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Day before Joey's marriage
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Author:  mohini [ 29 Aug 2008, 05:02 ]
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A thougtful bunny was jumping in my mind
So I decided to let it out and be kind.
The result is presented here
It is short so do not fear.
Advice and criticism expected vigourously
Praise should be given generously.


What must have happened a day before Joey's marriage.
As a challange to me ,I am trying to finish each part in 500 words.
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Joey was packing. Most of her possession had already been transferred. Now only the precious things remained. She had decided to remove all her things from Madge’s house.After all she would now be living in her own house. She looked at her parent’s photo as she packed. She had never seen her parents at least she did not remember. Madge had been her mother. She loved Madge, but a sudden thought came to her mind. If her parents had been alive today……..She remembered the wedding of her friends where they were surrounded by their parents and relatives. Had her parents been alive there would have been more of her family. Tomorrow she was getting married and only handful of her relatives would be there
.” Don’t be silly Joey”, she chided herself” You have everything. You cannot wish for a better mother than Madge. As for relatives, think about Jack, he has just his sister. His parents cannot come, nor will his brother. And Jem who should have been his best man will be giving her away.” Think Joey! Think of the things you have.You are surrounded by people who love you.What more can you want.!!
To calm her mind, she sat down by the window and looked out at the scene outside .Jack had told her to do so. “Let your thoughts soar in the open air. Do not keep them bottled up.” Jack had said. He knew she was sensitive and would work herself up in fever. He did not want his wife to be feverish during the marriage. She knew she had to control herself .Jack was really a lump of support. How well he understood her. She let her thoughts linger on Jack for some time. It was a calm topic .She tried to recall their meetings and the sweet nothings he had whispered to her. Blushing suddenly, she turned away from the window and her eyes fell on the wedding gown hanged near the mirror. She got up and walked towards the mirror to look at herself. A pale, thin face with dark black eyes, hair tied looked back. With an impatient movement, she returned to the window.
I wish I was beautiful!!!! , she thought. Then I would also have looked pretty in by bridal dress. Will Jack love me in this dress? Will he be breathless when he looks at me coming down the aisle on Jem’s arm? What if he finds another girl who is more attractive? There are nurses in the sanatorium who are good looking. Nurse Andrews is in love with Jack and she is so stunning. Jack had paid many compliments but he had never said I was beautiful. Jo went on thinking.
Stop it at once .! Do not have morbid thoughts. Jack loves you. Stop sitting here and thinking like a stupid person. Go and do something.
With this resolution in mind, she decided to visit her new house and so she took Madge’s car and left.
Author:  Lesley [ 29 Aug 2008, 07:17 ]
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Awwww, so typical - all brides have doubts.

Thank you Mohini - that was lovely.
Author:  Alison H [ 29 Aug 2008, 07:42 ]
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That was lovely.
Author:  janetbrown23 [ 29 Aug 2008, 11:04 ]
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I really enjoyed that Mohini. Please continue it asap, I get very greedy when I see a Drabble I like the look of.

Jan :D
Author:  Fiona Mc [ 29 Aug 2008, 11:27 ]
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Thanks, that was lovely
Author:  abbeybufo [ 29 Aug 2008, 13:47 ]
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Thanks Mohini, good to see Jo's inner thoughts at such an emotional time.
Author:  leahbelle [ 29 Aug 2008, 14:47 ]
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Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  Chris S [ 29 Aug 2008, 15:11 ]
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Thanks Mohini. We hear so little about Jo's wedding that its hard to imagine her feelings at the time, especially since she seemed to be so anti marriage as a schoolgirl.
Author:  Abi [ 29 Aug 2008, 18:12 ]
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Lovely, Mohini, I can so imagine Joey having just those doubts.
Author:  Honor [ 29 Aug 2008, 21:49 ]
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Thanks Mohini. I like the fact that Jo recognises that things were going to be hard for Jack too, not having his family there and also 'giving up' his best man so that Jem could be there for Jo.

Really enjoyed this. :)
Author:  Clare [ 29 Aug 2008, 22:35 ]
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Lovely Mohini! Poor Joey, I hope she finds reassurance for her doubts.
Author:  mohini [ 30 Aug 2008, 05:13 ]
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Thanks for the kind words.

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Jack sat by the window looking out at the waves in the sea. Today was the last day of his bachelorhood .He would be getting married tomorrow. To Joey. His Joey!. His wonderful Joey!. He shivered in anticipation. He had known that she was the girl for him right from the day he saw her as an irresponsible young girl. It had taken 8 patient years to slowly court her without letting her know about his interest. He did not worry about his brother’s wife. Unlike her, his parents had taken an instant liking to Joey. His house was ready. Once they got married he would take care of her. She was a sensitive soul and had gone through a lot in the past few weeks. She needed love and rest and lots of it .If she remained with Madge, she would be busy with the kids specially now, that Margot was very ill and Madge had a small baby to take care of... He would have to do something about the tendency of all to depend on Joey.
He turned as he heard the door open. It was Dr. Jim, his senior doctor, because of whom Jack had the job in Tirol and had met Jo. “Hello, old chap! How are you? You look serious. Having second thoughts?” he said grinning.
“No. Just thinking about tomorrow”
“So you are going to marry one of the Bettany girls. Shall I give you a word of advice? Remember two things about the Bettany girls. They are very clannish in their behavior and they are not demonstrative”
“I know all about that”, said Jack smiling ruefully “But do you think she will be happy with me?”
“Yes. You have given her something which she desperately needed”
“What?”
“You are her anchor. As long as you do not interfere in her activities, she will be happy. She needs you but does not realize it at present. You are the best thing that could happen to her. She will now stop depending on Madge. Do not hurry her. Go slowly.”
“Robin and Daisy ……”
“I know they are going to live with you. You cannot do anything about that. The baby is small and it was Jo’s idea to decrease the burden on Madge.”
“I know they are everything to each other. Dick is there but he is far away. Are you ready for your job tomorrow?”
“Giving away Jo? Oh yes! I would give her away thankfully!!!. She has been a burden. Now it is your turn to carry it “, grinned Jim
“Burden. Calling my Jo a burden”, punched Jack playfully on Jim’s shoulder “If I had known it, I would have carried her away earlier. She can be a storm, a breath of fresh air, a champion butter-in, she can drive away cobwebs but she will never be a burden. Wish you were my best man!. I have to do with Dr. Philips.”
“About the finances. The papers …..” and the conversation became technical.
Author:  mohini [ 30 Aug 2008, 05:13 ]
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Thanks for the kind words.

