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#1: Early Author: Bookwormsarah, Location: Cambridge, UK

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 12:48 pm

The sharp pain hit her and she clutched at the dresser, eyes widening in alarm - not yet - too soon. She saw the fear on Jack's face. The pain came again, and she sank to the floor, clutching her stomach. He was by her side, lifting her, murmuring words of comfort and love.
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Jack blinked tears from his eyes as he looked at his second son. He was so small, his movements so feeble. He had to live, had to live. And Joey, sleeping now, whiter, weaker than Jack had ever seen her , Jo must never, never, go through this again.

#2: Author: Lottie, Location: Humphrey's Corner

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 12:56 pm

So what happened to change his mind then?!?

#3: Re: Early Author: Mia, Location: London

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 12:57 pm

Oh you write really sad drabbles! Crying or Very sad

But they're really excellent!

Bookwormsarah wrote:

Jo must never, never, go through this again.

huh so much for that! Wink

#4: Author: Jennie, Location: Cambridgeshire

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 1:51 pm

Famous last words!

#5: Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:09 pm

Jennie wrote:

Famous last words!

Agree totally with this Very Happy

Thanks Sarah.

Star Wars

#6: Author: JackieJ, Location: Kingston upon Hull

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:11 pm

Yes - Jack obviously did change his mind.

Lovely drabble though Sarah - thank you Very Happy

JackieJ

#7: Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!!

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:24 pm

Thanks Sarah, you need to extend this one though to explain why Jack did change his mind! Wink

#8: Author: LadyGuinevere, Location: Leicester

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 6:59 pm

Jennie wrote:

Famous last words!

Indeed!

Thanks Sarah!

#9: Author: Sarah_K, Location: St Albans/Leicester

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:08 pm

Thanks Sarah. I'm fairly glad Jack didn't keep that promise though.

#10: Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle

Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 12:10 am

Poor all of them and I suppose this explains the large gap between Charles and Mike!

Thank you Sarah.

#11: Author: Lyanne, Location: Ipswich, England

Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 6:42 am

But does Jack mean childbirth altogther, or childbirth without medical intervention? Because Joey has the triplets at home, and Stephen and Charles (I think), but the rest all seem to be born in hospital.

#12: Author: LizB, Location: Oxon, England

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 7:45 am

Thanks Sarah

Liz

#13: Author: Chair, Location: Rochester, Kent, England

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 11:46 am

What a great scene - thanks, Sarah.

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