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Author:  JB [ Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:05 pm ]
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Jean of Storms is described as EBD’s only novel for adults and is also a rare example of her writing about the area where she grew up.. Serialised in 1930 in the South Shields Gazette, it was rediscovered and published in book form by Bettany Press in 1996. A transcript is available on Raya’s site

This summary is from the introduction to the Bettany Press edition:

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The heroine, Jean McLeod is a 23 year old woman who lives a comfortable, middle class existence with her 35 year old aunt, Oona McLeod. When Jean’s widowed sister in law dies in India, Doris’s two daughters, Jean’s niece, Allison and her older half-sister, Kirsty, are sent to live in England. Jean is to have the care of 5 year old Allison, while Kirsty goes to a paternal aunt on the south coast. During the near-vertical learning curve of child-rearing, Jean is wooed and won, not without some emotional discomfort, by a young doctor, Kenneth Errington. Her best friend, folk-dance teacher Mollie Stewart is likewise courted by a young curate, Charles Benson. Interwoven into the love story plot are some well-drawn characters such as the fearsome Scottish housekeeper, Morag, Kirsty’s irksome Aunt Gladys, Mollie’s troublesome landlady Mrs Taylor and the serene Moti-ayah from India.


A few questions to start us off:

How does Jean of Storms differ from EBD’s other novels which feature adult characters and themes?
How well do you feel Jean deals with her two nieces?
The portrayal of Morag, the McLeod’s servant, is very different to that of EBD’s usual “faithful retainers”. Is she too exaggerated?
Does this work well as an adult novel (described as a "light romance") or do you that EBD is stronger as a children’s writer?

And finally, any discussion of this book wouldn’t be complete without Dr Errington’s thoughts as he falls in love with Jean:

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Somehow he felt, as he had never felt before, the want of a woman to sit facing him as he read a new book on pulmonary complaints.


Next week – Judy the Guide (transcript available on Raya’s site).

Author:  Alison H [ Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:07 pm ]
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I have to say that I was very disappointed with this, given how well EBD wrote about "adult" life in Reunion. Admittedly it's one of her earlier works - and the style's actually more late 19th than early 20th century - but even so I just don't think it's very good. I like Morag, but the romances with the younger characters just seem silly. & the infamous line about wanting a woman to sit opposite him whilst he read up on pulmonary complaints is just bizarre: it sounds like someone's writing a spoof version of EBD's work, rather than EBD's own words.

The way Jean treats Kirsty is awful. The poor little kid has lost both her parents and her stepfather, then been shipped off halfway round the world, and then she addresses Jean as "Auntie Jean" and the first thing Jean does is to tell her that she's not allowed to call her "Auntie" because they aren't blood relations. What a horrible way to treat a frightened child! Then she more or less tells her that it won't be convenient for her to come to visit her half-sister.

Sorry - not impressed! I'd like to have seen EBD write an adult book later on in her writing career, though: I think that by then she might have written a really good one.

Author:  Sunglass [ Tue Jul 07, 2009 12:25 am ]
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This is one of the weirdest novels I've ever read! I think what really strikes me is what a deeply unpleasant environment the fictional world of the book is, compared to the sweetness and light of the CS! It looks like a conventional double romance, with the folk-dancing heroine and her friend bagging the local doctor and vicar, with some strictures on child-rearing in the background, but set in a world which is (don't know how consciously on EBD's part) claustrophobic and viciously gossipy, full of slander and people passing on false rumours about teachers swearing and being promiscuous. and doctors being drunk, and everyone spying on one another, and there's a real sense of people being vulnerable to other members of a small community to the point of paranoia.

Jean and her aunt are afraid of their own elderly servant, and of the unpleasant vicar's wife, who may refuse to let the local Guide troop use the parish hall because Jean has got her back up; the sensible Mollie is petrified of her landlady to the point where she's afraid to give in her notice and move. Children are mistreated. Morag the servant frightens everyone with her extreme version of Calvinism, while the poorer locals seem to be either slovenly housewives, alcoholic layabouts or minor delinquents.