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Jack sat by the window looking out at the waves in the sea. Today was the last day of his bachelorhood .He would be getting married tomorrow. To Joey. His Joey!. His wonderful Joey!. He shivered in anticipation. He had known that she was the girl for him right from the day he saw her as an irresponsible young girl. It had taken 8 patient years to slowly court her without letting her know about his interest. He did not worry about his brother’s wife. Unlike her, his parents had taken an instant liking to Joey. His house was ready. Once they got married he would take care of her. She was a sensitive soul and had gone through a lot in the past few weeks. She needed love and rest and lots of it .If she remained with Madge, she would be busy with the kids specially now, that Margot was very ill and Madge had a small baby to take care of... He would have to do something about the tendency of all to depend on Joey.
He turned as he heard the door open. It was Dr. Jim, his senior doctor, because of whom Jack had the job in Tirol and had met Jo. “Hello, old chap! How are you? You look serious. Having second thoughts?” he said grinning.
“No. Just thinking about tomorrow”
“So you are going to marry one of the Bettany girls. Shall I give you a word of advice? Remember two things about the Bettany girls. They are very clannish in their behavior and they are not demonstrative”
“I know all about that”, said Jack smiling ruefully “But do you think she will be happy with me?”
“Yes. You have given her something which she desperately needed”
“What?”
“You are her anchor. As long as you do not interfere in her activities, she will be happy. She needs you but does not realize it at present. You are the best thing that could happen to her. She will now stop depending on Madge. Do not hurry her. Go slowly.”
“Robin and Daisy ……”
“I know they are going to live with you. You cannot do anything about that. The baby is small and it was Jo’s idea to decrease the burden on Madge.”
“I know they are everything to each other. Dick is there but he is far away. Are you ready for your job tomorrow?”
“Giving away Jo? Oh yes! I would give her away thankfully!!!. She has been a burden. Now it is your turn to carry it “, grinned Jim
“Burden. Calling my Jo a burden”, punched Jack playfully on Jim’s shoulder “If I had known it, I would have carried her away earlier. She can be a storm, a breath of fresh air, a champion butter-in, she can drive away cobwebs but she will never be a burden. Wish you were my best man!. I have to do with Dr. Philips.”
“About the finances. The papers …..” and the conversation became technical.
Author:  Alison H [ 30 Aug 2008, 07:40 ]
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Love the idea of Jem giving Jack a pep talk!
Author:  Lesley [ 30 Aug 2008, 08:56 ]
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Love Jem looking on Joey as a burden too!


Thanks Mohini
Author:  abbeybufo [ 30 Aug 2008, 20:38 ]
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Thanks Mohini - nice to get Jack's POV :D
Author:  Honor [ 31 Aug 2008, 19:25 ]
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Jack sounds really sweet in this.
Author:  mohini [ 04 Sep 2008, 05:24 ]
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Madge nodded to Jo when she peeped in the room. Madge was attending to the demands of her new baby and did not speak. The baby was taking a nap. As she was tucking the baby in her cot, her thoughts turned to the girl who had just gestured to her from the door. Tomorrow Joey was getting married. She would heave a sigh of relief. Right from the day her mother died, she had taken care of her young sister. It had been very difficult .In the earlier years they had Guardians but all responsibility fell on Madge. Dick though her twin was a boy and irresponsible. He was not a deep thinker. Madge always had to think before taking any action. She knew she was the role model for her sister.
Her sister had not been a quite girl. She was always getting into some scrap or the other. one had to be on one’s toes to keep in pace with her.
Things had not improved after Joey left school. There had been a Doctor who had been infatuated by Joey and she had been very angry. Therefore she had been sent to India.
Her habit of butting in had at times created difficult situations
Madge recalled one incident when Joey had butted in and the Indian family involved had been angry. Jo did not understand the minds of the Indians and had tried to interfere in their family affairs. Then she had been attracted towards the son of the family and it had taken joint efforts of the family and all the English people staying in the colony to separate them. They had rushed back to Austria and so that affair had been nipped in the bud.
However, it had been a stormy incident.
Madge now wanted to give time to her children. David was a good boy and baby was small, but Sybil was a problem. She was getting jealous of her sister and Madge had seen her pinching the baby once. With Joey out of her hands, she would be able to pay attention to her family. Even Dick’s children needed her. In addition, there was Daisy and Primula. Margot was not going to live long. Moreover, she had promised Margot that she would take care of the girls. Then Joey had butted in and said that she would take Daisy with her because Daisy would fret here. In her house Daisy would be busy helping Rabin to settle in that she would forget her worries. .
M adge loved Joey but now felt relieved. Jack would look after her. He loved her. She would not worry about Joey from tomorrow and concentrate on her family and Jem. Jem had been extraordinarily patient and understanding. .
Now she would spend more time with him He needed her. She would visit the hospital too. It would make a difference to the patients.
Closing the door she went to see if everything was ready for the wedding tomorrow.
Author:  Lesley [ 04 Sep 2008, 20:24 ]
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That's interesting - seeing Madge's viewpoint - makes perfect sense.


Thanks Mohini
Author:  Alison H [ 04 Sep 2008, 23:21 ]
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That was really interesting. When Joey left school she had no career plans, said that she never intended to marry and just seemed to be planning to hang around at Die Rosen for ever: we never got to hear what either Madge or Jem thought about it. As you've said, Madge had an awful lot on her plate even without Joey.
Author:  Abi [ 05 Sep 2008, 18:09 ]
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That's certainly not a viewpoint we see very often, but you can see how it would have been a relief to Madge in many ways. Joey wasn't always an easy person to live with!

