even telling Eustacia's Aunt about her. Is it any wonder that when Grizel is forbidden to do anything (climb the Tiernjoch, go to that Swiss place in Head Girl of the CS) that she thinks, "I'll go anyway". On all this you have made a great story, but I still feel the villains of the piece are Mr Cochrane and Mrs Cochrane the Second. I very much like Grizel. I haven't read any discussions on other boards to the contrary YET! The thing is, if she were a real person, she may be likely to throw all this sympathy back in everyone's faces with a cutting remark. Sad, but true, but maybe underneath a real life Grizel would be grateful for a bit of support like that.

 

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#196:  Author: Guest,  Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 3:17 pm

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Awww if feel slightly more for Mr C than before but still think he's totally unfair to Grizel!

 

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#197:  Author: Chloë, Location: London/Southampton: when away from home planet! Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 3:19 pm

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oops the post above was me being to silly to remeber to login

 

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#198:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 4:53 pm

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As it was Sunday, Irene came upstairs a little later to tell Grizel to get dressed in her best frock so they could go to church.

She sat in the wooden pew between her father and Irene swinging her legs, which were too short to reach the floor. She looked around eagerly, examining the faces she could see in profile, and the backs of the heads in front of her. Her roving eye caught sight of the boy from the fishmongers, looking eminently respectable in his choirboy’s surplice, with his hair neatly combed. He met her eye and flashed her a grin of recognition.

Grizel stood up to sing loudly in the hymns, and those around her smiled at the childishly enthusiastic voice, although Irene, catching the indulgent glances cast their way felt a most unholy wave of annoyance. Grizel tried to listen during the sermon, but didn’t really understand what the Rector was talking about and reverted to gazing around again, still swinging her legs until a firm hand on her knee stilled them.

When the service ended, Irene grasped Grizel firmly by the wrist before she could wriggle of through the crowd of people, and they made their way out of the church, pausing to greet the Rector in the doorway. Mr Cochrane had stopped in the aisle to speak to someone he knew, so Irene and Grizel were alone when the Rector held out his hand. “So nice to see you here,” he greeted Irene. “Are you and your little girl new to Taverton?”

Irene stiffened, but shook his hand. “Thank you Rector. I am new here, although my husband, Henry Cochrane, has lived here for several years. This is his daughter. Say ‘how do you do’ to the Rector, child.” She gave Grizel’s shoulder a slight shake as she spoke, annoyed by the Rector’s assumption that this might be her daughter.

Grizel held out her hand and said “How do you do,” very properly. The Rector smiled down into the pretty little face and shook her hand, receiving a beaming smile in return, then the press of people exiting the church moved them away from him.

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#199:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:02 pm

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What a cow Irene is!

 

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#200:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:49 pm

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That's being generous, Jennie - I can think of far better things to call her. :angry:

 

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#201:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:50 pm

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poor Grizel and yes....evil Irene!

 

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#202:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:58 pm

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Poor Grizel! Everything she does is met with annoyance and disapproval. Great to see this back, thank you Liz

 

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#203:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:16 pm

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Thankyou for the update, Liz. Poor, poor Grizel.

 

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#204:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 1:35 pm

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Grizel was used to spending Sunday afternoons quietly reading while Grannie rested, and so the rest of the day passed peacefully, apart from requests for quiet at the meal table, which were so much water off a duck’s back to her.

The following morning she again dressed herself early and let herself out into the garden. She was disappointed not to find any birds bathing that time, but contented herself by stirring the pond water with a stick, peering into the murky water to see if there were any fish. Consequently, when she was prompted by hunger to return to the house to see if it was time for breakfast she was considerably damp around her feet and ankles.

Letting herself into the kitchen she wiped her feet perfunctorily on the mat before going to set at the breakfast table. Her father was already there and responded with a grunt to her cheerful “Hello Daddy,” before raising his newspaper. Undeterred the little girl carried on talking. “Daddy, do we have any fish in the pond? I tried to see if there were any, but I couldn’t see any. If we haven’t got any fish, Daddy, will we get some?”

Irene arrived in the room to hear this last question. She had already seen the damp tracks from the kitchen. “Have you been out in the garden this morning?” she questioned Grizel. “In future, please do not go outside in the morning before you have eaten, do you understand?”

“Yes,” nodded Grizel, then continued “Do you like fish? I can show you the pond in the garden if you like, but I couldn’t see if there were any fish in it.”

Henry folded his paper shut with a snap and rose from the table. “I am going to the office my dear” he told Irene. “I shall probably not return until after dinner.”

“Are you going to work Daddy?” asked Grizel, “can I come with you and watch what you do?” Henry barely repressed a shudder at the thought of his energetic, chatterbox daughter spending the day in his office, and the memories that would provoke. “No, Grizel, you must stay here. Be a good girl and do as you are told.”

He left the room without waiting to hear her cheerful reply of “Yes Daddy. Have a nice day Daddy.”

“What are we going to do today?” Grizel turned to Irene, “Are we going shopping again?”

“Not today. The new cook and maid are starting today child, so you must keep out of the way while I talk to them about their duties. Now, if you have finished you may leave the table and go and occupy yourself without getting into mischief. I don’t want to see you again until lunchtime.” Grizel made her way out to the garden again, and spent a happy morning skipping around, investigating various nooks and crannies she had neglected in her previous explorations, running races against nothing, and jumping up to reach the branches on trees. She had forgotten by now, Saturday’s warning about keeping her clothes clean, until she let herself back into the kitchen, where Irene was talking to another woman.

A horrified shriek greeted her appearance. “What have you been doing now child! I told you not to get into mischief and just look at the state of you! Wipe your feet – properly – and come with me at once! I shall be back shortly Mrs Acott.” She swept from the kitchen, continuing to scold as they went up the stairs. “I told you you are to keep your clothes clean and tidy. If you cannot learn to obey a simple request like that I must help you remember. I will stop your pocket money for the next two weeks and you may consider yourself to have got off lightly. Another time I will not be so lenient with you. Now get yourself cleaned up and stay up here until I tell you you may come downstairs.” She propelled Grizel into the bedroom and shut the door behind her.

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#205:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 1:40 pm

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LizB wrote:

Another time I will not be so lenient with you.

JDHSGKJHDFKJG KDJSHGAGHKGASGH Real words are not powerful enough for the EVILNESS of that woman. Thanks Liz!

 

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#206:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 2:27 pm

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I presume Irene was never a child? Stupid woman!

 

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#207:  Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 2:42 pm

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How is Irene? She might be

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annoyed by the Rector’s assumption that this might be her daughter

because she's not old enough to have a 10 year old daughter.

 

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#208:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 3:11 pm

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grrrrrrr.....EVIL woman! I know she's not practised at being a parent and all that but she could at least be kind!!

 

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#209:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 4:13 pm

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I really really want something terrible to happen to both of them, Harold and Irene - surely there's scope - we didn't hear much about them other than that he died first and she died around Rounion. (Has plot-bunny nibbling ankles)

 

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#210:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 11:08 pm

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*Gasps in an aghast and horrified fashion* (I didn't know how to type the actual noise I was making )

 

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#211:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 11:18 pm

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kicks irene hard that woman is so insensitive and unbending and evil

 

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#212:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 12:49 am

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*queues behind francesn to give Irene a good kicking*Stupid woman *hoping Lesley's plot bunny continues to bite - would like to see them get their just desserts*Thanks for the updates Liz - incredibly emotive

 

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#213:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:19 pm

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wibbling slightly as to what you lot might do to Irene after a few more posts...


Ellen, the new housemaid, carried a tray up to the schoolroom with Grizel’s lunch, and returned to collect it an hour later. The food restored much of Grizel’s spirits and Irene, coming to see if she was suitably penitent, was irrationally angered by the sound of singing as she approached the schoolroom. Irene flung open the door, which stopped the singing, but her entrance was met with the eager question “Can I go outside to play again now?”

“No, you may not. You are to stay indoors for the rest of the day. I have your dress here for you to mend.” She held out the offending item of clothing. “Get your needlework basket please.”

Large grey eyes met hers. “I don’t have a needlework basket.”

“Very well,” Irene sighed, “I will provide you with a needle and thread for this afternoon.” She left the room and returned with the appropriate items. “Well, what do you say, child?”

“Thank you,” replied Grizel, and with a satisfied nod Irene left her to her sewing.

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#214:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:05 pm

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Grrrrr thanks Liz

 

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#215:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:27 pm

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awww, poor Grizel. I wonder how much longer she'll continue to be so normal and happy

 

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#216:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:35 pm

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*quickly sews Irene's mouth shut with the needle and thread so conveniently provided* (((Grizel)))

 

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#217:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 4:49 pm

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May I please drown Irene in the fishpond?

 

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#218:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 5:01 pm

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Vikki wrote:

May I please drown Irene in the fishpond?

Yes Vikki, I'll keep watch for you.

 

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#219:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 5:08 pm

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And I'll help you hold her down!

 

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#220:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 5:15 pm

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Joins the queue to hold Irene down in the fishpond. Why should those three have all the fun?

