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A Chalet Girl at Last - finished 31/3/08
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Author:  francesn [ Wed May 31, 2006 12:19 am ]
Post subject:  A Chalet Girl at Last - finished 31/3/08

This was lost in the hacking so for now I'm reposting where we got to on the board, then I have some more!


Mrs Lacey sat weeping in her room. She had scarely emerged since her husband had died, three weeks previously. A knock on the door roused her from her reverie.

“Come in,” she sobbed. She looked up to see her daughter, Gwendoline Mary, enter the room. Her spirits rose, as they did every time she looked at her beautiful daughter.

“Mr Wilson is downstairs, Mummy,” Gwendoline Mary said.

Mrs Lacy dabbed her eyes delicately with a lace edged handkerchief and rose from the chair.

“Tell him I’ll be there in a minute, darling,” she said. “And ask Miss Winter to make some tea. Do you think we can offer him some biscuits?”

“I should think so,” Gwendoline Mary replied, her eyes lighting up at the mention of biscuits. Ever since her father’s death the strict diet that she had been forced to endure, both at school and home since her pretended heart trouble a few years ago, had been relaxed, and she feasted on cakes and sweets whenever she could.

She exited the room and shut the door behind her firmly, making her way sedately down the stairs in search of her old governess.

She found Miss Winter soon enough, mending a pair of Gwendoline Mary’s stockings.

“Mummy wants you to make some tea for Mr Wilson,” Gwendoline Mary said coldly. She was not too kindly disposed towards her governess at the moment, as Miss Winter had privately thought Gwendonline Mary’s late father was quite right in his treatment of his daughter, and she had supported him wholeheartedly. In Gwendoline Mary’s eyes her father’s treatment had been unnecessarily cruel and she wasn’t prepared to see otherwise.

Miss Winter stood meekly at once, and vanished in the direction of the kitchens. It never crossed Gwendoline Mary’s mind that she could have fetched the tea herself and saved her ageing governess the walk. Instead she crossed the hall to the parlour and greeted her late father’s solicitor graciously. Gwendonline Mary could be quite charming when she wanted to be, and with her flowing blonde hair, blue eyes and pale complexion many people considered her beautiful.

Gwendoline Mary preened as she noticed Mr Wilson’s appraising look. She wasn’t to know what he was thinking, at it wasn’t flattering. In fact it was much the same opinion which had been held by those awful girls at her school, Malory Towers in Cornwall. She had been forced to leave when her father had died, there wasn’t enough money available for her to go to her Swiss finishing school either. Instead Miss Winter had had the temerity to suggest that she should get a job. Miss Winter was still labouring under the delusion that her dear Gwendonline Mary was the cleverest girl alive – her French excellent, her spoting prowess unequalled.
Any of the girls at Malory Towers could have swiftly told her that this was in fact a pack of lies, indeed one or two had in the course of Gwendoline Mary’s school career, but she had refused to believe them.

“Miss Winter is just fetching us some tea, Mr Wilson,” Gwendoline Mary simpered. “And Mummy is just on her way down. She’s been feeling terribly delicate lately. So have I, as a matter of fact, I rather think my heart is playing up again.”

Mr Wilson smiled grimly.

“Do sit down, Gwendonline,” he said. Gwendoline sat obediently, a little put out at the omission of her much prized second name. They waited in silence for Mrs Lacey, who entered a moment later, a shadow of her former self.

“So good of you to come, Mr Wilson. Shall we wait for the tea, before we read the will?” she said faintly.

Gwendoline Mary’s eyes brightened at the mention of the will, but she managed to contain her impatience until Miss Winter arrived bearing a large tea tray.

Miss Winter settled her load on the table with a sigh.

“Shall I stay, Mrs Lacey?” she asked deferentially.

Gwendoline Mary was about to tell her to go when her mother stepped in.

“Oh do stay, Miss Winter, it would be such a comfort,” Mrs Lacey said, privately hoping that the presence of Miss Winter would prevent her daughter from manipulating her as much as she was given to in private. Gwendoline Mary drew her brows together for a fraction of a second, but swiftly relaxed her features and smiled sweetly at her former governess.

“Shall we start?” Mr Wilson said, clearing his throat. Without waiting for a reply, her reached for the briefcase lying by his chair and opened it. He withdrew a large brown envelope and Gwendoline Mary leaned forwards eagerly.

Mrs Lacey closed her eyes as the terms of her late husbands will were disclosed, Gwendoline Mary listened avidly.

“And for my daughter Gwendoline’s future education….”

Gwendoline Mary shut the door behind the lawyer and hugged herself excitedly. Her father had made a provision for her education and that was good enough for her. She could go to Switzerland just as she planned. Her father had been such a sensible man to see that finishing school was so necessary to her, and of course there would be enough in the fund to go to the Delaney Academy for at least one year, if not two. She would be socialising with the daughters of some of the most well-bred and well-to-do families in England.

Although she was not given to skipping, or indeed any form of physical activity, she allowed herself a small skip in the hall on her way back to the parlour. She entered to find her mother clutching the small envelope Mr Wilson had handed her jut before departing.

“Isn’t that so sensible of Daddy?” Gwendoline Mary asked, dropping down beside her mother. “I shall go to Switzerland after all.”

“Yes dear,” her mother said, weakly. “But…”

“But what?” Gwendoline Mary asked sharply.

“I think you should read this,” Miss Winter said, looking at Mrs Lacey, who gave a small nod. Gwendoline Mary accepted the letter from her governess with a puzzled expression on her face

“Dear Ellen,” she read,

“I know how anxious you are that Gwendoline should receive a proper education, and although I am afraid that I am unable to leave you much to see this fulfilled, I have put aside a sum for Gwendoline to spend a year at an excellent school I know of in Switzerland.

“Gwendoline has been enrolled at St Mildred’s for the next academic year. I hesitate to do this without your knowledge, but I am confident that it is the best thing for her. My will provides a sum of money for fees and other sundries. There will of course be travelling expenses, and doubtless she will need a uniform…”

Gwendoline Mary read the letter with growing horror. To go to St Mildred’s – what a ghastly name – instead of the Delaney Academy? To give up her plans? For her father to have done this behind her back?

“Oh Mummy,” she pleaded. “Can’t I go to the Delaney Academy instead of this place?”

But for once Mrs Lacey refused to be over-ridden.

“Your father was quite clear,” she said inflexibly. “If you want to go to school in Switzerland then you go to St Mildred’s. Otherwise you don’t go at all.”


In vain Gwendoline Mary wept and wailed but her mother, backed up by Miss Winter stood firm. She wrote to Switzerland for the prospectus and showed it to Gwendoline Mary at every possible opportunity.

“It seems such a sensible school,” Mrs Lacey sighed. “‘A healthy lifestyle is encouraged and girls specialise in science or arts building upon the foundations laid at school in preparation for university.’ And this Miss Wilson sounds extremely sensible. He’s a cousin of our own dear Mr Wilson, that’s how Arthur knew of the school.”

“Just what Gwendoline needs,” Miss Winter agreed, although she shuddered inwardly at what Gwendoline Mary would say when she found out it wasn’t going to be all etiquette and needlework.

Stubbornly Gwendoline Mary refused to even look at the prospectus.

“It’s a hateful school, and I’m sure I shall be unhappy,” she said dramatically. “I’ll be terribly homesick.”

“Then maybe you shouldn’t go to Switzerland at all,” Miss Winter said sharply. “Your poor mother has had quite enough of your whining. You are going to St Mildred’s and that is final.”

Gwendoline Mary glared at her governess, but shocked into submission she quietened down and allowed her mother to see to the multitude of belongings she would require.

Author:  Róisín [ Wed May 31, 2006 12:21 am ]
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It's back it's back! *squeees* This is one I was avidly following on the old board. So delighted. Keep it up Frances :D

Author:  francesn [ Wed May 31, 2006 12:22 am ]
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At last the day arrived. Gwendoline Mary was taken to Victoria by her mother an adoring governess, who had fully forgiven her charge in the shock of seeing her prepare to cross the continent.

“Oh I will miss you, darling,” Mrs Lacey wept, clinging to her daughter. “I know you’ll be terribly homesick, just like you were at Malory Towers, but do try and be brave.”

Gwendoline Mary embraced her mother fondly, tears running down her cheeks.

“I will try,” she sniffed. “I just know that I’ll hate it. I wish I was going to the Delaney Academy.”

Miss Winter frowned. “We’ve said all we have to say on that subject, dear,” she reproached Gwendoline Mary gently. “It looks like a charming place and I’m sure you’ll do very well there.”

A slight cough behind her drew her attention away from Gwendoline Mary and her mother. She turned to face a petite woman with brown hair and merry eyes.

“Mrs Lacey?” she asked, tentatively. “I’m Miss Nalder.”

Miss Winter flushed a little. “Oh no,” she said breathlessly. “I’m Miss Winter, Gwendoline Mary’s governess”

“Governess?” the woman repeated. “Is this Gwendoline’s first time away form home?”

For a second Miss Winter was tempted to say that it was indeed Gwendoline Mary’s first ever time at being parted from her mother. That at least might excuse her disgraceful behaviour, but honesty got the better of her.

“No, she was at boarding school for seven year. Naturally she is upset at leaving her mother though. They have not been separated since the loss of Gwendoline Mary’s dear father,” Miss Winter sighed.

Miss Nalder nodded. “And, pardon me for asking, how old is Gwendoline Mary?”

“She is 18,” Miss Winter replied, slightly bemused at this seemingly odd question.

Miss Nalder regarded the long flowing blonde hair with distate. “Did no-one inform Gwendoline that it is a rule of the Chalet School, girls over the age of 18 must wear it up?”

“Well….no…I mean….the Chalet School?” Miss Winter said helplessly.

“St Mildred’s is the finishing branch of the Chalet School,” Miss Nalder explained patiently. “And we do, in most instances conform to their rules. The trilingual rule for example, and the rule about the hair.”

“Trilingual?” Miss Winter repeated, startled.

Miss Nalder nodded, but a glance at the station clock left her no time to explain.

“I’m afraid we must hurry,” she said. Raising her voice slightly she approached the sobbing pair. “Gwendoline!”

Gwendoline Mary raised her head from her mother’s shoulder and dabbed at her eyes delicately with a handkerchief. Miss Nalder reflected that the girl could have even been called pretty, were it not for the fact that her eyes were rimmed with red, and her cheeks bore tearstains as evidence of her weeping. Gwendoline Mary shook the hair back from her face.

“I’m afraid it’s time for us to go. Please pick up your case and follow me. We must join the other girls.”

With a final embrace for her mother, and one for Miss Winter, Gwendoline Mary picked up her nightcase with a sniff and set off after Miss Nalder to join the knot of girls waiting at the end of the platform.

The girls had watched with interest as Miss Nalder dextrously parted the sobbing Gwendoline Mary from her mother.

“What a ghastly object,” Blossom Willoughby said, in her forthright manner.

“Hush, Blossom,” a pretty girl with chestnut hair and a peaches and cream complexion said. “She might hear you.”

“Not likely,” Blossom said, but she subsided nonetheless.

“Is this the Chalet School?” a quiet voice said behind them. “St Mildred’s?”

“It certainly is,” Blossom said with a cheerful grin. “I’m Blossom Willoughby, these others are Sybil Russell, Nan Herbert, Felicity King and Amy Dunne.”

“I’m Rachel Matthews,” the girl replied.

“Have your parents come with you? Miss Nalder – she’s the mistress in charge – will want to know,” Blossom said.

“Oh no. I didn’t need anyone to bring me,” Rachel said, as though amused by the idea. Blossom quickly revised her opinion of Rachel. Quiet as she appeared to be, her quiet and unprepossessing exterior hid a self-assurance and sophistication that the former Chalet Girls found it hard to match.

“You’re the only non-Chaletian we’ve had so far,” Amy Dunne, a pleasant faced young woman commented. “That’s most unusual.”

“Apart from that sobbing specimen with Nally,” Blossom said softly, causing Felicity King, a rather pretty but empty headed girl to hastily suppress her giggles.

Miss Nalder was hurrying Gwendoline Mary along the platform, although she knew full well that they had plenty of time to catch the train she wanted to avoid any more scenes.

“Come on, Gwendoline dear,” Miss Nalder said absently, spying Rachel amongst the girls that she was familiar with. Upon reaching the group she whipped out a pencil and a list.

“Who are you?” she enquired.

“Rachel Matthews,” the owner of that name replied.

“Did your parents come with you?” Miss Nalder asked perplexed. “I don’t see them.”

“Oh no, I came by myself,” Rachel replied assuredly.

“Oh….” Miss Nalder said ineffectually. “Well….I suppose…”

“My father is a very busy man,” Rachel said smoothly. “And I am quite capable of seeing to myself. Our chauffeur dropped me off at the station, and that was quite sufficient.”

“Well, yes. I can imagine that Professor Matthews does have great demands on his time,” Miss Nalder said worriedly, “but...”

“I shall wire my father, with your permission of course, once we arrive in Switzerland,” Rachel said in a voice which informed the mistress that she would be doing so whether Miss Nalder gave her permission or not.

Luckily for Rachel at that moment Miss Nalder’s attention was claimed by one Clare Fenton who had been a member of the Chalet School when it was on St Brivael’s Island, off the coast of Wales, and who was greeted rapturously by her former playmates.

Gwendoline, having heard Rachel mention that she had a chauffeur and therefore deducing that she must be moderately wealthy, sidled up to the other girl.

“They’ve just got and left us,” she said. “Dreadfully rude, I call it.”

“I don’t mind,” Rachel said, diffidently. “I quite enjoy the peace and quiet. Schoolgirls can be such dreadful chatterboxes.”

Gwendoline looked at Rachel doubtfully, but thought it best to agree with the girl.

“Oh absolutely,” she said ingratiatingly. “You seem far more sophisticated than that crowd. And you came by yourself! My mother wouldn’t let me – simply wouldn’t hear of it.”

“I don’t have a mother,” Rachel replied. “I’ve only got Father, and he’s always terribly busy, so Parkinson brought me.”

“Oh my father was always far too busy for me too,” Gwendoline said quickly. “He never had any time for me.”

They were stood a little apart from the group of girls, and consequently did not notice when the others moved off in a body, the older Chaletians taking charge of the new girls who had joined the group in the last few moments. Miss Nalder did a quick headcount and discovered that two of her lambs were missing.

“Blossom, Sybil,” she called ahead. Those two named looked around to see the mistress motioning towards them. “Will you go back to fetch Gwendoline and Rachel? They seem to still be standing where we left them.”

Blossom and Sybil murmured their assent, before walking briskly towards the silent pair.

“Didn’t you notice we were gone?” Blossom said bluntly.

Gwendoline gave a start. “Oh my heart,” she gasped. “You gave me quite a fright.”

“Sorry,” Blossom said unapologetically, “but look here! We simply have to get a move on or we’ll miss the boat train and a fine to-do that would be.”

Silently Rachel picked up her case and handbag and walked off. Sybil threw a despairing glance at Blossom and went after her, leaving Blossom to deal with the dawdling Gwendoline.

“Hurry up. Do!” Blossom urged.

“There’s no need to rush,” Gwendoline said, fixing Blossom with her wide blue eyes.

“Oh but there is,” Blossom replied. “If we miss the train there’ll be no end of a fuss and I’d rather be excused that.”

Startled, Gwendoline picked up her case and trotted after Blossom who set off at a quick pace towards Miss Nalder who was gesturing wildly.

They made it onto the train with seconds to spare, and no sooner were they settled in their reserved compartment than the doors were shut and the whistle blew. Gwendoline was distressed to notice that Rachel was in a different compartment, but she soon cheered up as she was introduced to the other girls.

“And of course, Sybil you’ve met already,” Blossom finished in grand style. “She’s far too modest to tell you herself, but she’s Madame’s daughter.”

Sybil coloured violently at this statement and stared fixedly out of the window.

“Madame?” Gwendoline said interested. “Who’s Madame?”

“Madame is Lady Russell who started the school, way back in the Dark Ages in the Tirol,” Blossom imparted. “Then the school moved to Guernsey, and to Wales, and finally to Switzerland a few years ago.”

Gwendoline perked up a little upon hearing the mention of a title, and resolved to make a special effort with Sybil, who quite apart from possessing a beauty of her own, had titled parents. She was about to ask whether Sybil herself had a title when she heard Rachel’s superior tones.

“Is that the Lady Russell who’s married to Sir James Russell, the TB specialist?”

“Well yes, as a matter of fact,” Sybil said. “Do you know my father?”

“Oh, my father and yours have worked together at certain points. My father finds your father’s work extremely interesting.” Rachel’s tone belied her friendly words, and Blossom looked at her sharply.