Thanks Mohini.
Author:  mohini [ 06 Sep 2008, 12:55 ]
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For the weekend.

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Grizel had been in an angry mood. She had received a letter from her stepmother and it was enough to put her in a bad mood. In addition she met Robin who told her that she was going to live with Jo after Jo’s marriage. Grizel had always resented the attachment between Robin and Jo and this made her say “But you will have to stand on your own feet. You will have to stop bothering Jo for everything. Jo will not be able to look after you after her marriage.”
“Why?” Robin had asked puzzled.
“Her first priority will be Jack. You will take a backseat in her life. Though why does she need you, I cannot understand. You will be a nuisance to her.”
“But Daisy is also coming. If Jo had thought that we would bother her, she would not have asked us to stay with her. I think you are not nice Grizel. You should not say such things.”
“Daisy is being sent away by Madame. With the arrival of the new baby, Madame finds it difficult to look after all those kids.”
Daisy arriving at the beginning of this speech heard it and looked shocked.” How can you say such bad things Aunty Grizel? Aunty Madge loves us.”
The look in Daisy’s face made Grizel feel ashamed of herself. This in turn made her angry at herself and at Daisy for making her aware of her behavior and she lost control over her tongue and spoke cruel words which she would never had said in her full senses.
“Loves you? Of course she does. However her priorities are changed now. Her top priority is the baby and her family. Otherwise why should she send you away to Jo and let Bride and Peggy stay with her? She should have sent Peggy and Bride. At least Jo is their own aunt. You are not related to Jo. Oh Daisy I’m so sorry! .I did not mean to say that! Please do not look like that! Daisy! Daisy!” The stunned look on Daisy’s face made Grizel realize her mistake and she cried in apology.
Luckily for all concerned, Madge arrived on the spot at this moment.
“Oh Madame! I’m so sorry! I did not mean to hurt Daisy! Oh please talk Daisy! Madame do something”
Madge did not ask for explanations. The immediate thing to do was to take care of Daisy. She looked so shocked. Her face looked pinched. Her mother’s death was not far from her mind on top of it Grizel's words had hurt her. ”Go inside Grizel and wait in the library. No!. I do not want to hear anything now” spoke Madge looking very grim.
Turning to Daisy, Madge calmly picked her up as if she was a child and carried her to he rroom.
Grizel looked at Robin who simply turned back and walked away. Grizel went to the library and sat on the window seat looking out with unseeing eyes.
Author:  Liz K [ 06 Sep 2008, 13:43 ]
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Oh dear, this really is sorting out everyone's priorities, isn't it? :(
Author:  Lesley [ 06 Sep 2008, 15:32 ]
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Poor Daisy - Grizel has no right to take her own unhappiness out on a vulnerable child.


Thanks Mohini.
Author:  Abi [ 06 Sep 2008, 15:49 ]
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That was nasty of Grizel. What Madge and Jo decide about Daisy and Robin is nothing to do with her - she should have more self-control by this time. :x

Thanks Mohini!
Author:  PaulineS [ 06 Sep 2008, 19:01 ]
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Grizel jealousy of the Robin did lead her into speaking without thought. She hurt both the Robin and Daisy there. She was fortunate that Madge understood her or she would have been without friends or a job.
Author:  Alison H [ 06 Sep 2008, 20:35 ]
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Grizel's jealousy made her behave really badly there.

This is fascinating, Mohini.
Author:  mohini [ 08 Sep 2008, 05:07 ]
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While writing down the drabble,I get a feeling that I am making some gramatical mistakes.
The Hildas out there please correct them.
Author:  Shander [ 08 Sep 2008, 11:29 ]
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I wonder if she's not speaking out of her own experience as well.
When her father remarried any love she had was taken away, and neither parent had any time for her. In her world people do change their priorities and stop loving you.
She might think she's trying to prepare Robin and Daisy for the inevitable.
Author:  di [ 09 Sep 2008, 06:19 ]
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I always felt so sorry for Grizel. With a stepmother who just wanted her out of the way and a father who was so blinkered he couldn't see beyond the end of his nose, she had a pretty rough deal before she went to the CS. She wasn't even allowed to pursue her career of choice but had to follow her father's edicts. No wonder she was so bitter and twisted. :(
Loving the insight to everyones thoughts about the forthcoming wedding although shudder to think what Joey would feel if she knew what her nearest and dearest thought about her departure from the nest and how much they were looking forward to Die Rosen without her. :lol:
Many thanks, mahini, looking forward to more.
Author:  mohini [ 10 Sep 2008, 09:41 ]
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Mollie Maynard was writing to her friends. Tomorrow her brother was getting married to Joey. She wondered how they would get along with each other... It had been difficult after Joey had left school. There was not much age difference between them and she had requested Joey to drop the Miss Maynard and call her Mollie. Though Joey had got used to it, Mollie sometimes found it hard and many a times had scolded Jo as if she was a schoolgirl. From teacher –student to friends they would now be sisters in law. Mollie hoped that they would get along better. Her relations with Lydia were very strained. Lydia did not like anyone. She had taken a violent hatred towards Joey.
Mollie knew that she would get along with Joey. After all Joey now was her family. Though Bob had been her favorite brother, Jack was her twin. She thought of her own boyfriend in England .If they had stayed for few more days in England last summer, something would have emerged from that friendship .It was heading towards marriage. However, they had to leave for school and he must now have found another girl .Mollie heaved a sigh.
She wished she was married. She was feeling lonely. Before she could wallow in self-pity, the door opened and Robin peeped in. Mollie glanced up angrily, but looking at Robin’s face her expression changed to concern .Robin was looking furious.
“Come in Robin. What is the matter?” Mollie asked.
“Me I do not like Grizel. Why does she hate me so much? She made Daisy cry. She is not nice.” Robin said.
“Come dear. Sit down and tell me what the problem is. Why is Daisy crying? And where is she?”
“Madge took her to her room”
“Then it is all right. Madge will look after her. But what is this about Grizel?”
Robin poured out all that Grizel had said. She did not like telling tales but this was too cruel to be hidden. The look on Daisy’s faced had frightened her. Daisy had still not recovered from the shock of loss of her mother.
Mollie’s face grew grimmer and grimmer as the tale unfolded. “I am going to kill Grizel “she thought. Grizel was a firebrand and Madame had always forgiven her. This was going too far.
“Where is Grizel?” Mollie asked Robin
“Madge sent her to the library “
“You go and play with the children. I will look after Grizel” .Mollie knew the Robin had always been a delicate child. This display of deep emotion was foreign to her and it would affect her health. With the children her mind would become calm
Clearing the table Mollie strode towards the library. She opened the door forcefully and cried “Grizel!”
Grizel looked up and glancing at her face Mollie forgot all she was going to say and ran forward to Grizel and put her arms around the white faced shivering girl in concern , anger all forgotten.
Author:  Clare [ 10 Sep 2008, 20:07 ]
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Ooooh...... This is getting really good! Can't wait for the next update - Grizel was awful there, poor Daisy. feel sorry for Mollie too, being so lonely.
Author:  Abi [ 10 Sep 2008, 20:10 ]
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That last line made me feel so sorry for Grizel - it's easy to forget what a hard time she had. :(