 

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#221:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 8:54 pm

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Horrible, HORRIBLE woman! Thank you, Liz!

 

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#222:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 12:36 pm

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Please, please, please let Cookie come on the scene before Grizel has to stand much more of this appalling treatment. And where are the Bettanys? Will they make friends with Grizel?

 

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#223:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:32 am

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Poor Grizel. Irene is a disgusting excuse for a woman.

 

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#224:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 2:15 pm

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This next bit comes with a warning - I hope it doesn't upset anyone, but it insisted on being written. Cookie and the Bettany's are on their way, I promise.

Grizel had not done much sewing before. She spent 10 minutes or more sucking on the end of the thread and trying to poke it through the eye of the needle, eventually succeeding to get the soggy end through. Then she pulled the edges of the tear together and made a valiant attempt at mending it.

She was asleep in bed that evening before Irene found time to go to the schoolroom and inspect the ‘mended’ dress. The stitches were half an inch or more long, pulling the edges of the material loosely together in places, puckering it in others and in one place attaching one sleeve of the dress to the skirt. With an exasperated sigh, Irene ripped out the stitches.

What was she to do with the child? There were another two weeks to go until school started and she felt she would scream if she had to spend another day with the child in the house. She sank onto a chair, tears of frustration coming to her eyes. A rustling sound behind her made her stand and turn around, startled, to see Grizel standing in the doorway.

Grizel was just as startled to see Irene crying. Grown ups never cried. Well, Grannie had done occasionally, but she had said that was because she was ‘just a silly old woman dear, don’t you mind me’. Maybe, thought Grizel, she was upset because she had been cross with her today, and she thought that Grizel might not want her to be her new mother any more. Grizel decided she ought to let her know that it was ok.

“Why are you crying mother?” she asked – surely calling her mother would show her that everything was alright and it didn’t matter that she had been a bit cross earlier.

“I told you I AM NOT YOUR MOTHER!” Irene screamed and raised her hand. All her feelings of bitterness, anger, frustration and helplessness surged through her arm and added weight to her hand as she brought it into sharp contact with Grizel’s face, causing the child to stagger slightly. “Now go back to bed! She ordered and, dazedly, Grizel went.

Mrs Cochrane gathered up the dress and went downstairs to the main bedroom, where she hurled it into a corner and sat down in the darkness, half-horrified at what she’d done, but the longer she sat there, the more the bitterness at the situation she was trapped in grew and gradually pushed the feeling of guilt aside.

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#225:  Author: francesn as guest,  Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 2:19 pm

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wowthat was really powerful

 

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#226:  Author: Helen C, Location: Sheffield/Luton Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 2:25 pm

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poor Grizel

 

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#227:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 2:44 pm

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Poor Grizel!! How dare that woman feel no guilt just because she has to be the injured party! Grizel is a child who has done nothing wrong!

 

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#228:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 2:53 pm

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Poor Grizel. :crying:

 

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#229:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 4:39 pm

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Lets jump up and down on her when she's in the fishpond!

 

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#230:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:19 pm

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I'll hold her head down whilst you jump on her? Evil little @#*&%. Poor Grizel. :crying: Hurry up, Cookie!

 

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#231:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:25 pm

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Oh, poor, poor Grizel. Why can't Irene see how horrible she's being and stop it? Very good writing, though.

 

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#232:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:39 pm

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She can't see anything wrong with her behaviour because: 1) She's a control freak 2) She has not a single maternal bone in her body 3) She secretly enjoys being a matyr, or pretending to be 4) She's bone selfish 5) This isn't the luxurious life that she was expecting to lead.

 

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#233:  Author: Dawn, Location: Leeds, West Yorks Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:19 pm

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How awful for Grizel but awful for Irene too as she is trapped and in those days you just couldn't walk away, she knows she is stuck with a husband who only married her so she would be a glorified housekeeper/nanny and a child who she has no idea how to handle (must admit I think Grizel would get on my nerves a bit too) I'm not saying she should behave like this, but I can understand her despair and helplessness over how to get Grizel to behave differently. Also she has kept asking Grizel not to call her mother and Grizel persists in doing so, so she may feel that Grizel is doing it deliberatley to wind her up.

 

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#234:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 7:18 pm

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Feel very very angry at Irene, her own situation is no excuse for physically and mentally abusing an innocent ten year old child. Seeing Grizel now and knowing how she will turn out is tragic. And this woman continued to abuse Grizel even when, long after her husband was dead, she had the freedom she craved.

 

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#235:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:14 pm

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*wraps Grizel in a big fluffy huggle, and slaps Irene with a large wet tuna!*

 

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#236:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:18 pm

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Oh god, this is so sad. You can totally see how it ended up like this. Not that that excuses Irene in any way, dispicable woman. And Henry's got a lot to answer for too. Thanks for the update Liz.

 

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#237:  Author: Sophoife, Location: down under Down Under Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:16 pm

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(((Grizel))) Offers to sellotape Mrs Cochrane's breathing orifices shut while you lot hold her down in the fishpond.

 

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#238:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 11:28 pm

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Thankyou Liz - very powerful and very, very sad Poor Grizel. Nasty Irene.

 

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#239:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 12:12 am

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poor, poor Grizel!

 

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#240:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 1:55 pm

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Grizel lay in the dark, tears rolling down her face. She put her hands to her cheeks to brush them away and found one cheek burning hot, while the other, and the rest of her, was icy cold. No-one had ever hit her before in her life, and she was hurt and bewildered. “What did I do wrong?” she whispered into the darkness. “I wanted to help.” Then, a while later, “Why?” She shivered, and wondered if, apart from that one cheek, she would ever feel warm again. It was a long time before she finally fell asleep.

 

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#241:  Author: Helen C, Location: Sheffield/Luton Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 2:16 pm

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Thanks Liz. Want to cry for Grizel . Hope things will be abit better for her when Cookie comes.

 

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#242:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 4:07 pm

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poor baby

 

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#243:  Author: Emily, Location: Land of White Coats and Stethoscopes. Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 4:17 pm

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Poor Grizel. Poor Irene.

 

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#244:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 4:22 pm

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Yes, it is possible to feel sorry for Irene, as she died alone and friendless. She never learned that you have to give love to receive it.

 

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#245:  Author: Sophoife, Location: down under Down Under Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:10 pm

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:ahhh: poor Grizel! And yes, poor Irene too I suppose - I don't think she even tried to learn about giving and receiving love.

 

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#246:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 9:18 pm

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Personally I feel Irene got what she deserved. How dare she take it out on the child? If she was unhappy she should speak to her husband, if she hated the situation so much she should have braved the scandal and left him. Poor Grizel.

 

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#247:  Author: Gem, Location: Saltash/Aberystwyth Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:18 pm

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:crying: Poor, poor child.

 

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#248:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:24 pm

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When Grizel awoke, later than usual the next morning, it was raining. As she dressed she winced when her clothes brushed against her cheekbone as she pulled them over her head. Combing her hair, her hand knocked against the tender area and she bit her tongue to avoid crying out. She waited in her bedroom until she had heard her father leave the house. She didn’t want him to know she had been so naughty that her stepmother had had to punish her like that. Once she had heard the front door close, she slowly descended the stairs and went into the dining room.

Mrs Cochrane looked up sharply as she entered. Her lips thinned when she saw the vivid bruise on Grizel’s cheek, but she said nothing. She was glad Henry had gone away on a business trip and wouldn’t be back for a few days, so there would be no need to explain the bruise to him. Grizel didn’t speak either, worried that she might say the wrong thing again.

“I will be going out this morning, so please try not to cause any trouble for Cook or Ellen. Stay in the schoolroom and keep out of their way.” She rose from the table as she spoke. Grizel did not reply, as she was discovering that chewing made her cheek hurt more. Her stepmother mistook the silence for sullenness and spoke again. “I will not have sulking in this house child. Please remember that,” and she left the room.

Grizel spent a very subdued day in the schoolroom, thinking. She still couldn’t understand what she had done so wrong that her stepmother had hit her. But she decided she would have to be very careful from now on to always do as she was told and not to make anyone cross.

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#249:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:10 pm

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Anyone else would have been horrified at seeing the bruise - that evil cow is just pleased her husband isn't there to see it.

 

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#250:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 7:01 pm

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#251:  Author: Sophoife, Location: down under Down Under Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 7:04 pm

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LizB wrote:

Mrs Cochrane looked up sharply as she entered. Her lips thinned when she saw the vivid bruise on Grizel’s cheek, but she said nothing.

I think she's just realised what she's done, and is horrified, and glad she doesn't have to explain it for that reason. I don't think I remember any tales of smacking/hitting from Grizel, so perhaps she's shocked enough not to do it again? Please? ~wibble~

 

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#252:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 7:07 pm

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Typical that he happens o be away, though Im sure if he ever said anything to Irene, it would make things worse. Oh why do I feel that even good well-behaved Grizel would still rile Irene Hopes we get to see an adult Grizel speak her mind!!

 

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#253:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 8:25 pm

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I interpreted the thin lips as inward horror of what she had done, but far too much pride to apologise. Poor, poor Grizel.