However nobody else appeared to notice and talk soon turned to pleasanter things.

Gwendoline felt markedly left out by the friendly chatter going on around her. There were several girls who had come from the English branch of the Chalet School for a year in Switzerland and their former school-mates were appraising them of the latest happenings in the school. Gwendoline could have listened, in fact she probably would have benefited from the conversation although she recognised none of the names. Instead she sat in the corner of the carriage and gazed out of the window with mournful eyes sniffing occasionally.

“It’s just too bad of them, ignoring me like that. They’re not very welcoming at all,” she thought fiercely.

She gazed pleadingly at Rachel, who was immersed in a book. Some author she’d never heard of but it looked interesting. Not that Gwendoline was particularly fond of reading, but the book was very attractive. It seemed to be a historical story of some kind, a romance Gwendoline presumed looking at the soldier and attractive young woman featured on the dust-jacket.

“Rachel,” Gwendoline said tentatively. “What are you reading?”

“It’s the latest Josephine M. Bettany,” Rachel said, raising her eyebrows. “Do you read her books?”

“No, I’ve never heard of her,” Gwendoline admitted. “Is she any good?”

That stopped the other conversation in the compartment right in its tracks.

“Not heard of Aunt Joey,” Blossom exclaimed. “That won’t do! She’s a very famous author and a simply wonderful writer, I’ve got all her books.”

“Is she really your aunt?” Rachel asked, interested.

“Well no, not really,” Blossom said. “She’s a sort of honorary aunt. But she is Sybil’s real aunt.”

Gwendoline nodded, noting yet another reason to make close friends with Sybil as soon as she had the chance. She decided to start by showing an interest in the writing of Josephine M. Bettany, even though she despised reading.

“Could any of you lend me one her books?” Gwendoline asked. “I’d quite like to read one.”

“Of course,” the good-natured Sybil said, jumping up and reaching into her case. “Here – try this.”

Gwendoline accepted the book, and regarded it with horror. “But it’s a school story!” she cried.

“And a simply wizard one too,” Clare Fenton said. “That’s her very first one, isn’t it?”

Sybil nodded. “It’s my absolute favourite.”

“You’ve been awfully quiet so far,” Nan Herbert, a quiet observant girl, said. “Are you feeling alright Gwendoline?”

“Not really,” Gwendoline sniffed. “I get train-sick terribly easily. And I’m feeling homesick too.”

“Homesick?” the thoughtless Blosssom questioned. “But we haven’t left England yet!”

Gwendoline scowled and racked her brains for a reason why she could possibly be homesick half an hour into a journey which would take her several miles from her home. “It’s my mother,” she said. “Father died only a few months ago, and she’ll be awfully lonely on her own. Of course she’s got Miss Winter, but that won’t be quite the same. She simply insisted that I came here though.”

Soft-hearted Sybil’s forehead creased sympathetically. “That must have been dreadful,” she said. “I think you’re very brave to come.”

Gwendoline allowed her blue eyes to fill with tears and smiled weakly. “I just hope Mother will be alright by herself. I’ll miss her terribly.”

Author:  francesn [ Wed May 31, 2006 12:24 am ]
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The rest of the journey passed pleasantly, the girls making an effort to include Gwendoline in their conversations, and Rachel until she politely informed them that she would rather be left to read in peace. Eventually the girls reached Berne where they left the train and Miss Nalder began looking round frantically.

“What’s she looking for?” Gwendoline asked, bemused by the mistresses behaviour.

“I expect she’s looking for Miss Culver or Miss Norton -they’ll have been on escort duty for the other girls,” Nan Herbert, who happened to be nearest replied.

“Oh there are more girls than just those at Victoria?” Gwendoline queried. “Why didn’t they travel with us?”

“Well you can hardly expect the Continental girls to come to England, just to travel back,” Nan laughed.

“Continental girls?” Gwendoline repeated. “You mean you take girls who aren’t English?”

“Oh yes,” Nan said comfortably. “Well Sybs and Blossom told you the school began in Tyrol. We’ve always had a goodly proportion of other nationalities, although fewer when we were in England, but there are more now we’re back in Switzerland.”

“I see,” Gwendoline said, compressing her lips.

“They come to improve their English, because we do stick to some of the Chalet traditions here, like the trilingual rule,” Nan continued, stopping dead as she saw the look on Gwendoline’s face. “Did you not read the prospectus?”

“No, actually,” Gwendoline said. “My Father arranged it all before he died, and that was that. I never bothered to read the prospectus.”

“Oh well it tells you all about it in there,” Nan explained. “We speak French Monday and Thursday, German Tuesday and Friday, English Wednesdays and Saturdays and any language we like on Sunday.”

“Goodness,” Gwendoline exclaimed. “I shall be dumb for most of the time.”

“Oh no you won’t. It won’t be allowed,” Nan grinned. “Besides you pick it up soon enough, speaking it all day two days a week.”

“In our free time?” Gwendoline gasped. “Even when there’s no-one else around?”

“Oh yes,” Nan nodded solemnly. “We’re trusted to keep the rules by ourselves. We’re quite old enough you know.”

At last it appeared that Miss Nalder had located Miss Culver, a striking young woman with chestnut hair who, Gwendoline was informed, held the position of school secretary. She was surrounded by a group of girls chattering away in French.

“Miss Culver,” Blossom cried. “Did you have a good hols?”

“Very nice, thank you Blossom,” Miss Culver smiled. “Now we must get a move on or we shall miss the train to Interlaken. This way please, everyone.”

Gwendoline picked up her case. This school seemed far more organised that the chaos of Malory Towers and she wasn’t entirely sure she was going to like it.

Exhausted and perspiring Gwendoline followed the line of girls tramping happily up the path from the station to the pretty Chalet where St Mildred’s was situated.

“We moved here…oh it must be three years ago,” Blossom chattered easily by her side. Gwendoline ignored her as one might ignore the buzzing of a fly. She was getting rather irritated with the constant flow of information emanating from one or other of the Chaletians. “St Mildred’s used to be at a little hamlet, called Welsen, further down the mountain, but the Chalet there was hemmed in by pine trees and it got ever so hot in the summer. Well to cut a long story short Miss Wilson, that’s the Head of St Mildred’s and the doctors at the San decided it simply wouldn’t do to have us all pulled down every time the hot weather came, so they moved us up here. And it’s ever so nice being close to the original Chalet School as well, not that that will matter much to you or any of the other new girls, but it makes a difference to lots of us, especially if we have sisters at the school. Do you have any brothers or sisters?” Blossom finished in grand style.

Gwendoline jerked suddenly. “Sorry what was that?” she said.

“I asked if you had any brothers or sisters,” Blossom repeated. “I expect you were admiring the view – it’s simply marvellous isn’t it?”

“Very nice,” Gwendoline said sweetly. “But no, I’m afraid I don’t have any brothers or sisters, I’m the only one.”

“That explains a lot,” Blossom thought to herself, but said nothing. Instead she urged the rapidly tiring Gwendoline on towards the building.

“Ooof I’m exhausted!” Gwendoline said, once they were inside and taking off their outdoor clothes. “Do you go in for that sort of thing much here?”

“Oh yes,” Sybil said, failing to notice the look of dismay on Gwendoline’s face. “Lots of fresh air and exercise has always been an important part of the school. Once the bad weather comes in we’ll be stuck in here for days, so we make the most of it while we can.”

Gwendoline cheered up slightly at the prospect of days where they would be stuck indoors without any chance of exercise.

“What do you do when it snows?” she asked.

“Well while it’s snowing we dance, otherwise we’d get no exercise, and once it stops and has frozen we’ll be able to ski,” Sybil replied.

“Ski?!” Gwendoline asked.

“Yes, ski,” Sybil said, laughing at her expression. “We are in Switzerland.”

“Is it hard?” Gwendoline asked.

“No-o. Well it is at first, your toes will keep crossing. It’s like they have a fatal attraction to each other.”

“My toes?”

Sybil chuckled maddeningly. “You’ll find out soon enough.”

“Oh I wish you would tell me now,” Gwendoline pleaded.

The good-natured Sybil relented. “Alright I’ll tell you. When you start ski-ing the points of your ski’s keep rushing together and over you go. Your toes cross, see.” And Sybil demonstrated.

“Sybil, what are you doing?” came a voice from behind them.

“Oh Miss Wilson. I was just showing Gwendoline what happens when you start ski-ing,” Sybil explained.

“Ah right,” Miss Wilson said, before turning her piercing gaze to Gwendoline. Gwendoline stared back, taking in the grey eyes framed by dark eyelashes, and the carefully arranged white hair. The skirt was simple but well cut, the blouse obviously expensive, the overall effect one of great elegance which suited the tall woman well. Miss Wilson took in Gwendoline’s long, blonde hair flowing unconfined over her shoulders, the wide blue eyes, delicate features and comfortable plumpness.

“Well girls, I suggest that you hurry up and join your peers in the common room. It will be Abendessen soon,” she said, before turning and leaving the cloakroom.

“Aben-what?” Gwendoline said, turning to Sybil for an explanation.

“Abendessen – it’s German for dinner. Literally evening, that’s the abend, meal,” Sybil explained. “Now come on – we need to get to the common room. Then it’ll be Abendessen and Bill will tell us where our dormies are. We’ll unpack tomorrow, and have our interviews with her and suchlike.”

“Bill?” Gwendoline repeated, confused. “Who’s he?”

“Bill is our nick-name for Miss Wilson,” Sybil said, patiently, privately thinking that this new girl was extremely dense. “It started ages ago, when Auntie Jo was at school. I’m sure she had something to do with it. Come on.”

“I shall never manage,” Gwendoline thought. “I wish I’d never come.”

After Abendessen as Sybil had predicted they were shown to their dormitories. Blossom kept up a steady flow of chatter for the girls she had assigned herself sheep-dog, as she termed it, to, including Gwendoline who would have much preferred to attach herself to Sybil, but Sybil had been summoned to Miss Wilson and would join the rest of them later.

“At Welsen some people slept in the Chalet proper and some in the Annexe, but here we’re all in the Chalet, which saves time in the morning!” Blossom grinned irreverently, and Gwendoline sighed in relief. “That’s our bather, cold or chill off in the morning. Not hot under any circumstances. And in here is our room.”

The girls crowded through the doorway, gazing approvingly at the room which slept six girls. The room was divided by wooden partitions which were curtained off from the main part of the room by flowered cretonne curtains. Each contained a bed, a narrow wardrobe, a chest of drawers and bureau. The cosy space was completed by a bedroom chair, and a light wicker one so girls could sit in comfort.

“Choose your own,” Blossom said. “I’m off up this end – oh and leave one for Sybil, she’ll be joining us later, once she’s had a good catch-up with Miss Wilson.”

Gwendoline looked around uncertainly, as did another new girl, Arabella Wentworth by name. Rachel headed calmly for one of the cubicles next to the door and began to unpack her case. Clare Fenton, who had been at the English branch of the Chalet School, swithered for a moment before heading for one of the cubicles in the middle of the room.

“Are we to have dormitory prefects?” she asked of Blossom.

“No,” Blossom replied cheerfully. “No prefects at all.”

“Gosh, that’ll be different,” Clare said. “I suppose unpacking’s the same as it ever was. And is visiting allowed? We’ve got two chairs each.”

“I suppose we can visit – Bill will tell us later. But you’re right about the unpacking, Matron Rider’s a dear, but she’s terribly strict,” Blossom said, emerging from her cubicle to find Gwendoline and Arabella standing there gaping. “Haven’t you too chosen cubey’s yet? No? Right – Gwen you take that one opposite Clare, and Arabella you take that one opposite Rachel.”

Gwendoline half opened her mouth to protest against the abbreviation of her beloved name, but decided against it. After all, she reasoned, she may enjoy being Gwen here.

She entered her small domain and looked around approvingly.

“It’s nice to be private,” she called to no-one in particular. “We had beds in a row at Malory Towers.”

“Golly how ghastly, we’ve always had cubeys at the Chalet,” Clare said. “What about everyone else?”

“I went to a day school,” Rachel said.

“Oh is this your first time away from home?” Blossom asked. “It can be frightful at first.”

“I shall cope,” Rachel said serenely, attending to her unpacking with ease, placing items deftly in drawers. Soon her unpacking was done, the last items being a large pile of books and a photograph of a rather stern man in a silver frame.

“Is that you father?” Clare asked, looking around the room nosily as her own unpacking was finished.

“Yes,” said Rachel shortly. “What do we do now?”

“Go back to the common room I expect. Do you remember the way?” Blossom asked.

“Yes thank you,” Rachel said, turning on her heel and departing.

“Queer fish that one,” Blossom remarked to Clare. “Be a lamb and help Arabella with her unpacking. I’ll take Gwen in hand.”

Gwendoline flushed with pleasure to be so singled out. “Actually I’m nearly done,” she said. “But if you could just make sure I’ve got it right…”

“A place for everything and everything in its place,” Blossom said with a grin. “That’s what Matey – our old Matron at the Chalet School – used to say. It looks like you’ve got it absolutely right. Don’t you have any books?”

“No, I didn’t know we were allowed to bring any,” Gwen fibbed.

“Never mind – we’ll lend,” Blossom consoled her. “And the library’s supposed to be jolly good. Auntie Jo’s donated a copy of each of her books, and two copies of the popular ones.”

“I’ll look forward to it.”

“Good-o, now let’s see what Clare and Arabella are up to.” Blossom left Gwendoline’s cubicle and entered Arabella’s without warning.

“You have to put it there,” Clare was explaining.

“Why at home we always do it this way!” Arabelle protested.

Blossom took a hand. “Well you’re not at home now, and we do it this way.”

Gwendoline watched in awe as Blossom competently sorted Arabella’s belongings into the correct drawers, overriding her protests.

“There we’re all done. Now come along,” Blossom said leading the way out the door. Gwendoline trotted along beside her and Arabella trailed behind.

“Where did you come from then?” Gwendoline demanded of Arabella, once they were in the common room.

“Well Daddy’s estate is in Devon, but Mummy and I spend most of our time at our townhouse is London,” Arabella said.

“Gracious that sounds fascinating,” Gwendoline gasped. “Won’t you miss it?”

“Oh terribly,” Arabella replied. “But Mummy simply insisted that I came here – she said most men want finished wives nowadays, so here I am.”

“Do you want to marry soon then?” Gwendoline asked.

“Hi you two, we don’t talk about that sort of thing here,” Blossom interrupted.

“Whyever not?” Arabella questioned. “Why at home, Mummy and I talk of nothing else!”

“Well we don’t,” Blossom said crushingly. “We’re not here to learn how to attract a husband.”

“Oh,” Arabella said, rather blankly. “Well what are we here to learn?”

“I don’t know,” Gwendoline said. “This doesn’t seem a bit like Malory Towers. It doesn’t have a swimming pool for starters.”

“Oh are you keen on swimming?” Blossom said. “We swim in the Thun – that’s the lake in the valley. But we can only do that in the summer because otherwise it would be freezing. It’s spring-fed you see.”

“What a shame,” Gwendoline cried. “I simply adored swimming at school.”

“Wasn’t it terribly bad for your hair?” Arabella said, condescendingly.

Gwendoline wrinkled her nose, torn between wanting to impress Blossom and seem as sophisticated as Arabella.

“Not if you wash it after swimming,” Blossom cut in. “Isn’t that right, Gwen?”

Gwendoline nodded sagely. “It never did my hair any harm,” she added, shaking her head. “See?”

Arabella was forced to admit that no, it evidently hadn’t done Gwendoline’s hair any harm at all.

“I shall miss swimming,” Gwendoline sighed theatrically.

I shall miss my horses,” Arabella sighed equally theatrically. “And it’s bound to be terribly cold here. I feel sure we shall end up with pneumonia.”

“And feathers on our beds, instead of blankets. It wasn’t like that at Malory Towers. Matron wouldn’t hear of feathers,” said Gwendoline, who was inclined to be chilly at night.

Arabella and Gwendoline passed the time complaining quietly to each other in the corner until Blossom checked the large clock hanging on the wall.

“Golly. Twenty-two o’clock already. We’d best be making tracks for bed,” she exclaimed.

Gwendoline looked puzzled at this use of continental time. “It wasn’t like that at Malory Towers…” she began.

“Well you aren’t AT Malory Towers now, are you?” Rachel cut in. “You’re here and you’d best abide by the rules.”

The former Chaletians looked both surprised and pleased at this intervention. As a rule new girls were given to complain about either the rules, or the use of European timing, but Rachel seemed to be fitting in perfectly. She just wasn’t overly sociable.

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“Gwendoline?”