That was a lovely insight into Mollie's feelings, and interesting to see the comparison with Lydia, too.

Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  di [ 11 Sep 2008, 06:38 ]
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Good for Maynie. Glad she recognised Grizel's pain and [ I think!] sorrow.
Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  mohini [ 12 Sep 2008, 04:37 ]
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Oops! Sorry.!
I had forgotten that Mollie was married in Camp and so some of her thoughts may not be corrrect in the context.
Consider it as EDBism on my part.
Thank you Lesley for making me aware.
Author:  mohini [ 15 Sep 2008, 05:19 ]
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Wrote the whole chapter again with another character instead of Mollie.
I donot know how to delete the earlier update of Mollie.
If it cannot be deleted, do not consider it.
Please feel free to point out any more mistakes in language, ideas etc.
Mohini
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Helena Wilson was writing to her friends. Tomorrow Joey was getting married to Mollie’s brother. She wondered how Mollie was and when they would meet and how she must be feeling .Her student marrying her brother. Joey will have to grow up now, she thought. and stop behaving like a schoolgirl. Jack would see to it.. He needed a wife not a schoolgirl.
Bill sighed. She was bored. She wished she was married or did something else. With the school closed, she felt aimless. She would have to take knitting or start cooking for the soldiers.. She had no family left .She was living with Madge. She was feeling lonely. She will have to do something to keep herself busy. She would have to search for a school where she could teach.
Before she could wallow in self-pity, the door opened and Robin peeped in. Miss Wilson glanced up angrily, but looking at Robin’s face her expression changed to concern .Robin was looking furious.
“Come in Robin. What is the matter?” Miss Wilson asked.
“Me I do not like Grizel! She made Daisy cry. She is not nice.” Robin said.
“Come dear. Sit down and tell me what the problem is. Why is Daisy crying? And where is she?”
“Madge took her to her room”
“But what is this about Grizel?”
Robin poured out all that Grizel had said. She did not like telling tales but this was too cruel to be hidden. The look on Daisy’s faced had frightened her. Daisy had still not recovered from the shock of loss of her mother.
Miss Wilson’s face grew grimmer and grimmer as the tale unfolded. “I am going to kill Grizel “she said loudly Grizel was a firebrand and Madame had always forgiven her. This was going too far.
“She cannot help it. I feel sorry for her. But she hurt Daisy.”
“Where is Grizel?” Bill asked Robin
“Madge sent her to the library “
“You go and play with the children now. I will look after Grizel Do not talk about this to anyone.Understand?” “Yes! I will not. But …..Can’t you forget what I said? I said it in anger” The Robin looked at Miss Wilson with her beautiful eyes. She looked frightened and upset.
Miss Wilson knew that Robin was deeply attached to Joey and though she did not speak about it,Grizel’s words had sowed a doubt in her mind about Joey’s affection and she was worried.
Like all the chalet school staff, Miss Wilson knew the Robin had always been a delicate child. This display of deep emotion was foreign to her and it would affect her health. With the children, her mind would become calm
Bill strode towards the library. She opened the door forcefully and cried “Grizel!”
Grizel looked up and glancing at her face Miss Wilson forgot all she was going to say and ran forward to Grizel and put her arms around the white faced shivering girl in concern , anger all forgotten.
Author:  Lesley [ 15 Sep 2008, 06:50 ]
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Let's hope Bill can help Grizel.


Thanks Mohini
Author:  di [ 15 Sep 2008, 06:56 ]
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I'm sure Bill will help Grizel; she's had years of practice dealing with schoolgirls. But why does she need to look for a school where she can teach? Is she not at the Chalet School in this universe?
Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  Lesley [ 15 Sep 2008, 07:03 ]
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The Chalet School is closed at the moment though, isn't it? Doesn't reopen until the following year - August 1939.
Author:  Vick [ 15 Sep 2008, 14:47 ]
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Lovely excerpts on everyone's thoughts

