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Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
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Author:  Vick [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
This has stemmed from a random plot bunny which was left hanging around in the TB thread in Anything Else. :dontknow: To whom it may belong, I have no idea, but if they would like to claim it back I would be very grateful! :lol:

As this is my first attempt at any sort of writing since I left school about 15 years ago, apologies for any glaring errors or mistakes. :roll:

I must say a very big thank you to Mary R for proofreading this for me, her input has been very welcome :D

Jo Bettany was curled up in a chair in the corner of the salon at Die Rosen, reading a book and blissfully unaware that her world was about to come crashing down around her. Her sister, Madge Russell, sat knitting in another chair across the room. There was no one else in the pretty chalet where they lived, set on the Sonnalpe above the beautiful Tiernsee in the Austrian Tyrol. Rosa had taken the small children out for a walk and Marie had gone to visit her family down in Briesau with her husband and children.

Jo glanced up furtively from her book and towards her sister. She felt that she needed to cough, not a small cough to clear her throat, but one that had started to become all too familiar over the past weeks. It was a cough which felt as if she was trying to remove something from deep within her. Until now, she had managed to hide it mostly from her sister, but she knew she couldn’t avoid it this time. Suddenly, she started coughing, and Jo dropped her book in the process of trying to stop herself from making it sound any worse than it actually was. Her sister glanced up sharply when the book landed on the floor with a thump. What she saw made her drop her knitting anyhow and rush across the room to her sister’s side.

“Jo! What’s wrong?” Madge cried. Jo couldn’t answer. Madge stood up and left the room, returning quickly with a glass of water for her sister. When she arrived back, Jo was still coughing, but not so badly now.

“Here Jo, drink this, darling,” and Madge helped her sister to sip the cool water. Jo looked up at her sister and gave a watery smile through the tears which were now pouring down her face, a combination of the ferocity of the coughing fit and knowledge of the fact that her sister would now know something was badly wrong with her.

“S-Sorry old thing!” she managed to croak. “Didn’t mean to worry you.”

“Of course you worried me, Jo.” Madge replied, equally quietly. “How could I not worry when you were coughing like that?” She looked carefully at her sister and, noting the dark shadows under her eyes and the intense paleness of her pallor, made a decision.

“I think you ought to go and have a rest in your bedroom, Joey. You look tired after all that. I’ll give you a hand, shall I?” Jo nodded her assent, talking still being too much effort. Madge helped her to stand up and guided her slowly out of the salon and upstairs to her pretty bedroom. Once there, she helped her sister to undress and saw her safely under the covers, before closing the curtains and leaving the room, closing the door softly behind her.

As she descended the stairs, Madge thought about what she had just witnessed. She had not seen Jo have a coughing fit like that for a long time now and it worried her. Her sister had been so delicate up until the last few years and Madge thought that she had finally outgrown this tendency. Today’s events had brought back the memories of when Jo had been unable to run around without getting out of breath. She suddenly realised that she hadn’t seen her sister doing anything strenuous lately and wondered at it. Did it have something to do with the coughing she had just witnessed?

She arrived at the bottom of the stairs and turned to go towards the salon again when the front door opened and her husband let himself in, shutting it behind himself.
Author:  cestina [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:09 pm ]
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Ohhhhh.....scary........
Author:  Finn [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:10 pm ]
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Oh, I think I recognise the hanging plot bunny. If I do, then this should be very interesting - thanks Vick! Very elegant writing.
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:25 pm ]
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Thank you for new drabble.
Author:  Chloe15 [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:30 pm ]
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Thank you. This will be very interesting.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:43 pm ]
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A very interesting start, Vick - well done for posting your first drabble. :) I think I might have an idea where it could be headed, but will wait patiently to find out.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:51 pm ]
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This looks interesting - looking forward to reading more.
Author:  Shander [ Wed Feb 02, 2011 11:27 pm ]
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This looks fascinating!
I'm looking foward to more.
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:26 am ]
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A great beginning, looking forward to more.
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:02 am ]
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That's a great beginning and it's very well-written. Thanks :-)
Author:  cal562301 [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:00 am ]
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Congratulations on your first drabble, Vicky. This looks very interesting. Looking forward to more, when you have time.
Author:  KathrynW [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:20 pm ]
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Thank you Vick, this is a very promising start and I look forward to seeing more of it!
Author:  chris84 [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 4:21 pm ]
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Thank you, this looks really interesting. :D
Author:  Minim [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:04 pm ]
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Interesting...

Thanks, Vick.
Author:  ivohenry [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 6:06 pm ]
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Adding to those who think this is an interesting start!
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:06 pm ]
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Oh no, why do I have a horrible feeling of where this is going?

Thankyou, and well done on posting :D I can't wait to read more!
Author:  Vick [ Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:11 pm ]
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Thank you for the comments everyone.

I was hoping the book I'd ordered from Amazon to help me along with writing this would have arrived this morning, but typically, Postie only delivered a Backyardigans dvd I'd ordered for C :roll:

Here's a bit more anyway.

“Oh Jem! Just the person!” she said, relieved to see her husband. “I’ve just taken Joey to bed. She’s had such a coughing fit. I’m rather worried about her.”

Jem removed his coat and hat and hung them up quietly, before coming to kiss his wife and guide her into the salon where they could talk in relative privacy.

“What do you mean, my dear?” he asked as they were sitting down on the sofa together. “Why don’t we ring for some coffee and then you can tell me what’s happened.” Suiting action to words, he rang the small bell and, after requesting coffee from Marie, sat back down again with his wife. Once the coffee had been brought, and they both had a full cup, he spoke again.

“What’s happened to Joey, Madge?”

“She and I were both in here just sitting quietly. Jo was reading and I was knitting, when suddenly, she started to cough really violently. It was just like when she was younger and she had been running when she shouldn’t, but worse. I tried to help her, but it was a really bad attack, Jem. When it was over, she was so pale and exhausted, that I suggested she go to bed for a while. She didn’t argue either, which isn’t like Jo.”

“Hmm.” was all he replied, but he was thinking hard and, from what his wife had just said, he knew something was wrong. “I’ll go and take a look at her when she wakes up. I think the best thing for her is sleep now.”

Two hours later, Jem wandered up the stairs and tapped lightly on Jo’s door, before opening it quietly and peering round. Jo was awake and smiled at her brother-in-law, though she made no effort to move.

“Hello, Jem” she whispered. Talking was still an effort despite the rest she had just had.

“Hello, Jo” Jem replied quietly. “Mind if I come in?” Jo just nodded, so he came in and sat on the edge of the bed next to her. Jo had already turned on the little bedside lamp and Jem could see, even in the soft glow, how pale she looked.

“You gave your sister quite a fright earlier. How long have you been coughing like that?” he asked gently.

“A few weeks,” she whispered vaguely. She suddenly had a deep sense of foreboding and felt that Jem was trying to get at something. She had no idea what, as her brain felt so confused at the moment. Jem looked keenly at her and, sensing that he wouldn’t get much more from her at the moment, decided to leave it for now.

“Try and get some more rest. We’ll talk in the morning, when you are feeling more like yourself.” Jo nodded again and obediently closed her eyes. Jem turned out the light and felt his way out in the dark looking thoughtful.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:18 pm ]
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Oh dear :( . Do I get the horrible feeling that she's about to start coughing up blood?
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:32 pm ]
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Thank you. Joining Alison in fearing the worst.
Author:  chris84 [ Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:40 pm ]
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oh dear :(. Joins Alison and PaulineS in fearing the worst for Joey. :(
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:35 pm ]
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Definitely fearing some really bad news to come!

Thankyou for the update.
Author:  Abi [ Sat Feb 05, 2011 2:25 pm ]
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Just read the beginning of this, and agreeing with everyone else. This doesn't look at all good for Joey. :(
Author:  Vick [ Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:37 pm ]
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The next morning, Jo woke late, so by the time she had washed and dressed and made her way slowly downstairs, Frühstück had just about finished. Only Jem was still at the table in the Speisesaal. He looked up with a smile as Jo came in and sat in her usual place.

“Good morning, Jo. How are you feeling?” he asked genially.

“A bit tired still, but much better than last night,” she answered, truthfully. She helped herself to some coffee from the pot still on the table, but didn’t feel inclined to eat anything.

“You should try and eat something, Joey.” Jem said, kindly, but his tone held something that compelled her to obey him. She managed a warm croissant smothered in rich creamy butter, but refused anything more. Jem didn’t push her.

“Why don’t you come out for a walk with me this morning?” he proposed, when she had finished her breakfast. “The fresh air will do us both good.”

Jo hesitated. She had been deliberately avoiding too much exercise for fear of the cough developing, but the way Jem looked at her made her feel as if she could not refuse his invitation.

“Okay. I just need to get my things first.”

“I’ll meet you at the door in ten minutes,” was all he replied, before leaving the table and searching out his wife to tell her of his plans.

Jo was duly waiting by the front door, all wrapped up against the cold when Jem arrived there ten minutes later.

“Let’s have a walk to the other end of the alm, shall we?” he suggested as he shut the door firmly behind them. Matching his normally long swift strides to Jo’s much slower than usual stroll they set off down the path and turned out of the garden gate. Jem deliberately tried to keep the conversation light, but his experienced eyes were watching his young sister-in-law closely. What he saw was something he didn’t like the look of. She was extremely pale and still had dark circles under her eyes. He could tell that she was struggling to keep up with him, something she had previously been able to do with no problems. Her breathing was starting to become shallower, as if she was struggling to catch her breath. Suddenly, she started to cough again, a deep ragged cough, which caused her to collapse on the ground in a heap. Jem knelt beside her, concern on his face. He noted that they weren’t far from the Sanatorium and he made a decision. Once Jo had managed to stop coughing enough to notice him again, he spoke.

“Let’s go in to my office, where you can have a rest and recover a little,” he suggested. Jo had no strength left to argue and just nodded. Jem helped her back to her feet and wrapping an arm protectively around her, almost carried her for the rest of the way.
Author:  Abi [ Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:06 pm ]
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Poor Joey, and all of them. Thanks Vick, this is beautifully written.
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:35 pm ]
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Oh dear, this doesn't look good. Liking Jem here.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:41 pm ]
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Pleased Jem decided to walk to the San so he could assess Jo without her realising it. Thanks Vick
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:01 am ]
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Oh dear it's not looking good.
Author:  keren [ Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:18 am ]
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have a little rest.....

And when will he let her out?
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Feb 07, 2011 1:56 pm ]
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I just caught up on two updates. Poor Joey. This is really well-written Vick. I really lovely how you're writing Jem. Thanks :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Feb 07, 2011 7:35 pm ]
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I really don't think that this is good. I guess I'll just have to hope for a happy ending!

Thankyou!
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:14 pm ]
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Thanks Vick
Author:  Vick [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:20 am ]
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Thank you for the comments. :D

Apologies for the slowness of this, but the plot doesn't want to speed up at all :roll:

Once in the safety of his office, Jem busied himself in making Jo as comfortable as he could on the small sofa in the corner. He then went to fetch some hot coffee and biscuits, both of which he insisted she swallow.

“I have a few things to do while I’m here,” he said, quietly. “You lie down and have a nap. No one will disturb you in here. I’ll be back soon.”

Jo nodded again and obediently lay down on the sofa, Jem throwing a blanket over her to keep her warm, before leaving her to sleep. He went straight to the X-ray room and arranged an appointment with the nurse there for two hours later, before going on to check on some of his patients.

When Jo woke up an hour or so later, Jem was back in his office, busy at his desk. As she yawned and stretched he put his pen down and came over to her.

“How are you feeling now?” he asked gently.

“Tired out and fed up of coughing,” she replied frankly. She was still struggling to breathe properly and drew in a large shuddering breath.

“I’ve arranged for you to go and have a chest X-ray in twenty minutes time,” he told her. “I don’t like that cough you seem to have developed and I would like to have it checked out.” He then helped Jo to sit up and proceeded to show her to the bathroom, so she could tidy herself up a little.
Jo stood in front of the mirror in the bathroom for a while, studying her reflection. Even she could tell that she wasn’t looking well.

“Well, you’ve managed to avoid detection this long, it was bound to come out some time,” she said to herself sadly, before turning and heading back to Jem’s office. Just outside, she paused and said a quick prayer for help in all that she felt was about to happen to her. Then, resolutely, she opened the door and entered, ready for anything.

“Ready?” Jem asked her.

“Ready,” she replied. Jem stood up and came around the desk ready to escort her down to the X-ray room.

They walked in silence down the corridors, until they reached the door to the X-ray department. Both were lost in their own thoughts. Jo was worrying about what was about to happen and Jem hoping against hope that his sister-in-law wasn’t as ill as he feared. Jem opened the door for Jo and followed her into the room.
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:13 am ]
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Thanks for another excellent update. Joey seems to be quite accepting of it. How old is she meant to be in this? Thanks :-)
Author:  Jools [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:35 am ]
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Thank you. I too like Jem in this universe.
Author:  chris84 [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:52 pm ]
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Thank you for the update. Poor Joey.
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:58 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. Wibbling along with Joey and Jem about what the X-rays are going to show.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:59 pm ]
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Jem is handling a nightmare situation very well, and it sounds as if Jo's been doing what so many people unfortunately do - putting off getting medical help in the hope that a problem might just go away :( .
Author:  Abi [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:30 pm ]
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Sounds as though Joey had a fair idea there was something wrong.

Thanks Vick, I'm enjoying a look at what could have happened.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 6:20 pm ]
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This is exactly Jo of the early days - how horrible it must be for them.

Thankyou!
Author:  marni [ Tue Feb 08, 2011 7:03 pm ]
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I like how Jem is looking out for Joey in this - He's being very gentle and supportive. Thanks Vick. Look forward to more.
Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 3:32 am ]
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I have a pile of tissues next to me ready to deal with what seems to be coming.
Author:  JS [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:53 am ]
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Send some over to me Miss Di - I generally avoid sad drabbles but am hooked now :(
Author:  Vick [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:18 am ]
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Thank you for your comments.

Leaving her in the charge of the nurse on duty, he told Jo that he would come back for her in half an hour. The nurse instructed her to change into a hospital gown and then proceeded to take the X-rays required in an efficient and professional manner. Just as Jo was changing back into her normal clothes, Jem reappeared to escort her back through the maze of corridors.

Once back in his office, Jem bade her to drink some coffee and to eat some of the fresh bread rolls and butter his secretary had left for them.

“I’m not hungry, though.” Jo protested when he presented her with the plate.

“You have to eat, Jo,” he said firmly. “You won’t have any strength left if you don’t eat.” Jo reluctantly choked down one of the bread rolls and drank some of the coffee, but refused to eat any more, declaring that she would be sick if she did so.

“Jack has offered to run you back to Die Rosen as he is going off duty soon,” he continued.

“But I’d rather walk back.” Jo wanted some time alone to absorb what had just happened to her.

“After what happened earlier? No, I don’t think so, Jo. It’s going dark now and I don’t think walking back alone in the dark would be a good idea, do you? If you have another coughing fit, there won’t be anyone to help and we may not know where you are to rescue you and your sister would be dreadfully worried”

Jo looked mutinous, but knew that he was right. She also knew that walking would only make her worse and she didn’t want to worry her sister any more than she already had done.

“I’ll get those films developed today and let you know the results tomorrow morning,” he continued, quietly. “When you get home I’d like you to go straight to bed and stay there until I come to you tomorrow please.”

“What about visitors?” Jo asked hopefully. “Surely someone can come to see me; otherwise I’m going to go mad.”

“Your sister may visit, but no one else, especially not Robin or the children. Hopefully its nothing, but I’d rather be on the safe side than risk them.”

Jo nodded. She had no wish to pass anything on to her adopted sister Cecilia Marya Humphries, better known as the Robin. A knock came at the door at that moment and, at Jem’s answer, Doctor Jack Maynard came into the office.

“Ready, Jo?” he asked with a smile. Jo nodded and turned to collect her outer garments. Jack grabbed them before she could bend down to pick them up and helped her into them, then turned to his superior for a quick word. Once that was done, he held his arm out to Jo in a friendly fashion and escorted her down to the car. If they seemed to walk a little slower than usual, he said nothing, just happy to be in her company. They reached the car and Jack unlocked it. He held open the passenger door for Jo to climb in, before closing it and running round to get in his own side. Then he revved the engine and set off back to Die Rosen. He noticed that Jo seemed a little distant, when normally she was happy to chatter away to him and wondered at it. All too soon, they arrived back at Die Rosen. Jo managed to raise herself out of her reverie enough to climb out of the car.

“Thank you for the lift home, Jack,” was all she said to him.

“No problem. Any time,” he replied with a smile. She smiled back at him before shutting the car door and setting off up the path to Die Rosen. As she approached, Madge suddenly appeared and, as she pulled her sister inside, he saw no more. Shrugging to himself, he continued on to his own rooms and something to eat.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:23 am ]
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Ooh, I hadn't thought about Jack. I wonder how he'll react to this.

Thanks Vick: this is very interesting.
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:28 am ]
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Jack doesn't seem to be aware of what's going on... Thanks for the update :-)
Author:  chris84 [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 4:32 pm ]
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Thanks for the update :D.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:25 pm ]
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I hope that they tell Jack soon - if Jem knows of his feelings, it seems most unfair not to tell him. And I'm not sure that Jem should be leading the case anyway, with all of the ethics around relations and things.

Thankyou!
Author:  Abi [ Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:30 pm ]
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Also wondering how this will affect Jack. And what's going to happen to Joey....
Author:  Vick [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:39 am ]
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Jack knows his feelings for Jo, but I have no idea if Jem knows yet :roll:

As Madge drew her sister into the house, she was acutely aware of the conversation she had just had with her husband over the telephone.

“She’s tired out, Madge. Can you make sure she goes straight to bed and doesn’t go anywhere near any of the children or Robin. You may sit with her for a while, but it will be best if she sleeps. Try not to let her brood, though. I have a few things to do here and I’m on duty tonight, so I’ll see you in the morning.” With that, he had rung off abruptly and Madge had barely replaced the receiver when she heard the sound of a car stopping outside. Once Jo was inside, she helped her out of her coat.

“I hear you’ve had a bit of a trying day again Joey.” Madge spoke softly to her sister as she led her towards the stairs and up towards Jo’s bedroom.

Jo just nodded. If truth be told, she was exhausted. It seemed like such a long time since breakfast that morning, though it was barely six hours ago. Madge helped her to undress and tucked her under the covers for the second time in two days.

“Would you like me to sit with you for a while?” she asked, still in that same gentle tone.

Jo shook her head. “I’m so tired I feel as if I could sleep for a week,” she said, simply. “If I’m awake later on, then yes please. I don’t think I can face being awake on my own.”

“I’ll check in on you after Abendessen and if you are awake then, I’ll happily sit with you a while.” Madge bent down and kissed her sister, before leaving the room, turning the light out as she went.

Jo lay staring into the darkness for a few minutes, before she realised she was crying silently. All the stress of hiding her problems over the past few weeks had taken their toll on her and she found that now she had started, she couldn’t stop. She rolled over and, burying her head into her pillow, cried out all her troubles. Thus, when, after Abendessen, Madge came to check on her sister, she found her in an exhausted sleep, tearstains covering her face. She pulled the covers closer around her sister and left the room as quietly as she had entered.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:43 am ]
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Poor Jo, and it's a lot for Madge to cope with when she's got so many young children at Die Rosen too.
Author:  Bryony [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:48 am ]
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Thank you Vick this is great, if harrowing. I've also got the tissues handy - I always cry when people are ill at the CS, even when EBD's at her least convincing/ most melodramatic. Sniffling in anticipation of your next update...
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:23 am ]
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Poor all of them! This is so difficult. Thanks :-)
Author:  chris84 [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:49 am ]
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Thank you, this is so sad but also so well written. :)
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 3:19 pm ]
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Thank you Vicky. How old is Jo in these episodes?
Author:  Abi [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:13 pm ]
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Poor Joey and all of them. :( Thanks for this, Vick.
Author:  jayj [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:27 pm ]
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Poor Jo! This looks like it's going to be tough for them all.

Thanks!
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:50 pm ]
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Oh dear.

I love a really harrowing story. The more weeps the better!
Author:  Vick [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:44 am ]
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Thanks for all your comments.

I have Jo at 18 and has left school, hence why she didn't get caught by Matron! :lol:

Meanwhile, back in his office at the Sanatorium, Jem was busy with some patient records, when a knock came at his door. At his answering call, the nurse from the X-ray department entered and handed him a large envelope.

“The developed films from your one thirty appointment, doctor.” She said, before turning on her heel and leaving as rapidly as she had entered.

“Thank you.” He replied and placed them on top of his to do pile before turning back to the papers spread across his desk. He quickly tidied them away into a large manila file and swapped it for the envelope he had just been given. After ringing the kitchen and asking for some coffee, he got up from his seat and stretched. Another knock at the door heralded a maid with the requested coffee and some biscuits, which he thanked her for and, after shutting the door firmly behind her turned back to his desk.

He hurriedly slid the films out, then picked them up slowly and took them over to the light to study them. Eventually, he placed them back into the envelope and sat down heavily, heaving a large sigh.

“How am I going to tell them?” he thought out loud to himself. He rested his elbows on the desk in front of him and put his head in his hands. He had had to break this news to many people before, but this time it wasn’t going to be the same. He sat there for some time, unaware of the noise outside his office door, trying to work out the best way to break the news.

There was a sudden knock on the door and then it opened to reveal another of the doctors who worked alongside him. Jem put his thoughts to one side and turned his attention to other things which he needed to do whilst on duty.

Towards the end of his shift, his thoughts turned back to those X-rays sitting on his desk and he realised he needed to get a room ready for his newest patient. Calling a nurse who happened to be passing, he requested her to ensure one of the single rooms would be ready by morning, before heading back to his office once more and the task of starting a new patient file for Miss Josephine Bettany.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:52 am ]
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Poor Jem: this is so hard for him. He needs to get one of the others - not Jack - involved.

Thanks, Vick: this could so easily have happened.
Author:  jayj [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:01 am ]
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*wibbles* but it's all going to be ok, isn't it? I mean, Jem's meant to be a superherodoctor, scourge of all known illnesses, isn't he? *getting desperate* isn't he?
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 12:15 pm ]
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Poor Jem - this must be so difficult for him but surely he won't be treating her? Thanks :-)
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 2:45 pm ]
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Thanks for giving us Jo's age. Jen could care for Jo as she is not directly related to him. The San in the Tyrol seemed to share the care of individual patients between the doctors depending on who was on duty rather than caring for the same patients each day.

Thanks for the update.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:49 pm ]
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I've just had two updates to catch up on, and it still isn't looking like good news! Please let it have a happy ending!

Thankyou!
Author:  JS [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:19 pm ]
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Here's hoping she responds well to treatment - poor all of them :(
Author:  Chloe15 [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:43 pm ]
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Thanks for the update.It doesn't look as if it's going to turn out well.
Author:  Abi [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:47 pm ]
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It'll be interesting to see how this changes what happens. Thanks Vick.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:31 pm ]
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Thanks Vick, this is really good and am enjoying (if thats the right word) the alternative with Jo
Author:  Vick [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:09 am ]
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Thank you for your comments.

Pauline, I figured that's how they arranged the care as well.

Here's some more as I'm waiting for my fry up to be cooked :lol:

Early the next morning saw Jem handing over to Jack Maynard. “We have a new patient arriving later this morning,” he said, wearily.

“Oh?” Jack looked inquiringly at Jem. He knew that no one had been referred from elsewhere lately, which meant they must be local.

“Yes, I will be bringing her over myself a little later. You’d better have a look at these as we’ll need to conduct further tests when she arrives. I have asked a nurse to make sure one of the single rooms is ready.” With those remarks, Jem handed Jack the envelope with the X-rays in and a new patient file, grabbed his things and left abruptly. Jack left to go to his own office, closing the door behind him.

Once Jack was seated at his own desk, he looked at the file and envelope he had been given and was shocked to read the name on the front of them. He stared straight ahead for a few moments, trying to gather his thoughts which had been scattered by that name. Then he opened the file and the envelope and began to study the contents carefully. What he read explained why Jo had been avoiding him lately and had always been too busy to come for a walk, something she had always been happy to do before. Once he had finished reading, he then went to check which room had been made ready for her before going off to do his rounds.

Jem was walking briskly home. It was a cold morning and he had no wish to hang around, but as he approached Die Rosen he found his footsteps slowing down. He knew that he was bringing bad news which was going to affect everyone in the household, himself included. Eventually, he reached the front door and entered quietly. After removing his things, he went upstairs to check whether anyone was awake yet, despite the early hour. He found the pretty room he shared with Madge was vacant, so crossed the corridor and tapped on the door to Jo’s room, certain that he would find his wife sitting with her sister. He was correct. As he peered round the door, he could see her fast asleep in a comfortable chair in the corner, a blanket wrapped around her. Jo was awake though and she nodded to him in welcome. Jem returned the nod and indicated that he would go and fetch some coffee for them, before withdrawing his head and departing to the kitchen to see if Marie was up and could provide a tray for them. He returned twenty minutes later and quietly bade Jo to eat some of the food on it. After pulling a face at him, Jo did as she was told and managed a small breakfast before turning to her brother-in-law.
Author:  Alison H [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:42 am ]
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I'm wondering how much Madge realises. This is going to be very hard for her too.
Author:  Elbee [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 12/2/11
This is so sad. Thank you, Vick.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:36 pm ]
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Madge's behaviour seems to reflect that she knows something. Poor Jack though, puzzled as he was by Jo the previous day he had no warning.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:04 pm ]
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I do think that Jack could have been given a little more warning. Poor all of them!

Thankyou - this is so heart rending.
Author:  chris84 [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:17 pm ]
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Thank you for the update.
Author:  Abi [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:20 pm ]
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Also feeling very sorry for Jack, though I can see why Jem would have found it difficult to tell him in person. So hard for all of them. :(
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:28 pm ]
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Thank you Vick
Author:  shesings [ Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:08 pm ]
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Oh no! This is gripping but it brings back some nasty memories. :(
Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:56 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 12/2/11
I feel I must go and dig out my copy of The Plague and I so to be sure I'm up with the latest in TB treatment
Author:  Vick [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:59 am ]
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The Plague and I is my main source of research, Miss Di :oops: It's also a very good book.

“Well?” was all she said. Jem looked carefully at her, considering his answer.

“How long has Madge been there?” he asked in reply.

“All night,” Jo replied in an undertone. “I don’t know what time she came in, but when I woke up around midnight, she was there.” At this moment, Madge roused and stretched out, before looking to the bed. Upon seeing her sister awake and her husband there, she made an effort to get up, but found her leg had pins and needles from being in the same position for so long.

“Ouch!” she said as she managed to stand up and limp across the room to where her husband was sitting. Jem smiled at her sympathetically, before pouring her a cup of coffee from the jug and gesturing for her to sit down.

“Well?” Jo said again. Jem looked at them both, wishing he didn’t have to do this, but he knew that the sooner he got Jo to the Sanatorium, the better. He had no wish to prolong her stay there, but he knew further tests were necessary if he was to have a full diagnosis. He took a deep breath.

“I’m afraid it’s not good news,” he sad slowly to them. “Your X-rays showed some shadows on your right lung.”

“What does that mean?” Jo asked hesitantly.

“It means that you may have tuberculosis,” he replied.

“May?”

“I need to do further tests, but it doesn’t look good, Jo. I’m going to admit you to the Sanatorium whilst they are done.” Jo looked away as the enormity of what her brother-in-law had just said started to sink in. Madge held her hand and squeezed it gently. She had dreaded this day happening for so many years now, and when it had finally come, words failed her. She wanted to shout out and ask why. Why now, after so many years? So many years of carefully watching over her little sister, making sure she had the best possible care. Yet it had still happened. A movement brought her back to her senses. Jem had stood up and was preparing to leave the room. She suddenly noticed how tired he looked and remembered that he had been on duty all night.