Gwendoline looked up from the magazine she had been perusing to see Miss Culver standing over her wearing a strained expression.

“Yes, Miss Culver?” Gwendoline said, idly turning a page.

“Miss Wilson will see you now?” Miss Culver said, a trifle put out by Gwendoline’s apparent lack of interest.

“Of course, Miss Culver,” Gwendoline simpered. “Where should I go?”

“To Miss Wilson’s study,” the secretary said pleasantly. “Do you think you can find your way, or shall I take you there?”

“Would you be so kind as to take me?” Gwendoline said. “I haven’t quite got my bearings yet. I’m sure it took me until my third year at Malory Towers to find my way around.”

“Well you’re only here for a year, so you’d best learn quickly,” Miss Culver smiled. “It’s not that bad once you get used to it. This way, please.”

Gwendoline followed the young woman through the passages of the Chalet to the small annexe where the offices and staffroom were. As the passed the staffroom Miss Culver popped her head through the door and Gwendoline caught a glimpse of a bright, airy room, not unlike their own common room, with comfortable chairs to one side and desks to the other.

“Pour me a cup of coffee, Julie,” Miss Culver called. “I’ll be along in just a moment. Miss Wilson wants to see the last of the new girls before Kaffee und Kuchen.”

Gwendoline’s blood boiled. To be left until last was an insult to her way of thinking. Little did she realise that Miss Wilson had deliberated long and hard before placing her, and she had been left until last because she was to go wherever there was space.

“Come in, Gwendoline,” Miss Wilson said, as she saw Gwendoline’s golden head poking nervously around the door. “Please, sit down.”

Gwendoline obediently sat in the chair indicated and waited quietly for Miss Wilson to speak. Miss Wilson carefully replaced the paper she had been reading on pile to one side of her desk. She placed her hands on the desk in front of her and leaned forwards.

“I have a report from your former headmistress, Miss Grayling,” Miss Wilson said, observing the girl carefully.

Gwendoline coloured a little, but her features remained smooth.

“She wrote to tell me that had you not been forced to leave Malory Towers prematurely, you were to take your Higher Certificate in the summer. Is that correct?”

“Yes,” Gwendoline gasped, relieved that the letter, as far as she knew, had said no more about her school career than that.

Miss Wilson noted the girl’s flushed face, but said nothing.

“Now as I’m sure you know here at St Mildred’s we divide the girls up into three groups, each named after a saint. St Ursula, where the girls specialise in languages, literature and arts; St Barbara, where the girls specialise in Geography and Botany, although of course they do have some lectures on languages and literature; and St Agnes which is class specifically for younger girls, or those who have not taken their Higher Certificate.”

Again Miss Wilson paused, watching carefully for any sign of a reaction from Gwendoline. She saw none.

“Now in light of these facts, and taking into account the letter Miss Grayling sent in addition to your mother’s wishes, we have decided to try you in St Ursula, as you should be up to standard. However if you are finding the work too challenging then we shall have to reconsider. Do you have any questions?”

“Please, Miss Wilson,” Gwendoline said properly, “Sybil Russell said that we don’t have form lists here? Or marks. How will I know whether I am up to standard or not?”

Miss Wilson smiled. “Just because we do not have form lists does not mean your work will not be marked. The mistresses will put comments on your work which should give you some idea of what is expected and whether you are coping or not.”

“I shall cope,” Gwendoline thought. “I’m just the sort of person that does. And all these continental girls won’t know a thing.”

“Now have the girls explained the rules to you?” Miss Wilson asked.

“Most of them, I suppose. I shan’t find them too difficult,” Gwendoline said diffidently.

Miss Wilson smiled slightly. “Oh that’s good,” she replied warmly. “Most girls find writing their essays in a foreign language such a trial. Still, I’m sure you’ll do admirably. Off you go, dear. I expect I shall see you at Abendessen.”

Gwendoline stood, a horrified look on her face which Miss Wilson failed to notice, reaching as she was for a pile of correspondence.

Author:  francesn [ Wed May 31, 2006 12:26 am ]
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New bit!

Lectures began the Tuesday, which happened to be a German day in the school. Gwendoline, having already professed that she did not speak a single word of the language was treated kindly by Blossom and Sybil who endeavoured to speak slowly and clearly, providing translations whenever Gwendoline seemed lost, which appeared to be most of the time. Clare Fenton, a former pupil of the English branch of the Chalet School where they kept to the school’s trilingual tradition found that her German was well up to standard and Arabella got by mostly by copying what the others did and remaining silent until it was time for lectures.

It was left to Rachel Matthews to provide the dormitory with its first shock. When addressed slowly and clearly by Sybil, who naturally assumed that Rachel being English and not a former pupil at the Chalet School did not speak any German, she was told in icy tones and flawless German that she was very able to cope by herself. In fact Blossom Willoughby was heard to admit later that Rachel’s accent was far better than her own despite living in Switzerland and the Chalet School’s insistence on proper pronunciation.

Rachel continued to astound the assembled company at Fruhstuck by taking part in the lively conversation between the Chalet girls in fluent and idiomatic German. When conversation turned to school matters she engaged in a detailed analysis of German politics with the one German national in the school, Elsa Brandt, who seemed delighted by Rachel’s attention.

After Fruhstuck the girls attended to their cubicle chores and much as Arabella attempted to protest that there was no need for her to speak German when they were on their own she was soon squashed by Rachel of all people, who informed her in that language they were old enough to be trusted to keep the rules, and speaking German was a rule therefore Arabella must abide by it. Arabella, faced with this fluent stream which she was quite unable to understand, merely looked at her blankly. Rather than providing a translation however Rachel calmly turned back to her own dormitory work and left Arabella on the verge of tears. Sybil and Blossom looked at each other in consternation but there was nothing they could do. Rachel left the dormitory as soon as she had completed her work, without waiting for any of the other girls and when Sybil arrived in the lecture room with Gwendoline she found Rachel sitting perfectly composed in the front row with pen and paper at the ready.

Sybil drew Gwendoline gently to the middle row and installed her at a desk.

“I shall sit at this desk, and Blossom next to me,” Sybil said slowly in German, and suited the action to her words.

The girls came in by twos and threes settling themselves as they pleased, but for the most part avoiding the front row where Rachel sat in solitary state. It fell to Arabella Wentworth, who had dawdled over her dormitory work most of the time vocalising in English her disgust that they should perform chores, Bronwen Evans and Heulwen Jones, two quiet Welsh girls who had found in each other an immediate friend due in no small part to their shared heritage, and a rather bossy girl who had come from the English branch of the Chalet School, one Majorie Jenkins, to complete the front row.

Blossom, coming in with Arabella looked around immediately for Sybil who patted the desk next to her with a chummy grin.

“Vielen danke!” Blossom exclaimed, slipping into her seat. “Ich habe gedacht, dass ich in der vorderen Reihe sitzen müsste!”*

Gwendoline frowned, and resolved to learn German as quickly as possible. She did so dislike being left out of the chatter going on around her.

*I thought I would have to sit in the front row![/i]

Author:  KathrynW [ Wed May 31, 2006 12:54 am ]
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Thanks Fran, I think I sort of lost this on the old board so it's great to see it back. It's brilliant!

Kathryn

Author:  Lesley [ Wed May 31, 2006 5:49 am ]
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I didn't see this before - or at least not after the first part - very interesting. Can't believe that Bill doesn't know everything about Gwendoline - am sure that Miss Grayling would have told her all about Gwen's stay at Malory Towers. Your new characters are also intriguing - want to know more about both Rachel and Arabella.

Thanks Fran.

Author:  LizB [ Wed May 31, 2006 10:40 am ]
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Yay! Good to see this back :D

Thanks, Fran

Author:  JustJen [ Wed May 31, 2006 3:27 pm ]
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Yeah! It's great to see this story back.

Author:  Lisa [ Wed May 31, 2006 4:22 pm ]
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Just found this for the first time, looking forward to seeing how Gwendoline Mary's character progresses ... she seems to be doing OK so far (for her!) I wonder who will get slapped ... :twisted:

Thanks, this is great!

Author:  Chair [ Wed May 31, 2006 4:55 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I'm glad that Gwendoline didn't have to sit in the front row.

Author:  Rosy-Jess [ Wed May 31, 2006 6:50 pm ]
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Have also just found this for the first time. It's fab Fran

Author:  Chelsea [ Wed May 31, 2006 6:56 pm ]
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Chelsea with mod hat on - have moved this as requested from St. Clare's.

Author:  Liane [ Wed May 31, 2006 6:59 pm ]
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Great to see this back! Thanks fran.

Author:  Jennie [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 11:44 am ]
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It's great to see this back, thanks Fran. I suspect the girls will soon see through Gwendoline and treat her accordingly.

Author:  MaryR [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 1:17 pm ]
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I've just read the whole lot, Frances, and had great fun.

Thank you.

Author:  francesn [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:03 pm ]
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Thanks Chelsea

“I am glad we can speak English today,” Gwendoline sighed as they completed their dormitory work the following morning. “I found it ever so difficult yesterday. But thankfully I speak a bit of French so tomorrow shouldn’t be too bad.”

“That’s good,” Blossom said supportively. “You’ll pick up German in no time at all though, speaking nothing but it two days a week. And Mademoiselle Berne is frightfully jolly, if you ask her to she’ll give you lists of words to learn each day and that’ll help no end.”

“Which one is Mamzelle Berne?” Gwendoline asked.

“Mademoiselle,” Blossom corrected. “I’ll point her out to you later. Where on earth did you learn such frightful pronunciation, my girl?”

Gwendoline looked confused. “But that was what we called the French teachers at Malory Towers. They were Mam’zelle Dupont and Mam’zelle Rougier.”

Blossom frowned slightly.

Gwendoline went on, warming to her theme. “We used to have such fun playing tricks on them. Alicia would get boxes and boxes of tricks from her brothers and we’d play them on Mam’zelle Dupont. Of course I always thought it terribly cruel,” she said, catching sight of the identical horrified expressions sported by Blossom and Sybil.

“Well you’ll have none of that here,” Sybil warned.

“Oh gracious no,” Gwendoline said. “Why we’re here to learn how to become young ladies, not to waste our time playing immature tricks on the mistresses.”

“I wouldn’t have put it quite like that,” Blossom murmured.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:07 pm ]
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Hmmm, slightly different type of culture here!

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Chair [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:08 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. It's interesting to see Blossom and Sybil's views on the tricks and the pronounciation of the names of the French mistresses.

Author:  grover [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 8:30 pm ]
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This is great, Fran. Rachel is a bit of an enigma...wonder what her story is?

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jun 01, 2006 9:10 pm ]
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:lol: at the comments about the pronunciation - I'd never thought of that before!

Author:  Tara [ Fri Jun 02, 2006 12:12 am ]
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Love the contrast between the MT and CS attitudes to 'foreign' staff! Very aptly put.

Looking forward to more about Rachel and Gwendoline.

Thanks, Fran.

Author:  LizB [ Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:02 am ]
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Was Gwen able to roll her Rrrrrs to the satisfaction of Mamzelle?

And what will Mademoiselle have to say about them?

Thanks, Fran :D

Author:  Pollyana [ Sat Jun 03, 2006 4:49 pm ]
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Fantastic to see this one back! One of those I was really enjoying :)
Looking forward to the next bit......

Author:  KathrynW [ Sat Jun 03, 2006 7:37 pm ]
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Brilliant Fran, thank you :D

Kathryn

Author:  Carolyn P [ Mon Jun 05, 2006 10:28 pm ]
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Didn't see this before, but enjoying it greatly now. Thanks Fran.

Author:  Kate [ Tue Jun 06, 2006 10:11 am ]
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Oh YAY, this is back! :) Thanks Fran!

Author:  Elle [ Tue Jun 06, 2006 11:42 am ]
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I am so glad that this is back!


Thank you so much.

Author:  Kate [ Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:56 pm ]
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*wonders if we shall have more* 8)

Author:  Helen P [ Mon Jun 19, 2006 5:41 pm ]
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I've just found this, Fran! It is wonderful and I do hope there will be more soon!

Thank you.

Author:  jonty [ Sat Jul 01, 2006 3:18 pm ]
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I've just found this - it's great, thanks Fran :)

I always felt sorry for Gwen at MT - I hope she manages to enjoy herself at St Millie's, even though it's not looking promising at the moment. Perhaps she'll cut straight to the chase and meet a doctor husband??? :lol:

Author:  francesn [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 2:32 pm ]
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Gwendoline decided to take Blossom’s advice and sought out Mademoiselle Berne. She had hoped that the French mistress would take to her in the way dear Mam’zelle Dupont at Malory Towers had. She was just Mam’zelle Dupont’s type, long golden hair with big blue eyes that could fill with tears at a moment’s notice and trembling bottom lip. It had served her well with the soft-hearted Mam’zelle, but Mademoiselle Berne was quite a different matter.

Petite, brisk, neat and youthful Mademoiselle Berne was the complete opposite of Mam’zelle Dupont who could only be described as comfortably plump and untidy. Mademoiselle Berne’s idea of correct French grammar and pronunciation was also considerably different to the views held by Mam’zelle Dupont, as Gwendoline was about to find out.

“Mademoiselle Berne,” Gwendoline exclaimed breathlessly, paying careful attention to the pronunciation of the Mistress’s name. “Blossom a dire à moi que vous pouvoir aider moi avec le Francais et l’Alleman. Je n’ai pas apprends l’Alleman a Malory Towers.”

As she said this Gwendoline widened her eyes in an expression of eagerness and innocence and regarded the French mistress hopefully. Mademoiselle Berne in turn stared at the English girl suspiciously. Gwendoline had not come to St Mildred’s with a reputation for seeking out extra work but the Chalet School believed in giving girls a fresh start so Mademoiselle Berne gladly agreed to give Gwendoline a list of ten words in each language to learn every day.

“Would you like me to set you grammatical exercises too?” Mademoiselle Berne asked kindly.

“Oh yes please,” Gwendoline said enthusiastically.

The sooner she could understand the gossip in German the better.

Author:  leahbelle [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 2:41 pm ]
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I wonder if Gwen quite realises what she's letting herself in for!

Author:  Elle [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 2:51 pm ]
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*sings "It has been updated! It has been updated!*


*dances round the room to the mystification of yr 10*


Thanks Fran!

Author:  KathrynW [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 2:55 pm ]
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*joins in with Elle's song*

Thank you Fran :D

Author:  Aquabird [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 3:13 pm ]
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Wow, this is fantastic Fran!

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 3:54 pm ]
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Glad this is back!

Author:  Chair [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 3:56 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I wonder if Gwendoline will keep up with learning all the new words.

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 4:21 pm ]
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Hooray! Some more!

Thanks, Fran.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Jul 13, 2006 5:05 pm ]
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Gwen's in for a shock! :lol:

Thanks Fran

Author:  Jennie [ Fri Jul 14, 2006 1:21 pm ]
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He he, looking forward to Gwen realising how different it is at the CS.

Author:  LizB [ Sat Jul 29, 2006 2:03 pm ]
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Nice to see her keen to learn - and love her motivation :lol:

Thanks Fran!

Author:  francesn [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:31 pm ]
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“Gwendoline!” Sybil Russell called. “Gwendoline Lacey!”

Gwendoline, who had been sulking in the summer house after receiving feedback on one of her poorer attempts at an essay, cheered up a little and called back to Sybil.

“Do you want to come for a walk down to the village?” Sybil asked.

“Can we?” Gwendoline asked doubtfully.

“We most certainly can, and equally we may,” Sybil giggled. “If only Auntie Hilda could hear me now, she was dead nuts against wrong uses of can and may!”

“Auntie Hilda?” Gwendoline queried.

“Well I should call her Miss Annersley in school really, she’s the head of the school proper – I’m sure you’ll see her at some point. She and Miss Wilson are great friends,” Sybil replied. “Anyway, let’s go up to the dormy and fetch our purses and hats. And we can catch Blossom on the way.”

Gwendoline gladly agreed and linked her arm through Sybil’s, drawing her towards the school. They found Blossom in the dormitory accompanied by Rachel.

“Would you like to come down to the village, Rachel?” Sybil asked pleasantly, fully expecting a polite refusal.

“That would be very nice, thank you,” Rachel said warmly.

Blossom and Sybil exchanged quick glances of shock but schooled their faces back to a smooth expression quickly. They collected their hats and purses, and set off companionably for the village.

“Do you like Switzerland so far, Rachel?” Blossom asked.

“It is certainly very pleasant,” Rachel said stiffly.

“And what do you think of the school?” Blossom tried again.

“It is certainly different,” Rachel replied.

“Certainly,” Sybil said quietly to Gwendoline walking beside her, who tittered.

