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A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
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Author:  Cath V-P [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:08 am ]
Post subject:  A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
I now have a reasonable amount of this written, so thought I would start posting. As we're moving in just over a month, I don't know how frequently I'll be able to update, but I will try. And I'd like to thank everyone who stuck with the first part of this.

“Now, are you sure you’ve got everything, Hilda?” Hilda glanced quickly round at the luggage piled up in the hall and smiled at Elizabeth sitting quietly on one of the hall chairs.
“One trunk, our cases, and handbags, Elizabeth’s small bag and that basket – yes, that seems to be everything.” Her sister-in-law followed her glance and laughed.
“Well, you certainly seem to have enough with you; and if you have left anything I’ll send it on as soon as possible. It will certainly be found quickly, when we begin moving.”
“Will that be soon, Mrs Annersley?” asked Nell, as she came up the front steps accompanied by the cab driver, who surveyed the trunk, then began to manoeuvre it out of the door. Emma nodded.
“Oh yes, John wants us out of London as quickly as possible; in fact the men will be coming tomorrow to remove the items that we’re not taking with us into storage. I’ve already made a detailed list so it should be fairly straightforward.” She looked at Hilda thoughtfully, then with the air of someone nerving herself to ask a difficult question, continued. “I know it’s short notice,” she said quietly, “but when I was sorting through the china and silver last week, I wondered whether you might like to have your mother’s afternoon tea service? We don’t use it, and it’s a pity for it to go into storage – and there is some of the linen she embroidered, and one or two other things as well.” Hilda stared at her incredulously for a second.
“Mother’s tea service?” she whispered. “Some linen? I didn’t know -”
“Yes,” said Emma, a faint touch of embarrassment showing in her face. “Of course, I should have asked you about it long ago, but somehow I never seemed to have the time.” She stopped, suddenly aware of Nell’s quizzical expression. “I’m sorry,” she finished awkwardly, her face suddenly pink.
“Don’t worry, Emma,” said Hilda quietly. “ Anything that you can find of Mother’s will be very welcome.” She met Nell’s eyes and shook her head slightly; Nell wrinkled her nose, but stayed silent as Emma sighed with relief.
“Thank you, Hilda. I’ll sort out what there is and arrange for it to be sent to you as quickly as possible.” There was a rustle of movement on the first-floor landing and both Emma and Hilda looked round; a sleepy-looking Celia had appeared, clad in a pale-pink dressing gown and with ruffled hair.
“Mother, Auntie Hilda, I’m sorry I’m late; my wretched alarm didn’t go off! Thank goodness I didn’t miss you!” She scurried down the stairs into the hallway, shivering slightly – the draught from the open front door was distinctly on the cold side – and stopped by Elizabeth. The little girl smiled up at her cousin, who rummaged in her pocket, then pulled out an envelope. “This is for you, from Joseph and me,” she said cheerfully. “Put it safely in your bag, and have fun with it. No, you haven’t got time to open it now, Auntie Hilda and Miss Wilson are waiting.” She watched as the little girl examined the envelope curiously before putting it into her bag and slipping down off the chair. “We’ll miss you, Small,” she said, bestowing a swift hug on the child as she murmured an earnest ‘Thank you.’. “But I know you’ll be happy with Auntie Hilda and her friend – and I hope you’ll send me a letter if I write to you.” Elizabeth nodded.
“If I can,” she said glancing worriedly across the hall at her mother and Nell and fidgeting with the strap of her bag.
“Of course you may,” said Hilda reassuringly. “And I’m sure Auntie Emma will want you to write to her as well.”
“Certainly I will,” agreed Emma. She smiled down at Elizabeth. “Goodbye my dear,” she continued. “I’m sure you’ll be a good girl for Auntie Hilda and Miss Wilson – and I know you’ll have a splendid time in the country.” Elizabeth nodded politely, murmured “Goodbye, Auntie Emma,” then she turned toward Hilda, staring at her mother, but not moving any closer. There was a few seconds of uneasy silence broken by Nell.
“Hilda, I’m sorry, but we will have to leave now if we want to be certain of catching the train.” With a faint sigh of relief, Hilda held out her hand towards Elizabeth, who clutched her bag more closely to her, but obediently took her mother’s hand as the latter made her farewells to Emma and Celia. Then together they walked out of the house and down the steps to where the taxi waited.
Author:  Fi [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:34 am ]
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Woo Hoo!! :D :D :D
I have been looking forward to this being continued as I really enjoyed Part 1 and the prequel drabbles.

I really like this universe and I hope that at least the journey back to Devon goes smoothly. It will be wonderful to see Hilda and her daughter continue to develop their relationship, preferably in a positive way but I am wibbling slightly because Elizabeth seems somewhat ill at ease with H and N.

Thank You so much for updating this Cath
Author:  ibarhis [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:42 am ]
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Wibbling too, but really looking forward to seeing how this works out.
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:22 pm ]
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Good to see this back!
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:29 pm ]
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Thank you for posting more. I came on in my lunch break and was really pleased to find this.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:07 pm ]
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Oh lovely - more of this!! A very pleasant surprise on a grey, cold morning here.

It's going to be very interesting to see how Elizabeth reacts to the move, which will be such a big change for her in all respects. Clearly at this moment she is somewhat bewildered, but that will change. A pity Emma hadn't thought about the family heirlooms before this, but things are moving very quickly for her, as well, and I'm sure that in the end, she will send a considerable amount on to Hilda - which will probably help Elizabeth feel at home in her new surroundings, too. At least both Emma and Celia are giving the child an affectionate send-off.

Thanks, Cath - I will look forward to seeing more of this as and when you have chance to post. Good luck with all the myriad arrangements for moving.
Author:  Pat [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:50 pm ]
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Very glad that this is back. Thanks Cath.
Author:  linda [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 7:31 pm ]
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Lovely to see this back, thank you Cath
Author:  clair [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 7:53 pm ]
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So glad to see this back - mind you my colleague in the office thought I'd gone mad when I saw it! Maybe I should stop having a look at work.
Looking forward to seeing them settling down together
Author:  Nell [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 8:12 pm ]
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Good to have this back - thank you Cath!
Author:  Squirrel [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 8:17 pm ]
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Oooh! How lovely to see this up Cath.

I enjoyed that conversation - poor Nell, wanting so desparately to protect Hilda from the thoughtlessness of her relatives. But they handled that very well. I am pleased to see the care that Elizabeth is given by her close relations, and I do so hope that whatever is stopping Elizabeth from having the confident trust in Hilda she had when she was younger is overcome soon.

Thanks Cath.
Author:  MaryR [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 8:35 pm ]
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Don’t worry, Emma,” said Hilda quietly. “ Anything that you can find of Mother’s will be very welcome.” She met Nell’s eyes and shook her head slightly; Nell wrinkled her nose, but stayed silent as Emma sighed with relief.

Poor Hilda, deprived of things that would have reminded her of her mother and would have meant so much to her. But as always she acts the peacekeeper, knowing just how angry Nell would be on her behalf.

Everyone on tenterhooks, going their own separate ways, and Elizabeth torn from her roots..... how will she react? :cry: We still have to find out just what that nanny has done to her, don't we? :cry:

Thank you for returning, Cath.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:57 pm ]
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Just discovered this, Cath, and had to go back to read it all from the beginning of part 1 - which is why I'm not in bed yet and its nearly midnight here :shock:

This is just fascinating. Really loving it.
Author:  Shander [ Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:47 pm ]
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Thanks Cath!
I'm so happy to see this back, it's great.
Best of luck with your move.
Author:  Ruth B [ Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:16 am ]
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Great to see this back, thanks Cath!
Author:  Rosalin [ Sat Feb 16, 2008 2:01 pm ]
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Great to see a new part of this. I hope Elizabeth will settle down with Hilda and Nell, and I'm glad that Hilda stopped Nell from saying anything to Emma about the heirlooms. Emma does seem to be trying and it would have been a pity to have harsh words spoken at this point.

I particularly liked this little exchange

Cath V-P wrote:
“If I can,” she said glancing worriedly across the hall at her mother and Nell and fidgeting with the strap of her bag.
“Of course you may,” said Hilda reassuringly. “And I’m sure Auntie Emma will want you to write to her as well.”


Thanks Cath. Hope the move goes well.
Author:  di [ Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:37 am ]
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:) Great to see the return of this, Cath. Thanks.
Author:  Tara [ Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:50 pm ]
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'My heart leaps up when I behold' ... an update from Cath! Lovely to see this back, I hope the move doesn't totally overwhelm you. All good wishes for it, anyway.
My heart (it's busy today!) goes out to poor little Elizabeth, being snatched away from everything she knows. Which reminds me, she doesn't yet know that Hilda is her mother, does she? I was so glad to see Celia showing some tenderness towards the child, and shared Hilda's relief when it was finally time to go.

Really looking forward to seeing how they all shake down together.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:46 am ]
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Am really glad to see this again
Author:  Kathy_S [ Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:59 pm ]
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Thanks for squeezing this in during the moving insanity. :)
Author:  Cath V-P [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 12:32 pm ]
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Thank you for all your kind comments... the moving insanity is exactly that! We've just spent the evening moving two minus 80 freezers, three fridges, a tissue culture incubator and a laminar flowhood from a large truck into the garage. They will be accompanying us to Brisbane... :roll:

Anyway, on with the story!

They arrived at Paddington in good time for their train - in such good time in fact, that once they had seen Elizabeth’s trunk safely into the guard’s van, and their own cases into their compartment, they were able to pay a visit to the bookstall. Elizabeth stood beside them, staring round silently at the crowded platforms in fascination, while Hilda selected a newspaper and two books.
“Is this your first train journey, Elizabeth?” asked Nell suddenly realising that the strangeness of her surroundings might be one of the reasons why the child was so quiet. The little girl shook her head,
“No Miss Wilson, but the station is different.” Nell grimaced slightly at the formal mode of address, but then decided that this wasn’t the time, or indeed, the place, to do anything about it. She glanced round at the station, and realised what the child meant; while the bustle and smoke and general busyness of early morning at a large station remained unchanged, sandbags were piled carefully beneath the windows, which were themselves crisscrossed with sticky tape, the lights were dimmed and people in uniform – predominantly young men, but here and there were small groups of women – scurried by in a great hurry. There were very few children to be seen. Nell grinned down at the little girl,
“I see what you mean, “ she said. “But there’s twenty minutes yet, so you’ll be able to sort out some of the changes while we’re waiting.” And I think you’ll find that the pigeons and the trains are the same – and the noise!” She winced as the engine two platforms away emitted a shrill whistle and a damp cloud of steam and soot briefly enveloped them. “Ah the joys of train travel!” she muttered, and glanced across to Hilda who was tucking her purchases into her bag. “Got what you wanted, Hilda?”
“Just,” came the reply. “What about you?”
“Haven’t had a chance yet, but there’s plenty of time. Look, why don’t you take your tickets and get on the train? I’ll be there in about five minutes.” She pushed two tickets into Hilda’s hand and turned back to the bookstall. The latest issue of Time and Tide had just appeared, and while Nell deplored some of the political views expressed in its pages, the writing was not to be overlooked. She picked it up, added the latest issue of Nature and a Margery Allingham that she had never read, then stopped. On the two shelves devoted to children’s books was a copy of Andrew Lang’s Blue Fairy Book, something that she remembered had been a favourite with Cherry when she was Elizabeth’s age. She reached for it, flicked swiftly through the pages and came to a decision. “I’ll have this as well,” she said to the assistant.
The train left London only twenty minutes late, and although it was very full to begin with, their early arrival at Paddington had allowed them to secure seats together. For the first part of the journey, Elizabeth was very quiet, although given the number of people in the compartment, this was scarcely surprising. She sat very still, gazing fixedly through the window, firstly at the various sights afforded by the western part of London, then as they left the city behind, at the hypnotic swoop of telegraph wires and poles as they passed by. Hilda made one or two quiet remarks to her, but although Elizabeth appeared to answer politely, conversation did not develop, and the child did not volunteer any remarks of her own. Unwilling to draw attention from the other passengers, Nell could say very little, and buried herself in Time and Tide – with little success. It was only after she realised that she was reading George Orwell’s ‘Notes on the Way’ for the third time that she abandoned the effort. As the magazine dropped into her lap, Hilda glanced at her but said nothing. Beside her, Elizabeth sat gazing solemnly out of the window, her hands folded neatly in her lap. Nell considered her for a moment and the small voice of concern in her mind grew louder. She did not like this silent wariness in a child - and neither did Hilda if her expression of concern was anything to go by. And yet, was it that surprising? In the short space of just two days, Elizabeth’s life had been turned upside down – the familiar surroundings that she had known since babyhood were lost to her, and she had been handed over to an aunt who loved her, but whom she had not seen for several months. She was leaving London, and probably had almost no idea where she was heading – unless Celia had said something to her the previous day. That was certainly possible, given the girl’s sensible handling of her young cousin, but Nell doubted that it had happened. And on top of that there was Nell herself, a total stranger with whom Elizabeth would now be living. It was no wonder that the child was silent and watchful – and then there were all the other complications as well. Nell sighed and wriggled a little, drawing on herself the hostile glare of the rather large lady beside her who had overflowed effortlessly into the two adjacent seats and annoyed the rest of the occupants by refusing to allow either her large black bag or her basket to be placed in the rack. “I hope this goes smoothly,” she thought anxiously. “Heaven only knows what it would do to Hilda if the child doesn’t settle with her, and we’ve so little time before school opens.” She refused to follow that thought any further, shifting her posture again, and the large woman glared at her before snapping out a fierce “Do you mind?”
“Not at all” responded Nell smartly. There was an indignant drawing of breath, accompanied by the faint creaking of overstrained corsetry, but before the woman could say anything, the train slowed indicating its arrival at Reading and as she was changing trains, she was forced to leave the compartment with her wrathful words unuttered. Her departing look at Nell was anything but kindly, and moved Hilda to murmur, “I don’t think she approves of you!” just as the door slid closed behind the broad back. Nell smirked,
“Whatever gave you that idea?” Then she chuckled. “I didn’t exactly mean to say that, you know. It just happened.” She laughed again, and catching Elizabeth’s eye was rewarded by a faint twitch of the child’s mouth before she turned back to her steady contemplation of the outside world.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 1:09 pm ]
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That's a mind-boggling collection of equipment which has to move with you, Cath - part of the joys of having a SLOC who is so much involved in research I presume!

It's lovely to see more of this - you have captured the situation so acutely. It's hardly suprising that Elizabeth must feel her entire world has been turned upside down; but that little 'twitch' just at the end is an encouraging sign that she will adjust to the changes in her life as she becomes accustomed to them. However, I can also understand Nell's anxiety over the situation for them all.

Thank you for this, I'll look forward to seeing more as and when you have time to post.
Author:  Fi [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:25 pm ]
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I am hoping that Elizabeth is just nervous due to the changes that have happened recently as apposed to some deeper rooted issue that may cause problems in the future. :lol: at Nell's response to the lady in the train.

It's lovely to see more of this, thanks Cath. I hope your move is going as well as can be expected.
Author:  Sugar [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:39 pm ]
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Poor Elizabeth, no wonder she's feeling withdrawn with all the changes.

Thanks Cath - great to see this back.
Author:  Squirrel [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:56 pm ]
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I certainly agree with Elder as to the different things that will be travelling with you - for a minute I wondered if you were proposing to feed an army once you got there!

As to the train trip... I just love Nell's thoughtfulness as she picks the book that Elizabeth might like. And I enjoyed her fight (mental as well as verbal) with the woman who took up so much room - what a rude lady! Just as well she had to hop off when she did though.

I am also pleased to see that Elizabeth might be willing to open up to Nell as time goes on. I do hope that when they are at the cottage, the three of them will be able to have a chat and clear the air.

Thanks Cath.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 5:15 pm ]
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Thanks Cath - hope the move's going OK!
Author:  MaryR [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 5:31 pm ]
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Nell sighed and wriggled a little, drawing on herself the hostile glare of the rather large lady beside her who had overflowed effortlessly into the two adjacent seats

I did giggle at that *overflowing* lady. :lol:

Poor Hilda, who can talk so effortlessly to her girls, and who has enjoyed such a lovely, unrestrained auntie/niece relationship with her little daughter - how it must hurt her that it all seems to have disappeared and there is now only a withdrawn silence which she doesn't seem able to break. There is much more here than meets the eye and it looks as though Hilda and Nell will have to tread very warily with Elizabeth. But, as Nell says, the new term is drawing nigh and time is short....

Thanks, Cath. :wink:
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:55 pm ]
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Thank you for the update amidst your move. Hoope bith your move and Elizabeth's relocations go well.
Author:  linda [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:00 pm ]
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Poor Elizabeth. Everything is moving so quickly. She must not know whether she is on her head or her heels. She really doesn't know Hilda well, and has only just met Nell. AND we don't yet know what the nanny has said to her. No wonder she is quiet.

I too giggled at the 'overflowing' lady.

Thank you Cath for giving us another post whilst you are still involved in the move. Hope your move goes well :D
Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:00 pm ]
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I have just read this from the very beginning of Part 1 until the current post - thanks very much. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to more :)
Author:  Elbee [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 10:49 pm ]
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Poor Elizabeth must be quite bewildered. I'm worried that the nanny has said something which will cause problems.

Thanks, Cath. Good luck with your move.
Author:  di [ Thu Mar 13, 2008 7:00 am ]
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Thanks, Cath, I'm really enjoyng this. Hope your move goes successfully :)
Author:  Kathy_S [ Fri Mar 14, 2008 4:13 am ]
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Quite a journey on everyone's parts -- including yours, Cath. I can't imagine having to move the minus 80s.:shock: Empty, or packed with dry ice and Important Stuff?

Nice to see the promising exchange of glances between Nell & Elizabeth. Who gets to read the Blue Fairy Book?
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Mar 16, 2008 2:18 am ]
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Poor Elizabeth, that's so many changes for her. Thanks for the update.

BTW Good luck with the moving and unpacking to Brisbane
Author:  Cath V-P [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:34 pm ]
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Well we haven't moved as yet...although we've sold the house, and we seem to have found somewhere in Brisbane. David has been working in Brisbane since the start of April, and at the moment, it looks as if we'll be moving at the start of August. And as I have a little time, I've been able to start writing again. I'm sorry it's been so long since an update.

The train had emptied itself of at least half its passengers at Reading, and eventually they found themselves alone in the compartment. This, for Nell was the signal to investigate the contents of the basket with which Emma Annersley had provided them: not only did breakfast seem to have been rather a long time ago, but this would give them a way to deal with Elizabeth’s continuing silence. Apart from politely answering any questions that were put to her, the child had not volunteered a single remark since leaving London, and the effect that this was having on Hilda was becoming more noticeable by the moment. A distraction was definitely needed. Nell stood up, stretched – the seats were distinctly uncomfortable and her back was reminding her of this - retrieved the basket from the rack and put it on the seat beside Hilda. Elizabeth’s eyes followed Nell’s movements, but she said nothing.
“Hungry, Elizabeth?” Nell asked casually, as Hilda wrestled with the catches on the basket. The little girl jumped, then nodded, a faint tinge of colour suddenly apparent in her cheeks.
“Yes,” she whispered finally, and Nell grinned,
“Good, so am I,” she remarked cheerfully. “And I know that there’s a bag of fruit buns in there because I saw Cook put then in – Hilda, haven’t you managed to undo that yet?”
“The straps are stiff and won’t move,” came the somewhat irritated response. “Here, you try - wretched thing.” Nell laughed.
“All it needs is kindness you know!” Hilda started to reply, then glared as Nell effortlessly unfastened the second strap, and threw back the lid. Nell smirked. “It obviously knew I was in charge,” she said complacently and moved hastily out of range.
“Don’t boast, it doesn’t become you,” said Hilda severely, and Nell laughed, then fell silent as she noticed Elizabeth’s suddenly-worried expression. A glance in Hilda’s direction revealed that she had noticed it too, and for a few seconds, a strained quiet filled the compartment as Nell stared into Hilda’s troubled eyes. Then Hilda held out a bun to the child, who accepted it with a whispered ‘Thank you,” and the tension dissipated.
Her bun and cup of milk disposed of, Elizabeth turned back towards the window again and showed every sign of remaining silently in her corner and continuing to stare out at the swiftly-passing scenery as she had done since leaving London. Nell and Hilda exchanged concerned looks and Nell realised that Hilda’s mouth was set in a line, and her hands folded tensely in her lap. “This can’t continue,” she thought, and suddenly stood up.
“Come on, Elizabeth,” she said briskly. “Time for some exercise!”