The fabulously bad Jean and the doctor scenes almost make up for it, though, in their Mills-and-Boon-y way:

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"Better be a brute than a heartless flirt -- as you are!" He interrupted her, madly.

Jean sprang to her feet. He rose to his. Man and woman, they stood there, rage gleaming in their faces. She was nearly as tall as he and her eyes were almost on a level with his. He almost shrank, appalled at the fury of their green depth. And he was as much startled by the devil she had aroused in him.

"You cad!" She said at length, in low tones of concentrated anger. "I didn't think even you could sink to such depths! Thank heaven, I have learnt what you are!"


When Jean confesses her love to the doctor, she 'gives him her lips' :shock: and there's a bride who looks 'less like a girl than a human rose' - which sounds like the kind of thing Hilda Annersley would have laughed at Joey for writing!

This falls into the 'so bad its good' category for me!

Author:  Mel [ Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:39 pm ]
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I agree that this one is weird; it is as though EBD thought, this is for adults, I must be as sensational as possibe. There are CS type themes, with Jean brought up by an aunt and having to take in two young relatives, the grand house, the accident etc. Also extreme examples of servants, the dour retainer and the ayah who crosses the world twice to care for her charge, poor woman. I found the rant against being a clergyman's wife quite interesting, can't remember the details, but so unlike a CS girl who wouldn't shirk service to God surely?
It's not surprising that she didn't try an adult novel again, though the La Rochelles I never found to be completely children's books. I wonder what the folk of South Shields thought of it?

Author:  Fiona Mc [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:33 am ]
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I did enjoy this book for the most part. I do think not having to work and still have an income sounds awfully appealing (and before anyone says you'd get bored. I'd still like to try it!) It is a book written as a weekly serial which I think causes a lot of the contradictions in the book. at first Jean isn't particularly welcoming towards Kirsty especially when it says later in the book her brother made sure she was as well looked after financially as his own daughter but by that stage Jean is suddenly much more protective and wisheing she had of accepted Kirsty along with her sister, Allison. I do think EBD tends to differentiate between blood and step and the attitude thoughout her book seems to be not very accepting of non-blood relations (eg Aunt Kath and Marigold and Rosemary in Stepsisters for Lorna). While I can accept Lorna had a harder time accepting new relations as her mother was getting married so soon after her father died, I do think Jean is extremely harsh to a grieving child whose is being seperated from her sister and everything she knows. She does however redeem herself by the end of the serial.

The doctor is an idiot. I can understand why he did think Jean and the curate were interested in each other initially due to gossip, I would have thought that would have cleared up after Mollie and the curate got married and made patently clear that the curate wasn't interested in Jean, but despite the fact he was going to be best man at the wedding, he still pigheadedly believes Jean is in love with the curate and not in him despite the truth staring him in the face. That whole attitude put me off him. I did think EBD must have been bored or asked to wrap it up because it did end rather neatly and quickly.

I think Morag was a bit like the servants in Wuthering Heights. Not Nelly Dean but the others and can see why Jean spoke to her the way she did. I just don't understand why Jean and Oona were so scared of her when they were the ones paying her wage and giving her a job. Mollie's fear of her landlord was more believable as she was nasty and did justify Mollie's fears by her behaviour afterwards.

Author:  JS [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:35 am ]
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My guess is that she wrote the story for money and tried to make it as true to the style of the weekly serial in a newspaper as she could. That she managed to put in some of her own character/favourite themes is a bonus!

On the other hand, it's a while since I read it but the 'flirt' and 'cad' line quoted above is one which has stayed with me - so un-EBD. Can you imagine anyone (apart from perhaps, poor Joan Baker) being accused of being a 'flirt'? And isn't cad reserved for Captain Carrick (in Dick's words) and for Donal O'Hara?