“Is this the village?” Rachel asked Blossom, ignoring Gwendoline and Sybil completely.

“Yes, it is,” Blossom said, inwardly finding the conversation rather strained. “Shall we go to the Post Office first. I want some stamps.”

“I’d like a picture card to send to Mother,” Gwendoline said. “And Miss Winter too I suppose.”

“They’re frightfully expensive,” Sibyl warned.

“Oh that won’t be a problem,” Gwendoline said carelessly. “Mother simply loaded me with cash. Of course she always did when I was at Malory Towers but they were so stingy, we were barely allowed any.”

“Well we had rationed pocket money at the Chalet School too,” Blossom said briskly. “It’s quite usual, you know. It’s only here that Bill thinks we should learn to manage our own money.”

“Oh and she’s quite right,” Gwen said hastily.

“Isn’t it rather unfair on the girls who don’t have so much money?” Rachel queried gently though. “Surely the other system was fairer for them.”

Blossom and Sibyl exchanged glances. Rachel certainly was a surprising girl and neither of them could quite figure her out. They liked most of what they saw of Gwendoline, appreciating that she sometimes blustered and boasted because she so desperately wanted to be liked and accepted, but Rachel hadn’t seemed at all concerned about that at all. She was altogether self-sufficient, perfectly polite and appreciative of any attempts made to include her in conversation but never seeking out the company of other girls.

Author:  Caroline58 [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:37 pm ]
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Thanks for the update - and for being nice to Gwen!


Have deleted the double post - Elle with her (new!) mod hat on.

Author:  Helen P [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:42 pm ]
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Wonderful to see another episode of this! Thank you Fran. :D

Author:  Carolyn P [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:49 pm ]
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Nice to see a good side of Gwen.

Author:  Chair [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 9:58 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. It's good that Rachel decided to go with them.

Author:  Liane [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 10:02 pm ]
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It's so nice, having people be nice to Gwen. It makes you feel that she was never given a chance at MT, and could probably have been quite nice.
Thanks for the update Fran.

Author:  Aquabird [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 10:52 pm ]
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Thanks for the update! :D

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 11:26 pm ]
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Glad they're being nice to Gwen. I did a MT re-read recently and felt quite sorry for her. How come people always got away with pushing her in the pool and then dragging her under water?!

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Aug 16, 2006 11:38 pm ]
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Strange to see a nice side to Gwen - but it does make you think that perhaps she wasn't always given a decent chance at MT!

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:35 am ]
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I'm still wondering about Rachel, though. Thanks Fran.

Author:  LizB [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:16 pm ]
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francesn wrote:
“Isn’t it rather unfair on the girls who don’t have so much money?” Rachel queried gently though. “Surely the other system was fairer for them.”


Possibly if you're talking about young girls, but if Millies is going to prepare them for the outside world, surely making them aware that some people have more than others and for those with less to learn to manage with what they've got and for those with more to learn how to manage the amount they have is far better.

Thanks, Fran

Author:  ibarhis [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 2:54 pm ]
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I've just caught up with this, and it really seems to fit in with EBD's ethos of allowing girls to have a new start. Looking forward to seeing how it pans out!

Author:  Katherine [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 4:47 pm ]
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I think I am still at the stage of being brainwashed by Enid Blyton. Finding it very strange with Gwen being accepted like this. Poor thing!
Thanks Fran.

Author:  leahbelle [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:31 pm ]
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I'm also glad to see Gwen being given a chance. I hope she makes the best of it.

Author:  francesn [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:46 pm ]
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“Ooof I’m exhausted,” Gwendoline complained as they rounded the corner leading to the school following a strenuous pull up to the pretty building.

“Wait until we go on a proper ramble,” Blossom laughed. “That was a gentle stroll.”

“Oh don’t be a meanie,” Sibyl cried. “You know they go easy on us the first few weeks, especially new girls.”

“Of course, some of us are used to city living,” Rachel put in. “But I shall find the lengthy walks we are able to take most enjoyable.”

“Well we lived in the country and we never walked anywhere,” Gwen said, somewhat disgruntled. “There wasn’t anywhere to walk to!”

Blossom and Sybil refrained from commenting that you didn’t necessarily have to be going anywhere to have an enjoyable walk.

“Didn’t you like the fresh air, Gwendoline?” Rachel asked. “It’s one of the things I notice most about here – so clean and fresh smelling.”

“Well the air is lovely, and so beneficial for my complexion, but I can appreciate the air just as well sitting outside as I can getting all sweaty and exhausted scrambling around on a mountain,” Gwendoline said crossly.

“Oh girls,” Miss Nalder said as she came across them. “We’re just about to go for a gentle ramble – change into climbing kit and fetch your picnic from the kitchen.”

“We’ve just been for a walk,” Gwendoline muttered sulkily.

“Only a quick stroll down to the village,” Blossom said hastily before the mistress gained the impression that they had been breaking bounds.

Miss Nalder’s face, which had looked a little troubled at the news cleared immediately and she laughed. “That was a nice gentle warm-up for you girls then, now hurry up. We want to be off soon.”

“I don’t see why we should be made to go on another walk,” Gwen grumbled to herself. “We should be learning something useful, like flower arranging. This is supposed to be a finishing school after all and it seems exactly like school.”

Author:  LizB [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 10:11 pm ]
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Oh dear - hope the walk isn't toooo strenuous for Gwen!

Thanks, Fran

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 10:26 pm ]
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Well they did do an awful lot of walking at the CS ... :lol: !

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Aug 17, 2006 10:31 pm ]
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Gwen should stop complaining or she'll destroy all the good impressions she's made recently! :lol:

Thanks Fran

Author:  Ruth B [ Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:20 pm ]
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Flower arranging? Useful? Huh!

Author:  tiffinata [ Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:16 am ]
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Ruth B wrote:
Flower arranging? Useful? Huh!


Maybe Gwen would like a job in a florist? :D

Author:  Chair [ Sun Aug 20, 2006 8:56 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I hope that Fran will get used to the walking.

Author:  Elle [ Fri Aug 25, 2006 6:48 pm ]
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Ruth B wrote:
Flower arranging? Useful? Huh!



Judging from the look on my mothers face when she saw my latest effort at flower arranging - put flowers in right hand, vase in left, shove - I think it might be quite a good thing to be able to do!


Thanks for the updates Fran.

Author:  LizB [ Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:37 pm ]
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They seem to be on a very long walk ...

*hinting just a little*

Author:  francesn [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 12:09 am ]
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sorry about the 10 day walk! Here's a nice long update to make up for it, but don't think drabble-bouncing will always get you results, Liz dear!

“Oh do keep up, Gwendoline,” Miss Culver cried, exasperated, as she looked back over her shoulder to Gwendoline toiling up the gentle path.

“I’m tired,” Gwendoline complained breathlessly.

“Well we’ll have a rest in a moment, when we come to somewhere suitable,” Miss Culver compromised, casting her eye around for such a resting place. The other girls were steaming ahead, except Arabella who was mincing along just in front of Miss Culver, Bronwen Evans, who was inclined to be artistic and dawdled along admiring the scenery accompanied by her good friend Heulwen Jones who was discussing the lecture they had had on Shakespeare with Nan Herbert.

Gwendoline speeded up her pace slightly, mopping her pink face with a handkerchief as she did so. She was feeling distinctly breathless and her heart was hammering away in her chest in exactly the manner it had at Malory Towers when she had been forced to partake in a strenuous game of lacrosse. In fact her rapid heart rate, whilst entirely normal, was alarming Gwen somewhat.

Gillian Culver, not an entirely insensitive young woman, looked at Gwen slightly askance but concluded it was simply the unaccustomed exercise which brought the flush to Gwendoline’s cheeks. In her opinion the girl could do with slimming down a little, and the way she gorged herself at meals was certainly less than healthy. A little exercise would do her the world of good Miss Culver decided judiciously and, although there was a little break in the path ahead where the girls might have rested, she decided to press on a little further until they reached the meadow where they planned to picnic.

By the time Miss Wilson and the rest of the staff with the girls who accompanied them were settling down to the delicious picnic of meat pies and crisp lettuce with fruit to follow, Gwendoline was feeling distinctly uncomfortable. Gillian Culver was also more than a little concerned about the shade of Gwendoline’s complexion. She was beginning to regret her decision to press on and not allow Gwendoline to rest. Gwendoline for her part seeing the worried look on the secretary’s face decided to embellish upon her act a little.

“Please may I sit down?” she implored. “I do feel faint and my heart feels funny.”

This had the effect of stopping Miss Culver in her tracks. “Your heart?” she repeated. “Are you quite sure?”

Gwendoline pressed her hand to her chest and nodded, acting as though she was too fatigued to speak.

“How does it feel, Gwendoline?” Miss Culver asked, her expression clouding.

“It feels…..fluttery,” Gwendoline replied.

Miss Culver looked around and, spying Nan and Heulwen stopped just a little way up the path, hailed them. Nan came running immediately.

“Can I help, Miss Culver?” she asked, noting the look of Miss Culver’s face and Gwendoline’s fatigue.

“Yes, Gwenoline is feeling unwell,” Miss Culver explained. “Could you run ahead and fetch Miss Wilson, and tell her to bring – oh- Blossom Willoughby and Clare Fenton with her?”

If Nan was puzzled by Gill Culver’s request she did not show it, merely heading off up the path at her best pace. Miss Culver did her best to make Gwendoline comfortable, offering her a drink of water and allowing her to sit with her back against a tree.

Soon Miss Wilson arrived and Gill Culver quickly explained the situation. A look of surprise played across Miss Wilson’s handsome features but she agreed that it was best to take no risks and despatched Blossom and Clare, both of whom were good runners, to the San along the Platz to fetch a doctor and an ambulance.

“Gwendoline,” Miss Wilson said gently, “we’ve sent for an ambulance. How are you feeling now?”

To tell the truth Gwendoline was feeling as right as rain but she allowed her eyelids to flutter slightly and replied in a weak voice, “I feel simply dreadful.”

Miss Wilson and Miss Culver exchanged worried glances but settled down to wait.

Author:  Kate [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 12:29 am ]
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Gwen up to her old tricks... I feel bad for her, but she does bring trouble onto herself.

Thanks Fran!

Author:  Chair [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 12:37 am ]
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Thanks, Fran. I wonder which of the doctors will come.

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:43 am ]
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That was Gwen all over!

She never got to be rescued by a handsome doctor at MT though .... :lol:

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:43 am ]
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Hmmmm, I hope Gwen will be cured of this - I was actually starting to feel sorry for her - don't think the doctors or Matron will be fooled.

Thanks Fran.

Author:  LizB [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 10:51 am ]
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Oh Gwen, did you not learn your lesson last time you tried that trick!

Thanks, Fran :D

Author:  Fatima [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 2:45 pm ]
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How mean worrying Gill like that. :roll:
Thanks Fran, I'm really enjoying this story, so please don't make us wait too long to see Gwen rescued by a (hopefully!) handsome doctor.

Author:  Aquabird [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:25 pm ]
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Ohhh, I'd love to see Matey get her hands on Gwen! :twisted:

Thanks, Fran.

Author:  Elle [ Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:50 pm ]
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And it was all going so well... sort of!

Author:  KathrynW [ Sun Sep 24, 2006 2:07 pm ]
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I think we might be due for some more of this Fran? I did wonder if Gwen's heart might start playing up again...thank you, am really enjoying this and I think you've got Gwen spot on

Author:  wheelchairprincess [ Mon Oct 23, 2006 1:14 pm ]
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Just found this and I think it's brilliant. I will have to re-read MT though! Any chance of some more?

Author:  Loryat [ Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:02 pm ]
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Heh heh I just found this! I like that the CS girls are a bit nicer to Gwen than the Malory Towers ones, but personally I never really lived Gwen as a character, though I felt sorry for her since she was so despised. She had a really nasty streak in her. Of course, a lot of her behaviour is mainly her parents' and Miss Winter's fault!

Author:  francesn [ Thu Nov 09, 2006 9:07 pm ]
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Sorry for the complete lack of updates - RL is being supremely pants and thus not much is getting done/written. Once everything's sorted I plan to get back on track though.

Glad everyone's enjoyed it so far!

Author:  Ruth [ Wed Nov 29, 2006 10:55 pm ]
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Hope real life settles down - I only found this today and am loving it. I always liked Malory Towers and this is proving to be a smashing sequel

Author:  francesn [ Mon Apr 02, 2007 11:10 pm ]
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When the ambulance arrived Miss Wilson insisted on accompanying Gwen to the San herself and sent Miss Culver back to rejoin the others with Blossom and Clare, both of whom were under strict orders to say nothing about the incident to anyone. Blossom looked a trifle disappointed at this edict but knew better than to even consider disobeying Bill.

The ambulance arrived with Dr Graves in what seemed like no time at all to Gwen but an eternity to Miss Wilson who was mentally composing herself for the inevitable telephone call to Gwendoline’s mother, who, from what Miss Wilson had seen, was a rather weak character.

“No, no, don’t exert yourself, Gwendoline,” Dr Graves said, a frown creasing his forehead. “Nell, a word?”

Gwen allowed herself to be carried down to the ambulance by the brawny Joseph, who settled her comfortable on a trolley in the back.

“Is there anything in her medical history?” Dr Graves asked.

“Not that I know of,” Nell replied. “Do you think it’s serious?”

“Well she looks fine to me,” Dr Graves said. “How did she look when you found her?”

“Well she was quite flushed and her breathing was laboured…” Nell frowned. “You don’t think there’s anything wrong, do you?”

“To be honest, I don’t,” Phil Graves said decidedly. “But we’ll check her out just to be safe. Come on.”

The pair made their way down to the ambulance where Gwen was lying on the trolley, seemingly fine. Nell and Dr Graves exchanged glances.

………………………….

“Nothing wrong with you,” the doctor pronounced cheerfully. “Probably just over-exterted yourself a little, which is good. Lots more walks will get you into shape!”

Gwen decided to back down gracefully. “I suppose I’m just not used to all the exercise,” she admitted.

“I thought Malory Towers had an excellent reputation for sport,” Miss Wilson said, a little sharply.

“Well, yes, we did of course,” Gwen blustered, “but I was never good enough to get into any of the teams and if you weren’t in the teams no-one bothered with you.”

Miss Wilson frowned but said nothing in response to that comment.

“If there’s nothing wrong we’d better walk back to St Mildred’s,” she said instead. “Come on!”

“But…but…I’ve just been taken to hospital,” Gwen protested. “Surely I shouldn’t be walking around the Platz.”

“Didn’t you hear what the doctor said?” was Miss Wilson’s response. “There’s nothing wrong with you so stop being silly. And the walk will do you good.”

Author:  Aquabird [ Mon Apr 02, 2007 11:21 pm ]
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Heh, you tell her, Bill! :twisted:

Thank you for the update, Fran! :D

Author:  Tara [ Mon Apr 02, 2007 11:33 pm ]
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She'll not get much change from Bill, will she!

Lovely to have this back, hope RL continues to calm down.

Author:  JustJen [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:49 am ]
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Wee, an update!
thanks Francesn

Author:  Fatima [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:50 am ]
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Poor Gwen - having to walk home from the san!

Nice to see more of this, thanks Fran.

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:10 am ]
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That's a few miles, isn't it? Wonder if Nell will write to Malory Towers to get a full report...


Thanks Fran - good to see more of this. :lol:

Author:  Liane [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:41 am ]
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Good to see this. Thanks Fran. I hope the bunny stays for a while!

Author:  Clare [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:51 am ]
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Yay! I found this the other day and was hoping for more :D Thanks for the update Francesn.

Author:  Ruth B [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:55 am ]
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Hehe! Good to see this back Fran!

Author:  Elle [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:51 pm ]
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Hurrah!


*dances around full of glee because of the update*

Author:  leahbelle [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:48 pm ]
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Great to see this back! Thanks, fran.

Author:  Liz K [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:51 pm ]
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This is excellent. Bet fireworks'll go off if Matey gets involved!!!!!

:roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:

Author:  francesn [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:11 pm ]
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From that day forth no excuse would suffice to get Gwendoline out of a walk. The mistresses were extra-vigilant and somehow the other girls had worked out what was going on. Despite Miss Wilson’s edict Blossom had not been able to resist telling Sybil at least an edited version of events when Miss Wilson returned with Gwendoline, hale and hearty.

“Miss Culver looked panicked,” Blossom whispered. “And we had to go haring off to get a doctor, but here she is right as rain.”

“I expect they were just being careful,” Sybil said peaceably. “You know how seriously they take our health here, and Gill, I mean, Miss Culver, doesn’t get in a stew easily. Besides she seems fine now…”

The girls fell silent as Rachel joined them.

