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Title: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 10th, 2003, 4:41pm (I said I might have a go at a "behind closed doors" with Thekla but in flicking through Lintons/Rebel, it seems to me that Mademoiselle deals with her faithfully and that any further conversation would be futile because she does not repent until many years later when she sends her letter. However, we do learn that Mademoiselle is closeted with the other 4 senior members of staff prior to any decision being reached and I thought it would be very interesting to be a fly on the wall to that particular discussion ... so here's a little something to whet your combined appetites ....) Miss Wilson hurried to the staff room in search of her contemporaries. She made a fine figure as she strode purposefully down the corridor, trig and trim in her fawn twin-set. Joey Bettany had once mischievously likened her to a red setter and with her easy lope and smooth auburn hair pinned neatly to her head, it was not difficult to see why. Bursting into the mistresses’ private domain, with scant regard for protocol, her eyes alighted on two of the three people she was searching for. “Con! Hilda! You’re wanted in Mademoiselle’s study immediately!” “But Nell, what on earth’s the matter?” protested pretty Miss Stewart, the History mistress, as she looked up from her partially completed jigsaw. “Pow-wow for all senior staff” was the succinct explanation. “Have you seen Jeanne anywhere?” Miss Annersley, Head of English and Senior Mistress, blotted the pithy comments she had just made on Cornelia Flower’s essay on Julius Caesar and closed the exercise book with a sigh of resignation. She was barely halfway through her marking and judging by Nell’s expression, she would not be returning to it that afternoon. “Whatever has happened to precipitate such a summons?” she demanded. “Thekla” replied Miss Wilson with a frown. The other two mistresses exchanged startled glances, before Miss Annersley explained that Mdlle de Lachennais had left moments before to retrieve a book from her quarters. “Thanks, Hilda, I’ll see you both in there” and Nell had gone as rapidly as she had appeared, to track down the Languages Mistress. Con shrugged and quickly swept her remaining jigsaw pieces back in their box for safe-keeping, then joining Hilda Annersley at the door, the two women made haste to the Headmistress’s office. Ten minutes later saw all five women seated round the large desk, each amply supplied with coffee and a plate of cakes. Mademoiselle LePattre had ensured that each mistress had set work for any further classes they had that day and the prefects were in charge. She now sat at the helm. A distinctly plain-looking Frenchwoman with a somewhat sallow complexion, she had succeeded Madge Bettany as Headmistress on that young lady’s marriage to James Russell, three years previously. Madge had begun the Chalet School as a young and rather naïve twenty-four year old but the school had blossomed and grown from strength to strength in the intervening years. Madge’s own style of leadership, a firm but fair hand and her knack of understanding others, was quite different to that of Therese LePattre, but the Frenchwoman’s quiet dignity and commitment to both staff and pupils engendered the same level of respect in her employees. Nell Wilson and Con Stewart, who were great friends out of school hours, pulled up chairs together. Con was built on a small scale and her Scottish good looks perfectly matched the rather handsome features of the Science & Geography mistress. Mdlle de Lachennais, a compatriot of the Head, and Miss Annersley sat opposite them. Jeanne was a small, vivacious lady, very Gallic in both speech and mannerisms and with dark colouring to match. Hilda Annersley, tall and stately with piercing blue-grey eyes and an unconscious air of authority, perfectly complemented the gathering. Mademoiselle looked round the table carefully and what she saw reassured her. With the school about to face its most difficult decision to date it was critical that she seek counsel from her colleagues. Together with herself, the four women she had convened to this meeting made up the nucleus of the teaching staff and she knew that they would provide the necessary wisdom and sound advice to tackle this most thorny of problems. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Jennie on Nov 10th, 2003, 4:47pm Ooooh-er, I wouldn't like to have that lot discussing me and my shortcomings. Feels terrified and crawls under desk. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Marianne on Nov 10th, 2003, 4:50pm Excellent! I look forward to reading the rest of this!!! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lesley on Nov 10th, 2003, 5:41pm Wow, never realised until reading that exactly what Thekla would face! Feel just like Jennie - would be running and hiding! This is really good Rachael - looking forward to next installment! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 10th, 2003, 5:59pm Consider my appetite whetted Rachael! You know what we're ALL going to start baying for now don't you? ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Carolyn P on Nov 10th, 2003, 6:19pm This is an interesting idea, we all know the outcome, but the process will be worth writing/reading about. Like Jennie, I'm glad I've never had to face that group, how terrifing! Look forward to more. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 10th, 2003, 6:28pm on 11/10/03 at 18:19:30, Carolyn P wrote:
I think this is one of the most interesting aspects of the whole drabbles board. Taking scenes where we know the outcomes but which Elinor chose not to write about is fascinating. The whole idea of "what really happened" at various times in the CS history is amazing. We know where the story is going, but it is really good to see a possible route it could have got there. And of course, because it isn't the definitive version, it still allows us all the freedom to write the same scene in a variety of ways. Even some truly bizarre ways! So Rachael, we know Thekla is going to get kicked out, but who is going to be the first to say it out loud? I imagine it would be a very hard subject to raise in a school with the CS ethos of forgiveness at all times, so can't wait to see how you are going to tackle it! Rachel ~ settles back, removes "sensible" hat and trundles off to play on the drabbles. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lisa_T on Nov 10th, 2003, 6:30pm *sticks head from under table to demand MORE!* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Sugarplum on Nov 10th, 2003, 8:42pm OOOOOhhh this good :) seeing the storries we know being intervened with drabbles is sooo good. I've always wondered about this discussion as well. More please |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 10th, 2003, 8:47pm Wow. This could be a very explosive story, and I hope, with such a great beginning, it can be added to our Fictional Fill-Ins section. I have to say that one thing that will be interesting is to see what role Mlle Lepattre plays. For the life of me, I can't get her to 'come to the party' in Matey. She just won't do anything! And is this possibly the start of Miss Annersley's famous 'mercy'? |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by xanthe on Nov 10th, 2003, 8:53pm Ooh, ooh, oooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!!! :o *all agog and waiting for some more please Rachael* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 11th, 2003, 12:09am Consider my appetite well and truly whetted, more please. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 12:19am on 11/11/03 at 00:09:19, Esmeralda wrote:
Wanders through this thread muttering "where is everybody?" Where have all the yibblers gone tonight? Do you realise I am about to go to bed with a BOOK because nobody wants to yibble with me? ** Wonders if it's time to get paranoid but opts for neurotic instead ** Rachael, please hurry back and write some more! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 11th, 2003, 12:29am Well, I was going to wander off and write some more of Tensions, Rachel, but if you'd prefer me to stay and yibble I'm always happy to oblige.... |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Nicole on Nov 11th, 2003, 12:32am Rachael - really enjoying this and can't wait for more **Thinking about starting the chant** |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 1:36am Chant, chant, chant, chant, chant, chant, chant, chant, chant ;) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 11th, 2003, 10:13am (Goodness - some of you lot seem to have very guilty consciences :o And I think some of you may have the wrong end of the stick - Thekla won't have to face all five of them (that would be very cruel!) This is just a private discussion as to the best way to handle her and, unless they give me any surprises, I'm fairly fixed as to how they'll all react ...) Turning to Miss Wilson, Mademoiselle asked her to bring the rest up to date with Thekla’s latest exploit. “I was woken up at one this morning,” began Miss Wilson, “Only to find Cornelia Flower, Joyce Linton and Thekla von Stift outside their dormitories. Cornelia was haranguing them, it was her voice that woke me.” Here she broke off to acknowledge the grin from Miss Stewart who could well imagine Cornelia’s clarion tones. “Cornelia had been disturbed by the other two and knowing the trouble Joyce, at least, would be in if she was found breaking Lights Out, was trying to get her back to bed. I turned up just as Joyce was leaving and rather put the cat amongst the pigeons. I clearly wasn’t going to get anything out of them at that time of night so I told them to come to me at Break. Joyce wasn’t prepared to say anything … when will those girls learn that their wretched code of honour isn’t applicable to every situation?”, Miss Wilson gave an exasperated sigh followed by a wry smile as she continued, “Corney however, was! She was quite adamant that Thekla must have woken up Joyce and brought her out to the window seat where she was holding her wrist. After learning that, I dismissed Corney and was just about to find out why Thekla felt the need to speak to Joyce so urgently when Mademoiselle arrived.” Mademoiselle took up the tale herself. “I caught Cornelia dancing with rage in the corridor”, she explained. “I gather she was frustrated at missing out! I take it you’re all aware that Jo seems to have taken Joyce under her wing?” “I didn’t know,” mused Miss Stewart, “But it would certainly explain her improved grades. I was quite surprised to find myself giving her an A+ for her History this week.” “And I awarded her a B for her French” added Mdlle de Lachenais who had been quiet up until now. “Exactly, somehow Joey has got through to her and I am quite satisfied that Joyce played no part in this. Thekla seems to have been intimidating her and demanding that Joyce end her friendship with Joey …” “But, cherie, why?” interjected Mdlle de Lachenais, with a horrified expression. “I expect she realised that her influence over Joyce had been broken”, replied Miss Annersley thoughtfully. “By insisting that Joyce end the friendship, Thekla hoped to resume their own relationship. They’ve certainly not close pals but Joyce is the nearest thing Thekla has to a friend, and being younger than her, Thekla has a hold. Jo and Thekla are poles apart, of course, and they’ve barely been on more than civil terms since Thekla arrived. It wouldn’t surprise me if Thekla was a little envious of Jo’s sudden interest in Joyce, especially when it results in Joyce turning over a new leaf.” |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 11th, 2003, 10:13am “I think that Gillian may have asked Jo for advice ...” another voice interrupted. What makes you say that, Con?” Miss Wilson had sat up with interest. “Oh, I wasn’t close by but Gillian asked Jo to be her partner during one of the Senior walks and I definitely saw her draw Jo to one side for a private talk. Simone’s face was a picture!”” Con chuckled reprehensibly and the others smiled. “Pauvre Simone!” said kind-hearted Mdlle de Lachenais. “Jo is everything to her and she finds it very hard to share her company, even now” “But she is learning fast,” Mademoiselle defended her young cousin,” and she now has much better control of her emotions.” “If Gillian has asked Joey for help then Jo is proving herself a real friend.” Miss Wilson looked concerned. “Mrs Linton is very ill and any bad news from the school could have an adverse effect on her health. If Joey has helped Joyce to see that and to put her mother first, then we may be very thankful for her influence.” Miss Annersley remained pensive. “Of course, Nell, and I think that Joey succeeded where we failed simply by being Jo.” The questioning eyebrows caused her to continue. “Joyce is at that difficult age where she’s neither child nor adult. Gillian, being her sister, is too close to her to have any effect and she sees us as “old”. Joey, however, has the authority in her status as Head Girl to make her listen but is close enough in age to make an impact.” Mademoiselle nodded. “Yes, I believe you’re right, Hilda, but we are here to discuss Thekla and the question is, what action do we now take?” The mistresses sat in quiet contemplation for a few minutes. “Should we not discuss this with Madame?” asked Miss Annersley tentatively, once it had become clear that no one wished to voice the first opinion. Mademoiselle shook her head imperatively. “I telephoned Dr Russell before you arrived but he was quite adamant that Madge is not to be bothered with anything. It’s only a few weeks since Sybil’s birth and she’s still dreadfully tired. For what it’s worth, he has every confidence that we will make the right decision.” Leaning back she waited for a response. She had her own views as to a possible outcome but she had learnt the value of speaking last and encouraging her staff to debate the subject matter freely before imposing her thoughts as Headmistress. Nell Wilson glanced around the group. Having played a major role in the previous night’s events, she felt that she must be the first to speak ... |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Abi on Nov 11th, 2003, 11:09am Oh, this is good, Rachael. Please let us have more soon. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 11th, 2003, 11:56am Quote:
Thanks for the hint, KB - I have a cunning plan ..... but it won't fit in 'til later ...... |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 11th, 2003, 12:40pm Quote:
So, what did she say? *Impatiently awaiting the next part |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Ray on Nov 11th, 2003, 1:09pm This is great :) I'm joining with the impatient masses for more, and soon please :) Ray *who would also like it noted that this drabble has given her a plot bunny* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 2:55pm *waiting as patiently as possible* *hopes Ray will look after that plot bunny, and bring him to fulfilment!* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 4:28pm ** waiting as impatiently as possible ** ** stomping round and stamping on plot bunnies in frustration ** When do we get more of this then? |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 11th, 2003, 4:29pm For once in her life she was reluctant to articulate her feelings. Appreciating the value that the Chalet School placed on forgiveness, she also possessed an extremely well-developed sense of right and wrong and in this instance she felt that Thekla had been given every chance. “I know this may go against the grain,” she began slowly, “But I’m struggling to see what else we can do for Thekla. This is her second term with us and, if anything, she has become worse. It may be for the best if she leaves.” “You mean expel her?” Mdlle de Lachenais looked aghast. “If we can’t find a way to help her, then yes, expulsion.” Having expressed her thoughts, Nell began to warm to her subject. “Come, Jeanne, think about it. From her very first day, Thekla has been difficult. She came to us with an extremely supercilious air and has been downright rude on numerous occasions to those she thinks are beneath her. That kind of silly snobbery just doesn’t fit with the ethos of the school and after two terms she ought to be changing. As it is, she’s compounded the situation by her conduct this term, culminating in last night's bullying of Joyce Linton. If she won’t change, how can we possibly keep her?” “Won’t or can’t?” Hilda Annersley’s quiet voice was compelling. “What do you mean, Nan?” “Is it that she refuses to change or that she does not know how to change?” Mademoiselle listened closely, sensing that the English mistress was on to something. “Does it matter which?” Con Stewart was the youngest and least experienced present and had never had to deal with anything like this. “Definitely. If Thekla refuses to change then we can not help her because her attitude prevents it. If her heart, however is in the right place and she recognises the error of her ways, then we can help, in fact I would go so far as to say it is our duty to assist her. We can not blame the child for her background and training.” Nell grimaced but then relented. “You have a point, Hilda, and if there is a way to mitigate the circumstances then I’m prepared to consider it. However, if we’re going to go down that route, I insist that we examine everything systematically. I propose we review the two terms that she’s had, look at every angle and see whether that helps us come to a decision. I warn you though, if I don’t see any concrete evidence of a willingness to change, my initial judgement stands.” “I think that’s an excellent plan” Mademoiselle nodded her approval at the same time as Miss Annersley inclined her head in acceptance. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 4:38pm ** Slightly scared how well my last tactics worked, but not averse to the result ** Fabulous Rachael. It's definitely an interesting conversation to be eavesdropping on! (I never dropped no eaves, honest ;)) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 4:48pm This is great Rachael!! *starts another chant!!* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 11th, 2003, 5:00pm You'll have to wait until tomorrow for more - plot bunny wanted me to write a couple of paragraphs that come later so can't post them! Rachel - lucky break - if I'd actually seen your post I may have delayed ............................................................. ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 5:06pm *glad Rachael didn't see Rachel's post!!* Yaaaarrrrggghhh!!! Too many bloody Rach(a)els!!!!!! :o |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 11th, 2003, 5:16pm Quote:
Well, >:( definitely no more posts 'til tomorrow, now ;) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 5:29pm Aww Rachael, I'm sorry! I didn't mean it in a bad way, but it does get confusing!! The meeting's going to be fun!! At least four of you!!! :o :o :o |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:17pm on 11/11/03 at 17:29:38, Vikki wrote:
How come? Is Rachael a clone? ;) ** Goes to hunt out anti-clone weapons just in case ** |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:21pm You know what I meant!! There'll be at least 4 Rach(a)els at the meeting!! ::) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:26pm But I'm unique! ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:29pm Something for which we should all be profoundly grateful!!!! ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:32pm Anyone who isn't profoundly grateful yet will be after March . . . |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Ray on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:33pm *grins* We're all unique. Of course, at least *I* make things easier by refering to myself by my college nickname of Ray... ;) On the subject of the plot bunny, he's very healthy and bouncing up and down beside me now, pestering me to finish off the first chapter. On the subject of this installment - it's excellent. Looking forward to seeing what's to come :) Ray *off to tidy up her own work* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:37pm So when do we get to see the first chapter Ray? Or has your bunny not given you the posting schedule yet? |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Ray on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:43pm *briefly hijacks Rachael's thread* Well, chapter 1 is nearly done, but I want to read it back to myself and see if I have folks in character. Hopefully this evening for posting, or if not, then tomorrow. Ray *returning you to your normal service* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 6:55pm on 11/11/03 at 18:43:45, Ray wrote:
Gosh! Isn't she polite?! The rest of us just yibble away! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 7:02pm Oh, we'll soon train her out of that!!!! ;) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 7:18pm And the sooner the better! Don't want to be shown up like by people just back from lumps of cheese! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by PatW on Nov 11th, 2003, 8:15pm she's just out of practice, that's all. We just have to hope that the Philly didn't go mouldy!! ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Ray on Nov 11th, 2003, 8:19pm Honestly. No soft cheese was harmed during my vacation. (I've decided the toxic gunk United serve up as a snack shouldn't be defined as cheese period.) And I didn't yibble (much) before I went away - so why would you expect me to *start* yibbling now? *pauses* You've got me at it. Haven't you... Ray *moaning softly* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachel on Nov 11th, 2003, 8:24pm I understand Ray. I don't yibble either. It's Vikki and KB that do all the yibbling round here. ::) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 11th, 2003, 8:42pm *laughs hysterically at Rachel's attempt to portray innocence* 8oo 8oo 8oo |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lesley on Nov 11th, 2003, 8:47pm Rachael this is wonderful - really looking forward to the next few installments - especially as I have a little idea of what may be in them! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Carolyn P on Nov 11th, 2003, 8:54pm Rachael, This is wonderful. Looking forward to more aand now able to see where Ray got her inspiration from. Well done for lending her a plot bunny. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 11th, 2003, 11:05pm on 11/11/03 at 20:42:03, Vikki wrote:
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 12th, 2003, 10:07am I like the Thekla's granddaughter story Ray - nice one! “First impressions then, everyone. Any thoughts, Nell?” Butter would not have melted in Miss Stewart’s mouth as she kept a straight face. She could not resist the dig, knowing full well what her friend’s comments had been on the subject! “Such innocence!” groaned Miss Wilson. “If any of you haven’t heard the story, I had the dubious pleasure of being the recipient of Thekla’s views once she realised she would be consorting with what she considered the lower classes. Now, what were her exact words? I’m sorry but I can not associate with people like this!” “But, Nell, how then did you respond?”, this from Mdlle de Lachenais. “I merely pointed out that Graf von Stift had chosen to send her to the Chalet School and by association this meant that he expected her to mix with all our pupils, not just those she deemed hochgeborene!” “I take it she was suitably squashed?” Hilda Annersley sounded amused. “Oh, completely! Quite the size of a beetle by the time I’d finished, give me some credit, Nan!” Hilda laughed, well aware of Miss Wilson’s reputation for sarcasm throughout the school. “I think the problem was that her people had heard that Elisaveta had been a pupil and automatically assumed that she was representative of the average girl. What a shock Thekla must have got when she discovered the variety of backgrounds we have here!” “Yes, I think we have to take into account the influence of her family,” Mademoiselle intervened. “Her father was an officer in the German Imperial Army and certainly seems to have impressed his Junker outlook on his daughter. Do you feel we’ve made any progress with those beliefs?” “In fairness to the girl, yes”, Miss Stewart took the floor. “In her first few weeks she was quite unbearable, offensive even, in her dealings with girls whose folk are tradesmen. I hear she was very rude to both Frieda and Sophie and they’re prefects! However, by the end of last term there was a distinct improvement and as a minimum she seemed reconciled to a certain level of decorum.” “But, with respect, Con, any good work we achieved was undone over the holidays. She came back this term as bad as the beginning of last. There’s little use in the school effecting a change during term-time if we have to start again at the beginning of every term – it’s a classic case of one step forward and one step back!” “Nell’s right, Con. If we are to have an influence it must be enduring. Sadly for Thekla, I believe her brother is very much under the sway of some of the more extreme views emanating from within Central Europe.” The staff all looked serious for a moment as Hilda’s comment caused them to reflect on the more alarming news stories reported in recent months. “Didn’t you tell us that was one of the reasons her parents sent her to us?” Mademoiselle nodded her assent before Miss Annersley resumed her line of reasoning. “If she is subjected to that type of politics in her home life then I agree we have an impossible struggle. More importantly, it’s not fair on the other girls.” Mademoiselle agreed. “You are quite right, Hilda. The majority must not suffer for the needs of one.” |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 12th, 2003, 11:35am Wonderful - I've always enjoyed the staff room discussions in the books - this one is especially good as it is dealing with such an important issue - more please. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Ray on Nov 12th, 2003, 12:24pm Like this :) (Though I thought that Thekla's brother was infected with Naziism - but I could be wrong) Looking forward to more :) Ray *prodding her plot bunny* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 12th, 2003, 2:12pm Yep - I have to admit that both my geography and history are letting me down badly! I didn't want to go into any details so was trying to leave it vague. Wasn't sure to what extent Nazism was rife at this time and/or the extent of its influence on T's brother - as for Eastern Europe - d'oh for me! I did't mean communism! I was thinking from my perspective sitting here in the UK rather than from Austria - although technically, Berlin does seen to be slightly to the east of Innsbruck .... *clutching at straws* *someone give me some help and I'll modify the post - cheers* edited to add: have changed to Central instead of eastern Europe for now! Meanwhile .... “So,” Mdlle de Lachenais began, “we must accept there is a limit to the control we may have over Thekla’s family and their principles. But for me, I believe we have had very positive results with regard to her temper. Remember, Hilda, how we came upon her screaming and beating upon the floor after she had scratched her arm on the stationery cupboard? Mon Dieu! She had lost all sense of dignity and self-respect!” Hilda chuckled as she remembered the commotion. “You are very generous in your description, Jeanne. I seem to remember she was disporting herself like a beast, she was thrashing around on the ground like a wildcat!” “But Hilda, you never told me this!” Mademoiselle had been visiting Madge Russell up at the Sonnalpe when this incident had occurred. Miss Annersley had given her only a brief outline of events on her return. “My apologies, Therese,” Miss Annersley made haste to rectify her oversight. “Thekla was so furious when Bianca refused to give her an exercise book that she pushed past to grab one herself. As you know, she caught her arm on the lock of the stationery cupboard and the song and dance she made disturbed both myself and Jeanne. We arrived on the scene to observe Thekla literally flinging herself to the ground and spitting at Bianca in a fit of temper. I had to physically drag her to her feet and proceeded to scold her soundly.” Mademoiselle looked suitably horrified so the English mistress hurriedly continued. “You weren’t available so I called a staff meeting. We discussed the problem long and hard but came to the conclusion that it was early days and we should just keep an eye on her. Con, I think it was you who suggested the girls themselves would set her straight and explain that such behaviour is not acceptable in our establishment. The rest of us concurred. I was a little worried that we might expect similar outbreaks if she was subjected to the usual teasing but Ivy Norman recommended a programme of games and exercise so they would all be too tired to squabble. I must say, it does seem to have kept her in check. I don’t think we’ve had a repeat performance except for …” “Except for the episode on the Barenbad Alpe!” Miss Wilson interrupted with a twinkle. Miss Annersley subsided, content to hand over the reins. “What a day!” Nell reminisced. “We had a glorious ramble up the Alpe and everything seemed to be going smoothly. The girls were picking flowers and finding ingenious ways to stop them wilting on the way back. Then the next thing we knew, Marie von Eschenau was holding Thekla by the shoulders and giving her a jolly good shaking! I pulled them apart, of course, but I couldn’t believe my eyes!” “No, I have to admit, I rather thought Marie didn’t possess a temper!” Miss Stewart had also been amazed. “What had Thekla said to incite her?” “I gather it was some argument about Germans and Austrians. To be honest, I didn’t enquire too deeply at the time, I was more intent on getting us home without drawing any further attention to ourselves! Much of it was tiredness on Thekla’s part, she was unaccustomed to our walks. Did I ever tell you that she demanded an escort to assist her off the mountain?” “No! Nell, she never?” “Oh yes, she sat down at one point and refused to move another step. I sent the others on and told her quite firmly that she had two choices: to stay there on her own or to come with me at once. Suffice to say, she made the right choice.” There followed a chuckle of appreciation. “Hilda and I got the full story from them both later. I think we successfully drove a few truths home.” There was little need to explain further. If Miss Wilson had a reputation for sarcasm, it was only bettered by Miss Annersley’s line in gentle irony which was also legendary throughout the school. The other mistresses could almost pity the unfortunate Thekla and Marie! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 12th, 2003, 5:28pm It's strange isn't it, we know what they'll decide, but we're still desperate to find out what happens next!? :) More soon please Rachael!! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lesley on Nov 12th, 2003, 5:43pm Loving this Rachael - more please! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 12th, 2003, 9:46pm This is excellent, Rachael. I love the reminiscences that are going on, and you've done a lot of research into which staff were there and which weren't. Please don't make us wait too long for more. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 13th, 2003, 1:46am *Finding it difficult to say MORE PLEASE in more than three words. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Susan on Nov 13th, 2003, 1:50am Rachael - have only just seen this story it's brilliant. So nice to know what goes on behind the closed doors. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 13th, 2003, 5:04am on 11/13/03 at 01:46:55, Esmeralda wrote:
You could go the very polite path: May we please have more? The slightly more forceful path: More. Now. Please. And the path for Vikki: Stop yibbling and post, you time-waster, you! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 13th, 2003, 10:11am “Still, there is nothing there to mark her as out of the ordinary compared to the other girls.” Mademoiselle was valiantly trying to keep the discussion on track. “Agreed.” Miss Wilson was scrupulously fair. “But we haven’t even started on this term yet.” “You’re right, that’s when the problematic behaviour began” Con was of the same opinion as her friend. “Thekla didn’t exactly endear herself to her classmates last term but in retrospect she was no worse than some of the difficult children we’ve had in the past. Eustacia, Cornelia and even Grizel if we go further back.” “No, but then they all settled down within their first term. Thekla has succeeded only in alienating herself. She let slip that Margia & Co. boiled the clock,” Miss Wilson permitted herself a small smile in memory, “I think that may have been inadvertent but the rest sent her to Coventry. Then I shall never forget her comments following Evvy’s explosion as long as I live …” “Which were?” “That’s what comes of teaching girl the same lessons as boys. Their brains are not wise enough to reason as those of boys do, and so one has such an event as this! Trust me, she was snubbed by all!” “I’m not surprised. What a dreadful thing to say and with our academic record! A significant number of our girls go on to higher education and are very successful.” Mademoiselle was quite ruffled. “That aside though, I feel her attitude had changed by the end of last term.” Mdlle de Lachenais always strove to see the best in everyone. “Oh, absolutely, she was acting very normally by the Staff Evening and I for one will treasure the memory of her face when she was doused by that tub of water Joey threw over her!” Miss Annersley had the audacity to smirk and Miss Stewart rose to the challenge. “Never mind, Thekla, what about us?!” Both Nell and Con had rushed to Thekla’s rescue and borne the brunt of Jo’s folly. Their faces on being drenched with icy water had also been a picture! “Goodness knows what Jo thought she was playing at,” Miss Wilson added her tuppence worth, “She’s a disgrace to any self-respecting Guide!” As the teasing continued, everyone studiously ignored Mdlle de Lachenais. Petite and graceful as she was, Jeanne had contrived to thud heavily over twelve lighted candles, thus condemning herself to one year’s bad luck! Thekla had been attempting the same feat when a candle flame ignited the muslin petticoat which she had been strictly forbidden to wear. Nell and Con, as Guiders, had flung her to the ground to beat out the flames and been soaked for their troubles. Thekla had been so impressed by their quick thinking that she had expressed a wish to join the Guides the following term. Sadly, this had never materialised. “Does anyone know why she never joined?” Miss Annersely was curious. “I asked her before our first meeting and she said that her parents did not wish her to join. She didn’t seem disappointed either, I think by then their values had been reinforced.” Miss Wilson sounded sombre. “It’s a crying shame because it would have been just the thing to help her.” |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 13th, 2003, 11:46am Mademoiselle took it upon herself to review the discussion to date. “So, we believe that Thekla’s home situation is not conducive to the school having a lasting positive influence but that last term, at least, we were able to help her control her temper and be civil to those of a different background to herself?” “Yes, that’s it in a nutshell,” Miss Stewart was quick to reply, “But this term she has returned with a most objectionable manner and I sense that she has become even more contemptuous of the ideals we uphold.” “Yet in some ways she is acting like girls much younger than her. I find it hard to credit that she would get involved with things so childish as passing notes and a midnight feast.” “I’m inclined to believe that her involvement in passing notes was directed as an insult to the prefects, if not to Joey herself.” “Go on, Nan” “She has never liked any of the prefects. She either condescends to address them or has taken an instant dislike to those who have had cause to reprimand her. Take Joey, as an example. She is Head Girl with an unconscious talent for leadership that appeals to the majority of the girls. She also has a hail-fellow-well-met style that makes her approachable but when she stands on her dignity it can be quite cutting. Any schoolgirl would yearn to be friends with her but Thekla probably senses that she is not the type of girl to appeal to people like Joey and her coterie. As a result she is hurt and defensive. As an older girl, she should be making friends amongst the Seniors and yet she finds them aloof. She may well recognise that this is her own fault but her upbringing has failed to provide her with the tools to make a change. It must be very difficult for her and so she reacts by pushing them even further away.” “Pauvre petite” murmured Mademoiselle sympathetically. “So that’s why she took up with Joyce Linton?” “I expect so. Joyce is not a good judge of character and would have been attracted to Thekla’s superior attitude. Thekla would have been thankful for the friendship even if she did find Joyce immature. Her participation in Joyce’s misdemeanours is as likely to be a kick against the status quo as any genuine desire to rebel.” Mdlle de Lachenais who had remained reticent for much of the discussion expressed an opinion. “For me, I do not like Thekla’s dishonesty. Joyce has been rude and disobedient, but very disobedient, but she has never lied. Always she has owned up to any mischief and taken the punishment. Thekla is more devious …” “Devious? I would say downright untrustworthy!” Miss Stewart’s peppery temper was roused. “Hilda, didn’t you tell me that Thekla tried to blame the whole midnight feast idea on Joyce?” “Yes, Con. I ignored her. I’m sure it was Joyce’s idea but that’s no excuse for the rest of them. They all made a choice to join her and Thekla should have been ashamed of herself. After all, she and Luise were the eldest present.” “I only wish we’d seen them when she produced her raw bacon!” The mistresses doubled up at this. The girls were always well fed and prior to this term there had never been a midnight feast until Joyce insisted that it was the done thing at boarding schools. The resulting array of weird and wonderful foods had been eye-opening and the other girls had been appalled when Thekla produced rashers of raw smoked bacon as her contribution to the festivities! Mademoiselle was the first to recover. “We should not laugh. Thekla is in very serious trouble and her deception and penchant for blaming others disturbs me. We can not excuse this in a Senior