“I need to go and get some sleep, but when I wake up, I need you to be ready to come with me.” Jo didn’t answer, too wrapped up in her own thoughts to hear.

“I’ll make sure she’s ready Jem,” Madge replied. Jem beckoned her out of the room. “I’ll just go and get us some fresh coffee, Joey.” Once she had closed the door behind her, Jem drew her into their room.

“Don’t stay away too long. She’s going to need you soon. Please pack as many warm clothes as you can for her and have her dressed and ready in her room by eleven o’clock.” He then gave her a hug and a kiss before turning to the bed. Madge just nodded mutely and went off in search of coffee, whilst her husband climbed into bed and fell asleep.
Author:  cestina [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:02 pm ]
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Oh how sad. Poor Madge. This is beautifully written Vick, it has absolutely the right EBD feel to it.

I love The Plague and I - and horrid though the sanatorium procedures are it feels such a safe place to be. I'm glad it's your chief source book!
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:13 pm ]
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Thanks Vick. This is so well written and catches the problems that TB brought to families before the Second World War.
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:23 pm ]
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This is so sad :( .
Author:  roversgirl [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 13/2/11
Just caught up on two updates. The poor family. I guess she won't even really be able to see the Robin? Thanks :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:05 pm ]
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This is so sad, but I like that Jem knows to give Madge something to do - I think that this will probably help her to come to terms with what she's just heard.

Thankyou!
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:34 am ]
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You're doing a great job Vick and I really appreciate your regular updates!
Author:  Vick [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:41 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 13/2/11
Thank you for all your comments.

May need a tissue warning with this post :D

Madge busied herself with packing a suitcase for Jo, who was still sitting staring at the wall, no emotion showing on her face. Madge glanced over towards her sister occasionally as she removed the warmest garments she could find from the wardrobe, folding them swiftly and placing them into the case on the floor. She wanted to say something – anything - which would break the calm in the room.

Jo was struggling to keep herself calm. The thoughts wouldn’t stop whizzing around inside her head. She knew what Jem had meant when he told her he was admitting her to the Sanatorium. She had tuberculosis. She didn’t need any more tests to know what the outcome was. She would be in that Sanatorium for the rest of her life, she thought. She had heard of enough people dying there, that she didn’t know if she could face going through with it. She wouldn’t be allowed to see Robin, David, Peggy, Rix, Sybil, Primula…

At this point she let out a strangled sob. Madge was at her side immediately, cradling her in her arms as the tears started to take hold and she found she could not stop crying. Eventually, they started to slow. Jo pulled herself upright and looked at her sister.

“Th-thank you,” she managed to gasp out. Madge passed Jo the glass of water from the bedside cabinet and she drank it slowly. Madge glanced at her watch.

“Time to get ready,” she said, gently. “Go and have a wash, whilst I finish packing your case. I’ll ask Marie for some coffee and something to eat as well.” Jo nodded, and flung back the covers. She hugged her sister and made her slow way to the bathroom.

At eleven o’clock, Jo was dressed and her case was packed ready for the short trip to the Sanatorium. She was sitting alone in her bedroom, in the comfortable chair. She heard a tap on the door, and then it opened to reveal Jem. He came in and picked up her case.

“Ready, Jo?” he asked. Jo just nodded mutely. Jem started across the room to help her, but she shook her head at him, standing up herself. He looked carefully at her and, realising that she was determined not to be helped, turned and headed down to the car. He stowed the case in the boot and waited for Jo to reach him.

Madge was waiting at the bottom of the stairs and gave her sister another hug when she reached her.

“I’ll visit soon, Joey. Just take care of yourself and concentrate on getting yourself better as soon as you can,” she whispered in her ear.

“I’ll try Madge,” was all she said, before turning and heading slowly towards Jem and the waiting car.
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:54 am ]
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:cry: - Glad you warned us in advance about needing tissues!
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:08 am ]
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Poor Joey. Thanks :-)
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 11:11 am ]
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Poor Madge as well. I hope that Joey can be treated. Thanks for the update.
Author:  JS [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:10 pm ]
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Thanks Vick. I don't know the source book, but I'm hoping that there are reasonable grounds for optimism. Feel very sorry for Jack, who presumably hasn't told anyone what Joey means to him.
Author:  Honor [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:06 pm ]
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This is beautifully written. Thanks Vick. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author:  chris84 [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:28 pm ]
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Thank you for the update. :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:41 pm ]
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Thankyou for the update and the warning!
Author:  Vick [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:44 am ]
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Thank you for all your comments.

Have some more... :D

Once they were in the car, Jem drove slowly towards the Sanatorium. Neither one felt inclined to talk, both lost in their own thoughts. When they arrived, Jem parked the car in his usual spot near to the entrance, before getting out and removing Jo’s case from the boot. Jo climbed out of the car and looked at the Sanatorium. It was a long low building, stretching out from the main entrance in the middle. Balconies ran along the south side of the building, and she could see many patients were sitting out, well wrapped up against the cold. The gardens were dotted with small summer houses, where patients who were well enough to be up, could go and sit during the day, thus alleviating the boredom of being in the same place all the time.

A movement at the entrance caught her eye at this point. Giving herself a mental shake, she looked up to see a nurse waiting to show her to her room. Jem had gone on ahead, whilst the nurse escorted her slowly along, pointing out the Speisesaal and the recreation room as they went. Eventually, they reached the room she was to occupy, at least until a full diagnosis had been obtained and they knew how bad her lungs were. The room was large enough to hold a single bed, a small combination wardrobe, a bedside cabinet, a table and two chairs. There were large windows along one end and a door which opened out onto the balcony. Another door led to a private bathroom.

“I’ll leave you to settle in now, Jo,” Jem said. “Nurse will go through your registration forms with you. I’ll come back later on to see how you’re getting on.” With that, he turned on his heel and left quickly before Jo had chance to speak.

“I’ll go and get those forms Doctor Russell was speaking of, whilst you start to unpack,” Nurse said to Jo. Then, she too, left the room. Jo was left standing in the middle of the room. She sighed and turned to her case.

“May as well unpack then,” she said out loud to herself, before opening her case and removing the garments her sister had packed for her. She had just about finished, when Nurse returned with the forms.

“I’m sorry I took so long,” she apologised. “Please sit down and we’ll go through these.” She then took a pen from her pocket and sat in one of the chairs, ready for filling out the form she had placed on the table. Jo made herself comfortable in the other chair.

“Let’s see. I have down here that your name is Josephine Mary Bettany and that you are eighteen years old. Is that correct?”

“Yes,” Jo replied.

“The address I have is Die Rosen, here on the Sonnalpe?”

“Correct.”

“Next of kin, Mrs M Russell at the same address?” Jo nodded. This carried on until all the details on the form had been checked. Jo was starting to tire now and tried to stifle a yawn. Nurse noticed, however.

“That’s all, for now. It’s time you had a rest.” With that, Nurse stood up and, picking up her paperwork, departed, closing the door softly behind her. Jo changed into her pyjamas and dived under the bedclothes, where she quickly fell asleep. Normally a light sleeper, she never even heard Jem when he came in to check how she was.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:04 am ]
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Thanks Vick. We don't hear much about what happens at the San and this is really interesting.
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:25 pm ]
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I agree with Alison - it is very interesting to see how the San works. Thanks :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:38 pm ]
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Thankyou. There's some fascinating detail here, but it's all so sad at the same time. Oh please make it a happy ending!
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:41 pm ]
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Thanks Vick, Jo is tiring very quickly, it looks as if Jem and Jack are right to be concerned.
Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:53 am ]
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Ulp. Sniff.

Dear, so sad and it is good to see how the san works
Author:  Vick [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:51 am ]
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Thank you for your comments.

Just a quick note: I have opted for the TB test we all had here in the UK, which is the 6 needles in a circle. From what I can gather, in the US they have always used the mantoux test, which is different. I figured that as Jem is British, he would use British methods.

Thinking back to when I had my TB jab at 12, I remember everyone at school thinking that it would be a good idea to try & scratch it to make it go red so you wouldn't have to have the actual jab, rumours being that it was really horrible. Having the knowledge I do now, what a bad idea that was!

Apologies for any medical inaccuracies, from now on. :roll:

It was about half past two when she finally woke up again, having been disturbed by something. It turned out to be Jem and Jack, both dragging the chairs up to the bed, so that they could talk to her. She was still groggy from sleep and, at first, wondered why they were both in her bedroom at Die Rosen. As her senses started to return, she realised that she wasn’t there anymore, but was now a patient in the Sanatorium.

“How are you feeling Jo?” Jack asked, kindly.

“Tired still,” she replied. She tried to sit up, but found it a struggle. Both men came to her aid, and helped to make her comfortable, with a wrap over her shoulders and plenty of pillows behind her. Jem smiled at her as he sat back down in a chair.

“First things first,” he said. “We need to give you a test to confirm what yesterday’s X-rays showed.” Jack produced a syringe containing six small needles, and proceeded to give a Jo an injection in her left forearm. Once done, he sat back down.

“That will probably turn red in the next couple of days,” he said. “It tells us if you have tuberculosis or not.”

“You should rest as much as you can Jo,” Jem added. “That’s the best thing you can do for now. Once we know the results of that injection, we’ll be able to work out a regime specifically for you. There is a chair out on your balcony too. Please remember to wrap up warm if you go out there at all, and to take a blanket to cover you.” At this moment, Nurse came in with a small tray.

“Just a bit of something, as you missed Mittagessen,” she said, placing it on the bedside cabinet. Jo pulled a face, but under the gaze of both doctors, she managed a small bread twist and a cup of coffee. Once she had finished, Jem stood up to leave.

“I have an appointment in a few minutes,” he said as he returned the chair to the table. I’ll pop in before I leave though.” Then he was gone, leaving Jack alone with her.

“You should have said something Joey,” he said. “If you didn’t want to tell Jem, you could have said something to me, you know. I’m not that scary, am I?” Jo shook her head. She had missed Jack’s company over the past few weeks, but she had been so worried about ending up where she now was that even that sacrifice had seemed a good idea at the time.

“You know,” he continued, conversationally, “I’m willing to bet that you won’t be here as long as you think you will be.” Jo, remembering her thoughts from earlier in the morning, looked guilty.

“Are you sure?” she asked.

“Sure,” he replied. “Our medical knowledge here is completely up to date, and luckily, you’ve been caught early. It would have been earlier, if you’d told us, though.” Tears formed in Joey’s eyes. She knew what he meant, however kindly he tried to word it. Jack noticed this and wished he could bite back those last words, but he also believed in talking frankly to people about their illness.

“Don’t fret about it, Joey,” he said, touching her hand. She didn’t pull away, something she would normally have done. “What’s past is past and now we have to concentrate on getting you back to full health, as quickly as possible. Jem was right, when he said to get as much rest as you can. It’s the best thing for you. Let me help you to lie back down and then I have to go as I’m technically still on duty.” He stood up and, removing the pillows from behind her, helped her to lie back down and pulled the covers over her.

“I’ll call in to say goodbye when I finish,” he said, then replaced the chair and left her to sleep.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:02 am ]
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Two people in our year of around 110 kids had a bad reaction to the TB jab and ended up on antibiotics. Guess who was one of them :roll: .

Hope that Jack's optimism is justified.
Author:  keren [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 10:16 am ]
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Like those Sci Fi where you have the same result in the end...

here the patient can fall in love with the dr
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 10:22 am ]
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I was lucky that I only had yearly x-rays after my jab, though my brother ended up with it from working up north with the aborigines where it's more common and had 2 years of ABs
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:50 pm ]
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I had the mantoux at School (in UK) and one of my class mates was positive and disappeared to receive treatment. I had both mantoux and the six needle skin test at various times in my nursing career as we were tested every time we changed jobs. Fortunately my BCG took first time as I worked on a isolation ward with children with TB during training in the sixties.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:58 pm ]
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Thankyou for the update - I hope that Jack is right and she can get better!
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 7:17 pm ]
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Jack is very sweet - hope he's right in being optimistic though! Thanks :-)
Author:  Vick [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:34 am ]
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Jo slept until Nurse brought her a tray in at Abendessen. She had not heard either Jem or Jack look in on her during the afternoon. Nurse put the tray down on the table and asked Jo where she would like to eat it.

“At the table, please,” Jo replied. Nurse came over and helped Jo out of bed and into her dressing gown and slippers, before departing to continue her rounds. Jo found that she was actually quite hungry and managed to eat about half of the meal. When she had had enough, she then went to the bathroom to have a wash, before climbing back into bed with a book Madge had tucked into the case for her.

This was how Jem found her when he entered half an hour later. She looked up at him and even managed a small smile in welcome. He noticed the half eaten meal on the table and commented on it.

“You’ve eaten quite a bit there, Jo,” he said, as he came in and sat down in a chair. Jo put her book onto the bedside cabinet before turning to him.

“It must have been all that sleep I’ve had today.” Jem just smiled. She certainly seemed a lot happier than when he had previously spoken to her.

“May I have a look at your arm?” he asked. Jo held her left arm out and Jem examined the mark, which was already beginning to turn red. He made no comment and let her drop her hand back into her lap. “What are you reading?”

“Oh, just something Madge packed for me. I’m grateful for it; at least it keeps my mind occupied,” she answered. “In fact, it’s given me an idea. Could you give me a pen and a sheaf of paper?”

“Of course, I’ll bring some next time I come in. Now, though, I think it’s time you went to sleep again. Its nine o’clock now.” Jem stood up at this and helped Jo to take her dressing gown off, before tucking her into bed. “Good night Joey.”

“Good night Jem. And thank you.” Jo replied sleepily. Jem just smiled at her, before leaving the room, turning the light out on the way.

The next morning, Jo was woken by a nurse bringing in her Früstück. She helped her to sit up, before placing the tray across her knee. She then proceeded to remove the bag of used tissues from the bedside, replacing it with an empty one, another pile of tissues and an empty, lidded jar. Her water jug was refilled and the nurse left.

Just as Jo had finished, another nurse came in to remove the tray. Placing a thermometer into her mouth she then departed, to return five minutes later dragging a pair of scales. She removed the thermometer and noted Jo’s temperature on a chart, before informing her that she was to be weighed.

“The doctor will be along later to take some blood and your sputum jar,” she said. At Jo’s questioning look, she continued, “Make sure you spit into a jar every day.” Jo nodded. Once she had been weighed, the nurse went, leaving Jo alone again. She coughed and filled her sputum jar, fastening the top on tightly, before going into the bathroom for a wash. After she had dressed, she wrapped up warmly, picked up a blanket and went out onto the balcony. It was a cold morning, but not windy. She sat down on the lounger and, after wrapping herself up in the blanket, allowed her mind to wander.

She was still there when Jem entered the room an hour later. He came out onto the balcony and stood beside her. Noting her faraway look, he was loath to disturb her, but he was a busy man and still had other patients to see. He tapped her lightly on the shoulder and she jumped, not having heard him arrive. He smiled at her and then spoke.

“Come back inside now Jo. I need to do a blood test and it’s easier to do it inside.” He helped her to untangle herself from the blanket and aided her back into the room. He sat her down on a chair so she could rest her arm on the table, and then proceed to take the samples he needed. He also had a close inspection of the now hard red bump on her forearm. Gathering his things together, he picked the jar up off the bedside cabinet and turned to leave.

“I’ll get these down to the lab and then we’ll be able to decide what the best course of action is,” he said. “Go back to bed now, Jo. I’ll come back later, when I have the results.” With that instruction he left the room. Jo realised she was tired again, and climbed back into bed, falling asleep quickly.

Jem had deposited the blood and sputum jar at the lab. He asked the technician to let him have the results as soon as possible, before continuing on his rounds. When he had finished, he returned to his office. The technician brought the results to him there a few hours later. Jem rang for some coffee and then opened the envelope he had been given. What he read made him sigh out loud, before he turned to the telephone and asked Jack Maynard to come to his office.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:59 am ]
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Oh dear :( .
Author:  JS [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:00 am ]
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I think this is really nicely written and I'm learning a lot too. Thanks Vick.
Author:  shesings [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:07 am ]
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Oohhh Nooooooooo! Very well written, though! :D
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 17/2/11
Ack! Come back!
Author:  Liz K [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 17/2/11
Ooooohhhhh, please, please, Vick, don't keep us waiting too long!

Thank you.
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 17/2/11
Oh dear :-( This is very well-written and clearly explained. Thanks :-)
Author:  chris84 [ Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 17/2/11
This is very sad but very intersting. Thank you.
Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 17/2/11
I have to confess just the phrase "Sputum Jar" makes me feel ill.

Poor Joey
Author:  Vick [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 17/2/11
*slips quietly in, leaves large box of tissues and another update, before legging it as fast as she can*

It was late afternoon, when the doctors came to see Jo. She was curled up in bed, reading, when they dragged chairs up and sat down on either side of her. Neither of them was smiling and she started to fear the worst. The thoughts about dying started to crowd back into her mind and she started to tremble.

Jem spoke. “Jo, you have pulmonary tuberculosis.” Jo’s trembling increased. “Luckily, we’ve caught it early.”

“Wh-what happens now?” Jo managed to ask.

“Complete bed rest,” Jem answered shortly. At Jo’s questioning look, he continued on. “That means you will be laid in bed for at least the next month. No reading, writing, talking unless necessary, laughing or singing.” Tears started to form in Jo’s eyes as the enormity of this sank in.

Jack reached out and squeezed her hand. “Would you like to stay on in this room Jo, or would you prefer to share with someone?” Jo didn’t answer. She was too busy trying to fight the urge to cry, but this just caused her to start coughing. Jack silently handed her a tissue to cover her mouth with. When she stopped, they helped her to lie down and pulled the covers over her. Jo’s black lashes swept over her pale white cheeks and she fell into an exhausted sleep. The two doctors left her quietly and Jack continued on his rounds. Jem paused on his way back towards his office to request a nurse to check on Jo regularly and call him immediately the moment she woke.

Once back in his office, Jem dropped into his chair behind the desk. He glanced at the clock and wished he was about to go off duty. He desperately wanted to be at home with his wife, but he knew he had to make sure Jo was all right first. Madge would be worried if he didn’t. He loved his wife and desperately wanted to help her carry this burden, but he knew how close the two sisters were, despite the twelve years age difference. If he went straight home to tell her the news, she would want to know how Jo had taken it and how she was. He couldn’t tell her that he didn’t know. She would immediately try to come and be with her sister just as she had always been there through past illnesses. This time was different, though. She couldn’t be with her, as that would be risking herself and everyone else in Die Rosen, especially the children in the nursery.

At this point in his thoughts, a knock came at the door. At his call, it opened and a nurse entered to inform him that Jo had just woken up. He jumped up and headed straight there, thanking the nurse on his way past. He entered quietly and sat down next to her. She had her eyes closed and appeared to be still asleep.

“Joey?” he asked, quietly. Jo’s eyes opened and looked directly at him.

“Is it true Jem?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.

“Yes, I’m afraid it is Jo,” he answered. Jo closed her eyes again, unable to look at her brother-in-law. Jem waited. He knew she would have more questions, but she needed time to formulate them.

“What do I do now?” she ventured, not opening her eyes.

“You lay as quietly as possible to allow your lungs to rest.”

“What about eating?”

“Someone will come in to assist you to sit up to eat your meals. You are not to try to do anything.” Jo just nodded.

“Please may I see my sister?” Jem was expecting this question.

“Not at the moment,” he answered, softly. “You will be allowed a visitor twice a week at first, but next visiting isn’t until Wednesday afternoon. I promise she will come then.” Tears welled up in Jo’s eyes again. “Please don’t cry again, Joey. You need to be strong now and shoulder this burden. You aren’t alone, and I hope you never will be, but you have to have faith that you will get through this and I’m sure you will do so.”

“Th-thank you,” she managed to say. Jem smiled at her. He was about to say something else, when a nurse came in with a tray. Jem took it from her and told her he would help the patient tonight. He placed the tray on the table before turning back to the bed. He quickly helped Jo to sit up and placed the tray in front of her.

“The first thing I want you to do is to try and eat as much as possible at each meal. You need to eat well in order for you to get well.” Jo nodded, and obediently ate as much as she could, which was still only half of the small meal there. When she had finished Jem removed the tray and proceeded to take her temperature again, before helping her to lie back down.

“I have to go now,” he said. “Get some more sleep. The more you sleep, the better your lungs rest.” He then stood up and departed. Retrieving his coat and bag from his office, he headed towards the car and home. He passed Jack Maynard in the entrance hall and, pausing only to tell him he had spoken to Jo again and she was a lot calmer now, headed out into the night.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
Thanks, Vick: this is a side of things which EBD never shows us.
Author:  Chatelaine [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 11:41 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
Poor Joey! My first thought was "How will she cope with no reading for a month?" because that's what I would find hardest to bear.

Jem is lovely in this - I think if EBD hadn't let her "Doctors are gods" obsession take over, she could have made him more bearable. Hope the prognosis ends up being better than the diagnosis: I'm pinning a lot on the "Luckily we've caught it early" comment. . .
Author:  keren [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
A big shame they had not invented audio books them (maybe they did have on records, but who would bring a record player)
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
thanks Vick. Hope Jack sees her regularly and provides her with the company, that Madge is unable to provide.
Perhaps Jack could read to her.
Author:  chris84 [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
Thanks for the update. :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
keren wrote:
A big shame they had not invented audio books them (maybe they did have on records, but who would bring a record player)


My first thought too!

Thankyou for the update, I hope that she can fight this.
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
oh poor Jo - I'm also hoping Jack will be able to make things easier. Thanks :-)
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
Thanks, am really sympathising over the do nothing for a month but then Joey is really unwell and won't have the energy most of the time anyway
Author:  Vick [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:43 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/2/11
Thanks for the comments. Just a short update today :lol:

When Jack checked on Jo just before dawn, he found she was awake. He came and sat down where she could see him in the gloom.

“Penny for them,” he said. Jo managed a half-smile.

“Don’t think they’re worth that much,” she replied, before lapsing back into contemplation of the wall behind him.

“What is it that’s bothering you?” Jack tried again. He could tell she was worrying over something and was determined to get to the bottom of it. Jo didn’t reply. If truth be told, she wasn’t sure how to. She reached for a tissue and cleared her throat, before disposing of it in the bag provided. Jack waited patiently. Eventually, she spoke.

“I don’t know if I can do this.”

“Do what?” he asked.

“This. Lying here. I feel as if… as if I should be doing something, but I don’t know what. I just feel so… useless. And stupid. I know I should have said something, but I didn’t and look where it’s landed me. Stuck in here, not allowed to do anything at all, not allowed to see my sister or Robin. The nursery folk will forget who Auntie Jo is…” Jo gulped, tears threatening to overcome her.

“Oh, Joey.” He placed a hand on hers. “Don’t be so silly. You’re neither useless, nor stupid. Yes, you’re stuck in here for now, but things will improve. You just have to give it time and to learn to be patient.” A voice could be heard in the corridor asking for him. “I have to go, someone needs me.” He stood up, feeling in his pocket as he did so. “Here. Take this. It may help you during your time here.” He dropped something into Jo’s hand and left in a hurry. Jo looked at it and realised that it was a rosary. She stared at it for a few minutes then, closing her hand over it, she rolled over in bed and finally fell asleep properly, only waking when Früstück was brought in.
Author:  Bryony [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:02 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
:o Not the carved wooden rosary Jack has used ever since he was a small boy, as met in Highland Twins? Well, she'll have to marry him now. If she pulls through...

Thanks vick, this is utterly enthralling. Please make her get better!
Author:  Alison H [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
That was sweet of Jack.
Author:  Abi [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
I've just caught up on loads of this. Poor Joey; all things considered, I think she's being really brave. She must be so scared... and I wonder how all the people at home are coping? Thanks Vick, this makes for very powerful reading.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
How lovely of Jack to give Joey the rosary. She was unlikely to have her own, but would know how to use it from Frieda, Marie and Simone. I hope it allows her to pray and gain the courage and peace she needs to deal with the long period of boredom she is facing. I too hope she recovers and marries Jack.

Thank for the updates.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
Eep, that has given me a dreadful thought - presumably the war will still be coming, and can't be far off now? And if anything were to threaten Joey's recovery...

I think I'll start constructing a little shelter we can all hide in until we know that she's better again. Because she will be. Won't she?

*brings biscuits to the wibble shelter*
Author:  Minim [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 7:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
*goes to wibble shelter with chocolate*
Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 2:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
No reading??? Poor Joey, that's even worse than no talking.
Author:  Karry [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 2:59 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
My dad was diagnosed with pulminary TB in the early 1950s. He was a psychiatric nurse in a Nottinghamshire asylum (the correct term at the time), nursing TB patients. He spent 2 years in the same hospital he had nursed in. I was born 2 years after he was declared cured, but stiull had the BCG vaccination at the age of 6 weeks! I had the classic 6 needle test at 11, as my parents wanted to make sure the BCG had taken!
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 6:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
Thanks Vick
Author:  Vick [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 10:16 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/2/11
Thanks for all your comments.

A longer update for you today. Don't know when I'll get on to post tomorrow as we are out tonight and staying over at the in-laws. :D

The next few days passed slowly for Jo. She found that she was sleeping a lot and the quiet seemed to help her to relax a little. Both Jem and Jack came to check on her regularly when they were on duty, but neither stayed for long, having other patients to see. Eventually, Wednesday arrived and Jo woke early, the anticipation of seeing her sister for the first time since she had been brought to the Sanatorium making her restless. When Nurse took her temperature after Früstück it was slightly up. Nurse noticed that she looked excitable and resolved to inform one of the doctors.

An hour later, Jem walked into the room. He looked at his sister-in-law and could see she was slightly flushed. He knew she was looking forward to seeing her sister, but he also knew that she shouldn’t have any excitement which could affect her recovery.

“Jo, if you don’t calm down and continue to rest, I won’t allow Madge to come and visit you this afternoon,” he said, abruptly. Jo turned horrified eyes on him.

“Oh, Jem, you can’t do that,” she gasped.

“Yes I can, and I will if you don’t calm down.” Jem sat down and continued in a quieter voice, “You need to rest, Jo. If you’re excited, you aren’t resting and I can’t allow visitors.” Jo looked at him and realised he meant every word. She stayed silent.

“That’s better.” He smiled at her. “If your temperature is lower at Mittagessen, then Madge will be here after rest hours.” He stood back up and turned to leave.

“I’m sorry,” Jo whispered.

“There’s nothing to be sorry about, Jo. These things happen. Now try to rest and get your temperature back down so your sister can visit.” He patted her on the arm and departed to continue his rounds.

When Nurse took Jo’s temperature after Mittagessen, it had gone down a point or two.

“That’s good,” she said as she noted it on the chart. “Do you know if anyone is coming to see you today?”

“My sister,” Jo replied, happily.

“Well, you get some rest now.” Nurse helped her to lie back down and left to see the next patient. Jo lay quietly, staring at the ceiling. The next thing she knew, a very familiar voice was speaking to her and she opened her eyes to see her sister sitting in the chair.

“Hello, Jo. How are you?” Jo smiled at her sister.

“Hello, Madge. It’s nice to see you.” Madge had brought news of all the family as well as notes from Jo’s friends, which she read to her sister. Madge noticed Jo looked wistful as she listened.

“They’re all busy getting on with their lives and I’m stuck in here doing nothing. I can’t even write back to them,” she said, sadly.

“I’m sure they understand why you haven’t written recently,” Madge replied. “You’ll be able to write to them soon.”

“Not that I’ll have anything to write about.” Jo’s mood was starting to darken as she realised just how much she was missing outside the Sanatorium. Before Madge could reply, a bell rang out to indicate that visiting time was over. Jem had told her that she must leave when the bell rang, so she stood up and gathered her things.

