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CHALLENGE: Songs from a snow-capped mountain
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Author:  Nightwing [ Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:03 pm ]
Post subject:  CHALLENGE: Songs from a snow-capped mountain

Cat C's January Challenge
In the style of Masaoka Shiki.

In the coolness of
The still and grey-coloured sky
Two maidens chatter

Pale like ivory
The warrior-child fights back
And slays her devil

Wicked as a crow
The other soars down the slope
Snow-white petals fall

She runs like a dear
But her roar is a lion's
She screams in silence

The majestic pine
Reaches up towards Heaven
She tries to follow

Author:  abbeybufo [ Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CHALLENGE: Songs from a snow-capped mountain

I tried to compose
Something in Japanese style
You beat me to it

Thanks Nightwing :D

Author:  Nightwing [ Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CHALLENGE: Songs from a snow-capped mountain

Cherry-blossoms drift
Softly to abbeybufo
All should write haiku

:D

Author:  Cat C [ Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CHALLENGE: Songs from a snow-capped mountain

Wow, is all I can
Say in response to something
I could not have done.

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