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You Can't Choose Your Family (Part 2) - Completed 2nd Dec
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Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 12:25 pm ]
Post subject:  You Can't Choose Your Family (Part 2) - Completed 2nd Dec

Here we go again. Posting may be a bit slower this time, as there are still quite a lot of gaps in the rest of this, but I'll try and keep it going.

For over a week after Helena's visit, peace reigned. Stephen relaxed slightly, and Charles had been heard to announce proudly that Stephen had left a book lying out of place in the prefects room and hadn't put it away for two whole days! Stephen himself responded by pointing out that it was equally nice when Charles wasn't attempting to pick a fight with everything, animate and inanimate, that he walked past. Such a peaceful state of affairs, it was generally considered, was the fore-runner to an avalanche of catastrophes, the sort that started with a lost book or a burst pen, and escalated into a school-wide battle which would take a diplomatic genius to sort out. The prefects watched closely for any signs of problems with the fourth and fifth forms. The staff exchanged puzzled looks as day after day passed with minimal disruptions - no more than would be expected in the best regulated of schools. The first bouncing pebbles arrived in the mailbag the following Wednesday.

As Wednesday was a busy morning for the Lower Sixth, Stephenson left the letters addressed to the four junior prefects on the table in the entrance hall. Jones scooped the bundles up on his way from a music lesson and distributed them before the beginning of the second class of the day. Charles took his letters, glanced through them, sighed at the collection of Swiss postmarks, and shoved them into his blazer pocket, where they remained until his lunch break.

Once they had eaten, the four boys retired to an empty corner of the library. Jones produced a pack of rather battered playing cards from his pocket and waved them questioningly.

"Not me." Charles said. "I still haven't opened my letters - I hate Wednesday mornings."

"Anything interesting?" Miller asked, as Jones began to deal the cards.

"My mother." Charles discarded this envelope on to the table. "My sister in Edinburgh, at last! And a mystery one with a Swiss postmark."

"Oh, open the mystery one first!" Monty said, picking up his cards. "Jones, this hand is awful, I'm sure you do this on purpose." Charles obliged, dropping Margot's letter on the table and tearing open the third.

"Ah, it's only my cousin." he told them, after flicking to the signature. "Wonder what she wants?"

"Read it and you'll find out." Monty suggested. Charles made a face at him and turned to his letter.

"Dear Chas,

I know a letter from me is a rare event, but I had to let you know the latest. I've sent this to you instead of Steve so that he doesn't have to get all Head Boy over it, but honestly Chas, you will not believe this for a second. Drumroll for my news...

My delightful brothers have gotten themselves thrown out of Winchester. Or rather, Daddy was 'asked to remove them' before the school made it a public explusion. Daddy is livid, as I'm sure you can imagine, and as he's still in Australia until Easter, it was David who had to go and collect them and take them back to the Round House, and I gather from an extremely aggrieved letter from Kester that he tore strips off them. You know that David and Rix and John and Maurice all went there and there were no problems, and now the awful K's have been thrown out (and after only one term, no less!)and as such, are the black sheep of the entire family at the moment! So, they're at the Round House - until Friday, when they are joining your place. And that's why I had to write to you!

Apparently Uncle Jack phoned your Head to get him to agree to take them - I have no idea why anyone would want them otherwise. They were hardly ideal pupils when they were at school in Australia, but in the last six months or so (since they were sent home to go to Winchester, in fact) they've collected more order marks between them than the rest of their form put together, they put cricket balls through every window in the Headmaster's study - deliberately, I might add - and a stray cat in the staffroom, and a frog on the dinner table, they led a protest against the middle school being put into silence during prep by encouraging their entire form to sing at the tops of their voices for the full time, and they topped off that (and the protest was only at the start of this term) by finding the keys a car belonging to one of the masters, helping themselves to it in the middle of the night and (of course!) crashing it into a tree. Honestly, Chas, have you ever heard the like? They're only eleven!

I think Mummy, Daddy and David are hoping that a school where they know some people and you and Steve can keep an eye on them will help. The next step if it doesn't is sending them to different schools - according to David, they don't know that's been considered, so you might want to keep it up your sleeve and use it as a threat if they get too out of hand.

Anyway, I must go, because we've a tennis court booked, but I just had to let you know! Let me know in return if they do anything too outrageous, won't you?

Ailie"


"They sound just lovely." Miller commented, when Charles had finished summarising the letter for them after groaning over its contents himself. "Are they identical?"

"No, thank goodness." Charles replied. "Why us though? What did we do to deserve them? If there's bad news in any of the other two letters, I'm disowning my family." He picked up his mother's letter and buried himself in it. To the amazement of his friends, after a few seconds he crumpled the pages in his hand and took off out the library at top speed.

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 12:40 pm ]
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Help! What has Joey said now? Thanks for the update I think. Pleased Charles and Steve are getting on better, they are going to need it to cope with Kevin and Kester by the sound of it.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:12 pm ]
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Nice to see that Charles and Ailie are friends: they were fairly close in age whereas Ailie was a fair bit younger than Josette and much older than Kevin and Kester. Hope Joey hasn't upset Charles.

Author:  AnneM [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 3:21 pm ]
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Hmmm! Wonder if this links in with Joey's change of plans for their summer holidays?

Don't envy Steve and Chas having to deal with terrible twins!

Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:09 pm ]
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Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next part!

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 7:50 pm ]
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Love the terrible 'K's' - no wonder that was kept quiet. :)


Wonder what Joey has to say...


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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Loved Ailie's letter, that was fabulous and am glad Ailie was so lovely in it and pretty understanding herself of her brothers

Author:  Abi [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:40 pm ]
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Kevin & Kester sound like rather a handful! :shock: I wonder what Joey's said now...

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:00 am ]
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:shock: at the terrible twins. And also wondering what else came from Switzerland.

Author:  jmc [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 8:59 am ]
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Can't wait to see what havoc the twins will create. What's Joey written now to upset him?

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Chatelaine [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 10:15 am ]
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Excellent episode, as usual!

Eilidh wrote:
The first bouncing pebbles arrived in the mailbag the following Wednesday.


I love this image! Can't wait to see the rocks. . . :D

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:58 am ]
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Charles burst into Stephen's study without knocking, making both Stephen and Jeff jump.

"Really, Maynard!" Stephen exclaimed. "What on..." he tailed off, seeing his brother's white face and blazing eyes. Charles slammed the crumpled remains of the letter down on the desk.

"I'll just... umm... right..." Jeff muttered, sidling towards the door. "I'll stick these up on the boards, Maynie, ok?"

"Yes, fine." Stephen replied absently, picking up the top sheet. "Chas, go and sit down and calm down a bit, would you?" he demanded after a second. "It's a nightmare trying to read this with you pacing up and down like a caged tiger." Charles flopped down on the window ledge and Stephen started again.

"Dear Charles,

How nice to hear from you again so quickly. Bad luck to lose to Roddy's school, but I'm sure you'll beat them next time and it's all about the game, of course, not the winning. Of course, neither Papa nor I know a great deal about football, but I'm sure it's much like everything else and will work itself out over time. Sorry to hear that the weather is so awful - one thing I do not miss about England is her winters! We've been teaching Geoff and Cecil to ski this last week or so, after school. They're both having a wonderful time, though are very sore at bedtime!


"Chas, there's nothing in this. What are you annoyed about?" Stephen demanded, "I get enough of this reading her letters to me, never mind getting to share yours as well."

"Keep going." Charles said, his voice grim. Stephen sighed and turned the page.

I do hope your studies are going well too. You mentioned that you were top in Latin last week - I'm so pleased, as that will of course be of great use to you in your future vocation. I know you haven't said anything, and that you were still keen to work at your science, but as you know, Mamma always knows what you really want. I'm so pleased that both you and Margot will be following the same path - more or less.

I do hope next year, you'll give up your science and work at the subjects you really need. I suppose things like English and Scripture and maybe History would be of more use to you? Anyway, I must sign off as I have letters to write to Felix and Mike as well. I'm looking forward to seeing you all in the summer - I've a lovely surprise planned for you all! All I'll say is, we're not going to the Tiernsee!

Love,

Mamma


Stephen dropped the letter back on the desk.

"Ah." he said.

Author:  Finn [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:10 pm ]
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!!

Methinks Madame Maynard is crazy! Fancy believing 'Mamma knows best'!

Author:  Tawny [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:17 pm ]
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Blimey! Why can't Joey not just leave well alone! Chas a priest! I don't think so!

Loving this drabble so much!

Author:  AnneM [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:47 pm ]
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The woman's completely crackers! Has she learned nothing from Len's departure? :banghead: :banghead: Hope Steve can calm him down a bit.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:10 pm ]
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Oh dear, poor Chas. Couldn't you just thump Joey?

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:10 pm ]
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'm looking forward to seeing you all in the summer - I've a lovely surprise planned for you all! All I'll say is, we're not going to the Tiernsee!


I thought she had told him they were going to France to see Len in the Summer as she had received her address from Mary Lou! But that letter is even more chilling in her complete lack of insight into Charles interests and needs.

Steve's
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"Chas, there's nothing in this. What are you annoyed about?" Stephen demanded, "I get enough of this reading her letters to me, never mind getting to share yours as well."


Is also telling that Joey has not learnt anything from Len's departure. It makes Charles anger at Len and his parents more understandable. If Jack and Joey had responded by trying to understand the boys then there would have been a benefit, rather than just a feeling of loss.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  Elbee [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:21 pm ]
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Oh dear, poor Charles! I'm sure Mamma does not know what is best for his future career!

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 6:55 pm ]
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Oh eep - at both updates! (Glad I missed the worst of the cliff, *touches wood*) Can't wait to see the two K's, please do write them in!

Thankyou for the update!

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 7:04 pm ]
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oh dear...

Author:  dentian adventurer [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 7:58 pm ]
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:banghead:


and things seemed to be getting better!

(i think i still know it's not real!)

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 8:40 pm ]
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Poor Chas. Hope he's able to sort it out. I remembered Joey was still tha same with Len over the summer in the other drabble, so haven't expected her to change. Maybe Chas will get to experience what Len did first hand and have a bit more sympathy for someone who found you can't talk to a bulldozer.

Author:  KJX [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:48 pm ]
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Silly silly woman.

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 10:25 pm ]
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Oh dear, Joey you're a stupid cow.

Author:  Abi [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 10:44 pm ]
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Wot Stephen said... :shock:

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:05 pm ]
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Thank you for the replies. I am resisting writing about Joey being pushed off the edge of the Platz by her sons...

"Ah? Ah? She still thinks I'm going to be a priest!" Charles exploded. "It's alright for you to sit there and 'Ah' at me, but I don't want to be a priest. It's the last thing I want!"

"Will you calm down?" Stephen asked, rather wearily. "No one can make you be a priest Chas, think about things sensibly for a minute and stop flying off the handle like... like Margot."

"They can refuse to pay for any other training for me." Charles pointed out, though he moderated his tones. "You know they can. And the way things are going, she will! She seems to think that if she keeps us all going the way she's dreamed out in her head, everything will be fine. Maybe she even thinks Len will come home."

"I dont think so. I think she just has an idea in her head about what we're like, and we can't change it. It's not like she knows us very well." Stephen stretched. "You know what she's like, a son who becomes a priest would be a wonderful thing in her eyes. It's just a pity she's picked on you. Anyone more un-priest-like I've yet to meet!"

"Well, she has picked on me. And now the big question is what am I going to do about it?" Stephen frowned, then suddenly and unaccountably his face brightened.

"Just how smart are you?" he asked cryptically. Charles raised an eyebrow. "Your results - are they the result of hard work, or do you get them standing on your head?"

"Depends." Charles replied. "Sometimes I work. I have to work to beat Miller, he's really good."

"But he's an English and languages person, he's in classes with me." Stephen said thoughtfully. "What about your Science classes?"

"Elizabeth is good. There are a few of the other who come close as well. I can beat them fairly easily, but I have to study things to do it. Where is this going?" Stephen was looking more and more pleased with himself.

"Jeff's just put this up on the notice board." he said, digging a slip of paper off his desk and waving it. Charles took it.

"This is to notify all students in the VI form that the Gibson scholarship falls vacant at the end of this year. The Gibson scholarship entitles the bearer to full fees and a small living stipend to be paid while the bearer studies a scientific degree at one of a shortlist of universities, place to be taken up this year or next. The list of suitable establishments can be obtained from Dr. Hammersley. In the event of more than one candidate coming forward, an examination in the sciences and mathematics will be set to determine the most deserving applicant. All names should be submitted to Dr. Hammersley before Thursday, 22nd February.

"And you think I should apply for this?"

"Of course!" Stephen exclaimed. "If you get this, they can't argue with you. And even if they do argue, well, it's not like any of us expected to be welcomed home like the prodigal sons, was it? It's a good scholarship too, Chas - Hammer was going on about how it was funded by someone-or-other who used to be at school here, and went on to become tremendously successful, and to be honest I wasn't really listening. I can think of a couple of chaps in Upper who'll go for it."

"There's a couple in Lower as well." Charles said thoughfully. "But I think I can beat them. It's the Uppers who'd be the problem. They've all got an extra years worth of knowledge - and they won't be studying for Higher, so they'll have more time to work."

"You can only try." Stephen pointed out. "Go down now and see Hammer, and tell him you want to enter. And if you see Jeff, tell him to come back up, would you?" Charles, calmer now, set off to see the Head and Stephen leant back in his chair with a sigh, before turning his attention to his prep and hoping to get through some of it before the next problem arrived.

Author:  Abi [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 1:43 pm ]
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Hope Charles gets the scholarship - maybe Joey will at last realise that her sons aren't the people she's assuming they are.

Thanks Eilidh, this is one of my favourite stories at the moment!

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 1:56 pm ]
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He's not exactly modest, is he :lol: ? Really hope he gets the scholarship.

I was never sure how much of a joke it was meant to be, but Madge and Jem said they were hoping one of their twins'd go into the Army and one into the Navy, and that was when they were still babies :shock: .

Author:  claire [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 2:35 pm ]
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I'm not sure given the sound of the twins in this that it's a good idea to let them near any form of guns.

Hope Charles does it - his other option of getting out of the priesthood is to get Elizabeth into trouble and 'have' to marry her - don't think that would go down well though

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:43 pm ]
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Perhaps even just going for the scholarship would be enough to convince Joey that he isn't going down her chosen path! Though I dread to think which of the younger boys she'll decide is to do it instead - or if she'll just need another son to train up from babyhood :shock:

Thankyou!

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 6:48 pm ]
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That's a great solution. Hope he wins! :-)

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:02 pm ]
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"Of course!" Stephen exclaimed. "If you get this, they can't argue with you. And even if they do argue, well, it's not like any of us expected to be welcomed home like the prodigal sons, was it? It's a good scholarship too, Chas


Well said Steve. Go for it Charles.

Author:  cestina [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:19 pm ]
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I do like Stephen - he has his head very much screwed on the right way.

And I like it that Charles has no false modesty.....a much overrated virtue!

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:00 pm ]
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Very sad that they've neither of them any illusions about how they are viewed by their Mother. Good luck with the scholarship, Charles.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  jmc [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 10:58 am ]
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Somehow I managed to miss a post. Oh well I got to read two at once. Hope Chas gets is scholarship but Joey's letter just goes to show she really doesn't know her sons.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:16 pm ]
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Thank you for the comments.

"Maynie, there was a couple of packages for you in the post room. I brought them up." Stephen, who was fathoms deep in a new book - part of his birthday present from Charles, Mike and Felix - looked up.

"Package?" he asked vaguely.

"Yes, you know, package - big box covered in brown paper and string. Normally has things in it."

"It's your birthday box, you idiot." Charles contributed. "And on time, for once! Put that book down and open it, one of Anna's lemon biscuits would just brighten this afternoon up nicely."

The prefects were all in their room. They had had a meeting earlier in the day, and then, since going outside was made impossible by the torrential rain that was streaming down the window, they had with one accord elected to stay put. The arrival of Stevenson carrying a large box, with two or three smaller ones balanced on top of it and a pile of letters had attracted everyones attention. As instructed, Stephen put down his book and set to work on the package. Once he'd managed to get the string off, and tossed it to Charles to roll up, he pulled off the paper and opened the box itself.

The first thing to emerge was a huge pile of envelopes containing birthday cards. Stephen gave into the calls to 'leave those 'til the end, Maynie!' and pulled out the next package.

"I spy lemon biscuits!" Charles grinned. Stephen pried the lid off the box and looked inside.

"Absolutely right." he agreed. "Here, pass them round."

"You two," Monty said a few seconds later through a mouthful of biscuit, "Have the best housekeeper that ever existed. Do you think we can convince her to send you a box of these every week?"

"I've tried." Charles replied. "She says they're birthday only, when it comes to sending them over here. What's next?"

"A whole assortment of presents." Stephen said, removing a collection of brightly wrapped packets from the box. "And an absolutely enormous birthday cake. Anna's surpassed herself!"

"Get on with the presents then!" Jeff ordered, taking the cake and placing it safely on a side table. Charles turned over the neat labels.

"Auntie Hilda and Auntie Nell, the Sheppards, Erica and Felicity, Adrienne," he shot a sly smile at his brother "ah, here we are - Mum and Dad." Stephen took the box and looked at it from all sides.

"Open it already!" Charles said, waving a cushion threateningly. Before Stephen could say anything, someone banged on the door.

"Come in!" Miller called, tipping back precariously on his chair in order to pull the door open. "What can we do for you? Have a biscuit." he added as the tin came past again.

"Umm... no." the fourth former on the other side of the door sounded nervous. "Dr. Hammersley and Mr. Whyte said please can you all come to the prep school at once. And they said can one of you go to the art room and bring the turpentine with you."

"Turpentine? What's happened?" Stephen asked, as they got to their feet with assorted moans and sighs.

"I don't know. They were outside the third form common room when I saw them. They looked really angry."

"I suppose we'd better go and find out then. Where's your raincoat, kid? You never came across in your blazer on a day like this. Go and get it, while we collect ours, and we'll meet you at the front door."

"Kevin and Kester?" Charles asked Stephen in an undertone as they entered the prep school.

"Wouldn't surprise me." Stephen agreed. "Trust them to cause a riot in the middle of my birthday presents. Here we are, Sir. You wanted us?"

"I did." the Head said grimly. "I think this is better dealt with by the prefects than by me - I do not want to have to send reports home to thirty sets of parents, including your own." The prefects entered the common room behind him and looked around. Several of them had to bite their lips to save themselves from laughing. The combined third forms wore no blazers, jumpers or ties, and all of them had their shirt sleeves rolled up. Empty paintboxes lay scattered around the room and their hands, arms, necks and faces were all painted brightly with the contents. Felix met Charles' eye briefly, and then became extremely interested in the carpet. Kevin and Kester, however, stood side by side in the middle of the room and grinned at Stephen as he stared around in disbelief.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 2:00 pm ]
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Cheeky little monsters :lol: .

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 2:59 pm ]
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Playing Indian's!!!! :rofl: :rofl:
Whose has remembered the Chalet School tales of misdoing I wonder?

I expect Steve to come up with a good punishment as they have spoilt his birthday afternoon. O would not like to be Felix or either of the two K's.

Thanks for brightening a dull afternoon. :lol: :lol:

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 3:15 pm ]
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Wonderful :lol:

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:09 pm ]
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That definitely rings a bell! 8)

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:23 pm ]
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Now I wonder if even K&K won't find the courage to bring up the CS to Steve..... :lol: Hopefully they will, it would be priceless!

Thankyou!

Author:  Abi [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:25 pm ]
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Oh dear..... :lol: :roll:

Author:  Elle [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:30 pm ]
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I wanted to know what Steve got for his birthday!!! I love presents. Wretched Kevin and Kester.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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Thanks, really enjoyed catching up with everything. I thought Steve's idea was brillant, hope it works for Chas.

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I was never sure how much of a joke it was meant to be, but Madge and Jem said they were hoping one of their twins'd go into the Army and one into the Navy, and that was when they were still babies .
He's not exactly modest, is he :lol: ? Really hope he gets the scholarship.


I always read it as a joke simply because Joey had said they should be professional crooners and Madge retorted the Navy/Army comment. I always saw it as a retaliation for Joey's suggestion, not that she really expected it to happen.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:50 am ]
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"Hello Maynie!" Kevin said cheerfully. "Do you like our war paint?"

"Quiet." Jeff snapped from behind Stephen.

"Take two or three of them each." Stephen said grimly to the others. "Take them to a bathroom, and get as much of it off as you can without the turpentine. Once they look decent, bring them back here. Russell and Russell - you're coming with me."

Stephen marched his charges off to the bathroom beside the first form dormitories, stood in silence until they'd removed all the traces of paint, and then returned them to the common room. With an instruction for them not to talk, he sent the twins to join those of their contempories who were more or less clean at one end of the room, and joined his own at the other.

"What are we going to do with them?" he asked in an undertone. Blake shrugged.

"Clean this place for a start - there's paint everywhere. They'll need to explain the state of their shirts to their matron. Whoever was responsible for it we'll stick in detention for a week or so, with a selection of essays - Why I must not Waste my Property. The Importance of Behaving the the Common Room. I'm sure we can come up with more."

"I've got a very good idea who was responsible." Stephen replied, as the rest came back. The prefects faced the younger boys, many of whom now looked close to tears and still bore traces of paint. Once the last third former had been returned to the line, Stephen spoke again.

"Who is the Upper Third form prefect?" A boy near the middle of the line raised his hand.

"What is going on is here?"

"We were... playing indians."

"And does playing indians always involve you making a mess like this, wasting your school equipment and generally showing less sense than the first form?"

"No Maynard."

"No, I didn't think so. Whose idea was it?"

"Mine." Kevin admitted cheerfully. "We got the idea from..."

"Be quiet!" Stephen said, having a very good idea of exactly where Kevin and Kester had got the idea from. "Listen to me. Tomorrow is Saturday. You will all give up your free time after morning prep. You will come here, and you will clean every drop of paint from the floor, walls, tables, chairs and other items in this room. You will be supervised by..." he paused and turned to the other prefects. Miller nodded at him. "...Miller." he said, turning back to the boys. "If you do not get the room clean by lunchtime, you will return after lunch, do you understand?" A series of nods answered him. "You will also, of course, have to explain to Matron exactly what has happened to your school shirts. If they cannot be cleaned, you will be docked pocket money to pay to have them replaced. Now, who, other than Russell, is responsible for this? Step forward please." Kevin and Kester stepped forward instantly, followed by Felix and his closest friend. "You four will report to the prefects room after tea today. Now go, all of you, and get yourselves looking presentable for tea."

"Comprehensive punishment." Baxter observed, as they strolled back across to the main school for their own meal.

"That pair need it." Stephen replied. "That one was a tale of my mothers, from something that was done at her school when she was head. The last thing we need is them trying any more of her stories! Hopefully this will put them off for life! Now come on, all of you - there's a huge birthday cake waiting on us!"

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:53 am ]
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Thanks for the update!

Will it be enough though?

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:54 am ]
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:lol: That's what they get for Joey driving everyone mad with tales of her schooldays all the time! At least they all owned up.

Author:  Myth Tree [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 3:45 pm ]
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May we find out what was in the presents now? Please?
*Finding it hard to remember this is not real life!*


Edited to put n in present

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:25 pm ]
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Thanks, Love the prefects handling of the affair.

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:59 pm ]
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Truly a case of 'making the punishment fit the crime' - I love it, but those Juniors definitely deserve it!! If Kevin, Kester and Felix aren't shaking in their shoes about what other punishments Stephen might dream up for them, then they should be - after all, they are family, and senior family members are almost always harder on the junior members of their family (whether siblings or cousins) than they are on other offenders.

Oh well, I've no doubt that in the end this will go down in family legend - but I hope Joey blushes when she hears about it, as she certainly will. And I hope those three miscreants are cured of trying to copy her exploits once and for all!

Thanks, Eilidh, I really am enjoying this.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 7:22 pm ]
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I just hope that Jack and Madge and Jem make sure that she hears all about it! Wonder what else waits in store for the miscreants...

Thankyou!

Author:  Abi [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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Great punishment! Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:04 pm ]
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I think Joey will just laugh it off more than anything else and then come out with worse deeds girls used to do. I think Kevin and Kester need that kind of punishment to squash them, though don't think it will completely, somehow.

Author:  jmc [ Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:23 pm ]
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The twins will probably be thinking of what they are going to next even while they are cleaning the room. At least they owned up. Thanks

Author:  JS [ Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:51 am ]
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So, which of the twins is Major and which Minor :lol:

Thanks so much for this Eilidh. I'm really enjoying it and it's taking superhuman efforts for me to keep each post to read with my breakfast rather than read it straight after it's posted. I don't always succeed :D .

Author:  Catherine [ Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:46 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh. I can't wait to see what the twins do next - though I hope Felix manages to stay out of it!

Author:  ivohenry [ Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:11 pm ]
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JS wrote:
So, which of the twins is Major and which Minor :lol:

:D .


I suppose since they are always referred to as Kevin and Kester, Kevin must be the older twin, don't think we are ever told specifically.

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:45 am ]
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I've just caught up on a group of updates, the addition of Kevin and Kester is going to be very interesting. Like the challenge that Charles has got ahead of him, and looking forward to the next instalment.

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 11:48 am ]
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Stephen has not told me what he got for his birthday, sorry!

Miller rushed into the room and slipped into the last chair available - right on the end of the line - just as the clock on fireplace chimed six. Eight of the ten prefects were seated along one side of the big table which normally stood in the middle of the floor. The last two - Stephen and Charles - were sitting in armchairs off to one side, Stephen having refused to preside over this meeting.

"I really don't like doing this." Jeffries said with a sigh, from his seat in the middle. "Especially to kids - why can't they just behave?"

"We never did." Baxter replied. "Oh, here we go - I hear footsteps." All eight of the boys sat up and attempted to look imposing.

"Come in." Baxter called sharply. The four third formers slipped round the door and stood in a line in front of the desk. Felix Maynard and his friend, Davies, both stared at their feet. Kester looked round him curiously, and Kevin grinned at both Stephen and Charles quite cheerfully.

"Nice fire you've got in here - it's cold outside." he remarked. "You might have borrowed a room in our building, so we didn't have to trek all the way over here in the rain."

"We could get pneumonia and die, being out in the rain like that." Kester agreed. "Kev, if I get pneumonia and die, make sure everyone knows it's the prees fault. I'd do it myself, only..."

"...you'd be dead, yes, I see." Kevin finished for him. "Anyway, what was I saying?"

"Be quiet." Monty told him firmly. Kevin and Kester both looked at him with mild interest, as though he was an unusual animal in a zoo, but consented to stop talking. Jeffries took over.

"Tell me." he said conversationally. "What happened in your common room this afternoon." Kevin, of course, was quite ready to oblige.

"Well, we were bored, because it was raining and we couldn't go outside. So someone suggested playing cowboys and indians." he began. "But we got bored with that, and then Kes - I mean, my brother - remembered about a story that we heard from our older sister who heard it from our aunt - have I missed out any links, Kes?"

"No, I don't think so."

"Good. So this story, it was about some girls she was at school with who painted themselves to play at indians. We all had paintboxes, of course, so we thought we'd try it."

"We even looked up the proper patterns for our faces in the encyclopedia." Kester added here. "We worked really hard, and we did each others faces because we couldn't see them. I mean, we couldn't see our own faces."

"What happened to the cowboys?" Blakely asked curiously.

"No one wanted to be a cowboy when we were painting our faces." Kevin took over the story again. "So we were two indian tribes and we were going to go to war for scalps." On the end of the table, Monty succummed to a violent coughing fit. Charles very determinedly didn't catch his eye.

"Enough." Jeffries, with a heroic effort, brought the meeting back under control. "Maynard and Davies, what did you have to do with all this?"

"We supported them." Felix told the carpet. "I remembered some things Russell forgot."

"And we both went to the art room for our paint boxes." Davies added, also staring at his feet.

"You two should both have known better. I don't know what standard of behaviour was expected at the twins' previous school - in fact, I don't even know what it was,"

"It was Winchester." Kevin interrupted helpfully. "And no, it wasn't really acceptable there either. That's why they threw us out." he added in a stage whisper.

"Quite." Jeff replied. "At any rate, Maynard and Davies, you can take yourselves to your art teacher and explain why none of your class has any paint left. And all four of you will have a week's worth of detentions, starting on Monday. Whoever is on duty in your detention room each day will set you an essay subject. We expect them handed in, complete, when you are told to leave. Do you understand? Good - now get out of here."

"Does anyone else think," Baxter asked, as the door swung shut behind Davies and several of the boys started laughing, "That the harder we squash that child, the higher he'll bounce?"

"I feel sorry for you people who have another year of him." Jeff agreed, entering the punishments in a book and scribbling his signature across the bottom. "There you go, Maynie, one brother and two cousins dealt with. I don't suppose anyone will object if you kill them over half term."

"I won't even see them over half term." Stephen replied cheerfully, signing his name beside Jeffs and putting the book away. "And now, as it is still my birthday - I suggest we have another slice of cake each and enjoy ourselves until the next disaster comes along."

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 11:54 am ]
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:lol: This is brilliant!

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:00 pm ]
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Hope Steve tells you some of the presents at least before the next post. Thanks for this one.

Author:  Squirrel [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:09 pm ]
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Um... is it just me, or are the irrepressible twins likely to need a far heftier squashing than that for it to make much difference...

Thanks Eilidh... Looking forwards to whatever you have in store for us next.

Author:  dackel [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:31 pm ]
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I think the twins are going to need squashing, hard, on a regular basis. :lol:

Their parents are in Australia, aren't they? Maybe the twins just want to be sent back there?

I am enjoying this drabble so much - definite high point to my lunch day whenever you post!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:58 pm ]
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:lol: Oh my oh my! I think I'm falling in love with the twins! I can't wait to see what else they get up to; this is so brilliant!

Thankyou!

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Author:  Elle [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:49 pm ]
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Stuff the twins, I want to know what Stephen's presents are!!!

Thanks for the update, I seriously doubt that punishment wills squash the gruesome twosome.

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:07 pm ]
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I don't think Kevin and Kester are even remotely worried at the moment - Steve is going to have to do something far more imposing.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  robinette [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:38 pm ]
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I am really enjoying this Eilidh, it brightens up my day to read this when I get home! :D

Elle wrote:
I seriously doubt that punishment wills squash the gruesome twosome.


I agree, I foresee a lot of trouble with them!

*begs for more*

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:22 pm ]
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The twins are brilliant! Thanks! :-)

Author:  Abi [ Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:55 pm ]
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Another one who thinks that 'dealt with' might be a slightly optimistic way of putting it... :lol:

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 7:26 am ]
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Thanks, I think it'll take a lot more than that to squash the twins

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:54 am ]
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By popular request... I'm not keen on this bit, but it does answer the pressing question of what Stephen got for his birthday. :lol:

"Let's see then." Charles said. Stephen smiled.

"Put the kettle on and make the cocoa first." he said. "There's some biscuits left that I saved from the rest. Now, where was I before."

"Opening the one from Mum and Dad." Charles replied, busy with the kettle. Stephen located the box and put it on the table.

"What do you think?" he asked. Charles screwed up his face.

"Watch?" he suggested. "Not many other things I can think of them getting you." Stephen opened the box.

"Watch it is." he confirmed, displaying it.

"Engraved?" Charles asked through a mouthful of biscuit. Stephen turned it over.

"Stephen John Maynard, Happy 18th Birthday, Love Mamma and Papa." he read. "And the date. Want to see?" Charles examined it while Stephen dug for another parcel.

"Who's is this?"

"Adrienne's." Stephen replied, tearing off the paper.

"It's a scarf." Charles said in confusion as Stephen held it up. Stephen grinned, and pulled a note out of the wrapping.

"Dear Steve, I had no idea what to get you for your birthday, and then you told me about leaving your school scarf on the train on the way back. Jan has been teaching me to knit in hobbies, so I hope you will accept this as replacement. Love, Adrienne."

"She made it herself." Stephen said, smiling. Charles groaned.

"Open something else already." he said, picking up the wrapping paper, rolling it into a ball and throwing it at his brother. "It'll be lights out soon." Stephen obliged, finding a new set of handkerchiefs, with his initials carefully embroidered on to them by Felicity, several more books and a photo album full of pictures of him with every member of his family he could think of.

"That's it then, birthday over." he sighed, as the bell rang for lights out and Charles prepared to return to his own room. "It's half term the week after next, and then it'll be Easter and then it'll be the summer holidays before we know where we are."

"Oh, pull yourself together." Charles said scornfully. "You're eighteen, not eighty. Soon you'll be telling me how everything was better in your day!" Stephen laughed.

"Good night!"

"G'night." Charles replied, closing the door behind him and sneaking back down the stairs and into his own room.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:55 am ]
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Bless :D .

