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Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:31 pm ]
Post subject:  You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 5th October

This drabble runs at roughly the same time as and in the same universe as Changing Directions. This can be read on it's own, though you might be slightly confused. It is the story of the older Maynard boys - both of them, though Charles really has the starring role. In CD, I accidentally aged both Stephen and Charles slightly, so they will stay the same age for this drabble. All that said, I've now realised there isnt a Maynard in sight in the first few posts...

June

"Bye Liz."

"Write to us, Liz!"

Elizabeth Braithwaite smiled cheerfully at the few of her classmates who had come to the front door (strictly against the rules) to see her off, and climbed into the car. The school driver took her to the train station, handed her an envelope from Madame containing her ticket, and saw her onto the platform. She thanked him politely and stood demurely until he had left the station, the picture of a perfect schoolgirl.

As soon as the train pulled in, Elizabeth found herself an empty compartment and settled down. She removed her school hat, throwing it into the luggage rack with a complete disregard for it's well being, replaced her heavy school shoes with light ones that she had in her bag, and untangled her long blonde hair from it's pigtails, combing it out. It fell in a heavy sheet to her waist, and she considered it thoughtfully. She looked, she eventually concluded, exactly llike one of the porcelain dolls which sat in her bedroom, gifts collected over the years from people who hadn't known what else to buy a young girl. She was small for her age, and eventually concluded that she also looked about 12, which she did not consider was a desirable state in a 16 year old who was trying to convince her father to take her, and her future career plans, more seriously. Hunting further through her bag, she found a pair of sharp scissors and, using the window as a mirror, calmly cut round at the level of her chin. The long strands fell to the floor and she collected them up and wrapped them in a bag, tucking them away with the scissors. At the very least, such a drastic change in her appearance might distract her father for a while, and Elizabeth very firmly believed that if people weren't sure what to shout at her about first, then they would be calmer by the time they decided.

This transformation accomplished, Elizabeth changed out of her school uniform into a casual skirt and jumper, found a book, and settled down to enjoy the long journey. Before long, however, she abandoned her book and fell to considering her situation.

Despite her relaxed attitude, Elizabeth found that she was very worried about the reaction of her father when she finally got home. She admitted herself that the last thing she deserved to get was anything she wanted, however she reasoned that what she had done had been the best plan she could come up with at the time.

Her mother had died when she was born, leaving Elizabeth to her father's care. Mr Braithwaite, recently out of the army, had refused to go back to his job and brought his daughter up to the best of his ability until she was eight years old. At that point, the family finances being tight, he had had to look for another option.

This option turned out the be the selling of their house and accepting a job as the senior housemaster and History master in a large Boys' boarding school, some fifty miles from the town they lived in. A small flat would be provided in the top of the senior boarding house, and a salary big enough to pay for Elizabeth to attend a large boarding school on the south coast. Her holidays were spent with her father at the school or on trips around the country, and until Elizabeth turned fifteen things were almost perfect.

Elizabeth had always known she was clever. She had fairly effortlessly topped every form she was in, and when she received the letter giving her school certificate results, she approached her father with some trepadation to discuss the possibility of training as a doctor at some point in the future.

"But I'd have to leave St Anne's, daddy." she explained earnestly, during the summer holidays. "I'd need to do all sorts of science, and Latin, and maths, and things like that. St Anne's won't let me do more than two classes in those things, and they want me to do Literature and French and Needlework." This last causing her to twist her face into a disgusted expression.

Her father had refused her request immediately. He would not take her from the school he knew to enroll her in another at such short notice, and he didn't particularly want her studying to become a doctor either, considering that the workload to be far too heavy for her. Elizabeth had tried discussion, sulks, and tantrums until the entire resident staff was sick of her, and delighted to see the back of her when her father returned her, still sulking, to St Anne's at the start of the new term.

Elizabeth determined then that her best course of action would be to get sent away from St Anne's at the first possible opportunity - thus forcing her father into sending her to a new school. Having been given the Form Captain's position in Lower Sixth, she proceeded to neglect her new duties, and her prep. She slipped quickly down the form lists, broke every rule she could think of and steadfastly ignored every attempt that her form mistress, head, and everyone else made to talk to her. The removal of her recently awarded Captainship she greeted with a shrug. The rows, talkings to, and detentions she either ignored, or treated with disdain. Eventually, shortly before Easter, she broke into the Stationary Cupobard and helped herself to a set of textbooks for the subjects she wanted to learn, climbed out of her bedrooom window in the early hours of the morning, walked into the town, and caught the first train back home - slipping in the back door and arriving at the flat in the top of the boarding house just as fully-fledged panic broke out at St. Anne's when it was reported that Elizabeth Braithwaite hadn't shown up for her first or second class, and no one knew where she was.

A monumental row was the result of that escapade, and the Headmistress of St. Anne's flatly refused to accept Elizabeth back, suggesting to Mr Brathwaite that his daughter would be happier if she was allowed to do what she wanted to do. Mr Braithwaite, deciding that this was the last thing his daughter deserved, enrolled her in a strict Parisian finishing school. Disgusted, Elizabeth repeated her previous tactics, adding to them a complete refusal to speak in anything except her own language, ignoring all instructions given to her in French, and behaved in the worst manner she could think of, and within the space of a term found herself expelled and in the train home.

Author:  KathrynW [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:14 pm ]
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Ooh thanks Eilidh, I really enjoyed Changing Directions which I read earlier and I'm very glad I've happened upon this already! I look forward to seeing more of it.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:50 pm ]
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Thanks for the early start on the boys tale. I remember Elizabeth being mentioned in CD, so good to learn more about her.

Author:  robinette [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:10 pm ]
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I loved CD and can't wait to see more of this!
Thanks Eilidh

Author:  shazwales [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:32 pm ]
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She seems very determined,looking forward to seeing more of this,thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:30 pm ]
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Her Father's an idiot though

Author:  Abi [ Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:49 pm ]
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I can't help liking Elizabeth, though her father seems a bit of a turnip.

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 5:13 am ]
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A very determined young lady - wonder why her father won't even consider her plans?


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  cal562301 [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:30 am ]
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A very interesting start. Like others, I'm not impressed by Elizabeth's father.

Thanks, Eilidh. Looking forward to more.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:26 pm ]
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Her father collected her silently from the station, and drove back to the school where they made their home. He ushered her into the flat, sat her down in the small sitting room and looked straight at her.

"Explain please, Elizabeth." he said. Elizabeth shivered at the anger in his voice. She twisted her hands in her lap nervously.

"I want to learn to be a doctor." she said quietly. "I have two years left at school. I want to study the subjects I need and then go and study to become a doctor. I don't want to go to finishing schools, or study needlework, or anythign else. I can do this, daddy, I know I can. Please." Her father sighed.

"I dont know what I can do about this, I really don't." he said, in a much gentler tone. "I don't want you to pin all your hopes on this, only to end up not being able to do it. Or for you to change your mind half way through. However, since you're determined, and any effort I've made to get you to consider anything different has failed, I suppose I'll have to let you give it a shot. Wait here." He left her there and made his way downstairs and across to the gloomy entrance hall, where he entered the Headmaster's office. They had worked together for many years, and the head smiled as his friend came in.

"Tom." he greeted him. "What can I do for you?"

"I need to talk to you about Elizabeth." her father said with a sigh. "You know, of course, that she's been sent home from Paris. The girl is as stubborn as a mule, and any effort I make to get her to change her mind from her chosen track is going to be wasted. Unfortunately, I also can't get her into a school where she will be able to do what she wants. The few with spaces are refusing to take a girl who has twice been expelled in the space of four months, and I am not at all keen to send her to the local High School." The head studied his friend over steepled fingers.

"I did warn you about this last summer - I said Elizabeth would get her own way. What are you proposing?" he asked eventually.

"Elizabeth has been studying her Higher certificate courses herself." her father continued. "She helped herself to the textbooks before she left St Anne's. Will you let her sit in some classes with the sixth forms, and take her exams from here? She won't be with the boys at any other time, only in a few classes." The head considered this.

"I'm not sure." he said eventually. "Elizabeth is obviously a disruptive influence in herself, never mind the disruption she'd cause anyway as a girl in a boys' school."

"She was never disruptive before this year." her father defended her, "I sure she wouldn't disturb things here - I'd make sure she knew this was her last chance. And we have had girls before, occasionally - remember they used to come in to do science before it was so widely taught in girls' schools."

"That was a long time ago, but I accept the point." the head said. "It's only a few weeks until the summer holidays. Elizabeth is, I think, a year ahead for her age, is she not?" her father nodded. "I'll agree at the moment." he said eventually. "She can join the boys for classes after the summer holidays - Lower Sixth would be best, I think, and she can repeat this year since she seems to have spent it doing as little as possible. However, if there is any trouble - any trouble at all - she'll have to go, as will any of the boys who are concerned in it. Also, I'll expect her to be near the top of the class - and next years Lower Sixth contains boys like Miller, and Maynard Minor. All their group are getting junior prefectships, and with any luck they'll turn their considerable brainpower to work, rather than havoc, at long last."

"I doubt that very much. No prefectships or anything else will calm those four down and make them obey they rules for more than about 10 minutes. But thanks, Ed." Tom Braithwaite said, relieved. "I'll make sure Elizabeth knows the conditions. There won't be any trouble, I guarantee."

"And of course, I will expect her to be in uniform for all classes." the head added. "I suppose she will be wearing a skirt instead of trousers, but otherwise I expect shirt, tie, and blazer, the same as the boys. I feel I might regret this, but I've known Elizabeth a long time - and as I said, if there's a problem..."

"There won't be." her father assured him. The two men sat for a while longer, working out the details and then Elizabeth's father made his way back to the flat, to find Elizabeth curled up on the sofa with a book. She jumped to her feet as he entered.

"Right." he said firmly. "This is your last chance. You will listen to me, and you will accept this, because the alternative is that I send you to stay with your Aunt Monica and attend the local high school there, do you understand?" Elizabeth nodded, thankful that she wasn't to be sent to her elderly aunt immediately.

"After the summer holidays, you will be enrolled as a pupil here." her father told her. "You will take your classes with the sixth forms, who will hopefully be mature enough to cope with the fact that you are that most unusual of creatures, a girl. Your meals, and accomodation will be in this flat. Your recreation time will be here too, and when your form are doing games, you will go for a walk." Elizabeth's face fell.

"I can't get you in to another girls school." her father said. "Your references from your previous Heads are appalling, and this is the only option left. I've only managed this because I've guaranteed Dr. Hammersley your best behaviour, and your hardest work. It's this, or Aunt Monica. Your choice."

"I'll stay." Elizabeth decided. "And I'll work hard and behave perfectly, I promise." her father nodded.

"Very well. I'll let Dr. Hammersley know. Oh, and Elizabeth?" he added, "If I hear one rumour of improper conduct - so much as a glance - between you and your new classmates, Aunt Monica will look like paradise, do you understand? I might add that the Head agrees with me on this - you will be leaving at once, as will any of the young men who are silly enough to risk anything." Elizabeth blushed scarlet, but agreed. "And now, finally, who on Earth gave you permission to cut off your hair?" he finished off. "I'll make arrangements with Mrs MacKenzie to take you into town to the hairdressers this week to get it trimmed properly, and for this afternoon, you can take yourself to your room and stay there as punishment for it. Leave your book here." he added, as she reached for it. Elizabeth sighed, and made her way into the tiny bedroom that she occupied when she was here. She curled up on the window ledge and looked out over the school grounds, watching some of the boys at Games below her. This was not how her plan had been supposed to turn out. Two years having lessons in a boys' school? She groaned.

"Focus on the end, Liz." she muttered to herself. "It'll be worth it in the end."

Author:  Spoot [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:29 pm ]
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I'm feeling somewhat worried about the emphasis that any boy involved in an incident with Elizabeth will be expelled.

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Thanks.

Author:  keren [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:43 pm ]
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Was any part of this ever published any where? (on the CBB)

The name and a possible future incident, seem familiar

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 5:12 pm ]
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There are references to Elizabeth in Changing Directions. Thanks for this Elildh, it will be good to see the boys at school.

Author:  robinette [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 5:56 pm ]
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I'm loving this Eilidh, its brill!!

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:08 pm ]
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keren wrote:
Was any part of this ever published any where? (on the CBB)


Elizabeth makes a brief appeareance (or 2, maybe?) in Changing Directions. Dr. Hammersley has a scene there as well, and several of Stephen and Charles' friends are mentioned too. This story was originally part of Changing Directions, but due to the fact that Elizabeth was not at all happy with a back seat role, it grew way out of hand and I had to separate them to the best of my ability. They do each have references to the other, though!

Hope that helps. :)

Author:  shazwales [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:25 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh,really enjoying this.

Author:  Abi [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:40 pm ]
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Glad Elizabeth's getting what she wanted, although it's going to be quite hard going for her. Still, I should think she's determined enough to make a success of it!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:58 pm ]
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Glad Elizabeth gets her chance but am hoping she doesn't throw it away fro anything

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:01 am ]
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Good for Elizabeth.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  charli [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:50 am ]
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I'm another one really enjoying this, and i think it's an interesting idea having her in a boys school.
Thank you for the update.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:16 pm ]
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Thank you all for the comments! This is the last Elizabeth-only post, there will be real CS characters in the next one, I promise!

After tea, which she had with her father in the flat, Elizabeth settled back down with her book again. She'd been reading for an hour or so when the door opened and one of the maids came in.

"Oh, I'm sorry! I didn't realise you were here or I would have knocked." she apologised. Elizabeth shook her head.

"It's ok, don't worry about it." she smiled. "No harm done." The girl set to work, dusting the flat quickly and replacing the towels in the small bathroom.

"I hope you don't mind me asking," she said hesitantly, when she was done, "But are you staying here all the time now? I'm presuming you're Mr Braithwaite's daughter? I thought Mrs Mac said you were only here in the holidays."

"I'm here forever - or at least, that's what it feels like." Elizabeth replied. "Two years I think, at least. I'm getting to do lessons with the boys." she finished glumly.

"Poor you." the other girl said fervently. "I left school last month, as soon as I possibly could. At least now I'm working I'm earning some money. I say... if you're going to be here for so long, I don't suppose you play hockey, do you?"

"I was on the team when I was at school." Elizabeth replied, feeling that it was uneccessary to add that she'd been thrown off that same team for bad behaviour less than a month after joining it.

"It's just... there's a group of us who left school over the past couple of years, but we really enjoyed playing and we've got a team that plays together on a Saturday morning. We're always looking for more people if you'd like to join us. Sometimes we play among ourselves but we get challenges from the schools, so we do get a fair number of matches. Oh, I've just realised I haven't introduced myself - I'm Kitty."

"Elizabeth." she replied. "And yes, that sounds great! I'm not allowed to do any sports with the boys, of course - though I'm hoping they might relax that for tennis - but other than that I'm limited to walks, and there's only so much walking you can do. I'll have to ask Daddy, of course, but I'm sure he won't mind."

"We play at Ashford Farm, out of the village on the other side - do you know it? Nora Ashford began it, and her father gave us enough ground to play on." As she finished this explanation, the click of heels was heard on the stairs and Kitty jumped to her feet in horror. "Mrs Mac!" she hissed, just as that lady herself appeared in the doorway.

"Exactly right." she replied. "I presume you're finished here, Kitty? In which case," as that young lady nodded mutely, "take yourself down to the laundry and help with the folding until it's time for you to go." Kitty rushed off, and Mrs Mac turned to Elizabeth,

"Elizabeth, you have an appointment the hairdresser tomorrow morning. Meet me at the front door at 10 - if you're late we'll miss the train."

"Yes, Mrs MacKenzie." Elizabeth replied, very properly. "And please, Kitty won't get into trouble, will she? I kept her with talking, I'm sorry - I won't do it again." The housekeeper's rather severe expression softened.

"She's not in trouble." she assured her. "I know what Kitty's like - she talks too much, but she works hard. Now, on the subject of working hard, I need to get on. I'll see you tomorrow."

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:52 pm ]
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Pleased you have found a way for Elizabeth to have some games. I hope the authority will let her take part.

Author:  JellySheep [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:41 pm ]
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I've just found this, and it looks like it's going to be great. I'm looking forward to reading more and finding out what happens. Her father is rather silly about not wanting her to pursue medicine. The hockey team sounds like a good positive activity.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:16 pm ]
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Glad Elizabeth's found a friend - or at least a potential friend. It must be rather a lonely existence for her. And the hockey will be good too.

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:57 pm ]
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An interesting experiment!

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:40 pm ]
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Thanks, glad Kitty was so nice

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:58 am ]
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Kitty sounds a real character.


Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:55 am ]
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How on earth did I miss the beginning of this? Thanks, looks F.A.B. so far!

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:58 am ]
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"Prefects?"

"Sir, you can't be serious!"

"Us? Prefects?"

"Sir's lost his marbles!"

The four exclamations came simultantously, and Dr Hammersley suppressed a smile.

"I assure you, Maynard, that I am perfectly serious, and no, Montgomery, I am in full possession of my... ahem... marbles. Yes, you four will be the junior prefects next year." The Head sat back and regarded the four shocked faces in front of him.

"But Sir!"

"Yes, Miller?"

"Sir, we're... we can't... I mean to say... You can't..."

"For an articulate boy, Miller, you are making a terrible mess of a simple sentence."

"What Miller means, Sir, is that we're the last four in the school to be made prefects. I mean - well, speaking bluntly, Sir, our conduct record is as long as this room, you can't be going on form places because Monty - I mean, Montgomery - and I are here, you can't be going on age because Maynard's here - really, Sir, none of us expected this at all."

"What you expected, Jones, is neither here nor there. Now, boys, I have to meet the govenors soon and show them around. I sugggest you return to whatever you were doing before I called you in, and get used to the idea that the rest of your school lives will be spent as prefects." He nodded to them and watched them file out, still looking shocked by the very idea of prefectships. He recalled the heated debate in the staff room over them - for every staff member who said that they were enough trouble without authority, another pointed out the complete lack of leaders of any sort in the current Upper Fifth. Eventually, those speaking out in favour of them had won by a narrow margin, and the decision had been passed. Dr. Hammersley hoped that the boys who had just left his study would give him no reason to take change his mind.

The four boys wandered back out into the entrance hall and, in defiance of the school rules, sat down on the main staircase.

"Well." Miller said, after a while.

"Prefects." Jones added, sounding depressed.

"Shiny badges and shouting at kids for doing things we did." Monty sighed.

"Setting a Good Example." Charles Maynard, finished, the capital letters evident by his tone. They sat in silence for another few minutes.

"What were we doing before the head called us in?" Miller asked.

"Nothing." Monty replied. "Come on, chaps, it's not for another three months almost. We've got the rest of this term and the whole of the hols to go. Lets cheer up a bit and do something more fun."

"Like what?" Charles asked. Monty looked around for inspiration.

"Don't know." he admitted eventually, defeated.

"Well, I'm going to the nets." Jones said, getting to his feet. "We won't get much more practice in this term."

"I'll come with you." Miller agreed. Charles shook his head.

"I've got a Chem coaching in half an hour." he explained.

"I'll stay here too then." Monty decided. "It's too hot for cricket."

"Lazy object." Jones grinned over his shoulder as they went out. Charles looked around him.

"You know," he began conversationally, "I bet I could climb those curtain things there and get into the staff corridor without going up the main stairs."

"Not a chance!" he friend exclaimed. "You're small, yes, but you're not that small. You'd be on the floor in a heap with the curtain on top of you."

"I don't think so." Charles replied, studying the curtain thoughfully. "If I bunch it up and then go like this..." he tailed off as he began to swarm up the heavy curtain as if it was a rope in the gym hall. Monty watched him.

"Minor, come down! You'll kill yourself falling from there!" he called. Charles looked up at the railing just above his head, and reached as high as he could. Just as his fingers brushed the edge of the wood, the door opened and Dr. Hammersley entered with the school Govenors.

"Who... Maynard Minor! Get down from there at once!" he thundered. Charles jumped and loosened his grip. He began to slide down the curtain, scrabbling for purchase with his feet as he went. Eventually, he managed to get his toes onto the top of a large painting and rested there for a second, still gripping the curtain. "Don't stand on that!" the head exclaimed, rushing forward. Even as he spoke, there was a loud snap, and the portrait plunged to the floor, where Charles landed on top of it with a bump that shook all the breath out his body, and banged his head hard off the floor.

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:11 pm ]
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So Charles expresses himself at school as he is so nondescript at home! School must be lively with him and his friends. Looking forward to seeing Elizabeth with them next term. Thanks for the update.

Author:  Chatelaine [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:20 pm ]
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Phew! You had me worried there that Charles was going to come over all sensible and turn into an amalgam of Mary-Lou and Dimsie!

Author:  Abi [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:49 pm ]
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:lol: Love Charles' way of responding to his impending responsibility!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:17 am ]
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Thanks, love how Chas is so different to at home. Stephen must chuckle about it at times

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:39 am ]
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I have just read this all through, and it is a really interesting slant. Changing Directions was so well written and gave such tantalising glimpses into the boys lives; I am really looking forward to finding out more about them.

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:00 pm ]
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Thanks for the comments. I've got a nice quiet period at work just now, so I'm getting plenty written!

Almost immediately, Matron, using that special sixth sense for trouble that all matrons have, bustled down the stairs, looking angry.

"What on earth has he been doing now?" she demanded, looking around. "Climbing curtains? I never did see the like, not in all my time here. That boy will kill himself before he leaves this school, I'd stake my salary on it. It's ok Doctor, I'll take him now, you get on with the guests. Montgomery, leave that picture alone! Get out of here, go on, before you hurt yourself too. Don't worry about Maynard, he's only knocked himself out, and I'm not surprised. He'll be ok in a few minutes. Maynard, Jeffries, what are you doing?"

"Nothing Matron." Stephen replied promptly, drawing back from where he'd been hanging over the bannister outside the prefects' room.

"Good. Then you can come down here and help carry this brother of yours to the San. Come along! Quicker we can get him there the quicker I can make sure he's not done himself any damage."

Charles remained motionless until Stephen and his friend had put him down on a bed in the San, and then his eyes flickered open.

"OK, Chas?" Stephen demanded, attempting to sound unconcerned. Charles stared blankly at him for a second, then turned his head away and was violently sick.

"He'll be fine, I'm sure." Matron replied, hurrying past. "There's the tea-bell - go on down, you can come back after prep if you want and see how he is. Almost certainly just bruised and a slight concussion."

"More than slight, the way his head bounced off the floor." Stephen's friend remarked from the doorway. "Come on Maynie. We'll get some food and come back later, if you want. Minor's made of rubber, anyway, he'll be fine. Look at the knocks he's taken before. Anyway, you can't expect him to go a whole term without a night in the San, can you?"

When they returned, they found Charles sitting up in bed, talking to Monty, Miller, and Jones, who Matron seemed to have let in to see him against her better judgement.

"Hello you two." he said cheerfully, when Stephen and Jeffries appeared. "Sorry for the fright." he added with a grin at his brother. Stephen sighed.

"It's not the first, and I doubt it'll be the last." he said. "And young Felix is taking after you, did you hear? Armstrong was taking the kids today for sports day practice, and Felix got himself stuck up one of the pine trees at the side of the rugger field."

"Armstrong said he only turned his back for thirty seconds." Jeffries added. "Then half the kids were yelling and he had to get your brother out the tree, and he - your brother, I mean - had got himself stuck as well. It's a good thing there's only one more of you to come. Probably by the time he gets to Upper Fifth he'll have burnt the school down."

"We never managed that." Miller said regretfully.

"Never even a decent explosion." Charles agreed. "And now we never will."

"Stupid prefect badges." Jones sighed, helping himself to the chocolate on the bedside table.

"What?" Stephen and Jeffries demanded in unison.

"Prefect badges, big brother." Charles said with a grin. "You know, that thing there pinned to your blazer. You're talking to next years junior prefects." The two older boys exchanged glances.

"What did we do to deserve this?" Jeffries asked. Stephen shrugged.

"We must have been very bad in a previous life." he speculated. "Me particularly. Not only do I have to live with him, I have to work with him at school as well?" A chorus of protests rose from the younger four at these words, and Matron came hurrying up the room to chase them all out.

"And you, try and go to sleep!" she added over her shoulder to Charles, closing the door behind her.

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 2nd August

Quote:
"We must have been very bad in a previous life." he speculated. "Me particularly. Not only do I have to live with him, I have to work with him at school as well?" A chorus of protests rose from the younger four at these words, and Matron came hurrying up the room to chase them all out.


I love Stephen's response to Charles here.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  cestina [ Mon Aug 02, 2010 1:37 pm ]
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Love this - so nice to see more of the boys in action.

Thank you Eilidh (please, how do you pronounce your name so that I can say it to myself as I write it? :) )

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:13 am ]
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I haven't read 'Changing Directions' but I'm very much getting into this. Thankyou, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Aug 03, 2010 11:47 am ]
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August

Felix could hear voices. They seemed very loud, thundering in his head. He closed his eyes and leant against Stephen, feeling very sick.

"Docked at last! What an awful crossing. Hope we don't get any more like that in a hurry. It says here that someone from Dartmouth will be here to meet me, Steve. I guess we'll see them ok? Where do you think they'll be?"

"Did anyone see what I did with my blazer?"

"It's alright for you three, I'd to spend it outside with Felix, poor kid. Seasickness is awful, isn't it? Give it a rest, Mike, we'll find your whoever he is once we get off the boat. Rod, isn't that it there on that chair?"

"Come on F'lix, I know you feel rotten but we need to get off the boat."

"You'll have to carry him, Steve. He's not going anywhere, poor kid. It was a rough crossing, wasn't it? Do you think you can manage him if we take the luggage?"

"Of course I can. Chas, Roddy, sort the cases out, would you? Mike, why are you putting that in there? That's your jumper and Chas's case. It won't do you much good in there. Come on Felix, up you come. That's it. I've got you, you don't need to hold on. Not long now kid, and you can have a sleep when we get on the train. You'll feel better after that."

"This is mayhem, I can't see a thing. Where are we going, Steve?"

"Could be worse, could have Geoff here too."

"No thanks, Roddy and I'll be long gone by that time, and Chas will too - he'll be your responsibility, Mike! Chas, what on earth is that?"

"Porter's trolley. Pinched it from over there. Pile the stuff on, Mike. Rod, watch where you're putting yours, you're not getting our train, remember. Oh, and there's a chap in a uniform over there and some boys dressed like Mike beside him. Guess that's where we're going. D'you think we can put Felix on the trolley too?"

"Best not, I'd say. Let's get moving then. Mike first, and then we'll go to the station. Alright, Felix?"

Felix roused himself slightly to reply. "Hate boats."

"I know kid, I know. Need to convince Dad to let us fly, eh? Oh, good afternoon, Sir - this is Michael Maynard, you should be expecting him? I'm his brother - we travelled from Switzerland overnight, yes. It was a rough crossing, Sir, yes - bad night for it I think."

"Bye then Mike - see you at Christmas. Have fun."

"Have a good time, Mike. Write to us if you want. Might write back if I can be bothered."

"Got those cases, Chas? Where are my rugger boots? And what's that bag? Right, come on then, train. Hold on Felix, not far now. If you're going to be sick, let me know in advance though, eh? Oh blast, Chas, run back and give Mike his jumper, would you? The idiot's left it on the trolley."

"Caught him. Platform Six, is it? And five for Roddy. Come on then."

"Run, Rod, that's your train! See you when we play you, maybe! Otherwise we'll see you at Christmas."

"'Bye! Chas, prepare to be defeated!"

"In your dreams, Roddy Richardson!"

"Where's our train? Oh, this one. There's an empty carriage here, Steve - I'll bag that. Felix can sleep until some more of the chaps get here."

"Shove that blanket over him then Chas, he's cold. Who gets on next? Baxter's crowd, isn't it?"

"Should be a few of them this year, they've cut down the number of stations they're meeting at. Oh, I'll be glad to get to school. I hate all this travelling."

"Not as much as Felix does."

"True. Poor kid."

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:28 pm ]
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What a horrid crossing they have had. Pleased they could all travel together as far as the English coast at least. If it was overnight it seems as if it was one of the long crossings rather than just the Channel ones the girls use which is hard on Felix in particular. Thanks for the update.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:38 pm ]
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What a mad journey, especially to have to do themselves! You think that somebody could have been spared to chaperone them... Suddenly Stephen's responsibility at home as well all makes sense!

Thankyou for the update.

Author:  shazwales [ Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:17 pm ]
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I agree with Ariel about Stephen,there were always three of the triplets and usually staff or other girls but,Stephen seems to have been left to cope on his own,even though the boys were going to different places.

Author:  Abi [ Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:29 pm ]
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Loved the splendid confusion of that scene! Poor Stephen having to take charge of that rabble, though!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:49 am ]
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No wonder Steve is so responsible. Surely one of the triplets could have gone with them. Aren't they at Uni by this time?

Author:  Finn [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:43 am ]
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Thoroughly enjoying this, Eilidh!

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:52 am ]
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Thanks for all the comments. I get the impression Stephen rather enjoys it - at least I hope he does, since he has a year as Head Boy to go!

A few hours later the train stopped at a big station, and a horde of boys poured on to it. Baxter, one of Stephen's closest friends, found them quickly and joined them in the compartment, followed by two or three of the rest of the sixth.

"Maynie!" he yelled as he entered, thumping Stephen on the shoulder before turning to greet the other two. "Minor. Kid. Good hols?"

"Had better." Stephen replied guardedly. "Got everyone from here, I presume?"

"The whole lot." Baxter replied, waving a sheet of paper with numerous ticks on it.

"Good. Felix, if you're feeling better, some of the others from the prep got on further down, I saw them." Felix still looked pale, but got up and disappeared into the corridor. "Poor kid was sick all the way from France." Stephen explained. "What about you, good hols?"

"Stayed with the Mater's folk in Ireland." Baxter replied, moderating his tones slightly. "Only went indoors to sleep, and that only sometimes. Good enough, really! Your people go away?"

"Just at home." Charles replied.

"Just at home, he says." one of the others jeered. "Like just at home for you two isn't more exotic than where most of us go on holiday!" They all laughed.

"I say, you crossed from France last night?" Baxter demanded. "What happened to staying in Devon first like you normally do?"

"Can't stay in Devon before they come across, can they?" one of the others laughed. "Not sure what's worse, Baxter, your English or your Geography."

"Give it a rest, you know what I meant." Baxter replied, not the least bit concerned by this insult.

"Mr Head Boy here is trusted to bring his little brothers over without an escort." Charles replied. "Especially now we know the journey so well. So we escaped the horror of travelling with the mistresses from the school next door, thankfully, and it meant we could have an extra few days at home. Have to say, though, I'd swap living in Switzerland for a few hours journey to school like you lot have, rather than a 2 day journey like we've just come from." he added, as they pulled into the next station and in the rush of more boys piling into the train, the conversation was changed. Stephen jumped out to meet the Upper Fifth Former who was the oldest person here, receiving the list of names from him and checking that everyone in a navy blue uniform got on the train. This pattern was repeated at the rest of the stops, until finally they swept into the little station that served the nearest town to the school.

"There are hundreds of us!" Charles exclaimed, as the boys poured off the train.

"Can't be." Stephen shouted back over the noise, "There's only 250 in the school, and a lot of them will be driving or coming with the nothern crowd. Lets get them organised, anyway." He jumped onto a nearby bench and attempted to make himself heard over the crowd, with no success. Baxter, famous for having the loudest voice in the school, climbed up beside him and whistled piercingly.

"Shut up, all of you, and listen to Maynie!" he yelled. The noise level dropped appreciatively. "Alright boss, do your job." he added in an undertone. Stephen grinned at him, then looked around at the crowd, ranging from a small group of terrified looking eight year olds, to some of his own form.

"Right!" Stephen announced. "There are four buses outside the station. Prep take the first two you come to, Baxter and Maynard Minor are going with you! Senior school, take the others - I'll be on one and Blakely will take the other. You know how it works, we do it every term! The northern group is due here in half an hour, so lets get out of here before they arrive! Line up and march!" The three boys he'd named had already vanished, Charles and Baxter vaulting the station gate and climbing into two of the coaches, while Blakely stood beside the gate, counting the boys as they filed past him.

"How many?" Stephen asked, bringing up the tail of the line.

"126." Blakely replied thankfully.

"And none of them ran off before they reached the coaches." Baxter added. "Tell the Head that Minor and I will walk back over from the prep once we've dumped the kids, would you? And don't you go bagging the best study when I'm not there, Blake!" he called after them

"Good, we haven't lost any." Stephen said, relieved. "I didn't think we had, but it's best to be sure. Lets get to school now before Jeff's crowd turns up." The drivers set off as soon as the four prefects climbed aboard the coaches, and Charles grinned and waved to Stephen as he passed. This was it, the school term really had begun. And this time, they were at the top. Charles intended to enjoy every second of it.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:06 pm ]
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Why am I worried by that last sentence? At least they all made it safely onto the coaches!

Thanks for the update :D

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:05 pm ]
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Wondered for a minute why their holiday had not been as good as usual until I realised it was when Len left home with only a card to say she was alright.

I hope Charles does not have too many wild ideas stored up for school!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:27 pm ]
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PaulineS wrote:
Wondered for a minute why their holiday had not been as good as usual until I realised it was when Len left home with only a card to say she was alright.

I hope Charles does not have too many wild ideas stored up for school!


I wondered that too, until I realised! I'm glad they preferred coming accross alone. I can see how it would be more fun and Len did get to travel on her own at 17 in Althea

Author:  Abi [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:41 pm ]
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It's a good thing Steve does enjoy the responsibility! He seems to be pretty good at it, anyway. Really enjoying this Eilidh, thanks. :D

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:56 pm ]
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Travelling with the mistresses from the school next door. Shudder. No wonder they prefer to travel by themselves!

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 12:11 pm ]
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Hopefully this isn't too boring at the moment. Both Charles and Elizabeth insisted on such a lot of scenes!

Later that evening, Elizabeth wandered around the flat alone. In her bedroom the navy blue skirt and blazer were hanging on her wardrobe door and the white blouse and navy and silver tie were folded on the chair, ready for the next day. All the boys who had any distance to come to school had arrived that afternoon, and Elizabeth could hear shouts and bangs echoing up through the senior boarding house to where she was waiting. Feeling like she couldn't sit still for a minute, Elizabeth made her way down through the boarding house and across to the main school. She had spent enough time exploring to have a good idea of the layout, and she quickly found herself outside a large brown door with the words 'Lower VI' printed on it in black lettering. She had never ventured inside this room yet, but now took a deep breath and pushed the door open.

