Bryony wrote:
(What about Jack, though... any chance of a part 2??)
Jack is so happy he doesn't have to spend money on a huge wedding that he promptly takes the afternoon off work and comes home to spend time with his family.
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| Author: | Nightwing [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:40 pm ] |
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Don't play fast and loose with him, Len... Len shifted uncomfortably in her chair. She'd come home from Oxford with her mind absolutely made up, and yet now, at the very first hurdle, she found she was faltering. Don't play fast and loose, her mother had said. In Len's mind's eye Joey's face was stern, her words sharp. Don't play fast and loose... Her stomach clenched. Stop being silly, she told herself. No matter how disappointed Mamma was, telling her wasn't going to be nearly as hard as telling Reg. "Alright, my lamb! Clare is safely playing with her new stuffed horsey Bride sent her, so we should have some time to ourselves without any little pitchers! Here - help yourself to a choccy," and Joey produced a many-layered box of chocolates. Len declined, but Joey took her time selecting one, apparently not noticing the way her eldest daughter was fidgeting nervously as she waited. Finally, having found one that was appropriately caramel-y, she looked at Len with a smile. "So why did you want to talk?" she asked. Len glanced at the bookshelves, the carpet, her hands twisting in her lap. Anywhere but her mother's face, into those eyes that saw too much at times. "I've been thinking," she began. "I know that Auntie Hilda wants me to start at the Chalet School once I've graduated, but I thought maybe - with the kids still there - it might be a better idea if I went back to the first plan, and taught in England for a few years, first." Now she glanced at Joey, through her lashes, and saw that she was nodding approvingly. "A good plan," she said. "I'll be sorry not to have you close to home, of course, but I know how hard it can be to teach somewhere where you know half the school already - not to mention the mistresses ready to remind you of your past misdeeds at the least provocation!" She gave her daughter a matey grin, and the corners of Len's mouth automatically flicked up in response. But she wasn't done yet. "There's more," she continued, feeling her heart start to beat a little faster. "I know - I know you and Dad will be disappointed, and I know we've already started the preparations, and I can pay you back for any money you've spent - and, and maybe you'll not want to see me for a little while, because you'll be angry, but..." She paused, swallowed. This was it, she told herself. She had to say something now. "Oh Len," her mother said, sadly. "I've known for a long time now that you're not in love with Reg." And Len stared at her, the words she'd been struggling to say dying on her lips. "You - you knew?" was all she managed to stammer out. "Very strongly suspected, if you prefer. Maybe I should have said something earlier, but-" Joey hesitated. "I've never been very good at talking about - affairs of the heart. And - there was always a chance I was wrong, after all." "You knew," Len said again. "For how long?" "I wondered - even when you were first engaged, I wondered." Don't play fast and loose, she'd said. Len had always thought her mother was warning her off - well, leading Reg on. But had she meant that she'd suspected - even before Len had known herself - that what Len thought was love was only a childish infatuation? "Why didn't you stop me?" she demanded. "You could have stopped the engagement, if you didn't think it was right." "What would you have done," Joey said, "If your father and I had said there was to be no engagement - outright?" "I wouldn't have agreed to marry him, of course," Len said promptly. Then, "But - I would have resented it, I think. I thought I was so much a grown-up when I was finishing school..." And with Margot having decided on her own life's journey, perhaps she'd been a little quick to make sure she was, too. She shook her head. "But couldn't you have done more to make Reg stay away - wait until I was older? I was so much a kid, Mamma - you must have seen that." Joey's mouth twisted a little. "You're right, Len. I thought that your father having words with Reg would be enough to warn him off - until you'd left school, at least. If I'd known he was making sheep's eyes at you whenever he got the chance!" She sighed. "But you three were our first children, Len. We were bound to make mistakes. All I can do is say I'm sorry." "You're sorry," Len repeated. "I thought - I thought you'd be disappointed. Not sorry. I wish I'd been brave enough to say something earlier. I wish you had. But I- how many mothers would be happy for their daughters to break off an engagement. I - I'm not sure how I should be feeling." She breathed in, a shuddering breath, and found herself pulled into a hug. "Feel happy," her mother suggested. "That's all your father and I want for you." Len dashed her hand across her eyes, catching a stray tear. "Thank you," she whispered. "Do you think - could you tell Papa, please? And the others? I know every at the School will have questions - and the kids, too - and I don't want to have to deal with it more than I have to. I know that's cowardly-" "It's perfectly natural," Joey reassured her. "Would you like me to speak to Reg, too?" "N-o. That really is something I'll have to do myself." Len sniffed, and then gave Joey a brave smile. Knowing that her mother was going to support her after all - suddenly, breaking off things with Reg didn't seem so daunting. Don't play fast and loose with him, Len... It was no more than a very faint echo, now, a voice tinged with caution and worry. I didn't, she told the voice, secure in her mother's arms. I didn't. |