Author:  Elle [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 12:44 pm ]
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I am relieved that my secret fear that Stephen's present from Joey and Jack would be the latest Josephine M Bettany was totally groundless. An engraved watch is nice present for an 18th birthday.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  Joanne [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 12:53 pm ]
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I wonder if Charles got him anything? Probably not - just a brotherly punch on the shoulder, I expect!

Still loving this drabble, thanks very much.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 2:30 pm ]
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Quote:
"Maynie, there was a couple of packages for you in the post room. I brought them up." Stephen, who was fathoms deep in a new book - part of his birthday present from Charles, Mike and Felix - looked up.
"Package?" he asked vaguely.

"Yes, you know, package - big box covered in brown paper and string. Normally has things in it."

"It's your birthday box, you idiot." Charles contributed. "And on time, for once! Put that book down and open it, one of Anna's lemon biscuits would just brighten this afternoon up nicely."

The prefects were all in their room. They had had a meeting earlier in the day, and then, since going outside was made impossible by the torrential rain that was streaming down the window, they had with one accord elected to stay put.


It seems a long time since the prefects were together waiting for tea when they were distracted from opening the parcel by being called to see to the twins' mischief! Thanks for letting us know what was in the parcel.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:08 pm ]
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Ah, poor Steve, so young *heaves elderly sigh*

Thankyou for the update! Now to the more pressing question of Chas and Elizabeth, and KK and...

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:56 pm ]
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Nice to know§ thanks! :-)

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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An engraved watch sounds like a really nice present from Jack and Joey.

It's the exact present my SLOC got from his grandparents for his 18th

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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Decent present from Jack and Joey - and ah bless, Adrienne made him a new scarf. :wink:

Author:  Abi [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 9:02 pm ]
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It seems that Stephen likes Adrienne's present best.... :D

Author:  KJX [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 9:28 pm ]
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Photo album of the family - just what every 18 year old boy wants :rofl:

Author:  shesings [ Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:06 pm ]
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Great drabble and I love the interaction between the boys! (I still want to smack Joey even if she did send Stephen a watch!)

Author:  jmc [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:12 am ]
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Not a bad haul. Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  di [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 10:11 am ]
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I don't know how I've missed this recently but missed it I did and have just spent an enjoyable few minutes catching up.

I loved the escapades of Kevin and Kester; I don't remember EBD writing much about them. They're certainly going to keep the prefects on their toes for quite a while I imagine; they're both very sure of themselves aren't they? :lol:

As for Joey! Words fail me. :wink: How dare she assume she know best. I could have strangled her for that comment. No wonder Chas was so angry. Does that woman understand any of her children? :evil: I'm keeping my fingers crossed that he gets the science scholarship - that'll shut her up!

Still loving this, thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:47 am ]
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Thank you for the comments!

Half-Term

The big stone house stood silent, gloomy, and almost completely dark. A light could be seen inside the front door, and another reflected from a side window onto the lawn. Several trees stood around it, all bare and standing out black against the starry sky. A hint of frost was visible on the lawn, reflecting the dim light from the full moon. The street itself was still, dark and quiet, as befitted a collection of houses which had stood since the turn of the century and seen their fair share of excitment. A big black car disturbed the silence, turning into the road, and drawing up outside the house. Inside, two elderly women looked at each other with resigned expressions. The peace was about to be shattered.

"Hello, boys!" Mrs Miller hurried forward as her grandson and his friends almost fell in the front door and dropped their weekend cases in the hall.

"Gran!" The responses were cheerful and both Miller and Jones hugged her while Monty looked further down the hallway.

"Mrs Walker! Here we are back to be fed up again! They starve us at that school, did you know that?" He picked up the tiny woman and danced down the hall with her.

"Put me down, you dreadful boy." she scolded, slapping at him. "Go on, get your things upstairs, all of you. Supper will be in the dining room once you're changed. Maynard, what on earth are you doing to the door?"

"It's more a question of what is the door doing to me!" Charles protested. "I've got my blazer stuck on something. There we go, see? Door doesn't want to let me in. Hello Gran, thank you for having us again."

"Another one who's turned into a giant!" Mrs Miller said sadly, as he bent down to kiss her cheek. "Really, boys, when will you stop growing?"

"Not as long as we're coming here for half term and eating Mrs Walker's cooking!" Monty called back from upstairs. "Are we in our usual rooms?"

"Of course you are. Go on and get changed, you noisy bunch, you're already late back. I don't want school uniforms at the dinner table and I don't want a burnt dinner either." Charles leapt up the stairs after the others, taking them three at a time, and threw his case into Miller's room. The connecting door was lying open and the other three were in the next room. Miller seemed to have dragged his clothes through with him to talk to the others while they changed.

"It feels like ages since we've been here, don't you think?"

"Well it is ages, we didn't come last term because Gran hadn't been well." Miller's voice sounded muffled by his jumper. "Is that us? Are we ready?"

"Minor, are you coming?" Jones demanded impatiently, sticking his head around the door.

"Right behind you." Charles replied, dragging a comb through his hair and heading back downstairs, where tempting smells were floating from both the kitchen and dining room.

***

Charles woke long before any of the others the following morning and decided to get up and dress. He had inherited his mother's dislike for staying in bed unneccessarily, and from what he could see from the window, the sun was coming up over a frosty garden and the morning looked bright and inviting. He headed downstairs confidently, having spent so many half terms here that he knew it almost as well as Freudesheim.

"Morning, Mrs Walker."

"I might have guessed it would be you, making such a noise on the stairs. Breakfast isn't ready yet."

"Oh come on, a slice of toast and some tea?" Charles pleaded. "Breakfast isn't for an hour and a half, I could fade away by then!" Mrs Walker shook her head, laughing.

"Bread's on the table, butter in the dish, tea is in the pot. If you want it toasted you'll have to do it yourself."

"I'll cope with bread and butter." Charles decided, cutting himself a thick slice. "I'll be in the garden if anyone else gets up." Mrs Walker nodded at him and continued with her work, while Charles let himself out the back door and wandered down through the garden.

"Now, child, what are you doing out here at this time in the morning?" Charles looked round.

"Morning Gran. I woke up, so I didn't see the point in staying bed." Mrs Miller turned him to face her and scrutinised him closely.

"You look tired, you should be asleep." she scolded. Charles shrugged, and in obedience to her gesture followed her into the big glasshouse, where a single deckchair and a small heater sat beside a small table, which held a mug of tea and a paperback novel. "Come on, tell me what's on your mind. Or I'll continue calling you child." Charles laughed and sat down on the ground at her feet.

"You can call me child for as long as you want, Gran. Grans are allowed to do that. I bet you never expected to get three extra grandsons when Miller came to school with us."

"No, I can't say I did. However, I have you now, so how about you just tell me what it is that's got you up at this time in the morning, when the only people who should be awake are old ladies who don't need to sleep." Charles sighed, and then in a sudden rush of words told her story of the last six months, from the terrible summer holiday to the scholarship and the twins. When he'd finished talking, Mrs Miller ran one hand over the untidy dark hair.

"My dear boy, what a time you've been having." she said gently. "Let me see. Your sister is safe now, and you know she is, so that will be one thing off your mind. As for the rest - I cannot see you in a seminary, and I wouldn't worry too much about it. I'm sure things will work themselves out, and your brother is right about the scholarship, it will be a great opportunity for you, if you can get it without working yourself into the ground. And if you don't, remember there will be others to apply for next year, when the Higher Certificate is out of the way. With regard to Elizabeth, I can only suggest that you follow your heart if you possibly can without getting yourself expelled. From bitter experience, child, I can tell you that life is too short to put these things off. And finally, whatever happens, we will always kill the fattened calf for you here." Charles twisted around to look up at her.

"Do you know, Gran, I think that's the closest you've ever come to criticising my mother." Mrs Miller smiled slightly.

"Come on now, help an old woman up and we will go and see if the rest of our party are intending to join us for breakfast.

Author:  Finn [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:53 am ]
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Aw, how lovely that he has another family, even if it is a small one! Gran is charming. Wish I had a nan like her.

Oh, I feel quite mushy now - thanks Eilidh!

Author:  Elbee [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:01 pm ]
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How lovely that they all call her Gran! Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  dackel [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:13 pm ]
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I love Gran! What a sensible woman; she seems to know Charles much better than Joey.

And how lovely for her to have four grandsons for the price of one (as it were!), especially as she has lost so many people from her close family.

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 1:40 pm ]
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It's lovely for her to have some extra grandsons, and it's nice for Charles to have an honorary grandparent.

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 2:33 pm ]
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Pleased Charles has an adult like Gran in his life. Loved her response to his mother's knowledge of him. And lovely for Gran to gain three extra grandsons who all love her and care for her.

Thanks for a lovely, comforting update.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:48 pm ]
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Thankyou for such a gentle, nice update - though I was saddened by the fact that he knew it nearly as well as Freudesheim. It speaks such volumes.

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:22 pm ]
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What a lovely, lvoely woman. Thanks! :-)

Author:  Rafaella [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:32 pm ]
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This series just keeps on getting better. I'd love to see Gran having a conversation with Joey.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:12 pm ]
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That was so lovely, thank you

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:50 pm ]
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Like everyone else I love Gran - Mrs Miller must really be fond of the boys. Glad she's there to give Charles some good advice.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:54 pm ]
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Gran is a sweetie, but it's sad that she seems to know Charles so much better than his own family do.

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 3:11 am ]
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Awww, that was such a sweet conversation (and such good advice)

Author:  di [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:50 am ]
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I have to agree with all the others - Gran is a sweetheart and appears to understand Chas far more than his own mother; shame on you Joey! What a lovely final comment "..we will always kill the fattened calf for you...." :)
An interest final comment from Chas regarding Gran criticising his mother; how loved and cherished he must feel here. :D
Thanks, Eilidh, that was grand.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:01 pm ]
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'Gran' is slightly based on my own grandmother. She also has a habit of adopting anyone and everyone as a grandchild, and a tendency to look very disapproving about things she doesn't approve of without making a comment about them. I imagine 'Gran's' opinion of Joey leaves much to be desired, but she doesn't consider that it would be proper to criticise her to Charles.

Please forgive the lack of happenings in this post - I have once again been carried away by writing these four together, and despite the complete lack of plot points i could not bring myself to get rid of this part. :)


"I'm bored." Monty announced. Much to his disgust, there was no reply. Charles was stretched full length on one sofa with a book, Miller was sprawled in one armchair with his feet in another and another book, and Jones was sitting at a table beside the window, tapping out rhythms and singing to himself. "Oy!" Monty picked up a pen and threw it at Charles.

"What?" that young man demanded grumpily.

"Ah, contact with the Nautilus!" came the unsatisfactory reply. "Now, if Captain Nemo can connect with Phileas Fogg over there, and someone disturbs the Phantom of the Opera in the corner, maybe we'll do something enjoyable today."

"We are doing something enjoyable." Charles grumbled, dropping 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea and leaning over to attract Miller's attention.

"What?" Miller demanded.

"The middle is sulking because we're not talking to it." Miller looked round.

"I was reading." he said. "Minor claims this is better than 20,000 Leagues, I'm proving him wrong."

"You're not." Charles argued. "Around the World in 80 Days is far better. And drier. This thing is making me feel like I've been for a swim."

"It's better than a glorified travel-logue." Miller countered, waving his own book in the air.

"Will you all stop making such a noise?" Jones said, before Charles could respond to this. "I'm trying to do some work over here."

"Well put it away, I'm making you all come out for a walk." Monty said. "It's a waste of a lovely day to spend it in here with Jules Verne and an invisible piano."

"It is never a waste to spend a day with Jules Verne." Miller said. "But if we're going for a walk, will I go and talk Mrs Walker into giving us lunch?"

"You might as well, we'll get no peace if we stay here." Charles agreed. "We'll make Monty carry it though, since it's his idea!"

***

"I love half term." Monty swung the bag he was carrying wildly, almost knocking Miller into a bush. "Especially half term at this time of year that is remotely warm, if rather muddy. When was the last time any of you had a picnic in February?"

"Year before last, at half term, the same as you." Jones grinned. "And that bag has got our drinks in it, so if you're not going to carry it properly, swap with me. I love half term for a different reason."

"What's that?" Charles asked curiously.

"We can go back today, soaking wet, covered in mud, however we like - and there is no one to be set a bad example to."

"That was disgusting English." Miller complained.

"And that's another reason to love half term." Charles said. "Only Miller to correct our English, unless some of the staff are hiding up a tree or something - and there's no rule that says we have to listen to him."

"Only four more of them to go though." Miller said. "And the next one will be spent at school, cramming for the exams."

"Don't mention exams!" the cry came in unison from the other three.

"And we won't be allowed to cram at half term anyway." Monty added. "I wouldn't, even if we were, so I'll have to make sure the rest of you put your books down too. I don't know what I did to be blessed with such bookish friends."

"Just because some of us have to get on under our own steam once we leave school." Jones retorted. "Unlike you, we need to work. Well, Miller probably doesn't - he just works because he likes it, he's weird like that. But Minor and I actually have to go out and make ourselves some money."

"Do you know, I've just realised something." Charles said suddenly.

"What?"

"We've only been in one row this year. How have we got from September to February with only one row?"

"We haven't broken enough rules." Jones said. "It's that whole responsibility thing. Come on, lets behave like the fourth form today, while it doesn't matter."

"This whole responsibility nonsense... it's not going to affect June, is it?" Monty asked. The other three looked shocked.

"Of course it isn't!"

"June is a tradition!"

"We have to do it!"

"Just checking." Monty grinned. "Come on - I bet I can get to the top of the hill before you three. Last one there gets the most squashed lunch!" he shouted back over his shoulder. The other three exchanged looks.

"It's the behaving like the fourth form idea." Charles said, as he took off in pursuit. "It suits him perfectly. Come on Jones, lets see how fit you are after seven months of no games!"

Author:  Finn [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:15 pm ]
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Ooh, looking forward to June now!

Author:  cestina [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:52 pm ]
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Who needs happenings? The interaction between the group is so delightful that no more is needed..... :D

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:08 pm ]
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It's brilliant seeing the boys as real people, with their friends.

Author:  KathrynW [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:31 pm ]
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Thank you Eilidh, that was such a lovely scene!

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:23 pm ]
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Thanks for your no happenings post. It was too good to leave out. Love the way the boys are responding to growing up. I can not imagine EBD sixth forms letting their hair down by acting as fourth formers.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:07 pm ]
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Finn wrote:
Ooh, looking forward to June now!


Only if it doesn't mean the end of the drabble! This can't possibly end, ever, can it?

Thankyou!

Author:  Eunice [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:22 pm ]
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I've just started reading this, so I read through the first part and loved it! More please! It's lovely to see something about the boys in the Maynard family. I was also puzzled about why they seemed to be shoved out of things. And yes, it does seem unfair that they don't have any visitors. Even if Joey and Jack couldn't get to see them, surely they have enough rellies and friends in the UK who could? Poor lads.

Anyway, more please! Lots more!

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:47 pm ]
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slightly worried about june myself!

Author:  Joanne [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:50 pm ]
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Can I have Gran as well - I would love to have someone like that in my life!

Wondering about June also - and how much trouble they are likely to get into then.

Thanks.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Oct 21, 2010 9:29 pm ]
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cestina wrote:
Who needs happenings? The interaction between the group is so delightful that no more is needed..... :D


Couldn't have put it better myself, so I shan't try!

But I, like many others, am definitely looking forward to June...

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 6:20 am ]
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Love it - and looking forward to June! :lol:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:12 am ]
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I'm curious about June too and am curious how the younger boys will react to it and will they include Elizabeth?

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:07 pm ]
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June will come in time... and so will a lot more drabble after June, because this is completely out of control now... :D

Last update until Wednesday probably, I have a long weekend and probably won't get much writing done.


March

"Minor, you know you owe me a games lesson?"

"Yes."

"And you know that you said if I covered for you while you finished your prep, you'd pay me back any time I wanted?"

"Yes."

"I want you to do it today."

"But it's raining!"

"It was raining the day I covered for you as well, and I swear if I have to take the thirds again you'll be a brother down by the end of the afternoon - and I'm not even mentioning your cousins." The two games prefects glared at each other, and then Charles gave in.

"Fine, I'll take them. Are they supposed to be doing anything in particular?"

"Driving me up the wall." was the only response he got, and with this rather unsatisfactory information he had to be content as Baxter picked up his prep and became deaf to any further questions.

Shortly afterwards, Charles surveyed the sixteen eleven year olds who were standing around him in a half circle, complaining quietly about the light rain that was still falling.

"Are you taking us then?" one bright voice asked. Charles glanced at his cousin.

"I am." he confirmed. "OK, this is what we're going to do."

"Why isn't Baxter taking us?"

"Because it's his privelege to send me to do it for him. This is what we're doing-"

"Doesn't he want to take us? Are we too hard work?"

"Russell, if you say another word, I'll have you running from now until the rest of the class goes in and back out here during your prep time, do you understand? Just nod." Kevin nodded. "Good, now, this is what's happening. I know it's a horrible day, but we're here for the next hour so we might as well put up with it. I'm getting as cold and wet as you are. All of you, go into the pavillion and bring your favourite piece of kit from the store room. Make sure you bring four of whatever it is." They rushed off, splattering mud behind them as they ran, and Charles watched closely to make sure that they all went in and counted them back out. Only fourteen came back, and getting them to pile the equipment up, he set them to running a lap of the field to keep warm while he went to track down the missing two.

Unsurprisingly, he found Kevin and Kester sitting on boxes in the storeroom.

"Oh come on Chas, we don't want to play games in the rain!" Kevin said, as Charles stared at them questioningly.

"If you don't say anything, no one will know we're not there." Kester added.

"Move." Charles said, pointing towards the door. With identical sighs, the twins made their way slowly towards the door. "Two laps of the field, please." Charles said once they were outside. With much muttering and moaning, the two boys set off, while Charles consulted the pile of equipment - ranging from tennis rackets to stilts - and with the help of the rest of the class laid out a obstacle course. He allowed the boys to arrange themselves into teams, and was disturbed to see Felix and his closest friend immediately join forces with the Russells.

After a further thirty minutes, Charles sent most of the class back inside to change, keeping only Felix to help him put the equipment away.

"Felix, are you spending a lot of time with Kevin and Kester?" he asked, as they packed the things back into their places.

"Yes!" Felix said enthusiastically. "They're fun! It's really good having two cousins at school with me. Davies likes them too, they have lots of good ideas. Like yesterday, we..." he broke off suddenly, biting his lip. "Well, I can't tell you 'cause you're being a Pree, you're not being Chas, and we'll get into trouble. Again."

"Come on, F'lix - you know it's silly to spend all your time with them when you keep getting into trouble." Charles sat down on a crate. Felix looked at him warily.

"Are you Chas, or are you a prefect?" he asked.

"This is off the record."

"Well, how is anything me and Kevin and Kester are doing worse than what you and your friends did? We haven't done anything too awful, truely, Chas. They don't want to end up like they did at Winchester."

"Thrown out, d'you mean?"

"Yes. Though some of the things they did were funny. Kevin says that the prefects here are more on the ball that the Winchester ones. I said it was just 'cause you and Steve knew what we were like."

"Thank him for the flowers." Charles replied. "But still, you're trying to get me off the point. I know when people are doing that, I'm a master at it."

"Well... well to be honest, Chas, it's none of your business!" Felix replied. "And now you can put me in detention or whatever you want if you were only pretending about what you said before, but if I want to be friends with Kevin and Kester I will and you're not going to change that." Charles smiled slightly.

"Get out." he said cheerfully. "Go on, go and get changed."

"When's my detention?" Felix asked. Charles shrugged.

"I told you it was off the record. You want a detention?"

"No Chas!" Charles raised an eyebrow and Felix grinned. "I mean, no Maynard!"

"Good. Now get out like I told you!"

Charles picked up several things that belonged in the gym hall and began to make his way back to the school as Felix shot off across the field towards the prep school. He was halfway back when he heard a bicycle bell behind him and the sound of tires crunching on the gravel.

"Hello." Elizabeth jumped off her bike and fell in beside him. "Games coaching?"

"The thirds." Charles replied. "Horrible class, the lowers especially. We should put them all in a cage and leave them there."

"I bet you were just as bad." Elizabeth said.

"I couldn't possibly comment, as I'd be in danger of giving you a bad impression of my fellow prefects." Charles said quickly.

"A worse impression than I already have?" Elizabeth asked, laughing. "Is that possible?"

Three floors above, the other three boys watched them coming round the side of the house, Elizabeth pushing her bicycle and walking beside Charles, whose arms were full of games equipment.

"It must be awful, really." Monty observed. "He likes her, and she likes him, and neither of them can do anything about it without someone throwing them out the school - well, if they get caught, that is. I wonder how long he'll keep it up before he gives in to her?"

"Before he kisses her, d'you mean?" Miller said. "I reckon after the exams."

"I don't think he'll last that long." Jones said thoughtfully. "My money's on sometime between the Easter hols and the start of the exams."

"I think he'll be lucky to get to the Easter hols." Monty said. "He certainly won't last 'til after the exams. Week's pocket money on it?"

"Why not." Miller agreed. "Don't tell him though. He'd go nuts."

"Week's pocket money suits me too." Jones nodded. The three of them shook hands.

"Deal." Monty grinned.

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:14 pm ]
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Lovely update and nice to see he tries to get through to Felix by talking to him as a brother.

My bet's on the next update! :lol:

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:23 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh: this is great :D .

Author:  Finn [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:29 pm ]
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Hehe, your lads make me grin :)

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:18 pm ]
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Thanks, love Charles way of controlling the twins. Hope Felix can stay out of too much trouble.

Author:  Chatelaine [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:25 pm ]
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Er, haven't those three already lost their bet? :)

Lovely update, thank you! I look forward to seeing new episodes in this drabble!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 4:15 pm ]
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Chas and Felix were wonderful there; but silly Chas, thinking Felix wouldn't immediately bring up where he got such an influence from in the first place! :lol: May we have more of K&K please?

Thankyou for the update!

Author:  Abi [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 9:18 pm ]
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Love their betting on how long Chas will last! :lol:

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 9:25 pm ]
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Glad no one was home to hear me laugh at the last bit :lol: :lol: Thanks, love the bet

Author:  janetbrown23 [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 9:36 pm ]
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What lovely lads, if somewhat mercenary.

Author:  Lesley [ Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:42 pm ]
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Love it, all of it. :lol:

Author:  jmc [ Sun Oct 24, 2010 9:01 am ]
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Thanks, really enjoyed that. Like the fact that the twins are still mucking round but thy have restrained their activities as they don't want to be kicked out.

Author:  Sarah_G-G [ Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:32 pm ]
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The benefit of being too busy all week to check drabbles- I come back and get to read 4 updates at once! :D Gran is lovely, I want one. :lol: The boys are lovely together as well, and good for Felix pointing out to Charles that he's acting no differently to how Charles did when he was that age. It's lovely to see the relationship between the two of them as well, even if Felix is clearly beginning to grow into a proper teenager. Thank you for the regular updates!

Author:  di [ Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:17 am ]
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I too enjoyed the dialogue between Chas and Felix; it must be so annoying for Felix, not only having older brothers who know what he gets up to [most of the time] but also one of those said brothers knows every trick in the book because he's already been there, done that and got the 't' shirt. Frustrating for Felix to say the least :)

Monty is certainly on the ball as far as Elizabeth and Chas are concerned; how mean of Jones to suggest betting on the time it'll take before he kisses her, although I, like Chatelaine, thought that the bet is rather too late. :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh, your writing makes your characters seem so alive.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:56 am ]
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Back at work, which means back to writing drabble. There's a bit of a gap here which I'm trying to fill as I go along. If I fail, you'll know, because we'll jump straight to the Easter Holidays and pick up the school again afterwards!

Kester, Felix and Davies were all sitting in a row along the wall that divided the prep school from the vegetable garden. Kevin, who was bored with sitting still, was systematically pulling up and changing all the neatly placed labels showing what had been planted where.

"You do know that it'll be months before they find out." Kester said, yawning.

"I know. But it'll be funny when they do. What happened with the fourths, Kes?"

"Davies and I overheard them yesterday afternoon, talking about 'stupid tricks that the kids in the third are playing now'. Kids indeed!"

"Like they're so grown up themselves." Davies added.

"You've done something, I suppose?" Kevin said, placing the last label neatly infront of the wrong set of plants and climbing back on to the wall. "Who was it, anyway?"

"Morris." Davies replied. "And Kes said he'd deal with it."

"What did you do, Kes?"

"Went in this morning before breakfast. Collected up all their pens, pencils, and anything else they can use to write and dumped them all in Morris's desk." Kester said. "That'll teach him to talk about kid tricks."

"I want to do something big." Kevin said suddenly.

"Such as what?" Felix asked, with a lack of grammar that would make most of his teachers pull their hair out.

"I don't know. I have a small idea, but I need to work on it. In the meantime, Mr Young has us first today. Did you soak the chalk?" Felix nodded.

"And the stationary cupboard was open, so I hid the spare boxes at the back behind a stack of books."

"Good." Kevin grinned suddenly as the bell rang. "He's not getting away with giving us detention for not doing anything."

"We were doing something though, Kev. We were having a hangman tournament."

"That's not the point. He didn't have any proof. He just thought we were misbehaving, so he punished us. It was completely unfair, and we deserve to get a free lesson while he hunts for chalk. It'll make up for the hour we spend in the detention room last week."

Author:  JS [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 12:40 pm ]
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Little horrors - thanks Eilidh (yep, I've failed to keep this post to read with tomorrow's breakfast :) )

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 1:25 pm ]
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:lol: Kevin and Kester are great.

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:27 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. The twins and Felix are going to cause problems unless someone finds a way to divide them. They are the equivalent of Joey at the same age.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:25 pm ]
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I am seriously wondering what they're planning! Yay for more updating. Thankyou!

Author:  Abi [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:41 pm ]
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They really are horrors! But highly amusing... :lol:

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 2:09 am ]
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Dreadful brats that Need Squashing.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 5:21 am ]
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Miss Di wrote:
Dreadful brats that Need Squashing.


Agreed - so far though nothing seems to have worked.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 7:32 am ]
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thanks! :-)

Author:  di [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:23 am ]
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Lovely, Eilidh, thank you.

Author:  cestina [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:31 am ]
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This is so wonderful - it needs to go as slowly as possible! :D

Author:  janetbrown23 [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 10:54 am ]
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Hands the Prefects a cane AND the right to use it

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:51 am ]
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Miss Di wrote:
Dreadful brats that Need Squashing.


This pretty much sums it up perfectly. :) End of term filler-type post again, sorry!

Mr Whyte, who was in charge of the prep school, sat back behind his desk and stared at the four third formers in front of him.

"Does someone want to start this explanation?"

"What would you like me to explain?" Kevin asked. Mr Whyte raised his eyebrows.

"Well Russell! You could, perhaps, explain why Mr Young had to come into my class to borrow chalk this morning while he was teaching your class. You could also explain why I got a complaint from the gardners after you spent break beside the vegetable garden. You could explain why none of the Lower Fourth had anything to write with in my history lesson this morning. You could explain why Matron has been to me reporting torn sheets in an entire Upper Third dormitory due to apple pie beds. Or, you could explain how it is that in less than a term at this school, you have had one major row with the prefects, and are now facing me." Kevin opened his mouth - possibly to begin this explanation - but Felix, who had had far more experience of Mr Whyte in a temper, stood on his foot.

"We're very sorry Sir."

"Sorry, Maynard? Sorry? Sorry to have disrupted two lessons, to have caused extra work for Matron, or for the annoyance you have given the gardners?"

"For all of that, Sir." Davies, encouraged by the fact that someone else had started, backed Felix up.

"If it wasn't the holidays at the end of the week, I have here a list of suggested punishments from the people who you have annoyed today." Mr Whyte waved a sheet of paper at them. "As it is, there are only four days until the end of term. You four will spend them in the San, where hopefully you can't cause a problem to anyone else. I will expect to see an improvement in your behaviour next term, or I will take further steps, do I make myself clear?"

"Yes, Sir." both Felix and Davies replied together. The twins, recognising when someone else was reducing the amount of trouble they were in, stayed quiet.

"Right." Mr Whyte got up. "Come on, all four of you. I'm going to hand you over to Matron in the san myself, so that I can be sure you get there and don't do anything on the way. Quickly now, I haven't got all day!"

***

"Here, Maynie!" Stephen's study door rebounded off the wall with a crash "Our kid says your kid is in the San until the end of term."

"Is he sick, or is he being punished?" Stephen asked.

"Punished." Baxter said, with a grin that said he found it all highly amusing. "All four of them, apparently, your cousins and young Davies as well."

"What have they done now?"

"What haven't they done? They stole all the pens and pencils from the Lower Fourth and hid them in Morris's desk. Except Morris had a music lesson and no one could find them. They changed the labels on all the vegetables in the vegetable garden, and a bunch of other things." Stephen stared at him in amazement, then laughed.

"Seriously? The vegetables? What on earth for?" Baxter shrugged.

"Can you get some sense into him over the hols do you think?"

"I can try." Stephen said doubtfully.

"Ah well, if you can't you can't. Maybe by the time they get Head's Letters sent home they'll settle down a bit."

"You've got more faith in them than I do." Stephen said. "I doubt dropping a bus on those blasted twins would settle them. Why my aunt took it into her head to send them here, I'll never know. Still, my aunt and uncle are home now at least. Maybe the thought of having their parents in the same country will help."

"Might do." Baxter agreed. "Anyway, don't worry about them just now, leave them to the staff and come with me. I want your opinion on the summer games equipment."

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:53 am ]
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:lol: :lol: :lol:

Where's Mike, by the way? Sorry if you've already said!

Author:  ivohenry [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:23 pm ]
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Mike's at Dartmouth - just as well I should think, if he were there too he'd be a couple of forms below Chas, and a couple above Felix, and might be even worse than K and K!

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 3:10 pm ]
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Well there was tha answer as to what they got up to! thanks! :-)

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 5:47 pm ]
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:lol: Let's hope that Jem, at least, can make some difference! I wish Stephen luck, though.

Thankyou for the update!

Author:  dackel [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 5:49 pm ]
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I laughed so hard at that last post - what a catalogue of mischievous deeds! Poor prefects...

Thanks, Eilidh, I'm really enjoying this!

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 6:12 pm ]
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Quote:
"Right." Mr Whyte got up. "Come on, all four of you. I'm going to hand you over to Matron in the san myself, so that I can be sure you get there and don't do anything on the way. Quickly now, I haven't got all day!"


Mr Whyte has learnt a lot about the twins in the half term they have been at the school! Pleased the gardener realised so soon what the twins had been up to. The school certainly seems to more on the ball than any where the twins have been previously. Hope Steve, Charles and Jack can help Felix realise he has to think for himself and not let the twins think for him. Pleased Felix realised he needed to respond to Mr Whyte rather than letting the twins make the situation worse. Wonder if Matron will make them repair the sheets as Matey would!!

Thanks for letting us know what they did.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:41 pm ]
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:lol: :lol: :lol:

Gosh, what hideosities!

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:26 am ]
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So glad they aren't my little cousins! Because for some reason relations are always supposed to know what their kin is up to and stop it.

Author:  di [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:59 am ]
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What naughty little boys! I hope 4 days in the San and a letter home will curb the twins' behaviour but I very much doubt it.

Hopefully the Maynards will be able to work on Felix during the holiday and help him understand that joining in with K and K is not the best way to behave in school. I'd like to see Jack's reaction when he gets the Head's letter; he was always so much harder on the boys in the family.

Maybe Jem could take a leaf out of his book and punish the twins in an appropriate way.

Thanks, Eilidh, that was fun.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 11:49 am ]
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April - Easter Holidays

"Here we go, Interlaken - collect everything up. Felix, make sure you put everything back in your bag. Why you had to unpack everything between Basle and Interlaken is beyond me."

"There's Papa, there's Papa!" Felix yelled, completely ignoring his brothers as they picked up the things that had become scattered around in the short journey from Basle. The four boys tumbled off the train with piles of luggage, and after a loud reunion Jack shepherded them back to the minibus, all talking at once.

"Where's Mum?" Stephen asked, scrambling into the front seat.

"Montreux, staying with Aunt Winnie. She'll be back at the end of the week. All settled back there? Let's go then."

A short while later, Stephen and Charles were depositing the things they'd brought home in their room and settling back in.

"Girls' holiday starts tomorrow too, doesn't it?" Charles asked. Stephen nodded.

"It does. So we have just over two weeks with all of us here, and then we head back. Who is it?" he added, as there was a knock at the door. It slammed open and Adrienne appeared.

"Aren't you supposed to be at school?" Charles asked, confused.

