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Author:  Kathy [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 6:13 pm ]
Post subject:  The Holiday at the Chalet - new drabble by new drabbler!

I've got a prequel drabbel about the first visit to Austria - or the beginnings of one anyway...we'll see if it gets anywhere!

The setting: Taverton, 4 and a half years before School. Autumn. Dick and Madge are both 19. Dick has recently finished at his public school and is at home applying for jobs. Joey is languishing in the wet weather after another attack of bronchial flu.

1. A Conversation

Margaret Bettany, commonly known as Madge, was sitting in the front room of her guardian’s house. It was a dark, dank afternoon in November. She did not appear to notice that her mass of brown curls, only recently put up, had slipped from its normal roll and was coming down at one side, and against this her fair skin looked pale.

She was biting her lip and staring into nothingness when there was a knock at the door and a fresh-faced young doctor came in, carrying his medicine-case and stethoscope and looking serious. Madge’s expression immediately changed from distraction to alarm.

“Doctor! How is…I mean, she is going to be alright, isn’t she? I’ve been so…”

He hastily reassured her. “Oh, there’s nothing to fear – nothing immediate that is. But I don’t like this, Miss Bettany”. He drew up an armchair and sat down. “Forgive my presumption. I feel as though I’m butting in here – after all, Joey’s not my patient, and I know she’s been with Doctor Phelps for years. But I can’t help wondering…”

“Yes?” Madge was leaning forward in anticipation now, her slim hands knotted together.

“Well, if it’s right just to keep her in bed. She’s getting no better, as you say, although you’re also right that she’s getting no worse. But – well, if I may speak candidly, Miss Bettany, I’m a young man, and I don’t really approve of this Victorian idea of keeping the invalid in bed indefinitely and waiting for a miracle! The body simply doesn’t function like that. Stuffy rooms – stale air – that’s what’s keeping your sister the way she is. And not only that, but she’s losing her spirit.” He spoke more boldly now. “That kid hates being confined to bed!” – Madge managed a rueful smile at this, knowing how very true it was! – “and, in the long-term – how long has she been like this again?”

“Since she was four and a half.” Madge’s face had lost its pallor and although she looked anxious, there was hope in her eyes. “She had that awful pleuro-pneumonia, and it left her very weak. She gets better for a certain length of time, and we even get her to school at times, but usually after a few months she loses it again. It’s the winters, Doctor. She’s never been able to cope with them since then.”

“Yes, I’m afraid our English winter isn’t too kind to those whose lungs are not strong. And that’s the essence of my suggestion, Miss Bettany.”

“You mean – take Joey away? But how? And where?”

“That rather depends.” Dr. Cooper flashed a sudden smile. “How are your languages?”

“Fluent enough, thankfully – French and German that is! Madge answered him. “But I still don’t see…” Madge was warming to this pleasant young doctor, though wondering how someone who looked so young could speak with such confidence.

“And haven’t you been working as governess to the Bates’s kids?”

“I’ve been giving them some private tutoring in English literature,” Madge said with some dignity. “It isn’t nearly the same thing.”

“Alright!” ejaculated Dr. Cooper. “I take it back. How about friends on the Continent. Do you know anyone?”

“There’s Mademoiselle Lepattre in Paris,” Madge said doubtfully. “But I’m not sure…”

“I’ll put your mind at ease then,” he said with another grin. “It’s just a suggestion, but can you and your brother contrive to take Jo out of the country for the whole winter? She needs fresh air – mountain air is said to be best! – and a chance to get outside lots and get fitter, since our current autumnal weather doesn’t seem to be offering that! He grimaced at the wind that was howling around the house like an angry wolf. “It’s just what she needs. If you can do that, be better able to weather the winter. And there’s some thing else…”

“Yes?” Madge’s deep brown eyes were like saucers.

“It will give her something to look forward to. At the moment she’s just feeling languid. She can’t see any fun in anything, everything makes her ill, and she’s got too much in her to take it kindly! A trip like this would shake her out of that. If not…” his face became serious again – “it not, if I may again speak plainly, Miss Bettany, the best we can say is that she’ll languish through another winter or so”.

It was Madge’s turn to look serious. At that moment, the door handle turned and Dick came in. It was obvious that he and Madge were related, although his fair hair made such a contrast to her dark one. Now he advanced on Dr. Cooper and gave him a friendly clap on the back.

“Cooper! Glad you could make it old boy! I was worried when I spoke to the surgery and they said they couldn’t send anyone because of this ghastly epidemic. When they offered to send you over from North Taverton at the end of your shift, I couldn’t believe our luck. I had no idea you were practicing locally now?”

“I’ve only been back a few months from my placement” said Dr. Cooper, rubbing his arm where Dick had clapped him slightly overenthusiastically. “I asked to be posted overseas and found myself in a little hospital in Innsbruck. A bit remote at times maybe, but it’s a wonderful place…Now, I wonder…”

“What is it?” asked Dick impatiently. “What have you two been scheming while I was attending to our beloved guardian?”

“It’s just that somewhere like that would be ideal to take Joey. Just for the winter. Yes I know it seems drastic” as he saw Dick’s mouth fall open, “but she needs something pretty drastic if she’s going to ever improve. Miss Bettany will tell you the details, and” with a boyish grin that belied his young age “for goodness’ sake, do it or you’ll find yourself with six of the best!”

Both men chuckled at the memory this conjured up. Dr. Cooper, as a prefect at Stonefields, had found thirteen-year-old Dick Bettany and his friends running what they had called a “military society”. This had involved practicing their “skills” of sneaking through undergrowth, using catapults, raiding tuck boxes for “rations”, breaking bounds and ambushing younger boys at every opportunity. They had built up a respectable store of toffees, fruit cake, knives and other small trophies of war when Nemisis had fallen. Cooper and his own gang had resolved to teach the Third a lesson they would not forget and ambushed the ambushers. The Third had received a sound thrashing for thieving (“even though we never would have touched any money”, as Dick said) and the escapade had gone down in their school’s unofficial annals.

Madge looked at Dick. “Sorry to break in…” she began, realising that the two were on the brink of beginning a long reminiscence, “but what are we going to do?”

Dick grinned back. “Sorry, Madge. And by the way your hair seems to have worked itself loose. What do you advise then Cooper?”

”My advice to you,” Cooper seemed to have pulled himself together and was once again the consummate professional, as Madge blushed furiously, wondering how long her hair had been falling out, “is to write to any friends you’ve got across Europe. Let them know the situation and ask if you can come to them. Better still, see if one of them will travel with you. You’re neither of you of age yet, and though you’re both very capable, it’s more the look of the thing! I can’t imagine that muddle-headed guardian of yours making it very far!”

“You’re very right there!” Dick chuckled again. “Say, Cooper, let’s ring for tea shall we? Madge,” noticing her blushes “do you want to run and tell Jo our plans, then join us down here? That’ll give us a chance to get the memories out of the way!”

Madge seized her chance and escaped upstairs. She did not intend telling Jo anything until things were settled – besides, who knew how long it took to plan such things? – but it would give her time to make herself tidy again, and Joey would probably be awake and might want a chat or something to read. She hurried up the stairs to see her younger sister.

Author:  Kathy [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 6:18 pm ]
Post subject:  The Holiday at the Chalet - chapter 2

2. Joey-Baba!

“Madgey! It’s so nice to see you! Doctor Cooper is ever so much more interesting than Dr. Phelps, but his stethoscope is cold!”

Madge laughed as she surveyed the slight figure in the bed. Tiny for her seven years, Jo had a thin, pointed face framed by jet-back hair which was “straight as a pump-spout” as a family friend had once pointed out. Large, dark eyes stood out on her pale skin. Usually these sparkled with mischief, but the listlessness that had taken hold of Jo recently had been a source of great worry to Madge and Dick. However, the novelty of Dr. Cooper’s visit seemed to have cheered her a little. His boyish manner was evidently popular with children.

“Joey-Baba! Poor Doctor Phelps!” she teased. “He’s been out to see you in much worse weather than this before, and the one time he can’t make it you turn against him! Ungrateful, I call it!”

Joey looked slightly abashed. “I do like Dr. Phelps. Only Dr. Cooper talks about such interesting things – places he’s been to and things. Do you know, he was telling me about a toymaker in this little town in Austria…”

As Joey chattered on Madge watched her, deep in thought. The thought of far-away places seemed to have reanimated Joey; she was a long way from the lethargic, exhausted little soul she had seemed a week ago. Her spirit was never broken for long. And yet…and yet…Madge shivered a little as she remembered Dr. Cooper’s chilling words.

Joey broke off to ask, “And is there any news of the epidemic?”

A bad ‘flu epidemic had been sweeping the south-west for the last few weeks. Madge was almost thankful Joey had already been poorly before it happened, as this had prevented her coming into contact with it, as from the reports it was similar in some respects to the Spanish ‘flu of some years before. Jo would have stood little chance against such a deadly virus. Joey’s question, while a little morbid, was another sign that she was thinking about life outside again.

“Not much Jo. Only that Doctor Phelps is ever so busy. I saw Mrs. Dene with Rosalie yesterday, so they must be alright – keeping out of it.”

Jo sighed. “That’s good. I like Rosalie. And she’s ever so clever! I wouldn’t want them to be ill”.

Madge felt that she had better change the subject. Taking out a comb and some pins she proceeded to re-do her hair. Jo watched her in horrified fascination.

“I’m never going to do that with my hair!” she said emphatically. “It would take me all day to be ready!”

Madge found herself laughing out loud. “Oh Joey-Baba you do make me laugh! All girls put their hair up when they’re eighteen. It shows you’re a lady and not a girl. You get used to doing it faster. Yours might be a little harder as it’s so straight, but you could plait it and coil it up…like so!”

She demonstrated with a stray lock of her hair and proceeded to pull the whole arrangement out. Frustration welled up in her – it was so irritating, trying to keep tidy! – but Joey’s laughter was music to her ears, and she joined in.

“I do seem to make a mess of this don’t I! Now I shall have to begin again in the mirror. Can I fetch you any books while I’m there Jo?”

“Yes please! May I have the big fairy story book? It’s so old, and the pictures are ever so interesting. You look at them and you see one thing…then another…then another – it’s lovely!”

“As long as you promise not to try and lift it” said Madge warningly. “It’s ever so heavy – you couldn’t hold it yourself in bed. I’ll fetch it and we can look at it together.” With which she left the room.

Joey sighed happily and looked around the room. It was her own, yet there was little sign of her presence. Their guardian, while a dear at heart! believed that “children should be seen and not heard”, and an embroidered sampler on the stark white wall opposite her issued this instruction. Her few toys and books were in a chest in Madge’s room and noisy play was only permitted when they were alone in the house, or, when it was fine and she was well – in the garden.

