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A Black Forest Christmas - for Susan. Finished 15/12
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Author:  Secret Santa [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 2:56 pm ]
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I may have committed all sorts of EBD-isms with the main protagonist as I can't remember whether she re-appears in later books. But hey, if Santa can't take literary liberties at Christmas, who can??? Second (and final) part tomorrow.

Frau Habermann hurried to the door. Who on earth could that be, outside on this terrible night? It had been snowing for hours, and the wind was still howling. Her home, deep in the woods of the Black Forest, lay nestled in the snow. She hadn’t even tried to get to church, though it was Christmas Eve and she hadn’t relished the prospect of spending the evening alone. Who could be knocking so late? Whoever it was, they evidently meant to be let in. Wrapping her shawl more tightly around her, she opened the door just a crack, trying to keep the warmth in. To her surprise three young men in the Allied uniform of British soldiers stood huddled in the doorway. The enemy! Only fear and cold could have brought them to her door, for they had no way of knowing what their reception would be. Frau Habermann’s thoughts went to her young husband, far away on the Russian front. She owed it to the Fatherland and to all the brave soldiers of the Third Reich to turn these enemy combatants from her door. Who cared whether they lived, or perished in the snow? As a good German she could hardly sabotage the war effort by helping them. Quite apart from anything else, her punishment would be severe if she were caught helping the enemy: people had been executed for less. And yet, looking at these men, the same age as her husband, she could not help wondering whether some other woman, deep in the heart of some Russian forest, was at this very moment considering whether or not to give shelter to her beloved Hans.

The words were out of her mouth before she even registered them. Frau Haberman’s English was careful and halting, but no former pupil of the Chalet School could ever completely forget her languages. ‘Please, come in, come in, do not stand in the doorway. I beg you, come and sit by the stove and close the door that we may be warm.’ If George, Tom and Lucas were surprised to hear their own language, they did not show it. Indeed, their wits were so close to being addled by cold and hunger that they were almost past noticing anything. George and Tom, half-carrying Lucas between them, made their way to the stove. Tom thought wistfully of his family back in Warwickshire, and imagined them sitting by the fire, getting ready for the Christmas festivities. Mother would be preparing vegetables for tomorrow’s meal and they would all be looking forward to Midnight Mass. Tom was so homesick it hurt. But he pulled himself together. Such thoughts did no-one any good. The minutes ticked by. Good Frau Haberman gave them hot chicory coffee – the taste was on the bitter side, but the drink was warming, and gradually the three young men came back to life. They told Frau Haberman of all that had chanced. Four days ago, they had been part of a daring raid on the Ruhr valley. They had become disoriented in the moonless night, their planes had been shot down, and only the three of them were left alive. They were hoping to make it to the Swiss border, but the weather was against them, and they had wandered, cold and fearful, until desperation had brought them to Frau Hoffman’s door. George brought a picture out of his pocket. It was his best girl, Fran, from Colchester in Essex. Frau Habermann showed the picture of her dearest Hans, proudly displayed on the mantelpiece. She was just about to tell the story of how they had met, and what had taken them to the pretty house in the Black Forest, when more knocking came at the door. The four looked at each other in horror. Who could that be, and what, oh what, would happen to Frau Habermann if she were found to be helping the enemy?

Offering up a swift prayer, Frau Habermann went again to the door. With an agonised look at the three Tommies, she indicated the loft. They would be safe there, she hoped. As she opened the door again, Frau Habermann’s worst fears were realised. Two tall, blond-haired young men, also in uniform, but this time in the garb of the Gestapo. Her countrymen, also lost in the depths of the forest. They looked frozen to the core. If she had closed the door, Frau Habermann doubted whether the two of them could have forced it open in their weakened state. So she invited them in, as she had done the British soldiers. They too came and warmed themselves by the stove, and began to share tales of home and family. Johan was from Silesia. His father had been killed in that other war, the war to end all wars. Ulrich, the superior officer of the two, was Bavarian by birth. He lived with his wife and twin baby daughters in Freiburg. He worked in the Gestapo offices there, and had been sent with Johan to this remote district in search of fugitive enemy officers, believed to have been shot down in a raid. The going had been hard, and they had been making for the village some two miles distant, in search of a bed for the night. But they had become lost in the snow. Frau Habermann had undoubtedly saved their lives, for they would not have survived the night unsheltered in the forest. And so the evening passed in quiet chatter between the three Germans, whilst upstairs the three British men scarcely dared to breathe, let alone move. It was cold in the loft. How they longed for the cheerful warmth of the stove.