"Yes, I'm supposed to be at school! I'm supposed to be studying for a scholarship exam, you remember?" Adrienne snapped, looking like she was on the verge of tears. "Except Rosli slipped on the stairs last week and broke her leg, so she's gone home to recover, and Auntie Joey had the trip to Montreux arranged, so she phoned Miss Annersley to get me to come over and look after the kids for the last week. I was supposed to be working while I was here, but Claire has a cold and Phil's having problems with her leg and being incredibly sulky, and Geoff and Cecil are only day pupils at Saint Nicholas, so they were at home in the evening and needed help with homework and I don't think I've got more than about an hours work done all week. By the time the kids go to bed, I'm too tired to do anything." She wound to a halt, and Stephen tentatively put his arms around her, looking alarmed as she immediately burst into tears.

"Adrienne! Phil's crying and Claire says she feels sick!" Cecil's voice came from the hallway. Adrienne cried harder. Stephen looked at Charles pleadingly over her head, and Charles sighed.

"So much for an easy holiday." he said.

In the nursery, Charles found a scene of utter chaos. Every surface seemed to be covered in toys, an abandoned set of paints was rapidly hardening on the table, Phil and Claire were both crying, and Geoff looked close to tears as well, while Cecil was kneeling beside Phil. Through the door to the night nursery could be glimpsed unmade beds, Charles stood in the door for a few seconds before any of the children noticed him.

"Oy!" he exclaimed. Silence fell almost at once, broken only by an occasional sob.

"What's going on?" he asked. Cecil scrambled to her feet.

"Claire isn't feeling well and Phil is crying and I don't know why." she said. "And there's a bit of a mess." she added, looking around the room as if seeing it for the first time. Charles glanced at Claire's flushed cheeks and put his head back out the door.

"Felix!" he yelled, then returned to the room. "Phil, why are you crying?" he asked patiently. Phil raised a tearstained face to him.

"My leg hurts." she said unhappily.

"It only hurts because she hasn't been doing her excercises while Rosli isn't here." Geoff put in importantly. "She told me." Phil stopped crying long enough to glare at her twin.

"What's wrong Chas? Wow, look at the state of this place!" Felix appeared in the doorway.

"Go and find Dad, if he's still here, or Anna if he's not, and ask them to come up to Claire." Charles said. "Cecil and Geoff, start getting these toys put away. Phil, wait there one minute." He picked Claire up, carried her through to the night nursery and put her down on her unmade bed, and then came back to find Geoff half heartedly putting books onto a shelf while Cecil had picked up a toy bear.

"Come on, get moving!" Charles encouraged them. "OK, Phil. You come with me." He picked her up as well, took her to his own room, and dropped her on his bed, thankful to see that Stephen and Adrienne had gone somewhere else. "Right, exercises!"

***

By the time Charles and the still sulky Phil returned to the nursery, Felix had joined Geoff and Cecil. He was sitting on the table, swinging his feet and shouting out items.

"Book!" he said, as they looked at him eagerly. Both children dived for the nearest books and rammed them hurriedly into the bookcase. Felix looked thoughtful.

"Hmm... Cecil I think." he said, adding a tick to the toy blackboard set up on the table beside him. "Coming to join in Phil?" she nodded eagerly and Felix picked up a duster and cleared the scores. "We'll start over to make it fair for Phil." Charles stared at him in disbelief.

"What?" Felix asked.

"I can't believe that after all you've subjected Steve and I to over the last few months, you've now developed a game to tidy the nursery with the kids." Charles said, shaking his head. Felix grinned at him.

"I can't come up with things I shouldn't be doing all the time." he pointed out. "Teddy Bear! I got Dad, by the way. He's with Claire now. He said it was prob'ly just a cold."

"I'll leave you to it then." Charles said, as all three children were now waiting eagerly on Felix's decision, with Geoff claiming that Cecil was cheating by picking up a stuffed elephant rather than a bear.

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:01 pm ]
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"Yes, I'm supposed to be at school! I'm supposed to be studying for a scholarship exam, you remember?" Adrienne snapped, looking like she was on the verge of tears. "Except Rosli slipped on the stairs last week and broke her leg, so she's gone home to recover, and Auntie Joey had the trip to Montreux arranged, so she phoned Miss Annersley to get me to come over and look after the kids for the last week.


Really Joey has not learnt from Len's running away at all. Hope Adrienne can be allowed some time to study now and Jack recalls Joey.

I love Felix's response to Charles.
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I can't come up with things I shouldn't be doing all the time." he pointed out.


Thanks for the update

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:38 pm ]
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Oh dear - looks as if Adrienne's getting dumped on and no-one can cope unless both Anna and Rosli are there :shock: .

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 3:10 pm ]
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But why is Joey making the trip I wonder? Might she be hoping to be busier still again soon? Or something else?

Thankyou for the update, Felix was wonderful there!

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 5:28 pm ]
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Thanks for that. Lovely to see Felix being slightly responsible. Grr at Joey.

Author:  Abi [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 7:33 pm ]
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:hammer: Joey! I hope there is an EXCELLENT explanation for this...

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Oct 29, 2010 7:52 pm ]
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She is such a selfish cow :banghead: There had better be a good explanation for why you've done that to Adrienne, Joey.

Love Felix finding some responsibility. :lol:

Author:  jmc [ Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:58 am ]
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Jo seems to have some serious problems. Not only does she dump all the responsibility on Adrienne but once again she's not there for the boys. Hope she has a good reason for not being there. Thanks

Author:  di [ Sat Oct 30, 2010 8:46 am ]
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That woman makes my blood boil! How dare she go off when one of her youngsters is ill. It would serve her right if Claire's cold developed in to something more serious. [Not that I would wish that on to the child]. and what's even worse is demanding that Adrienne leave her studies to come to care for the littlies- to whom she isn't even related!!! I'm surprised that Miss Annersley allowed it - but even she, I suppose, finds it difficult to refuse Joey anything. :roll:

Is Jack is aware that Adrienne is struggling to cope with the nursery folk and studying at the same time - and -is he bothered so long as it doesn't interrupt his work at the San? :banghead:

I wonder what the boys think about their mother not being there to greet them after they've been away all term; do they even care any more?

Thanks Elilidh; I do hope someone gives Joey a 'flea in her ear' for the chaos she's caused by swanning off to Montreux.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:18 pm ]
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Really glad the boys arrived to help. Can't believe Hilda allowed it to happen. She had far more consideration for the triplets and Ruey than she did for Adrienne. At least with them, there were three to look after the kids, not just one and at least Joey didn't ask Ruey as she did have an exam later that year.

Thanks

Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Oct 31, 2010 5:52 am ]
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Grrrr Joey. Have you learnt nothing you stupid stupid female?!

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 1:02 pm ]
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The second half of this has been written this morning, so please excuse huge numbers of typing errors (should they be there!) Also, I should say that I have a long-time objection to writing Hilda Annersley! She's just too hard to do!

A few days into the holiday, Charles rifled quickly through the piles of letters in the post bag. It was early, and so far he hadn't seen anyone else out of bed at this time in the morning. There were clear benefits to being an early riser, and this week, it had meant a chance to watch for the letter before his parents got it. Finding an envelope with the school crest printed on it, adressed to Dr. John Maynard, he stuffed it inside his jumper, ran back upstairs and transferred it to the inside of a large and heavy book about trains that someone had once bought for Stephen.

"What are you doing?" Stephen asked.

"Saving Felix from a thrashing. I'll slip it back into the post bag the day we go back to school. The post mark is smudged, so with any luck they'll blame the mail services for the length of time it takes to get here."

"You think it'll make a difference?"

"To Felix's behaviour? I doubt it. It makes me feel better though."

"How did you never get letters sent home?" Charles grinned.

"Because we were smarter than them. Listen, what are we going to do about Mum?" Stephen sat up in bed and shrugged.

"She's back today?"

"Supposed to be. Get up anyway, we can think about it while we're having breakfast."

***

"Auntie Hilda! WIll you invite us in for Kaffee?" The Chalet School's Headmistress looked up from a huge pile of letters at the five young people clustered round the study window.

"Yes, I should think that would be acceptable." she smiled. "Go round and come in by the front door though, so that you can wipe your feet. I don't want mud all over my study carpet and the ground is still very wet in places."

Within very few minutes they were all seated in the comfortable study.

"Is this purely a social visit, or did you want to see me about something?" Miss Annersley asked as she poured Kaffee into the six mugs on the table. Everyone else looked at Stephen.

"What we wanted to know was - I mean, it might be none of our business - but it's not really fair - of course, depending on how you look at it -" Charles sighed.

"What we want to know, Auntie Hilda, is whether there's anything wrong with Mum." Hilda Annersley didn't answer immediately, instead sipping her coffee and looking at the second of her brevet nephews with amusement in her eyes.

"How very like Connie you are, Charles." she observed. "However, I'm afraid that you'll have to be more specific. Why should there be something wrong with your mother?" They all looked at each other again, and Stephen indicated that Charles should continue. With a look that threatened dire retribution as soon as they were somewhere more fitting, Charles obliged.

"She doesn't seem to have learned anything at all! Helena went off last summer, and she said then that she'd made some big mistakes and that she was going to try and stop labelling us and expecting so much from us - especially from the girls. It worked for the summer, and at Christmas I think she was still trying. But now, she seems to be as bad as she ever was! I mean, surely if Rosli fell and hurt herself, Mum should have stayed at home with the kids rather than pulling Adrienne out of school? It doesn't seem very fair, Auntie Hilda, that's all." Charles finished, with a sudden recollection that Adrienne's headmistress would have been at least partially responsible for that young lady spending a week at home.

"And now Mum's coming back this afternoon, and if she's going to be back like she was before, we'd all like to know before she gets here." Stephen added.

"Let me start with what I know." Miss Annersley said after a few moments thought. "I agreed to Adrienne going home because, my dear, you were well ahead of where you should have been in your work, and both Matron and Miss Ferrars were worried that you were working too hard. We thought that an extra week at home where you wouldn't be so focussed on your exam work would help you relax. In addition, I understood that Dr. Jack would be at home to help out?"

"In the beginning he was." Adrienne replied. "But then there was a bad case at the San, and he had to spend a lot of time there."

"I see. Those were the reasons that Adrienne was allowed to go home from school. As to why your mother went to Montreux, I'm afraid that is your Aunt Winnie's secret and I can't pass it on to you. Please rest assured that she wouldn't have gone if she didn't feel she had to, particularly over your holidays. I know you don't believe it, you three, but she really does miss you badly when you're away at school."

"Why don't they go to school in Interlaken then?" Erica asked.

"That is not a question I can answer." Miss Annersley said. "Maybe Dr. Jack wants his sons to go to the school he was at? And would you leave, you two, even if you could? It's different from Mike now, of course, at Dartmouth."

"I'd leave there fast enough." Mike said. Everyone else stared at him, and he shrugged. "It's not the same. I don't know anyone, and I don't like it. I'd far rather be back with Steve and Chas."

"I think that you all need to make some time to talk to your parents." Miss Annersley said. "I'm sure, Mike, that if you're not happy then something can be done about it. Remember, all of you - your parents may not be perfect, but they love you all very much and they want you to be happy."

"So long as it fits with their idea of what we should be doing." Charles muttered. Stephen shot him a warning glance.

"I don't think I can give you any other advice." Miss Annersley said, getting up. "I'll be over for Kaffee later in the week I should think, so I'll see you all then, but just now I really need to get back to work." She showed them out, and they wandered slowly back towards Freudesheim. Mike and Erica disappeared on some plan of their own, and Charles, feeling like a rather un-necessary spare part, declined when Stephen suggested a walk through the pines. Stephen and Adrienne set off alone, and Charles went home and sat down on a bench in the garden. Within a few minutes, Bruno arrived and dropped down on his feet.

"It's all a bit miserable, really, Bruno." he said after a while. "Mike not happy at Dartmouth, Adrienne overworking herself here - and why didn't anyone tell her that's why they were sending her home? - me working flat out for a schalarship so I don't have to be a priest, and Steve... well, I'm not sure what Steve is thinking any more. Come on." he got up and Bruno jumped up too. "Lets go and pick up the kids and take you for your walk. Things to do, no time for sitting about!"

Author:  Chris [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 1:07 pm ]
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Poor kids!All this because no-one talks to each other, or because they assume things.
Looking forward to Joey's explanations.

Author:  cestina [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 1:16 pm ]
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I always liked Charles, even EBD's version of him, but I think I love him now...... :shock:

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:02 pm ]
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I hope Winnie isn't ill :( .

Author:  di [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:51 pm ]
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What a shame Chas couldn't tell his Aunt Hilda about his mother's decision that he should become a priest. She did, once upon a time, have some influence over Joey, after all and she might have been able to speak to her on Chas's behalf.
A shame nobody thought to tell Adrienne she was to take a break from studying while she was at home and a pity Jack didn't think to mention to Hilda that there was a worrying case at the San so he couldn't be around to support Adrienne. Perhaps if he had Hilda could have sent someone else to support her.
Seems to me that the adults in this family and its' extension don't talk to each other!
Thanks, Eilidh, loving this still. Chas is a sweety, hiding the letter about Felix, from his father.

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 7:18 pm ]
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I wonder if Charles hid any letters about himself from the School. I think his actions are good in view of Jack's likely response. I hope Charles Steve and Mike can talk to their parents and Mike can go back to school with the others. Charles will need him after the summer if the two K's are still there.
Thanks for the update.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 7:43 pm ]
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The letter was really sweet of Chas! All I can say about Miss A., though, is that I wish she was around on the board - she makes everything sound so rational and normal!

Thankyou!

Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 7:44 pm ]
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Hope Joey ahs some good explanations and Jack too! Thanks :-)

Author:  Abi [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 9:08 pm ]
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I hope they all get to talk about things; maybe they'll be able to come to some understanding.

Thanks Eilidh!

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:00 am ]
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Eilidh wrote:
Also, I should say that I have a long-time objection to writing Hilda Annersley! She's just too hard to do!


Can't say I've ever had that problem! :wink: She came across pretty well there Eilidh.

Can understand her not passing on information to them when it is not her news to pass on. Perhaps Joey did have a good reason for going to Winnie Embury but someone should have told Adrienne that she was not to work and someone should have told Jack that he's not the only Doctor at the San - they can cope without him!

Oh and Chas? Speak to your Auntie Hilda - or Auntie Nell (she may be better as she is also Catholic) about Joey's attempts to shoehorn you into a career as a priest. :lol:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 12:49 pm ]
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"Chas, are you busy?"

"Yes."

"No you're not, you're not doing anything!"

"I'm thinking." Charles replied, without moving from where he was lying on his back on his bed.

"Can you think in the Salon?"

"What do you want, Mike?"

"Moral support."

"Where's Steve? Isn't that his job?"

"I can't find him. Please, Chas!" Charles groaned and got up.

"Fine. I don't know how much help I'll be, but I'll take a book down. Don't be all night."

In the event, Charles had barely settled himself in the salon before Mike appeared.

"Mamma? Have you got some time?" Joey put down her knitting and patted the seat beside her.

"Always." she said cheerfully. "What can I do for you tonight?" Mike glanced nervously at his father, who was buried in a newspaper, and then seized the bull by the horns.

"I want to leave Dartmouth and go back to school." There was a silence, broken only by the rustle as Jack lowered his newspaper.

"Leave Dartmouth?"

"Yes."

"What on Earth for?" Jack asked.

"I don't like it." Mike said nervously. "I don't like the work and I don't like the staff and I don't really get on with any of my class. Please let me go back to school with Chas and Felix next year?"

"Well, it's not quite so simple as that." Jack began, but Joey interupted.

"Come and sit down, Mike, and stop looking at us like we're going to eat you. Of course if you're not happy you can leave Dartmouth. It might take a bit of effort, but I'm sure we can rise to a few letters and a phonecall to see if there's still a space for you at the school - you can put a call through to the headmaster tomorrow, can't you Jack?"

"I don't see why not, but what do we do if he doesn't have a space?"

"I'm sure he will." Charles, forgetting he was supposed to be keeping to himself, butted in. "No one joined that form this year after Mike left, and there's still plenty of dorm space and things."

"It'll be cheaper than Dartmouth as well." Joey pointed out. "Which will be helpful with fees to find for Geoff in a couple of years time. Though we won't be paying school fees for Chas by that point." she added with a smile at him. "But what will this do for your career, Mike? You wanted to join the Navy."

"No I didn't, Mamma, not really. I just like boats. Steve likes trains, but no one suggested he should be a train driver." Joey looked surprised.

"But I was sure... ever since that trip to Canada when you enjoyed yourself so much on the boat. I don't know what's happening to this family. They all seem to have their lives planned out and then they go and completely change their minds!"

"Everyone changes their minds, Jo. When you were fifteen, you weren't going to marry, let alone have eleven children and then adopt six more!" Joey grinned.

"Point taken! Very well, Mike, we'll see what we can do. I'm making no promises though!"

***

"Good game Chas."

"Thanks." Charles wiped his face on the jumper he'd picked up from the side of the tennis court. "Need to keep up my standard. Miller and I are aiming for second pair, but there's a few in the Upper Fifth are horribly good. Thankfully the Sixths are almost all cricket fiends this year, and those that aren't don't really care about either sport."

"Second pair?" Stephen asked, amused. "I think you're better than Jeff."

"Nonsense." Charles said scornfully. "Jeff would wipe the floor with me."

"Well I didn't, and I'm better than he is." Stephen replied, with an unusual lack of modesty. "You're stronger than you were last year."

"I'm six inches taller than I was last year as well."

"That always helps." Stephen grinned. "We'll have some more games before we go back, and then I'll get Jeff to play you when we do get back and see. " Before Charles could answer, however, they were interrupted.

"Steve? Chas? Steve!" Erica sounded panicky and both boys ran to meet her as she tore across the garden, her hair flying out behind her. "Have you got Geoff?" she asked breathlessly. They shook their heads.

"Haven't seen him since breakfast." Charles said. "Why?"

"He's not here. He's gone, we can't find him anywhere. Mike and I had the kids in the garden, and we both thought the other one had him, and the gate's lying open."

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 12:54 pm ]
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Glad they were OK with Mike, but hope Geoff is OK.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 1:16 pm ]
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Quote:
I don't know what's happening to this family. They all seem to have their lives planned out and then they go and completely change their minds!"

"Everyone changes their minds, Jo. When you were fifteen, you weren't going to marry, let alone have eleven children and then adopt six more!" Joey grinned.

"Point taken! Very well, Mike, we'll see what we can do. I'm making no promises though!"


Joey your family are growing up!! They are individuals, with their own hopes and plans. THough at least she is more open to Mike going back to school than Jack appeared to be. He pulls strings to get the two K's in who are trouble causing, but seems to be reluctant to help his own son.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  AnneM [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 1:49 pm ]
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Love Mike's comment about nobody suggesting Steve should be a train driver! How old was Mike on the trip to Canada, for heaven's sake? Two? Three?

Hope they find Geoff OK and that they don't all get blamed for his disappearance.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  di [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 2:22 pm ]
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I do hope Geoff is safe!

If Jack is phoning school to see if they have a place for Mike [and I have to admit both Jack and Joey seemed to listen to him and hear his unhappiness] I hope the issue of THE LETTER doesn't crop up or both Chas and Felix will be in trouble. :(

Am amazed at Joey's lack of understanding of children and young people. Fancy imagining they will all follow the career they show an interest in as young children. Mike had a good point about Steve and trains! Of course, a train driver wouldn't fit in with her idea of a good career! :lol:
I can't imagine Chas ever showing an interest in becoming a priest either!

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:03 pm ]
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That was a cruel part to end on! Please come back and relieve us soon!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:20 pm ]
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Thanks, glad Jack and Joey were understanding and amendable about Mike's plans in the end. It would have been a surprise to them and to understand and agree within a five to ten minute conversation is pretty good for any parent!

Hope Geoff is okay

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:14 pm ]
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I actually thought Joey wasn't too bad here! Thanks :-)

Author:  Abi [ Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:42 pm ]
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Glad Joey supported Mike in his wish to leave Dartmouth... But hoping Geoff is ok.

Author:  robinette [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:35 am ]
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Another one hoping Geoff is ok!

Author:  jmc [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:03 am ]
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Even if there is something wrong with Winnie it still wasn't particularly nice to leave no explanation to Adrienne or to boys. Hope Geoff is OK.

Thanks

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 12:49 pm ]
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Glad people thought Joey handled that OK - I think she is trying to do the right thing, but irritatingly she also doesn't seem to have a clue what the right thing is!

I was going to split this update, but I wasn't sure where so you can have the whole thing. Don't say I'm not good to you! :D


"Where's Mum?" Stephen asked, following her back towards the house.

"In her study, writing." Erica replied. "Mike's tearing the garden apart."

"I'll get her, you phone the San." Charles said.

Within the next twenty minutes, it seemed that the entire Platz was in an uproar. All of the staff remaining at the school had turned out to help look for the little boy, and several of the doctors had left the San when Jack got Stephen's phonecall. Joey, after turning very white and scaring Charles badly, had gulped down a mug of hot sweet tea provided by the terrified Erica and organised her family into searching the house and garden again as thoroughly as they could. Phil and Cecil were each with one of the older children and hunted enthusiastically, fairly sure that it was all some type of big game. Eventually, all the family searchers returned to the house to admit defeat. Wherever Geoff was, he wasn't in the house or the garden. Joey looked whiter than ever at this news, and Phil, sensing now that something was badly wrong, burst into tears. The phone rang shrilly, startling them all.

They all watched anxiously as Joey grabbed the phone.

"You've got him? Oh thank goodness, thank you Biddy! I'll send someone along for him right away, thank you!" Joey turned back to them even as Anna reached for her coat and removed her apron.

"Auntie Biddy's got Geoff." she said with relief. "Stephen, go and find your father and tell him. I'll run over to the school and stop the staff hunting over there. Chas, keep an eye on everyone, would you?"

"There you go, didn't I tell you? He's fine." Charles said, sitting down on the stairs with Phil on his knee. "Anna will have him back here in no time, you just wait."

"I'm finishing my painting, if anyone is looking for me." Adrienne said, climbing past Charles and Phil and heading back to her room. Jack came back in from the garden, followed by Stephen, and glanced round the hall.

"Michael, Erica - my study please."

"It wasn't their fault, Dad!" Stephen put in desperately. Jack ignored him, closing the door firmly behind Erica as she walked past him.

"...Completely irresponsible... anything could have happened... would have been your fault!" the words drifted out through the closed door. Stephen and Charles exchanged glances.

"Come on, lets go back outside and see about some lunch." Stephen suggested, in an effort to move the younger children away from the door. Before anyone could move, however, a cry came from upstairs, followed by the sound of someone coming down the stairs and stamping their feet on every step.

The study door opened, and Jack appeared again.

"Erica, go." he ordered. Mike looked scared, and Erica stood beside him firmly.

"No." she said.

"Is no one looking after this baby? Is she just to be allowed to scream herself sick? And how on Earth anyone expects me to win a scholarship to anywhere with all this going on is beyond me!" Adrienne dropped her burden on Stephen's knee and faced them angrily. "It's bad enough that I missed the last week of term, now I can't even catch up or study for my exam in the holidays because the entire house has gone mad!"

"We haven't all gone mad, Uncle Jack just seems to think he can hit Mike for letting Geoff go when firstly, I was just as much to blame, and secondly, it wasn't any of our faults, because neither of us left the gate open!" the entire family moved from staring in shock at Adrienne, who had never lost her temper in such a spectacular way before, to staring in shock at Erica, who was glaring at her guardian.

"Erica, don't!" Felicity said, catching the older girl's arm. "You mustn't!"

"No, the gate was Felix." Mike agreed nervously, ignoring Felicity.

"It was not! I didn't go near it!"

"It's completely unfair to blame Mike and me. I wish I had relatives in another country I could spend my holidays with, like Roddy! Then I wouldn't have to be here all the time!"

"Erica Standish, how dare you speak to me like that!" Jack attempted to regain control of the situation. Hearing her father yelling, Phil burst into tears again, an example quickly followed by Claire.

Joey stopped dead in the doorway, staring at the scene. Erica, scarlet and untidy, was yelling at Jack who looked completely shellshocked. Felicity, almost in tears, was still holding on to the older girl's arm and trying to convince her to stop shouting. Both Stephen and Charles were attempting to calm down the upset children, Felix was glaring angrily at Mike and Cecil was staring round with her eyes and mouth like saucers. Joey, recalling a skill from her childhood, put her fingers in her mouth and gave a piercing whistle that made them all jump.

"What on earth is going on?" she demanded in the silence that followed.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 2:06 pm ]
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Hope Joey will handle things better than Jack's doing.

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 2:09 pm ]
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Talk about 'chaos reigns'!!! :( And Jack was clearly making things much worse. :banghead: I loved Joey's use of the whistle to attract everyone's attention - here's hoping she can also manage to sort out the situation and calm everyone down.

Thanks, Eilidh - I am continuing to enjoy this.

Author:  cestina [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 2:19 pm ]
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Great stuff! Hoping for a superfast update - can't wait to see how Joey handles Jack.

Author:  AnneM [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:22 pm ]
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Wow! Three cheers for Adrienne and Erica! There was something earlier in this drabble (I think - or was it one of your other ones :dontknow: ) that made me wonder what they were going to do.

Can we have another update Very Quickly, please??

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:25 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. You could not have split that anywhere. Hope Joey can calm Jack down.

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And how on Earth anyone expects me to win a scholarship to anywhere with all this going on is beyond me!" Adrienne dropped her burden on Stephen's knee and faced them angrily. "It's bad enough that I missed the last week of term, now I can't even catch up or study for my exam in the holidays because the entire house has gone mad!"


Adrienne has obviously not listened to Hilda saying she needs a break, rather than more work!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:53 pm ]
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Really hope Joey can calm things down. Jack has completely over reacted there and can understand why Erica wants out of the family

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:58 pm ]
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I think Erica is a little bit harsh but I do agree Jack over-reacted. not convinced Joey will handle it well but anything's better than jack's approach! Thanks :-)

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:26 pm ]
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I don't think that Erica has over-reacted. I think she was extremely brave to defy Jack like that and support Mike. It seems to be Jack's style to immediately find fault with his children - he's supposed to be the father, he should ensure it means more that just earning the money, it means actually looking after his children - not expecting someone else to do it for him.


Well done Adrienne too!

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:36 pm ]
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Hope Joey can bring Jack to his senses, the idiot man. Another who's glad Erica stood up to him - why should Mike be punished when Jack hasn't even bothered to try to find out what's actually happened?

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  di [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:20 am ]
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So like Jack- react first and then find out the facts.:banghead:
I'm another who thinks Erica did the right thing by standing up for Mike; how dare Jack thrash the boy when he has no idea of the facts. I hope her comment about wishing she had family in another country hits home to Joey and Jack,
I'm surprised Adrienne didn't agree with her but losing her temper about not being able to work because the 'whole house has gone mad' may penetrate the thick skulls of the adults.
Love Joey's whistle - let's hope it shocks Jack in some form of normality- the guy is mad and has so obviously 'lost it'. :roll:

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:57 pm ]
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Last holiday post. Back to school after this one!

Thank you for the comments.


"Really, Joey, where did you learn to do that?" Hilda Annersley demanded from behind her. "Why don't we all go into the Salon and have this conversation in comfort? It would be far more sensible than standing out here in the hallway, and you did invite me over for Kaffee und Kuchen."

Shortly afterwards, the older members of the family sat in silence over their coffee. Anna had returned with Geoff, and after a quick word with Joey had taken the youngest four into the kitchen to help her make biscuits. Jack, Joey had sent out for a walk to calm down. Characteristically, Joey broke the rather uncomfortable silence.

"Well? Is someone going to tell me what was going on? Steve, you're normally quite calm - what happened?"

"Umm... well... Dad was angry with Mike and Erica, and Claire woke up and no one heard her, and Adrienne got disturbed and was angry, and Erica was angry too..." Stephen tailed off.

"Stephen, repetition! English is one of the richest languages in the world!" his brevet aunt said from her seat. Stephen blushed.

"Sorry, Auntie Hilda."

"Erica? What gave you the right to speak to your uncle like that?" Joey asked. Erica looked at her hands.

"He was going to hit Mike - he told me to go away and it wasn't fair for Mike to get hit, he didn't do anything wrong! He didn't leave the gate open and it was both of us who didn't watch Geoff closely." Erica sounded like she was getting worked up again and Joey held up a hand to stop her.

"Felix left the gate open." Mike said stubbornly.

"I didn't!"

"You did, you went out this morning!"

"And I closed it again! Gaudenz brought the postbag from the station, maybe he left it open!"

"Oy!" Joey said sharply. "It really doesn't matter who left it open. This is not about who left the gate open, or for that matter who should have been looking after Geoff, this is about the disgraceful scene that I came home to. Erica, whatever you may feel your motivations are, you cannot speak to your uncle like that. You can spend tonight in your room, and when I see you tomorrow morning I will expect a full apology for your uncle. Go now, please." Erica, seeing nothing else for it, got to her feet and disappeared upstairs. "And now for the rest of you." Joey said, glaring round the rest of the family and looking most unlike herself. "Adrienne, I appreciate that you are trying to work, however sometimes things will happen which disturb you. We are trying to limit them. Losing your temper because you happened to be the person who heard Claire is not necessary."

"In addition," Hilda put in "You are not supposed to be working. You are more than prepared enough for this exam and the holidays are supposed to be a break from work. You still look tired, and if you come back to school looking like that then Matron will have you in the san to catch up on the rest you should be having now."

"I'm sorry." Adrienne said. Joey nodded to her.

"Then we'll say no more about it. Steve, Chas, make sure she goes out the house? Fresh air and excercise and no more books, and even Matey won't be able to complain. Now, go on, all of you - go somewhere else for a while and keep out of trouble while Auntie Hilda and I have the Kaffee we were coming to get."

"And discuss what she's going to say to Dad." Stephen said quietly as they went outside.

"Good for Erica though! I didn't think she had it in her! He wasn't being fair, she was right."

"He was probably just worried about Geoff and that made him angry." Stephen said.

"That's no excuse for hitting people though!" Mike protested.

"No, you're right, it's not. Ah well, at least he phoned the school before this all blew up - you're going back next year."

"How d'you know?"

"He was telling Mum this morning. Come on, we've only got a week of the hols left. Lets go and find something to do."

Author:  Rafaella [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 1:05 pm ]
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Love this drabble :)

So (remembering from Stalky) Mike will be Maynard Tertius and Felix will be Quartus?

Author:  thefrau46 [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 1:34 pm ]
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"Oy!" Joey said sharply. "It really doesn't matter who left it open. This is not about who left the gate open, or for that matter who should have [/color[color=#BF0000]]been looking after Geoff, this is about the disgraceful scene that I came home to.


?? :banghead: Surely she should want to know who was supposed to looking after Geoff??

Actually I thought Geoff had run away because he didn't want
to go to school with the rest of the boys - I'd forgotten he's still so young in this wonderful drabble. :lol:

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 1:58 pm ]
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thefrau46 wrote:
?? :banghead: Surely she should want to know who was supposed to looking after Geoff??


I may have worded this badly - what Joey meant ( :D ) was that she wasn't about to start shouting at people for Geoff's disappearance or the reason that Geoff was able to get out the garden at all (and possibly she is also thinking that really, she should have been looking after Geoff rather than a pair of 13/14year olds!) but that she was trying to get to the bottom of the argument with Jack instead and not get side-tracked by Mike and Felix bickering.

Author:  Squirrel [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:55 pm ]
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Wow! Talk about an action packed few episodes. Like the fact that the boys are well aware that Joey and Hilda are going to talk about how best to deal with the way Jack handled the situation away from prying ears. I do hope that the adults can continue to learn the lessons they so desparately need to learn here!!!

Looking forwards to the next update as and when. Thanks Eilidh! :D

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:58 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. Pleased Joey calmed everyone down.


Quote:
"In addition," Hilda put in "You are not supposed to be working. You are more than prepared enough for this exam and the holidays are supposed to be a break from work. You still look tired, and if you come back to school looking like that then Matron will have you in the san to catch up on the rest you should be having now."


Hope Adrienne listens this time and has a break. I am sure her short temper occurred because she was tired.

Pleased Jack has arranged Mike's schooling before the outbreak.
Mike will be Minor as Charles will be Maynard after the summer break, and Felix Tertius I would think. What do they call the two K's as they are the same age, with only minutes between them?

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:30 pm ]
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I think Felix could also become 'Maynard Minimus' rather than 'Maynard Tertius' since there will only be the three boys there once Stephen leaves.

I personally think Joey was more than a little harsh in her treatment of Erica, but....

Thanks, Eilidh, I'm really enjoying this.