Hilda gasped, and the little girl’s eyes opened widely as she looked at Nell, who found herself choking down an unexpected giggle at the sight of mother and daughter gazing at her with identical expressions of confusion. “It’s a corridor train,” she continued briskly, “and the corridor’s empty. So off you go – up and down six times, walking quickly!” With another bemused look at her, Elizabeth, slid down off the seat, and left the compartment complying with Nell’s instructions. At once Hilda turned in her seat,
“Nell, what -” Nell frowned.
“ It’s a useful distraction Hilda; hopefully, she’ll be more at ease after this.” Hilda sighed, squeezing her eyes shut.
“I don’t know, Nell, this isn’t what I’d expected - although I haven’t had much time to think about it.” Nell laid a gentle hand on her shoulder.
“A lot has happened in the last three days hasn’t’ it? And if it’s confusing for us, then -”
“It must be just the same – or worse - for her,” finished Hilda. They were quiet for a moment, watching the corridor; Elizabeth passed the compartment for a second time and Hilda smiled wistfully after her daughter. “I’ve looked forward to this for so long,” she said. “But Nell -” She fell silent and her eyes suddenly shone with tears. “I don’t know what to do,” she whispered. “If she was a pupil - but she isn’t, and I somehow can’t see the way ahead.”
“It will be alright,” said Nell immediately, pulling Hilda into a swift hug. “There might be difficulties, but we’ll get through them.” Hilda leaned into her for a second, then straightened up, immeasurably reassured by Nell’s words.
Author:  di [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:54 pm ]
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Poor Elizabeth, she must be so confused. She obviously has the words of her previous nanny ringing in her ears and here she is with two comparitive strangers, one of whom is her 'aunt' and the other she has only met a couple of times. There is nothing familiar for her to cling to. I hope Hilda can pull herself together enough to help this little girl feel more comfortable!
Great to see this again, Cath and selfishly hoping you will fit more in before you move in August. :wink:
Author:  MaryR [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 1:55 pm ]
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“I don’t know what to do,” she whispered. “If she was a pupil - but she isn’t, and I somehow can’t see the way ahead.”

And there's the conundrum for her. Being a headmistress in no way has prepared her for being a mother - even though the former aunt/niece relationship was filled with joy.

But then she has no idea that someone else has already scuppered her, so to speak. One really does wonder just what the nanny has put in the child's head - she certainly jumped at Hilda's suddenly sharp tone to Nell. :cry:

Thans, Cath. Glad the voices are speaking.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 3:52 pm ]
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It's not surprising Elizabeth feels her entire world has been turned upside down in the course of 3 days, especially since neither John nor Emma had said anything about the impending change in her circumstances, nor do we know what poison that nurse has been dripping into her mind.

Hilda is clearly just as puzzled at this turn of events as the child herself is, given the loving nature of their earlier encounters - but I'm sure we can have faith that she will eventually be able to make the much-needed breakthrough.

Thanks for the update, Cath, both in the story and in your own situation - I hope you'll be able to finish this before you move.
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 4:32 pm ]
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Thanks Cath - good to see this back.
Author:  Celia [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 4:40 pm ]
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It's great to see more of this Cath. Thank you. :D

Maybe a snack and being allowed to move about will relax Elizabeth a
little. I'm sure the whole experience is really scary for her. We know
how nice Hilda and Nell are, but all she knows is that she has left the
only home she has ever known to go and live with two people who are
comparative strangers to her. Add to that whatever Nanny has said
and ouch, poor little girl. :(
Author:  abbeybufo [ Sun Jun 29, 2008 6:48 pm ]
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Lovely to see this back, Cath

Glad you're fixed with somewhere in Brisbane & hope the move goes well - the delay at least has the advantage of more of this for us :lol:
Author:  wheelchairprincess [ Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:52 am ]
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Great to see this back again. Good luck with the move, hope it goes quickly, easily and well!
Author:  linda [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:05 am ]
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Great to see this back again. :D

Poor Elizabeth, I wonder what nanny has said to her, but that might not be the problem. She must be feeling very unsettled having said goodbye to everything which is familiar, leaving for a new life with two people, one of whom she has only just met and the other who has been an intermittent visitor in her life. It is no wonder that she is being very quiet.

Thank you Cath. Hope the move goes well.
Author:  Sugar [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:14 am ]
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Great to see this back Cath!
Author:  Cath V-P [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:51 am ]
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Thank you for your comments, both about the story and The Move (it's acquired capital letters now). I'm steadily working through the books - it's taken me a while as I decided to catalogue the collection for insurance purposes as well, and that's been a bit more work than I thought. And of course, buying more books (three today) doesn't exactly help... :D Anyway, on with the story.....

Elizabeth passed the compartment for a fourth time, then, somewhat to their surprise, returned almost immediately. She was followed by the ticket inspector, who slid the door open with the usual “Tickets please!” Hilda fumbled in her pocket for the three strips of pasteboard and handed them to the inspector who scrutinised them closely.
“You’ll be needing to change at Exeter,” he said, “There shouldn’t be too much of a wait for the next train.” He scrutinised Elizabeth. “Going to the country, then?” Elizabeth nodded, her eyes wide. “Up to Dartmoor, eh? You’ll find that different to London.” He clipped the tickets and returned them to Hilda. “Exeter in an hour,” he said, and moved off down the corridor. Elizabeth remained in the middle of the compartment, moving uneasily from one foot to the other. Hilda smiled at her.
“An hour isn’t long,” she said. “Why don’t you look at the book Auntie Emma gave you last night?” Elizabeth thought for a moment, then, to Nell’s surprise, she turned towards her.
“Is it alright?” she asked anxiously. “I only managed four times – not six. I’m sorry.” Nell stared at her in disbelief; surely the child did not believe that Nell was angry with her because she had not completed her walk up and down the corridor? For a few seconds, she was speechless, then the worry on the child’s face prompted her to respond.
“Of course it’s alright,” she said reassuringly. “Why don’t you get your book as Auntie Hilda suggested? ” She watched as Elizabeth settled into her seat, and opened her book. Opposite her, Hilda squinted curiously at its pretty wrapper.
“Anyone we know?” asked Nell in an undertone. Hilda shook her head.
“Not really; she started writing about fifteen years ago, mainly for younger children. She has a regular column in the Teacher’s World that I know May uses in the Kindergarten, and I’ve seen some of her later books in the shops. This one was published last year I think.” Nell peered at the book in her turn.
“The Enchanted Wood – no, I’ve never heard of it. The wrapper’s attractive though.”
“Bride was given a copy last Christmas; I know she liked it.” She gazed at her daughter, so evidently engrossed in her new book, and smiled proudly. Nell’s lips twitched a little.
“I think it must be hereditary,” she said blandly, reaching for her newspaper.

The rest of the journey to Exeter passed uneventfully, until the train came to a halt for no discernible reason some five miles from the station and stayed resolutely in one spot for the next twenty minutes - much to Nell’s annoyance as this meant that they had now missed their connection.
“I’ll have to find a telephone,” she said crossly. “Still, as we’ll now have at least an hour to wait there should be time.”
“It can’t be helped,” replied Hilda soothingly. “And even with the later train we should get there before we’re all too tired. Interesting isn’t it,” she added thoughtfully, “just how tiring sitting still can be.” Nell grimaced.
“I really don’t like trains,” she said. “And to be honest, Hilda, I’d much prefer to be home by a reasonable hour – preferably one that involves light rather than dark.”
“Well, as we’re already using daylight saving, that shouldn’t be impossible,” commented Hilda.
“True – ah, I think we’re moving again.” The train gave another jolt, then slowly began to pick up speed, and ten minutes later saw them walking up the platform at Exeter St Davids, a porter following with their luggage.

As they neared the footbridge, Nell moved to examine the timetable, and pulled a face at it.
“Well, thanks to that burst of lethargy, we missed our original connection by eight minutes, bother it! Honestly, I don’t know why people talk about trains ‘running’ - a gentle amble would be more accurate!” Behind her, Hilda giggled.
“Definitely – but now that’s out of the way, how long do we have to wait here?” Nell glanced at the station clock and groaned,
“Over an hour, I’m sorry to say. And we have to change platforms as well. Still, at least we have time to eat lunch.” Hilda looked round the station and nodded.
“That’s a good idea: why don’t we go the waiting room - we’ll be out of the wind, and we can eat in relative comfort.” Nell nodded.
“You do that, and I’ll join you, after I’ve dealt with that phonecall.” Hilda smiled, held out her hand to Elizabeth, who took it shyly, and they set off towards the waiting room. Nell watched them, then turned to direct the porter to take their luggage to the platform from which they would catch the local train.

Despite the characteristic stuffy warmth of the waiting room – that oddly enough did very little to combat the wicked little draughts caused by ill-fitting doors and windows – they lingered there over lunch longer than they had anticipated. For one thing, both Hilda and Elizabeth were cold, and therefore reluctant to face the chill spring breeze outside, and more importantly, by the time lunch was over Elizabeth was clearly a little more at ease, although she still said almost nothing. Neither Hilda nor Nell felt that plying the child with questions would be helpful, and after her earlier reactions to Hilda’s irritated remark and to Nell’s instructions in the train, they were careful to keep their conversation friendly and playful, hoping that as Elizabeth grew used to them, she would realise that there was nothing for her to worry about. Once or twice it had seemed as if she were about to add something to the few words that she had uttered, but she had stopped herself, a wary, almost shuttered expression visible on her small face. The first time she had seen it happen, Nell had winced, and looked away to prevent her feelings of fury being seen. She had then realised that if she found it upsetting, for Hilda, it would be – must be - far worse and she had schooled herself to show no further reaction, although when the clock showed that the train was almost due, she was thankful. She screwed the lid onto her flask, disposed of her apple core in the bin, and stood up.
“If we’ve finished, I think we should head over to the platform. The train usually gets in early and we might as well sort ourselves out.” Hilda nodded in agreement and began to repack the basket. Elizabeth immediately scrambled off the bench near the window and went to help her. That job finished, Hilda scrutinised her daughter.
“Hmm, you could do with some tidying,” she observed. “ Nell do you have a comb handy? Mine’s at the bottom of my bag.” In answer, Nell fished in her pocket and produced a small comb, as well as two handkerchiefs, a pen, a box of matches, and a compass, at the sight of which Hilda’s mouth twitched. She said nothing however, but simply took the proffered comb and proceeded to replait Elizabeth’s hair. “A wash wouldn’t come amiss either, so I think a visit to the cloakroom is in order,” she added.
“I was going to suggest that,” murmured Nell. “In the cause of, shall we say, comfort and convenience.”
“Two minds with but a single thought,” said Hilda wryly. They gathered their possessions together and went out onto the platform.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:02 am ]
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Lovely Cath, thanks :D

Still worried as to what poisoned remarks Elizabeth has been subjected to, though :shock:
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:27 am ]
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They must feel like they're treading on eggshells, but they seem to be managing. Thanks Cath :D .
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:34 am ]
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Poor Elizabeth. Her quietness seems to indicate how much she was forced to repress with the Annersleys. I only hope she is able to relax soon
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:30 pm ]
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Clearly Elizabeth is going to need time to relax with Hilda and Nell - and to realise that whatever poison her erstwhile Nanny has tried to instil into her mind is indeed just that - poison!

Thanks, Cath - I will be looking forward to further developments.
Author:  di [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 8:05 pm ]
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Thanks Cath for that lovely interlude. Nell is going to have to watch her caustic tongue until Elizabeth gets to know her a little better.
Author:  Celia [ Fri Jul 04, 2008 8:47 pm ]
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Thanks for another interesting update Cath. This period of adjustment
is not going to be easy for any of them is it . John's remark "We hardly
know there's a child in the house" keeps coming into my mind.
Author:  MaryR [ Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:22 pm ]
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Honestly, I don’t know why people talk about trains ‘running’ - a gentle amble would be more accurate!”

*giggles quietly* Typical Nell remark - and it cheered Hilda up. :D

Nell's fury simmering, Hilda's anxiety and hurt growing, Elizabeth's silence unnerving - how will they sort it all out, I wonder....

Thank you, Katerina. :wink:
Author:  Fi [ Sun Jul 13, 2008 1:30 pm ]
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Elizabeth has had so many changes to deal with and that horrible nanny seems to have left her afraid to breathe too loudly. I'm sure that she will settle down with H and N when she realises how lovely they both are but the road will probably be long and rather bumpy.

It's kind of weird to think of anyone not immediately recognising Enid Blyton as she is now so engrained into British childhood. But it makes you realise that there was a time when she would have been seen as a very modern author who parents may have heard of, but not read.

:lol: at Nell and her compass.

Thanks for the posts Cath.
Author:  Tara [ Sun Jul 13, 2008 11:07 pm ]
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I don't know how I managed to miss the update, Cath, but I'm delighted to see this back.
Poor little Elizabeth, it's going to be hard on her, not to mention Hilda. She (E) really has been thoroughly squashed, hasn't she. Nell's going to have to be rather careful and moderate her usual caustic comments, E will take her seriously. I loved the contents of Nell's pockets - she is totally delightful. Also loved the description of the stuffy but draughty waiting room; I remember them all to well.

Hope RL allows of more soon (she said, greedily).
Author:  Cath V-P [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:32 am ]
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[color=blue] Well, The Move has happened, and I am recovering. Other than leaving the UK 17 years ago, I can't think of any of our other moves that has been quite so complex and annoying. But we are here, on our 2.5 acres, gazing out at trees and a dilapidated chook shed and surrounded by boxes. We've unpacked as far as we can, but not many of the books alas as we have renovations happening. David celebrated us getting here by knocking down the dining room walls - as you do - and purchasing quantities of insulation for the roof. We can't install it until we have evicted the two, maybe three, possums that are living happily in the roof space (and driving the dog berserk when they start scrabbling about in the early evening) and wired up their access points. And major point of irritation - we can't get Broadband so are forced back to dial-up in the short term, drat it.
But I have been able to start work on "Diamond' again, and here is a short piece for you all. With luck, it won't be seven weeks before the next update....:D [/color

Nell was right; their train had already arrived, and a varied range of items were being loaded into the guard’s van - something which intrigued Elizabeth, rather to Nell’s surprise.
“She must have seen this before,” she commented in an undertone. A smile tugged at the corners of Hilda’s mouth.
“Quite probably,” she replied. “But I don’t know that it will have involved livestock!” She gestured towards a trolley of crates packed with chickens, all grumbling their way peevishly up the platform, their heads sticking out at impossible angles between the wooden slats. Elizabeth was staring at them, fascinated, until the noisy yapping of a small dog attracted her attention. Behind them, an overweight and obviously ill-tempered terrier was barking hysterically at a collie sedately accompanying its master up the platform. As they watched, the terrier’s owner, a dumpy middleaged lady, whose downturned mouth and slightly protuberant eyes gave her an unfortunate but definite resemblance to a toad, cuddled it protectively against her ample bosom and glared at both man and dog as they went by. As they passed, Nell could have sworn that they directed identical looks of contempt at the terrier and its owner. She shook her head.
“What some people do their dogs,” she remarked. “What about you Elizabeth? Do you like dogs?” The little girl thought for a moment.
“I – I think so, Miss Wilson. But I don’t know many. Auntie Emma says that it’s difficult to keep dogs in London.” Nell smiled.
“It can be tricky,” she agreed. “Cats are easier.” Elizabeth’s eyes lit up.
“I do like cats,” she said breathlessly. “The cook has a lovely big black and white cat called Archie. He used to come into the nursery, but Nanny said he wasn’t hygi – hygi - something – and he couldn’t be there any more.” Nell and Hilda exchanged glances.
“That was sad,” said Hilda gently. “We both like cats, though we don’t have one.”
“Yet,” muttered Nell. She glanced at Hilda, whose eyes twinkled, but who otherwise ignored the monosyllable. Fortunately, Elizabeth appeared not to have heard it and was once more regarding the chickens with intense interest. Hilda and Nell waited until the crates had disappeared into the guard’s van, before suggesting that they board the train.
“You’ll be able to see everything from the window,” Hilda said gently, “but it would be better if we settled ourselves now.” At once, Elizabeth turned and followed her mother over to the train where Nell had already laid claim to three seats.
“We’ve got about an hour and a half before we arrive,” she said briskly. “And I should remind you that we will stop at every tiny halt and station that exists between there and here!” Hilda laughed.
“I hadn’t forgotten, Nell, although this time at least I’ll see it all in daylight.” Nell paused.
“Have you only ever come this way in the dark then? I suppose you must have, although it seems as if you’ve been here for ever.” She smiled gently at Hilda, then turned to Elizabeth. “If you sit here, you’ll be able to see what’s happening,” she said. Elizabeth immediately sat down in the window seat as Nell indicated, murmuring “Yes, Miss Wilson,” as she did so. Nell frowned.
“I think we have something to sort out,” she said, sitting down by Elizabeth and ignoring Hilda’s sudden startled glance. Beside her Elizabeth was very still, staring down at her shoes. Nell frowned, wondering whether this was the right thing to do – but they had to make a start somewhere, and this was at least a sensible place to begin. “You know,” she said, “it really doesn’t make sense for you to call Hilda “Auntie Hilda,” and me “Miss Wilson,” does it?” Mutely, Elizabeth shook her head. “Good! Well, you’d better make it “Auntie Nell,” for the future, if you don’t mind.” Elizabeth bit her lip, then cast a quick sidelong glance toward Hilda who was smiling reassuringly at her.
“That seems like an excellent idea to me, Elizabeth.” Nell laughed.
“Approval from on high! Good, that’s settled – it’s “Auntie Nell” from now on, and if you talk to “Miss Wilson”, she might refuse to answer you!” She was unprepared for the look of alarm that crossed Elizabeth’s face at this, and even more taken aback by Hilda’s low-voiced and angry “Nell! Stop teasing the child!”
Author:  di [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 9:26 am ]
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Glad to hear the move went well and you're ensconsed in your new home-complete with possums!
Poor Elizabeth, so confusing for her but hopefully she can bring herself to call Nell 'Auntie'. When, or if, I wonder, will they tell her that Hilda is really her mother.
Love the descriptions of the hurly burly of the station and loading up the livestock. Elizabeth is being exposed to all sorts of new experiences and I'm sure by the time they reach their destination she'll be exhausted and fit for nothing but bed.
Thanks, Cath for the update. This is a fabulous story.
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 11:07 am ]
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“I do like cats,” she said breathlessly. “The cook has a lovely big black and white cat called Archie. He used to come into the nursery, but Nanny said he wasn’t hygi – hygi - something – and he couldn’t be there any more.” Nell and Hilda exchanged glances.