Still, she reflected, she was luckier than lots of people. The garden was a fine place to play with plenty of secret hidey-holes. If only she could be well and it could be summer again! She smiled, lost in happy memories of making secret dens with Rosalie’s cousin Mary and another friend, Frances. Mary was slightly more given to “girlish” games and quiet activities than Jo and Frances, but she had loved “the den” which they had made between the raspberry canes. Mrs Burnett was nice too – she had only issued a slight scolding when Mary had turned up with a torn, muddy dress but – horror of horrors! – she had told Mary that she would have to learn to mend her own clothes!

Still, Mary didn’t seem to mind that much. For Joey, the very idea was torture. She well remembered being forced to stitch at a sampler last year when she had been in bed with a cold and Madge had caught it too, and the temporary housekeeper had had a rather fixed idea of what girls should do. The tatty, partly-finished sampler was now gathering dirt in the bottom of her toy box. Joey knew what she enjoyed doing, and it did not involve needles and cotton!

Lying back on her pillows, the garden hovered in her imagination until it combined with the wonderful stories that Dr. Cooper had been telling her, of meadows thick with spring flowers, little huts, ice-cold streams and snow-capped mountains…and she slipped into a dream-world which may have owed something to the Heidi books, of living in a little hut with her guardian and plaiting and coiling her hair…and the samplers on the wall said that goats should be seen and not heard…

Madge, now tidy, returned to the room to see her sister slumbering peacefully, her breathing still a little shallow but even and her face cool. She paused to tuck the covers warmly around her and put the big fairy-tale book down near the bed ready for later before making her way back down the stairs, full of possibilities and ideas.

Author:  kimothy [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 6:21 pm ]
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thanks kathy!

this looks great, i love they way you have captured madge's character soo well

Author:  Alison H [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:07 pm ]
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Congratulations on your first drabble :D !

Author:  LesleyAnn [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:10 pm ]
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This is lovely and how nice to see a glimpse of their life pre-School at

Author:  MaryR [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:48 pm ]
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This is very interesting, Kathy. One has to feel sympathy for Madge and Dick having to look after a younger sister who was always ill. I'm sure Madge must sometimes have wished for someone to take the responsibility off her young shoulders.

Thank you.

Author:  Lisa [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:56 pm ]
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Ooh, I love it!! :D

Author:  Lesley [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:25 pm ]
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Really liking this so far, Kathy, congratulations on your first drabble! :lol:

Author:  Tara [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:34 pm ]
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Very, very good. Looking forward to lots more!

Author:  Elder in Ontario [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:51 pm ]
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This looks really good, Kathy, and I'm looking forward to more of it - it's always interesting to catch glimpses from 'before' the Chalet School.

Thank you.

Author:  Pado [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:14 pm ]
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I'm enjoying the beginning - looking forward to more!

Author:  Cath V-P [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:47 pm ]
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This is fascinating, epecially catching glimpses of how illness must have restricted Joey's childhood.

Thank you Kathy.

Author:  Squirrel [ Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:03 pm ]
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I'm really enjoying this - it looks like it shall be a most interesting tale.

Thanks Kathy

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:59 am ]
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This is great and would love to see more. Thanks

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 12:33 pm ]
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Great start - thanks!

Author:  Alice [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:19 pm ]
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This is lovely, thanks Kathy. Looking forward to some more.

Author:  leahbelle [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:37 pm ]
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This is great, Kathy. How frustrated Joey must have been being cooped like that.

Author:  Fatima [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 3:16 pm ]
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It's lovely to see a new drabbler, and thanks for such a lovely beginning, Kathy.

Author:  Sarah_K [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:56 pm ]
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Thank you Kathy, it's a brilliant start!

I like Dr Cooper, poor Joey must be pretty fed up stuck in bed for all that time when we all know how lively and imaginative she is.

Author:  Kathy [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:59 pm ]
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Thanks to everyone for their kind supportive comments!

3. Letters and plans

By December, however, the ‘flu epidemic had spread throughout the country and gales and heavy rain were making it a miserable winter for all. Madge and Dick were forced to concede that taking Joey away for the winter was not a viable option.

“It’s just too dangerous,” Madge said with a flat finality over breakfast one chilly morning. “The ports and stations will be full of people – any of them might have it. It’s too much of a risk for Jo.”

“You could say the same of any disease, at any time of year, anywhere” Dick pointed out impishly. “However, I’m inclined to agree with you. It’s not a good time to be travelling. The ports could be closed and we could be holed up somewhere for days before we’d even left England. I think we should wait until the summer.”

“But Dick!” Madge’s tone was worried. “Will you still be with us then? When do you start your training?”

“Hard to say yet! I’m waiting for a letter...I hope I’ll be able to join you though. Hello, here’s the post!” This last as he saw a familiar figure passing the window. He jumped up and returned a few minutes later with a pile of letters.

“Something for you Madge…and another…gosh, who have you been writing to! And something official-looking for me.” He ripped it open, studied the contents intently, then let out a boyish whoop.

“Madge! It says I can start in September! I’m to be trained for a Forestry placement. That’ll means the possibility of going to India to work. Oh, it couldn’t be better!” He saw Madge’s keen eyes on him. “Don’t worry Madge, I don't have to go. If things are tough with Jo, I can take a place nearer. And in any case, I won’t be going anywhere for a couple of years yet. Got all the training to come first!

Madge was still looking thoughtfully at him. “You really do miss India, don’t you?”

“Miss it? I should say! It seems a little like a dream now I suppose. It was so long ago. But I remember loving it as a child. The animals…the temples…even the summer heat and the monsoon! I found England very strange when we first arrived, and I always wanted to go back. Oh, I daresay I shan’t settle permanently out there. But a good few years would be an adventure as well as setting us up financially for a long time. Oh, hallelujah!” With that he caught up the pepper and salt pots and a small jar of marmalade and began to juggle with them.

Madge laughed to see him so happy. “Well it settles another question, and that’s that you can come travelling with us. I’ve just received this from Madamoiselle Lepattre” She smoothed out a piece of blue paper upon which was a good deal of cramped handwriting. Dick, distracted, caught the salt and pepper pots in one hand and missed the marmalade which hit the floor with a sticky crash. “Dick! Honestly! I’ll have to clear that up before Mary sees. It’s not her day for floor-polishing and she’ll curse you alright! Now, listen!”

Ma cherie Marguerite,

How wonderful to hear from you. I hope this finds you well in Devon as it leaves me in Paris. I would have replied to you before, but ma cousine is staying with us as their house was flooded. Have you suffered with this terrible weather? I feel like quite half of France is under water!

Ma cousine brought her little girls with her and I have looked after them while their mother sorted out their possessions and organised to clean the house. The eldest is close in age to your sister Joey I think – seven? The other is only four. Elles sont les petites mignonnes, but they do miss their mother when she’s not here! It has been so hard to go out, I have given them some lessons and also some treats! Yesterday, I found the paper dolls I had played with in my own childhood. They were so enthralled that we spent most of the day playing with them! It was wonderful for me too!

In answer to your question about coming to us. My dear, the house is open to you! I only have my tutoring work, and that is not always, you know. There is plenty of space here. I should love to show you Paris and perhaps travel down through France with you. I don’t know how long I could be with you but it is a wonderful idea. Mais, ma cherie! You must come to us in spring or summer! I can not think of you travelling in this dreadful weather. The train should drown!
At which point Dick and Madge both dissolved into giggles.

I look forward to receiving your reply and planning our petit sojourn!

Ameties, Therese Lepattre


“That’s settled then.” Madge declared. “We’ll go in June. We can both save a little money so that we have plenty for this trip, and we should both brush up on our languages a little – my French doesn’t get enough use just tutoring reluctant schoolgirls! Then we just need to decide on a route. We may as well take out time travelling down – Joey won’t be able to cope with rushing from one place to the next. Any ideas Dick? Where have you always longed to visit?

Dick frowned in thought. “I should love the Rhine, and Provence if we could make either of them. But really I’m longing to see this place Cooper was describing. It sounds almost magical – a blue lake surrounded by mountains.”

“I’d love to see something of the Low Countries if we could manage it.” Madge added; she had not long finished reading Vilette and had been struck by the descriptions of the imaginary town which Bronte had loosely based on Amsterdam. “We should spend a good few days in Paris too, Dick. Jo’s never been, but I found her reading one of the Scarlet Pimpernel stories the other day and she seemed hooked!”

“Isn’t she a bit young for those?” Dick screwed up his face in the effort of memory.

“Poor dear! Where does it hurt?!” she teased. “Yes I wondered that, but she does read very widely and it isn’t as if she’s likely to pick up any language from them! Now, Dick, we do need to make one decision before we can make any plans. When do we go?”

“Late May or early June would be best.” Dick said thoughtfully. “That gives me a decent amount of time with you. I’d probably have to leave you in mid-August to make the journey back in plenty of time.”

“Then that’s decided,” Madge was firm. “I’ll book our passage and train tickets to Paris, and then we can tell Joey. She’ll be so thrilled! Could you find the telephone directory?” And so saying she departed to seek a damp cloth and so avoid the wrath of the Bettany’s housekeeper, inwardly resolving that nothing should stand in the way of Dick's returning to India.

Author:  JoS [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:20 pm ]
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This is wonderful, thanks Kathy.
Am eagerly waiting for more.

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:54 pm ]
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Kathy wrote:
“Poor dear! Where does it hurt?!” she teased. “Yes I wondered that, but she does read very widely and it isn’t as if she’s likely to pick up any language from them!


Er, got news for you Madge! Yes she will. :lol: :lol: :lol:


This is wonderful Kathy, you've captured the feel of the early books so well.


Thank you.

Author:  Lottie [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 9:56 am ]
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This is great, Kathy. :D I'm really looking forward to the next part.

Author:  Jennie [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:42 am ]
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Great, Kathy. Looking forward to more of this.

Author:  leahbelle [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 1:51 pm ]
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Thank you!

Author:  Fatima [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:03 pm ]
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*lazily echoes the other comments*

Thanks Kathy.

Author:  Dawn [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:40 pm ]
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this is great Kathy - I love Dick juggling and Mademoiselle LaPattre's cousins little girls playing with the paper dolls

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 4:01 pm ]
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This is lovely - thanks Kathy.

Author:  Clare [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 4:19 pm ]
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This is really good - thank you Kathy. Looking forward to the next installment.