Edited to correct spelling of Freiburg. Hope it's right this time! :oops:

Author:  Lesley [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 3:59 pm ]
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Oh wow, that's so very possible - hope Frau Habermann manages to survive the night - and that the rest of the soldiers do likewise.

Thanks Santa.

Author:  Fatima [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:40 pm ]
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I'm on tenterhooks, just as Frau Habermann and the British soldiers must be.

Thanks, Santa.

Author:  Alison H [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:05 pm ]
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Me too!

Thanks Santa.

Author:  PaulineS [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:38 pm ]
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Thanks Santa. Hoping they all survive the cold and whatever the war throws at them.

Author:  Sugar [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 7:36 pm ]
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Thanks. That was lovely. That's the spirit for Christmas for sure!

Author:  leahbelle [ Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:05 pm ]
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Thanks, Santa.

Author:  Chris S [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:56 pm ]
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Thanks Santa, this is a really different Christmas story. I'm looking forward to part 2. Do they all end up sitting round the stove playing
paper and pencil games?

Author:  Secret Santa [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:09 pm ]
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The second and final part as promised. Santa hears that Chris S has been good this year, so there is an extra special addition just for her. Original words by EBD in green. Merry Christmas to Susan and all CBBers!

The talk turned, as it was bound to do, to Christmas. Frau Habermann described that brief episode in her girlhood when she had lived amongst girls of all European nations. Johan and Ulrich listened intently. This, they agreed, was what they were fighting for. For the day when all men and women could live together as brothers and sisters, united as one people. On Christmas Eve it was hard to think harsh thoughts of the enemy. ‘Let us sing a carol’ proposed Ulrich. Frau Habermann agreed with alacrity. Her mind was made up, and she knew what she had to do. ‘Indeed we should sing,’ she replied. ‘But first, I would like you to meet some more friends. More brothers. On this day of all days the dear Christ child bids us all be as one family. I beg you, do not be surprised by what you are about to see.’ And Frau Habermann opened the hatch to the loft. There cowered George, Tom and Lucas, their eyes wide with fright. The Gestapo! Surely execution awaited them now, and perhaps the life of the courageous, selfless German woman who had sheltered them would also be forfeit. ‘Do not be afraid,’ said Frau Habermann to the British soldiers. ‘These good men will not harm you. Tonight we remember that God gave his only Son to the world. Not to Germany, not to Britain, but to the whole world. Surely, in honour of His Gift, we greet each other in peace this night?’ There was a question in her tones, but her voice was firm: Frau Habermann was nothing if not self-controlled, and she betrayed no fear. Ulrich thought of his little girls. They were not quite two years old, and were it not for Frau Habermann, they would most probably have become fatherless by the morning. The three men looking at him, were they someone’s beloved sons, husbands and fathers? Not just enemy fighters, but flesh-and-blood people, with homes and friends of their own? His eyes bright with unshed tears, he wordlessly offered his hand to the three British soldiers. ‘Come,’ he said in halting English. ‘Come. We make Christ’s Mass together.’

Frau Habermann remembered that Christmas until she died, a contented old woman, more than fifty years later. They had taken it in turns to sing carols of their own lands, and she had taught them the beautiful Adeste Fidelis. They had told stories of their homes and families and Christmas customs. They had even played some of the pencil-and-paper games beloved of all Chalet School girls. Food was scarce, but there were sausages and potatoes to fry, and plenty of chicory coffee to drink. At last, warm and comforted, and their hunger satisfied, she had made up makeshift ‘beds’ for all the men, and they enjoyed a few hours’ sleep. And in the morning, with smiles and tears, Johan and Ulrich departed for the village and thence to Freiburg, to report that there were no British fugitives to be found. At dusk, for it was too dangerous for them to travel by day, George, Tom and Lucas departed too, making for the Swiss border and freedom.