Her first thought was that it was very like any other classroom - the double desks, as yet unclaimed, were in neat rows, each engraved with the initials of many boys who had sat at it before. The blackboard stood in the corner, and beside it on the wall was a big world map. Several bookcases ran along the opposite wall, holding a bewildering array of books and at one end, several neat piles of text books ready to be handed out the following day.

Elizabeth made her way over to these and flicked through one of them. It looked similar to the books she'd used at St Anne's, and she was grateful that she'd at least have some idea of what was being taught. She lost herself further in the book, until suddenly she was disturbed by voices outside.

"What are you two doing here?"

"Wandering. Looking at things. Wasting time."

"Breaking bounds."

"Oh come on, Maynie! Term hasn't started yet!"

"We only came down to have a look at the Lower VI room. We were bored. The other two are still unpacking."

"Come on, show us around! Stop being so Head Boyish." the volume increased greatly as the door banged open. Elizabeth whirled round and stared nervously at the four young men who had just entered the room. They, in turn, stared back at her as if she was a ghost.

"Hello." one of them said eventually. "Who are you and why are you in here?" Elizabeth pulled herself up straight and summoned an air of confidence that was the last thing she was feeling.

"I'm -" she paused, remembering her father's instructions on using her first name when she was with the boys. "I'm Miss Braithwaite." that was what they'd settled on - she'd refused to use her surname alone. "I'm here because I was bored, and I hadn't seen my classroom yet, so I thought I'd come and have a look." The red haired boy looked like he was about to choke.

"Your classroom?" he demanded. "You can't be a teacher!"

"No, I'm not." Elizabeth agreed. "I'm a member of the Lower Sixth. And now, as I'm at rather a disadvantage - you are?" The redhead seemed to have been robbed of all speech by this last comment, and merely opened and closed his mouth. It was left to the boy who had spoken first to intervene.

"I'm Maynard." he told her. "I'm Head Boy this year. This beside me is Jeffries, who's my deputy, on the other side of him is my brother, Maynard Minor and the fool on the end is Montgomery, commonly known as Monty. What on earth do you mean, you're in the Lower Sixth? You're a - well, you're a girl."

"Excellently noted." his brother muttered. "Full marks for observation, and a gold star for stating the obvious."

"Wait." Jeffries, who hadn't spoken yet, looked at her closely. "Braithwaite, you said? Like, Mr Braithwaite who teaches history?"

"Yes." Elizabeth nodded. "I couldn't do the subjects I wanted to at my school so he arranged with your head for me to do them here instead. I'm here for two years." At this, Monty burst out laughing.

"You had us." he told her. "We really believed you. I knew Braithwaite's daughter lived here in the hols. I guess your school doesn't go back until Monday?"

"I'm telling the truth." Elizabeth insisted. He continued to laugh, and the other three looked unsure.

"If you turn up in my class tomorrow..." Monty thought for a moment, then turned to the others "I'll tell you what, if she's telling the truth, I'll sit beside Kettering for the whole of this term and let her have my desk."

"Who's Kettering?" Jeffried asked, interested.

"You know, small, skinny chap - looks a bit like there was some sort of rodent somewhere in his family tree. Can talk for hours on the history of the steam engine and similar railway stuff, most boring chap I've ever met in my life. He's ended up with a room to himself this year, I heard - there are 25 of us, like usual, and rather than fighting to see who got the single, we were fighting over who didn't have to share with Kettering."

"That's some punishment." the younger Maynard boy agreed. "For you, that is, not for me. Sounds like quite a good deal for me." he winked at her, and Elizabeth felt her cheeks growing hot.

"Oy." his brother said, slapping him on the back of the head. "Enough. And you two stop talking nonsense as well." he added, "Come on, we're not even supposed to be in here. Jeff and I need to be doing lights out the the fourths in ten minutes. Do you want to walk back over to the boarding house with these two?" he asked her, indicating the younger boys. Elizabeth shook her head.

"I can't." she replied. "I'm not supposed to have anything to do with you lot outside lessons. I'm sure they'll relax it eventually, but I guess breaking the rules on the first night of term wouldn't look good."

"You are enjoying this head boy thing far too much." the younger of the Maynards grumbled. "I'm sure that nowhere in the How to be a Head Boy book does it support physical violence to younger siblings. I was only commenting that having Miss Braithwaite as a desk mate wouldn't be..." he ducked and dived out the door as his brother raised his hand again, closely followed by Monty.

"Hard luck, you could've escorted her right back to her dorm." she head Monty comment as they moved off, followed by a short scuffle, the sound of running footsteps, and then silence.

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 1:25 pm ]
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Loved the meeting between Elizabeth and Charles. Poor Kettering.

Author:  cestina [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:14 pm ]
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Goodness, no boredom here Eilidh! This is lovely - and Ariel, if you really haven't read Changing Directions you truly should, post haste :D

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 3:39 pm ]
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Thanks for the rec :D

And, also, thankyou for the update!

Author:  Finn [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 7:15 pm ]
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Still thoroughly enjoying this, Eilidh, especially the little touches of humour - deftly done!

Thanks :)

Author:  Abi [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:29 pm ]
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I'm loving this - the characters just come alive. (And yes, Changing Directions was brilliant!).

Author:  charli [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:35 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
"Good, we haven't lost any." Stephen said, relieved. "I didn't think we had, but it's best to be sure.


Love it :lol:

Thank you for 2 long updates..this is one of my favourite drabbles at the moment :D

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:10 am ]
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Lovely introducion for Elizabeth.

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:32 pm ]
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Friday's post, and it's Charles' turn. Thank you all for the lovely comments.

Charles woke up early. Quiet snores on the other side of the room told him Monty was still asleep, and he got up quietly, rejoicing in the smaller rooms that the VI form were allowed. He dressed quickly, picked up his shoes, and left the room, carrying his shoes until he reached the staircase where he sat down on the top step to put them on.

"Good Morning, Maynard!" said a voice behind him. "You're up early!" Charles grinned at his housemaster, who he'd always got on well with.

"Good morning, Sir." he said, very properly. "Yes, Sir. Just thought I'd go for a wander round before breakfast."

"Your alter ego not with you?"

"Monty? No Sir, still asleep."

"Lazy object. You've grown over the summer, Maynard!" he added as Charles stood up

"Yes, Sir, so I've heard." Charles replied. "Nearly as tall as my brother now."

"Well, off you go then - don't be late for breakfast. Have a nice wander."

"Yes, Sir. Thank you." Charles called over his shoulder. He left the house by the front door and wandered around the school garden. It was good to be back at school. Maybe there would be a letter from Len today. She had always written regularly to them and she would surely know that they were worried about her. He could understand her not wanting to write when they were at home, but surely now that they were back at school she'd be in touch soon. Charles put it to the back of his mind and made his way across to the playing fields.

"Minor! Hey, Minor!" Charles didn't have to turn around to recognise Baxter's voice, and he slowed his pace until the big prefect caught up with him. "You're up early."

"I woke up." he explained briefly. Baxter was Stephen's friend, and Charles wasn't very sure what he wanted with him. "Anyway, you're up too."

"Heh - Jeff was snoring too loudly for anyone to sleep through." Baxter explained. "I've got no idea how your brother put up with him last year. Anyway, now I've met you, I wanted to talk to you."

"What about?"

"You're a junior pree this year, aren't you?"

"Yes, for my sins. Actually, considering my sins, I'm still not sure entirely why I am one, but the Head assures me he can read his own writing and I'm on the list."

"Anyone given you a job yet?"

"Between tea yesterday and seven in the morning on the first day of term? No, not yet."

"Can I have you as Junior Games?"

"That depends on what Junior Games involves." Charles replied guardedly.

"Bit of coaching for the Prep or the fourths - Lower V at a push, you won't have to do anything with the Uppers though, standing in for me as host at home games if I'm at an away one, and responsibility for the football and tennis teams. I've always been a rugger and cricket man, so I'm not too great at the others and I could use someone who's halfway decent in charge."

"I'm not great with the kids. I haven't really got the patience for them."

"You'll give it a try though, won't you? You've got an army of younger brothers and sisters, you must have some idea. I mean, you're the only Junior this year who's even remotely good at games. Well, Jones is good, of course, but he has a bad ankle, you remember, and no one will even consider allowing him to do games this year. Miller's a bookworm," Baxter said this last with a tone of utter contempt "and the last one is your friend Monty and he's... well..."

"The laziest man to grace the world since Rip van Winkle?" Charles suggested. "Yes, I see. Oh well, I suppose I'll do it then. I can't promise I'll be any good, but I'll do my best and saints can't do more, as my mother keeps telling me. There's the bell."

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:42 pm ]
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I wanted to quote all the bits that made me laugh, but that would be most of it! Thankyou for the update :D

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:22 pm ]
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i would hope Jones has two ankles!!! He could not do games with out one in fact. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

I could not resist, i have the same feelings about poor use of English in relation to illness and disabilities as Hilda has to "can" and "may". I really would like to know how a disabled toilet is available for use, if it is disabled it should be out of use as broken!!!!

Thanks for a lovely update. I do like your Charles in this universe and I can now understand his response to Len in Changing Directions. If anyone is reading this who has not read Changing Directions my advise is do so quickly as it makes parts of this more interesting and it is excellent,

Author:  Chatelaine [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:24 pm ]
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PaulineS wrote:
i would hope Jones has two ankles!!! He could not do games with out one in fact. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


Well, maybe that's why he's off games? :lol:

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:32 pm ]
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PaulineS wrote:
I could not resist, i have the same feelings about poor use of English in relation to illness and disabilities as Hilda has to "can" and "may".


Apologies, I missed out a word (somehow, despite repeatedly proof reading it). :lol: What Jones actually had was a bad ankle... Edited now.

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:22 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
PaulineS wrote:
I could not resist, i have the same feelings about poor use of English in relation to illness and disabilities as Hilda has to "can" and "may".



Apologies, I missed out a word (somehow, despite repeatedly proof reading it). :lol: What Jones actually had was a bad ankle... Edited now.



Sorry Eilidh

I was not getting at you, but the way English can be used to have two meanings.

Author:  janetbrown23 [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:53 pm ]
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"This door is alarmed" always gets me asking who alarmed it.

Author:  abbeybufo [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:30 pm ]
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janetbrown23 wrote:
"This door is alarmed" always gets me asking who alarmed it.


Oh me too!

Loving this Eilidh - thanks for the regular updates :D

Author:  Abi [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:33 pm ]
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That was a great update - loving Charles in this!

(Whenever I see a receptacle labelled 'staff tips' I'm always tempted to put in suggestions for ways they could improve. :) )

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:13 am ]
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Thanks, really enjoying seeing more of the boys

Author:  Chatelaine [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:25 am ]
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abbeybufo wrote:
janetbrown23 wrote:
"This door is alarmed" always gets me asking who alarmed it.


Oh me too!



I just say "boo" as I pass the door :D

Totally loving this - especially the fact that, despite his best efforts, Charles is still a prefect this term!

Author:  RroseSelavy [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:10 am ]
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abbeybufo wrote:
janetbrown23 wrote:
"This door is alarmed" always gets me asking who alarmed it.


Oh me too!


South West Trains went through a phase of asking passengers to "politely close doors." Needless to say, I always treated their doors with the utmost courtesy :D

Thanks Eilidh, am (still) really enjoying reading this.

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:49 am ]
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Later that morning Elizabeth, neatly dessed in her new uniform, was introduced to her Form Master - a Mr Hopkins. The boys were already in the Hall, waiting for the assembly to begin, and he merely looked at her for a few seconds before nodding.

"Very well. Change must come to us all, however unwelcome it appears. Come!" he demanded, striding into the Hall. Elizabeth nearly had to run to keep up, and almost crashed into him when he stopped beside a row containing boys who looked about her age. "Sit there." he instructed, pointing to the chair on the end. Elizabeth sat, her cheeks burning, as every boy within hearing distance turned their heads and stared at her. The master left the room again, and she stared at her hymn book, wishing that her father had found another alternative for her, and failing that, that she was back at St. Anne's, needlework or no needlework. Just as she felt she'd have to get up and scream if the attention wasn't taken off her, the boy she'd met the night before - Maynard, she told herself firmly, trying to remember names - stood up and banged a hymn book off the desk at the front. Silence fell slowly.

"If you're all quite finished making an exhibition of yourselves?" he demanded. "The head won't be against putting everyone looking in the wrong direction into detention, I'm sure." Elizabeth felt the focus of attention shift away from her and sighed with relief. "That's better." Maynard continued. "Now, first hymn is number 93. Find it and sit quietly until the Staff get here. Baxter, go and ring the bell, would you?" he called to another boy at the back of the hall, who nodded and vanished.

The bell pealed through the building a moment later, followed by the last few boys who had been held up. The door opened again and the school got to it's feet as the staff entered to take their places on the stage, followed by the Head.

"It's nice to see you all back." the Head told them, smiling. "I don't have much to say to you this morning, I'm sure you'll be pleased to hear. Our Head Boy this year is Maynard, as I'm sure you've guessed as he's standing here announcing hymns. His Deputy is Jeffries, and the Games Captain is Baxter. The other prefects are Whiting, Blakely and Stevenson, and the Junior Prefects this year are Jones, Miller, Maynard Minor and Montgomery - quite the collection of M's, in fact! We have a few new pupils this year outside the Upper Fourth - three in the Lower Fifth, two in Upper Fifth, and due to unexpected circumstances, Miss Braithwaite will be joining the Lower Sixth." Once again, every head in the room swivelled to look at Elizabeth and she turned bright red. "Miss Braithwaite will be a day pupil as far as you are concerned - please make her, and all the other new pupils, feel welcome. Now, I don't think there are any more announcements to make? Oh yes there are - Maynard would like me to tell the prefects that there will be a meeting in the prefects room immediately after lunch, and Mr. Wilkins would like all those who wish to try out for one of the teams to put their names on the correct list in the Gym Hall before Friday. There is an addition to that last note from Baxter, which is that anyone who does not put their name on the list before Friday will not be trying out for any of the teams, and he will only accept your own death as an excuse for turning up on Saturday without being on the list. Now that really is all - we'll have the hymn, and then get on with doing some work!"

At the piano, the music master started the hymn. It was one Elizabeth didn't know and she listened to the rest of the room as they sang loudly. Mr Hopkins appeared to lead Lower Sixth back to their classroom, where Elizabeth stood to the side as there was a busy scuffle over desks. To her amusement, she watched Maynard Minor and the boy they called Monty argue violently for a few seconds before Monty moved across the aisle to take an empty seat beside a small, scruffy looking boy who had been staring at Elizabeth with undisguised pleasure, and who then looked at Monty in disappointment.

"Miss Braithwaite, it seems that is your seat beside Maynard." Mr Hopkins told her, and Elizabeth hurried to sit down. "This will be your classroom!" he thundered, and all the boys jumped slightly. "Unless you are taking sciences, your lessons will be in here! Allow me to stress that it is not necessary to carve your initials in your desk, despite popular belief to the contrary! Now, timetables." He waved a sheaf of papers at the nearest boy, who took them and began to hand them out. "Pin these inside your desks." he instructed. "And learn them as soon as possible - the last thing we need is you all turning up in the wrong place at the wrong time." Elizabeth tuned out slightly as the rest of the start of term notices washed over her. It seemed all schools were more or less the same at certain points.

In addition to the boredom of the notices, Elizabeth was uncomfortably aware of Maynard - she must, she decided, learn his first name - sitting beside her. The desks were not big, and he regularly brushed against her when one of them moved. Elizabeth contemplated trying to move away, but then decided that if she sat near the edge she'd end up in a heap on the floor - which aside from being extremely embarrassing, wasn't likely to help her be taken seriously. She studied her desk mate out of the corner of her eye. He was rather attractive, she decided. Thick, straight black hair, cut so short she could see the line of his tan on his neck - a back to school haircut, she guessed. Unlike many of the boys, he appeared to be able to look fairly smart in school uniform - everything was straight, and uncreased, and generally tidy. It seemed he was very amused by the whole situation. He regularly looked away, exchanging glances with his friend at the next desk and grinning when Monty glared at him. He glanced in her direction and caught her eye, smiling, before sliding a sheet of paper towards him.

"Shouldn't make promises he doesn't want to keep." he wrote. Elizabeth smiled back.

"Sorry I've stolen his desk." she wrote underneath. Mr Hopkins seemed oblivious to them, reading out a list of lunchtime and after-school hours clubs that were available.

"I'm not." Maynard wrote back. "He's just jealous because I've got the best looking desk mate in the school." Elizabeth turned scarlet, which appeared to amuse Maynard even more.

Elizabeth spent the morning being given stacks of stationary, books, and meeting several of the masters who would be teaching her for the next year. By the time the bell for lunch rang, and the boys headed into the big dining room, she was exhausted and was happy to make her way back to the flat and collapse in a heap. A few minutes later, the door opened and Kitty's voice called,

"It's only me!" from the hallway. She entered with two lunches, one of which she placed in front of Elizabeth while the other she took herself. "If I agree to do washing up after lunch, I can eat with you Mrs Mac says." she explained. "And no one wants to wash up, so they won't mind if I volunteer to do it - what's wrong?" she asked, seeing that Elizabeth didn't seem to be paying her the slightest bit of attention.

"Oh Kitty, thank goodness you came up." she sighed dramatically. "I need your help - I think I'm in love!"

Author:  Llywela [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 12:48 pm ]
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janetbrown23 wrote:
"This door is alarmed" always gets me asking who alarmed it.

Oh, me too - I always want to pet it and say 'there, there'. :lol:

Loving the story - thanks :)

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 12:54 pm ]
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Oh dear. Oh dear. Why do I sense that this could become dramatic?

Thanks for the update!

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Just caught up on all this and really enjoying it :D .

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:55 pm ]
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Thank you I hope that Charles and Elizabeth can keep out of trouble. They are going to find it difficult sharing a desk and an attraction to each other.

Author:  Elle [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:38 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
"Oh Kitty, thank goodness you came up." she sighed dramatically. "I need your help - I think I'm in love!"


If it is Charles she is in love with, I think I may agree with her!

Thanks for the update Eilidh, I am really enjoying this.

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:29 pm ]
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Oh dear!


Love the notice from Baxter - and the fact that the Head read it out without any qualms.

Author:  Abi [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:39 pm ]
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Loving this!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:19 pm ]
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Thanks, that's great. Couldn't think of anything worse than being the only girl in an all boy school

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:21 am ]
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Awwwww Young Lurve

(feeling old and jaded but they're sweet)

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:03 pm ]
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The obligatory Prefects' meeting... :) Thank you for the comments!

At this remarkable pronouncement, Kitty stared at her friend for a few minutes and then burst out laughing.

"I'm sorry Liz." she gasped when she'd recovered herself slightly. "You just looked so ridiculous. In love with who?"

Elizabeth immediately launched into a long description of her meeting with the Maynard boys and their friends the previous evening, and the fact that she'd ended up sitting beside the younger one in the classroom. She described him in detail to Kitty over lunch, and at the end of it that young woman looked thoughful and nodded.

"You're right." she declared. "You do think you're in love. Come on, eat your lunch and then you can point him out to me." Kitty let the way over the school, up to the top of the building, and into a box room. "Climb up here." she prompted, indicating a packing case under the big window. Elizabeth scrambled up and found herself on a flat section of roof. Just in front of her was a low wall with many windows in it.

"The dining room." she giggled, looking in. "OK, lets see - where are they?" The two girls peered down through the high windows until Elizabeth found her form and pointed them out, after which they discussed the oblivious boys freely until bell rang for the start of afternoon lessons, and Kitty went back to work.

***

Stephen banged on the table with his fist, having nothing else to hand. Slowly the room quietened down.

"Are we the Prefects or the first form?" he demanded. "Have you forgotten that we're over Hammer's study? Sit down, for goodness sake, and lets get on before we give up our whole afternoon to this." There was a scramble for seats, and after a minor altercation which ended with Monty on his back on the floor, while Jones settled himself in the chair they had both dived for, silence fell. Stephen consulted a sheet of paper on the table.

"OK, first things first - duties for those of you who don't have them. I've got a job, obviously, and Jeff gets to spend the next year as my devoted slave,"

"I'm glad you think so!" that young man muttered.

"Baxter's got Games, and I have here that he's managed to convince Minor to be his deputy, am I right?"

"Quite right, go to the top of the class." Charles replied lazily, lounging in his chair with his arms behind his head. Stephen ignored him.

"Right, Hammer's given me a list. We need a Librarian, and a deputy Librarian, then we need a Post Master, someone to run the bank, some poor soul who wants to take responsibility for Upper IV and someone to run the music. Any volunteers?" There was a deafening silence. "Wonderful." Stephen said with a sigh. "Very well, we'll do it the hard way. Whiting, you're a book person - do you want the library?"

"I suppose I could manage that." Whiting agreed. "Who do I get as deputy?" Stephen glanced at the four junior prefects with his eyebrows raised.

"Miller." Charles suggested. "I doubt Jones and Monty have ever read a book voluntarily."

"Cheek!" Jones protested.

"Stop it, you lot. Minor, if it's not helpful, don't say it - we've got enough to do without you messing about." Charles made a face at his brother but subsided into silence. "Miller, will you take the library with Whiting?"

"Can do." Miller agreed. "It's better than Upper IV, anyway."

"Anyone good at maths want the bank? It's only for the Prep and the Upper Fourth, and it's only a couple of hours on a Saturday morning. Probably best for someone who's not in one of the teams though."

"I'll do it." Jones volunteered. "I don't mind numbers, and after that break I gave my ankle last term I won't be in any teams until at least the summer, worse luck."

"Music's only going one way then, I think - there are only two of you who learn it. Hard luck, Blake." The other boy nodded.

"It's not bad, it's only organising the practice rota and making sure there's no trouble." he said. "I did it last year as well."

"I'll take the Post, then." Stevenson said quickly. "If it's a choice between that and dealing with Upper IV, I'm pulling rank on it. Sorry Monty."

"No you're not." Monty replied with a sigh. "So I get Upper IV? What do I have to do to them?"

"Tie them up in a sack and put them up one of the pine trees?" Charles suggested.

"Get to know them, give them someone they can talk to, keep them under control." Jeff replied, writing the appointments down as he spoke. "The real trouble makers will go ahead anyway - you know that from experience - but you'll be able to keep some of them under control. I think you're a good choice for it, anyway."

"Right, next thing. School magazine." Stephen announced. There was a chorus of groans.

"Haven't they given up on that yet?"

"Evidently not. Anyway, if nothing else, it's our duty to produce something each. It can be a match report, something fictional, whatever you want, I don't care. Miller, I'm going to hand the whole thing over to you."

"Why me? I'm not the one with a writer for a mother!"

"You're the librarian."

"Assistant Librarian."

"Yes, but if I give it to Whiting, he'll give it to you, so I thought I'd cut him out and just give it straight to you myself. Aside from that, yes, Minor and I have a writer for a mother, but that doesn't mean either of us inherited any of her talents. Believe it or not, there's a good reason we both dropped English at the earliest opportunity." Miller grumbled under his breath as he scribbled something on the paper in front of him.

"Form reps and whatnot like usual?" he asked. Stephen nodded, and Miller subsided back to quiet grumbling.

"Right, that's me for today - anyone got anything else?"

"I want as many of you as I can to help on Saturday for team trials." Baxter announced. "There's no way we can do it all ourselves. Those of you who are trying out I'll exempt - the rest of you, we need you!"

"Like we've got nothing better to do with our Saturday." Blakely sighed. "Fine, we'll be there. Is that us? Braithwaite wants to see me about my History in ten minutes if we get done."

"Yes, that's us." Stephen decided, after a quick glance around the table. "Lets have a good term."

Author:  Finn [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:34 pm ]
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Eilidh, your boys do make me laugh :) and I do like the idea of Kitty and Liz eyeing up the totty :D :D

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:41 pm ]
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They make me chuckle too! Thankyou for the update.

Author:  cestina [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:23 pm ]
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Much more realistic prefects meeting than EBD's compliant ones! I've always thought the girls were too good to be true taking on the tasks thrown at them.....

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:27 pm ]
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Love Stephen's reasons for allocating the jobs.

Kitty and Elizabeth's commenting on the boys takes me back to school when a group of girls hung out of the window (third floor) and discussed the boys at the school next door. Having just come from a mixed sex school and meeting boys outside school I could not see the fun in it, but Elizabeth comes from the sheltered environment so many of my fellow pupils did so I can see her interest.

Author:  Abi [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:39 pm ]
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That was a brilliant prefects' meeting! Thanks, Eilidh!

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:18 am ]
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Love seeing the boys brawling. Chalet School prefects would politely offer each other footstools!

Author:  JS [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:31 am ]
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Love that the naughty middles get their own prefect - surprising the CS didn't think of it.

Thanks Eilidh - I've not been posting much but I have been enjoying your drabbles very much.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:50 am ]
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Sorry for the lack of post yesterday - I was frantically trying to write 1500 words on the history of medicine... shame they wouldn't accept 1500 words of this instead!

Term had started on a Thursday. By the Friday of the following week, Elizabeth's head was whirling. It took her some time to get back into the habit of working hard in a class full of other people who were doing the same, and she found that her previous work was slightly different from what the boys had done. She also found the boys themselves hard to get used to - the Lower Sixth seemed to have a habit of all yelling at the same time, and very few things happened which they did not immediately all express an opinion on. By the end of the first full week of term, Elizabeth was exhausted. Abandoning her prep to be done at the weekend, she headed over to the main school building and shut herself into one of the music rooms for a while, in the hope that the repetitive excercises she'd brought with her would help her sort everything out in her head. After a while, she collected up her music and began to made her way back to her room. On the way, she passed the door to the sixth form common room, which was standing slightly ajar. There was a buzz of noise coming from inside, and she caught her name. With a quick glance around to check there was no one to see her, Elizabeth stopped.

"What's she doing here anyway? This is supposed to be a boys school, isn't it?"

"Of course it is, Timmons. She's just here because... well, I don't know why. It's none of our business really, is it?"

"It is when the Head's had us all into his office threatening us if we so much as look at her. She could land any one of us she liked in trouble, and no one would even listen to us!"

"I'll threaten you if it makes you shut up." someone offered.

"I'm serious! She doesn't belong here. Girls brains don't work the same way ours do, it's a well known fact! She'll probably make herself ill working at all the science and maths and latin that she does - I mean, she does more of them than most of us, and we're boys! I think we should get rid of her. Tell the Head we want her out of our class and preferably out of our school."

"Don't be ridiculous, Timmons." that sounded like Maynard. "And leave her alone, it's not her fault that the Head's got his knickers in a twist." Elizabeth moved slightly so she could see better thought the gap in the door.

"All very well for you to say don't be ridiculous, you're the Head's golden boys, you four! Never out of trouble since the day you came here and all of a sudden you're even prefects, while the rest of us get passed over? Not to speak of you, Minor, abandoning your friend to sit beside the new girl - fairly obvious you only want one thing from her - pity the Head's going to expell you for it, isn't it? Or maybe not such a pity." They were all on their feet now, and glaring at each other angrily.

"Shut your mouth, Timmons." Monty warned.

"Or what? Will Minor's nasty big brother come and get me?"

"No, you slimy little rat, I will." Jones responded angrily.

"Reverting to name calling as well now, are we? Well, I don't know what else we can expect from someone like you, Jones."

"What do you mean, someone like him?" Miller demanded.

"This is all off the point." Timmons pointed out, speaking to the entire room. "What it comes down to is this - Braithwaite's daughter can only be here because she can't get into a girl's school, which means she must have done something wrong that none of them will take her. So instead, we get her dumped on us, just as we hit sixth form, so we're supposed to get some freedom, we've got the head and all the staff watching us like hawks. And our esteemed prefects won't go to the head with out problems because they... well, who knows what they want out of her. If she's got a bad enough record to not be able to get a school, then who knows, they might even get it. In the meantime, I'm starting a petition to take to the head to say we want her out, and none of you can do the slightest thing about it, or you'll lose your badges." He turned to the four prefects with a smirk, just as, to Elizabeth's horror, Charles punched him.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:56 am ]
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Is it very bad that I snorted at that ending? :lol: I can see his point of view but he should at least give her a chance first. Though I wonder if, if they find out she was eavesdropping, they'll treat her like they would another boy, or if it will be "just because she's a girl"?

Thanks, I can't wait for more! Good luck with the 1,500 words - I also often wish I could hand in drabbles as proper work!

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:09 pm ]
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thanks for the update. Hope the 1500 words went well, it is a topic I am interested in, but I sympathise when it interferes with something you want to do.

Poor lads, the head is going the right way to make Elizabeth's life a misery, he would have been better to say nothing.

Author:  Elle [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:53 pm ]
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Good for Charles!

Hope the History of Medicine is going well. I teach it for GCSE and it is fascinating.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:14 pm ]
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Hah! Well done, Charles! Not liking Timmons at all; there could be all sorts of reasons for Elizabeth being there. I suppose there was bound to be someone who made a fuss, but still.... :bawling:

Thanks, Eilidh, this is great!

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:04 pm ]
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Well Timmons definitely deserved that punch - but Charles is going to get in trouble about it!


Thanks Eilidh - do hope Timmons is made to eat his words about girls brains not being able to cope.

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:28 am ]
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I snorked at the final words too Chubby Monkey!

Thanks Eilidh, I think that Timmins has a point in his reasoning.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:24 pm ]
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How interesting! I wasn't expecting sympathy for Timmons. :D Thank you for the comments, I always get something to think about from them. Last post of the week.

Charles was dimly aware of Miller using the sofa for leverage and leaping past him to land on someone, while Monty and Jones had gone for two of Timmons' friends. There was a roaring in his ears and he was aware of nothing except causing as much pain as he could to the boy in front of him. Something hit him hard on the head, and from one side he was vaguely aware of Jones swearing loudly about something. Suddenly, he felt someone grip his upper arms and pull him back, holding him too tightly to move, and then a well known voice demanded,

"What on earth is going on in here?"

"They were defending me." Elizabeth replied. The Upper VI formers who had just rushed past her hadn't even seen her, and as such the whole room turned to look at her. "People said things about me, and they were sticking up for me. I was passing and I heard." she added.

"Is that right?" Stephen demanded. Miller nodded, as none of the others seemed inclined to reply. "Right. You four get out of here, go back to your rooms, and clean yourselves up. Stay there until I come to you. You can consider yourselves banned from the common room for the forseeable future as you quite obviously can't be trusted to spend your free time with other people." Charles opened his mouth to protest at this, but Monty grabbed him before he had a chance and pulled him out the door. Stephen continued. "Miss Braithwaite, you shouldn't even be in here, you go back to where ever you should be as well. The rest of you, no one is leaving this room until I get told exactly what was said in here to make four of the prefects behave like that. And I don't have a lot of patience left, so you'd better start talking quickly."

Elizabeth rushed up to her rooms, threw down her music on the table, seized the first aid kit her father kept for emergencies, and hurried back down to the floor below, hoping she could remember her guide first aid. She caught them in the corridor, Jones limping badly and leaning heavily on Monty.

"What are you doing down here?" Miller demanded.

"Matron's out. I came to help." Elizabeth explained, waving the first aid kit. "After all, it is my fault, sort of."

"Oh well, come on then. Might as well be hung for a sheep, and all that." Miller said, opening one of the doors. Elizabeth looked round at them all. Jones, now sitting on one of the beds, looked pale but other than whatever he'd done to his leg, seemed ok. Miller had a cut on his forehead which was bleeding freely, Charles had some impressive bruising on his face and was holding a hand to his head, and Monty was doing his best to stop his nose bleeding.

"Hold something to that cut." she instructed him. Miller obligingly pulled out a pocket handkerchief and held it to his head. Elizabeth closed her eyes briefly. "What have you done to your leg?" she demanded. Jones made a face.

"Broke my ankle last term and some..." he tailed off as he caught her eye "someone kicked it." he finished lamely. "It just needs strapped up."

"Isn't it supposed to be strapped anyway?" Monty asked, still trying to stop his nose bleeding.

"Couldn't be bothered today." Jones admitted.

"Well, you'll just need to bother now. Shoe and sock off please." Elizabeth demanded. "Miller, how's your head?"

"Hasn't fallen off yet." that young man replied flippantly. Monty lowered the handkerchief away from his face.

"Stopped at last." he said thankfully.

"Go and wash your face then." Elizabeth instructed. Monty disappeared obediently as she strapped up Jones' ankle to the best of her ability. "Stay there just now." she told him, leaving him on the bed and turning her attention to the cut on Miller's forehead. She had just finished when the door opened.

"Miss Braithwaite! How many places are you going to be today that you're not allowed? I'm surprised at you four letting her in here. And what are you all doing in Jones and Miller's room anyway?"

"Matron's out, she brought the first aid kit down, that's all." Monty explained. "Come on, Maynie, read us the riot act and let us have the rest of the night off."

"Most of your form agree that you were provoked." Stephen replied. "Unfortunately, they also agree that you lot went for Timmons' group."

"We admitted that much." Miller pointed out. "What are you going to do about it?"

"Nothing, at the moment." Stephen replied. "I'll have to tell the Head, but I'll make it off the record. If you could all look rather subdued tomorrow, that would be nice, and don't tell the rest that I let you off. I've banned you from the common room, which I suppose means I'll have you under my feet in the prefect's room more often. I should have your badges off you, but demoting 4 prefects one week into the term is a bit much I think - besides the fact that really, I'd rather just bang all your heads together and leave you to sort it out yourselves. But, if you put one more toe out of line - any of you - I won't be able to ignore it."

"You mean if we do and you catch us." Monty pointed out. Stephen pretended he hadn't heard him.

"And now, a word please, Minor." Charles followed his brother out of the room and along to the end of the corridor. "What on earth did you think you were doing?" Stephen demanded, running his hands through his hair like Margot did when she was worked up. "Really, Chas! Rising to insults from an idiot like Timmons? Don't you think I've got enough problems without having to defend why I didn't take your badges off the four of you? I'm going to have to sell it to the Head on extreme provocation and it'll never happen again, and even then he'll give me that look."

"Take them then, we don't want them anyway." Charles growled, flopping down on the window seat.

"Chas, come on, you're my brother! I need you behind me!"