Author:  Jane [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:28 pm ]
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This book, to me, reads more like the American Gene Stratton-Porter's weaker efforts (not A Girl of the Limberlost, which is brilliant) such as The Harvester. It has the same kind of rather hectic, melodramatic atmosphere and the actions of the adult protagonists are almost equally unbelievable - and yet terribly compelling. What my daughter would call a guilty pleasure (she was referring to the TV show Gossip Girls; you know it's dreadful but you can't stop reading.

Author:  Sunglass [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:58 pm ]
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Maybe that's why I found it so odd - that EBD was consciously trying to write to a particular kind of serialised romance model, as done by a particular kind of author, and because I don't know the work of Gene Stratton-Porter and co, I couldn't 'recognise' the patterns or typical plots, the way I can recognise CS as a school story, even when EBD is playing with stereotypes... In this you seem to get bits of sub-Mills and Boon, bits of Funny Servant in Dialect, bits of childcare manual, bits of small-town realism. Even when she's on romance mode, though, her heroine is thoroughly well-bred and 'nice'-minded and baffled by her own feelings:

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Jean sat very still, pondering many things. Her thoughts were mainly on the doctor, rather to her disgust. She had no idea why he was always coming into her head and she resented it strongly. She glanced at Mollie, who was sitting with her eyes fixed on Mr Benson, her whole attitude one of attention.
"I wonder?" Thought Jean to herself. "It would be rather decent if it happened. I can say nothing to Mollie yet, of course; but I might be able to help them somehow. What fun if it really came off! The wedding would have to be from Storms. I should like it so much. He is very nice -- nearly good enough her and she would make a topping little wife."


I also find Jean's response to Morag telling Allison there's no Santa Claus very weird - rather than threatening to fire her, or just asserting her authority as employer, Jean threatens to walk out of her own home herself!

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"very well, then," said Jean. "If you will not do as I say, I shall take Allison and leave Storms for as long as you remain in it. Have my training of her interfered with, I will not and that you may as well understand first as last! As you doing your duty, all you've done is to kill her belief in God as well as in Father Christmas. [...] Either you leave Allison entirely to me, not attempting to contradict anything I may tell, or to undo any training of mine, or I shall pack up tomorrow and leave the house with her. And, as I said before, if I do that I'll stay away as long as you are here."


OK, I get that Morag has worked at Storms since Jean was a baby, and Jean and Oona seem absolutely tyrannised by her, and she seems to manifest her dissatisfaction with her employers by either leaving their friends standing in the rain at the front door, or ushering in unexpected callers unannounced at awkward moments! And of course frightening Allison about hellfire and telling her Santa Claus doesn't exist just before Christmas. But, given that Jean is furious and speaks up now, why on earth is she, the employer, saying that if her servant disobeys her, she, the one who pays Morag's wages, is going to walk out of her own house???? It seems like a completely illogical thing to threaten! (Though quite fun after 'perfect' Anna and Karen and co at the CS!)

It's quite dark for EBD, though, especially involving a bereaved child in a new home who's also just had a kitchen table emergency tracheotomy:
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But it came too late to save the child's belief in Father Christmas and the Christmas Day so happily planned by Jean, Oona and Mollie was fated never to take place.
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Allison fretted herself into a temperature over Morag's words and though she was wrapped up and carried down to the den on Christmas morning, it was a very white-faced little girl who sat in the big armchair, opening her many parcels -- nothing would induce her to hang up her stocking; Morag had worked too well for that! -- and smiling languidly. [...] Only over one present did she show what had happened to her. Morag had given her a Bible and when the child knew from whom it came, she picked it up and flung it with all her weak force across the room.


EBD really puts the boot in Calvinism in this one! (Anyone up for writing a drabble called A Chalet School Calvinist?) :lol: :devil:

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:09 pm ]
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The Oberland in the '50s - it's changed now, due to a lot of immigration from mainly Catholic countries - would have been pretty Calvinist, in complete contrast to Tyrol which is so Catholic. We never really hear about that, though, because we hardly meet any of the locals!