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“Approval from on high! Good, that’s settled – it’s “Auntie Nell” from now on, and if you talk to “Miss Wilson”, she might refuse to answer you!” She was unprepared for the look of alarm that crossed Elizabeth’s face at this, and even more taken aback by Hilda’s low-voiced and angry “Nell! Stop teasing the child!”


Elizabeth has been affected by the nanny's attitude. I am glad Hilda recognises it and hope she can help Nell see it too.

They are going to have to tell Elizabeth the truth about Hilda and her marriage as nanny as I suspect nanny has given her a distorted picture of what happened.
Author:  Sugar [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 11:37 am ]
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Glad the move went well Cath!
Fantastic to see more of this
Author:  linda [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:04 pm ]
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Glad the move went well, Cath. Hope you manage to evict your possums soon.
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“I do like cats,” she said breathlessly. “The cook has a lovely big black and white cat called Archie. He used to come into the nursery, but Nanny said he wasn’t hygi – hygi - something – and he couldn’t be there any more.” Nell and Hilda exchanged glances.
“That was sad,” said Hilda gently. “We both like cats, though we don’t have one.” “Yet,” muttered Nell. She glanced at Hilda, whose eyes twinkled, but who otherwise ignored the monosyllable.

Poor Elizabeth, Nanny has a lot to answer for. I wonder if Hilda is thinking she might get a kitten for Elizabeth? OK now, Hilda, but what about when you're all back at school?

Perhaps 'Auntie Nell' will seem less intimidating than 'Miss Wilson', and will help Elizabeth to feel as though she belongs, rather than being sent away with people who are little more than strangers - and who knows what frightening ideas Nanny has put into Elizabeth's head!

Lovely to have this back, Cath. I look forward to the rest of the journey home.
Author:  Fi [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:15 pm ]
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It's great to see this back and I'm glad you managed to survive your move Cath.

Nell seems to be doing a good job of reassuring Elizabeth so far but she still needs to be careful and bear in mind the child's recent history. I wasn't surprised by Elizabeth's final response after the trouble that her Nanny caused. I was however surprised by Hilda's - she seems to be very uptight and nervous. She needs to relax or Elizabeth will sense the tension and become more anxious.

Thanks Cath.
Author:  clair [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:51 pm ]
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Good to see this back - glad the move went well in the end!

Let's hope they all manage to settle more easily once they're back in the cottage, maybe Elizabeth will feel more comfortable after a couple of days and once she's seen that they're ready for her to move in.
Author:  MaryR [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:12 pm ]
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Poor Hilda - so on edge that all should go well, and knowing that it isn't. She'd seen earlier that teasing frightens Elizabeth so can't stop herself scolding Nell. Yes, she approves of what Nell is doing this time, but will she be upset every time Nell takes it into her head to do something for or with the girl that Hilda hasn't approved - and will it cause almighty ructions in the very new relationship Nell and Hilda have just embarked on? :cry: Oh dear!

Thanks, Cath.
Author:  Celia [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:22 pm ]
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Lovely to see this back Cath.

Hope that things will be easier for all of them once they are safely at the
cottage. At least Elizabeth was able to show a very natural curiosity
about all the livestock :)

Glad the move is over at last, I thought squirrels in the roof were bad
enough, never mind possums !!

Thank you
Author:  abbeybufo [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:11 pm ]
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Good to see this back - glad your move is successfully over, even tho' you still have lots to do.

It will be interesting seeing how Hilda and Nell go about getting Elizabeth to relax with them.

:hammer: that nanny :evil:

Thanks Cath
Author:  Shander [ Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:09 am ]
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I'm delighted to see this back, although sorry to hear that you have possums in the attic.
I hope they get moved out quickly. :D
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:39 pm ]
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Its lovely to see a tidbit more. Thanks
Author:  Tara [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 11:47 pm ]
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Delighted to find this waiting for me! Glad the worst of the move is over, Cath and hope you have lots of writing time very soon :wink: .

I loved Elizabeth's reaction to the livestock and hope they find a cat to share, as they won't be able to keep one.

Nell dealt with the problem of what E called her very sensibly, something obviously needed to be done. Now is Hilda being more sensitive than Nell to E's reactions, or is she over-reacting? And does she resent Nell's proactive behaviour? They've got several minefields to negotiate here and, as Mary said, a very new relationship!

Thanks, Cath.
Author:  Cath V-P [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 8:16 am ]
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Sorry about the delay in updating this; I will try and be a little faster next time. And thank you for all your kind comments on the previous section.

For a long moment, Nell froze, unable to quite believe what she had heard.
“I – I beg your pardon?” she said finally, wondering where she had gone wrong; surely Hilda must know that she would never use teasing as a weapon – and particularly not against a vulnerable child. But faced with Hilda’s unnerving words, she was suddenly uncertain; perhaps she had been too overbearing? And Elizabeth might never have encountered this type of banter before – perhaps she thought that Nell really was angry. She looked down at the child; although the little girl had not moved, Nell had the definite impression that she was somehow trying to make herself smaller to avoid undue attention. She sighed and crouched down sufficiently so that she could clearly see the small tense face.
“I’m sorry, Elizabeth; did you think I was cross with you?” A few seconds later, the little girl gave an infinitesimal nod of her head, her mouth quivering. Nell winced. “I’m sorry,” she said once more. “I wouldn’t tease you like that, you know. If I ever am cross about something you might have done, I will tell you, so there won’t be any mistakes. Do you understand?” She waited as Elizabeth mulled this over; finally there was another of those barely-perceptible little nods and a whisper of “Yes Mi– yes, Auntie Nell.”
“Good girl,” said Nell. She moved away from the child, now gazing out of the window once more, and turned towards Hilda who blushed and looked down at her hands, twisted together in her lap.
“I’m sorry, Nell,” she murmured. “I shouldn’t have said that.” Nell stared at her.
“No, you shouldn’t,” she said quietly. “You know me better than that, don’t you? I would never -”
“I know, I know,” Hilda broke in. “I don’t know what I was thinking. I must have been mad! And after all that you’re doing too!” She raised her head, and Nell was horrified by the mingled shame and misery on her face.
“Don’t worry,” she replied, laying her hand on Hilda’s and stilling the restless twining of her fingers. “We’ll talk about everything later, when we’re home.” Hilda squeezed Nell’s hand for a second, then picked up her previously-discarded book. Suppressing a sigh, Nell followed suit, although her attention was not on the words in front of her: it was clear from the last few minutes that the way ahead was not going to be as straightforward as they had thought and that fact warranted some consideration. Of course, they had been preoccupied with the removal of Elizabeth from the Annersleys’ house; Nell at least had not looked much further than that, although she was becoming increasingly convinced that Hilda must have done so, and that the results of that were somewhat worrying in a number of ways. “And I hope we’re not going to have too much bother with gratitude,” she mused. “Whoever it was said that gratitude was the very devil was absolutely right - and Father always thought too much of it could be very dangerous. I suppose we’ll just have to see what happens….” Resolutely she forced her attention back to her book, noting as she did so that there was now less than an hour before they arrived.

The silence in the compartment remained unbroken until the train had started its slow climb up the hill before the station. Since her last little speech to Nell, Elizabeth had concentrated on The Enchanted Forest with a careful intensity and both Hilda and Nell had felt it was easier to leave her to herself for a little rather than force her to talk. However, as they were almost at their destination, they had to prepare to leave the train and with that in mind, Hilda lowered her book, and turned to Nell.
“Won’t we be arriving shortly, Nell?” Startled – despite her earlier preoccupation, she had managed to take a very healthy interest in Murder Must Advertise, which she was reading for the third time – Nell glanced up, then jumped to her feet.
“Heavens, yes! I hadn’t noticed how near we are! And the train doesn’t wait long here, so we’d better be ready.” As she spoke, she bundled her book into her bag, seized her hat from the seat next to her, whence she had dropped it after leaving Exeter, and turned to Elizabeth. “Elizabeth, perhaps you should -” She paused, then continued carefully, “If Auntie Hilda helps you with your things, I’ll see about the bags in the rack.” She stretched up and lifted down the suitcases, carefully avoiding Hilda’s slightly puzzled gaze. “At least we’re here before it’s dark,” she went on determinedly, gathering together the rest of her possessions. “That way Elizabeth will have some idea of the village - and if you look out of the window now Elizabeth, you’ll see one of the loveliest views of the journey.” With the almost painful promptness that characterised her response to any command, no matter how obliquely phrased, the little girl at once turned towards the window, and then gasped. The train had slowed as the gradient increased, and now as it rounded the last curve before the station, the valley fell away sharply, an endless sea of green and grey, the pale blue sky apparently limitless. Then with a final gallant effort, the train was at the top of the hill and steaming slowly into the station.
Author:  Yvette [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:27 am ]
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Terrific story so far Cath!!

And welcome to Brisbane! :D
Author:  Alison H [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:54 am ]
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Lovely to see more of this - thanks Cath :D .
Author:  abbeybufo [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 11:00 am ]
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Glad you're settled enough to be able to post more of this, Cath - lovely to see it again.
Author:  dackel [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 1:20 pm ]
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It's lovely to see some more of this, thanks, Cath!
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 1:32 pm ]
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Pleased to see more of this. Poor Nell discovering that innocent remarks can be misunderstood by Elizabeth.

Elizabeth is going to find the next few days and weeks confusing as she gets to know Hilda and Nell better.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 2:16 pm ]
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I'm delighted to see RL has settled down enough to give you chance to post another episode, Cath. Poor Elizabeth - Hilda and Nell will really feel they need to 'tread gently like Agag' around her until she becomes accustomed to them and to her new life. It won't be easy for any of them, but I'm sure all will be well in the end.

Thanks, Cath - Will look foward to more of this in due course.
Author:  di [ Tue Nov 04, 2008 5:49 pm ]
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Beautiful ending, Cath and a lovely story. keep it coming, please! :)
Author:  MaryR [ Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:54 am ]
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Poor Hilda and Nell, watching their new relationship coming under fire like this. Nell now scared to say anything, in case she arouses Hilda's ire, and Hilda so scared about her relationship with her daughter that she's being unfair to Nell. But that is so understandable with Elizabeth's strange reactions to everything. All three are tip-toeing around each other - and I can see storms and fireworks ahead, as Nell has little patience and Hilda is in totally unfamiliar territory and doesn't know how to react.

Thanks, Cath.
Author:  blue1 [ Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:31 pm ]
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Can I just say thanks.
Only just found this site so this is my first post. I love this drabble. Ive just read this "the return" and Christmas 1939" straight through (twice) :oops: . Havent slept in a while though. Its brilliantly written.

I dont know how anyone reads this at work though are ye made of stone or do your colleagues just expect the seemingly random tears by now!

Can't wait for the next part :)
Author:  Celia [ Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:47 pm ]
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Lovely to see more of this Cath.
Poor Nell and Hilda, just getting to grips with their own
new relationship,and now having to accomodate Elizabeth, and all her difficulties.

Thank you
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:39 pm ]
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Lovely to see more of this. Can see where Elizabeth gets her sensitive nature from
Author:  Cath V-P [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 9:05 am ]
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Thank you for your comments - I will try to be a little more forthcoming in 2009. At least the move is out of the way, though we're now faced with the joys of renovation..... but it's nice to be back in Brisbane, although it's a bit hot and humid at the moment, and there's a storm rattling around.


A bare four minutes later, they were standing on the platform with their luggage, the train already moving slowly away from them, silently confirming Nell’s previous observation that it didn’t wait long here. Thanks to the delay outside Exeter, it was very late in the afternoon, and both Hilda and Nell were feeling tired, hungry, and more than a little grubby, and while Elizabeth had not voiced any complaints, she sagged wearily against a bench, and her small face was pale. Nell looked round, then brightened as the recognisable form of Charlie Gorton appeared from his small office and marched purposefully towards them.
“I knew he couldn’t resist it,” she muttered under her breath. Hilda glanced round.
“Who – ? Oh, I see.” Nell grinned.
“I sent a telegram to Sarah yesterday, asking to be met – and you know how it is in a village: news is almost sucked out of the air, so to have a piece of paper with the words on it is a veritable gift!” Hilda choked back a giggle at this artless observation, aware that Charlie Gorton was now in earshot. He had acquired a barrow, having had time to observe the luggage piled by them, and his expression, rarely cheerful at best, had deepened to a gloom, reminiscent to Nell at least, of a depressed bloodhound.
“Who’s meeting us, Nell?”
Nell jumped slightly, her attention having been focussed on the approaching Charlie and turned back toward Hilda. Behind her, Elizabeth had straightened up and was looking at Nell with an expression similar to Hilda’s own wary curiosity.
“I’m sorry, Hilda, I didn’t mean to ignore you.” She smiled at Elizabeth, and was rewarded by a tentative twitch of the child’s mouth. “We live a little way outside the village, Elizabeth, but don’t worry we won’t have to walk.” The little girl’s gaze slid away again, but heartened by that almost-smile, Nell did not allow it to worry her for the moment.
“I sent a telegram to Sarah yesterday,” she said serenely. “Henry should be waiting for us.” She paused, acutely aware that Elizabeth was listening. “I think he’ll have brought Conrad, rather than the car, although I suppose he could claim that he is collecting something from the station, and that counts as shopping – but given the pedantic nature of at least one of our local policemen, that possibly isn’t wise.” Hilda chuckled at this conclusion, then sobered.
“I know that animal is supposed to be safe, but he’s rather large,” she said, grimacing. Mindful of Elizabeth, she didn’t add anything further, and Nell smiled reassuringly. Elizabeth glanced up at Hilda and Nell and seemed to be about to ask something – but then she folded her small lips into a straight line and said nothing, watching as Charlie pushed the last case on the barrow and grasped the handles. Nell set off towards the exit, as Hilda took Elizabeth’s small grubby hand and followed her out of the station into the yard where they were greeted by the sight of Conrad and the governess cart with Henry Gorton waiting patiently beside them.
“Good, you’re here then,” he said as greeted him. Behind them Charlie Gorton puffed along pushing the barrow containing their luggage and bitterly regretting the curiosity that had brought him out of his office onto the platform. Nell grinned as he let go of the handles and ran a hand over his sweating brow.
“Thank you, Charlie,” she said demurely. “Now, it you could give Henry a hand with the trunk, we’ll be on our way.” Charlie grunted, but said nothing; he and Henry hoisted the trunk into the cart, added the three cases, then with an indistinct ‘Good afternoon,’ Charlie stumped away down the platform musing darkly on the agonies of unaccustomed exertion.
Author:  di [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 9:16 am ]
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Great! More of the story to keep me amused over the Christmas hols. I'm sure the village folk will be very curious to find out about the new arrivals. Thanks, Cath, looking forward to lots more!! :)
Author:  abbeybufo [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 12:36 pm ]
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Lovely to see this back - glad you're pleased to be back in the Brisbane area :D

Thanks, Cath
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 1:07 pm ]
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Good to see this back :D .
Author:  Jennie [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 1:34 pm ]
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Thanks, that was great.
Author:  Celia [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:30 pm ]
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It's lovely to find more of this Cath. Thank you.
Good luck with the renovations :wink:
Author:  MHE [ Mon Dec 29, 2008 11:43 pm ]
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Good to see this back.
Author:  Nell [ Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:40 pm ]
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Great - your back and so it this. Look forward to more when you have time and seeing the reaction of the village and how Elizabeth settles in.
Author:  MaryR [ Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:49 pm ]
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Nice to see Charlie get his comeuppances! :P

Elizabeth is giving Nell a lot of cause for concern, isn't she? I wonder how it will go when they reach the cottage and are all alone, just the three of them, and try to settle down to real life.

Thanks, Cath. :D
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:01 pm ]
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Thanks Cath, glad to see more of this
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:43 pm ]
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Good to see more of this, Cath - it will indeed be most interesting to see both how the village reacts to Nell and her guests, and how Elizabeth adjusts to her new situation. Will look forward to more of this as time and renovations permit!!! :)
Author:  Cath V-P [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:25 am ]
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Thank you for the comments - they must have had an effect as I am updating after only a week!

“I hope he’s not strained anything,” said Nell with tardy compunction as she observed the somewhat laboured gait of the retreating station-master.
“I wouldn’t worry,” said his brother heartlessly as he helped Hilda into the governess cart, and then lifted Elizabeth up to sit beside her. “Charlie hasn’t lifted anything heavier than a pen for more years than I care to remember!” Nell chuckled as she as she scrambled up into the driver’s seat, and reached for the reins, aware as she did so of Elizabeth’s wide-eyed stare.
“As long as I don’t have to pay his doctor’s bills,” she began, then breaking off as Conrad tried to sidestep. “Heavens, this fellow is restless!” There was a mutter from Henry Gorton, which Nell didn’t quite catch, then he had joined her.
“Margaret fed him, and I think she must have given him rather too many oats,” he said. “I’d hoped he worked it off coming down from the farm, but evidently not quite - do you want me to drive?” Nell shook her head.
“I’m fine, she said breathlessly, feeling the lines stretch out taut in her hands as the horse leaned into them. “Once we’re on the hill, he’ll have something else to think about!” Carefully, she guided the governess cart out of the station yard holding Conrad down to a walk.

Fortunately, Conrad’s meal of oats manifested itself only as a disinclination to walk when he had the opportunity to trot and by the time they were halfway up the long hill leading to the moor, he had sobered down considerably. Nell had relaxed to the extent that she was able to hold a somewhat disjointed conversation with Henry, occasional sentences of which drifted back to Hilda. Henry was evidently, and unsurprisingly, concerned with the scarcely three-day-old invasion of Denmark and Norway, and the effects that this might have on shipping in the North Sea, and Hilda remembered that Sarah had mentioned a younger brother in the Merchant Navy. Judging by the snatches of conversation that she heard, Henry was also asking about how London was faring, and Hilda sighed as she remembered the tense atmosphere of a city that seemed somehow to be waiting for something . . . A few words that John had spoken at the conclusion of their dinner two nights ago slipped into her mind.
… But, if I were you, I should avoid London for the foreseeable future.” Hilda stared at him, a strange sense of dread filling her; from his hints, John seemed to have more than an idea of what was coming.
“Why?” she asked, dreading what she would hear.
“Let’s just say that you’ll probably find it healthier in the long run,” he replied gravely. Hilda rubbed the tips of her fingers together nervously.
“Are you expecting something to happen?” John frowned.
“Well,” he said eventually, “Holland and Belgium are very vulnerable…. and the French are getting worried. This isn’t going to be over for a long time – and yes, the cities might well suffer more directly. This is a war that will come to everyone . . .”
She shivered as the conversation replayed itself in her mind, then looked up realising that they had stopped outside the cottage gate.