“I have to go now, Joey. Take care of yourself and concentrate on getting better.” Jo just nodded. She knew that if she spoke, she would break down. Madge squeezed her hand and left. Once the door was closed, Jo finally let the tears flow. She was still crying when Jem slipped into the room fifteen minutes later. He took one look at his sister-in-law and took matters into his own hands.

“Jo, stop this now, please,” he said. Jo jumped. She made a grab at the tissues as the shock of suddenly hearing his voice made her start to cough, but she missed the pile. Jem hastily passed one to her and stood back. Eventually, she started to calm down and when he was sure she had finished coughing, came forward to pass more tissues to her. When she was finally quiet, he sat down.

“What’s wrong?” he asked, gently.

“I miss everyone,” she managed to say. “I miss home. I miss being able to do things”

“We all miss you being at home too, but you know it has to be this way, for now,” he replied.

“I know, but it doesn’t make it any easier.” Jo’s voice was barely above a whisper.

“It will improve for you, Jo, but you have to trust us when we say you need to rest. Those tears I came into aren’t resting. If you’re going to cry like that every time your sister visits, I shall have to stop her coming.”

“Please don’t do that,” Jo begged. “It’s just that seeing her and hearing everyone’s news reminded me of all the things I’m missing out on. I won’t do it again.”

“We’ll see,” was all he said. The door opened at that moment and a nurse brought in Jo’s Abendessen. Jem helped her to sit up and placed the tray on her knee. “Eat that and then get some sleep,” he said, leaving the room as he spoke.

The next few days passed by in a blur of sleeping and eating. She was rewarded for it by another visitor on Saturday. This time it was Frieda Mensch, who was up visiting her brother and sister-in-law for the weekend. Jem had allowed her to visit as he was sure Frieda would not cause Jo too much excitement. When Jack checked on her afterwards, he was grateful to see that she was just lying quietly; toying with the rosary beads he had given her. She never noticed him as she had her back to the door, so he slipped back out as quietly as he had entered. He smiled to himself as he continued on his way. That she had not just thrown them into a drawer meant a lot to him. He knew he would have to be patient. She had to deal with tuberculosis first and then adapt to being back out in real world before she could even begin to think about what her future held.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 10:25 am ]
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Pleased that they allowed Frieda to visit and Jack was gorgeous at the end. Thanks Vick.
Author:  jayj [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 11:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 20/2/11
Crikey, it seems to be a punishment as much as a cure! But I think Jo's actually quite lucky here - at least she's got the familiar faces of Jem and Jack around, even if she isn't really allowed to see anyone else for long.

Thanks Vick - thought-provoking!
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 3:30 pm ]
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It's good to see Jem in action: we know that he's one of the world's leading TB specialists but we only ever get to see him dosing stressed-out women with sleeping tablets. This is much more like it.
Author:  Abi [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 20/2/11
Jo's really learning some self-control here, and, as Alison said, it's great to see Jem in his element.

Thanks Vick.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:49 pm ]
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I think that this will really help Jo to grow up, she's still very much schoolgirl Joey at the moment, but she's having to learn patience - it's just horrible that it had to happen this way. Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 8:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 20/2/11
Just caught up on a few updates. I really like the way you're writing the characters - if she gets through, this could be the making of Joey. Thanks :-)
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Feb 20, 2011 9:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 20/2/11
Thanks Vick. She really is going to start growing up in all the ways the Robin has had to for years. Am really enjoying it as it all seems so believable
Author:  Vick [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 20/2/11
Thank you for all the comments.

Apologies for late post today, but only got back about half an hour ago. :lol:

As the weeks went by, Jo felt she was in another world. The only things brightening her daily routine were those twice-weekly visits. Her sister visited each Wednesday, and as Jo had promised, she didn’t cry again after she left. Madge had been devastated to hear the state Jo had got herself into after that first visit. She continued to bring news from home, but made sure that it was nothing which would overexcite Jo. On Saturdays, Jo never knew who would be visiting until they turned up, but she looked forward to them, nonetheless. Marie had made it across once, and Juliet and Grizel had also been to visit.

She was lying quietly one morning when Jack came into the room, pushing a wheelchair. “Chest X-ray today,” he said cheerfully. He helped her into her dressing gown and slippers, then into the chair. He set off down the corridors to the X-ray department, where he deposited her in the waiting room.

“Someone will bring you back when you’re done,” he said. Jo was left alone. A nurse came in five minutes later and escorted her to the X-ray room. Once they were finished, Jo was left in the waiting room once more. Eventually, another patient was wheeled in. The nurse left her and proceeded to push Jo back to her room, where she was instructed back into bed. Jo found she was tired and soon fell asleep.

Late next morning, Jack came into the room carrying a book, pen and paper. He was also grinning. Jo looked at him suspiciously.

“Why so happy?” she asked.

“You get time to read and write now,” he said, placing the book on the bedside table and the pen and paper on top of it. “Only thirty minutes a day, mind, so use it wisely.” Jo smiled at him.

“Thank you,” was all she said. Jack smiled again and then left her to it. Jo looked at the book and pen and paper, but decided to leave them until later. Her sister was due to visit this afternoon and she didn’t want to risk losing that privilege. She lay toying with Jack’s rosary, which always seemed to help clear her mind and to rest easier.

After Madge’s visit, she allowed herself to look at the book Jack had brought her. It was a classic she had read before, but anything was better than nothing, so she picked it up and was soon absorbed in it. She reluctantly put the book back down after a couple of chapters, knowing that if she read longer than the allotted time, she would lose the chance to be able to read at all.
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
I'm beginning to understand why Jem was so obsessed with training children to instant obedience, if this was the environment he was working in all the time.
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Pleased Jo can read again. Hope that they find her some new books as well as those she has read before.
Thanks for the update.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
I hope that this is a sign that Joey's getting better!

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Glad Joey's doing as she's told! Thanks :-)
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Hoping that Joey gets better before we hear all the gory details of collapsing one lung :twisted:
Author:  Luisa [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Just read from the beginning. Ouch. Hope she continues to improve
Author:  Storyteller [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
I'm curious - why would reading and writing be thought to be harmful?
Author:  shesings [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Wasn't so much the reading and writing, though movement of the arms was not encouraged, but, at least in the early stages, it was felt that sitting up for any length of time was too tiring and it also constricted the chest.

My father and my brother, who had both been enthusiastic cyclists and footballers, spent long periods lying as still as possible which must have been torture for them.
Author:  Abi [ Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
I'm impressed at how good she's being - keeping to the time she's allowed, not letting herself get too upset. Jack is lovely here. :D
Author:  Vick [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Thank you for your comments. Miss Di, you have anticipated me :lol:

Have a little more.... Again, apologies for any medical errors

The days and weeks moved slowly onwards for Jo. She had another chest X-ray and was rewarded with more time to read and write and was allowed to get up and use the bathroom. One morning, Jem came in to see her.

“Jo, we are going to give you a pneumothorax operation today,” he said.

“What’s that?” Jo asked, worried by the word ‘operation’.

“It is air pumped into your chest cavity to make your lung collapse,” Jem explained. “It will make it easier for your lung to rest and heal.”

“Will it hurt?”

“You may feel a little pain, at first, but otherwise, no, it won’t hurt. Nurse will take you to the operating theatre after Mittagessen, and the doctor on duty down there will do the procedure. When you come back, please lie down and rest properly. If anything feels wrong, inform the nurse immediately.” Jem left Jo alone after that. She tried to rest, but found it almost impossible. She found her brain was too busy swirling thoughts about. Eventually, she felt the rosary under her pillow, and the familiarity of the beads in her fingers managed to lull her to sleep.

After Mittagessen, a nurse came for Jo and wheeled her down to the operating theatre. She was given a local anaesthetic and had a needle inserted into her chest cavity. This was attached to a machine which measured how much air was pumped in. When the doctor was satisfied, he removed the needle from Jo’s side. Jo was returned to her room and assisted into bed, and left to try and sleep.

She slept all afternoon, never hearing anyone until Nurse arrived with a tray at Abendessen. Nurse woke her and helped her to sit up. Afterwards, she was thankful to lie back down again. A little later, Jack came in to check on her.

“How does it feel?” he asked.

“It hurts,” she replied. She felt that even talking took too much breath, so she kept her replies short.

“It’ll get better. The reason it hurts at the moment is because a small part of your lung has attached to the cavity wall. You’ll have a pneumothorax every couple of days for two weeks or so. Each time you have one, the pain will lessen as that part comes away.” Jo didn’t look convinced at this.

She yawned, which caused her pain in that side. “Ouch,” she said. Jack took the hint on both levels.

“I’ll get you some painkillers,” he said. He disappeared, quickly returning with the tablets. Once Jo had taken them, he suggested she get some more sleep. She acquiesced and rolled over onto her good side. Jack turned out the light and left to continue his rounds.

As Jack had predicted, the pain did lessen. After two weeks, she was feeling much happier and she was reduced to having it twice a week. She had another chest X-ray around this time and was given the good news that she would be allowed to sit up for one hour each day.

Jo discovered that she was still not allowed out of bed, and that she had to build up to the hour ten minutes at a time. She grumbled at this, but soon discovered that sitting up for even ten minutes is very tiring when your body is used to being flat.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:05 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/2/11
Thanks Vick - this is really interesting.
Author:  Abi [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/2/11
It is interesting, and I'm starting to feel more hopeful about Joey now.

Thanks Vick. :D
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/2/11
This all looks very positive, so I hope that you aren't misleading us!

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/2/11
This is very informative, thanks!

Quote:
She grumbled at this, but soon discovered that sitting up for even ten minutes is very tiring when your body is used to being flat.
I agree! It's horrible how your strength goes! Thanks :-)
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/2/11
Alison H wrote:
I'm beginning to understand why Jem was so obsessed with training children to instant obedience, if this was the environment he was working in all the time.


I could always understand that from a medical/nursing point of view. One of the hardest things I've found is dealing with patients who won't listen, think they can do what they want and then wonder why they aren't getting better or dying instead. In those cases instant obedience always seemed like a great idea. There's nothing more frustrating than watching a patient die a slow and painful death because they refuse to obey what the doctors and nurses were telling them, especially when their death was completely preventable.

Sorry, I'll get off my soap box. Thanks Vick am really enjoying this and seeing how Joey copes. I'm glad she finds Jack's rosary comforting
Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Feb 22, 2011 10:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/2/11
Thanks Vick I'm really enjoying this and will try not to peek ahead anymore :lol:
Author:  Vick [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:09 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/2/11
Thanks for the comments.

The next couple of parts are a little out of season, but have this bit anyway. :D

One afternoon, a nurse came into the room with a small fir tree wrapped in tinsel. Jo was surprised. She had had no idea Christmas was so close.

“What date is it?” she asked the nurse.

“The twenty third of December,” the nurse replied as she left the room to continue distributing trees and decorations. Jo stared at the tree for a long time. She never heard Jem enter.

“Jo?” he asked. She turned her head towards her brother-in-law, and he saw there were tears in her eyes.

“I didn’t realise it was so close. I haven’t even got anyone presents,” she said, sadly.

“Oh, Jo, don’t be so silly. No one expects presents from you. The best thing you can give us is to keep on improving as you are doing. We don’t want anything else.” Jo shook her head. She wasn’t convinced by this.

“I should at least get things for the nursery folk”

“How do you expect to do that? You’re here and still on bed rest. There isn’t a shop for miles and have you looked outside lately?” He pointed to the whirling snow coming down as if it never meant to stop, before continuing more gently, “The children will understand. They know you are here and that you are busy concentrating on getting better.”

Jo looked thoughtful for a while. Jem waited. He knew she was planning something and he hoped it wasn’t something he was going to have to veto. Eventually, she spoke.

“Jem?”

“Yes?”

“I haven’t had my allowance for a while, have I?” Jem wasn’t expecting this.

“Er, no. It’s being put by at home for you.”

“I’d like you to give what’s there to Vater Johann for the parish, please,”

“Are you sure, Jo? There is three months worth there you know.”

“Yes. I have no use for it whilst I’m in here, do I?” Jo looked determined.

“I’ll have to ask Madge if you may. If she says yes, then I will make sure he gets the money.” Jo looked as if she was about to argue, but Jem refused be drawn any further on the subject. Instead he got up and left the room rather abruptly, leaving Jo to go back to sleep.

He reappeared later on, on his way home. As Jo wasn’t expecting to see him again, she looked up in surprise.

“I’ve spoken to your sister on the phone,” he said. “She said that if that is what you wish to do, then you have her blessing. I’ll pass it on to Vater Johann in the morning.”

“Thank you,” was all Jo said. Jem smiled at her.

“You’ll go far, Jo. The path may be rocky at the moment, but I’m sure it will smooth out for you.” With that comment, he bid her goodnight and left for home.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
That was kind of Jo. It must be very hard for her having to spend Christmas in a sanatorium.
Author:  JS [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:44 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
That's very sweet of Jo. Glad she's making improvements.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:46 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
Thanks Vick, it was a lovely thought. That means she would have spent her birthday in hospital too?
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:41 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
Thanks Vick. I wonder what she will do for the Nursery Folk.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
That was a really nice thought on Jo's part.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:48 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
That was a really lovely gesture - thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
That was nice of Joey. It'll be hard for her, thinking of the festivities at home over Christmas.
Author:  Vick [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 9:27 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/2/11
Thanks for all your comments. :D

When Christmas Day arrived, Jo was woken by the sounds of carols outside her door. She listened quietly, wishing she could join in. Eventually, the carollers moved on along the corridor and Jo was left to contemplate what the day would bring. She didn’t expect to see Jem as she knew he would be at home with everyone, unless he got called out. She was also fairly sure it was Jack’s day off, so didn’t expect him to call in either. Resigning herself to her fate, she picked up her book and started to read.

Jo was absorbed in the story when her door suddenly opened. She glanced up, expecting to see one of the nurses, but instead she saw Jack framed in the doorway. He came quickly in, closing it behind him.

“Happy Christmas, Jo,” he said. Jo just stared at him.

“I thought it was your day off today?” she finally asked.

“It is. I can’t stay long as I don’t want to get caught, but I couldn’t let today pass without bringing you a little something.” He felt in his jacket pocket and produced a small parcel which he dropped into Jo’s lap. She looked at him in surprise.

“Aren’t you going to open it?” he asked. Jo slowly picked it up and began to unwrap it. Inside was a silver necklace. Jo looked at it, tears beginning to form in her eyes.

“I-it’s beautiful,” she managed to say. “I haven’t got anything for you, though.”

“I didn’t expect anything,” he answered, gently. He took the necklace out of the box and fastened it round her neck for her, before passing her a small mirror to admire it. She smiled at him.

“Thank you. Happy Christmas, Jack,” was all she said.

“You’d better put it back in the box for now, where it’ll be safe.” He removed the necklace and handed it back to her so she could replace it in the box, before putting it into her bedside drawer. He then went to the door and, listening carefully for footsteps in the corridor, he smiled at her once more, before slipping back out.

The rest of the day passed quietly for Jo. She managed to enjoy the Christmas dinner she was brought. She wondered what was happening at Die Rosen, and wished she could be there with everyone. She knew it wasn’t possible, but she wanted it all the same.

The next morning, Jem appeared with a bagful of presents for her. Jo smiled at some of the more interestingly-wrapped ones. She could guess that these had come from her nieces and nephews. She slowly unwrapped them all and found that she had a couple of books, a new pen, writing paper and some items of clothing. Finally, only the present from Madge and Jem remained. As she removed the wrapping, she couldn’t stop the tears from falling. Inside, was a framed photograph of everyone at Die Rosen.

“Like it?” Jem asked her. Jo just nodded, too overcome for speech. Jem took it from her and placed it on the table, where she could see it.

“Thank you, Jem,” she managed to say. “How did you know that was the one thing I wanted?”

“It was Madge’s idea, actually,” he confessed. “She knew how much you were missing everyone and thought it would be nice for you to have a photo of us all.” Jem collected the discarded wrappings up and then departed.

Jo used her reading and writing time that day to write thank you notes to everyone. When Jem called in to say goodbye at the end of his shift, he was presented with a pile of envelopes to distribute when he got home.

When she settled down to sleep that night, Jo made sure she left an envelope addressed to Jack propped on the bedside cabinet. She knew he had taken over from Jem, but didn’t expect to see him. Jack checked in on her during his rounds and, on seeing the envelope addressed to him, removed it, slipping it into his jacket pocket to read later.
Author:  Bryony [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:24 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Thank you Vick, this continues to be spellbinding. I want to know what's in the letter!
Author:  Llywela [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Have just read from the beginning - what a fascinating look at what might have been, as well as insight into the work of the San, which EBD never explored.

I love the thought of that photo of all the Die Rosen folk together - perfect gift. :)
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Aww, that was very sweet.
Author:  Chatelaine [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 11:38 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
I like Jack saying Joey should remove the necklace and put it away for safe keeping - neat excuse to get close to her and make innocent physical contact!

Thank you Vick, this is a lovely story, and all the familiar characters in it are so much more believable and likeable than they are in the "real" CS! (Yes, Herr Doktor Russell, I'm looking at you. . . :D )
Author:  marni [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Really enjoying the story Vick. A really good way of meeting the working Jem and Jack. Thank you.
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Loved Jack creeping in under cover to see Joey and her leaving his letter out for him rather than giving it to Jem, thanks Vick.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 6:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
That was nice of Jack to visit - especially as he must have felt a little bit lonely himself, with his family in England or New Zealand (I think is where Mollie goes?)

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 7:53 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
That was truly lovely. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Thu Feb 24, 2011 9:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Really nice presents, and how nice of Jack to pop in and visit Joey. :D
Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 12:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Jack is really making his intentions clear here! Jewellry to a single girl he isn't related to :shock:
Author:  Identity Hunt [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:48 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
Absolutely loving this - thank you !!
Author:  Vick [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/2/11
After Christmas, the tree was removed from Jo’s room. New Year came and went with no fanfares and the weeks continued to drag on along with the monotony of eating, sleeping, and reading. The highlights of Jo’s weeks continued to be visiting days. Miss Annersley and Miss Wilson had both visited her, as well as her friends and her sister. She continued with pneumothorax and had X-rays regularly. At the end of February, she was rewarded with three hours time up.

“You may even sit out on the balcony for some of the time, if you wish,” Jem told her. “If you do, make sure it is for no more than an hour and you have plenty of warm clothes on in this weather.” Jo nodded to indicate she understood. There was still snow on the ground, but it was starting to thaw now.

The next morning, when Nurse came in to remove her tray, Jo asked if she might sit outside. Nurse obligingly helped her into her warmest clothes and outside. Jo sat down in the lounger and Nurse swathed her in blankets, before leaving her to continue to her next patient.

An hour later, she was just wondering how she was supposed to get back inside, when Jack came into her room. He saw her outside and promptly came to her aid. Once she was back in her bed, he checked if she was warm enough before leaving her alone again. Jo snuggled down under the covers and managed to warm up quickly. The next thing she knew, it was Mittagessen.

Once she had been sitting up for three hours for a few days, a nurse appeared with a wheelchair instead of Mittagessen. She helped Jo into it and informed her that she would now be taking her meals in the Speisesaal.

“You’ll be wheeled there for the next week, but after that, you’ll be able to walk there by yourself,” she informed Jo.

Once they reached the Speisesaal, Jo was left at a table with some other female patients, and one of the kitchen staff brought her meal to her. She managed to make some polite conversation with the other people at her table, but was glad to return to her room afterwards. She had found the experience to be very tiring and was more than happy to lie down and rest.

Thus, the routine continued. After a week, Jo was allowed to walk to the Speisesaal for her meals. Normally quite happy to chat to other people, she found being there daunting. She felt very self-conscious about being there and longed to be back in her room. This worry caused Jo’s appetite to decrease noticeably. A few days after she had started to walk there alone, Jem came in to talk to her.

“How are you, Jo?” he asked as he sat down in the chair.

“Fine,” Jo replied.

“I hear you aren’t eating properly,” he said. Jo didn’t answer. She knew there was no point in denying it. She also knew that it was ridiculous to be shy when she had been used to eating in a large room full of people at school. Jem looked carefully at her and she blushed deeply.

“I’m not going to lecture you, but if you don’t try to eat more, you’ll end up losing both weight and your time up. Using the Speisesaal helps you to get used to walking about again. I want you to carry on getting better so that you can come home. We all miss you and we want you back with us.” Jem had said his piece and he stood up to leave.

“I’ll try,” Jo whispered.

“That’s all we ask, Joey. Keep on trying and you’ll get to come home.” Jem left at that and Jo rolled over in bed. She toyed with the rosary and determined that she would do as Jem said. When she went to Abendessen that evening, she managed to eat the meal and even started to chat to one of the other patients, who was a similar age to her.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Good to see her getting to know the other patients.

This is fascinating, Vick -thank you.
Author:  KathrynW [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 12:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Thank you Vick, it's really interesting seeing more of what it would have been like for the patients in the San and I like the way you've weaved the Joey/Jack relationship into this.
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 12:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Thank you Vicky. Pleased Joey did not have any long term physical effects from her bed rest, even if she did have some psychological ones from the enforced seclusion.
Author:  Liz K [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Please, please, don't let Joey have a setback now. This is great. Thank you.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
This has been fascinating reading from the outset, Vick. Although I don't think I've commented up to now, I really like the way you are showing the various treatments which TB patients of the period would have undergone and also the way the Joey/Jem and Joey/Jack threads are woven into the story.

I wonder if Joey's shyness and self-consciousness during those first meals in the Spiesaal was due less to the fact that she'd been so much alone during her time at the San and more to the fact that she was very conscious of her relationship with Jem, and embarrassed both for him and for herself that she had developed TB in the first place. That could certainly explain her reluctance to explain to him why she had made no effort to socialise.

Thank you - I'll be looking forward to the next part.
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Poor Joey - you really capture how hard that situation would be. Thanks :-)
Author:  whitequeen [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
I forgot to check this for a while - great to have so much to read in one go! It's a really engrossing story. Thanks :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Her feelings are understandable, but I do hope that she can overcome them and we get the old, gregarious Jo back. Thankyou!
Author:  claire [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Really enjoying this - but can I put in a plea for - save Joey, marry her off to Jack but let her have infected Robin before she admitted to her symptoms, want to see her cope with th guilt at killing Rob
Author:  Abi [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Interesting to see her trying to cope with some of the other effects her illness is having. Thanks, Vick.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:14 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Thanks Vick. This is wonderful
Author:  Vick [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/2/11
Thanks for all your comments. :D

A month later, Jo had another chest X-ray, and was told she could stay up for six hours a day. She only had a pneumothorax operation every two weeks now and she felt things were finally starting to look brighter. Her cough had practically disappeared and she was eating well. She still looked very pale, but she was assured that she would lose the pastiness once she was back at home.

It was springtime now and Jo spent as much time as she was allowed out on the balcony. It was still quite chilly during the day, so she had to ensure that she was well wrapped up and swathed in blankets and she was only allowed to stay out for an hour and a half. She enjoyed the peace out there as she could let her thoughts wander. Her view looked across the Sonnalpe shelf and towards the Tiernsee below. She wished she could go and visit her friends, but she knew it would be a while before she would be allowed that privilege. She had to concentrate on getting back home first and being allowed to do normal things there, before she could entertain going to see friends.

It was whilst she was sitting out on the balcony one day that she realised she hadn’t seen Jack for a few days. She remarked on this to Jem, when he came in during his rounds, and was informed that he had gone to England for a conference and was taking a few days leave to see his family whilst he was there. Jo was disappointed she had missed the chance to say goodbye, but she tried not to show it. She knew how hard he worked and that he rarely saw his family, so she did not begrudge him the chance he had. She realised that she had looked forward to when he came to her room, even when it was as her doctor. Now he wasn’t around for a few weeks, she thought her life was rather empty. She liked the other doctors who worked at the Sanatorium, but found she wasn’t as comfortable talking to them as she did to Jack. He was always willing to stay a little longer to talk to her about things other than her treatment.

*****

Jo was given another chest X-ray in early May. She was sitting out on the balcony, when Jack suddenly appeared in the doorway. He brought one of the chairs out with him and sat down next to her.

“Hello, Jo,” he said, smiling. Jo returned the smile. She was pleased to see him again.

“How was England?” she asked him.

“Cold and wet, as usual. It was nice to go home for a while, though. Everyone sends their love, by the way.” Jo smiled again. She knew Jack’s family well, having spent holidays there with Jack’s sister when the latter taught at the Chalet School.

“I’ve also brought news,” he continued, grinning even wider.

“Oh?” she said. She looked suspiciously at him, wondering what they were planning to put her through next.

“You’re allowed to have eight hours up, now.” He sat back at this and waited for her reaction.

“Eight hours? Are you sure?” she asked in disbelief.

“Very sure,” he replied, more gently. “You’re doing so well now. If you can manage that you’ll be allowed out into the grounds and may even get the chance to go home for a day.” Jo sat there in silence as she tried to digest this information. She didn’t know if she was ready for it yet. She looked out towards the view without speaking for so long that Jack began to wonder if he had been wise in telling her that she might be allowed home. Eventually, she turned to him and smiled.

“Thank you.” She didn’t know what else to say. Her eyes betrayed how close to tears she was. Jack squeezed her hand and smiled at her. Then he stood up and left her to her thoughts.

When Jo had finished Früstück the next morning, she was asked if she wanted to go and sit out in the grounds. Jo nodded, enthusiastically. She couldn’t wait to be somewhere other than in her room. Nurse made sure she was wearing her warmest clothes and that she had plenty of things to keep her occupied. Picking up a few blankets, she then escorted Jo to one of the little summerhouses. Nurse made sure she was warm and comfortable and left her alone. Jo found herself looking out towards the Tiernsee. She could just make out some of the villages along the shore. She stared happily at the view for a while, before picking up her book. The nurse returned to collect her at Mittagessen, after which she had to rest in her bed for two hours. Once they were over, she had Kaffee und Kuchen and went back to the summerhouse until it was time for Abendessen. She went straight to bed afterwards, as her eight hours up time was over. She soon settled into this routine, revelling in being outside once more, especially now the weather was so much warmer.
Author:  Alison H [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
Glad to see that Jo's doing better - and missing Jack when he's not there :D .
Author:  Liz K [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:48 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
This is wonderful.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
They're both lovely - I just hope Jack asks her soon! *excited bouncing*
Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 9:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
thanks glad Joey has continued to improve.
Author:  Abi [ Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
Nice to see that Joey's noticing - and missing - Jack. And that she's improving well.
Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:19 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
I do hope you aren't going to take up Claire's suggestion!
Am really enjoying (in a macbre kinda way) Joey's struggles.
Author:  Vick [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/2/11
Thanks for your comments. :D

Have some more...

A few weeks later, Jem came to find her in the summerhouse. He dragged a chair up to her and sat down in it. Jo looked at him over the top of her book. She had just reached a rather exciting part and felt annoyed at his intrusion.

“How would you like to have a day at home tomorrow?” he asked. Jo stared at him, disbelief in her eyes.

“Home?” she asked. Although Jack had told her it was possible, she hadn’t really believed it could happen.

“Yes, home,” he answered, with exaggerated patience.

“I-I’d love to.”

“Make sure you’re ready immediately after Früstück and I’ll collect you. Don’t get over-excited about it, please, because if your temperature goes up, you won’t be allowed to come.”

“But, Jem…”

“No, Jo. You know the rules here as well as I do and I’m not bending them for you.” With that edict, he stood up and left to continue on his way. Jo looked out at the view, her book forgotten in her lap. She was going home tomorrow! Only for a few hours, but even that was something she hadn’t been able to contemplate until now. She wondered what she would do when she got there and if she would be allowed to see the children. She was so deep in her reverie that never saw Jack approaching. When he placed his hand on her arm, she jumped.

“Oh!” she said, as she recovered her composure. “You startled me.”

“So I see,” he replied, drily. “Did you know you’re late for Mittagessen?”

“Am I? What time is it?”

