Grizel's heartache
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#1: Grizel's heartache Author: Richenda PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 12:25 pm


Had a teensy weensy idea when reading Exile. Can't decide whether to leave it as a short or develop it further!

Grizel Cochrane stood looking down towards the Tiern See – the most beautiful of the Austrian lakes, tears brimming in her eyes. She had a boyish hatred of tears, and she dashed them away hastily. Breathing a heavy sigh, she turned her head away from the vista and started to stride out towards the far end of the Sonnalpe. A strenuous walk would help her to think, and enable her to get her emotions under firm control once more. She thought back to the mornings exchange with the Robin. She felt bitterly ashamed of how she had spoken to the younger girl, but the news she had imparted had shocked her to sharpness. Joey – engaged!! It seemed the most preposterous of ideas! Grizel had known for some time Jack Maynard’s feelings on the subject, yet Grizel felt that Joey would never reciprocate, and Jack himself would move on. He was such a energetic and lively man that a one-sided relationship that would never come to fruition was unlikely to satisfy him forever. It would have been only a matter of time before….

She cut off her thoughts in that direction immediately. Jack belonged to Jo now. Her secret hopes and dreams had been dashed.

 


#2:  Author: LizBLocation: Oxon, England PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 1:16 pm


ooooooh! Develop it please

Liz

 


#3:  Author: JennieLocation: Cambridgeshire PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 1:19 pm


Yes, indeed, that is a very promising beginning.

 


#4:  Author: Helen PLocation: Crewe, Cheshire PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 1:28 pm


Agreed - please do develop it further! It's looking really good.

 


#5:  Author: SusanLocation: Carlisle PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 3:02 pm


Really liking the look of this. Please develope it.

 


#6:  Author: ElzbieLocation: London PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 3:21 pm


Yay! I did have my suspicions..... can we have some more?

 


#7:  Author: AnnLocation: Newcastle upon Tyne, England PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 4:45 pm


Yes... that would explain a lot! Please develop it further, Richenda!

 


#8:  Author: LizBLocation: Oxon, England PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 4:48 pm


Poor Grizel, first losing out to Jo, then to Deira - and maybe others in between? Liz

 


#9:  Author: AnnLocation: Newcastle upon Tyne, England PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 5:30 pm


Ummm... I thought Grizel was losing out to Jack, not Jo. Have I got the wrong end of the stick? :dontknow: Only one way to find out - more story! Wink

 


#10:  Author: AllyLocation: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!! PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 6:24 pm


Pleeeaaseee may we have some more!! I like Grizel stories as I always thought EBD was thoroughly horrid to her sometimes!!!

 


#11:  Author: LesleyLocation: Allhallows, Kent PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:17 pm


Definitely want it developing - I read it as Grizel loved Jack.

 


#12:  Author: Carolyn PLocation: Lancaster, England PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:26 pm


That's an interesting idea, certainly very possible and one I'd love to see developed further if the :bunny: allows.

 


#13:  Author: VikkiLocation: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!! PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:07 pm


ooooooh!!! Very intrigued......

 


#14:  Author: JackieJLocation: Kingston upon Hull PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:35 pm


Another person all intrigued here. Curious to see whether it is Jack or Jo. More please? JackieJ

 


#15:  Author: EllieLocation: Lincolnshire PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 11:17 pm


Adding myself to the list of intriugees (if there is such a word) :red: :jump:

 


#16:  Author: patmacLocation: Yorkshire England PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 9:25 am


I read it as loss of Jack upsetting her but could be Jo. Two drabbles?

 


#17:  Author: Nicci as guest PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 1:33 am


Just found this Richenda. Looks interesting - any chance of continuing this please?

 




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