“Well, that took the fidgets out of you,” remarked Nell severely to a much more subdued Conrad. The horse shook his head and ‘huffed’ indignantly at Nell’s tone; Nell laughed as she jumped down while Henry assisted first Elizabeth and then Hilda before busying himself with the luggage. Hilda took Elizabeth’s hand and opened the gate, Nell immediately behind them. The little girl hesitated, then silently followed Hilda up the path to the front door. There was a few second’s fumbling with the key, then all three of them were safely in the living room.
“Well, we’re home,” said Nell briskly tossing her hat down on the dresser as she spoke. “Here Elizabeth, take your coat off and you sit down here while I put a match to the fire and your mo – aunt puts the kettle on.” She turned toward the fireplace, face burning and acutely aware of her slip. Hilda glanced at her, then went into the kitchen where, to her surprise, she found a tray laid ready for tea, and a note on the table that read:
‘Dear Nell and Hilda, The beds are made up, and milk, butter and eggs are in the scullery. There is a loaf in the bread crock. We hope the journey wasn’t too trying for you. Sarah.’ As an afterthought a final sentence had been added: ‘Parcel and rug arrived as expected.’ Hilda looked round, but seeing no sign of either item, she decided to ignore that for now, and get on with the more important business of making that much-desired cup of tea. Judging by the sounds now more-or-less overhead, Henry and Nell were taking Elizabeth’s trunk to her room, and Nell at least would be ready for tea once she was downstairs again. Hilda hurriedly set the kettle to boil, noting as she did so that the water in it was already warm, and blessing Sarah for her forethought, returned to the living room where a fire was burning brightly and Nell was farewelling Henry.
“Is he not staying for tea?” asked Hilda as Nell closed the door. Nell shook her head as she shrugged off her coat and hung it up.
“No, he doesn’t want to keep Conrad standing, especially as it looks as if it might be coming on to rain.” She turned to where Elizabeth sat silently on the sofa, her coat beside her and thought for a moment. “Hilda, are you happy if we have tea first, and then show Elizabeth her room? I’m sure Sarah’s put some milk somewhere –
“In the scullery, with butter and eggs, and there’s a loaf of fresh bread as well.” Nell brightened.
“I hoped she would! Ok then, what about boiled eggs, bread and butter and some of that fruitcake that’s in the tin?”
“That sounds like an excellent idea – what do you think, Elizabeth? With milk for you, instead of tea?” They were delighted to see the little girl’s face relax into a small smile as she nodded.
“Good,” said Nell briskly. “Hilda, why don’t you take Elizabeth to the bathroom while I get on with things in the kitchen?” She watched, her face serious for a moment as Elizabeth immediately got to her feet and followed her mother upstairs; the little girl had said almost nothing since their arrival, and although she had clearly been curious about her new home – the frequent hasty glances around had revealed that - she had asked nothing at all about it….
Author:  di [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:11 am ]
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Poor Elizabeth. I bet she feels a bit like Alice in 'Alice in Wonderland' being taken here and there without really knowing which side was up. Nell's tongue slips must also have her wondering! I can forsee some sharp words between Nell and Hilda shortly if Nell doesn't remember to refer to Hilda as 'aunt'. :lol:
A lovely description of the cottage in the 1940's - I haven't heard the bread bins being referred to 'crocks' since I was a young child; almost too long ago to remember really. :) What a cosy place it sounds. Just right for a little girl to begin to relax and forget the horrible nanny she had.
Thanks, Cath, that was delightful.
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:56 pm ]
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The cottage sounds lovely, and I'm glad that they're well away from any city centres given what we know is to come in terms of the Blitz.
Author:  linda [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:44 pm ]
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Lovely to see this back again.

Poor Elizabeth. I wonder just what Nanny has said to her. She seems very subdued. I just hope that the sanctuary of the cottage will give her an opportunity to open up to Hilda and let them begin to build a closer relationship.

Poor Nell, she is really struggling not to put her foot in it. Mo.. instead of aunt. Oh dear.

Thank you, Cath, this is brilliant.
Author:  Nell [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:49 pm ]
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Thanks Cath - I've just taken advantage of being off sick to re-read all this from the Return...trouble is I've spoilt myself and just want more. Love it.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:11 pm ]
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Great to see these two new instalments. I foresee a bewildering time for all three of them as Elizabeth tries to adjust to this abrupt and enormous change in her life. Wonder if she will find that, to quote a memorable phrase coined early in the war by a cousin of mine, 'the quiet is too noisy' as she experiences country life after the bustle of London.

I'm sure that in the end, Hilda and Nell will convince her to tell them just what her Nanny had said and done to her. Hopefully Nell will manage to refrain from 'putting her foot in it' too much, too!! :) :)

Thanks, Cath - I will be looking forward to more of this.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 6:01 pm ]
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I wonder if nanny has told Elizabeth that she is a bastard!!! I wonder if she also told her Hilda is her mother? If so poor girl will be very confused and getting more so the longer Hilda does not tell her the truth.

If you add that confusion to being removed from London and all she knows to a strange enviroment with people she does not know and a quite different lifestyle. And she must know Hilda is a teacher so she will know she faces a strange school in the near future as well.

I amnot supprised she is quiet and reacts so quickly Nells statements which she does not follow. Looking forward to discovering the answers to the questions.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:28 pm ]
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Hope Elizabeth is able to relax soon, though i think it will take awhile
Author:  MaryR [ Mon Jan 05, 2009 7:40 pm ]
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PaulineS wrote:
I wonder if nanny has told Elizabeth that she is a bastard!!! I wonder if she also told her Hilda is her mother?

Which is exactly what I was thinking as I read it, Pauline, before I saw your words. And what has she said about Nell, I wonder. Elizabeth MUST have noticed Nell's slip, even for such a young girl.

As for Hilda, it occurred to me that she might well be wishing she had a home of her own to offer the girl. If things get tense with Nell, there's nowhere for her to go. :cry: The atmosphere is so tense one could cut it with a knife.

Thanks, Cath.
Author:  Tara [ Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:59 pm ]
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Just realised you've updated, Cath :oops: .
Really lovely to see this back. Hilda and Nell are certainly going to have to navigate some choppy waters as they negotiate their relationship with Elizabeth and with each other, but, despite the tension and everyone's uncertainty about who and where they are, there is a lot lof love around and they'll get there in the end - though not without some trauma, I'm sure. I wonder just what that awful nanny has told Eliz - and how Nell will react when she finds out!

Might there be a little more in the near future??????
Author:  blue1 [ Sat Feb 28, 2009 4:08 am ]
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Just noticed this was updated some time ago and i missed it :oops: .

I can't wait to see where this is heading.

Thank you
Author:  Cath V-P [ Tue May 05, 2009 7:09 am ]
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Well,I didn't quite realise how long it has been since I updated... :oops: Anyway, I've managed to write some more, and while I won't promise anything, I'll try to update a little more often from now on. And here is a little more!

Upstairs, Hilda’s thoughts were running on similar lines. Until now, she had been so concerned with the simple fact of bringing her daughter home that she had not been able to see beyond that – indeed she had scarcely dared to try, for fear of tempting fate – and it was only after their train had left Paddington that she had allowed herself to believe that it had happened, that her cherished Elizabeth was hers again, as she had not been since she was a baby. Yet even as she tasted the happiness of the moment, the intense joy that she and Elizabeth were together, safe with her beloved Nell, she was sharply aware that this was not an ending but a beginning, and that a tangled web of problems lay in wait for them. Going home was simply the first step on this new path – and there were so many things that could go wrong, so much to decide and so little time available to them. And when they got back to the school, things would surely become even more complicated . . . Unable to stay still, she started to pace up and down the landing, then stopped as she realised that the bathroom door had opened silently and Elizabeth was watching her warily.
“Is there something wrong, Auntie Hilda?” Hilda stared down at her daughter for a moment, then drew a deep breath and smiled reassuringly.
“Of course not Elizabeth; if you’re ready, we can go and see how Auntie Nell is getting on.” The little girl looked at her mother thoughtfully, then turned away to go downstairs - and Hilda felt suddenly that she had somehow said the wrong thing. Silently, she followed her daughter down to the kitchen where Nell awaited them.

As soon as Hilda and Elizabeth reappeared, Nell realised that something was amiss. Unfortunately, Elizabeth’s presence meant that she had little chance to find out just what that might be, and it was clear that Hilda, apparently concentrating on settling Elizabeth at the table, would volunteer no information at the moment. Nell fished two eggs out of the hot water and stood with her spoon poised above the pan.
“Softboiled for you Hilda, I know. What about you Elizabeth? How do you like your eggs - soft or hardboiled, or in the middle?” She waited patiently as the little girl considered the question.
“Mostly softboiled, please, Auntie Nell.”
‘Ah, a curate’s egg it is then!” Hilda noticed Elizabeth’s puzzled face and hastened to the rescue.
“Auntie Nell is teasing, Elizabeth. Don’t worry!” She stared meaningfully at Nell, who bit her lip as she put the dish down on the table beside the plate of bread and butter.
“Auntie Hilda is right, Elizabeth – I was teasing you, but only a little.” Elizabeth lips twitched in a tentative smile as Nell continued, “And a curate’s egg is a sort of joke – it means something that’s described as good and bad, but really can’t be divided up like that. Don’t worry - you’ll understand it better when you’re older. And if I say something you don’t understand, or that worries you, do please ask me.” She stopped suddenly; she was probably overwhelming the child and that would make matters worse. Silently, she hung up her apron and joined the other two at the table, uneasily aware that she was nervous - and in her own home too - and that with that realisation had come a slight spark of resentment.
“You didn’t mention scones, Nell.” Hilda’s comment broke into her thoughts and she addressed the diversion with relief.
“Sarah left them with the bread, and that pot of strawberry jam. She must have brought them down when she came to deal with Elizabeth’s room.” She grinned at Hilda. “I asked her to make up the bed and leave it at that, but knowing her, she probably gave everything a complete clean and tidy!” Some of the tenseness left Hilda’s face at Nell’s words and she laughed.
“I agree – I haven’t seen it yet, but I’m sure you could eat off the floor, should you desire to do it!” She turned to Elizabeth and began to pour milk into her cup. “Sarah is Mrs Gorton, and she was Auntie Nell’s nurse when she was little. The Gortons have a farm some way up the road - we’ll probably go there tomorrow, or maybe the next day.” There was a murmured “Yes, Auntie Hilda,” then Elizabeth gave her attention to her boiled egg and bread and butter. There was a small space of silence as Hilda and Nell exchanged identical worried glances.

After that, the meal progressed quietly; neither Hilda nor Nell felt capable of maintaining conversation, so confined themselves to occasional remarks, and Elizabeth said nothing at all, although she clearly enjoyed her meal, something that both Nell and Hilda found vaguely comforting. Gradually the tension eased, until as they finished the last of the washing-up – Elizabeth had been shooed into the living room where she was entertaining herself with a book – Nell sighed and remarked,
“I suppose we’d better show her the bedroom.” Hilda’s eyes flickered towards her, noting the particularly firm set of her mouth.
“You don’t have to, you know,” she began. Nell shook her head.
“No, Hilda, it’s alright. Start as you mean to go on and all that.” She hung her apron on the hook behind the door, and followed Hilda out of the kitchen.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Tue May 05, 2009 7:59 am ]
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Yay it's back - great to see this again, Cath :D :D
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue May 05, 2009 9:17 am ]
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Good to see this again. Thanks for thr update.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Tue May 05, 2009 12:59 pm ]
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Great to see this back again - I can see that both Hilda and Nell will have to tread as warily as Agag for the next little while until Elizabeth is more settled with them.

Will look forward to further updates - thanks, Cath V-P
Author:  Chris S [ Tue May 05, 2009 1:55 pm ]
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Lovely to see this back. Much as I enjoyed the story of Hilda bringing her daughter home, I wanted to know how they would both cope.
Author:  blue1 [ Tue May 05, 2009 4:38 pm ]
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Thank you.

It's great to see this back. I'm looking forward to seeing how they cope with Elizabeth at home and how it is going to affect both of them.
Author:  Identity Hunt [ Tue May 05, 2009 4:46 pm ]
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How lovely to have an update !
I have enjoyed this so much :mrgreen:
Author:  linda [ Tue May 05, 2009 7:03 pm ]
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How lovely to have an update.

Now they are back at Nell's cottage, they will all find things difficult. Everything has changed - for all three of them. And they each need to find their own way to cope with the new situation. I look forward to seeing how things develop.

Thank you, Cath
Author:  di [ Wed May 06, 2009 5:30 am ]
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Great to see this back! Yes, it's going to take a while until they're all comfortable around each other. Children do adapt more easily than the adults so I'm more concerned about Hilda and Nell. I hope they keep talking to one another.
Thanks, Cath.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed May 06, 2009 8:05 am ]
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Thanks, good to see more of this
Author:  MaryR [ Wed May 06, 2009 1:43 pm ]
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Yet even as she tasted the happiness of the moment, the intense joy that she and Elizabeth were together, safe with her beloved Nell, she was sharply aware that this was not an ending but a beginning, and that a tangled web of problems lay in wait for them.

Oh, Hilda, relax a little and allow Nell to be Nell. She could help break that stilted atmosphere and she could also be a much better support to you than you're allowing her to be. She wants the relationship back to what it was before she knew about Elizabeth.

Oh dear, is the fact that they share a bedroom going to cause problems? :cry: Nell is trying to get them to face up to things, isn't she?

Thank you, Cath. :D
Author:  Celia [ Tue May 12, 2009 7:10 pm ]
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Thank you Cath for the update. It's great to see more of this.
So hard for Nell...knowing this is what Hilda has longed for,but
not knowing how it will effect the relationship between the
two adults.
Author:  Tara [ Wed May 13, 2009 12:46 am ]
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It's really lovely to see this back, Cath. I've just re-read The Return and Christmas 1939 in preparation, and have enjoyed them so much - it's going to be hard to have to read this in small slices!

Well, that's a nice tense beginning for them all. I wonder what in particular is bothering Elizabeth - is she still very wary of Nell? I suppose she doesn't really know where she fits in.
I feel so sorry for Nell. Every time she opens her mouth she puts her foot in it, however hard she tries, and Hilda is so very aware of every twitch of reaction from Eliz. No wonder Nell was
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uneasily aware that she was nervous - and in her own home too - and that with that realisation had come a slight spark of resentment.

As they go to show Elizabeth her room, it seems as though Nell is determined to demonstrate to Hilda (and, perhaps, to Elizabeth) that they are in this together, but I wonder how easy she will find it to have Eliz taking over Cherry's room. I hope Eliz will like the lamp and dolls that Nell bought - has Hilda seen them yet? I think she'll love the lamp, but she's in such a fragile state that there's no telling.
I still have unanswered questions about the earlier happenings, too. What did Nell find at Somerset House that she didn't expect???

I do hope you'll have time for lots of updates, Cath, I'm longing to know more.
Author:  seven [ Mon May 25, 2009 6:47 pm ]
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Thank you Cath for this story, it's beautiful. I feel so sorry for Nell seeing their relationship changing and being so uncertain what to do about it, or even knowing if Hilda wants to to be with her now. Hilda has what she wanted but she must be wondering how the three of them can be together.

Would love to know what happens next.
Author:  Sugar [ Tue May 26, 2009 4:42 am ]
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I keep reading the updates then forgetting to comment. I'm so sorry Cath. I'm really enjoying the updates when they appear though as I have a soft spot for this one. I do hope H&N manage to break through E's shell though and things relax.
Author:  jonty [ Sat Jun 06, 2009 6:16 pm ]
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This is such a lovely story, Cath. Poor Nell, she's probably not been around very young children at any time in her adult life and hasn't had to worry about her trademark sarcasm being interpreted as teasing - as if things weren't tense enough without that! She must feel like she's walking on eggshells. (I'm sure there's a joke in there somewhere about Curate's eggshells, but it's eluding me just now...)
Thanks, Cath.
Author:  Cath V-P [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:41 pm ]
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Clearly the Muse has been chivvying me to some purpose over last two days! Yes, it's an update, and I am very shocked that I've managed it. Memo to self: must try harder. :D

“At least we don’t have to worry about the blackout just yet,” Nell remarked as she moved towards the stairs. “Sunset isn’t until almost eight o’clock, so we’ve got at least another hour before it starts to get shadowy.”
“True,” acknowledged Hilda, “and I must concede that it’s been rather pleasant having had two additional months of extra daylight.” Nell’s eyes twinkled.
“Er, Hilda, you do know that it’s not exactly extra don’t you? The amount we get doesn’t change. It’s more that time has been adjusted to take advantage of it.” There was a second’s silence before Hilda muttered, “Pedant!” Nell chuckled.
“Just doing my job, my dear! After all I do need to justify my salary, don’t I?”
“I should set you to scrubbing floors, you wretched female! You’d be much more useful that way!”
“And I should do them beautifully as you well know!” Nell turned to laugh down at Hilda’s indignant expression, then stopped abruptly as she saw Elizabeth’s puzzled and worried face. Hilda turned as well and the teasing light faded from her eyes.
“What’s the matter, Elizabeth?” she asked softly. The little girl shook her head and did not reply, even when Hilda knelt down beside her and looked into the small face. “Did you think that Auntie Nell and I were cross with each other?” There was another moment of silence, then the briefest nod. At once Hilda gathered the little girl to her in a comforting hug. “Oh sweetheart, we were teasing on another. Don’t you remember what Auntie Nell said on the train – that you would know if she was cross?” Elizabeth bit her lip then faintly murmured ‘Yes.’
“Good,” continued Hilda. “Well that’s true for all of us – if Auntie Nell or I are angry with each other, then we make sure that there aren’t any mistakes about that. She would know if I was cross, and I would know if she was. Do you understand?”
“I – I think so, Auntie Hilda.” Hilda smiled at the anxious little face, and gently smoothed back the soft hair that would keep escaping from its plaits.
“You mustn’t worry about Auntie Nell or me teasing each other; we do it a lot and it’s because we are happy and comfortable with each other, and we know the teasing doesn’t hurt. If it did, we would stop at once. So you see, there’s nothing for you to worry about.” She paused as Elizabeth thought over what had been said, then as the little girl’s tense body relaxed slightly, she added, “I promise you’ll understand more about it soon – but if you are puzzled or upset by something here, will you come and ask me or Auntie Nell about it?” Elizabeth considered this request, her eyes flickering from Hilda to Nell and back again, then apparently reassured, she murmured ‘Yes,’ and both Hilda and Nell smiled in relief.
“Good,” said Nell. “Now, let’s go and have a look at your bedroom.” She turned and led the way upstairs, wondering how long it would take for Elizabeth to feel at least comfortable with her mother.

Stopping outside the room that had once belonged to Cherry, she opened the door and stepped back to allow the little girl inside. Sarah had evidently received her lengthy telegram of two days ago and ignored at least part of it, as not only was the bed was made up, but the room was also immaculately clean and tidy. Moreover, although Nell had been able to give Sarah only the barest instructions, her old nurse had understood exactly what was needed; the treasured possessions of Cherry’s girlhood had been removed, and the room, suddenly seeming oddly impersonal, awaited the arrival of its new owner. Nell closed her eyes for a moment, wincing at the sight; she had thought she was ready for this, and yet . . . Cherry had been overjoyed when she had seen the newly-redecorated room, and had lost no time in making it her own. Over the next two years, Nell and her parents had delighted in giving Cherry small gifts - a pretty glass vase, a small watercolour, embroidered mats for the dressing table - that had only enhanced her pleasure in her surroundings. And after Cherry’s death, and that of their parents, Nell had been unable to pack away any of her sister’s possessions, even finding herself adding to them on her rare trips to Devon as she emptied their London home. Eventually, the room had somehow become a sanctuary for her as she fought through the overwhelming grief of that first lonely year; no matter how lost and alone she felt, she had only to step inside to feel a little of the comfort and warmth that she always associated with her sister. And now it would be Elizabeth’s room. That was as it should be - but it still hurt to give up that final link with Cherry.