“Oh don’t worry,” she said coolly in response to their guilty looks. “I’m not interested in your gossip. I just came over to see if you’d finished with that copy of Monsieur de Porceaugnac.”

“What? Oh, of course. Here,” Blossom replied hurriedly.

“Thanks,” Rachel said, before walking off.

“She’s very strange. There’s something, I don’t know, stand-offiish about her. She’s perfectly polite, but she never really wants to talk to any of us,” Blossom murmured.

“So self-contained. I suppose it’s because her mother died when she was very young, and her father’s been terribly busy with his research.” Sybil agreed. “But she’s very clever and pretty sensible.”

“Oh yes, definitely sensible,” Blossom nodded.

“Who is?” Gwendoline asked, appeared behind them.

The girls jumped and for the second time that day sported guilty looks. They exchanged glances as Blossom opened her mouth.

“Miss Wilson,” she said smoothly. “Very sensible, don’t you agree, Gwendoline?”

“Oh no!” Gwendoline cried, falling into the trap immediately. “I don’t think so at all! Why she made me walk nearly 5 miles when I’d only just come out of hospital, and I was feeling so shocked and delicate. I don’t call that sensible at all. When I was at Malory Towers we knew how to deal with girls who were delicate.”

“I’m sure the staff here are perfectly able to deal with delicate girls,” Blossom pointed out. “After all it is one of the reasons that so many girls come to the Chalet School. Many of them have folk in the San or have been ill in the past so wouldn’t do well in an ordinary school.”

“I wouldn’t say Malory Towers was an ordinary school,” Gwen said defensively. “It was a pretty decent place.”

“So why do you complain about it?” Blossom returned. “Seems you’re never satisfied with anything.”

“At least I don’t talk about people behind their backs,” Gwen said spitefully, conveniently forgetting that she had done exactly that in the past. “I know it wasn’t Bill you were talking about when I walked up, and I shall tell Rachel what you said about her!”

Turning on her heel, she headed for her dormitory with every intention of finding Rachel and telling her what she had heard.

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:17 pm ]
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Gwen you're not making friends and influencing people here!


Thanks Fran

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:14 pm ]
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Gwen going on about how good MT was - brilliant :lol: !

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 5:34 am ]
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Oh dear. She's not going to be well received by Rachel either. Poor Gwen.

Author:  LizB [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:18 am ]
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Poor Gwen, she's seizing the wrong opportunities, isn't she!

Still, I'm pinning my hopes to the title :D

Thanks, Fran

Author:  Miranda [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:31 am ]
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Um, Gwen.... that's probably not the best thing to do....

Author:  Helen P [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:01 am ]
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I'm so pleased to see this back, Fran, I'm really enjoying it! :D

Author:  Elle [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:42 am ]
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Oh dear me...


:poke: Gwendoline

Author:  francesn [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 12:01 pm ]
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Last update until I get back from holiday now! Feel free to nag after the 12th April!

“Don’t you care what they said about you?” Gwen asked, horrified.

“No, not really,” was Rachel’s response. “After all I’m only here for a year, and that’s to further my education before university.”

“Why didn’t you stay at your old school?” Gwen inquired nosily.

“I didn’t want to,” Rachel said calmly. “Besides it was a day school so that would have meant living at home for another year. Anyway, if you don’t mind I want to finish this play.”

Still undeterred Gwen continued her questioning. “Which play? What’s it about?”

“Monsieur de Porceaugnac, and if you’d done the literature prep you would know what it’s about. You’ve got until tomorrow to read it you know, and prepare the questions for discussion.”

Gwen flushed, and resolved to acquire an English translation of the play. Really she couldn’t think of anything worse than discussing a French play in German as she would be expected to do on the morrow. In fact languages weren’t proving to be Gwen’s forte, and she was too lazy to improve, for that matter science was another weak spot.

She spotted Arabella walking in the direction of the dormitory and hastened to join her.

“How are you feeling?” she asked solicitously, guessing correctly that the scowl on Arabella’s face had a story to tell and preparing to lend a sympathetic ear.

“That Miss Nalder,” Arabella spat. “She told me I had to start making more of an effort in my work, and I needed to join in the dancing we do in the evenings. I don’t call that sort of thing dancing, where I wanted to go we would have learnt to dance properly. I don’t call this hole a finishing school at all, but my aunt insisted I came here rather than the place Mummy wanted to send me. She said it might get some sense into me, and maybe a little knowledge too. I did pass my school certificate you know!”

“Are you finding the work here dreadfully hard?” Gwen probed. “I know I’m finding it frightful.”

“Oh I don’t bother with that,” Arabella replied. “Besides the girls here seem to put far too much store on brains and learning and that won’t help you net a husband.”

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 12:11 pm ]
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Oh, Gwen's going to get on famously with Arabella! Thanks Fran. Enjoy your holiday. :D

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 7:01 pm ]
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They sound quite well matched - and I was hoping we'd see the reformation of Gwen!


Thanks Fran.

Author:  Elle [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:32 pm ]
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Thanks Fran!

:poke: Gwendoline again.

Author:  Smile :) [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:05 pm ]
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Ooh this is good Fran, thanks!

Author:  Pollyana [ Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:07 am ]
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Is it the 12th yet? Polly dances up and down in anticipation, loving this one :)

Author:  Aquabird [ Fri Apr 06, 2007 3:49 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran, hope you have a good holiday. :D

Author:  leahbelle [ Sat Apr 07, 2007 3:48 pm ]
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Silly Gwen!

Author:  Jennie [ Sun Apr 08, 2007 9:22 am ]
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Poor Gwen, she still hasn't worked out that the CS won't tolerate that sort of thing.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:49 am ]
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Really enjoying this thanks

Author:  francesn [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 10:56 am ]
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Mrs Lacey coughed weakly into her handkerchief, sitting in her chair in the lounge. She sipped from the glass of water beside her and shivered a little despite the warmth of the room.

“Miss Winter,” she whispered. “Miss Winter, dear, could you ring the doctor? I think I must have the flu.”

Miss Winter rose at once and tucked the blanket around Mrs Lacey’s knees.

“You’re ever so thin,” Miss Winter worried. “Are you sure you don’t want something to eat?”

“No, I don’t have any appetite,” Mrs Lacey sighed. “Just get the doctor to come and see me. I just can’t seem to shake this stupid cold.”

Miss Winter went to the telephone immediately leaving Mrs Lacey sat in the chair quite breathless. This cold, which had taken hold of her shortly after Gwendoline had left for Switzerland, seemed to have settled in her chest. She could scarcely draw a breath without coughing, and despite the temperature of the room she was always chilly. Her appetite had vanished, along with all her energy and she spent her days tucked up by the fireside with only Miss Winter for company.

Miss Winter, having dutifully telephoned the surgery, returned to say that Dr Henderson would be calling round in the next hour. She regarded Mrs Lacey with concern – the once pretty and slender woman was now skeletal and pale. Her skin was translucent and she could barely move without inducing another bout of coughing. The women waited for the doctor’s arrival, Mrs Lacey weak and Miss Winter worried.

A knock on the door sent Miss Winter scuttling to answer it. She composed herself before opening the door but could not disguise the worried look on her face.

“How are you, Miss Winter?” Dr Henderson asked unctuously. “Are you well?”

“Oh yes, yes, I’m fine. A little tired, maybe a bit run-down I suppose. Mrs Lacey is very ill you know. It’s dreadful, really dreadful. I do hope you can do something for her… Mrs Lacey, the doctor’s here to see you.”

Mrs Lacey smiled and sat up a little straighter, the action precipitating a bout of coughing. Dr Henderson frowned as he crossed to room to sit by the invalid. Placing his large black case on the floor he took Mrs Lacey’s clammy hand. He studied her pale face intently, noting they grey tinge to her skin and the unnatural sparkle in her eyes.

“What do you think, Doctor?” Mrs Lacey asked attempting a smile. “Is it dreadfully bad?”

“I don’t like the sound of that cough,” Dr Henderson said brusquely. “I’d like to listen to your chest. How long has this been going on?”

“Oh ever since my dear daughter left for school. She’s in Switzerland, on the…” A bout of coughing interrupted Mrs Lacey’s speech.

“About six weeks ago, Doctor,” Miss Winter broke in. “And Mrs Lacey had been ever so run down before that, Mr Lacey’s death was a terrible shock. And Gwendoline was difficult about going to Switzerland. She didn’t want to go to St. Mildred’s at all. Yes she was difficult,” in response to Mrs Lacey’s shake of the head. “And you know she was!”

“I suppose you’ve been worried about your daughter,” the doctor said, finishing his examination.

“Oh yes, I’m sure she’s in very good hands, but it would be such a comfort to have her here,” Mrs Lacey responded. “I would go out and see her but I feel so dreadful…I don’t think I could stand the journey.”

The doctor stood up at last and turned to Miss Winter.

“I don’t suppose there’s any chance of a cup of tea?” he asked, a trifle apologetically.

“Oh of course,” came the reply and Miss Winter scuttled out the room to put the kettle on.


“Now this might come as a shock,” Doctor Henderson said, lowering himself into a nearby armchair, “but I don’t think you have the flu. And it’s certainly not a cold….”

Mrs Lacey looked at him hopefully and caught sight of his expression.

“It’s something terrible, isn’t it?” she asked nervously.

The doctor did not respond immediately.

“Oh Gwendoline,” Mrs Lacey sobbed. “She’s lost one parent already, is she to lose another? Oh what are we to do?!”

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:16 am ]
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Oh dear :( .

Author:  Aquabird [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:32 am ]
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:shock: That was an unexpected turn of events. Poor Mrs Lacey. :(

Author:  LizB [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:52 pm ]
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Oh dear. Poor Mrs Lacey. Will she be sent to the San?

Thanks, Fran

Author:  Elle [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 3:31 pm ]
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LizB wrote:
Oh dear. Poor Mrs Lacey. Will she be sent to the San?



And meet a nice Doctor and so get better and lumber Gwen with a stepfather who will be able to tell when she is putting on an illness?


Thanks for the update.

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:04 pm ]
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Poor Mrs Lacey. I hope she does go to the San.

Author:  Clare [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:27 pm ]
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It's going to be such a shock for Gwen. I hope she writes to Darrell to update her on how life is progressing.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:57 pm ]
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Poor Gwen - but at least Miss Winter seems to have developed a backbone.

Thanks Fran

Author:  arky72 [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:47 pm ]
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Just found this - and I love it! Thanks Fran, looking forward to more :D

Author:  francesn [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:31 pm ]
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“Gwendoline! Gwendoline Lacey!”

Gwen, sat in the summer house with a magazine resolutely pretended not to hear Marjorie Jenkins as she called through the grounds.

“Gwendoline!”

Gwen hunched her shoulders and stuck her fingers in her ears. She had no particular desire to talk to any of the Chalet Girls at all. Doubtless they were coming to invite her on one of the beastly walks they all seemed to enjoy in their leisure time, or it would be that horrid Rachel girl telling her to tidy her cubey, not that it was any business of Rachel’s what her things looked like. Arabella was, for once, applying herself to her work after a stinging letter from her father who had apparently threatened her with all sorts of things unless she actually learnt something. Gwen had formed quite an attachment to the sophisticated Arabella, who had up until this point failed to make any friends amongst the other girls, not realising that her inflated sense of self-importance and shallow self-centredness was the cause of the disdain with which she was viewed by everyone else.

“Gwendoline? Oh sorry Bronwen, I might have known you weren’t Gwenoline, I’ve never seen her read a thing. You haven’t seen Gwendoline Lacey have you?” Marjorie asked, nearly falling over Bronwen stretched out under the tree intent on her book.

“She was headed in the direction of the summer house,” Bronwen replied absently.

“Why can’t the silly goose hear me shouting then?” Majorie asked, exasperated, of no-one in particular. “Gwendoline!” she yelled.

Realising that perhaps she had better show herself or risk the sarcastic tongue of Majorie who didn’t spare Gwen the low opinion she had of her, Gwen picked up her magazine and the sewing that she had intended to do, and emerged, blinking, from the summer house.

“Did someone want me?” Gwen asked, trying to mimic Bronwen’s air of absence but merely sounding pathetic.

“There you are!” Marjorie cried. “Hurry up – there are people looking all over for you. Miss Wilson wants you in her study pronto.”

Gwen’s face paled, recalling the last time she had been suddenly called to the Headmistresses study. She racked her brains to think of what might cause this summons could think of nothing. She caught at Marjorie’s arm.

“Won’t you come with me?” Gwen pleaded.

“Whatever for?” Majorie asked, surprised. “Bill won’t eat you!”

“I’m just frightened,” Gwen said. “The last time I went to the Head’s study was at my old school, and she told me my father was terribly ill and that I was to go home.”

“I’m sure Miss Wilson just wants a chat to see how you’re getting on!” Marjorie said bracingly. “But I’ll come with you if you’re that worried. We’d better hurry though, Bill doesn’t like to be kept waiting.”

With that Marjorie took Gwen’s arm and hurried her to the study.

“Now in you go,” Majorie said with a pat on Gwen’s arm. “I’m sure it’ll be fine.”

Timidly Gwen knocked on the door, and heard Miss Wilson’s invitation to enter. She opened the door and walked through. To her surprise Miss Wilson was not alone, she was accompanied by a slender lady with black hair in great shells over her ears and sparkling black eyes which seemed at the moment strangely subdued who Gwendoline recognised as the authoress Josephine M. Bettany.

“Thank you, Joey, I’ll take it from here,” Miss Wilson said. “Have a seat, won’t you Gwen. Have you had Kaffee yet? No? Well I’ll ring for some.”

They waited in silence until one of the maids brought a tray through and each was supplied with a cup of coffee.

“I expect you’re wondering why I’ve asked you to come here,” Miss Wilson said gently.

“Well I wasn’t expecting it,” Gwendoline owned.

“No, I don’t suppose you were.”

There was an awkward pause as Miss Wilson wondered how to continue.

“I’m afraid I have some rather bad news for you,” she began.

“Am I to be put into St Agnes?” Gwen broke in. “I did rather expect it. The work’s been harder than I thought.”

“No,” Miss Wilson replied. “It’s nothing to do with your work. It’s your mother…”

“She…she is alright, isn’t she?” Gwen asked fearfully, already dreading the answer.

Miss Wilson shook her head slowly. “I’m afraid the doctor has diagnosed your mother with tuberculosis. She’s to travel out here immediately for treatment.”

“Here?” Gwen asked, mystified.

“To the Sanatorium,” Miss Wilson explained. “The doctors here are very good, the specialise in the treatment of TB, they have every hope that your mother will recover.”

“You mean that she might not?” Gwen asked, her eyes filling with tears.

The Chalet School had a policy of not shielding girls from unpleasant news, and Miss Wilson knew that Gwendoline needed to know but watching the reaction to her confirmation that Mrs Lacey may not recover was one of the hardest things in her entire career.

Author:  Chair [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:19 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I'm feeling very sorry for Gwendoline.

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:17 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. Poor Gwendoline.

Author:  Fatima [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:32 pm ]
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Poor Gwen. But dare we hope that her mother's illness might bring on a transformation in Gwen?

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Alison H [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:15 pm ]
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Oh poor Gwen.

Now wondering if Joey's about to "stick her oar in" ...

Author:  Liane [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:57 pm ]
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I hope not, she does rather too much of that in my opinion.
I hope everything turns out OK for Gwen and her mother. Thanks Fran.

Author:  Lisa_T [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:18 pm ]
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Uh oh. Someone needs to set Mary-Lou on Gwen.

:twisted: :twisted:

I wasn't very surprised at this development; now I think of it, I think I always mentally compared Doris Trelawney/Carey to Mrs Lacey. Not very fair to poor Doris, though :lol:

Really enjoying this. :lol:

Author:  Lesley [ Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:53 pm ]
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Horrible thing to have to do - but why is Joey there? :?


Thanks Fran

Author:  Helen P [ Mon Apr 16, 2007 6:39 am ]
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Poor Gwen. I am echoing the wonderings why Joey is there, and awaiting further developments with great interest!

Thanks Fran! :D

Author:  Ruth B [ Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:28 pm ]
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Poor Gwen to have her fears confirmed. :(

Author:  LizB [ Mon Apr 16, 2007 2:00 pm ]
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Poor Gwen :(

Thanks, Fran

Author:  Jennie [ Mon Apr 16, 2007 8:42 pm ]
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I do feels orry for Gwendoline now, but perhaps her mother's illness is what she needs to stop her being so self-centred.

Author:  Loryat [ Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:50 am ]
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You'd think her dad's illness would have done it!

Author:  leahbelle [ Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:24 pm ]
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Poor Gwen. I hope the San will be able to help her mother.