“Ten past twelve. Come on, or you’ll be even later.” Jack helped her to her feet and they set off towards the entrance. “Why were you so lost in thought?”

“Jem said I can go home for the day tomorrow.”

“Really? That’s great news, Jo.” He smiled at her, before continuing, “Make sure you don’t give him any chances to rescind it, then.” They entered the building at that point and parted, Jack to his office and Jo to the Speisesaal.

After Mittagessen, Jo returned to her room for rest hours. She lay on her bed, but found her mind was in a whirl with excitement. Mindful of Jem’s and Jack’s words earlier, she tried her best to relax, and eventually managed to fall asleep for some of the time.

After rest hours, came Kaffee und Kuchen. Once Jo had eaten, she wandered back outside to find her book. She managed to lose herself in it until it was time to go in for Abendessen. When she went to bed after Abendessen, she found that she was tired and soon fell asleep.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Thanks for the update. Pleased Joey can have a visit home. Hope she does not get breathless at doing more on just one lung.


Agee with Mis Di, please ignore Claire's suggestion.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Here's hoping that she makes it home! Thankyou for the update.
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Hope the day at home goes well.
Author:  Abi [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Hope she enjoys the day at home. Thanks!
Author:  emma t [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Only just found this - really cannot believe I've been missing out on a brilliant drabble for so long :) You've caught it exactly, and the detail which EBD didnot include is written how she would have written it - I've often wondered if Joey did have TB and this is so heart-wrenching. Hope that Joey gets better, and does not have any major set backs!
Author:  roversgirl [ Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Just caught up on a couple of updaes - am so glad she's coming to realise how important Jack is and that she gets to go home for a day! Thanks :-)
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:47 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
I hope that Joey has a lovely day at home and doesn't get too excited about it. (or give anyone her germs)
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:43 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
I hope the visit is all that Joey hopes it to be and she doesn't relapse
Author:  Vick [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:44 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/2/11
Thanks for all your comments :D

Jo was awake early the next morning. She tried to lie quietly, but was too excited about the prospect of the trip home. She found the rosary and allowed the beads to move gently through her fingers. The repetitive movement soothed her and when she finally got up; she found she was quite relaxed.

She was duly ready and waiting when Jem appeared in the doorway to her room after Früstück.

“Ready?” he asked. Jo nodded and came over to the door. “Come on then.” He led the way to the car and helped her to climb in. Once she was settled, he got behind the wheel and set off to Die Rosen. When they arrived, Jo slowly got out of the car. She found that she was suddenly nervous. She knew it was her home and she had longed to be there so many times during the past eight months, but now she was actually there, she wasn’t sure if she was ready for it. Jem came round to her side. He looked carefully at her and could see she was trembling slightly.

“Welcome home, Jo,” he said gently to her. “It’s been a long time, hasn’t it?” Jo nodded slightly. She was relieved no one was standing in the doorway watching out for her. He linked arms with her and they slowly went towards the house. They went inside where Jem helped her out of her coat, and then led her into the Salon. Madge was sitting reading a book when they entered. At the sight of her sister, she jumped up and went over to greet her.

“Hello, Jo. How are you feeling?” she asked, as she drew her sister into a quick hug before leading her to the sofa.

“Strange,” Jo admitted. “I don’t know exactly how I feel at the moment.”

“It’s to be expected, Jo,” Jem told her. “You haven’t been here for the past eight months. The last time you saw this room was when you were ill.” Jo just nodded. She wasn’t sure what to say.

“The children are all excited and can’t wait to see you,” Madge went on, through sheer nerves. She never thought she would find conversation hard with her sister. “They’ve all been busy making presents for you.”

“They’ve been told that they may come down in pairs and stay for ten minutes,” Jem added. “Robin is also coming home for the weekend this afternoon, so you’ll see her too.” Jo smiled at this information. She had missed Robin badly and looked forward to spending a little time with her before she went back in the evening. Jem then mentioned something about things to do in his office and departed, leaving the two sisters alone together. They looked at each other in silence, before Jo started to laugh. She infected her sister, who also started to giggle. Jo stopped quickly enough, when she thought she might start to cough again, but it broke the ice. Madge rang for coffee, which was brought in by Marie. When she saw Fräulein Joey sitting in the room, she happily welcomed her home and insisted on bringing in some cakes she had made that morning.

Once they had finished, Madge departed to the nursery to collect Peggy and Rix Bettany. They came running into the room holding their presents for Auntie Jo and hurled themselves at her in delight. Jo gave them both a quick hug and then demanded to see what they had brought with them. Peggy produced a pair of handkerchiefs, on the corners of which, she had managed to embroider Jo’s initial, whilst Rix gave her an empty wooden box. Jo looked askance at this, and Rix explained that it was for her to put her used hankies into. Jo laughed at this, but thanked him all the same. Then they were sent back up to the nursery and Bride and Jackie came in. Their presents were equally original, but Jo managed to solemnly thank them, before David, Sybil and Primula were brought down. They had painted pictures for her and Jo promised to put them on her wall. Once they had departed, it was time for Mittagessen. Marie had made a special meal for them to celebrate Jo being there, and she happily ate everything put in front of her.

Once they had finished, Jem decreed that Jo should go and rest in her room for two hours as she would normally do so at the Sanatorium. Jo looked mutinous, but decided she should do as she was told if she wanted to be allowed out again. Once there, she lay on her bed and soon fell asleep. Jem had to wake her for Kaffee und Kuchen. She had just finished her coffee, when she heard the front door open. Five minutes later, Robin came running into the room.

“Zoe, oh Zoe, how I have missed you,” she cried as she came over to hug Jo. In her excitement, she dropped into the baby language she had used when she first arrived at the Tiernsee as a child of only six.

“Robin!” was all Jo could say, as tears threatened to fall. She held her in a tight hug for a long time, before letting go and putting her away from her. “Let me look at you. How you’ve grown!”

“I am growing all the time,” Robin said proudly. “I have to keep growing to stay the same size as Amy.” Jo smiled at this. They sat in the corner of the room and talked animatedly until Jem came in, holding Jo’s coat.

“Time to go, Jo,” he said. Jo looked at him and reluctantly bade farewell to Robin and her sister. They followed her to the door and stood there to wave her off. Jem drove slowly and silently back towards the Sanatorium. Jo was quiet, too. She had enjoyed her day, but discovered that she was very tired. She hadn’t realised how much energy she had used up. When they reached the Sanatorium Jem bade her to go straight to bed after Abendessen.
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:06 am ]
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Glad it went OK.
Author:  JS [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:18 am ]
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Some of this is very close to home for me and I think you're capturing it really well - Jo's reluctance (in earlier posts) to be part of the 'group' of TB patients; the simultaneous excitement about going home and the fear of it too; the awkwardness about adjusting relationships with loved ones and so on.
I'm really enjoying it and am looking forward to seeing where it's going.
Author:  Elbee [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:51 am ]
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Just had a major catch-up session on this. Thanks, Vick. My Mum was in hospital with TB for a few months when I was a baby (early 60s), so I'm finding it fascinating.
Author:  Chatelaine [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 11:27 am ]
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Thoroughly enjoying this story. I like seeing how Jo is maturing and learning patience and the wisdom to accept the doctors' decrees regardless of how unwelcome they are to her. She's turning into a much nicer and more well-rounded adult than EBD ever painted her. . .

Thanks Vick!
Author:  emma t [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:22 pm ]
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Thanks Vick, it must have been horrible for Jo to have felt awkward in going back to her own home - glad she knew when to control herself :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:09 pm ]
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I know exactly why I'm now wibbling about Robin :evil: - please reassure us soon! Thankyou for a lovely update, it was really interesting to see her go home and see everyone again.
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:47 pm ]
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Lovely to see she could enjoy being at home. Hope she continues to get better! Thanks :-)
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:30 pm ]
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Interesting that Madge found it strange, yet she had been visiting Joey, so it is unsurprising that Joey found it strange as well. Love Rix's box to put used hankies in, it would be more useful to put clean ones in.
Thanks for the update.
Author:  Abi [ Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:56 pm ]
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Interesting to see everyone's reactions to Joey being at home. Hope she isn't too tired from the extra effort, though.
Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:36 am ]
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Awww. That was sweet. I can understand why Madge and Joey felt awkward but the kids were very cute.
Author:  Vick [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:30 am ]
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Thank you for all your comments. I am rapidly heading towards the end of this section now... :shock:

Jo was glad to crawl between the sheets when she reached her room that evening. She soon drifted off and slept soundly all night. Jack came to find her in the garden late on in the morning.

“How was your day out?” he asked, as he sat down next to her.

“Tiring,” she admitted. “It was nice to see everyone, but I didn’t realise how much energy it would take.” Jack looked at her in silence. She had dark circles under her eyes, and she didn’t seem as lively as usual.

“I think you should get some more rest today,” he told her. “Take your things back to your room when you go in to Mittagessen and stay in bed for the rest of the day. Hopefully, you’ll be fine again tomorrow, but we’ll see about that in the morning.”

“I feel all right, though,” Jo protested.

“You don’t look all right,” he said grimly, before continuing more gently, “You don’t want to set yourself back, do you?” Jo shook her head. “Well, do as I say and hopefully, you won’t.” He stood up at this and walked off, leaving Jo to stare after him. She was surprised at what he had just told her. She had never expected going home for one day to have repercussions.

Jack walked quickly back to his office, where he shut himself in. He was annoyed with himself and with Jem. He hated laying down the law to Jo, but he desperately wanted her to get better and be able to move on with her life. If it took a couple of days’ bed rest to recover from her visit home, then so be it. At least she wouldn’t be back at square one again. He wanted to rant at Jem for allowing her to go home so soon after being up for eight hours, but he knew that Jem was just as involved. Jo’s tuberculosis had put them into the position of doctors to her rather than as her friend and brother-in-law. Jack looked at Jo’s file and discovered that she was due to have pneumothorax the next day. At least that would give her a day of bed rest without looking suspicious. Her temperature and weight charts were good. If she continued to improve, she would get another home day, but Jack resolved to tell Jem to make sure she didn’t overdo it next time.

That discussion took place when Jem came on duty that evening. Jack told him bluntly that he had sent Jo back to bed after Mittagessen as she was tired out. Jem looked surprised at this, but admitted that apart from seeing her at mealtimes and insisting she had two hours rest, he had stayed out of the way all day.

“We aren’t at home with other patients when they have their first home leave, so it wasn’t fair to Jo for me to be watching over her like a hawk all day.”

“I know, but maybe next time she goes home you should insist she remain quiet. Luckily, this time she should get away with it, as she has pneumothorax tomorrow, which always puts her out for a day.”

“Hmm, you’re right; maybe seeing everyone was too much for her. She was trembling with nerves when we got home and she’s excitable at the best of times.”

The conversation finished after this, and Jack went home, a little soothed by Jem’s agreement. Jem went to check on Jo, and found her already fast asleep in bed. The dark circles under her eyes were beginning to fade, and her pallor wasn’t quite as pronounced as it had been when he brought her back last night. He silently apologised for letting her get carried away yesterday, before leaving her and continuing his rounds.

As Jack had predicted, the pneumothorax did put Jo out of action for a day, so she felt much better when she woke up the following morning. Jem had told her to remain in her room until Jack came to see her. She hadn’t been told she must stay in bed, so, when Jack arrived, he found her sitting out on the balcony.

“How are you feeling today?” he asked

“I ache, but apart from that, fine,” she replied. Jack looked at her and noticed that she looked much more like herself again.

“Glad to hear it,” he said. “Do you want to go out into the garden again?” Jo nodded. “Get your things then and I’ll help you.” He smiled at her and she smiled back, genuinely happy that she wasn’t in Jack’s bad books, anymore.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:01 am ]
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This must be very hard for all of them.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:52 am ]
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Glad the visit itself went okay, and am glad Jack was able to be firm. It's a hard juggling act to be family and health professional
Author:  emma t [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:40 pm ]
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I can imagine how Jack must be feeling wanting to tell her how he feels!
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:55 pm ]
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I'm glad someone is managing to be both friend and doctor! Thanks :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:31 pm ]
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I do hope that it hasn't set her back at all! Poor Jack, this must be so hard for him.

Thankyou!
Author:  Abi [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:33 pm ]
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Glad Jack was able to insist on Jo resting.
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:02 pm ]
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Pleased Jack could see Joey had done too much and could help her get the rest she needed. Hope that Joey realises jack was not cross with her, but concerned.

i expect Joey had more family to be reunited with than most of the San's patients, who would not have their whole family so near.
Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:26 am ]
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I wouldn't have thought many of the patients were close enough to home to go home for the day. How lucky Jo is.
Author:  Vick [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 8:15 am ]
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Thanks for all your comments :D

Jo slowly adjusted to the routine of being up for eight hours. She was enjoying spending her days outdoors now that it was summer. In a way she was glad she hadn’t been invited back home again. Not because she didn’t want to be there, but rather that she had found it to be a very tiring experience. As Jack had pointed out at the time, she didn’t want to set herself back, which could so easily have happened. She had settled down now and almost considered the Sanatorium to be her home, as she had been there for the best part of a year.

At the beginning of July, Jem approached her again with the offer of a day at home. She was inclined to say no, but she knew her sister would be upset if she did. Jem understood her fears, and promised that this time she would spend the day as quietly as possible.

“You need to get used to being back there, Jo,” he explained. “You aren’t going to be here forever, as you’re doing so well. We hope you don’t have any set backs, but you have to test your strength, both mental and physical. Going home for a day helps you to do that. If you can cope with a day trip home, then you’ve made another important step on the way to recovery. Last time was probably too soon for you, but this time I think you’ll be able to cope.”

Jo continued to worry about it, even after Jem had gone. When Jack came into her room during his rounds that night, he found her lying wide awake, unable to sleep. He sat down next to her.

“What’s wrong, Jo?” he asked, gently.

“Jem’s asked me to go home for the day again,” she replied, not looking at him.

“That’s good news. It shows you’re making good progress.”

“I don’t know if I can cope with going, though.” Jo gulped, trying to stop herself from crying. Jack laid a hand on her shoulder.

“Don’t get upset, Joey. Of course you’ll cope with it. You’ve managed to cope with everything you’ve had thrown at you here and you’re doing so well. A day at home is a good sign. It means you’re well on the road to recovery.”

“Do you really think so?”

“I wouldn’t say it if I didn’t mean it. You get a good night’s sleep and go home tomorrow and enjoy it. You’re in a much better position than many other people here.” With that, Jack stood up to leave.

“I’ll try.” Jack had reached the door, when Jo called him back. “Jack?” He turned back to her.

“Yes?”

“Thank you. For everything. I don’t know what I would have done without you.” Jack smiled at her.

“Oh, you would have managed, somehow,” he said, then left abruptly, not trusting himself to say any more.

The next morning found Jo dressed and waiting quietly for Jem to arrive. She had gone out onto the balcony, where she could sit and enjoy the sunshine. Eventually, Jem arrived. He found her sitting out there, in a world of her own and he was loath to disturb her. She was thinking back over the conversations she had had the day before and never noticed him. She realised that both Jem and Jack were correct in what they had said. She decided that she had to be strong; both for herself and for them. She would beat this horrible disease she had, she would go home and enjoy herself and come back stronger. At this point in her thoughts, she noticed Jem hovering in the doorway. She turned her head and smiled at him. He came over and offered her his arm and they set off for home.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 9:00 am ]
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Good to see Jo feeling more positive.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 9:13 am ]
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Joey is really growing from this experience
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:12 pm ]
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Thanks Vicky. I wonder if some of the patients go for the day to stay with their relatives at the Hotel and guest houses which had developed around the San. We hear of relatives moving to be near their loved ones, either to the self with the San or the Lakeside.
Author:  abbeygirl [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:24 pm ]
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Ive just read right through and am now anxiously waiting for more please! Very interesting as well as - perhaps entertaining is not the best word? but you know what I mean! Thanks!
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:45 pm ]
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I do hope that Jo has a good day at home. She and Jack are so sweet here, and I think she's starting to realise her feelings for him, if not his for her.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 6:56 pm ]
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I really like how you're developing Joey's character. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Wed Mar 02, 2011 9:20 pm ]
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It's fascinating to see how this is making Joey grow as a person (NOT a spineless jellyfish :lol: ). And I'm loving the little hints of how her relationship with Jack is gradually growing and changing.
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:17 am ]
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Just brilliant, thanks!
Author:  Vick [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 8:52 am ]
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I'm afraid this is the last post for now. There is more (Lots more! :shock: ) written, and I have passed it on for proofreading. However as my proofreader is MaryR, I'm sure you will all understand there may be a delay for a while...

Thanks for all your comments. :D They are all much appreciated and have encouraged me to keep posting this.

As Jem had promised Jack, Jo did indeed spend a quiet day at home with her sister. She came back with a little regret, but not feeling as tired as last time. A week or so later, she had another chest X-ray. The next day, as she was sitting out in the grounds, she heard footsteps approaching. Taking no notice of them, she suddenly looked up from her book to find Jem and Jack sitting down on either side of her. Both were smiling.

“Jo, how would you like to go home?” Jem asked.

“I went home last week. Surely I don’t get another day so quickly,” she said.

“I mean permanently,” Jem explained. Jo stared at him, dumbstruck. She didn’t know what to say.

“You aren’t contagious any longer and your last X-ray shows a massive improvement.” It was Jack who spoke this time. “In fact, you can have ten hours up each day now.”

“You’ll still have to come back for X-rays and pneumothorax each month for a while yet, but you’re well enough to go home,” Jem added.

Still Jo didn’t speak. She felt tears starting to trickle down her cheeks. She was going home. Permanently! She didn’t know whether to be sad or happy. She had become so used to the routine here, that she wasn’t sure if she wanted to go back to Die Rosen and all the people who came and went there. It wasn’t the quietest of places to live. However, Jem had already thought of this and had asked Madge to see if she could organise a small room which was seldom used for Jo to have as a private sitting room.

Jack glanced at his watch and realised that they both had to be at a meeting in five minutes time. He motioned to Jem and they both reluctantly stood up, neither wanting to leave Jo alone. They couldn’t miss the meeting, though.

“We have to go to a meeting now,” Jack said. “I’ll come back later.” With that, the two men left Jo alone with her thoughts.

Jack was as good as his promise and returned an hour and a half later. He noted that she still looked dazed and wasn’t doing anything other than stare unseeingly at the view. As he sat down beside her, she looked at him and managed half a smile.

“Am I really allowed to go home?” she asked.

“Yes, you are,” he replied. “Your X-rays are improving every time you have them and your lung is in much better shape than it was when you were admitted. You’re not contagious any more and as long as you keep up the regime you have here, you should continue to improve.”

“But Die Rosen isn’t the quietest of places. How am I supposed to keep quiet, when there are always people coming and going, not to mention all the children there?”

“I’m sure Jem will have thought of something for you, but you’ll have to ask him that.” Jo remained silent, trying to marshal her thoughts. “Aren’t you happy to be going home, Jo?”

“Yes, I am, but I’m also scared. This place is safe and you all know what do if anything goes wrong.”

“Die Rosen is safe, as well. It’s not as if you’re going somewhere where there won’t be any medical attention. You live under the same roof as Jem. I think he may qualify in that respect.”

“He didn’t notice before.”

“No, but he wasn’t looking for it, was he? He’ll keep an eye on you and, anyway, it won’t happen again.” He glanced at his watch and stood up. “Time for Abendessen. I’ll carry your things, shall I?” He picked up the bag Jo brought out with her and walked back with her companionably.

“You know, I’ll miss our little chats,” he said, as they approached the building.

“You’ll have to come and visit me at home, then,” Jo replied. Jack smiled and nodded.

“I’ll take you up on that.” They entered the building at that point and he escorted her to her room before going on to his office.

The next morning found Jo packing her case. She had packed all her clothes and then opened the drawer in the bedside cabinet. As she collected the few personal belongings she had with her, she noticed a small box. Upon opening it, she discovered the necklace Jack had bought her for Christmas. She took it out and admired it, wondering briefly if Jack had found her thank you note. She decided that it was too pretty to stay inside the box and fastened it round her neck, before dropping the box into her case alongside the rosary and the Die Rosen photo.

Half an hour later, Jo was sitting out on the balcony reading a book as she waited for Jem to collect her. She knew he had a meeting to attend, first, and that he would come as soon as he could. Eventually, he arrived, full of apologies for the delay as the meeting had gone on longer than he had anticipated. Jo just smiled at him as he came over to her.

“Ready, Jo?” he asked.

“I just need to drop this in my case,” and she quickly stowed the book away. Jem picked the case up from the bed and offered her his free arm. She accepted and together they left the room and the Sanatorium to go home.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:17 am ]
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This sounds hopeful, although I hope all the little ones'll understand that she won't be running round after them for a while.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:44 am ]
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I hope all goes well for Joey at home
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:48 am ]
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Thank you Vicky and MaryR as your proof reader. I think you have chosen a good place to have a break. i like the others hope Joey can have a quiet time at home and that Jack continues to visit her specifically.
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:28 pm ]
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Thanks for this first bit; which was really lovely and interesting. Looking forward to the next bit when you both have time. Thanks :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 8:25 pm ]
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That was a brilliant place to break, and Joey and Jack are so sweet here! Thankyou!
Author:  Abi [ Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:58 pm ]
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I hope it all goes well for Joey at home, and that Jem doesn't let her get too tired. Looking forward to the next bit when it arrives. :D
Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Mar 04, 2011 2:47 am ]
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That is a very natural place for a break.
Thank you Vick for a very believable story and Mary, I hope your eyes improve soon.
Author:  emma t [ Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:50 pm ]
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Thankyou Vick, and also to Mary R I really love this and looking forward to reading more when it comes :)
Author:  jmc [ Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:50 am ]
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I read through all of this earlier in the day. It could so easily have happened to Jo. Look forward to more when you are able. Thanks
Author:  Vick [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:34 am ]
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Good morning!

It's a new week and I have more (much more :D ) written of this, so here goes again...

Many thanks to MaryR once again for her patience and encouragement whilst proofing this for me. :mrgreen:

Also, thanks to PaulineS as well for allowing to me keep asking random questions of her :mrgreen:

When Jo arrived at Die Rosen she was feeling a little nervous. Although she had been there twice in the past few months, she had always known she was going back to the safety of the Sanatorium, where she was carefully watched over. Here, she would be expected to look after herself. She knew her sister and brother-in-law would be keeping a close eye on her wellbeing, but it didn’t feel the same.

She was met at the door by her sister, Madge Russell, who drew her inside. After helping her to remove her coat, Madge led her towards the Salon. Jo followed, but really didn’t feel like being sociable. She wanted a little time alone to try and order her thoughts. Once Jo was seated in one of the chairs, Madge spoke.

“I know this isn’t the most peaceful of places to live, Jo, especially when quiet is what you need right now, so Jem and I have emptied the little sewing room out for you to use as a private sitting room when things get too much.”

Jo smiled at her sister. “That sounds lovely, Madge. Thank you for thinking of it.”

“There isn’t much in there at the moment, I’m afraid. Just a couple of chairs, a side table and a small bookshelf, but it’s all yours.”

“May I see it?” Jo asked.

“Of course,” and Madge led the way to the small room at the back of the house. It was just large enough for Jo. There was little room for anything other than the furniture already there, but it immediately felt like a sanctuary to Jo. A small watercolour was on one wall and the door and window took up two more, whilst the last one was blank. The chairs had been arranged so the occupants were looking out of the window and the table was between them. A lamp stood on the top of the bookshelves, which were positioned to one side of the furthest chair.

“It’s lovely, Madge. Just what I need,” Jo said.

“We still want you to use the Salon, but if it gets too much, you can come here and rest. Jem tells me you are up for ten hours a day now.” Madge led Jo back to the Salon as she spoke.

“Yes, Jack told me yesterday.”

“We’ve made sure that no one is visiting us for the next week, so you can get used to being back here and with us, first.”

“Thank you.” Jem came into the Salon at this point.

“I’ve put your case on your bed if you want to go and unpack,” he said. Jo stood up and thanked him, relieved to leave the room. As she closed the door behind her, he turned to his wife.

“She’s going to take time to adjust to being back here with us all,” he said. “Don’t be surprised if she spends a lot of time in that sitting room at first.”

“I know,” Madge answered, slowly. “She seems so distant at the moment. It isn’t the Jo I know, at all. It’s as if you’ve brought a different person home.”

“She’s had to do a great deal of growing up whilst she was in the Sanatorium. It’s going to take us time to adjust to the fact that she has changed. She’ll rest after Mittagessen and hopefully, we’ll all feel a little less awkward, then.”

Upstairs, Jo slowly put her things away. She left the photo on the bed to take down into her little sitting room, and picked up the rosary Jack had given her. She debated whether she ought to give it back to him, but in the end she put it on her bedside cabinet. It was something that had brought her much comfort whilst she had been in the Sanatorium, especially at first when she had been on complete bed-rest and not allowed to do anything. She was on the road to recovery now, but she knew she still had a long way to go before she was completely cured. Suddenly, the gong sounded for Mittagessen. Jo quickly put the last of her things away and went to wash her hands, placing the now-empty case outside her door on the way.
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:59 am ]
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Thanks Vicky. Pleased I can help.

Joey has grown and developed in this drabble and has become a more balanced individual.
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:23 pm ]
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They all seem to be handling a difficult situation very well.
Author:  sealpuppy [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 2:42 pm ]
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This is terrific, I've just read the whole thing at a gallop. :D
I love the way it fills in the time between Jo leaving school and the escape to Switzerland.

Of course it's quite clear that EBD actually wrote this herself but decided it was too upsetting to include in a book for young girls, and put it aside. Equally clearly, it's obvious that Vick has been to an auction lately and bought a mouldering trunkful of books and manuscripts, which turned out to have belonged to EBD! :D
Author:  chris84 [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:10 pm ]
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Just caught up on this, thank you Vick. :D
Author:  emma t [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:31 pm ]
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Wonderful Vick, and really am looking fwd to more soon!!
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 5:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 7/3/11
sealpuppy wrote:
Of course it's quite clear that EBD actually wrote this herself but decided it was too upsetting to include in a book for young girls, and put it aside. Equally clearly, it's obvious that Vick has been to an auction lately and bought a mouldering trunkful of books and manuscripts, which turned out to have belonged to EBD! :D


Well, obviously, I didn't think that anybody even needed to say it! I just hope that there was one about a certain trip to India, too...

Thankyou! I'm glad to see this back :D
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 7:15 pm ]
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Hopefully Joey will be able to get used to life at Die Rosen again. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:46 pm ]
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They've obviously thought this through very well; I'm glad Joey's wellbeing is provided for.

Thanks Vick.
Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:18 am ]
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Sealpuppy I think you could be onto something there.



It quite made my day to see a new post so quickly Vick!
Author:  Vick [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:24 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 7/3/11
My pleasure Miss Di :D Thank Mary for being so speedy!

Sealpuppy: I only wish I did have that mouldering trunk of manuscripts!!! :bawling:

As it's such a glorious morning here in sunny Yorkshire, have some more :mrgreen:

When Jo woke the next morning, she felt quite relaxed. She lay for a few minutes, enjoying the fact that she was back in her own bedroom, before throwing back the covers and getting dressed. When she arrived in the Speisesaal, she was warmly greeted by everyone there. She smiled happily round as she sat down.

“What do you plan to do today, Jo?” Jem asked.

“I thought I might sit outside this morning. It’s a lovely day, and it seems a shame to be indoors,” Jo replied.

“Good idea. I’ll ask Andreas to put some chairs on the lawn for you.” Jo nodded her agreement at this.

Half an hour later saw Jo sitting comfortably on the lawn with a book in her hand. Always an avid reader, she now felt lost if she didn’t have one with her, as books had become her lifeline during her time in the Sanatorium. They gave her the chance to forget about tuberculosis and how ill she was and let her go to imaginary places and fantasy worlds. Her sister joined her a little later on.