"No, not this term I'm not. This term I'm one of your prefects first, and being your brother is going to come a long way second. That's why you've been jumping on my with both feet - in the prefects' meeting last week, just now, when you over-ruled me when I was taking prep on Tuesday. You might be Head Boy Steve, but you're also my brother. And one of my best friends. And I can't work with you when you're behaving like this, because to be perfectly honest, the next person I punch might very well be you."

"Chas, have you got any idea..."

"No, Steve, you haven't got any idea! I didn't ask for this and I don't want it, especially if it means I have to stand back while that... that disgusting excuse for a human being insults me, my friends, and Miss Braithwaite, who hadn't done a thing wrong! So I'm sorry Steve, I know you're trying to help, but all we're going to get is accusations of favouratism on top of the rest, and all so I can keep a position I didn't want in the first place. I've seen what happens to the responsible people in our family. It's not for me." he unpinned the small silver badge from his blazer and held it out. Wordlessly, Stephen took it. "I resign." Charles said firmly.

"The Head won't like this." Stephen pointed out. "You'll have to explain it."

"The Head," Charles shot back over his shoulder from his bedroom door, "can go hang."

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:26 pm ]
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Oh dear - although it's good to see that Charles has a mind of his own, and he's got a point about what happens to the responsible people in the Maynard family.

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:09 pm ]
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Both Steve and Chas have a difficult role to play here. Only eight prefects and two of them brothers, without a girl being added to mix, I sympathise with both.

Wondering if the Head will accept Charles resignation as the only prefect suitable to be junior games?

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:52 pm ]
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Oh dear, I can see that causing some problems for a lot of people. Why am I sceptical as to the Head being understanding?

Thankyou, I think! Please come back and help me stop wibbling soon!

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 7:26 pm ]
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Can see Charles' point of view - especially when he has Len as an anti- role model for what happens to 'responsible' people.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 8:31 pm ]
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Really liking both Stephen and Charles here.

Author:  Elle [ Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:21 pm ]
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Abi wrote:
Really liking both Stephen and Charles here.


Same here! Really looking forwards to the next update.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:53 pm ]
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Elle wrote:
Abi wrote:
Really liking both Stephen and Charles here.


Same here! Really looking forwards to the next update.


So am I

Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:32 am ]
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Me too!

And it wasn't sympathy for Timmons - more seeing his point of view about them having less freedom because of Elizabeth and wondering why she wasn't at a girls school and what terrible deeds had she done.

Author:  di [ Sun Aug 15, 2010 1:21 pm ]
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Have just found this and read it all in one go. I'm really enjoying reading about the boys of the Maynard family; EBD never really developed the stories about them, understandably, and I always wanted to know more about them!
I love the way you're portraying Chas; wasn't he always the quiet one of the boys in the family? It's good to see him kicking at the traces here. Maybe he's a prime example of a child who is so good at home that he/she has to be a handful at school and vice versa. He's certainly taken a shine to Elizabeth.
I hope Elizabeth doesn't get in to trouble for being in the wrong place. After all she was only passing, initially - who wouldn't stop and listen when they heard their name mentioned? Also, who else was there to tend to the boys wounds if Matron was missing - quite rightly I reckon Steve doesn't want to involve any of the staff if he can help it. :lol:
Many thanks, Eilidh, this is great!

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:26 pm ]
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Ahem... the Headmaster may or may not be completely out of my control...

"Maynard to the Headmaster please, Sir." Mr Hopkins let out a sigh.

"What have you been doing now, Maynard? Very well, off you go. Make sure you get a copy of the notes that you missed, preferable before our practical lesson this afternoon if you have a prep period."

"I do Sir. I'll get a copy later." Charles replied, ignoring the first question.

Charles entered the Head's study to find Dr. Hammersley standing at the window.

"Ah, Maynard."

"Yes, Sir. You sent for me?"

"Yes. Tell me Maynard, what do you see here?" Charles, feeling slightly wrong-footed, hurried across to the window and looked out.

"Umm... the Third Form doing games, Sir. Rather badly."

"And beyond them?"

"Sheep, Sir."

"Precisely!" the head turned away from the window and strode back to his desk. Charles hurried to stand in front of it. The desk was tidy, and the center of it was clear with the exception of a small silver and blue badge lying in the middle - the same badge he'd handed over to Stephen the nght before. Charles felt his heart sink. He waited while the head seemed to collect his thoughts. "I often feel, Maynard, that schoolboys are like sheep."

"Sir." Charles responded, trying to hide his confusion.

"So often you watch sheep and they all blindly follow each other. This is, no doubt, a good practice if the sheep at the front is a wise animal, don't you think, Maynard?"

"Yes, Sir." Charles replied automatically.

"It is important, Maynard, that people who have the capacity to be good leaders use that gift to the advantage of all. Under a bad leader, very little can be accomplished."

"Yes, Sir."

"And therefore, to return to the sheep, if the farmer knew which animals were wise, he would ensure that they did the leading, wouldn't you say?"

"May I speak freely, Sir?"

"Certainly."

"I think your metaphor has collasped, Sir." Dr Hammersley considered.

"Yes, you may be right. Still, metaphor or not, my point remains, Mr Maynard! At the moment, the Lower VI consists, if I may put it bluntly, of a large crowd of sheep! There are in that form two young men with the capacity - I believe - to make it into a group who can work together. One is you. The other, I believe, gave you that lovely black eye."

"Sir."

"The elections for form captains will be taking place at the end of next week." the Head observed. Charles was snapped out of his impassive stance.

"No, Sir, I couldn't!"

"Maynard, you cannot spend your entire life allowing other people to dictate events while you drift along passively! Do you really believe that the right thing for your form this year is to be led by Timmons?"

"There are others, though, Sir. Miller, for example, he could be Form Captain."

"Miller's role is not to lead." the Head replied. "Miller, as you are well aware, provides the ideas. Yourself and Montgomery are the active parties in getting them carried out. Mr Jones, I can only presume, provides most of the common sense - though I feel there are frequent occasions when he slips up."

"Then Montgomery, Sir."

"There is a certain amount of work involved as a Form Captain, Maynard. Montgomery, despite many admirable qualities, is not good at work. As an additional incentive, Maynard - please remember that next year, I must produce another two prefects from the current Lower Sixth. The Form Captain would be an obvious choice, and you do not, I think it is fair to say, want to work closely with Mr Timmons."

"That won't affect me anyway, Sir." Charles responded, finally feeling like he was ahead of the conversation.

"It won't?"

"No Sir! I've resigned."

"Ah yes, I knew there was something else. The important thing about a resignation, Mr Maynard, is that it must be accepted. I do not choose to accept yours."

"But Sir!"

"There are no buts, Maynard. I suggest you spend the rest of this period fixing things you did wrong last night. Please remember that a wise sheep never acts in haste, or in anger, Maynard."

"Yes, Sir." Charles replied miserably as the Head stood up, picked up the prefect badge, and dropped it into Charles' blazer pocket.

"I do believe your brother is in his study, Maynard."

"Yes, Sir."

"You may go now."

"Thank you, Sir."

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:39 pm ]
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Pleased the Head refused to accept Charles resignation, and challenged him about further responsibilities. Poor Charles though he could do with some help from Len here and she has cut off contact. Hope he and Steve can make up and find a way to cope with Lower VI.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:05 pm ]
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I like the Headmaster :D .

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:10 pm ]
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:lol: That was brilliant! I wish we'd had him as a Headmaster at school.

Thankyou, this is ace!

Author:  c8bt [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:27 pm ]
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I like the way the headmaster seems to know how to speak to Charles - and to deal with his wish to avoid resposnsibility.

I just wish I'd had decent head-teachers like that!

Author:  di [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:36 pm ]
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This HM is one cool guy as my son would say! I love the way he speaks to Charles and his refusal to accept Charles's resignation took the wind right out of his sails. To then present him with a fait accompli regarding the form captain post was pure genius on the Heads part.

Many thanks, Eilidh this is really ,enjoyable.

Author:  Finn [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:24 pm ]
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Shades of Vetinari in that there Head, methinks :)
Again, Eilidh, you've had me laughing out loud. Thank you!

Author:  Abi [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:01 pm ]
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Loved the sheep analogy! :lol: And I am definitely a fan of the Headmaster.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:09 pm ]
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That was fantastic, thanks. Poor Charles, he didn't stand a chance

Author:  brie [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:12 am ]
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Thanks eilidh, I'm loving this drabble

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:55 am ]
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Fantastic! So pleased that the Headmaster recognises Charles' potential - always felt he (along with most of the boys) gets a raw deal in the books.

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:13 pm ]
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The Upper VI form occupied the whole of the third floor of the senior boarding house, in a combination of bedrooms and studies. Charles hadn't been in Stephen's study before, but he found it at the top of the stairs and knocked firmly.

"Come in." Stephen shouted. Charles pushed the door open, and found himself in a large room which was a combination of bedroom and study. It was immaculately neat. Stephen was sitting at his desk, scribbling something on a sheet of paper. He looked up with a frown when Charles came in.

"What do you want?"

"You looked scarily like Dad when I came in." Charles observed. "Stop scowling, or you'll end up looking like him all the time."

"I haven't got time for nonsense, Chas, tell me what you're here for or get out. Thanks to your drama-queen act last night, I've got all the supervision rotas to reorganise."

"No, you don't." Charles replied. "The Head wouldn't let me resign. So maybe you could stop acting quite so much like... like Mary-Lou and start behaving like a normal human being." Stephen raised one eyebrow.

"Mary-Lou?" he asked. Charles nodded.

"Bossy, all-knowing, interfering..."

"I hope you realise I consider that a deadly insult." Stephen said seriously.

"You were supposed to." Charles agreed. The two brothers stared at each other for a few moments. "I'm sorry." Charles said eventually. Stephen nodded.

"So am I. Though not for interfering with your prep supervision. They were making a ridiculous amount of noise."

"It was their rep."

"Why were they doing their rep out loud?"

"Because when they were doing it quietly, they weren't doing it at all."

"Have I really been like Mary-Lou?"

"Not so bossy, maybe, but there have been similarities."

"There's just so much to do!" Charles wandered over to the desk.

"I bet there's not, really." he said. "You just can't delegate. That's why I get to play with the axe when we're on holiday and Anna wants the wood chopped, and you end up cleaning shoes. You're like Len - you need to know personally that everything's being done. What's this?"

"Next week's prep rota." Charles tossed it on the floor.

"Jeff's job. This?"

"Copy of the practice timetable from Blake." The sheet floated into the empty fireplace.

"You don't need that, you don't do music. This one?"

"Challenge from Whiteside Grammar."

"Baxter's - oh no, wait a minute - mine." he stuffed it in his pocket. "This?"

"Note from the Head asking about outstanding books in the library."

"Whiting's. Why did that even come to you? This?"

"Private." Stephen made a grab for it while Charles, faster, slipped backwards off the desk and skimmed the top sheet.

"Well!" he exclaimed. "You're quite right. I'll just... give you that back then. And incidentally, curls and twirl don't rhyme. Where were we before I accidentally stumbled on that bombshell? Oh yes - clearing your desk."

"Chas!"

"What?"

"You won't say anything?"

"Do I ever? Now, moving on."

"No time." Stephen pointed out. "The bell's going to go in a minute."

"Oh well. You'll have to finish it yourself later." The boys headed back towards the stairs

"Chas?"

"What?"

"You really won't say anything?"

"Look, Steve, if you want to write bad love poems, that's your call. Nothing to do with me. Now if you don't mind, I'm going to go back to forgetting all about it, because quite frankly I find it rather disturbing and just slightly wrong." Stephen smiled as Charles, with a quick glance around, jumped on to the bannister and slid down to the main hall, before heading in the direction of the Lower VI room, whistling brightly.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:10 pm ]
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Quote:
"Mary-Lou?" he asked. Charles nodded.

"Bossy, all-knowing, interfering..."

"I hope you realise I consider that a deadly insult." Stephen said seriously.


:lol: - Excellent!

Author:  Sarah_G-G [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:10 pm ]
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I've just caught up on two posts at once (as I didn't check this thread yesterday, on the grounds that I was being pathetic checking it over the weekend when you'd already said that Friday was the last post of the week :lol: ) and have agree with the others, I love the Headmaster! Poor Charles, he didn't stand a chance. I love the interaction between him and Steve as well, it's very natural. I think the two of them are good for one another. From the sounds of it Charles could do with an understanding Head Boy and I think Steve needs to be told when he's taking on too much as well. If only Len and Con/ Margot had the same sort of relationship!

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:11 pm ]
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I really enjoyed Charles' swift lesson to Steve in the art of delegation there, which only emphasises the basically good relationship between them, even though it's not perfect. I'm also glad the head refused to accept Charles' resignation as a prefect in the previous post.

Thanks, Eilish, I'm enjoying this very much.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:14 pm ]
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Hope that Charles has cleared the air with Steve and reminded him to delegate. Love seeing Being another Mary Lou as an insult

Author:  Abi [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:01 pm ]
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Loved Steve writing love poems..... somehow I never before saw him like that! :lol:

Thanks Eilidh!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:46 pm ]
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I don't know which bit to laugh at more! :lol: This is all fantastic! Thankyou!

Author:  sealpuppy [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:59 pm ]
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Really wanting Hilda and the Headmaster to swap places for a term, benefits all round, I should think. Love the boys in this, specially Charles who has always been my favourite. (Priesthood indeed! Ha!)

Author:  brie [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:23 pm ]
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Thanks eilidh! I'm curious as to who the love poem is to? the whole post had me laughing though

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:12 pm ]
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Len really needed a Chas around to make her stop taking on extra responsibility!

Thanks

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:53 am ]
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Oh that had me in fits. Thanks for the lesson in delegation!

Author:  di [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:41 am ]
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Steve and Chas have a lovely relationship with each other here and I really like the way they are able to apologise to each other without difficulty.

Chas demonstrated his affection for his older brother by sorting out his paper work for him, albeit filing it on the floor which, no doubt, Steve will have to clear up later and also by not teasing him about his attempts at writing a love poem.[for or about Elizabeth one wonders?! :heart: ]

The comment about Mary-Lou was priceless- had me rolling with laughter. So spot on, though! :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:54 am ]
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No matter what else I may or may not do to these lovely Maynard boys before the end of this drabble :twisted: , they will not both be going after Elizabeth. That would be too much for them.

"And what do you think you're doing?" Elizabeth jumped guiltily.

"Nothing Matron." she replied.

"It doesn't look like nothing to me." Matron replied. "It looks like lying on your bed in the middle of the day, and probably getting it covered in ink while you're doing it!"

"Oh no, Matron." Elizabeth said, hastily getting to her feet. "I mean, I was lying on it, yes, but it's only learning work."

"Hmm. Well that's something. Desks are for working, however, beds are for sleeping in."

"Yes Matron."

"Anyway, I came up to tell you that as the rain has gone off, you should go outside for a while. Get your things on and if you have nothing better to do, you can take a parcel down to the Prep for me. Come and collect it when you're ready."

"Yes Matron." Elizabeth wriggled into her blazer and shoes and knocked on the door of Matron's rooms, which were on the same floor as her fathers, but occupied the other half of the house. She collected the parcel and set out across the path which ran between two of the games fields. It was muddy after the rain and she picked her way carefully, when a whistle reached her and she looked up to see her own form looking cold, muddy and miserable, ranged around the games master.

"Cross Country!" he boomed at them, his voice reaching Elizabeth. "Usual route, go! And if I hear one complaint, you'll be doing this every lesson for the next month!" The boys set off, splashing through the muddy field, and Elizabeth heard a sigh behind her and turned around.

"You actually look jealous." she said in amazement.

"I am." Jones grinned back. "Where are you going, to the prep? I'll carry your parcel." he took it off her and they strolled on across the field.

"Is that Monty at the back?" Elizabeth asked, squinting at the distant runners.

"Probably. Miller'll be with him. The one out in front is probably Minor. They go across the field, and then round through the wood, up the back of that hill there and back down into the games field in time to shower, change, and do some prep before the practical lessons this afternoon."

"And you want to be doing that?" Elizabeth asked in disbelief.

"Of course. Though I can't until next summer probably. That doesn't qualify as the gentle excercise Nurse thinks I should take. Neither does fighting on the common room floor." he added ruefully. "She's not happy with me today."

"I don't imagine anyone's happy with you today." Elizabeth smiled. "Though... I didn't get a chance to thank Maynard for sticking up for me. He was a bit..."

"Sulky?" Jones suggested. "Yes, he gets like that. Strange, because Maynard's not like that - the older one I mean. Just Minor. He'll be ok today, he looked better this morning. I say, Miss Braithwaite?"

"What?"

"You know that we don't really think that about you, don't you? I mean, what Timmons said last night? I'm not good with words really, but none of the decent chaps in the form would have said that - or even thought it. I mean, I know you're here for something but I'm not interested in what - well I am of course, but not in an inquisitive way if you know what I mean."

"It's ok." Elizabeth took pity on him.

"I just wanted you to know." Jones explained again, as they reached the prep school. "It's strange being back here." he observed. "We never really get much chance to come back across. And it feels so small now! When I was twelve, it felt huge."

"Is that when you came here?" Elizabeth asked, interested. "In fact, wait a minute - I'll run this up to the Matron and then you can tell me on the way back."

"Yes, I started here at twelve." Jones confirmed, as they went back out into the sunshine. "The school offers some scholarships for people who don't sit the eleven-plus, for whatever reason. In my case it was because I fell out of a tree the night before the exam, knocked myself out and broke my arm." Elizabeth giggled.

"And so you ended up here." she finished for him. "In my case, I had managed to get myself expelled from two schools last year - deliberately, mind you - and nowhere else would take me." Elizabeth had walked another few steps before she realised that Jones was no longer beside her. She looked back to find him standing still in the middle of the path, staring at her in disbelief.

Author:  Squirrel [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:05 pm ]
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:lol: This is great Eilidh. Have just read through both the preceeding drabble and this and am really enjoying it.

That's some way to shock a boy into silence! :)

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:19 pm ]
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Not what Jones expected to hear!

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:31 pm ]
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Thanks Pleased Elizabeth can tell Jones the truth. Hope they do not get into trouble for walking together.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:54 pm ]
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:lol: Elizabeth is great.

Author:  shesings [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:07 pm ]
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This is an intriguing situation! :D

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:24 pm ]
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Oh, I do hope that he reacts well! :lol: Thankyou!

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:02 pm ]
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She's just shocked the poor lad speechless! :lol:

Author:  Abi [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:08 pm ]
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Love the way she's shocked him! Elizabeth is great.... :lol:

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:26 pm ]
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That was fantastic. Jones is lovely there. Hope he copes with Elizabeth's news! :wink:

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:45 am ]
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Priceless!

Author:  di [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:04 am ]
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Elizabeth is 'magic' here. Her sense of timing is wonderful!! To hear someone admit to having been expelled twice and on purpose is enough to shock someone but to then realise that the person is your history teacher's daughter is something else again!!
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:56 am ]
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"What?" she demanded.

"You're so..." Jones tailed off.

"Sweet? Innocent?" Elizabeth demanded. "I know. It's the lack of height and the blonde hair that does it. But even sweet innocent little girls can not hand in any prep, disrupt classes, and be rude to people, among other things. I capped it all by running away." she added. "Anyway - I've got prep to do. Are you working or walking?"

"I'll come and do some work." Jones decided. "Might as well get it out the way. Are you allowed to do prep in the form room?"

"If I want to." Elizabeth replied. "I just don't normally want to. Come on then."

Elizabeth read over her Chemistry notes again, then, sure she had the processes firmly in her head, looked at the clock. There was still half an hour to go before the rest of the boys were due to come in, and Jones was engrossed in something on the other side of the room. She thought it must be music as he periodically stopped writing to play an imaginary piano on the lid of his desk. Setting aside her maths to be done later, she opened Charles' desk and pulled out his notebook, then began carefully copying the notes and diagrams from her book to his. She finished the last word just as Charles himself wandered in, his hair still damp and looking rather tired.

"New record?" Jones asked, looking up. Charles shook his head.

"Four minutes over. Too hard to run on my own." he complained. "You need to come back."

"Nothing I'd like better." his friend grinned. Charles dropped down at his desk with a sigh.

"What are you doing with my book?" he demanded.

"Copying the notes for you." Elizabeth replied. "Since it was defending me that got you into trouble with the Head. Thank you, though."

"Rot. It was nothing to do with you." Charles protested. "The Head just wanted to see me to tell me I wasn't allowed to resign from being a prefect, worse luck. I can copy my own notes."

"Well, I've copied them anyway." Elizabeth replied, pushing the book back towards him. "Sorry if I've done something wrong. I was only trying to help." She got up from the desk, collected her books together, and stalked off.

"What did you do that for?" Jones demanded, as the door closed behind her.

"What's she copying my notes for?" Charles asked in response, brandishing the notebook at him.

"To say thank you for sticking up for her last night." Jones replied. "There was no need to be such an ass about it, Minor. I don't know why it is that when you're in a bad mood it lasts for days."

"I wasn't in a bad mood until I found out she'd been at my books!" Charles argued, sounding heated. Jones raised his eyebrows.

"Whatever you say, Minor. Now shut up, would you? I'm working." he turned his attention back to his books and Charles, pushing his aside, rummaged in his desk and produced a pad of writing paper.

Dear Con,

I hope you're having fun at Oxford. You need to take lots of snaps to let us see when we see you at Christmas! In the meantime, I'm writing to you for some advice.

You know, of course, that I'm a prefect this year. I don't want to be a prefect, but the head seems to think it's a wonderful plan. Last week, when he refused to let me resign (I was fighting, and then Steve came in, and then Steve and I were arguing and I ended up trying to quit) he told me he wants me to stand for Form Prefect. I don't know if you know how we do it here, but the idea is that anyone interested in the job is voted on by the class.

For the last three years - since we joined the senior school - our form pre has been a chap called Timmons. He's the one I was fighting with as well. He's a bully, Con. He doesn't like Jones because Jones is here on a schol., and he's not very keen on several of the other chaps in the form for different reasons. He doesn't like me or Miller or Monty much either, but that's just because we don't let him say anything to Jones. Since he's been Form Pre, none of them have been picked for anything, and to be honest our form isn't really a group, it's just a... bungh of people. I hope that makes sense. I've seen Steve's lot and they're always talking and laughing and joking together, but we're all split into our little groups.

This is getting long, and probably isn't making a lot of sense, and I'm running out of prep time. I'll try and hurry up. Basically, I think the Head wants me to go up against him in the hope that I win and I can do something about him picking on all the others. But the thing is, Con, I don't want to take on all their causes and convince them that they can stand up to him, and sort it all out. I want an easy, fun year like the rest, where I only need to worry myself about my friends and beating Miller in the form list. I really don't care what happens to the rest. Is that terribly awful of me?

All the best,

Chas.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Len would've told him that of course he had to deal with everyone else's problems, but it'll be interesting to see how Con reacts.

Thanks Eilidh - it's great to see the boys as real people.

Author:  di [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:15 pm ]
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2 posts in 1 day, what luxury! Poor old Chas - he really does not like responsibility does he?! Interesting that he chose to write to Con for advice not Len. No doubt he sees Len as the one who is always trying to look after the others without having time for herself and he doesn't want his life to be so serious.
In some ways he's rather like his mother in not wanting to grow up - remember the fuss she made when she was made Head Girl? - but neither does he want to be the one putting things right with others whereas Joey was a milder version of Mary-Lou.
The relationship between him and Elizabeth is intriguing- I wonder how it will develop? :lol:
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:35 pm ]
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I like that he wrote to Con, and I hope that she can give him some good advice. Len's would be fairly obvious, but I wonder what Margot would say!

Thankyou.

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 4:52 pm ]
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Hope Con can help Charles, I suppose he had written to Len in previous years and was missing her now. However Con may be able to help him more than Len before she rebelled.

Thanks for the update.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:42 pm ]
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Len's not contactable at the moment is she? I don't think anyone other than the other triplets know where she is. Wonder what Con will say to him? Interesting that he was so 'off' with Elizabeth - young love :heart:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:02 am ]
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Thanks, can understand why Chas wants responsibility even less after what he's seen happens to those who are responsible.

Hope Con is able to help

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 9:05 am ]
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Con's advice will be interseting to see - she has always been cast in a similar light in relation to Len as Charles is to Steve. Interested to see what she thinks!

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:03 pm ]
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Quick comment about timing - we are currently in the September after the triplets leave school. Len has been missing for just over 2 months. She is not due to get in touch with anyone for about another 3, so even Con and Margot don't know where she is just now.

Short update today, and no more until Monday. Thank you again for all your lovely comments.


"Letter for a Maynard - which one of you is C? I can never remember." Stevenson, as was becoming his habit, strolled into the prefect's room at the end of break with his hands full of mail which he proceeded to toss to its various owners. Charles waved a hand.

"From your sister, by the looks of it." Stevenson told him. There was a bang as Stephen dropped the book he had just picked up.

"Our sister?" he demanded.

"Well, it's postmarked Oxford - isn't that where your sister is?" Stevenson demanded.

"Con." Charles confirmed. "I wrote to her at the end of last week." Stephen sat back down, looking disappointed, and Charles ripped open the envelope.

Dear Chas,

Oxford is wonderful, thanks for asking, and of course I'll take plenty of pictures! Maybe they'll help you decide to come here in a few years yourself. The freedom after being on the Platz for so long is wonderful - there is no one to worry about my bed time, and make me change if my feet get wet, or even care if I leave my clothes lying on the floor!

However - you do seem to be in a nice mess. I can't help you with deciding what you want to do about the form captainship. I can certainly sympathise with not really being bothered about everyone else. Sometimes, it's nice just to know that the people you care most about are happy, and then no one else matters. If you feel really strongly that you don't want to do it, then don't. After all, if you have to volunteer then no one can make you, and no matter what your Headmaster says, if you don't want the responsibility then he can't make you take it!

On the other hand, maybe being Form Prefect won't make a lot of difference to you, but you might make an enormous difference to some other people. Wouldn't it be worth it just for that? Imagine how unhappy your friend Jones would be without you three to stand up for him. Do you really wish that on others? Could you be happy - really happy, Chas - knowing that you could maybe have made things better, but you didn't try? I remember how much influence you can have over people when you try. I remember how you used to sort out Margot! Now, end of lecture! And I'm sorry for preaching, but you did ask what I thought.

Give my love to Steve, and Felix when you see him. I'll try and rise to a letter for Steve later this week, and a postcard for Felix at some point as well. I hear from Mamma on a weekly basis, but I don't suppose I have anything to report that you don't know already. I got a few scribbled lines from Mike last week. It might just have been me, but he didn't sound too happy. Have you heard from him at all? You were always quite close.

Looking forward to seeing you at Christmas,

Love,

Connie (I've added the N-I-E back on, I think it looks much better, don't you?)

Author:  di [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:16 pm ]
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Some good sisterly advice from Con, or should we now refer to her as Connie as she obviously prefers it. The thought of sitting back and not doing anything to help his friends won't sit comfortably with Chas, I shouldn't think so I expect we'll hear that he puts himself forward as Form Captain despite not really wanting the position!
Poor Steve - did he hope the letter was from Len? The 2 older boys must be so worried about her.
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  KathrynW [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:24 pm ]
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Thanks Eilidh, really enjoying this and it's so nice to get a glimpse of the boys' lives at school.

Author:  Catherine [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:30 pm ]
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Just caught up with all of this and I'm really enjoying it, Eilidh, thanks. I think Connie has given Charles some very sensible advice and really left it up to him to make the decision, rather than just telling him what she thinks he should do. I hope Mike is OK.

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:40 pm ]
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That was a great letter - thanks.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:47 pm ]
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That was really good advice - dare I say it, much better than Len would have given? Thanks for the update, I'll be very interested to see if he follows it or not, though I'm guessing he will!

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:03 pm ]
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As Charles had been in contact with Len in previous terms, I wonder if Steve hoped she would contact them now they were away from their parents. Hope he is not too disappointed by a letter from Con.

Also hoping Mike is alright. Wonder what Con thinks of receiving letters from the boys, as expect they have been joint ones before?

Thanks for the update and the summary of the time scale of what has happened to Len.

Author:  Elbee [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:42 pm ]
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Just caught up with lots of this again. I love the boys' school! Really enjoying this.

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Abi [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:59 pm ]
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Very sensible letter from Con there - full of good advice but not trying to tell him what to do.

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  charli [ Fri Aug 20, 2010 10:23 pm ]
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Yes, that was good advice from Con there. .
I think Charles would make an interesting form captain! And I bet he will be good at it. Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:06 pm ]
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Mr Hopkins surveyed the class with his customary scowl.

"This morning, you are to elect a form captain. I want you to do this with the minimum of fuss, if such a thing is possible! Any boy wishing to stand for election, go and stand in front of the board." Timmons got to his feet immediately.

"Anyone else?" Mr Hopkins demanded. "Of course, if there is only one, then we need not vote. So no one else at all? Very well then, Timmons..."

"Me, Sir." Charles got to his feet suddenly. There was a bang on the far side of the room which distracted Mr Hopkins.

"Miller, what are you doing?"

"Overbalanced, Sir." Miller explained, scrambling to his feet and picking his chair up. "I got a shock when Maynard stood up. It won't happen again, Sir."

"Hmph. Well then, Maynard, it looks like we are having an election after all. Go and stand beside Timmons." Charles moved out to the front of the room. Timmons glared at him, and Charles kept his eyes firmly fixed on the back wall of the classroom, a slight look of amusement on his face. "Get a page from your rough books, all of you. Write the name of the boy you prefer on it clearly, fold it in half, and pass it forwards. Once all the papers are at the front, pass them to Miller. He's going to count them, to save him from finding time to swing on his chair." There was a flurry of activity for a few minutes. "Now, while Miller is counting, I suggest the rest of you find something to occupy yourselves with. You two sit back down."

Miller was sorting through the slips of paper quickly, with one of Timmons' friends looking over his shoulder.

"15 for Maynard, Sir, and 11 for Timmons." he announced eventually. Elizabeth glanced at Charles, who merely looked resigned to his fate.

"Very well then. Maynard for form prefect. And now, sit here quietly until whoever is coming to take you arrives."

"How did they take it then?" Mr Braithwaite asked. It was later in the evening, and several of the staff were sipping drinks in the Head's study.

"Timmons was annoyed, that much was evident. Maynard didn't look like he cared. To be perfectly honest, you could have knocked me down with a feather when he stood up." Mr Hopkins leant forward and helped himself to a cake. "I prefer it to be him, to be honest. I know Maynard's a troublemaker, but there's something about Timmons that I don't like. Nothing I can put my finger on, but definately something there."

"I wonder why he decided to stand for it... did you have something to do with it Bob?"

"Me?" the head asked. "I may have hinted to the boy that he might do it."

"Hinted?" Someone else asked. The Head smiled slightly.

"Those four have all settled down remarkably this year." Mr Braithwaite commented.

"Well, they are all sixteen now - in fact, aren't Montgomery and Miller seventeen? It's about time they settled down."

"The Maynard boys are a strange bunch though."

"Strange?"

"Well, they seem to be much more independent than their friends - and of course, they are all very close for brothers. We've had boys here before who wouldn't speak to their brothers for terms at a time. Do you know anything about their family background, Bob?" The Head looked up.

"A bit." he replied. "I was at school with their father, as it happens. He's a very successful doctor now, part owner and manager of a Sanatorium in the Swiss Alps. Their mother is a children's author, of course - Josephine M. Bettany? I think the prep has a few of her adventure stories. There are loads of children. I last saw Jack Maynard when he came here to enroll Maynard before they went to Switzerland, so ten years ago - and there were eight children then. One of the babies then, of course, is the Maynard who is in the prep just now, and I believe there have been a few since then. At least one more boy, since he's down to enter the First Form next year, I think? Or maybe the one after?"

"And of course, they've got adopted brothers and I presume sisters as well." Mr Wilkins, the Games Master pointed out. "One of their adopted brothers is in one of the teams we play against, I forget which team though. I remember Maynard Minor telling me that that was how they knew each other."

"Big family then." Mr Braithwaite said thoughtfully. "Could explain why they seem to rely on each other so much."

"Could do. Anyway, Maynards aside - anyone for a stroll before bed?" Several people took up the offer and the study slowly emptied.

Author:  keren [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:27 pm ]
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Poor children

independant, rely on each other

sounds like a group of orphans

Author:  cal562301 [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:43 pm ]
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keren wrote:
Poor children

independant, rely on each other

sounds like a group of orphans

How true. Really enjoying this account of the 'forgotten Maynards. Thanks. Eilidh.

Looking forward to more.

OT But how do you pronounce your name? I've been wondering for ages. Apologies if this has been answered elsewhere!

Author:  robinette [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:50 pm ]
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Thanks for the update Eilidh!

Loving this :D

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:49 pm ]
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I'm really enjoying this universe, Eilidh - it's good to see more of the Maynard boys in term time.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:15 pm ]
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It's really interesting to see the Maynard family from a perspective that isn't the CS! Thankyou!

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:53 pm ]
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In ten years Jack has not been to school once. Yet they have been in England during term time. No wonder they are an independent bunch. poor Mike at another school must be even more orphaned.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:57 pm ]
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Interesting to see an outside perspective on the Maynard family.

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 8:08 pm ]
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The boys must all feel completely abandoned by their parents.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:13 pm ]
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Ten years since Jack was last at the boys' school?! Poor boys, no wonder they're so close.

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:58 am ]
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Why is it that rich families never seem to be "known by DOCS" for neglecting their children?

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 4:21 am ]
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I can't believe Jack and Joey haven't been to visit :shock: I'm one of twelve and Mum and Dad always make the effort including the ones in another country.

It's not like Jack and Joey are poor or haven't visited England during that time

Author:  di [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:53 am ]
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Ah, but they are odd parents aren't they? The boys must feel left out especially as Joey is forever bobbing in and out of the CS; the girls must talk to their brothers about it and how embarrassing it is for them to have Mamma in and out of school.
It's Mike I feel for though, he's on his own at Naval College whereas all his brothers and sisters have each other to talk to when the going gets tough.
I like the way the Head has engineered the post of Form Prefect and pleased that Chas has risen to the challenge. I foresee fireworks soon though as Timmons can't be too pleased he's been ousted from his position of power. :evil:
Please, what do you mean by 'Known by DOCS', Miss Di? it's not a term I've come across before.
Thanks for the update, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 12:22 pm ]
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This is rather a filler post, so I hope it's not too boring.