Author:  cestina [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:44 pm ]
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Elder in Ontario wrote:

I personally think Joey was more than a little harsh in her treatment of Erica, but....


I thought she was appallingly harsh. Joey, if anyone, should know about standing up for oneself, and particularly others, in the face of injustice. Has she forgotten the lessons in Exile?

I'm much looking forward to seeing Mike's re-entry..... :-) Perhaps he can sit on the Terrible Twins - after all, he was no angel......

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:57 pm ]
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Thanks for the update! I think Joey was a bit harsh with Erica but at least she'll calm down!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:03 pm ]
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roversgirl wrote:
Thanks for the update! I think Joey was a bit harsh with Erica but at least she'll calm down!


So did I, but at least everything got calmed down

Author:  Abi [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:05 pm ]
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I agree that Joey was rather harsh with Erica, but I guess she was doing her best. Hope she manages to talk some sense into Jack, though - hopefully Hilda will be able to help with that...

Author:  keren [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:42 pm ]
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She tells Steve and Chas to keep Adrianne busy, does she know what is going on? did she encourage it subconciously? or did she not even notice?


Mike and Erica also seem to be some sort of a team

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:10 pm ]
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Will be interesting to see how school goes now! Have just caught up on a couple of updates, actually I think that Joey was quite fair.

Hiding now.

Just in case.

*whispers from hiding place* Thankyou for the updates!

Author:  Myth Tree [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:21 pm ]
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I also think Joey was being quite fair. Erica was so wound up she needed a break.
*Creeps into cupboard to hide*

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:42 pm ]
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Myth Tree wrote:
I also think Joey was being quite fair. Erica was so wound up she needed a break.
*Creeps into cupboard to hide*


Chocolate biscuit? We might as well make the most of exile!

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:49 am ]
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Oy Erica, tell your Aunty Jo to bugger off, you did nothing wrong.

Author:  robinette [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:26 am ]
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[quote="Eilidh]


"Oy!" Joey said sharply. "It really doesn't matter who left it open. This is not about who left the gate open, or for that matter who should have been looking after Geoff, this is about the disgraceful scene that I came home to. Erica, whatever you may feel your motivations are, you cannot speak to your uncle like that. You can spend tonight in your room, and when I see you tomorrow morning I will expect a full apology for your uncle.

"In addition," Hilda put in "You are not supposed to be working. You are more than prepared enough for this exam and the holidays are supposed to be a break from work. You still look tired, and if you come back to school looking like that then Matron will have you in the san to catch up on the rest you should be having now."

"I'm sorry." Adrienne said. Joey nodded to her.

"[/quote]


Personally I think Joey was too harsh on Erica, haven't they been taught to stand up for what is right?

No wonder Adrienne looks tired she's either working or looking after the younger kids!

Thanks you Eilidh I love this :D

Author:  di [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:53 am ]
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I'm another who thinks Joey was too hard on Erica, although I can see the sense of giving her some space to calm down.
Quite honestly I think Joey has totally missed the point of the 'uproar'; Jack shouldn't be hitting anyone, neither Adrienne nor Mike and Erica or, in fact, any of the junior Maynard's/ adopted family should be looking after any of the little ones - they're Joey and Jack's responsibility and if they are too busy to look after their own children they should ensure that they have paid help to do their parenting -and replace that help if something happens as it did to Roslii.
Miss Annersley is not without blame either; she should have made sure that Adrienne understood that she was supposed to be resting during this holiday and Joey and Jack should have also been given that message loud and clear - resting does not include looking after sick children!! :poke:
Grrrrr. Now I've got that off my chest I can get round to saying thank you, Eilidh for a grand update. Apologies for getting so involved in the plot that I can't separate fact from fiction! :lol:

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:49 pm ]
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Well! Thank you for all the comments and discussion. Back to more familiar ground now, and anyone who can get to the end of this update without wanting to bang Charles and Elizabeth's heads together will be doing better than me.

May

The exams seemed much closer from the other side of the Easter holidays, and as a result the school was much quieter in the last term of the year. Throughout the school boys were attempting to make up the work they should have done in the earlier parts of the year or cramming frantically in an effort to remember just one more fact that would make a difference. Tempers grew short as the days grew long and warm, and they all tried to spend as much time outside as possible while keeping up with their work.

Late one evening, Mr Braithwaite returned to the flat to find Elizabeth pouring over her maths text book, and took action.

"Elizabeth! It's nearly eight o'clock!"

"I know." Elizabeth replied. "I just want to go over this one last time, then I can put it away."

"No." her father took the book off her and placed it in the bookcase. "Miller and co. are in the garden, go and join them, get some air, and give yourself a break." Recognising defeat, Elizabeth pulled on a cardigan and followed his instructions. On reaching the garden however, she only found Charles, who also had his head in a textbook.

"Apparently it's too late to be working." she said, sitting down beside him. Charles muttered something unintelligible. "My father took my books off me and sent me outside." Elizabeth said. "Should I do the same for you?" Charles closed the book and put it down beside him.

"What do you want?" he asked.

"Come for a walk with me. We haven't spend any time together in weeks." Elizabeth said. Charles shook his head.

"Too risky. I think the Head's got his eye on us. I saw him a few times last term when we were going places together."

"Oh come on, risk it!"

"I can't."

"Of course you can! You risk anything! I told you - I used to hear stories about you in the holidays from the staff. You've got the school record for most detentions awarded in one term. And you won't risk an innocent walk with me?" Charles smiled slightly.

"Joint record. I share it with Miller." he corrected her. "Never did work out how Monty and Jones wriggled out of it so often. But regardless, Elizabeth, I can't risk it now. Whether I like it or not, I'm a prefect, remember? The Head would crucify me if he thought we were doing anything we weren't supposed to."

"But we wouldn't be." Elizabeth coaxed him. "We'd just be walking."

"I told you no!" Charles replied, beginning to lose his temper. Elizabeth stood up.

"It's only a walk!" she exclaimed. "Or is it just that you don't want to spend time with me any more?"

"It won't be only a walk, it'll only be a walk until we get out of sight of the school and then you'll start again and I can't keep telling you no, Elizabeth! And if you're going to keep behaving like that, then no, I don't want to spend time with you!"

"Behaving like what?" Elizabeth asked, in a dangerously low tone.

"Like you always behave when we're on our own together." Charles replied angrily. "Like you think you have some sort of prior claim to me, when in fact all we are is friends and we'll probably never be anything else, no matter how much you try and convince me it's a good idea! Did it never occur to you that I might not be interested in anything else any more? I have a ridiculous amount of things to do right now and I haven't got time for your childish nonsense!" Elizabeth's hand connected with his face so hard that she left a flaming handprint on his cheek. Charles stared at her in shock.

"Friends?" she asked. "I'm not sure I can be just friends with you, but if that's what you want then that's fine, Minor." she placed deliberate emphasis on the name. "And now, I'll leave you to go back to your work, since that's the most important thing to you." She turned her back on his and walked away, managing to get round the corner of the house before she stopped, leant against the wall and covered her face with her hands.

Elizabeth climbed back up to the top of the boarding house without meeting anyone, only to find the door locked. Too late, she remembered her father telling her he was going to have a drink with the Head and as she was going out, he was intending to lock the door. At almost the same time, Elizabeth remembered that her keys were inside, in her coat pocket and she sat down on the top step and burst into tears.

After only a couple of minutes, Matron's door opened, and she looked at Elizabeth in amazement.

"Elizabeth! What on Earth is wrong?"

"I'm locked out and Charles hates me." Elizabeth informed her though her tears, all need for secrecy forgotten. Matron pulled her up and led her into her own flat.

"The staircase is not the place for these conversations." she said firmly. "Now, come in, sit down and dry your face while I go and get us a drink. Then you can tell me all about it."

Charles, meanwhile, had come in behind Elizabeth and was in bed and pretending to be asleep - mainly because he could hear footsteps coming along the corridor.

"You here, Minor?" Monty asked, sticking his head around the door.

"Is he?" Miller's voice asked.

"Yes."

"Is he asleep?" That was Jones. "At this time?" Charles felt Monty standing over him, and lay still.

"He's pretending to be." Monty announced, after close inspection. "And he's got a lovely bright red handprint on his face. You're lying on the wrong side, idiot." he added in a whisper. "I wouldn't have seen it if you'd been facing the wall."

"Leave him then, if he's in a temper." Miller said from the doorway. "I guess if Elizabeth's slapped him he's sulking anyway. Come over to our room, Monty, there's a box of biscuits that needs eating." The door closed behind them and Charles rolled on to his back and stared at the ceiling for a few minutes. Then, lacking anything else to do, he pulled a book out of his bag and went back to work.

Author:  Squirrel [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:51 pm ]
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Wow!!! Ouch!!! That's a bit of a humdinger of a scene! I only hope that Matron can help Elizabeth pull herself back together, and that Charles is able to get his head round the problems he sees. Really, the two need their heads knocking together, but....

Seem like typical teenagers to me! :wink:

Thanks Eilidh!

Author:  Joanne [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:23 pm ]
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Poor Charles, seems he is doing his best to be responsible. Elizabeth isn't listening to him and he's having trouble saying what he wants to say - hope they make it up after the exams when they're calmer.

Thanks for the update - love this story!

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:12 pm ]
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Thanks Charles is trying to follow his brother as Head boy and try for a science scholarship in addition to his ordinary exams, I am not surprised that he does not want to risk it for a friendship. He does not know that the head and his house master think that he is a suitable friend for Elizabeth and would not be worried by them becoming closer companions.

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:38 pm ]
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Poor Charles. he has so much to do and he doesn't want problems. I hope they sort it out! thanks :-)

Author:  Abi [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:51 pm ]
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Oh dear; tactless Chas! Hope they manage to sort themselves out... :lol:

Author:  RroseSelavy [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:31 pm ]
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I haven't posted much, but I'm really enjoying this - it's one of the first drabbles I look for :D

Thanks Eilidh!

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:11 pm ]
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So do they come to their common or garden senses?

Gaa, teenagerhood!

Author:  Elle [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:26 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:

"The staircase is not the place for these conversations." she said firmly. "Now, come in, sit down and dry your face while I go and get us a drink."



Is Matron going to offer her a gin and tonic? :lol: :lol:

Thanks for the updates.

Author:  jmc [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 4:02 am ]
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The pair of them need their heads bashed together.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:23 am ]
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Hang on a sec, I feel sorry for Chas there. Elizabeth may not care if she's expelled from a third school, but some people like Chareles don't even want to be expelled from their first school. And the Head said that's exactly what would happen if anyone developed a close friendship with Elizabeth. Charles has said that several times to her. Doesn't she get it or does she only want to use Charles for her own ends and doesn't care or won't care if he's expelled for it?

Author:  di [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:45 am ]
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Quite! I agree with Fiona; Chas has spelt it out several times to Elizabeth that the Head had threatened expulsion to any one who behaves in an improper way towards her and in his immature 16/17 year old mind being alone with her could be construed as improper behaviour.

In addition he'll have, in his mind, the reaction his parents, especially Jack, would have if he were to be expelled as well as the worry about forthcoming exams and the scholarship exam in particular - his 'get out of jail free' card which he can use when Joey tries to present him to the Seminary to train as priest.

All in all he has a lot on his plate, as he tried to explain to Elizabeth; she's the one we need to give a shaking to. If she leaves him alone at present, well who knows what the future will bring, but if she keeps harassing him she'll push him, irretrievably, away.

Hopefully Matron will be able to talk with her to try and explain the nuances of relationships; she needs a mother's input and Matron is the nearest to that at present. I'm sure her father wouldn't have a clue about how to advise her!

Thanks, Eilidh. Can't wait to hear Matron's advice.
p.s. I hope Chas's inflamed cheek disappears overnight or he'll be in for some ribbing in the morning. :lol:

Author:  thefrau46 [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:34 am ]
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I agree with Fiona Mc. and Di. Elizabeth really should think about the consequences for Chas. :roll:

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:56 pm ]
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Hmm, how much telling about 'just friends' did he do, though, and did certain other behaviour really back that up? Of course he has a lot on at the moment, but so does Elizabeth with exams, and tempers will flare high.

I can't wait to see if they sort it out or not.

Thankyou!

Author:  Eilidh [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:26 pm ]
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Oooh, look! A weekend update! Thank you again for your comments - this has now broken 75,000 words (posted+unposted) and there are far too many more still to write. I'm amazed you're all still reading.

“Sit down.” Matron chased Elizabeth towards a small sofa and disappeared through a door. “Tea?” she called back. Elizabeth wiped her face and swallowed.

“Yes.” she replied. She sat down on the edge of the sofa, and waited. After a few minutes, Matron returned with two steaming mugs, one of which she handed to Elizabeth before sitting down in an arm chair opposite her, kicking off her shoes and pulled her feet up.

“Now.” She said kindly. “Who is Charles, why does he hate you, why are you so upset, and how on Earth have you managed to lock yourself out?”

“Am I going to get anyone into trouble?” Elizabeth asked. Matron shook her head.

“I'm off duty, except for emergencies.” she smiled. “So, which of the – let's see – five Charles's in the top three forms have you gotten yourself involved with, expressly against your father and the Headmaster's instructions?”

“Maynard.” Elizabeth replied, staring into her tea. Matron nodded with satisfaction.

“We though so.” she said complacently. “And what has young Mr. Maynard done to upset you so much?” As quickly as she could, Elizabeth explained what had happened.

“And so I slapped him.” she finished. Matron raised her eyebrows.

“Slapped him?”

“On the face.” Elizabeth said. “I was angry.”

“I see. Yet if you don't mind me saying so, my girl, he's only following the rules. The headmaster would indeed crucify any of the prefects he caught getting involved with you. They are, after all, supposed to set a good example to the rest of the school. Maynard is right, he could be expelled and at this stage in your careers, neither of you can afford to be thrown out of – in your case another – school.”

“He wouldn't though!” Elizabeth protested. “He said that, I know, because if he hadn't then half of the upper school would have been – well – trying things, but I'm sure he wouldn't throw out Charles. Or me for that matter.” Matron stayed silent. “He wouldn't, would he?” Elizabeth asked.

“If it became common knowledge that someone had broken his rules, then he would have no choice.” Matron sipped her tea. “He can't afford to make exceptions. So yes, I think in the right circumstances he would. However, if the two of you managed to be suitably discreet, then I think – very firmly off the record – that you're right and you could get away with it. Of course, what Maynard Major would have to say about it is a whole different kettle of fish.”

“So what do I do now, though?” Elizabeth asked. “Like I said, he hates me now! I slapped him! He'll never speak to me again!”

“Now don't start crying again!” Matron warned, as Elizabeth showed signs of exactly that. “I'm sure he doesn't hate you. Believe me, I've seen you together – the boy is crazy about you, Elizabeth. Just be nice to him. He's a seventeen year old boy – in fact, is he even seventeen yet?” Elizabeth shook her head. “OK, so he's sixteen. He spends term time at a school full of boys, and although I believe he has sisters, a girl he's not related to is probably a fairly new experience for him. Especially who knows so definitely what she wants.”

“So what do I do?” Elizabeth repeated. Matron sighed.

“Give the boy some space.” she advised. “Move to a different desk in the form-room, if there's a spare, spend your free time with your other friends, and leave the rest of the quartet to sort him out. Montgomery has his head screwed on the right way, you leave Maynard to him and the other two. It won't take them long to get to the bottom of things, though it's probably best if you try not to give them too much information either. Let him tell them himself.”

“Monty will tell him he's an idiot.” Elizabeth said, smiling weakly.

“Well then, let Monty tell him that. Sooner or later, things will sort themselves out, you'll see. And when they do, you can let him know that as long as you are discreet and keep things a secret, I think your father and the Head will turn a blind eye. Now, go and have an early night. I'm here if you need me – as is your father's spare key.” She produced it from a drawer and let Elizabeth back into her own rooms.

“Thank you, Matron.” Elizabeth said.

“I think if you're going to being problems like this to me, you'd better make it Aunt Anne outside of school time.” Matron smiled. “Anyway, being called Matron all the time makes me feel old.” Elizabeth smiled back.

“Goodnight, Aunt Anne.”

“Goodnight Elizabeth.”

Author:  Elle [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:39 pm ]
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I like this Matron! Even if she didn't offer Elizabeth a G & T.

Thanks.

Author:  cestina [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:41 pm ]
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The reason we are all still reading Eilidh is that this is totally and completely delightful! And from our comments you can see how involved we are with the characters........it's the highlight of my reading day :D

Thank you so much.....

Author:  Abi [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:55 pm ]
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Some excellent advice from Matron there! Thanks Eilidh - I love this story. :D

Author:  gwynne [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:07 pm ]
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of course we're still reading - it's fantastic!

Author:  DuncanD [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:30 pm ]
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I second that!

Author:  Rafaella [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:54 pm ]
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Still reading??? I cheer every time there's an update!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 1:17 am ]
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I love the drabble and am really, really happy to see a weekedn update. Glad Matron helped Elizabteh see sense

Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:55 am ]
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Still reading. Heck yeah, I check for updates several times a day!

Author:  janetbrown23 [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:07 am ]
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I wouldn't miss this one for the world Eilidh.

Author:  keren [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:59 am ]
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I do not have time to comment, but also like this very much

Author:  di [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 10:04 am ]
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Me also. I get so wrapped up in the story I sometimes have difficulty in remembering that it is a story and not real life! :)

Some sound advice from Matron, she is a sweetie and rather a change from the matrons at the CS. She's quite right; give Chas some time and space and he'll come round.

By the way, I liked the comment 'We thought so' from Matron - just who are we? I reckon the whole staff know exactly what is happening between the two and quietly endorse it - as long as they are discreet, as Matron said. You can imagine the headlines if it became public knowledge, especially during the times this is set; and just what Joey and Jack would make of it doesn't bare thinking about! :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh, keep the updates coming! :)

Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 1:38 pm ]
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Thank you for a very pleasant surprise, a weekend update. As I turned on the computer I thought which drabbles will have been updated and behold an unexpected one that I really enjoy.

This matron certainly knows the boys and who will be best at providing help for Charles, and who should be the last to know. Though at least Charles has a weapon in his armoury that matron knows nothing about to deal with Steve.

Quote:
Of course, what Maynard Major would have to say about it is a whole different kettle of fish.”

Author:  marni [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 1:51 pm ]
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Like the others writing here I'm really enjoying reading this - long may it continue! Thanks

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:13 pm ]
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I'm another who may not post after each new episode, but I'm really enjoying this, Eilidh! And thank you for the weekend update - it was a lovely suprise.

Matron's advice is absolutely spot on, and I hope that Elizabeth can see the wisdom of it. I loved the 'We thought so' comment - clearly the powers that be, and probably all the members of the staff room, too, can see exactly what's happening and will continue to turn a blind eye so long as Elizabeth and Charles continue to be discreet. And we, as readers, too, have to remember that that need for discretion fits so well with the mores of the times in which this story is set!

Thanks, Eilidh - I will be looking forward to the next instalment. :)

Author:  Elbee [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:32 pm ]
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Definitely still reading, this is one of my favourites! I'm hoping you will follow the lives of Mike, Felix and the Ks too as they progress through the school!

Thanks, Eilidh

Author:  Minim [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:14 pm ]
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ChubbyMonkey wrote:
Myth Tree wrote:
I also think Joey was being quite fair. Erica was so wound up she needed a break.
*Creeps into cupboard to hide*


Chocolate biscuit? We might as well make the most of exile!


*Remembers to bring hobnobs, Penguins, Echoes, Kitkats, Twixes, and a whole load of chocolate, mainly Hotel Chocolat*

I'm... reading... *Tries not to mention that I've spent at least 3 hours reading this, and still is devoted*

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:35 pm ]
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Something tells me that she'd get on well with Matey! *absently bats plot bunnies in your direction*

And, yes, certainly still reading! I absolutely love this drabble, thankyou so much for it.

Author:  JS [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 9:51 am ]
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Hmm, so why does Matron have Mr Braithwaite's spare key....
Glad that she was there for Elizabeth.
Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:01 pm ]
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Elbee wrote:
I'm hoping you will follow the lives of Mike, Felix and the Ks too as they progress through the school!

:shock: :shock:

The alarm clock rang loudly, and Elizabeth reached out and hit it, hard, before turning over again. What seemed like only a few seconds later, her father banged on her bedroom door.

"Elizabeth! I'm going now! Are you up?"

"Yes." she replied sleepily. Slowly, she sat up and rubbed her face. Her eyes felt swollen, and it was only a few seconds before the night before came rushing back to her, making her wish she could just curl up under the bedclothes for the rest of the term. "Well, you can't, so stop being such a wimp and get up." she said out loud. She was almost ready to leave by the time the rising bell rang for the boys, and as she made her way down to the front door the latest risers were spilling out of their rooms in various states of readiness. Just as she reached the door there was a clatter behind her, and a textbook skidded to a halt at her feet.

"Morning, Harry." she said, without turning round.

"Oh come on, Elizabeth, that's not fair!" Harrington retrieved the book and feel into step beside her. "That could have been anyone."

"It wasn't though, it was you. You doing some work before breakfast?"

"Thinking about it. I'll walk over with you anyway."

The formroom was deserted when they got there and Elizabeth, to Harrington's bewilderment, started by opening her desk and moving all her belongings to an empty one at the back of the room. This task completed, she settled herself at her new desk and opened a book.

The next person to come in was Mr. Hopkins, who looked sharply at her.

"You appear to be in the wrong desk, Miss Braithwaite!"

"Yes Sir." Elizabeth agreed. "I have more room to work here, Sir, if you don't mind." It wasn't technically a lie, she thought to herself - she did have more room. He nodded to her and went to his own desk, where he got to work on some marking. Elizabeth resumed her seat, and her revision, and silence reigned for the next twenty minutes.

When the rest of the boys came in, there were many curious glances in her direction, but Elizabeth ignored them all. She joined the back of the line as they filed in to morning assembly, ignoring Charles entirely - although she had noticed that he looked tired and like he hadn't slept well. Feeling some degree of satisfaction from this, Elizabeth ignored all attempts from her classmates to catch her eye and paid strict attention to the Head for the duration of the assembly.

Not wishing to be caught by any of them and questioned, she abandoned her habit of chatting with them at breaktime and slipped away to talk to Kitty. She had her lunch with that young lady as well, and then by special permission from the Head, the two girls sat in the sun in the staff garden and caught up with each other's news.

Elizabeth avoided the form room during prep time, choosing instead to work in her room, and slipped down later to do her piano practice when she thought the music rooms would be deserted. She had barely sat down on the piano stool, however, when the door opened and three people came in.

"Right, lovely Elizabeth." Monty said, leaning on the piano. "We want to know what on Earth is going on."

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:20 pm ]
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Thank you, Monty, is nothing if not blunt.

Author:  dackel [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:24 pm ]
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Thanks, Eilidh - I do love this drabble.

The interaction between the figures is just spot-on!
Quote:
"Morning, Harry." she said, without turning round.

Just had to laugh at that!

Hope Elizabeth and Charles manage to sort themselves out.

Author:  cestina [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 2:06 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
Elbee wrote:
I'm hoping you will follow the lives of Mike, Felix and the Ks too as they progress through the school!

:shock: :shock:

Echoes Elbee. In fact I'm thinking of setting up a chant for as many parts as New Dreams :D


Eilidh wrote:
"Right, lovely Elizabeth." Monty said, leaning on the piano. "We want to know what on Earth is going on."

Can't decide whether I love Monty more than Charles or vice versa :?

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:46 pm ]
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cestina wrote:
Echoes Elbee. In fact I'm thinking of setting up a chant for as many parts as New Dreams :D


Certainly! I'll join that chant :D

Thankyou! :lol: Can't wait to see them, hopefully, knock some sense into the pair of them.

Author:  Myth Tree [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:34 pm ]
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Can see Chas as desperate to not be expelled, after all he wouldn't want to be sent to a strict Catholic seminary to begin training.

Love the interaction between them and hope Monty will drum some snse into them- even if they have to hold back a little till they both feel safe.

Author:  Sarah_G-G [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:20 pm ]
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Heh. Go Monty! Also, Elizabeth's methods may be effective but if they don't want the staff to know what's going on, I'm not sure that pointedly avoiding everyone is the way to go. It's a better option that just avoiding Charles, I suppose, but it is going to scream out that something's not right.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:48 pm ]
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Thanks, really hope Monty is able to get Elizabeth to see sense. Am also going to join in the chant for lots and lots more.

(You don't have anything else better to do with your life other than to write this do you? :D :wink: )

Author:  Abi [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:04 pm ]
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:lol: Good for Monty! Hope he and the others can sort those two out...

Author:  jmc [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:40 am ]
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Wonder if she will tell Monty the truth. Thanks

Author:  di [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:48 am ]
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Ha, ha. caught by the trio! So much for trying to avoid everyone today. Now Elizabeth is cornered and hopefully by talking to the three [if she does!] she will maybe learn more about Chas and what makes him tick.

I wasn't too happy that she found it satisfying that Chas looked as if he hadn't slept but I have to remember that she, also, is still young and unsure of her way in, what is possibly, her first meaningful relationship.

Looking forward to hearing how the trio tackle her.

Thanks, Eilidh. Also joining the chant for many more episodes of this drabble. :lol:

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 12:57 pm ]
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Thank you for the comments!

"Why don't you ask Minor?" Elizabeth asked, turning towards the piano.

"Because he's sulking and won't talk to us." Miller replied. "Or rather, he won't answer any questions. Other than that he's talking to us normally, until someone mentions you, at which point he clams up like a..." he paused

"Clam." Jones finished.

"I was looking for something a bit more imaginative!"

"Well you can find it once Elizabeth's answered the question. We're not here for you to be imaginative." Miller subsided, and Elizabeth, having had a few seconds to think, asked

"So why do you think I know what's going on?"

"You moved to a new desk."

"You haven't spoken to any of us all day."

"And you slapped him." Monty finished cheerfully. "What?" he said in response to the glares from the other two. "She did, there's no point in pretending we didn't notice!"

"He deserved it." Elizabeth gave up all pretence at piano practice and spun around to face them all. "He said things and I lost my temper."

"He probably did." Miller said, nodding. "But the thing is, you're not going to stay not talking to each other, are you? It makes things very awkward if you're not."

"He doesn't want me to make things up, he made that clear last night." Elizabeth replied, turning back round on the stool so she didn't have to look at them. "I should think he's prefectly happy to be rid of me, so please don't worry about me. I'm sure things will go back to how they used to be for you four soon."

"He said things?" Monty asked. "What things?"

"He said I was going to get him expelled, he said I was only interested in childish nonsense, he said he was far too busy to be bothered with me. And now I really need to get my practice done." The boys took the hint and left, deciding they had enough information to make a start on Charles. Elizabeth heard the door close, then put her head down on the piano and burst into tears again, deciding that leaving Charles to come to his senses on his own was far too difficult. After a few seconds, footsteps came back along the corridor and halted outside the door. Elizabeth didn't notice until the door opened again, and someone's hands pulled her to her feet and hugged her.

"Come on, he's not worth this, surely?" Monty asked in an unusually gentle voice. Elizabeth shrugged. "Really, Lizzie, he's not - believe me, he's my best friend, I know he's not worth it. It'll work itself out." he produced a still folded handkerchief from the pocket of his blazer, and handed it to her to wipe her face.

"What are you doing back here anyway?" she asked, calming down slightly.

"You looked like my sister does when she's about to run off somewhere and burst into tears." Monty said, slightly awkwardly. "I thought I'd come and make sure you were ok." Elizabeth smiled slightly.

"I didn't even know you had a sister." Thankful that she seemed to have stopped crying, Monty nodded.

"She's fourteen. Her name's Isobel - well, Izzy, normally. She's too much like me to be an Isobel, that's a name for people who know how to behave themselves. Are you ok?"

"I think so."

"I meant what I said. He's not worth getting upset over, and it really will all be fine. I'll make sure it is. I've known him since he was seven, remember - I doubt there are many people here know him better."

"Maynie." Elizabeth said.

"OK, but other than Maynie." Monty hugged her again. "Come on, I'll take you back to the boarding house, will I?"

"Not until you've given me one of your fabulous excuses for breaking at least six school rules into pieces, Mr Montgomery." said the Head's voice behind him. "I'm sure this one will be remarkably good, and I'm very much looking forward to hearing it."

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:40 pm ]
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Thanks looking forward to hearing Monty's excuse. Hope the Head shows his understanding can help them both and Charles.

Author:  Abi [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:19 pm ]
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Aww, isn't Monty a sweetie? So glad he was there to help Elizabeth. Hopefully the Head will be understanding, though...

Author:  shazwales [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:29 pm ]
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Than you,really enjoying this.

Author:  Myth Tree [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:47 pm ]
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The Head has always been very understanding before so I'm sure he will be again.
Thank-you.

Author:  Joanne [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:11 pm ]
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Oh dear, was he still hugging her when the head came in?

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:30 pm ]
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Really hope everything goes okay for Monty and he doesn't get into trouble. I really want to shake Elizabeth. Does she really not get how serious being expelled is or does she just think it's all a joke?

Author:  Sugar [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:51 pm ]
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oh crumbs! I nhope the Head isn't going to boil Monty alive! Or expel them!

Author:  Elle [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:55 pm ]
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Joanne wrote:
Oh dear, was he still hugging her when the head came in?


I think he was...

Eilidh wrote:

"OK, but other than Maynie." Monty hugged her again. "Come on, I'll take you back to the boarding house, will I?"



Thanks for the great update.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 7:12 pm ]
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Arrrgh, I sense cliffage!

Author:  di [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 9:38 am ]
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Ooops! I hope this doesn't count as improper behaviour towards Elizabeth else it'll be Monty on his way to expulsion. Surely the Head will be sensitive to the fact that Elizabeth has been crying and accept Monty's explanations without too much delving. :(

Monty is a sweetheart, isn't he! There aren't many lads of his age who will deliberately return to comfort a girl who is crying - they're too worried that they won't know what to do. :lol: As he explains though, having a sister gives him some insight to the workings of the female mind!

If Elizabeth could listen to herself she might realise how selfish she sounds -Chas is perfectly right- they could both get expelled if they're caught on their own, he has got a lot of revision to do [as Elizabeth has also] and she can also be manipulative as she's shown in the past. I suppose he could have been a little more sensitive towards her and admit that he does like her but -hey- he's only16 and a boy to boot. It's his first experience and he probably just doesn't have the words to explain himself.

To return to my original point, I do hope the Head acts with compassion towards Monty and Elizabeth; he seems to be a reasonable man who understands the youngsters in his care.

Thanks, Eilidh. I know you won't keep us hanging on this cliff for too long - will you?!? :cry:

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:57 pm ]
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Monty released Elizabeth immediately and spun around on the spot.

"Well Sir, I'd like to start by contesting the fact that I'm breaking six school rules at the moment. I'm counting, and I can only reach four. Once we've established the number accuratley, then I'll start coming up with excuses."

"You would, would you? Well then, we will count them. Stay there, Miss Braithwaite, I want a word with you as well. Now, Montgomery. What time is it?"

"Ten minutes past nine, Sir, assuming you are referring to the time here at this moment and not the time in say, Hong Kong or New York."

"I am referring to the time in this room, yes. It is ten past nine. And where are the places you are allowed to be at this time?"

"My room, the prefects room, or the common room Sir. Only not the common room because I think I'm still officially banned from there due to the disturbance two terms ago that wasn't actually my fault at all, really, it was..."

"We are not here about things that happened two terms ago, Montgomery."

"No Sir."

"So there we have one broken rule. Next, are you a music student?"

"No Sir."

"And this is the music department?"

"Yes Sir, it is normally, except when it's being used for something else like dressing rooms for plays or for isolation punishments and things like that. Which admittedly it isn't at the moment, but maybe we could also say that I am not a music student at the moment and then I'd be allowed here, if I was sometimes learning music and this was sometimes the music department?" Elizabeth could have sworn that the Head's face flickered slightly.

"That makes two. Now unless my eyes are playing tricks on me, you don't appear to be wearing your school tie."

"No Sir. It's in my pocket though, Sir."

"The rule does not say that a student must have his tie about his person, it is understood that you are supposed to have the article in question around your neck. Three. Next, and most seriously, will you deny that when I reached this room, you were embracing Miss Braithwaite?"

"Comforting, Sir. Not embracing. If I was embracing her, Sir, I'd have far bigger problems to worry about than you, with all due respect Sir." The Head seemed to ignore this comment. Monty turned slightly and winked at Elizabeth with the eye the Head couldn't see. Elizabeth, biting the insides of her lips to stop herself laughing, was fairly sure the Head knew he'd done it anyway.

"Did you, or did you not, have your arms around her? This does not need a discussion, Montgomery, yes or no will suffice."

"Yes Sir."

"And have you forgotten the discussion I had with you all at the beginning of the year?"