Thanks Mohini :D
Author:  mohini [ 16 Sep 2008, 12:51 ]
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Robin walked slowly to where the kids were playing. Knowing tenderest love since she could remember, this display of jealousy by Grizel was puzzling to her.” Why” she thought in pretty French which she still found easy than the English ‘Why does she hate me? Because I am going to stay with Jo? But Jo is like sister to me.”
She entered the room to find a chaos there. Bride was sulking in one corner, Sybil was looking mutinous, Rix was jumping, and usually placid Peggy was looking harassed. ”Why! What is the matter? Wait! Wait!” as all of them started to speak at once, “Peggy you tell me “
Slowly the story enfolded. With the entire house getting involved in marriage of Joey, they had decided to enact the marriage ceremony where Sybil was the bride and Jacky was the groom. The first problem arose when someone said, “Here comes the bride” Sybil objected to that and wanted everyone to say, “Here comes Sybil. Becos my name is Sybil, not Bride.”
When that was sorted out and the marriage ceremony took place, Davis who was acting as a priest said”Now you may kith the bride,” David lisped at times. Jack took it as kick instead of kiss and got angry with David and Bride sulked. Then Rix said to Sybil”Now you must change your properties. Everyone does so after marriage”
“Stop! Stop!” said the Robin.”Sybil!Here bride means the girl who is getting married and not your cousin Bride. Jack! David meant kiss. The groom is supposed to kiss the bride not kick.David! You must now learn to speak properly. See how much problems it can create. Bride! Stop sulking. No one is going to hurt you. Now what is this about changing properties?” “I heard Auntie Grizel saying that your properties change after you get married. Had gone to get a glass of water and she was talking to you” Rix explained.
“It is not correct to listen to other people’s conversation. And she did not say properties. She said priorities” Robin reprimanded Rix
“What do you mean by priority?” asked Peggy
“It means, I think what is of primary importance .What you should do first. Like if you see bits of paper on the floor your first priority should be to pick them up and then ask who threw them.”
“What shall we do now? Shall we sing?” asked Robin “No ! No! Tell us stories about Auntie Jo!” said all the children.
Nothing loathe the Robin sat with the children around her and told adventures of her beloved Jo.
After a while the children went off to play on their own and Robin’s thoughts turned to Grizel.
“She needs love. Jo had told me all about it. Her father had no time for her, her stepmother did not like her and her grandmother who had petted her and spoilt her died. And I was angry with her. Me, I will go and say sorry now.” thought Robin.
Author:  JS [ 16 Sep 2008, 13:12 ]
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Robin, you're being too nice!! She's the one who should be apologising - she might be miserable but she's an adult.

Love the confusion over Bride and properties!

Thanks Mohini
Author:  Alison H [ 16 Sep 2008, 14:04 ]
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Robin is being too nice, but I can understand Grizel being miserable. I always thought it was awful that Joey didn't even tell Grizel - her oldest friend - the news of her engagement herself but let Robin do it instead.

The kids are sweet :D .
Author:  di [ 16 Sep 2008, 18:46 ]
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The Robin has a heart of gold! Of course it should be Grizel apologising and hopefully she will after her talk with Nell. She does have a difficult time learning to hold her tongue. :(
Thanks Mohini. Loved the interlude with the tinies.
Author:  Lesley [ 16 Sep 2008, 18:46 ]
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Robin's being very mature here to be able to discern Grizel's problems - but Grizel does still owe Robin an apology.


Love the misunderstandings among the children about the wedding! :lol:


Thanks Mohini
Author:  mohini [ 20 Sep 2008, 04:50 ]
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Am a bit busy as I am organizing a workshop for Laboratory technicians on 25th and 26th September.So cannot wirte the next part.Will do it soon.
It is ready in my head.
Author:  PaulineS [ 20 Sep 2008, 11:32 ]
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Hope all goes well. Keep calm and identify people who can help you. Make sure they have coffee/tea breaks/refreshment stops and I am sure all will be well.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ 21 Sep 2008, 15:27 ]
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Robin's apology will probably soften Grizel. Hope things get sorted soon between everyone. They all seem out of sorts
Author:  Honor [ 30 Sep 2008, 21:19 ]
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Really enjoying this. Hope Grizel is OK as must be tough for her.
Robin is lovely in this.
Author:  mohini [ 04 Oct 2008, 04:28 ]
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Here is the next posting.Sorry for the delay.Was busy in Workshop.
BTW it went well and everyone is asking when is the next one.


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Madge carried Daisy to her room and made her wash her face. Then she took her on her lap and held her close. The sobs were now lessening and finally stopped.
“Now tell me dearest. What is the problem?”
“Mummy! Mummy! I want my Mummy. Auntie Madge I feel so lonely. I miss mother. Why was she taken away? I have no one now.”
Her cry went straight to Madge’s heart and she held her tightly.
“Never never say that you are alone. You are not alone. We all are here with you. Your Uncle Jem, David, Sybil, Primula and also Joey and Robin and oh so many. We are your family now.
“Auntie Madge, do you love me?”
“Yes dear. Very much”
“Then why are you sending me away? Aunty Grizel said it is because I am not directly related to you.”
Madge was quiet for some time. She knew her answer was going to be very crucial. A mild person by nature, she was furious with Grizel for saying the cruel words.
“I am not sending you away Daisy. Never never think like that again. I am sorry if you feel so. I love you very much Daisy. Not only because you are my sister in law’s daughter but also for yourself. That is why I want you to live with Joey. Robin is going to stay with Joey and with Robin gone; you will be the eldest among the children here. With Joey you will be youngest.”
“But why did Auntie Grizel…...”
“There are people who like to gossip or say things without thinking. Do not mind them. You will find many people saying the same thing. Most of my neighbors said it. Some even said it to your mother. However, she was not bothered about it.Actually it was her wish also that you should stay with Joey or else you will fret here. Primula is too young to understand the loss .But if you stay here there will be many things to remind you of your mother.”
“But I do not want to forget her!”
“I do not want you to forget her dear. But remember her as she was. And feel glad that she has now joined her husband and sons. She always fretted for them. You know it.”
Daisy was thoughtful. Her Auntie’s words comforted her but she was still not feeling better. Her Aunt looked at her face wondering what question was in her mind now.
“Auntie Madge…” “Yes, what is it?” “Auntie Madge why cannot Peggy and Bride go to Aunt Joey’s place?”
“It would mean moving everyone.”
“Why? What? I do not understand.”
“If Peggy goes, so will Bride. Then Jack will also insist and Rix as Peggy’s twin cannot be separated from Peggy. And David will demand to be with the boys. Well it would be a regular nursery at Joey’s place. What will Joey do?”
Daisy gave a sudden giggle and felt better as she imagined the whole lot of children at Joey’s place.
Author:  Lesley [ 04 Oct 2008, 08:11 ]
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That's good of Madge, making Daisy feel so much better.