Author:  Sunglass [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:30 pm ]
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I quite like the idea that the older, more conservative locals on the Platz - far from being endlessly admiring and forelock-tugging towards the CS, as in the Tiernsee - in fact shocked and disgusted by the Saturday night dancing and gadding about, and the maids' report that the mistresses play cards! Maybe the reason there's no contact with the locals at all in the Swiss books is because the locals think everyone at the CS is headed for hellfire and are shunning them... :)

I wonder how the CS would deal with a girl who was 'too' pious in the style of Morag? There's quite a lot about making the irreligious more religious, or at least more observant, but supposing a new girl denounced the school as not having God sufficiently at the centre of things, not having long enough daily prayers, or the right kind of RE classes, and visibly thought Catholics were children of the devil or something...?

Author:  Tor [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:31 pm ]
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interesting. Which CS book (def Swiss years) is it where Len (I think) gives someone short shrift for saying decorated churches were silly.

(apols, wine at lunch appears to have fuzzed over brain)

Author:  Alison H [ Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:44 pm ]
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She has an argument with Yseult, because Yseult says that all the various ornaments/icons etc in the church would be better off in a big museum where everyone would be able to see them, and Len disagrees.

Mary-Lou then butts in and tells Yseult that Len's right - which always really annoys me, because Yseult has as much right to her opinion on the subject as Len does!

Mmm, in the early years they always have "gentle" Sundays, whereas in the Swiss years (I think) they go out for rambles on a Sunday. It might be interesting to see someone objecting to that, or maybe saying that too much attention's given to music and dancing.

Author:  Miss Di [ Fri Jul 10, 2009 7:51 am ]
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Nothing to do with romance, religion or children - but isn't the cover DIRE. Lumpy people. I would much rather have an idealised drawing (or at least photoshop the photo so the people look half way attractive)

Author:  JB [ Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:39 am ]
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One thing which has been puzzling me is this reference to Kirsty's nightdress:

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"Flannelette? I thought it was considered more or less a deathtrap for children."


Can anyone explain what this means? I was reminded by Sunglass's comment on Kirsty's clothes in the Class thread.

Author:  Mel [ Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:05 am ]
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I agree that the cover picture wouldn't entice anyone to buy the book. Isn't flannelette extremely flammable? Would that cause it to be a deathtrap with all the open fires in the house? Or, because it is fuzzy, it might hold moisture ie perspiration and cause Damp on the Chest? I don't know, it seems a typical fabric for a nightie in that period.

Author:  Sunglass [ Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:59 am ]
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Mel wrote:
I agree that the cover picture wouldn't entice anyone to buy the book. Isn't flannelette extremely flammable? Would that cause it to be a deathtrap with all the open fires in the house? Or, because it is fuzzy, it might hold moisture ie perspiration and cause Damp on the Chest? I don't know, it seems a typical fabric for a nightie in that period.


I seem to remember from some sewing forum a while back people making references to the fact that (in the US at least, it seemed) there was some kind of federal legislation which stated you couldn't manufacture sleepwear for babies and children out of flannel, unless it was treated with flame retardant. Not that I could say, hand on heart, that I know the difference between flannel and flannelette, if there is one.

I suppose the implication is that Kirsty's relatives' meanness extends to buying her cheap clothing fabrics which are also considered dangerous. Though there's definitely just an edge of middle-class fastidiousness too, which is amusing - obviously the colour of the nightdress would not make any difference to whether it's flammable or not, but the 'vile' pink seems to bother Jean at least as much as the safety aspect! To the extent that, as far as I can remember, one of the servants is sent off to the town before breakfast the morning of Kirsty's first day to buy the kind of pretty soft cotton sleeping suit which is clearly suitable for the nicely-brought up child, plus a matching bedjacket! (I wondered slightly how 'sleeping suit' differed from pyjamas, as the CS girls are shown wearing pyjamas - one-piece? For younger children?)