A quiet murmur of “Nell?” brought her back to herself and she blinked. Elizabeth was at the door, her eyes solemn as she surveyed her new domain; behind her stood a protective Hilda, her face once more wary and anxious as Nell had seen it so often during the last few days. She sighed; this was all too complicated, and they were both too tired, too worried, and, if she were honest with herself, too insecure to deal with it now. The truth of it was that she did not quite know how to go forward - and neither she suspected, did Hilda. Silently she watched, Hilda beside her, as Elizabeth looked around the room, her eyes widening in astonished delight.
“Do you like it?” asked Hilda hopefully. Elizabeth looked up at both of them, then surveyed the room once more.
“It’s lovely – it’s prettier than Celia’s room. Is it really for me?”
“Of course it is,” answered Nell quietly. “Do you like pink? The - the little girl who this used to belong to did.” Elizabeth nodded.
“Oh, I do like it,” she said breathlessly. “The night nursery was green, and last year Auntie Emma wondered if Nanny wanted it to be repainted because it was faded. But Nanny said it didn’t matter because I wouldn’t be there for very long. It wasn’t very nice green though and I did wish it was different.” She stopped suddenly after what had been the longest speech she had uttered that day and gazed around the room for a third time. “It is lovely Auntie Hilda. Thank you. And Auntie Nell as well.” Both Hilda and Nell smiled in relief – this at least had gone well.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:01 pm ]
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Oh fabulous - an update!!!

(((Nell))) - seeing that room so changed must really have brought home to her the finality that Cherry would never enjoy it again, but I'm sure that Elizabeth's delight in it as she sees it for the first time will help assuage at least some of her grief.

I love the banter between Hilda and Nell, but can see just why poor Elizabeth was bewildered by it - it's something she has never come across before.

I foresee shoals ahead before the three are completely at ease with each other, and Elizabeth learns who 'Auntie Hilda' really is, but I am confident that all will be well in the end.

Thanks, Cath - more soon, please! :) :)
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:12 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. Pleased that Elizabeth like Cherry's choice of colours.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:22 pm ]
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So glad to see this back.
Author:  di [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:23 pm ]
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Yippee, an update. :lol:
I, too, foresee some difficulties as the 3 adjust to life together, and I felt for Nell as she pondered on the complications and their insecurity in knowing how to deal with them. However, they are two strong women, secure in their love for one another so I am sure they will find a way through. Elizabeth, too, will hopefully soon relax in their company and once she learns that Hilda is her mother she will begin to feel that she 'belongs'.
Thanks, Cath. Echo Elder in asking for more soon. :wink:
Author:  shesings [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:27 pm ]
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So glad to have more of this...............another favourite story updated :D And I've found out how to do smileys, thanks to ChunkyMonkey!
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:06 am ]
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Very glad Elizabeth liked the room, but poor Nell, it would have been hard for her
Author:  Squirrel [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 7:22 am ]
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Must admit I was a tad surprised with how little of this there was for me to catch up with Cath, considering how long it has been since I was fully active on here. If I'd thought about the lack of 'update' messages, I'd have assumed you'd got onto a new thread. However, it sounds like you've been pretty busy over that time, and I'm so pleased to hear that we may occasionally have updates now.

I've just loved the last several posts, and am so relieved to find that they have all finally got home. I feel really sorry for all three of them, as they start to learn more about each other. It seems that lots of normal family stuff, such as teasing, have been so far removed from Elizabeths life that they frighten her. Then there is whatever may have been said to her by nanny as well. Part of me really thinks that Hilda needs to tell her how pleased she is to have Elizabeth with them (and Nell too of course), and then to Keep On Saying it. I could see it taking a wee while for Elizabeth to settle down with them properly, and though I think the actions - the room being prepared for her etc - will help along that way, they will definitely be the proof behind the words, I do wonder if she needs to be told it.

Thanks Cath
Author:  MaryR [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:09 pm ]
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Hae just gone back and re-read the post before this one:

Quote:
“Is there something wrong, Auntie Hilda?” Hilda stared down at her daughter for a moment, then drew a deep breath and smiled reassuringly.
“Of course not Elizabeth; if you’re ready, we can go and see how Auntie Nell is getting on.” The little girl looked at her mother thoughtfully, then turned away to go downstairs - and Hilda felt suddenly that she had somehow said the wrong thing.

Does Elizabeth know? :shock: Has Nanny told her some twisted version of the truth and was she waiting for verification there?

Poor Nell, such a reminder of all she has lost, and maybe she's thinking the game's not worth the candle if Hilda is going to continue being so uptight. Nell's humour is so needed here, but Hilda is so scared of putting a foot wrong... :cry:

Thanks, Cath
Author:  Tara [ Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:18 pm ]
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Aaagh, I didn't realise you'd updated this! I do so feel for Nell:
Quote:
She sighed; this was all too complicated, and they were both too tired, too worried, and, if she were honest with herself, too insecure to deal with it now. The truth of it was that she did not quite know how to go forward - and neither she suspected, did Hilda.
The strength of her commitment to Hilda is so clearly shown in her willingness to make Cherry's room over to Elizabeth, but it is all so difficult and so wearying, especially when they can't even relax with each other.

I feel, with Mary, that the ghastly Nanny must have said something to the child, and it's a reasonable guess that whatever it was wouldn't have been either true or helpful:
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Nanny said it didn’t matter because I wouldn’t be there for very long
What's the background to that, I wonder - and why didn't Emma overrule Nanny, it was her house, after all?

Eagerly awaiting further installments, and I'll try not to miss them next time :wink:
Author:  Kathy_S [ Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:35 am ]
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Nice to see Elizabeth responding so positively to the room, especially given how difficult it is for Nell to see it change....

I'm glad to see this back!
Author:  JellySheep [ Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:33 am ]
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Hurrah! An update! Great to see this back.
Author:  Cath V-P [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:27 am ]
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Another update in only a week!! I'm surprising myself... :D This is half of what was originally a very long post that grew a little more when I edited it - so I decided to split it and give you half now and half on Monday! Thank you for your comments on the previous post - they are very encouraging. I will be posting on Darkness tomorrow and then I am away for the weekend - I'm a very new Guide leader (Anne is a very new Guide) and this weekend is the 'Girls Celebrate!' rally for the start of the Australian celebrations of the centenary - and we are going.

By now it was clear that the strain of the day was catching up with all of them. Elizabeth was starting to yawn - although her efforts to conceal this were heroic - and neither Hilda nor Nell felt remotely interested in tackling anything other than the most necessary evening chores. With this in mind, Hilda suggested that they leave most of the unpacking until the next morning and content themselves with doing the bare minimum tonight. “Besides,” she added persuasively, “I’m sure we would both be happier spending a peaceful evening by the fire.” Nell chuckled,
“Well, if you put it like that, who am I to argue? There are the usual numbers of hours in the day tomorrow, so we may as well occupy some of them profitably! Besides, the last few days have been somewhat hectic, and a quiet evening is just what we need.”
“Yes, that’s what I was thinking, so it’s nice to know that you concur.” She glanced at the clock. “I don’t think it’s too early to suggest bedtime to someone, do you? I know it’s still quite light, but she is tired - ”
“Don’t forget the blackout – that darkens everything pretty effectually. I know we sleep with the curtains and window open, but I don’t think it’s a good idea for her just yet.”
“She didn’t in London.” Nell snorted.
“Well, you wouldn’t would you? Unless you wanted to die of asphyxia or – what is it?” Hilda frowned.
“Well what are we going to do about the upstairs lighting? She’s used to London, and even though it’s darker these days, it certainly isn’t quiet. But here the nights are almost silent - ”
“They’re not, you know,” Nell interjected.
“Maybe not, but they’re quieter than she’s used to, and I doubt very much whether she’s heard much in the way of owls and nightjars before.” Nell considered this.
“Hmm, I do see what you mean; we don’t want her scared by anything the first night. Look, let’s keep the curtains and windows closed for tonight – it shouldn’t be too stuffy as it’s only April and still a bit chilly – then we can leave the landing light on and her door ajar. Tomorrow we’ll sort something else out.”
“You won’t mind?” Nell laughed.
“Don’t be silly, Hilda! Why on earth would I mind?”

By half-past seven, Elizabeth was tucked up in bed and already asleep. Hilda had decided - wisely in Nell’s opinion – that the little girl was too tired for a bath that night, and although she had started to read The Tale of Mrs Tittlemouse, which Nell had produced with a flourish from one of the downstairs bookshelves, Elizabeth’s eyes were shut by the time she was halfway down the second page.
“That didn’t take long,” came Nell’s voice softly from the doorway. She came to stand beside Hilda who was looking down at her daughter with such love in her gaze that Nell was breathless for a moment.
“I’ve made tea for us,” she said quietly watching as Hilda leaned down to kiss the child’s forehead and lightly smooth back the soft hair. “Sleep well, little one,” she added as Hilda turned to check the blackout for a final time. Neither woman said anything more until they were downstairs again, Hilda curled in the armchair by the fire and Nell on the hearthrug, leaning back against Hilda’s chair. Then Hilda spoke.
“I’ve dreamed of this for so long, Nell, and now it’s happened I can scarcely believe it.” Nell looked up at her.
“I can understand that, my love. And it’s all been so fast as well.” Hilda nodded.
“I keep thinking that I’m going to wake up and find that none of it is true – that she’s still with John and Emma, and I have nowhere for us to go. And you know, having her here isn’t the end of our problems, is it? She’s so unlike herself - and she doesn’t know about me - and then there’s school - and we have so little time -” Nell turned and kneeling, took Hilda’s hands between her own, holding them tightly.
“Darling Hilda, it will be alright. I do understand that you’re feeling overwhelmed by all this, but it will get better. And you know, you were right about one thing – they are our problems.” She looked searchingly into Hilda’s eyes as she continued. “And I promise I will be here to help you solve them if that’s what you want.” There was a silence, then Hilda whispered,
“With you beside me, Nell, all things are possible.” She leaned forward murmuring, “I do love you,” as she pulled Nell into her arms. They were quiet for a long time.
Author:  Alison H [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:55 am ]
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They're very good together, aren't they?
Author:  Squirrel [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:43 pm ]
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What a lovely 'family' post. How right Nell is - things have happened astonishingly quickly for Hilda, and it's no wonder that she is feeling that sense of disbelief that it has all taken plac at last!

I shall be looking forwards to the next installment on Monday.

btw - speaking as an 'old hat' to guiding... we always loved it when the girls parents decided to become a guider with their daughter becoming a guide (rainbow in the cases I knew of!). Quite often they made some of the keenest guiders, with some of the best ideas.
Author:  snowmaiden [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:56 pm ]
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Oh Cath, I just love this universe. Have read 'The return' and 'Christmas 1939' more than once, they are just brilliant, you make them all really live. I also confess to having cried buckets at more than one post :oops: I love the way Hilda and Nell have found each other. And the cottage is so real in my head - genius. Really hoping things work out with Elizabeth. Thank you.
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:13 pm ]
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Thank you, hope they are going to tell Elizabeth the trueth soon. It would be horrible for her to find out by accident or from someone who does not care for her.
Author:  di [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:27 pm ]
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That was so lovely. I am so glad that Hilda is including Nell in helping Elizabeth adjust to her new surroundings. Having just got custody of her precious daughter it would be so natural for her to want Elizabeth to herself -at least in the beginning. By including Nell from the start she is confirming to Nell that she sees her as a co- parent, thus confirming her love for her.
Although Elizabeth may well find their relationship difficult to understand [and who knows what that awful Nanny has told her about her mother and Nell!] at least she will see them pulling in the same direction in regards to their love and care for her.
Cath, you wrote about the relationship between Nell and Hilda with such tenderness and sensitivity that it almost had me in tears.
Thank you, so much.
Author:  MaryR [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 6:31 pm ]
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I'm so pleased they've managed at last to open their hearts a little, after all the tension between them on the journey and when they first arrived. Nell is being very generous - she must so long for Hilda to herself, when this is still the beginning of their new relationship. But whatever Hilda wants will be what Nell wants, and she is so reassuring.

Thanks, Cath
Author:  MHE [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 9:54 pm ]
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It's good to see the two of them finally being able to relax and enjoy being together after the stresses and strains of the last few days. Hopefully Hilda will be able to find the words and courage to tell Elizabeth the truth soon and Nell will be there at her side whenever that time comes.

Thanks Cath.
Author:  Tara [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:46 pm ]
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Cath wrote:
so I decided to split it and give you half now and half on Monday!
A totally reasonable decision, Cath - except that I won't be here on Monday :cry: . I'm going on holiday next week, so will have to possess my soul in patience.

Patience is what Nell is going to need, too, however much she normally lacks it. She wouldn't be human if she didn't feel just a tiny bit jealous of Hilda's glowing love for Elizabeth, and just a tiny bit resentful that Eliz is stopping them being together in quite the way they want. I'm really glad they realised that Elizabeth might well be frightened by an environment that is so normal to them (all that fresh air - brrr!), and it's really lovely to see them able to relax together at last. I shall go to bed and think about them now :) .

Hope you and Anne have a great weekend, Cath.
Author:  Kathy_S [ Thu Sep 03, 2009 11:22 pm ]
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I suppose the dark and different sorts of noises would be scary.... Still, so far, so good.

Thank you, Cath.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:05 pm ]
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Cath V-P wrote:
- so I decided to split it and give you half now and half on Monday!

Um - which particular Monday might that be? :hiding:
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:13 pm ]
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I to am wondering which Monday. Shall we start a chant for the update?
Author:  di [ Fri Sep 11, 2009 5:31 am ]
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Chanting, in between eating breakfast!
Author:  shazwales [ Fri Sep 11, 2009 9:24 am ]
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Thanks Cath just read this from the beginning,it's lovely.
Joining in chant for more please :?:
Author:  abbeybufo [ Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:37 pm ]
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Adding to the chant :D - it's Monday again tomorrow, folks ... dare we hope??? :twisted:
Author:  Tara [ Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:21 pm ]
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Popping in to join the Hope Party :wink: .
Author:  shesings [ Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:08 am ]
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Chanting quietly so as not to upset anyone but "I love this universe, I love this universe, I love this universe"
Author:  MHE [ Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:13 am ]
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Cath V-P wrote:
Quote:
- so I decided to split it and give you half now and half on Monday!


Perhaps Australia has decided to ignore Mondays :lol: :lol:

Joins chant for some more please :)
Author:  clair [ Mon Sep 14, 2009 5:04 pm ]
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Please could we have some more? I don't post often but really love this story, it's one of the first ones I go to and would love to hear more about how Elizabeth's settling in
Author:  Cath V-P [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:33 am ]
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Well, we do get Monday's earlier so it's easy fro them to slip by unnoticed! :lol: Seriously, thank you for the chanting - I'm so delighted that this universe is a believable one - and I am finally ready to update. I was all set to start the next post with the paragraph beginning 'At first", but then they started talking, and I was stuck until I'd resolved that. But here we are....

Hilda looked in at Elizabeth at least three times that evening before going to bed herself. Nell made no comment at all, but simply smiled reassuringly at Hilda each time she returned to the livingroom. Finally, as Hilda got up for the fourth time, Nell put down her book – of which she had read precisely five pages in two hours - craned her neck to look at the clock and scrambled up from the rug.
“I don’t know about you,” she said, “but I’m inclined to think it’s bedtime.” Hilda paused.
“You’re right,” she said in astonishment. “Goodness, I hadn’t realised it was as late as that. I’ll see to the kitchen, if you do the fires.” Nell grinned.
“Of course - you know my feelings about washing up!” She looked at Hilda thoughtfully. “You’re going to have to tackle the fires sometime; I know you’re not used to peat, but it’s quite simple if you’re careful. But not tonight, I agree,” she finished hastily. Hilda sighed in relief and Nell turned her attention to the fire, her hands moving mechanically in a long-familiar task.

As she finished she sat back on her heels and stared unseeingly at the carefully banked down fire. The concern that had worried her at intervals throughout the evening loomed larger, and she knew that now she would have to say something to Hilda. She winced; however she phrased it, there was a very strong possibility that she would end up hurting Hilda - and then there was always the chance that she was correct and that Hilda would want … Her thoughts tailed off unhappily: why couldn’t life be uncomplicated? Surely there had been enough problems in one day – why did this have to be dealt with now? And how on earth could a simple question be so difficult? And there was no way for her to avoid it … Hilda’s questioning “Nell?” interrupted her and slowly she got up taking a deep breath.
“I was wondering,” she said hesitantly. “I would understand if you didn’t want to – I mean if it was easier for you, there is the other bedroom ready apart from the bed, and if it would help at all … it would be alright …” Her voice died away and she watched Hilda’s face anxiously.
“Is that what you want, Nell?” she asked very quietly. “Don’t you – don’t you want us to be together?” Her mouth quivered a little and Nell cursed her own stupidity; as usual she had said it the wrong way.
“Of course I do,” she said vehemently, clasping Hilda’s hands between her own. “Being with you, loving you, sleeping and waking with you - I could never tire of that or stop wanting it. But if it helped you, then - then I would.” Hilda shook her head, the sudden hurt fading from her eyes.
“No, my quixotic Nell, that isn’t the way. Not for us, not now.” She cupped Nell’s face in her hand for a moment. “We start as we mean to go on, here at least.” Nell relaxed into the familiar touch.
“As long as you’re sure,” she began. Hilda nodded.
“Oh yes, Nell. I know there are difficulties ahead of us, and there is so much that can go wrong; to be honest, I’m feeling so overwhelmed at the moment that I want to run and hide, but I can’t. There’s so much to say and do, and so little time, but together here, there’s something to build on.” Nell was silent for a moment, then murmured,
“My refuge and my strength.” There was another second of quiet, before she added,“ All we can do is take it one step at a time.” Hilda leaned into her embrace, relishing the warmth and security that she so often associated with Nell.
“It’s definitely bedtime my love; let’s hope we have an undisturbed night.”


At first it seemed as if this hope would be realised – until, at one o’clock in the morning, the peace of the night was broken by a frightened little wail from Elizabeth’s room. Hilda was out of bed and with her daughter in less than a minute.
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” the little girl was sobbing as her mother switched on the light. “I didn’t mean to, I’m sorry!”
“Elizabeth, what’s the matter?” asked Hilda softly, as she cuddled the child to her. “It’s alright, darling, I’m here. Don’t cry.” At once she realised what part of the problem was; the bed was wet.
“I’m sorry,” said Elizabeth again, “it was an accident.”
“Of course it was,” came Nell’s voice from the doorway. “And nobody is cross about things like that.” She turned to Hilda.
“I’ll start running the bath for you, and if you like to deal with Elizabeth, I’ll tackle the bed.” Hilda nodded and lifted the little girl up, still sobbing, to take her to the bathroom. Her face was suddenly very sad, and Nell smiled encouragingly at them both. “It’s only a wet bed,” she said. “That’s easily put right.” Elizabeth stopped crying and stared at her in astonishment.
“Nanny - Nanny said I was old enough to know better,” she remarked in an unhappy little voice. ‘And she said I had to be very very good and not disgrace anyone.”
“Well you have been,” said Nell cheerfully. “You’ve been so good that I don’t see how you could have been gooder.” Despite herself Elizabeth gave a watery little smile, and said doubtfully,
“Isn’t it better, Auntie Nell?”
“Is what better?”
“What you said – better instead of gooder!”
“Auntie Nell can’t speak the King’s English,” put in Hilda at that point. Nell stuck out her tongue in response and Elizabeth giggled faintly before hurriedly looking away.
“That’s better,” said Hilda gently. “No-one’s cross with you, sweetheart, I promise. Now come along, and we’ll tidy you up.”
Ten minutes later, the sheets were soaking in the scullery sink, Nell had turned the mattress and remade the bed, with a layer of towels underneath the bottom sheet, and Elizabeth was bathed, dry and in fresh pyjamas – Celia had thoughtfully packed two pairs in Elizabeth’s small case, something which Hilda had pondered over earlier in the evening.
“I think that cocoa in the kitchen would be a very good idea,” remarked Nell as Hilda reappeared with the little girl. Elizabeth’s eyes opened wide at this suggestion, and she looked doubtfully at Hilda. Hilda smiled at Nell,
“That sounds splendid,” she said at once, taking Elizabeth’s hand and making her way downstairs.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:43 am ]
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There were bound to be some problems at first, but they seem to be coping well.
Author:  di [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:45 am ]
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Oh, goodie, I'm first to read the update if not to reply. I was too busy trying to form what I wanted to say!