Thanks Mohini - pleased to see more of this - and that your Workshop went well.
Author:  di [ 04 Oct 2008, 09:20 ]
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Well done, Madge. for making Daisy feel loved and wanted after Grizel's thoughtless comments.
What of Grizel? Bill is with her now and hopefully helping her to recognise that her words can be so cruel. Perhaps she will be able to come to terms with her own hurt and pain before she destroys all her friendships with her vicious words.
Thanks, Mohini. pleased your workshop was successful. Looking forward to more of this,
Author:  Abi [ 04 Oct 2008, 12:09 ]
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Well done Madge - hopefully Daisy won't think too much of what Grizel said now. I also hope Bill helps Grizel to work through her feelings.

Thanks Mohini!
Author:  mohini [ 07 Oct 2008, 07:11 ]
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Writtena bit hastily. I hope the ideas put are clear.


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“What’s the matter Grizel?” Miss Wilson asked again. “Why can’t I be the one to marry Dr Jack!” was the startling answer “Oh! Poor Grizel! I am so sorry! I did not know. Do you love him so much?”
“No I don’t love him.”
Now Miss Wilson was beginning to wonder if she had heard correctly or else Grizel had gone mad. There was no other explanation.” Then why…...’
Out poured all the resentment "Why should Joey get everything? I am older than she is and prettier. But she is marrying before me. She always gets all she wants. She was selected by Elisaveta, she had all the adventures, she can do what she wants, and she has no stepmother. I do not love Dr Jack. But at least someone should have proposed to me. Joey got proposed twice. It is not fair.” Grizel ended with an angry sob.
Miss Wilson’s face was turning grimmer and grimmer as Grizel spoke. This was something no one had imagined. It was with difficulty she controlled her anger and disgust and simply walked out of the room. It was way beyond her to tackle this problem.
She could not even go to Mrs. Russell with this. It would hurt her. This needed thinking seriously. For now she had to go away from Grizel or else she was likely to slap or shake Grizel.
Miss Wilson marched out of the room and then turned back and entered again.”Grizel…Why…? What…? How…? Do you understand …? Oh I feel so sorry for Joey and Madame.
“Why should I always think about others? Why can’t anyone think about me once?” pat came the reply” I do not wish to hurt Joey or Madame .But …”
It was at this moment that the Robin entered and said “Miss Wilson, Madame told me to tell you that she wants to talk to you.” “Alright Robin. Thank you dear. How is Daisy?” ”Better.” ”I feel so sorry for Daisy” And without looking at Grizel, Miss Wilson walked out of the room.
“Is Daisy alright?”Grizel asked anxiously starting to feel ashamed of herself. ”Oh Robin I am so sorry I spoke like that”
“But I am sorrier for you Grizel.”
“Why?”Grizel wondered “Don’t you hate me?”
“No. Why should I hate you?”
“Oh Robin! Please help me. You had helped me once when you were small. # ”
“But I do not remember! How can I help you?”
“I do not really hate anyone but I am envious of them”
‘But think of what you have. All the blessings that you have.I always do it. Trust in God and everything will be alright.” Robin spoke softly. She was a deeply religious person. She had spent many holidays with families of Tirol folks and Grandmother and the parents talked with her. Their simple faith had influenced her a lot.
Grizel was starting to look calm. ”I will go and say sorry to Daisy and Madame. Robin please help me”
“I will always”

# The Head Girl at Chalet School
Author:  Alison H [ 07 Oct 2008, 07:50 ]
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Robin was lovely there. I'm sorry that Grizel's unhappy but she's being unreasonable: if she really liked Jack then there'd be some excuse. I can understand how she feels, though - Joey did end up having it all!
Author:  Lesley [ 07 Oct 2008, 19:25 ]
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It's pure jealousy isn't it? No wonder Miss Wilson was unable to speak to her.


Thanks Mohini
Author:  di [ 07 Oct 2008, 19:49 ]
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Poor Grizel. I think it's more than jealousy - the girl has no-one, at least no family member who really cares about her. The only person who did was her grandmother and of course she's no longer alive. She's desparate to be loved and thus jealousy rears its' head because she sees those around her being loved and cherished.
That's not to excuse her nastiness to those weaker than her; she does need to recognise where her feelings come from and learn to deal with them herself rather than projecting on to others. I do so hope that the Robin will be able to help her.