Author:  MaryR [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 5:52 pm ]
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Thank you, Kathy - delightful. :wink:

Author:  Kathy [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 7:23 pm ]
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Oops - didn't know that about the Scarlet Pimpernel Books!! :oops:

Amazing how this forces you to research - I found myself looking at forestry in India trying to work out what on earth they did, how they trained and what on earth a "furlough" was!!!

Author:  Kathy [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:23 pm ]
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4. Finally off!

“Joey! Can you sit still for one moment, child! I need your weight to close the trunk, and it’s no use if you wriggle like that!” Dick’s words may have been exasperated but his tone was mild.

Joey, perched on top of an overstuffed brown trunk, looked down at her skinny arms and legs. “I don’t know that I’m much good at things like this,” she said ruefully. “Tisn’t as if there’s much of me to squash it with. Not like some…” There was a glint of mischief in her eye as she looked at him.

“You cheeky little minx!” And Dick scuffled with her, somehow contriving in the process to sit on the suitcase himself and so slip the latches shut.

“Finally! Now Jo, did you put your books and papers ready for Madge’s night-case?”

“I put them where she said”. Jo was dancing around the room again now. “Oh Dick it’s going to be such fun! We’re going to Calais, and to Dover, and to Brussels, and to Antwerp, and to Paris, and to…” she paused in the midst of an improvised ditty. “Dick I can’t make the other ones fit in the song!”

“Never mind, nightingale! You’ll have plenty of time to write all the songs you want on the journey! Now, calm down and tell me, is Madge ready? Is that the taxi hooting? It’s nine sharp, so they should be here.”

Madge came running into the room. “Dick, can you take the trunks out? I think we’re all set to go. Joey, do stop skipping like that – you’ll get short of breath again and we don’t need that now! Sit down a minute, and remember to take your little night-case out to the taxi for us while Dick carries the trunks.”

Joey sat down, pale with the exertion. She had had a cough for most of the spring; nothing bad, but it had made breathing difficult and running just hurt! It hadn’t been like that for a long time, not that she remembered. “Sorry Madge, I’ll be good.”

A little later, they were waving goodbye to the handsome Victorian house and to their guardian, who had winked and pressed a pound note into Joey’s hand at the last moment, saying “Don’t forget a postcard, Josephine dear”. Since a pound would buy any number of postcards and stamps, as well as an assortment of other goodies, Jo was happily contemplating the possibilities that lay before her. In what seemed like no time at all to one lost in such happy reverie, they arrived at Exeter main line station and boarded the big express train.

“Goodbye Devon!” Jo sang, standing the in corridor and peering out of the window. “We’ll see you in September when the leeeaves are broooown…”

“Joey! Come into the compartment and settle down, I’ve got a new paper here for you.”

The first part of the journey sped past quickly. Jo read her stories, filled in her puzzles, and nearly drove Dick, who was trying to read through some notes on his placement, to distraction asking him the quiz questions. Madge was settled comfortably with a book about Napoleon, her preparation for the visit to Paris. Because of the wet winter, the countryside was even greener than May always is, and the effect was set off by a glorious blue sky.

Travelling to Dover necessitated changes in Southampton and Portsmouth. It was late that evening before they arrived. They found the tiny guest-house Dick had booked next to the station, and, upon instruction, left their cases in the hallway and went straight to the dining-room to eat cold ham and bubble-and-squeak. Joey ate the ham but toyed with the bubble and squeak; fried foods were not her favourite. She was beginning to look pale and tired, and Madge reflected that she probably needed sleep more than any other sustenance, so found the little night-case and escorted her up the stairs to change for bed, leaving Dick to talk to the proprietor.
Having soothed Joey off to sleep, Madge made the sudden decision to go back downstairs. The guesthouse was only small – merely a house with a few extra rooms, and Joey was within earshot if she awoke – and even if she did, she would more than likely be able to amuse herself until she dropped off. Pausing only to check her hair in the glass Madge returned to the dining room, where Dick was enjoying a glass of brandy and chatting with the proprietor. It was late in the evening and not yet the holiday season, so the dining room was otherwise empty.

“Welcome back! Mrs. Bettany? May I get you anything?”

Madge blushed and Dick stepped in. “It’s Miss, I’m afraid.”

“I do apologise, madam. Is the little one asleep?”

“Sleeping very soundly,” answered Madge. “Thank you very much, a coffee would be lovely.”

As she sipped her coffee and talked with Dick, Madge reflected that she had never in her life before sat up late drinking coffee in a restaurant. There was no danger; no gossip could be engendered in such a small place, yet she felt faintly daring and slightly guilty at leaving Joey alone. There was nothing to fear though, Joey was fast asleep at the top of the stairs and she could enjoy a small taste of freedom.

“And where are you planning to visit on your trip?” The proprietor had returned, bringing Dick another brandy. She noticed that he looked faintly uneasy.

“We’re travelling from Calais down to Brussels,” Madge answered “where we are meeting an acquaintance of our parents. We are going to stay with them for a few days and look around Brussels. If Joey stays well, we might perhaps see Bruges or Antwerp on a day trip. From Brussels we are going south to on to Paris, where we will meet a very close family friend. My mother knew her well as a girl and she has always been very kind to us. She has promised to show us Paris.” Madge’s eyes sparkled in anticipation of this insiders’ guide to one of her favourite places.

Dick took up the tale. “After that we get the Paris-Berne express. We’ve booked a private compartment so that Joey can sleep on the train – she’s not too strong you know, and this ‘flu that’s been going round – well, we wouldn’t want to take the risk.”

The proprietor nodded sympathetically; he was a father, although his brood had now grown up and moved out, and he well remembered the worries they had had with his youngest son, not that anyone would think it now to look at him, he reflected.

“We’ll stay in Berne for a few days, again to look around and give Jo a rest, then we’ll journey slowly across to Innsbruck via Luzern and see some of the lakes. That should take us about two weeks. We’re planning to spend the rest of the summer in the Tyrolese mountains. What was the place called again Madge?”

“Briesau,” answered Madge. “It’s on the shores of a lake called the Tirren See I think?”

“The Tiern See,” Dick corrected her. “I remember now. It sounds a lovely place.” He turned to the proprietor. “An old school chum of mine was posted to Innsbruck on his medical placement. He did some exploring of the lakes and mountains while he was there – I think he was a bit lonely, poor fellow, as his German isn’t what you’d call conversational! Anyway, he reckoned this lake to be the bluest thing he’d even set eyes on. He gave us a shortlist of a few places, but that was the one we settled on.”

“It sounds a wonderful scheme,” said the proprietor a little wistfully. “Well, I suppose I should let you retire, Mr Bettany and Miss…” He stopped, then coloured a little carried on. “Your luggage has all been put in the room with your little girl.”

Madge’s horrified face was a picture and the crimson colour of her face would have caused some consternation, had there been anyone else to see it. The proprietor was confused, but finally humbly apologetic. Between the two, and his own incipient giggles, it was as much as Dick could do to explain and remedy the situation. When he finally parted from the proprietor and entered the hurriedly-made-up separate room they had found for him, he lay down on the bed and simply shouted with laughter.

Author:  Lesley [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:40 pm ]
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Kathy wrote:
Oops - didn't know that about the Scarlet Pimpernel Books!! :oops:


Oh I didn't mean that there was anything particular in the Scalet Pimpernel books - only that Joey would pick up language reading video instructions! :lol:


Lovely episode - I thought, as soon as Madge said she was Miss Bettany, that there would be gossip!


Thanks Kathy.

Author:  JoS [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:44 pm ]
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Poor Madge! And what excitement. Lovely, thanks Kathy

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 9:49 pm ]
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:lol: :lol: I suppose lots of people must've thought that they were Joey's parents though. Having a "delicate" child to look after when they were only young themselves must've been a lot to cope with.

Looking forward to hearing about the holiday.

Author:  Pat [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 10:12 pm ]
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But there's only 12 years between them!

Author:  Tara [ Thu Jan 18, 2007 11:42 pm ]
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But Joey's small for her age ...

This is great, Kathy, and I love all the little forerunners of themes we know. Is this the start of Simone's obsession with paper dolls? And Jo's with Napoleon?

I was touched by Madge's enjoyment of that little taste of freedom. Having the charge of a delicate little girl must have been an awesome responsibility for a very young woman.

Author:  Dawn [ Fri Jan 19, 2007 1:07 am ]
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I'd never thought about the Miss and Mr travelling together :oops:

Author:  Fatima [ Fri Jan 19, 2007 5:20 am ]
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Poor Madge, how embarrassing!

Thanks Kathy.

Author:  Cath V-P [ Fri Jan 19, 2007 8:55 am ]
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This is lovely...

Author:  leahbelle [ Fri Jan 19, 2007 12:12 pm ]
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I am really enjoying this insight into pre-CS life. Thanks!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Fri Jan 19, 2007 1:52 pm ]
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This is great. Ame really enjoying it

Author:  Kathy [ Fri Jan 19, 2007 3:15 pm ]
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thank to everyone! I'm enjoying writing it although it's moving rather slowly - but it's fun trying to fit the themes in. I know someone else did a prequel but I'm afraid I only read the first bit!

No more till at leas Monday as I have no Internet connection at home so I'll have to put it on disk - byeee!

Author:  LizB [ Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:18 pm ]
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I've just found this - it's lovely. I'm looking forward to seeing more of their journey and holiday.

Thanks, Kathy :D

Author:  Kathy [ Sat Jan 27, 2007 11:46 pm ]
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Here we go with Chapter 5. I may be stretching a point here with Joey's non-comprehension of someone learning another language from birth, but I remember the first time I heard a little kid speaking a foreign language fluently was on a school trip when I was about 12, and it sounded really odd to all of us - although i technically knew that the kid had spoken German since birth, it was hard to comprehend that!

5. We are sailing!

It was six o’clock in the morning when Madge was awoken by a small clammy hand in hers. She opened her eyes to see Joey’s face very close to hers.

“Morning Madge! Sorry but I was just so excited I wanted to see if you were awake too!”

“I wasn’t,” yawned Madge, “but now I am. No harm done Joey-Baba, we’ve got a boat to catch at ten, but,” more awake now, “you are not to walk around in your nightgown, Joey Bettany! How are we to keep you well if you simply invite colds! Snuggle down properly here for a minute and warm up.”

Joey did as she was told. “Madge, you’re a dear. I’m so excited I can’t speak!

“Then hush, Baba! Goodness only knows that’s rare enough for you! Now listen to me, Joey. You don’t want to spoil things by getting over-excited and ill. We’re going to have a wonderful summer and,” she yawned again, “you’re going to feel really fit and strong by the end of it. But you must do as we say and not grumble if we say you aren’t quite well or strong enough to do something.”