 

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#254:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 10:57 pm

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Me too, Helen. I know Irene's a ghastly woman, but I can't help just feeling a bit sorry for her. She obviously has no idea how to either handle or relate to a child, and is not really willing to learn. Poor old Grizel. Can feel that sting in her cheek from here. *hoping Cookie comes along very shortly*

 

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#255:  Author: Emily, Location: Land of White Coats and Stethoscopes. Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 11:24 pm

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Me three. Irene is just as much a child in this as Grizel. Yes, she's grown up and should have some basic compassion, but the situation is completely beyond her experience and expectations. Grizel misunderstands Irene, and tragically gets punished and becomes the girl we know in the books for it and Irene misunderstands Grizel equally- she's not being so awful because she maliciously sets out to hurt the child. Not that that makes it any better.

 

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#256:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 1:29 am

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Poor little Grizel. Yes you can feel a little sorry for Irene but she is old enough to know better. Why on earth does she not try and explain to Grizel? Even if she just told her that she didn't want to take her mother's place and wants to be called something different?

 

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#257:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 1:38 am

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*wibbles and weeps* Poor poor poor Grizel. I am warming to her in a way I never did in the books - I just want to give her a huge hug.

 

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#258:  Author: Dawn, Location: Leeds, West Yorks Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 3:59 pm

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Emily wrote:

Me three. Irene is just as much a child in this as Grizel. Yes, she's grown up and should have some basic compassion, but the situation is completely beyond her experience and expectations. Grizel misunderstands Irene, and tragically gets punished and becomes the girl we know in the books for it and Irene misunderstands Grizel equally- she's not being so awful because she maliciously sets out to hurt the child. Not that that makes it any better.

I agree with Emily. As a parent it's hard enough dealing with older children, when you have watched them grow up and have some understanding of how they reason and what makes them tick. I have watched some of our friends not have a clue how to speak or deal with our 3. These are wonderful people, but they have chosen not to have children in their own lives and have no idea how to relate to them at all. We never left one particular friend alone with our children even for a couple of minutes - NOT because we were worried about sexual abuse, but because he completely misjudged what to say to them and how to deal with them. They all felt very uncomfortable with him on a one to one basis but were ok as part of a group or when we were there. Now that they are older, they get on reasonably well with him - he treats them more as adults and they are fine with that. The other thing no one has mentioned - is how was Irene treated as a child? If she did not have good parenting as a child, it would be much much harder for her to be a good parent to Grizel and as she had not chosen to be in that role in the first place........ I know people who have been excellent parents themselves after having poor parenting, but they have chosen to be parents. Poor poor Grizel, that she can't even say how much it hurts now

 

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#259:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:23 pm

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And there is also the cultural hangover from Victorian times to be considered. Children should be seen and not heard. Little girls should be clean, neat and obedient, and always well-behaved. Just read the first chapters of 'The Mill On The Floss' for that point of view. Perhaps Irene might have taken better to a boy as a step-child.

 

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#260:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 3:49 pm

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I don't think Irene would have taken well to any stepchild. She just didn't know how to deal with children.

 

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#261:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 6:37 pm

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Poor Grizel. Here is the start of her frightened, biddable existence. Feeling a little sorry for Irene, but not much. I wonder what would have happened if Henry had been considerate enough to prepare her for the step-daughter awaiting her...

 

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#262:  Author: Miriam, Location: Jerusalem, Israel Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 8:20 pm

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Irene would probably have been much happier with a boy as a stepchild, for the simple reason that it was much more acceptable to send boys off to public/boarding school from a much younger age (about seven according to the Maynards!), and she would have had to see a lot less of him. That may not have improved her child management skills during the holidays, but since it was a shorter time, the effect may have been les detrimental.

 

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#263:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 11:11 pm

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Not sure about the second half of this - hope it's ok.


Grizel was kept to the schoolroom for much of the next few days. There was not a lot to do, but she spent some time looking out of the window, watching people walk by on the street. She loved to watch the passers by and think about where they might be going, and what they might be doing. She was always happy to see Ellen, who brought up her lunch and dinner every day, and chatted to her eagerly. Ellen took tales back down to Cook in the kitchen and told her about the bruise on the child’s face. “She didn’t get that by running into a door, you mark my words.” she said darkly. Cook tutted in dismay, and took care to tuck an extra bun onto the next tray before Ellen took it up. Grizel saw very little of her stepmother over those few days.

The bruise on Grizel’s cheek gradually faded, and by the time Mr Cochrane returned from his business trip the visible bruise had disappeared completely. The invisible injury would remain, however, like an ugly scar, becoming less painful as time passed, even fading slightly over the years, but always there, puckering, distorting and never fully healing.

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#264:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 11:16 pm

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I want to hug that child so badly!! Thanks Liz.

 

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#265:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 11:32 pm

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so how many years of this has Grizel got to endure before she can go to the CS? no wonder she turned out as EBD portrayed her

 

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#266:  Author: Sophoife, Location: down under Down Under Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 12:10 am

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Well, Grizel was fourteen and a half when she left England with the Bettany girls, and they certainly knew what her life was like, and she was three weeks past her tenth birthday at the beginning of this drabble... Oh rats now I know she has to put up with this for four and a half years - I'm really upset now!

 

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#267:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 1:10 am

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Glad Grizel has Cookie on her side now.

 

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#268:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 3:18 am

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LizB wrote:

Grizel saw very little of her stepmother over those few days. The bruise on Grizel’s cheek gradually faded, and by the time Mr Cochrane returned from his business trip the visible bruise had disappeared completely. The invisible injury would remain, however, like an ugly scar, becoming less painful as time passed, even fading slightly over the years, but always there, puckering, distorting and never fully healing.

Ow. That is a really powerful analogy Liz. Are you sure you don't want to make this an alternate history and kill the rotten cow off?

 

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#269:  Author: patmac, Location: Yorkshire England Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 8:02 am

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Very powerful! I always felt the older Grizel was defensive rather than 'nasty'. She found reaching out didn't bring acceptance so she couldn't risk being vulnerable to more rejection. Poor kid. Irene didn't have the maturity to cope with a completely unexpected situation and must have been just as miserable. Imagine being told by your husband that he married you to bring up a child you didn't even know existed. She must have felt unloved too. The trouble is she didn't ever develop the maturity to cope. I think that particular slap was not intended to be as hard as it was. If she had deliberately done it, she would not have risked a bruise. If Mr Cochrane had seen that he might have had second thoughts. He deceived Irene when he married her and she feels trapped. I'm not excusing her behaviour, just trying to understand it. I still think it's Mr Cochrane who deserves most of our fury. I reckon Irene would help us hold him down in the fish pond.

 

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#270:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 9:30 pm

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Can accept that Irene was treated badly, but she had no right to take it out on the child. Poor, poor Grizel - after four and a half years of that i wonder that she wasn't completely psychologically damaged.

 

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#271:  Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 9:37 pm

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Lesley wrote:

Poor, poor Grizel - after four and a half years of that i wonder that she wasn't completely psychologically damaged.

Thought the common opinion was that Grizel as EBd portrayed her was!

 

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#272:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 12:09 am

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I still think it's Mr Cochrane who deserves most of our fury.

I agree. Even though Irene has behaved despicably, he is the spineless coward who started the whole ball rolling.Thanks for the updates Liz - very well written.

 

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#273:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:07 pm

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An uneventful week passed, and Grizel recovered some of her previous exuberance. She spent some time in the garden, careful now to keep her clothes clean, chatting to the elderly man who came to work there, asking him questions about what he was doing as he pruned the long-neglected hedges. Her new school uniform, which had been ordered from a store in London arrived on Wednesday. Under her step-mother’s watchful eye she tried on the white blouse, grey tunic, tie and blazer. The tunic was a little long, but, as Mrs Cochrane commented, that gave her room to grow.

On Wednesday evening, Mr and Mrs Cochrane went to the Mortons for dinner, leaving Grizel at home with Mrs Accot. Grizel had not had much to do with the cook, having had her meals brought to her by Ellen. On previous occasions when she had been left alone in the house with the Cook and Ellen she had been restricted to the schoolroom under orders not to waste the maid’s time by chattering to her. This time, Mrs Cochrane had been in a hurry getting ready to go out, worrying about whether her dress was appropriate “You look lovely my dear” her husband reassured her automatically, leaving her to put the last touches to her hair while he ran upstairs to say “Goodbye, be a good girl” to his daughter.

It was Ellen’s day off, so it was Cook who carried the dinner tray up to the schoolroom. “Here you are Miss Grizel” she said cheerfully as she put the tray down. Grizel looked up from the picture she was drawing and recognised the woman who had waved to her from the hallway when she had come for interview. “I’ll wait here while you eat, save my poor legs from going up and down those stairs all evening, if you don’t mind, Miss Grizel?”

Grizel didn’t mind. She was quite happy to have company and chatted away while eating her meal, asking Mrs Accot a dozen or so questions at a time, listening enthralled to stories of her nieces and nephews “Seven of them my sister has, and each of them more mischief than the last,” until the clock striking downstairs recalled them to the time and Grizel was bustled off to bed and Cook took the tray back down to the kitchen.