“The children have gone out for a walk, but they will only be an hour, at most,” Madge told her as she settled into another of the chairs. Jo smiled at this information. She was looking forward to seeing her nieces and nephews, as she had kept away from the nursery yesterday.

“I’d best make the most of the peace and quiet then,” she said, laughing. Madge joined in, before turning serious again.

“Don’t get drawn into their games, Jo. You know how active they are, and you aren’t fully fit yet.” Jo just pulled a face at her sister. She knew she wasn’t capable of more active things at the moment, and she felt that she didn’t need reminding of this fact. Madge took the hint and said no more, reminding herself how her sister had had to grow up in the past year and that she must start to let Jo live her own life now.

The sisters settled into a companionable silence, Jo reading and Madge knitting, until voices could be heard coming round the corner of the chalet. Suddenly, there was a rush of feet and all the children descended upon them.

“Auntie Jo, Auntie Jo,” they cried out as they surrounded her. Jo dropped her book and gave them all a big hug, even manly Rix.

“Hello, where have you all been?” she asked

“We went for a walk along the alm,” Peggy replied. At six years old, she considered herself rather grown up now.

“Will you play with us, Auntie Jo?” David asked.

“That depends on what you want to play,” Jo replied, cautiously.

“Hide and seek,” Rix said. Jo shook her head slowly.

“I don’t think I can join in that one at the moment,” she told them. At their sad faces, she added, “I’ll be ‘home’ though if you like.” The children sorted themselves out and even two year old Sybil joined in. Rix was elected to be first seeker and he stood next to Jo with his eyes covered and counted out loud whilst the rest all ran to hide in various parts of the garden. When he had finished counting, Rix then went off in search of them all, and the others tried to make their way back to Jo unseen. This game lasted quite happily until they were called in for Mittagessen, after which Jo retired to her room to rest.

When Jo came back downstairs, it was almost time for Kaffee and Kuchen, which they took in the garden. Jo found she was hungry and ate plenty. Madge noticed this and was secretly pleased. She was still inclined to worry over her sister, even though she was so much better now. After the meal, Jo excused herself and went off to sit in her small sitting room. She still found it strange to be in the company of others all day long, after so many months in isolation.
Author:  JS [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:55 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 8/3/11
Glad to see this back so quickly. Thanks Vick (although I'm jealous of the Yorkshire sunshine - cold and grey here :( )
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:58 am ]
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Sunny on this side of the Pennines too :D, and it's interesting to see how Jo's adapting to being back home.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:06 am ]
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Thanks Vick, it'll be interesting to see how Madge reacts to a maturing Jo. This will have changed the dynamics of their relationship a bit
Author:  Abi [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:26 am ]
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Glad Jo's still managing to be sensible - I'm sure there would be a huge temptation to rush around and try to do everything.
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:01 pm ]
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I loved the way Joey was able to participate in their game whilst taking care. Hoping the progress continues. Thanks Vicky.
Author:  emma t [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 4:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 8/3/11
Its lovely here in Yorkshire - I'll share some sun with you all :D Love how Jo was able to play with the children without being active :)
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Mar 08, 2011 9:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 8/3/11
It's sunny in France too! :-) Thanks for a lovely update - it's nice to see Jo maturing and not doing more than she should. Thanks :-)
Author:  Vick [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 8/3/11
Thanks for your comments. :D

This routine continued for the next week. After that, Jo noticed that visitors started to appear most days. They weren’t all visiting her, but she felt the intrusion keenly. One afternoon, she found herself fleeing to her little sitting room as soon as she heard the gate latch click. Madge jumped up and called after her, but to no avail. She turned to see Jack Maynard coming round the corner of the chalet and dropped back into her chair with relief.

“Hello,” he said, as he approached. “I thought I might find you out here.” He noticed that Madge looked upset. “What’s happened? Where’s Jo?”

“She fled as soon as she heard the gate latch. I don’t know what’s got into her today. She seems rather nervy and disappears as soon as she can when anyone comes round.”

“It’s only to be expected. She’s just spent the best part of a year pretty much in isolation. It must be hard to suddenly have to deal with people again when you’ve only seen them for a couple of hours every few weeks. Would you like me to have a word with her?”

“Would you, Jack? She’ll probably listen to you.”

“Where do you think she’s gone?”

“She’ll probably be in her little sitting room at the back of the house. I’ll ask Marie for Kaffee, shall I?”

“Yes, please. Have it out here in about half an hour or so. I’ll make sure Jo is here.” With that remark, Jack set off to seek Jo.

As Madge had predicted, Jo was, indeed, hiding in her sitting room. Jack tapped on the door and cautiously peered round it. What he saw made him enter quickly. Jo was curled up in one of the chairs, crying. He crouched down in front of her and placed a hand on her arm. She didn’t move, nor make any attempt to stop crying.

“Jo?” he asked, gently. When she made no reply, he tried again, this time in a louder voice. “Jo?” She glanced up and saw him watching her, concern on his face. She gulped, and managed to stem the tears, slightly, but she was too far gone to stop completely. Jack handed her some tissues from the bookshelf and she blew her nose loudly. After ten minutes, he had managed to calm her down, though her face was tear-stained and her eyes red and swollen.

“Go and have a wash, then we’ll talk,” he said to her, still in the same gentle tones he had been using. She stood up shakily and went to do as she was told, returning five minutes later looking a little better for the cold water she had splashed on her face. She sat back down in the chair and Jack crouched in front of her, once more. He inspected her carefully, and saw only a scared girl, not the young woman he knew so well.

“Why did you run off like that when you heard the gate?” he asked her. She shook her head, unsure how to answer. “You’ve given your sister a bit of a fright, you know.”

“I-I just couldn’t face talking to any more people today. It was getting to me, having to be nice and knowing that they were only there so they could see if I looked any different.” The words continued to tumble out, and Jack listened patiently. He was concerned that she had allowed herself to get so upset, but not surprised. She was no different from anyone else who had spent time at the Sanatorium and who was struggling to adjust to being back at home once more. Jack thought for a moment.

“It’s my day off tomorrow. How about I take you out for a picnic somewhere?” Jo smiled faintly at this suggestion.

“Are you sure you want to spend your day off taking me out?” she asked him.

“I wouldn’t ask you if I didn’t mean it,” he replied. “We used to go out walking all the time, before you got ill. Just because you aren’t up to walking again yet, doesn’t mean I don’t want to spend time with you. Now, come on back outside. It’s a lovely day and it’s a shame to be sitting in here. Your sister was murmuring something about Kaffee when I came to find you and I think we could both do with a cup.” He stood up at this and gently hauled Jo to her feet, before guiding her back outside to where her sister was waiting, somewhat impatiently.

As they approached, Madge noted Jo looked a little happier, but wisely decided not to ask questions. She simply poured the delicious coffee and bade them to help themselves to the fancy bread twists Marie had just brought out. Once they had finished, Jack stood up to leave after thanking Madge for the meal. He was due on duty in an hour and needed to go home and change first. Jo escorted him to the gate.

“I’ll pick you up about three tomorrow, then.”

“Okay,” she replied. “I’ll ask Marie for a basket, shall I?”

“Good plan. She always gives us a good meal.” He turned to go at this.

“Jack?” He turned back to her. “Thank you. For earlier.” He smiled at her.

“You’re welcome. Remember, if you ever want to talk about anything, you know where I am.” He turned again, and this time, left for home. Jo stood looking after him. She wasn’t sure what to do with herself. She knew she didn’t feel like returning to her sister, but she also didn’t want to go and sit alone in her sitting room. Eventually, she found herself walking towards the back of the chalet and the shed where her St Bernard dog, Rufus, was generally to be found. She knew she would find all the comfort she could want there. She spent an hour with him, just petting him and chatting to him and found she felt much better for it. When the light started to fade, she reluctantly went back inside the house, via the kitchen to ask Marie for a picnic basket for the next afternoon.

Jo excused herself straight after Abendessen that evening and went to her bedroom. Jem looked surprised at this, but didn’t question her. Once she had gone, he turned to his wife to see if she could shed any light on why Jo had departed bedwards so suddenly. She explained to him what had happened earlier in the day. Jem’s worry faded, when he heard that Jack had dealt with her, but he looked thoughtful all the same.

“I did wonder if this might happen,” he said, slowly. “She’s struggling to adjust to be being back at home at the moment. She feels insecure, thinking that everyone is checking up on her, when all she wants is to be left alone.”

“Can’t we do anything, Jem?” Madge asked. “If she’s feeling so vulnerable at the moment, maybe we should tell people not to come for a while longer.”

“No. That won’t help her to adjust back into a normal life. She needs to get used to seeing people and realise that they aren’t just coming to see if she is any different. The main thing is that we try and support her through this. She’ll have days like today, when she’ll just flee at the slightest hint of someone coming, but other days she’ll feel much more confident and manage to get through them. We just need to look for the signs. How many people have been over in the last couple of days?”

“About half a dozen,” Madge admitted. “Jo has managed to stay through most of them.”

“This afternoon was the straw that broke the camel’s back, then. When she heard the gate go, she knew she couldn’t cope any longer and fled to her sanctuary. Luckily, it was Jack Maynard, and he knows how to deal with her. She’ll probably be fine now, but if it happens again, let me know and I’ll have a chat with her.” Madge nodded. She had been worried about her sister, but Jem’s explanation had helped put her mind at rest. The clock chimed eleven at that point, and they decided it was more than time to retire to bed.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:32 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 9/3/11
Glad that Jack was able to help, but it's a lot for all of them to have to cope with.
Author:  JS [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:47 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 9/3/11
A dog can be a superb comfort when you're down (and Jack too, of course).
Thanks Vick.
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:05 pm ]
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Pleased it was Jack who found Joey and could help her settle, without making her feel guilty for wanting to run away. Rufus can also help being there, they must have missed each other whilst she was in the San.
Thanks Vicky
Author:  emma t [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:50 pm ]
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Thanks Vick, I'm really enjoying seeing Jack and Joey's relationship develop :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:38 pm ]
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It's really interesting seeing Jo trying to adjust, and Jack is wonderful.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:07 pm ]
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Jack is lovely here, thanks! :-)
Author:  Abi [ Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:15 pm ]
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Glad Jack was able to help, and it's nice to see him suggesting they do some of the things they used to do before Jo was ill. Hopefully she'll get used to people again soon.
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:12 am ]
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This is so lovely and Jack is such a SLOC :lol:
Author:  Vick [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 8:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 9/3/11
Thanks for all your comments :D

Have some more...

When Jo came down to Frühstück the next morning, she felt considerably happier than she had done over the past few days.

“Good morning, Jo,” Jem said, as she slid into her place. “How are you feeling today?”

“Fine, thank you,” Jo replied, helping herself to coffee and croissants. “Jack has offered to take me for a picnic this afternoon, as it’s his day off.” Jem raised his eyebrows at this, but refrained from commenting. He had his suspicions as to how Jack felt about Jo, but kept them very firmly to himself. It was not up to him to decide what her future was to be and he very much doubted that Jo had any ideas at all, at the moment. He just hoped that Jack was prepared for a long wait.

At three o’clock, the gate latch clicked and Jack came round the house to collect Jo. She was sitting with her sister, reading a book, as usual. She glanced up and, when she saw it was him, put her book down at the side of her chair and smiled at him in greeting. He returned the smile with a wide grin, before turning to greet Madge.

“Hello, Madge. How are you?” he asked.

“Hello, Jack. I’m very well, thank you. Yourself?” Madge replied.

“Excellent, thank you.” He turned to Jo, “Ready, Jo?”

“I just need to collect the basket from Marie,” she replied, getting to her feet as she spoke.

“I’ll get that. You head towards the car and I’ll meet you there.” Jo didn’t argue as she knew there would be no point, so she turned towards the gate.

“Have fun, Jo,” her sister said. “I’ll see you at Abendessen. Will you join us too, Jack?”

“That would be lovely, thank you.” Jack then headed towards the kitchen for the picnic basket Marie had prepared for them. She handed it over with a smile and resolved to set an extra place for Abendessen that night.

Jack quickly stowed the basket in the boot and they both climbed in the front. He had decided that they wouldn’t go too far, but that he would take her somewhere away from the Sonnalpe. They drove for about half an hour, before he stopped the car.

“I thought we could walk to a little clearing near here,” he said, as he climbed out. Jo nodded and climbed out herself. Jack retrieved the picnic and locked the car, before offering his free arm to Jo. She accepted with a smile and they strolled companionably into the woods towards the clearing.

When they reached their destination, Jack put the basket on the floor whilst Jo dug out the rug and laid it out for them to sit on. They then investigated what Marie had packed for them and were delighted with the goodies they found. She had also included some ice-cold lemonade, which they drank thirstily. There wasn’t much conversation, Jack was just happy to be in Jo’s company and Jo was happy to be away from the Sonnalpe, even for a few short hours. Once they had had enough to eat, Jack turned to Jo.

“Happy?” he asked her. Jo just nodded; she was busy watching a small bird at the other side of the clearing. When it flew off, she turned to him.

“It’s so nice to be away from the Sonnalpe, even if it is for such a short time,” she answered, honestly.

“It isn’t that bad there,” he told her. “You have a loving family and friends who care about you a lot. They just want to see you happy and well again, that’s all.”

“I know that,” she acknowledged. “It just feels a little claustrophobic there, sometimes. This is the first time I’ve been anywhere in almost a year.”

“You’ve not been home two weeks yet. You have to give yourself time to adjust. Doesn’t the school break up for summer soon?” As Jo nodded, he continued, “You’ll have Robin to talk to, then, as well as Grizel and Juliet. It won’t feel as lonely for you.” He glanced at his watch at this point, before asking, “What time is Abendessen?”

“At nineteen. Why?”

“We’d better get a move on then, if we don’t want to be late. It’s almost eighteen now, and starting to get a little gloomy in here.” Jo looked around her. It was, indeed, getting gloomy in the clearing, so she turned to and swiftly re-packed the basket. They stood up and shook out the rug, before putting it on top of the basket. Jack picked it up and they headed towards the car. Once there, they stowed the basket and headed home.

Jo absently fingered the necklace she was wearing as Jack drove. He had noticed she had his Christmas gift round her neck and was secretly pleased. He refrained from saying anything, though, as he knew she was too emotionally fragile at the moment. He felt she needed to rebuild her life first, and then maybe she would be ready for more than friendship.

Eventually, they reached Die Rosen. Jack took the basket through to the kitchen whilst Jo went to wash and brush her hair. They were warmly greeted by Jem and Madge as they arrived in the Salon and were just sitting down when the gong summoned them to the Speisesaal. They enjoyed a lovely meal before returning back there. Jo soon excused herself to go to bed, though, as she was tired.

“Thank you for a lovely afternoon, Jack,” she said to him as she stood up.

“It was my pleasure,” he replied, smiling. “Good night, Jo.”

“Good night.” She departed at this, as was glad to climb into her bed, where she was soon sound asleep.

The next two weeks passed quietly. As Jack had predicted, once the school had broken up, she had Robin, Grizel and Juliet to keep her company. She found herself feeling much happier. It felt as if life was finally starting to come together for her.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:09 am ]
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Aww, I really like Jack in this :D .
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:18 am ]
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Thanks Vicky, a lovely peaceful picnic. I think Joey is finding her feelings for Jack developing.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:18 am ]
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Jack is such a sweetheart
Author:  jmc [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:27 am ]
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It's nice to see more of Jo and Jack together. Thanks Vick.
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:12 pm ]
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Jack is lovely there. Thanks :-)
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:44 pm ]
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Even though Jo understands well enough that she needs to continue taking things slowly and has been surprised herself at how hard she's found it to adjust to being home again, I can well imagine that she also has times of feeling 'cribbed, cabinned and confined'. I'm sure that this little outing with Jack, right away from the Sonnalpe, was just the tonic she needed. I think her feelings for him really are growing, if only very, very slowly and am glad that Jack is prepared to respect that and wait awhile before declaring his feelings for her.

Thanks Vick, I'm really enjoying this.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:47 pm ]
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Jack is being very wise indeed, here, and is shaping up as the perfect SLOC for Joey. Thankyou!
Author:  Abi [ Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:01 pm ]
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Jack is indeed marvellous, and so understanding of what will help Joey.
Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:58 am ]
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Awww. I think I have a little crush on your Jack Vick!
Author:  Vick [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:37 am ]
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I must admit that if I wasn't already happily married, Jo would have competition for Jack! :lol:

A month after her return home, Jem reminded her that she had to go to the Sanatorium the next day for a chest X-ray and pneumothorax. Jo didn’t object. She had known it was going to happen, but it upset her equilibrium slightly, and she kept to herself for the day, not wishing to spoil anyone else’s happiness.

The next morning found Jo waiting for Jem at the front door once Frühstück was over. He was to drive her to her appointment and bring her back afterwards. Jo sat silently as Jem drove, re-living the last time this journey had taken place. She knew that she would be going home again today, but she couldn’t keep the fear out completely. Absently, she played with her necklace, which she had forgotten to remove. Jem noticed, however, and once they had arrived, gently suggested she give it to him for safekeeping. She did as he asked and he dropped it into his wallet. He then escorted her to the X-ray department, stating that he would collect her after she had been for her pneumothorax. She nodded and sat down to wait her turn.

Two hours later, he returned to collect her, this time from the operating theatre waiting room. He saw immediately that she didn’t have the breath to walk to the car, so he commandeered one of the wheelchairs and wheeled her back, instead. The journey home wasn’t particularly pleasant for Jo, as she felt as if she had been winded each time Jem passed over the smallest bump in the road. Eventually, they reached Die Rosen. Jo was thankful for the supporting arm Jem flung around her as he helped her into the chalet and up to her room, where she collapsed onto the bed and fell asleep.

When Jem checked on her a few hours later, she was awake once more.

“How are you feeling?” he asked, as he came in and sat down with her.

“Better,” she answered, shortly. He knew that she tended to keep her talking to a minimum for several hours after the procedure, so did not worry unduly.

“Do you want anything to eat?” Jo just nodded. “I’ll go and fetch a tray for you. Stay where you are and I’ll help you when I come back.” He departed, to return a few minutes later with a tray for her. After helping her to sit up, he placed the tray across her knee and she ate what she could. Jem then removed the tray and helped her to lie down again.

“Try to sleep some more, Jo. Do you plan to go down for Abendessen?” Jo shook her head. “I’ll ask Madge to bring you a tray up then, as I’ll be out. Take your time sitting up.” Jo nodded. Jem stood up to leave at this, and then remembered something. He turned back to the bed and, removing the necklace from his wallet, dropped it into Jo’s hand. She smiled at him.

“Thank you,” was all she said. Jem smiled at her and left. Jo looked at the necklace, before putting it onto her bedside cabinet and closing her eyes once more.

The next morning, Jo was feeling well enough to be up and about again, though she didn’t attempt to move too far. She knew from experience that it was better to take things slowly for a few days.
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:46 am ]
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Thanks Vicky.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:59 am ]
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Jem is lovely too :D .
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:11 am ]
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Jem and Jack are both lovely, thanks Vicky
Author:  jmc [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:09 am ]
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Wish I could find myself one of your Jacks or Jems. Thanks Vic
Author:  Chatelaine [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:19 pm ]
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What I love about Jo in this drabble is her maturity in understanding that things she doesn't want to do have to be done for the good of her own health, so even though she might cavil at them inwardly, she doesn't kick up a fuss the way, I think, EBD's Jo would have done. I really like her in this. Thanks Vick!
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 6:38 pm ]
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I do think that Jem and Jack are wonderful here - you've not really changed them at all from EBD's creations but you've added the bits of their character that she never seems to quite get across.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:39 pm ]
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I agree with CM! The way you're developing their characters is lovely. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Fri Mar 11, 2011 11:18 pm ]
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Thanks Vick; this is a great story.
Author:  emma t [ Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:58 pm ]
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Just had a catch up :) I do wonder if Jack has hinted to Jem how he feels about Joey if Jem has guessed ? :) Surely Jo would realise the way in Jack is always seeking out her company as he did before she was diagnosed with tb? Thanks Vick! :D
Author:  Vick [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:30 am ]
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Apologies for lack of update yesterday. Was out all day & had friends to stay :mrgreen:

Life continued in the same pattern for Jo over the next month. The weather was extremely hot, so she spent most of her days outside in the shade. She was generally joined by her sister and any of the other occupants of Die Rosen who were about during the mornings. She continued to take a two hour rest in her room after Mittagessen, and found she was spending less time in her little sitting room than she had done when she first arrived home. She still enjoyed the sanctuary it gave her and wasn’t prepared to give it up, just yet.

When her next appointment at the Sanatorium arrived, she found herself being driven over by Jack Maynard, as Jem was already there. She chattered to him quite happily on the way over. He dropped her at the entrance, saying he would collect her afterwards. She made her way in and was directed to the X-ray department first. She was then sent over to the operating theatre for her pneumothorax. However, she was told that she had to see Dr Russell, before she left. This surprised her, as she had expected to go straight home afterwards. As she was rather breathless after the procedure, a nurse kindly wheeled her to his office. She knocked on the door and, at his command, wheeled Jo in.

“Thank you, Nurse,” he said, formally, as she deposited Jo and turned to leave. Once she had closed the door, he came round the desk to sit next to his sister-in-law, who was looking rather confused by now. “You’ve done nothing wrong, Jo,” he told her. “I just needed to have a word with you before you left.”

“What about?” she asked, her face only clearing slightly. She was still a little apprehensive.

“Your last X-rays were really good. I think you are well enough to have twelve hours up, now.”

“Really?”

“Yes, really. You’re improving all the time and walking about so much more now. You only really struggle when you have pneumothorax, and that’s to be expected. You’ll have to go on having that for a good while yet, though.”

“Th-thank you,” was all Jo could find to say. She wanted to hug him, but managed to refrain, as she knew it would hurt too much. Jem saw her look, and smiled at her.

“Another time, Jo,” he said, gently. She just nodded in reply to this. “Now, we’d better get you to the entrance ready for your lift home. Don’t do anything silly and I’ll see you when I get back.” At this, he went to the door and summoned a passing nurse to wheel her to the entrance hall to wait for Jack.

Jo sat waiting for about twenty minutes. She had almost dozed off when a shadow fell across her and a hand was laid gently on her arm. She jumped slightly, causing her to struggle to catch her breath again.

“I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to startle you,” Jack apologised. He sat down next to her whilst she recovered, and then helped her to her feet. He escorted her to the car, and drove quickly back to Die Rosen.

“Thank you,” Jo said to him as he pulled up at the gate.

“My pleasure,” he replied. “I’m sorry I was late collecting you.”

“It’s okay.” Jo paused, then continued, “Spoke to Jem.”

“Oh?” Jack had an idea what had been said, having seen her file only yesterday.

“Twelve hours up, now.”

“That’s wonderful news, Jo.” Jack smiled at her, genuinely happy she was doing so well. “We’ll have to celebrate.” Jo nodded, and then yawned. Jack saw it and the discomfort she was beginning to feel, so he quickly climbed out and went round to help her. They walked slowly to the door, and Jack turned to leave once he had seen her inside. He glanced back as he reached for the door handle and saw her contemplating how she was going to negotiate the stairs.

“Why don’t you use the lift, Jo?” he asked her.

“Don’t like it,” she answered, shortly. Jack stared at her for a minute, as he digested this piece of information.

“What if I came in it with you?”

“No.”

“Would you like me to give you a hand up, then?” Jo just nodded in reply, and he came swiftly over to help her. Eventually, they reached the top and Jo stopped to catch what little breath she had.

“Thank you,” she gasped.

“Let’s get you to your room first, eh?” He held out his arm to her and they went along the corridor until they reached her room. He stopped here, and turned to head back down the corridor.

“Get some rest now, and I’ll see you soon,” he told her. He then strode back along the corridor and down the stairs. Jo watched him go. Then she went into her room and crawled into bed, falling sound asleep until Jem came in at Kaffee und Kuchen.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:04 am ]
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Thank you Vicky.
Author:  Abi [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:43 am ]
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Aww, lovely Jack!
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:53 pm ]
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Jack's lovely.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:16 pm ]
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Please may I have a Jack? And possibly a Jem, too? Oh, I just can't decide! :lol:
Author:  roversgirl [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 8:53 pm ]
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Isn't he sweet? Thanks :-)
Author:  emma t [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:08 pm ]
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I'd love a Jack too :)
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:10 pm ]
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Thanks Vick. I do like how Joey is growing up here
Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:36 pm ]
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Silly girl, why not use the lift.

I want a Jack! (Of course my SLOC might be upset but as he's a pilot not a doctor he'll just have to cope)
Author:  jmc [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:26 am ]
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Jack and Jo seem made for each other here. Thanks Vick.
Author:  Vick [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:46 am ]
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Thanks for the comments.

Another glorious morning here in sunny Yorkshire. :mrgreen:

Time continued onwards and Jo found herself able to do more than just sitting around. She was walking about much more, now. Not long distances yet, but she felt glad to be able to go outside the gardens of Die Rosen after Kaffee und Kuchen. She wasn’t allowed to go alone, but she secretly hoped that would come soon. She still struggled for a few days every time she had pneumothorax, but this was something to which she was becoming accustomed. She was starting to look much healthier too, as Jem had been pleased to tell her at her last check-up.

Winter arrived and, with it, some bitterly cold weather. Jo looked out of the window in the Salon one morning and noticed a few flakes of snow drifting down. She commented on it to her sister, who happened to be in the room with her.

“I hope we don’t have another severe winter,” Madge said. “Last year was awful.”

“I don’t really remember,” Jo replied, sadly. “I was stuck in the Sanatorium. I don’t even remember my birthday last year.” Madge smiled sympathetically at her.

“It’s only a week or so away. Why don’t you invite one or two friends round for Abendessen that night?”

“May I?” Jo asked. She perked up at this suggestion, as Madge had intended.

“Of course you may. No more than four, though.” Jo pondered who to invite, whilst her sister returned to reading her book. Eventually, Jo looked across at her sister.

“I think I’d like to invite Frieda, Marie, Grizel and Juliet, please,” she announced. Madge smiled at her.

“If you invite Marie, then you have to invite Eugen as well,” she pointed out.

“But that makes it five! I can’t invite Marie and Eugen and not invite Frieda, as she also makes up our quartette. It’s a shame Simone is in Paris, otherwise I would have invited her, too. It’s the same with Grizel and Juliet. I can’t invite one and not the other.”

“That’s true,” Madge agreed. “In that case, you may invite them all. If you go and use the ‘phone now, you’ll be able to have it all arranged by the time Mittagessen arrives.” Jo stood up at this, and departed to Jem’s office to make the calls.

When Jem arrived home that afternoon, he was informed of the plan. He looked serious for a few minutes as he digested the information, before smiling at Jo.

“May I invite another person, as well?” he asked, in mock serious tones.

“Of course,” Jo replied, surprised.

“Excellent.” He smiled and said no more. Jo didn’t feel as if she could press him for more information. She was just glad he hadn’t vetoed the idea, something she thought he might well have done if he had been so inclined.

The day before her birthday, Jo was reading in the Salon after Kaffee und Kuchen, when Jem came into the room.

“Jo?” he said, as he sat down beside her. Jo looked up from her book. “I know it’s your birthday tomorrow, but you are still only allowed twelve hours up.” Jo frowned at this reference to her illness. Apart from when he told her she had appointments, Jem had been very good at not talking to her about it at home. He had deliberately tried to keep all his medical talk strictly to the Sanatorium so that Jo wouldn’t feel as if she was being constantly watched. So far, this had worked as Jo hadn’t rebelled and had kept strictly to her regime. Jem didn’t want her birthday to be the thing to set her back.

“I think you should stay in bed tomorrow morning and come down later on. That way, you won’t have to go to bed at ten o’clock whilst everyone else carries on without you.” Jo stared at him for a few minutes as she digested this information. She understood what he meant, and was pleased that he had thought of a solution for her.

“Really?” she asked, still wondering if she would be allowed to do that.