(Other Irish people on the CBB, do you remember those RTE public health ads in the 70s or early 80s for the IS148 flame-retardant nightie, the one with the nightie-clad little girl getting her hairbrush off the mantelpiece over the open fire and the mother saying 'Kids are divils, but sure wouldn't you die if anything happened to them?')

Author:  Alison H [ Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:31 pm ]
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Sorry to go a bit OT, but I recently read an article about how the many positive aspects of Calvinism (not spending too much, etc) are currently, in these days of recession et al, quite a big talking point in the Netherlands (I've been reading a book about English and Dutch settlers in New Amsterdam/New York in the 17th century, and was looking something up on Google and got sidetracked!).

Author:  Cel [ Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:40 pm ]
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JB wrote:
One thing which has been puzzling me is this reference to Kirsty's nightdress:

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"Flannelette? I thought it was considered more or less a deathtrap for children."


Can anyone explain what this means? I was reminded by Sunglass's comment on Kirsty's clothes in the Class thread.


When my aunt was a little girl (1940s), she stood in front of an open fireplace at home in her nightdress which caught on fire and set her hair alight. She was very nearly killed and spent months in intensive care... my grandmother must have been dressing her in vile flannelette, the shame of it all...

Author:  Katherine [ Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:26 pm ]
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Miss Di wrote:
Nothing to do with romance, religion or children - but isn't the cover DIRE. Lumpy people. I would much rather have an idealised drawing (or at least photoshop the photo so the people look half way attractive)

I agree; I think it is the worst cover ever and would put me right off if I didn't know what the book was. And the interminable country dancing is the worst thing about the book.
It's been a while but I suspect that I like it becasue it's EBD rather than because it's any good.

Author:  Sarah_G-G [ Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:23 am ]
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I read this for the first time a couple of weeks ago and would have to agree with the general weird-ness factor! At one moment Jean seems to be a re-incarnation of Joey (the comments about Mollie's wedding, with her needing to be married from Storms and what's-his-name being nearly good enough for her, as she'd make a topping little wife), then the next she's more from a Jane Eyre sort of era. I found the atmosphere a little disturbing, especially the constant comments about people's looks. Mollie's landlady is clearly "kinked" in both mind and appearance, JEan immediately likes "pretty" Kirsty's looks but appears shocked at Allison's lack of beauty, as does everyone else. I was almost expecting a plot-line saying she clearly wasn't Jean's niece as she wasn't at all pretty enough! Oh, except that her eyes were lovely so that's all right then... :shock: I can't remember the other bits now, but I found it all slightly disturbing to be honest.

Overall, it was interesting but not one I think I'll be re-reading. The going out for a walk and getting trapped in a cave was very CS though! I enoyed that little episode. :)

Author:  RubyGates [ Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:58 pm ]
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I'm reading Jean of Storms on the transcripts site and sadly I'm not too impressed so far. Jean doesn't come across as a particularly attractive character, she's really nasty about Kirsty and just assumes she must be "horribly spoilt" because all anglo-indian kids are. This poor kid has lost her mother, her home and just about to lose her little sister yet none of this seems to occur to Jean at all. Then she says to Mollie that as she has Allison she'll be "a lot more tied" in the future but poor little Allison hasn't featured much at all. Jean still seems to carry on doing everything she was doing before. Oh well, I'll keep on with it and see if my opinion changes by the end of the story.

Author:  Jennie [ Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:41 pm ]
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I've read this on the Transcripts site and really didn't think much of it. I found the characters unbelivable, and in some cases, unbelievably dim, and certainly unsuited to look after small children.

Morag was a nightmare, and certainly not a good servant, and rather a bully to boot.

As so many have said here, I think the treatment of Kirsty is appalling, does no-one have any compassion for the poor child?

And all that fuss and bother about the children's clothes, surely cotton sleeping suits were rather cold wear for a small child in the north-eastern winter.

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