A case in point is at he end of 'Island'. I didn't want to know what
part Jo played in the ending. Her narrative takes about nine pages, and
it's mostly about her and why she went to Penny Rest. For goodness
sake, a lot of us have had to cope with teething children and almost
sleepless nights, and some of us had to get ready and go to work the
next day,or get up and look after other children and do housework. Jo
had
Anna to do all that for her, so she wasn't exactly the martyr to
teething that she pretends to be. So, I really didn't want all that
information about Jo, I found it intrusive, I just wanted to see the
denouement between Annis' father and her aunt. It would have been far
more dramatic to see it first hand, not filtered through Jo Maynard and
her complaints. That was one occasion when EBD dragged her in totally
unnecessarily. the drama lay in Annis' situation, not in Jo's child's
teething problems. It would have been good to see the reunion between
Annis and her father, too. |