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#274:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:14 pm

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So pleased that Cookie is there for Grizel - would like to hear her unvarnished opinion of Mr and Mrs Cochrane. Thanks for slightly more hopeful update, Liz.

 

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#275:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:33 pm

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Its so good to see Cookie, I feel much better knowing that Grizel has someone to look out for her. Thank you Liz

 

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#276:  Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 9:36 pm

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We're judging Irene's behaviour as seen from our own time - I don't believe any of us are old enough to be her comteporaries. (The School at the Chalet was published in 1925, & Grizel is (I think)14, so this is currently set in 1921. Irene must have been born in the nineteenth century. Who is there Irene could turn to for advice or supprt? It was an era when such things were not talked about in public. I think it's easy to forget how recently it has become acceptable to talk about family matters to non-family members & for fathers to automatically have a role in childrearing. I'm very concerned about the idea of drowning her in the fishpond - no-one has suggested removing the fish first!

 

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#277:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 9:40 pm

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*carefully removes the fish in order to allow Irene drowning to proceed*

 

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#278:  Author: auntie karry, Location: Stoke on Trent Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 9:43 pm

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so good to see Cookie at the beginning of the relationship. I have always liked the way that Grizel kept in touch with her at school.

 

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#279:  Author: Miriam, Location: Jerusalem, Israel Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 9:55 pm

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Would like to provide aquarium to rehouse fish, since just removing them from the pool (however carefully) will not help them very much. *Carefully fills aquarium with pond water, so the fish don't have too much of an environmental shock*

 

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#280:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 10:41 pm

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This is so sad, I'm glad that Grizel has Cookie now though!

 

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#281:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 11:55 pm

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Want to give Cookie a big hug for being so lovely to grizel

 

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#282:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 12:37 am

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Yay for Cookie!!!!

 

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#283:  Author: Dawn, Location: Leeds, West Yorks Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2005 10:47 am

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Lyanne wrote:

We're judging Irene's behaviour as seen from our own time - I don't believe any of us are old enough to be her comteporaries. (The School at the Chalet was published in 1925, & Grizel is (I think)14, so this is currently set in 1921. Irene must have been born in the nineteenth century. Who is there Irene could turn to for advice or supprt? It was an era when such things were not talked about in public. I think it's easy to forget how recently it has become acceptable to talk about family matters to non-family members & for fathers to automatically have a role in childrearing.

Very true - I learnt a few weeks ago, that my grandmothers mother committed suicide when Beta (granny) was only a few months old. Apparetly she was pregnant agian and her husband didn't want any more children (there was an older brother as well) and was so nasty to her that she threw herself off a cliff - this was the early 1900s. My mother didn't find out until she was an adult and was distraught as she had always adored her grandfather and thought him a wonderful loving man

 

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#284:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2005 4:20 pm

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Didn't your great-grandfather realise that it takes two to tango?

 

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#285:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2005 7:23 pm

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Ouch! How awful!! *hugs Dawn, her mum, her gran, and her great gran!*

 

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#286:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2005 4:15 pm

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Miriam wrote:

Would like to provide aquarium to rehouse fish, since just removing them from the pool (however carefully) will not help them very much. *Carefully fills aquarium with pond water, so the fish don't have too much of an environmental shock*

They could come and live in our fishpond at work as it is fishless at the moment as all but four of the previous occupants swam away in the floods. The four that didn't swim away were recaptured and are languishing in a retired workers fishpond waitinf till all the fuss dies down before they return home. Thanks for the update Liz. Cookie is a lovely lady.

 

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#287:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 2:23 pm

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On Sunday morning, Grizel was once again taken to church, wearing her best frock. This time, as they left the building, they greeted the rector and were about to move on when he stopped them, saying “Let me introduce you to my sister, Miss Fareham. Hermione, this is Mr and Mrs Cochrane and, I’m sorry my dear, I’ve forgotten your name?” (Actually, he had not been told it.)

“I’m Grizel,” she introduced herself and was rewarded with a bright smile from Hermione Fareham.

“Well Grizel, I think you must be just the right age for my Sunday School class, if you would like to join us?” Miss Fareham straightened and then addressed Mr and Mrs Cochrane. “We start up again after the summer holidays next week. The children come from three o’clock to half past four and we’d be delighted to have Grizel join us.”

"I’m sure Grizel would like to come.” Henry replied. Then aware of the people waiting to greet the rector, they moved onwards.

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#288:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 5:09 pm

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I hope these are some more friends for Grizel, she needs as many as she can get!

 

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#289:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 7:29 pm

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At least she'llbe away from those people for 90minutes each Sunday. Thanks Liz.

 

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#290:  Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 11:27 pm

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Cazx wrote:

I hope these are some more friends for Grizel, she needs as many as she can get!

I seem to recall they were by the time School came around, so that's a good thing. (((Grizel))) - well, she needs it, poor lamb. Thanks Liz

 

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#291:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 10:05 am

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Cazx wrote:

I hope these are some more friends for Grizel, she needs as many as she can get!

Friends now coming thick and fast Cazx - no prizes for guessing who's next


Tuesday was the first day of school, and Grizel was awake early that morning, excitedly pulling on her new uniform. She had been to a small school near Granny’s house, but there had only been 37 pupils in the whole school. Now she was going to a much bigger high school, and she was looking forward to meeting more girls her age and making new friends. She soon settled in and by the end of the week she knew every girl in her form, and most of those in the Lower School Common Room by name, many of them she knew about their families as well. She liked her teacher, Miss Rose, who found Grizel to be an intelligent girl, keen to learn anything new.

Sunday saw them back at church again. Once more Grizel looked round curiously, examining the faces around her. One face in particular held her attention for a long time. It was another girl, younger than Grizel, very thin, with short black hair and big dark eyes that looked enormous in her small pointed face. She was sitting between her parents and when it came to the hymns she sang with as much enthusiasm as Grizel did, although the rest of the time she wasn’t paying much attention, she didn’t look around like Grizel did.

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#292:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 10:11 am

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I assume Joey is actually sitting between Madge and Dick? Their parents died when Joey was only a baby. Good to see that Grizel is making friends and is enjoying school, especially as her spirit will be slowly getting crushed at home by those people.

 

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#293:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 10:22 am

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Lesley wrote:

I assume Joey is actually sitting between Madge and Dick? Their parents died when Joey was only a baby.

I know that, and you know that - Grizel doesn't... yet... Liz

 

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#294:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 11:38 am

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Ooooh yay, friends for Grizel! I hope we get Mary and Rosalie too!!!

 

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#295:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 11:43 am

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LizB wrote:

Lesley wrote: I assume Joey is actually sitting between Madge and Dick? Their parents died when Joey was only a baby. I know that, and you know that - Grizel doesn't... yet... Liz

Yes, I realised that - didn't mean it as criticism.

 

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#296:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 1:17 pm

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Madge and Dick must seem ancient to Grizel, so it was an easy mistake to make.

 

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#297:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:37 pm

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Yay!!! Looking forward to Jo and Grizel meeting properly!

 

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#298:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 1:06 am

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yay Grizel is making lots of friends. Hope she can spend lots of time away from home now.

 

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#299:  Author: Sugarplum, Location: second star to the right! Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 1:28 am

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Glad to see Grizel is being allowed to go to Sunday school at least and love the way Joey is portrayed as not paying much attention.

 

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#300:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 1:50 pm

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Lesley wrote:

LizB wrote: Lesley wrote: I assume Joey is actually sitting between Madge and Dick? Their parents died when Joey was only a baby. I know that, and you know that - Grizel doesn't... yet... Liz Yes, I realised that - didn't mean it as criticism.

I didn't mean to imply you were criticising, Lesley

 

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#301:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 1:51 pm

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Sorry - I couldn't resist Joey's request


Grizel felt that there was something mysterious about the girl, and the way she gazed into space, as if she could see things that weren’t there, so she was pleased when Mr Cochrane stopped to greet the family after the service. “Dick, Madge, please allow me to introduce you to my new wife, Irene. Irene, this is Mr and Miss Bettany, and their young sister Josephine." Grizel noticed that the girl pulled a face at that. "Are you walking our way? Then lets go together.”

The fair young man shook hands politely with Irene, as they made their way down the aisle, and then turned his gaze to Grizel. “This must be your Grizel then? Hasn’t she grown, Madge, since we saw her last?”

“Yes this is Grizel,” replied Mr Cochrane, putting a hand on his daughter’s shoulder, “Say hello to Mr and Miss Bettany my dear.”

Grizel said “hello” and looked at Josephine.

That young lady gave her a quick grin. “What did he say your name was?” she asked curiously, as the two girls walked slightly ahead of the others.

“Grizel,” replied that young lady, and continued glibly as she had many times before, “it’s a family name – the Cochranes are really Scottish if you go back far enough, you know.”

“I’ve never heard it before, but it’s a pretty name. Everyone calls me Jo or Joey – not Josephine – I hate it! And my brother and sister are really Richard and Margaret, but everyone calls them Dick and Madge.”