“Yes, I don’t see why not. If you rest most of the morning and get up in time for Mittagessen, you’ll be able to stay up until everyone has left, without affecting yourself unduly. You’ll need to stay in bed the next morning, too, but I’m sure you’ll accept that as part of the deal.” Jo nodded her acceptance. She knew that she wouldn’t be able to do as he suggested, otherwise.

Jo duly stayed in bed the next morning. She rose and dressed about eleven o’clock, before making her way to the Salon. When she entered, she was surrounded by the children, who had been allowed downstairs to play.

“Happy Birthday, Auntie Jo,” they all chorused.

“Come and open your presents,” added Rix, who was possibly more excited at the prospect than Jo was. She laughed and let herself be dragged over to the corner where a pile of parcels were lying, some wrapped better than others.

Madge joined in her laughter, adding, “I’ll ring for coffee, Jo. You may need it!” Jo smiled her thanks as she was given the first of the parcels. Half an hour later, Jo was sitting with a coffee in her hand. She had unwrapped her presents as instructed and found that they were mainly drawings and models that the children had all done themselves. She had thanked them and managed to praise them all for their efforts. Once they were satisfied, they had gone back to their game that her entry had interrupted and she was left in peace to speak to her sister.

“Happy Birthday, Jo,” Madge said. “Are you looking forward to tonight?” Jo nodded. She had been looking forward to it since she had been told she might invite a few friends for Abendessen. She had managed to curb her enthusiasm, though, thinking that Jem may veto it if she was too excited. The gong for Mittagessen rang at that moment, so the sisters left the Salon to go to the Speisesaal, Rosa having collected the children five minutes before.

Jo was obliged to retire to her room once more when Mittagessen was over. She soon fell asleep; despite the fact that she had been sure she wouldn’t, as she had rested all morning. She was woken by Jem at Kaffee und Kuchen. He had arrived home from the Sanatorium and was surprised to hear that she had not come back down after her usual two hours. He anxiously looked at her for any tell-tale signs, but on finding none, gave her a gentle shake. She rolled over and grunted slightly, before opening her eyes. When she saw Jem standing there, smiling at her, she attempted to sit up, but failed miserably as she was tangled in her covers. Jem just laughed, before informing her that Kaffee und Kuchen was waiting downstairs and departing. Fifteen minutes later, Jo appeared in the Salon. She was greeted properly by Jem this time, before she sat down and helped herself to coffee and cakes. She spent the meal trying to find out whom Jem’s guest was to be that evening, but he was not forthcoming, simply telling her to wait and see.
Author:  jmc [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:05 am ]
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It has to be Jack doesn't it.
Author:  JS [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:03 am ]
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Quote:
It has to be Jack doesn't it


Much as Jo likes him, I think she'd be even happier if it were Simone (or Robin, but she's possibly a bit young).

Thanks Vick - again envious of your sunshine; I've just been cleaning out the chickens in the sleet :(
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:54 am ]
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Sunny here too :D. I'm hoping it's Simone: I think making a big deal of Jack visiting might be pushing it at this stage.
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:34 am ]
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Thanks Vicky. I hope it is Jack :D
Author:  Sarah J [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 1:01 pm ]
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I hope it's Jack as well. He would be disappointed not to see Jo on her birthday.
Author:  Myth Tree [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:20 pm ]
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Hope it's Jack otherwise poor Eugen going to be outnumbered.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:28 pm ]
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Methinks will be Jack, which should be interesting!

Thankyou :D
Author:  chris84 [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:44 pm ]
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Thanks Vick. :)
Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:51 pm ]
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I haven't been on the CBB for ages, but I have had a treat catching up with this. I love how you have rounded out the characters of Jem and Jack, and how Joey is growing up. Thanks!
Author:  emma t [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:07 pm ]
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Thanks Vick, got a feeling its going to be Simone :) but i could be wrong!
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:36 pm ]
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I hope it's Jack and I hope she reacts well. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:32 pm ]
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Not sure who I'd like it to be... it would be slightly odd for Jem to make such a fuss over it's being Jack, when he sees Jo a lot anyway. Maybe it is Simone; that'd be really nice for Joey. Or someone we haven't even thought of...
Author:  Vick [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:51 am ]
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Oooh... speculation :D Some of you got it right :lol:

Jo went to change at six thirty that evening. She wanted to make sure she was ready and in the Salon when her friends arrived. The first to appear was Frieda Mensch. She was staying with her brother so only had to walk round the corner. Grizel and Juliet were next to arrive, followed by Marie and Eugen von und zu Wertheimer. All were old friends, so they chattered happily away, even Eugen managing a few words, though he was relieved to see Jem appear, and behind him his mystery guest. They had entered and were standing talking in the corner for a good few minutes before Jo noticed them. When she finally did, her face broke into a huge smile and she came rapidly across the room to greet them.

“Jack!” she said, surprised. “Are you Jem’s mystery guest?” Jack grinned widely at this. He had been warned that Jo had no idea he was coming.

“I certainly am,” he replied. “Happy birthday, Jo.” The gong for Abendessen rang at this moment, so Jack held out his arm. “May I have the honour to escort you?” Jo smilingly accepted. They led the procession through to the Speisesaal, the others following in groups. The meal was a lively affair and they all thoroughly enjoyed what Marie had made for them. The ladies left the table first and went back to the Salon, leaving the men to themselves. They eventually rejoined the ladies an hour later. At half past twenty-three, Marie and Eugen reluctantly bade farewell and departed. This broke the party up, and the other guests also prepared to leave. Jack offered to see Frieda home and Grizel and Juliet to the Chalet School Annexe, where they lived during the term. Frieda accepted gladly, but the other two laughingly refused, saying it was out of his way.

Once they had departed, Jo stood up and yawned widely. “I think it’s time I departed, too,” she said. “Thank you both for such a lovely evening.” She gave her sister a hug and turned to Jem. “Thank you, Jem,” she whispered as she hugged him in turn.

“You’re very welcome,” he answered, returning the hug. “Get some sleep now. I don’t want to see you until Mittagessen tomorrow.” Jo headed to her room at this and was soon sound asleep, never hearing Jem come in to check on her as he sought his own bed.

Jo slept until after Mittagessen the next day, only waking when Jem came in with a tray after he had eaten his own. He woke her and waited for her to sit up, before placing the tray across her knee. Jo found she was hungry and ate everything in front of her, which Jem was pleased to see. Although she was tired, she seemed to be well enough. When she had finished, he suggested she lay back down again.

“But I feel all right now,” she protested.

“No, Jo. You’re still tired. If I hadn’t woken you for Mittagessen, you would still be asleep now. Your body is still recovering from your late night, as it isn’t used to them. Plus, you would normally rest now, anyway, and you should try and get back to your normal routine.”

“Oh,” Jo said, acknowledging the fact that Jem was right. “Well, may I get up for Kaffee und Kuchen, then?”

“If you’re awake, I don’t see why not. Make sure you’re in bed at your normal time, or earlier if you feel tired.” Jem picked the tray up at this and departed, leaving Jo to lie and rest. She picked the rosary up off the bedside cabinet and absently toyed with it for a while, thinking over what Jem had said. She knew he was right. He was always right, she thought to herself, but at least he had said she could get up for Kaffee und Kuchen. She dozed back off at this point, the rosary in her hand.

She woke at half past fifteen, and felt much better. She found the rosary still entangled around her fingers and put it back on the cabinet with a smile. She had never realised quite how much comfort it brought her until that moment. She spent the evening quietly with her sister, going to bed at her usual time. The next day, she felt well enough to be up and about again as normal.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 9:07 am ]
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It does all make a lot more sense than Jo melodramatically falling into his arms because Robin went AWOL during a picnic :D .
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:47 pm ]
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Thanks Vicky. Pleased Joey is making good progress and learning to take care.
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:18 pm ]
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Glad she was pleased that Jack came. Thanks :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:37 pm ]
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Yay! It was Jack! And Jem still makes a really embarrassing Cupid :D

Thankyou!
Author:  Abi [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:51 pm ]
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ChubbyMonkey wrote:
And Jem still makes a really embarrassing Cupid :D


Oh, thanks for that image! :roll:

It's nice to see their relationship growing, though. Thanks Vick.
Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Mar 15, 2011 11:12 pm ]
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It was nice to have a normal dinner party with no wild romps, childish games or silly sandwiches! Thanks Vick, your character development is great.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:14 am ]
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Thanks this is really lovely
Author:  Vick [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 8:49 am ]
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Many thanks for your comments. :D

Time flew on towards Christmas. Jack took Jo down to Spärtz one morning so she could do some shopping. As this was her first trip there for over a year, she was excited just to be somewhere which wasn’t the Sonnalpe. They spent a lovely hour or so wandering around, buying gifts for everyone, before Jack took her to the Gasthaus for Kaffee. After that, they had to depart. Jo was reluctant to go, but she soon fell asleep in the car on the way back, only waking when Jack stopped the car outside Die Rosen. He smiled at her, as she yawned and tried to stretch unsuccessfully in the small space.

“Are we back, already?” she asked him.

“I’m afraid so. You slept all the way,” he replied.

“I’m sorry. I just couldn’t keep my eyes open.”

“There’s no need to apologise. Now, how about I help you inside with your bags?”

“Thank you. Will you stay for Mittagessen?”

“That would be lovely.” They got out of the car and collected Jo’s bags from the boot, before heading inside, where they shed their outer garments. They took her shopping along to her little sitting room and dumped it on the floor, before going along to the Salon.

After they had eaten, Jo retired to her bedroom, where she swiftly fell asleep. Jack departed as well, as he had to be at the Sanatorium for a meeting that afternoon.

Almost before Jo realised, it was Christmas Eve. She spent the morning wrapping presents in her sitting room, and the time after Kaffee und Kuchen helping her sister decorate the Christmas tree, which had been brought in and placed in the Salon. She departed to bed at her usual hour, having been told that she would not be allowed to attend the midnight service this year. Jem also told her to stay in bed until it was time to go to church the next morning, so that she could stay up a little later on Christmas Day. Jo happily agreed to this, as it meant that she could spend the time with her family and friends in the evening as she always did.

Jo was woken by her sister as she came in with a tray on Christmas morning.

“Merry Christmas, Jo,” she said as she laid it across Jo’s knee.

“Merry Christmas, Madge,” Jo replied, kissing her sister. “How lovely to have breakfast in bed on Christmas morning.” Madge smiled at this.

“Don’t get used to it. Next year you’ll be joining us in the Speisesaal.” Jo didn’t bother to reply to this, as she had already tucked into the contents of the tray. Madge just laughed and departed, telling her to get dressed when she had finished as it would be time to go to church by then.

The rest of the day passed quickly. Mittagessen was a riotous affair, as the children had all been allowed to join in the feast in the Speisesaal. Jo was obliged to rest after this meal, but when she returned to the Salon, there was much rejoicing as the children were allowed to exchange their presents. The adults were a little more restrained, but even they were infected by the excitement. After Kaffee und Kuchen, the children were allowed to play some of the games they had been given, before being collected by Rosa for their Abendessen. When they had departed, the adults retired to change in readiness for their expected guests.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:08 am ]
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Things seem to be going well.
Author:  jmc [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:11 am ]
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A much nicer Christmas for Jo than the one before it. Thanks Vick.
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:10 am ]
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Thanks Vicky. Pleased Joey could cope with visit to Spatz and with Christmas itself.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 6:18 pm ]
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D'awwwwww!

Go Jack!
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 8:17 pm ]
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That was lovely and I'm glad she could participate in quite a bit of it! Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:06 pm ]
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Glad Joey seems to be doing so well. Thanks Vick.
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:06 am ]
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Making children wait until after lunch for pressies? That's just cruel!
Author:  Beecharmer [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:54 am ]
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Just wanted to say thank you and enjoying the drabble. :-)

I do like this development of Jack and Jo, it almost feels more real than the version in the series now. Are you sure you didn't find those lost manuscripts ? :-)
Author:  Vick [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:54 am ]
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Good morning (just!) :mrgreen:

Many thanks for all your comments

Jo was the first to be ready, so she sat down in a corner of the Salon with a book to wait. She was soon absorbed in it. When Jack entered the room, he glanced around and realised they were alone, although Jo hadn’t noticed his presence yet. He wandered across to where she was sitting.

“Merry Christmas, Jo,” he said, quietly. She glanced up, surprised, but at the sight of him smiling down at her, her expression soon changed to happiness.

“Merry Christmas, Jack,” she replied. She stood up to give him a hug and he returned it in kind, stooping to kiss her cheek at the same time. Jo didn’t pull away. The door opened just then and they parted quickly as her sister and brother-in-law came in, followed by other guests who had arrived at the same time. Not long after, the gong went for Abendessen. Jo was seated opposite Jack at the table and she smiled at him throughout the meal. Once it was finished and the men had been left alone in the Speisesaal, the women happily chatted away in the Salon. Jo was quiet at first, as she couldn’t get that brief moment alone with Jack out of her mind. Eventually, she managed to pull herself back to the present, reminding herself that her sister would worry if she did not take part.

The men eventually rejoined the women in the Salon, and they soon broke up in to smaller groups, enjoying the chatter. Madge and Jem moved effortlessly around the room, making sure that everyone had full glasses and taking part in the conversation. At twenty-three o’clock, Jem managed to wrangle his way into a conversation with Jo and Gisela Mensch. After a few polite words, Gisela excused herself to go and talk to someone else, leaving Jo and Jem alone. Taking advantage of this moment, Jem spoke quickly and quietly.

“Have you seen the time, Jo?” he asked. Jo glanced at the pretty new watch she was wearing, and gasped. She hadn’t realised how late it was. “Take yourself off to bed as quickly as you can decently manage.” He left her at this and moved onto the next group of people. Jo headed slowly for the door, carefully keeping out of any more conversation and hoping to slip away unnoticed. She was upset that Jem had bade her to go to bed, but she was beginning to realise that she was tired now. As she slipped through the door, Jack noticed her go. He rapidly concluded his own conversation and went out after her. She was just starting up the stairs, when he caught her up.

“Were you going to disappear and not say goodnight?” he asked her. Jo turned around, looking slightly embarrassed at this.

“I didn’t exactly want to shout it from the rooftop,” she replied, drily. It was Jack’s turn to feel embarrassed as he realised the reason why she had disappeared so quietly.

“I’m sorry. I should have thought about that,” he apologised. Jo smiled slightly at him. He stood at the bottom of the stairs and she was on a level with him on the first step. Impulsively, she threw her arms around him in another hug. Jack was slightly surprised, but returned it happily, before drawing back to look at her.

“Goodnight Jack, and Merry Christmas,” she smiled, as she pulled her arms back. She then turned and headed off up the stairs, leaving him staring after her and wondering if she may be starting to return his feelings for her.

“Goodnight, Jo,” he called after her. She waved from the top of the stairs and was gone. He turned and made his way slowly back to the Salon.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:28 pm ]
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Making progress :D .
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 5:44 pm ]
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Sounds like they will be willing o share their feelings for each other soon.

Thanks Vicky
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:19 pm ]
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I now have an adorable image of Jack stood rubbing his foot up and down the back of his leg like a small boy waiting for his first kiss :D

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:21 pm ]
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oh how cute! Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:51 pm ]
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Love the way this romance is developing. :D
Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:03 am ]
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Vick wrote:
“Merry Christmas, Jack,” she replied. She stood up to give him a hug and he returned it in kind, stooping to kiss her cheek at the same time. Jo didn’t pull away.



Awwwww. Bless.

Reading Jo's biggest challenge is the first thing I do at work every day!
Author:  Vick [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:36 am ]
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Many thanks for your comments :oops:

Jo and Jack's romance never seems to be given much page space and I'm sure he must have courted her before they got engaged.

Back to the story, I'm still rather unsure about whether this scene would happen, but Mary convinced me that it was fine, so here goes... :dontknow:

Jo found the weeks after Christmas moved slowly onwards. She continued with her monthly trips to the Sanatorium for check ups, X-rays and pneumothorax. The winter weather seemed to be dragging on, to her mind. She was becoming a little fractious at being stuck in the house because it was too cold for her to be outside for any length of time.

One day she managed to outdo herself, snapping at anyone and everyone who spoke to her, the final straw coming when she ended up arguing with her sister over something as trivial as the colour of some material Madge planned to buy. In the end her sister told her to leave the room and not to bother returning until she was in a better mood. Jo flounced out of the Salon to her little sitting room, where she dropped heavily into the chair and moodily stared out the window. She sat there for a good twenty minutes, before suddenly bursting into tears. Jem, coming to seek her shortly afterwards, heard her and hastily entered the room. He had heard the tail end of the argument and had seen Jo leave just as he was hanging his coat up. After having some Kaffee und Kuchen with his wife, who had explained what had happened, he had decided to see if he could do anything. When Jo had calmed down, he spoke.

“Do you feel better for that?” Jo shook her head. “Why not?”

“I’m still stuck here. Inside, looking at the same four walls,” she replied, petulantly. She was not willing to apologise quite yet, Jem realised.

“There isn’t much I can do about the weather, I’m afraid,” he stated.

“I know that, and I’m not asking you to. It’s just so frustrating being stuck here indoors, when everyone else can go outside and play or walk.”

“You’re in a better position than you were this time last year, Jo. You were in the Sanatorium still on bed rest, with only one hour time up. Wouldn’t you much prefer to be stuck indoors here, with twelve hours time up and able to walk about?”

“Yes,” she acknowledged, slowly. “I suppose so.”

“You’ve also been terribly rude to your sister.” Jem decided to ram his point home. “All she wants is the best for you, she wants you to be happy and healthy again, and you treat her like that.” Jo looked at the floor. She was starting to feel ashamed of her outburst, especially when Jem put it like that.

“I’m sorry,” she murmured.

“I’m not the one to whom you should be apologising,” he told her. Jo nodded at this, before getting slowly to her feet. Jem stood up, as well. “Go and wash your face first, then come back to the Salon.” They both left the sitting room, Jo to go first to the bathroom, whilst Jem headed straight back to warn his wife, before going on to his office.

Jo entered the Salon in some apprehension. Her sister just looked up from her knitting before continuing on with it in silence.

“I-I’m sorry, Madge,” she said. “I shouldn’t have said what I did to you, and I apologise.” Madge pulled her down onto the sofa with her. She had been upset when she had sent Jo out. She found it hard to accept that Jo was now an adult and that her illness had caused her to have a different outlook on life.

“Apology accepted,” Madge said. “Next time, though, it may be a good idea to think before you pick an argument.” She smiled at her sister, showing that there were no hard feelings. Jo smiled wanly back and the rest of the day passed in comparative peace.
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:14 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
Thanks Vicky. I am sure it could happen, I could have that sort of spat with my mother let alone my sister without Joey's experiences
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:05 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
I think things like that are bound to happen when someone's cooped up inside all the time and other people are, with the best of intentions, fussing over them.
Author:  Liz K [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 5:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
And surely it's a good sign, isn't it, that, even though Jo still has to be careful, she's wanting to be "on the go" again.
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
That's true, it is a good sign. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
Definitely a good sign if she can cope with strong emotion like that. And it was bound to happen sometime - no-one can live in peace all the time, however fond they are!
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
Thanks Vick
Author:  Vick [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 18/3/11
Good morning! :D The sun has got his hat on here in Yorkshire once more

This will be the last update for now, as it is as far as Mary has got in proofreading for me :devil:

The thaw arrived eventually, and Jo rejoiced in being allowed to go out walking again, even if she did need to wrap up warmly and wear waterproof boots. Jem took her and Robin down to Briesau one afternoon as he had to call at the Chalet School to consult with the Headmistress, Miss Annersley. She was greeted warmly by the staff there, and was given the news that her friend Marie von und zu Wertheimer and her husband and sister and their children were all going to America. Jem had news of his own, announcing that the school was to be moved, lock, stock and barrel up to the Sonnalpe during the half term, where they would have more protection if Germany should choose to include Austria in the Reich.

The weather continued to improve, and Jo with it. During her trip to the Sanatorium at the end of February, she was told that she would be allowed to stay up as long as she wanted now, but must continue to rest after Mittagessen, whenever possible. As Jo had never kept particularly late hours, and dutifully retired to her room each day after Mittagessen, this didn’t really affect her. Jem also told her that she would be allowed to spend a whole day out occasionally, as long as she rested the following day. Jo smiled at this and would have hugged Jem, if she had the breath.

Jack offered to take Jo to Innsbruck for the day on his next day off, an offer Jo was more than happy to accept. She hadn’t been there for over a year, so she enjoyed it immensely. Jack made sure she didn’t overdo it, though, and they spent a long time over Mittagessen, just happy to be in each other’s company. Jo was slowly beginning to realise that she cared for Jack much more than as a friend. However, she wasn’t ready to admit that to anyone yet, let alone to Jack. She had spent too many years stating that she would never get married, and she had to sort it in her own mind first. As for Jack, he was just happy to be with Jo at any opportunity he could. Although he had never told anyone of his feelings for Jo, he suspected that Jem knew how he felt.

*****

Just before Easter, Jo was asked to sign the Chalet School Peace League, something the girls at the school had devised to try and promote peace between their countries if war should come, now that Austria had become part of the German Reich. The next day, a select few from school were to go on a picnic with Jo and Jack to hide the document safely from prying eyes.

On the way to the picnic site, they were given the Nazi salute for the first time. After they had recovered from this shock, they continued on until they encountered a large boulder blocking the way. Jack looked at Jo as they reached it.

“How do you propose to get over that?” he asked her.

“I’d forgotten about this bit,” she acknowledged. “It’s so long since I came this way and, as far as I know, this is the only way to get there.”

“Well, we’d better figure out a way to get you up there, then.” Jack thought for a moment, before calling to Hilary Burn. “Do you think you can get up and then give everyone else a hand up if I help from down here?” Hilary looked at the boulder, thoughtfully.

“It shouldn’t be too difficult. There looks to be plenty of foot and hand holds.” She set off up the boulder, more agile than elegant, and was soon sprawled across the top. The others soon followed, with boosts from Jack at the bottom, until there were only him and Jo left.

“Take your time. I don’t want to have Jem on my back because you’ve outdone yourself,” he warned her. Jo heeded his advice, and eventually reached the top. She was very breathless and Jack made her sit down until he was satisfied she had come to no real harm from the unaccustomed exertion.

Eventually, they moved on, strolling along until they reached the place where they planned to have their picnic. Everyone ate well, Jo included, and all chattered happily together. Suddenly, Jeanne le Cadoulec noticed the small boy who had given them the Nazi greeting earlier on. He was hiding behind a nearby rock.

“How are we going to hide it if he’s following us?” asked Cornelia, practically.

“Easy,” Hilary answered her. “Let’s have a game of hide and seek. He won’t be able to follow all of us at the same time and two of us will easily be able to sneak off to hide it”

“That’s true. Who should hide it, though?” Evadne put in.

“It had better be Robin, as she knows where the cave is. I won’t be quick enough to get there and back in time,” Jo said slowly.

“Can you shove it in your pocket, then?” Cornelia asked Robin. She nodded and the precious document was duly hidden, ready.

“Don’t go there immediately, though. We need to wait a few turns before you do it,” Hilary warned her.

“Dr Jack, will you be first seeker?” asked Evadne.

Jack nodded his agreement, before adding, “As Jo is at a disadvantage, her partner is responsible for getting back home for both of them.” Jo scowled at him. She felt she was capable of playing a game of hide and seek, but Jack just ignored her. He knew she wasn’t up to running, even if she thought so.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 10:46 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
Thanks Vick, though you've now left us hanging at an exciting bit! :D
Author:  jmc [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 11:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
So are they still going to get engaged at this point? Really hope so. Thanks Vick.
Author:  Alison H [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
Jo getting hysterical and collapsing would make much more sense if she were just recovering from a serious illness.
Author:  Beecharmer [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 1:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
My big worry now is the bit that comes after - if she is just able to do these things what will the trek to escape do to her ??? Don't make this a sad drabble just as things have started to improve, pretty please !!

Thank you for the story though !
Author:  roversgirl [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
I am also wibbling about how she'll manage the escape to Switzerland. Thanks :-)
Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
Thanks Vicky. Pleased joey is doing so well, and realising her feelings for Jack.
Author:  whitequeen [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
It's really nice to see this connecting up with the "canon" now! :) Thanks!
Author:  Abi [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 8:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
Interesting to see how the events coincide and differ. And it's nice that the girls still asked Jo to sign the Peace League, even though she hasn't been able to be as involved with the School as she was in the original.

Thanks Vick!
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
Two updates at once - I am a lucky bunny! Thankyou, it's wonderful to watch the changing relationship between them and to link it up to canon. This is definitely how EBD should have written it!
Author:  Miss Di [ Sun Mar 20, 2011 3:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
It does make Jo's collapse when the reach Switzerland much easier to understand. A big thank thank you to Vick for this story and her trusty proofreader Mary!
Author:  Vick [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 8:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 19/3/11
Good morning from very sunny Yorkshire. :D

You lucky people will be pleased to know that Mary, bless her, has spent the weekend proofreading a large chunk for me to continue posting :mrgreen: However, she hasn't found the next, equally large, chunk sitting quietly in her inbox, yet :lol:

After a few turns, Jo took her turn at seeking. She wisely left Robin and Hilary until last, as she suspected that they would be going to hide the document. She found Jeanne and Cornelia first, and sat down with them to have a quick drink, before going in search of Evadne and Jack. Once they, too, had been found, she went off in search of Robin and Hilary. She soon found the cave where they were supposed to be hiding the document and entered, suddenly feeling slightly apprehensive. She had no idea why, though. As she went along to the end and there was still no sign of them, she felt panic rise. Had she missed them on the way up? Having checked thoroughly inside the inner cave, she made her way slowly back out and hunted in the bushes round about, in case they had already been in and were now just joining in the game. She became more worried as she discovered that they seemed to be nowhere around. In a last attempt, she tried the bush right next to the cave entrance.

She didn’t find Robin and Hilary, but she did find Hermann Eisen, the little boy who had given them the Nazi greeting earlier in the day. She grabbed hold of him before he could run off and demanded to know what he was doing there. He tried to act as if he had no idea what she was talking about but, by this time, Jo was in no mood to tolerate any nonsense. She shook him hard, firing questions at him. He tried to answer as best he could, for he was thoroughly scared by her rough treatment. Eventually, she managed to get out of him that he had seen them enter the cave, but they had not returned.

Jo made her way back down to the rest of the group, instructing Hermann to follow her in a voice that forbade any argument. She was worried and frightened about the disappearance of Robin and Hilary and needed to find someone to reassure her. That someone was Jack. Regardless of the pain she was now starting to feel in her chest, she walked as quickly as she could, Hermann following in her wake. When she reached the picnic site she was in a terrible state.

“Jo! What’s happened?” Jack asked, concerned. Jo grabbed the nearest tree for support. She was gasping for breath and holding her right side. “Sit down, and concentrate on breathing slowly.” As she sank onto the ground, she tried to open her mouth to speak, but he was quicker. “No. Don’t try to speak yet. You need to get your breathing back under control first.

When she was calmer, he tried again. “What’s happened?”

“Not in the cave,” she told him.

“How do you know?

“Looked... inside and out...”

“Well, they must be somewhere. Are you sure you haven’t just missed them?”

“Yes. Only him there.” Jo pointed at Hermann, who was sitting between Cornelia and Evadne. Jack was silent, thinking what to do next.

“I think we should go and double check, just to make sure. Do you think you could manage to show us where the cave is?” Helping Jo to her feet, he bade Jeanne to stay there with Hermann and the baskets. He then wrapped an arm firmly around Jo, and almost carried her back to the cave.

When they reached it, he gently put her away from him and set off into the cave. Jo followed, breathing heavily. Once he had established that there certainly was no sign of Robin or Hilary, he decided the best course of action would be to return home and send out search parties if they weren’t already there. Holding Jo tightly once more, they set off for home, collecting Jeanne and Hermann on the way. The boulder proved to be the main obstacle again, but he managed to get everyone down without a hitch, thanks to some help from Evadne and Cornelia.

