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Author:  LizzieC [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:05 am ]
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Hope this is in the right house (Mods, if you think it would be better else where please move it). I was trying to write some more of Demons on the train home from London, but the bunnies wouldn't help and made me write this instead.

She laid her head against the cold glass and gazed unseeingly out of the rain splashed window of the train taking her back to England. Somewhere in the darkness the countryside was rolling quickly past. She owned to herself that she was exhausted, physically and mentally, broken by all she had undergone in the last weeks. The venture that had started so brightly less than a year ago was over, and she didn’t really care. The eager presence that had accompanied her to Austria was gone, gone forever, and the circumstances had made her position there untenable. Even if it hadn’t, she had no desire to remain. The deaths of two pupils, including her own sister were a blow she did not think she would ever be able to move past. The school had been so tiny that breaking it up and selling the assets had not been difficult, and she had remained in Austria only two weeks after the awful event. The service had been charmingly simple, the casket interred as close to Joey’s beloved Tiernsee as possible. A single tear rolled down Madge Bettany’s cheek as she thought of her sister, lost, a casualty of the cruel Tiernjoch.

Author:  patmac [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:09 am ]
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:cry: It could have been. Very moving, Lizzie.

Author:  Mona [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:18 am ]
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Thank you Lizzie. Very poignant.

Author:  Alison H [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 11:48 am ]
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:cry: Thanks Lizzie.

Author:  Lesley [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 1:55 pm ]
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How sad. :cry:

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 2:03 pm ]
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Ouch! Thanks.....

Author:  Sugar [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:04 pm ]
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How sad :cry: Poor Madge How easily it might have happened

Author:  Aquabird [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 4:21 pm ]
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:cry: :cry: Thanks Lizzie.

Author:  Clare [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 6:08 pm ]
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Thanks Lizzie. It could have so easily happened to them both, and I do wonder how Grizel's father would have felt if that had happened.

Author:  Elbee [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:35 pm ]
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Very sad :( . Thanks Lizzie.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:52 pm ]
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Thanks Lizzie, that was potentially how it could have ended up

Author:  crystaltips [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:54 pm ]
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Thanks Lizzie, that gave me goosebumbs, it could easily have been so.

Author:  JustJen [ Sat Jun 21, 2008 8:04 pm ]
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very sad and moving Lizzie

Author:  Karoline [ Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:18 am ]
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Thank you Lizzie :(

Author:  Billie [ Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:51 pm ]
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Ooo, how awful. And it could so easily have ended that way. :(

Author:  leahbelle [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 12:18 pm ]
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That's very sad. Thanks, Lizzie.

Author:  abbeybufo [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:25 pm ]
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Thanks Lizzie - this was a real tear-jerker :cry:

Author:  Abi [ Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:06 pm ]
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Oh, that's so sad, and could so easily have happened.
:cry:
Thanks Lizzie.

Author:  Vick [ Mon Jun 30, 2008 8:30 pm ]
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:cry: Thanks Lizzie

Author:  Carolyn P [ Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:15 pm ]
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Ouch, that is so sad.

Author:  mel-mel [ Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:14 pm ]
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Thank you Lizzie

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