“Are they your brother and sister – I thought they were your mother and father?”

“I never knew my mother and father – they died when I was a baby.” Jo explained. “Madge has brought me up, but she’ll laugh when I tell her you thought you were my mother, she’s only 20!” Jo giggled at the thought of her sister’s outrage. “Are you really Mr Cochrane’s daughter? I’ve not seen you before.”

“I’ve been here a month.” Grizel replied. “I used to live with Grannie, because my mother died when I was little, but now I’ve come to live here with Daddy.”

“We’ve been away on holiday all summer.” Jo told her. “We went to Austria and stayed by a lake and had an awfully jolly time. There were mountains all round it and it was topping. We got there on this funny little railway, and then there was a steamer on the lake. We only just got back this week, which means I’ll be late back to school. Where do you go to school?”

“The High School,” replied Grizel, “I’ve just started there this week.”

“I’ve been going to Miss Tate’s school, but now I’m going to go to the high school. We’ll be in diff’rent forms of course, ‘cos you’re older’n me. Do you like school? I love it, but I miss quite a bit of because I get ill, especially in winter.”

“Do you get ill an awful lot?” asked Grizel, feeling the automatic sympathy of the naturally healthy.

“Oh well, I just get a lot of coughs and so on,” explained Jo off-handedly. “But it gives me loads of time to read. I just love books don’t you?”

“Er, well they’re alright but I’d rather be doing things.” Grizel answered. “But if I can’t be doing things then a book’s good,” she added hurriedly, not wanting to disparage her new acquaintance.

“I like doing things too, but when I’ve got a cough I can’t and that’s what got me into reading and,” Jo continued, dropping her voice slightly “can you keep a secret?”

“Of course I can” Grizel was thrilled. I write stories too. I wanted to tell you ’cos I was wondering if I could borrow your name for it.”

Grizel looked at her wide-eyed “You write stories?” she asked.

“Yes, I’ve just been thinking about a new one with a witch and a princess, and I was stuck for the princess’s name, because I wanted it to be different – Grizel is a really different name, can I use it?”

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#302:  Author: Kate, Location: Ireland Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 2:02 pm

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Aw, how cute... and how Joey!! (Would have thought myself that Grizel would be a more appropriate name for the witch than the princess... I really dislike that name!! ) Thanks Liz!

 

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#303:  Author: Rachel, Location: Plotting in my lair Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 3:32 pm

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Ahhhhhhhh, sixteen pages in one sitting - and now there isn't any more to read! This is really good - thoroughly enjoyed all the comments along the way from the critics regarding who should be murdered and in what manner! Hope there is more of this soon. I'm hooked already!

 

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#304:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 8:08 pm

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Lovely meeting between the two of them - and their different interests touched on straight away! Thanks Liz.

 

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#305:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 8:18 pm

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Awww a nice Joey!

 

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#306:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 10:27 pm

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awwwww what a lovely young joey - just the way i preferred her in the early books before she thought she knew best about everything!

 

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#307:  Author: Kathy_S, Location: midwestern US Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 10:32 pm

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It's nice to see Grizel and Joey getting along -- and Grizel making an effort at it, too, definitely not your "hardened character." As for the witch/princess -- my early views of Grizel (since I think of it as short for Griselda) come from The Cuckoo Clock, one of those classic 1870s books, so I'd see it more as a princessy sort of name, though a sad sort of princess who needs rescuing. And then there was Lady Griselda Gray, name of a kitten in The Golden Name Day (1955) -- who ended up being called Cuckoo Clock, a much more fitting name, as she wasn't at all ladylike . *still ready to slap the evil Mr. & Mrs. Cochrane*

 

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#308:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 12:15 am

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is grizel really short for griselda then? i always assumed it was a separate name and griselda was jo's nickname for her, though i've never seen grizel anywhere else come to think of it....

 

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#309:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 12:25 am

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yay!

 

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#310:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 1:47 pm

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Grizel is the Scots form of Griselda.

 

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#311:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 2:38 pm

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francesn wrote:

I always assumed it was a separate name and griselda was jo's nickname for her, though i've never seen grizel anywhere else come to think of it....

Me too Frances, its only Joey who ever uses Griselda.

 

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#312:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 2:16 am

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Awwww!!!! Liz, that was great!! What a lovely Jo!

 

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#313:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:14 pm

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Lovely Liz, thanks. Glad Grizel has met Joey now.

 

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#314:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:27 pm

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Grizel was pleased to discover that her new friend was in her Sunday School class when she arrived that afternoon. Madge Bettany, who helped with the girls older than Grizel assured Mrs Cochrane that she would see Grizel safely home afterwards, and the girls had another opportunity to chatter as they walked home.

“… we have a guardian, Mr Crumper, but he’s away at the moment, so we’ve got a friend Mademoiselle La Pâttre staying with us until he comes back. Then after that Dick will go back to India.”

“To India?”

“Yes, he works there. I was born there, but I don’t remember it at all.”

“You’ve travelled so much,” said Grizel enviously. “I’ve only lived here and with Grannie, which isn’t far away. We used to go to Torquay for our holidays. Do you always go to Austria?”

“Oh no, we went there last year, but it was Italy the year before that and one winter we went to the Riviera, because they thought it would help my cough.”

“One day I’d like to travel around the world,” said Grizel, dreamily, “there’s so many places and things to see – all the different kinds of people and so on. I’d like to see mountains and castles and waterfalls and people who wear strange clothes and wild animals and oh all sorts of things. I think it would be such an adventure.”

“Maybe you will one day.” Joey told her as they arrived at the Cochrane’s gate. “I’ll lend you a book with some pictures of different countries in if you like.”

“Would you really?” asked Grizel, delighted. “That would be topping!”

“Madge,” Jo turned to her sister, who had left them to their chatter during the walk “can we lend that book to Grizel, the one with the pictures of all the countries in – you know the one I mean?”

Madge smiled, “I don’t see why not Jo, we’ll have to see if we can find it for you Grizel. Now run along in my dear, and give my regards to your father and step-mother. I expect we’ll see you again soon.”

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#315:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:59 pm

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Thank you Liz. So nice to see Grizel being able to be 'normal' with Joey and Madge.

 

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#316:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:04 pm

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Wonder how long it'll take for Joey and Madge to realise that all is not well chez Cochrane? Thanks Liz.

 

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#317:  Author: Tahnee, Location: New Zealand Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:31 pm

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Madge and Joey are so sweet in this, I'm glad they are there for Grizel.

 

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#318:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:15 pm

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Glad to see a nice Joey and Madge (for once )

 

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#319:  Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:44 pm

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That was lovely, hope that Joey and Madge can help Grizel have some happiness. JackieJ

 

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#320:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:13 pm

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*thinks Irene won't approve of the book* so happy Grizel has found a friend - maybe nice Madge can influence Irene (as opposed to evil alcoholic Madge of later life)

 

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#321:  Author: Alice, Location: London, England Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:41 pm

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In some ways I think Madge and Joey will guess soon since they have known for a long time in the first chapter of School. But I do remember that Rosalie is shocked in chapter two that Grizel is dismissive about her stepmother so I think Grizel has quickly got good at hiding her uphappy home life.

 

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#322:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 2:45 pm

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Ellen answered the door and Grizel entered the house with a little skip. “Your father is in the drawing room, Miss Grizel,” Ellen told her, “better go in and let them know you’re home.”

Full of excitement Grizel entered the drawing room. “I’m home Daddy,” she announced. “Miss Bettany sends her… her regards, and she says they’ll lend me a book about travelling to different places. Joey’s travelled a lot you know, she was born in India and…"

“That’s quite enough, child,” Mrs Cochrane interrupted her. “Now, you may go and ask Cook for a glass of milk then go up to your room and read quietly.”

Grizel made her way to the kitchen, where she was soon telling Cook and Ellen all about Sunday School and the Bettanys. She was happily expanding on the theme of travel when Mrs Cochrane came to speak to Cook half an hour later. “Grizel!” she spoke in ominous tones from the doorway. “What did I tell you to do?”

“To come and get a glass of milk.” Grizel answered promptly. “And then?”

“To go upstairs and read. But I was just telling…”

“When I tell you to do something, please do as you are told without delay. Is that clear?” Grizel opened her lips to reply but was forestalled. “No, I don’t want to hear any excuses. Now go up to your room.”

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#323:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 2:49 pm

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Well Cook and Ellen will definately know what's going on now...poor Grizel Thank you Liz!

 

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#324:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 3:17 pm

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Eeevil woman!!! Poor Grizel who can do nothing right Good to see her first meeting with the Bettany's though

 

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#325:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 4:56 pm

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That women is so horrid and nasty. At least Grizel has the Bettany's now!

 

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#326:  Author: Phil, Location: London UK Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 6:33 pm

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Carry on, this is excellent. Wasn't aware of the Scottish origin of Grizel's name. Many Thanks, Phil

 

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#327:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 7:09 pm

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Nice that Jo and Madge are so lovely to Grizel - she needs a bit of support in her life. Intrigued to see how Madge takes finding out about the Cochrane's true character.Thanks liz, this is great as ever.