Author:  KathrynW [ Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:52 am ]
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Thanks Fran, just caught up on this and enjoying it as ever.

Author:  francesn [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:01 pm ]
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Gwen left the study in a daze and made her way to the dormitory where she stayed, sitting on her bed, staring numbly at the partition which separated her cubicle from Blossoms. Miss Wilson had excused her from lectures for the rest of the day, and Matron had decreed that she be left alone.

“She needs time,” Matron had said sensibly. “Unless she has time to sit and come to terms with this it won’t sink in.”

“But at school…” Miss Nalder began.

“This isn’t school, Grace,” Miss Wilson pointed out heavily. “We can’t hold her hand forever. Sooner or later she’s going to be alone with this, maybe at night when she’s trying to get to sleep. Gertrude’s right.”

The girls were told that Gwen had received some bad news from home and that she was resting. The Chalet girls accepted the explanation, and the remedy, without question, and all resolved to be kind to Gwen when she returned. It was Rachel, unusually, who questioned what they had been told.

“Gwendoline’s father’s dead, isn’t he?” she said to Blossom as they awaited a member of staff for the afternoon lecture.

“Yes, I believe he is,” Blossom replied, startled first by the fact that Rachel had addressed her in the first place, and second by the fact that Rachel had obviously paid enough attention to Gwendoline’s family situation to notice her father’s absence.

Rachel said nothing more on the matter but glanced at her watch, and then gathered her things together before standing up and leaving the room.

“What…” started Sybil.

Blossom shrugged.

Rachel made her way through the Chalet to the dormitory where Gwendoline was sat in silence, unshed tears collecting in her eyes. Rachel deposited her belongings on her bed, blithely disregarding Matron’s edicts and the strict rule regarding work materials in the dormitory and set on the chair opposite Gwen.

“Is it your mother?” Rachel asked abruptly.

Gwen started. “How did you know?” she asked weakly.

“I guessed. They said you’d had some bad news from home, and I remember you said you didn’t have a father, so logically….”

“Oh,” Gwen replied.

The two girls sat in silence for a while, Gwen gathering her thoughts and Rachel waiting patiently.

“She has TB,” Gwen said eventually. “She’ll die if she stays in England. So they’re bringing her here.”

There was a pause before Rachel spoke.

“I’m sorry,”

“So am I,” Gwen sighed. “When father died I was prepared to change. I wrote to Darrell – she was the closest thing I had to a friend really at Mallory Towers however much I disliked her at time – and explained everything. I…I wasn’t very nice there. But somehow I never got round to it. I meant to enrol on a secretarial course but I didn’t. I stayed at home, telling myself my mother needed me, but really I was just trying to manipulate my mother into sending me to finishing school.”

“I understand you not wanting to leave,” Rachel put in. “When my mother died…I never wanted to leave my father again. He…He didn’t want me. He sent me here instead.”

The two girls relapsed into silence, each alone with her own thoughts.

Author:  Helen P [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:12 pm ]
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How interesting to hear a little more about Rachel! Thank you for more of this, Fran; I am loving it. :D

Author:  Chair [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:52 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I wonder if they will be able to help each other over a period of time.

Author:  Lisa_T [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:55 pm ]
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Poor things! Although it has to be confessed I'm feeling rather sorrier for Rachel than for Gwen.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 11:21 pm ]
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That was so nice of Rachel

Author:  Loryat [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 12:12 pm ]
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I really like Rachel.

Author:  Fatima [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 5:46 pm ]
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Yes, I'm getting to like her, too.

Author:  francesn [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:07 pm ]
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Gwen spent the next two week in near silence, wondering what she could say to her mother when she was finally allowed to see her. Mrs Lacey spent eleven exhausting days travelling across the continent and when she finally arrived at the San she was in such bad shape that the doctors were privately afraid she wouldn’t last the night. Miss Wilson was informed of Mrs Lacey’s condition but all Gwen was told that evening was that her mother had arrived at the San and she would be allowed to see her when she had regained some of her strength.

In the morning Jack Maynard visited Mrs Lacey, having privately warned Miss Wilson that Gwendoline might be called for. He was pleased to find his patient a shade stronger and, as far as he could tell, out of immediate danger. He was still alarmed by his patients pallor and frequent bouts of coughing but her breathing did seem easier already.

“How is the pain in your chest this morning, Mrs Lacey?” he asked.

“Dreadful,” his patient replied honestly.

Jack smiled a little. “Nurse – increase Mrs Lacey’s pain relief by 5%, please. I’ll visit again in the afternoon, just try to rest in the meantime.”

He turned to leave but stopped when he heard Mrs Lacey’s whispered question.

“Really, doctor, am I going to recover?”

Jack sighed. “If you’d come here earlier we would have a much better chance,” he said honestly. “But as long as you do what Nurse says, and you stay out here until you’re completely well then we’ll do our best.”

“I see,” Mrs Lacey said, sinking back onto her pillows. “Thank you, doctor.”

“Try to sleep,” Jack said gently. “I’ll come by after lunch.”
……………..

While Jack was making his rounds at the San, Miss Winter was walking along the Platz marvelling at the scenery. She was so distracted by the glorious view that she didn’t notice the small boy who came tearing around the corner and cannoned straight into her.

“Oh!” she gasped.

“Sorry,” the small boy said penitently.

“It’s alright, dear,” Miss Winter responded kindly. “I expect you didn’t look where you were going.”

“I didn’t ‘spect you to be there,” was the small boy’s reply.

“Oh,”

“Felix!” someone called.

“Is that your mother, dear?” Miss Winter asked.

“I ‘spect so,” Felix said airily.

“Felix Maynard!” Joey scolded as she rounded the corner. “You musn’t run away like that, you naughty boy. I’m so sorry, I hope Felix didn’t bother you,” she apologised to Miss Winter.

“No, he isn’t bothering me at all,” Miss Winter said nervously. “Well, now you’re here I should be going. I don’t suppose you know the way to the school near here?”

“I do indeed,” Joey replied. “I live next door to it myself. My name’s Jo Maynard by the way.”

“Agatha Winter,” Miss Winter responded shyly. “If you could just point me in the right direction…I have to see my charge. Well my former charge. I was her governess until she came to school.”

“How lovely,” Joey said warmly. “Why don’t you come with me, and when we get home I’ll give Hilda a ring. We can pop over to the school for Kaffee und Kuchen.”

“Hilda?” Miss Winter asked. “I….well…I may be mistaken but I thought the Headmistress’s name was Helena….is there more than one school out here?”

“Ah, you must be after St Mildred’s, the finishing branch,” Joey said easily. “That’s quite a long walk from here…”

“I don’t mind,” Miss Winter assured her hastily. “I just must see Gwendoline. She’ll be ever so worried about her mother, and the doctors won’t let anyone see Mrs Lacey until she’s stronger but I know Gwendoline must be suffering, so I simply have to see her.”

Suddenly Joey understood just who the strange, slightly dishevelled and very obviously English woman was.

“Come with me,” she insisted. “I’ll run you over to St Mildred’s as soon as we get home.”

“But your children…” Miss Winter protested ineffectually.

“Anna will look after them,” Joey said dismissively. “I simply won’t take no for an answer.”

Author:  Fatima [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:26 pm ]
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Miss Winter seems so anxious here. I really hope Mrs. Lacey will be all right.

Author:  Chair [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:33 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I'm glad that Joey will take Miss Winter to Gwendoline.

Author:  Clare [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:48 pm ]
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I always felt sorry for Miss Winter - so desperate to please, yet she did try and stand up to Gwen when it really mattered. I hope she'll be OK.

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 7:04 pm ]
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Pleased that Miss Winter has met Joey - she was always such a weak thing yet gained strength at the end.


Thanks Fran

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Apr 23, 2007 10:43 pm ]
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Doesn't sound good about Mrs Lacey :( .

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Apr 24, 2007 11:29 pm ]
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That was lovely of Joey to offer to drive Miss Winter over. (And you gave the poor woman the name Agatha!! :shock: :lol: ) Love the update

Author:  KathrynW [ Wed Apr 25, 2007 10:14 am ]
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Thanks Fran :D

Author:  francesn [ Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:38 pm ]
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Fiona Mc wrote:
That was lovely of Joey to offer to drive Miss Winter over. (And you gave the poor woman the name Agatha!! :shock: :lol: ) Love the update


I was feeling cruel....

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Wed Apr 25, 2007 3:30 pm ]
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Oh Frances - I thought that was an update.

Feels sorry for self. :bawling:

Sends bunny treats.

Author:  francesn [ Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:38 pm ]
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Bunny treats seem to have worked!

True to her word, Joey took Miss Winter to see Gwen at St Mildred’s talking nineteen-to-the-dozen all the way. Miss Winter sat, silent, admiring the scenery and allowing Joey’s flood of chatter to wash over her.

For once in her life Joey wasn’t quite sure what to say. She had not yet met Gwendoline, having much less to do with the finishing branch that with the school proper, and she avoided talking about the San at all costs guessing that Miss Winter would not want to dwell on the reason that she was in Switzerland. Finally she plucked up the courage to broach the subject.

“I hope I’m not intruding,” she began, “and do tell me to mind my own business, but have you thought what you’re going to say to Gwendoline?”

Miss Winter started.

“Not really,” she confessed. “I just wanted to see her, to make sure that she was alright. Her mother is so terribly ill, you see, and Gwendoline only lost her father recently. I know she was very fond of him, although they argued dreadfully at time. He only ever wanted hat was best for her. So do I.”

“Well, does Gwendoline know how serious the situation is?”

“I don’t know,” Miss Winter said helplessly. “Do you know what the school will have told her? There was no time to write, no time to do anything really. It all happened so quickly.”

Joey’s heart went out to the woman sat beside her. “I think you should let Gwendoline ask what she wants to know, and answer her as honestly as you can however hard that might be.”

Miss Winter nodded slowly. “I don’t want to hurt her,” she said piteously.

“It would hurt more if you gave her false hope,” Joey pointed out gently. “I’ll wait for you.”

It was only then that Miss Winter realised they had stopped outside a big Chalet built in the typical Swiss style, with brightly painted shutters and gay window boxes. She opened the door of the car and got out. Lifting her chin a little she took a deep breath and started down the path which led to the front door. When she reached the door she paused for a moment before she rang the bell and adjusted her hat.

A maid answered the door promptly and conducted Miss Winter to a chair placed in the airy entrance hall.

“I shall tell Fraulein Wilson she has a visitor,” the maid said in accented English.

“Oh, thank you,” Miss Winter gasped as the maid vanished.

Soon after the maid returned with a tall young woman whose chestnut hair was fastened in a knot at the back of her head.

“Miss Winter?” the young woman asked, extending her hand, which Miss Winter shook hurriedly. “I’m Miss Culver, the school secretary. I’m afraid Miss Wilson is teaching at the moment, but if you’ll come with me I’ll fetch you a cup of coffee and you can explain why you’re here.”

“Oh, thank you,” Miss Winter gasped again. She picked up her handbag and followed Miss Culver through the corridors of the school until they ended up in a large room with comfy chairs at one end and desks at the other.

“This is the staff-room,” Miss Culver explained. “And these are Miss Nalder and Matron Rider.”

“Lovely to meet you,” Matron Rider, a comfortable looking woman dressed in a nurse’s uniform and cap, smiled.

“Excuse me, but are you Gwendoline’s governess?” Miss Nalder queried. “I seem to recognise you. You were at Kings Cross with her?”

“Yes, yes I am. Well I was. And I was at Kings Cross, yes,” Miss Winter replied, flustered.

“Are you here to see Gwendoline then?” Miss Nalder asked. “How is her mother?”

“She didn’t take the journey well,” was all Miss Winter said. “Is Gwendoline in a lesson? When will I be able to see her?”

“I shall go and ask Miss Wilson to excuse Gwendoline from her class. I think she should know how her mother fares,” Matron Rider said decisively. “Gillian – if you’ll take Miss Winter to my room I shall send Gwendoline there.”

Gillian Culver motioned for Miss Winter to follow her as Matron Rider left the room and took her to Matron’s domain. Standing by the window, ostensibly admiring the view, Miss Winter waited for Gwendoline. She did not have long to wait, for she soon heard two steps of footsteps coming down the corridor.

“Miss Winter!” Gwendoline cried flinging herself into her governess’s arms. “I wasn’t expecting you.”

Matron withdrew allowing Miss Winter to talk to Gwendoline alone.

Author:  Chair [ Thu Apr 26, 2007 8:43 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I think that Joey handled the situation in the best way she could.

Author:  Elle [ Thu Apr 26, 2007 9:28 pm ]
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Gosh! What a lot of lovely updates. Thanks very much.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Apr 26, 2007 10:11 pm ]
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Thanks for that Fran - nce to see Miss Winter supported by everyone.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:16 pm ]
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I thought Joey was lovely there and I'm glad to see Gwendoline so welcoming to Miss Winter. Normally she's a bit dismissive of her

Author:  Cath V-P [ Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:56 am ]
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Miss Winter is coping amazingly well. Thank goodness Gwen appreciated her.

Author:  Jennie [ Fri Apr 27, 2007 12:30 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I hope this will be a wake-up call for Gwen.

Author:  leahbelle [ Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:09 pm ]
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I wonder how Gwen will cope?

Author:  Lottie [ Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:34 am ]
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Thank goodness Joey didn't jump in with both feet and offer to tell Gwen herself! I hope Gwen doesn't go to pieces at the news.

Thanks, Fran!

Author:  francesn [ Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:03 pm ]
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Got a bit stuck with this - it didn't really go the way I wanted. Miss Winter seems to have developed a spine :?

“We’ll be home soon,” Joey said, as Miss Winter settled herself into the seat of the motor vehicle. “Just in time for lunch – you will stay, won’t you?”

“Thank you,” Miss Winter whispered.

Joey glanced at her passenger and noted the drawn expression but resolved not to say anything until Miss Winter had been given some food and the opportunity for a rest.

“It must have been dreadfully hard for her,” Joey thought to herself but she allowed the drive to proceed in silence, and ten minutes later drew up outside Freudesheim. She ushered her guest into the house, relieving her of her coat and settled her in the salon.

“I’ll just ask Anna how long it will be until Mittagessen,” Joey said. “Make yourself comfy, I won’t be a sec.”

Miss Winter sank into onto the sofa and looked around the bright room. She noticed the books and the many photographs of happy smiling faces, some obviously related to one another, others very obviously not.

“That’s a lovely one, isn’t it?” Joey said, re-entering the room.

Miss Winter realised that she had been staring at a photograph of a younger Joey with three babies.

“Yes,” she answered ineffectually.

“I know you haven’t known me very long,” Joey started. “But if you ever need a friendly ear then my door is always open.”

Miss Winter smiled faintly. “I could do with someone to talk to sometimes,” she admitted. “It can be terribly lonely being a governess. And you feel such an obligation to the family, much as I love Gwendoline. Of course, now Mrs Lacey is ill I’m all the family she has.”

Joey nodded sympathetically.

“She’s never been so affectionate before,” Miss Winter said wonderingly. “I fear that her mother’s illness has hit her very hard, although she has been ever so brave. Do you know when she’ll be able to see her mother?”

“I’m afraid not,” Joey replied. “But it shouldn’t be too long. It depends how Mrs Lacey has stood the journey.”

“Not terribly well, I fear,” Miss Winter sighed. “I only wish I knew what to do…”

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Apr 30, 2007 10:40 pm ]
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Poor Miss Winter :(

Author:  Chair [ Mon Apr 30, 2007 10:52 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. It's good to get to know Miss Winter better in this drabble.

Author:  Aquabird [ Mon Apr 30, 2007 10:58 pm ]
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Thanks Fran.

Author:  Loryat [ Tue May 01, 2007 5:35 pm ]
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Both Miss Winter and Joey very sympathetic in this drabble.

Poor Miss Winter, being a lonely governess in the Lacey household! :(

Author:  Elle [ Tue May 01, 2007 7:35 pm ]
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Thanks for the update. It really is about time Miss Winter developed a spine.


*off to re-read all the Malory Towers books*

Author:  leahbelle [ Tue May 01, 2007 8:14 pm ]
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Nice to see Miss Winter developing as a character. I always had a soft spot for her in the MT books because Gwen was so awful to her.

Author:  Bookwormsarah [ Thu May 03, 2007 12:19 pm ]
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This is really lovely. I always felt sorry for Gwendoline Mary and thought that although she was a bit of a pain, the homesickness was genuine and the others were frankly bullies to pick on her over that. I tend to weep at partings (mine or other peoples :oops: , but not excessively so) so can sympathise! I liked the more matter of fact approch the CS girls have, and their general kindness. Rachel is also very intriguing. Thank you :)

Author:  Lesley [ Tue May 08, 2007 10:47 pm ]
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Glad Joey is being so kind to Miss Winter - of course she was really Mrs Lacey's companion once Gwen went to Malory Towers - I wonder what will happen to her should Mrs Lacey die?