How sensitively you wrote about the issues of sharing the bed, in this wonderful relationship. The times were not at all accepting of lesbian relationships despite Queen Victoria's admonishment about women not doing 'those sort of things' [my words, I can't remember exactly what she said when homosexuality was outlawed in Victorian times].

Nell handled the bed wetting episode so well; helping Elizabeth to relax with them and undo some of the awful things Nanny taught her. This will all help Elizabeth accept Hilda as her mother and Nell and Hilda as a loving couple.

How I wish EBD had written in a time when lesbianism was seen as just one of many different ways of relating to other people. I'm sure some girls would have been helped by reading about female couples in such a down to earth and enjoyable genre.

Thanks, Cath. :D
Author:  jmc [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:13 am ]
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They both handled that so well. Poor Elizabeth but at least she and Nell seemed to have made a bit of progress now. Hilda and Nell's relationship was handle beautifully there.

Thanks Cath
Author:  shazwales [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:13 am ]
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Thanks Cath that was beautiful.
Author:  shesings [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:26 am ]
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There's almost bound to be a wet bed from a child uprooted from her usual surroundings and taken on a long tiring journey. The matter of fact, comforting attitude of both Hilda and Nell was exactly the right response.

I bet nasty Nanny was the type who rubbed the poor child's face in the wet jammies! Or left her lying in them all night!

Beautiful writing, Cath, as always!
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:02 am ]
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Thanks for responding to the chant.
A bet they had experience of wet beds at CS, but EBD never dealt with that either.
Author:  Sugar [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:23 pm ]
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Thanks for the update Cath! Can totally understand why Hilda felt the need to check on her so much. Pity Nanny has been so nasty and the bed wetting (she's still only 7 so not that unusual) but at least Nell dealt with it really well.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:38 pm ]
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Two very different questions there, but both dealt with equally sensitively. Fortunately, I think that, poisonous as she clearly was, Nanny would not have thought Elizabeth old enough to raise the issue of relationships between women with her, though I'm sure she'd already put the 'fear of God' into her about bed-wetting. But I loved the matter-of-fact way both Hilda and Nell dealt with that situation - and I agree that accidents would not be at all out of the way in a 7-year old in Elizabeth's situation.

Thanks Cath - it's really good to see more of this universe.
Author:  Pat [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:13 pm ]
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Elder in Ontario wrote:
Two very different questions there, but both dealt with equally sensitively. Fortunately, I think that, poisonous as she clearly was, Nanny would not have thought Elizabeth old enough to raise the issue of relationships between women with her, though I'm sure she'd already put the 'fear of God' into her about bed-wetting. But I loved the matter-of-fact way both Hilda and Nell dealt with that situation - and I agree that accidents would not be at all out of the way in a 7-year old in Elizabeth's situation.


Or even 2/3 times a night - which I had to deal with!!!
Author:  linda [ Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:48 pm ]
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That was a lovely caring, thoughful exchange between Nell and Hilda dealt with in a very sensitive way.

Poor Elizabeth. She must have been really frightened about what Hilda and Nell would say. I'm sure that Nanny would not have dealt with a wet bed in such a matter-of-fact way.

Thank you Cath :D :D :D
Author:  Celia [ Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:31 pm ]
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Thank you Cath.

Hilda and Nell needed that loving time together,and were able to share the bedwetting incident in a more relaxed manner as a result.
Author:  MaryR [ Mon Sep 21, 2009 4:58 pm ]
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So glad they spoke their minds and sorted things out a little. Maybe Hilda could start to trust Nell a little more.

Poor Elizabeth! But hardly surprising, and not something to worry these two women, who are the soul of kindness and understanding. Hopefully, that is one little matter soothed over in Elizabeth's troubled spirit.

Thanks, Cath
Author:  Squirrel [ Mon Sep 21, 2009 10:29 pm ]
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I really enjoyed that post Cath. So right, so 'family'. It was lovely to see Hilda and Nell talking and discussing the best way to deal with life. And then to watch them as they sorted out Elizabeth after her awakening. Poor little lass, for she is only young yet, beign made to feel so ashamed of herself. Hilda and Nell will get her out of that though I'll bet.

Thanks Cath.
Author:  MHE [ Tue Sep 22, 2009 10:40 pm ]
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Lovely to see them working together to reassure Elizabeth that there was nothing to worry about. Wondering what else Nanny has been 'picking' on as it were.

Thanks Cath.
Author:  shesings [ Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:27 pm ]
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Not being pushy or anything, Cath V-P, but just making sure this stays on the front page so new CBBers don't miss it............... :wink:
Author:  Cath V-P [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:54 am ]
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shesings, how nice of you!! Especially as there has been a rather longer gap between updates than I wished. MHE, part of your question will be addressed below... di, there is a story to the effect that lesbianism was left off the statutes as nobody felt game to explain the mechanics to Queen Vic - but I think that might be apocryphal! Anyway, thank you all for your comments, and here is a little more

Fortunately, the kitchen was still warm and it took hardly any time before the fire was blazing again and Nell was pouring hot milk into three mugs.
“Here you are,” she said handing one of them to Elizabeth, and a second to Hilda. “If you keep stirring it, it cools faster – and that revolting skin doesn’t form.” Hilda suddenly grinned at her.
“And if it does,” she said wickedly, “we can always play the game of seeing how far you can spit it into the fire!” She was rewarded by a stifled choke of laughter from Elizabeth – and a splutter from Nell as she inadvertently inhaled her cocoa. “Auntie Nell hasn’t learned how to drink neatly yet either,” she whispered to Elizabeth, who smiled uncertainly back at her before lapsing into her former silence and sipping at her drink. Hilda sighed, and Nell’s amusement faded abruptly; this child seemed unable to accept that smiles and laughter were a legitimate part of life. And she seemed to be so anxious about everything – although, Nell told herself, given the disruption she had experienced during the last few days, this was unremarkable. Surely, once she had adjusted to her new circumstances and surroundings, things would improve. At the moment, she was so clearly unhappy despite all that they could do, and it was also obvious just how hard this was for Hilda. “But it’s early days yet,” Nell told herself firmly. “She will settle - she has to settle.” She didn’t dare contemplate what would happen if Elizabeth missed her life with the Annersleys too much – Nell told herself firmly that this had to be the cause of the little girl’s unhappiness - and if she didn’t accept Hilda as her mother . . . Nell winced, refusing to follow that thought any further.

They had both hoped that the events of the night might have eased things the next day, but it was obvious from the moment that Elizabeth said “Good morning Auntie Hilda, good morning Auntie Nell,” in a painfully precise voice that little had changed. She obeyed all Hilda’s gentle requests with a wary watchfulness that wrung Hilda’s heart and caused Nell to retire into her own thoughtful silence. During breakfast, she ate quietly and neatly – they had noticed her exquisite manners the previous evening - unless Hilda or Nell spoke directly to her, when a brief whispered answer was then forthcoming. As the meal progressed, both Hilda and Nell racked their brains for some way to make the little girl feel more comfortable, but no ideas were forthcoming. Nell did make one or two tentative suggestions for the afternoon, but as Elizabeth simply nodded her head and agreed, she let the subject drop. Finally acknowledging defeat for the moment, Hilda took Elizabeth’s empty cup to refill it with milk and as she passed it back, the little girl reached out for it. Hilda relaxed her grasp too soon, and the cup somehow slipped through both sets of fingers onto the table where it lay on its side, the milk puddling around it and soaking the cloth.
“Oh dear!” said Hilda, leaning across to pick up the cup and then she caught sight of Elizabeth’s face and stopped as if frozen. The child was white with distress and her mouth was trembling.
“I’m sorry,” she said quickly. “I didn’t mean to do it. I’m sorry!”
“Darling, it’s alright,” said Hilda hastily, inwardly horrified by this reaction. “We both know it was an accident.”
“Of course it was,” said Nell cheerfully, getting up. “There’s nothing to worry about, and we’ll soon clear it up. In the meantime, I suggest you sit a little nearer to Auntie Hilda, and I will mop up most of the milk before it drips onto the floor.” Elizabeth gazed at them both doubtfully.
“I – I’m sorry,” she said again, a little desperately, and Hilda found herself incapable of answering; Elizabeth’s anxiety was so painful, so grotesque, that she was momentarily speechless. To her relief, she heard Nell reply cheerfully,
“Don’t worry; I’ve spilled far worse than that on this tablecloth - if you look under the teapot, you’ll find the beetroot stain from three years ago.” Elizabeth looked quickly at Nell, but was evidently reassured by her matter-of-fact tone. Slowly, she moved her chair nearer a little nearer to Hilda, then accepted the cup that Nell held out to her. Hilda stared down at the dark head, chaotic thoughts tumbling through her mind. What was the matter? Why was Elizabeth so scared - and what was she scared of? “She cringed,” she thought to herself. “From us! Dear God, what did she think we would do?” She shuddered; the possibilities were chilling. She became aware that Nell was watching her, and knew at once that Nell’s thoughts mirrored her own. The disquieting image of Nanny Henderson slid into her mind once more, and she winced. Nell said nothing, but her expression was sombre.
Author:  di [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:05 am ]
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yeh, I'm first!! What has that poor child been through with the awful Nanny? I shudder to think. :( Hopefully Elizabeth will soon learn to trust Hilda and Nell and find out that life can be fun for a youngster like her self. But- what damage has Nanny [ :devil: ] done to her pyschological well being.

Thanks Cath, I do enjoy this.
Author:  jmc [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:31 am ]
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Oh the poor little darling. Just what has she been subjected to? Hopefully Hilda and Nell can help her soon.

Thanks Cath
Author:  Squirrel [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:48 am ]
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Poor Elizabeth. And poor Hilda and Nell too. What a ghastly situation to be in. There was one point where I was thinking "Give her a hug Hilda, give her a hug!" but I see from the rest of it, that she wasn't really in a place for accepting one of those. And how much worse would everyone have felt if Hilda had tried to hug her, and she had shied away even more obviously.

That Nanny has a heck of a lot to answer for. And I know we're only in very early days - but please, can we have some breakthroughs fairly soon?

Thanks Cath.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:57 am ]
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As I understand it, Queen Victoria refused to believe that female homosexuality was possible, which was why the laws passed during her reign only covered male homosexuality.

& that nanny does indeed have a lot to answer for.
Author:  shazwales [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:51 am ]
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I hate to think of what the nanny has done to totally terrify her?
Thanks Cath.
Author:  clair [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 9:13 am ]
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The nanny must have been evil - hope Nell and Hilda get through to her soon

Thanks for more of this, looking forward to another installment soon :wink:
Author:  Sugar [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 2:20 pm ]
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Elizabeth reminds me of a child i worked with once who was from a home where the parent was unpredictably violent. Poor little pet. Hopefully after a few days Elizabeth will realise that H&N won't be unreasonable with her. It takes a long time to loose that fear but once it happens the change can be miraculous!

Thanks Cath! Great to have an update.
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 3:31 pm ]
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Elizabeth is so damaged, Nell and Hilda will have job to break through the barrier that I suspect the Nanny has created by her attitude to Elizabeth.
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:08 pm ]
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Hilda and Nell are going to have to be very patient, and tread as 'warily as Agag' until Elizabeth is much more certain of them than she is now. But I think they know that, and will bide their time, meantime taking every opportunity to reassure the child that a)she is with them for good and b) they really do love her. And I know that Hilda will wait until the child feels more secure with them before revealing who she really is.

But oh, that Nanny!!! She should have been stopped in her tracks long ago, before she could poison Elizabeth's mind so effectively and make her so fearful.

Thanks, Cath - will look forward to more when you have time, though I wouldn't be surprised if this story is just as hard to write as your other one, but for very different reasons.
Author:  shesings [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:22 pm ]
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((((Cath)))) for todays' double! :halo:

I think Nasty Nanny :hammer: had already told poor little Elizabeth that's she's illegitimate (horrible word) and unwanted and was being sent away because she was an embarrassment to the family. She's always enjoyed being with 'Auntie' Hilda in the past but she's probably scared witless that if she doesn't 'behave' she'll be sent to an orphanage or off to Canada.

Also, the wee mite has probably been punished hard for all the normal little childhood mishaps like spilling milk or wetting the bed.

Hilda and Nell will need patience, understanding and gentleness but thankfully they have that in large measure.

(Settles down quietly to wait without fuss for future developments!!)
Author:  MaryR [ Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:04 pm ]
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Quote:
She didn’t dare contemplate what would happen if Elizabeth missed her life with the Annersleys too much – Nell told herself firmly that this had to be the cause of the little girl’s unhappiness - and if she didn’t accept Hilda as her mother . . . Nell winced, refusing to follow that thought any further.

All those are viable options, Nell, but obviously something much worse is behind this behaviour, this stillness and watchfulness, this fear when things happen that are beyond her control.

It would be nice to think simple love and care are going to make her relax, but why do I have the horrid feeling that things are only going to get worse? :cry: Surely they have to return to school soon. What happens then?

Thanks, Cath - I got there in the end. Blame RL! :banghead:
Author:  shesings [ Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:22 pm ]
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Just putting out some tasty leaves for plot bunnies and a few special treats for Cath V-P. no pressure mind :) .
Author:  shazwales [ Thu Nov 05, 2009 6:20 pm ]
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Joining shesings,would be lovely to see more of this. :?: :?: :?:
Author:  PaulineS [ Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:41 pm ]
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Yes please lets have some more.
Author:  Tara [ Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:51 pm ]
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Aaaagh, I nearly forgot poor little Elizabeth! Some more would be really lovely. She is such a vulnerable wee mite and has been made to feel so inadequate and frightened (I could have killed that Nanny over the bedwetting). Hilda and Nell's love and commonsense will change her, but it will take time - and time is something they don't have. As Mary said, they'll be back at school soon, and Elizabeth's vulnerability is being reflected only too well in them (particularly Hilda) at the moment. I just want to hug them all. I am also very interested in how Madge is going to handle all this. Are they going to tell her about their own relationship, for example? I don't think they quite realise what they're getting themselves into. Definite hugs needed.
Author:  shesings [ Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:55 am ]
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I think Madge will be able to cope with finding out that Hilda is a widow and has a small daughter but if they were to be honest about the nature of their relationship they would be putting her in a very difficult situation. Whatever her own views, she would have to consider the welfare of the school, the opinions of the parents and the religious and social mores of the time.

It wasn't so unusual in the 40s and 50s for two women to share a home. As in the aftermath of WW1, though to a lesser extent, there was an inbalance in the numbers of men and women. Many women lost fiances, boyfriends, husbands in the wars and it made economic sense to share with a woman friend.

ETA Just noticed this was my 100th post - jings, crivvens and michty me!!
Author:  Cath V-P [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:59 am ]
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Thank you for your lovely comments - and the treats as well shesings! This next post is rather short, but useful - and the one after that is almost complete.

The rest of the meal was very quiet; Elizabeth finished her second cup of milk without further mishap while Hilda and Nell drank their tea silently, each busy with her thoughts. Despite their repeated assurances, Elizabeth did not seem convinced that she was not in trouble for spilling her milk, and they were both at a loss as to how to proceed. Finally, after breakfast was over and the washing-up done, Hilda sent Elizabeth outside to play.
“You didn’t really see the garden properly yesterday,” she said. “Auntie Nell and I need to do some unpacking, but that’s no reason for you to stay indoors on such a lovely morning. “ She smiled at the little girl. “Put your shoes on and go and see what you can find.” Elizabeth moved hesitantly towards the door, then paused.
“Is there anywhere I shouldn’t go, Auntie Hilda?” Puzzled, Hilda stared at her.
“I – I don’t -” she began uncertainly, and stopped as Nell intervened.
“Apart from the shed, you can explore anywhere in the garden, Elizabeth.” She looked swiftly at Hilda before continuing. “We are quite near the moors, and we will take you up there soon – but you mustn’t go by yourself. Do you understand?” Elizabeth nodded, her eyes wide and worried.
“We’re not cross, Elizabeth,” Hilda said hastily, “but we do need to know that you understand where you’re allowed to go.” She smiled. “If you walk very quietly to the bushes near the wall behind the shed and wait, you’ll probably see some of the birds that have their nests there.” An immediate interest sparked in Elizabeth’s eyes.
“I’d like that, Auntie Hilda.” She stopped, thought for a moment, then asked “Will they be different birds? There were lots of pigeons and starlings in London, and they were all grey or black.” Hilda nodded – after the noise and dirt of London, apparent even in the affluent area where the Annersleys lived, Elizabeth would undoubtedly find this place very different.
“It’s the soot in the air that makes them grubby,” she explained. “It’s not like that here - go and see.” Behind her, Nell picked up a paper bag from the shelf and held it out.
“And this is for you to play with outside. Mrs Gorton at the farm sent it; she said you might have one, but it’s as well to have a spare.” Cautiously, Elizabeth took the bag, and pulled out a new skipping rope with bright red wooden handles. Her face lit up in a delighted smile.
“Thank you, Auntie Nell,” she said politely. “I did have one to take to the park, but we didn’t go there often, and then I couldn’t find it.” She turned towards the door, then stopped. “I wasn’t careless, truly,” she said anxiously looking from one to the other. “It just wasn’t there.”
“Don’t worry,” said Hilda at once. “We’ll show you where you can keep things, and I’m sure you’ll be careful. Now, you run off and explore that garden!” And to both her and Nell’s delight, Elizabeth nodded once, then departed through the scullery to the back door, clutching the skipping rope tightly to her. Hilda and Nell exchanged glances.
“Well,” said Hilda after a moment, “I suppose we’d better go and unpack.”
Author:  shazwales [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:15 am ]
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Thanks for the update,lovely little scene.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:27 am ]
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Lovely Cath, thank you. A quiet time on her own is just what Elizabeth needs.

Still boiling with rage at what that nanny has done to her!
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:14 pm ]
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Lovely - thanks, Cath. It will take a while for Hilda and Nell to undo the damage which that Nanny has done, but I'm sure their patient love and kindness will in the end enable Elizabeth to see that she can love and trust them in return.
Author:  Celia [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:45 pm ]
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Time on her own on a beautiful morning in the countryside should
help Elizabeth relax, and will give Hilda and Nell a few welcome minutes to themselves.

Thank you for the update Cath.
Author:  Alison H [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:50 pm ]
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Thanks for the update :D .
Author:  shesings [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:59 pm ]
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Oh thank you, Cath! That was a lovely little scene and I hope Elizabeth has fun skipping and seeing some un-sooty birds!
Author:  di [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:55 pm ]
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Thank you, Cath. A lovely interlude where everyone can take stock of their respective situations. I hope Elizabeth will relax a little whilst she is exploring and whilst she does, Hilda and Nell really need to share some of their thoughts about the past 24 hours.
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:41 pm ]
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I hope Elizabeth can find some friendly robins and some other small birds to interest her. I womder what the nanny did with the skipping rope? I am sure she hid it and then blamed Elizabeth for being careless.
Author:  jmc [ Fri Nov 20, 2009 11:47 am ]
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I hope Elizabeth can settle down so and realise that Hilda and Nell will be there for her. Thanks Cath
Author:  stuffs [ Sat Nov 21, 2009 7:36 pm ]
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i love this story - please may we see more soon?
Author:  MaryR [ Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:41 pm ]
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Quote:
“Well,” said Hilda after a moment, “I suppose we’d better go and unpack.”