“Promise, Madgey. Come on then, lazy-bones!”
Breakfast was a little stilted at first, but the proprietor and his wife soon forgot about the mix-up of the night before and served them with an excellent breakfast, then bid them farewell and good luck. In a very short time they were at the ferry terminal, and soon they were able to board the Queen Caroline. Jo delighted in everything, from the hand-rails to the lounges and the shop where one could buy confectionary and souvenirs, and decided to part with twopence for – luxury of luxuries! – another paper. After a promenade around the ship, they settled in the lounge to watch England recede and France creep closer, Joey enthralled by stories of Enid of the Third and The Pony Pack, Dick half-dozing behind a copy of The Times.

An hour later Madge felt a tap at her elbow. “Yes Joey?”

“Madge, this girl and I want to talk, but she doesn’t understand me and she talks funny back”.

Madge looked up, startled. Next to Joey was a little dark-haired girl of about Joey’s age who was repeating plaintively “Est-ce que tu veux jouer au cache-cache?”

Madge laughed. “Joey, she’s speaking in French! You remember when I taught you to say “Bonjour” and “Ca va” and the rest?

“But why doesn’t she just speak English?” repeated Joey. “It must be really hard having to speak another language all the time, Madge!”

“Joey, you goose! For her, speaking French is like you speaking English. You’ve learnt it from birth so it comes naturally to you. People in France learn French from birth so that’s what comes naturally to them. Understand?” Joey nodded wonderingly. “So, ma petite, comment appelles-tu?”

Je m’appelle Marie,” answered the little girl. “Est-ce que la petite fille la pouvient jouer au cache-cache avec nous?”

Madge was torn – she knew it would be pleasant for Joey to have a friend for the journey, but did not think that hide-and-seek would be a suitable game on the crowded decks; besides, Joey would soon be out of breath. Instead she implored the little girl to sit and chat to them, and soon Joey was gleefully repeating phrases such as “J’ai sept ans” and “J’habite a Taverton, en Angleterre” to the great amusement and infectious giggles of “Marie”. Listening to the pair, Madge reflected that although Jo had very little understanding of what she was being asked to repeat – Madge kept a careful ear that none of it was inappropriate! – she showed unusual skill in repeating the sound of these new words exactly as they were, rather than making a similar “English” sound.

As they approached the coast of France, Madge tapped her sister on the shoulder. “Joey! Do come and look out of the window. We can see France – on peut voir la France” to Marie, who squealed with delight and ran to her family calling “Maman! Maman! La France est la-bas!”
Joey looked at Madge with mischief in her eyes. “I’m not Joey, I’m Zhoey”, pronouncing her name with the soft J as Marie had. “We’re in France now Madge, so I have to change my name. You can be Marguerite like Aunt Therésé sometimes says. And Dick…and Dick can be…

“Richárd,” said Dick, emerging from his newspaper to give this French pronunciation. “Jolly good idea, Zhoey! Right-oh, let’s have a quick view before we get off.”

They newly-christened three strolled to the window to see the port ahead and the green northern coast unrolling in front of them, before saying “au revoir” to Marie and her family, who were visiting friends in Calais before travelling on. The they descended to the exit and hailed a taxi, ready for the “real” part of their adventure to begin.

Author:  Kathy [ Sat Jan 27, 2007 11:53 pm ]
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6. The journey

“May I get my books out now, Marguerite?” They were settling down in the afternoon train from Calais to Brussels. The train was rather late already. They had not booked a private apartment on this train, as it would arrive that evening and they would be met by Mr. and Mrs. Holmes. The Holmeses had known the Bettany family in India, but previous to that Mr. Holmes had worked in a Dutch ,,,,,,,,in Brussels, so they had chosen to retire there.

“Of course, Zhoey. Dick, I mean Richárd, can you lift the night-case down?” That done, Joey proceeded to hunt out her possessions.

“Madge, are you sure they’re in this one? I can’t see them.”

“Let me look.” Madge lifted out various items. “No, they must be in the other case. How strange! Dick – could you check?”

“Not in that one, old lady. I had to unpack everything from that case last night as it was wet - I was worried something had leaked. Turned out it was just that the outside of the case had sat in a puddle. No, your books aren’t there.”

“Then what happened to them?” Joey’s face was creased in thought.

To work out the explanation took a little time. The three finally correctly surmised that something in the nature of a slapstick farce had been enacted the previous day. Joey had made her pile of books and papers on the floor outside Dick’s room as instructed by Madge. Madge had seen the pile and carried them to the hallway to be divided between the trunk and the night-case. The gong had rung for lunch at that moment. While the Bettanys were eating, the doorbell had rung. The housekeeper had answered the door to three collectors for the town Jumble Sale. Assuming the pile of books next to her had been left there for that purpose, she had handed them over.

Joey’s horror at losing several of her favourite books was short-lived and she soon saw the funny side of the story. “Only, may I write from Brussels?” she begged. “The Sale isn’t till next week, so we might stop them being sold.”

“Of course, Joey.” Madge looked concerned. “Oh dear. I hope we can get some books for you. It’s rather a pity we didn’t realise before. It’ll be hard to get English books before Paris at least”.

“P’raps they’ll have some at the Holmeses?” Joey asked.

“Perhaps they will. Can you amuse yourself a little, Joey? You’ve got a couple of papers at least.”

Joey settled down to re-read her papers, but her mind was wandering. She looked out at the French countryside. So far, she decided, French countryside looked rather like English countryside, although the buildings were a little different. She looked around the carriage, listening to various conversations. There was an elderly vicar, engrossed in writing a letter “or a sermon maybe,” thought Joey, there was a family with two bored-looking little girls, there were two thin ladies dressed in tartan, a few important-looking men in suits sitting together, and a group of English ladies who seemed to be two mothers and their grown-up daughters. Joey’s attention drifted between the sounds of the various conversations as she stared out of the window.

“Vraiment, Amelie! Tu es mechante! Taises-toi!”

“Mais Papa…elle m’a frappe…”

“Ich kann nicht glauben, Anna, dass er gegangen ist”


“Mary, are we going to see the Belfry and the Minnewaterpark?”

“I don’t know to be sure, Rose. I’ll check in Baedecker. Mummy, could I borrow the Baedecker?”

“….simply full of cheese, you’ve never seen a market…”

“Papa, Mama, est-ce que je peut…”

“Und ich bin jetzt so traurig, Anna. So traurig!”


“…stay up all night on Bastille Day. Oh Mummy couldn’t we?”

“Enfin, M’siur. Trois jours, je vous prie.”

“….just dripping with….”

“Non, Amelie!!”

“…S'il vous plait…” Joey reflected with a smile that that phrase meant “please”, but only if you were talking to someone older than you, or more important.

“but of course, she never knew about that until after…”

“Non! C’est trop tard.”

“Oh, Frieda!”

Joey noticed that the train seemed to be slowing down a little.

“Jetzt bin ich allein, esse ich den ganzen Tag. Essen essen essen!”

“Mummy, are we staying at the Inter-Continental?”

“Essen essen essen…” Joey rather liked the sound of that phrase. She muttered it over and over to herself. “Essen, essen, essen” until she caught a sharp look from Madge and promptly feel silent.

“And when she went back, she found he had…”

“Bald werde ich dick sein!”

“Monsieur! J’ai beison de seulement trois jours, c’est tout.”


Although Joey had very little idea what was mean by much of this, she found herself watching the three men. One was silent, merely listening. Another was pointing and gesticulating at the other, who was raising his hands as if to ward off evil. Their conversation was impossible to follow, apart from the occasional “Please” and a repeated work that sounded like “larzhon, larzhon”. Joey briefly considered getting Madge’s attention and asking her to translate from French. Before she could do anything, however, the silent man and the pointing man got up and disappeared into the next carriage. The man who was left pulled out a handkerchief and wiped his head. Joey decided it was for the best that she hadn’t asked Madge. It might not have been considered polite.

At that moment Madge finished her book and looked up with a sigh. “What a story! Are you alright, Zhoey?”

“Fine thank you Marguerite! When do we arrive in Brussels?”

“Oh, not for a couple of hours yet, Baba,” answered Madge. “It’s such a shame about your books! Are you sure you’ve read all of your papers?”

“A few times,” sighed Joey. “Madge, is there anything of yours I can have a look at?” As she said this, the train slowed down even further.

Madge considered. “You can have a look at this biography of Napoleon,” she finally decided. “You might not understand it all, but there are some interesting pictures in the middle of ships and things. If we’re slowing down a bit, we may be on this train for a long time!”

“Thanks!” Joey peered at the book, and very soon forgot all about the inhabitants of the carriage as she buried herself in the adventures of the great general. Dick, glancing up from his own reading, watched her with a chuckle.

By the time they arrived at Brussels, the train was running two hours late. Joey, even given her interest in her new book, was tired out with the journey and was beginning to look as though her dark eyes could take over her face. She leaned languidly against Madge’s side, and looking at her, Dick felt a familiar clutch of fear.

“Have we done the right thing, bringing her away like this?” he wondered silently. “What if she’s ill?” There was little time for such reflections, however, as they all scrambled to gather their belongings together and disembark to seek Mr. Holmes. Joey grasped Dick’s hand firmly as she climbed down the steep step, but in her tiredness she tripped and half-tumbled onto the platform, grazing her knee.

“Joey!” Madge’s face was pale with both tiredness and fear, but Dick was already jumping down after her.

“Upsie-daisy, Joey Baba! Come on kiddie, put your hands around my neck and I’ll pickaback you wherever we need to go.” He had already seen the burly yet genial figure of Mr. Holmes in the distance.

A little later, Madge and Dick, having washed the grime of the journey off as best as they could, were seated at a table with a dazzlingly white cloth. Joey had again been put straight into bed. She would be there for a few days until the exhaustion of the journey had worn off. This time however, Madge ate the simple yet tasty stew with bread that was served them, made her excuses and retired quickly up to the room she shared with Joey.

Author:  Kathy [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:08 am ]
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Text box took out all of my diacritical marks - accents etc! Hmmph! Ah well, hope it still makes sense!

Author:  Lesley [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:29 am ]
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That was excellent - love Joey not understanding that someone French would speak French rather than English - a point of view I've often considered. :wink: Also love that Madge recognised that Joey had a gift with languages even then.


Thank you Kathy.

Author:  Alison H [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:11 am ]
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My best friend at school used to be convinced that French kids had to sit in lessons reciting "Je vais, tu vas, il va, elle va" etc and it took a long time for her to accept that they actually grew up knowing stuff like French verb endings :lol: :lol: !