Meanwhile, due to a combination of prefect duties, special coaching, and music practice, Charles' friends had been unable to discuss his new promotion with him. After the seniors had gone upstairs, Miller and Jones arrived in the room Charles shared with Monty. Immediately, Monty began.

"Minor! We've been trying to get you all day. What on earth possessed you to decide to be form prefect?"

"You could have knocked me over with a feather when you stood up." Jones added. "We don't do form prefecting, don't you remember? That's responsibility, and good examples, and all that stuff."

"It was the Head." Charles explained. "He told me he thought I should try it. And I bet you all voted for me."

"Of course we all voted for you." Miller waved this aside. "What do you mean the Head told you to?"

"He said that we were a flock of sheep and it was about time I stood up to things and stopped being so passive." Charles replied. "And lets be honest, I'll be better than Timmons. I hope."

"Of course you will." Monty agreed. "And that's us found 4 of the people who voted for you."

"Who's the fourth?" Charles asked.

"Miss Braithwaite, of course." Miller grinned. "We're not blind, even if you are."

"What does the Head want you to do it for anyway?" Jones asked.

"He seems to think I can make out form less like a disaster and more like the Upper VI - all getting on with each other and stuff." Charles sighed. "Sounds like a lot of hard work to me."

"This year was always going to be hard work." Miller sighed. "And next year will be even worse."

"How d'you figure that out?"

"Well, look at us." The other three exchanged glances of confusion and then looked back at him. Miller sighed. "Honestly, I had no idea you were all so thick! Minor, who were last years juinor prees?"

"Maynie, Jeff, Baxter and Blake." Charles replied promptly, and then stopped. "You don't mean... one of us is going to end up as Head Boy?" Miller nodded. Charles flopped backwards onto his bed with a groan. "Just when I didn't think it could get any worse."

****

Joey picked up the newspaper and tossed it into the bin, dislodging an envelope as she did so. She picked it up and flicked through the photos inside, smiling slightly. Felicity had been given a camera for her last birthday, and had spent the summer holidays hiding in all sorts of places, snapping pictures of any of her unsuspecting family who walked past. Most of them had ended up being thoroughly uncomplimentary and Joey sat down and giggled over pictures of Margot in the middle of telling Felix off for something, Con in the act of biting into a chocolate bar, and the look of horror on Mike's face as he toppled backwards off the garden gate.

"Cocoa, Frau Doktor." Anna said cheerfully, bringing the trolley through.

"Oh, Anna! Thank you - sit down and have some with me. Jack is away tonight and the house is so quiet now that the horde are back at school. Have a look at these." Joey waved the photos at her. "Some of them are priceless." They went through the bundle together, leaving the worst aside, as Joey said 'to do something embarrassing with later'.

"This one is good." Anna said in surprise, handing one over. Joey looked at it. Felicity had managed to catch Stephen and Charles as they came in the gate. Charles had obviously just said something funny, because Stephen was looking back over his shoulder at him and both were laughing.

"It is." Joey agreed, taking the photo. "It's just so like them. Steve leads, Chas follows. Or Chas pushes, Steve goes, I suppose it depends how you look at it. I think I'll have this one for my desk - remind me of my big boys during the term when they're not here." Anna nodded. "It's the worst thing about living in Switzerland, having them all so far away." Joey said with a frown. "Still, they do make it home for most holidays, so I'll enjoy them while I can. Now, to bed, I think! Leave the washing up until the morning."

Anna merely smiled as she took the cups back to the kitchen, while Joey made her way upstairs. She looked into the big room which had been known as the night nursery until Geoff protested that they were too old for a nursery. Phil had the bed nearest the door and was curled under the covers, one of her plaits clutched tightly in her hand. Claire, in the next bed, was sprawled flat on her back. Geoff was against the back wall, his bed a mess. Joey sorted out the covers and pulled them back over him, running her hand over the short red curls.

"Only another year or two until you're gone as well." she sighed. "All my boys." She kissed each child lightly and murmured a blessing over them, and then, feeling slightly melancholy, she made her way to her own room, opened the window and blew eight kisses out into the night air. "Keep them well, safe and happy." she said to the staue of Ste Therese on her dressing table, before propping the photo up against the mirror and beginning her own preparations for bed.

Author:  di [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Mmmm! it's all very well Joey blowing kisses through the window for the boys- she'd be better off visiting them all at half term. I'm sure the 'tinies' will manage with Rosalii and Anna caring for them for a few days.
Seems like Chas and his friends are finally accepting that it's time for them to 'put foolish things aside.....' [can't remember who said this!] and take on the responsibilities which come with age. I'm sure they'll all do very well as senior prefects next year and one of the 4 will make an excellent Head Boy even if they don't think so at the moment!
Certainly this is not boring, Eilidh! It's one of my favourites and I love having the daily instalments. Thank you.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:14 pm ]
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Is it the Bible quote about seeing through a glass darkly and putting away childish things? Unfortunately I don't think I've ever got there! It's quite sad that Jo seems to regard the boys as being "gone" as soon as they've gone to boarding school.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:38 pm ]
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That was a horribly sad update, but I do like seeing that side to Joey. The pictures sound brilliant. Thankyou.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:29 pm ]
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Di asked
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Seems like Chas and his friends are finally accepting that it's time for them to 'put foolish things aside...

It is from 1 Corinthians 13, a famous chapter about Love (Charity).

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Please, what do you mean by 'Known by DOCS', Miss Di? it's not a term I've come across before.

I think it is Department of Child Services or Doctors working in Child protection. Rich children suffer from separation and isolation which in poorer families would be seen as abuse.

Thanks Eilidh for the update. The photo's sound fun. Hope Joey tells the boys that she thinks of them each night before she goes to bed.

Author:  cal562301 [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:46 pm ]
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Wish Joey would go and see the boys and tell them how much she misses them instead of doing it remotely.

Good to see another side to her, though.

Thanks for the update. Really enjoying this.

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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Joey needs to sort out her priorities - otherwise she will lose all the boys just as she lost Len.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Tue Aug 24, 2010 9:19 pm ]
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I wonder why it doesn't seem to occur to Joey to go and see the boys, since she obviously misses them.

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 7:18 am ]
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I've just caught up on the last three posts, which were all excellent. I'm really glad that Charles stood for form prefect, and hopefully with his friends' support he should make a success of that. Unbelievable that Jack and Joey have never visited the boys at school though - the school having noticed their lack of involvement, surely the boys must notice too, particularly since the involvement with the girls school is so intense.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:56 am ]
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Joey is hard to write. She quite clearly loves all her family, she just doesn't have the slightest idea that what she does is not perfect, if that makes sense. Thank you for your comments though.

October

In the afternoons, when there were no practical lessons taking place, the boys had games or prep or what the head termed 'personal study' and the boys regarded as free time. Elizabeth went for a walk or got started on her prep, depending on her preference and the weather. One sunny afternoon, eight weeks into the term, she was preparing go into town when she walked straight into an argument at the front door of the building which housed the dormitories, and her father's rooms.

"I don't care what you're telling me, Maynard, anyone who has fallen straight down the stairs and given himself a knock like you did is not playing rugby - certainly not today, and not for the rest of the week at least."

"But Sir, I'm fine. I didn't fall down the stairs as such, I just tripped over someone's boots at the top of the stairs and ended up at the bottom."

"You are anything but fine, boy - you're black and blue from your neck to your knees, to say nothing of the sprain you've given your arm and shoulder. If you want some excercise, you can join Miss Braithwaite on her walk - assuming she doesn't object. But you are coming nowhere near the games field until that bruising heals, and you're playing no rugby until your arm and shoulder are as good as new. Now go and get changed."

"I'll wait for you." Elizabeth offered. "I'll go and tell the Head you're coming with me if you want, and meet you at the front door." Charles sighed and agreed, before heading off back up the stairs to change. The games master had already gone out, and Elizabeth made her way to the headmasters office.

"The Head's given us some letters to take to the Post Office." Elizabeth said, as Charles joined her a few minutes later. "So he says to tell you that if you're not back in time for the start of prep, he expects you to make up the time later. He also said that if you were in need of cheering up, then the tea shop in the village is excellent and that he'll tell whoever is on duty why you're not at Tea." Charles, who looked like he was in a thoroughly bad mood, brightened slightly.

"Not bad!" he exclaimed. "A free afternoon with tea out. What more could we ask for, Miss Braithwaite?" Elizabeth made a face.

"Look, if we're going to spend all afternoon together, can you stop Miss Braithwaite-ing me? It makes me feel about ninety."

"What do you want me to call you then?" he asked.

"How about Elizabeth?" she suggested. "I really don't understand why boys are so formal. I mean - I've been sitting beside you in class for two months, and I have no idea what your name is. Oh, I know it begins with C. But that's it."

"How do you know that?" he asked, curious. Elizabeth reached out and caught his tie, flipping it over to show C. Maynard neatly marked on the back. He grinned. "And when did you see the back of my tie?"

"When you had it tied round your head last week in Latin, before the head came in and said that as we were acting like savages, it was appropriate that you were dressed like one." Elizabeth replied promptly. Charles turned red at the memory. Dr. Hammersley had had several sharp comments to make on how one was expected to wear one's uniform after that incident. "Now, are you going to tell me what the C stands for or should I start guessing?"

"Charles." he said. "Commonly shortened to Chas."

"Charles is nice." Elizabeth said thoughfully. "It doesn't really need shortened."

"That's my family, I'm afraid." Charles told her ruefully. "Helena - Len, Constance - Con, Margaret - Margot, Stephen - Steve, Michael - Mike, Felix - Flix, Felicity - Flixy, Cecilia - Cecil, Phillipa - Phil, and Geoffrey - Geoff."

"So many!" Elizabeth exclaimed, half in horror and half in envy. "There's only one of me. And I'm almost always Elizabeth now, unless I'm playing hockey in which case I'm normally Liz. Elizabeth is too long then."

"Yes, there's eleven of us." Charles said, making a face. "And assorted other hangers on and adoptees. But I don't want to talk about my family. I've had quite enough of them recently. Where are you playing hockey?"

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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I'm impressed with the school letting them go off on their own together ("on their own together" is a very stupid expression, just thinking about it :roll: :lol: ) :wink: . Hope they have a good afternoon.

Author:  Squirrel [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:11 pm ]
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Given all the warnings and the way that Elizabeth has been separated so thoroughly from becoming 'one of the boys' it's heartening to see that those they trust are being allowed to get to know her a little and break through the isolation she could well be feeling.

I understand why Charles doesn't want to talk about his family - but I hope he starts to open up about them at some point. Doesn't do him any good to brood on the matter. Even if it does explain more about the reaction Len got when she visited later on in the year.

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  di [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:58 pm ]
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Thanks, Eilidh. I hope they enjoy their afternoon tea and get to know one another better. :)

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:00 pm ]
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Squirrel said
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I understand why Charles doesn't want to talk about his family - but I hope he starts to open up about them at some point. Doesn't do him any good to brood on the matter. Even if it does explain more about the reaction Len got when she visited later on in the year.


I agree. Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Spoot [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:18 pm ]
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"But Sir, I'm fine. I didn't fall down the stairs as such, I just tripped over someone's boots at the top of the stairs and ended up at the bottom."


Yes, Charles, that is nothing like falling down the stairs. :mrgreen:

That's like me last year trying to explain that my very swollen and purple broken toe was no reason not to do the triathlon (the fact that my shoe didn't fit on my foot did, in fact, prevent the running bit).

I'm very much enjoying this story - thanks.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:27 pm ]
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:lol: I love seeing Chas being so carefree, and getting into mischief. No CS senior would ever be allowed to do that after the flouring incident! Thankyou.

Author:  Abi [ Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:47 pm ]
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Nice to see them being allowed to go off together. It must be a relief to Elizabeth after all the care that's been taken to keep her separate.

Thanks Eilidh; I'm really enjoying this.

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 12:59 am ]
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di wrote:
Please, what do you mean by 'Known by DOCS', Miss Di? it's not a term I've come across before.


It's the NSW Department of Community Services. Often under fire for either a. not intervening when they should or b. sticking their noses in.

"Known to..." is newspaper shorthand for The Authorities Already Knew About This Family And There Was Something Wrong With Them, it's generally used when a child dies/goes missing, etc

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:14 am ]
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Love to read Charles' attempt to excuse his fall down the stairs. :lol: As for allowing them out together - perhaps the Head wants nature to take its course?


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:51 am ]
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I have entirely given up trying to control Elizabeth. I've written this scene 5 or 6 times now, and each time she ends up saying exactly the same things! So I'm afraid that unbelieveable or not, Elizabeth insisted on this.

Thanks again for the comments, it's good to know people are enjoying this.


Continuing their conversation as they walked, it didn't take them long to get to the town. Elizabeth knew many of the people who lived there now, and waved and replied to greetings as they made their way down the street.

"How do you know so many people?" Charles demanded. "That's the fourth person in as many minutes that's said hello to you."

"I live here." Elizabeth pointed out. "I spend my holidays here, play hockey with them at weekends, go to parties here, everything. Surely you know a lot of people where you live?" Charles glaced at her.

"I live half way up a mountain in Switzerland, in an English colony that thinks it's 15 years in the past." he pointed out. "But yes, I suppose I know them all. More because we all live in each others pockets than anything else though."

"Liz!" another voice called. Elizabeth turned round and smiled.

"Hello!" she replied cheerfully. "This is Nora Ashford, my hockey captain. Nora, this is Charles Maynard, my-"

"Boyfriend?" Nora suggested, interrupting her. Charles turned scarlet, and Elizabeth smiled.

"Classmate." she replied. Nora raised her eyebrows.

"I see... classmate. Anyway, I just stopped you to ask if you'll play on the wing on Saturday. I know, I know..." this last as Elizabeth made a face, "but we're playing Greenacre High and Verity's twisted her ankle, so I'm having to put Susan in the team for it, but Susan can't run as well as you can."

"Fine." Elizabeth agreed with a groan. "I suppose I'll cope. Trust Verity though - what did she do?"

"Fell over the cat." Nora said with a giggle. "Anyway, I have to get on - Dad's expecting me back with this stuff and I'll hear about it if I'm not. See you Saturday! Nice to have met you." she added to Charles.

"Why did you let her think I was your boyfriend?" Charles asked, as Nora moved out of hearing.

"I didn't. I told her quite clearly that you weren't." Elizabeth pointed out.

"Yes, but she didn't believe you."

"I can't help what she believes. Anyway, would it be such a bad thing?"

"Yes!" Charles exclaimed.

"Why? I'm not bad, surely?" Elizabeth asked, considering her reflection in the window of the Post Office.

"No, but I'd - your - the head - I don't mean..." Charles stammered, then took a deep breath. "The head warned us - he said it was up to us to show everyone that we were gentlemen and not - you know - and then he said that if anyone did - you know - then he'd send us away at once, but not before he'd let your father deal with us." Elizabeth grinned at the state of the normally immaculately calm and collected young man.

"Why don't you compose yourself while I post these?" she asked, waving the letters. "And then we can go for tea and you can tell me exactly what it is that I'm supposed to know."

Charles leaned against the wall and breathed deeply. He closed his eyes, and immediately found himself back in the head's study at the beginning of term.

"And you will understand - all of you - that anyone who behaves at all inappropriately towards Miss Braithwaite will find himself out of this school so fast that his feet won't touch the floor, pausing only to explain himself to Mr Braithwaite. Do I make myself perfectly clear?"

"Yes, Sir." they had all replied. Charles shook his head and brought himself back to the present. That had all been before he realised he had ended up with Elizabeth sitting beside him in most of his classes. Before he had spent so many hours over the past few weeks aware of the way she frowned when something puzzled her, the way she pushed her hair out her face when she was writing, the way she nibbled the end of the pen while she was checking her answers. Of course he liked her, every boy in the school liked her! Every other member of Lower VI was insanely jealous of him for getting to sit beside her, he knew that. But the Head's threat kept circling in his head, and before he'd sorted anything out Elizabeth reappeared.

"So, shall we have tea?" she asked, tucking her hand through his good arm. "There's a shop down here that is very good - I've been there after hockey more than once. Lets go there."

"So what about it?" she asked, once they were settled in the little tea shop.

"I really don't think it's a good idea." Charles replied.

"No? Why not? Or is it just that you're too scared?"

"I'm not scared!"

"You sound it. Scared of my father, scared of the Head, even scared of your brother! Being expelled isn't that bad. I've managed it twice now and I'm still here." Charles choked on his tea at this revelation.

"Why?" he demanded. Elizabeth waved a hand.

"Oh, this and that." she replied cheerfully. "It was all in a good cause, didn't Jones tell you about it?"

"I'm sure it was." Charles looked disbelieving. "And no, he didn't..."

"He must have forgotten. Anyway, it's not important." Elizabeth said firmly. "The important thing is... well, you know already." Charles looked across the table at her. She was regarding him steadily, her cake lying almost untouched on her plate. Her blonde hair was ruffled by the wind and her cheeks were pink from the heat in the little tea shop, and Charles wavered slightly.

"We really shouldn't." he protested weakly.

"That just makes it all the more fun." Elizabeth grinned. "But fine... I'll leave you alone just now. I'm sure you'll change your mind eventually."

"We'll still be friends though?" Charles sounded concerned.

"Of course we will." Elizabeth laughed. "I haven't given up, you know. I've heard about you from my father. You never do do what you're supposed to for long! And lets face it - you have lots more competition than I do!" And with that, she turned her attention to her meal, leaving Charles feeling like he'd just made a rather big mistake.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 26th August

I really like Elizabeth :D .

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 26th August

Well done Elizabeth, glad you let her have her way in the end.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:37 pm ]
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Hurrah that girl! Don't make a mistake, Chas, whatever you do!

Thankyou for the update :D I loved his description of the Platz.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:58 pm ]
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Elizabeth is brilliant! I feel sure she will soon persuade Chas.... :D

Author:  charli [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:12 pm ]
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:lol:
Go Elizabeth!
I like her like this. Thanks for update.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:17 am ]
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Whether or not Elizabeth doesn't mind being expelled, Chas's option would be the Chalet School and he'd hate that!

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:41 am ]
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Cheeky minx!

And isn't a sign that your characters are "real" when they won't do what you want them to?

Author:  di [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:15 am ]
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Well done, Elizabeth! I love feisty characters who insist on saying and doing what they want and not what the writer has planned. :lol:
I feel so sorry for Chas; he obviously likes her a lot but is terrified not only of the threats from the Head but also the prospect of being friends, or even more, with Elizabeth. Even though he has a shed load of sisters back home he's still very shy around other girls - the downside of single sex schools I'm afraid.
No doubt Elizabeth will soon cure him of his insecurities but, I hope, she remains sensible and doesn't do anything to jeopardize either his or her own place in the school. Jack's response to Chas being expelled doesn't bear thinking about. He didn't speak to Mike for ages after he disobeyed an instruction so goodness only knows what he'd do if Chas was sent home in disgrace.
Thanks, Eilidh; hope Elizabeth starts to behave herself and do what you want! Thanks also to Lady Di for your explanation about child protection jargon.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:58 am ]
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And again, a short post for Friday.

"I say, Minor!"

"You said what?"

Charles held up his hands in defeat.

"I know, I know, but you know what he said!" Jones and Monty both shook their heads in frustration. Miller, seated on the end of Monty's bed, leant forward.

"Minor?"

"Yes?"

"You are a complete and utter idiot." The other two nodded their agreement.

"Would you have said yes?"

"No, because you would have torn our heads off if we had. That's a completely different thing. If I'd have been you, then of course I would have!"

"It's not! And I wouldn't! And no you wouldn't." Charles argued. "Because if you'd been me, then you'd have been me, and you'd've acted in exactly the same way I did because you'd have been me."

"She'd never have asked us anyway." Monty observed, having tried and failed to get to the end of Charles' sentence. "She might have said you had competition, but she didn't mean it."

"Oh, change the subject, for goodness sake!" Charles snapped. "Come on, we've still got to break the news to the rest of the form that we're being expected to provide the Christmas entertainment."

"We're banned from the common room." Jones pointed out.

"Well, it's been a while since we've been anywhere we weren't allowed." Miller said thoughtfully. "Come on, lets go and make their day."

"It's been a while since we broke any rules." Monty complained. "We'll be losing our reputation at this rate."

"When I became a man, I put away childish things." Miller quoted sadly.

"Well, we haven't put them all away yet." Charles grinned. "Come on, I'll race you to the common room. First one to get caught by staff takes the next prep cover that isn't theirs!"

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:14 pm ]
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:lol: I love Charles's logic :lol: .

Author:  di [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 27th August

Great, 2 in the same day!
I love the logic of this age group.
I'm not surprised Jones, Monty and Miller couldn't follow Chas's logic, I had to read it through a couple of times before I could get the gist of it. :lol:
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:35 pm ]
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That conversation is typical of teenagers. Hope they can survive the common room.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 27th August

Thanks, really like the discussion between the boys. :lol: Highly entertaining!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:43 pm ]
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Alison H wrote:
:lol: I love Charles's logic :lol: .


It's brilliant!

Author:  Abi [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:14 pm ]
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:lol: Great!

Author:  Finn [ Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 27th August

Thanks, Eilidh, some more cracking updates! I do like this story ever so much, y'know :)

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 11:48 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 27th August

Monday again... so much for doing some work on this over the weekend, my plot bunnies are obsessed with what everyone is doing 5 years or so in the future and not now. :roll:

Jones slid onto the piano stool and played a series of crashing discords which silenced the common room in seconds.

"What are you lot doing here? You're not allowed." Timmons pointed out.

"Shut up." Monty replied with a glare that had far more effect than the words did. "Form meeting. Minor's got things to tell you all." The rest of the form, scattered in twos and threes around the room, looked up from what they were doing with vague interest.

"Why is it so dark?" Charles demanded. "Turn the lights on, Miller, would you? And someone close the curtains. Jones, if you're finished making such an ungodly noise, can you go and grab Miss Braithwaite from the practice rooms? This is a form meeting, after all, not a most of the form meeting. The rest of you, move in a bit. I can't be bothered shouting to the back of the room." Once Jones had returned with Elizabeth and they were all gathered nearer, Charles dropped his bombshell.

"Our glorious Headmaster, in his infinite wisdom, has chosen us to produce the Christmas entertainment this year." There were groans from all around the room. "And he'll be selling tickets for charity. So my first question is," Charles continued when they'd subsided, "What are we going to do?"

"Not a carol concert." Miller said, when it didn't look like anyone else was going to speak. "Some of us are in the choir, and will get enough of them, and the rest of you aren't in the choir and there's a reason for that."

"What about a pantomime?" someone suggested form the back of the room. "That's Christmassy."

"It's a lot of work as well." Charles said doubtfully.

"We could keep it short."

"It's a stupid idea." Timmons said quietly. "Far too much work, and there's no way we'd be able to do it. Just the sort of thing I'd expect from..." Charles rounded on him immediately, cutting him off.

"If you're going to keep making comments like that, get out now." he snapped. "And if you can't behave like a civilized human being, we'll do this without you. None of us have got time for your rubbish. And move over there so you can stop whispering to people." Timmons moved, and sulkily threw himself down into another chair.

"It'll need to be one without a lot of female parts." Jones said firmly from the piano, attempting to draw the meeting back on track. "I'll do a lot of things, but I draw the line at getting up on the stage in a dress."

"You'd be doing the music anyway."

"Who is that?" Charles demanded, trying to see over the crowd. "Come out here, whoever you are, save me talking to someone I can't see. Oh, it's you Lewis." The boy addressed as Lewis perched on the table beside Charles self-conciously. "Right, explain." Charles said cheerfully.

"Well, we have Jones, who can play anything he likes on the piano, just about." Lewis explained. "We've got two or three other musicians, we've got a few people who can sing, we've got a couple of actors, we've even got a few people who will just get up and make a fool of themselves." Monty waved both hands in the air, to general laughter from the room.

"It's an idea, if we can find someone to write it." Charles said, still sounding doubtful. Miller immediately slid off the table he was sitting on and moved to where Charles couldn't see him.

"I am not doing it." he annouced from behind an armchair. "No, no, no, and no again. Pick on someone else."

"I could do it." Lewis volunteered shyly. There was a snort from Timmons, and Charles jumped down off the table.

"I warned you." he said calmly. "Get out, and get out now. Any of your friends who want to go with you are welcome to. If they can behave reasonably, they can stay."

"You can't keep me out of this." Timmons stated. "I'm a member of this form, the same as the rest of you." Charles considered.

"No, you're probably right." he agreed eventually. "Not by myself anyway. But you see these badges on my blazer? They mean that if I take it into my head, either Maynie, or Mr Hopkins, or the Head will be here to keep you out of it for me. Now, what's it to be? You go quietly, or we interrupt someone's evening and you go with a fuss." Timmons glared at him, and Charles sighed.

"I've got sixteen brothers and sisters, Timmons, I can out-glare anyone in this room, so that's not going to work. Just get out." Timmons got to his feet.

"You'll be sorry, Maynard." he promised, leaving the room, "Some day." Charles stared at him for a second, then burst out laughing.

"I might be, to be losing dramatic talent like that from this pantomime nonsense." he admitted. "What about the rest of you? Staying or going?" Timmons' friends glanced at each other, then two of them followed the other boy out of the room while that other two remained where they were. "Jolly good!" Charles said, sarcastically. "Now, can we get on? What were you saying, Lewis?"

"He was saying that he could write a pantomime." Miller provided, from where he'd taken possession of Timmons' chair. "Which I think is an excellent idea. Really excellent. Mainly because it means I'm not writing it." With Timmons leaving, the room had relaxed slightly, and several of the boys laughed at this.

"Right then." Charles said thoughtfully. "If you want to try that then, Lewis - just keep the amount everyone has to learn to a minimum. Anyone who'd rather be involved in music or lighting or whatever can report themselves to Jones. Anyone who actually wants to act, see me."

"What about me?" Elizabeth asked, "Can I take part?"

"Don't see why not." Charles replied, carefully not looking at her. "Means we've got one less person to talk into dressing up as a girl."

"Don't girls in things like that normally play men?" Miller asked.

"Fine - we'll put you in a dess instead." Charles told him firmly.

"Doesn't worry me. I can see Monty and I as the Ugly Stepsisters, can't you?" Charles smiled.

"There you go Lewis - there's your pantomime. If nothing else, I'd pay good money to see those two like that!" The bell ringing to tell them it was bedtime drowned out Monty's response, and Miller took off at top speed before his friend could catch him.

Author:  di [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 30th August

Well done Chas! I love the way he's responded to the Head's challenge with gusto and enthusiasm and the way he dealt with Timmons showed a level of maturity he'd rather not admit he had. :lol:
His comment that he had 16 brothers and sisters and therefore could outglare any one in the room was priceless and certainly put the dissenters in their place!
I was amazed though that Timmons did 'get out' when Chas told him to and that only a couple of his cohorts went with him. He obviously didn't have the support he thought he had from the rest of the form.
Thanks, Eilidh, this is a fantastic post!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:14 pm ]
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What a brilliant update! The idea of the pantomime is priceless (though a shame that Chas didn't channel his mother's talents and offer to help write it) but I'm wondering what the revenge will be.

Thankyou!

Author:  Abi [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:28 pm ]
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The Head picked well when he asked Chas to stand as head of the form; he seems to have a natural authority which even someone like Timmons responds to. Am a little worried about what form his revenge might take, though...

Thanks Eilidh. :D

Author:  JS [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:35 pm ]
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Really good to catch up with this (I've been enjoying your stories in the archive too). Also intrigued by what your plot bunnies are saying about five years hence!

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 30th August

Thanks I wondered if Charles would offer a St Milly's panto. Pleased someone volunteered from outside the sub prefect group.

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:23 pm ]
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Like Charles facing down Timmons - wonder what his form of revenge will be - he obviously hasn't got as much support as he hoped.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Finn [ Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:05 pm ]
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Thanks, Eilidh, I'm very much enjoying this! Respite from work...

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:26 am ]
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Three cheers for Elizabeth, the Principal Boy! :lol:

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:59 am ]
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Love Charles's comment he can outglare anyone else due to sixteen brothers and sisters :D

Do wonder what the revenge will be

Author:  cestina [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:20 am ]
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Looks to me as if Charles will be well able to deal with whatever form of revenge Timmons comes up with. Loved the 16 siblings comment! A great post - thanks :D

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 12:17 pm ]
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Steve,

Excuse the postcard, am in a tearing hurry as usual. Sickening that young Daph is in quarentine over your half term. Why don't you see if that Head of yours will agree to you coming over and spending it with me? Sorry no room for Chas as well. Let me know.

Roger.


Charles skimmed this missive, reflecting that Roger's handwriting was deteriorating fast, and tossed it back into the Upper VI mail pile with a sigh. Over the last week, he had taken to hunting out Stephen's mail each morning as well as his own, just in case she'd written to Steve. As usual though, she hadn't.

"You alright, Minor?" Charles spun around to see Miller framed in the door of the post room - really just a large cupboard off the entrance hall - looking concerned.

"I'm fine." he replied shortly. Miller raised his eyebrows, but let this pass.

"We're in the garden, are you coming?" he asked.

"No." Charles replied shortly, searching his brain for an excuse. "I need to go and see what state the games field is in - told Bax I would, because he's on detention duty today." Miller shrugged and went outside without another word. Charles watched him go, and then hurried out of the building and turned towards the games fields. He might as well actually go and have a look at them now.

Meanwhile, Miller dropped down on the garden bench where the others were waiting and accepted a chunk of the chocolate Monty held out.

"No luck?" Jones asked.

"No."

"What are we gonig to do now? We've all tried."

"We can't go back to Maynie and tell him that we've failed. We're his best friends! And he's getting worse." Monty groaned. There was a pause while the other two worked through the confusion of pronouns.

"We could force him." Jones suggested.

"How?"

"I don't know - lock him in his room and not let him out until he talks to us?"

"If you're going to make suggestions, at least make them sensible ones." Monty sighed.

"Maybe we just leave him to come out of it by himself?" Miller suggested. They all looked at the gap on the end of the bench, and shook their heads.

"If we only knew what had got into him!" Jones sighed in frustration. Monty suddenly sat bolt upright and gave a cry.

"What's got into you?" Miller demanded. Monty pointed dramatically ahead of him.

"I see the solution!" he exclaimed.

"What was in your tea this morning?" Jones asked. "All I see is Miss Braithwaite." Elizabeth caught her name and looked over.

"You called?" she asked.

"We've got a problem." Monty explained, jumping up and offering her his sea on the bench, while he perched on the arm in Charles' usual place.

"And I can help you, can I?" she asked, looking amused. "I'm not a miracle worker."

"This is a real problem." Miller explained. "Maynie asked us about a week ago to see if we could do anything about Minor. Apparently he's not speaking to Maynie unless he has to, which is unusual - they were always really close, for brothers, you know - and now he's barely speaking to us either. Monty says he's up before the bell every morning, and he's haunting the post room like he's attached to it by a short piece of string."

"Have you asked him?" Elizabeth demanded.

"We've all had a turn." Jones said gloomily. "It's no use, he just brushes us off and then finds an excuse to go somewhere else."

"So what do you want me to do?"

"Well, I'm not sure." Miller admitted. "Monty had a plan, I think."

"You talk to him for us!" Monty explained. "You'll get on far better than we will - you're a girl."

"And what does that have to do with it?"

"Girls have feelings. You understand these things." Elizabeth rolled her eyes.

"Fine, I'll try. I don't promise any success though. I don't have time just now, where will he be after dinner?"

"If we're outside, he'll probably have wandered off towards the games field." Monty guessed. "If we're in, I'd try the library."

"OK, I'll try." Elizabeth promised.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 12:57 pm ]
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Thanks Charles is really missing Len. Pity he is taking it out on Steve and that Roger can only have Steve to stay and not Charles as well. Felix is also going to have to stay at the school for half term, where are Madge and Jem, they must be back from Australia by now.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:04 pm ]
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Hope Charles is able to talk to Elizabeth. Teenage boys aren't usually brilliant at "feelings" stuff: I can't imagine him explaining to the other lads that he's down because he's missing Len.

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:20 pm ]
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Quote:
"Girls have feelings. You understand these things."


A very male response! Excellent writing, I am really enjoying every bit of this.

Author:  Abi [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:51 pm ]
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I hope Elizabeth can encourage Charles to talk to her. Probably more likely than her talking to any of the other boys.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:30 pm ]
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2nd Gen Fan wrote:
Quote:
"Girls have feelings. You understand these things."


A very male response! Excellent writing, I am really enjoying every bit of this.


That just made me laugh. Thanks, hope Elizabeth suceeds on getting through. It's a shame Roger can't have both boys. A bit rough Chas has to miss out.

Author:  JS [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:42 am ]
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I think his friends are being very mature - an altogether nice bunch.
Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:25 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 31st August

I was going to say the same as you, JS. Chas's friends seem really caring. I hope Elizabeth can get him to open up as all this brooding is not good for him. What a shame he won't talk to Steve.
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 31st August

Thankfully, neither of the classes Elizabeth had before lunch required much thought. She copied notes and worked on excercises with half a mind, pausing frequently to inspect Charles out of the corner of her eye. For his part, he worked continually, rarely looking up from his book from the start of the lesson to the end. Elizabeth left the lesson immediately before her lunch break distracted, receiving hopeful smiles from Charles' friends as she passed them. She ate her meal quickly, and then ran downstairs and out into the garden. Miller waved to her as she passed him sitting on the same bench with a book, and pointed in the direction of the games field. Elizabeth nodded to him and made her way out of the garden and across the drive.

The games fields, which stretched from the driveway to the prep school on the opposite side, looked empty, and also very muddy. Elizabeth set out towards the small, abandoned pavillion in the middle, sticking close to the house where the ground was drier for as long as possible and picking her way carefully. She found Charles inside, tidying sports equipment that looked like it hadn't seen the light of day for years. She deliberately stamped the mud off her feet outside and let the door close loudly behind her.

"Who's there?" Charles called.

"Only me." Elizabeth replied, opening the door to a little storeroom and almost hitting him on the head with it. "Oh, I'm sorry! What are you doing in here?"

"Come in if you like." Charles shrugged. "You'll need to close the door though or there's not room. I wouldn't mind the company." Elizabeth, with a slightly inelegant scramble, managed to find herself a seat on top of a battered cupboard and perched there, swinging her legs.

"What are you trying to do?" she asked again.