Frau Habermann wiped away the tears as she sped the last of her Christmas guests on their way. The wind had died down, and it was a crisp, starlit winter’s night. She gazed up at the panorama above her head. Unbidden, Mademoiselle’s words came back to her, as they had so often over the years. ‘You have proved yourself to be ruthless, vindictive and unchristian… I pray God that this terrible knowledge may prove to be your help and safeguard for the future.’ At last, thought Thekla Habermann, maybe – just maybe – she was growing into a woman the Chalet School might be proud to count among its former pupils. Now that danger was past, she allowed herself to know just how much peril she had placed herself in with that act of courage, selflessness and peace. Mademoiselle’s words had indeed been her help and safeguard, and more than that, her inspiration. Shivering a little, for the night was bitterly cold, she offered up a silent prayer for the kindly Frenchwoman. And way up in the heavens, a tiny star, scarcely visible to the human eye, shone just a little bit more brightly that Christmas night.

Author:  Lesley [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:15 pm ]
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Oh my, you've just made me cry. So, so pleased it was Thekla.


Thank you Santa.

Author:  Pat [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:23 pm ]
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Tears in my eyes too. Thank you.

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:30 pm ]
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That was indeed lovely. It also put me in mind of the story about Christmas in the trenches (?1914) where the German and British troops sang Silent Night in German and English.

Like Lesley, I'm glad that this was Thekla.

Author:  PaulineS [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:11 pm ]
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What a couragous and selfless action by Thelka. I too was gald to see who it was and that her actions had a positive outcome.

Author:  Elbee [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:12 pm ]
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That was very moving. I'm glad Thekla redeemed herself. Thank you so much, Santa.

Author:  Sugar [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 9:43 pm ]
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Awww that was lovely. :cry:

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 9:48 pm ]
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I was hoping it was Thekla - thank you for a lovely story, Santa.

Author:  Susan [ Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:44 pm ]
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Thank you very much Santa. Your beautiful story mad me cry!

I had no idea which CS girl it was but glad it was Thekla.

Author:  Liz K [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 6:16 am ]
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Secret Santa wrote:
[color=#0000FF]Shivering a little, for the night was bitterly cold, she offered up a silent prayer for the kindly Frenchwoman. And way up in the heavens, a tiny star, scarcely visible to the human eye, shone just a little bit more brightly that Christmas night.



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Author:  Cath V-P [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:53 am ]
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Very poignant. thank you.

Author:  Sarah J [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:03 am ]
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Very moving - I'm glad it was Theckla - I was hoping it would be.

Author:  Emma A [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:11 am ]
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That was very beautiful - and even more poignant because it was Thekla. I'm so glad that she was able to be so brave, and that all her guests could come together in the spirit of peace. Thank-you Santa (and lucky Susan!).

Author:  judithR [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:51 am ]
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Susan wrote:
Your beautiful story mad me cry!


me too

Author:  JackieP [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:55 pm ]
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That was beautiful Santa, thank you very much.

JackieP

Author:  Chris [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 1:12 pm ]
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quiet tears in my office too!
Lovely

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 2:10 pm ]
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That was so beautiful. Thank you

Author:  Fatima [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:16 pm ]
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That was so poignant and beautiful. Thanks for a wonderful Christmas story, Santa.

Author:  Chris S [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:24 pm ]
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Thank you Santa. The tears are falling down my cheeks. I am so glad they joined together for the pencil and paper games - I just couldn't see them out in the snow playing football. It was a very moving story showing how the CS managed to turn Thekla into a better person, I wonder how many of us turned out to be better people because we read about the school. Many of us were influenced to visit Austria and Switzerland so I'm sure the CS influenced us to do other things as well.

Author:  linda [ Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:57 pm ]
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Aww....! That was lovely, but it made me weep. Thekla redeemed herself.

Thank you :santa:

Author:  jilianb [ Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:39 am ]
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Thank you Santa. That was beautiful. So glad that Thekla had the chance to redeem herself.

Author:  Kathy_S [ Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:29 am ]
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That's lovely, Santa!
And I never guessed it would be Thekla.
*sniffles*

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