Thanks Kathy - this is lovely :D .

Author:  JayB [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:48 am ]
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Just caught up with this. I love the way you've caught the characters - Dick with that boyishness he never quite grew out of, and Madge just on the verge of adulthood, trying to be dignified but not always quite succeeding.

I like Dr Cooper too - he gives advice, instead of issuing orders. And he really does seem young, unlike EBD's doctors, who always seem middle aged even when they're supposed to be young.

Author:  Cath V-P [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:53 am ]
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It was always Latin that I couldn't ever quite envisage being spoken from infancy.....

Thank you Kathy, this was fascinating and really does give a clear idea of what might have happened.

Author:  JoS [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:51 pm ]
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Enjoyed your latest chapters - thanks so much Kathy.

Author:  Fatima [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:53 pm ]
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They're such a lovely little family. Thanks Kathy.

Author:  wheelchairprincess [ Sun Jan 28, 2007 8:52 pm ]
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Just found this and read it straight thru. Congratulations on such a wonderful first drabble. Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

Author:  Tara [ Tue Jan 30, 2007 11:39 pm ]
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Oh, I did enjoy that. Joey encountering languages (and doesn't it always seem eerie to hear small children chattering away in a foreign language!) and Napoleon, and showing already two of her deepest interests. A clever and fun explanation of her lack of books, too. And I thought the snippets of conversation were fascinating, accents or no!
All three of the Bettanys are very realistically drawn, and Madge's overwhelming love of and fear for her little sister are obvious.

Thank you, Kathy.

Author:  Kathy [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:58 am ]
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I had meant them to be at the Tiernsee by now, but they're wandering through Europe and I don't have the heart to stop them!

Chapter 7 – Another encounter

“Ooh, Madge! I mean Marguerite. And Richard,” squeaked Joey as a French train announcement boomed out across the platform. “Here comes the train!”

The trio had spent a few days in Brussels recovering from their first long journey. Joey in particular had been exhausted and had spent the first two days in bed, Madge having been alarmed by her listlessness. When Joey wasn’t ill she generally bounced out of bed by six, so for her to still be dozing at ten was quite alarming. When she had finally come to at lunchtime, she was so crabby and unhappy at having missed the first “real” morning of the holiday that she had become very worked up. By the time she had calmed down and been reminded of their little conversation in Dover and the agreement she had made, she was only fit to return to bed to sleep off her headache. Madge had also gone to bed early, tired out by the strain of the day, but had been unable to sleep and had awoken feeling tense and nervy.

Mr. and Mrs. Holmes had been very kind, even offering to call an English doctor they knew for both of them, which Madge had declined, though the offer was tempting. Sure enough, after a few days of quiet, Joey was almost her usual self again, although Madge was still pale and dark-eyed. The group had spent the previous day looking around Brussels, and enjoyed spending time in a Belgian patisserie. Joey had surprised them by trying one of Dick’s “oilbollen” – fried dumpling balls, a Flemish speciality, although she declined another, saying “They smell like oil…it makes me feel funny”. ‘Glacé,’ however, had been a big success, especially as the weather had turned warmer, and the invalid had had some compensation for her days in bed.

“Well spotted, Joey!” Dick was sporting a sun-hat and light jacket, as the early morning was still quite cool. “At last! Come on you two, let’s bag us some seats!”

They were settling themselves in a fairly empty public carriage for the two-hour journey to Bruges, or “Brugge”. Madge had just departed to ask a guard how late their train would be arriving at Bruges, her French being more fluent than Dick’s, when Joey suddenly whispered;

“Look Dick, there’s those men on the train from Calais!”

Dick looked where she was pointing, and sure enough, there were two of the important-looking men from the Calais-Brussels train. They were sitting at the other end of the carriage and seemed engrossed in conversation.

“So it is! Though I must say I didn’t look at them overmuch. I was reading on that trip.”

“You were sleeping,” Joey pointed out.

“And sleeping, if you must, pest! Honestly, can’t a man do anything round here without it being pointed out to him!” Dick grinned at the face Joey was pulling at him and took out his book.

“Dick,” Joey was screwing up her face in an effort to remember now, “those men kept saying something about larzhon. Larzhon larzhon, they kept saying all the way. Is that in French too?”

It was Dick’s turn to crease his brows in thought. “Larzhon. Oh, could it have been l’argent?” He pronounced it more clearly but still with a very un-French intonation.

“That’s it! What does it mean?”

“I think it means ‘money’” Dick looked interested. “They must be important businessmen cutting a deal, Joey. Well observed, picaninny, if a little nosey!”

Madge returned at that juncture with the news that the train would only arrive twenty minutes late, and so they should not have to disrupt their plans for the day unduly.

“What are we going to see in Bruges then, Madge?”

“Wait and see! But I will tell you that the main square is lovely. And then there’s some wonderful churches, and shops selling lace, and patisseries – oh, you’ll love it, Joey!”

“Super! May I please look at your Baedecker? I’ll be very careful.”

Dick passed over the neatly bound volume and the rest of the journey passed quietly. At last, a train announcement was made for “Brugge”. Joey looked up, interested.

“What’s that language, Madge? It doesn’t sound the same as French”.

“It’s Flemish, or Dutch,” Madge answered.

“Why do they speak it here then? We’re not changing country.”

“Because some parts of Belgium speak French, and some speak Flemish. And lots of people speak both! Now come on, this is us!”

Author:  Kathy [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:00 pm ]
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8. Bruges!

Joey followed her sister from the train, wondering how anyone could be so clever as to speak two languages. Though she supposed Madge and Dick were good at French and German, but it wasn’t the same!

Her musings were soon driven away. Walking through Bruges was like stepping into a storybook. Church spires jabbed the azure sky, towering over the brightly-coloured houses, with their gabled fronts and shutters looking, as she said, “like toy-box houses”. People thronged the streets, shopping, bartering and chattering in what Joey had just discovered was Flemish. Narrow cobbled streets and alleyways seemed to lead to endless secret places, and blue canals full of tiny boats crossed them at every angle. A few boats contained men with small placards who were shouting at the passers–by.

“Madge, are they offering rides? Can we go in a boat?!” Joey asked excitedly.

Madge shook her head. “No in those ones, Joey! They’re far too unsafe. But we might see if there’s a larger one.”

“Ooh!” Joey skipped, then stopped at a warning glance from her sister.

As they neared the centre of town, the towering “Belfry” loomed up. In a short time the three found themselves climbing seemingly endless stairs, Madge and Dick both with an anxious eye to Joey and making sure they took the ascent slowly. They peeped in at the carillon – the mechanism that controlled the lovely bells which ring out every fifteen minutes in Bruges. Finally they were peeping out of a window near the top of the tower, surveying the town below.

“Lovely!” breathed Jo. And indeed, the view of the gaily painted houses and ornate towers, ringed by canals and set off by green countryside and distant windmills, was something to be treasured.

The trio’s next stop was a café, where a cheerful waitress bid them “God Dag!” and took their order with a “Dank U!” Joey looked at Madge and took them both by surprise by saying thoughtfully;

“It’s like English but sort of - wobbly!”

It took some time for Madge and Dick to control themselves, and Madge almost had to resort to the schoolgirl trick of stuffing a handkerchief in her mouth to stop the giggles. Fortunately the Kafee, choklat, and éclairs arrived at that moment. A bite of delicious éclair was enough to silence any chuckle, even though the tears of laughter still ran down Madge’s face. The rest of the meal passed without incident. Joey did stare, in a puzzled fashion, at a thin lady on the next table with a large plate of cakes in front of her. The lady’s face looked faintly familiar, but she could not place her.

Afterwards they set out for “La cathedrale de Notre Dame”, Madge with more colour in her cheeks, and explaining that there was a cathedral with the same name in Paris, and it simply meant “Our Lady”. They paused in their discussion of which lady that meant, and who she belonged to, exactly, to admire a view of St. Anthony’s Hospital reflected in the canal, before entering the ornate-looking Notre Dame.

“Take a look at that!” Dick was quietly impressed with a wood carving of a horse and rider which stood near the entrance. Madge preferred the stained-glass windows with their wonderful scenes, and Joey quite lost herself in the pictures.

“Madge, there’s so much to look at! Why isn’t the church back home like this? This is more…twiddly!” Joey whispered.

Madge found herself at a loss for words. How do you explain doctrine and denomination to a child of seven? Finally she settled for “Because some churches don’t believe in finery, Joey, as they feel it distracts you from the real purpose of church. Others feel that you might look at all of this and be inspired by the glory of God. There are different paths to God, Joey, and this is another one.”

Joey looked thoughtful and walked a little way away to study a big altar. There were candles to light, some of which were already flickering against the carved walls. Some small pieces of card lay on a table near it. She picked one up as Dick came up behind her.

“Dick, what’s Unser Vater? And Notre Pere? And how about Santa Maria? And why are there candles?”

“Joey, you are an eternal question-mark! I don’t know how we put up with you!” – they were both whispering still. “Bring one of each card and I’ll explain later. Now, do you want some change to put in the box?”

Leaving the cathedrale, they walked back to the main square to enjoy the view of the buildings. Dick had a brownie camera with him and amused himself by taking some snapshots while Madge and Joey listened to the silvery notes of the carillon and tried to hum along to the tunes. Lunch was spent pleasantly in a hotel, all of them eating delicious soup followed by veal. Joey refused the frites which accompanied it, but happily ate the creamy potato gratin.

Thus fortified, they walked to a bridge where larger boats were offering more “official”-looking tours of the city. Madge was still not convinced the idea was a good one, but Dick persuaded her that some opportunities did not come along too often. Finally Madge laughed.

“I’m becoming an old fusspot, I suppose! Come on you two, let’s get in!”

The boat trip was lovely, despite none of the three being able to say a word to the ferryboat man but “God Dag!” and “Dank U!” at the end. The water lapped gently against the boat as she bobbed through by, through and under the streets of the town. Joey’s delight was to drift under the tiny, dark bridges, Dick teasing her that she was too big to get under them and would be knocked out of the boat, or that strange creatures would jump out and grab her in the dark! Joey giggled and squealed delightedly as Dick grabbed her shoulders in the darkness, roaring. This would never be allowed at home!

Once or twice Madge looked as if she was going to shush them both, but the ferryboat man simply threw his head back and laughed. And finally Madge herself did the same. As she did, she felt an odd sense of relief. She couldn’t quite place it, but she suddenly felt that this trip had been for the best, whatever happened afterwards.