because it sets a terrible example to the younger girls.” |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 13th, 2003, 2:14pm (with mucho gracias to Lesley ;)) “That’s a good point, Therese,” Miss Wilson’s face was grave, “I doubt whether we can make much difference to someone who is inherently dishonest.” “I suppose there is one thing in her favour.” Miss Stewart was doing her best to be impartial. “When those little terrors ragged Miss Norman, she did refuse to take part.” “Only because it was undignified, “Miss Annersley was quick to refute this point. “She had no right to absent herself from a lesson without permission. Her first duty was to seek advice from a member of staff.” “So that leaves last night’s events?” “Quite so and I think this will be pivotal to our final decision.” Mademoiselle was confident in this. “Nell, tell us more about what happened,” pleaded Miss Stewart, “How did Joyce react?” “According to Cornelia she was scared out of her wits. Joyce knew full well the consequences of her actions. I think she would have gone back to bed of her own accord but Thekla was holding her fast and she’s much smaller so she had no option but to stay. Then when Thekla made demands that she end her friendship with Joey, Joyce began to argue back and that’s when Corney found them. Corney was steadfast in her conviction that Thekla was intimidating Joyce, she was gripping her wrist so hard that Joyce cried out.” “We certainly can’t sanction that kind of behaviour!” “No indeed, particularly when Thekla was trying to manipulate Joyce and dictate who she may have as friends.” “And you said that Thekla’s reasoning for this was that she wanted to hurt Jo by getting Joyce into trouble?” “Yes, Thekla has taken such a loathing to Joey Bettany that she will do anything to harm her, even if it means getting another girl to the brink of expulsion, never mind the effect it may have on the girl’s mother.” Mademoiselle could barely put it into words. “It certainly seems that way.” “Despicable!” Miss Stewart was lost for words. “Quelle horreur!” Mdlle de Lachenais’ exclamation was stacatto. “I don’t like it,” Nell was forceful. “Lies, deceit, deception, bullying, both physical and emotional …. the list goes on. We’ve had her for almost two terms and any progress we made last term has been completely undermined. Last night’s episode is the final straw. We can’t possibly keep her and fulfil our responsibility to the other girls. I dread to think what the parents would say if they heard of this. I had to drag the story out of Thekla, most of which was a pack of lies until Cornelia butted in, and at no point did she express any regret. As far as I’m concerned the decision’s made.” The conversation flew back and forth between them. Miss Annersley fell silent as the others reviewed the facts. The Senior Mistress was a very strict disciplinarian but she maintained an empathy for the girls which was second to none in the staff room. Perhaps this was because Hilda Annersley’s own schooldays had been anything but smooth and as a Middle, her reports, had anyone chosen to investigate them, showed a very chequered history. No one would have believed it of such an authoritarian but Hilda Annersley had been an imp of the first water and had very nearly been expelled herself! Not for worlds would she have shared this with the staff but only the intervention of a kind and perceptive Deputy Head had saved her. That same lady had been instrumental in guiding the young Hilda Annersley through the rest of her education and, had she but known it, had become her inspiration and role model. On more than one occasion Hilda had found herself stopping to consider how that same Deputy Head would have dealt with a situation. This approach had helped her become the respected figure she was, held in deference by staff and girls alike. Now, as they discussed Thekla, there was something niggling at the back of her mind and she was focusing all her efforts on pinning it down. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by PatW on Nov 13th, 2003, 2:26pm Well don't leave it there - keep going, pleeeaase! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 13th, 2003, 3:50pm Well, I have written the rest ... just not sure whether to let you have it now or wait for tomorrow ......... :-/ Hmmm, these decisions are difficult, aren't they? I thought that was quite a good place to leave it myself ;D (and as I'm currently "being roundly applauded, the board must surely agree too?) *looks innocent* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by PatW on Nov 13th, 2003, 4:01pm Your look of innocence doesn't come any where near the level of corney's in 'Accident', so there's no way you can get away with it! ::) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 13th, 2003, 4:09pm But Pat, I am at my most beatific! Not to mention saintly, innocent, *Rachael P - wingless angel* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by PatW on Nov 13th, 2003, 4:12pm Doesn't work - get posting!! *Pot calling the kettle.....* 8oo |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lisa_T on Nov 13th, 2003, 6:08pm *scowls blackly at Rachael* Now you're just being annoying. This is fantastic and I want to read the rest of it! By the by, a thought just occurred to me. Do you think that it was because of this incident that the school are so watchful of friendships in case one girl is being manipulated or damaged by another? Thekla is starting to sound worse than BWD who was silly and spiteful but not much else! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lesley on Nov 13th, 2003, 6:23pm Wonderful Rachael - and isn't it annoying that there are currently only three of us who know why you were thanking me? ;D BTW I've had a sneak preview at a later post - not sure when it'll be ready to go - but it's fantastic!!!! Definitely well worth waiting for and a perfect spotlight on two particular characters! (Hey Rachael - this gloating lark's pretty good - no wonder you've enjoyed it!8oo) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 13th, 2003, 10:21pm Please post the next bit tonight Rachael!!! Pretty please!! :-* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 13th, 2003, 11:16pm Rachael, it's wonderful the way you're tying things together and gradually (but not too quickly) drawing the story to a close. I loved the way you used Lesley's story, too. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 13th, 2003, 11:23pm *now wanting very much to read Lesley's 'Headmistress' (presuming that's the story to which KB is referring)* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 13th, 2003, 11:49pm Yes, that's the one. It's a fantastic story! ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 14th, 2003, 2:11am Really looking firward to reading the rest of this - whenever you do decide tto post it. *Absolutely and totally refuses to react to any of the gloating on on this thread. *Goes off to sulk in private >:( |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 14th, 2003, 2:14am *urges Esmeralda to put her sulkiness into "Tensions"* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 14th, 2003, 8:39am Well, after today I'm not around 'til Wed and it seems a bit mean to have you hanging around until then, so here's the rest - hope you enjoy it! “In summary, quite a litany of transgressions. Under the circumstances I think we have no option but to expel.” One by one, the other mistresses acquiesced, albeit reluctantly … all but one. “Hilda?” No response. “Nan! What do you think?” “I’m sorry,” Miss Annersley flushed as she was roused from her reverie. She had been gazing reflectively at the large bookshelf along one length of the wall. “You’ve been deep in thought for the last few minutes. What’s on your mind and when were you thinking of sharing it with us?” Con Stewart was at her most persuasive. “William Shakespeare” was the surprising answer and one calculated to provoke a response from her peers. “Mais cherie, je ne comprends pas!” “Shakespeare?!” “For goodness sake, Nan, how can Shakespeare be of any use in this?” Nell Wilson’s voice rang out loudest. Only Mademoiselle remained silent. She recognised that with Hilda Annersley, still waters ran deep. “Have any of you seen or read The Merchant of Venice?” Not waiting for a reply, she began to enlighten them. “I was reciting Portia’s speech to Shylock to myself, the scene after he has demanded justice and his pound of flesh from Antonio. “The quality of mercy is not strained…” and “… earthly power doth then show likest God’s, where mercy seasons justice”? Portia tells him that “we do pray for mercy and that same prayer does teach us all to render the deeds of mercy…” I was wondering whether she might have a point.” Miss Wilson bristled. As a scientist, she was extremely logical, perhaps even didactic, and consistently took a rational approach to analysing problems. Whilst she enjoyed a good novel, she tended to read for relaxation and to enjoy a story at its face value. It had never occurred to her to actually apply any of the books she read, other than the Bible, to her personal or professional life. “Hilda, I hope you’re not suggesting that we base today’s decision on a centuries old playwright? Really! I believe you’re becoming soft-hearted and heaven help us if you are!” Her voice was dismissive. “I think the fact that Shakespeare’s plays have survived through the centuries is tantamount to their relevance today.” Miss Annersley’s response was dry. “You’re being ridiculous. Those plays were written for entertainment!” Miss Wilson had no intention of letting this go. “Of course, but we wouldn’t still be watching them and interpreting them if they didn’t have significance and in this case I believe there is an extremely pertinent message. Thekla von Stift has sinned against all the codes that we hold dear and we are examining the pros and cons of imposing the school’s ultimate penalty. We have an absolute obligation to explore every avenue. If that means giving her a last chance to prove us wrong, then we owe it to her and I for one will not sleep easy if we deny her that much.” This speech was given in Miss Annersley’s usual measured tones but her conviction and passion shone through. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 14th, 2003, 8:44am There was an awkward silence as they digested her words. A look of sheer anger had crossed Miss Wilson’s face but she had smothered it in an instant. Not before Mademoiselle had noted the pursed lips and hardened eyes, however, and that esteemed lady wondered whether this exchange would cause a rift between her two most senior mistresses. Miss Annersley, also, had noticed the change in her colleague’s countenance and pondered on the cause of it. It seemed to go deeper than a simple clash of opinion. Nell, meanwhile, was cursing herself. If truth be told, she was wrestling with feelings of envy and even resentment which had been simmering for some months now. Despite her own seniority in the school, the position of Senior Mistress had been passed to Hilda Annersley and Nell was struggling to come to terms with it. Common sense told her that Hilda was the best choice, nevertheless her pride was slighted. What made matters worse was that everything about Hilda’s demeanour and input to the current discussion only served to emphasise the validity of her appointment. Nell realised that matters had come to a head and she must deal with them immediately. ‘Helena Wilson, get a grip!’ she rebuked herself. ‘You know damn well that Hilda’s the best person for the job and you’re good friends with her … stop acting like a silly schoolgirl and accept it. You love your job here and there’s no question of looking for another post. So what alternative is there? To sulk yourself into a depression and make everyone else round you miserable? Far better to be happy for Hilda and to support her in every way you can. There’s nothing to choose between you when it comes to teaching but go on, admit it, Hilda’s got that something extra on the pastoral side. She goes much deeper than you and has an instinctive understanding of people and situations. And if you’re honest with yourself, you know she’s right here as well. You can learn that kind of thing to a certain extent but not to Hilda’s level. Concentrate on what you do best woman, which is to bring a factual perspective to the table and quit brooding!’ Another person may not have found this inner turmoil so straightforward to untangle but Nell Wilson was made of sterner stuff. A practising Catholic, she had an innate and profound belief that had served to help her on many an occasion. There were times when she was wont to fume at the injustices of life but deep down she could be fatalistic and had resigned herself years ago to the fact that sometimes life could and would seem unfair. Thus, the only way round it was to dust yourself down, think positively and get on with it. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 14th, 2003, 8:44am This outlook on life was now to stand her in good stead. With a monumental effort, she turned to face Miss Annersley, speaking directly to her. “Hilda, I’m sorry. I’ve spoken out of turn and I had no right to trivialise your point of view. Please forgive me. What you said makes sense and if I’d stopped for a moment to consider it, I’d have realised that. I can understand why you think it’s best to give Thekla a final chance and you have my complete support. I only wish I had shown more confidence when you first spoke.” Hilda Annersley was not one to bear a grudge. “Nell, it’s forgotten. You’re perfectly entitled to contradict me. Your opinions are as worthy as mine and I value them. What kind of world would we live in if there was never any discord?” She caught Nell’s sober grey eyes in a fleeting glance that was able to convey both understanding and companionship. Nell was thankful and taken aback to feel her grievances evaporate. The two women never spoke of this altercation but as the years wore on, Hilda Annersley was to find in Nell Wilson, the dearest of friends and the most loyal of colleagues. Nell herself would come to appreciate the merits of adopting a more holistic approach to teaching and as a team they were to be the perfect foil for each other. One day, in their future roles as Heads of the Chalet School, theirs was to be the consummate partnership. Mademoiselle did not see exactly what had passed but she felt relieved. She had the utmost respect for both women and had no desire to see a division in the staff room. Having assured herself that all the mistresses were prepared to listen further she pressed Miss Annersley for more details. “What exactly did you have in mind, Hilda?” “Thekla has been interviewed two or three times about the incident, once in the middle of the night, again by Miss Wilson this morning and also by yourself, Therese. She knows your initial reactions and she’s been in isolation for a good couple of hours. She’s had plenty of time to think about events and she should have come to some conclusions. If she is to show any signs of remorse or guilt about last night, it will be now. My suggestion is to bring her here and ask her a couple of trenchant questions. Her answers to those will dictate our course of action.” “I like it.” Miss Wilson had decided to back her colleague in every way and she was keeping her word. “It’s simple but effective. Well done, Hilda! All we really need to know is why she did it and is she sorry? That gives her every opportunity to make amends and we will have acted fairly, indeed, tempered justice with mercy.” She proffered a rueful smile in Miss Annersley’s direction that was reciprocated. “And if she is not repentant?” Mdlle de Lachenais wanted to be completely clear. “Then our hand is forced” No one had ever seen Miss Annersley so severe. “It will be the first time in the school’s history but I agree with Nell, we shall have to expel her. “If you all approve, I will ask Matron to escort her down from the San.” Mademoiselle brought the discussion to an end. There were no detractors and each woman mentally prepared herself to face the challenge before them …. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Ray on Nov 14th, 2003, 9:37am *applauds wildly* This was great. A wonderful wrap up and a wonderful way to deal with Bill's position in the school. I'm also all agog to see Lesley's Hilda story :) Ray *applauding more* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 14th, 2003, 9:39am Bravo, Rachael! *stands and applauds* This is a masterpiece of work, using the existing hints given to us in the books, as well as the characterisations that are inherent in all four women, and from that creating a piece that could easily have been written by EBD and belongs, by rights, in the series itself. I don't believe you could have done this better. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lisa_T on Nov 14th, 2003, 10:48am Rachael- brilliant! Well done. *really must stop using that phrase* I love the way you portrayed Nell Wilson's reaction. There's never a hint of it in the books, but of course it's perfectly likely she felt slighted by Hilda being appointed Senior Mistress. Thanks! BTW, is there any chance that Hilda was employed as Head of English and Senior Mistress? Given the link we've discussed before between English and senior staff at the school. Then again, Mollie Maynard is still at the school in Hilda's first couple of terms, isn't she, so that wouldnt be right. OT- does anyone know how to get a laptop keyboard fixed? PM me if you do. Ta! ;D |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Jennie on Nov 14th, 2003, 10:57am This is terrific, Rachael, I can't wait for the next post, and hope that it won't be the last. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 14th, 2003, 11:03am Jennie, I think that is it. The rest simply leads into the scenes in "Lintons" (or "Rebel" if you have the pb) where Thekla is questioned and expelled. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Carolyn P on Nov 14th, 2003, 11:21am This was excellent Rachael and I love the exploration of Hilda and Nell's relationship and Hilda's past, (Presume that is what comes from Lesley?). I do love your style of writing and the perspective you give on people. Who are you going to 'do' next? Have you thought about Margot during that last year at school as she makes her big decisions to study mediciene and to take orders? |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 14th, 2003, 11:21am Sorry, Jennie but KB's right! Thanks for the nice comments - Bill is my fave character and I think I like her because she does have her faults but I think she's the sort of feisty character to tackle them head on - and I was fairly sure that she would feel a wee bit slighted at not being Senior Mistress but that she would find a way to deal with it without creating a scene. Mademoiselle, I did struggle with - I had the same concerns as you, KB! So I put her in as more of a facilitator, keeping the discussion on track etc Con Stewart I expected to follow Nell's lead Jeanne de Lachenais I thought would be quiter but insightful when she had a view And Hilda ... well Hilda is Hilda and we all love her! ;D It was fun writing it :D edited to add - Lisa, I don't know - Hilda starts in Visitors and Mollie Maynard is till with them in Head Girl Carolyn - yep, straight from Lesley's story - all the details there ;) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 14th, 2003, 11:24am Rachael, have you noticed how apt the little tag-line about your avatar is at the moment? |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Jennie on Nov 14th, 2003, 12:33pm I did know that about Thekla's expulsion, but I do hate to see a good drabble come to an end. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Rachael P on Nov 14th, 2003, 12:53pm LOL, KB!! *hoping that yours and the one to follow are never apt!!* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Esmeralda on Nov 14th, 2003, 1:17pm Very well done Racheal, obviously we knew the ending, but thanks for treating us to such an illuminating view of the staff as they discussed the matter. *Joins the board in it's applause. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Jennie on Nov 14th, 2003, 1:33pm That's why I didn't want it to finish, the way the characters were drawn was so good. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Abi on Nov 14th, 2003, 3:25pm Marvellous, marvellous, marvellous. This was really good. I wish it didn't have to end too. Maybe you could do some sort of teeny-weeny little epilogue where we see their reactions to Thekla's reactions, if you know what I mean? ;) *putting on puppy-dog-begging-for-bone expression and offering chocolate as a bribe to Rachael* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Jennie on Nov 14th, 2003, 4:20pm Brilliant idea, Abi. I second that, and join in the chant, very loudly. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by xanthe on Nov 14th, 2003, 4:25pm *applauding, cheering & throwing flowers at Rachael* [much to the consternation of the rest of the computer room] ;) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lisa_T on Nov 14th, 2003, 4:30pm here's an idea for you Rachael. You and lesley could work on together- exploring Hilda's thoughts and emotions on her way home to the Tyrol from Rome when the San cable to say that Mlle has gotten worse, and later when Mlle and Madge later offer her the post as Headmistress. She's almost asbsurdly embarassed about it in New CS, so maybe the thought had never crossed her mind...? |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lesley on Nov 14th, 2003, 8:09pm Rachael Wonderful - what more can I say! I'll will never have to wonder how the 5 mistresses reached their decision - you've just told us! Thank you! |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 14th, 2003, 9:07pm on 11/14/03 at 12:53:23, Rachael P wrote:
*thanks Rachael for that kind hope* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Lisa_T on Nov 14th, 2003, 9:14pm *sniggering at KB's tag* *wondering if Liss is gonna make it grey still to all appearances dead! The last one would look a bit odd- OOAOHG as a ghost!* (Will someone please remind me how to get the ROFL smiley working?) |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by KB on Nov 14th, 2003, 9:30pm I've been still. That comes first. Now I've just got to be 'to all appearances dead'. And for that smiley, it's 8 o o without the spaces 8oo 8oo 8oo |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Vikki on Nov 14th, 2003, 9:52pm *presents Rachael with a big box of yummy choccies, and thanks her for a wonderful drabble!!* |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by Susan on Nov 15th, 2003, 1:04am Rachel that was wonderful. The expansion of the characters was brilliant. Hope you have enjoyed your break. |
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Title: Re: The Staff Discuss Thekla (SCS) Post by catherine on Nov 15th, 2003, 10:00am Rachael, this was great! You've got all the characters so right and it was really good to see their deliberations and discussions (but very tantalising of you to drop that little bit in about Hilda's past. Can't wait to read Lesley's book!) |
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