By the time they reached Die Rosen, it was dark and Jack was practically carrying Jo. His face was grim as he realised how much this could set her back. He thought back to that day the previous month, when he’d taken her to Innsbruck. He had noticed a subtle change in her attitude about her future, though he’d said nothing at the time. Now she could end up back in the Sanatorium, thanks to an innocent vow devised by schoolgirls, but lethal if in the wrong hands.

Madge came to greet them with the news that Robin and Hilary had arrived back a couple of hours earlier, no worse for their adventure. This was too much for Jo and she promptly went limp in Jack’s arms. He carried her inside and laid her on the sofa. After several minutes, she came back to her senses. She just looked at him and burst into tears, holding tightly onto him, as if she never meant to let go. He held her closely, murmuring words of comfort in her ear, much to the surprise of Madge, who swiftly left the room.

“Its okay, Joey,” Jack told her, softly. “I’m here. I’ll always be here for you, if that’s what you want.” Jo just clung on more tightly. His words were comforting to her.

“Oh, Jack,” she managed to choke out. “I don’t know what I’d do without you. When everything falls apart, you’re still there. You’re a solid lump of comfort and I love you.”

“I love you too, Joey. I don’t want us to ever be parted again, whatever life throws at us. Will you marry me and share your life with me forever?”

“Yes, yes. Of course I will.” Jo hugged him even tighter, despite the pain in her chest. Jack realised, though, and pulled away slightly. He looked into her eyes, and saw the love in them, as well as the pain.

“Let’s get you upstairs to bed. I don’t think you’ll be going far for a while, especially when Jem hears what happened today.”

“Promise me you’ll come every day?” she asked him.

“I promise,” he said, tenderly. There was no way he would leave her again, if at all possible. “I have to work tomorrow, but I’ll come straight after.” Jo just nodded. She realised that she had completely exhausted herself, and could no longer do anything without struggling to breathe. Jack helped her upstairs and into her room. Once she was in bed, he checked she was comfortable and warned her not to move from the bed the next day, before kissing her good night and departing to seek his own bed. Jo was soon fast asleep and heard nothing when Jem came in the next morning.

He had been told about the previous day’s events from Jack when he took the shift over. He stood there looking at Jo’s sleeping form for several minutes. There were no physical signs of her escapade, apart from her pallor and the dark circles under her eyes. He planned to make sure she had complete bed rest for at least the next week, if not longer. He left her to sleep on, knowing it was the best thing for her at the moment.
Author:  JB [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 8:44 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Aw. Thanks Vick. I wasn't expecting another update so quickly so it was a great breakfast time surprise.

Joins the wibblers about what's coming next ....
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
I really think that that works better than a 100% healthy Joey just swooning into Jack's manly arms!
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:36 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Thanks Vicky. It makes Jack's reactions to Joey being off colour later in life more realistic as well. Joining those wibbling about the next few weeks as your drabble and cannon join together.
Author:  Beecharmer [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 1:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Thank you again, this just feels right, it actually explains so much later. Wibbling hugely about next few updates tho !!
Author:  liberty [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Have just read this all the way through and its great. I love stories about Jo and Jack.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 6:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Dare I say that this is a tad less romantic than the original? :lol: Far more realistic, though, and still very enjoyable. Thankyou!
Author:  emma t [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 6:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Just had a big catch up - was very touched by the engagment scene, and love how you wrote in your own version of the 'Exile' chapter and the missing bits of what went on on that couch :D
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
The engagement scene was lovely. Thanks :-)
Author:  CareBear [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 8:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Lovely thank you,am really enjoying this
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Brought a tear to my eye that scene did. Lovely.




Of course it could just be that I'm overtired having been awake since 3:30am...
Author:  Abi [ Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
That was a gorgeous scene, thank you!
Author:  Vick [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 21/3/11
Many thanks for your comments :D

It was well after Mittagessen when Jo finally woke. She opened her eyes and looked straight into Jem’s. She smiled wanly at him, but he did not return it.

“I understand you had quite an adventure yesterday,” he said, seriously. Jo just nodded. She suddenly felt about fifteen again and in trouble for some mad escapade. “Well, you’ve punished yourself for it. You aren’t stirring from that bed for the next week, at least, and you’re to have complete bed rest as well, no reading or visitors.”

“But, Jem, Jack has promised he’d visit me,” Jo cried, tears welling up at the thought of not being allowed to see him. “He-he asked me to marry him last night,” she continued, brokenly. “And I said yes. P-please, don’t say he can’t come either.” Jem’s expression softened slightly at this news.

“Congratulations, Joey-baba,” he said. “I shan’t stop Jack from visiting in that case, but he won’t be able to stay long. You need to rest and recover from yesterday. Have you been coughing at all?” Jo shook her head. “That’s a good sign, but if you start, I need to know immediately.” Jo nodded this time. The door opened, at this point, and her sister entered with a tray. Jem helped Jo to sit up and Madge placed the tray on her knees. Jo ate ravenously, as she hadn’t eaten since the picnic the day before. When she had finished, Jem spoke again.

“Have you told your sister yet, Jo?” he asked, casually. Jo shook her head and looked slightly embarrassed.

“Told me what?” Madge asked.

“Apparently, a certain someone proposed to our Jo, last night,” he replied, innocently. Madge looked surprised.

“Really? What did you say, Jo?”

“Yes,” Jo replied, happily. Madge went to hug her sister, gently.

“Congratulations! May you be as happy as we are,” she said, tenderly.

Jo smiled at her. “Thank you. Please don’t tell anyone else yet, though. I don’t want to spoil Juliet’s wedding.”

“Of course, Jo. That’s very thoughtful of you,” her sister replied.

“Now, I think you should rest some more,” Jem put in, at this point. He stood up, took the now-empty tray, and left the room. Madge followed him and Jo was left alone once more. She lay back down and picked up Jack’s rosary, allowing the beads to slip gently through her fingers. She was soon fast asleep again, the rosary clutched tightly in her fingers.

When she woke again, she found her bedside lamp had been turned on and Jack sitting at the side of her bed. She smiled happily at him and he returned the smile.

“How are you feeling?”

“Still tired and aching, but better for seeing you,” she replied. She dropped the rosary back on the bedside cabinet and held her hand out to him. He took it and gently squeezed it, glad to know that she still had the rosary so close to her. He noted that she was still not fully recovered yet, and wholeheartedly agreed with Jem that she should stay where she was for the time being.

“I gather you don’t want to tell anyone else our news until after Juliet’s wedding?” he asked her. Jo shook her head.

“It wouldn’t be fair to Juliet,” she replied. “I don’t want to spoil her big day.” Jack smiled at this, understanding Jo’s motives.

“What about a ring?” he asked. “Do you want to come and help choose it, or may I do that?”

“I’ll let you choose it,” she said. “I don’t want it to be too gaudy, though, please.”

“I think I can manage that. Next time I have a day off, I’ll go to Innsbruck and get it.” Jo just smiled at him. She was starting to tire again. Jack saw this and got to his feet.

“Get some more sleep, Jo. I’ll come again tomorrow.” Jo just smiled sleepily at him as he bent down and kissed her gently on the forehead. Jo was asleep before he reached the top of the stairs, never waking until Jem came in with Frühstück, the next morning.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:05 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
That was sweet :D .
Author:  Bryony [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
She doesn't want the ring to be lime green then...? :devil:

But seriously, that was lovely, thank you!
Author:  JS [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 10:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Tears in my eyes after that, thanks Vick.
Author:  Abi [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:33 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Aww, they are so sweet. :D
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Pleased Jem is allowing Jack to visit. Thanks Vicky.
Author:  emma t [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:52 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Aww :) Im almost sure that Jem KNEW that Jack was going to propose - I wonder if Jack had asked his permission to ask her - as he is her sister's husband who is her guardian :)
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
That was lovely, thanks! :-)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Please can I have a Jack? I've been a very good girl so far this year!

Thankyou for the update.
Author:  Vick [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:39 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Many thanks for your lovely comments :D

I think spring has finally arrived here in Yorkshire, the sun has been shining for more than 3 days in a row :lol:

Just a short update for you, today

Jo spent the next week in her bedroom. She slept most of the time, as she recovered from that eventful picnic. Jack faithfully came to visit every day, though he never stayed long. They were short-staffed at the Sanatorium, and he was needed there much of the time. Jo understood this, but she missed his company all the same. The following week, she was allowed downstairs for a few hours each day, and then all day the week after. She was under strict orders not to try to do anything strenuous, or she would find herself back in bed again.

On her next trip to the Sanatorium, Jem called her into his office after she had been for her chest X-ray and pneumothorax.

“You’ve been very lucky, Jo,” he told her. “Your X-ray shows no damage from your escapade, though I’d advise you to continue to take it slowly for a while longer.” He smiled at her at this point.

“Thank you,” she said, returning the smile.

“Now, let’s get you back home again, so you can continue to improve.” He collected his coat and came round the desk to push Jo’s wheelchair out to the car. Once home, he helped her upstairs and left her in her bedroom, where she climbed into bed and fell sleep.

*****

Two days after Juliet’s wedding to Donal O’Hara, Jack took Jo to Spärtz for the morning. Whilst they were having Mittagessen, he gave her a small box. When Jo looked inside it, she found a lovely emerald delicately set on a narrow gold band.

“Like it?” Jack asked, anxiously. He had worried whether he had made the right decision in choosing an emerald.

“It’s lovely,” she breathed. Jack picked it out and placed it gently on the fourth finger of her left hand, where she could admire it. He held onto her hand and smiled at her.

“Now we really are engaged. Like it?” Jo simply nodded at him, to overcome to speak. He glanced at his watch. “We’d best get going, or I’ll be late for work.” He motioned for the bill and paid it, before helping Jo into her coat and escorting her back to where they had left the car. Jack drove quickly back to the Sonnalpe and dropped Jo at the gate to Die Rosen, before driving on to the Sanatorium. She walked slowly up the path and in through the front door, where she joined her sister in the Salon, showing the ring to her.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 9:03 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
Of course he was right to choose one with a green stone :wink: !
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 9:42 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
Thanks Vicky, I am pleased Jack choose an emerald.
Author:  sealpuppy [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
This all makes such perfect sense of what Joey was doing before Exile. Thank you so much, Vick.
Author:  emma t [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
Lovely :) im sure it was an emerald in Exile too :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
Thankyou for such a lovely update - I'm glad that Joey didn't suffer any permanent damage!
Author:  Abi [ Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
:D Mm, wonderful!
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:04 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 22/3/11
Vick wrote:
“Now we really are engaged. Like it?”



Golly that made me cringe just like a real EBD engagement scene!
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:17 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
That was sweet - glad she liked it :-)
Author:  Vick [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:21 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 23/3/11
Many thanks for your comments. :D

The next afternoon, Jo was in the Salon talking to Robin and Grizel. Suddenly, a thundering knock came at the door. The next minute, their happiness was in tatters. A Gestapo agent came in demanding the preventative arrest of those people who had taken part in the picnic a few weeks before. Jem managed to stop him from taking any of the girls and Jo, as they were all under the age of twenty-one. Jack, however, had no choice, and he was taken to Innsbruck to be questioned about it. Jo was worried and nervy the whole week he was missing. She had a vivid imagination and she couldn’t stop herself from thinking what awful things might befall him while he was in the hands of the Gestapo. She lost her appetite, much to the consternation of her sister. Jem was also worried, but hoped that once Jack returned, she would start to pick back up again.

When Jack was finally released a week later, he went straight to the Sanatorium, rightly guessing he would find Jem there. He was extremely angry with the way he had been treated, and gave vent to his feelings. Once his outburst was over, Jem told him not to say anything about it to anyone, warning him that he could easily be arrested again. He was then advised to go and clean himself up, as he was needed to cover the next shift, which was due to start in an hour.

It was after Kaffee und Kuchen, the next day, before Jack had the chance to visit Jo. When he arrived at Die Rosen, he found her in her little sitting room. He was surprised at how pale she looked, but her smile, when she saw him, was unmistakable. She threw herself into his arms, and hugged him tightly, crying into his chest. Jack returned the hug, and then held her at arm’s length.

“Why the tears, Jo?” he murmured.

“I’ve been so worried about you, and wondering what they were doing to you,” she said, shakily. Jack sat down and pulled her onto his knee, so he could look into her face as well as keep a reassuring arm around her waist.

“I’m fine, Jo,” he reassured her. “It wasn’t a pleasant experience, but I’m back now and I have no intention of leaving you again.” Jo leaned into him. He could feel that she was trembling slightly, a simple reaction to the fact that he was back safely, despite all her worries. He tightened his grip around her and allowed her to just sit and sort her thoughts out. Eventually, he felt her trembling lessen, and then stop. She sat up and looked at him, managing a small smile. He returned it, thankful that she hadn’t seen him the day before. The gong went for Abendessen at this point.

“Will you stay for Abendessen?” Jo asked him, as she reluctantly removed herself from his knee.

“Of course. Madge asked me when I arrived, since she needed to let Marie know.” He offered his arm to his fiancée. She accepted with a smile and they headed to the Speisesaal together. Jo ate a reasonable meal, much to her sister’s relief. Jem had been right when he suspected that it was worry over Jack which had caused her to lose her appetite.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
That must've been a horrible time for Jack. It's never really referred to again.
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
In fact is that experience why Jack volunteers to be a doctor in the forces, so early in the war. He knew what they were fighting. It always puzzled me why he so quickly.
Author:  emma t [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
It's lovely to see how Joey and Jack were reunited :)
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Poor Jack, but at least it all works out rightly in the end.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Poor Jack, I always thought it was one of the reasons he joined up too. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 8:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Poor Jack, and poor Jo, too. Thanks Vick!
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
I'm getting worried over what is going to happen next (even tho I know I don't know if you know what I mean) :lol:
Author:  Beecharmer [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 12:07 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Miss Di wrote:
I'm getting worried over what is going to happen next (even tho I know I don't know if you know what I mean) :lol:


This sentence has a great feeling of " you know I can't believe it's not butter? Well I can't believe I can't believe it's not butter ..." about it.

I know what you mean though and am seriously wibbling here too. Thank you for the Drabble again !
Author:  Liz K [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Beecharmer23 wrote:
Miss Di wrote:
I'm getting worried over what is going to happen next (even tho I know I don't know if you know what I mean) :lol:


This sentence has a great feeling of " you know I can't believe it's not butter? Well I can't believe I can't believe it's not butter ..." about it.
I know what you mean though and am seriously wibbling here too. Thank you for the Drabble again !


Haven't been watching Vicar of Dibley have you??
Author:  Beecharmer [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 7:48 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Liz K wrote:
Beecharmer23 wrote:
Miss Di wrote:
I'm getting worried over what is going to happen next (even tho I know I don't know if you know what I mean) :lol:


This sentence has a great feeling of " you know I can't believe it's not butter? Well I can't believe I can't believe it's not butter ..." about it.
I know what you mean though and am seriously wibbling here too. Thank you for the Drabble again !


Haven't been watching Vicar of Dibley have you??


Yep, though not recently. I just think that scene is great, especially the way she says it so seriously.
Author:  Vick [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:47 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 24/3/11
Since you are all wibbling on this lovely sunny morning :lol: , I may as well give you a reason to do so... :devil:

The next month continued much the same as the one before. Jo spent as much time as she could with Jack, when he wasn’t working. Her strength was starting to return again. One day in June, she offered to accompany a party of girls from school down to Spärtz. This was gratefully accepted by Miss Wilson, the mistress in charge of the trip. They had all managed to buy what they needed and were enjoying Kaffee und Kuchen when a commotion outside interrupted their meal.

Robin was the first to go to Herr Goldmann’s rescue, followed swiftly by the others. By rescuing the kindly old Jew from a mob intent on pursuing him, they had unwittingly put themselves into great danger. Luckily, Vater Johann, the parish priest, came to their rescue and offered them sanctuary in the church. Once they had barred the doors, he quickly led them behind the altar and opened a trap door. They all descended a flight of stone steps into a tunnel, which was so dark they couldn’t see the person in front of them. Jo shuddered violently. As much as she hated the lift in Die Rosen, she found being in this tunnel even more terrifying. She knew, however, that she had to control herself and try to help Daisy, who was the youngest in the party. This responsibility gave her a strength she didn’t realise she had, until Miss Wilson took over for a while, and Jo was left to continue alone. The path was on a constant incline by now, and Jo realised that she would struggle to reach the end of it. Everyone else was fit and healthy and she wasn’t. She started to lag behind as her breathing became shallower. She could hear the footsteps of the others gradually getting further away. Finally, she could hear them no longer, and she was alone in the tunnel. She desperately tried to control her imagination, as she thought about being stuck inside it forever. Suddenly, she saw a grey speck in the distance. She aimed for it with what little strength she could muster, and was glad to see it growing gradually larger, until she fell through some briars and into the arms of Cornelia.

Cornelia quickly lowered Jo until she was sitting on the floor. As she recovered her breath, she became aware of her surroundings and realised where she was. She opened her mouth to speak, but then stopped as she caught sight of Miss Wilson’s hair. She stared, open-mouthed, as the shock of seeing her with white hair instead of chestnut, sank in.

“Yes, I know, Jo,” Miss Wilson said, briskly, as she crouched down in front of Jo. “The others have already informed me of my new hair colouring. Do you know where we are?” Jo nodded. “Can you tell us if we are safe enough, for now?” Jo nodded again. Do you think you could locate someone you trust, nearby, to get Daisy back to Die Rosen?” Jo nodded for a third time.

“About ten minutes away,” she managed to add. It was Miss Wilson’s turn to nod this time.

“Rest for now, Jo, and when you’re ready, you’ll have to take Daisy.” Jo stayed where she was for a good half an hour, until she felt her breathing was nearly normal. She slowly got to her feet and turned to Miss Wilson and Daisy.

“Okay, I’m ready,” she said. Daisy stood up and grabbed Jo’s hand. “Robin’s cave is just over there. I’ll see you in there as soon as I can. Come on, Daisy, let’s get you back home to Mummy.” They set off slowly to find the person Jo planned to leave Daisy with. On the way, Jo impressed on Daisy that she wasn’t to talk to anyone except Uncle Jem and Auntie Madge and to tell them they were in Robin’s cave. Jo left her in the care of a herdsman she knew well and slowly returned to the cave. Once there, she collapsed in a heap and fell into a fitful sleep. The walk back from taking Daisy had given her pains in her chest again.

Jem appeared at two o’clock in the morning, bearing food and drink for the group. Whilst the others gathered at the other side of the cave, he came over to where Jo was still lying. He shone his torch on her and was worried by how pale she was. He woke her, gently.

“How are you feeling, Jo?” he asked her in an undertone.

“Tired and aching,” she replied, sleepily.

“Do you want some painkillers?” Jo nodded. He pulled out a small bottle and handed her a couple to take immediately, before giving her the rest of the bottle, with the instruction to take them only when needed. He then persuaded her to eat something.

Once they had all eaten their fill, they discussed what their next move would be. It was finally decided that Jem would try and get word to the King of Belsornia to see if he would take them in and get them to England. They agreed to meet Jack and Gottfried in Umfert and hide in the Zillerthal until they could safely get across the border.

Once this plan had been agreed, Jem stood up. He couldn’t risk being away from the Sonnalpe any longer, in case he was missed. He had a quick word with Miss Wilson, before turning to Jo.

“Take care of yourself, Joey. Try to keep calm and concentrate on breathing slowly as you walk. It’ll help you to go further. Rest as much as you can, though I know that may be difficult. We love you and we’ll see you very soon.” He gave her a hug, then let go and left quickly.

He was worried for all of them, Jo especially. He knew she wasn’t as strong as the others in the group, and she would slow down their escape considerably. He wished he could take her back to the Sonnalpe with him, but that was impossible. The Gestapo were already there, waiting for them to return. He hurried back as quickly as he could, determined to send Jack and Gottfried off to meet them before they, too, were apprehended.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:06 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Well, that's a different explanation for Jem's mysterious whisper :D .

Thanks, Vick - this is great.
Author:  keren [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:15 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Exactly what I was going to say, now we know what he whispered to her
Author:  abbeygirl [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:08 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Thank you Vick - so interesting to see the different ways the characters develop here....
Author:  janetbrown23 [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:22 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Thank you Vick but I really am getting quite wibbly now about how Jo will cope with the journey.
Author:  CareBear [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 11:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Thanks for the update, also worried how Jo will cope
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Thanks Vicky. Now I can join in the wibbling, knowing what EBD had them facing.
Author:  emma t [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 6:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Thanks Vick, now my curiosity if resolved over what was said in that whisper :)
Author:  Abi [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Also a bit worried about how Joey will cope with the journey.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Well, I'm not going to wibble, but put my faith in you. You'll make Jo and Jack happy in the end, I know you will.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Am also worried about Jo and all of them! Thanks :-)
Author:  crystaltips [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
I do not understand how I managed to miss this drabble until now. However, on the plus side, I've been able to read all 21 pages in one go :D :D I do like Jack & Jem in this & it definitely makes the Jo/Jack romance much more believable than the (dare I say it) rather wishy-washy EBD version.
Wibbling a bit about the rest of the escape journey though.

Thanks Vick
Author:  Beecharmer [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 12:07 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Thank you again, even if you do keep making me wibble !!
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
I've had a wonderful time catching up with this. Thanks Vick. i love how you have woven the real EBD with your creation and how it fits so well
Author:  Vick [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 1:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 25/3/11
Many thanks for all your comments :oops:

Jo, Miss Wilson and the others set off back down the mountainside about half an hour after Jem had left. There was a thick mist, which they were thankful for, as it meant they would be very unlikely to meet anyone as they travelled. They moved slowly, to allow Jo to keep up with them and also because it was treacherous underfoot, and they couldn’t risk any accidents. They walked for hours in the thick mist, diving into ditches and hiding in bushes whenever they heard anything moving.

Eventually, they reached the outskirts of Umfert, where they literally bumped into Gottfried. He took them to a nearby barn where they could change into the dry clothes he provided, and eat something while they waited for Jack and Robin. Jo fell asleep in the hay after eating, so exhausted was she from the long walk

When Jack and Robin finally arrived, it was with the news that they had been spotted. Jack went to wake Jo. When she saw him crouched in front of her, she flung her arms around him. He held her close for a moment, then pulled her gently to her feet.

“We have to go, now,” he told her. They joined the others at the other side of the barn, and they made sure they left behind no evidence of their presence

“We can’t stay near here, any longer,” Jack told them all, as they prepared to leave. “We’re too close and may be recognised.”

Gottfried agreed with him. “We must head for Switzerland. I know a way over the frontier which is seldom used.”

“Let’s go, then. The sooner we leave here, the better,” Jack replied.

“Which way?” Jo asked, as she linked arms with Jack. Gottfried led them into a ditch, and on into the woods nearby. Once there, they followed seldom-used paths until they were deep inside the trees. They were obliged to go at a slower pace than Jack and Gottfried would have liked. Jo was their main concern, but the others were all tired, too, and some of them were starting to limp slightly. Jack could hear Jo’s breathing becoming shallower as she struggled on. She said nothing, though. She understood the danger they were in and that they needed to get as far away as possible.

When they finally stopped for something to eat, Jo sank down on the ground, utterly exhausted. Once she had managed to eat something, Jack sat with her and made her lie down, using his knee for a pillow. She was soon asleep again. Gottfried allowed them an hour’s rest before he stood up once more, stating that they needed to move on if they were to get to the place where he planned to rest overnight. Jack woke Jo gently, telling her they had to go. She was hauled to her feet by Cornelia, with more goodwill than gentleness, whilst Jack stood up himself. He linked up with Jo once more and they set off.

They rested for ten minute intervals, regularly, along the way. As night started to draw in, Gottfried led them into a natural shelter, where they were to rest for a few hours. Once she had eaten, Jo curled up in a corner and was swiftly asleep. Jack looked at her as he settled down next to her to try and sleep himself. She was breathing very rapidly and he could tell she was in pain, though she had said nothing. After four hours rest, Gottfried woke Jack and they prepared something to eat, before they woke the others. Jack woke Jo.

“How are you feeling?” he asked her, concerned. Jo shrugged. She was in pain, but was reluctant to tell him. “Do you have those painkillers Jem gave you?” Jo nodded and handed him a small bottle from her pocket. He took it from her and examined the contents before extracting two and handing them to her. “Take these when you have something to eat,” he told her and he pocketed the bottle.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 1:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Thanks Vicky. That journey must have been a nightmare for the adults in particular as they know the risks and the problems Joey faces
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Poor Jack, having to watch Joey suffer. Sometimes, it can be just as hard as the suffering itself.

Thankyou.
Author:  Alison H [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Thanks for the daily updates!
Author:  Beecharmer [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Thank you. This just makes so much sense of why Jack was so careful of Joey later.
Author:  Abi [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Joey's illness just makes the whole thing that much harder... :(
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:44 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
And Joey is so much more sympathetic in this, and much braver too
Author:  jmc [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:56 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Still really enjoying this and with Joey's illness the escape is made that much more scary and difficult. Thanks.
Author:  Vick [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:15 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 26/3/11
Many thanks for your comments

They continued walking slowly onwards for the next five days. All of them were weary now and just wanted to be somewhere safe, where they could sleep properly and not live in fear of being caught. Jo struggled on as best she could, Jack giving her the painkillers whenever he thought she needed them. One day, she suddenly collapsed on the ground, coughing. Jack stayed with her, anxious. He knew what that cough meant all too well. When she stopped, he crouched down to where she was.

“Jo?” he asked. She just shook her head at him, knowing she wasn’t finished yet. Jack leaned back on his heels and waited. Sure enough, she started up again, and he hastily moved away from her. He felt guilty at doing this, but knew she was now contagious again. This caused a problem for everyone else, too. If Jo was contagious, he had to try and prevent her from being too near the others. Once she finally stopped, she managed to sit up. Jack came and crouched back down with her, worry etched across his face.

“I-I’m sorry,” she choked out.

“It’s not your fault,” he told her, gently, as he drew her into his arms. Jo lay there, her face away from Jack. She was exhausted, both physically and emotionally. She eventually pulled away and looked at him.

“It’s back, isn’t it?” It was more of a statement, than a question. Jack just nodded. “Well, I’d best try and keep away from everyone then,” she continued, philosophically. She managed to haul herself up, hanging onto the nearest tree for support. Jack stood up, too. He admired her for her honest practicality, but he yearned to pull her into his arms and be able to support her. He held out his arm to her and she took it. Together, they slowly walked on along the path, each lost in their own thoughts.

When they finally caught the others up, Jo deliberately kept to the edge of them. She had no wish to pass on her illness. She knew what it was like to be unable to do anything for herself, and she had no wish for any of the others to have to go through what she had already been through, and probably would have to go through again, once they reached safety. She decided that she had to do her best to continue on by herself. She felt that Jack had enough on his plate helping them all to escape, without her making things worse by her illness. If she got caught, then so be it. It was with this resolution in her mind that she fell into a fitful sleep.

Jack watched her, anxiously. All he wanted to do was to get her to safety, whatever the consequences. Whatever she said to him, he was determined to stay with her and help her through it. When everyone else had fallen asleep, he told Gottfried of his worries. The latter was sympathetic, but practical.

“We are coming back to the mountains again, now,” he told Jack. “I’m hoping Lorenz, Robin and Jeanne will pick up and improve once we are among them. If that is the case, then you must help Jo. She is the most important thing for you, now, and she must be got to safety. It is only one more day’s walk to the border, then we shall be safe and we can think what the best course of action is.”

“We will all have to get checked out, though,” Jack replied, earnestly. “We don’t know how long she has been contagious.”

“That is true, but we will worry about that once we are safely at my aunt’s house.” They finished their conversation at that and both lay down to sleep for a few hours.