"No Sir."

"And that gives us four. Next, how do you think I knew you were here, Montgomery?"

"No idea Sir. Did you use your crystal ball? Or was it your spies who told you?"

"Kindly stop talking nonsense at me, Montgomery. You have left a trail of mud from the front door."

"So number five is that I haven't changed my shoes, Sir?"

"Quite so. Well done. And number six, well, on all available evidence, I very much doubt that you are in possession of a handkerchief."

"I did - I mean - I had - No, Sir."

"I'm sure if we put our minds to it we could find some more, but lets not try to make any more trouble. We will continue this discussion in my office. Go and wait for me there, and try not to leave any more mud on the carpet, if you can. Mrs Mac will be less than impressed as it is." Monty disappeared, and the Head turned to Elizabeth.

"Is there a problem, Miss Braithwaite?"

"No Sir." she replied quietly. "That is, there is - well there was - well there is a bit, but Monty - I mean, Montgomery - is fixing it." she finally got to the end the sentence and the Head smiled. "He didn't do anything wrong, Sir, really. I was upset and he was just trying to help."

"I see. Well, I'll have a word with him, and for you I prescribe a good novel and a large mug of cocoa."

"Yes Sir." Elizabeth said, smiling.

Monty had found time to put his school tie on in the short walk to the study, and it was a very proper looking young man who took his place in front of the Head's desk a few minutes later. The Head sat back in his chair.

"Speak."

"I was carrying out my duties as a prefect, Sir." Monty said quietly and seriously. "I was helping an upset student in the manner I thought was best."

"Not the manner you would have used to deal with any other pupil."

"No Sir, but Miss Braithwaite is a... unique pupil and I felt the situation needed unique handling." The Head laughed quietly.

"Sit down, Montgomery, and listen to me. I will say this only once, and at any other time I will deny all knowledge of this conversation, do you understand me?" Monty frowned.

"Umm... not at the moment Sir."

"This morning, I had a short conversation with Matron. I have a fair idea what this is about, and I commend you for your ever present willingness to help your friends get into as much trouble as they can. While the ban on becoming - involved, shall we say - with Miss Braithwaite is exactly that, I do not want to have to expel anyone. I am aware that the ban will probably be ignored. Despite popular belief, I am not stupid. I have no intention at all of doing anything to either Maynard or Miss Braithwaite as long as I get no complaints from parents, other pupils or some of the more... traditioinal members of staff. I cannot ignore something which is brought right under my nose, but I can be remarkably blind to other things. Do you understand?" Monty grinned.

"Yes, Sir. I'll make sure he knows that."

"Good. Now, a punishment for the catalogue of rules you were breaking." Monty's face fell, and the Head looked thoughtful for a few minutes. "I know. Sort this mess out. I can't afford to have a form and school prefect sulking around in corners over a girl, and that should give you enough to be getting on with."

"If I can do that Sir, you should make me Head Boy next year. I'll do what I can though." The Head laughed.

"We'll see. Now, go back to what you should be doing. Good night, Montgomery."

"Good night Sir!"

Author:  Chris [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:08 pm ]
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That was brilliant - really amusing. What a sensitive and clever young man!

Author:  Chatelaine [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:09 pm ]
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I wouldn't have thought it possible before now, but I think I love the Headmaster and Monty even more than I love Charles!

Thanks Eilidh - glad the cliff was only a few feet high :D

Author:  gwynne [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:28 pm ]
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oh! that as wonderful! I love both Monty and the Headmaster!

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:29 pm ]
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Thank heaven for a Headmaster with a sensible world view and the compassion to handle this situation with tact, sensitivity, and yes, a healthy dose of humour, too. I'm glad to see that despite his ominous warnings at the start of term he is prepared to turn a blind eye to certain things. The exchanges between Monty and himself, both in front of Elizabeth and later, in his study, were a real day brightener.

Thanks, Eilidh, I'm really enjoying this, even though I don't get chance comment very often.

Author:  di [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:44 pm ]
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Brilliant, just brilliant!. What more can I say!
I love Monty's responses to the Head's initial questions - he must know and trust him so well to even consider responding in the way he does and the Head must be one in a million to allow him to answer in such a cheeky manner.
Good for the Head - let the punishment fit the crime - he gives Monty carte blanche to fix things between Elizabeth and Chas and lets him know that so long as he isn't confronted with complaints about the two he isn't going to expel any one.
Thanks, Eilidh, I just loved this post.

Author:  Sugar [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 2:57 pm ]
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One word - Fantastic.... and I love Monty !

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 3:47 pm ]
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Good to see both Monty and the Head coming up trumps. Well done to all. The head's recommendation/punishment of Elizabeth (a novel and a cup of Cocoa) was inspired as well.

No wonder Mike wanted to return to the school with a head like that in charge.

Author:  shesings [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:23 pm ]
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Magic!!!!!! :D :D :D :D

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:29 pm ]
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I really, really like the Head and Monty. Thanks

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:32 pm ]
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:lol: Oh, that was so brilliant! I just hope that things can be sorted out (and I've still got half an eye on the two Ks, as well, as indeed I hope the prefects have!) Thankyou!

Author:  c8bt [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:40 pm ]
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di wrote:
Brilliant, just brilliant!. What more can I say!
I love Monty's responses to the Head's initial questions - he must know and trust him so well to even consider responding in the way he does and the Head must be one in a million to allow him to answer in such a cheeky manner.


I strongly suspect that it was because the only witness was Elizabeth that either of them felt able to act that way; it just couldn't be done in front of younger pupils for example (imagine how the Ks would feel they could act if they saw one of the prefects being so cheeky to the Head :shock: )

Eilidh; this has really brightened my day, and brought a smile to my face when I was otherwise feeling quite down, so thank you so much!

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:18 pm ]
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What an absolutely fabulous pair of conversations between the Head and Monty - wonderful! :lol:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Elle [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:32 pm ]
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I think I would pick Monty over Chas, after all if you picked Chas that would mean Joey and Jack as parents-in-law!

Author:  Abi [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:51 pm ]
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Haha! I think I love the Head!

And Monty!

Thanks, Eilidh. :D

Author:  Joanne [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 8:14 pm ]
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Thank you Eilidh, you resolved that beautifully! It's a rare headmaster who would put up with that level of cheek from a student, but we have already seen that he is just that.

Author:  jmc [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:15 am ]
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Think I'll join the queue of people loving this Head. He's shown here how much he really cares for his students. Monty was great too. Thanks

Author:  alicat [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:03 pm ]
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I do wonder if Miss Annersley would have seen a similar situation in quite the same light :roll: :roll: :roll:

I feel Monty has a career at the Bar ahead of him......

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:58 pm ]
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alicat wrote:
I feel Monty has a career at the Bar ahead of him......


Interesting idea! I hadn't even thought of that for him. Hmm...


By the time Monty got back to the boarding house, Miller and Jones had succeeded in extracting the whole story from Charles. Miller repeated it for Monty's benefit, and that young man, deciding a different tactic was required from that which they'd taken with Elizabeth, adopted a disbeliving expression and glared at his friend.

"For someone who is supposed to be so clever, I have never met anyone who is so lacking in the slightest hint of any form of sense! You are a complete and utter first class through-and-through gold-starred idiot! Is your brain so full of science and maths and Latin that you've forgotten everything else, or were you just going off your head? I'm amazed you've even lasted this long, if you're as thick as you're behaving!"

"And quite apart from that - though I do agree that your stupidity in saying what you did surpasses anything we've ever seen from you before, even the time you thought it would be a good idea to sneak into the staff cloakroom and swap all their gowns around the night before speech day - you can't really think the Head is going to expel you?" Miller said, interrupting what looked like a long speech from Monty. "You're practically his star pupil!"

"If he was going to expel any of us, he'd have done it long before now." Jones agreed. "Last year, for example, when we broke into Helston's study, or the time we disconnected the bell so that it took them nearly the whole afternoon to round everyone up and then as soon as they got it fixed you disconnected it again, or when you and Miller went to war with the prefects for giving you detention for nothing and ended up spending the whole term there - that's the times you should have been thrown out, not for this!"

"Aside from which," said Monty, in the manner of someone about to drop a bombshell, "he's just told me he's not going to expel you anyway if he can help it - which means not unless someone comes to him and complains about you. And he says I've to get you to stop moping around because it doesn't look good in a prefect."

"But the Head said..." Charles began. He was interrupted by groans and frustrated exclamaitions from the other three.

"Minor. Listen to me." Monty leant forward. "He had to say that. He had to say it to scare the living daylights out of people like Timmons, and Kettering, and whoever their equivalents are in the Upper VI. You know what they're like! Do you really want someone like Timmons deciding that for some reason he can do what he wants to Elizabeth? It's not about you, or anyone else reasonable for that matter!"

"How did you come to be having a heart to heart with the Head about Minor and Elizabeth anyway?" Miller asked curiously.

"Because he knew I was the best person to sort it all out." Monty replied. "Now, I just need to figure out how to."

"It doesn't matter." Charles said. "It really doesn't. We got on fine for years before she showed up and started causing problems, we'll get on fine again. I'm not going grovelling to her. Everything I said was right anyway."

"Even the bit where you said you weren't interested in her?" Miller asked innocently. Charles flushed.

"That's nothing to do with it." he muttered. "Talk about something else, would you? We've accepted that you all think I'm an idiot, now if you can all stop rubbing my face in it I'd be delighted!"

Despite Monty's best efforts, Charles stubbornly refused to be distracted from his work by anything, and threw himself into his books at every possible opportunity. This state of affairs continued for the next few weeks, through half term and on towards exam week. On the day before the exams were due to start, the Head had organised a series of excusions for all the school - partly as a celebration of their 'Founder's Day' and partly to give the exam candidates a break. On the Friday before, he announced them in Assembly, causing the younger boys to cheer and the older ones to look at each other with despair at the loss of a full day's cramming. To add further dismay, he also encouraged them to leave their books aside for the weekend and enjoy themselves.

"You've all been working non-stop since Easter." he pointed out to the combined sixth forms after Assembly. "Most of you have exams starting on Tuesday, leave your books in your desks and have the weekend off. I promise you, you'll all do fine if you've worked, and if you haven't, it's far too late to start now." Most of them took him at his word, though there were several complaints as desks were closed.

"Tennis, Minor?" Miller asked. Charles, still sitting at his desk, shook his head.

"I just want to read over this last chapter." he replied. "I'll join you later." Several of the boys exchanged glances.

"At least take it outside, Minor." Monty said. "Get some air and things. You look like a ghost."

"I'm fine." Charles said stubbornly. "The sooner you lot let me get on with this, the sooner I'll be done."

Elizabeth, with one last glance at her own pile of textbooks, put them away and joined Lewis, Miller and Jones for the tennis match while Monty umpired. Afterwards, and after a picnic style lunch that they all helped themselves to from the dining room, Elizabeth wandered around the kitchen garden and out towards the woods. She was halfway down the path that led along the side of the playing fields when she heard a heartfelt groan, and jumped. She looked around nervously, and then heard a huge sigh. Following the noises through the trees, she came across Charles, sitting in a sunny glade in the trees, with a notebook on his knee and a textbook spread out beside him. He looked up as a twig cracked under her foot.

"Oh, it's you." he muttered.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:02 pm ]
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Aha, now maybe they can sort things out with each other.

Thanks Eilidh. :D

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:45 pm ]
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Quote:
"Adrienne, I appreciate that you are trying to work," Joey

"In addition," Hilda put in "You are not supposed to be working. You are more than prepared enough for this exam and the holidays are supposed to be a break from work. You still look tired, and if you come back to school looking like that then Matron will have you in the san to catch up on the rest you should be having now."

"I'm sorry." Adrienne said. Joey nodded to her.



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"You've all been working non-stop since Easter." he pointed out to the combined sixth forms after Assembly. "Most of you have exams starting on Tuesday, leave your books in your desks and have the weekend off. I promise you, you'll all do fine if you've worked, and if you haven't, it's far too late to start now."


As Charles heard both these remarks you would think he would have learnt. However he appears to happier acting as the idiot his friends have called him.

Hope he and Elizabeth can make it up now and that Elizabeth can succeed were others have failed and make him take a break.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:02 pm ]
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Something in me suspects that this could make it worse and not better. Oh dear!

Thankyou for the update :D

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:06 pm ]
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Thanks, I'm not going to guess, but am curious as to what will happen now

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:42 am ]
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My goodness this is so brilliant that I am struck for words.

Thanks!

Author:  di [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:15 am ]
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I do hope neither of them say things they will regret; this meeting could go either way. Chas may think Elizabeth is deliberately seeking him out and in his present frame of mind this will not go down well. She, on the other hand, has a very quick temper and will retaliate if he voices his thoughts, which I've no doubt he will. :screen:

Oh dear!

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the outcome of this meeting, Eilidh, and thank you for this post.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:47 pm ]
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Elizabeth, with one last glance at her own pile of textbooks, put them away and joined Lewis, Miller and Jones for the tennis match while Monty umpired. Afterwards, and after a picnic style lunch that they all helped themselves to from the dining room, Elizabeth wandered around the kitchen garden and out towards the woods. She was halfway down the path that led along the side of the playing fields when she heard a heartfelt groan, and jumped. She looked around nervously, and then heard a huge sigh. Following the noises through the trees, she came across Charles, sitting in a sunny glade in the trees, with a notebook on his knee and a textbook spread out beside him. He looked up as a twig cracked under her foot.

"Oh, it's you." he muttered. Elizabeth went and sat down beside him.

"Are you ok?" she asked. Charles was pale, and his eyes were red-rimmed and had deep shadows under them. Elizabeth tried to remember when the last time was that she'd seen him without a book in his hands, and felt a sudden stab of guilt that she hadn't spoken to him recently.

"I'm fine." he replied gruffly. The unexpected gentleness had dented the fragile selfcontrol that he had left, and he turned his face away.

"You don't look fine." Elizabeth replied. "When was the last time you had a break?"

"I don't need a break." Charles snapped. "I need to be left alone to learn this stuff. I have to get this scholarship, do you understand? I have to!"

"You're learning, are you?" Elizabeth asked. "OK then, if you're learning, lets see what you've learned." she leaned across him, and flicked the text book back a chapter, and then taking the notebook and pen out his hands she copied one of the problems out carefully and handed it back. "Solve that properly and I'll leave you alone." she ordered. Charles bent his head over the book. Elizabeth looked up and jumped slightly when she saw two figures watching her through the trees. It took her a second to recognise Stephen and Monty, but both of them nodded to her and withdrew quietly.

Charles stared at the book. The problem wasn't a hard one, he knew that. He remembered looking at them the day before. Or maybe it was today, he wasn't sure. The numbers jumped around on the page and he squeezed his eyes closed and then looked again. He knew how to do it. He just had to remember. Remembering seemed so hard. Elizabeth was a distraction. He had to get a grip on himself, really. This was important. If he solved this then she'd go away and let him work. She'd said so. If only his head would stop aching for two minutes so he could think. He knew how to do it. It just wouldn't come to him. She'd taken the textbook away. There was only a month to the exam. He could keep this up until then. There would be time to relax afterwards. What was he doing? Oh yes, Elizabeth's problem. He wished his thoughts would stop jumping around. He wished Elizabeth wasn't here. What was he supposed to do with this problem again? There was a rule, a law. They'd done it in class. Elizabeth was good at them.

"What is it?" Elizabeth asked, still in the same soft voice. Charles glanced up at her. "You said my name." she prompted. He looked confused. "You need a break." Elizabeth coaxed. "Come on. Give me the book." Slowly Charles handed it over.

"My head." he said. Nothing seemed to be making sense any more. Elizabeth was pulling him, trying to get him to stand up.

"Why don't we go up to your room?" Elizabeth suggested, keeping her voice soft. "Come on. Lie down for a few hours and you'll feel better." Charles allowed her to pull him to his feet and lead him back out the trees, where they met a rather ashamed looking Monty and Stephen, who sighed.

"Really, Chas. Do I need to get you a babysitter? You're nearly seventeen, you should know better than this!"

"I'm fine." Charles snapped, pulling his arm free of Elizabeth's. Stephen raised his eyebrows.

"Yes, you look it. Come on, to the San again. It's nearly a year since you've been in there, must be a record."

"I don't need to go to the San."

"Look, Chas, you've got two choices. Either you can walk up there yourself, or we go and find everyone else and get you carried up there. It's up to you." Charles didn't answer and Stephen shrugged. "Monty, run over to the games field and grab a couple of people would you? I know Baxter's over there, and some more of the prefects. Shouldn't take too many of us, I know he's taller but there's still not exactly a lot to him."

"I'll walk." Charles said, as Monty turned to go. "But if I fail because I haven't done enough work, you know what will happen." he glared at his brother, and Elizabeth and Monty exchanged confused looks. "And it'll be all your fault. I hope you'll feel guilty."

"If you fail, Chas, I'll feel as guilty as you want." Stephen replied. "Now come on."

"Maynie's worried." Monty said as they watched the two brothers walk back to the school. "It's never good when that happens."

"How do you know?"

"He called him Chas. He almos never calls him that - at least not in front of other people. Dunno what they do in private. Would be very strange to call your brother by his surname in private, don't you think?"

"You're worried as well." Elizabeth said shrewedly. "You're talking nonsense."

"Well, how long before someone says that I should've done something about it earlier? They don't realise that arguing with Minor is like taking on a brick wall. And if I'm asleep, how exactly am I supposed to stop him getting up at the crack of dawn to work? Tie him to the bed?"

"It's not your fault."

"No, I know that." Monty replied gloomily. "But I bet someone else thinks it is. Come on, I'd better get back and see what's happening."

"What did Matron say?" she asked Monty a few hours later.

"Overwork - exhaustion - let him sleep." he replied. "Matron said just to let him sleep until he wakes - she wasn't sure how long that would be, but that gives him from Friday afternoon to Monday morning. She asked how much sleep he'd been getting, I told her I wasn't sure. To be honest though, I don't think he's slept more than 3 or 4 hours a night for about the past month. He's been working constantly for this scholarship. She's taken him up to the San for the weekend, so he's out of the trip on Monday."

"OK. I'm not going on Monday anyway." Elizabeth replied. "Girl and all, you know? People will look at me like I've got two heads if I go out with you lot. I'll keep an eye on him if he wakes up, make sure he has the day off."

"Sure you will." Monty replied with a wink. "I assume the two of you are speaking again, anyway?" Elizabeth made a face at him, which he ably returned, and flounced off back up to the flat. Monty, laughing at her, went to join an impromptu game of cricket and peace reigned over the school.

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:19 pm ]
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Just caught up on a week's worth of updates! Thanks :-) I hope they sort this out and I hope he gets the scholarship...

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:04 pm ]
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Pleased they all ganged up on Charles and made him report to Matron. Thanks for the update.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:46 pm ]
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Thank goodness he's in good hands now - I just hope that he can listen to such good advice! Thankyou for the update.

Author:  Squirrel [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:11 pm ]
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Phew! *mops brow* I'm so glad that Charles is now being forced to take a break... That was some pressure he was putting himself under - and so obvious it was getting nowhere.

Thanks for all the updates I've just caught up with - still enjoying reading this, even if I'm only catching up in stages...

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:27 pm ]
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Poor Chas, do feel sorry for him. He needs/wants this scholarship so desperately. Elizabeth was really nice there

Author:  Abi [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:43 pm ]
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Poor Chas; I'm glad he was caught before he made himself really ill. Good old Elizabeth. :)

Author:  ghoti [ Sat Nov 13, 2010 8:21 am ]
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Just read through this and Changing Directions. I'm really worried about Charles now. Thankyou, I'm loving it.

Author:  jmc [ Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:36 pm ]
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Pleased they have made Chas rest as he would probably have blown the scholarship the way he was going. Thanks

Author:  AnneM [ Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:15 pm ]
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Sad, though, that both Steve and Chas feel the only way for Chas to get what he wants is by winning the scholarship, and that discussing things with their parents would be of no use.

Thanks, Eildih.

Author:  shazwales [ Sat Nov 13, 2010 6:01 pm ]
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This seems so real,thanks Eidih.

Author:  di [ Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:55 am ]
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I'm glad that Chas is safely tucked up in bed in the San where he'll be able to rest and have some space to 'sort his head out!' I presume Monty alerted Steve to his brother's exhaustion. He really is a loyal friend!

I wonder what Joey and Jack would make of the situation; their son is making himself ill, studying, to give himself ammunition to use when his mother tries to push him towards becoming a priest - her decision for her son's career!

It's so sad that he doesn't feel he can discuss this with her. Someone ought to let her know just how much he loathes the thought of this and the lengths he is going to in order to avoid it.

Thanks for the update, Eilidh; anyone care to wager how long Chas will sleep for? I reckon he'll be out until at least Sunday afternoon. :lol:

Author:  Lesley [ Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:24 am ]
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Perhaps the Matron or Headmaster needs to write to Joey and tell her that her son has made himself ill working for a scholarship - after all the reason he's done so is so that he will be able to follow his own dreams about his future rather than hers.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Alison H [ Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:50 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh - just caught up on this :D .

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:58 pm ]
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Charles has a really good group of friends - and I love Elizabeth.

Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:43 am ]
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Sigh. Another lovely update. SUch nice children

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:40 pm ]
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Sorry for the short update - the second half of this bit is proving to be a nightmare to write.

On the Monday morning, the school was full of people who all seemed to be shouting at the top of their lungs. The prep school had walked over after breakfast, and a fleet of busses were drawn up at the bottom of the steps. Elizabeth leaned on the bannister and watched the prefects gather on the stairs. Stephen said something that she didn't hear, and a few seconds later Baxter whistled loudly. Silence fell almost at once.

"That's better!" the games prefect said to the assembled boys. "Listen to Maynard." Stephen looked at the list in his hand.

"OK! The staff are already on the coaches and waiting for us, so you'll be looking for your own Form Master - or Mistress." he added with a glance at the excited eight and nine year olds at the bottom of the stairs. "First and Second forms, you're going with Whiting and Stevenson." The two prefects herded the youngest boys outside into the sunshine. "The two thirds are going with Miller and - wait a minute, Miller, are you taking them on your own? Minor isn't coming."

"Can I have Harry and Lewis?" Miller asked hopefully. Stephen nodded.

"Take them. OK, the two thirds are going with Miller, Harrington and Lewis. You treat Harrington and Lewis like you would the prefects, do you understand? Russell, Russell, Maynard and Davies - if I get one bad report about you four, you'll be sick of the sight of the detention room by the end of term. Third forms go, please."

"Lower and Upper Fourth, you've got Montgomery and Jones. Same thing applies to you lot with regard to the detention room. The two fifths are going with Jeff and Blake, and the rest of the sixths, with me and Baxter, will be on the last coach. Now lets get moving, or we'll have to come back before we get there."

The last of the boys left the building, some of them waving to her as the went, and Elizabeth was the only person left in the school buildings with the exception of Mrs Mac, Matron, Charles and the maids. Reports had floated out of the San over the course of the weekend that Charles was doing well, and that Matron fully expected him to be back to normal once he'd caught up on his sleep. After the last coach disappeared from the school drive full of excited boys, Elizabeth ran downstairs and curled up in the library, a book in her hands. She spent a few hours engrossed in the Adventures of Sherlock Holmes, which Miller had told her she had to read, citing his authority as librarian and his horror that she admitted to never having read it. Eventually, the doings of the fictional detective lost interest for her and she went hunting for Mrs Mac, with the aim of securing a picnic lunch.

She finally ran that woman to earth outside the San, and made her request, which the housekeeper happily agreed to. Elizabeth ran back to her room to change into more suitable clothes, unknowingly leaving Charles awake behind her in the San. Charles himself sat up and looked around, just as Matron appeared from a side room.

"Hello Matron." he grinned. "Back in my favourite place, I see. Am I ill, or did I do something stupid that I can't remember?"

"A bit of both." Matron said sharply. "Scholarships, indeed. Plain over working, I call it. Now, if you're awake, you can get up, but I don't want you looking at a single book today, do you understand?" Charles nodded, being unable to say anything else while Matron took his temperature.

"Yes Matron. Why is it so quiet?"

"There's no one here - it's Monday and they're all away on trips."

"Monday? How did it get to Monday?"

"In the usual fashion. Now, as you don't seem to have suffered any ill effects, which is a miracle in itself - what are you going to do with yourself today?" Charles, remembering the conversation he'd overheard as he woke up, had a suggestion.

"How about you arrange with cook to give me a picnic and I go for a walk? You can even check the picnic basket to make sure I haven't hidden any books in it."

"That sounds like a far better plan than any you've had recently." Matron replied. "It might put some colour back in your cheeks. I know you're normally pale, but you really have surpassed yourself this time." Charles rolled out of bed and consulted the nearest mirror.

"I do look a bit ghostly, don't I?" he grinned. "I'll get dressed then, since you're going to let me out. Have I got clothes in here?" Matron nodded.

"You'll find your things in the drawer. Montgomery was here with them yesterday. He left a message for you as well. It was 'Stop being an idiot'. He said you'd know what he meant."

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:44 pm ]
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Glad that Charles is on the mend.

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:58 pm ]
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Gosh forty eight hours sleep! He must need fresh air now. Love Monty's message to Charles.
Steve's warning to the thirds and fourths was good as well. Hope Felix and Davis at least manage to behave themselves.
Thanks.

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:28 pm ]
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Loved Stephen's comments to the various groups as he assigned them to their buses and 'keepers' for the day. Like Pauline, I hope that at least Felix and Davis manage to keep out of trouble - have less hope that the Russell twins will manage to do the same. :(

Glad to see Charles is recovering - please allow his and Elizabeth's picnic paths to intersect so that he act on Montgomery's advice.

Thanks, Eilidh

Author:  di [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:32 pm ]
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Gosh, what a long sleep! Glad Chas is feeling more like himself -certainly he sounded fine, negotiating a picnic lunch as Elizabeth did. I hope he plans to catch up with her and sort things out.

Steve is showing himself to be an excellent Head Boy - he know the lads so well!! Loved his comments to the twins and their cohorts, including his younger brother,I hope they behave but............ :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Chatelaine [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:50 pm ]
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Lesley wrote:
Perhaps the Matron or Headmaster needs to write to Joey and tell her that her son has made himself ill working for a scholarship - after all the reason he's done so is so that he will be able to follow his own dreams about his future rather than hers.


Thanks Eilidh


Um. . . something tells me that if Joey and Jack got a letter like that, Joey would be straight on to Charles telling him to stop being so silly and that he didn't need a science scholarship to enter the seminary!

Thanks Eilidh - this is one of the drabbles I make a beeline for on a daily basis :)

Author:  Finn [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:59 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh

Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:48 pm ]
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Thank you. Am I the only one hoping Elizabeth will be joining him? :-)

Author:  ivohenry [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 5:40 pm ]
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Just what I was hoping too!

Author:  Squirrel [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:00 pm ]
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*laughs* I love that ending Eilidh! That whole scene with Matron was just brilliant fun. OK, so what's the chances of Charles bumping into Elizabeth accidentally-on-purpose?

Also loved Stephen's manner as he split the forms up amongst the prefects.

Thank you - hope that the rest of it starts to come more easily now.

Author:  ghoti [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 8:10 pm ]
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I was half expecting Matron to suggest it, but I guess that's too much to hope for.

Author:  Pat [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 9:02 pm ]
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PaulineS wrote:
Gosh forty eight hours sleep! He must need fresh air now.


I'd have thought he needed to go somewhere else first! And far more urgently!!!!

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 9:19 pm ]
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Actually unless they had catheterised him or got him out of bed at regular intervals I would expect a very wet bed! I wondered if Eilidh was taking an EBD approach and not mentioning toilet breaks on purpose! I to wondered about use of the toilet, but remembered that you can give a person the opportunity to go to the toilet when they are sleeping as deeply as Charles was and they do not remember it later. I suspect he would need a bath or a shower as well before he went out.

Author:  Abi [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:27 pm ]
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Hope Elizabeth and Chas have a good time... :D

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:11 pm ]
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PaulineS wrote:
Actually unless they had catheterised him or got him out of bed at regular intervals I would expect a very wet bed! I wondered if Eilidh was taking an EBD approach and not mentioning toilet breaks on purpose! I to wondered about use of the toilet, but remembered that you can give a person the opportunity to go to the toilet when they are sleeping as deeply as Charles was and they do not remember it later. I suspect he would need a bath or a shower as well before he went out.


Shall we just assume? :lol:

Thanks for all the comments anyway, they have cheered me up tonight. More story tomorrow!

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:20 pm ]
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I wish that subject hadn't been mentioned :lol: :lol: - now I'm wondering exactly how people went on every time they were in those long dose-induced sleeps :roll: .

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:17 am ]
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Me too Alison. And everybody knows no-one in chalet school land ever needs the loo!

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 12:48 pm ]
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"It's the sea, it's the sea!" one of the Lower Third yelled. The cry was taken up by half the coach, while the other half immediately began debating what to do first.

"Well spotted." Miller replied. "Sit down, please." They sat, and with barely constrained impatience waited until the big coach had stopped and the arrangements for the day were given out. The staff took all of the Upper Third, and a selection of the Lower to the shops and pier first, to fulfil requests for ice creams, chocolate, and other items. Most of the Lower Third elected to go straight to the beach, and all three sixth formers decided to accompany them.

"To supervise, of course." Harry said cheerfully, removing his socks and shoes and stuffing them into his bag. The other two followed his example, Miller keeping one eye on the Third Formers who were already out of theirs and standing impatiently around them.

"Of course." he agreed. "OK you lot, you are allowed to paddle, but anyone who gets wet has to stay like that until we go back to school, so don't. You can explore the beach, but don't try to climb anything and don't kill yourselves. Come back when you hear the whistle or you won't get any lunch." he shouted after them as they all sprinted off, then turned to the other two "Come on, I'm sure we can supervise much better from beside the water. Leave your things where the kids have dropped theirs."

"We've done well for prefects today." Kevin remarked, as he and his faithful satellites splashed at the edge of the water. "Only one, really, and he's not even a very prefecty one."

"What are you talking about?" Felix demanded, jumping backwards away from a larger-than-average wave.

"The fact that we've only got Miller supervising." Kevin repeated. "The other two aren't prefects, they don't really count."

"Maynard said they did." Davies pointed out.

"Maynard's not here." Kevin replied.

"What are you thinking?" his brother asked.

"Nothing yet." Kevin grinned wickedly. "But you never know when there might be an idea that means less prefects are good."

"Less prefects are always good." Kester corrected. "But I know what you mean. D'you think we can get permission to go and get shrimping nets for the rock pools?"

"We can go and ask." Felix said. The four of them ran over to the older boys, and Kester made his request.

"Didn't you hear Mr Browning asking who wanted to go to the shops while we were on the coach?" Miller demanded.

"Well we didn't think of it then." Davies explained. "We only thought of it once we got down here. Please?" he added.

"I'll take them." Lewis said.

"Are you sure?"

"Yes. I'll bring us back ice creams, unless you think ten in the morning is too early for ice cream? Go and put your shoes back on, you four."

"Watch them like a hawk." Miller advised. Lewis nodded.

"Will do."

***

After lunch, the staff members took the majority of the boys on a boat trip, while the three older boys remained on the beach with those who didn't want to go. Kester's wish for shrimping nets having been granted, the four boys were poking around in a rock pool further down the beach. Several others were enjoying themselves at the edge of the water, and near the sixth formers, a few others were erecting a magnificent sand castle. As they got close to the time to return to school and the tide began to come in, the seniors began to round up the boys.

"Lewis is coming along." Felix said.

"Don't hear him." Kevin said quickly. "There's something interesting down here I want to look at." Obediently, the other three bent their heads lower as Lewis' voice floated across to them. "Has he gone?" Kevin asked.

"Yes." Davies said, risking a look. "He's going back to the rest. We've got a bit more time."

"And that's why he's not a prefect." Kevin said with satisfaction. "A prefect would have stayed to check we were coming." Felix had an uncomfortable idea that this wasn't how it was supposed to work.

"Steve said he counted as one." he pointed out. "And Chas has already got me out of one enormous row at home this year."

"Are you going or staying?" Kester asked, slightly impatiently.

"Staying."

"Well then, stop fussing."

"Miller." Harry said doubtfully.

"Hmm?" Miller looked up from where he was trying to sort out a large pile of shoes into pairs.

"We're missing some." Miller looked around and sighed.

"I should've known." he said. "Where are they? Gone for ice cream?"

"They're still out there." one of the other third formers said, pointing. Miller looked. They were indeed still there, crouching on a ring of rocks around a deep pool. Worse, there was now water all around them, and it was still coming in fast.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 12:53 pm ]
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O dear. I suspect they are going to be both danger and trouble!
Thanks for the update.