No, Hilda - talk to Nell instead! Clear the air while you have the chance.

At least Elizabeth is talking, which is good. Let's hope they can build on when she comes in, because they're all treading on egg-shells, including Elizabeth, and the atmosphere is so taut that something will snap unless Hilda relaxes and opens up.

Thanks, Cath.
Author:  shesings [ Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:21 pm ]
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Just thought I'd pop in with some choccies and a wee bottle of wine to help Cath with her drabble...............................I love this story!!!!
Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:51 pm ]
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This is a wonderfull story, I have really enjoyed reading it all when I should have been doing other things! Are there others in the same series? How do I find them? Sorry, still quite new to the board!
Author:  abbeybufo [ Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:20 pm ]
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2nd Gen Fan wrote:
This is a wonderfull story, I have really enjoyed reading it all when I should have been doing other things! Are there others in the same series? How do I find them? Sorry, still quite new to the board!


Go to the thread at the top of Ste Therese called Index Drabble-orum - a click on this should take you straight there :D

Then find Cath V-P's name under C and her drabbles are all listed there - the first in this series is called 'The Return' and there are notes in the Index as to what follows on from there.
Author:  shesings [ Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:43 pm ]
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Bringing another helping of Christmas choccies and wine for Cath, some tasty leaves for plot bunnies and a plea to get that poor wee mite in from the garden. please, please?!?!?!?!
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:13 pm ]
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Please let us have an update soon.
Author:  di [ Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:26 am ]
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ditto!
Author:  Cath V-P [ Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:47 am ]
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The chocolates, wine and treats have had an effect - I've finally got this sorted to my liking (well, as close as I can get it anyway). Thank you to everyone for your comments. She isn't quite in from the garden, but we're moving on.

“I can tell you one thing she’s going to need,” said Nell ten minutes later. “Gumboots. I didn’t see any when we unpacked.” Hilda looked around. They had decided to empty the trunk of all Elizabeth’s clothes to see exactly what she had, and what she was likely to need. The bed was now covered with neat piles of clothing and the little girl’s shoes were in a row near the window. Hilda considered them.
“Everyday shoes on her feet, Sunday shoes, slippers - no, you’re right, no gumboots. I wonder what else is required?” Nell sat down on the bed, contemplating the various piles of small garments.
“I don’t think she’s particularly short of clothes – and we have to remember that she’ll need uniform soon anyway - but Hilda, if you’ll forgive me, she doesn’t seem to have much that’s attractive.” At this plain speaking, Hilda’s face grew troubled.
“I’ve been wondering about that - apart from what I was able to choose, she always seemed to be wearing navy blue, but I wasn’t there often enough to be certain. The quality is good, but - ”
“Yes,” said Nell. “It is, but once you’ve said that, you’ve said it all.” She picked up the dress nearest to her and rubbed the material between her fingers. “It’s fine wool but it’s very plain, just navy blue without any trimming - I mean, she’s a little girl, and she must like pretty things as well as the next child. Look at the Bettanys and Russells!” Hilda frowned, her thoughts turning to the inhabitants of the Russell nursery; between them, Madge, Rosa and Marie had always ensured that the children’s clothes were not only neat, but attractive too, Madge believing firmly that to do otherwise would not benefit anyone, least of all the children. The girls’ clothes were particularly dainty, frequently adorned with Rosa’s embroidery and made from materials that were carefully selected to suit the wearer. Sighing, she reached out for the little pile of handkerchiefs and hair ribbons on top of the chest of drawers.
“Navy blue ribbons and these handkerchiefs are plain too.” Her mouth tightened. “I don’t like this, Nell. I’m finding out things I had no idea of - what’s been happening?” Nell started to say something, then stopped.
“I don’t know Hilda,” she said finally. “But we can do something about some of these clothes anyway. That blue dress - if we changed the blue collar and cuffs for white and added some red piping, it would be vastly improved. And new ribbons, and some embroidery on those handkerchiefs would help.” She looked enquiringly at Hilda. “What is it?” Hilda’s eyes were unhappy as she surveyed her daughter’s possessions.
“Nell, it’s almost as if nobody took any real trouble over her - as if it didn’t matter whether or not she looked nice, whether her clothes suited her or not, whether they were pretty.” Nell’s mouth tightened as she remembered the events at breakfast and the night before, and the uneasy suspicion that had been niggling at her strengthened. Don’t say anything yet, Nell, she cautioned herself. It might be your imagination although Hilda’s getting worried too – but wait until you’re sure.
“Well, we will,” she said firmly, putting her hand on Hilda’s shoulder. “Come on Hilda, let’s get the rest of those things out of that trunk, then we can get this room sorted out - and we’ll have a better idea of what we have to get.” She reached forward into the open trunk and pulled out several books, a paintbox and a large soft parcel wrapped in tissue paper. “No wonder this was heavy,” she said grinning. “There seem to be a number of books here!” She caught Hilda’s eye. “Not that I’m exactly surprised – she’s your daughter after all!” Hilda relaxed slightly.
“Pass them over Nell, and I’ll put them on the shelf.” Nell chuckled.
“And have you stop to read them first? No, I don’t think so – I’ll do them myself! Here, you take this.” She put the paintbox down on the bed, passed the parcel to Hilda, and turned to shelve the dozen or so books she had pulled out of the trunk. “And there are at least as many again,” she noted cheerfully, as she stood The Tailor of Gloucester next to The Tale of Squirrel Nutkin. “I always felt a bit sorry for Nutkin,” she went on. “To lose his tail like that!”
“He was very rude though,” said Hilda seriously. “So maybe he deserved it.” Nell eyed her in amusement.
“Foolhardy, certainly!” She stood up and stretched, having put the last of the books - Milly-Molly-Mandy Stories – on the shelf. “That’s done anyway. Now there are just these -” She glanced at Hilda and was across the room in two steps; Hilda had unwrapped the parcel to reveal a soft white shawl which she was holding tightly to her, her eyes filled with tears. Nell reached out and pulled her close in an attempt to reassure and comfort this woman who was so unutterably dear to her and whom life had hurt so badly.
“What is it, my love?” Hilda swiped her hand across her eyes and struggled to calm herself.
“It - it’s her shawl – I made it before she was born. I didn’t know what had happened to it, but I suppose Emma must have kept it for me.” She gently freed herself from Nell’s arms and sat down on the bed with Nell still close beside her and unrolled the shawl, running her hand gently across its delicate whiteness. “It was comforting to be able to do something like that then,” she said almost to herself. “Something normal when nothing else was.” Nell’s throat constricted - the thought of what Hilda had undergone hurt and angered her to the point where she wanted to weep or hit something, but she knew that to give way to either impulse would achieve nothing. Choking back her feelings, she reached out and drew Hilda closer to her.
“I wish – I wish,” she began, not sure what she wanted to say, other than that she wanted Hilda to feel that whatever might have happened previously, she was now loved and safe. “And always will be,” she thought fiercely as her grip on Hilda tightened. Hilda sighed and relaxed into Nell’s embrace
“I know, Nell,” she murmured. “I do know.” She looked down at the shawl in her lap and her lips tightened. It seemed so long ago since she had wrapped her daughter in it – and now that baby was almost seven and Hilda knew so little of her . . .
Author:  di [ Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:15 am ]
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Oh, that was heartbreaking for Hilda; finding out that her precious daughter, given to her brother to care and cherish, seems to have been quite neglected. I wonder if it was the nanny who was responsible for clothing her? In some ways I hope so, for if it was Emma and John then they certainly haven't fulfilled their promise to Hilda.

Thank goodness Nell is there to support her through this revelation; she is the more practical of the two and has already made suggestions about how to make Elizabeth's clothes prettier for her.

It seems that Elizabeth has been very neglected emotionally and I forsee a long and difficult journey for the three of them.

Thanks Cath, this is such a lovely story.
Author:  shesings [ Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:56 am ]
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Thank you for the update, Cath - Merry Christmas! :santa:

You can just see that cold witch of a nanny :hammer: deciding that the child should have been in an orphanage and that she should be dressed accordingly. And no gumboots, so no splashing through puddles or singing in the rain as children that age love to do!

They can do something about her clothes but the emotional side is going to be much harder. It's a hopeful note that Elizabeth did run to Hilda's arms when she and Nell first arrived at John's house so affection is there. The little girl needs to keep being reassured that she is now in a loving and permanent home with two people who will cherish her.

Nell is wonderful here and Hilda needs her loving support
Author:  Alison H [ Sun Dec 20, 2009 2:35 pm ]
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Thanks for the update :D .
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:10 pm ]
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But was Hilda the only one who gave her affection? i hope they can give Emma a sense of security and love soon.
Author:  shesings [ Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:40 pm ]
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John, Emma and their children might have been quite fond of little Elizabeth - Celia certainly seemed affectionate when they all said their goodbyes - but in a household of the professional classes in the pre-WW2 era the nanny would have had almost sole charge of a child of that age. Many upper and middle class mothers only saw their children at certain hours of the day.

It's also possible Emma didn't want to get too attached to Elizabeth anyway because she feared that John would get his way and Hilda would agree to the child being adopted.
Author:  Sugar [ Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:22 am ]
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poor mite. Let's hope her mum and Aunty Nell can undo some of the damage PDQ!

Thanks Cath... i love this drabble.
Author:  snowmaiden [ Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:43 pm ]
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Thanks, Cath. I also really love this drabble, you make it all so totally believable. Very worried about what that ghastly nanny has been up to though. :(
Author:  MaryR [ Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:08 pm ]
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Poor Hilda - such love was woven into that shawl, and such dreams about what she might be able to do for her daughter, even if she did live with John's family. And she had the same high hopes when she managed to take the child away occasionally, for Elizabeth had seemed to relax with her and love her. So what went wrong? Why does the girl no longer seem to trust her *aunt*? Was the Nanny acting out of moral rectitude, that Hilda was an unmarried mother and therefore her daughter wasn't worthy to be dressed like the others - or was it even more sinister than that? And can the two of them counter-act it?

And I'm hoping Elizabeth is actually okay out there all on her own? :shock:

Thanks, Cath
Author:  clair [ Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:13 pm ]
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Poor Elizabeth, hope that she lets down the barriers with Hilda soon and finds her childhood

Would love more of this when you get time!
Author:  shesings [ Fri Jan 29, 2010 12:20 pm ]
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Just wanted to sneak in and say how much I love this drabble - and I'm beginning to worry about Elizabeth still being in the garden..................but no pressure, Cath!
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:32 pm ]
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Cath please come back and rescue Elizabeth from the garden.
Author:  AnneM [ Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:20 pm ]
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PaulineS said:
Quote:
Cath please come back and rescue Elizabeth from the garden.


Oh yes, please do. I'm really keen to see how this all works out. There are so many possible worries and complications.
Author:  Lisa_T [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:36 am ]
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Aww.... poor all of them, and especially poor Elizabeth. Just as well that Nell is there - she'll provide the balance and clear-sightedness that Hilda and Elizabeth may well lack, given the situation. Looking forward to more!
Author:  di [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:09 am ]
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Cath, please come and rescue Elizabeth from the garden, she must be getting very cold out there and there are only so many times she can inspect the trees and flowers and look at the birds!
Author:  Cath V-P [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:40 am ]
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Thank you for your lovely comments - and for waiting so patiently. In a truly perverse way, I have had a number of prompts for later in the story, but very little at this point! However, I seem to have forced myself on a little further... nothing exciting, but on we go. :D

The mellow chiming of the clock downstairs alerted both Hilda and Nell to the fact that more time had passed than they had realised.
“We’d better finish this,” said Nell getting up slowly. “The morning’s racing by - and I think we should go down to the village this afternoon.” At this, Hilda tensed and Nell squeezed her shoulder reassuringly. “Some things are better done sooner rather than later,” she said gently.
“I suppose so – but I’d much rather wait a few days.” Nell glanced at her.
“Hilda, we don’t have a few days,” she began carefully. “School -”
“I know, Nell, but it doesn’t stop me wishing things were different.” Nell was silent; there was no possible answer to this other than to agree with Hilda. Sighing, the other woman stood up and as she did so, a small greyish-white object fell to the floor. Nell picked it up, recognising it as a small knitted toy, evidently intended for a baby.
“A rabbit?” she asked uncertainly. To her surprise, Hilda laughed softly.
“No, this is Lambkin.” Nell looked at the misshapen creation closely – white, four legs and a head which had clearly been chewed on past the point of recognition - then nodded.
“Ah, I can see the resemblance.” She looked down at the absurd little toy. “Cherry had a rabbit, I remember. She bit the ears off when she was about fifteen months old, and when Mother replaced them, she simply did it again. After three sets of ears, Mother gave up! And Sarah tells me I had a cat, although it didn’t survive much past my second birthday. Apparently I led it a hard life!” She held out the relic to Hilda, who took it gently, her face wistful.
“I really thought this had gone too,” she said. “I suppose it got wrapped up with the shawl and that’s why . . .” Her voice trailed off as she stared at the toy for a moment. “I’d better put these away safely,” she said finally, and Nell watched in silence as she left the room.

It took only a few more minutes for Nell to take the rest of Elizabeth’s belongings from the trunk and put them away neatly. Her task completed, she stood back and surveyed the room finding that suddenly, it was not difficult to think of it as belonging to Elizabeth rather than Cherry and she breathed a prayer of thankfulness that this was so. Ever since that moment of realisation in London, she had been uneasy every time she envisaged Elizabeth here, in this room . . . But now that feeling was gone, swamped by her desire to love and protect the child – not only because she was Hilda’s, but also for her own sake. And giving her Cherry’s room was not only the right thing to do, but it was what she wanted as well. Besides, Cherry would have approved, as would their parents. Mr and Mrs Wilson had opened their home freely to their daughters’ friends – or indeed any of their family and friends who sought comfort or safety – and Nell knew that had her parents been alive, Elizabeth would have been welcomed as a grand-daughter. “They would have spoiled her shamelessly,” she said ruefully, then bit her lip. Would that have been so bad? Other than Hilda, there had been nobody to whom the child really mattered; the Annersleys might have cared for her since babyhood, but they had not cherished her as they should have - and she certainly did not occupy the place in the family that the Venables and Bettany children held in the Russell household. A single glance at the child’s room revealed that; she had sufficient clothes, and was well-provided with games and books. But, there were none of the little trinkets or ornaments that small girls loved, no photographs at all, and only one doll had emerged from the trunk. Most telling of all to Nell was the complete absence of any beloved soft toy, or indeed, anything that was personal to the child. And of course Hilda would have seen this as well . . . Suddenly feeling that the room was stifling, she went to the window, her lips folded tightly against the harsh words burning on her tongue, and then catching sight of Hilda and Elizabeth together in the garden, relaxed. They were standing very still, staring down at something Elizabeth was holding in her cupped hands, then just as Nell opened the window, Elizabeth turned, made her way to the bushes near the wall, and carefully put whatever-it-was that she was holding onto a twig. Then she looked up at her mother and smiled tentatively.
Author:  PaulineS [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 12:27 pm ]
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Thank you Cathy That was a lovely post and worth the wait.
Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 12:44 pm ]
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Thanks Cath: this was lovely. This must be strange for Nell.
Author:  shesings [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:01 pm ]
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Thank you, Cath, it was well worth waiting for! I just loved Nell's thoughts here, loving and caring about Elizabeth for the child herself and not just because she was Hilda's daughter. And I'll try not to be so impatient for the next update!!
Author:  di [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:10 pm ]
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Super! Nell seems to have taken Elizabeth to her heart for her own sake and not just because she's Hilda's daughter; this surely will help the trio in the months to come for I fear there will be many obstacles for them to overcome. Indeed, Hilda has already sensed that the villagers may not be as welcoming as Nell hopes them to be.
I, too, will try to be patient but it won't be easy as this is such a lovely story.
Author:  cal562301 [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:34 pm ]
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Really enjoying this. Hope to see more soon.

Thanks.
Author:  Joanne [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:56 pm ]
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Thank you Cath, it is lovely to see more of this. I look forward to seeing Elizabeth thrive in her new environment but I fear it won't be easy for any of them.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:26 pm ]
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Great to see more of this ... is it too much to hope that we shan't have to wait quite so long for the next bit?

Please :insert hopeful smiley:
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:15 pm ]
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It's really good to see more of this. I shuddered slightly at the comments about Elizabeth's possessions - they really stressed just how much the Annersleys had cared for her material needs, but none of her emotional ones. But I loved the way that Nell is coming to accept her, not just because she is Hilda's child, but also because she is growing to love her for herself. And the fact that she can 'give away' Cherry's room to her with such equanimity says much for how far she has already come, not just in her love for Elizabeth, but in finally accepting Cherry's death, and finding some closure there.

Thanks, Cath, will look forward to another update before too long - hint, hint :) :)
Author:  linda [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 7:19 pm ]
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Thank you Cath, this is lovely. It is so good to see that Nell is beginning to love Elizabeth for herself and not just because she is Hilda's child.

It is sad that whilst the Annersley's have looked after Elizabeth's basic needs all these years, no-one has really looked after her emotional development. And, we still don't know exactly what Nanny has told her about her origins.
Author:  clair [ Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:46 pm ]
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Thanks Cath - got very excited when I saw this had been updated!

Poor Elizabeth, am hoping that she'll settle down with Hilda and Nell soon - once she realises that their love is unconditional and secure I'm sure she'll be more forthcoming
Author:  shazwales [ Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:37 am ]
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Thanks Cath lovely to see more of this .
Author:  Pat [ Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:47 pm ]
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So glad to see more of this. Please post some more soon.
Author:  Celia [ Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:25 pm ]
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I do hope that the time Hilda and Elizabeth spend together in the garden strengthens the tenuous bond between them. The tentative
smile sounds as if the child is beginning to remember how much she likes to be with this special 'auntie'

Thanks for the update Cath
Author:  MaryR [ Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:13 pm ]
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Nell finding that making new memories doesn't destroy the old but embellishes and renders them new again. She deserves that moment of aweareness for all her generosity to Hilda and Elizabeth.

And Hilda being offered a moment of closeness by whatever is held in those tiny hands - a baby hedgehog or a ladybird or whatever. Can she build on this and find her way into the heart of this apparently damaged child of hers.

As Nell says, there isn't too much time for anything, as surely this is the Easter before they move into Plas Howells. Will they have any time left over during this busy first term for a young child who needs so much?

Thanks, Cath
Author:  ivohenry [ Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:25 pm ]
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More please!! Time they came in from the garden!
Author:  shesings [ Wed Apr 07, 2010 5:14 pm ]
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Don't want to be pushy , Cath, but I, too, would love more of this great story! (scatters some bunny food and leaves a very tasty Easter Egg and some fine wine for Cath)
Author:  marni [ Tue Apr 27, 2010 8:23 pm ]
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I love this alternative universe. I check this drabble every time I come on the board. I really look forward to the next instalment Thanks Cath.
Author:  ivohenry [ Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:14 pm ]
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Any chance of more of this one soon? Please!!!
Author:  di [ Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:51 am ]
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Cath, I too am missing this drabble, :( , so am starting a chant for an update. Anyone else care to join me? :)
Author:  Tara [ Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:39 pm ]
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Definitely, Di. It's a bit of a cheek for me to chant, as I haven't been on here for so long, but I would so like to hear the continuation of this story! Any hope of life sitting still for long enough, Cath?
Author:  kirstyb01 [ Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:26 pm ]
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I'd like to join the chant for more. I was really excited to see this back up at the top of the listand would love to have more.

I'm with the others in wishing horrible fates on the nasty nanny and praying that Hilda and Nell can get through to Elizabeth.