Thanks Fran.

Author:  wheelchairprincess [ Thu May 17, 2007 11:18 am ]
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I really must find some MT books to re-read (think my mum made me get rid of mine when i went to uni). I like Miss Winter in this (and shockingly enough, Joey too). More soon please! *off to ebay*

Author:  francesn [ Thu May 17, 2007 5:27 pm ]
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*For Emma*

“Rachel, could I talk to you?” Gwen asked nervously. “I don’t want to interrupt if you’re busy doing prep….”

Rachel frowned as she looked up. “It’s fine,” she said abruptly. “What did you want?”

“Well my governess came to see me today,” Gwen began. “She made the journey here with my mother.”

“Let’s go upstairs,” Rachel interrupted. “It’s quieter, and then we can talk.”

Gwen followed Rachel silently up to the dormitory.

“Why didn’t you want to talk to me downstairs?” she burst out once they were inside their room. “I know people don’t like me, they never liked me at Malory Towers.”

Rachel stared at Gwen for a moment. “But I thought….no, never mind. It’s quieter up here, and no-one will interrupt us. What did you want to say?”

“Just that Miss Winter came to see me,” Gwen said sulkily. “She was my governess. Now she’s my mother’s companion.”

“And she travelled over here with your mother?” Rachel prompted. “Did she tell you how your mother was doing?”

Gwen nodded, tears filling her eyes.

“And?” Rachel asked. “You don’t have to tell me, you know, but it might help a bit.”

“She’s….well she has TB, and Miss Winter isn’t sure how well she’s stood the journey, and the doctor’s don’t sound terribly hopefully. They won’t let me see her,” Gwendoline wailed. “She’s all I have left, and they won’t let me see her. I’m her daughter, I should be there with her.”

Rachel put her arms around Gwen and let the other girl cry on her shoulder.

“I’m sure if she was very bad they would let you see her, if only to say goodbye,” Rachel soothed. “They’re just waiting until she’s stronger, that’s all.”

“Did you see your mother?” Gwen gulped.

Pain flashed across Rachel’s face. “I…I didn’t have the chance,” she said quietly. “It was very sudden. An accident.”

“I’m sorry,” Gwen whispered.

“I still have my father,” Rachel’s face twisted into something approaching a grimace before she continued, “and your mother will be fine.”

Author:  Lesley [ Thu May 17, 2007 6:37 pm ]
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Hmmmm, very interesting. Most intrigued about Rachel - look forward to discovering more about her as and when. She was very good to Gwen there.

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Clare [ Thu May 17, 2007 6:59 pm ]
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“Why didn’t you want to talk to me downstairs?” she burst out once they were inside their room. “I know people don’t like me, they never liked me at Malory Towers.”


Poor Gwen. I hope there's more of this soon, I want to learn more about Rachel too!

Author:  Chair [ Thu May 17, 2007 9:28 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. Rachel is being a great support.

Author:  Sal [ Thu May 17, 2007 10:34 pm ]
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Poor Gwen. Thanks Fran this is brilliant, your Gwen is much easier to emphasise with than Blytons. :)

Author:  wheelchairprincess [ Thu May 17, 2007 11:34 pm ]
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Thanks Fran :)

Intrigued by Rachel in this.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri May 18, 2007 12:44 am ]
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I'm very intrigued about Rachel and can understand why Rachel wanted some privacy upstairs, especially is Gwendoline was going to break down

Author:  Bee [ Fri May 18, 2007 10:46 am ]
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I've just discovered this, and I've had so much fun reading it from the beginning. I was a huge Malory Towers fan when I was younger, as well as Chalet School. I like seeing Gwen portrayed in a different light. She never did get much of a chance at MT!

Thanks Fran :D

Author:  Bee [ Fri May 18, 2007 10:47 am ]
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I've just discovered this, and I've had so much fun reading it from the beginning. I was a huge Malory Towers fan when I was younger, as well as Chalet School. I like seeing Gwen portrayed in a different light. She never did get much of a chance at MT!

And I like seeing Miss Winters with a spine! Rachel is also very intriguing... can't wait to find out more.

Thanks Fran :D

Author:  Smile :) [ Fri May 18, 2007 8:16 pm ]
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Just caught up with this. I feel very sorry for Gwendoline. I want to now more about rachel. Thank you Fran.

Author:  Fatima [ Sat May 19, 2007 5:27 am ]
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That was nice of Rachel. Thanks Fran.

Author:  francesn [ Sun May 27, 2007 10:49 pm ]
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Three days passed before the doctors deemed Mrs Lacey fit enough for visitors. Truth be told they were far more concerned about her condition than they had let on, although Miss Wilson had been told that Gwen might be needed at very short notice and she had drawn her own conclusions. Gwen herself had worried terribly, and the other girls had noticed the change in her, but she only seemed to talk to Rachel about the subject and brushed it off when any of the other girls mentioned it.

The former Chalet Girls were far too polite to mention what many of them wondered, and the more mature amongst them recognised that this was Gwen’s own way of dealing with the worry she felt for her mother. Other girls, however, were not so polite and one in particular made her feelings very clear to a select group of girls.

“I call it callous,” Arabella Wentworth pronounced. “If it were my mother dying in the San I would be there every single day. It’s just completely uncaring of her. I can’t understand it!”

Unfortunately for Arabella she had failed to notice Rachel in the corner, quietly reading a book. The two girls had always rubbed each other up the wrong way and Rachel had, over the past week or so, come to think of Gwendoline as a friend. The result was something entirely unprecedented. Rachel lost her temper.

“Now look here,” she said furiously. “Gwen’s worried sick about her mother – which you’d know if you actually bothered spending any time with her! It’s not her fault she can’t see her, the doctors won’t let anyone near Mrs Lacey. And Mrs Lacey isn’t dying so don’t you go ill wishing her. Gwen’s worth twenty of you and your feather-headed cronies any day, and I’m proud to have her as my friend. You could all try being a bit more supportive!”

Arabella sniffed and turned back to her cronies intent on airing her views to those who she thought actually wanted to listen to them but found herself interrupted as Gwen burst into the room.

“Rachel! Rachel! You’ll never guess what I’ve just heard!” Gwen gasped.

Rachel frowned a little, she had, at the beginning of term, come to associate this tone of voice coming from Gwen with some tidbit of gossip she was entirely disinterested in but having just told Arabella she counted Gwen as a friend she felt obliged to listen. She had surprised herself with that comment, the truth be told. As far as Rachel was concerned Rachel Matthews didn’t have friends.

“Good news?” she replied, trying to sound excited.

“The best!” Gwen enthused. “They’re going to let me see Mummy. Miss Wilson says I may go over there this afternoon and Mrs Maynard is coming to collect me.”

“Oh lucky you!” Arabella broke in. “I’ve been dying to meet Mrs Maynard. She’s my favourite author!”

“Funny that you’d never heard of her before you came here then, isn’t it?” Gwen sniped. “In any case I don’t care who’s coming to collect me, as long as I get to see Mummy.”

Author:  Chair [ Sun May 27, 2007 11:14 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. It's good that Gwen has a chance to go and see her Mother.

Author:  Lesley [ Sun May 27, 2007 11:34 pm ]
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Pleased for Gwen - and good for Rachel in standing up for her.


Thanks Fran

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon May 28, 2007 12:32 am ]
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Am really glad Rachel stood up for Gwen and it wasn't gossip she was wanting to pass on as Rachel feared. Hope they get some more support from the others

Author:  Miranda [ Mon May 28, 2007 6:49 am ]
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I'm glad that Gwen is finally going to be able to see her mother! I wonder what their relationship is going to be like now?

Three cheers for Rachel and standing up for Gwen!

Author:  Sal [ Mon May 28, 2007 2:26 pm ]
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Good that Gwen is able to see her mother.

Thanks Fran

Author:  Fatima [ Mon May 28, 2007 2:57 pm ]
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That was lovely, hearing Rachel jumping to Gwen's defense. That's the first time that sort of thing has ever happened on Gwen's behalf!

Author:  Jennie [ Mon May 28, 2007 9:02 pm ]
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Well, perhaps the CS is working its magic on Gwen already, but there's a long way to go with Arabella.

Author:  Smile :) [ Mon May 28, 2007 9:17 pm ]
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Lovely that rachel stood up for gwen. I'm gland gwen is getting to see her mother and that gwen seems to be becoming a bit nicer.

Author:  Aquabird [ Mon May 28, 2007 9:36 pm ]
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Glad that Rachel stood up for Gwen and that Gwen will get to see her mother.
:poke: Arabella

Thanks Fran.

Author:  francesn [ Mon May 28, 2007 11:02 pm ]
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Joey duly arrived an hour later to pick up Gwen. She also requisitioned Sybil on the grounds that she was having a party that afternoon and could do with the help. All the way to Freudesheim she kept up a light flow of chatter, mostly centring around activities in the main school, producing amusing anecdotes which made even Gwen laugh.

“The Chalet School sounds like so much fun,” Gwen said wistfully.

“It was,” Sybil replied, with a smile.

“You mean it is,” that young lady’s aunt corrected her. “You’re still at the Chalet for all you try to pretend that you’re all grown up and have left us all behind. It’s still the same school at heart.”

“I suppose you’re right,” Sybil said thoughtfully. “We all look out for one another, and we help each other whenever we can.”

“It’s so different to my old school,” Gwen wondered. “I thought maybe it was because we were older, but maybe it’s something entirely different.”

Sybil suddenly gurgled with laughter. “It’s not like you to be so introspective, Gwen!”

“I know – I’m surprised I haven’t fainted from the effort,” Gwen laughed.

Joey said nothing, but smiled to herself. The girls may not have realised yet but part of what the Chalet School did was encourage pupils to look that little bit deeper.

“Here we are!” Joey announced. “Gwen, my love, I’m just going to run indoors with Sybs and then I’ll be along to take you to the San, okay?”

Gwen nodded her assent and Joey and Sybil disappeared indoors.

“Auntie Jo,” Sybil said, just as that lady turned to leave. “Can I ask you a question?”

“If it’s a quick one,” Joey replied. “I can’t leave Gwen in the car too long – she’ll think she’s been abandoned.”

“It’s about Gwen actually,” Sybil started. “I don’t think she’s very happy but I don’t know what to say…..it must be awful, not being able to see your mother. But we just don’t know what to do about it.”

“Maybe the best thing is to say nothing,” Joey advised. “Strange advice from a fabled butter-in but you would know if she wanted help. Just be her friend, that’s what she needs most at the moment.”

Sybil nodded and then hugged her aunt.

“Steady on, my girl!” Joey said. “Lucky you didn’t catch me off balance or we’d both be sprawled on the floor by now. Off with you – the kids are dying to see you.”

“Thanks, Auntie Jo!” Sybil called over her shoulder. “See you later.”

Joey’s face was thoughtful as she made her way back to the car. She’d had no contact with Gwen before today, although she’d heard plenty about the girl from Miss Winter. And she was about to ignore her own advice.

Author:  Aquabird [ Mon May 28, 2007 11:09 pm ]
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I quite like Jo there - but of course she's not going to just sit back when there's an opportunity for her to butt in!

Thanks, Fran.

Author:  Smile :) [ Tue May 29, 2007 5:27 pm ]
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Thank you Fran.

Author:  Lyanne [ Tue May 29, 2007 9:04 pm ]
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Jennie wrote:
Well, perhaps the CS is working its magic on Gwen already, but there's a long way to go with Arabella.


And also on Rachel.

Author:  Chair [ Tue May 29, 2007 11:04 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran.

*Clare faints with shock*.

Joey actually advised someone not to interfere? :shock:

Author:  fio [ Tue May 29, 2007 11:09 pm ]
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Chair wrote:

Joey actually advised someone not to interfere? :shock:


And then, by the sound of it, promptly does it herself?! :? :lol:

Author:  Elle [ Tue May 29, 2007 11:24 pm ]
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Chair wrote:
Thanks, Fran.

*Clare faints with shock*.

Joey actually advised someone not to interfere? :shock:



*Joins Clare in fainting*


Thanks for the updates Fran.

Author:  Jennie [ Wed May 30, 2007 8:17 pm ]
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I knew it was too good to be true. Jo just can't resist it, can she?

Author:  francesn [ Thu May 31, 2007 12:02 am ]
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“Ready to go?” Joey asked with a matey grin as she slipped back behind the wheel.

Gwen nodded. “Thank you so much for fetching me, Mrs Maynard,” she said.

“It’s nothing,” Joey responded with a grin. “I’m up and down the Platz the whole time, and it gave me an excuse to grab Sybs!”

They subsided into silence, Gwen wondering what she would find when she reached the San and Joey musing on what Sybil had unwittingly revealed. She couldn’t see the Gwendoline of Miss Winter’s chatter in the pale, tense girl sitting beside her.

“Are you enjoying St Mildred’s?” Joey asked eventually.

“I didn’t at first,” Gwen replied honestly. “But I think I am now. Everyone’s so nice and helpful, not like Malory Towers, and people are friendly.”

“Tell me about your old school,” Joey invited. “You never know, I might end up using it in a story!”

“It’s in Cornwall,” Gwen began, “by the sea. It’s simply huge with glorious views and we had a swimming pool down by the sea. There are four towers which are a bit like houses, you live in your Tower but have classes with the rest of your year. We played a lot of sport – lacrosse, swimming and tennis seemed to be the favourites, although some girls kept horses. Bill used to ride to school every term on Thunder!”

“It sounds like a marvellous place,” Joey said encouragingly.

“It was, I suppose,” Gwen said doubtfully. “Although I didn’t enjoy it that much at the time. I don’t think I did as well as I could have there.”

“Do you keep in touch with any of your old schoolfellows?” Joey asked, intrigued by Gwen’s reticence. “I don’t know what I’d do without my three great friends from school, we try to meet up from time to time but rarely manage it!”

“Only Darrell – I suppose she was the closest thing to a friend I had at Malory Towers. I never really got on with anyone else, especially not Alicia with her beastly spiteful tongue.”

Joey glanced at the girl surprised by her vehemence but now was no time for further questioning as they had arrived at the San.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu May 31, 2007 7:04 am ]
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And Darrell wasn't really a friend was she? Just someone that would help anyone regardless. Has Gwen realised yet that a great deal of her problems at MT were her own fault?

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Alison H [ Thu May 31, 2007 7:41 am ]
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I did feel sorry for Gwen - I know she brought a lot of it on herself, but they were all so horrible to her! No-one even took her side when Darrell slapped her.

Author:  JustJen [ Thu May 31, 2007 3:41 pm ]
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Gwen did bring a lot of trouble upon herself but the staff really didn't step in and try to help Gwen.
Alicia and her friend were nasty girls

Author:  Chair [ Thu May 31, 2007 5:08 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. It was interesting to see Gwen's view of Malory Towers.

Author:  Elle [ Thu May 31, 2007 5:44 pm ]
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JustJen wrote:
Alicia and her friend were nasty girls



It's only with re-reading the series that I have realised quite how nasty Alicia was, I don't think I noticed this as a child, I always thought Gwen deserved what she got. Re-reading them Alicia is awful to Gwen from the start, and that then that sets the tone for the rest of the books.

Thanks for the updates Fran.

Author:  Fatima [ Thu May 31, 2007 5:52 pm ]
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Elle wrote:
It's only with re-reading the series that I have realised quite how nasty Alicia was, I don't think I noticed this as a child, I always thought Gwen deserved what she got. Re-reading them Alicia is awful to Gwen from the start, and that then that sets the tone for the rest of the books.


I agree. I always liked Alicia when I read the books as a child and could understand how Darrell was drawn to her. It also seemed fine to be mean to Gwen all the time. I like Gwen in this, thanks Fran.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu May 31, 2007 6:31 pm ]
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With reference to Darrell slapping Gwen - in her defence Darrell had just stopped Gwen from holding little Mary-Lou under the water maliciously as she was the only one Gwen could bully. Darrell was in a steaming temper and she did immediatelyapologise to both Gwen and the rest of the class as soon as her temper had cooled. I'm not saying she was right but she did recognise that she had done wrong and attempt to make amends.


Alicia, however, was nasty from the start - even to Sally in one of the books.

Author:  Smile :) [ Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:06 am ]
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Thanks for the update Fran.

Author:  Loryat [ Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:22 pm ]
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I think it's nice that we're seeing a different side to Gwen here but I feel that in the books she really was horrible. When I was wee I felt sorry for her but now when I reread them I'm quite shocked by how nasty she is. Alioia and that were also horrible, it's true, but I really feel that Gwendoline wasn't a very nice person with or without Alicia's treatment of her.