Author:  Finn [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:14 pm ]
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oh no, disaster! come back soon and save those boys!
thanks

Author:  Chatelaine [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:15 pm ]
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Drown the Russell twins, pretty please? :twisted:

I must commend Miller's policy of giving praise where it's due:

Quote:
"It's the sea, it's the sea!" one of the Lower Third yelled. The cry was taken up by half the coach, while the other half immediately began debating what to do first.

"Well spotted." Miller replied.


:D

Author:  dackel [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:17 pm ]
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Trust them!

I hope Charles and Elizabeth are getting on better - they, at least, will presumably be in no danger of drowning...

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:34 pm ]
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Indeed, drowning them might be a good idea! Thanks :-)

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 4:40 pm ]
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Oh dear :lol: . Sounds like fun, though - we never got to go to the seaside on school trips!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:41 pm ]
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But have they realised yet or are they unaware of the danger?

Thanks for the update!

Author:  Sarah_G-G [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:46 pm ]
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Chatelaine wrote:
Drown the Russell twins, pretty please? :twisted:

I must commend Miller's policy of giving praise where it's due:

Quote:
"It's the sea, it's the sea!" one of the Lower Third yelled. The cry was taken up by half the coach, while the other half immediately began debating what to do first.

"Well spotted." Miller replied.


:D


I laughed at that bit too!

Poor little Felix having a vague feeling that something's off but not quite able to put his finger on what. :wink: Thanks Eilidh!

*thinks quietly that Eilidh writes a much more believable near-disaster than EBD* :oops:

Author:  Abi [ Tue Nov 16, 2010 8:11 pm ]
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Ah, leave the little devils to drown... :wink:

Author:  JS [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:30 am ]
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So will they be rescued by a passing female GP??

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  di [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 10:43 am ]
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Whatever happens to the little terrors I hope it's severe enough to give them all the biggest shock of their lives without totally endangering themselves or those who will, no doubt, have to go to their rescue.

I feel quite sorry for Felix; he obviously is feeling uncomfortable at disobeying the prefects but K and K seem to have such a strong hold over their friends and Felix isn't able to stand up for himself.

I'm not sure that I like Madge's twins- they seem thoroughly spoilt and used to getting their own way without any thought of consequences. I hope they get their comeuppance this time.

What news of Chas and Elizabeth? I hope they're enjoying their picnic and talking through the difficulties.

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:59 pm ]
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This post... aargh, I hate this post. I have written it, and re-written it, and written it again, and written it when I was concentrating entirely on it, and sneaked up on it and written it while I was thinking about something else. I am now at the point where I am changing things just for the sake of changing them, so I am going to post it, and then shut my eyes and hope that it works.

After dressing, and consuming an enormous breakfast, Charles headed down towards the kitchen and collected his lunch from a maid who looked at him as though he was an insect that she'd like to squash. Charles had a sudden brainwave.

"Are you Kittie?" he asked.

"No, I'm Katherine. Only people I like get to call me Kittie."

"Don't you like me?"

"No."

"Why not?" Kittie gave him a withering glance.

"Why do you think?" she demanded. Charles decided not to follow this argument, tempting though it was.

"I only want to know where Elizabeth went. Please?" Kittie continued to wash dishes, seemingly oblivious to him. "Oh, come on!" Charles said. She glared at him.

"Up the hill behind the prep school, and over the top." she said sharply. "And if she finds out I told you, she'll kill me. And if Mrs Mac catches me talking to you, she'll kill me before Elizabeth gets a chance, so get out!"

"Thank you." Charles said gratefully. He left, and set out across the playing fields towards the prep school, whistling cheerfully.

Elizabeth reached the top of the hill and stopped for a second to admire the view and catch her breath. That done, she crossed the flat top of the hill, and jumped down a short drop on the other side, landing at the top of a long, smooth grassy slope. This was a favourite place with many of the young people in the surrounding area - with the top of the hill sheltering it from the wind, it was summer warm in spring and autumn, and on a hot May morning, Elizabeth felt like she'd just got into a warm bath. She lay flat out on the grass in the sunshine, enjoying the chance to relax, and was almost asleep when a shadow fell across her and a well known voice asked

"Can I join you?" Elizabeth rolled over on to her stomach and looked up at him.

"I can't stop you."

"No, you can't." Charles agreed, jumping down and sitting beside her. "I think it's lunchtime, don't you?"

"How did you find me?" Elizabeth asked.

"Coincidence." Charles said quickly. Elizabeth glared at him.

"Too quick. I'm going to kill Kittie."

"It wasn't her fault!" Charles protested. Elizabeth made a disbelieving face.

"Are you feeling better?" she asked, with a sudden change of subject.

"Much, thank you." Charles said, "And I suppose I should thank you. I don't remember much of Friday, but I do remember having the worst headache I've ever experienced. And then you turned up and then I really don't remember much after that."

"I only got there minutes before your brother and Monty." Elizabeth said. "I think if I hadn't taken the books off you and taken you back to school, they would have. Why are you working like this, anyway? The scholarship isn't worth your health." There was no answer. "Sorry, shouldn't I have asked?" She looked across at Charles, who was staring into the distance and biting his lip nervously. "Sorry." she said again. "Don't tell me if you don't want to. Have some lunch instead."

"Because if I don't win this then my parents pay for my training." Charles explained. "And they want me to - well, this is ridiculous, but they want me to be a priest." Elizabeth stared at him in disbelief for a few seconds before she began to giggle. Charles looked annoyed. "It's not funny!" he protested.

"You were the one who said it was ridiculous. And it is." Elizabeth replied. "I can't think of anything you're less suited to, and I'm only your friend. And a fairly new friend at that. Don't your parents know you at all?" Charles looked unhappy.

"I'd rather not talk about my family." he told her. "They're really not worth conversation. And what do you mean, you're only my friend? Haven't you been aiming to be more than that for long enough?" Elizabeth blushed.

"Well, you're not interested so I rather gave up." she admitted. A rather awkward silence fell.

"I am sorry, you know." Charles said suddenly, a few minutes later. "For what I said before half term." Elizabeth became very interested in the daisies in the grass beside her.

"So am I." she said. "I've behaved very badly."

"So did I, so shall we call it quits?" Charles suggested hopefully. "It would cheer Monty up anyway if we did, I think he thinks it's his job to get us talking to each other again. He hasn't been off my back about it in weeks."

"Well, if it's going to cheer Monty up, we're almost obliged to, aren't we?" Elizabeth smiled. Charles wriggled over to sit beside her and put his arm round her shoulders.

"You can see the school." he pointed out, waving his hand in the direction of the grey buildings far below them.

"Just as well the school can't see us." Elizabeth replied, resting her head on his shoulder. "I'm sure this would be forbidden."

"It's only forbidden if we get caught." Charles said thoughtfully.

"So I heard from Matron."

"And Monty got it from the Head."

Charles looked at her for a few seconds. They were sitting very close together now, and he could feel her heart beating fast. Shaking with nerves, he pulled her closer to him and kissed her. After a few seconds, he pulled away from her again.

"You have no idea how long I've wanted to do that." he said distractedly. Elizabeth smiled, looking unusually shy.

"Do it again, then?" she suggested. Charles laughed.

"Good idea."

Author:  Chris [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 1:08 pm ]
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Aaah! At last.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:03 pm ]
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Hooray!

Author:  Chatelaine [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:36 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
This post... aargh, I hate this post.


You only hate it because you didn't drown the Russell twins in it. . . :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

ETA: thank you for sorting things out between Charles and Elizabeth, though, and please don't kill Kittie!

Author:  cal562301 [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:47 pm ]
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Wonderful post. Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 3:22 pm ]
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AHH well worth waiting for. It was a caring and understanding post. Charles and Elizabeth were both natural and told their own story, which might not have been the one you first thought of, but was what they needed to do.
Thank you.

Author:  cestina [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 4:44 pm ]
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Oh lovely, thank you so much :D

Author:  Elbee [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:01 pm ]
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Nothing wrong with that post - in fact it's very right!

Thank you, Eilidh.

Author:  Joanne [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:11 pm ]
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That was a lovely post Eilidh, it got them together beautifully.

thanks.

Author:  Squirrel [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:18 pm ]
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I enjoyed that Eilidh, and the post before it as well. Completely different atmospheres of course, but both just right for what they were doing.

Thank you. :)

Author:  janetbrown23 [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 6:16 pm ]
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That was just right Eilidh thank you for sorting them out so well. Now to drown the Russell twins but not Felix please.

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:06 pm ]
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I'm si pleased they got everything sorted out! Hopefully now with Elizabeth's support Charles will calm down a little about his work.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:47 pm ]
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Thankyou, that was a beautiful post - but could we go back to the beach, please?

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:16 pm ]
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That post was perfect! Thanks. This is my favourite drabble at the moment by the way :-)

Author:  Abi [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:48 pm ]
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Hurrah!

Author:  Elle [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:58 pm ]
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Is it wrong that I am a little jealous that a fictional character has just snogged another fictional character that it appears I have little crush on?* Lucky Elizabeth.


Thanks for the updates, am loving this.


*Nb: This is not the first time I have had a crush on a fictional character, Rupert Campbell-Black, Richard Sharpe, John of Gaunt (as written by Anya Seton)... The list is endless...

Author:  Bryony [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:08 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh, I've been following this avidly but realised I'd not yet posted my appreciation :oops: . Glad they've finally got their act together!

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:14 pm ]
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And not before time, too!!! Given the Head's 'blessing, so long as they aren't too public about it' and Monty's urging, this ending of the impasse between Charles and Elizabeth is most welcome. :) And to look ahead a little, I suspect that the enforced weekend's rest, together with this reunion, will do far more to ensure that Charles will do well in his scholarship exam than another few days' cramming would have done.

Now if only someone can get those twins to mend their ways before they kill either themselves or someone else.....

Thanks, Eilidh, I'm continuing to enjoy this.

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 10:17 pm ]
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You haven't drowned the twins yet...

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 7:36 am ]
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Glad they've both sorted it out with each other

Author:  chattie [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 8:37 am ]
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Elle wrote:
*Nb: This is not the first time I have had a crush on a fictional character, Rupert Campbell-Black, Richard Sharpe, John of Gaunt (as written by Anya Seton)... The list is endless...


You can't have Anya Seton's John of Gaunt because he's been mine since I first read "Katherine" by candlelight during the Winter of Discontent!

Author:  di [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 10:40 am ]
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Perfect! At last. :lol: Now perhaps they can get on with learning more about what makes each of them tick! :)

If you're going to drown K and K please don't let anyone else go down with them!

Thanks, Eilidh. A fantastic post.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:51 pm ]
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The water was deep already, and the waves were strong enough that certainly the smaller boys, and probably the twins as well, would be knocked off their feet. With a horrible mental picture of the Head having to explain to parents that their children had drowned on a school trip, Miller sat back down and pulled off his shoes and socks again. Beside him, Harrington was doing the same.

"What are you doing?" Miller asked. "You don't need to come with me."

"You can't go yourself." Harry pointed out reasonably. "There's four of them. This lot can stay with Lewis. They'll behave well enough if they know what's good for them."

"They'd better." Miller glared round at them all as he pulled off his blazer. "Because if one of them puts so much as a toe out of line before I get back, they'll be in so much trouble they'll be wishing for Head's reports." The third formers stared at him, scared. Miller had a reputation as the easiest going of all the prefects, but now he looked so angry that they were all very thankful they weren't among the group who hadn't come back in.

Together, the two boys ran down to the edge of the water and glanced at each other.

"This is going to be cold." Harry said grimly, as they waded out into the sea.

Meanwhile, slightly further out, Felix sat back on his heels and looked around.

"Umm... Kev?" he said. His cousin looked over.

"What?" he asked. Felix silently pointed around them at the water. "Oh." Kevin said.

"We'll need to wade." Kester said promptly. "It can't be that deep, can it?"

"It's at least waist deep on us." Kevin guessed, looking over the edge of the rock. "Deeper for the other two. Oh look!" he added, as he caught sight of the two prefects. "It'll be fine now. Miller won't be too angry. He never is."

"I wouldn't be too sure of that." Davies said nervously. A wave broke over the top of the rock, soaking them all.

"Should we try and get to them?" Kester asked, looking down into the water.

"Don't move." the words floated across the water.

"That'll be no, then." Kester said. "It's getting deep."

Both of the sixth formers were now in water above their knees, and despite the face that they'd rolled their trouser legs up before they started, were facing the prospect of a wet journey home. By the time they reached the stranded third formers, they were both very annoyed, as well as being wet almost to their waists.

"Didn't you hear Lewis shouting?" Miller demanded. There was no response, and he didn't wait for one. "Maynard, come here." he turned his back on them, and took Felix, as the smallest of the group, on his back. Harrington followed his example with Davies. The twins, who were taller, jumped off the rock and into the water, which came well above their waists.

"Move." Harrington said grimly, putting a hand on Kevin's shoulder. By the time they reached the beach, the staff had returned and the rest of the group were waiting on the coach. Miller, shivering as he pulled his blazer back on, glared at all four of them.

"Directly after breakfast tomorrow, you see me in the prefects room." he said grimly. "Don't argue, Russell, and don't open your mouth to say anything else either. I'll hear it tomorrow morning." Silenced, the four younger boys filed past the staff, who had heard the full story from Lewis and fully intended to deal with the culprits themselves once the prefects were finished.

***

The bus got back to the school at the same time as the one with the Fourth Form on it.

"How were your lot?" Monty shouted to Lewis, as they jumped down. "Ours were wingless angels, we've had a great..." He tailed off as Harrington and Miller, both still soaked, got out of the bus as well. Miller held up a hand.

"Don't." he said firmly, as both Monty and Jones opened their mouths at the same time. "Just don't. I'm going for a bath."

***

"So that was that." Miller sounded rather muffled from under the towel with which he was scrubbing his hair dry. "Back to school in almost total silence, and the staff as angry with them as I am. I saw Maynie as well, and he wants a meeting tonight to decide what we're doing with them before we see them tomorrow."

"Well, it could have been worse." Monty said. "It you'd had Minor with you, like you should have, he'd be looking at three weeks in the san with pneumonia or something now. At least you and Harry seem to be unaffected, save for having to have a bath in the middle of the day." They all waited for the reaction from Charles, which didn't come. He was leaning against the wall, staring dreamily out the window.

"He's not even listening, is he?" Jones said. "Hey! Minor!"

"What?"

"Are you listening?"

"No. Did you ask me something?"

"Monty's just trying to make you rise." Miller explained, emerging from the towel and running his fingers through his hair.

"Is he?"

"Minor, what is wrong with you?" Monty demanded impatiently. "What were you doing today?" he asked suspiciously. Charles dragged himself back to the present.

"Nothing. I'm fine." he replied. "Sorry, I was just thinking."

"You don't look fine." Monty replied. "You look like someone's hit you over the head with something."

"Maybe it was Elizabeth." Jones suggested. "She was around today, wasn't she?" Charles silently cursed his fair skin as Miller looked at him closely.

"Is he going red?" Miller demanded.

"He is!" Monty confirmed, souding delighted. "You did it, didn't you? When we were all out the way!"

"Ha!" Jones jumped up beaming as Charles nodded, and held out his hand. "I believe, gentlemen, that you both owe me money!" This shook Charles out of his silence.

"You had a bet on?" he demanded, outraged, as both Miller and Monty rummaged through their pockets with sighs and groans.

"Oh come on, Minor, of course we had a bet on!"

"But on me?"

"If the positions had been reversed...?" Jones asked. Charles gave up and laughed.

"If the positions had been reversed, I'd have won. Now, haven't we got a prefects meeting to get to?"

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 1:11 pm ]
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So you didn't drown the twins :-( oh well. Thanks for the update :-)

Author:  dackel [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 1:30 pm ]
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Brilliant - I do love those boys! And finally Charles and Elizabeth have got themselves sorted out. Now those twins just need sqashing terribly hard...

Thanks, Eilidh - this is my lunch-time treat every day!

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:06 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh. The four boys are not going to know what hit them! Matron about wet clothes, a prefects meeting and the staff following. Glad I am not in their shoes.

Kevin is about to get a shock I think, believing Miller does not get angry.
Davis and Felix are more aware of the senior boys.

Author:  Jennie [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:47 pm ]
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I always knew that Jem's policy of instant obedience would turn out badly.

Author:  shesings [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:35 pm ]
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He may not have enforced it with the twins as much as he did with the older siblings - often the way with the youngest of a biggish family! I hope they get a really hard time and begin to learn a bit of sense.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:40 pm ]
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More realistic than a doctor just happening to be passing :lol: .

Author:  Chatelaine [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:16 pm ]
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roversgirl wrote:
So you didn't drown the twins :-( oh well. Thanks for the update :-)


Never mind, roversgirl, I'm sure if we start chanting quietly the idea will lodge itself subliminally in Eilidh's mind and she'll eventually kill them off just to shut us up :twisted:

I am so looking forward to the prefects' meeting!

Loving this, as usual :D

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:40 pm ]
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Really can't wait to see what you come up with for them - and the fallen faces when they realise they haven't won the bet at all! Thankyou :D

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:27 am ]
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Darn they didn't drown.


They must be witches!

Author:  di [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:34 am ]
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....or wizards! Can you have male witches, Miss Di? :?:

Hmmm, the four third formers were very lucky; had they been at Morecombe Bay I wouldn't have held out much hope for their rescue. I hope they all get their just desserts from the prefects and the staff and that K and K get extra for being the instigators - although Davies and Felix both have minds of their own and knew very well they should have responded when called.

Chas and Elizabeth seem to have sorted themselves out if Chas's dreamlike behaviour is anything to go by- I just hope they remain sensible and don't bring themselves to the attention of the staff or boys lower down the school.

I hope their exams go well and that enough science work has been revised to enable Chas to win the scholarship. If he does I want to be a fly on the wall when Joey finds out her plans for him to enter a seminary are well and truly scuppered. How the fireworks will fly. :lol: :lol:

Author:  Abi [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:24 pm ]
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Love Charles' outrage at them having had a bet on him and Elizabeth. :D

Thanks Eilidh, that was great! Hope they manage to properly subdue K&K, though.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:03 pm ]
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Busy to the point of headless-chicken mode today, so what we have here is half an update. The other half might appear tonight, over the weekend, or on Monday. This just keeps getting longer and longer...

The four third formers filed in and stood in the middle of the floor. Miller closed the door firmly behind them and sat on the edge of the table. To their surprise, the only other prefect in the room was Stephen, who was sitting behind them and didn't appear to be at all interested in what was going on. For a few minutes, Miller stared at them all with a slightly amused look, and the younger boys began to relax. If he was smiling, and going to deal with this alone, surely they couldn't be in much trouble? Felix, who had been expecting to face both his older brothers along with the rest of the prefects, felt hopeful.

"Well." Miller said coldly. "You managed to almost drown yourselves, cause considerable inconvenience to myself and Harrington, and spoil the end of yesterday's trip for everyone else. I will warn you now, I have no patience with any of you, and anything that sounds even remotely like cheek, this goes out of my hands and straight to your Head. It's your choice. Now, lets start at the beginning. Why didn't you come in when you were called?"

"We didn't hear him." Kevin said tentatively.

"Do not lie to me!" Miller shouted, in a voice that would have done Baxter proud. The younger boys all jumped. "Maynard!"

"Yes?"

"Did you hear Lewis yesterday?" Felix glanced helplessly at his cousins. Kevin looked mutinous.

"Don't pick on Maynard, it wasn't his fault." Kester said suddenly. Miller had a sudden memory of standing in the same spot several years earlier. "Don't blame Miller, Brown, it wasn't anything to do with him." Kester was still speaking. "Yes, we heard him. We didn't come in because there was something we were looking at in the pool. We didn't realise the water was so close. Maynard and Davies weren't happy - Maynard told us to move, but we didn't."

"Lewis didn't stay to make sure we moved, either." Kevin added.

"No, that's true." Miller said quietly, and something that looked like relief flared of Kevin's face. "He presumed that boys of your age and form would be able to follow instructions without someone standing over them to make sure they did it. Obviously he over-estimated your abilities there!" The hope was swiftly extinguished. "I would even go so far as to expect the first form to be able to come when instructed to by a prefect, yet such a simple task seems to be beyond you."

"Lewis isn't a prefect. I don't see why we should have to do what he tells us anyway."

"Russell, I warned you. Go and stand outside please." Kevin stared at him. "Did you not understand me, or is your ability to follow instructions even worse than I thought?" Miller asked. Kevin left, to find Monty in the passageway, leaning against the opposite wall. He showed no surprise when Kevin appeared.

"Stand there." he said, pointing.

"I didn't..."

"There's no need for you to talk." Monty interrupted, seemingly preoccupied with something on the sleeve of his blazer.

"But I..."

"Shh!"

"Now, perhaps we can get on." Miller said, as the door closed behind Kevin. "Is anyone else going to argue that you were told perfectly clearly yesterday morning to obey Lewis and Harrington as though they were prefects?" They all shook their heads. "Do any of you have anything else to say that is not unnecessary cheek, and that might save you from a trip to the Head's office with Russell?"

"We're sorry." Davies said. "We really didn't mean to cause such a problem - we just wanted to see what it was that Russell had spotted and then we would have come in. Like Kes said, we didn't see the water." Felix nodded in support of his friend.

"We are sorry Miller."

"You will apologise to Lewis and Harrington - to Lewis, for ignoring him, and to Harrington for the soaking he got coming to help you. I presume you've already seen your Matron?"

"Yes. She wasn't happy." Felix said.

"No, I don't imagine she was. You owe her an apology for the extra work as well, and also Matron here, who is equally unhappy. In addition, I'll tell whoever is on duty to expect you for detention every night next week. You may spend the time coming up with some very good reasons as to why you should do what you know is right, regardless of who is telling you otherwise. I'm on duty on Friday, I'll collect them then. Now go, both of you. Apologies done by the end of the day, please."

"Should I go too?" Kester asked nervously, as the door swung closed behind them and Miller sat down at the table and began writing something in a book.

"No." Stephen said, from behind him. Kester spun around to face his cousin, who he'd almost forgotten was there.

"There you go, that's those three written up." Miller said, handing over the book, no longer cold and angry but seeming fairly pleasant. "I'll take the other Russell down to the Prep school."

"We'll be down presently." Stephen told him as he went out. Miller nodded, and Kester heard him meet Kevin in the corridor and march him off. "Now." Stephen said.

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:18 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. Nice to see Miller getting to deal with them. Glad to see they said that Felix and Davies weren't as much to blame. I wonder what Stephen is planning for him? It doesn't seem pleasant...although definitely deserved!

Thanks :-)

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:30 pm ]
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Kevin wants a good smack - at least Kester admitted he was to blame and didn't try lying his way out of it.

Author:  Abi [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:48 pm ]
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Well, that should keep at least some of them on the straight and narrow for a while at least! :shock: And hopefully the Head and Stephen will deal faithfully with Kevin and Kester.

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:39 pm ]
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Pleased they have split the twins, if they can keep them apart Felix might have the chance to realise it is not a good idea to follow them. Pleased Felix and Davis are seen as followers not leaders in the trouble.
Thanks for the update.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:35 pm ]
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Why would I really not want to be either of those two at the moment? (The old dilemma - the Head might be just a little better than Stephen! And Stephen can write home, i.e. to Madge and Jem, in this instance...) Hm, I think not!

Thankyou for the update, I really hope things calm down so you can come back soon!

Author:  ghoti [ Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:40 pm ]
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Ouch, Stephen's scary there! I can just picture his face...

Thankyou, and I hope things get a little less hectic soon.

Author:  di [ Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:50 am ]
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I wouldn't want to be in either Kester or Kevin's shoes right now. I'm not sure which is worse - facing Steve or the Head but I suspect neither would be particularly pleasant towards the twins. I do hope they are split up- it might give one of them a chance to redeem himself and it would be a wake up call for Felix who seems to think his cousins are the 'best thing since sliced bread!'

Thanks for the update Eilidh. I hope RL calms down for you.

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:58 pm ]
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So many good intentions... I bet you all knew this wouldn't appear until Monday! :lol:

There was a long pause, while Stephen regarded his cousin with a rather distant air. Kester looked back, then at his feet, and finally settled on looking past Stephen at the back wall, which was covered in things that the prefects had put up over the past year. Stephen was thinking hard. Originally, this had benn the point where he was supposed to squash Kester - and Kevin, though they had correctly predicted that Kevin would be unable to stop himself answering Miller back - so hard that neither twin was heard from for the rest of the term. That had been the idea, right up until Kester had stepped in and taken the blame to save Felix. And that, Stephen considered, put a whole different slant on things.

He was interrupted by Kester wobbling violently and almost falling over, due to attempting to stand on one leg while he was waiting. Stephen made his mind up suddenly and chose a completely different tactic. After all, they'd been shouting at the twins for months and he really didn't see the point in doing any more.

"Sit down, Kes, before you fall down." Kester, looking just as off balance as he had a second before at this approach, sat on the very edge of a chair opposite Stephen. Stephen thought hard for a few seconds. "Right, Kester - this is just about your last chance." he said thoughtfully. "You're lucky, I think. Kevin, because he can't keep his mouth shut and also, I suspect, for telling outright lies, gets to face the head. You just get me." Kester's face showed that he didn't really consider this to be a good thing. "You know, the problem with having you lot at school with me is that I have to do this whenever you do something wrong." Stephen continued. "People always say that you're harder on your own friends and relations, and maybe I am. I try not to be."

"David said he hoped you'd thrash us to within an inch of our lives if we put a toe out of line." Kester volunteered.

"Should I?"

"I'd rather you didn't."

"What about Kevin? Can you give me a good reason for not thrashing him?"

"He's my twin."

"That doesn't help with the decision. Or, for that matter, with me deciding what I'm going to do with you. You see, I'd give you the same punishment as Felix and young Davies, but I know that the next time Kevin comes up with one of these plans, you'll be right behind him."

"Well, he's my twin."

"Yes, I know that. Look, the chances are that the Head is about to send Kevin home for a week or two - and he's going to ask me if I think you should go too. I'm going to tell him no."

"But..."

"Look, Kes, he's your twin. He's not your brain. You can think for yourself and you know when things aren't right. You can probably do more than anyone towards getting you all out of the huge amounts of trouble you keep ending up in. If you don't support him, then he's far less likely to do any of it."

"But he's my twin." Kester repeated, frowning. "I have to support him. That's what we do!" Stephen sighed.

"This is getting nowhere. You can spend the next week in the San, as well as giving all the apologies that Miller told the other to to do. While you're there, try and do two things for me. Firstly, get some work done so that you can be in the form you're supposed to be in - after all, you are a year older than Felix. Secondly, try and get it out your head that because you and Kevin are twins, that you need to follow him blindly where ever he goes. Maybe sometimes he'll follow you - and maybe you can lead somewhere other than the detention room. The alternative, Kes, is that you both get taken away from here and sent to different schools, and you'll hardly see each other at all. I know Uncle Jem's thinking about it. Now go, give the apologies, and then report to your Matron and tell her you're in isolation for a week."

"Steve?"

"What?"

"Can't I get sent home too?"

"No, you can't! Or if you do, I'll make sure Kevin isn't! It's about time you learned to exist by yourself Kester Russell, and I'm going to make sure you do. Now go!"

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:08 pm ]
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Good for Steve. I am pleased he has realised that Kester is not thinking for himself and needs to start doing so. Splitting the twins for a week, with the threat of separate schools may help him decide it is his turn to lead.
Hope Felix and Davis start to think to for themselves as well.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:26 pm ]
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I agree on all points. Heopfully he'll work it out. Thanks :-)

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 2:40 pm ]
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Hope it all works out!

Author:  di [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 2:49 pm ]
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Separating the twins for a while is probably the only punishment that will have the desired effect on Kester. I'm not sure Kevin will gain much from being away from his twin but it seems that Kester needs Kevin to be with him.
Steve is also saving Kester from the wrath of Jem who may well decide to send Kevin to another school - possibly the best outcome for both of the twins.
I know this is only a story but I get so involved in it that it could almost be RL and I want the best for both boys! :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh. Do we get to hear what Jem has to say to his erring son on his arrival home?

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:44 pm ]
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That would probably be the one punishment that will make an impression; seperating the twins. Hope Kester is able to start standing up to Kevin

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 7:11 pm ]
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Oh yes, please do show us Jem when Kevin arrives at home! I hope that it works out for both of them, I bet if Kester let himself follow Felix instead they could have just as much fun without half the trouble.

Author:  Abi [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 9:25 pm ]
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Well done Stephen - that's likely to have a pretty drastic effect on both the twins.

Thanks Eilidh!

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Nov 22, 2010 9:31 pm ]
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Maybe it'll make Kester start to think for himself - he seems like the Ruth bit of the Connie and Ruth twins in Malory Towers - needs to get out of his twin's shadow.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:02 am ]
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They're as gashly as the abbey twins. Hope you can reform them!

Author:  claire [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 9:30 am ]
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So we can expect a string of accidents and broken bones in any new characters if they follow the Abbey twins, possibly burning down the school

Author:  Chatelaine [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:17 am ]
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Lesley wrote:
Maybe it'll make Kester start to think for himself - he seems like the Ruth bit of the Connie and Ruth twins in Malory Towers - needs to get out of his twin's shadow.


Thanks Eilidh


<Points to Lesley's head; points to own head. Repeats at a frantic pace.> Exactly what I was thinking, Lesley! And we know what happened to Connie the following year. . . :twisted:

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:53 pm ]
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I had completely forgotten Connie and Ruth! And (I think thankfully) I am not aquainted with the Abbey Twins. We are not going home with Kevin though, because this is now heading for the end of the year at long last.

Also, Mr Hopkins' shoes originally belonged to a retired maths teacher who invigilated most of my school exams. They, and the plan to deal with them, did exist. Oh, and I've pulled Charles' exam questions from the depths of my brain, please don't scrutinise them too closely!


Tick. Tock. Tick. Tock. The silence which wasn't quite silence was oppressive. The sun was streaming through the windows at the side of the hall, making it warm and adding to the feeling of pressure. Charles, wrestling with a complicated problem about angles and lengths, wondered what would happen if he stood up and screamed, just to break the monotony. He risked a glance to the side, and caught Aitken's eye. His classmate pulled a face which managed to convey exactly what he thought of scholarships, exams, and hot silent stuffy halls, all at once. Charles pulled one in return, and wondered why it was that they had to have exams at the hottest time of the year, and why his scholarship exam had to be the last one of all. At least - and here Charles grinned to himself - it was the 31st of May. He hoped the other three were busy with plans while he was in here slaving over this paper. He finished the calculation, drew a neat pair of lines under the answer, and turned the page.

Tick. Tock. Tick. Tock. High on the wall at the front of the room, the clock marched relentlessly on. It seemed to Charles, looking up at the end of every question, that someone was moving the hands forward whenever he looked away. Mr Hopkins, who was invigilating, was wearing shoes which clicked sharply on the wooden floor as he completed a circuit of the nine desks in the middle of the floor and returned to his seat at the front. There had been a suggestion a few years ago that all the examination candidates should donate a penny and with the collected pennies, they should buy Mr Hopkins a pair of slippers to wear in the exam hall. The loud click - click - click as he walked around the hall was well known. Charles smiled, wondering what would happen if anyone ever did carry out the plan, and bent back over his paper.

State the area under the graph described by the following equation.

Tick. Tock. Tick. Tock. With a sigh that almost blew the exam paper off the desk, Charles went to work. The clock continued to march on. He checked over the calculation, with a clear memory of the exam paper he'd once handed in which claimed that 1 + 1 = 1 and looked at the clock again. 20 minutes left. Mr Hopkins got up - click - click - click - click - down the hall and bent over one of the Upper Sixth. Click - click - click back up the hall.

"There is an error in question seventeen." he said, his voice sounding suddenly loud in the silent hall. "The hydroxide molecule in the equation should of course be marked with a negative charge. There are twenty minutes left."

Charles raised his eyebrows. Ferguson was going to have to get a move on if he was still on question seventeen. It was good to know that he'd been right about the mistake he'd spotted. The question hadn't made sense any other way. He turned over the last page.

Describe the chemical tests for the following, including any chemicals used and the expected positive result:

Charles grinned, remembering the rows of test tubes on the desk and Elizabeth methodically writing down the results of each one, only to discover afterwards that she'd written in his book and not her own. She'd made him copy the results into her book for her afterwards. He closed his eyes briefly and pictured the page, and then set to work.

"Five minutes left. Check over your answers if you're finished."

Charles flipped through the pages, skimming his answers. On one side of him, Aitken was still scribbling feverishly at whatever he was writing. On the other, one of the Upper Sixth was leaning back in his chair with his hands behind his head and his eyes closed.