"Get this place useable again." Charles replied, using two broken tennis rackets to pick up something that Elizabeth suspected may once have been a sock, and tossing the whole lot into a bag beside him. "Seems such a waste to have it and never use it. It would be good when we're playing matches here."

"Your partners in crime not helping you?" Elizabeth asked, picking up a stack of papers and beginning to look through them.

"No. They're not very happy with me at the moment."

"Oh? Why not?" she asked innocently. Charles continued to pull things out the cupboard, ignoring the question. Suddenly he stopped, staring at the tennis racket he held in his hands.

"What is it?" Elizabeth demanded.

"This one belonged to a member of my family." Charles explained. "My cousin, in fact. He died before we were born - some sort of accident that no one talks about. I was just surprised to see the name." He placed the racket to one side and continued pulling things out the cupboard, sorting them into a pile to be kept, or the bag to be thown away.

"Charles, get your head out that cupboard and talk to me." Elizabeth said firmly. Charles sat back and looked up at her.

"What?" he demanded.

"Why aren't you with the other three, why are you sulking in the sports pavillion on your own when probably loads of people would help you sort it out, and why are you spending half your breaks haunting the post room?"

"None of your business." Charles snapped. "You can go if you've just come to be nosey."

"Charles, people are worried about you." Elizabeth said. "Your brother, your friends, me, even some of the staff. You've been getting more and more withdrawn all term. What's wrong with you?"

"The bell for afternoon classes will be going in ten minutes." Charles observed.

"And it's Tuesday, we're both free all afternoon because the Mr Wilkins has taken some of the Upper Fourths to the dentist so you're not having games. You've got no prep to do, you told me this morning, and I did all mine last night because my father was at a staff meeting and I was bored."

"Well, I'm spending my afternoon working on this, and you're not." Charles snapped. "Get out and leave me alone."

"You know, you'd feel far better about whatever it is if you just told me." Elizabeth said, with a provoking air of calm. "And surely better me than my father, or the Head."

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 1st September

Ooh, I'd forgotten that Rolf went to the same school - are we going to find out what really happened to him :wink: ? (Pretty please!)

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:21 pm ]
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I had to think for a moment which cousin had died before Charles, Steven and the triplets, were born. Didn't Rolf disobey his mother by running into the road and getting hit by a car?

Elizabeth is certainly determined to get Chas talking about whatever it is he's brooding over and she's not allowing him get away with distraction tactics. What a tenacious young woman she is. :lol: I do hope she's successful, otherwise Chas is going to make himself ill.

Thanks, Eilidh, 2 posts to read today, yeh!! :)

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:29 pm ]
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"You know, you'd feel far better about whatever it is if you just told me." Elizabeth said, with a provoking air of calm. "And surely better me than my father, or the Head."


Hope Elizabeth's tactics work. Thanks fr th eupdate.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:57 pm ]
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Ooh, I've just had lots to catch up on - well, two updates! Still, this is excellent, and I just hope that she can get him to talk. Thankyou!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:07 pm ]
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Hope Elizabeth gets through to Charles

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:00 pm ]
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di wrote:
Didn't Rolf disobey his mother by running into the road and getting hit by a car?


I do hope not. I didn't think there was anything canon about how he died, is there? I've seen a few drabbles on the subject, but I think that's all.

"Well, I'm spending my afternoon working on this, and you're not." Charles snapped. "Get out and leave me alone."

"You know, you'd feel far better about whatever it is if you just told me." Elizabeth said, with a provoking air of calm. "And surely better me than my father, or the Head." She jumped down from the cupboard and made her way out of the storeroom, but Charles stopped her.

"Wait."

"What?"

"The Head?"

"Well, someone's going to have to find out what's wrong, and if you don't stop moping about in corners you'll find yourself explaining it while he takes your prefect badge off you." Elizabeth replied, still in the same conversational tone. "Can't have a prefect who's not talking to anyone. Still, whatever you prefer." She opened the door again, and again Charles stopped her.

"Elizabeth, wait."

"Wait or go, make up your mind."

"Wait. Come in and sit back down." With some difficulty, Elizabeth twisted herself around and managed to scramble back up on to the cabinet. Charles resumed sorting out the piles of junk and following his lead, Elizabeth returned to the papers she'd been looking at.

"My sister ran away from home at the beginning of the holidays and we haven't heard from her since." Charles said suddenly while performing a close examination of an old tennis racket. "Every morning I expect there to be a letter from her, and every breaktime I'm disappointed. I can't talk to Steve because he was closer to Len than anyone else, and he's worried enough without me worrying him more. I presume he's put you up to this." He tossed the racket onto the top of the pile of rubbish and stuck his head back in the cupboard.

"Why did she run away?" Elizabeth asked.

"My mother..." Charles thought for a moment and then started again. "My mother has very set ideas for what she wants each of us to do. Len was supposed to go to university, train as a teacher, then come back and live near Mum, married to an old family friend, and teaching at her old school. She hated the idea, but she was so used to doing what she was told, she had no idea how to tell them that. So she ran away. All we got was a postcard from France, telling us she had a job, then nothing else."

"I can see why she ran away." Elizabeth said thoughtfully.

"So can I! But I can't see why she hasn't let us know she's ok. She must know we're all worried about her."

"Maybe she hasn't thought of it? Maybe she doesn't want you to know where she is? I'm sure she'll get in touch eventually."

"She used to write all the time." said Charles, now studying a deflated football. "She gave us advice on anything we asked for - and some things we didn't. I miss her letters. I miss Len." he added quietly. Elizabeth jumped down from her perch and grabbed the rubbish with one hand.

"I'll get a new bag." she said, pulling it out the door behind her. If she took longer than necessary hunting for the bags which were lying at the front door, and paused to press her ear to the door before going back into the store room, neither of them commented on it.

"What are you doing at half term?" Charles asked.

"Nothing." Elizabeth replied.

"I'm staying too - my cousin is in quarentine for something so I can't go to my aunt and uncle. I was planning on getting this place cleared out, would you want to help?"

"I probably could." Elizabeth agreed. "You do know that Monty and Miller and Jones are staying too, don't you?"

"They are? But Monty and Jones were going to Monty's cousin in London for the week, and Miller always goes home."

"They're staying with you - my father told me last night." Charles turned red.

"They're staying because I am? Even though I've been such a pig?" he asked.

"They're your friends." Elizabeth pointed out. "And really, you should go and find them. You don't have to explain anything, but you really should start talking to them again. We can finish this over half term. One of the girls from my hockey team is coming up as well, to stay with me - her father is the police constable in the village, and she's at a private school in town, a tiny one. She just wants a change of scene, she said she didn't care what we did. I'll rope her in too."

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:29 pm ]
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Well done Elizabeth for persuading Charles to talk, and for reminding him that his friends are there for him. Hope they all enjoy half term.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:48 pm ]
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Glad Elizabeth managed to get through to Charles. It must have been so hard for all of them when they didn't hear from Len for so long. :(

*reminds self that this is in fact fiction....*

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:11 am ]
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Abi wrote:
*reminds self that this is in fact fiction....*



Are you sure Abi? I thought it was Real!

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:32 am ]
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Definitely real! Like the way Elizabeth got him to talk - a very determined young lady!


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:43 am ]
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I don't think there's any canon about how Rolf died. There are some cryptic remarks about it being due to disobedience so it sounds as if he had an accident rather than an illness, but I don't think EBD actually tells us the details.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:15 am ]
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Glad Elizabeth was able to get through to Charles and am another who is hoping for more on Rolf

Author:  charli [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:01 am ]
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Just caught up on a lot of posts.
I really really like this Eilidh. :D

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:25 pm ]
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Real? Yes, I'd say so. Elizabeth certainly thinks she's real!
Alison H wrote:
I don't think there's any canon about how Rolf died.

Phew, that means there is no need for a re-write!

Half Term

"Breakfast downstairs this morning, girls!" Elizabeth's father called into the small bedroom. "And if you're planning on clearing that sports pavillion today, you'd better put old clothes on."

The four boys were already standing at the table when Elizabeth and Verity joined them. As they sat down after grace had been said, she waved a hand around the table.

"Minor, Monty, Miller, and Jones." she said. "Boys, this is Verity."

"You can't seriously expect me to call them that?" Verity demanded. "What are your actual names?" she asked, looking from one to the other. The boys all exchanged glances. "OK." Verity continued, addressing Monty, "How long have you known him?" she pointed at Charles.

"Minor? Nearly ten years."

"What's his first name?"

"Haven't a clue." The staff at the other end of the table were now listening intently as well, amused by Verity's shock.

"What about you then, Minor?" she demanded.

"Staff call him Montgomery, we call him Monty, his mum calls him dear." Charles grinned. "As to the name on his birth certificate? It starts with an A."

"You lot are hopeless." Elizabeth said, shaking her head. "It's not worth it, Verity. They don't see the problem. Anyway, Minor, I've warned Verity about the sports pavillion project - she's quite keen to help out. What's the plan?"

"Monty and Miller have volunteered to get the outside painted today." Charles replied, waving a piece of toast as he spoke, "So if the rest of us get started on the inside, if we can finish clearing it out and cleaning it, then we can get it painted towards the end of the hol."

"I might come down and help you one day." the Head said thoughtfully, and several of the other staff nodded as well.

Three days later, the Head kept his promise and appeared for breakfast in casual clothes. Once they'd eaten, the entire party descended on the Pavillion, which, on the outside at least, looked much better. The painting had been finished and all the windows had been washed. Verity, as the smallest and lightest member of the party, had been lifted on to the flat roof to sweep off the years of rubbish which had been piled up there. Inside, the floors had all been swept and washed, and a fresh coat of pain had been applied to many of the walls. Monty and Jones set to work to finish the painting, while the rest of the party collected in the main room. This had been cleared out and now contained a large table, on which was piled all the photos and trophies they had found, as well as everything else that they had decided was too good to throw out.

"I thought it would make the place more interesting if some of this stuff was on display." Charles said, waving a hand towards it. "So I suppose we need to find our what's worth keeping, and then see about getting the pictures framed and the trophies and things cleaned." he added with a glance at the Head. That gentleman regarded the piles with amusement, then suddenly seized a trophy and held it up to the light for inspection.

"Good Lord, I hadn't thought of this for years!" he exclaimed. "So this is where it ended up? Well then, I suppose we'd better get started."

"Who's this then?" Miller asked a while later, pulling out a photograph.

"What does it say on the back?" Elizabeth asked.

"Junior Tennis Six, 1929. Maynard, R. Looks exactly like Maynie, that's why I asked."

"Of course he does." Charles replied. "He's a Maynard in looks, like Maynie, and my brother who went to Dartmouth is the same. Tall, fair, probably had bright blue eyes, same facial features."

"So how do you get a short, skinny, dark haired, black eyed brother in the midde of those?" Jones asked. They had all stopped now and were studying the picture that Miller still held.

"I take after my mother." Charles scowled. "And I'm not that short now."

"Anyway, who is this, Minor? A cousin?"

"A cousin, yes. He died young, I don't know what happened to him. He's generally held up as an example of the perils of disobedience. Sir, do you know?" Charles asked.

"Do I know what?" Dr Hammersley looked up from the photos

"What happened to Rolf Maynard."

"Ah, yes. Yes, I remember Rolf, and what happened to him, poor boy."

"Can you tell us?"

"Over lunch, perhaps. I see that Mrs Mac has kindly sent some of the maids down with a picnic. Why don't we get settled with that and I'll tell you the story."

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Quote:
OK." Verity continued, addressing Monty, "How long have you known him?" she pointed at Charles.

"Minor? Nearly ten years."

"What's his first name?"

"Haven't a clue." The staff at the other end of the table were now listening intently as well, amused by Verity's shock.

"What about you then, Minor?" she demanded.

"Staff call him Montgomery, we call him Monty, his mum calls him dear." Charles grinned. "As to the name on his birth certificate? It starts with an A."


Love this. I remember being called by my surname only by a Home Warden during training and complaining I was not a boy and had a first name which she knew and she could call me by that or Miss or Nurse with my surname. I never understood why boys accepted it.

Author:  thefrau46 [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:19 pm ]
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I'm going to show my age now - the boys in my grammar school were called by their surnames too. Now that I think of it we probably didn't know their first names either -except for those who made it to the Sixth Form and did the same subjects as us. I can remember Collett and Rigglesworth's but not Bothwell or Darbishire's! :)

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:14 pm ]
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You've left us on a right cliff there!!

Author:  Joanne [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:32 pm ]
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I'm really enjoying this story - the characters are very real!

Thanks.

Author:  Abi [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:26 pm ]
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Oh, a cliff! But I want to know what happened to Rolf... :?

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  charli [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:33 pm ]
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Well?
What happened to Rolf?

*rubbing head after falling right over that cliff*

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:56 pm ]
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And here was I thinking that I'd be safe after a couple of updates! Please don't leave us on the cliff for long!

Thankyou :D

Author:  cal562301 [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:20 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. Really enjoying this.

*Another one who wants to know what happened to Rolf*

Author:  Elle [ Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:36 pm ]
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Blimey, that is a cliff and a half! Thanks for the update.

Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:24 am ]
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Owch! I think I broke my ankle tripping over that one. Oh and if the crew would like to pop over this way when they're done with the pavillion I could use some help Spring Cleaning.

Author:  Lesley [ Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:58 am ]
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Pleased we're going to hear about Rolf. Love the scene about names. :lol:

Author:  di [ Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:23 am ]
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Back at home, catching up after 2 days in hospital. maybe I read about Rolf, in a previous drabble-looking forward to hearing what happened to him in this reality.
Elizabeth worked well on Chas, getting him to talk a little about Len and his hurt at the lack of correspondence from her, glad he's communicating again with his friends.
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Tawny [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:25 am ]
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I am loving this! It's the first drabble I have read and I am hooked.

Thank you for this

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:04 pm ]
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Tawny wrote:
I am loving this! It's the first drabble I have read and I am hooked.
:oops: :oops: Thank you! I am honoured to be someone's first drabble!

Hopefully this lives up to everyone's expectations, and the completely unintentional cliff!


"This is really for Maynard." Dr. Hammersely began, after they'd had lunch. "Would you rather hear it privately?" Charles shook his head.

"I think it's more school history than family history." he said thoughfully. "My Uncle Bob died in the war - before I was even born. We get a card from Aunt Lydia at Christmas, but we never hear from her any other time. Rolf is only mentioned as an example of what happens to disobedient children - 'if you don't do what Mamma says, you'll end up like your cousin Rolf.'" he quoted with a sigh.

"Very well, make yourselves comfortable, and I'll begin. As you may know, this school was founded in the early years of this centuary, by my grandfather. He canvassed among his friends to send their boys here to learn, and one of the founding pupils was Robert Maynard - your uncle, Maynard. Robert's younger brothers, Stephen and Charles, were promised in time as well, and so the Maynard family was linked with this school from the outset." Charles had sat bolt upright at this introduction, meaning Monty, who was leaning against him, ended up sprawled on the floor. When they had themselves sorted out, Dr. Hammersley continued. "Tragically, both of the younger boys, and also, I believe, a sister died in childhood - neither lived long enough to make it here. Shortly before they died though, the Maynard family was extended again, by another boy."

"Twins." Charles corrected. "John and Mary - Jack and Mollie - my father and aunt." Dr Hammersley nodded to him.

"Robert Maynard was therefore in the Sixth form and getting ready to join the army before his only surviving brother joined the school. He did join the army, and he also married the daughter of old family friends. His son - his only child, I believe - was born while he was away fighting in France." He paused to bite into the apple he was holding.

"Jack Maynard - and myself, incidentally - left school the year before Rolf Maynard started. We were both studying very different things, and my contact with the Maynard family fell away until I graduated and came back here as a junior master. I then heard that Robert Maynard was still in the army, that Jack was finishing his medical training at a sanatorium in Austria, and that Rolf Maynard, the only one of the next generation so far, was a member of my form."

"Rolf had just entered the Upper Fourth - that means, girls, that he'd just moved up from the prep school to the main building." Elizabeth and Verity both nodded. "I taught Rolf for 2 terms before the accident. He was a very bright boy, full of energy and a leader in his form. He was never out of trouble, though he accepted all his punishments cheerfully, and learned not to get caught that way again."

"From the sounds of it, Minor might not look like his cousin, but he certainly takes after him!" Jones grinned.

"Yes, there are certain similarities." Dr. Hammersley admitted. "However, to continue. The boys all went home for the Easter holidays. Later we heard that on his arrival home, Rolf was told that due to the continual heavy rain and the snow that we'd had over the winter, the river was off limits for him as it was very full, flowing very fast, and very dangerous. Although he was disappointed, Rolf accepted this and spent his Easter holidays in the usual way, just without the boating he was keen on. A few days before he was due to return to school, he had been out with the family dog, when the ball that the dog had been playing with went into the river. We can only presume it was a bad throw - like yourself, Maynard, cricket was not your cousin's game. The dog, of course, went in after it and due to the currents, almost immediately got into difficulties. Forgetting his mother's instructions on the subject, Rolf plunged into the water after it, however the currents were too strong and it seems he got into difficulties quickly. The full river was more than chest deep for him and freezing cold, and it wasn't long before he was swept downstream. He was dead by the time they got to him."

There was a silence. Charles shivered slightly, and Elizabeth put her hand on top of his and gave it a quick squeeze. He smiled at her, surprised.

"I was one of the representatives sent from the school to the funeral." Dr. Hammersley continued, determindly staring at the far wall while this was going on. "The family was torn apart. They were so angry that he'd died trying to save the dog, which had been washed into the bank and had survived anyway. Some of them were blaming disobedience, saying that he'd been told he shouldn't go in or on the river."

"But he couldn't just watch his dog drown!" Verity cried.

"If he had, he wouldn't have died." Jones pointed out. "Better the dog than the boy, surely."

"That was the thinking, yes." the Head agreed. "People said Rolf was disobedient. His mother, I believe, thought that this was her fault, that she was being blamed. She became very unhappy."

"I once heard Dad tell Mum that Aunt Lydia resented that there were so many of us when she'd lost Rolf." Charles said thoughtfully. "It was when he was thinking about asking her to come for Christmas."

"I think we are now leaving facts behind and entering the realm of family gossip." the Head said firmly. "And as such, I think it's time that we get one with our work. Lets finish these last things off, and then you can all have a picnic lunch and go off somewhere tomorrow, before the boys come back on Friday."

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:12 pm ]
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Thank you. Dr. Hammersely shows care and compassion here, and gives a credible reason for Ralf's death. That it was not plain disobedience but the act of a caring, active boy will leave an impression on all the younger members who heard it and might help Charles understand some family dynamics better.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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That makes a lot of sense, and makes it seem even more unfair that Lydia was blamed.

Author:  shazwales [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:04 pm ]
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Thank you,agree with everything that Alison has said,it does seem unfair that Lydia took the blame.

Author:  charli [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:15 pm ]
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Oh , poor Rolf. :(
And poor Lydia blaming herself, although natural I suppose.

You write very powerfully Eilidh, I just had to remind myself that this is not in fact real life! :)

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:52 pm ]
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Very realistic thing to happen - Rolf wasn't being deliberately disobedient - he was doing what most humans do when someone they love is in trouble. That it was a dog is even more tragic.


Feel very sorry for Lydia. :cry:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Abi [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:47 pm ]
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That's very natural and very, very sad. :( And in a way I suppose the family's reaction was natural too, although I wish they could have dealt with it better. Poor Lydia, though.

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:18 pm ]
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charli wrote:
Oh , poor Rolf. :(
And poor Lydia blaming herself, although natural I suppose.


It wasn't just Lydia blaming herself but the doctor at the time blaming her for it. I thought that was particularly nasty.

Thanks, I really liked the explaination; very sympathetic and realistic

Author:  di [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:08 am ]
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Poor Lydia, folks can be so cruel! If I remember rightly [and I've already proved my memory isn't that accurate :lol: ] Joey wasn't that sympathetic towards her sister in law and, as Chas, tells, only held up the tragic events as the result of what happens to naughty children who do not obey!!
Despite it's tragic end Chas must be pleased that he resembles his cousin in some way. It was sweet of Elizabeth to offer comfort - they seem to be growing closer.
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 12:01 pm ]
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November

"No, no, no, not like that! Move your foot the other way!" Charles cried in frustration as Elizabeth winced. The rehearsal stopped.

"He's right." Lewis observed, from his position on the side of the stage. "The Prince never broke Cinderella's foot - or her glass slipper - by standing on it with his boots on, Harry." The boy he was talking to threw up his hands in despair.

"I can't dance." he said firmly. "I've been telling you for weeks I can't dance, no matter how hard I try. I'm sorry, chaps, but I can't do this part. Someone else is going to have to take it. Minor knows how it's supposed to go, why doesn't he do it himself? I can prompt as well as he can." Charles, who was well aware of the several reasons why he didn't want the part, and equally well aware of the fact that he couldn't explain them to the form at large, opened and closed his mouth several times.

"Good idea." Elizabeth said gratefully, rubbing her foot. "Dancing was the only useful thing I learned at that stupid finishing school, and they never told me there about enormous men stamping on your feet with their school boots on. Can you dance, Minor?" Reluctantly, Charles nodded.

"My sisters taught us in the summer, one week it was wet." he explained in answer to the amused looks. "They said we'd never be proper gentlemen otherwise, and then they said we'd never be able to do it anyway. So we did it just to prove them wrong."

"So you take the part then." Lewis, who had been appointed producer due to his admitting that he was involved in amatuer dramatice in the holidays, said from the stage. "Look, try it on the floor first, before you try it up here." Reluctantly, Charles crossed the hall to where Elizabeth was putting her shoe back on. She stood up, danced a few steps with an invisible partner, and nodded. "OK, from the beginning of that scene." Lewis called from the stage. "Jones, stop grinning like an ape and get back to the piano." Jones obeyed the second half of this instruction, flicking back through his music to the right place. Elizabeth stood back as two of the other boys opened imaginary doors. Jones provided a fanfare and Elizabeth walked forward as if entering the ballroom, sweeping a deep curtsey to an extremely uncomfortable looking Charles, who managed to pull himself together enough to return it with a bow.

"May I have this dance, my lady?" he asked. Monty and Miller, seated on the edge of the stage, were both laughing quietly while Jones was focusing hard on his music in an effort not to follow their example.

"I would be honoured." Elizabeth replied, prefectly composed, taking his hand. Charles led her into the middle of the floor and placed his arm around her waist. Jones struck up a waltz, and Charles, blushing furiously, danced her around the hall while trying to stay as far away from her as possible.

"Well, it wasn't good, but at least she's not limping." Lewis declared, tactfully ignoring Charles' red face. "Continuez, mes enfants!" he added, waving the script at them. "Do that again, but this time with the other dancers. Ladies?" he added to Miller and Monty, who jumped off the stage and found their unfortunate partners. Elizabeth soon found herself being danced around the hall again, while the rest of the form focused on the others and on making their dancing as ridiculous as they could.

"Will you relax?" Elizabeth muttered. "It's like trying to dance with a statue."

"No." Charles snapped back. Luckily, Lewis waved them off at that point to sit down while he - and everyone else who felt like injecting some helpful criticism - concentrated on the Ugly Stepsisters and their unlucky partners.

"They're supposed to be laughing at them, not at us." Elizabeth said as they sat down. "If you keep dancing like that, no one will notice the others."

"Well I can't help it." Charles said sulkily. "At least I didn't stand on your feet." Elizabeth sighed.

"Stop sulking." she ordered. "It's very unattractive. And meet me down here at eleven tonight, without your entourage. Maybe some practice will help."

Author:  Joanne [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 1:11 pm ]
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Oooh, can't help thinking that meeting on their own at night might not be a good idea! :shock:

Thanks.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 1:18 pm ]
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They seem to be getting ever closer :wink: .

Author:  Abi [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:01 pm ]
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I've said it before, but Elizabeth is brilliant!

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:03 pm ]
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Poor Charles - he really doesn't stand a chance, does he? :lol:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 10:14 pm ]
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Lesley wrote:
Poor Charles - he really doesn't stand a chance, does he? :lol:


Thanks Eilidh


No he doesn't :lol:

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Sep 07, 2010 11:18 pm ]
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Midnight (well nearly) meetings? Not such a good idea kids!

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 6:40 am ]
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Oh dear, breaking school rules. :lol: Will they be believed when they're no doubt caught, I wonder?
I love the way the two are becoming closer, despite themselves, especially Chas who is sooo embarrassed by it all.
Thanks, Eilidh, still loving this so much.

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:26 pm ]
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Hardly any lunchbreak left and I've just got here! This wasn't supposed to be a post all by itself, but they wouldn't stop talking...

After the rehearsal, the boys split up to different parts of the building. Most of them went to the common room, where they had permission to make cocoa before bed. Miller, muttering things abot children who couldn't be trusted, marched off to ensure that the Upper Fourths went to bed at the correct time. Charles, after a quick glance round the prefects room, excused himself and knocked on his brother's door.

"I'm not in." Stephen called. Charles opened the door.

"Wish I'd been Hammer there." he said by way of greeting. Stephen shook his head.

"I knew it was you. What can I do for you?"

"You're not supposed to be working now." Charles pointed out, removing the pen from Stephen's unsuspecting hand.

"Come on Chas, don't mess about. I need to get this done."

"What is it anyway, prep?" Charles asked, relinquishing the pen and turning his attention to the small kettle which Stephen was allowed in his room by virtue of his position.

"No, home letter." Stephen replied.

"Wasn't it my turn to do it?"

"Yep."

"Sorry." Stephen shrugged.

"Doesn't matter, it's done now. I only done it because if we don't make tomorrow's mail, she'll worry, and I don't want to worry her."

"I know, I'm sorry - I was caught up in these dratted rehearsals. Here, chocolate." He put a mug down on the desk beside his brother.

"So are we going to have a Christmas entertainment?" Stephen asked, scribbling his name at the bottom of the sheet and hunting for an envelope. Charles laughed.

"Oh yes, it'll be entertainment all right."

"You're not in it, are you?"

"I am now. Harrington threw in the towel, so Lewis is making me take his part instead."

"What's wrong with Harry?"

"Can't dance."

"Of course he can't dance!" Stephen exclaimed. "He's got two left feet, he can barely walk along the corridor without tripping over. Who in their right mind gave him a part where he had to dance?"

"Lewis." Charles replied. "Said Harry looked the part, and he was sure that the dancing would work itself out. He's the optimistic type. Anyway, never mind the pantomime. I've had enough of the thing. What letters have you had this week?" Stephen flicked through a bundle sitting at the side of his desk.

"Connie - Another rhapsody on the theme of Oxford, with strong overtones of socialising with Roger." Charles raised his eyebrows, but refrained from commenting. "Felicity, asking me to try and get Mum to stop waving and shouting at her every time she sees her when she with the School."

"No chance." Charles grinned. "Poor Fliss. And your letter from Adrienne, of course."

"What do you mean of course?" Stephen asked. Charles rolled his eyes. "Don't look at me like that! We do write, but there's no of course about it. We just exchange news, the same as with any of the others." Charles shrugged.

"I didn't imply anything else." he pointed out. "I just wondered what she had to say, that's all."

"Just school news." Stephen replied. "And I know what you think of Chalet School News." Charles laughed.

"True. I've got one from Margot, telling me all about Edinburgh, and a scribble from Mike. Oh, and a note from Roddy asking me to ask you to reply to his last. What on earth do you think we did to end up with such a ridiculous family?" he asked, with a sudden change of subject.

"Ridiculous?" Stephen asked. Charles nodded.

"Look at them, really. Dad's obsessed with work - really obsessed. He's convinced the san can't manage without him. Mum's obsessed with the dratted School. Len's vanished into thin air. Connie lives in a dream world. Margot... well, Margot's not normal."

"Not normal?" Stephen asked.

"She wants to be a nun." Charles pointed out. "That's not normal. You are I are the only normal adults in the entire family."

"Well, I might be." Stephen agreed. "But right now, whether you think you're an adult or not, you're not Upper VI and therefore, you're not supposed to be in this corridor at this time. Good night!" Charles sighed and made his way to the door.

"It really wouldn't kill you to bend the rules sometimes, Steve. Sleep well."

"You too." his brother replied as the door closed behind him.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 1:02 pm ]
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Poor Felicity :lol: .

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:15 pm ]
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echo 'poor Felicity'
Chas is right in thinking he and Steve are the only sane adults in the Maynard family when you see it as he does.
I wish Steve would bend a little with Chas- he's only 12 months or so older and yet he treats him like a child sometimes-what does it matter, just for once, that Chas is in the Upper VI corridor? He may have needed to talk to Steve in private but his older brother didn't give him the opportunity to do so.
Do I detect a little 'interest' between Adrienne and Steve? :lol:
Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:17 pm ]
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Love Charles summary of the family. Pity Len did not write to the boys, she would have reassured them that she wanted normality as well and that was why she had left. Wondering if Connie's dream world is her way of escaping the family as well.

Thanks for the post.

Author:  Abi [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:46 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
"You are I are the only normal adults in the entire family."


:lol: :lol: :lol:

Thanks Eilidh!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:57 pm ]
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Thanks. I do love seeing all about Steve and Chas. Love Chas's assessment on the family.

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:08 am ]
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Love the family descriptions there. Thanks!

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:30 am ]
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Steve really does need to listen to his brother - definitely seems to be some interest between him and Adrienne. Also love Chas' assessment of their family. :lol:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  JS [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:17 am ]
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I'm wondering if it was Adrienne whose hair (presumably) was curly and twirly in Steve's poem earlier :)

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:56 am ]
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Poor Felicity :lol:

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:00 pm ]
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Apologies in the advance for this next bit - might be a bit soppy for some people's taste!

When Mr Braithwaite put his head around the end of the Lower VI corridor at ten thirty and called, as he always did,

"Lights out, you chaps!" Monty reached out and plunged the room into darkness. Charles lay on top of his bed. He had removed his blazer and tie, but was still wearing his school shirt and trousers. The twenty five minutes that he had to wait seemed like an eternity.

Elizabeth, meanwhile, waited until her father retired to his own room with the radio on then pulled on her plimsolls, dropped her shoes into a bag which already contained a record and tiptoed quietly out of the flat. All the lights in the main school building were off as she approached it, with the exception of one in the Headmaster's private rooms. Elizabeth slipped in the side door, which was generally left unlocked, and made her way to the Hall. She was joined shortly afterwards by Charles, who looked surprised when he saw her.

"I didn't think you'd actually be here. I can't believe you want to practice at this time." he muttered, coming in. "Hammer's still awake, by the way, I checked on the way over."

"I know." Elizabeth replied absently, fiddling with the record player. "And I thought this way we could practice privately, and you wouldn't be so embarrassed. This is the music Jones has been playing for us. Come on, lets get on with it." Charles sighed, and put his arm around her. After a few seconds, Elizabeth stopped again.

"I never realised it was possible to dance with someone while being so far away from them." she said, smiling. "Come on, I thought you said you'd been taught to do this."

"By my sisters!" Charles said. "You are most definately not my sister. And the other two were two of the adoptees - Ruey and Adrienne. Ruey's been a member of my family since I was thirteen. And Adrienne, well, I didn't get to dance with Adrienne. She was rather monopolised."

"So what we're getting to, in a rather long and roundabout fashion, is that you've never danced with anyone you weren't related to." Elizabeth replied. "I take it that pretending I'm your sister is out of the question?" Charles gave her a blank stare. Elizabeth looked thoughtful.

"What?" Charles asked suspiciously.

"Well, just for just now - while it's the middle of the night and we're here alone - can you stop panicking about whatever it is that you're panicking about, and lets enjoy ourselves?"

"Maybe." Charles said.

"Because if you can't, we'd be as well going back. I only suggested coming down here alone because I thought you'd relax more if we weren't being watched by the entire form."

"I'll try." Charles agreed. Elizabeth started the record again.

"You're still holding me like I'm a china doll." she said, frustrated. "I'm not going to break, really. Look, try this." she stopped and took a step away from him, holding out her arms. "Pick me up."

"I can't do that!" Charles exclaimed. Elizabeth waved this aside.

"Of course you can. I'm not heavy, and you look strong enough. I'll even jump to help you, if you want." Charles, looking doubtful, placed his hands lightly on her waist. "You're not going to lift me like that." Elizabeth said helpfully. Looking at her in annoyance, he tightened his grip and lifted her easily off the ground. "Right, put me down now, but don't let go." Elizabeth smiled, as the record reached it's finale. He lowered her gently to the ground, and she stepped closer to him, removing his right hand from her waist and holding it in hers. Charles glanced down into the bright blue eyes below him, and almost subconciously wrapped his arm tightly around her waist. Elizabeth smiled.

"Now we can dance." she said, as the record player returned to the start of the music. She closed her eyes and allowed Charles to steer her around the hall, enjoying the sensation of not knowing where she was going.

Dr. Hammersley made his way from his bedroom to his office to collect a glass of water. On his way back, he paused. Something wasn't right. He re-traced his steps then continued through into the secretaries office, and out into the front hall. He spotted the line of light under the doorway to the Hall immediately, and slowly opened the door a crack. Applying his eye to this crack, he observed the two sixth formers, neither of whom noticed him. With a smile, he glanced at his watch, shook his head, and made his way back to his own room.

After they'd run through the dance several times, they both found the motions becoming automatic. Elizabeth rested her head on Charles' shoulder as the record began again - she'd lost count of the number of times they'd repeated it now. After a second, she felt Charles rest his head on top of hers.

"Now you're relaxed." she observed, a few minutes later. He laughed quietly.

"Yes, and tired." he replied. "Do you know it's after midnight?"

"Is it?" Elizabeth asked absently. Charles released her hand and wrapped both arms round her waist.

"Hold on." he warned her. Elizabeth wrapped her arms round his neck and he picked her up, spinning her round and round as he took her back up the hall towards the record player, where he stopped the music.

"So," Elizabeth said, still holding on to him. "with regard to that conversation we had near the start of term, have you changed your mind yet?" Charles groaned softly.

"No." he said, as firmly as he could. Elizabeth raised her eyebrows as she broke away and began to change her shoes.

"Don't regret your answer?" she asked. Charles ran his hands over his face.

"Every day." he admitted. Elizabeth smiled, and walked back towards him. Standing on her tip toes, she kissed him on the cheek.

"Thank you for the dance." she said, "I look forward to doing it again at every rehearsal between now and Christmas."

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:05 pm ]
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Aww, bless :D .

