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#1: Letting go... Author: aitchemelle, Location: West Sussex

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 7:29 pm

He turned to look at her. Her loveliness radiated from pink cheeks and pale skin. He felt a turmoil of emotions inside him. He blinked twice then cleared his throat.
Her long red hair tumbled to her waist, a secretive smile which reassured him that she would protect him. His big sister. And now to give her to another man? Now who would care for him? He turned to blink away tears of regret, catching the eye of the groom. His face stunned the young man into stillness. She deserved the kind of happiness that he alone could not provide. He smiled.

#2: Author: Amanda M, Location: Wakefield

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 8:50 pm

Ashamed to admit that I'm not sure who the characters are Embarassed

, but I don't think it matters as it's so beautifully written.

Thanks aitchemelle.

Star Wars

#3: Author: Mia, Location: London

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 8:54 pm

It's Clem and Tony Barrass, isn't it - an older sister with red hair?

Thanks Hannah - it is very well written! Very Happy

#4: Author: Helen P, Location: Crewe, Cheshire

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:00 pm

That's lovely Hannah.

And I guessed it was Clem and Tony before I scrolled down to Mia's message - hope we're both right Very Happy

#5: Author: Ally, Location: Jack Maynard's Dressing Room!!

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:05 pm

Awww thank you Hannah that was sweet (am Im sure it was Clem so it must be Tony too!) Very Happy

#6: Author: Carolyn P, Location: Lancaster, England

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:16 pm

That was sweet, and I thought Clem and Tony as well.

#7: Author: Sugarplum, Location: second star to the right!

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:49 pm

Lovely Thanks

#8: Author: Susan, Location: Carlisle

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 1:39 am

Thanks Hannah - very very emotive.

#9: Author: LadyGuinevere, Location: Leicester

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:25 am

Aww, that's lovely.

#10: Author: aitchemelle, Location: West Sussex

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 1:32 pm

Mia wrote:

It's Clem and Tony Barrass, isn't it - an older sister with red hair?

Of course it is!! I always write about them! They're almost my own children! LOL

Thank you for all your kind words!

#11: Author: MaryR, Location: Sale Cheshire

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 2:38 pm

You're as bad as me always writing about Hilda! Rolling Eyes

Lovely, Hannah.

#12: Author: Sarah_K, Location: St Albans

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:46 pm

Aw, poor Tony *hugs* Weddings do seem to cause a lot of tears don't they!

Thanks Hannah

#13: Author: Vikki, Location: Sitting on an iceberg, freezing to death!!!

Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 11:34 pm

Thank you Hannah!

#14: Author: RuthY, Location: Anyone's guess

Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 3:46 pm

Thanks Aitchmelle, that was beautifully written

#15: Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:23 pm

is there any more aitchemelle?

that was beautiful but i would LOVE to find out about Clem's marriage and how Tony feels....

please...

#16: Author: Lesley, Location: Allhallows, Kent

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:02 pm

MaryR wrote:

You're as bad as me always writing about Hilda! Rolling Eyes

Can't understand why someone would do that, Mary! Razz

#17: Author: aitchemelle, Location: West Sussex

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:37 pm

francesn wrote:

is there any more aitchemelle?

that was beautiful but i would LOVE to find out about Clem's marriage and how Tony feels....

please...

Patience Fran, Patience. The poor girl's only just started ths CS for goodness sake. She hasn't had time to meet any doctors yet and she's only 12!

#18: Author: francesn, Location: away with the faeries

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 11:44 pm

patience is a virtue
virtue is a grace
grace is a little girl who never washed her face

i ALWAYS wash my face therefor i am neither virtuous nor patient and deserve more drabble

but i will hold you to that continuation......

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