"Your time is up, please stop writing and put down your pens. You are to remain in silence until your papers have been collected." Mr Hopkins moved between the desks, collecting each paper in turn. Once he had all nine in his hands, he gave the boys a rare smile. "End of exams for this year. Enjoy the rest of the term."

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:58 pm ]
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We used to have a male teacher who used to peer over your shoulder as he walked round the exam room, and everyone was convinced he was trying to look down girls' tops :roll: :lol: .

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:04 pm ]
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Nice update. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the results of exams. Thanks :-)

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:21 pm ]
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Thanks for the update.

Author:  Sarah [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:38 pm ]
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One of my teachers wore flip-flops for exam inviigilation!!!! :shock: :shock: :evil:

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:13 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
[color=#408000]We are not going home with Kevin though, because this is now heading for the end of the year at long last.


Oh, but - but - just one quick letter to Kester read to the rest? Please? (Or perhaps a quick spin off? :D)

Thankyou for the update, I do hope that Chas has done well enough!

Author:  Abi [ Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:34 pm ]
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Oh, exams. :bawling: Hope Charles gets his scholarship, though.

Author:  janetbrown23 [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:23 am ]
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I agree with Ariel...........a spin off would be great.

Author:  di [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:45 am ]
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Fingers crossed that Chas passes his exams, especially the scholarship one and with better than good marks.

Can't wait to see what the 4 of them have planned for what seems to be a traditional piece of mischief!

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:57 pm ]
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ChubbyMonkey wrote:
Or perhaps a quick spin off? :D

At the moment, I am writing Helena's wedding, the second half of this (which may or may not be a new drabble all on its own now), and I have the outline of a prequel which promises to be enormous. So much Maynard boys and not enough hours in the day! That said, I am tempted... maybe. :D

Elizabeth woke up suddenly, and rolled over to squint at the clock. It wasn't even midnight yet, and she sat up in confusion, wondering what had woken her. It only took her a few seconds to figure it out as the breeze brought a hint of laughter and the clink of glass to her ears. Scrambling on to her knees, she leant out the window and peered into the darkness. Once her eyes adjusted to the lack of light outside the circle thrown by the light over the front door, she made out two tiny red glows on the very edge of the school grounds - cigarettes, she decided. Straining her ears, she once again heard laughing and consumed by curiosity she got out of bed.

By the time she was dressed and making her way down through the house, it suddenly struck her that whoever was trespassing in the garden, she probably didn't want to tackle them alone. If it was some of the boys, her Sixth Form status wasn't enough for her to get them back to bed herself as they would just laugh at her, and if it was a stranger, there was no way she wanted to tackle them alone. She had a sudden brainwave and, still carrying her shoes, she tiptoed along the Lower Sixth corridor.

Hoping desperately that the door didn't squeak, Elizabeth looked into Charles' room first. His bed was empty, she could see that as soon as she opened the door. Puzzled, she opened it further and put her head round it. Monty's bed was empty too. With a sudden idea about what was going on, she crossed the corridor and opened the door to the room that Miller and Jones shared. This one did squeak, but it didn't cause a problem as their room was as empty as the last. Elizabeth grinned to herself and ran lightly downstairs, leaving the house by the kitchen door - already unlocked, she noticed - and set out towards the edge of the school grounds.

She kept to the darkest parts of the garden, though she was fairly sure that no one would be expecting to be caught. Looking back at the house, she saw that she was the only person likely to be disturbed by them - the rooms immediately below hers on the Upper Sixth floor weren't used, below that was the San - the Lower Sixth sleeping on the other side of the house, and on the lower two floors where the Upper Fourth and the Fifths slept, there were no windows on the ends of the house, all the rooms facing either forwards or backwards. As she got closer, she could make out Monty's deep, slow voice, and she could hear Miller laughing.

"So, as the clock is about to chime midnight," Monty announced, "I'd like to propose congratulations to Jones, who turned seventeen today, and Minor, who is about to turn seventeen in a few seconds."

"And here's to the fifth year in a row we've managed this without being caught!" Miller added gleefully. Elizabeth stepped out into the light.

"Do you think so, then?" she asked. All four boys jumped violently when she spoke and Elizabeth burst out laughing at the panic on their faces.

"Jesus, Lizzie!" characteristically, Monty was first to recover himself. "You scared the life out of us!"

"You deserve it. Smoking and drinking on school grounds." Elizabeth made a face. "If I was staff, you'd all be in so much trouble you'd have to swim. As it is, you're lucky. As long as I don't take offense at not bring invited and report you to the Head, you're probably safe." Miller handed her the bottle he was holding.

"It's lemonade." he grinned. Elizabeth sniffed it cautiously before tasting it and finding out that he was right. "One of the rules of breaking the rules is knowing which rules to break, dear Elizabeth. Being caught smoking - which, can I point out, Minor and I aren't - is bad enough. That's doubled by the fact that it's the middle of the night and we're out of bed. We're not actually out of bounds, though, if you notice? If we were, or we were drinking, that would be eight times the original amount of trouble. If we were both, we'd be in sixteen times the original amount of trouble and then we'd never find a way out."

"You lot have given this far too much thought." Elizabeth said. "I presume this is a tradition?"

"A long standing one, now in it's second last year." Jones told her. "And we will do it next year, even though one of us will almost certainly be Head Boy."

"Probably Monty." Charles said, helping himself to a cake from a box beside him.

"Probably Monty rubbish!" that young man replied himself. "It'll be one of you two. They'll want Jones for Games."

"We'll know in a week or so anyway, there's no point in discussing such a horrible subject just now." Miller pointed out. "Elizabeth, sit down if you're staying, and take a bottle. I believe we were in the middle of a toast?" Elizabeth sighed, and sat down.

"You lot are a bad influence on me." she said.

"Nonsense." Monty replied. "If anything, it's the other way around, I'm sure. Now, gentlemen and lady, please raise your glasses,"

"Bottles." corrected Charles. Monty glared at him.

"Bottles, to both birthdays and another successful midnight!"

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:01 pm ]
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Nowhere near as bad as I thought. How lovely! Thanks :-)

Author:  Bryony [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:03 pm ]
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Thank you!

Pleeeease don't let them get caught...

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:14 pm ]
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Their school sounds like much more fun than the CS :D .

Author:  di [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:12 pm ]
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Brilliant! I echo Bryony, You couldn't be cruel enough to get them caught, could you, Eilidh?
I love their logic of the severity of their actions - if they repeat their logic to the Head [if they get caught, which they won't -fingers crossed!] he'd be so confused he'd have to let them off for ingenuity. :lol:
Thanks Eilidh, that was great.

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:15 pm ]
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Love the idea of a traditional celebration which they intend to continue even of one of them is Head boy.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 5:07 pm ]
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Ah, but talking of knowing which rules to break, surely fraternising with the only, and forbidden, female in the school would make it at least thirty-two times the amount of trouble without the possible others - so let's hope that they don't get caught!

...And that you decide to do a spin-off :wink:

Thankyou for the update!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:40 pm ]
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Alison H wrote:
Their school sounds like much more fun than the CS :D .


And so much more relaxed. Somehow I could never see Len doing that

Author:  Abi [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:42 pm ]
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Great tradition! (Hope they don't get caught...)

Thank Eilidh - I love this story!

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:05 pm ]
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It is far more relaxed than the CS - and somehow even if they were caught I don't think the Headmaster would make a big deal of it.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Chatelaine [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:24 am ]
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Lesley wrote:
It is far more relaxed than the CS - and somehow even if they were caught I don't think the Headmaster would make a big deal of it.


Thanks Eilidh


Something tells me the Headmaster already knows about it. . . :D :D :D

Thanks Eilidh, really enjoying this!

Author:  Tawny [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:11 pm ]
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Loving Loving loving this drabble! More please.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:10 pm ]
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"Gentlemen! Could we please bring this meeting to order before we're here until midnight?" The staff slowly stopped talking and took their seats at the big table. The Head smiled cheerfully at them. "You all know the purpose of this, of course. I'm looking for suggestions for the Head Boy and prefects for next year. We are keeping at least three of our current Lower VI prefects, so we'll start with them. Any objections to keeping on our current prefects? Hopkins?" The Lower VI form master shook his head slowly.

"I never thought I'd say it about these four, but keep them all. I'm a big enough man to admit when I make a mistake, and you were right to appoint them. You say only three, though? Which one is leaving?"

"I have a letter here from Montgomery's father. He tells me - in confidence, mind - he's not sure that they will be able to afford to keep him here next year. They have had a lot of bad investments, and he's talking about selling their house. There's a younger girl as well, as some of you may know, and they have to think of both children. Montgomery has been here for nine years, and he'll be eighteen in October. His father says that if at all possible they will manage the fees, but he's not hopeful."

"Does he know?"

"He didn't when his father wrote to me. I imagine they'll tell him before the end of term." The staff all looked serious.

"Can't we do anything?" Mr Braithwaite asked, leaning forward. "Isn't there a way we could keep him?"

"Not that I can think of." the Head said sadly. "Still, we may as well look on the bright side, it is only a 'may'. And back to business - one of these four has to be our Head Boy."

"Not Jones please." Mr Johnston, the games master, put in. "Maynard Minor has done a good job this year, of course, but Jones is a far better coach and a better all-rounder. He's been helping out these past few weeks and I'd like him for Games next year. Anyway, if Montgomery is possibly leaving, you'll need to make the other two Head Boy and Second Prefect."

"The school in the hands of Maynard Minor and Miller." someone groaned from further down the table. "God help us."

"They are still joint top of the 'most detentions ever awarded' list." one of the prep school masters grinned. "And I have horrible flashbacks to them every time I teach the Russell twins. The twins even have the same colouring as those two did."

"Ah come, they've settled down tremendously these last few years, and grown up considerably even since last summer." the Head smiled. "But Johnston is right - it's just a case of deciding which way round they go."

"Miller for Head Boy." put in the English master from the seat to the Head's left. "He's by far the brightest child we have in the school."

"Nonsense!" Mr Hopkins thundered from the Head's right hand side. "You only say that because he takes your subjects. Maynard is a scientist, so you don't know him, and he has been a wonderful Form Prefect this year - he'd be a far better option."

"Gentlemen!" the Head said. "If we are all agreed on Jones as Games prefect, then the decision between the other two can be taken later - by me, who teaches both of them. We do not need to turn this into an arts v. sciences debate. Now, we need to appoint another two prefects from next years Upper VI. It's not going to be a big class as many of them are leaving, so if anyone has any suggestions from the names on this list, lets have them. Harris?"

"Lewis and Harrington, if I'm judging on performance from my own classes." the English master said, with a glance at Mr Hopkins. That man tapped his pencil on the sheet thoughtfully.

"On performance?"

"Please."

"Well, for me, Aitken - and one person who is not on this list."

"Who?"

"Elizabeth Braithwaite."

"Elizabeth?" her father looked thunderstruck. Mr Hopkins nodded firmly.

"She's clever, she's got influence over the boys - the majority of them either want to impress her, so do what she tells them, or are so wrong footed by being given order by a girl that they do it first and think abuot it afterwards - she can organise, and I think she'd be good at it."

"In case you've forgotten, Hopkins, this is a boys school. Elizabeth is a girl, and is only here due to the most unfortunate of circumstances." Mr Harris put in. "You can't posibly have a girl as a prefect here."

"We have female staff." Mr Braithwaite pointed out in defence of his daughter.

"That's a completely different situation." the English master argued. The Head sat back and listened. The argument raged round the table. No more names were mentioned, and positives and negatives were argued for all those who had been put forward. Eventually, he cleared his throat.

"So, if I may summarise. Apart from the fairly big problem that she's a girl, and the fact that she's only been here for a year, Elizabeth Braithwaite is a good choice, according to you lot. Harrington's history is against him, but on the positive side no one has seen him spend much time with Timmons since before Christmas and he's certainly been working hard. Lewis was so horribly quiet up until these last few months that most of you aren't sure he'd be able to do the job at all. And Aitken appears to have a great deal of support, but we must also take into account that he is liable to spend more than half his time in a dream."

"And they are the best options we have." Mr Braithwaite sighed. "What about the junior prefects next year?"

"Next years Lower VI are going to be a nightmare." Mr Johnston, who was the form master of Upper V, said firmly. "There's four who could of it, yes, but they're going to need a lot of work. The entire form is just terrible!"

"Last year," Mr Hopkins said, "You gave me the quartet, and were glad to wash your hands of them. This year, you give me a class which you claim are a nightmare. And you expect me, in the space of a year, to turn it around into a class that can lead the school the year after next?"

"Well you do it so well every other year." the Games Master grinned.

"Lets finish. If I can have recommendations for junior prefects by the end of the day tomorrow please, as it is now after 10. I'll have a think about the full prefectships and let you all know as soon as I can, likewise with deciding between Maynard and Miller for Head Boy."

Author:  Chris [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:18 pm ]
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Lucky me - first to read! This is lovely - am enjoying interaction of the staff.

Author:  jayj [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:34 pm ]
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lovely! but poor Monty - I hope they (i.e. you) can work out some kind of plan to keep him at the school.

thanks!

Author:  Squirrel [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:32 pm ]
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how interesting to see the staff debating! Again, I'm sorry to hear the issues that Monty's family are having, and hope there is some way round it for them.

And Elizabeth might be in with a chance of prefecthood - if the staff can forgive her for being the only girl in a boys school? Well done her!

I'm glad that thus far the 5 of them have escaped retribution for their being out of bed - though I must admit, at first I was expecting her to find the Russel boys breaking bounds again!

Thanks Eilidh! :)

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:59 pm ]
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I Hope there some sort of scholarship that can be found for Monty (their group would be much weaker without him :-( ) Hopefully Charles for Head Boy (just to prove Joey that he can lead too!) and Elizabeth as a prefect. Thanks :-)

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 3:37 pm ]
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I love this school! You can't get rid of Monty :?

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Catherine [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:34 pm ]
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Is this meeting taking place on the same evening? If so, why do I feel the boys are going to get caught?

Please find a scholarship to let Monty stay!

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 5:30 pm ]
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Catherine said
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Is this meeting taking place on the same evening? If so, why do I feel the boys are going to get caught?

Please find a scholarship to let Monty stay!


My thoughts exactly. Hope they can make Elizabeth a prefect, Harrington and Lewis seem a good choice after backing Monty on the school trip.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 5:37 pm ]
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Yes, I have a horrible sense of being near a cliff and not quite being able to see it myself. Please come back and relieve us soon!

Oh, and keep Monty on! I'll be heartbroken otherwise!

Thankyou.

p.s. Is this turning into "Ariel's list of demands" every time I post? :oops:

Author:  Abi [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:48 pm ]
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It would be great if Chas ended up as Head Boy. :D

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:07 pm ]
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If Monty stays he get's my vote. :D Please find a way to keep him

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:38 pm ]
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Hope a handy schol pops up!

Author:  Storyteller [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:16 am ]
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What about a CS scholarship for the girl, so Monty can stay for another year?

Author:  di [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 10:03 am ]
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My first thought on reading this was 'Oh dear! The quartet and Elizabeth are going to get caught if the staff meeting ends as they are on their way back' I do hope that they manage to escape detection and get back to their beds safely but I can see it is an ideal place for a cliffhanger!
As for prefects next year I hope Chas is made Head Boy if only to prove to his family that he is capable and reliable and worthy of the position. Elizabeth would also make a good prefect if she is given the chance by the 'slightly sexist' male staff.
As for Monty, I'm sure the Head could work out a compromise with his parents or manufacture a one off scholarship for him- it would be such a shame to split the 4 boys up next year.
Many thanks, Eilidh, I DO SO LOVE THIS DRABBLE. :D

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:06 am ]
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An early (and long) update today, as I'm finishing in 20 minutes for a long weekend. Normal drabble service will resume on Wednesday, if not before. Thank you all very much for your comments!

"Minor, tell me something." Charles looked up from arranging the hall for the speeches and prizegiving. Almost the entire school was involved in this enterprise. The Upper Fourth, accompanied by a selection of the Lower Fifth, were sitting on the stage polishing the huge collection of cups, plates, and shields which would be given out as prizes the following day. The remainder of the two Fifth forms were carrying a seemingly endless stream of chairs from all corners of the house, to be sorted into neat rows by the Upper Sixth. The Lower Sixth were getting themselves covered in dust while dragging the long, low benches - the usual seating for the school at these occasions - out from the storage space under the stage. The prefects were here, there, and everywhere at once, and Charles pushed his hair out his face as he turned to find the speaker, leaving a long smear of dust across his forehead.

"What?" he demanded.

"Well, your family, with all it's twins and triplets and things."

"What about it?" Charles asked.

"Don't you feel left out? I mean, not having a twin - someone who's always with you and who knows you inside out." Charles shrugged.

"I've got someone like that." he replied distantly, looking across the Hall towards the windows. "I don't need a twin. Here Monty! Take this." Monty obediently took the end of the bench Charles had been carrying, and stared after his friend in confusion as he darted through the boys, leaped over a bench at the other end of the Hall and disappeared out of the Hall doors.

"What was that about?" he asked, bewildered, but was answered only by a chorus of shrugs.

***

"There goes Maynard." Mr Braithwaite observed, as Stephen walked past the window. "He looks like something's on his mind." the Head glanced up.

"And there goes the other one." he smiled, as Charles came into view.

"You've decided about next year?"

"Yes, I've decided."

"I think you're right."

***

Charles caught Stephen just at the top of the driveway.

"Where are you off to?" he demanded.

"Anywhere. I really don't care."

"Steve?" Charles asked. His brother looked miserable, and was holding a letter in his hand. "What's wrong? Is someone ill? Is it Phil again?" Stephen shook his head.

"It would probably be easier if you just read this." he said in a flat voice, holding out the letter. Charles took it from him.

Dear Steve,

You always said you appreciated people being direct, so I'll be direct. Things between us need to stop. Auntie Joey is suspicious I think - she was asking pointed questions a few days ago about how often I heard from you and what we could have to talk about to write so often. Miss Annersley has spoken to me as well, and apparently it is not proper for me to receive so many letters from a young man who, when all is said and done, is not my brother. Of course, the fact that you are not my brother is very important to both of us, and we are caught in something of a circle here. I'm only allowed to receive letters from a brother or relation, and if I tell them that I consider you as one, we will run into huge problems later on when we tell your parents everything.

I owe very much to your mother and Miss Annersley, and I feel that I should respect their wishes in this. Once I leave your parents guardianship, who knows what might happen, but until then, I'm afraid we can't be together. I know that you'll be unhappy - I am unhappy myself - but remember, we wouldn't have had much more time together anyway. You will be in England, and after I finish school next summer I intend to return to Paris and study art. I can't see myself living in England, and I can't see you living anywhere else.

I am spending the first few weeks of the summer with Jane. In order that we avoid any awkwardness, I have also accepted an invitation from José for the rest of the holidays, and will return to school from there. Although we will both be on the Platz at the start of the Autumn term, I would hope we could avoid each other to save difficulties for us both.

Yours, as always,

Adrienne


Charles read this twice, muttered something under his breath that Stephen thought it best not to ask him to repeat, and then handed it back and regarded his miserable brother.

"What on earth has anything to do with Auntie Hilda?" he asked eventually. "Why is Mum complaining? She's the one who wants to make people part of the family! What is Adrienne thinking?" Stephen shrugged. "Why can no one in this damn family mind their own business?" Charles demanded angrily.

"You're not helping, Chas."

"Sorry. What do you want me to do?"

"I don't know."

"What are you going to do?"

"I don't know that either."

"What were your plans, if you hadn't received this letter this morning?" Charles asked curiously. "You've been so secretive the last month or so, I don't have the slightest idea what you've been doing." Stephen shrugged.

"I was going to join the diplomatic service." he said hesitantly. "I've been working at my languages, you know. Adrienne was helping me. And I like the sound of the work. The Head will give me a reference, I'm sure."

"Not where I'd have seen you going." Charles said thoughtfully.

"I think it would be good. But anyway, that was my plan. Now though - I really don't know."

"You can't change your mind because of this." Charles pointed at the letter. "You can't let her ruin it for you. If I could get my hands on her now..." he tailed off, muttering threats.

"It's not her fault."

"Of course it's her fault!"

"It's not. She wasn't sure before, and then some of her friends - Jane and José and Janice and Judy and Ailie - were all a bit doubtful too, because we live in the same house and are practically part of the same family. They thought it was a bit... weird."

"I don't believe for a minute Ailie agreed with this. She's sensible! As for the rest, well, Judy Willoughby is normally a decent sort as well, and so is José Helston. I've never liked Jan Chester though, and as for Jane Carew..." Charles shuddered. "If she ever spends a holiday at Freudesheim again, I'm moving out. Her and her darlings!" Despite himself, Stephen smiled slightly.

"They're really not that bad, Chas. But anyway, I'm sure Adrienne wouldn't have done this if she didn't feel she had to."

"Stop making excuses for her. She'd have found a way round it if she really wanted to. Seriously, Steve, go on and do whatever you were going to. Apart from anything else, I'm relying on you to be in London so that I've got someone to share Rix and David's flat with!"

"It's just not the same - before, I was doing it knowing that there was someone who would support me unconditionally. Now I just feel like I'm on my own. And I really don't see the point."

"Well, you've got me. I know I'm just a little brother, but for what it's worth, Steve, I think you'll be great at it and I completely think you should go for it. And I think Adrienne's an idiot, and she'll regret it when she sees you with someone else." Stephen looked disbelieving.

"Thanks, Chas. I don't believe you, as least as far as Adrienne regretting anything goes, but thanks anyway."

"I'll tell you what - speak to Helena if she comes tomorrow. I don't suppose she will, but if she does - she'll help."

"Yes, I might do that."

***

"Glorious day." The Head sank into a deckchair beside the rest of the staff. "I presume this is sports' day training."

"It is for the active ones, the prefects are in charge and some of the rest of the sixths are helping out."

"And the lazy ones?"

"In the garden, I believe, with Montgomery." The Head laughed.

"I see. How typical. Very well, a relaxing afternoon it is." He sat back and watched the boys with interest.

"Minor!" Baxter roared at the top of his lungs, doing a credible imitation of a sailor on the deck of a ship in a gale. Charles, interrupted in the middle of an explanation of how one should properly jump a hurdle without catching it with one's foot and ending up flat on one's face, looked up in irritation.

"What?" he shouted back.

"Swap me!" Baxter said.

"Is that a suggestion or an order?" Charles called.

"It's an order!" the games prefect informed him. "I feel like Gulliver in the land of the Lilliputians over here. Come and take a turn!" Several of the others seniors looked up as well, to see Baxter surrounded by first formers, very few of whom even came up to his waist.

"That's a very literary reference for you, Bax!" Miller shouted over from the rounders game he was refereeing. "D'you mean they've got you tied to the ground?" Baxter glowered at him, and Charles sighed.

"Try and practice what I've been telling you." he said to the little group of third and fourth formers round about him. "Baxter will be here in a minute or two."

The staff watched the two games prefects switch places.

"All the people who are on the shortlist for full prefectships next year are out there or round at the tennis court."

"Elizabeth is coaching tennis?" her father asked, surprised.

"She's round there with Maynard - Major, that is - and a group of the Upper Fifth."

"May I make a suggestion?" Mr Whyte, the head of the Prep School, glanced over from his chair.

"Of course."

"Well, as I understand it, the problem next year is that you have four more potential prefects from the Upper VI, and you only need two. Why not appoint all four, and have a round dozen prefects next year? Then you could assign two of them to me. Two of the prefects concentrating directly on them would make the prep feel more like a part of the school I think."

"So appoint Lewis, and Harrington, and Aitken, and Elizabeth Braithwaite?"

"Yes."

"It's certainly worth considering." The Head watched the groups of boys thoughtfully. "Yes, it's certainly worth thinking about."

Author:  cestina [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:30 am ]
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This is such a stunning drabble. I really feel as if I am sitting in on all these conversations and discussions. Nothing till next Wednesday? Arrrrgh. What a nuisance RL is sometimes!

Thanks so much, Eilidh, for this totally believable world.

Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:05 pm ]
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I agree that it is stunning. Definitely my favourite! I feel sorry for Stephen and Adrienne but think that Adrienne is right in some ways. I mean, since the Head and Joey have now interfered, they either have to lie or wait. Glad that Elizabeth is going to be a prefect! :-)

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 5:35 pm ]
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Love the suggestion about the prefects. Mr Whyte and you need to be congratulated for it. Elizabeth will find that being a prefect will cancel out being expelled from two schools when she comes to apply for University.

Adrienne was a bit brutal there, I would hope that they could have a break now and think about resuming their correspondence when Adrienne goes to college/university in Paris.

Have a good weekend.

Author:  marni [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 5:59 pm ]
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thanks for the update. I hope that the next few days go well and look forward to Wednesday to read more.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:55 pm ]
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Chas was so adorably sweet there! Thankyou for the update, but please, I'll need a fix again before Wednesday!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:58 pm ]
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Thanks, could understand if Adrienne said lets wait until we're both at Uni and then restart but to say no altogether like that would be hard, though if that's how she feels it's better she says so now not later.

Chas was really supportive there

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 10:27 pm ]
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Adrienne was rather brutal but perhaps she felt she had to be to ensure Stephen got the message. Hope Stephen will be okay. Love the discussions about the new prefects.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Fri Nov 26, 2010 10:46 pm ]
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Poor Stephen, what a shock. Great suggestion about the prefects, though. :D

Author:  di [ Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:41 am ]
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Another example of Joey interfering! However, if Adrienne had really wanted the relationship with Steve she would have fought harder for it by suggesting to Steve that they wait until they are both at Uni and then see what happens.

I can't believe that a school would censor the mail their pupils received. After all the distance from most homes would prevent any untoward relationships developing- or am I being naive? :roll:

I thought Chas was lovely with his big brother,very supportive over his choice of career- I wonder what Joey has in mind for her eldest boy? Probably the Armed Forces!! :lol:

So relieved that the quartet and Elizabeth weren't caught. :)

Thanks, Eilidh. Enjoy your long weekend.

Author:  cestina [ Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:55 pm ]
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di wrote:

I can't believe that a school would censor the mail their pupils received. After all the distance from most homes would prevent any untoward relationships developing- or am I being naive? :roll:


Well my boarding school in the 1950s certainly did. We were only allowed to write to people on an approved list, handed in at the beginning of term. No letters to boys, other than brothers. I wrote for years to a boy in Rhodesia but as far as the school was concerned his name was Belinda and that's what appeared on the airmail letters back from him as well.

Author:  AnneM [ Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:06 pm ]
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Di wrote
Quote:
I can't believe that a school would censor the mail their pupils received. After all the distance from most homes would prevent any untoward relationships developing- or am I being naive? :roll:

My cousin (in the early late 60s / early 70s) was supposed to provide a list of people she could receive letters from. Her father said, "My daughter may receive letters from anyone kind enough to write to her." That sorted them! :D

Author:  di [ Sun Nov 28, 2010 12:37 pm ]
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I love your Uncle's response, AnneM. :lol: and how ingenious, cestina, to write to 'belinda', was he at boarding school as well? I wonder what cryptic name you took on, if he was.

I still find it strange but obviously it happened. I wonder why Adrienne didn't think of the ploy cestina used. I rather think she was less fond of Steve, in a romantic way than he was of her. Poor lad. :(

Author:  cestina [ Sun Nov 28, 2010 12:41 pm ]
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di wrote:
... and how ingenious, cestina, to write to 'belinda', was he at boarding school as well? I wonder what cryptic name you took on, if he was.


He was at boarding school but my name is uni-sex in its spelling and it was never queried at his end.....

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:37 pm ]
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There are only about 3 or 4 posts left to go now...

"Ho-hum, end of term and Open Weekend again.  Faces washed, shoes polished, ties straight, hair brushed, daydreams to pass the time during the Head's speech prepared.  Now it's families to be welcomed, sports to run, books to get, plans to make, fancy meals to eat..."
 
"Will you shut up, Minor?" Baxter demanded.  "If you want to do something so much, come in, shut the door, and help me with this race schedule."  Charles grinned and did as he was asked.
 
"What's up?" he demanded, perching on the table and looking at the list of races upside down. "Didn't we do this already?"
 
"We missed the kids hurdles." Baxter replied with a groan.  "The kids games all need to be done before lunch, and there isn't a spare space for them.  The field is being used for javelin and the like after lunch, then our races and we can hardly have kids hurdling across the bottom of it while we throw javelins at them."
 
"Interesting sport though.  I'd take part."  Monty put in, leaning over Charles' shoulder.  "Maybe we could add it as an element of danger to all their races."
 
"You're not helping." Charles laughed, while Baxter glowered at them.  "Come on Bax, it can't be that hard, can it?  What's in that gap there?"
 
"Morning Tea while we set up for the next lot of races."
 
"And that one?"
 
"That's the skittles tournament they begged for."
 
"Well, that doesn't have to be on the field.  That can be in the gym hall, surely?  And then you can put their hurdles on the field at the same time.  At least, you can assuming that there are different people participating in each. Who's got the lists?"
 
"I have." Miller contributed from the other side of the prefect's room.  "What are you looking for, Minor?"
 
"Can we run the skittles and the kids' hurdles at the same time without any of the Prep bursting into tears because they're in both?"
 
"Let's see." Miller rapidly skimmed the lists of names in his hand.  "Yes you can.  None of them are in the finals of both."
 
"There you go then.  Problem solved.  Just call me a genius." Charles grinned.
 
"Hmm." Baxter scowled at the list again. "I suppose it'll have to do, though it means we'll need to turn the hall round fast afterwards for the next thing.  This is what happens when you give in to their begging, you hear me, you four who are going to be prees again next year?  No more blasted skittles at sports day!"
 
"We haven't had that confirmed yet." Miller pointed out.
 
"Oh, rot." Jeffries put in.  "You'll all be getting a nice meeting in the head's office soon, to tell you how wonderful you've been and how much being prefects has improved you all."
 
"Improved them?" Baxter snorted.  "If you ask me, they've not improved since we were lordly second formers and Minor and Monty joined the first form."
 
"You haven't improved much since you were in the first form yourself, Mr. Baxter." said the head's voice behind him.  "Apologies for my intrusion, boys, but you did leave the door open.  I'd like a word with you all, if I may."

"Certainly, Sir." Stephen replied promptly, jumping up and offering his seat.
 
"Thank you, Maynard." the Head seated himself, looking round at them.  "First of all, with only a few days of the year left, I'd like to thank you all for the wonderful job you've done this year.  Maynard, you have been a wonderful Head Boy, and I will happily praise your leadership, diplomacy, tact and organisation in any job reference you send to me."  Stephen turned scarlet.
 
"Thank you Sir."
 
"Jeffries, in many ways you have had the hardest job of all this year - to be all the same things as Maynard, but without the title or the kudos.  Again, I think you've been excellent, and I will pass that on to any employer who asks me.  Baxter, you have certainly shaken up our games department.  Mr. Johnston never tires of telling me how many matches all of our teams have won, and I am particularly impressed with the amount of work that both you and Maynard Minor have put in to coaching both the Upper Fourth and the Prep."
 
"Thank you Sir." came from both boys together.
 
"Blakely, Whiting and Stevenson - again, you have given back more than we ever ask to the school this year, and last year as well Blakely.  And to the Junior Prefects, who talked themselves blue in the face trying to get out of the job, I am very glad that I didn't listen.  Now, I believe it is almost time for the parents to arrive for the sports?  I'd like a brief word with Maynard Minor while the rest of you get the school in order, and then we will get started!"  The boys filed out, leaving Charles alone with the Head.

"Well, Maynard Minor - or rather, just Maynard after tomorrow, although I don't suppose that will stop your friends calling you 'Minor' for the rest of your life."
 
"Probably not, Sir." Charles agreed.
 
"Maynard, if I was to offer you a choice, next year, of being Head Boy or Games Prefect, which one would you take?"
 
"May I be honest, Sir?"
 
"Of course."
 
"Neither of them."  The head raised his eyebrows.
 
"Oh?"
 
"Sir, I don't want to step straight into my brother's shoes.  I'm a different sort of person.  Steve - sorry - Maynard is a leader, an organiser, he always has been.  I'm the follower.  My sister was Head Girl at her school last year, Maynard was Head Boy this year, they're both different from me.  And Games Prefect... well, one of my sisters was that as well, if I'm being honest, but really it just doesn't appeal to me at all.  I'm not like Baxter - he yells and yells and yells at the kids, and they like him anyway and they work harder to please him.  If I yell at them they sulk."  The head laughed.
 
"Maynard, I don't want you to be your brother.  And I certainly don't want you to be Baxter!  I want you to be you, and ideally, I want you to be Head Boy next year.  For the last year, the school has been run by your brother and his friends.  They have done a wonderful job, as I told them, but they have always been strictly law abiding.  They have done everything to the letter of the law, and generally pulled the reins quite tightly, would you agree?"
 