Thanks, Mahini for a great update.
Author:  PaulineS [ 07 Oct 2008, 22:03 ]
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Grizel desparetely needs to come first with someone. But she does not know how to put others first. Her upbringing was no damaging. Her father's continued control of her reinforces her poor self image, as she feels she can not control her own life, but others who do not want her foerself control her from a distance.
Author:  mohini [ 08 Oct 2008, 04:14 ]
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Joey parked her car and entered the garden. Her house. Her very own house. This would be her home from tomorrow. She would live here with her beloved Jack and Robin and Daisy. She looked around the garden. It was beautiful. She glanced at the house beyond with its white walls and green windows. She felt a sense of belonging. As if she had reached the journey’s end.
Till now she had lived in many different places. Madge’s house was also nice, but this belonged to her! At last she had a home. She bent down to pick up a bit of the cool earth in her hand. This is my own! I own this piece of land on the earth! I am the queen here!
Eagerly she took out the key and opened the door and entered. She went round the rooms to see everything was ready. All her friends and family had worked and helped to set the house.
Here was the study. She would sit here and write. There were more bedrooms than needed. However, I will have lots of children. This house needs children. Lots of them. My children will never feel lonely like I did when Madge used to go to college. I had no one to play with, no companions.
She sat down by one of the windows looking out at the blossoming bushes. She was overwhelmed with feelings. Till today she had purpose in life. She was helping Madge to raise the kids and writing stories. As a child had no ambitions till Elisaveta. However, that did not materialize. Marriage has also not been on her cards.
Now she had a purpose, something to look forward to. She had a husband, a house which she would turn into a home and a future full of children.
Chalet school and her stories and her adventures seemed so childish now .She was now a woman.
Jack had come in her life and they would start a life together from tomorrow. From Miss Joey Bettany she would become Mrs. Jack Maynard.
She would cook for him and darn his socks and try to be a perfect wife to him.
She suddenly turned and saw her face reflected in the mirror. She looked the same. She thought she must be looking mature .But the mirror was reflecting the same face, still pale with black eyes and hair arranged around her head.
“ I am not ready for marriage. I cannot do it. I am still young.’
She ran downstairs luckily remembering to lock the door after her and ran towards the car wiping tears from her eyes.
How she reached Madge’s place she did not remember. Parking the car on the drive, she ran inside the house crying Madge’s name.
Madge who had succeeded in consoling Daisy came out looking worried.
“Joey dearest! What is the matter? Why are you looking like this? Come here Joey.’
“Oh Madge! I’m feeling afraid. I do not want to marry!”
Author:  Lesley [ 08 Oct 2008, 07:04 ]
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Wedding jitters - poor Joey - and she was young. But loved the thought that she had put childish things like the Chalet School behind her - er no, Joey, doesn't happen! :lol:


Thanks Mohini
Author:  Alison H [ 08 Oct 2008, 07:43 ]
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This is brilliant, Mohini. It comes across so well - Madge babied Joey when she was younger, and at this stage Anna hadn't arrived in Guernsey and there was never any mention of Joey having any other "help" in the house so presumably she was going to have to manage on her own.
Author:  Elbee [ 08 Oct 2008, 09:00 ]
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Poor Joey, so excited but then suddenly feeling she's too young! I'm sure Madge will be able to reassure her.

Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  Fiona Mc [ 08 Oct 2008, 10:07 ]
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Just caught up with all this. Poor Grizel, I think she was speaking out of great unhappiness being alone and not the special one in someone's life and she is someone who really needed that. Love Joey's wedding jitters
Author:  di [ 08 Oct 2008, 10:50 ]
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Definitely last minute nerves! Alison H is right though, Joey has no idead abut how to run a home. Can she even cook?
Thanks, Mahini.
Author:  Abi [ 14 Oct 2008, 15:38 ]
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Poor Joey - it's a good thing she always had plenty of domestic help!

I felt very sorry for Grizel there - as other people have said, she doesn't come first with anyone, and it makes a difference.

Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  mohini [ 25 Oct 2008, 06:07 ]
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This is the part before the last.Have I left some loose threads?
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At Joey’s sudden declaration Madge said the first thing that came in her mind”Oh Joey is it due to Grizel? However, you should not mind her .You know how she is. She has no feelings”
“Grizel? What did Grizel say?”
Madge who had been told about Grizel’s thoughts had planned not to tell Joey about it. Now it was too late. The Bettany’s never had secret and from childhood Joey had been included in everything. The Grizel’s problem was different and Madge felt that Joey had to know. She was a sensitive person and would understand Grizel’s loneliness. She told only about the Jack part and not about what Grizel had said to Robin or Daisy.
Joey was deeply attached to Robin. If she came to know about the cruel words, she would hate Grizel forever. Then there would be no chance of improvement in Grizel.Joey was one of her few friends.
“Is Grizel mad?” cried Joey” She can have him if she wants”
“Joey dearest, what is the problem?” Madge asked anxiously.
Joey was blushing. “It is difficult to say.” Slowly with lots of stammering Joey told about the problem. Madge tried hard not to laugh out loud.
It was very simple. It seemed that Jack demanded a reward for everything he did and wanted it in form of a kiss.
“Don’t you like it?” Madge asked
“Yes. However, it becomes boring after some time. Last time he wanted to be rewarded for opening the door, showing me the view, taking a step.” replied Joey plaintively. ”He has been hinting about something I do not know what he is saying. If it is what I think then I do not know why or how. Oh Madge I am so afraid!”
Madge looked at the fire burning brightly as if for inspiration. This was a serious problem. She knew that in spite of her years Joey was quite young as compared to her friends. In addition, knowing Joey as she did Madge doubted if she had discussed about married life with her friends. The thought must not have even come to her mind. Madge wished there was someone elder to explain. She suddenly remembered what Bernhilda’s grandmother had told her before her marriage.
Saying a swift prayer she turned to Joey and quoted “The time has come the Walrus said to talk of things.”
“Why? What?”
“Listen Joey! Do you know what marriage means? Do you know about birds and beasts?”
“Are you going to talk about Science now?’ Joey asked
“No.” said Madge biting back a giggle. Then she talked in a low serious voice about marriage. The fire glowed brightly. The room was warm and after 5 minutes Madge realized that Jo was fast asleep. Always a weak and a highly sensitive person, this deep emotion had tired Jo and the warm room and Madge’s gentle voice lulled her.
Madge arranged some rugs around her and went off thinking about Jack.”Poor Jack.” She thought with a wide grin.
Author:  di [ 25 Oct 2008, 08:19 ]
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Poor Jack indeed!! It seems he's taking on a very naive girl. What will Madge do if Joey falls asleep every time the 'birds and bees' are mentioned :lol: She's going to have such a shock on her wedding night if somebody doesn't explain to her. I only hope Jack is a patient, very patient man. Mind you they went on to have 11 children so one assumes Joey worked it out. Unless the rumours of the hot milk and turkey blaster are to be believed! :P
Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  Lesley [ 25 Oct 2008, 09:04 ]
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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Madge should be ashamed of herself though - letting Joey get to the night before her wedding without that knowledge.