Author:  cestina [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:14 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
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He spotted the line of light under the doorway to the Hall immediately, and slowly opened the door a crack. Applying his eye to this crack, he observed the two sixth formers, neither of whom noticed him. With a smile, he glanced at his watch, shook his head, and made his way back to his own room.


Oh what a lovely and, above all, sensible man!

(But what are the chances of finding a Head like that in RL I wonder?)

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:30 pm ]
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Cestina said:

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Oh what a lovely and, above all, sensible man!


My sentiments exactly! As for finding such an understanding RL head, I fear the short answer would have to be 'in your dreams'!! Pity!!

Thanks, Eilidh, it was lovely watching that unfold.

Author:  charli [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:59 pm ]
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Oh, how sweet!
Elizabeth is so brilliant. Also agree the head is great. Wish mine had been like him.

Thank you. :D

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:27 pm ]
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The Head is great :lol: pleased Elizabeth and Charles were able to relax.


Thanks Elizabeth

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:34 pm ]
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Still feel sorry for poor Charles, he's so nervous. Glad the Head was so understanding

Author:  Abi [ Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:57 pm ]
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Awww, that was sweet. :D

Author:  di [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:24 am ]
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What a sensible chap Dr. Hammersley is! I can't imagine many other members of Staff trusting them and just leaving them to get on with it.
Elizabeth has done a marvellous job helping Chas to relax enough for him to enjoy dancing with her.
I wonder what Jack and, especially, Joey would make of this? I can't imagine either of them being too pleased to find that their son is becoming fond of someone they don't know! I'm sure Joey has Chas's future all planned out for him, including him marrying a 'nice girl' from the CS- perhaps, Mary-Lou, but ah, no, she'd be too old for him!!! Can't think offhand who was there and about the right age for Chas. but no doubt Joey will have singled one of the girls out!:lol:
Thanks, Eilidh. not too soppy at all. :)

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:14 pm ]
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cestina wrote:
But what are the chances of finding a Head like that in RL I wonder?


Ah, but this one is in my head, and therefore can be tailored to suit the story exactly! As it is, I think he is a good headmaster with a soft spot for and a lot of trust in Charles to do what's right.

Anyway, onwards! Sorry this one is so short.


The first thing Charles knew the next morning was Monty shouting. He opened his eyes blearily, and realised the shouting was directed at him.

"Minor! Get up! Get up! Come on, wake up!" Monty looked up from what he was doing and saw Charles had his eyes open. "Finally! What's got into you this morning? It's breakfast in ten minutes!"

"Has the bell gone?" Charles asked sleepily.

"Of course the bell's gone! Didn't you hear me say it's nearly time for breakfast? Get up!" this last accompanied by the disappearance of Charles' bedcovers at high speed. Charles groaned, rolled out of bed, and hunted for his school uniform which seemed to have unaccoutably disappeared since the night before.

Just over an hour later, Charles sat at his desk, his head resting on top of it. He'd so far been late for breakfast, failed entirely at tidying up his half of the bedroom, and received several jabs in the ribs from his neighbour's elbow during prayers. Around him, the rest of the VI forms who took Latin were comparing the answers to their prep or frantically revising it at their desks.

"Hammer!" hissed one of the boys near the door. There was a sudden silence as the class dived to their desks, and stood very properly as the Head came in. He dropped his books on the desk at the front and surveyed them cheerfully.

"Tired, are we, Maynard?" he asked. Charles stood up straight and hoped he looked awake.

"No Sir."

"Then can you explain to me why your Latin book now seems to have a green cover instead of a red one?" Charles looked at his desk. His Chemistry book looked back at him.

"It's the wrong book Sir, sorry!"

"Too much pantomime rehearsing, perhaps?" the Head asked, his eyes twinkling. "Tired you out? Not got enough energy left for your Latin after your dancing and acting and whatever else? Let's all try paying a bit more attention, shall we? Sit down please. Harrington, hand these out."

"He knows." Charles muttered as they sat down.

"How can he?" Elizabeth hissed back. "If he'd seen us he'd have come in and stopped us!"

"He knows everything." Charles replied, as the room fell silent. The Head raised his eyebrows.

"Indeed, Mr Maynard. Now, I will not ask you again to turn your attention to your Latin. You may begin."

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:25 pm ]
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Love the head's response to Charles tiredness, and Charles believing he know every thing. Thanks.

Quote:
"He knows everything." Charles replied, as the room fell silent. The Head raised his eyebrows.

"Indeed, Mr Maynard. Now, I will not ask you again to turn your attention to your Latin. You may begin."

Author:  Amira [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:32 pm ]
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That made me laugh out loud... not a good thing as my mouth was full of apple cake at the time! Wish I'd had a head teacher like Dr Hammersley.

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:01 pm ]
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Dr Hammersley is brilliant.

Author:  cal562301 [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:21 pm ]
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Also a fan of Dr Hammersley. Really enjoying this, thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  di [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:09 pm ]
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Love it!
Thanks, Eilidh, for such regular updates.

Author:  JennieP [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 3:05 pm ]
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When I read this I had no idea what the question she asked him earlier in the term was, and ended p going back and looking for it, and found that I had missed that whole entire post! It made my day.
Thius is great.

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:43 pm ]
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Dr Hammersley is wonderful! :heart:

Author:  charli [ Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:53 pm ]
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:lol: :lol: :lol:
Poor Charles, but what a great reaction from Dr Hammersley.

Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:42 am ]
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Hysterical! What a fantastic master.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:46 am ]
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Love dr Hammersley in that :lol:

Author:  Abi [ Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:28 pm ]
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Haha! That was great!

Author:  jmc [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:45 am ]
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I thoroughly enjoyed Changing Directions but haven't been able to catch up with this until last night when I read it all at once. You've made the boys into real people which is something that EBD never accomplished. Love Elizabeth too. Looking forward to more. Thanks

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 11:57 am ]
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Phew - it only seems like last week I was sending Stephen and Charles back to school, and now it's nearly Christmas.

December

"Letter for you Maynards - I brought it up. Oh, and Maynie, Braithwaite's looking for you." Stevenson entered the prefects room and tossed the letter on the table. "Swiss stamp." he added. Charles, who had glanced up from his work, bent back over it.

"Your turn, I did the last two." he said. Stephen groaned aloud and pulled the letter towards him.

"Do you want to hear it?" he asked. Charles shrugged.

"Not really." he replied. "Chalet School Nativity play, let me think, Fliss will probably have a small part, possibly with one line to say, Cecil will be an angel. Probably a summary of the plot of the play in there too, it looks quite thick. Plans for Christmas, like it won't be the same as the last ten. If there's anything I need to know you can tell me." Stephen shook his head.

"No, if I have to listen to it, so do you. Come over here so we don't disturb the rest of the room." He unfolded the thin airmail sheets and began to read.

My dear boys,

Many thanks for your last letter, I'm pleased you're both doing well and your teams are winning their matches. Charles is obviously doing well as a games prefect, even though I didn't expect him to end up with a job like that! Steve, I'm glad to hear that Charles thinks you're doing well as Head Boy, not that I ever expected anything else. I hope you're enjoying yourselves as well - it's so hard to believe that Steve is almost ready to leave school and that Charles will only be a year behind him! You need to make sure that you both make the most of this year, and next year as well Chas.

I am delighted to hear that you are finishing so early for Christmas. Hopefully you will be able to leave school slightly early and catch the late boat on the 17th, meaning that you'll be back here in time to see the play yourselves this year. The School is leaving early on the 22nd this year, and the play is in the afternoon of the 20th. Do let me know if you can arrange it with your housemaster, won't you? I know it might be hard for Steve to get away early, but I would like for you both to see the play this year. Both Felicity and Cecil are in it, so as you can imagine it's rather taken over life at the school and on most of the Platz.

I've based this years play around a legend that Tante Veta told me the last time she visited, when I was looking for ideas. I won't tell you about it here though, since you will hopefully be here to see it for yourselves. Felicity has a few lines to say this year and she's very excited about them. Cecil is an angel - I can only hope that she doesn't end up with her halo stuck to her curls like Auntie Rob did!

Charles' pantomime sounds very exciting. You should write to Peggy, and see if she can give you any tips - she did produce two for Millies, after all, and then came back to guest star in a third, so she knows all there is to know about it. I'm sure she'll be happy togive you any advice she can if you ask her.

Papa hopes to be able to collect you himself in Basle, but if he's busy at the San then it might be someone else. Roger and Roddy will not be travelling back with you this year - Roddy finishes earlier and they're coming back together before you. Con and Margot have made plans themselves as well, so I can see several trips to Basle going on in the run up to Christmas!

Finally, we've still heard nothing from Len. Try not to worry about her - we're all praying for her, of course, and I'm sure she'll be safe. Maybe she'll get in touch in time for Christmas.

Much Love,

Mamma
'

"I am not going to that play." Charles said firmly. "No way. write back and tell her, make some excuse, whatever." There was a knock at the door, and Miller reached over to open it.

"Ah, Maynard, there you are." Mr Braithwaite said as he came in. "I'm just here to check your arrangements for travelling home - I presume you will be leaving on the school train with everyone else? You'll make the late boat on the Thursday night then, and you should be home by the Saturday evening - the 20th, I think?" Stephen looked from the master, to his mother's letter, to Charles' scowling face.

"That will be fine." he agreed. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Charles relax slightly as Mr Braithwaite made nodded, made a note, and rushed off somewhere else.

"If only everything was solved so easily." Charles grinned, pulling a sheet of paper towards him. "Dear Mum, very sorry, but the school have booked us train tickets for the following day. Absolutely devastated to be missing the school play. I'm sure it'll be hilarious and you'll have a huge number of new stories to tell us when we get home. Maybe we'll make it home in time next year. Looking forward to seeing you all, Steve and Chas."

"You can't send that!" Stephen laughed. Charles crumpled up the sheet and threw it expertly into the fireplace.

"No intention of it." he grinned. "Like I said - it's your turn. You can wrap it up in tact and tell her we're not going."

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:08 pm ]
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Thanks, I do not think Charles needs advise from Peggy about the panto. Joey is so predictable here that I was not surprised at Charles "letter" in response. Probably a good job it is Steve's turn to write.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:10 pm ]
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:lol: Glad they've got a good excuse to miss seeing the CS Nativity Play, but what a shame that Joey's mind so clearly only runs on a CS track.

Author:  Elle [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:38 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
"Dear Mum, very sorry, but the school have booked us train tickets for the following day. Absolutely devastated to be missing the school play. I'm sure it'll be hilarious and you'll have a huge number of new stories to tell us when we get home. Maybe we'll make it home in time next year. Looking forward to seeing you all, Steve and Chas."

"You can't send that!" Stephen laughed. Charles crumpled up the sheet and threw it expertly into the fireplace.



I wish they would though!

Thanks for the updates. I have been really busy the last few days so it is good too catch up on a few updates.

Author:  Abi [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:54 pm ]
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Love that they escaped the play after all, and I do wish they'd sent that letter!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:55 pm ]
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Thanks, Chas really seems to have Con's astuteness and can see why he can change or stop people from doing things with a look.

(ie Margot from having a tantrum and Con from stealing sugar! Pity he can't do it with his mother going on about the CS)

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:57 pm ]
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That is just so sad - does Joey have no idea how she comes across to her sons?


Love Chas' reply - maybe they should have sent it! :lol:

Author:  jmc [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:41 am ]
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It seems that Len's running away hasn't really taught Joey much. :( I wish the letter did get sent home. Thanks

Author:  di [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:56 am ]
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Joey is so predictable-had to laugh at Chas's summary of her letter before Steve read it out loud. It's as well the boys know her so well otherwise Chas, in particular, could have been very hurt at her comments about him.
It would be good if Len got in touch with the pair before they leave school to go home for the hols, even if she doesn't want to contact the Swiss contingency. Surely she must realise how much they worry about her.
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:54 am ]
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Short post. I've had to split this one because tomorrow's (which should have been the second half of today's) is being difficult and isn't finished yet.

On the last Monday of the term, twenty-six pairs of eyes watched Mr Hopkins, carrying a sheaf of papers, approach his desk. He was aware of the scrutiny, and took his time sitting down, finding a pen, extracting one sheet from the pile and then putting the rest away in the drawer. Finally he looked up.

"Sit." he snapped. "Now," he continued when the noise had died away. "I'm glad to see that at least one or two of you have pulled your socks up now you're in the sixth. Of course, some of you are still doing as little work as possible. Daddy's money will not get you through any longer!" he thundered, making Elizabeth jump slightly. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Charles stifle a smile of amusement at her. "And the sooner you all understand this, the better." Mr Hopkins continued. "After this lesson, I believe you are all free for the rest of the week. Your pantomime is tomorrow, so I imagine you're spending today rehearsing. The Carol Service is on Wednesday, and you are all going home on Thursday. So, form places for this term. " Elizabeth clenched her hands together.

"Not last, not last, not last." she murmured almost under her breath. Charles gave her arm a comforting squeeze while Mr Hopkins was looking away.

"Top - Maynard, Second - Miller," Charles glanced at his friend across the room, who grinned at him and bowed his head in defeat. They had had a friendly rivalry going for many years now. "Third, Miss Braithwaite, fourth, Aitken, fifth, Lewis, sixth..." Elizabeth let her attention wander. Third in the form! She hoped her father would be pleased. She looked at Charles beside her, and Miller on the other side on the room, thinking of times when she'd skimped her preparation or rushed through her class exercises to get time for daydreaming. Charles felt her gaze and turned, seeing her thoughtful face. He picked up a pen and scrawled without looking on a scrap of paper on the desk. Elizabeth glanced down.

"Planning to beat me next time?"

She picked up her own pen,

"It'll be a walk in the park." she scribbled underneath, with an assurance she didn't feel. Charles read this, and then raised an eyebrow. He picked the scrap up, folded it, scribbled something on the outside and with one eye on Mr Hopkins who was taking their exam papers out of his desk to hand back, tossed it across to Monty. It landed back on the floor under their desk a few minutes later, and Charles knocked his pen to the floor, collecting both things when he bent down. He smoothed out the paper, read the message, and grinned, showing it to Elizabeth.

"You're on - M." she looked across the room to see Miller watching her and laughing. Gritting her teeth, Elizabeth turned her attention to the mistakes on her exam paper. If she had to beat both of them - and she did now - she'd need to get down to it.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:56 am ]
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Loving this :D .

Author:  di [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 12:12 pm ]
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Love the rivalry between the three of them.
Looking forward to hearing about their panto - do hope we get a glimpse at least- not necessarily the blow by blow account EBD used to give us! :lol:
Thanks, again, Eilidh.

Author:  cal562301 [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:14 pm ]
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I think it's a shame Chas didn't send the letter he wrote to Joey. But then, I never was the most tactful person around! :D :roll:

Great to see Elizabeth keeping up with the lads academically and I really hope she beats them all next term.

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:15 pm ]
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Well done Elizabeth. Pleased she is so high in the form and hope she can do better next term.
Thanks for today's drabble, hope the next section will go well.

Author:  charli [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:32 pm ]
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Nice one Elizabeth! Hope she does beat them next time. :D

Author:  Abi [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:27 pm ]
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Good for her! Can't help hoping she does beat them all next term... :D

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:53 pm ]
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Loved that scene. It was fun, thanks, really hope Elizabeth can give the boys a run for their money

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:15 am ]
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I think I would have sent the original letter, never mind a more tactful version. And Go Liz! We want to see you flog the boys (maybe not an approriate expression for a boys boarding school but you know what I mean :lol: )

Author:  jmc [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:05 am ]
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Yay for Elizabeth although I bet some of the boys won't like that. Love the friendship that is developing here. Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Tawny [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:02 am ]
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I am loving this one. The letter is brilliant, I only wish they would send it like that!

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:48 am ]
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"Maynard?" Stephen, with an inward sigh, stopped dead in the middle of the corridor, wishing that it was the end of term already.

"Yes?" he asked with as much patience as he could manage, not recognising the fifth former who was following him.

"Miss White sent me - there's a phone call for you or Minor at the office." Stephen sighed, about turned, and headed back towards the front door. It must be his mother, he decided, presumably wanting to discuss their trip home for Christmas. Best not to send Charles, he'd been in a strange mood recently and there was no telling what he'd take it into his head to say to her. The secretary waved him to the phone when he arrived. Bracing himself for a long conversation, he picked up the handset.

"Hello?" he asked. A very fast stream of words answered him.

"Hello? Hello, are you there? Steve? It is Steve, isn't it? Your secretary said whichever of you she found first but you don't sound like Chas."

"It's Steve, Con."

"I had to phone and tell you! You'll never guess! It's all ok!"

"What is?" Stephen demanded, glancing at his watch and wondering if his sister had been celebrating the end of term in ways his parents wouldn't approve of.

"The letter! It's all fine! That's what I said already, you're not listening!"

"Con, you'll never make a journalist at this rate! What's all ok? Who is the letter from? Start at the beginning and tell me in the right order."

"I got a letter from Len and she's fine! She gives an address and says she's been travelling and working as a companion and she's quite happy and misses us!" Stephen leant against the wall weakly.

"You're sure she's ok?"

"Well, she says she is. And I guess she should know. Listen, Steve, I can't stay, I still have to tell Roger and get him to tell Roddy. I'll give you the letter to read when I see you at home. You'll tell Chas?"

"Right away." Stephen promised.

"But not Felix, because you'll get home before me and I don't want him blurting it out to Mamma. Right, I need to go - I'm almost out of money. See you next week!"

"Good news?" the secretary asked as he hung up. Stephen nodded.

"Wonderful news." he agreed. Feeling suddenly energetic, he ran up the stairs towards the prefects room three at a time. He burst in the door, startling several of the others who were enjoying a large box of toffee and a free evening.

"Chas!" he yelled across the room.

"What's got into you?" Charles demanded.

"She's ok! I spoke to Con, on the phone, she says she's got a letter! She's in France and she's ok!" Charles stared at him, and pleased exclamations broke out all around the room, as by now all the boys were aware of how worried the two Maynards had been.

"Len?" he checked. Stephen nodded.

"Yes, you idiot, Len! Who else? Connie's got an address that we can write to and everything!" After a few minutes of celebration, Charles slipped out and wrapping his blazer tightly round him, ran through the thickly falling snow to the boarding house. It was deserted, all the boys spending the evening in the school building, and he saw no one as he ran up several flights of stairs to the roof and knocked on the door.

Elizabeth answered herself, and stared at him in confusion. Charles picked her up and swung her round several times.

"Len wrote to Connie!" he laughed. "She's ok - Connie says so! She said she was well and happy! And... oh my. I'm sorry." he began to back towards the door, but Elizabeth stopped him.

"It's ok." she replied. "I'm pleased she's safe."

"But you're..." Charles waved a hand.

"They're called pyjamas." Elizabeth explained. "I'm sure you've heard the word. I got soaked coming over this evening after the rehearsal, so I changed into them so that I could dry my uniform."

"I am going to be in so much trouble." Charles groaned.

"Why?" Elizabeth asked. "I'm not going to tell anyone, am I?"

"But... but..."

"Look, come in. You're freezing, come in and sit down and get warmed up. There's no point in you going back across to the school now, it's after half past nine."

"But your father..."

"He's at a staff meeting and he'll stay for a drink with the Head afterwards. He won't be back for a while." Charles allowed her to pull him into the flat and sat down on the couch beside the fire.

"Tell me about it then." she suggested.

"Steve didn't say much." Charles said. "I don't think Connie told him much - just that Len had said she was safe, and happy, and that she had a job in France as a companion. And that she missed us." he added as an afterthought.

"You don't look very happy." Elizabeth said. Charles shrugged.

"If she misses us so much, why did she wait six months to get in touch?" he demanded. "Why has she had us all worried sick about her, while she flits around in France pleasing herself? She must have known how worried we'd be, how much the kids would miss her!" He turned his head away and stared firmly at the opposite wall. Instinctively, Elizabeth sat down beside him and wrapped her arms round him. After a second he buried his face in her shoulder and let out the frustrations and worry of the last six months. Eventually, he sat up.

"Sorry about that." he muttered. She shook her head.

"I'm your friend. That's what I'm here for - well, one of the reason. And I'm the best friend you've got here for things like that." Charles gave a shaky laugh.

"Yes, I don't think Monty's exactly the type. Anyway - I need to go to bed before they all start coming over. Need to get my beauty sleep before the big performance tomorrow!"

"So do I." Elizabeth agreed. "I'll see you in the morning, though. Goodnight!"

"Goodnight." Charles replied. He made his way back down through the house, thankfully without meeting anyone, though he could hear the Fourth and Fifth forms below him. Monty hadn't come across yet, so when Charles reached his room he left the lights out, got ready for bed quickly, and drew the blankets up over his head. For the first time since the start of term, he was asleep within minutes.

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:11 pm ]
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Thank goodness for that. Now Steve and Chas can relax a little, knowing Len is safe and working in France.

Chas is so sweet; after the initial euphoria of hearing the news the first person he wants to share it with is Elizabeth - demonstrating just how much the trust is developing between them. Chas feels comfortable in letting his feelings show in front of her, even the secondary anger about Len waiting for so long before contacting them, and Elizabeth supports him by showing that it is ok for him to do so. :tea:

I'm just glad that her father didn't show up; I'm not sure he has the same level of understanding as Dr. Hammersley. :)

Thanks, Eilidh, this is fantastic. :D

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 1:15 pm ]
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Also glad no-one caught them whilst Elizabeth was in her pyjamas :lol: . The way their relationship is progressing is lovely, though.

Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:34 pm ]
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Thanks pleased Charles could share with Elizabeth safely and she could help him cope with the reaction.

Author:  Squirrel [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 4:41 pm ]
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Have just read several chunks of this one after another and have loved every second of it.

That head master sounds wonderful... where can I get one? :lol:

I'm so glad they have heard from Len eventually, and I'm pleased to hear that Charles was able to get help from Elizabeth and let out some of his frustration to her - without getting caught for spending time with her while she was in her jama's.

Hope the panto goes well!

Thanks Eilidh.

Author:  Abi [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:23 pm ]
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So glad they've heard from Len, and that Elizabeth was able to help Charles with his feelings about it.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:53 pm ]
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Really glad Con rang to say she heard from Len and didn't wait until they got home and loved Chas turned to Elizabeth in this. Really like how their relationship is progressing

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 5:39 am ]
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Awww that was sweet - poor Chas though - pleased his anger with Len does go eventually.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 11:51 am ]
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As I know exactly what 90% of the board thinks of long-winded pantomime/ Nativity Play descriptions, this has been the hardest update to write so far! I refrained from writing any EBD-style songs and hopefully you will not all be asleep by the end of it. :lol:

I have managed to get tomorrow and Monday as holidays, which means that tomorrow's post (which should have finished this section) might not go up, depending on what I'm doing. So the next post will be on Tuesday at the latest, but hopefully before.


To Charles, peering through the curtains, the Hall had never looked so full. He saw the Head come in and take his seat, and turned to the crowd gathered behind him.

"Right, you lot, keep the noise down. That's everyone in now. Remember, if you need to, yell it at them. Better that than that we can't be heard. The scenery is all in the right order, don't mix it up, don't drop the curtains like they've got lead weights on them, keep it slow."

"Minor, we know." one of the boys remarked from his place beside the curtain mechanism. Charles sighed.

"Yes, I know." he agreed. "Doesn't mean I can't say it again. OK, let's go. Jones, you're up." Jones, dressed in a bow tie and tails, pushed through the curtains and took his place in the center of the stage.

"Ladies, Gentlemen, and Upper IV." he announced. The noise level dropped, except in the Fourth Form rows where those young men were trying to decide if they'd just been insulted. "Lower VI would like to welcome you all to this year's Christmas entertainment. All ticket money will be donated to the local children's hospital, and we would like to thank you for your generosity. We hope you enjoy the performance." Jones seated himself at the piano as one of the other boys, stationed at the back of the hall, lowered the lights. There was an excited bubbles of noise, followed by hush as he began to play softly and the curtains rose smoothly to show Lewis, who was standing alone in the middle of the stage, dressed as Buttons.

He spoke his first lines, his voice reaching clearly to the back of the hall. The boys picked up the idea immediately and shouted back a response to his greeting. Behind the curtains, Charles sagged with relief as everything started smoothly. In the audience, Mr Braithwaite leaned towards the Headmaster.

"That's never Lewis." he murmured in amazement. The Head smiled back.

"Apparently the whole thing was his idea." he responded, before he was drowned out by the laughter in the rest of the hall as Elizabeth was pursued onto the stage by Monty and Miller, loving their roles as Cinderella's ugly stepsisters. They were pelting her with things as she ran, and yelling orders. At the sight of their own prefect, the Upper Fourth broke into delighted cheers, applauding and stamping their feet. The actors, finding that they couldn't make themselves heard, stopped in confusion until Monty interrupted proceedings to move to the front of the stage, drop a deep curtsey the direction of Upper IV and then abandoned his character to annouce,

"Be quiet and sit still, you horrible bunch, or you'll all get thrown out. And end of term or not, I will sit in a detention class with you tomorrow!" before returning to his place, and demanding of Cinderella why she couldn't keep these people in order. Miller picked up his cue, and pointed out that Cinderella really couldn't be trusted to do anything properly, screeching in a falsetto that made Matron mutter things about gargling before bed, and the music master cover his face in horror at effect on the vocal cords of one of his soloists the night before the carol service.

By the time they got to the ballroom scene, everyone in the hall was thoroughly enjoying themselves. Lewis had been clever in his writing, and several of the boys had fouond aspects of their own personalities in the characters they were playing. Miller, with his love of quoting from any book he could get his hands on, found himself misquoting many well-known works, and accompanying each mis-quote with a grimace. Monty's laziness was also played up as much as they could, and the school appreciated many sly jokes which passed over the heads of the visitors.

When the trumpet fanfare sounded, played by one of the Upper VI who was helping out, the footmen opened the door they had cut in the backdrop and Elizabeth swept in, snapping her fan open as she did so to hide her face from her 'stepsisters'. She swept a deep curtsey to the Prince, who was clad in the best they had been able to find in the acting cupboard and looked very regal. With a smile, Charles bowed, before Jones stuck up the correct music and he held out his hands. Both were grateful for their late night rehearsal as the dance finished and the clock struck, leaving Elizabeth to exit in the traditional fashion. The rest of the pantomime passed off without a hitch, and Elizabeth grinned widely at Charles as she took his arm for the final curtain call.

"You do realise that in some periods of history, you having seen, let alone handled, my ankles while putting that shoe on me makes us practically engaged?" she whispered. Charles glanced at her in horror before seeing that she was laughing, and, shaking his head at her, led her forward where she swept a deep curtsey to the audience.

Author:  di [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:08 pm ]
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Fabulous! Just about the right amount of information about the pantomime :lol:
Love Elizabeth's final comment-how she likes to tease Chas.
A pity Joey and Jack didn't make the effort to come and watch Chas's effort. I'm sure he's as talented as Con who got all the encouragement for her writing. I bet his parents have no idea!
Thanks, Eilidh. Enjoy your break.

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:27 pm ]
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Thank you. You gave us a beautiful description of the panto, which was not too detailed. I love Monty's reaction to Upper IV. he might have a reputation for laziness but he can keep order and is obviously popular with the young men he is in charge of as prefect.
Have a good weekend.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:09 pm ]
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Much better than some of EBD's efforts :lol: !

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:25 pm ]
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Alison H wrote:
Much better than some of EBD's efforts :lol: !

Just what I was thinking :lol: .

Thanks, Eilidh, really enjoying this.

Author:  Elle [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:40 pm ]
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Elbee wrote:
Alison H wrote:
Much better than some of EBD's efforts :lol: !

Just what I was thinking :lol: .

Thanks, Eilidh, really enjoying this.



I agree with everything above. This is brilliant, it is one of my favourite drabbles on the board at the moment.

Author:  cestina [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:45 pm ]
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Just great - panto came to life before my very eyes!

Author:  charli [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:04 pm ]
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Awwww, I want an Elizabeth! She is soooo brilliant. ( I keep repeating that, i know, but I mean it!)
Thanks.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:19 pm ]
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Great panto! Thanks Eilidh. :D

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:49 pm ]
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Thanks, really like the unrehersed interactions with the audience

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:07 am ]
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Great panto, thanks!

Author:  jmc [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:58 am ]
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Excellent! Thank you

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:02 am ]
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Early update today! I think this is probably my favourite Stephen and Charles scene in the entire drabble (or at least, the bits of it written so far).

"Wonderful job!" the Head announced, when they were all backstage again. "Quite superb. Lewis, you have a talent for writing like that! If you all get changed out of your costumes, there's supper for you all in my study, make your way across when you're ready. Maynard, a word please." he drew Charles into the corridor.

"Excellent job." he congratulated him again. "You've done wonders with the form - I'd never have believed Lewis could have pulled off all that talking, never mind some of the others you had convinced to act."

"Thank you, Sir." Charles smiled. "It was quite easy, really - once we'd thrown out the people who were causing the problems."

"Your own people weren't here tonight?"

"No, Sir - it's not easy for them to come over from Switzerland. My father is always very busy, and my mother isn't likely to come alone unless she's going to visit family."

"Ah, yes, of course. Still, it's a shame. I'm sure they'd have been proud of your performance. I'll let you go and get changed, now - join the rest in my office afterwards."

Charles returned to the practice room that he'd left his school uniform in. He was almost changed when Stephen appeared in the doorway and let himself in.

"Good job, Chas." he grinned. "Best Christmas entertainment we've had in a long time. I didn't know you could act."

"Neither did I." Charles replied. "I only got the part because Con and Margot taught us to dance last summer."

"Chas, can I ask you something?"

"You certainly can..." Charles began, with a wicked grin. Stephen picked up the nearest object and threw it at him. Charles caught it - a shoe - just in front of his face. "What is it?" he demanded.

"Is there something between you and Miss Braithwaite?" Stephen asked hesitantly. "I wouldn't normally ask about that sort of stuff, you know, but with the Head warning us all and well, you can just imagine what Dad would say."

"I wouldn't be able to sit down for a month." Charles agreed, busying himself with folding up his costume. "And the answer is yes and no."

"What do you mean yes and no?" Stephen asked.

"Well, she asked me, I was worried about all those things you said, I said no. Sometimes - normally - I wish I'd said yes. So I suppose the answer is no, but when I'm brave enough, there might be."

"Chas, you need to be careful!"

"I Need to be careful?" Charles demanded. "The worst that can happen to me is that I get thrown out of the school. The way you're going, you're going to thrown out the family!"

"I don't know what you're talking about." Stephen replied, turning red.

"Steve, don't treat me like an idiot. It's the last thing I am, and you're a terrible liar anyway. You know perfectly well what - and who - I'm talking about. And you can make as many disbelieving noises and try to escape the conversation if you want." Charles closed the practice room door and leaned on it with one hand. "But you and Adrienne could use an ally. I'm not stupid. She doesn't write to me once a week, after all!" Stephen waved his hands as though trying to shape invisible dough, and finally said,

"When did you end up the same height as me?" Charles shook his head.

"When you were too busy buried in your love letters to notice."

"They're not love letters." Stephen protested hotly.

"I haven't got time to argue, I'm having supper with the Head." Charles told him, leaving the room. He glanced around to make sure the corridor was empty, then looked back. "Just... Steve?"

"Yes?"

"You don't keep Margot or Con's letters in your blazer pocket." Charles grinned, before sauntering off towards the study, leaving Stephen scarlet and stuttering behind him.

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:22 am ]
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It's so good to see the boys as real people and not just numbers!

Author:  di [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:14 am ]
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What lovely brothers these two are; amid the bantering there is such genuine affection between them. Chas is right, Steve could do with an ally and he could return the favour for Chas.

What is it with Jack and Joey? It's perfectly natural for boys of their age to be interested in girls and to be developing one or two close relationships so why are their parents so against the idea?

Dr. Hammersley's praise was well deserved; he was quick enough to notice that the Maynards weren't watching their son and to comment on it. I hope he lets them know how well Chas is doing in school this term.

Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:43 am ]
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di wrote:
Dr. Hammersley's praise was well deserved; he was quick enough to notice that the Maynards weren't watching their son and to comment on it. I hope he lets them know how well Chas is doing in school this term.

Thanks, Eilidh.


So do I.

I really like the relationship between Chas and Steve.

Author:  shesings [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:46 am ]
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Eilidh wrote:
.

"Your own people weren't here tonight?"

"No, Sir - it's not easy for them to come over from Switzerland. My father is always very busy, and my mother isn't likely to come alone unless she's going to visit family."




Isn't that the saddest comment? Joey only comes alone if she's going to 'visit family' - obviously 'family' doesn't include her sons................

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:40 pm ]
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Thank you. Charles and Steve are very much teenage boys here, Joey and Jack are missing so much. You would have thought that after Len Joey at least would be more aware. She could have sent a message/card/telegram wishing him all the best for the panto. She did know about it as she advised him to contact Peggy for info in a letter.

Author:  Abi [ Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:47 pm ]
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Steve and Charles were great there!

Author:  jmc [ Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:06 am ]
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The two are just great together. Thanks

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:44 am ]
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Whew! I've just had a long lot to catch up on, and I loved all of it! It was really good to see the relationship still developing, and Steve and Chas are lovely here.

Thankyou.

Author:  shazwales [ Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:56 am ]
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I'm another one who's had a lot of catching up to do,this is brilliant especially the 'panto' :) :) :)

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:58 am ]
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Jack and Joey will lose both of those boys - and will only have themselves to blame. I appreciate it's a long way from Switzerland - but once a year to visit surely is not unreasonable. Glad the head noticed - wonder if he'll comment in their reports?


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:04 pm ]
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I seem to have missed yesterday's post. Oh well, never mind. :) You can have it today instead. Short updates at the moment because I'm struggling to get it to sound right.

The Fifth forms had spent the whole day decorating the school church for Christmas. Greenery trailed round all the windows and across the backs of the pews. An ornately carved crib was set in one corner, the nativity scene visible inside. Opposite it stood a huge Christmas tree, richly decorated and with candles glowing on the branches. Elizabeth gasped as she entered.

"Impressive, isn't it?" asked Miller, who was standing at her elbow. "I've seen it nine times now, but I always think the same thing. It doesn't feel like Christmas any more unless I've been here."

"It is, yes." she agreed. The church was small and old, and had predated the school by more years than anyone had been able to work out. It was cold inside due to the thick stone walls, but with close to 250 boys plus the staff packing in to it, it was warming up fast. The church was used for Sunday services by the majority of the school, however as Elizabeth went with her father and those few boys who were Catholic by bus into the nearest town each Sunday, she hadn't seen it before.