 

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#328:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 8:05 pm

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cook and ellen certainly know the score as far as Grizel is concerned now! (((poor grizel))) why oh WHY can't Mr and Mrs Cochrane see what a lovely, bright and happy child Grizel is and encourage her?!

 

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#329:  Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 8:58 pm

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((((Grizel)))) I just want to rescue her now. It's not nice for her. Hopes that cookie will keep her spirits up. JackieJ

 

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#330:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 9:03 pm

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Evil woman - why is she insisting on making Grizel the scapegoat - and what the hell did her father want her home for if she's never to be allowed to speak. (((Grizel)))

 

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#331:  Author: Pat, Location: Doncaster Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 10:15 pm

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A sense of duty I suppose. Can't think of any other reason.

 

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#332:  Author: Helen P, Location: Cheshire Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 10:55 pm

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Poor, poor Grizel. I have high hopes of Cookie being extra nice to her from now on.

 

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#333:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 2:08 am

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See, i can understand her not understanding childrenbut i do not understand how she can just be cruel!

 

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#334:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 2:16 am

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LizB wrote:

Grizel made her way to the kitchen, where she was soon telling Cook and Ellen all about Sunday School and the Bettanys. She was happily expanding on the theme of travel when Mrs Cochrane came to speak to Cook half an hour later. “Grizel!” she spoke in ominous tones from the doorway. “What did I tell you to do?” “To come and get a glass of milk.” Grizel answered promptly. “And then?” “To go upstairs and read. But I was just telling…” “When I tell you to do something, please do as you are told without delay. Is that clear?” Grizel opened her lips to reply but was forestalled. “No, I don’t want to hear any excuses. Now go up to your room.”

You'd think she would be only too pleased to have Grizel safely in the kitchen and out of her hair. Looking wildly arround for my very own PointyStick

 

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#335:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 11:33 am

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Lesley wrote:

Evil woman - why is she insisting on making Grizel the scapegoat - and what the hell did her father want her home for if she's never to be allowed to speak. (((Grizel)))

He didn't want her home, but her Grannie was getting too old to take care of her so he had no choice.


The week at school passed quickly. Grizel was introduced to netball and became an immediate enthusiast. The Games mistress noticed her keen attempts at play and, although it was early days, decided that it would be worth keeping an eye on her progress. Mrs Cochrane endured Grizel’s fervent descriptions of the game as she walked her home from school for two days, then coldly told her to “refrain from your ceaseless talk and walk quietly as if you had at least some vestige of a decent upbringing.” Fortunately Grizel was too busy wondering what "vestige" meant, to notice the slur on her Grannie, or she might not have got the quiet she was wanting!

Despite the difference in age and temperament, Grizel and Joey soon became friends out of school. During school hours, they did not see much of each other, and each of them was making plenty of friends among their own peers. But although most of the week they only exchanged greetings in passing, or a smile or wave, both still felt the initial attraction to each other.

Mr Cochrane approved of the friendship when he heard about it and it was allowed to flourish. “Young Joey Bettany is a delicate child, so Grizel won’t be getting into any mischief with her,” he assured his wife. “I’ve known the Bettany’s for years – I knew their parents well – and Mr Crumper, the Bettany’s guardian is very well-respected in Taverton. Let Grizel associate with them as much as she would like, she won’t come to any harm with Madge.”

Last edited by LizB on Wed Mar 09, 2005 4:33 pm; edited 1 time in total

 

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#336:  Author: Marianne, Location: Lancaster Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 12:32 pm

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So glad he ''approves''

 

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#337:  Author: Emma A, Location: Peterborough Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 12:41 pm

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I suppose he'd be only too pleased to let someone else look after his child, gruesome horrible selfish man that he is. Wonder if Irene will think Grizel will tell tales? And how will she get on with the Bettanys?

 

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#338:  Author: Dawn, Location: Leeds, West Yorks Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 5:36 pm

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LizB wrote:

Mr Crumper, the Bettany’s guardian is very well-respected in Taverton.

Appearances can be deceiving (assuming he's the one who got their affairs in a muddle) Good to see an update on this Liz - thankyou

 

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#339:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 6:22 pm

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Thank goodness he's letting the friendship continue at least.

 

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#340:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 7:54 pm

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Well at least Grizel is allowed to spend some time with the Bettany's.

 

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#341:  Author: Katie, Location: London, but my heart belongs to Harrogate Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 8:52 pm

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LizB wrote:

"Young Joey Bettany is a delicate child, so Grizel won’t be getting into any mischief with her”

He obviously doesn't know our Joey!!! Poor Grizel, though. No wonder her character got so hard.

 

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#342:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 10:00 pm

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Evil woman! Thanks Liz!

 

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#343:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 12:18 am

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Still feeling desperatley sorry for Grizel. So glad she has Cookie, Ellen and the Bettanys she deserves some hapiness in her life. I suppose madge will notice her character change as she has yet to become the 'quiet and biddable creature' she became.

 

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#344:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 4:50 pm

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When, a few weeks later, Madge spoke to Mr Cochrane and invited Grizel for Saturday afternoon and tea the next weekend, the little girl was delighted when he agreed. The promised travel book had been loaned, and, on rainy days, hours spent poring over pictures and reading descriptions of exotic places had kept Grizel quiet and occupied enough to avoid a scolding. The longed-for Saturday finally came and Grizel carefully carried the book with her to return it to the Bettanys. “Thank you very much for letting me borrow it,” she said politely, handing it over to Madge. “You’re welcome, Madge smiled at her. “Oh, what’s this?” she held up a second book. “I thought Joey might like to read it.” Grizel answered. “Grannie gave it to me. It’s about a girl called Mary who came to England from India and went to live in a big house, where she discovered a boy hidden away and a garden and they helped it grow.” Joey looked at the book with interest. “The Secret Garden. Oooooh goody, I’ve not read this one!” she exclaimed. “Thanks everso Grizel.” She opened it at the beginning. “Jo, you can’t start on it now while Grizel is here.” Madge told her. “Put it on the table for now and you can look at it later.” She turned to Grizel, “would you like to play Fish, Grizel?” A fun afternoon ensued, followed by what Joey termed “… a luscious tea. You’ll have to come again Grizel, if it means we get a feed like this.” “Joey, don’t be such a little pig!” Madge admonished. “But we should like to have you visit us again sometime Grizel.” “And next time we’ll go outside and do some skipping,” put in Joey, “if Madge will let us. You will, won’t you Madge?” “We’ll see,” replied Madge. “Now hurry up and finish your bun Joey-baba, it will be time for Grizel to go home soon.” Unfortunately, next time didn’t come as soon as they all hoped.

 

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#345:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 4:53 pm

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That last line sounds ominous... Is it because Joey falls ill or that Grizel is punished for something silly by her evil step-mother?

 

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#346:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 4:59 pm

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Really wanting to strangle the evil Irene. Fancy her having a name that means 'Peace'.

 

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#347:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 5:00 pm

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*wibbles* In an evil twisted way I really hope Joey's ill rather than Grizel being punished.

 

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#348:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 5:32 pm

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So do I Frances! Oh, how very big of Mr Cochrane to allow Grizel to have a friend. His ceaseless kindness, generosity and unrivalled love for his family never fails to astonish me.

 

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#349:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 7:07 pm

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Laura wrote:

So do I Frances! Oh, how very big of Mr Cochrane to allow Grizel to have a friend. His ceaseless kindness, generosity and unrivalled love for his family never fails to astonish me.

My thoughts exactly (too lazy to have an individual opinion tonight, and Laura sums it up very nicely! )

 

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#350:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 9:19 pm

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Also hopes it's Joey being ill! Poor Grizel -how long will it be before she starts to notice that others have much more of a family life than she does?

 

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#351:  Author: Alice, Location: London, England Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 9:28 pm

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LizB wrote:

Joey looked at the book with interest. “The Secret Garden. Oooooh goody, I’ve not read this one!” she exclaimed. “Thanks everso Grizel.” She opened it at the beginning. “Jo, you can’t start on it now while Grizel is here.” Madge told her. “Put it on the table for now and you can look at it later.”

This reminds me of myself. Starting to read a new book I'd been given even though I was in company. I did this at a CS London junior meeting when Ju Gosling gave us copies of The Chalet School Revisited - very rude!