Thanks Mohini
Author:  Abi [ 25 Oct 2008, 11:38 ]
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:lol: :lol: :lol: Oh dear, Joey could be in for a shock! (Presumably, however, she becomes reconciled to that particular activity...). I wonder where Madge thought Joey was going to find out about it?!

Thanks Mohini!
Author:  PaulineS [ 25 Oct 2008, 12:28 ]
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As Madge had no mother to tell her I expect it did not occur to her that it was part of her role to tell Joey. At least Jack is trying to prepare Joey and therefore should be aware of her lack of knowledge. I believe it was quite common at the time for woman to go to the marriage bed without preparation.
Author:  Alison H [ 25 Oct 2008, 14:26 ]
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Madge had no mother to tell her about "things" and there's no mention of her aunts attending her wedding, so I hope Frau Mensch (junior or senior) or Frau Marani did tell her. She really should've thought to tell Joey before this, though :lol: .

Presumably Madge'd also had to explain things to Juliet before her wedding, and that must've been even more awkward because she wouldn't have been as close to Juliet as she was to Joey.

If Joey falls asleep every time Madge tries to have a "little chat" with her then it could be difficult, though!
Author:  Lesley [ 25 Oct 2008, 15:00 ]
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Alison H wrote:
If Joey falls asleep every time Madge tries to have a "little chat" with her then it could be difficult, though!


Oh I don't know - perhaps that's how Jack manages it! :wink:
Author:  mohini [ 28 Oct 2008, 06:20 ]
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If no loose ends then this is the end
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Madge was taking a well-deserved rest. She waited for Jem to return. It had been a hectic day. But now everything was settled. Grizel had apologized to Daisy and Robin and Bill and herself. Daisy had stopped feeling unwanted. Madge was not aware that the hurt would not go till she was married and settled. But that was in future. Madge had finally managed to talk to Joey and had been pleasantly surprised to know that Joey was aware of the facts.

Robin’s talk to Grizel about forgiveness and love of God made Madge think ”Is she going to join the church? What about Jo? How will she take it?”
“I should stop thinking about Joey now. It is high time she grows up and I stop taking care of her or protecting her. Jem is right. I must think about my children first. Joey is grown up. Jack will take care of her. She is no longer my responsibility.” Madge admonished herself.

Jem was walking towards the house. It had been a busy day. Tomorrow Joey was getting married.Finally. Jem congratulated himself. Hough Joey was not aware of it neither was Jack, but he was responsible for the marriage. Right from the beginning he had seen to it that both of them were thrown together. He had asked Jack to teach Joey to drive; he had sent them together to pick up visitors or patients arriving by train.
Luckily Jack had also taken to Joey. Although there had been pretty girls around, Jem saw to it that Jack was not attracted to any of them. He wanted Jack in the hospital. Jack was a good doctor and if he were married to the family he would not leave or even aspire for more. Jo would see to it that she stayed near Madge. So there would be an experienced doctor under hi. They could recruit new ones later

He entered the house to find his wife waiting for him. It was a very peaceful scene. He sighed and settled in a chair.” So Joey is getting married tomorrow. How quickly the time has passed! It seems like yesterday when she was be in the middle of some adventure or other.” “Oh you talk as if she was always a nuisance” “No! No! .But one was never sure what she would do next! You have to admit it. Where is she? Fast asleep? I thought there would be lot of activity the day before Joey’s marriage. How calm and peaceful the house is! I never expected it to be so quiet.” He walked up to the fireplace and looked at his wife who was staring at him wide eyes.


“What’s the matter? I just said that it is all quiet here “ Madge slowly walked towards her husband thinking of the day gone with its jealousies and tears; frustrations and indecisions and humorous situations. Then first confirming that they were ready to catch her she promptly fainted into Jem’s arms.

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Author:  Alison H [ 28 Oct 2008, 08:46 ]
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Love the idea of Jem being a matchmaker - although his motives seem a bit questionable!

Thanks Mohini :D .
Author:  di [ 28 Oct 2008, 09:09 ]
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Thanks for filling in the gaps between the family arriving in Guernsey and Joey a married woman about to produce the triplets. I was always disappointed, as a young reader, that EBD jumped the marriage in the book, especially as she'd made so much of Joey and her adventures.

Thanks, again, Mohini, a great drabble. :)
Author:  Elbee [ 28 Oct 2008, 09:36 ]
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All is finally well by the end of the day!

Thanks, Mohini.
Author:  janetbrown23 [ 28 Oct 2008, 10:28 ]
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Lovely drabble Mohini many thanks. When is the next one? :D
Author:  PaulineS [ 28 Oct 2008, 13:32 ]
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Quote:
I thought there would be lot of activity the day before Joey’s marriage. How calm and peaceful the house is! I never expected it to be so quiet.” He walked up to the fireplace and looked at his wife who was staring at him wide eyes.


“What’s the matter? I just said that it is all quiet here “ Madge slowly walked towards her husband thinking of the day gone with its jealousies and tears; frustrations and indecisions and humorous situations.


Jem's innocence here is lovely
Author:  Vick [ 28 Oct 2008, 16:08 ]
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Lovely ending, thanks Mohini :D

Loved Madge checking Jem's arms were ready to catch her :lol:
Author:  Lesley [ 28 Oct 2008, 20:05 ]
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Vick wrote:
Loved Madge checking Jem's arms were ready to catch her :lol:



Also loved that bit! :lol:


Thanks Mohini
Author:  abbeybufo [ 28 Oct 2008, 22:20 ]
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Lesley wrote:
Vick wrote:
Loved Madge checking Jem's arms were ready to catch her :lol:



Also loved that bit! :lol:


The very bit that made me chuckle, too.

But it has all been most enjoyable.

Thanks Mohini
Author:  Abi [ 31 Oct 2008, 12:28 ]
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Also loved Madge's caution! This was a lovely story, Mohini. Thank you!
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