The younger boys from the prep school arrived just then, and Elizabeth stood at the back of the church, watching as the prefects shepherded them into seats.

"Why are Jones and Maynard up there handing out hymn sheets but you're not?" she asked.

"I'm in the choir." Miller explained. "I'm off duty, prefect-wise, today. And Monty's bringing the Upper Fourths over from the school since if we let them come themselves half of them won't arrive and the ones who do will be up to their knees in mud. Speaking of which, I need to go - I'll see you afterwards." he said over his shoulder, disappearing up the stairs towards the choir stalls.

"Miss Braithwaite! Come and help with the candles!" Lewis called to her then, and Elizabeth joined them in fitting a huge box of tall white candles into candlesticks, which the rest of the school filed in and took their seats.

At the side entrance, her father and the head stood together, watching her work.

"They don't even seem to remember that she's a girl, half of the time." her father observed, watching her laughing with her classmates. "Do you think it's all going ok?"

"I think so." the head replied. "I haven't had any complaints, certainly, and she's finished the term third in Lower VI, so I can't complain on that score."

"And you haven't had to expell anyone either."

"No, though I have wondered..." the head began thoughfully, as the last of the school filed in.

"Wondered about what?"

"Well - look now."

Mr Braithwaite looked across at the sixth form, who had finished with the candles and been joined by the prefects. Elizabeth was clearly visible in the middle of them, her fair hair gleaming in the light reflecting all around the church. Charles Maynard was standing beside her, holding a candle in each hand, while Elizabeth, steadying herself against the crowd with a hand on his arm, was carefully applying a lit taper to each of them.

"Maynard?" Mr Braithwaite asked his friend.

"As I said - suspicions." the head laughed. "Don't worry, Tom, it was bound to be one of them. And Maynard's better than most. I won't expel him - or her, for that matter - unless anything becomes drastically apparent. Childish flirtation we can put up with."

"You can maybe. She's not your daughter."

"Oh, really! He's a perfectly decent boy, and neither of them will be brave enough to take it beyond flirtation - they can't afford to mess up at this point. Now come on, the procession is waiting on us."

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:26 pm ]
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What an extremely sensible Headmaster - good thing he was able to speak to Elizabeth's father - he doesn't like the fact that she's growing up, does he? :lol:


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

Thanks good to see an update. Hope you had a relaxing weekend off. Pleased the head understands Charles and Elizabeth relationship is a lighthearted flirtation.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

Lesley wrote:
What an extremely sensible Headmaster - good thing he was able to speak to Elizabeth's father - he doesn't like the fact that she's growing up, does he? :lol:


Thanks Eilidh


He does. And no father likes seeing their daughter grow up like this :D

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

I really like the headmaster :D .

Author:  Tawny [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

This is my favourite drabble at the moment, I am loving the interaction between all the characters and the Head reminds me of my old Music Master at school. He had the same understanding of things. He was one of those teachers who made you feel like you could achieve anything.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 4:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

He is a brilliant head - can I have one, please? (Don't know what good it would do me, but after certain people last year, somebody like that on the course might improve it!)

Thankyou for the update; sorry for the ramble.

Author:  Abi [ Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

Yes, I am also a fan of the headmaster! He seems exceedingly sensible. :D

Author:  JS [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

Quote:
neither of them will be brave enough to take it beyond flirtation - they can't afford to mess up at this point.


Hmm, the head might know Charles well, but I think he might be underestimating the bravery of Elizabeth.....

Thanks Eilidh - continuing to enjoy this very much.

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

Thanks, Eilidh. A charming interlude.
I'm another fan of the Headmaster. He is just so sensible! I hope Elizabeth and Chas don't let him down!! :D

Author:  JennieP [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:22 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

The problem with this drabble is what to do to fill in the RL gaps between updates...

This is great, thanks Eilidh!

Author:  jmc [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

I wish the principal at my school was at least half as good as the head here. He at least seems to understand people. Mine just does what he wants and if you get in his way he figures out ways to get rid of you.

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:48 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 21st September

Thank you for all the comments! I do like writing Christmas updates, even if they are rather un-seasonal at the moment. :D

They joined the rest of the staff at the front door of the church, taking their places near the front of the line as the choir stood up. The organ played the first few bars of Adeste Fideles and the school took it up enthusiastically as the staff filed in, led by the Vicar from the village and the parish Priest. In the tradition of their carol services, once the staff were all seated, one of the Upper Sixth turned out the lights, leaving the church lit only by the Christmas tree, and a tall white candle of either side of the Nativity scene.

Then as one of the youngest boys in the choir sang alone, the two sixth forms, led by Stephen and Jeff, filed up the central aisle of the small church, each carrying a tall, lit candle. With the Head's words in his mind, Elizabeth's father watched her walk slowly up, accompanied - as always - by Charles. The leaders of the procession had placed their candles at the front of the church, and the rest spread around the sides once they got the the front. Attempting to turn his head inconspicuously, Mr Braithwaite watched Charles place his candle on one end of a high window ledge, and then take Elizabeth's from her and place it on the other. He said something as he did so and they both smiled before joining the rest of the Lower Sixth at the back of the church.

After the service, the school was in pandemonium. It seemed to Elizabeth, sitting inconveniently half way down the main staircase with those of her form who were ready to leave, that the number of boys in the school had doubled since breakfast time. There were yells from all corners of the house, thumps as suitcases were pushed down the staircases, and over everything else, a hum of excitement. The staff were everywhere at once, greeting parents, rounding up pupils, collecting up abandoned belongings and attempting to organise the chaos.

A shrill whistle broke through the noise as the Games Master, standing beside the font door, attempted to make himself heard.

"Jones!" he bellowed. Jones looked up in surprise.

"I'm supposed to be getting the train." he said, "Oh! Pete!" He was on his feet and leapt to the bottom of the stairs in a second, greeting a tall young man in army uniform who looked enough like him to proclaim him a brother. The whistle sounded again.

"North Train!" Monty got to his feet.

"Have a nice Christmas." he said. Replies followed him down the staircase as a large group of boys were funnelled out the door and onto the waiting busses. Immediately the volume and confusion dropped, and the staff looked slightly less on edge as more parents arrived and collected the excited boys. Jones, waving enthusiastically, drove off with his brother. Miller climbed into a big black car which pulled up at the door, after a brief hug for Elizabeth and a handshake for Charles. His car joined the line snaking its way out the gate as the coaches came back up the driveway.

Mr Hopkins, scowling even at Christmas, collected up the remaining boys who were all catching the train which went south. He ticked them off as they filed past him onto the coaches, where two other members of staff counted them. Charles hung back slightly.

"See you in January then, I suppose." he said. Elizabeth nodded.

"Merry Christmas." she replied. Glancing round to make sure all the staff were occupied somewhere else, Charles hugged her and ducked his head quickly to kiss her cheek.

"Have a good holiday." he muttered, hurrying to join the end of the line. Elizabeth stared after him for a second then laughed, before joining the staff to wave as the coaches pulled away.

"Listen." Doctor Hammersley held up a hand. They all stopped and listened.

"Silence." Mr Hopkins said, with a rare smile. "Blessed silence."

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Two updates in one day- great.
The melee of the boys waiting to be dispersed/decanted in to parental transport or coaches for the station made me smile; I could almost have been there. :)
Chas's parting kiss was rather risky- just as well Elizabeth's father and Dr. Hamersley were occupied elsewhere. Rather sweet however, I thought! I wonder will he contact her during the holiday?
Thanks, Eilidh. Do we get to hear about Steve and Chas's Christmas at home in Switzerland? I do hope so.

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Bless :D .

Author:  cestina [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Ooh yes please Christmas in Switzerland! And a sharp comment from Dr Hammersley in their reports as to how sad it is that parents couldn't be there to share the triumphs.....
:hammer: neglectful parents

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 4:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

I love how well the head is handling the relationship between Elizabeth and Charles - hope her father calms down about it as well. (Just as well he didn't see the kiss!)

Author:  jayj [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 4:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

loving this a lot - it all seems so very real.

Thanks!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 6:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

I'm joining the chorus for a Christmas in Switzerland (and I really can't sing, so you'd better give in soon!)

Thankyou for the update :D

Author:  Abi [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 7:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Ahh, how lovely!

Author:  cal562301 [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 7:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

That was lovely. Can't wait to see Christmas in Switzerland. Hint, hint!

Author:  charli [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

:D
I've enjoyed the last two updates immensely!
I would also enjoy more! No, 2 updates in a day is not enough :wink:

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Thanks, I'll join the chorus for Christmas at the Maynards.

BTW did Con tell her parents about hearing from Len?

Author:  jmc [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:44 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Staff reaction once the students had gone was was true. Will Chas write to Elizabeth over the break? Christmas from the boys point of view would be very interesting. Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 22nd September

Well, it's just as well I didn't have any work to do this morning, as until I read the comments we weren't going home with the boys for Christmas! Alas, the plot bunny saw all your comments and had a different plan, so here we are.

Mike was sitting on the platform on his suitcase when they got to the ferry port, waiting patiently. He jumped to his feet as the train pulled in and came running to meet them.

"Hello Steve, hello Chas! Hi Felix, good term? Did you have snow?"

"Have you been waiting long?" Stephen asked, while Charles stuck his head back through the train window to double check the compartment.

"No, only twenty minutes or so. Isn't it cold?"

"Freezing." Charles agreed, withdrawing his head. "Come on, lets go and see if we can get on the boat. It's a short crossing this time, isn't it?"

"Thank goodness." Felix made a face. "Matron made me take a tablet before we left the school though."

"Good." all three of his brothers replied together, and then burst out laughing. Stephen put a hand on Felix's shoulder as they made their way through the crowd, with Charles and Mike behind them, all talking hard. Deciding, on balance, that it was too cold to stay outside on the boat, they found an empty corner inside and sat down. Charles leaned back against the wall and closed his eyes as the boat started to move, listening to the other three talk, until he was jerked back to full attention by Felix's comment.

"You kissed that girl, Chas. That's horrible."

"What?" Mike demanded. "A girl? Chas? What girl? What have I missed?"

"The girl who's in his class." Felix told him. "He kissed her before he got on the bus, I saw him." Charles, scarlet to the tips of his ears, looked to Stephen for help, but Stephen was staring fixedly at the wall with his lips clamped tightly together, evidentally finding it all highly amusing.

"So what if I did?" he asked, since Mike and Felix were still both staring at him questioningly.

"Kissing girls is horrible." Felix said firmly with the air of one who knows, at ten years old, that this is fact.

"Dad kisses girls sometimes." Stephen said, coming to the rescue. "You look on Christmas Day, he'll kiss Auntie Biddy and Auntie Nell after Mass, and all the other Aunties when he sees them."

"Dad and Auntie Biddy and Auntie Nell are grown up though." Felix argued. "Chas is just Chas."

"Not sure if that's a compliment or an insult." Charles grinned. "Anyway, Felix, don't worry about it. It was just a goodbye and Merry Christmas kiss to a friend. Nothing to get excited about."

"Come on, Felix, lets go and see if we can see the captain." Mike suggested. "I've still got my Dartmouth uniform on, so they might let us in." Felix agreed cheerfully, and the two departed towards the front of the boat, leaving the older boys with the luggage. Stephen regarded Charles with amusement.

"You kissed her?" he asked. "And where Felix could see you? Honestly, Chas!"

"Shut up." Charles snapped. "It was only her cheek, and I didn't know he could see me! It seemed like a good idea at the time."

"I did wonder why you looked so red when you got on the bus." Stephen continued relentlessly. "So where does this leave you when we go back to school?"

"I thought I told you to shut up? It doesn't leave us anywhere, it was just exactly what I told Felix it was." Charles picked up his book, opened it at random, and started to read.

"Well she obviously didn't object. But then she wouldn't, I suppose." Stephen said thoughtfully, still sounding amused. "My little brother, all grown up!"

"Stephen Maynard, if you don't shut up right now, I'm going to throw you off this boat." Charles said.

"Whatever you say." Stephen said, in an infuriatingly smug tone. Charles kept his eyes on his book and Stephen sighed, stretched himself out in his seat, and closed his eyes.

It was almost midnight by the time they reached Paris. Snow was falling in flurries as Stephen hailed a taxi and they all piled in to cross the city. There were Christmas trees and lights visible everywhere they looked, and a general air of festivity that woke Felix up from the half doze he'd been in when they dragged him off the train. The overnight train to Basle was waiting at the platform when they got to the station and they were all thankful to scramble into the bunks that Joey had reserved for them. Too tired to unpack their cases, Stephen pulled off Felix's outer layers and boosted him into the upper bunk, where he was asleep almost before his head hit the pillow. Mike jumped neatly into the opposite one with an enormous yawn. Stephen, after checking that their passports and tickets were nearby, fell asleep at once, leaving Charles to turn out the light and get into the bunk underneath Mike. He lay in the bunk, staring up into the darkness for a while. He could hear the other three breathing deeply, and the occasional mutter from Felix, who was given to talking in his sleep. The rhythmic sound of the train seemed to tie in with the circles his thoughts were taking, and slowly, he fell asleep.

***

"Chas! Chas!" the insistant whispering and nudging gradually penetrated Charles' concious, and he sleepily opened one eye.

"What?" he demanded.

"Shh!" came the unsatisfactory response. Charles opened the other eye. "You need to go and find out where we are, I can't wake Steve up and I think we're nearly home." Felix whispered. Charles climbed out of bed, squinted at his watch, and decided Felix was probably right. A few minutes conversation with a helpful guard confirmed this, and Charles returned to the compartment. Felix had dressed himself in the clothes he'd take off the day before, leaving off his tie. Charles followed his example, running his fingers though his hair to make it lie flat. Felix hadn't bothered with such things, and his hair stood up from his head like a scrubbing brush.

"Oy, Steve! Mike! Stir yourselves! We're almost in Basle." His announcement had more effect that Felix's quiet whispers had, and by the time the train pulled into the station they were all ready to get off, though looking more than slightly untidy.

"Mamma! Fliss!" Felix yelled loudly enough that people on the platform jumped as he almost fell off the train, trying to hug both his mother and sister at once.

"Felix!" Joey greeted him, "And Mike." she added, pulling Mike into a hug as well. "How was Dartmouth? Have you made plenty of friends? Your letters were so short!" she said, releasing him. "Chas, you've grown! Steve, you look tired." Joey greeted both boys with hugs and kisses as Mike picked Felicity up and swung her round, leaving her shrieking and breathless.

"Where's Dad?" Stephen asked curiously.

"At the san." Joey replied. "They have a difficult case at the moment, and they still haven't replaced Reg." Stephen and Charles exchanged glances. "Don't look like that!" Joey said, "He wanted to come and meet you, but he really couldn't get away. So we brought Minnie down and thought we'd get our Christmas presents and then meet Connie and Margot this afternoon, then we'll go back to the Platz after that. But first, breakfast! The other girls are at the restaurant." Joey led the way out the station, while Stephen seized Charles' sleeve and pulled him back.

"Other girls? Does she mean Adrienne?"

"Can't imagine who else she means." Charles replied, revelling in getting his revenge for Stephen's teasing the day before.

"Help!" Stephen said.

"Help?" Charles asked, grinning widely. "You need help, Steve? I'll have to think about how best to do that." He laughed, shook his arm free and ran to catch up with the rest of the family.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:57 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Thank you for writing the holidays in :D .

Author:  dackel [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

This is currently my favourite drabble - I love the boys and Elizabeth! They're all so real and the humour is spot on. I shouldn't really read this at work because it makes me laugh so much...

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Thankyou! I can't wait to see how Christmas pans out :D

Author:  Tawny [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:02 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

This is so brilliant! I want more.

Author:  JennieP [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

I love this. Thanks for the frequent updates!

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 3:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Two updates at once - wonderful.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Can't wait to see how it goes with Adrienne - both Steve and Chas are growing up, aren't they? Looking forward to seeing Christmas.

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Thanks for including the holiday from the boys perspective.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 7:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Hope Adrienne is there. :D

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 10:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Love the last lines, thanks :lol:

Author:  jmc [ Thu Sep 23, 2010 10:48 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Thanks for such a lengthy update. Considering you weren't going to write about the holidays will we get more?

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

How sad that the boys can make a night journey accross several countries alone and yet the Chalet girls must be escourted.
I am enjoying this very much.

Author:  di [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 8:17 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Great! Christmas in Switzerland! Thanks to your plot bunny and you, Eilidh for including this.
I love Felix's innocence about Chas kissing Elizabeth but hope he keeps quiet about it once they reach home otherwise Chas will never hear the end of it, especially from Joey and Jack.
Chas looks as if he'll get his own back on Steve if Adrienne is in the welcoming party!
Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Eilidh [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:59 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 23rd September

Christmas Eve

The sky was clear, and both the stars above and the snow below glittered as Charles heaved the big family sleigh round from the garage. As he got it to the front door, Connie appeared with her arms full of warm rugs and blankets. They worked in silence together, spreading them over the wooden seat, both enjoying the silence and peace of the night until it was shattered by the rest of the family, spilling out of the house in ones and twos.

"Come on, Cecil, Geoff, Phil, Claire, into the sleigh. That's it, wrap the blankets round you. Keep your hands in, Geoff. Felix, put your skis on, or you'll have to go in the sleigh too. Where's Mike? Oh, hot bottles, thank you Anna! Tuck these in beside you, you four. Roger, Ruey, you don't have to sit up until we get back. Go to bed if you're tired. Steve, put your hat on. Is that your glove, Felicity?" Thus Joey, whirling around, as the rest of the family strapped on skis and picked up poles. The clock chimed eleven as Jack, who was last out, closed the door behind them.

"Now, keep the noise down, you lot, there are people on the Platz who are trying to sleep." he said as he picked up his poles. "Felix and Felicity, go on in front if you're ready - you're probably slowest, so you won't be left behind that way. Am I in harness?"

"We'll take it." Charles volunteered briefly, picking up one of the long ropes leading from the sledge. Stephen took the other. "You could give it a push to get us going though." he added. Jack obliged, and the two older boys set off towards the gate, pulling the sleigh full of children behind them.

"Just like Father Christmas!" Phil said delightedly.

"Well yes, except he has reindeer and you have to make do with brothers." Charles said over his shoulder. "We can paint Steve's nose red if you want though." All four of the children laughed at this idea, and Stephen took one hand off the rope to aim a slap at his brother, which Charles dodged easily. Connie and Margot were just behind them, with their arms linked. Both girls looked grave, and Charles suspected they were missing Helena more than either of them would admit. Anna, Adrienne and Mike were all ski-ing alone, and Joey and Jack brought up the rear.

It was very peaceful, Charles thought, gliding across the snow with nothing to worry about but matching his pace to Stephens. The four children were cuddled together behind them, staring in delight at the unusual sight of the Platz at nightime. In front of them, Felix and Felicity, hand-in-hand, had turned in the gates of the school and were heading across towards the chapels on the far side. They were lit up, the light reflecting out through the stained glass windows that both boasted and onto the surrounding snow. The sound of the organ floated over to them, and other people were visible coming from all parts of the Platz to the midnight sevice. The Courvoisiers shot past, towing their own sleigh-load of children, with Marie and Pat waving to the Maynards. A crowd of people were visible coming along the road from the San, and another group was coming from Ste. Cécile.

"Have you got room for me in there?" a voice asked behind them. Stephen glanced back.

"Hello, Auntie Nell." he grinned. "No, I don't think so. At least, not unless these four get out and walk!"

"Pity." Nell Wilson said, falling in beside the 'reindeer'. "It looks much easier than ski-ing. Did you see your Auntie Hilda on the way over?"

"Haven't seen her since this afternoon." Stephen replied. "Mum might know where she is. Here we are, you lot, out you get!" he added as they glided to a stop in front of Our Lady of the Snows.

***

Stephen carried the sleeping Claire back out of the church after the service. Ahead of him, he could see Charles doing the same thing for Phil, while Connie was helping Geoff back into his jacket. Adrienne joined him as he got to the door, carrying one of the blankets from the sleigh.

"To keep her warm." she explained. "If she is sleeping, she will be very cold." Stephen helped her wrap the little girl in the thick blanket, then laid her down beside Phil in the sleigh. Geoff, who was struggling manfully to stay awake, and Cecil were packed in as well. Charles picked up the rope again, but Stephen found that before he could get his skis back on to take the other side, Mike had grabbed it, and with Anna keeping pace with them they were towing the tired children back to Freudeshiem. Charles looked back over his shoulder, grinned, and mouthed something Stephen didn't catch. He decided it wasn't worth worrying about, and turned to his mother instead.

"Steve, can you wait for Adrienne?" she asked, her arms linked through Connie and Margot's. "Papa has gone on with the twins, who were tired, and we're just about to leave. She shouldn't be long, she's gone to light a candle."

"I can wait." Stephen agreed.

"We'll make you some cocoa." Margot promised, as they set off. "Come on, Mamma! You said you could keep up with us!"

"Cheeky madam!" Joey responded promptly, increasing her speed.

After a few minutes, Adrienne appeared, yawning.

"You look tired." Stephen said. She stamped her feet into her skis and smiled at him.

"En Francais." she said reprovingly.

"If you want." Stephen replied in the same language. "Though I don't think I'm very good yet."

"You are much better than you were." Adrienne said, "Your writing especially. And you will not improve if you do not practice!"

"Thank you for helping me." Stephen said. "Your corrections always make so much sense!"

"It is no problem. I like hearing about your school and what you are doing." Adrienne said with a smile. "It is fun getting your letters. There, I am ready. Lets go." She tucked a hand through his arm as they headed back towards Freudesheim. "You have not said much to me since you got home." she remarked.

"I didn't want to bother you. You spend your term times correcting my letters and being bothered with me that way, so I thought I'd give you a break."

"You're a friend, not a bother." Adrienne scolded. "Or maybe you only want me to correct your languages?"

"No!" Stephen exclaimed. "That's not what I meant at all." She laughed.

"I understand." she smiled.

They added their boots and outdoor clothes to the rest hanging up in the cloakroom. Stephen almost ran into Adrienne, who had stopped in the doorway.

"What's that?" Stephen looked up.

"It's mistletoe." he said with a sigh, adding in an undertone. "When I get my hands on you, Charles Maynard..."

"And what," Adrienne asked, drawing the door closed, "Does one do with mistletoe?" Stephen opened and closed his mouth several times. "Fish impressions." Adrienne mused. "Interesting. Not what Jane suggested as the best use for it."

"Well?" Charles demanded, when Stephen came into their bedroom.

"I'll well you!"

"You said you wanted help!" Charles protested, as Stephen looked threatening.

"I didn't mean help like that! I meant something discreet!"

"Well you didn't tell me that! Did it work?"

"None of your business!"

"Did you know you've got lipstick on your face?" Stephen wiped his face frantically, and Charles burst out laughing. "It worked then." he said with satisfaction. Stephen spun round and looked at himself closly in the mirror.

"You... you... " he spluttered incoherently. Charles, still laughing, lay down.

"Go to bed, Steve, it's after one. We've got less than five hours before they wake us up."

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Aww, that was lovely :D .

I feel all Christmassy now!

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Clever Chas! :lol:

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Thanks Steve showed Adrienne the proper use of mistletoe :D :D

Charles certainly gave him so appropriate assistance.

Author:  cestina [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

These two boys are so lovely......this goes from strength to strength and it started off pretty well :D Each episode I think "This can't get any better" and each episode it does! (Where's the loud applause smiley please?_

Author:  Abi [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 6:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Steve and Chas are great! I feel as though I've said that before, but it's true!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Thanks, that was wonderful

Author:  Elle [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Some good updates, thank you very much.

Author:  KJX [ Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

I do love the way they are all growing up.

Author:  Sugar [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

I've just read all of this after a rec from Lesley and it's brilliant and I think I might be love with Chas myself. Saying that the relationship between Steve and Chas is great!

Off to read Changing directions now, it's only 2.34am! :shock:

Author:  jmc [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:00 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

Well done Chas. Thanks

Author:  Myth Tree [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

It's great to see what happened at the same time as Changing Directions. We miss so much of the boys in the canon and I love your version of the boys.

Author:  di [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:43 am ]
Post subject:  Re: You Can't Choose Your Family - Updated 24th September

What a lovely description of the journey across the Platz to the church. I could clearly see the sledge, pulled by Steve and Chas, with all the little ones wrapped up snuggly inside, whizzing across the snow with the stars twinkling so brightly as they do in mountainous regions. A real Christmas card scene. :)

Chas is such a tease; he certainly fooled Steve into admitting he'd shown Adrienne the proper use for mistletoe, although, by the sound of it, she'd already been told by Jane.

Thanks, Eilidh, this was lovely.

Author:  charli [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:01 pm ]
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cestina wrote:
T Each episode I think "This can't get any better" and each episode it does! (Where's the loud applause smiley please?_


I agree! And if you find an applause smiley let me know because I want to use it for this! :D

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:05 pm ]
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As everyone else has said, that was just wonderful, and those two are so sweet together - I wonder if Joey knows? The way she asked Steve to wait seemed almost as if she'd had a hint from certain people to let them get closer if they wanted to...

Thankyou!

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:59 am ]
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I particularly liked the moment with the mistletoe, the line
Quote:
"And what," Adrienne asked, drawing the door closed, "Does one do with mistletoe?" Stephen opened and closed his mouth several times. "Fish impressions." Adrienne mused. "Interesting. Not what Jane suggested as the best use for it."

really made me giggle!

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:14 pm ]
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Thank you very much for all the comments, both on this and on Changing Directions over this weekend. I'm stunned by them, and at one point showed them to SLOC and told him "That's my drabble! They're saying that about my drabble!". :D

Christmas Day

The door slammed open, banging loudly off the wall.

"Steve! Steve! Chas! Come and see, Santa's been!" Geoff leapt onto Stephen's bed, and from there to Charles'. "Come and see, come and see!" he repeated, before racing back out the door and into the next room.

"Are you awake?" Stephen asked sleepily.

"No." Charles replied firmly, turning over and pulling his bedcovers over his head.

"Wake up Chas! Come on Steve, tell him, wake up, wake up!" Cecil shrieked, as she landed firmly on Charles' bed. Charles groaned.

"What time is it?" he asked.

"Half past seven. Not bad, actually." Stephen said. "Come on, you might as well get up. They're not going to leave you alone until you do, you know Mum won't let them have their presents until we're all there." Charles groaned again, and rolled out of bed. All over the house, the rest of the family were doing the same, roused by the four youngest with assistance from Felix and Felicity.

"Dressing gowns and slippers at least before you go downstairs!" Joey announced firmly. "And Merry Christmas, everyone. Mike, run through and see if Anna's up, would you? And if she's not, put the kettle on quietly. Steve, the fire should be laid, can you go down and put a light to it? Is Chas up?"

"Yes." Charles replied himself, with a yawn. "Under protest, but here I am." he scooped up Phil, who was limping along behind the other three as they raced from room to room and looking close to tears, and put her on his shoulders. "Come on, we'll go upstairs and get Con and Margot and Roger." he said. Phil cheered up instantly as Charles took the stairs two at a time, and giggled with delight as he ran her into Roger's room and dumped her on top of him.

Half an hour later, well fortified with coffee and toast, the whole family sat down in the Saal to distribute and open the presents. Cecil, Geoff and Claire worked their way through the piles under the tree, giving them out to their respective owners - Cecil reading the name on each label with a very important air before handing them to one of the younger two to deliver. Phil, tired out by her late night, early morning, and trying to keep up with her brother and sisters, chose instead to sit on Charles' knee and wait for her presents to come to her. At last, after all the presents had been distributed and each person had a large pile in front of them, Jack picked up one of his and for the next while, everyone was occupied in opening, examining, comparing, and exclaiming over their new possessions.

After the church services, Roger organised everyone from himself to little Claire into outdoor gear and led them out into the garden.

"Snowball fight!" he explained cheerfully. "Give us something to do and works up an appetite for dinner."

"You can't have the nursery people." Joey said anxiously from the doorway. "They're too small, you'll be too rough."

"Of course we won't!" Stephen argued, seeing the faces of the youngest four fall at these words. "We'll be fine."

"Well, you can't have Phil. She's not strong enough to run around in the snow for hours, and it's too cold for her to sit and make snowballs." Joey regarded her youngest daughter with concern. Phil's lip trembled.

"Everyone else gets to play!" she said.

"Can't she stay, mum?" Charles asked, feeling sorry for her. "I'll tell you what - I can't throw for toffee anyway, so I'll take her on my shoulders and then I'll run and she can throw. And no one will fall over her if she's with me either." Joey gave in.

"Remember, if any of you get at all cold, I want you straight back in. I don't want a load of colds on my hands in the holidays!"

"Yes ma'am." Roger grinned cheekily. "Right you lot, split yourselves up. There's 16 of us - no, 15 if Chas and Phil count as just one - so 7 each and whichever team has Geoff can have Claire for free. I'll take one team, and Margot can take the other. I'll keep Con, and let you have Ruey." he added to Margot, who nodded.

"OK, then I'll have Steve and leave you Roddy." she said. Charles picked Phil up and sat her firmly on his shoulders, where she shrieked and grabbed his head with both hands, almost pulling his hat off.

"Chas, you're staying with me, and Margot can have Adrienne and Geoff and Claire. We'll have Erica." Roger decided. "Who does that leave? Mike and Cecil and the twins? In that case I'll have Mike and Cecil, and you two F's go with Margot. Attack or defend, Margot?" Margot glanced at her team.

"Defend." she said firmly. "We'll take the space against the back wall, between the apple tree and the bush. That means you come at us across the tennis court, and there's nothing there we can break."

"You're on." Roger glanced at his watch. "We'll give you twenty minutes to get started, then we'll be there. Here, take this." He threw his scarf to her. "We'll get it back." Margot laughed and followed the rest towards the garden wall.

A while later, Roger's team gathered up again on the other side of the tennis court.

"We need a distraction." Roger said thoughtfully. Charles glanced around.

"Phil and I will distract." he grinned. "You lot rush straight in the front and get that scarf back before we have to go in." Roger follwed his gaze.

"Chas, you're wicked." he laughed. "OK, all of you, give Chas and Phil a few seconds then charge." Charles, holding Phil firmly, made his way out to the side and then waved at Roger, who immediately led the rest of the team, yelling, screaming, and throwing snowballs straight at Margot's team. Once they were well occupied, Charles made hi way up to the apple tree which stretched it's branches over the makeshift fort, and then with a few words of instruction, lifted Phil until she was standing on his shoulders. She stretched out and grabbed the nearest branch, shaking it as hard as she could and sending a deluge of snow down onto the heads of the defending team. They yelled in shock at the unexpected cold, and in the few seconds gap, Roger had hoisted Cecil over the wall and she had grabbed his scarf, swinging it round her head excitedly.

"We won!" she screeched, causing Joey to wince and cover her ears as she came to fetch them in to dry off for dinner.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 1:02 pm ]
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Great to see everyone getting on so well :D .

Author:  Cumbrian Rachel [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 1:14 pm ]
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The relationship between Charles and Phil is lovely here.

Author:  cal562301 [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:24 pm ]
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Absolutely loving this. Thanks, Eilidh.

Author:  Abi [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:33 pm ]
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Great snow fight. :D

Author:  charli [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:56 pm ]
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Quote:
he scooped up Phil, who was limping along behind the other three as they raced from room to room and looking close to tears, and put her on his shoulders. "Come on, we'll go upstairs and get Con and Margot and Roger." he said. Phil cheered up instantly as Charles took the stairs two at a time, and giggled with delight as he ran her into Roger's room and dumped her on top of him.


Oh, how sweet!
I like Charles more and more here.
Thanks

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:13 pm ]
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Charles may not see himself as a leader, or one who takes charge, but he does see what is needed and goes ahead with it. He is lovely in this. Thanks

Author:  Finn [ Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:52 pm ]
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I love getting regular updates on this story - but I can't wait til they're back at school making mischief again!

Thanks, Eilidh

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 2:50 am ]
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Aww. It is lovely to see the boys (and girls) acting like a normal family instead of junior saints!

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:38 am ]
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Chas is lovely, isn't he? A proper SLOC for someone.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Tawny [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:05 am ]
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Lesley wrote:
Chas is lovely, isn't he? A proper SLOC for someone.


Thanks Eilidh


Me, he can be my SLOC, I am 15 and a few months.....(240 months but who is counting ) hehehehhe :mrgreen: :lol:

I love this drabble!

Author:  jmc [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:31 am ]
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What a great Christmas! Chas is so great.

Thanks Eilidh

Author:  di [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:36 am ]
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I have to admit I'm sort of beginning to take to Joey in this drabble. She doesn't seem to be so much of a 'stick in the mud' and although, quite rightly, worried about Phil getting hurt she does let Chas take her out on his shoulders so she can join in the fun!
Thanks, Eilidh, I enjoyed the snow fight as much as the youngsters! :lol:

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:16 pm ]
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Last non-school post! New year, plus some background on the other 3 boys, who inform me that they don't get enough of a story. :roll:

New Year's Eve

Mr Braithwaite looked across the crowded hall to where his daughter was talking animatedly and laughing with a group of girls and boys her own age. He recognised a few of them - Kitty, who worked at the school, and Nora Ashcroft, daughter of one of the biggest farms in the area. Verity was there as well, and her parents were sitting a few tables away - her father, while technically on duty, had been convinced to join the rest in the village hall when the vicar pointed out that the entire village would be there, and therefore so, probably, would be any potential crimes. A sudden screech of static filled the hall, making most people wince and cover their ears.

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" The vicar cried from the stage. "I just can't get it to work!" One of the boys detached himself from the group Elizabeth was with and headed across the hall.

"I'll get it, Vicar." he called cheerfully. "You go and sit down." Murmuring his thanks, the vicar climbed down from the stage and after a few minutes, the unmistakeable sound of the BBC announcer could be heard throughout the hall.

"Drinks for everyone!" the vicar cried, and several of the younger people, Elizabeth among them, hurried to make sure everyone's glasses were full in time to toast the New Year.

***

Half a continent away, Roger Richardson carefully adjusted the dial on the big wireless and stood back.

"Now don't touch it again, Auntie Jo!" he ordered. Jo Maynard made a face at him but obediently seated herself on the other side of the room beside Anna and Nell Wilson.