 

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#352:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 11:22 am

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Sorry to disappoint you all... “Grizel! What, may I ask, is the meaning of this?” It was the first day of the half-term holiday. Grizel landed on one foot and froze. “I’m playing hopscotch,” she explained. “You have to hop over…” “I didn’t mean hopscotch, you stupid child. Stand up properly!” Grizel stopped balancing on one foot and put the other one down. “And aside from the fact that you have made a complete mess of the pathway with your chalk, that is not what I was talking about. What I am talking about is this.” She held up a sheet of paper. “What is it?” asked Grizel. “It is your half-term report from school. I don’t wish to discuss it out here, so you can clean up this mess and then come to the drawing room and explain to me why you have not done better.” After an attempt at scuffing out the chalk lines with her shoes, having discovered her handkerchief completely inadequate to the task, Grizel went inside to the drawing room to face her stepmother. “It says here, that you are twelfth in the form for English and fourteenth, FOURTEENTH, for History.” She waved the report at Grizel who stepped over to have a look. For most subjects she was in fifth–eight place. “Look, I came second in Jography and first in Maths!” she exclaimed, pleased. “Are you listening to me child!? I would like to know why you are so far down the lists for English and History.” She glanced at the card again “and French as well. This is not good enough Grizel. Your father pays good money for your education and I will not have you wasting it. I shall expect to see a vast improvement in your next report.” She paused, and then continued. “I am still waiting for your explanation.” “I like French but I’ve never learnt it before.” Grizel answered. “I don’t like history and…” “I am not interested in whether you like your lessons or not. You are at school to learn. Now you may spend the afternoon learning the names and dates of the Kings and Queens of England. I will come up to hear you recite them after dinner.” “But I can’t learn them this afternoon, I am going to Joey’s today.” Grizel protested. “How dare you answer me back like that!” Mrs Cochrane was infuriated. “Go upstairs now, and write a letter to Miss Bettany explaining that as you have been misbehaving, you will unfortunately be unable to join them for tea today. Ellen will deliver it.” It took six attempts before Grizel produced a letter that was approved by her stepmother and was able to start learning names and dates from Edward the Confessor onwards. By the end of the afternoon she had more or less struggled through to the Stewarts. When Mrs Cochrane came to see her she recited carefully, faltering her way through the Plantagenets, gaining confidence in the Tudors, and then tailing off at James II. “Well, I had expected you to do better than this,” was the judgement. “Until you know them all properly, you are not to play outside, or have any half-term treats. Now tidy this room up before dinner.”

 

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#353:  Author: zaks, Location: blackburn Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 11:48 am

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slaps irene and hugs grizel

 

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#354:  Author: Laura, Location: London (ish) Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 11:51 am

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Evil woman. What is her problem?! Has she ever said a kind word to Grizel? Grrrrrr.

 

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#355:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 12:07 pm

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Really, really hope Madge discovers what is going on - Irene is so evil it's difficult to have any sympathy for her.

 

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#356:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 1:35 pm

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I hate Irene!

 

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#357:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 1:41 pm

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With thanks to Enid Blyton for inspiration It took until Tuesday evening before Grizel could recite the whole list without getting the Henrys and Edwards muddled and had all the dates correct. With one day of half-term left, she was disappointed that the rain made it impossible to go outside. By lunchtime on Wednesday her stepmother felt her nerves were worn to a frazzle. Grizel, full of pent up energy found it increasingly hard to remember to be quiet and stay in the schoolroom. The final straw came when there was a loud crash from upstairs. Sitting in the drawing room, Mrs Cochrane leapt to her feet. “What has that infernal child been doing now!” she exclaimed and hurried from the room. She arrived in the schoolroom slightly out of breath from the stairs, to find Grizel sitting on a small upturned table. “What do you think you are doing?” The tones were coldly furious. “I was pretending it was a boat.” Grizel explained, suddenly realising that maybe that wasn’t such a good idea. “Go to bed. Immediately. Maybe if you spend the rest of the day there and have no supper that will help you remember in future that furniture is not to be played with.”

 

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#358:  Author: Alice, Location: London, England Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 2:03 pm

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Poor, poor Grizel. Thank you Liz.

 

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#359:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 3:25 pm

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Evil b*tch - she's so stupid it hasn't occured to her that if she wanted peace and quiet the simplest thing would have been to allow Grizel to visit her friends.

 

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#360:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 4:16 pm

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I agree with Lesley! Thanks for the update Liz!

 

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#361:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 4:55 pm

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I'm running out of adjectives to descibe was a sadistic cow Irene is. Presume this is where Madge will start to twig just how awful she's making life for Grizel?

 

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#362:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 5:01 pm

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Irene will never ever be loved, that's her tragedy, but if she had been good to Grizel, and thought about something other than having Grizel obey her instantly, she might have lived a better life.

 

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#363:  Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 9:27 pm

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((((Grizel)))) I just want to take her away from it all. Poor Grizel. JackieJ

 

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#364:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 9:28 pm

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Poor little Grizel!!!!!

 

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#365:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 11:35 pm

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Grizel was pleased to be back at school the next day. She greeted her friends in her form rapturously, but nobody noticed that she said little about her half-term while they chattered merrily about theirs. Listening to the conversations around her, she began to wonder why hers had been so different to theirs. However, she didn’t have much time to ponder, as they had to scurry to their desks for registration, and she forgot about it for the time-being. She waved to Joey across the Hall in assembly, but didn’t get the chance to speak to her until Sunday. “It’s a shame you weren’t able to visit us last week, Grizel, it would have been great fun if you’d been there.” Joey told her, “Were you really bad?” Mrs Cochrane overhead the question and stepped in to answer before Grizel could say anything. “I’m sorry that you had to miss your fun because Grizel was naughty, but hopefully she’s learnt her lesson and it won’t be necessary again.” “Well, let’s say it’s over and done with and not talk about it again,” put in Madge, as Joey opened her mouth to ask more questions. “Maybe Grizel could visit us the Saturday after next, Mrs Cochrane, if she’s not otherwise occupied?” As Mrs Cochrane agreed to this, Grizel spent the next fortnight on her best behaviour in order not to lose the treat again. She was quiet (most of the time) and managed to remember not to run up the stairs, or to tread mud in from the garden. In this last she was assisted by Cook and Ellen, who cast a sharp eye over her when she came in the kitchen door and reminded her to wipe her feet, or helped tidy her hair and straighten her clothes before she went through to the rest of the house. Having got through the two weeks with only a few minor scolds (for not leaving her room tidy enough, and for chattering to her classmates, making her slow on the way out of school), Grizel was greatly disappointed when on the morning of that Saturday a note came from Madge explaining that Joey had contracted a cold and so the visit would have to be postponed.

 

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#366:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 9:48 am

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Poor child, at least Cook and Ellen are helping her. And how tragic that she's now noticing how different her home life is to everyone else.

 

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#367:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 10:02 am

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*Huggles Grizel* I really hope that when Irene gets old, grey and all alone that she realises just how much of a b*&%h she has been!

 

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#368:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 2:45 pm

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grrrrrrrr how irritating it is that Mrs Cochrane is always there to step in with her explanation. However, Joey is a bright observant child and so is Madge for that matter. I'm sure they will begin to notice things soon (is making a valiant attempt to be very hopeful!!) Thanks for the updates Liz

 

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#369:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 11:26 pm

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*slaps irene* *provides joey with medicine to hasten the recovery* poor poor grizel

 

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#370:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 1:11 am

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francesn wrote:

*slaps irene* *provides joey with medicine to hasten the recovery* poor poor grizel

Too uninspired to think of own comment so borrowing frances's as it pretty much says what I wanted to! (thanks frances! )

 

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#371:  Author: Miss Di, Location: Newcastle, NSW Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 3:29 am

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GRRRRRRRR. Hope Dick brings back a pet tiger from India and it accidently-done-a-purpose eats The Stepmother.

 

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#372:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 9:53 am

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“Oh, well that’s a shame Miss Grizel,” sympathised Mrs Accot, as Grizel sat on the kitchen table, swinging her legs, telling her about her disappointment. “Let’s hope your friend is better and you can go to see her again soon.” “Why don’t you write her a note,” suggested Ellen, “I could deliver it for you when I walk out with Robert this evening. “Would you?” asked Grizel, “that would be super. I’ll draw her a picture as well. Thank you Ellen.” “Not at all Miss Grizel, I’ll come to fetch it from you later. Now I must go on and get on with the dusting.” She exited the kitchen, leaving Grizel to talk to the cook. “What are you baking today Cookie?” asked Grizel, jumping down from the table and going round to peer in the bowl. Cookie gave a stir to the mixture. “I’m just making some buns for tea, lovey, seeing as you’re going to be here after all,” she told her. “Would you like a stir? “Can I?” asked Grizel, her eyes lighting up. “Well, let me just add these currants and then you can have a go.” Cookie picked up the jar of currants. “Ah, there you are, I have been looking for you. Do stand up straight child, you’ll end up deformed!” Grizel stood ramrod straight, and faced her stepmother. “I was just…” “Never mind what you were doing, child, you shouldn’t be here wasting Mrs Accot’s time. Go upstairs to the schoolroom and stay there until lunchtime.” Grizel opened her mouth to tell her stepmother that she was going to help the cook, not waste her time, but a glance at her stepmother’s face changed her mind and she closed it and went silently up the stairs. As she went she heard the voice continuing behind her. “Mrs Accot, please, do not encourage Grizel to loiter in the kitchen and distract you from your work.” “She’s no trouble ma’am,” “I would appreciate it if you would respect my wishes in this matter.” “Yes ma’am.” “Very well. Now, about dinner, I think…”

 

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#373:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:00 am

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Hands out a new delivery of slapping sticks. I honestly believe that Irene is getting a lot of pleasure out of treating Grizel in this way.

 

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#374:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 11:20 am

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Thanks Liz.