Next was lace shopping; Joey was called upon to help choose a present for Madamoiselle Lepattre. After long deliberation they chose a lace-edged scarf and some napkins, and also bought a few picture-postcards and stamps from a post office. They were just leaving the shop to walk back to the train when Dick grabbed Joey’s arm.

“Picaninny! There’s your men again!”

Sure enough, there were the two men they were now seeing for the third time. They were standing outside a bank. Although both were talking fast, one man was obviously the leader, and was saying a lot of things that the other man seemed to be agreeing with.

“Do you think they’re bank robbers, Dick?” Joey breathed.

“Sure to be, Inspector Bettany. Highwaymen too no doubt! You go and arrest them.”

“No, you, Dick! Joey was giggling madly now.

Madge decided it was time to intervene now. “Hush you two! We’re in the street now, and anyway, Joey you’ll exhaust yourself with laughing soon! Come on, we’ve only a little time before the train.”

Seated in the train, Joey remembered the cards from the church and produced them. “Dick, are you going to tell me about these?”

“Sure thing, kiddo. Joey, you remember your Lord’s Prayer?”

Joey half-closed her eyes and recited “Our Father, which art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name, they kingdom come…”

“Good girl! Well this is Our Father in other languages. So that people who speak French, or German, or other languages can come there to pray.”

“Alright. And what about this one – Santa Maria? That’s a girl’s name.”

“That’s the Hail Mary. It’s an extra prayer that Catholic people say.”

They spent a little time looking at the cards, Joey finally deciding that she would put them into a scrapbook of the trip so that she could remember words like “pere” which meant the same as “vater” or “father”…it was all very confusing. Finally she put them away and asked her last question. “And the candles, Madge? What do they mean?”

“People light them when they say prayers, Joey. It’s…she thought hard…”like a focus to make you think about what you’re praying for.”

“Do you always get things if you pray for them?”

Always the hard questions with Joey! thought Madge. “God always listens to our prayers, Joey. Sometimes they’re not answered in the way we expect, but He always does something. Now, lie quietly against me for a bit. You must be tired; I know I am!”

Joey lay curled across her sister’s lap, thinking about the lovely day they’d had and dreaming of the exciting times to come in Paris…and Salzburg…to say nothing of this wonderful mountain lake in the Austrian Tyrol. At that moment, no-one could had been happier than little Miss Bettany.

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:05 pm ]
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This is wonderful! I love Brugge(/Bruges).

Author:  JayB [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:11 pm ]
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One can see why Joey was already an experienced traveller by the age of twelve!

I wonder if they'll run into any future CS people on their travels.

Author:  Fatima [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:23 pm ]
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Thank you. This is a wonderful story and long may they wander across Europe!

Author:  Nell [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:30 pm ]
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I'm intrigued by the woman who looks familiar and the two men. This is really good - thanks Kathy.

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:33 pm ]
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I love this - by the questions Joey asks you can see why she becomes the person she does - intriguing.

Thank you Kathy

Author:  RroseSelavy [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 1:28 pm ]
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Is the woman who looks familiar the one from the train who did nothing but "essen, essen, essen?" I had a guess about who she might be......

Thanks Kathy, I can just imagine Jo being like this on her first trip abroad!

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:09 pm ]
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I am seriously enjoying this! Thank you so much.

Did they visit the Béguinage in Bruges? It's quite my favourite part of the town!

Author:  Jennie [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 4:22 pm ]
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This is great. Thanks, Kathy.

Author:  JoS [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:39 pm ]
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You definitely capture the essence of the girl-child in Joey Kathy.
Joey is amazed that people can speak 2 languages fluently and yet, she end up being fluent in how many? Anyone know?

Author:  Dawn [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:33 pm ]
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I'm really enjoying this - you've really made young Joey, Madge and Dick all come alive

and they can meander around the continent for much longer before settling down at the Tiernsee as far as I'm concerned

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:48 pm ]
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JoS wrote:
You definitely capture the essence of the girl-child in Joey Kathy.
Joey is amazed that people can speak 2 languages fluently and yet, she end up being fluent in how many? Anyone know?


Just trying to think! English obviously, French, German (standard German plus various local dialects) and Italian. Plus bits of Russian, Belsornian, Romansch and Romany. & probably some Dutch and Norwegian picked up from people at school. Oh, and she said she learnt some Hindustani when she went to stay with Dick and Mollie. She never seemed to pick up any Welsh when she was living in Carnbach, though :roll: . Actually, that's not as many languages as I'd've thought, but I can't think of any reference to her learning any others, apart from Latin (and ancient Greek?). Have I missed anything obvious? Miss Denny spoke Spanish, but I don't think Joey did.

Author:  Tara [ Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:27 pm ]
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Please let them wander around Europe as much as they like, Kathy, 'cos this is quite delightful.
I'm beginning to understand why Madge always got so frantic over Jo's illnesses, and it's good to see her being persuaded to laugh and relax a little.
Jo is so interesting and attractive, too - and so utterly Jo-ish. I loved her descriptions of the Catholic church as 'twiddly', and Dutch as 'like English only a bit wobbly'.

And those men are clearly criminals ...

Author:  Cath V-P [ Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:21 am ]
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I love Joey's reactions to what she is seeing and hearing - typical seven year old!

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:47 am ]
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Just caught up on this again and am absolutely loving it. Very Chalet Schoolish.

Author:  MaryR [ Sun Feb 04, 2007 8:03 pm ]
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But, Madge, if she doesn't ask she won't learn!! :lol: :lol:

Thanks, Kathy. Delightful.

Author:  wheelchairprincess [ Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:44 pm ]
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This really is delightful and so in keeping with the Chalet School. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author:  Kathy [ Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:13 pm ]
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RroseSelavy wrote:
Is the woman who looks familiar the one from the train who did nothing but "essen, essen, essen?" I had a guess about who she might be......


PM me if you want to confirm! Hehe!

Author:  Kathy [ Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:14 pm ]
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Have only done half of the next chapter so it might be ready for tomorrow. Thanks for the lovely comments!

Author:  LesleyAnn [ Mon Feb 05, 2007 7:10 pm ]
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Have just caught up with this and it's really wonderful. I love the way you have caught their personalities, and all the little hints of things which happen later in the series - just brilliant.

Author:  Chelsea [ Mon Feb 05, 2007 7:31 pm ]
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Kathy wrote:
Here we go with Chapter 5. I may be stretching a point here with Joey's non-comprehension of someone learning another language from birth, but I remember the first time I heard a little kid speaking a foreign language fluently was on a school trip when I was about 12, and it sounded really odd to all of us - although i technically knew that the kid had spoken German since birth, it was hard to comprehend that!


Whenver I meet Kathye's Megan I am impressed that she can speak with a British accent :oops:

Author:  Josie [ Sat Feb 10, 2007 2:36 pm ]
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Thanks, Kathy, this is great. The characterisations are fab. :D

Author:  Kathy [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:10 pm ]
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Sorry this got held up. It ws finished last week but then the snow came down and cut us off!

Chapter 8 – Paris 1

“Ma petite Josephine! And Dick, and Marguerite! Oh – but you say Madge, n’est ce pas? Oh, mes enfants, it is so good to see you all at last! It has been so long!

Madge smiled as she returned the elder lady’s warm embrace. “Tante Therese, it is wonderful to see you again, and we are so excited to be in Paris. Joey has been longing to see Notre Dame, and the Tour Eiffel!”

“I also am very happy to be here to ‘tour-guide’ you through my beautiful city!” beamed Aunt Therese. “I have planned some wonderful treats! Come, let us adjourn for café before we make the journey chez moi – it takes some time, you know – or do you prefer thé, comme les anglaises?

They all laughed at this, excepting Joey, who was peering through the crowds at the Gare-Nord trying to spot a landmark. Disappointed in this, she followed the others to a small café where Madge and Dick continued to enjoy the rich Continental coffee, and Joey drank what was now called chocolat chaud but tasted very like chokolat. Cakes were ordered and Joey again luxuriated in an éclair. How gorgeous they were! She half-followed the conversation between Madge and Tante Therese, as it was in a combination of English and French, and gazed out at the busy street with people rushing towards the trains, looking trim and smart in elegant suits and hats. They then set out for the Paris suburb where Tante Therese lived.

The journey on the Metro and suburban trains was interesting, although crowded and noisy. Joey listened for scraps of conversations. “Tant pis!” “Quelle dommage!” “Merci, Madame!” “Mais c’est la vie, n’est ce pas?”, some of which she was beginning to recognise. Finally the small group arrived at a smart white-painted semi-detached house with green shutters. Tante Therese coached French children in English ah home and sometimes helped out with English lessons at a local school, or ecole. She had inherited the house when her parents died and let a room out to a teacher at the same school. The group entered a cool salon. The room was simply yet attractively furnished with fresh flowers in tall vases, prints of countryside scenes, and a few photographs in oval frames. Joey peered at one of a little girl holding a baby.

“Who is this, Tante Therese?”

“Ah, c’est ma petite Simone et Renee! Their maman, Madame Lecoutier, is ma cousine – my cousin. Little Simone is the same age as you – she has seven years now. They have been visiting me this last winter as their house was flooded, but they are back at home now. Perhaps we shall have time for you to meet them, but they live in a different part of Paris, and they are in school at the moment, so it is not easy.”

Joey was pleased at this. Perhaps “Simone”, the elder girl, would teach her some more French words if they met? Perhaps she would take her to the Tour Eiffel? “Isn’t it term-time at your school at the moment then, Tante Therese?”

“Yes, ma mie, but I give…extra teaching in English for some students, and there are big examinations at the moment so they do not need me until September. We were working very hard until last week!”

The four spent a relaxed evening eating diner, which consisted of some kind of stewed beef (Madge was worried Joey would find it too rich, but she ate it with every appearance of enjoyment) followed by tarte aux pommes which all declared delicious. Conversation was based around the exciting plans Tante Therese had laid and descriptions of the school she helped at, which fascinated Joey by its contrast to her school in Taverton. She was aghast to find that some French schoolchildren begin lessons at seven thirty in the morning. Seven thirty!

The next day was spent quietly, to give the group a chance to recover before being plunged into the bustle of Paris. They walked around the genteel-looking local area, bought some stamps at the post office, and found a parc for Joey to play in. As the adults sat and talked, Joey, armed with the knowledge of how to say her name, age and place of birth, found a small boy throwing a stick for a dog and decided to befriend him. It may be true that the boy was startled at being addressed in a rush by this striking-looking stranger, but he was a friendly soul and offered his name, Jacques, and that of the dog, Brun. Dick found her half an hour later, sitting on another bench, happily throwing the stick and calling “Jacques! Chien vite! Je suis anglaise. Bof! Brun est…chien”, and other such sentences in broken French.