"It just doesn't seem like the New Year until I've heard Big Ben." she explained. "Where are Steve and Adrienne? Go and find them, Mike, would you?" Charles jumped to his feet.

"I'll go." he offered. Mike shrugged and sat back down, and Charles hunted through the bottom part of the house. Eventually, he spotted a light under the door of his mother's study and with a quiet, muttered, 'Sorry, Steve' he knocked lightly on the door. There was a pause, then Stephen's voice asked,

"Chas?"

"Who else would have knocked?" Charles asked the door. "Mum's on the hunt for you, just a warning."

"Thanks." Stephen said, as the door opened and Adrienne, her cheeks pink and her eyes glowing, emerged. Charles put a hand out to stop Stephen as he attempted to follow her.

"Maybe better to go back seperately, looking like that?" he suggested. "Honestly, you'd think I was the only person in this family with any brains. Tell Mum we'll be there in a minute, Adrienne, would you?" As the door closed behind her, Stephen opened his mouth, but Charles held up a hand.

"I don't want to know." he said firmly.

"But..."

"I don't want to know, Steve!"

"I just..."

"Is the word 'Adrienne' going to feature in what you just...?"

"Yes... maybe."

"Then listen carefully, Steve - I do not want to know!"

***

Back in England in a town near the school, in a big, Victorian red brick house, an elderly lady and a young man were sitting in two large armchairs on either side of a roaring fire.

"You look more like your father every day." she observed. "It quite takes me back, sitting here with you like this. Your grandfather sitting in that chair, just after we were married. We saw in a few New Years in this house before the Great War, and then of course he didn't come back." She looked sad, remembering. "Your father, you know, was born in this house not long afterwards. And for so many years he sat there too, and we'd wait to hear the bells ring. Then when he met your mother, they always made a point of spending this night here. It was here you were born as well, in the room you have now. That wasn't intentional of course, but you always were impatient. I'm glad I didn't know on that day when we were so happy, that the accident would only be a few years later. And now here you are, almost a man and sitting in that chair. You look after yourself, my boy. I've mourned my husband, and buried my son and my daughter in law. My grandson will outlive me or I'll know the reason why!" He nodded his head.

"Yes Gran, I promise."

"Listen to me, getting all melancholy. That's what the end of the year does to people, I suppose. Ah, there we go - the beginning of a new year." She struggled to her feet and held out her hand to him.

"Happy New Year, Daniel." she said, giving him a hug.

"Happy New Year, Gran." he responded. "Do you need help up the stairs?"

"No, no, I'll be fine. Are you staying up with the radio just now?"

"Yes, for a while. I won't be much later though." She nodded.

"Good night then."

"Good night, Gran." Leaning heavily on her stick, Mrs Miller made her way to her bedroom, her grandson watching her anxiously until she was safely at the top of the stairs.

***

Much further north, Monty stood with his parents and sister, watching a fireworks display with the many guests who'd attended his mother's annual New Year Ball. In the house behind them, he could hear the musicians tuning up to provide more music after the display was over. As the rockets banged overhead, he felt his sister press close to him and slipped an arm around her. She was never a fan of loud noises, although she'd always loved fireworks. Monty had given up trying to understand that a long time ago.

His parents stood a short distance away. His father looked tired and old. Over the holidays, Monty had discovered that they'd had to sell off more land to building companies, and he suspected the family finances were in a bad way. His father's hair, once blazing red, had faded almost to white over the last few years, and there were grey streaks in his mothers dark head as well. He glanced down at Isobel, wrapped in one of her mother's fur coats which was now only slightly too long for her.

"OK?" he mouthed, deciding against trying to shout over the fireworks. She smiled and nodded, and gestured to him to lean closer.

"Will we be going back in soon, do you think?" she asked when he'd bent down so his ear was level with her mouth. He glanced at his watch, and tipped his wrist so she could see it too. It was almost 12:30. She nodded, smiled at him, and then both turned their attention back to the last few fireworks.

***

Jones watched his mother close the door behind their neighbours and then move over to close the window, opened 'to let the old year out and the new one in'. The house was immaculate, as it always was on New Year's Eve, every surface polished, every floor swept, and every stray object returned to it's proper place, often having been washed on the way.

"Come on then, bed time." she said cheerfully. "More people to see tomorrow. Someone rake out the fire and lets get upstairs." Jones' oldest brother obliged with the fire, and the rest of the family went upstairs. His sister and parents' rooms were on the first floor, although Anne's was little more than a cupboard. The four boys who still lived at home continued up another level, into what had once been the roof-space of the little cottage. Jones' father had converted this many year ago into a long bedroom for the boys, and Jones made his way to his own corner of it.

Unlike the others, who where here all year and had covered their walls with pictures, pages torn from magazines and anything else they could find, the walls around his bed were almost bare, containing only a few photos of school teams or friends. Shivering in the freezing winter air, all of the boys got into bed quickly and the lights were extinguished. Jones pulled the blankets up to his ears and curled himself into as small a space as possibly until he warmed up. He wondered idly how his friends had spent the night. He was willing to bet that Monty's sister hadn't burnt her hand trying to make toast without leaving any crumbs. He was equally sure that none of Minor's visitors were attempting to sleep on the setee, as his oldest brother was doing at the moment. He wondered if Miller was lying in bed hoping his toes weren't going to fall off as well. He wriggled round in his bed, trying to get comfortable, and grinned into the darkness at the thought. Cramped and cold though the cottage was, he was just as sure that none of them were having a holiday that was any better than his was.

Author:  Chatelaine [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:25 pm ]
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Eilidh wrote:
Cramped and cold though the cottage was, he was just as sure that none of them were having a holiday that was any better than his was.


That's a lovely way to end his thoughts! Mind you, I can remember as a child in winter wondering if I'd freeze to death before I fell asleep :)

Oh, this just makes me long for Christmas now!

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:41 pm ]
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That was a beautiful ending - and two updates, lucky person that I am :D Thankyou very much!

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:08 pm ]
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Nice to read more about the other lads.

Author:  clair [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:45 pm ]
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Don't think I've commented before but I love this drabble. It's so great to be seeing Len's actions as viewed byt he boys for once :)

Author:  Joanne [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:39 pm ]
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Give that boy a hot water bottle!

What different backgrounds they all have, and seemingly all happy in their own ways, despite their difficulties.

Thanks.

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Sep 29, 2010 1:36 am ]
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Weesh. Too cold for this little winter hater. Thank goodness summer is on the way.

Author:  di [ Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:54 am ]
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When you said you were giving us some background on the three boys for some reason I thought you meant Mike, Felix and Geoff so it was quite a surprise to then go on to read about Miller, Monty and Jones.

It was interesting to hear a little about their background and home life; lovely boys that they are.

Thanks, Eilidh. Looking forward to seeing them all safely back at school.

Author:  Eilidh [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:56 pm ]
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January

"I hate winter in England." Charles grumbled, as they waved goodbye to Rix Bettany and turned up the school drive. "I hate slush, and mud, and rain, and wind, and ice, and knowing that the girls are skiing in real snow while we're up to our necks in this stuff. I hate it when the trains don't work out so we have to spend the night at the quadrant, and I hate being at school before everyone else. I'm sick of it!" he finished, aiming a kick at a pile of snow on the way past.

"Well, I'm sick of listening to you moaning." retorted Stephen, who was fast running out of patience. "It was decent of Rix to bring us back to school instead of having to get that awful slow train to join up with the rest, and all you do is complain."

"I'm not complaining about Rix!" Charles pointed out. "I'm complaining about..."

"Everything." his brother finished for him. "Just shut up, would you?"

Both scowling, they made their way to the top of the drive, where Dr Hammersley met them. Ignoring their expressions, he greeted them cheerfully.

"Good morning, both of you! Welcome back! Good holidays, I presume? Now, you've had breakfast?"

"Yes, Sir." Stephen replied.

"Good, good. Well, take your things up to your rooms first and then if you don't mind, Maynard, Mr. Hanley wants your help in the library, and Maynard Minor, you've been volunteered to sort out lost property - it never got done at the end of last term. The rest of the boys should be here about tea time."

"Yes, Sir." Stephen said again. Charles merely nodded.

"Off you go then!"

The corridor where the Lower Sixth slept was quieter than Charles had ever seen it. The doors were open, and the weak January sunlight lit up the long passage. Through each door he passed, Charles could see spotlessly tidy rooms - the only time in the term when the rooms would be spotless, he reflected. Reaching his own door, he went in, dropped his case at the end of his bed and flopped down on a chair with a sigh.

Everything was exactly as they'd left it, from the books on the bedside tables to the pictures on the shelf. It always amused Charles when he saw his huge family photo beside Monty's, with only his parents and sister. With a sigh, he hung his coat up on the hook on the back of the door, opened his case and dropped the contents into a drawer, and then shoved the case under his bed. Pulling his blazer straight, he glanced in the mirror, straightened his tie, and then with a sudden grin at his reflection hurried back along the corridor, slid down the bannister and made his way, whistling brightly, back to the main building to claim the key to the lost property cupboard.

Author:  Finn [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:01 pm ]
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I find Chas monumentally endearing, and I think Adrienne is a jolly lucky girl!

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:03 pm ]
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:lol: :lol: at the image of the other boys looking in bewilderment at a Maynard group photo!

Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:20 pm ]
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:lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: :lol: :lol:
At Charles idea of unpacking!
Thanks

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:40 pm ]
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I loved Charles' instant transformation when he'd finished unpacking - but I do hope it doesn't presage some unfortunate mis-assignations of that lost property!!! :)

Thanks Eilidh - I'm really enjoying this.

Author:  Abi [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 8:28 pm ]
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Love Charles here - I can just see him doing all that!

Author:  di [ Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:51 am ]
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I could hear Charles chuntering all the way up the drive to the school building; what an unhappy bunny! Glad to see he cheered up after 'unpacking' his case. His idea of that task made me smile!
I wonder what treasures he'll unearth in Lost Property?
Thanks, Eilidh, looking forward to seeing what this Spring Term brings to the boys and, of course, Elizabeth.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:16 pm ]
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At least Chas will see Elizabeth earlier than what he thought. Loved all the updates I missed like Christmas and New Years

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:08 pm ]
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I could see him perfectly too - he sounds like Just William plus a few years!

Thankyou!

Author:  charli [ Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:21 am ]
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Two updates to catch up on, brilliant! Thank you :D

Author:  jayj [ Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:42 am ]
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Poor Chas - didn't he get volunteered to sort out a shed (or something?) in the summer holidays? Maybe he could get a special badge for being 'general tidier-upper prefect'? :D

Author:  Eilidh [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:06 pm ]
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Such a lot of update slacking! Hopefully normal service will redume this week. I do realise we're nearly at 25 pages, but we're also nearly at the point where this runs crashing into Changing Directions, so hopefully I'll get to that point before I have to start a new thread. I am slightly amazed that we're only slightly over half way though the first year and it's taken me 25 pages, though!

"Ah, here we all are, and here we go again! Yet another ten weeks in this miserable, freezing classroom, with our heads getting stuffed with verbs and equations and poetry and dates and other things which will be completely useless in eighteen months time when we leave, hurrah!" Monty dropped into his chair, making it creak with protest, and smiled round at his classmates. "Everyone glad to be back? Looking forward to an exciting fun-filled term full of exciting fun-filled lessons?"

"Nope." Charles replied from the depths of his desk, where he was trying to track down a book. "But you knew that already." He lifted his head and looked around. "Come on, you lot, sit down, would you? Hopkins'll be here in a minute and you sound like a day trip to the seaside."

"Don't fancy the seaside in this weather." Monty replied, looking over at where hailstones were rattling off the window pane. "I can barely see the garden wall."

"The seaside?" Elizabeth said, coming in in a whirl of cold air and closing the door quickly, before going to sit on the radiator. "I don't think so, my fingers are almost blue and I was only outside for five minutes. Not the weather for swimming, Monty! Minor, Hopkins says he's been held up by a phone call and we're to be organised and ready to go to prayers if he gets here in time. If not, we're to go ourselves and try to behave like the senior school and not the first form on a day trip."

"Well, we're trying." Charles replied, coming out of his desk again. "Drat this book! Has anyone got a spare hymn book?"

"I've got yours." Jones said, waving it in the air. "I borrowed it at the end of last term for something, I forget what now."

"And you didn't think to mention it while I turned my belongings upside down looking for it?" Charles demanded, exasperated. "I think you lot have left your brains at home this term. Come on then, lets go. Try and look like responsible adults, would you? We're supposed to be Upper VI in six months!"

"Welcome back! Welcome to the new term!" Dr Hammersley beamed round at them all. "I do hope you all had a good night's sleep and recovered from any delayed journeys yesterday. As you can all see, the weather has not improved at all from lunchtime yesterday, and so for the time being at least, all games classes will be in the gym hall. Weekend matches are not set to resume until next month, by which time we hope the ground will have dried out slightly. I have no other notices for you this morning, other than to remind you to read the notice boards, and to wish you all a happy term in which Matron has minimal work to do and I do not have to see any of you in my study other than for plesant reasons! Now, if the Upper Sixth will lead the way out, we will all get down to some work this morning!"

Charles and Elizabeth, along with a good proportion of the rest of the form, tossed their hymn books in their desks, collected their books for the first lesson, and continued on to the science lab at the far end of the building. Mr Hopkins was waiting when they arrived.

"Instructions on the board. Take detailed notes as you go along. Prep for tonight will be to try and figure out what has happened and why, and we'll look at it in detail tomorrow when we're in the classroom. Begin!" Elizabeth sighed.

"Why does he have to start us off with something difficult?" she demanded, digging in the cupboard under the bench for glassware. Charles shrugged.

"Because he likes difficult?" he suggested. "More test tubes, the board says 12, not 2. Can't you read or can't you count?"

"Can't read his writing." Elizabeth replied with a giggle, diving back into the cupboard. "There you go, 12. Do you want to weigh or boil?"

"I'll weigh." Charles decided. "You start things off here." Elizabeth watched him as he crossed the classroom. Neither of them had mentioned the kiss since they'd met the previous afternoon, and it didn't seem like Charles intended to mention it or even remember it. With a sigh, she rummaged in the drawer for a box of matches and lit the bunsen burner in the middle of the desk. Actual chemistry first. Any other types of chemistry would have to wait until later.

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:33 pm ]
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:lol: Particularly loved the last 2 lines.

Author:  Squirrel [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 2:14 pm ]
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Eilidh... it's heading for 25 pages before you're half way through the year because you're creating a gripping read so people are telling you how much they like it. Especially seeing it moves hand in hand with Changing Directions - it's great seeing how the two sides of the story equate and merge.

I'm thinking this term is going to be very interesting. Thank you.

Author:  gwynne [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 5:35 pm ]
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I'm loving this! and am hoping that there will be many, many more than 25 pages to read.

Author:  charli [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:31 pm ]
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There had better be more than 25 pages to this :D I absolutely love this!
I also like the last two sentences about chemistry. :D
Hope you do get to a good stopping point for the cut off.

Author:  Abi [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:31 pm ]
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Loved Elizabeth's thoughts on different types of chemistry. :lol:

Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 7:26 am ]
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A real feel of back-to-school-itis about the first passages there. Loved the last two lines.

Author:  jmc [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 9:26 am ]
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Just caught up with the last couple of posts. Loved the holiday scenes and also the return to school. Waiting for more chemistry. Thanks

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:09 pm ]
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February

"Elizabeth, will you stop moping around? It's not my fault you fell and hurt your ankle, and it's not my fault you can't play hockey today as a result."

"I'm bored." Elizabeth groaned.

"So you've told me at least forty times since you got up." Her father replied. "Why don't you get wrapped up and come with me?"

"Where are you going?"

"I'm taking the football team to their match - it's not too far away and it'll give you something to do. You might even enjoy it."

"I probably will enjoy it." Elizabeth agreed. "That sounds like an excellent idea. I'll go and get my things."

"You really shouldn't walk so far on your own while the weather is like this." her father warned her, as she strapped her ankle up firmly before pulling on her boots. "It was lucky that Maynard was down that way checking the state of the sports fields, or you could have been lying there for hours and no one would have known."

"Yes." Elizabeth replied vaguely.

Charles kept his back turned to Elizabeth as he looked around the pitch. He didn't need her here to be a distraction, especially for this game. This one was personal.

"Got a coin on you Cha - Maynard?" the captain of the opposing team called. Charles grinned at his adopted brother as he tossed one over.

"Not very organised, are you?" he muttered. Roddy laughed and flipped the coin in the air. "Heads!" Charles said loudly.

"Ah, you lose! A harbringer of things to come!" Roddy grinned, waving his team towards his chosen end of the pitch. Charles made a face at him.

"You're going to get such a beating, Roddy Richardson." he replied, taking position as Roddy's Games Master picked up his whistle.

At half time, Charles was contemplating eating his words.

"What's wrong with you, Chas?" Roddy demanded, coming over to sit beside him. "And who's the blonde girl watching you? She hasn't taken her eyes off you for the whole game so far."

"That's Elizabeth." Charles explained.

"That's Elizabeth?" Roddy said. He leant over to look again. "Wow, Chas! You really weren't exaggerating when you described her."

"I described her?" Charles asked, bemused. "Where was I while this was going on?"

"At Christmas." Roddy reminded him. "When Roger let us have that brandy he brought home, you remember?"

"Oh yes - well, at least, I remember the brandy." Charles said.

"Oh well, always nice to have some added help to thrash you." Roddy grinned, as the referee waved them both over.

The second half was, if anything, worse than the first, as Charles tried desperately to keep his mind on the game and rally his failing team into doing anything at all. Eventually, having been beaten by a decisive 8 goals to nil, and endured a celebratory tea that none of them felt like eating, Charles led his team back on to the small bus, where Mr Braithwaite was sitting in the driver's seat, with Elizabeth beside him.

"Oh come on!" Mr Braithwaite exclaimed as they climbed on. "It's not the end of the world, pull yourselves together!"

Charles slumped down in his seat, looking miserable, and the rest of the team took their cue from him. Elizabeth twisted around and knelt on her own seat as her father started the engine and pulled away.

"Anyone would think you'd all been told you had less than a week to live!" she exclaimed, surveying the boys. "Really, it was only one match. I'm sure your next one will be fine. How did you get on last week?"

"We didn't play last week." one of them eventually replied.

"The week before then." Elizabeth persisted. There were a few more of the boys paying attention to her now. "Come on, last match - did you win it."

"Yes."

"Well then! Stop being so pathetic. You're never going to win all your games, are you? The best you can hope for is that if you lose one, you pick yourselves back up and get back out and win. I'm sure when that lot - whose name I can't remember right now - come to play you, you'll thrash them just as badly." Most of the team was paying attention to her now.

"She's right." one of her classmates pointed out. "Last year we lost there as well, and then thrashed them when they came to us, didn't we Minor?" Charles glanced up.

"Yes." he agreed briefly.

"It's not very sporting to sit around moping like this, is it?" Elizabeth demanded. "What happened to being graceful losers? You're not exactly making a very good job of the graceful bit!"

"Though we did make an excellent job of the losing bit." one of the Lower Fifth grinned. "It balances out, Miss Braithwaite, don't you think?" Elizabeth rolled her eyes.

"No, I don't think." she replied, laughing. Several of the boys were smiling now as well, and as Elizabeth sat back down, a low hum of talk broke out.

"Well done." her father smiled at her. Elizabeth shrugged.

"It was all straight out of one of Nora's lectures." she replied.

"Nora's not here, though." her father pointed out. "You did well to pass it on - and you've certainly cheered them up!"

The bus pulled up in front of the school building just as Baxter, who had seen them coming up the drive from the window of the prefect's room, appeared on the steps.

"Well?" he called as they poured out. Charles scowled.

"Lost." he snapped. "Have you seen Maynie?"

"Out for lunch and tea with a red-haired girl who turned up this morning." Baxter replied. Charles looked shocked, and then shook his head slightly. "What happened that you lost?" the games prefect continued.

"Ask someone else." Charles growled, pushing past him and taking the stairs three at a time. Just as he rounded the corner at the top, two of the Upper Fourth came tearing along it. One of them crashed into him, nearly knocking him over, and the other, who had been slightly further back, managed to pull up just in time. Charles, who had been getting steadily angrier since he'd shaken hands with a grinning and triumphant Roddy two hours before, felt the last bit of his self control slipping away from him. He pulled himself up to his fulll height and glared at the younger boys.

And here we are back in Changing Directions! I will post the necessary bits from that here to finish off this thread, because those posts really belong to both drabbles, and will start a new one tomorrow or towards the end of the week with what happened after Len's visit. Aplogies in advance for spreeing when I copy them over.

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:12 pm ]
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Stephen reported himself to the head, stayed for a short chat and then made his way back to his own room in the senior boarding house. Half way there, he was distracted by sounds of shouting coming from a side corridor and detoured, to find his brother standing angrily over two members of the Upper Fourth.

"...and I'll teach you to do something like that again - you can both consider yourselves in detention for the rest of the week, and you can spend it learning..."

"What's going on here?" Stephen asked sharply. The junior boys looked from one brother to the other fearfully.

"I caught them running races in the corridor while they should have been at prep - they've disturbed half the house and nearly knocked me over." Charles explained.

"It was an accident..."

"We didn't mean..."

Both of the youger boys spoke at once.

"Silence!" Charles thundered at them. Stephen took a deep breath, thinking that Charles' reputation as the quiet Maynard was as far away from the truth as could be imagined.

"Maynard, I wanted to see you anyway." he said. "Take yourself up to my study, would you? I'll sort this pair out." Charles spun on his heel and stalked off, muttering to himself, and Stephen seated himself on the nearest window ledge and looked at the younger boys.

"OK, you first." he said, pointing to the one on the left.

"Please, we weren't racing." he said nervously. "We knew we were late for prep, and we were running to get there in time. We didn't mean to crash into him, he was just there when we went round the corner."

"Why were you late for prep?" Stephen asked patiently.

"We had practice just before and our watches seem to have gone wrong - they were both ten minutes slow."

"I see." Stephen though for a second. "OK, come with me. You might want to make sure your get your watches fixed - or have a word with whoever thought it would be funny to set them back ten minutes. Don't worry about the detentions, I'll fix it." he added, leading the way to their classroom and opening the door.

"Yes Maynard. Thanks." both boys muttered. Stephen opened the door.

"Sorry these two are late, Baxter - my fault." he said to his friend, who was seated behind the desk. Baxter nodded an acknowlegement and Stephen withdrew. "Right, Chas." he muttered, setting off up the stairs again.

"What was all that about?"

"You were interfering with my punishments, thowing your Head Boyship about, that's what all that was about."

"Chas, the kids hadn't done anything."

"They nearly knocked me down the stairs!"

"It was an accident."

"They had no right being there at all."

"Someone set their watches slow, come on Chas, you did far worse yourself! What's this about?"

"It's not about anything."

"Right. I get back from a rather difficult day out to find you terrifying the life out of a pair of Fourths, and now you're pacing round my study like a caged lion, but it's not about anything? Sorry Chas, but it's been a very long day and I'm not in the mood for your games. Tell me what's actually wrong or go away and leave me to do my prep."

"Where have you been all day?"

"I've been out. In the village. With... with Len."

"Len? She had the bare-faced cheek to show her face here? You know, Baxter told me you went off with some red-haired girl but I didn't think it would be her. After all this time, what did she think she was doing? What did she want?"

There was a knock at the door, cutting Charles off in mid shout.

"Yes?" Stephen called. Jeffries, his second in command, stuck his head in.

"I'm a delegation." he said. "Please can you keep the volume on the family row down a bit, because the entire corridor doesn't need or want to hear it, and we are in fact trying to work. I have an additional message for Maynard Minor, which is that Monty says he'll cover supper duty for you and sent these." A hand holding a pile of books appeared and deposited them on the floor. "Finally, I'm reminding you that supper is in half an hour, and that you're both on lights duty tonight to make up for disturbing the rest of us." Stephen laughed.

"Thanks, Jeff. Sorry." He said. Charles remained staring out of the window, his fists clenched. "Look, Chas, she came to apologise. She would've taken us both out if you'd been here, she said that. When she dropped me off the head said we could have tea in my study tomorrow - Felix as well. I have to go and collect him after lunch. Can we not spend it shouting at each other please?"

"We can if I'm not here."

"Chas..."

"Don't 'Chas' me! You've seem what she's done to Mamma, you've seen how much the kids miss her, never mind the rest of us! And now she wants to come for tea as if it's the most normal thing in the world?"

"Chas..."

"I said don't! You can have tea with her, or go for walks with her, or do whatever you want, but until she tries to fix the damage she's done to our family I'm not the slightest bit interested in having anything to do with her!"

"Fine." Stephen replied, seeing that Charles seemed to have wound down. "In that case sit down, calm down, and do your prep. You might as well do it in here because we're not going to get it finished before supper and I'm the only one who can get away with breaking curfew so we can sit up later to finish." He threw himself down at the table and picked up the nearest book. Charles collected his books from the floor, took the other chair, and they sat in silence for twenty minutes until the supper bell rang.

After supper, they spent some time in the prefects room with their friends, before seeing to lights out for the fourths and then returning to Stephen's study. They worked for a short time, dealt lights out for the Lower Fifth, and then returned to the study in oppressive silence for the last time.

"A Junior Pree breaking bounds again." Stephen smiled in an attempt to lighten the atmosphere as they sat back down.

"Encouraged by the Head Boy, no less." Charles replied. "Never mind, I've only Latin to do so we won't have too late a night."

"Only Chem for me." Stephen agreed, burying himself in his book. They finished just as they hear footsteps in the corridor and a voice called;

"Lights, you chaps. Sleep well!" Various calls of

"Goodnight, Mr. Braithwaite." and "Night, Sir!" replied from all along the senior corridor. Stephen got to his feet and turned out the overhead light, then, waiting until Charles had drawn the curtains, produced a small lamp from under the bed and plugged it in.

"Best present Con's ever given us." he said cheerfully. "Now, since it's lights out and you can't yell, are you going to tell me what was bothering you earlier?"

"I told you already." Charles muttered. "It was Len."

"You were in a foul mood before I even mentioned Len." Stephen pointed out, stretching out on his bed. Charles followed his example on the couch.

"I don't want to talk about it."

"I don't really care." Stephen replied. "Either you tell me because I'm your brother and I care about what's bothering you, or you tell me because you're one of my prefects and you're letting whatever it is affect the way you deal with the younger boys. Your choice." Charles groaned.

"Frying pan or fire." he sighed. "Fine, I'll take the frying pan. I never did fancy jumping into the fire."

"So what happened?"

"Elizabeth." Chearles said glumly. Stephen sat bolt upright.

"Chas! You weren't supposed to be having any more to do with her! You're going to get expelled, you idiot! You can't just... it's not..."

"Will you stop babbling on?" Charles demanded. "I know! I didn't have anything to do with her - at least, no more than I could help. But she came to watch the match today, didn't she? And she spent the whole time looking at me, and I was terrified in case Braithwaite saw her and decided to blame me for it. Added to that, I was so distracted by her that we lost - badly - for the first time this season."

"What did you tell her?"

"I told her that if I got seen with her, I'd be expelled, and she said being expelled wasn't such a bad thing. So I pointed out that if I was expelled, we wouldn't see each other at all, and she said that in that case we'd have to make sure we weren't caught."

"Chas... you need to stop seeing her."

"I don't want to." Charles pointed out. "Let's be honest Steve, every boy in the school wants to be with Elizabeth."

"Only because she's the only female between here and the village, other than the maids and Mrs MacKenzie."

"Oh yeah, I can just see them all dreaming over Mrs Mac." Charles grinned, referring to the school's housekeeper. "But really, I won't get caught. And if I do - well, sometimes I think it would almost be worth it." Stephen rolled his eyes.

"Get a grip on yourself." he snapped. "And think about what you're doing. You need to get a university place next year, you're not going to get that if you're expelled from school for messing about with the housemaster's daughter."

"Will you lighten up? You're worse than Len." Charles snapped. "For the millionth time, I'm not going to get expelled. I might even go one better than not getting expelled and convince them to give me this room next year, and that nice badge that you wear."

"I give up." Stephen sighed. "When they phone Dad to come and take you back to Switzerland, you better tell them I tried to discourage you." Charles muttered something unintelligible which Stephen decided, in the interests of peace, to ignore.

Author:  Eilidh [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:12 pm ]
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He was just as ready to give up the following afternoon as he surveyed his siblings. Charles, present due to being threatened with death, two weeks worth of supervising the Fourth Form's prep and Stephen working things so that he was left on the Platz the next time they were sent to Montreux, was sitting sulkily in the corner. Helena was involved in an animated discussion with Felix, who had been delighted to see his older sister. Eventually, she stood up.

"Well, I've had a lovely afternoon." she smiled. "It's so good to see you all again, but I'm catching a train tonight so I need to go now."

"Come back another time?" Felix asked eagerly. "It's good to have visitors. Oh! You could come to Prize Giving!" he exclaimed.

"Could I?" Helena asked, amused. "When is Prize Giving?"

"End of June." Charles spoke up. "Exactly the same time as the Chalet School sale." he added bitterly. Stephen swung round.

"Chas, will you give it a rest?" he demanded angrily. "It's hardly Len's fault that Mum always went to the sale, it's certainly not her fault that Mum doesn't come here! Stop taking it out on the rest of us, please!" Felix looked from one to the other, his eyes looking like they were going to fall out his head.

"I'll walk back over to the Prep with Felix." Helena said, in an attempt to diffuse the tension. "I'll come back and say goodbye." The older pair barely acknowledged this, glaring at each other across the room. Felix, however, cheered up significantly once they were out of the school building and pointed out everything he could think of as they walked back, from the place where he had fallen off the wall into a puddle to the windows of his dormitories. Helena returned him to the Matron who came out to meet them, told him to behave, handed him some pocket money, and left again quickly, promising to be at the prize giving if she possibly could.

Stephen and Charles met her on the steps of the main school building, firmly avoiding speaking to each other. Stephen hugged her briefly, smiled when she promised again to attend their prize giving, and disappeared into the building. Charles fell into step beside her.

"I'll take you to the gate." he offered.

"You're angry with me." Helena observed, when they were out of hearing distance of everyone else. "I'm sorry, Chas. I didn't know what else to do."

"You could've stayed. Spoken to Mamma. Spoken to Reg. The kids miss you, you know. So do Connie and Margot and Steve and the rest."

"But not you?" Helena asked, curious. He shrugged.

"I guess. At first I understood - I could see why you'd done it and I thought the rest were being stupid for not understanding, and for feeling sorry for Mum. I thought she'd brought it on herself, to be honest. But then - at Christmas - they looked so old Len, and so sad, and Phil and Geoff and Claire were asking for you and Mum had to keep telling them she didn't know where you were. You upset the entire family, and then you didn't even let Mum know you were safe. I just... well, got angry with you I suppose. Mum and Dad were so worried about you before Connie got home at Christmas with your letter, and said they'd seen you. It was just so unlike you to be so selfish, to not think at all of how the rest of us felt." He kept his eyes on his feet, which Helena was glad about, as she was slowly turning what she was sure must be a very bright shade of red. "But anyway, you're here - and you promised to come at the end of the year - that'll mean a lot to Steve. He's working so hard this year as Head Boy. He'll love having someone there to see the last big event of his school life. Felix'll be delighted too."

"And what about you?" Helena asked.

"I might even have to start working - make sure one of us gets a prize for you to applaud." he said with a grin that made him look far more like the child Helena remembered as 'Steve's shadow' than the young man he was trying to be.

"I am sorry Chas, truly." she said quietly. He shrugged.

"I know. I'd better get back to school." Helena hugged him.

"This is my address." she said, handing over a slip of paper. "I'll be in England for the next six weeks or so - I'm going to join my employer near London - but then I should be back there. Write to me if you want." he nodded.

"And you'll be here in June?" he checked again. Helena grinned at him.

"I'll come from the moon if I have to." she promised. Charles grinned at her again and then headed back up the driveway.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 1:18 pm ]
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Loving this :D .

Author:  Finn [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 1:19 pm ]
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Lovely to see this come together with Changing Directions, Eilidh (which I also loved, btw!)
Really well written :) congrats! And did I hear that there was more? :D :D

Author:  AnneM [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:04 pm ]
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This is fantastic! Looking forward to the next bit..............!

Author:  Catherine [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:41 pm ]
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Finally caught up on this, Eilidh. It's lovely and I'm really enjoying it - I hope Charles doesn't get caught out over Elizabeth though.

Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 5:31 pm ]
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Another one hoping that Chas and Elizabeth don't get into trouble! Thankyou!

Author:  Abi [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 8:17 pm ]
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It was great to read that all in one go, and merge with Changing Directions. Can't wait to see more... thanks, Eilidh. :)

Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Oct 05, 2010 11:33 pm ]
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I can't help feeling that Chas is being a tad unfair to Helena here. Because quite honestly if I had been treated like the au pair in my own home I wouldn't have wanted to contact my family once I escaped either.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Oct 06, 2010 2:39 am ]
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It might be unfair but it is understandable. Thanks, loved catching up on the bits that fit in with this

Author:  di [ Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:40 am ]
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Great to catch up with all these episodes; now I must away to read 'Changing Directions' which has been on my 'to do' list for some weeks!
Thanks, Eilidh, still loving this.

Author:  jmc [ Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:48 am ]
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Thanks for all the updates. Nice to see the two stories coming together.

Author:  Chatelaine [ Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:34 am ]
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Miss Di wrote:
I can't help feeling that Chas is being a tad unfair to Helena here. Because quite honestly if I had been treated like the au pair in my own home I wouldn't have wanted to contact my family once I escaped either.


Thank you, Miss Di, for expressing my feelings ezackly (as Davy Keith might say). I can't believe Charles's cheek, telling Helena that she was being selfish - has it occurred to any of the family, Joey and Jack especially, to acknowledge how sellessly Len has behaved all her life?

This is a great story, and I love how Charles is developing as a character. He was always my favourite Maynard!

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:46 am ]
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Yes Chas is being unfair to Helena - but that's what anger does to you, causes you to lash out at everyone, especially family. I don't blame Helena in the slightest.


Thanks Eilidh

Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:29 am ]
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Fiona Mc wrote:
It might be unfair but it is understandable.



Golly yes, who'd be a teenager again!

Author:  Elbee [ Thu Oct 07, 2010 3:19 pm ]
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That was great to see the two stories joined together. Thanks, Eilidh, looking forward to more!

Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Oct 10, 2010 1:59 pm ]
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Thanks love how you have linked them together.

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