Author:  James [ Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:01 pm ]
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Only just seen this and read through all of it - fantastic!! Is there any more to come, Fran? :D

Author:  Pado [ Wed Aug 01, 2007 4:28 pm ]
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Just caught up with this - wonderful!

Author:  babycassied [ Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:46 pm ]
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This is great!

I have to say re-reading MT now I do feel sorry for Gwen. I loved it as a kid but now MT sounds like my worst nightmare, all enforced PE, particularly outside in the winter and bullying if you don't fit in.

Author:  Sunflower [ Tue Oct 02, 2007 10:20 pm ]
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I thought that was an update, :(
come to think of it...any chance of one?

Author:  francesn [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:04 pm ]
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“In you go,” the nurse said gently, opening the door.

Gwen hesitated before stepping through. She had never been any good with illness of any kind, unless it was her own. The prospect of seeing her mother seriously ill, ill enough that she had had to come to Switzerland, ill enough to prevent Gwen from seeing her, frightened the girl.

The room was light, pleasant and airy. The walls, curtains and bedcovers were white, the floor a light wood. All the furniture was functional but still pleasing. Lying in the bed, wearing a pink bedjacket that Gwen recognised, was a thin, pale woman.

“Gwendoline,” the woman whispered.

“Mummy?” Gwen said, her eyes filling with tears. “Oh Mummy!” She moved to the chair at the side of the bed and took her mother’s hands in her own.

“You look….well,” her mother said faintly. “Switzerland suits you.”

“It will suit you too, Mummy,” Gwen declared fervently.

Her mother smiled weakly. “I look better already.”

If Gwen was shocked by this statement she didn’t show it. Instead she began to tell her mother all about St Mildred’s.

“It was frightfully hard at first, doing lessons in three languages, but I have tried, Mummy, honestly I have. And it’s not like school at all – we have discussions rather than lessons. The girls are all so nice, I was frightfully homesick at first but Sybil and Blossom were really nice to me, and I’ve made another friend called Rachel. She’s in my dormitory. The dormitory is so much nicer than Malory Towers, we all have our own space so it’s nice and private instead of beds in a row, and we can put pictures up.”

“I hope I shall be able to come and visit,” Mrs Lacey smiled.

“Oh you will, when you’re better you can come over for the afternoon and I’ll show you everything,” Gwen assured her mother.

“You do know that might be some time, don’t you?” Mrs Lacey asked cautiously. “I’m still not feeling myself.”

“I know,” Gwen said honestly. “But you’re here now, and the doctor’s will be able to make you better, won’t they?”

Mrs Lacey looked into her daughters big blue eyes and took a deep breath.

“I hope so,” she said.

Author:  Alison H [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:23 pm ]
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Nice to see this back - but it doesn't sound too hopeful about Gwen's mum.

Author:  Rosalin [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:45 pm ]
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Oh dear, that last line didn't sound too hopeful.

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Lesley [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:45 pm ]
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Glad Gwen has at least been able to speak to her Mother.


Thanks Fran - lovely to see more of this.

Author:  Fatima [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:25 pm ]
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Nice to see more of this, thanks Fran. I hope Gwen's mother will be ok.

Author:  Jennie [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:53 pm ]
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Gwen will have to grow up a great deal now.

I do wonder sometimes at the staff of Malory Towers. they were never there when they were needed, were they?

Author:  Aquabird [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 4:44 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. Gwen seems to be growing up a bit at last.

Author:  Helen P [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:42 pm ]
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Thank you Fran, how lovely to have an update! :D Poor Gwen, she seems to be growing up at school - now it is time for her to grow up where her mother is concerned - and quickly :(

Author:  Elbee [ Mon Oct 15, 2007 9:33 am ]
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I think Gwen is turning into a much nicer girl now.

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:15 am ]
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Thanks Fran. Its been nice to catch up with this

Author:  Sunflower [ Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:41 pm ]
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Yay fran! thanks for the update!!!

Author:  JustJen [ Tue Oct 16, 2007 1:43 am ]
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Hurray for updating Fran.
Poor Gwen I hope her mother will be well enough to see Gwen at school.

Author:  Chair [ Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:31 am ]
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Thanks, Fran. It's nice to see Gwen with her mother but I agree that it isn't looking too hopeful.

Author:  Elle [ Tue Oct 16, 2007 7:10 pm ]
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Thanks for the update Fran.

Author:  leahbelle [ Sat Oct 20, 2007 8:24 pm ]
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Great to see an update. I hope Gwen's mum will be ok.

Author:  francesn [ Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:30 pm ]
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A few short minutes later and the visit was over. The doctors had left strict instructions that the patient not be allowed to become overtired for Mrs Lacey was still very weak, despite the improvement shown since she came to the Platz. Although Gwen would have liked to stay much longer she did not protest, merely promising her mother that she would return as soon as she was allowed.

“Will I be allowed to stay longer next time?” Gwen asked the nurse as she was escorted to Jo’s waiting car.

“It depends on how your mother gets on,” the nurse said cautiously. “We’ll see how she is this evening after the excitement of your visit.”

“She didn’t seem very excited,” Gwen said petulantly.

“She talked of nothing else this morning and all of yesterday,” the nurse corrected Gwen gently. “She is still very fragile so don’t expect her to jump up and down when she sees you.”

“I just thought she’d be a bit more pleased to see me,” Gwen mumbled.

“She was pleased,” the nurse reassured the girl. “I’m sure she’s looking forward to your next visit already. Now there’s Mrs Maynard, so run along back to school.”

Gwen made her way over to the car slowly, a thoughtful expression on her face. The nurse had given her a lot to think about. She did know that her mother was frail but she also knew she herself hadn’t given her mother much reason to want to see her.

“I was an absolute beast to her,” Gwen thought as she walked. “I made such a fuss about that stupid Delaney Academy, and I didn’t want to come here. I never thought about how Daddy dying might have affected Mummy and I didn’t notice she was ill. I didn’t care about anyone except myself.”

Gwen smiled at Jo as she got into the car, but Jo had seen more than her fair share of upset school-girls in her time. She knew that something was up, but decided to let Gwen broach the subject. Sure enough, a few moments later Gwen spoke.

“I wonder if I could ask you something, Mrs Maynard,” she said shyly. “If one of your children acted like they didn’t love you any more, how would that make you feel?”

Whatever Jo had been expecting, it wasn’t that, but she rose to the occasion.

“Well I suppose I would feel upset at first,” she began, “but I know that when I was growing up I was sometimes horrible to my sister – our parents died when I was a baby, so she and my brother brought me up you see. It didn’t mean that I hated them.”

“I was horrible to my mother before I came here,” Gwen admitted. “And now she’s ill and I just want her to know that I didn’t mean it.” A single tear slid down her cheek.

“I’m sure she knows,” Jo said. “And from what you said earlier, your mother wasn’t the only person you have regrets about your behaviour towards.”

Author:  roversgirl [ Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:20 am ]
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fantastic to see you an update! thanks so much :)

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:20 am ]
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Really glad to the update and Gwen really seems to be growing up

Author:  Lesley [ Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:36 am ]
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Gwen is turning into a very nice person here - glad Joey is able to help her - even though Miss A would probably faint at Joey's sentence construction! :lol: :wink:


Thanks Fran

Author:  Fatima [ Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:42 am ]
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Yes, Gwen is improving in leaps and bounds. Thanks Fran.

Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:18 pm ]
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Thanks for the update.

Author:  Jennie [ Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:13 pm ]
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Thank you for that update. I've missed this one.

Author:  Billie [ Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:55 pm ]
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Oooh, I've just discovered this one and read it all in one go. Glad to see Gwendoline being given a chance. In the books she's not at all likeable, but I think she would have been better if people hadn't written her off immediately.

Author:  RroseSelavy [ Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:33 pm ]
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Yay! Great to see this back, Fran.

Author:  leahbelle [ Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:55 pm ]
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Fantastic to see this back! Thanks :D .

Author:  Aquabird [ Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:20 pm ]
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Great to see this back, thanks Fran. :D

Author:  Rosalin [ Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:06 am ]
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I'm glad Gwen is able to look at herself more objectively, but I hope she realises how much she's come on too.

Thanks Fran, great to see some more of this.

Author:  Chair [ Tue Jan 15, 2008 2:39 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. It's great to see this back! I hope it will make Gwen think more of others in the future.

Author:  francesn [ Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:11 pm ]
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“I think I was the Arabella of my old school,” Gwen mused as she and Rachel sat in her cubicle later that day.

“You were a bit of a trial to start with,” Rachel assented. “And you and Arabella did seem to be birds of a feather rather.”

“I can’t believe how awful I used to be to my parents,” Gwen continued. “Not just them, the teachers, everyone else at school. I was a horrible girl.”

“Well you aren’t now,” Rachel said practically. “I don’t make friends with horrible people. You were just a little bit misguided.”

Gwen smiled a little. “I had a talk with Mrs Maynard today,” she confided. “About how beastly I used to be.”

“I’m sure she didn’t say you were beastly!”

“No, of course not. Don’t be so silly! I mean she helped me see that it wasn’t just my mother that I behaved dreadfully towards. I was horrid to everyone else too. But it’s my mother I feel worst about. I don’t know how to make it up to her.”

Gwen looked at Rachel questioningly as she finished her sentence and saw a strange look on the other girl’s face.

“What is it?” Gwen asked.

“I was pretty horrid to my father too,” Rachel admitted. “I think I understand why he sent me here now. People say I look very like my mother, maybe I reminded him of her. But I haven’t written to him, not properly. I’ve written dreadfully polite little letters which don’t say anything at all. I never tell him how much I miss him, or how much I want to go home.”

By the time she finished tears were streaming down Rachel’s face.

“It’s not too late for you, you know,” Gwen said. “I might be too late for my mother, and I was too late for my father, but you can write to yours and let him know.”

Author:  roversgirl [ Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:17 pm ]
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it's fantastic to see the progress she's making here. thanks for the update :)

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:49 pm ]
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She's turning into a really nice girl - wonder if she'll ever have the chance to see Darrell or Alicia and show them?


Thanks Fran.

Author:  Billie [ Wed Jan 16, 2008 10:31 pm ]
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Ooh, yes, I'd like to see Darrell meet up with Gwen again now.
Thanks for the update!

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:05 am ]
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Gwen was never really given much of a chance at MT - I used to love Darrell & co when I was a kid, but when I read the books now I can't believe what a nasty bunch of bullies they were half the time! - and it's nice to see how much she's changing now.

Author:  Chair [ Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:57 pm ]
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Thanks, Fran. I hope that Rachel can sort things out with her father.

Author:  JustJen [ Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:30 pm ]
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Quote:
I used to love Darrell & co when I was a kid, but when I read the books now I can't believe what a nasty bunch of bullies they were half the time!


No kidding. Re-reading the books as an adult, I cringed at the behavior of Alicia and her best friend towards Gwen and some of the other girls who didn't fit in.

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:31 pm ]
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Gwen was great there. I hope Rachel can write to her father now, and let him know how she feels.

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Rosalin [ Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:57 pm ]
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She certainly has progressed - giving good advice to another girl :shock:

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Jan 18, 2008 8:39 am ]
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Lesley wrote:
She's turning into a really nice girl - wonder if she'll ever have the chance to see Darrell or Alicia and show them?


Thanks Fran.


It would be nice, especially Darrell who did try and help her reconcile with her father in the last term

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:40 pm ]
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I'm so glad this is back! Thanks, Fran.

Author:  Elle [ Fri Feb 22, 2008 12:52 am ]
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Lesley wrote:
She's turning into a really nice girl - wonder if she'll ever have the chance to see Darrell or Alicia and show them?



I would like to see that too.


Any chance of some more at some point Fran? :D :D :D :D :D :D

Author:  francesn [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:29 pm ]
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This was supposed to be the final part but we may well see an epilogue featuring Darrell and Alicia.....which means I need to read a bit more MT (shame!)

A few days passed before Gwen was allowed to see her mother again but she returned from the San in high spirits to be met from Jo’s car by an equally excited friend.

“It’s so wonderful…” Gwen began.

“You’ll never guess….” Rachel started.

They looked at each other and laughed.

“You first,” Gwen said.

“No, you!” Rachel urged. “Is your mother better? Is she going to be completely well?”

Gwen nodded enthusiastically. “She’s improved so much since I saw her. It made me wonder how bad she was when she arrived if she’s so much better today. I don’t know if she’ll be completely well, but she’s a lot better than she was and I told her how sorry I was, and she forgives me so everything’s going to be alright! Now what did you want to tell me?”

Rachel smiled. “I had a telephone call from my father. He got my letter and we had a long, long talk, and everything’s going to be just fine. He didn’t realise how I felt about coming here and when I go home for the holidays he says I don’t have to come back!”

Gwen’s face fell.

“But you’re the only real friend I’ve had. Are you really going to go?”

“Gwen, are you being selfish?” Rachel laughed.

“I am, aren’t I?” Gwen said wonderingly. “I’m such a pig. Of course you should go home if you want to – but write to me?”

“Of course,” Rachel promised. “And I’ll come and visit. See how you’re coming along.”

“By the time you come back I’ll be a real Chalet Girl!” Gwen said.

Jo, on her way to Miss Wilson’s study, heard the comment and chuckled to herself.

“You’re well on the way, Gwen. We’ll make a Chaletian of you yet.”

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:34 pm ]
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Thanks Fran.

Author:  Elbee [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 4:03 pm ]
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Thanks Fran, I really enjoyed this.

Author:  leahbelle [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 5:11 pm ]
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Great. Thanks, Fran.

Author:  roversgirl [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 6:14 pm ]
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That was great, thanks :) Lovely ending and I think an epilogue is called for! :wink:

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 6:22 pm ]
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Lovely ending - and looking forward to the epilogue! :lol:


Thanks Fran.

Author:  Jennie [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 8:49 pm ]
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Thank you, Fran. I'd like the epilogue as well, please.

Author:  BethC [ Mon Mar 31, 2008 8:51 pm ]
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Really enjoyed that - thank you, Fran!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Apr 01, 2008 12:17 am ]
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Thanks. I'm another who would like to see an epilogue.

Author:  Rosalin [ Tue Apr 01, 2008 3:11 pm ]
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Nice to see how much Gwen's reformed, and that her mother is going to be OK. I've really enjoyed this, thanks Fran.

Author:  Aquabird [ Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:50 pm ]
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Aw, what a great ending. Thanks Fran - I really enjoyed this.

Author:  PaulineS [ Tue Apr 01, 2008 9:02 pm ]
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Thanks for Gwen's story, please can we have the epilogue.

Author:  abbeybufo [ Tue Apr 01, 2008 9:10 pm ]
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*echoes request for epilogue*

Author:  Fatima [ Wed Apr 02, 2008 5:14 am ]
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How nice to see Gwen so different, with a real friend of her own. I'm also looking forward to the sequel!

Thanks Fran.

Author:  Helen P [ Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:18 pm ]
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Just caught up with the ending! How lovely - thank you Fran!

And yes please may we have an epilogue? :D

Author:  Smile :) [ Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:35 pm ]
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Thanks Fran, that was a lovely ending.

I'm looking forward to the epilogue . . .

Author:  joyclark [ Tue Apr 15, 2008 6:34 pm ]
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I don't usually message here but I'd really love to read an epilogue, especially if it involved Darrel and Co getting some comeuppance.

Please . . .

Author:  LauraMcC [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:26 pm ]
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Thanks a lot - as I am a fan of both the Malory Towers books and the CS books, it was great to read about how Gwen fared in Switzerland, and how she became a better person than Blyton gave her credit for. I too would love to read a sequel, maybe involving some of the other MT girls :?:

Author:  Maeve [ Fri May 02, 2008 5:48 pm ]
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I have just read this through in one satisfying swoop! Thanks very much, Fran! Hope the epilogue plot bunnies strike :) :) :)

Author:  Elle [ Tue May 06, 2008 9:49 am ]
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Helen P wrote:
And yes please may we have an epilogue? :D


I have really enjoyed this! Thanks Fran.


*adds to pleas for an epilogue*

Author:  shazwales [ Sun May 18, 2008 12:47 am ]
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Thanks Fran I've just read this in one sitting and really enjoyed it.

Please can we have an epilogue :?:

Author:  Cat C [ Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Chalet Girl at Last - finished 31/3/08

Only just read this (all through) - I wondered... is Arabella from the Naughtiest Girl series?

Other than that, I thought it was super, although I wonder what I'd think of MT if I were to re-read them now :shock:

Author:  Shander [ Wed Nov 12, 2008 11:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: A Chalet Girl at Last - finished 31/3/08

Lovely.
I just read the whole thing at one go, and enjoyed it so much.

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