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| Author: | PaulineS [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:00 pm ] |
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Thank you, this is so probable. |
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| Author: | Alison H [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:03 pm ] |
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Much better than what happens in Prefects! |
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| Author: | marni [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:08 pm ] |
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Absolutely. I agree with Alison. Thank you Nightwing. |
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| Author: | Bryony [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:18 pm ] |
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Ohhhhh how perfect! In my CS universe this is now definitely how it happened. Which means I can finally forgive Joey. (What about Jack, though... any chance of a part 2??) Thank you nightwing! |
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| Author: | Nightwing [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:22 pm ] |
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Bryony wrote: (What about Jack, though... any chance of a part 2??) Jack is so happy he doesn't have to spend money on a huge wedding that he promptly takes the afternoon off work and comes home to spend time with his family.
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| Author: | chris84 [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:23 pm ] |
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Loved that thank you. 
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| Author: | Finn [ Mon Feb 14, 2011 11:09 pm ] |
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Nightwing wrote: Bryony wrote: (What about Jack, though... any chance of a part 2??) Jack is so happy he doesn't have to spend money on a huge wedding that he promptly takes the afternoon off work and comes home to spend time with his family. Glad to hear it! Excellent work, Nightwing - I love it. Thanks. |
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| Author: | Lesley [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 7:00 am ] |
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I like that - good to see Joey so understanding - though she could have explained it better to Len in the first place.
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| Author: | JS [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:08 am ] |
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Quote: "But you three were our first children, Len. We were bound to make mistakes. All I can do is say I'm sorry." Aw, good for Joey. Thanks Nightwing. |
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| Author: | KathrynW [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:25 am ] |
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Thank you Nightwing, that scene was just right and I realy like seeing a nice Joey
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| Author: | Minim [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:45 pm ] |
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Wonderful. Thanks Nightwing. |
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| Author: | ChubbyMonkey [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:01 pm ] |
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It only made me think of a TV show when I saw the title  This was brilliant, though - thankyou! |
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| Author: | roversgirl [ Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:07 pm ] |
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That was lovely and very realistic. Thanks 
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| Author: | Miss Di [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:47 am ] |
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A MUCH better ending, thanks! |
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| Author: | mell [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:17 pm ] |
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I like this ending, thank you |
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| Author: | Chris S [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:41 pm ] |
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Loved the story, but was amazed that Joey actually admitted that she could get things wrong. |
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| Author: | Elbee [ Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:12 pm ] |
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Thank you, Nightwing. |
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| Author: | Abi [ Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:08 pm ] |
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Thanks for that scene, Nightwing. It felt very real and it was nice to see a human Joey for once! |
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| Author: | GotNerd [ Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:53 pm ] |
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This is brilliant - a much more Joey-ish Joey, and the end of Reg and Len. Thank you
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| Author: | Carolyn P [ Mon Mar 28, 2011 9:25 pm ] |
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That's lovely, thank you. |
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| Author: | jmc [ Tue Mar 29, 2011 10:46 am ] |
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Joey was great there but I'm glad Len didn't let her talk to Reg. |
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