"Yes Sir." Charles replied automatically.
 
"Next year - and I'm sure you are aware Maynard, that I never thought I'd hear myself say these words - I want to the school run by your quartet, who have always had a reputation for treating the rules as... guidelines, shall we say?  Now, I could force you to be Head Boy, but I don't like to do that.  You really are the only option though.  Miller is good and conscientious, but he's a Deputy Head, not a Head Boy.  Jones,  I am intending to offer the Games Captaincy to.  So what about it, Maynard.  Will you try it?  Not going in trying to be your brother, but going into the job as yourself, and bringing your own slant to it."
 
"I don't know... do it my way? Not Steve's?"
 
"Yes, entirely your way."
 
"I'll give it a try then, I suppose."

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:40 pm ]
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The headmaster is brilliant :D .

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:05 pm ]
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Awww, that's wonderful. Good of the Head to single out all his Prefects. So who will be at the Open Weekend for Steve and Chas? Somehow cannot see Joey there - but Len might be.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  cestina [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:38 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
There are only about 3 or 4 posts left to go now...


Oh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! :( :( :(

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:55 pm ]
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You can not do Len's wedding in the next three or four posts! So can we expect another drabble? I do hope so.

However I hope Len comes to the Open Weekend, and Jem and Madge should be there for the twins as well so the boys will family for the first time since they started at the School. Would love Jack or Con/Margot to be there as well.

Thanks for todays update. Hope your days off are going well.

Author:  gwynne [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:58 pm ]
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no! there must be many more posts....at least another whole school year's worth of posts....

Author:  cal562301 [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:23 pm ]
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I agree with everyone else. How can you end this without showing us Charles as head boy. And whether Elizabeth gets to be a prefect, and how their romance works out and........

Author:  abbeybufo [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:51 pm ]
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Now I shall be torn between wanting the next post soon, so I can read it, and not wanting it too soon as it will be another step closer to the end.

I hope you will do either Part 3 or another episode from this world, as I shall miss it dreadfully when you get to the end of this section.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:03 pm ]
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You really do have to show us Chas as headboy, you know! Especially as we still need the twins reformed and Felix sorted out and Chas getting his scholarship and Steve going to university and sorting things out with Adrienne and Joey realising what her sons are really like and...

I will go on if you don't write a part three, so I warn you now!

Thankyou for the update :D

Author:  Abi [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:13 pm ]
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I liked the way the Head persuaded Chas to agree to try being HB - reassuring him that he doesn't have to fit a mould - he is great! I don't want this to end, though....

Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:28 pm ]
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Echoing the calls for Part Three, you can't leave us in Limbo.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:43 am ]
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Thank, am really enjoying this and will add my pleas for a Part III

Author:  Tawny [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:44 am ]
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cestina wrote:
Eilidh wrote:
There are only about 3 or 4 posts left to go now...


Oh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! :( :( :(


Echoed wholeheatedly by me, I love this! :cry:

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:03 am ]
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Echoing everything everyone said! Please don't leave it there! Thanks for the update and hope you had a nice long weekend :-)

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:44 am ]
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Elizabeth leant on the railing at the top of the stairs.  Below her, in the entrance hall, what seemed like hundreds of boys were finding their families and taking them out into the school grounds.  Her eye was caught by a group near the door - two girls and a nervous looking young man.  The smaller of the two girls had the same black hair and dark eyes as Charles did, and both girls showed the expressive features that she liked so much.
 
"What are you looking at?" Charles asked behind her.
 
"Just wondering..." Elizabeth began, and then stopped.  "What's wrong with you?"
 
"Hammer's just asked me to be head boy next year." Charles said quietly.  Elizabeth laughed.
 
"Wonderful!" she replied, keeping her voice low.  "I knew he would.  What I was going to ask is, is that your people down there?" 
 
"I wouldn't think so." he said, before looking where she was pointing.  "But it is! Helena! Connie!"  Both girls looked up and smiled and waved.  "Find Steve." Charles begged, diving down the stairs and into the crowd below.  Elizabeth nodded, and headed outside.  She found the Head Boy crossing the games field with a young boy who looked like a small, fair version of Charles.
 
"Maynie!" she called, hurrying towards them.
 
"Is something wrong?" Stephen demanded.  Elizabeth shook her head.
 
"Minor sent me to find you, he's with your sisters in the entrance hall."  Stephen stared at her in disbelief.
 
"She came, she came!" the younger boy yelled, racing off.
 
"Felix!" Stephen called after him.  "Come on, we'd better catch him.  Come and join us, anyway.  Chas will want to introduce you, I should think." he added, with a meaningful look.  Elizabeth felt her cheeks growing hot.  "Don't worry." he added.  "I'm not going to do anything.  I've known for months and yes, I should probably have gone to the Head but... well,  Chas is one of the few normal people in my family and I don't want to fall out with him over a girl.  Anyway, you're not that bad."
 
"I'm so glad you approve." Elizabeth replied sarcastically.  "You'd better catch up with your brother."  Just then, however, the whole group emerged from the school.  The dark haired girl was talking animatedly to Charles, while the red-head was answering Felix's barrage of questions.
 
"Steve!" she called, as they approached.  Stephen hugged both his sisters, and turned to the young man standing to the side of the group.  "This is Ben." Helena explained.  "He came to keep me company on the journey.  Ben, this is my brother Stephen." Elizabeth smothered a laugh as Stephen and Charles turned identical suspicious looks on the unfortunate Ben, before being introduced herself.
 
"We're allowed to take you out for supper today." Helena said.  "Do you want to join us, Elizabeth?  Or do you have people here yourself?"
 
"My father teaches here." Elizabeth explained.  "So I'm on my own today." 
 
"Come with us then, of course." Connie said hospitably.  "What's the plan between now and supper, though?"
 
"Sports Day." Charles replied promptly.  "Watching your wonderful brothers win prize after prize.  The prize-giving itself is late this afternoon."
 
"Speaking of which," Stephen said suddenly, with a glance at his watch, "We're playing an exhibition tennis match in twenty minutes, Chas, and we're both standing around in the drive in our uniforms."
 
"We need to go." Charles agreed.  "Elizabeth, can you..." he waved a hand over his shoulder as they both ran off.
 
"I'm going to guess that the end that that sentence was going to ask me to take you to the tennis courts." Elizabeth decided.  "Come on, we'll go round through the gardens, it's nicer than going over the sports field, and I can give you a quick tour as we go.  That's the senior boarding house." she added, as they rounded the corner of the building and the big grey house came into view. 
 
"So they're playing together?" Connie asked as they sat down.
 
"Yes, they're the first pair this year." Elizabeth said.  "The smaller boy on the other side is Miller - he's one of Charles' friends, and the other one is Jeffries, who is friends with Stephen.  He's second prefect."
 
"Do you think they'll win?" Ben asked, as Charles served - a powerful, direct stroke that made Helena and Connie exchange glances and say together,
 
"Margot's teaching.'
 
After the match, which the two Maynard's won comfortably, they all moved to the field to watch Felix competing in his races.  Stephen and Charles, back in their uniforms but with wet hair, joined them shortly afterwards.
 
"That's us now until the cross country later."  Charles said, sitting down with a sigh.  "We didn't go in for the other races this year."
 
"Just as well, or you'd end up falling asleep during the prizegiving." Connie smiled.  "Is it the same course that you won last year, Steve?"  Seeing that Stephen wasn't going to reply, Charles nodded.
 
"He only won because my friend fell and broke his ankle on the last hill." he added.  "I'll beat him this year."
 
"Helena, can I talk to you?" Stephen asked abruptly.  Looking concerned, Helena got up and they walked back towards the school.
 
"Everything ok?" Connie asked, as the group remaining saw Helena tuck her hand through her brother's arm.
 
"Probably." Charles replied.  "He'll be fine once he's finished telling her all about it."
 
"Elizabeth! Over here!" Elizabeth led Helena, Connie and Ben over to where a small group of people was sitting near the finishing line.

"These are Charles' friends - Miller, and Montgomery." she explained to his sisters. 
 
"So three of our boys are in this race then?" Mrs Miller asked.
 
"One of them's going to win it." Monty said, stretching out on a picnic rug.  "Far too much like hard work for me."
 
"Your people not coming today, Monty?"
 
"Not this time, no.  Not a lot of point, is there, since I'm not winning anything."
 
"You won't win anything if you don't take part." Gran pointed out reprovingly. 

"Oh, is that someone?" Connie asked.  Miller screwed up his eyes and looked where she was pointing.
 
"That's them." he agreed.  "Now we just have to wait for them to get down and see who wins, then this is all over and we can do something interesting."

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:48 am ]
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How nice to see Helena and Connie getting on so well with Elizabeth. Love Steve's comment about "the few normal people" - I know the feeling :lol: .

Author:  Joanne [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:58 am ]
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I'm another loving this drabble - and I DO NOT want it to end! Please?

thanks for the update, so glad Helena and Connie made it.

Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 11:06 am ]
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Thanks for the update :-) Can we get to the prize giving now please? :-)

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 11:18 am ]
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Thanks for the early update today. I loved Gran's comment to Monty that you have to be it to win it!

Also waiting for the interesting bit, but not wanting this drabble to stop.

Author:  di [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:00 pm ]
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I'm with every one else- I don't want this drabble to end - ever!! so have fingers crossed for a follow on so that we see Chas leading the school and getting his scholarship and dealing with the Russell twins and continuing his relationship with Elizabeth and sorting out his mother and..... and.... and.... ! I could go on and on but think you'll have got my message! :lol:

It was good to see Helena and Connie supporting their 3 brothers but- where was their mother? I'm sure she'll have gone to the CS to support her daughters but that doesn't require much effort other than going through a gate in the garden, does it? I wonder what her excuse would be?

Thanks, Eilidh, sort of looking forward to the next part but don't want it to come as it'll be one more nearer the end. boo hoo.

Author:  Rafaella [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:30 pm ]
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You can't end this series - it's my favourite one ever! Please, please do a part 3.

Author:  cestina [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:47 pm ]
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We'd feel far better about the imminent ending of this fabulous tale if you could offer us a glimmer of hope for the future....pretty please? Just as an early Christmas present..... :santa:

Author:  Abi [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:51 pm ]
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Also voting for another part of this... please? :D

Author:  hac61 [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:17 pm ]
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Please don't stop writing this. And thank you so much for posting a day early.

I keep thinking I've read all of this in a book somewhere and then being disappointed when I can't find the book. This drabble is doing the power of good in my anti-depression fight, so if you can carry it on it would be much appreciated.

Hoping very much for part 3.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:59 pm ]
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I'm so pleased that someone made it! And I love the suspicious looks at poor Ben :lol:

Thankyou for the update!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:56 pm ]
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I'm curious as to what Steve wants to talk about. Love Len and Con's comment of 'Margot' when they saw the boys play tennis

Author:  Squirrel [ Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:34 pm ]
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I've had non-existent to limited internet access over the last few days Eilidh, and have just caught up with all your posts since Friday... They have been a wonderful read, and while I'm really looking forwards to the next post or so, I shall miss it once you've finished - and be looking forwards to any follow ons which come in due course.

Thank you.

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:53 am ]
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I love the suspicious looks at the boyfriend. I know I've seen members of my family do that when new partners are introduced.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:56 pm ]
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Penultimate post! As I said before, I am working on a few other things from this universe, and I hope that at the very least the immediate sequal to this will be ready to post soonish.

My apologies for what Miller has done to Byron here... when I worked out his character, it was this scene, and he turned up with the lines already written. :D


"Right you lot, quieten down!  Do you want your people to think you're a rabble?"  It was late afternoon, and the boys, in immaculate uniforms, were lined up on the drive.
 
"Their people know that already, Jeff!" Monty called from the middle of the Lower IV, where he was refereeing an argument which seemed to have broken out over nothing at all.

"Quieten down anyway, come on! We need to go in in a minute!"
 
"Where's Maynard?  Why are you telling us this?" someone called from the sixth form.
 
"He's coming in a minute." Jeff replied.  "He was doing the polite bit with the guests of honour.  Come on, the Fourths, stand up straight and try and look respectable for once."  Stephen jumped down the steps at the front door and strode, frowning, across to where the school was lined up.  He looked worried and nervous, and studied the waiting lines of boys closely, as if he could glare them into submission.  Waiting with the other prefects at one side, Miller was prompted to murmur to Charles
 
"Maynard came down like the wolf on the fold, And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold"
 
"Navy blue and silver, surely?" Charles grinned.  Miller mouthed the lines over to himself thoughtfully.
 
"Maynard came down like a cat in a stew
And his cohorts were gleaming in silver and blue, And he said 'Maynard Minor, your tie is askew, And did you know that Miss Braithwaite keeps looking at you?'" Charles choked with laughter, and tried hastily to turn it into a cough as Stephen looked over at them with a frown, and then nodded to the rest of the school.
 
"Looks fine to me.  Right, Andrews, you know where you're going?  Up the steps, into the Hall, and down and into the front row."  The small first former on the end of the front line nodded nervously. "On you go then." Stephen prompted, and the first form marched off, leading the school into the Hall.
 
"Right, you lot." he said to the prefects. "We're to sit with with our own forms, but for some reason we've to come in just before the staff.  Minor, your tie isn't straight."  Charles managed heroically to keep a straight face, while beside him Miller succumbed to a coughing fit of his own.  "I feel like I'm missing something." Stephen said, looking at them closely.  "You look like two Lower Fourths who have done something wrong and are waiting on someone finding out and giving you a thrashing."
 
"We haven't got time to find out what it is." Jeff pointed out, as the Upper VI started to move.  "Come on, boss, last big thing we have to do.  After this, it'll all be over, and it'll be someone else's job to keep the school in order."
 
***
 
"Lower Sixth - In Music and Art, W. Jones." There was polite applause as Jones, grinning widely, collected his prize with thanks.
 
"In English, French, Scripture and History, D. Miller."  Grinning triumphantly at Charles and Elizabeth, Miller climbed the steps to the stage to receive his prize.
 
"In Chemistry, Physics, Gym and Mathematics, C. Maynard." Charles followed Miller on the the stage, trying to count in his head how many awards were left to come.

"In Anatomy, Latin, Botany and Geography, Miss E. Braithwaite." the head boomed. Elizabeth followed the boys up onto the stage, accepting the pile of books the head handed her with a smile, and returned to her seat with the rest of the Sixth Form.  The head continued through the Upper Sixth prizes, and then stopped.  He leaned on the ornate lectern and addressed them.

“Now, the scholarship results. The school offers several scholarships, which cover fees both here and in further education, and I have several to award this evening.” Charles stared round the hall as the Head talked on. Vaguely, he was aware of some applause and boys climbing onto the stage to shake hands with the Headmaster. There was a sudden stir around him as the Head paused, and he glanced back at the front of the room.

“Charles Maynard, Lower VI form.” the Head said firmly. Charles blinked. Along the rest of the Lower VI row, applause slowly broke out. Charles looked from one side of him to the other.

“Move!” Monty hissed, digging him in the ribs. “Go on!” Charles got up. There was a cheer from the row behind that sounded like Steve, and Miller leant forward and gave him a dig in the back that sent him towards the stage.

“Well done, Maynard.” the Head said, beaming. “Though I suggest that you listen if you are expecting an award. It's generally less embarrassing.”

“Yes, Sir.” Charles grinned. “Thank you.” Smiling cheerfully, the Head dismissed him and turned back to the assembled school.

"Finally, on behalf of the school, I have three awards to make to three young men who have worked hard all year to ensure that it was a successful year for all of us.  These awards are suggested by members of the school, not by the staff, and show that the people concerned have been very highly thought of by their schoolmates.  Firstly, a young man who over his time here has achieved first team colours for rugby, cricket and swimming, a form captaincy, a school prefect-ship, and the school games captaincy.  Baxter has become well known over the years for his personality, his voice and his willingness to coach any and every member of the school who wanted it - and some who didn't - in any weather.  Many games captains will coach their own teams on sunny afternoons.  It takes a special one to coach the first form in the rain.  So the first award I have in my hand is for Dominic Baxter."  Red from a mixture of annoyance over the disclosure of his full name and embarrassment at the loud and enthusiastic cheers which rose from the school, Baxter rose to accept the award with thanks.
 
"Thank you all." he said, turning to face the school.  "And you can all stop cheering now, because term doesn't end until tomorrow and it's not too late for me to make you all run laps of the field!  I don't feel that I've done anything special this year, but thank you very much for the honour.  And special thanks to Maynard Minor, who's hiding in the ranks of the Lower Sixth again, for being fantastic as my assistant."  He received more applause as he sat down again, and the Head waited for it to die down before he turned back to his notes.
 
"Secondly, for a gentleman who has provided almost all the organisation to our prefect body this year, who has put aside his own work on many occasions for others, and who has had the difficult job of running the school this year without any of the credit for it.  For gaining first team colours in cricket and tennis, for holding a record number of seven form captaincies over the past ten years, the winner of the Kensington Award for English, holder of a school prefect-ship, last year's School Librarian, and this years Deputy Head Boy, Aaron Jeffries."  The cheer Jeff received as he stood up almost surpassed the one his friend had been given a few minutes before.  Declining to make a speech, he returned to his seat as fast as he could, scarlet with embarrassment.  The Head continued,
 
"And finally!  Those of you who were here last year may remember that I stood here and told you all that we'd be struggling to find a Head Boy this year who would do as good a job as Karl Helston did last year.  Which just goes to show that even the best of headmasters must eat their words at times, and this is one of them.  Our current Head Boy has done a remarkable job during the last year, and thoroughly deserves everything I am about to say about him.  So, ladies and gentlemen, his achievements: First Team Colours for rugby, cricket, tennis and swimming, Senior Cross Country Champion, holder of the Babbington scholarship awarded in the third form, twice Form Captain, Assistant Games Captain, Head Boy, Stephen Maynard."  After collecting his award and thanking the head, Stephen turned to the assembled school.
 
"Well!" he began, grinning at them, "I really didn't expect this when we came in here today.  On behalf of myself, Jeff and Baxter, thank you all very much for recommending us for these.  We have only done what we thought we should, this year, and what we wanted to do - so to know that you all appreciated it so much is slightly overwhelming.  I'd like to thank the rest of this years' prefects; Blakely, Whiting, Stevenson, Maynard Minor, Miller, Montgomery and Jones, as the school quite simply wouldn't have run at all this year without all ten of us working together.  I'm sure that whoever takes over my job next year will do admirably - probably better than me" he added, glancing at Charles, "and I wish all of you the best of luck with the rest of your school careers, and thank you again for all the help you've given me."

Author:  jayj [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:05 pm ]
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Can't believe there's only one more bit of this left, but very much looking forward to the next part!

It's lovely to see them all get such a nice reception - thank you!

Author:  Chris [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Aah, how lovely.

Author:  Finn [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Charming stuff, and I'm glad Charles won his scholarship! One in the eye for his interfering mother, at least :)

Also pleased that there's more to come, as I'll miss this when it's done.

Thanks, Eilidh!

Author:  Chatelaine [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:14 pm ]
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Um, there's something in my eye. . . no, not a tear, definitely not. . . Recognition of people's achievements always puts dust in my eye. . .

Thanks Eilidh, still thoroughly enjoying this, and fully expecting dust bunnies in my eyes when next year's Head Boy is announced!

Author:  dackel [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:21 pm ]
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So pleased they all got the awards they wanted and needed!

I'm really sad this is almost finished but whoohoo we have the next part to look forward to, so it's not too bad! :wink:

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:39 pm ]
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So pleased Charles got his Scholarship and that Stephen won his award. Pleased some from their family are there today - but doubt very much that Joey and Jack are - such a shame. :cry:


Thank you Eilidh - so glad that you mean to write a sequel to this.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:12 pm ]
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That was great, and I'm glad that Len and Con are there even if jack and Joey aren't.

Author:  ivohenry [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:21 pm ]
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So last year's Head Boy was Elisaveta's son! Can't remember for sure, but I think he's the second of her boys, is the youngest there too? Must be around age of the Terrible Twins and Felix?? Or is he a bit older and we can see him as a pal of Mike when he goes back to school there next term? (always assuming the sequel will be at least partly about the boys - please!)

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:52 pm ]
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Glad to see Elisaveta's second son was also head Boy there. That means the CS families are starting quite a tradition there! Lovely that Charles got his scholarship and that Elizabeth won some prizes. Thanks and looking forward to the sequel :-)

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:43 pm ]
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Thanks, really glad people won their scholarship and prizes. Didn't pick up on the name Karl Helston until someone mentioned it above :D And will be looking forward to the sequels

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:44 pm ]
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Pleased Elizabeth received a reward for all her hard work. Trust Charles to be day dreaming when the award is announced. Good that the first award day they have family there both boys receive awards, Jack should revisit his old school even if Joey is with the girls at CS.

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:13 pm ]
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Thinking about the whole not visiting the boys at school. We know that Joey obviously had her family there for any sports days etc - what about Jack? Perhaps he never had anyone visit him so cannot see the need to visit his children? Though considering the way he acted when they were at home last with him wanting to whip Mike when it wasn't his fault...

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 7:11 pm ]
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Thankyou for the update! That was beautiful, and I'm so pleased for Charles :D

Author:  Abi [ Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:24 pm ]
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That was a fantastic scene. And yay for Charles getting his scholarship!

Thanks, Eilidh. :D

Author:  ghoti [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:44 am ]
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Thankyou for that. I'm so pleased Charles got his scholarship... I wonder whether Joey will be outraged or suffer one of her bouts of contrition for not paying attention.

Author:  di [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:32 am ]
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I'm pleased Chas got his scholarship - even if he wasn't listening when it was awarded- and hope we get the opportunity to hear what his mother has to say about it. :)

Well done to all of the prize winners, especially Elizabeth; I bet this is the first time she's ever had an award from school as, from her history, I doubt she stayed anywhere long enough to receive an award. :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh, really pleased there is going to be a sequel sometime soon.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:25 am ]
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Thanks again for all your comments all the way through. They have been very much appreciated. I will get my head down now and get on with Charles' Upper VI year!

After lunch the next day, the school was almost deserted.  Many of the boys had departed the previous evening with their parents, and only those who had to catch trains or who lived locally and were staying to keep their friends company were left.  Charles, who was packed already and bored, wandered into the now empty prefects room.  The detritus which had been scattered all over it for most of the last year was now gone, the walls were bare, and the table was cleared, the chairs tucked neatly under it.  He wandered up to the top of the table and stood behind the chair which had been Stephens and was now, he supposed, his.  The table looked a lot bigger from the end than it did from his normal seat half way down it.
 
"Ah-ha!  I deduce, in the manner of the best detectives, that you are considering what the table will look like seen from that angle every day.  I thought it would be you." Miller closed the door behind him and grinned at his friend.  "My congratulations!  I'm just fresh from an interview with the Head myself."
 
"Oh?" Charles asked.  "What did he want?"
 
"To tell me I get to spend the next year as Second Prefect." Miller replied.  "Apparently it was a close run thing, and he hopes I'll give the new Head Boy my undivided support."
 
"And will you?"
 
"Oh, I don't know." Miller pulled out the chair on Charles's right and sat down.  Charles followed his example.  "I suppose I can probably get over the disappointment of not having to be in charge of everything and manage it eventually.  As long as the new Head Boy is a decent sort, of course." 
 
"I've heard he's rather hard work myself."  Charles said.
 
"I heard he was the only real option for the job.  Regardless of what the Head said, I have a feeling that I'd have been very much second choice.  I'm sure I can manage him."  He started laughing.
 
"What?" Charles asked curious.
 
"D'you remember Upper Fourth, and that detention with Helston Major?"  Charles looked puzzled for a minute, then joined in the laughter as well.
 
" 'In a few years time, there is a very faint possibility that you two will be in the running for prefectships!  Of course, the Head would have to lose his mind first.  If you ever make it that far, when the school is in chaos, remember that you brought it on yourselves by your complete lack of respect for authority in this school!' " Charles quoted.  "And you told him that one day we'd be running this place, and he said pigs would have to fly first.  Do you think he remembers?"
 
"Probably." Miller said.  "We had put stinging nettles in his bed, that's not the sort of thing you forget in a hurry."
 
"No, it's not.  Got a pen on you?"  Miller produced one from the inside pocket of his blazer.
 
"A good second prefect always does." Charles grinned, and reached over into a drawer to find a postcard before taking the pen.
 
"Let's see... Dear Freddie,  Just a short note to let you know to keep an eye out for the flying pigs.  The thing we predicted has come to pass, and we expect chaos to reign imminently.  Genuinely sorry about the stinging nettles now, even if we still don't have any respect for authority.  Of course, now that we are the authority, that might create a problem.  From the top of the prefects' table, Chas Maynard and Danny Miller.  I'll send it when I get home, my mother will have their address.  Mrs Helston was a school friend of hers - my Aunt 'Veta."
 
"Righto.  Now, how about one last slide down the bannisters?  I'll race you to the coaches!"
 
"You're on." Charles jumped up, hastily pushed the chair back into place and sprinted out the door and along the corridor.  Thus a few second's later the Head, showing a group of staff out of his office after a meeting, was greeted by the sight of the next Head Boy and Second Prefect sliding down the large bannisters on the main staircase, only to hit the ground at the bottom and disappear out the front door at a run.
 
"Happy holidays, Sir!" Charles yelled over his shoulder.
 
***
 
The coaches were sitting in the drive, and Monty and Jones had obliging brought their room-mates luggage down with them.

"Have a good summer then, all of you." Miller said.  "If any of you want to rise to a postcard, it'll get you bonus points with Gran."
 
"Don't we always sent Gran a postcard?" Jones demanded.  "It's more than our life's worth to forget!  Come on, Monty, the coach is waiting." Monty was staring round at everything, a rather sad expression on his face.
 
"Something wrong?" Charles asked.  He shook his head.
 
"No, nothing.  Have a good summer!" he jumped onto the bus behind Jones as Charles climbed into the other one and Miller headed towards the long-suffering and extremely patient driver who had come to collect him.  With a roar, the two coaches pulled into the driveway one after the other and the school went home.

Author:  keren [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:36 am ]
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I have enjpoed this very much

Please don't stop


Also, :show us how Monty's problem is solved

and Joey saying: "But why would you need a science scholarship.......you are going to be a priest......"............

Author:  Finn [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:38 am ]
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Ahh, poor Monty. I presume he's heard. I hope you have plans for his next year as well as the other boys!

Thanks Eilidh, this has been a fun drabble and I've really enjoyed reading it. The boys are such entertaining characters, and they seem to have a surprisingly charming and sanguine staff. If only all schools were more like this one!

Author:  gwynne [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:08 pm ]
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this has been brilliant! thank you, but please don't leave us waiting long for the next part....

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:13 pm ]
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You must bring Monty back somehow :shock: . I've really enjoyed reading this, it stands out as a school story in its own right, even if it didn't have a CS connection!

Thanks, Eilidh. Looking forward to the next school year!

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:19 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh: this has been brilliant.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:26 pm ]
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Love the postcard to Freddie - hope he appreciates it. The head must have known that his next Head Boy and Second Prefect wouldn't change that much. Hope Monty returns.


Please Eilidh show us Joey's reaction to Chas becoming Head Boy and getting that scholarship.

Thank you

Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:36 pm ]
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That was a lovely ending although I think Monty knows he won't be back. Hopefully they find a way to bring him back. It won't be the same without him! Looking forward to the sequel already, thanks! :-)

Author:  Chris [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:07 pm ]
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That was great. I have really enjoyed this and am looking forward eagerly to some more.

Author:  jayj [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:37 pm ]
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Poor Monty :cry:

Thank you for a wonderful drabble, Eilidh! It's been a proper pleasure to read.

Author:  JS [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:58 pm ]
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Eilidh, I've broken my 'keep to read with breakfast' rule because I couldn't wait - and it was fab. A really good ending to a most enjoyable drabble. I'm another very much looking forward to part 3 (and hoping that it all works out for Monty).
Thanks very, very much.

Author:  Squirrel [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:05 pm ]
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I have really enjoyed this. Poor Monty. I do hope something is worked out for him... I also hope that the dire straits in his family aren't bad enough to require him to work regardless of any other possible way forwards.

Thanks for the story Eilidh - I've really enjoyed it. Looking forwards to the next section as and when you can! :)

Author:  Catherine [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:30 pm ]
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Thank you, Eilidh. This has been lovely from beginning to end; although it would have been nice if you'd resolved Monty's problem before you finished!! I hope we'll see the sequel to this very soon (and maybe Helena's advice to Steve?).

Author:  abbeybufo [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:40 pm ]
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I shall miss this tremendously - your characters are so real - hope the writing of the next part comes quickly and easily to you so that we don't have to wait too long for our next 'fix' :D

Author:  cestina [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:09 pm ]
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A wonderful drabble - I found myself thinking about the people in it throughout the day and am thrilled to hear that the next part is already being planned.

Thank you so much for the daily delight!

Author:  Chris S [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:25 pm ]
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Many thanks for an excellent drabble.

Author:  AnneM [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:42 pm ]
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I have so much enjoyed reading this. I wonder what the school will be like with Charles' interpretation of the rules as "guidelines" rather than Steve's strict adherence to them. Could be interesting!

Echoing the pleas to bring Monty back.........

Thank you, Eilidh.

Author:  Cumbrian Rachel [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:50 pm ]
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Thanks for an excellent drabble. Like everyone else I'm eagerly awaiting the next part and hope you'll find a way for Monty to stay at the school.

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:13 pm ]
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Love Miller and Charles remembering Freddie's words to them and sending him an appropriate postcard. Wonder what Veta will make of it.

Thank you for a beautiful drabble and will now wait (im)patiently for part three, wit I hope Monty finding a place in it. Elizabeth as a prefect in another wise all boys school is also something to look forward too as well.

Thank you and enjoy a break.

Author:  lexyjune [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:30 pm ]
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Sad this is finished and really looking forward to the next episode. Thank you so much.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 6:46 pm ]
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:lol: Oh to be a fly on the wall when that postcard is received! And I absolutely love the way they celebrate their last day of non-prefectship. Now just to hope that I can be patient until the next part - I'm wondering what you've got in store! Personally, I vote a horribly strict new master who ends up in charge of K&K, and it all causes absolute mayhem and rebellion throughout the school...

*sits back and waits hopefully for more soon*

Author:  Abi [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:01 pm ]
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That was a brilliant finish! Loved them sliding down the bannisters and vanishing out of the door. :D Can't wait for the next installment, though....

Thank you!

Author:  Clodia [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:06 pm ]
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Thank you - I've really enjoyed this and will miss it.

Clodia

Author:  Cathy [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:48 pm ]
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Thank you so much. This was one of the best drabbles I've ever read. The characters are so real the way you've written them. I can't wait for Part 3.

Author:  honey lamb [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:32 pm ]
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That was lovely, thank you very much. I really felt I was in the school with the boys and I shall really miss the updates.

Another one looking for the next episode including the summer holidays in France and Joey getting her come-uppance when she realises Chas has no intention in the wide earthly world of going into the seminary

Author:  Nell [ Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:49 pm ]
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Have loved it and look forward to Chas Upper VI when you managed to get it started!

Many thanks!

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:45 am ]
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Thank you and I look forward to the next part when you resolve Monty's sad look.

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:11 am ]
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I'm sorry I haven't commented for a while; I've so enjoyed reading this, and look forward to reading the next instalments from this very realistic universe. Thank you!

Author:  di [ Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:43 am ]
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Joining in with those before me, thanking you for such a great story and looking forward to the sequel.

I loved this last part, especially the postcard to Freddie and sliding down the bannister. I'm sure the Head had a quiet chuckle to himself when he saw them. :lol:

It was sad to envisage Monty taking a final look round his school. I do hope you find a way of bringing him back next term as the quartet won't be the same without him - well, they won't be a quartet to start with but you all know what I mean I'm sure.

Enjoy the rest, Eilidh and thanks again.

Author:  chris84 [ Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:49 am ]
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Thank You. i have really enjoyed this and am also looking forward to your continuation of this universe :).

Author:  Tawny [ Fri Dec 03, 2010 10:54 am ]
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All I can do is echo the sentiment expressed by all those above me. I have loved this drabble and I think you have marvellous talent as a writer. Please Please can we have a part three?

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:23 pm ]
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Eilidh - I've been away and just got to read the last four posts in one go. I've really enjoyed the whole drabble, and while I feel for Monty's uncertainty about his future just at this moment I think/hope that you will find a means of ensuring his return so that next year, the school will, indeed, be governed by the 'Quartet'. Like everyone else, I'll be looking forward to Part 3 whenever you are ready to start posting - hope that inspiration will burn brightly and soon!!

Author:  jmc [ Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:29 am ]
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Very pleased to see there is going to be a part 3. I have thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for all your hard work and the frequent postings.

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