More please!
Author:  Cath V-P [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:42 am ]
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Okay, I really didn't intend to let almost six months go by before this was updated, but there was RL and a bit of a block. (Peeps nervously round from behind computer). But I do have something to post, and a tiny bit more written... And thank you for bumping this up the page and being so patient!

Nell drew back from the window, not wishing to be caught watching this essentially private moment between Hilda and her daughter. The relationship between the two was so fragile at the moment, that it seemed as if the least thing might damage it, irreparably, and Nell was determined that this would not happen if she could prevent it. But then, she acknowledged sadly, there were so many potential difficulties to account for and her best efforts just might not be enough. And apart from that, they had given very little thought to the inexorable approach of the new term . . . Suddenly, she heard the kitchen door slam and the sound of Elizabeth’s voice calling “Auntie Nell?”
“I’m in your room, Elizabeth,” she answered quickly. “Did you want me?” There was a silence followed by the sound of small feet ascending the stairs, then Elizabeth peeped round the door.
“Auntie Hilda sent me to ask if you wanted a cup of tea,” she began, then stopped as she took in the sight of her various possessions neatly arranged on the shelves and the empty trunk in the corner. “It’s all unpacked,” she said in amazement, and Nell looked at her, puzzled.
“Yes,” she replied. “Auntie Hilda and I did it while you were in the garden. All we have to do now is move your trunk-” She stopped watching as the little girl very carefully took a few steps into the room, then stopped, her hands behind her back.
“May I – may I take one?” she asked timidly looking towards the bookshelf. Nell’s mouth tightened; she could imagine Hilda’s reaction to this and was deeply thankful that she wasn’t in the room at the moment
“Of course you may,” she said, then added, “If you come down to the kitchen in five minutes, there’ll be some milk and biscuits for you. And then we’re going down to the village to do some shopping.” She watched as Elizabeth reached out and carefully removed one of the books from its space, her small fingers touching it gently in a gesture oddly reminiscent of her mother, then slipped quietly from the room leaving the little girl alone.

“You’re right about the wellingtons,” remarked Hilda as she watched Elizabeth carefully picking her way down the middle of the road. “There are puddles in those wheel-ruts, and the grass is still wet.”
“And it last rained two days ago,” replied Nell. “I’m sorry I didn’t think about that before she went into the garden. Still, her shoes were dry inside – I checked before she put them back on.”
“It does rain in London too you know,” said Hilda, amused. “But I don’t know that you would want to be out in it in quite the same way as you might here.”
“Mmm, it does tend to come with a coating of soot doesn’t it? Our rain is rather less complicated when you think about it.”
“It’s certainly cleaner, although I suppose you could argue that getting wet through on a regular basis isn’t necessarily good for your health. Still, rainwater is supposed to enhance one’s complexion - at least according to the magazines.” Hilda’s mouth fell open in amazement.
“When on earth did you start reading beauty advice, Nell?” Nell sniffed.
“I do take some interest in my personal appearance, you know.” She grinned suddenly. “Actually, it was when I was last at the dentist; there was a stack of the latest weeklies in the waiting room, and as I’d got there much too early as usual, it was that or consider what was awaiting me in far too much lurid detail. And I might add that most of the publications consisted of sheer unadulterated rubbish, but at that point anything was welcome!” Hilda giggled.
“That’s reassuring – I was beginning to wonder what had happened to you, and when!”
“Cheeky woman, I should just – Elizabeth, over to the side of the road now!” She jumped back as Hilda ran forward to grasp Elizabeth’s hand and pull her to the grass verge as a small car swept past rather too quickly, mud splashing up on to them from the wheel ruts in the road.
“Idiot!” said Nell forcefully to the rapidly-departing car. “Hilda, are you ok? And you Elizabeth?” The little girl nodded, her eyes wide and then as she glanced down at her mud-spattered coat, her face grew suddenly anxious.
“Don’t worry,” Hilda said quickly. “We’ll clean it off as soon as we get home. It’s only mud. Did you see who it was, Nell?” Nell shook her head crossly.
“No, but I seem to know the car. Normally I’d say ‘da - dratted tourist!’ stamp and swear a bit, and leave it at that, but that doesn’t really help – and they need a bit of reminding about the dangers of ignorance and idiocy -” She stopped abruptly as Hilda merely looked a silent question, then grinned sheepishly. “Well, yes, alright, I shouldn’t – anyway, forget I said that, and let’s get on. We don’t have all day, do we?” She set off determinedly up the road, ignoring Hilda’s small smirk, and unaware that Elizabeth was staring at them both, her small face screwed up in puzzlement.
Author:  ivohenry [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:55 am ]
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Yay, it's back! Thanks for this Cath, that was a lovely episode, worth waiting for!
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:06 pm ]
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Thanks Cath - definitely good to see this back again. But oh, dear, I fear that they and Elizabeth are going to have to overcome many 'hurdles' before they can adjust to their new situation. At least we know that both Hilda and Nell will give Elizabeth all the time and encouragement she needs to accept this new life.

Will look forward to seeing more of this unfolding.
Author:  shesings [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:35 pm ]
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I've just got on the train after a long and intense meeting and found this update!! What joy!! Thanks, Cath and here's some shortbread, Edinburgh Rock and Irn Bru for you and some tasty leaves for the plot bunnies.
Author:  PaulineS [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:45 pm ]
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Thank Cathy this is good to see again. i am pleased that Elizabeth has come in from the garden. Elizabeth's responses are such a clue to her relationship with that Nanny!
Author:  Celia [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:17 pm ]
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Great to see more of this, thanks Cath.

It would be just if 'Nanny' couldn't get another post, but I guess the Annersleys don't realise how repressive and negative her treatment of Elizabeth has been.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 5:17 pm ]
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Hurrah! glad to see more of this Cath - please don't leave it so long next time...
Author:  lexyjune [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:32 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. Great to see more of this.
Author:  Tara [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:02 pm ]
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How lovely to find an update - and such a delightful one. The relationship between Hilda and Elizabeth is a bit like butterfly-wings at the moment - needs to be handled with extreme care and delicacy. Love how Eliz handles books in the same reverential way as Hilda, and love, as always, the interaction between Hilda and Nell. I much enjoyed the exchange re. rain and the complexion! Also enjoyed Nell trying to swallow her automatic explosive reactions to the dangerous driver; she's going to have to learn restraint :D . Nell is, however, very aware of the difficulties ahead and of the nearness of the forthcoming return to school (much more so, in a way, than Hilda, who seems, very understandably, to be shutting off from the thought a little). Looking forward to the next slice of their lives.
Thank you, Cath.
Author:  di [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:46 am ]
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Thanks, Cath, for the update. it's good to see this back and I hope RL doesn't get in the way too much before we get more.
Poor Elizabeth- fancy having to ask if she could read one of the books on her bookshelf! Loved the vision of Nell shouting after the reckless driver who splattered them all with mud; perhaps the sight of Auntie Nell jumping up and down will have taken Elizabeth's mind away from anxiety about the mud on her coat.
Author:  Squirrel [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 12:54 pm ]
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Oooh! An update! And such a lovely one as well. I love the way you've woven such normal natural things together with the still slightly jarring quality that there is to some of Elizabeths interactions. I do hope that she will soon learn that things are different with 'auntie' Hilda and auntie Nell!

Thanks Cath, will look forwards to more as and when you've got time.
Author:  2nd Gen Fan [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:57 am ]
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Fantastic to see this back, and such a lovely post - a little more of Elizabeth's character coming out.
Author:  marni [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:11 pm ]
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Loved the update. Thank you for finding time to write again. Hope to have more soon when you have the time.
Author:  Identity Hunt [ Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:58 am ]
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Cath,
I am thrilled to log in and find this update ! Thank you ! :D
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:12 am ]
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Thanks Cath, it's great to see more of this
Author:  MaryR [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:43 pm ]
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Quote:
She set off determinedly up the road, ignoring Hilda’s small smirk, and unaware that Elizabeth was staring at them both, her small face screwed up in puzzlement.


Poor Elizabeth, clearly totally inhibited everywhich way, whether it is daring to take books down to read just when she likes or dirtying clothes by accident. Is it possible she was beaten when she got it wrong? One feels that it will take years of encouragement and reassurance for her to be at ease with any aspect of her new life. One wonders if she has been allowed to interact with adults at all, apart from Nanny, judging by her puzzlement at Nell and Hilda teasing each other. She is so tense and reserved she makes the self-controlled Hilda look positively out-going.

Thanks, Cath. :D
Author:  shazwales [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:32 pm ]
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Thanks Cath,lovely to see more of this.
Author:  ivohenry [ Thu Oct 07, 2010 10:41 pm ]
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Any chance of more of this one soon, Cath? It's a great story and would be good to know how Elizabeth is getting on with HIlda nd Nel.
Author:  seven [ Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:53 pm ]
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I second what Ivohenry has written! It's a wonderful story, Cath, and I would love to know what happens in the end.
Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Oct 10, 2010 7:28 pm ]
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Please come back and give us more.
Author:  lexyjune [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:13 pm ]
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I'd like to add to the pleas for more.
Author:  shazwales [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:24 pm ]
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Adding another request for some more please,this is really good,and i would love to see Elizabeth getting some confidence with Hilda and Nell.
Author:  marni [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:41 pm ]
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Me Too - It will be lovely to see this when you have time - Looking forward to it !
Author:  di [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 5:35 am ]
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Adding to the wishes to see more of this, pretty please.
Author:  Identity Hunt [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 5:55 am ]
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Joining in the chorus of those who, like Oliver, would like some more please :D
Author:  janetbrown23 [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 8:31 am ]
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We may have to start a chant......................
Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Oct 12, 2010 10:45 am ]
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please please can we have more..... soon.
Author:  Cath V-P [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 04.08.20 p12)
Thank you for all your comments - and your requests for updates as well. I have finally managed to write something which approached what I envisaged, so here is the next section.

Both Hilda and Nell were delighted by Elizabeth’s wide-eyed reaction to the crowded interior of Carter’s General Store - crowded, that is, with things, not people. Nell had timed their arrival carefully, knowing that by now the first flurry of local customers would have departed, with those present highly likely to be tourists - and as petrol rationing was severely curtailing travel, it was quite probable that the store would be empty. She was also well aware that the beady-eyed Mrs Elliott would be securely pinioned behind the counter of the Post Office across the street, and thus unable to pay attention to anything unusual that she might encounter, although Nell had never felt entirely certain that Mrs Elliott was not possessed of supernatural powers when in the pursuit of local gossip. When she had expressed this idea to Hilda, the latter had agreed wholeheartedly, but pointed out that it was a driving curiosity that motivated Mrs Elliott rather than maliciousness. “I imagine she’d delay her death for a toothsome morsel of information, but you know, I don’t see her spreading it to all and sundry.” Nell had considered this and acquiesced. Still, despite Mrs Elliot’s undoubted virtues, Nell was pleased to see that, apart from Mr Carter and his two assistants, there was nobody in the store whom they knew, and they were able to make their purchases without fending off inquisitive onlookers.
“Not that Mr Carter and Betty and – what’s his name? George? – are exactly oblivious to our presence,” muttered Nell three minutes after they had arrived. Hilda’s mouth twitched: Betty had given up even attempting her job of packaging lentils into blue half-pound bags and was staring unabashedly at Elizabeth while George, slowly gathering items together for somebody’s weekly grocery order, was not letting his occupation hinder him from the more important task of observing Hilda, Nell and Elizabeth. And Mr Carter was no better, although he was at least trying to conceal his interest by ostensibly scrutinising the entries in a ledger near the cash register. Unfortunately, the presence of one remarkably swivelling eyeball and a consequent squint betrayed this apparent disinterest while provoking revulsion and admiration - in roughly equal amounts – in Hilda.
“He’s looking in two completely opposing directions,” she murmured in awed tones. “I didn’t know you could do that,”
“You can’t as a general rule,” Nell responded drily, “but before you ponder too much on the mechanics involved, you should know he does have a natural advantage, which I haven’t really needed to mention before now.” Hilda considered this for a moment.
“Alright, what is it?” she asked cautiously. Nell smirked.
“Glass eye,” she said succinctly.

“Well, that was successful,” remarked Nell as she and Hilda walked slowly up the road watching Elizabeth joyously splash her way through a series of puddles, pausing every so often to survey the shiny dripping surface of her new gumboots. Between them, they carried a number of small parcels, plus a larger one containing Elizabeth’s damp shoes, and Nell was resigned to at least one evening spent in the pursuit of one of her less-favoured occupations. “I’ll start on the handkerchiefs if you like,” she said heroically. Hilda’s mouth twitched - Nell’s air of martyrdom was unmistakeable.
“It shall be counted unto you as righteousness,” she replied. “Don’t think I don’t know what that cost you!” Nell sighed.
“I never have liked sewing,” she said dismally. “And you know it.” Hilda smiled consolingly.
“Never mind, it will soon be over. Besides,” she added impishly, “I’m sure Elizabeth will help you if you ask her nicely!” She ignored Nell’s outraged snort and waved to the child who was now peering into one of the ditches, clearly fascinated by the contents. “What can you see, Elizabeth?” The little girl looked up as they approached her.
“I’m not sure, Auntie Hilda, but they’re swimming very fast.” Hilda and Nell looked down into the ditch, and instantly recognised the flickering motion of tadpoles.
“They’re tadpoles,” said Hilda, “Though whether these will turn into frogs or toads, I couldn’t tell you.”
“They might be newts, you know,” Nell commented. “Though I don’t think so. These are quite small, so I’d hazard a guess that we’re looking at the tadpoles of the Common Frog.”
“Really?” Elizabeth suddenly sounded breathlessly excited and Hilda and Nell exchanged smiles.
“Yes, really,” said Hilda. “Is this the first time you’ve seen them?” Elizabeth nodded.
“I’ve seen them in a book,” she said. “But they didn’t move. Joseph was going to get me some from the park once, but Nanny said they were dirty, so he didn’t. They’re little, aren’t they?” She squatted down and bent over the edge of the ditch staring at the quicksilver bodies darting in front of her. Moving to her side, Nell reached down and cupped her hands just under the surface of the water, trapping several of the little creatures.
“There you are,” she said. “Now you can have a proper look.” Behind them, Hilda watched as Nell pointed out the over-large head, long body, gills and thrashing tail, explaining as she did so just how the frog would emerge from this form “… and its tail is the last to disappear. The frog can’t live in water all the time, but he does have to stay damp – and he does still enjoy swimming. Now, shall we let them go?” Elizabeth whispered ‘Yes’ and Nell allowed the tadpoles to swim out of her hands before standing up and reclaiming her share of the parcels.
“I think we should go home now,” she remarked. “I’m starting to think longing thoughts about lunch, and I don’t like the look of those clouds.” She gestured upwards and Hilda realised that the clear sky of early morning was gradually given way to a slow banking of iron-grey clouds.
“Well,” she said, “That might change our plans for the rest of the day.”
Author:  Squirrel [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:37 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
First of all - thank you Cath, that was a joy to read.

Secondly... As a scene in the story as a whole, it was simply lovely. The whole area will be intrigued by the sudden arrival of a little girl, so it's not surprising that everyone in the store is interested by the three of them - even if it's practically empty of locals at the time. Good planning Nell.

I particularly loved the quick science lesson - another reminder to Elizabeth that these 'aunties' are different to Nanny and the family she has just come from. Yes, Elizabeth is still obviously very shy and uncertain, but that's only to be expected at this stage.

I do hope that the weather that's going to keep them indoors for the rest of the day doesn't continue on too long...

Thanks again Cath - I was definitely in the story along with them! :D
Author:  Alison H [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:47 am ]
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Glad to see this back :D .
Author:  shazwales [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 8:11 am ]
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Thanks Cath loved reading that,especially the 'tadpole' bit :D
Author:  jayj [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 9:23 am ]
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Great! such a vivid and detailful episode - and it's nice to see Elizabeth starting to settle down and behave like a normal child.

thanks!
Author:  di [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
Brilliant - an update!
I like the way Elizabeth, although still painfully shy, is beginning to relax in Nell's presence; what a lovely scene, I can just picture Nell crouched by her side with a handful of tadpoles explaining how they change in to frogs.

Hilda must be thrilled to bits to see the way her daughter is starting to relate to Nell and vice versa. It's a huge gamble bringing a child in to a relationship however stable that relationship is and I imagine there will be all sorts of hiccoughs along the way.

The next big step will be Elizabeth starting at the Chalet School; I wonder how that will go? There are bound to be searching questions from both the girls and staff. I hope Hilda gives Elizabeth some guidance about how to handle her school mates curiosity.

Many thanks, Cath. I do enjoy this story.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:07 am ]
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Loved seeing Elizabeth having fun like that, thanks Cath
Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:24 am ]
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Thank you Cathy. It was good to see Elizabeth being more natural in her new gum boots, and Nell explaining tadpoles to her.
Author:  abbeybufo [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:43 am ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
Lovely update, Cath - well worth waiting for ... but that desn't mean we'll be happy to have to wait so long again :lol:
Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:25 pm ]
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Oh, the 'joys' of a village grape vine system - been there, grew up in one, know the consequences!!! But I did giggle a little at Nell's comments on the various personae who might be relied upon to comment on the unusual!!

I also enjoyed Nell's spontaneous science lesson, and watching how comfortably Elizabeth was talking with her.

Thanks, Cath - it's really good to see this back - I agree with Abbeybufo that it's well worth waiting for. Like Abbeybufo, too, may I dare to hope we won't have to wait *too* long for the next one? :) :)
Author:  shesings [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
Thanks, Cath, this was well worth the wait but I'd like to add my voice to those asking for not so long a wait next time! :)
Author:  ivohenry [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 5:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
Lovely to have an update of this, especially liked the tadpole bit! Adding to those who say please may we have another update before too long!
Author:  marni [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
Yes! An Update- Lovely to see this again. Thank you so much Cath.
Author:  MaryR [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:28 pm ]
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Hopefully Hilda can now relax a little in this new spontaneity from Elizabeth. What a lovely outing, and the scene in the General Store was so of its time I could see every dust speck, every eye swivelling in their direction, every silent thought. :D

As to Nell and her 'satiable curtiosity' hopefully she can pass that on to the child. It certainly showed us a different Elizabeth, alert to all that is happening around her, something we hadn't seen before. May it be the start of something good for all.

Thank you, Cath. :D
Author:  Celia [ Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:57 am ]
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Lovely to see more of this Cath. Have only just found it as I've been away. Such a relaxed family scene, and Elizabeth enjoying the experiences of shop and walk, and doing things Nanny wouldn't have allowed like splashing in puddles and learning first hand about tadpoles.

Thank you
Author:  ivohenry [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:35 am ]
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It's been a long while since the tadpoles in the ditch provided Nell with the opportunity for a science lesson - any chance of more soon, please??
Author:  di [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:41 am ]
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Echoing pleas for more of this, please. By now the the tadpoles will be fully grown frogs and will have hopped away from the ditch giving Nell the opportunity for more scientific explanations - perhaps about the skeletal and muscle functions of amphibians. :lol:
Author:  Chris S [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:23 pm ]
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Adding more pleas for this drabble to continue. It was one of my favourites.
Author:  shesings [ Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:39 pm ]
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Me too!!
Author:  ivohenry [ Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:18 pm ]
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And me!
Author:  marni [ Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Single Diamond. Part 2: Devon (updated 15.11.10 p14)
And me too!
Author:  di [ Sun Apr 10, 2011 8:59 am ]
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Ohhh, I thought this was an update. :(

Please can we have some more? This is one of my favourites. :)
Author:  RuthFL [ Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:06 am ]
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di wrote:
Ohhh, I thought this was an update. :(

Please can we have some more? This is one of my favourites. :)

One day we will climb off the cliffs? :?:
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