 

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#375:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 3:03 pm

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*passes Cokkie the rat poison to add to Mrs C's dinner!!!*

 

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#376:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 6:38 pm

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Jennie wrote:

I honestly believe that Irene is getting a lot of pleasure out of treating Grizel in this way.

I think you're right, jennie - she seems to be deliberately ensuring that Grizel have as miserable time as possible. Evil cow.

 

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#377:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 8:24 pm

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I can't understand why she would want to act in the way she is though! She's so horrid!

 

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#378:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 8:30 pm

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Because there are people in this world who want to have everything their own way, and who aren't capable of being happy unless they are making everyone else unhappy. Irene is someone who does not know how to love, so she receives no love, thus making her feel that she is right to behave as she does. She doesn't understand, or want to understand, anyone else, and believes that she is the only person in the world who is entitled to have feelings.

 

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#379:  Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 9:21 pm

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Grrrrr, never mind slapping sticks, anyone up for putting Irene back into the pond and leaving her there? ((((Grizel)))) I have a horrible feeling that my hugs to Grizel are soon going to take over the whole board. JackieJ

 

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#380:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 9:27 pm

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Grizel did not see Joey for a few weeks, as the cold developed into a chesty cough, and Madge kept her at home until she had fully recovered. When the Bettanys reappeared at church, Grizel noticed the Joey was even paler and thinner than ever, although she grinned across at Grizel in her usual cheerful manner. “How are you feeling?” Grizel asked her when the met up after the service. “Are you better.” “Loads better thanks,” replied Jo, “Thanks everso for your notes.” Mrs Cochrane looked sharply over when she heard that, but was distracted by a question from Madge, and soon forgot it. .... The next excitement in Grizel’s life was the Christmas play to be given by the school. To her delight she had been given a small part as a shepherd, and she enthusiastically practiced her few lines. “Will you be coming to our Christmas play, Daddy?” she asked her father, at breakfast one morning, a couple of weeks before the play. “We need to let Miss Turner know how many tickets we want today.” Mr Cochrane looked at her enthusiastic face and was once more reminded of Victoria. Somehow he found his refusal stuck in his throat and the words “Well, I should think we’ll take two tickets” came out instead. He was rewarded by Grizel slipping from her seat and throwing her arms round his neck, before she skipped excitedly from the room and ran upstairs to get ready for school.

 

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#381:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:02 pm

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About bl**dy time!(Though I bet that evil cow spoils it! )Thanks Liz - I think.

 

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#382:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:03 pm

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addds hugs for Grizel to the mountain already provided by JackieI hope Mr and Mrs Cochrane won't ruin Grizel's Christmas play for her - it's lovely that they're coming to it, but why do I have a bad feeling about it?

 

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#383:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 12:37 am

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I have no words to describe Irene! Poor poor little Grizel. Some adukts should never be allowed near children.

 

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#384:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 9:36 am

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Somehow I think that Irene will talk Grizel's Dad out of going to the play!

 

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#385:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:50 am

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Also get a horrible feeling that this isn't going to go smoothly. I have visions of poor Grizel being left disappointed waiting for them to arrive... Thanks for the update Liz

 

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#386:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:25 pm

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The end of term came rapidly, and finally the great day arrived. Grizel was so excited she could barely eat any breakfast, although, she did manage to keep quiet, having had several reprimands about it over the previous week. Mr Cochrane folded his newspaper and got up from the table. “I shall have to go up to London for business today,” he told his wife. “I shall probably be away for three days.” “But Daddy, you can’t go away, it’s the play today.” Grizel protested. “I’m afraid that can’t be helped, Grizel,” he answered, “I have a very important meeting. Now, I must go or I shall miss my train.” He hurried from the room, leaving his daughter sitting downcast. “But… but…” “Your father is unable to come and that’s all there is to it.” Mrs Cochrane told her. “Now stop playing with your food and eat properly, child.” She rose and went into the hallway to bid goodbye to her husband, and Grizel took the opportunity to slip the contents of her plate back into a dish and leave the table. Mrs Cochrane did not even consider attending the play once she knew Grizel’s father would not be there. She told Ellen the time the play would end, and asked her to collect the little girl from the school once it had finished. “It’s a crying shame that nobody’s going to see her in her play, it is.” Ellen said in the privacy of the kitchen. “That excited she’s been and practising her words until she’s got ‘em off pat. I’ve a good mind to go myself, but the missus would be bound to notice I was missing and make a fuss!” Mrs Accot kneaded her dough. “Well, maybe I’ll get along there, it’s my half day today and I was going to my sister, but she won’t miss me for once.”

 

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#387:  Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:40 pm

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Oh, how could he. Although I suppose in a way he's just a product of his time. But she doesn't deserve him or Grizel, he's a fool for marrying Irene. Bless Cookie & Ellen though, maybe at least someone will be there to support Grizel. Thanks Liz JackieJ

 

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#388:  Author: Katie, Location: London, but my heart belongs to Harrogate Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:41 pm

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Yay for Cookie!! Horrid Mr and Mrs Cochrane

 

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#389:  Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:46 pm

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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr's at Mr Cochrane Im surprised at Irene, surely people might talk if she was not there and I dont think she would like that!!

 

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#390:  Author: Josie, Location: London Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:50 pm

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I knew it - hideous people that they are! Good for Cookie and Ellen though. Thanks Liz

 

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#391:  Author: Nell, Location: London, England Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 4:30 pm

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Joins Ally in Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrring at Mr Cochrane and Irene! How could they! La pauvre Grizel! Good for Cookie though!

 

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#392:  Author: Cazx, Location: Swansea/Bristol Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 4:49 pm

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Yay for Cookie

 

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#393:  Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 5:09 pm

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Good for Cookie!! poor Grizel!!!!

 

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#394:  Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 5:13 pm

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Doesn't Irene realise just how the town is going to take her absence from the play? In a way, it's a good thing as people will begin to realise just how horrible she is to Grizel.

 

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#395:  Author: Lesley, Location: Rochester, Kent Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 6:56 pm

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Perhaps this will allow Madge and Joey to start to see just how badly Grizel is treated. Irene may have made a bad mistake there -she'll have to be much more careful in future. In 'School at' it's obvious that the adults at least know what she's like - thinking Rosalie's mum. Lovely Cookie.

 

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#396:  Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 10:04 pm

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((Grizel)) *well seeing as she isn't getting hugs from her father or irene then i'm duty bound to heap hugs on her* ((Cookie)) for being so nice ((Ellen)) for thinking of going

 

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#397:  Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 10:55 pm

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There are parents today who think work is more important than their children & wouldn't thinkof going to see a school play if it inconvenienced them. they had to stop class assemblies at my son's primary school as not enough parents would turn up & the children would become distressed at their parents' absence. all irene has to do is say she had a cold and couldn't go

 

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#398:  Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 12:45 am

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Hope someone important from the town makes a comment to Irene about her absence - though I suppose she would just use the cold excuse. Thank goodness for Ellen and Cookie. Poor little Grizel.

 

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#399:  Author: Chelsea, Location: Your Imagination Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 2:07 am

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Lyanne wrote:

There are parents today who think work is more important than their children & wouldn't thinkof going to see a school play if it inconvenienced them. they had to stop class assemblies at my son's primary school as not enough parents would turn up & the children would become distressed at their parents' absence. all irene has to do is say she had a cold and couldn't go

My parents not coming to my play/awards night/game was the norm rather than the exception. But they weren't evil people like Irene (and my daddy still isn't!). Actually my dad came to my last Half and took me out to breakfast afterwards (where many carbs were consumed by me!). Lovely to see Cookie and Ellen being so sweet to Grizel.

 

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#400:  Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:08 am

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Grizel was disconsolate when she arrived at school, but the atmosphere in her form room was one of such excitement that she was soon caught up in the fervour of her classmates. It was the first time she had ever been in a play and the thrill of being dressed in her costume overcame most of her disappointment. She was as cheerful as the rest of the actors as they chattered excitedly backstage, before being hushed and then all led onto the stage for the opening carol. The curtains opened and the introduction to Once in Royal David’s City was played on the piano. Grizel half-hoping her father would be there after all, peered across the packed audience. She soon established that he was not there, and was disappointed once again, but halfway through the third verse she was pleased to spot Madge Bettany with Joey, and then, right at the back, she recognised Mrs Accot’s Sunday hat. She put all her enthusiasm into singing the final verse. The play went splendidly. Grizel spoke her lines well and clearly, wanting to do her best for her friends in the audience, and earning herself a word of praise from Miss Turner when she came off stage. “Well done Grizel, that was nice and clear. Now run and join the others dear.” …. “Well, Miss Grizel, that was lovely,” Grizel had sought out Mrs Accot in the crowded hall as soon as the performance was over. “Now, I must be getting on, I’m going over to see my sister, and we’ll just keep it as our little secret that I was here today shall we?” Grizel nodded, “I won’t tell anyone,” she promised solemnly. “Thank you for coming Cookie.” Cookie gave her one last smile and went on her way, while Grizel made her way through the press of bodies and found a place to sit and wait patiently for Ellen.

 

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