The group retired early that night to be fresh for the trip into Paris on the following morning. They awoke at six and were ready to leave by seven, catching the trains back into the city. People were travelling to work, and sat, stood or leaned reading copies of the Journal, talking and smoking. By eight, the group were walking from Saint-Michel metro station across the Pont de l’Archeveche to the Ile de la Cité looking towards a blue sky and the marvellous double-pillared front of Notre Dame.

“Madge! Isn’t it enormous!” exclaimed Joey.

“Simply huge! And it’s ever so interesting as well.” Madge was lapsing into schoolgirl English as she still did at times. “Do you know the story of the Hunchback of Notre Dame?”

Joey shook her head.

“But my dear!” exclaimed Tante Therese. “It is such a wonderful story. Now, in that building there once lived…” Joey, Madge and Dick all listened entranced to the sad tale of Quasimodo, the hunchbacked bellringer and his love for Esmeralda, the beautiful gypsy dancer, and the vivid descriptions of Parisian life in the fifteenth century. Madge helped with the translations of some of the words and put in what she remembered. Joey was delighted in the story, and especially loved the descriptions of Esmerelda’s little white goat with the golden horns. By the time of the imprisonment in the cell in the parapets, the trio were walking through the doors, gazing up at the towers and Joey gasped to see the place Tante Therese had described.

“Oh Madge! It’s like a story coming to life!”

They spent some time exploring the Gothic building, walking quietly around the galleries as Joey imagined each scene. Here could be where Quasimodo ran looking for her…and here might be where they found the skeletons…Joey shivered delightedly and quoted “La cloche qui sonne”, which Tante Therese had taught her meant “The bell that rings” as they approached the giant bell. Afterwards, the group posed for another snapshot outside the building.

“Where next, Tante Therese?” Joey was excited. “And have you any more stories? I love them! May I read the story of The Hunchback?”

Tante Therese laughed at her enthusiasm. “But ma petite it is a very long novel for a seven-year old! But I have a children’s’ book in French with a shorter version of the story. We could teach you to read that, n’est ce pas?”

Joey’s face fell at first – she was enjoying learning French, but to read a whole book? After a few seconds, however, she felt it would a great thing to achieve and was determined. “Thank you Tante Therese, that would be lovely! Are there any other stories about Paris?”

“Mais oui, ma petite. There are very many. It has long been an important place. Do you know of the French Revolution? It began,” the group were now walking over the Pont St-Louis to the next island on the great river “a little further down the river, just there,” pointing straight ahead, “where the poor people of France began their revolt by storming the Bastille, the big prison. They took it down brick by brick!”

Joey was now fascinated, and was equally so by the tiny shops and streets of the Ile Saint-Louis, the Hotel de Sens where Queen Margot once unhitched her carriage, and the view of the forbidding Palais de Justice on the Ile de la Cite. They walked back up the bank of the Seine to the “Pont Neuf” and beyond to the Jardins des Tuileries.

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Chapter 9 – Paris 2

The Jardins were blooming with colour, making a bright contrast to the stately white-painted buildings at their edges. The group luxuriated in the sunshine, sitting on a bench watching Paris drift by, then discovered a tiny patisserie within the gardens selling light-as-air bread twists and cakes, so stopped for café, which was excellent. As the others talked, Joey walked away a short distance and reappeared with a large bunch of flowers.

“Ta-da Tante Therese! Pour…you!”

“Oh Joey!” Madge scolded. “You can’t pick flowers in a public park!”

“I didn’t!” Joey exclaimed defensively. “I found them on the floor. I think someone else dropped them when they’d picked them. May I keep them?”

“You can keep some. Choose the nicest few and we’ll press them when we get home.” She knew that Joey would tire of carrying the flowers long before that happened! Tante Therese moved closer to her and murmered quietly “Merci, ma petite Josephine. C’est tres gentil”.

Since they were nearing the Place de la Concorde Madge decided to tell them a much-edited version of “A Tale of Two Cities” and again Joey listened in rapture. “Did they really chop their heads off?” When they reached the busy Place, she actually gasped at the sight of the gilded Egyptian obelisk. “Oh Dick, it’s like a giant merry-go round mixed with a fountain and a hot-air balloon!”

He laughed out loud. “Oh it’s nice to see things from your point of view Joey! All mixed up!”

They exclaimed at the Grant-Palais and the Petit-Palais, then crossed at the Pont Alexandre-III neat the Invalides. Dick had looked up a restaurant in Baedecker and they spent a very pleasant lunchtime, or dejuner before walking down to the Invalides. All of the group were hungry for lunch after their walk. Over lunch, Dick began telling Joey what he could remember of Napoleon’s history from school and from his own reading. Tante Therese brought up a question she had been meaning to put to Madge.

“Marguerite, I have an offer which I must consider carefully. I wonder if you might advise me. I have been offered another job.”

“That’s wonderful, Tante Therese! I’m not sure how I can advise you though. I know you enjoy your job as well”

“The post, it is in a girls’ school in England. It is a good post, a teaching post with much responsibility…it is one where one lives at the school… so I could let my house as well, and I would be very comfortable…mais… c’est difficile.”

Madge understood. She could well imagine the difficulties of living in a country not one’s own, even when one’s command of the language was good. Also, Tante Therese had not taught large classes before, only small groups. And since the school was not one Tante Therese knew, she was not sure what the mistresses and girls would be like. Would they be friendly and respectful? The two set to discussing the affair from ever angle…

“…Did he really make his brothers and sisters kings and queens of wherever he captured?” Joey breathed.

“He did! Fancy that for yourself, Joey-baba?”

“Rather! Where could I have? Italy? Or Canada?”

“Ooh, for you…well, I’d say the Ile Saint-Louis would be about your size…oof! I’m joking, Joey! No play-fighting here please!”

“And what about the rest of his family?” Joey was walking sensibly again now.

“His mother wasn’t very impressed! She stayed on Corsica saying “It’s only good as long as it lasts” all her life! Fancy that! When it finally ended, he was buried here, in the Invalides.”

Madge looked across. “Come on then you two, let’s visit the Invalides.”

They could see the golden dome of the old military hospital all the way down the esplanade. After a very interesting hour in the museum and church, the group queued to see Napoleon’s tomb. Joey was very excited.
“What’s next Madge?” she asked. “The Tour Eiffel?”

“I think we’ll have done enough for today after this,” said Madge, “but we’ll come in again. There’s a lot more to see near the Tower and we don’t want to rush.” Privately, she wondered whether taking excitable Joey up the Tower was a good idea, but saved that worry for another day.

“Look Madge!” as they moved along, looking down at the tomb – all tourists had to keep well back. “There it is!”

And suddenly, as they were looking, a brightly-coloured and rather squashed item flew past them. Joey’s flowers skimmed the top of the tomb in a very undignified way and came to a halt at the feet of a burly police officer.

“Mechante!” he shouted, walking towards her.

Joey froze, petrified. The few French words she knew would not help her here! Dick stepped forwards, panicking, envisaging Joey being taken to the police station and charged with assault…held in custody in France…But before these imaginings could progress any further, another saviour arrived.

“Monsieur! It is all my fault, the little girl is with me, and she was so fascinated by stories of our great general that she felt she ought to pay her respects. She means only good, and has so enjoyed visiting our wonderful city…” This conversation took place in emphatic, quick French, and Madge watched in frank admiration. Tante Therese seemed to be winning. The man had not actually smiled but had looked less sternly at Joey and nodded that she was free to go. After a shower of thank-yous and apologies, the group retreated outside. Joey gulped, she knew she was in trouble for making that scene, and took her ticking-off humbly.

She trailed thoughtfully behind Madge and Tante Therese as they walked to the Invalides metro station. Dick was taking one last snapshot of the golden dome framed by the trees. Madge turned to Tante Therese.

“Tante Therese, I don’t think you’ll have any trouble coping in England,” she said. “I think the staff and girls would soon see that you were someone they wanted to treat nicely.”

Tante Therese threw her head back and laughed. ”And so I am to be 'Mademoiselle,' she said. “'Mademoiselle Lepattre, la professeure de francais!' Or 'the French mistress' as you would say.”

Joey caught them up. “Are you really going to come to England to teach, 'Mademoiselle?'” she asked a little shyly.

“Bien sur! Come, ma petite, we know you meant well. Let us count the trees on the way to the metro! I shall be your teacher, and you must call me 'Mademoiselle'. Now listen! Un, deux, trois…”

Author:  MaryR [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:25 pm ]
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This background to Mlle Lepattre was fascinating, Kathy. As was all the visiting of Paris, my very favourite city in all the world.

Thank you.

Author:  Kathy [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:37 pm ]
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Cheers! It was a bit of a make-it-up moment, as I couldn't find anything about Madamoiselle Lepattre's "previous life" except that she would be glad to leave England where she was working, and that she had herself gone to a "big convent school in the south of France." That's from the PBs though, so I may have missed some info from the HBs!

Author:  Alison H [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:15 pm ]
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Thanks Kathy - that was lovely! I want to go back to Paris now!

Author:  Lisa [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:20 pm ]
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Wonderful Kathy! And HURRAH! as I am going to Paris for a romantic :wink: weekend on Friday to celebrate my SLOC proposing to me there 10 years ago :D

We have been planning what to do and see and your two chapters have more or less described our itinerary!

I love seeing everything through Joey's exuberant eyes, and the way her character is developing, particularly through her love of language, stories, Napolean and challenges!




eta I am going WITH said SLOC! :oops: Sounds a bit self-indulgent otherwise :lol:

Author:  Lesley [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:38 pm ]
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That was lovely - and you've captured Joey's character so well.

Thank you

Author:  JoS [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 7:36 pm ]
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Lesley wrote:
That was lovely - and you've captured Joey's character so well.



I agree. Thanks Kathy

Author:  dorian [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 8:44 pm ]
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Wow, two updates at once! That was lovely; thank you so much.

Author:  Tara [ Wed Feb 14, 2007 10:45 pm ]
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This continues to be fascinating, you've got right into the characters' skins - all the background details feel inevitable and right. Great fun as well!

Author:  Cath V-P [ Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:14 am ]
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That was lovely, especially seeing so much of it through Joey's eyes. Oh, I love Paris....

Author:  Squirrel [ Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:58 am ]
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I loved reading that - and actually seeing Jo learning her language through a mix of listening to other people, and being taught it.

The history of Mdlle and the sight seeing sounds wonderful. I'm glad that Jo is able to do so much. And I doubt Madge could keep Jo away from the tower! She would be very difficult to stop her pestering if she did not get to go. It will be interesting to see what happens that way.