They did, indeed, reach the mountains the next day. Most of the girls looked much better for it, which meant the two doctors could concentrate on Jo and Miss Wilson, who was also finding it harder to go on, thanks to the foot she had broken a few years before. Gottfried took charge of her, helping her whenever he could, whilst Jack tried to take on Jo.
Author:  keren [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:13 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
This is so much more scary than what EBD wrote
Author:  RuthFL [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:43 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
keren wrote:
This is so much more scary than what EBD wrote

I agree!
Author:  CareBear [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
RuthFL wrote:
keren wrote:
This is so much more scary than what EBD wrote

I agree!


Also agree poor Jo and Jack really hope they make it and get Jo treatment
Author:  Joanne [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
I find this very sad, more than scary. Poor Jo, knowing it has come back and that her future is so uncertain. And worrying that she could infect Jack and the others too. :(

Thanks for the update.
Author:  Beecharmer [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:53 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
:-(

This is sad, but very likely. This would actually fit in with Jo's "breakdown" once the reach safety though, in a better way than Exiles explains it.

Really enjoying this as ever. More please !
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
This definitely explains why Jo seemed so fragile on the journey.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
Thank you Vicky.
Author:  Abi [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 6:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
Poor Jo. :(
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
I am firmly of the opinion that this is really what happened in the year before 'Exile' and EBD just never thought to mention it in the books!

Thankyou.
Author:  roversgirl [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
Poor Joey :-( I hope she hasn't given it to anyone else and that she gets better soon! Thanks :-)
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
The Joey here is being so much more sensible and mature than the Joey in the books. Thanks
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 2:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
Somehow over the weekend I managed to miss three updates (what was I doing? Housework? Who needs clean clothes and house?) and I am still worried about the escape!
Author:  Vick [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 7:32 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 27/3/11
Many thanks for all your comments :D

He had not realised how stubborn Jo could be - until now! She was determined to do it by herself, and refused to let anyone help her, Jack included. He found his offers of help rebuffed again and again. He looked on as she valiantly struggled along, her breath becoming more ragged by the minute. Eventually, she collapsed again, coughing badly. When she finally stopped, he came to her. Sitting down alongside her, he pulled her into his arms, holding her close. He could feel her whole body shaking as she tried her best to breathe normally.

“You can’t go on like this, Jo,” he said, gently. “You’re completely worn out.”

“Don’t want to infect anyone else,” she said into his chest. Jack refrained from telling her that it was probably already too late. He understood her reasoning, and knew he now had to persuade her to let him help her.

“Jo, if you carry on like this, you’ll end up being so far behind us all, that you’ll lose your way and never make it over the border.”

“I’ll stay here, then. No point ruining anyone else’s chances. You go. I’ll be all right.”

Jack shook her at this comment. He was also tired and desperate to get to safety. Jo started to cough once more and he let her drop to the ground and moved away. He was at the end of his tether with her and he hoped his rough treatment would bring her to her senses. When he heard the cough subside, he drew closer again, only to find that she was sobbing uncontrollably. At this, he came and sat with her once more. Jo didn’t notice his presence and continued to sob on. He pulled her to him, and concentrated on trying to calm her. He hoped Gottfried had stopped to rest somewhere not far away. When she had finally stopped and was sitting quietly, he tried a different tack.

“I love you, Joey. I have no intentions of leaving you here, alone, so you may as well make your mind up to that.” Jo pulled away slightly, sitting so she could look at him.

“Do you mean that?” she asked him, incredulously.

“Of course I do.” He picked her left hand up and looked at the emerald he had placed on her finger only a few weeks before. “I wouldn’t have given you that if I didn’t. I don’t care how ill you are, or how long it takes, I want to spend the rest of my life with you.” Tears formed in Jo’s eyes once more at this. She had been so determined to go it alone, that she hadn’t even stopped to consider that Jack wanted to help her out of love, not as a doctor. Jack watched her, as she tried to gather her scattered thoughts back together. He could see she was struggling to accept that she wasn’t alone, that he would never leave her, now, or in the future. Finally, she looked up at him.

“I’m sorry,” she whispered. He pulled her into his arms at this and dropped a kiss onto her hair.

“I know. You’re in a tough position right now, but I just want to help you and make sure you’re safe. You’re my world, Jo. I don’t want it to fall apart just because you’re stubborn enough to refuse my help.” He gave her a final hug at this and then stood back up, and then pulled Jo to her feet. “Now, are you going to let me give you a hand?” Jo just nodded, mutely. He took her hand and they set off once more.

They found the rest had stopped a few kilometres ahead of them, hidden in some bushes. When they joined them, they were given a little food, and chance for a short rest before Gottfried decided that they must move on once more.

They spent the night in a cave, not far from the border, though Jo kept herself away from the others, propping herself up slightly against the wall to help her breathing. Jack came to her there and curled up nearby, watching her as she fell into a fitful sleep. He was worried about her, both physically and mentally. He knew that once she did reach safety, she would have some sort of reaction to all she had gone through, as well as needing medical attention for tuberculosis. He just hoped that she would pull through it.
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:16 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
This works really well. It's always annoyed me that Jo seemed to worry Jack and Gottfried even more than they were worried already, instead of trying to help the younger girls, but if she'd been ill it would make much more sense.
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 11:37 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
Thanks Vicky. It does fit the canon well as Alison H said.
Author:  sealpuppy [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 4:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
It's so brilliantly real that I'm already getting angry with Jack for later inflicting 11 children on his delicate wife! :D
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
Poor Joey - I hope that they make it all safely enough.

Thankyou!
Author:  Beecharmer [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
sealpuppy wrote:
It's so brilliantly real that I'm already getting angry with Jack for later inflicting 11 children on his delicate wife! :D


Yes me too! It is very good to read, although stressful.
Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 6:36 pm ]
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I'm glad Joey has finally realised how improtant she is to Jack. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 7:46 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
I don't know what to hope for first....

*wibbles*
Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
In the absence of a small cave I am hiding under my desk.
Author:  Vick [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:42 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
Many thanks for all your comments :D

How do you know she will have 11 children Sealpuppy? :devil:

*produces virtual chocs, (non)alcoholic beverages and a large box of tissues ready for next installment*

The next morning, as they ate their meagre breakfast, Gottfried gave them the news that, hopefully, they would get across the border into Switzerland that day. This cheered the fugitives, and they were a little chattier than they had been up until now. Only Jo didn’t join in with them. She was still huddled in her corner of the cave. Though she wasn’t actually asleep, she had her back to the rest of them, in pretence. This didn’t fool Jack, though. He came over and sat down next to her, resting his hand on her arm. She pulled it closer in to her, not letting go. He could feel she was trembling. She had gone through so much in the past year, and she probably knew she had to go through it all over again. However, Jack knew that this time he had be there to support her as her fiancé, not her doctor. He wished he could shield her from her constant pain, but all he could do was to sit on the edge and be there whenever she needed him. If, as Gottfried predicted, they would be at his aunt’s house by the end of the day, Jack would be a very relieved man.

When the others had finished, Gottfried stood up in readiness for departure. Jack removed his arm, and told Jo that it was time to go. He knelt and helped her to sit up, worried by the sound of her breathing. He had already given her the last of the painkillers from Jem, and they had no more. Once she was on her feet, she swayed slightly, and would have fallen again if Jack’s arm hadn’t been round her. Once she had regained her balance, the group set off on the last leg of their journey.

Gottfried kept them off the path as much as he could, and they trudged on towards the border. Eventually, he stopped a few metres in from the edge of the forest and waited for everyone to catch up.

“The frontier with Switzerland is in this field,” he said. “We will need to cross without being seen.”

“How far is it?” Hilary asked.

“Fifty metres of open ground.”

“We’d better look out for guards,” Cornelia put in. “What would happen if they saw us?”

“You would most likely be shot at,” Gottfried told her. “We must make a run for it. We will meet in the small clearing ten metres in at the other side.” As he said this, a guard walked across the horizon and everyone held their breath as he passed. Suddenly, they heard voices calling. The guard went towards the sound, which was coming from a small building about a hundred metres away from where they were standing.

“Let’s go!” Gottfried said, turning and starting to run. Everyone followed him as fast as they could.

They crossed the border and kept on running towards the forest on the Swiss side. Even Jo managed to cross, though she fell down coughing again before she could reach cover. Jack grabbed her and, pulling her quickly up, dragged her onwards. As soon as he got her far enough inside the trees, he let her sink back onto the ground. She stayed there for a long time, coughing, and struggling to breathe. When the cough finally subsided, she lay there, exhausted. Jack came over to her and immediately saw spots of fresh blood on her clothes. He said nothing to her, just cradled her in his arms, as her breathing slowed and she fell asleep.

Gottfried came to find them, worried that they hadn’t made it. However, when he saw them he smiled, which quickly turned to concern when Jack shook his head at him.

“You are safely here, then,” Gottfried said, quietly. “We will rest an hour, but we must move on then. We cannot risk staying so close to the border any longer.”

“Thank you,” Jack replied, equally quietly. “How much further to your aunt’s house?”

“It is still a good twenty kilometres away. I hope to be there by nightfall.” Jack nodded, hoping he would be able to get Jo that far. Gottfried left them at this, and returned to the others with the news that Jo and Jack were safe, and that they would have an hour’s rest before continuing on.

The next few kilometres were sheer agony to Jo, who was no longer able to walk without coughing. Jack had given her his handkerchief to hold over her mouth, as they toiled on. Luckily, Gottfried heard a hay cart coming along the road, and managed to persuade the owner to give them a lift to Scuol, where his aunt lived. Everyone sank down into the empty cart, thankful that they no longer had to walk. Before they knew it, they were at Gottfried’s aunt’s house and she was welcoming them in.
Author:  JS [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
I feel very lucky that I was away for a long weekend so have caught up with several (cliff-like) posts in one go.
Thanks Vick.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:14 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Thanks Vick. This is really good
Author:  Bryony [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Thanks vick. V glad they got over the border safely! But still, wibble wibble wibble. Please let Joey be ok!
Author:  Jools [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
This is so sad - but so beautifully written. Thank you
Author:  Beecharmer [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:59 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Thank you for the virtual gifts, they were needed. Glad they made it over the border. Thank you again.
Author:  jmc [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 10:43 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
It's great they made it over the border but feeling very sorry for poor Jo and Jack.
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:13 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Thanks Vicky. Pleased they heard the hay cart and could get a lift to village. Very CS.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Glad they made it OK.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Well, that's the final hurdle done, so hopefully Jo can get better now.

Thankyou!
Author:  emma t [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Thankyou Vicky, just had a lovely catch up - been dying to come in and read it, but as working 12 hour shifts til last night, I'm too tired to do much when home!! :) see you tomorrow :)xx
Author:  roversgirl [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Poor Joey. Let her be ok. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Glad they made it across, but poor Jo. Starting again from the beginning... :(
Author:  robinette [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 9:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
This is brilliantly written, Vick

I too am hoping for a happy ending,
thank you :D
Author:  Miss Di [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 10:53 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
wibble wibble wibble. I'm staying under my desk and not coming out.
Author:  Vick [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:31 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 29/3/11
Many thanks for your comments :D

*stocks tissues up and passes a box to Miss Di under the desk*

Once there, Frau von Hessel quickly bustled around. She provided hot food for them all, followed by hot baths. Gottfried advised his aunt not to touch their clothes. He would incinerate them, as they were in such a state. Hilary offered to help clean Jo up since she was now unable to do anything without the cough returning. Jack gratefully accepted, though he made Hilary cover her mouth and nose with a scarf to protect herself. Between them they washed and changed her into a nightdress. She was immediately tucked up in bed, in a small room by herself. When he had finally cleaned himself up, Jack went to check on her. He found her already asleep and withdrew as quietly as he had entered.

Everyone was thankful to sleep in a proper bed that night. For the majority of them, they fell into a deep and dreamless sleep, only waking late next morning. It was a different matter for Jack and Gottfried, however. Jack was suddenly woken by screaming. It was coming from the direction of Jo’s room. He ran to her, hoping he could calm her before she woke the entire house. When he entered her room, he immediately saw all was not well. Jo was thrashing around and screaming in her sleep, obviously in the throes of a most horrific nightmare. He tried to wake her, but as soon as he touched her she started to scream even more loudly. He rapidly backed away, and went to wake Gottfried, for he knew it would take more than him, alone, to wake her and calm her down. He was right. It took both of them to stop her thrashing around and wake her. When Jack looked at her, he saw that she was visibly shaking. Suddenly, she started to cough and Jack quickly passed her a handkerchief. She coughed so violently, she suddenly felt a warm liquid trickling out of her mouth. She turned terrified eyes on Jack, who quickly gave her more handkerchiefs to wipe the blood up, whilst Gottfried went to wake his aunt.

When she was finally lying quietly and he had managed to clean her up, Jack sat down beside her. He took her hand in his.

“We have to get you to a hospital, Jo,” he told her. Jo shook her head. She didn’t want to go anywhere. “You need medical attention, and you are highly contagious. You need to be where you can be looked after properly.” Gottfried came back at this point, followed by his aunt, her arms full of clean bedding.

“I have managed to contact the hospital and they are sending an ambulance for Jo,” he informed them. “My aunt has found some clothes for you, so that you may accompany her.” Jack nodded. He let go of Jo’s arm and went to dress. Frau von Hessel came across the room, sitting down in the chair Jack had just vacated. She informed them that she would sit with Jo for now, whilst Gottfried went to look for the ambulance.

Just as Jack was returning to Jo’s room, he heard the ambulance pull up and Gottfried welcome the driver. He had brought a stretcher, onto which Jo was placed, and swathed in blankets. Jack came with her, sitting alongside her in the back. When they reached the hospital, he spoke to the doctor in charge, insisting that she be immediately isolated. She was speedily put into a small room by herself. Jack left her alone for a few minutes while he told the doctor what had just happened and of her illness. The doctor looked worried at this, immediately sending Jack to the X-ray department to be checked. He also insisted that no one should enter Jo’s room without a mask on.

When Jack finally returned from X-ray, he was informed that he wouldn’t be able to stay with Jo, but he could return at visiting time the next day. The doctor wouldn’t allow any exceptions to this, though he did allow him to briefly say goodbye to her. Jo clung onto his hand. He promised he would be there at visiting time the next day.

When Jack arrived at the hospital the next afternoon, he was taken to the doctor’s office. He was informed that they had had to sedate Jo. Her screaming had woken many patients and they had been unable to keep her quiet. Jack looked grave at this. Her treatment was out his hands, however, and he just asked if he could sit with her. He was given a mask and told he could stay until the bell rang for the end of visiting hours.

When he entered Jo’s room, he saw that she was heavily sedated. He sat down in the chair and took her hand in his, squeezing it gently. He was at a loss as to what to do. He had never been in the position of relative before, and he found it to be a strange experience. One thing he did know was that he intended to stay with her in Switzerland until she could be moved. He wished he could get in touch with Jem, but he knew that Jem would be busy trying to sort out the Sanatorium and get himself safely out of Austria. All he could do was write to him at his new home and hope he received it quickly. Until then, he had to trust the Swiss doctors to look after her. He hoped that they would keep her at the hospital, for now, where he could at least visit her daily. If they decided to move her to a Sanatorium, he knew he would not be allowed to visit more than twice a week. When the bell rang to indicate the end of visiting, he reluctantly stood up, kissing the hand he held.

“I love you, Jo,” he whispered.

Jo was kept under sedation for three days. When Jack arrived on the fourth, he was told that she was awake, but confused. He wasn’t surprised. After all she had just gone through, he knew it would take her time to adjust. He put on a mask and went to her.

As he entered the room, he saw that she had her eyes shut. He went over to the bed and sat down, taking her hand gently in his.

“Joey?” he murmured. Her eyes opened and she looked straight at him. She stared at him for a minute, before she realised who it was.

“Jack?” she whispered. “Oh, Jack! I’m so glad to see you.” Tears trickled down her cheeks and Jack wiped them gently away.

“Don’t cry, darling. I’m here.” he said.

“I’ve had such a terrible dream,” she told him. “We were walking for days with hardly anything to eat and we had to keep hiding from people. It was awful.” Jack realised that she had been reliving their escape in her dreams.

“It wasn’t a dream, Joey. It happened. We arrived in Switzerland five days ago.” He watched her carefully as she digested this information.

“What about the others? Are they all here, as well?”

“Yes. We are all safe, now. Everyone will be going home in the next couple of days, all being well.”

“Are you going, too?”

“No. I’m staying here until you’re well enough to travel. I promised you I would never leave you, and I meant it.” Jo managed a wan smile at this and he squeezed her hand again. “You have to concentrate on getting better again, now.” Jo just nodded. She yawned. “Go to sleep, Jo. If I’m not here, when you wake, I promise I’ll be back tomorrow.” Jo obediently closed her eyes and slept. Jack watched her. He wanted to get her to England, but knew it was impossible to move her until he heard from Jem.
Author:  Beecharmer [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:55 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 30/3/11
:-( :cry: :? :x :bawling:

I want to thank you Vick but ... Sob ! Poor Jo and Jack. No wonder she is reliving that whole experience. It makes her feeling faint when things go wrong so much more understandable later too. I had better not read any mire discussions / drabbles for a while, if anyone is rude about poor Jo I might forget this isn't canon and start a fight in her honour.

*Arranges herself in front of Joey with sword and shield (and handy wizard) - You shall not pass, Joey criticisers !!*
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:09 am ]
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Jack is lovely.
Author:  keren [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:03 am ]
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Now we know why he is so completely concerned about her health and not upsetting her ever for the rest of their lives
This was traumatic for him too
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:45 am ]
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Thanks Vicky. This explanation explains so much.
Author:  emma t [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 30/3/11
All I can say is :( :( :( :(
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 30/3/11
Well, at least she's in good hands now, and she has Jack there with her. I'm sure it will be all right.

Thankyou!
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:33 pm ]
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Jack is lovely and this does explain a lot of his future handling of her. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:35 pm ]
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:( Poor Jo.
Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:30 pm ]
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Thanks for the tissues, I'm afraid I needed them.

This is very gripping. Poor everybody.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 7:16 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 30/3/11
Thanks Vick
Author:  Vick [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 7:22 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 30/3/11
Many thanks for your comments :D

For the next two weeks, Jack visited Jo in the hospital every day. One day, he was called to speak to the doctor. He told Jack that Jo was going to have to be moved, as she needed the specialist care of a sanatorium. Jack knew he was right, although he hoped Jem would be in touch before that happened. The doctor informed him that they would be moving her in a week’s time. Jack thanked him, and continued on his way to see Jo.

She was asleep when he entered, so he just sat in the chair and gently held her hand. She slept for the first hour, whilst Jack just watched her, wishing he could do something for her. He wanted to be able to take her in his arms and tell her she would be fine, but he knew he couldn’t do that. He knew she wasn’t fine and that he couldn’t even give her a hug, lest she pass on her illness. His own X-rays had come back and he had been given the all clear, which he was thankful for. He was sure he wouldn’t be able to go through what Jo was going through, knowing all he did about tuberculosis. He had offered to give his medical opinion to the doctors here, but they had refused, stating that he was too close to the patient to give a proper diagnosis. He had accepted that, though he was desperate to know what they were doing for her.

An hour or so later, Jo woke. She slowly turned her head and looked straight into his eyes. He squeezed her hand, and she feebly squeezed back. She managed to pick a tissue up from the bedside cabinet and coughed into it, dropping it into a box when she had finished. Jack just watched her, concern clearly showing in his eyes. When Jo looked at him again, she started to cry silently and quickly turned her head away from him.

“What’s wrong, Jo?” She just shook her head, as the tears continued to fall. “Please, Jo. I want to help, but if you don’t tell me, I can’t.” It was Jack’s turn to feel tears stinging his eyes,

“I’m scared, Jack,” she whispered, so quietly, he could barely hear her. “I’m scared we’re going to get caught. I want to go home, where it’s safe. I don’t feel safe, here. They are only a few miles away. What if they invade Switzerland and find us?”

“They won’t do that. Even the Nazis wouldn’t violate Swiss neutrality,” he assured her.

“They still might come looking for us, though.” Jo was obviously scared and her imagination was running away with her. Jack realised that he would have to find a way to get her to England, somehow, as there was no way she would be able to rest properly if she was in a permanent state of fear.

“They won’t, Jo, I promise.” The bell rang at this point to indicate that visiting time was over for the day. Jack reluctantly rose from his chair. “I have to go now.” Jo clung onto his hand. He gently extricated it and kissed her forehead through the mask he was wearing. “I’ll be here tomorrow,” he promised, as he made his way slowly to the door.

The last thing he saw, as he left, was Jo crying once more. It broke his heart to have to leave her, but he knew he could not stay. He walked slowly back to Frau von Hessel’s, who had insisted that he stay with her until he could get Jo back to England. When he finally arrived there, she came to greet him, a letter in her hand. She gave it to him with a smile and then told him she would get Abendessen ready for them. He thanked her and took it outside onto the veranda to read. Once he was sitting in the chair, he casually glanced at the writing on the front. He recognised it and immediately ripped open the envelope. He read it quickly and smiled to himself, before pocketing it, along with another envelope which had been enclosed.
Author:  Beecharmer [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:12 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 31/3/11
Thank you - and no thank you - sob !
Like the sound of that letter though.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:36 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 31/3/11
That sounds more hopeful :D .
Author:  Joanne [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:47 am ]
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Hopefully Jack will be able to arrange to get Jo to England now (or is it Channel Isles?).

Poor Joey. :( :(

Thanks for another lovely, early update!
Author:  Elbee [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:53 am ]
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Poor Joey, I'm wibbling hard. Hope the letter is good news.

Thanks, Vick.
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:12 pm ]
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Thank-you Vicky. I hope the letter is from Jem and it will help Jack get Joey to safety.
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:29 pm ]
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Sounds like Jem to me - I'd like to see the Swiss doctors try and stand up to him!

Thankyou!
Author:  emma t [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:40 pm ]
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Its a good jobI was eating chocolates whilst eating this :(
Author:  roversgirl [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 31/3/11
Poor Joey. Hope she can get away safely so she's more reassured. Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 7:37 pm ]
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I hope Jack can get Jo to England safely. She's in a bad way. :(
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:05 pm ]
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emma t wrote:
Its a good jobI was eating chocolates whilst eating this :(


Don't eat the drabble! How will we know what happens? :bawling:
Author:  Miss Di [ Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:16 pm ]
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Hopefully Jem can arrange an ambulance to transport Jo slowly and carefully accross Europe!
Author:  Vick [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:26 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 31/3/11
ChubbyMonkey wrote:
emma t wrote:
Its a good jobI was eating chocolates whilst eating this :(


Don't eat the drabble! How will we know what happens? :bawling:


:rofl: Don't worry! I won't let her near it. Luckily it's on a large old-fashioned stand-alone computer, so she would have a bit of trouble eating that!!! :wink:

Many thanks for all your comments. Have a little more...

When he went to visit Jo the next day, he made sure he saw the doctor in charge before he went to her room. Once he was seated in the doctor’s office, he handed him the envelope he had received the previous evening. The doctor took it and read the contents carefully, before looking up at Jack and stating he needed to make a telephone call in private. Jack took the hint and departed to see Jo.

Jo was awake this time, and turned her head to see who it was when she heard the door open. She smiled when she saw it was Jack. He quickly crossed the room to sit with her.

“I have news,” he greeted her, cheerfully. He took her hand in his. Jo just stared at him and he realised she was confused. “I had a letter from Jem yesterday,” he continued, a little more slowly.

“Is-is everyone safe?” she asked, looking worried.

“Yes. Everyone is safe,” he told her, gently. Jo turned her head away as the tears fell. Jack desperately wanted to hold her in his arms as she wept. He silently berated himself for not realising that she would be worrying about whether her family had made it to safety. He tightened his grip on her hand. Eventually, she was calm once more.

“Jem also told me something else,” he continued. Jo just looked at him, she couldn’t think what it would be and didn’t have the energy to attempt to guess. “He sent a letter for the doctor here, telling him he would be coming here himself to see if you were fit enough to travel.”

“Travel? Where to?” she asked him.

“Home. Jem is bringing an ambulance and, if he thinks you’re well enough, he’s going to take you back to England.” Jo continued to stare at him as she tried to digest this information. She was feeling overwhelmed by everything Jack was telling her, and she wasn’t sure she understood him. Jack noticed this and gently explained to her that he had written to Jem once as they had reached safety, telling him what had happened to her. Jem had been delayed in leaving Austria as he wound his affairs up with the Sanatorium. When he had finally reached his family, he had been given Jack’s letter and replied immediately. The bell rang at this point, and Jack had to leave. He told Jo to try and rest as much as she could, before squeezing her hand a final time and setting off.

He was just leaving the ward, when the doctor called after him, and asked if he had a moment. Jack just nodded. He was in no hurry, and he hoped he was about to find out whether Jem was on his way. Once they were sitting in the office, the doctor informed Jack that Dr Russell was expected in a week’s time. As they had planned to move Jo before then, he informed him that she would, therefore, stay where she was, until she had been seen by Dr Russell. Jack thanked the doctor for the information and left.
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
Thanks Vicky. Hoping Joey is fit enough to travel when Jem comes.
Author:  Bryony [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:04 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 31/3/11
Vick wrote:
ChubbyMonkey wrote:
emma t wrote:
Its a good jobI was eating chocolates whilst eating this :(


Don't eat the drabble! How will we know what happens? :bawling:


[color=#0000FF] :rofl: Don't worry! I won't let her near it. Luckily it's on a large old-fashioned stand-alone computer, so she would have a bit of trouble eating that!!! :wink:


Have wonderful image now of emma t chomping her way through iphones, laptops and even the occasional slimline desktop PC, but balking at your large old-fashioned computer Vick! There was that man who used to eat aeroplanes wasn't there? But I think it took him a long time to manage a whole one. So your drabble is probably safe from him too, if he's still alive.

anyhoo... thanks very much, enjoying this massively (in a wibbly kind of way) and v impressed at how often you are updating!
Author:  emma t [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:46 am ]
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:) :) :) Sharing said chocolates around to anyone who would like one!!!

Hope I don't get indegestion,Bryony! :)

Vick, Hope that Joey is able to travel - and nice that Jem is coming for her himself :)
Author:  Beecharmer [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
Ah you got there first ! I too had that image. There are many advantages of stand alone computers but being less digestible is a new one on me!

Thank you for the update, feel so sorry for poor joey.
Author:  hac61 [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:53 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
Shouldn't this be going to part II some time soon?

I know I'm not a mod., just querying. :shock:
Author:  ChubbyMonkey [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 6:52 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
Well, I'm glad to know that it's safe, at any rate :lol: Unless Joey dies, in which case, I hope it gets eaten and you have to re-write it nicely! *looks fierce*

Thankyou! I do hope that Joey can make it safely back to England.
Author:  roversgirl [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:59 pm ]
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Please let Joey be safe to move. Hope they still go to Guernsey though! Thanks :-)
Author:  Abi [ Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:56 pm ]
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Also hoping Joey'll be safe to travel.

*wibbles*
Author:  sealpuppy [ Sat Apr 02, 2011 8:00 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 28/3/11
Vick wrote:
How do you know she will have 11 children Sealpuppy? :devil:


Yikes! Not just wibbling now, but squibbling, (which is even more anxious!) :shock: This is so good, Vick, but I'm going to hide behind the sofa for the next episodes.
Author:  Vick [ Sun Apr 03, 2011 8:14 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
Many thanks for all your comments. They have encouraged me to keep posting this & also to keep writing :shock:

Will start a new thread for the next installment as we are at the magic 25 pages.... I NEVER thought I would manage to get to that! It was only going to be a short drabble & it's taken on a whole life of it's own :roll: :shock: :banghead:
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:21 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jo’s Biggest Challenge - update 1/4/11
Thanks Vick
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