Looking forwards to seeing her achieve the aim of reading a book in french. And to everything else that is to come.

Thanks Kathy

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:59 am ]
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This is fabulous and brought back a lot of memories of Paris. Thanks. Am really loving this

Author:  LesleyAnn [ Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:59 pm ]
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Thank you for the updates. I'm really loving this - you've caught the spirit of Joey perfectly and the background to Mlle's life is so beautifully thought out.

Author:  leahbelle [ Thu Feb 15, 2007 8:05 pm ]
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I managed to miss the last few updates, so have caught up in one go! Thanks, am really enjoying this :D .

Author:  Mrs Redboots [ Thu Feb 15, 2007 8:33 pm ]
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This is so good, so EBD. And I love Paris, too, having lived there for four very happy years in the 1970s.....

Thank you.

Author:  Mollio [ Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:28 am ]
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Have just read this from the beginning and I love it. Thanks! :D

Author:  JustJen [ Sat Apr 07, 2007 2:25 am ]
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This is a wonderful story Kathy.

Author:  aitchemelle [ Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:23 pm ]
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Thank you Kathy! this is great!
*bumps it up a little!*

Author:  Laura V [ Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:23 am ]
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just found this now and love it! 8)

Author:  Elle [ Wed Apr 11, 2007 3:21 pm ]
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Laura V wrote:
just found this now and love it! 8)



*echoes Laura*

Tis wonderful!

Author:  Liz K [ Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:54 pm ]
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Cor, when will we hear some more please?

Thanks.

:D

Author:  Kathy [ Fri Oct 26, 2007 2:55 pm ]
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agh, this was ages ago now, but I will get stuck back into it - my school was putting on Les Mis and it took over our lives for about 2 months!

thanks very much for lovely comments :)

Author:  Mollio [ Sat Oct 27, 2007 2:06 am ]
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Welcome back! :D Delighted to see you again. This drabble is REALLY good!

Author:  babycassied [ Sat Oct 27, 2007 6:25 pm ]
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This is lovely - please write more!

Author:  Miss Di [ Mon Oct 29, 2007 4:08 am ]
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I'd like some more too please.

Author:  roversgirl [ Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:14 pm ]
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i would love to see this continued too. :)

Author:  Kathy [ Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:07 pm ]
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Gosh this was ages ago - it's still in the back of my head and I'm starting to get going on it again but progress is slow! WIll post when I have another chapter or two.

Author:  cestina [ Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:12 pm ]
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Just started to read it and am delighted that there will be more......it's lovely

Author:  Kathy [ Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:02 pm ]
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OK so it's been about two years and I'm struggling to get back into style - but here's the next chapter in "The Holiday At The Chalet". I think someone has in the meantime written and published a far better version of their adventures but I've deliberately not read it so I can finish my own!


Chapter 10 – Paris-Berne express – Some stories

“All aboard then Joey-Baba? Or are you still Zhoey?”

Joey considered him seriously. “That depends. What country is Berne in?”

Dick, who had just finished talking to the porter about what time they would arrive in Berne on the morrow, sat down next to her in the small private compartment Madge had booked for this long stretch of the journey, mindful of how exhausted Joey had been by the time they arrived in Brussels. It had been, for Madge and Dick, a difficult decision to take, for money was not plentiful. Doing it this way meant she could lie down and sleep peacefully all night across three seats while the three adults sat and awake fresh when they arrived. “Berne? It’s in Switzerland.”

“What do you call Switzerland people?”

“What do you mean? Oh, people from Switzerland? You call them Swiss.”

“So what’s Joey in Swiss?”

“Oh I see what you mean! Swiss isn’t a separate language like French. It’s divided into sections and in some sections people speak French, and in another part they speak German, and right down in the south they speak Italian too.”

Joey looked thoughtful and for a minute stared out of the window at the smoky platform, the enormous roof of the station, and at the darkening sky beyond. The train was fairly crowded and the platform was a frantic bustle of action.
She found herself watching a dark-haired young man who was on the platform talking to a smartly-dressed fair-hared lady. One sleeve was pushed back to show his watch, which was gold. As Joey watched, the man leant in towards the lady, putting one hand onto her shoulder and the other onto her waist, and kissed her on the mouth. Joey waited for a moment or two for them to break apart; the lady was wearing a hat which pulled down low, and she wanted to see if she was a pretty lady. When they did not break apart, she frankly stared.

“Madge! Do look at that man over there. He must be looking right into the lady’s mouth! Do you think he’s a dentist? I don’t like dentists.”

Joey, Madge decided, was the best company for any trip. She was now used to trying to smother her giggles. The man in any case had broken away from the lady – Joey reflected that she probably was a pretty lady although she had a lot of hair and a lot of hat which made it very hard to see her face – and was now running for the train. The guard, having closed the door was ready to wave the train off and looked his irritation at the man as he struggled with the door, finally opened it and with a running jump boarded the train as the great engine, hissing, began to move out of the station. His coat billowed out behind him as he jumped and Madge reflected, he looked like a dashing villain from a stage play.

The train was even larger than any of the other trains they had travelled on so far. The engine, they had seen on the station was large, black and shiny with red and gold bands and a dark red funnel. It gathered speed as they rumbled through tunnels, under bridges and past poor-looking houses. The carriage, Joey reflected, was far more splendid than any they had been in so far, with soft green leather seats and a fold-down wooden table with a small electric light over it. She longed to sit at the table with one of her favourite books and read into the night.

As Joey was reflecting on this, Mademoiselle, as Joey was now calling her, returned. She beamed at Joey and they all settled down to read, rest or look out at the fields flying past. Joey went back to Napoleon. The words in the book were long and difficult, but the pictures of the smart uniforms were interesting – how funny the hats were! – and the three colour plates in the book enthralled her completely. One was of Napoleon on a horse crossing the some mountains called the Alps. That was where Madge has said they were going! The swirly outlines of the rocks behind him looked exciting. One was a painting of some boats near Plymouth. Joey knew that wasn’t too far from Taverton. The last was of Napoleon himself, standing with one arm tucked into his jacket. Why did he do that, Joey wondered?

Even more interestingly, on a postcard tucked away right at the end of the book was of a battle scene, with a man on a black horse leading men raising their arms as they ran, all under a yellow flag. There were some men in the way, with red on their faces. What were they doing? Madge had slipped into a doze, so Joey asked Dick, who, recalled to himself from an exciting novel, said that the men had fallen over and were asking their friends to stop, then firmly said it was time Joey read something else. Mademoiselle took charge.

“And so Zhoey, you have read all of your papers, n’est ce pas? And you have looked at all the pictures in that book? Bien, I have for you a petit cadeau – that is a little gift. There is a shop on the train and I have found a book in English. It has some of the tales of Baba Yaga and some wonderful pictures. Shall we read it together?”

"In a certain Tsardom, across three times nine kingdoms, beyond high mountain chains, there once lived a merchant. He had been married for twelve years, but in that time there had been born to him only one child, a daughter, who from her cradle was called Vasilissa the Beautiful." Joey was entranced. “Three times nine? That’s…twenty one kingdoms?”

Dick emerged from behind his book again and laughed. “No head for figures, our Joey. Come on, monkey, don’t you know your tables yet?”

“I forget them,” confessed Joey. “Miss Adams used to teach us them, but I haven’t been in school in so long. I remember the twos. Onetwoistwo,twotwosarefour…”

“That’s quite enough” cut in Dick hurriedly. “You know Joey, Therese, once she starts she doesn’t stop! Go on with the story.”

“When the little girl was eight years old the mother fell ill, and before many days it was plain to be seen that she must die… “I leave to thee this little doll. It is very precious for there is no other like it in the whole world. Carry it always about with thee in thy pocket and never show it to anyone. When evil threatens thee or sorrow befalls thee, go into a corner, take it from thy pocket and give it something to eat and drink. It will eat and drink a little, and then thou mayest tell it thy trouble and ask its advice, and it will tell thee how to act in thy time of need." So saying, she kissed her little daughter on the forehead, blessed her, and shortly after died."

As Mademoiselle paused, Joey looked out at the lengthening shadows of the trees stretched across the green countryside. She knew her mother had died as well, and Vasilissa was nearly her age. Maybe she had a magic doll, but she couldn’t remember. She couldn’t remember her mother at all really. Had she kissed her before she died, too? She wanted to ask Madge but looking across at her sleeping sister thought that perhaps it was best to wait. Maybe it was best not to ask at all. Joey remembered that the last time she had asked about their mother Madge’s face had gone all funny and later her eyes had looked all red. Grown-ups didn’t cry of course, but perhaps they did something that made them look similar.

Looking up, Joey realised that Tante Therese was looking down at her with a half-smile on her face but – Joey realised – it was also a sad smile. For a moment they regarded one another, then Joey suddenly smiled back and snuggled down into Tante Therese’s side, ready to lose herself in another story.

Author:  Lesley [ Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:12 pm ]
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Oh that was so lovely - your young Joey is a joy.


Thanks Kathy

Author:  roversgirl [ Sat Sep 26, 2009 6:09 am ]
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thank you for the update. it was lovely!

Author:  PaulineS [ Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:13 pm ]
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Pleased to see this again. Thank you

Author:  leahbelle [ Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:27 pm ]
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That was a really lovely update, and I'm glad to see that this is back!

Author:  Miss Di [ Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:15 am ]
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I'm glad to have discovered this - a really lovely story. Can you please tell me what the fairy tale Mlle is telling Joey is?

Author:  Lyanne [ Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:16 pm ]
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Miss Di wrote:
I'm glad to have discovered this - a really lovely story. Can you please tell me what the fairy tale Mlle is telling Joey is?


Baba Yaga, a Russian fairy tale. (Wicked step mother, ill treated girl, old witch... standard stuff, but lovely descriptive bits for Baba Yaga's cottage as it's on hen's legs.)

Author:  Cryst [ Fri Oct 02, 2009 8:42 pm ]
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This is lovely, Joey is so Joeyish. Thank you.

Author:  champagnedrinker [ Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:52 pm ]
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Also loving this, having just found it!
(And mystified as to the familiar looking woman a few posts back ... hope you can remember who you she's going to be!)

(And the men talking about money; random children called Frieda / Marie who've appeared so far...)

Author:  ivohenry [ Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:55 pm ]
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I've just found and read all of this one - would love to see some more - please!!

Author:  abbeygirl [ Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:57 am ]
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Another who has just found it and read eagerly through. You've captured it all perfectly... More please.....

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Sat Jul 10, 2010 11:37 pm ]
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Thank you, that was so lovely between Joey and Therese

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